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RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jul. 01, 2021
(Jul. 01, 2021 3:06 AM)BladeKingX Wrote:(Jul. 01, 2021 2:54 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Right click to download it then go to settings and hit the avatar then click on then click on the download
alright thanks
I like ur avatar lol
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - GenesisBlader - Jul. 01, 2021
(Jul. 01, 2021 3:32 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:(Jul. 01, 2021 3:06 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: alright thanks
I like ur avatar lol
lol thanks I like ashindra and its avatar
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - BeybladeManiac0 - Jul. 01, 2021
(Jun. 30, 2021 6:53 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Everyone!! We're having another character contest I want to give everyone another shot at it (Besides I can't make up characters) but Sorry BeybladeManiac0 since you won last time you can't enter again because I want to give everyone a fair shot. There will be 2 winners and both of them will be in Beyjitzu in the Tournament Arc oopsie I said that out loud at least you have a spoiler. Enjoy and may the best blader win!!
Name:
Age:
Personality:
Bey (Describe new parts):
Chip:
Ring:
Disk:
Driver:
Attacks:
Okay.
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - GenesisBlader - Jul. 01, 2021
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(Jul. 01, 2021 8:09 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote:(Jun. 30, 2021 6:53 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: one!! We're having another cer coest I wat o ve yone ther ot a t (Bes I cat mae p charters) but Soy @Beyblaniac0 sine yu wo lat tim yu ca't ener agin becus I wat o gi everne a fai sut. Thee wi e 2 winne an boh o th wi b n Betu in the Tent Ar poopsie I sad tot ot lod a leat yo ha a boiler
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jul. 02, 2021
Chapter 13 is out!! Sorry that it's late
Spoiler (Click to View)
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 13
Hyper Dragon!! Illusion Fafnir!!!
(A pillow slaps me on the face)
Me: I didn’t eat it!!
Pam: Finally, you’re awake, let’s go!
(I shove on my hoodie)
Me: Where are we going?!
Raina: Doing some training.
Aiden: Let’s go.
Me: Guys, I’ve got this!!
Pam: GIVE ME 20!!!
Me: Ah!
(I start doing push-ups fast)
Aiden: Time to get on the treadmill!!
(Aiden puts the treadmill on max. I start running fast)
Me: Turn it down!!
Aiden: Come on you’ve got it!!
(I get sent flying across the room)
Me: This is getting crazy!
(I run off)
Raina: Percy wait!!
~In The Forest~
Me: Man, they’re going crazy!
Poseidon: Really?
(Poseidon pulls me into a white void)
Me: Why are they going crazy? It’s not their battle!
Poseidon: But it’s yours.
Me: Exactly, that’s why they should just stay out of it!
Poseidon: Your friends are here to support you, isn’t that the reason they came?
Me: I guess.
Poseidon: They want you to win, they’re only doing this for your own good.
Me: I never thought of that.
Poseidon: Having friends is never easy, especially for you.
Me: Yeah.
(I get out of the void, I start running out of the Forest)
Me: I’ve gotta get practicing!!
~At BC Sol~
Aiden: Do you think we were too hard on him?
Raina: Definitely.
(I run in the training room)
Me: What’s next!!
Aiden: Percy!
Pam: Sorry we were so hard on you.
Me: I should be apologizing, but I won’t because it’s a sign of weakness.
(Raina Aiden and Pam fall over)
~At El Astro’s Main Arena~
Hanami: What is up everyone!! Today we’ll be having a ranked battle!! We’ve got Free De La Hoya Vs Perseus Nakano!! The Boy Of Water Vs The Lone Wolf!! We’ll be using our new stadium!! The Motor Driver Stadium!!
(The stadium appears from the ground, Me and Free walk up to the stadium)
Me: Woah, awesome!!
Hanami: Isn’t it? You can catch onto the spinning rim and speed up like crazy!!
Free: Well, this will be interesting.
Me: I’m so winning this!!
Free: In your dreams.
Reff: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Free: Let it rip!!
Free: Take the center!
(Fafnir takes the center)
Me: Flood Launch!!
(Poseidon hits Fafnir with a barrage of attacks, Fafnir starts gaining more and more speed)
Hanami: Fafnir sets itself up in a defensive position to absorb and deflect all incoming attacks!!
Aiden: Go Poseidon!!
Me: I’m not done yet!!
(Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim and flies in the air)
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
Free: Fafnir!!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up)
(Poseidon attacks from above, Poseidon forces Fafnir into the ground)
Free: Drain Counter!!
(Fafnir’s Drain Driver’s circular ring bounces Fafnir backup. Poseidon gets sent flying)
Me: *Gasps*
Reff: It’s Illusion Fafnir with a ring-out finish!! Free De La Hoya claims 1 point)
Aiden: Dang it. We lost a point.
Raina: Don’t worry, he’s still in it.
Pam: But if he loses again…
Aiden: Don’t say it. Go, Percy!! Go, Percy!!
(I pick up Poseidon’s parts)
Pam: Come on! Let’s join him!!
Pam/Aiden/Raina: Go Percy!! Go, Percy!! Go, Percy!!
Random: Looks like they really want him to win.
Random: We need to cheer him on too!!
All: Percy!! Percy!! Percy!! Percy!!
Me: *Gasps*
Free: Looks like you’re popular.
(I smile at my friends)
Me: Thanks!! I’m winning this!!
(I hold Poseidon up at them)
Free: I’m coming at you with a Beyjizu Launch!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Poseidon, let’s get reckless!
Ref: Second Battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Free: Let it rip!!
(Me and Free pull off strong Beyjitzu Launches)
Me: Hydro Striker!!
(Poseidon hits Fafnir hard, Poseidon steals spin from Fafnir)
Hanami: Poseidon starts off with a strong strike to knock Fafnir off balance!!
Free: Illusion Spin!!
Me: Flood Launch!!
(I thrust my fist forward)
(every time Poseidon hits Fafnir it steals its spin)
Hanami: Poseidon is out doing Fafnir in this display of power!!
Free: Fafnir!!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Charge!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Hydro Jet!!
(I catch onto the motorized rim and pick up speed, I head straight for Fafnir)
Free: Illusion Claw!!
(The whole stadium blows up, Fafnir gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Free: *Gasps*
Reff: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a ring-out finish!! Perseus Nakano claims 1 point!!
Aiden/Raina/Pam: AWESOME!!!
Me: I did it!!
Hanami: Percy just outdid the Legendary Blader Free De La Hoya!!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Free: Now it’s getting fun.
Me: Ready to lose?
Free: I’m winning.
Ref: Second Battle!! Ready? Set!
Me/Free: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(Me and Free pull off Beyjitzu Launches, the dragon's mouths on Fafnir close)
Free: Illusion Spin!!
Me: Flood Launch!!
(Poseidon hits Fafnir with a barrage of attacks, Fafnir wobbles with each hit)
Hanami: Fafnir takes each hit, but I don’t know how long it can keep it up!!
Free: Fafnir!!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up, Fafnir slams into the wall)
Hanami: Fafnir hits the wall to absorb the shock!!
Me: Poseidon!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up, Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim)
Free: Drain Break!!
(Fafnir’s driver goes inward, Fafnir speeds up)
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
(I fly off the motorized rim, Fafnir and Poseidon start clashing, The whole stadium blows up)
Hanami: Poseidon and Fafnir go all out!!
(Fafnir gets close to the ground while Poseidon gets sent flying above the stadium)
Free: *Gasps*
Me: Yes!!
(Poseidon hits the wall and bursts, Fafnir hits the ground)
Me/Free: *Gasps*
Ref: It’s Illusion Fafnir with a burst finish!! Free De La Hoya wins with a score of 3-1!!
Hanami: Apparently Poseidon hit the wall before Fafnir hit the ground, so Free De La Hoya is the winner!!
(I pick up Poseidon’s parts)
Me: Awesome match!!
(I put my hand out for a handshake)
Free: I guess.
(Me and Free shake hands)
~At BC Sol~
Raina: Sorry you lost Percy.
Me: No problem!! I’ll battle Free again!!
Aiden: Yup, I know you will!!
Pam (Thoughts): I’ve gotta make a Beyjitzu Bey!! I will not fall behind!!
Chapter 13
Hyper Dragon!! Illusion Fafnir!!!
(A pillow slaps me on the face)
Me: I didn’t eat it!!
Pam: Finally, you’re awake, let’s go!
(I shove on my hoodie)
Me: Where are we going?!
Raina: Doing some training.
Aiden: Let’s go.
Me: Guys, I’ve got this!!
Pam: GIVE ME 20!!!
Me: Ah!
(I start doing push-ups fast)
Aiden: Time to get on the treadmill!!
(Aiden puts the treadmill on max. I start running fast)
Me: Turn it down!!
Aiden: Come on you’ve got it!!
(I get sent flying across the room)
Me: This is getting crazy!
(I run off)
Raina: Percy wait!!
~In The Forest~
Me: Man, they’re going crazy!
Poseidon: Really?
(Poseidon pulls me into a white void)
Me: Why are they going crazy? It’s not their battle!
Poseidon: But it’s yours.
Me: Exactly, that’s why they should just stay out of it!
Poseidon: Your friends are here to support you, isn’t that the reason they came?
Me: I guess.
Poseidon: They want you to win, they’re only doing this for your own good.
Me: I never thought of that.
Poseidon: Having friends is never easy, especially for you.
Me: Yeah.
(I get out of the void, I start running out of the Forest)
Me: I’ve gotta get practicing!!
~At BC Sol~
Aiden: Do you think we were too hard on him?
Raina: Definitely.
(I run in the training room)
Me: What’s next!!
Aiden: Percy!
Pam: Sorry we were so hard on you.
Me: I should be apologizing, but I won’t because it’s a sign of weakness.
(Raina Aiden and Pam fall over)
~At El Astro’s Main Arena~
Hanami: What is up everyone!! Today we’ll be having a ranked battle!! We’ve got Free De La Hoya Vs Perseus Nakano!! The Boy Of Water Vs The Lone Wolf!! We’ll be using our new stadium!! The Motor Driver Stadium!!
(The stadium appears from the ground, Me and Free walk up to the stadium)
Me: Woah, awesome!!
Hanami: Isn’t it? You can catch onto the spinning rim and speed up like crazy!!
Free: Well, this will be interesting.
Me: I’m so winning this!!
Free: In your dreams.
Reff: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Free: Let it rip!!
Free: Take the center!
(Fafnir takes the center)
Me: Flood Launch!!
(Poseidon hits Fafnir with a barrage of attacks, Fafnir starts gaining more and more speed)
Hanami: Fafnir sets itself up in a defensive position to absorb and deflect all incoming attacks!!
Aiden: Go Poseidon!!
Me: I’m not done yet!!
(Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim and flies in the air)
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
Free: Fafnir!!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up)
(Poseidon attacks from above, Poseidon forces Fafnir into the ground)
Free: Drain Counter!!
(Fafnir’s Drain Driver’s circular ring bounces Fafnir backup. Poseidon gets sent flying)
Me: *Gasps*
Reff: It’s Illusion Fafnir with a ring-out finish!! Free De La Hoya claims 1 point)
Aiden: Dang it. We lost a point.
Raina: Don’t worry, he’s still in it.
Pam: But if he loses again…
Aiden: Don’t say it. Go, Percy!! Go, Percy!!
(I pick up Poseidon’s parts)
Pam: Come on! Let’s join him!!
Pam/Aiden/Raina: Go Percy!! Go, Percy!! Go, Percy!!
Random: Looks like they really want him to win.
Random: We need to cheer him on too!!
All: Percy!! Percy!! Percy!! Percy!!
Me: *Gasps*
Free: Looks like you’re popular.
(I smile at my friends)
Me: Thanks!! I’m winning this!!
(I hold Poseidon up at them)
Free: I’m coming at you with a Beyjizu Launch!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Poseidon, let’s get reckless!
Ref: Second Battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Free: Let it rip!!
(Me and Free pull off strong Beyjitzu Launches)
Me: Hydro Striker!!
(Poseidon hits Fafnir hard, Poseidon steals spin from Fafnir)
Hanami: Poseidon starts off with a strong strike to knock Fafnir off balance!!
Free: Illusion Spin!!
Me: Flood Launch!!
(I thrust my fist forward)
(every time Poseidon hits Fafnir it steals its spin)
Hanami: Poseidon is out doing Fafnir in this display of power!!
Free: Fafnir!!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Charge!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Hydro Jet!!
(I catch onto the motorized rim and pick up speed, I head straight for Fafnir)
Free: Illusion Claw!!
(The whole stadium blows up, Fafnir gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Free: *Gasps*
Reff: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a ring-out finish!! Perseus Nakano claims 1 point!!
Aiden/Raina/Pam: AWESOME!!!
Me: I did it!!
Hanami: Percy just outdid the Legendary Blader Free De La Hoya!!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Free: Now it’s getting fun.
Me: Ready to lose?
Free: I’m winning.
Ref: Second Battle!! Ready? Set!
Me/Free: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(Me and Free pull off Beyjitzu Launches, the dragon's mouths on Fafnir close)
Free: Illusion Spin!!
Me: Flood Launch!!
(Poseidon hits Fafnir with a barrage of attacks, Fafnir wobbles with each hit)
Hanami: Fafnir takes each hit, but I don’t know how long it can keep it up!!
Free: Fafnir!!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up, Fafnir slams into the wall)
Hanami: Fafnir hits the wall to absorb the shock!!
Me: Poseidon!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up, Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim)
Free: Drain Break!!
(Fafnir’s driver goes inward, Fafnir speeds up)
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
(I fly off the motorized rim, Fafnir and Poseidon start clashing, The whole stadium blows up)
Hanami: Poseidon and Fafnir go all out!!
(Fafnir gets close to the ground while Poseidon gets sent flying above the stadium)
Free: *Gasps*
Me: Yes!!
(Poseidon hits the wall and bursts, Fafnir hits the ground)
Me/Free: *Gasps*
Ref: It’s Illusion Fafnir with a burst finish!! Free De La Hoya wins with a score of 3-1!!
Hanami: Apparently Poseidon hit the wall before Fafnir hit the ground, so Free De La Hoya is the winner!!
(I pick up Poseidon’s parts)
Me: Awesome match!!
(I put my hand out for a handshake)
Free: I guess.
(Me and Free shake hands)
~At BC Sol~
Raina: Sorry you lost Percy.
Me: No problem!! I’ll battle Free again!!
Aiden: Yup, I know you will!!
Pam (Thoughts): I’ve gotta make a Beyjitzu Bey!! I will not fall behind!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Jul. 02, 2021
(Jul. 02, 2021 8:02 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 13 is out!! Sorry that it's late
Spoiler (Click to View)Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 13
Hyper Dragon!! Illusion Fafnir!!!
(A pillow slaps me on the face)
Me: I didn’t eat it!!
Pam: Finally, you’re awake, let’s go!
(I shove on my hoodie)
Me: Where are we going?!
Raina: Doing some training.
Aiden: Let’s go.
Me: Guys, I’ve got this!!
Pam: GIVE ME 20!!!
Me: Ah!
(I start doing push-ups fast)
Aiden: Time to get on the treadmill!!
(Aiden puts the treadmill on max. I start running fast)
Me: Turn it down!!
Aiden: Come on you’ve got it!!
(I get sent flying across the room)
Me: This is getting crazy!
(I run off)
Raina: Percy wait!!
~In The Forest~
Me: Man, they’re going crazy!
Poseidon: Really?
(Poseidon pulls me into a white void)
Me: Why are they going crazy? It’s not their battle!
Poseidon: But it’s yours.
Me: Exactly, that’s why they should just stay out of it!
Poseidon: Your friends are here to support you, isn’t that the reason they came?
Me: I guess.
Poseidon: They want you to win, they’re only doing this for your own good.
Me: I never thought of that.
Poseidon: Having friends is never easy, especially for you.
Me: Yeah.
(I get out of the void, I start running out of the Forest)
Me: I’ve gotta get practicing!!
~At BC Sol~
Aiden: Do you think we were too hard on him?
Raina: Definitely.
(I run in the training room)
Me: What’s next!!
Aiden: Percy!
Pam: Sorry we were so hard on you.
Me: I should be apologizing, but I won’t because it’s a sign of weakness.
(Raina Aiden and Pam fall over)
~At El Astro’s Main Arena~
Hanami: What is up everyone!! Today we’ll be having a ranked battle!! We’ve got Free De La Hoya Vs Perseus Nakano!! The Boy Of Water Vs The Lone Wolf!! We’ll be using our new stadium!! The Motor Driver Stadium!!
(The stadium appears from the ground, Me and Free walk up to the stadium)
Me: Woah, awesome!!
Hanami: Isn’t it? You can catch onto the spinning rim and speed up like crazy!!
Free: Well, this will be interesting.
Me: I’m so winning this!!
Free: In your dreams.
Reff: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Free: Let it rip!!
Free: Take the center!
(Fafnir takes the center)
Me: Flood Launch!!
(Poseidon hits Fafnir with a barrage of attacks, Fafnir starts gaining more and more speed)
Hanami: Fafnir sets itself up in a defensive position to absorb and deflect all incoming attacks!!
Aiden: Go Poseidon!!
Me: I’m not done yet!!
(Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim and flies in the air)
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
Free: Fafnir!!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up)
(Poseidon attacks from above, Poseidon forces Fafnir into the ground)
Free: Drain Counter!!
(Fafnir’s Drain Driver’s circular ring bounces Fafnir backup. Poseidon gets sent flying)
Me: *Gasps*
Reff: It’s Illusion Fafnir with a ring-out finish!! Free De La Hoya claims 1 point)
Aiden: Dang it. We lost a point.
Raina: Don’t worry, he’s still in it.
Pam: But if he loses again…
Aiden: Don’t say it. Go, Percy!! Go, Percy!!
(I pick up Poseidon’s parts)
Pam: Come on! Let’s join him!!
Pam/Aiden/Raina: Go Percy!! Go, Percy!! Go, Percy!!
Random: Looks like they really want him to win.
Random: We need to cheer him on too!!
All: Percy!! Percy!! Percy!! Percy!!
Me: *Gasps*
Free: Looks like you’re popular.
(I smile at my friends)
Me: Thanks!! I’m winning this!!
(I hold Poseidon up at them)
Free: I’m coming at you with a Beyjizu Launch!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Poseidon, let’s get reckless!
Ref: Second Battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Free: Let it rip!!
(Me and Free pull off strong Beyjitzu Launches)
Me: Hydro Striker!!
(Poseidon hits Fafnir hard, Poseidon steals spin from Fafnir)
Hanami: Poseidon starts off with a strong strike to knock Fafnir off balance!!
Free: Illusion Spin!!
Me: Flood Launch!!
(I thrust my fist forward)
(every time Poseidon hits Fafnir it steals its spin)
Hanami: Poseidon is out doing Fafnir in this display of power!!
Free: Fafnir!!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Charge!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Hydro Jet!!
(I catch onto the motorized rim and pick up speed, I head straight for Fafnir)
Free: Illusion Claw!!
(The whole stadium blows up, Fafnir gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Free: *Gasps*
Reff: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a ring-out finish!! Perseus Nakano claims 1 point!!
Aiden/Raina/Pam: AWESOME!!!
Me: I did it!!
Hanami: Percy just outdid the Legendary Blader Free De La Hoya!!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Free: Now it’s getting fun.
Me: Ready to lose?
Free: I’m winning.
Ref: Second Battle!! Ready? Set!
Me/Free: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(Me and Free pull off Beyjitzu Launches, the dragon's mouths on Fafnir close)
Free: Illusion Spin!!
Me: Flood Launch!!
(Poseidon hits Fafnir with a barrage of attacks, Fafnir wobbles with each hit)
Hanami: Fafnir takes each hit, but I don’t know how long it can keep it up!!
Free: Fafnir!!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up, Fafnir slams into the wall)
Hanami: Fafnir hits the wall to absorb the shock!!
Me: Poseidon!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up, Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim)
Free: Drain Break!!
(Fafnir’s driver goes inward, Fafnir speeds up)
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
(I fly off the motorized rim, Fafnir and Poseidon start clashing, The whole stadium blows up)
Hanami: Poseidon and Fafnir go all out!!
(Fafnir gets close to the ground while Poseidon gets sent flying above the stadium)
Free: *Gasps*
Me: Yes!!
(Poseidon hits the wall and bursts, Fafnir hits the ground)
Me/Free: *Gasps*
Ref: It’s Illusion Fafnir with a burst finish!! Free De La Hoya wins with a score of 3-1!!
Hanami: Apparently Poseidon hit the wall before Fafnir hit the ground, so Free De La Hoya is the winner!!
(I pick up Poseidon’s parts)
Me: Awesome match!!
(I put my hand out for a handshake)
Free: I guess.
(Me and Free shake hands)
~At BC Sol~
Raina: Sorry you lost Percy.
Me: No problem!! I’ll battle Free again!!
Aiden: Yup, I know you will!!
Pam (Thoughts): I’ve gotta make a Beyjitzu Bey!! I will not fall behind!!
This is awesome dude keep up the work!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 02, 2021
(Jul. 02, 2021 8:02 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 13 is out!! Sorry that it's lateI guess you already know beyjitzu is my fav fanfic from you (not meaning the others aren't great, but Dynachi doesn't stick into my head as beyjitzu does, prob because I didn't read it from the beginning). But anyway opinion time!
Spoiler (Click to View)Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 13
Hyper Dragon!! Illusion Fafnir!!!
(A pillow slaps me on the face)
Me: I didn’t eat it!!
Pam: Finally, you’re awake, let’s go!
(I shove on my hoodie)
Me: Where are we going?!
Raina: Doing some training.
Aiden: Let’s go.
Me: Guys, I’ve got this!!
Pam: GIVE ME 20!!!
Me: Ah!
(I start doing push-ups fast)
Aiden: Time to get on the treadmill!!
(Aiden puts the treadmill on max. I start running fast)
Me: Turn it down!!
Aiden: Come on you’ve got it!!
(I get sent flying across the room)
Me: This is getting crazy!
(I run off)
Raina: Percy wait!!
~In The Forest~
Me: Man, they’re going crazy!
Poseidon: Really?
(Poseidon pulls me into a white void)
Me: Why are they going crazy? It’s not their battle!
Poseidon: But it’s yours.
Me: Exactly, that’s why they should just stay out of it!
Poseidon: Your friends are here to support you, isn’t that the reason they came?
Me: I guess.
Poseidon: They want you to win, they’re only doing this for your own good.
Me: I never thought of that.
Poseidon: Having friends is never easy, especially for you.
Me: Yeah.
(I get out of the void, I start running out of the Forest)
Me: I’ve gotta get practicing!!
~At BC Sol~
Aiden: Do you think we were too hard on him?
Raina: Definitely.
(I run in the training room)
Me: What’s next!!
Aiden: Percy!
Pam: Sorry we were so hard on you.
Me: I should be apologizing, but I won’t because it’s a sign of weakness.
(Raina Aiden and Pam fall over)
~At El Astro’s Main Arena~
Hanami: What is up everyone!! Today we’ll be having a ranked battle!! We’ve got Free De La Hoya Vs Perseus Nakano!! The Boy Of Water Vs The Lone Wolf!! We’ll be using our new stadium!! The Motor Driver Stadium!!
(The stadium appears from the ground, Me and Free walk up to the stadium)
Me: Woah, awesome!!
Hanami: Isn’t it? You can catch onto the spinning rim and speed up like crazy!!
Free: Well, this will be interesting.
Me: I’m so winning this!!
Free: In your dreams.
Reff: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Free: Let it rip!!
Free: Take the center!
(Fafnir takes the center)
Me: Flood Launch!!
(Poseidon hits Fafnir with a barrage of attacks, Fafnir starts gaining more and more speed)
Hanami: Fafnir sets itself up in a defensive position to absorb and deflect all incoming attacks!!
Aiden: Go Poseidon!!
Me: I’m not done yet!!
(Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim and flies in the air)
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
Free: Fafnir!!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up)
(Poseidon attacks from above, Poseidon forces Fafnir into the ground)
Free: Drain Counter!!
(Fafnir’s Drain Driver’s circular ring bounces Fafnir backup. Poseidon gets sent flying)
Me: *Gasps*
Reff: It’s Illusion Fafnir with a ring-out finish!! Free De La Hoya claims 1 point)
Aiden: Dang it. We lost a point.
Raina: Don’t worry, he’s still in it.
Pam: But if he loses again…
Aiden: Don’t say it. Go, Percy!! Go, Percy!!
(I pick up Poseidon’s parts)
Pam: Come on! Let’s join him!!
Pam/Aiden/Raina: Go Percy!! Go, Percy!! Go, Percy!!
Random: Looks like they really want him to win.
Random: We need to cheer him on too!!
All: Percy!! Percy!! Percy!! Percy!!
Me: *Gasps*
Free: Looks like you’re popular.
(I smile at my friends)
Me: Thanks!! I’m winning this!!
(I hold Poseidon up at them)
Free: I’m coming at you with a Beyjizu Launch!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Poseidon, let’s get reckless!
Ref: Second Battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Free: Let it rip!!
(Me and Free pull off strong Beyjitzu Launches)
Me: Hydro Striker!!
(Poseidon hits Fafnir hard, Poseidon steals spin from Fafnir)
Hanami: Poseidon starts off with a strong strike to knock Fafnir off balance!!
Free: Illusion Spin!!
Me: Flood Launch!!
(I thrust my fist forward)
(every time Poseidon hits Fafnir it steals its spin)
Hanami: Poseidon is out doing Fafnir in this display of power!!
Free: Fafnir!!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Charge!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Hydro Jet!!
(I catch onto the motorized rim and pick up speed, I head straight for Fafnir)
Free: Illusion Claw!!
(The whole stadium blows up, Fafnir gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Free: *Gasps*
Reff: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a ring-out finish!! Perseus Nakano claims 1 point!!
Aiden/Raina/Pam: AWESOME!!!
Me: I did it!!
Hanami: Percy just outdid the Legendary Blader Free De La Hoya!!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Free: Now it’s getting fun.
Me: Ready to lose?
Free: I’m winning.
Ref: Second Battle!! Ready? Set!
Me/Free: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(Me and Free pull off Beyjitzu Launches, the dragon's mouths on Fafnir close)
Free: Illusion Spin!!
Me: Flood Launch!!
(Poseidon hits Fafnir with a barrage of attacks, Fafnir wobbles with each hit)
Hanami: Fafnir takes each hit, but I don’t know how long it can keep it up!!
Free: Fafnir!!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up, Fafnir slams into the wall)
Hanami: Fafnir hits the wall to absorb the shock!!
Me: Poseidon!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up, Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim)
Free: Drain Break!!
(Fafnir’s driver goes inward, Fafnir speeds up)
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
(I fly off the motorized rim, Fafnir and Poseidon start clashing, The whole stadium blows up)
Hanami: Poseidon and Fafnir go all out!!
(Fafnir gets close to the ground while Poseidon gets sent flying above the stadium)
Free: *Gasps*
Me: Yes!!
(Poseidon hits the wall and bursts, Fafnir hits the ground)
Me/Free: *Gasps*
Ref: It’s Illusion Fafnir with a burst finish!! Free De La Hoya wins with a score of 3-1!!
Hanami: Apparently Poseidon hit the wall before Fafnir hit the ground, so Free De La Hoya is the winner!!
(I pick up Poseidon’s parts)
Me: Awesome match!!
(I put my hand out for a handshake)
Free: I guess.
(Me and Free shake hands)
~At BC Sol~
Raina: Sorry you lost Percy.
Me: No problem!! I’ll battle Free again!!
Aiden: Yup, I know you will!!
Pam (Thoughts): I’ve gotta make a Beyjitzu Bey!! I will not fall behind!!
I'm imagining Percy being thrown at a wall, sees an exit and just sprints. Not surprised for him not beating Free, but pulling out a point is already good enough, lack of detail but doesn't bother me (yet) so I guess it's fine.
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Jul. 02, 2021
(Jul. 02, 2021 8:48 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:(Jul. 02, 2021 8:02 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 13 is out!! Sorry that it's lateI guess you already know beyjitzu is my fav fanfic from you (not meaning the others aren't great, but Dynachi doesn't stick into my head as beyjitzu does). But anyway opinion time!
Spoiler (Click to View)Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 13
Hyper Dragon!! Illusion Fafnir!!!
(A pillow slaps me on the face)
Me: I didn’t eat it!!
Pam: Finally, you’re awake, let’s go!
(I shove on my hoodie)
Me: Where are we going?!
Raina: Doing some training.
Aiden: Let’s go.
Me: Guys, I’ve got this!!
Pam: GIVE ME 20!!!
Me: Ah!
(I start doing push-ups fast)
Aiden: Time to get on the treadmill!!
(Aiden puts the treadmill on max. I start running fast)
Me: Turn it down!!
Aiden: Come on you’ve got it!!
(I get sent flying across the room)
Me: This is getting crazy!
(I run off)
Raina: Percy wait!!
~In The Forest~
Me: Man, they’re going crazy!
Poseidon: Really?
(Poseidon pulls me into a white void)
Me: Why are they going crazy? It’s not their battle!
Poseidon: But it’s yours.
Me: Exactly, that’s why they should just stay out of it!
Poseidon: Your friends are here to support you, isn’t that the reason they came?
Me: I guess.
Poseidon: They want you to win, they’re only doing this for your own good.
Me: I never thought of that.
Poseidon: Having friends is never easy, especially for you.
Me: Yeah.
(I get out of the void, I start running out of the Forest)
Me: I’ve gotta get practicing!!
~At BC Sol~
Aiden: Do you think we were too hard on him?
Raina: Definitely.
(I run in the training room)
Me: What’s next!!
Aiden: Percy!
Pam: Sorry we were so hard on you.
Me: I should be apologizing, but I won’t because it’s a sign of weakness.
(Raina Aiden and Pam fall over)
~At El Astro’s Main Arena~
Hanami: What is up everyone!! Today we’ll be having a ranked battle!! We’ve got Free De La Hoya Vs Perseus Nakano!! The Boy Of Water Vs The Lone Wolf!! We’ll be using our new stadium!! The Motor Driver Stadium!!
(The stadium appears from the ground, Me and Free walk up to the stadium)
Me: Woah, awesome!!
Hanami: Isn’t it? You can catch onto the spinning rim and speed up like crazy!!
Free: Well, this will be interesting.
Me: I’m so winning this!!
Free: In your dreams.
Reff: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Free: Let it rip!!
Free: Take the center!
(Fafnir takes the center)
Me: Flood Launch!!
(Poseidon hits Fafnir with a barrage of attacks, Fafnir starts gaining more and more speed)
Hanami: Fafnir sets itself up in a defensive position to absorb and deflect all incoming attacks!!
Aiden: Go Poseidon!!
Me: I’m not done yet!!
(Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim and flies in the air)
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
Free: Fafnir!!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up)
(Poseidon attacks from above, Poseidon forces Fafnir into the ground)
Free: Drain Counter!!
(Fafnir’s Drain Driver’s circular ring bounces Fafnir backup. Poseidon gets sent flying)
Me: *Gasps*
Reff: It’s Illusion Fafnir with a ring-out finish!! Free De La Hoya claims 1 point)
Aiden: Dang it. We lost a point.
Raina: Don’t worry, he’s still in it.
Pam: But if he loses again…
Aiden: Don’t say it. Go, Percy!! Go, Percy!!
(I pick up Poseidon’s parts)
Pam: Come on! Let’s join him!!
Pam/Aiden/Raina: Go Percy!! Go, Percy!! Go, Percy!!
Random: Looks like they really want him to win.
Random: We need to cheer him on too!!
All: Percy!! Percy!! Percy!! Percy!!
Me: *Gasps*
Free: Looks like you’re popular.
(I smile at my friends)
Me: Thanks!! I’m winning this!!
(I hold Poseidon up at them)
Free: I’m coming at you with a Beyjizu Launch!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Poseidon, let’s get reckless!
Ref: Second Battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Free: Let it rip!!
(Me and Free pull off strong Beyjitzu Launches)
Me: Hydro Striker!!
(Poseidon hits Fafnir hard, Poseidon steals spin from Fafnir)
Hanami: Poseidon starts off with a strong strike to knock Fafnir off balance!!
Free: Illusion Spin!!
Me: Flood Launch!!
(I thrust my fist forward)
(every time Poseidon hits Fafnir it steals its spin)
Hanami: Poseidon is out doing Fafnir in this display of power!!
Free: Fafnir!!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Charge!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Hydro Jet!!
(I catch onto the motorized rim and pick up speed, I head straight for Fafnir)
Free: Illusion Claw!!
(The whole stadium blows up, Fafnir gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Free: *Gasps*
Reff: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a ring-out finish!! Perseus Nakano claims 1 point!!
Aiden/Raina/Pam: AWESOME!!!
Me: I did it!!
Hanami: Percy just outdid the Legendary Blader Free De La Hoya!!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Free: Now it’s getting fun.
Me: Ready to lose?
Free: I’m winning.
Ref: Second Battle!! Ready? Set!
Me/Free: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(Me and Free pull off Beyjitzu Launches, the dragon's mouths on Fafnir close)
Free: Illusion Spin!!
Me: Flood Launch!!
(Poseidon hits Fafnir with a barrage of attacks, Fafnir wobbles with each hit)
Hanami: Fafnir takes each hit, but I don’t know how long it can keep it up!!
Free: Fafnir!!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up, Fafnir slams into the wall)
Hanami: Fafnir hits the wall to absorb the shock!!
Me: Poseidon!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up, Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim)
Free: Drain Break!!
(Fafnir’s driver goes inward, Fafnir speeds up)
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
(I fly off the motorized rim, Fafnir and Poseidon start clashing, The whole stadium blows up)
Hanami: Poseidon and Fafnir go all out!!
(Fafnir gets close to the ground while Poseidon gets sent flying above the stadium)
Free: *Gasps*
Me: Yes!!
(Poseidon hits the wall and bursts, Fafnir hits the ground)
Me/Free: *Gasps*
Ref: It’s Illusion Fafnir with a burst finish!! Free De La Hoya wins with a score of 3-1!!
Hanami: Apparently Poseidon hit the wall before Fafnir hit the ground, so Free De La Hoya is the winner!!
(I pick up Poseidon’s parts)
Me: Awesome match!!
(I put my hand out for a handshake)
Free: I guess.
(Me and Free shake hands)
~At BC Sol~
Raina: Sorry you lost Percy.
Me: No problem!! I’ll battle Free again!!
Aiden: Yup, I know you will!!
Pam (Thoughts): I’ve gotta make a Beyjitzu Bey!! I will not fall behind!!
I'm imagining Percy being thrown at a wall, sees an exit and just sprints. Not surprised for him not beating Free, but pulling out a point is already good enough, lack of detail but doesn't bother me (yet) so I guess it's fine.
You read my mind
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - GenesisBlader - Jul. 02, 2021
(Jul. 02, 2021 8:02 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 13 is out!! Sorry that it's late
Spoiler (Click to View)Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 13
Hyper Dragon!! Illusion Fafnir!!!
(A pillow slaps me on the face)
Me: I didn’t eat it!!
Pam: Finally, you’re awake, let’s go!
(I shove on my hoodie)
Me: Where are we going?!
Raina: Doing some training.
Aiden: Let’s go.
Me: Guys, I’ve got this!!
Pam: GIVE ME 20!!!
Me: Ah!
(I start doing push-ups fast)
Aiden: Time to get on the treadmill!!
(Aiden puts the treadmill on max. I start running fast)
Me: Turn it down!!
Aiden: Come on you’ve got it!!
(I get sent flying across the room)
Me: This is getting crazy!
(I run off)
Raina: Percy wait!!
~In The Forest~
Me: Man, they’re going crazy!
Poseidon: Really?
(Poseidon pulls me into a white void)
Me: Why are they going crazy? It’s not their battle!
Poseidon: But it’s yours.
Me: Exactly, that’s why they should just stay out of it!
Poseidon: Your friends are here to support you, isn’t that the reason they came?
Me: I guess.
Poseidon: They want you to win, they’re only doing this for your own good.
Me: I never thought of that.
Poseidon: Having friends is never easy, especially for you.
Me: Yeah.
(I get out of the void, I start running out of the Forest)
Me: I’ve gotta get practicing!!
~At BC Sol~
Aiden: Do you think we were too hard on him?
Raina: Definitely.
(I run in the training room)
Me: What’s next!!
Aiden: Percy!
Pam: Sorry we were so hard on you.
Me: I should be apologizing, but I won’t because it’s a sign of weakness.
(Raina Aiden and Pam fall over)
~At El Astro’s Main Arena~
Hanami: What is up everyone!! Today we’ll be having a ranked battle!! We’ve got Free De La Hoya Vs Perseus Nakano!! The Boy Of Water Vs The Lone Wolf!! We’ll be using our new stadium!! The Motor Driver Stadium!!
(The stadium appears from the ground, Me and Free walk up to the stadium)
Me: Woah, awesome!!
Hanami: Isn’t it? You can catch onto the spinning rim and speed up like crazy!!
Free: Well, this will be interesting.
Me: I’m so winning this!!
Free: In your dreams.
Reff: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Free: Let it rip!!
Free: Take the center!
(Fafnir takes the center)
Me: Flood Launch!!
(Poseidon hits Fafnir with a barrage of attacks, Fafnir starts gaining more and more speed)
Hanami: Fafnir sets itself up in a defensive position to absorb and deflect all incoming attacks!!
Aiden: Go Poseidon!!
Me: I’m not done yet!!
(Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim and flies in the air)
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
Free: Fafnir!!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up)
(Poseidon attacks from above, Poseidon forces Fafnir into the ground)
Free: Drain Counter!!
(Fafnir’s Drain Driver’s circular ring bounces Fafnir backup. Poseidon gets sent flying)
Me: *Gasps*
Reff: It’s Illusion Fafnir with a ring-out finish!! Free De La Hoya claims 1 point)
Aiden: Dang it. We lost a point.
Raina: Don’t worry, he’s still in it.
Pam: But if he loses again…
Aiden: Don’t say it. Go, Percy!! Go, Percy!!
(I pick up Poseidon’s parts)
Pam: Come on! Let’s join him!!
Pam/Aiden/Raina: Go Percy!! Go, Percy!! Go, Percy!!
Random: Looks like they really want him to win.
Random: We need to cheer him on too!!
All: Percy!! Percy!! Percy!! Percy!!
Me: *Gasps*
Free: Looks like you’re popular.
(I smile at my friends)
Me: Thanks!! I’m winning this!!
(I hold Poseidon up at them)
Free: I’m coming at you with a Beyjizu Launch!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Poseidon, let’s get reckless!
Ref: Second Battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Free: Let it rip!!
(Me and Free pull off strong Beyjitzu Launches)
Me: Hydro Striker!!
(Poseidon hits Fafnir hard, Poseidon steals spin from Fafnir)
Hanami: Poseidon starts off with a strong strike to knock Fafnir off balance!!
Free: Illusion Spin!!
Me: Flood Launch!!
(I thrust my fist forward)
(every time Poseidon hits Fafnir it steals its spin)
Hanami: Poseidon is out doing Fafnir in this display of power!!
Free: Fafnir!!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Charge!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Hydro Jet!!
(I catch onto the motorized rim and pick up speed, I head straight for Fafnir)
Free: Illusion Claw!!
(The whole stadium blows up, Fafnir gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Free: *Gasps*
Reff: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a ring-out finish!! Perseus Nakano claims 1 point!!
Aiden/Raina/Pam: AWESOME!!!
Me: I did it!!
Hanami: Percy just outdid the Legendary Blader Free De La Hoya!!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Free: Now it’s getting fun.
Me: Ready to lose?
Free: I’m winning.
Ref: Second Battle!! Ready? Set!
Me/Free: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(Me and Free pull off Beyjitzu Launches, the dragon's mouths on Fafnir close)
Free: Illusion Spin!!
Me: Flood Launch!!
(Poseidon hits Fafnir with a barrage of attacks, Fafnir wobbles with each hit)
Hanami: Fafnir takes each hit, but I don’t know how long it can keep it up!!
Free: Fafnir!!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up, Fafnir slams into the wall)
Hanami: Fafnir hits the wall to absorb the shock!!
Me: Poseidon!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up, Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim)
Free: Drain Break!!
(Fafnir’s driver goes inward, Fafnir speeds up)
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
(I fly off the motorized rim, Fafnir and Poseidon start clashing, The whole stadium blows up)
Hanami: Poseidon and Fafnir go all out!!
(Fafnir gets close to the ground while Poseidon gets sent flying above the stadium)
Free: *Gasps*
Me: Yes!!
(Poseidon hits the wall and bursts, Fafnir hits the ground)
Me/Free: *Gasps*
Ref: It’s Illusion Fafnir with a burst finish!! Free De La Hoya wins with a score of 3-1!!
Hanami: Apparently Poseidon hit the wall before Fafnir hit the ground, so Free De La Hoya is the winner!!
(I pick up Poseidon’s parts)
Me: Awesome match!!
(I put my hand out for a handshake)
Free: I guess.
(Me and Free shake hands)
~At BC Sol~
Raina: Sorry you lost Percy.
Me: No problem!! I’ll battle Free again!!
Aiden: Yup, I know you will!!
Pam (Thoughts): I’ve gotta make a Beyjitzu Bey!! I will not fall behind!!
this episode is AMAZING
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Jul. 03, 2021
So what I think about chapter 13 so far is. I love how his friends are trying to support him you know!? And where Percy has the moment with Poseidon! And the battle with free was just GREAT!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jul. 03, 2021
The Winners Of The Beyjitzu Character Contest are...
2nd @"Hollowmind8"!!
1st USN!!
Thank you all for joining my character contest and I hope there are no hard feelings!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Jul. 03, 2021
(Jul. 03, 2021 5:54 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: The Winners Of The Beyjitzu Character Contest are...
2nd @"Hollowmind8"!!
1st USN!!
Thank you all for joining my character contest and I hope there are no hard feelings!!
Good job everyone
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 03, 2021
(Jul. 03, 2021 5:54 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: The Winners Of The Beyjitzu Character Contest are...Fun fact 1, I was going to ask a 2 place if I was on first
2nd @"Hollowmind8"!!
1st "USN"!!
Thank you all for joining my character contest and I hope there are no hard feelings!!
Fun fact 2, first time someone mentioned me
I would write a elaborated "thanks" thing but my battery went from 39 from 20 at the time im writing it
Edited:
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screw that I have my pc now, so uhhh...*searching how people react when they win*
GG guys, uhh... yeah!
GG guys, uhh... yeah!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jul. 03, 2021
Chapter 14 is out!!
Spoiler (Click to View)
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 14
Bey Of Harmony!! Peacebringer Pegasus!!!
(Pam walks into the work room)
Pam: I’m gonna fix Doomsizer, no I’m gonna build a stronger bey.
(Pam flashback)
Pheng: Reverse Heal!!
Young Pam: Go!!
(Pegasus bursts Pam’s bey)
Young Pam: Aw man!!
Pheng: One day, I’m going to have to retire from Blading. So you’ll be owning Pegasus.
Young Pam: I'm gonna be super strong like you Big Bro!!
(Pheng ruffles Pam's hair)
Pheng: I know you will!
(Pam’s Flashback ends)
Pam: Pheng, I’m never going to let you down!!
(Pam starts working)
Pam: I’m going to create a new Pegasus!
~At BC Sol’s Main Gym~
Valt: So, where’s Raina?
Aiden: She’s out practicing.
Valt: Good, there’s something I need to tell you guys about her.
(Valt explains Raina’s Resonance)
Aiden: So Percy knew about this?!
(I nod my head silently)
Aiden: How could you not tell us?!
(Aiden’s voice turns angry)
Valt: I’m gonna let you work this out.
(Valt gets up and leaves)
Me: So.
Aiden: You knew about this and didn’t tell any of us?
Me: I couldn’t!!
Aiden: *Sighs* I’ll keep this, but next time you gotta trust us more.
Me: Promise.
~At The BC Sol Workshop~
Pam: Finally, it’s finished!!
(Pam holds up his new bey)
Pam: Peacebringer Pegasus!!
(Pegasus glimmers in the sun, Pam runs off)
~At The Stadium In The Woods~
(Me Aiden and Raina walk into the forest)
Aiden: What’s up Pam?
Pam: Meet Peacebringer Pegasus!!
Raina: Awesome!!
Me: That’s so cool!!
Aiden: That’s so cool!! Who are you gonna battle first!
Pam: I’m still bummed about losing to Raina, so she’s up first!!
Raina: I’m gonna win!!
Me: I’ll be the judge!! Inspect your opponent's bey!!
Raina (Thoughts): Peacebringer Pegasus, a clockwise spinning stamina type!! It’s very circular and it looks like golden wings can come out when it’s about to burst, but what are they for?
Me: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Raina/Pam: Let it rip!!
(Pegasus takes the center)
Raina: Pirate Launch!!
(Ridley rushes at Pegasus with a barrage of attacks)
Pam: Peaceful Zone!!
(Pegasus puts itself into a defensive position, Pegasus blocks all of Ridley’s attacks)
[Possessed Raina: RIDLEY!!!
(Raina’s Evil Resonance Aura flares up, Ridley sends Pegasus flying)
Pam: Pegasus!!
(Pam’s Resonance Aura flares up, Pegasus lands back on the stadium floor)
Possessed Raina: You shall be broken!!
(Ridley speeds up and heads straight for Pegasus)
Pam: Peaceful Feather Storm!!
(Pegasus creates a huge tornado, Ridley hits Pegasus hard but it gets deflected)
Me: Wow, Pegasus can counter anything!!
(Purple smoke around Raina blows up and her eyes glow purple)
Possessed Raina: Pirate Rush!!
(Pegasus gets sent flying, It’s golden blades stick out)
Possessed Raina: End this!!
(Ridley speeds up and hits Pegasus’ golden blades)
Pam: Peaceful Heal!!
(Pegasus reverses its locks)
Possessed Raina: What the?!
(Pegasus starts picking up speed and heads straight for Ridley)
Pam: Peaceful Thunder!!
Possessed Raina: Once again!! Pirate Rush!!
(Raina roars, Raina sees herself in a puddle)
Raina: *Gasps*
Aiden: So this is what Valt was talking about.
(I nod silently, The whole stadium explodes)
Pam: Come on, Pegasus!!
(Ridley gets sent flying in the air, Ridley bursts)
Me: It's Peacebringer Pegasus with a burst finish!! The winner is--
Raina: What was that?!
Pam: What do you mean?
Raina: I saw a dark aura engulfing me in it!
(Me and Aiden look at each other worried)
Pam: I saw it too.
Raina: Percy!!
Me: um, yes?
Raina: You seem to know what I’m talking about!!
(I gulp)
Me: Um well, you see!
(I explain everything that happened, Valt runs into the forest)
Valt: Yo--
Raina: Why didn’t you tell me?!!
Me: Because I couldn’t!!
Raina: Wait a minute, I never saw Doomsizer after our battle.
Pam: Uh Oh.
Raina: What happened to Doomsizer!!
Pam: It broke.
Raina: You!!
(Raina points her finger at me fiercely)
Me: How is this my fault?!
Possessed Raina: YOU DIDN’T TELL ME!!!
Me: *Gasps*
Possessed Raina: I CAUSED SO MUCH TROUBLE AND YOU LET IT HAPPEN!!
(Her dark resonance aura flares up)
Me: It’s not my fault that you're a bad blader!!!
Valt: Uh oh.
Raina: IT’S YOUR FAULT THAT YOU’RE A BAD FRIEND!!!
Me: *Gasps*
(I run off, Raina storms off)
Valt: Did Percy tell her?
Pam: No, she found out.
Valt: *Sighs* I started this and I'm gonna end it.
Aiden: What do you mean?
Valt: You’ll see.
(Valt gets up and walks away)
Chapter 14
Bey Of Harmony!! Peacebringer Pegasus!!!
(Pam walks into the work room)
Pam: I’m gonna fix Doomsizer, no I’m gonna build a stronger bey.
(Pam flashback)
Pheng: Reverse Heal!!
Young Pam: Go!!
(Pegasus bursts Pam’s bey)
Young Pam: Aw man!!
Pheng: One day, I’m going to have to retire from Blading. So you’ll be owning Pegasus.
Young Pam: I'm gonna be super strong like you Big Bro!!
(Pheng ruffles Pam's hair)
Pheng: I know you will!
(Pam’s Flashback ends)
Pam: Pheng, I’m never going to let you down!!
(Pam starts working)
Pam: I’m going to create a new Pegasus!
~At BC Sol’s Main Gym~
Valt: So, where’s Raina?
Aiden: She’s out practicing.
Valt: Good, there’s something I need to tell you guys about her.
(Valt explains Raina’s Resonance)
Aiden: So Percy knew about this?!
(I nod my head silently)
Aiden: How could you not tell us?!
(Aiden’s voice turns angry)
Valt: I’m gonna let you work this out.
(Valt gets up and leaves)
Me: So.
Aiden: You knew about this and didn’t tell any of us?
Me: I couldn’t!!
Aiden: *Sighs* I’ll keep this, but next time you gotta trust us more.
Me: Promise.
~At The BC Sol Workshop~
Pam: Finally, it’s finished!!
(Pam holds up his new bey)
Pam: Peacebringer Pegasus!!
(Pegasus glimmers in the sun, Pam runs off)
~At The Stadium In The Woods~
(Me Aiden and Raina walk into the forest)
Aiden: What’s up Pam?
Pam: Meet Peacebringer Pegasus!!
Raina: Awesome!!
Me: That’s so cool!!
Aiden: That’s so cool!! Who are you gonna battle first!
Pam: I’m still bummed about losing to Raina, so she’s up first!!
Raina: I’m gonna win!!
Me: I’ll be the judge!! Inspect your opponent's bey!!
Raina (Thoughts): Peacebringer Pegasus, a clockwise spinning stamina type!! It’s very circular and it looks like golden wings can come out when it’s about to burst, but what are they for?
Me: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Raina/Pam: Let it rip!!
(Pegasus takes the center)
Raina: Pirate Launch!!
(Ridley rushes at Pegasus with a barrage of attacks)
Pam: Peaceful Zone!!
(Pegasus puts itself into a defensive position, Pegasus blocks all of Ridley’s attacks)
[Possessed Raina: RIDLEY!!!
(Raina’s Evil Resonance Aura flares up, Ridley sends Pegasus flying)
Pam: Pegasus!!
(Pam’s Resonance Aura flares up, Pegasus lands back on the stadium floor)
Possessed Raina: You shall be broken!!
(Ridley speeds up and heads straight for Pegasus)
Pam: Peaceful Feather Storm!!
(Pegasus creates a huge tornado, Ridley hits Pegasus hard but it gets deflected)
Me: Wow, Pegasus can counter anything!!
(Purple smoke around Raina blows up and her eyes glow purple)
Possessed Raina: Pirate Rush!!
(Pegasus gets sent flying, It’s golden blades stick out)
Possessed Raina: End this!!
(Ridley speeds up and hits Pegasus’ golden blades)
Pam: Peaceful Heal!!
(Pegasus reverses its locks)
Possessed Raina: What the?!
(Pegasus starts picking up speed and heads straight for Ridley)
Pam: Peaceful Thunder!!
Possessed Raina: Once again!! Pirate Rush!!
(Raina roars, Raina sees herself in a puddle)
Raina: *Gasps*
Aiden: So this is what Valt was talking about.
(I nod silently, The whole stadium explodes)
Pam: Come on, Pegasus!!
(Ridley gets sent flying in the air, Ridley bursts)
Me: It's Peacebringer Pegasus with a burst finish!! The winner is--
Raina: What was that?!
Pam: What do you mean?
Raina: I saw a dark aura engulfing me in it!
(Me and Aiden look at each other worried)
Pam: I saw it too.
Raina: Percy!!
Me: um, yes?
Raina: You seem to know what I’m talking about!!
(I gulp)
Me: Um well, you see!
(I explain everything that happened, Valt runs into the forest)
Valt: Yo--
Raina: Why didn’t you tell me?!!
Me: Because I couldn’t!!
Raina: Wait a minute, I never saw Doomsizer after our battle.
Pam: Uh Oh.
Raina: What happened to Doomsizer!!
Pam: It broke.
Raina: You!!
(Raina points her finger at me fiercely)
Me: How is this my fault?!
Possessed Raina: YOU DIDN’T TELL ME!!!
Me: *Gasps*
Possessed Raina: I CAUSED SO MUCH TROUBLE AND YOU LET IT HAPPEN!!
(Her dark resonance aura flares up)
Me: It’s not my fault that you're a bad blader!!!
Valt: Uh oh.
Raina: IT’S YOUR FAULT THAT YOU’RE A BAD FRIEND!!!
Me: *Gasps*
(I run off, Raina storms off)
Valt: Did Percy tell her?
Pam: No, she found out.
Valt: *Sighs* I started this and I'm gonna end it.
Aiden: What do you mean?
Valt: You’ll see.
(Valt gets up and walks away)
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - GenesisBlader - Jul. 03, 2021
(Jul. 03, 2021 9:53 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 14 is out!!
Spoiler (Click to View)Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 14
Bey Of Harmony!! Peacebringer Pegasus!!!
(Pam walks into the work room)
Pam: I’m gonna fix Doomsizer, no I’m gonna build a stronger bey.
(Pam flashback)
Pheng: Reverse Heal!!
Young Pam: Go!!
(Pegasus bursts Pam’s bey)
Young Pam: Aw man!!
Pheng: One day, I’m going to have to retire from Blading. So you’ll be owning Pegasus.
Young Pam: I'm gonna be super strong like you Big Bro!!
(Pheng ruffles Pam's hair)
Pheng: I know you will!
(Pam’s Flashback ends)
Pam: Pheng, I’m never going to let you down!!
(Pam starts working)
Pam: I’m going to create a new Pegasus!
~At BC Sol’s Main Gym~
Valt: So, where’s Raina?
Aiden: She’s out practicing.
Valt: Good, there’s something I need to tell you guys about her.
(Valt explains Raina’s Resonance)
Aiden: So Percy knew about this?!
(I nod my head silently)
Aiden: How could you not tell us?!
(Aiden’s voice turns angry)
Valt: I’m gonna let you work this out.
(Valt gets up and leaves)
Me: So.
Aiden: You knew about this and didn’t tell any of us?
Me: I couldn’t!!
Aiden: *Sighs* I’ll keep this, but next time you gotta trust us more.
Me: Promise.
~At The BC Sol Workshop~
Pam: Finally, it’s finished!!
(Pam holds up his new bey)
Pam: Peacebringer Pegasus!!
(Pegasus glimmers in the sun, Pam runs off)
~At The Stadium In The Woods~
(Me Aiden and Raina walk into the forest)
Aiden: What’s up Pam?
Pam: Meet Peacebringer Pegasus!!
Raina: Awesome!!
Me: That’s so cool!!
Aiden: That’s so cool!! Who are you gonna battle first!
Pam: I’m still bummed about losing to Raina, so she’s up first!!
Raina: I’m gonna win!!
Me: I’ll be the judge!! Inspect your opponent's bey!!
Raina (Thoughts): Peacebringer Pegasus, a clockwise spinning stamina type!! It’s very circular and it looks like golden wings can come out when it’s about to burst, but what are they for?
Me: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Raina/Pam: Let it rip!!
(Pegasus takes the center)
Raina: Pirate Launch!!
(Ridley rushes at Pegasus with a barrage of attacks)
Pam: Peaceful Zone!!
(Pegasus puts itself into a defensive position, Pegasus blocks all of Ridley’s attacks)
[Possessed Raina: RIDLEY!!!
(Raina’s Evil Resonance Aura flares up, Ridley sends Pegasus flying)
Pam: Pegasus!!
(Pam’s Resonance Aura flares up, Pegasus lands back on the stadium floor)
Possessed Raina: You shall be broken!!
(Ridley speeds up and heads straight for Pegasus)
Pam: Peaceful Feather Storm!!
(Pegasus creates a huge tornado, Ridley hits Pegasus hard but it gets deflected)
Me: Wow, Pegasus can counter anything!!
(Purple smoke around Raina blows up and her eyes glow purple)
Possessed Raina: Pirate Rush!!
(Pegasus gets sent flying, It’s golden blades stick out)
Possessed Raina: End this!!
(Ridley speeds up and hits Pegasus’ golden blades)
Pam: Peaceful Heal!!
(Pegasus reverses its locks)
Possessed Raina: What the?!
(Pegasus starts picking up speed and heads straight for Ridley)
Pam: Peaceful Thunder!!
Possessed Raina: Once again!! Pirate Rush!!
(Raina roars, Raina sees herself in a puddle)
Raina: *Gasps*
Aiden: So this is what Valt was talking about.
(I nod silently, The whole stadium explodes)
Pam: Come on, Pegasus!!
(Ridley gets sent flying in the air, Ridley bursts)
Me: It's Peacebringer Pegasus with a burst finish!! The winner is--
Raina: What was that?!
Pam: What do you mean?
Raina: I saw a dark aura engulfing me in it!
(Me and Aiden look at each other worried)
Pam: I saw it too.
Raina: Percy!!
Me: um, yes?
Raina: You seem to know what I’m talking about!!
(I gulp)
Me: Um well, you see!
(I explain everything that happened, Valt runs into the forest)
Valt: Yo--
Raina: Why didn’t you tell me?!!
Me: Because I couldn’t!!
Raina: Wait a minute, I never saw Doomsizer after our battle.
Pam: Uh Oh.
Raina: What happened to Doomsizer!!
Pam: It broke.
Raina: You!!
(Raina points her finger at me fiercely)
Me: How is this my fault?!
Possessed Raina: YOU DIDN’T TELL ME!!!
Me: *Gasps*
Possessed Raina: I CAUSED SO MUCH TROUBLE AND YOU LET IT HAPPEN!!
(Her dark resonance aura flares up)
Me: It’s not my fault that you're a bad blader!!!
Valt: Uh oh.
Raina: IT’S YOUR FAULT THAT YOU’RE A BAD FRIEND!!!
Me: *Gasps*
(I run off, Raina storms off)
Valt: Did Percy tell her?
Pam: No, she found out.
Valt: *Sighs* I started this and I'm gonna end it.
Aiden: What do you mean?
Valt: You’ll see.
(Valt gets up and walks away)
YESSS AWESOMEEEE
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jul. 03, 2021
15) World Champions!! Heroic Valtryek!!
16) Teamwork Makes The Dream Works!!!
17) Spryzen Vs Spryzen!!
18) Lord Of Darkness!! Vile Overlord!!
19) The Junior World Championships!!
20) Fiery Dragon!! Cinder Salamander!!
21) The Roaring Dragon!! Wicked Balkesh!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - GenesisBlader - Jul. 03, 2021
ono raina is now on her quest to destroy some bey's and the start of it ain't lookin too pretty
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jul. 03, 2021
(Jul. 03, 2021 9:55 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:(Jul. 03, 2021 9:53 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 14 is out!!
Spoiler (Click to View)Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 14
Bey Of Harmony!! Peacebringer Pegasus!!!
(Pam walks into the work room)
Pam: I’m gonna fix Doomsizer, no I’m gonna build a stronger bey.
(Pam flashback)
Pheng: Reverse Heal!!
Young Pam: Go!!
(Pegasus bursts Pam’s bey)
Young Pam: Aw man!!
Pheng: One day, I’m going to have to retire from Blading. So you’ll be owning Pegasus.
Young Pam: I'm gonna be super strong like you Big Bro!!
(Pheng ruffles Pam's hair)
Pheng: I know you will!
(Pam’s Flashback ends)
Pam: Pheng, I’m never going to let you down!!
(Pam starts working)
Pam: I’m going to create a new Pegasus!
~At BC Sol’s Main Gym~
Valt: So, where’s Raina?
Aiden: She’s out practicing.
Valt: Good, there’s something I need to tell you guys about her.
(Valt explains Raina’s Resonance)
Aiden: So Percy knew about this?!
(I nod my head silently)
Aiden: How could you not tell us?!
(Aiden’s voice turns angry)
Valt: I’m gonna let you work this out.
(Valt gets up and leaves)
Me: So.
Aiden: You knew about this and didn’t tell any of us?
Me: I couldn’t!!
Aiden: *Sighs* I’ll keep this, but next time you gotta trust us more.
Me: Promise.
~At The BC Sol Workshop~
Pam: Finally, it’s finished!!
(Pam holds up his new bey)
Pam: Peacebringer Pegasus!!
(Pegasus glimmers in the sun, Pam runs off)
~At The Stadium In The Woods~
(Me Aiden and Raina walk into the forest)
Aiden: What’s up Pam?
Pam: Meet Peacebringer Pegasus!!
Raina: Awesome!!
Me: That’s so cool!!
Aiden: That’s so cool!! Who are you gonna battle first!
Pam: I’m still bummed about losing to Raina, so she’s up first!!
Raina: I’m gonna win!!
Me: I’ll be the judge!! Inspect your opponent's bey!!
Raina (Thoughts): Peacebringer Pegasus, a clockwise spinning stamina type!! It’s very circular and it looks like golden wings can come out when it’s about to burst, but what are they for?
Me: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Raina/Pam: Let it rip!!
(Pegasus takes the center)
Raina: Pirate Launch!!
(Ridley rushes at Pegasus with a barrage of attacks)
Pam: Peaceful Zone!!
(Pegasus puts itself into a defensive position, Pegasus blocks all of Ridley’s attacks)
[Possessed Raina: RIDLEY!!!
(Raina’s Evil Resonance Aura flares up, Ridley sends Pegasus flying)
Pam: Pegasus!!
(Pam’s Resonance Aura flares up, Pegasus lands back on the stadium floor)
Possessed Raina: You shall be broken!!
(Ridley speeds up and heads straight for Pegasus)
Pam: Peaceful Feather Storm!!
(Pegasus creates a huge tornado, Ridley hits Pegasus hard but it gets deflected)
Me: Wow, Pegasus can counter anything!!
(Purple smoke around Raina blows up and her eyes glow purple)
Possessed Raina: Pirate Rush!!
(Pegasus gets sent flying, It’s golden blades stick out)
Possessed Raina: End this!!
(Ridley speeds up and hits Pegasus’ golden blades)
Pam: Peaceful Heal!!
(Pegasus reverses its locks)
Possessed Raina: What the?!
(Pegasus starts picking up speed and heads straight for Ridley)
Pam: Peaceful Thunder!!
Possessed Raina: Once again!! Pirate Rush!!
(Raina roars, Raina sees herself in a puddle)
Raina: *Gasps*
Aiden: So this is what Valt was talking about.
(I nod silently, The whole stadium explodes)
Pam: Come on, Pegasus!!
(Ridley gets sent flying in the air, Ridley bursts)
Me: It's Peacebringer Pegasus with a burst finish!! The winner is--
Raina: What was that?!
Pam: What do you mean?
Raina: I saw a dark aura engulfing me in it!
(Me and Aiden look at each other worried)
Pam: I saw it too.
Raina: Percy!!
Me: um, yes?
Raina: You seem to know what I’m talking about!!
(I gulp)
Me: Um well, you see!
(I explain everything that happened, Valt runs into the forest)
Valt: Yo--
Raina: Why didn’t you tell me?!!
Me: Because I couldn’t!!
Raina: Wait a minute, I never saw Doomsizer after our battle.
Pam: Uh Oh.
Raina: What happened to Doomsizer!!
Pam: It broke.
Raina: You!!
(Raina points her finger at me fiercely)
Me: How is this my fault?!
Possessed Raina: YOU DIDN’T TELL ME!!!
Me: *Gasps*
Possessed Raina: I CAUSED SO MUCH TROUBLE AND YOU LET IT HAPPEN!!
(Her dark resonance aura flares up)
Me: It’s not my fault that you're a bad blader!!!
Valt: Uh oh.
Raina: IT’S YOUR FAULT THAT YOU’RE A BAD FRIEND!!!
Me: *Gasps*
(I run off, Raina storms off)
Valt: Did Percy tell her?
Pam: No, she found out.
Valt: *Sighs* I started this and I'm gonna end it.
Aiden: What do you mean?
Valt: You’ll see.
(Valt gets up and walks away)
YESSS AWESOMEEEE
Thx
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - GenesisBlader - Jul. 03, 2021
(Jul. 03, 2021 9:58 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: 15) World Champions!! Heroic Valtryek!!
16) Teamwork!! Helios Blazebringer And Hyperion Flamebringer!!
17) Spryzen Vs Spryzen
18) Lord Of Darkness!! Vile Overlord!!
19) The Junior World Championships!!
20) Fiery Dragon!! Cinder Salamander!!
21) The Roaring Dragon!! Wicked Balkesh!!
WICKED
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Jul. 03, 2021
(Jul. 03, 2021 9:53 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 14 is out!!
Spoiler (Click to View)Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 14
Bey Of Harmony!! Peacebringer Pegasus!!!
(Pam walks into the work room)
Pam: I’m gonna fix Doomsizer, no I’m gonna build a stronger bey.
(Pam flashback)
Pheng: Reverse Heal!!
Young Pam: Go!!
(Pegasus bursts Pam’s bey)
Young Pam: Aw man!!
Pheng: One day, I’m going to have to retire from Blading. So you’ll be owning Pegasus.
Young Pam: I'm gonna be super strong like you Big Bro!!
(Pheng ruffles Pam's hair)
Pheng: I know you will!
(Pam’s Flashback ends)
Pam: Pheng, I’m never going to let you down!!
(Pam starts working)
Pam: I’m going to create a new Pegasus!
~At BC Sol’s Main Gym~
Valt: So, where’s Raina?
Aiden: She’s out practicing.
Valt: Good, there’s something I need to tell you guys about her.
(Valt explains Raina’s Resonance)
Aiden: So Percy knew about this?!
(I nod my head silently)
Aiden: How could you not tell us?!
(Aiden’s voice turns angry)
Valt: I’m gonna let you work this out.
(Valt gets up and leaves)
Me: So.
Aiden: You knew about this and didn’t tell any of us?
Me: I couldn’t!!
Aiden: *Sighs* I’ll keep this, but next time you gotta trust us more.
Me: Promise.
~At The BC Sol Workshop~
Pam: Finally, it’s finished!!
(Pam holds up his new bey)
Pam: Peacebringer Pegasus!!
(Pegasus glimmers in the sun, Pam runs off)
~At The Stadium In The Woods~
(Me Aiden and Raina walk into the forest)
Aiden: What’s up Pam?
Pam: Meet Peacebringer Pegasus!!
Raina: Awesome!!
Me: That’s so cool!!
Aiden: That’s so cool!! Who are you gonna battle first!
Pam: I’m still bummed about losing to Raina, so she’s up first!!
Raina: I’m gonna win!!
Me: I’ll be the judge!! Inspect your opponent's bey!!
Raina (Thoughts): Peacebringer Pegasus, a clockwise spinning stamina type!! It’s very circular and it looks like golden wings can come out when it’s about to burst, but what are they for?
Me: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Raina/Pam: Let it rip!!
(Pegasus takes the center)
Raina: Pirate Launch!!
(Ridley rushes at Pegasus with a barrage of attacks)
Pam: Peaceful Zone!!
(Pegasus puts itself into a defensive position, Pegasus blocks all of Ridley’s attacks)
[Possessed Raina: RIDLEY!!!
(Raina’s Evil Resonance Aura flares up, Ridley sends Pegasus flying)
Pam: Pegasus!!
(Pam’s Resonance Aura flares up, Pegasus lands back on the stadium floor)
Possessed Raina: You shall be broken!!
(Ridley speeds up and heads straight for Pegasus)
Pam: Peaceful Feather Storm!!
(Pegasus creates a huge tornado, Ridley hits Pegasus hard but it gets deflected)
Me: Wow, Pegasus can counter anything!!
(Purple smoke around Raina blows up and her eyes glow purple)
Possessed Raina: Pirate Rush!!
(Pegasus gets sent flying, It’s golden blades stick out)
Possessed Raina: End this!!
(Ridley speeds up and hits Pegasus’ golden blades)
Pam: Peaceful Heal!!
(Pegasus reverses its locks)
Possessed Raina: What the?!
(Pegasus starts picking up speed and heads straight for Ridley)
Pam: Peaceful Thunder!!
Possessed Raina: Once again!! Pirate Rush!!
(Raina roars, Raina sees herself in a puddle)
Raina: *Gasps*
Aiden: So this is what Valt was talking about.
(I nod silently, The whole stadium explodes)
Pam: Come on, Pegasus!!
(Ridley gets sent flying in the air, Ridley bursts)
Me: It's Peacebringer Pegasus with a burst finish!! The winner is--
Raina: What was that?!
Pam: What do you mean?
Raina: I saw a dark aura engulfing me in it!
(Me and Aiden look at each other worried)
Pam: I saw it too.
Raina: Percy!!
Me: um, yes?
Raina: You seem to know what I’m talking about!!
(I gulp)
Me: Um well, you see!
(I explain everything that happened, Valt runs into the forest)
Valt: Yo--
Raina: Why didn’t you tell me?!!
Me: Because I couldn’t!!
Raina: Wait a minute, I never saw Doomsizer after our battle.
Pam: Uh Oh.
Raina: What happened to Doomsizer!!
Pam: It broke.
Raina: You!!
(Raina points her finger at me fiercely)
Me: How is this my fault?!
Possessed Raina: YOU DIDN’T TELL ME!!!
Me: *Gasps*
Possessed Raina: I CAUSED SO MUCH TROUBLE AND YOU LET IT HAPPEN!!
(Her dark resonance aura flares up)
Me: It’s not my fault that you're a bad blader!!!
Valt: Uh oh.
Raina: IT’S YOUR FAULT THAT YOU’RE A BAD FRIEND!!!
Me: *Gasps*
(I run off, Raina storms off)
Valt: Did Percy tell her?
Pam: No, she found out.
Valt: *Sighs* I started this and I'm gonna end it.
Aiden: What do you mean?
Valt: You’ll see.
(Valt gets up and walks away)
This is crazy!!!!! And Raina and Percy have to fix there problems
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jul. 03, 2021
(Jul. 03, 2021 10:00 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:(Jul. 03, 2021 9:58 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: 15) World Champions!! Heroic Valtryek!!
16) Teamwork!! Helios Blazebringer And Hyperion Flamebringer!!
17) Spryzen Vs Spryzen
18) Lord Of Darkness!! Vile Overlord!!
19) The Junior World Championships!!
20) Fiery Dragon!! Cinder Salamander!!
21) The Roaring Dragon!! Wicked Balkesh!!
WICKED
Don't you mean Wicked Balkesh?
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Jul. 03, 2021
(Jul. 03, 2021 9:53 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 14 is out!!
Spoiler (Click to View)Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 14
Bey Of Harmony!! Peacebringer Pegasus!!!
(Pam walks into the work room)
Pam: I’m gonna fix Doomsizer, no I’m gonna build a stronger bey.
(Pam flashback)
Pheng: Reverse Heal!!
Young Pam: Go!!
(Pegasus bursts Pam’s bey)
Young Pam: Aw man!!
Pheng: One day, I’m going to have to retire from Blading. So you’ll be owning Pegasus.
Young Pam: I'm gonna be super strong like you Big Bro!!
(Pheng ruffles Pam's hair)
Pheng: I know you will!
(Pam’s Flashback ends)
Pam: Pheng, I’m never going to let you down!!
(Pam starts working)
Pam: I’m going to create a new Pegasus!
~At BC Sol’s Main Gym~
Valt: So, where’s Raina?
Aiden: She’s out practicing.
Valt: Good, there’s something I need to tell you guys about her.
(Valt explains Raina’s Resonance)
Aiden: So Percy knew about this?!
(I nod my head silently)
Aiden: How could you not tell us?!
(Aiden’s voice turns angry)
Valt: I’m gonna let you work this out.
(Valt gets up and leaves)
Me: So.
Aiden: You knew about this and didn’t tell any of us?
Me: I couldn’t!!
Aiden: *Sighs* I’ll keep this, but next time you gotta trust us more.
Me: Promise.
~At The BC Sol Workshop~
Pam: Finally, it’s finished!!
(Pam holds up his new bey)
Pam: Peacebringer Pegasus!!
(Pegasus glimmers in the sun, Pam runs off)
~At The Stadium In The Woods~
(Me Aiden and Raina walk into the forest)
Aiden: What’s up Pam?
Pam: Meet Peacebringer Pegasus!!
Raina: Awesome!!
Me: That’s so cool!!
Aiden: That’s so cool!! Who are you gonna battle first!
Pam: I’m still bummed about losing to Raina, so she’s up first!!
Raina: I’m gonna win!!
Me: I’ll be the judge!! Inspect your opponent's bey!!
Raina (Thoughts): Peacebringer Pegasus, a clockwise spinning stamina type!! It’s very circular and it looks like golden wings can come out when it’s about to burst, but what are they for?
Me: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Raina/Pam: Let it rip!!
(Pegasus takes the center)
Raina: Pirate Launch!!
(Ridley rushes at Pegasus with a barrage of attacks)
Pam: Peaceful Zone!!
(Pegasus puts itself into a defensive position, Pegasus blocks all of Ridley’s attacks)
[Possessed Raina: RIDLEY!!!
(Raina’s Evil Resonance Aura flares up, Ridley sends Pegasus flying)
Pam: Pegasus!!
(Pam’s Resonance Aura flares up, Pegasus lands back on the stadium floor)
Possessed Raina: You shall be broken!!
(Ridley speeds up and heads straight for Pegasus)
Pam: Peaceful Feather Storm!!
(Pegasus creates a huge tornado, Ridley hits Pegasus hard but it gets deflected)
Me: Wow, Pegasus can counter anything!!
(Purple smoke around Raina blows up and her eyes glow purple)
Possessed Raina: Pirate Rush!!
(Pegasus gets sent flying, It’s golden blades stick out)
Possessed Raina: End this!!
(Ridley speeds up and hits Pegasus’ golden blades)
Pam: Peaceful Heal!!
(Pegasus reverses its locks)
Possessed Raina: What the?!
(Pegasus starts picking up speed and heads straight for Ridley)
Pam: Peaceful Thunder!!
Possessed Raina: Once again!! Pirate Rush!!
(Raina roars, Raina sees herself in a puddle)
Raina: *Gasps*
Aiden: So this is what Valt was talking about.
(I nod silently, The whole stadium explodes)
Pam: Come on, Pegasus!!
(Ridley gets sent flying in the air, Ridley bursts)
Me: It's Peacebringer Pegasus with a burst finish!! The winner is--
Raina: What was that?!
Pam: What do you mean?
Raina: I saw a dark aura engulfing me in it!
(Me and Aiden look at each other worried)
Pam: I saw it too.
Raina: Percy!!
Me: um, yes?
Raina: You seem to know what I’m talking about!!
(I gulp)
Me: Um well, you see!
(I explain everything that happened, Valt runs into the forest)
Valt: Yo--
Raina: Why didn’t you tell me?!!
Me: Because I couldn’t!!
Raina: Wait a minute, I never saw Doomsizer after our battle.
Pam: Uh Oh.
Raina: What happened to Doomsizer!!
Pam: It broke.
Raina: You!!
(Raina points her finger at me fiercely)
Me: How is this my fault?!
Possessed Raina: YOU DIDN’T TELL ME!!!
Me: *Gasps*
Possessed Raina: I CAUSED SO MUCH TROUBLE AND YOU LET IT HAPPEN!!
(Her dark resonance aura flares up)
Me: It’s not my fault that you're a bad blader!!!
Valt: Uh oh.
Raina: IT’S YOUR FAULT THAT YOU’RE A BAD FRIEND!!!
Me: *Gasps*
(I run off, Raina storms off)
Valt: Did Percy tell her?
Pam: No, she found out.
Valt: *Sighs* I started this and I'm gonna end it.
Aiden: What do you mean?
Valt: You’ll see.
(Valt gets up and walks away)
This is crazy!!!!! And Raina and Percy have to fix there problems
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jul. 03, 2021
(Jul. 03, 2021 10:00 PM)LegendJustice Wrote:(Jul. 03, 2021 9:53 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 14 is out!!
Spoiler (Click to View)Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 14
Bey Of Harmony!! Peacebringer Pegasus!!!
(Pam walks into the work room)
Pam: I’m gonna fix Doomsizer, no I’m gonna build a stronger bey.
(Pam flashback)
Pheng: Reverse Heal!!
Young Pam: Go!!
(Pegasus bursts Pam’s bey)
Young Pam: Aw man!!
Pheng: One day, I’m going to have to retire from Blading. So you’ll be owning Pegasus.
Young Pam: I'm gonna be super strong like you Big Bro!!
(Pheng ruffles Pam's hair)
Pheng: I know you will!
(Pam’s Flashback ends)
Pam: Pheng, I’m never going to let you down!!
(Pam starts working)
Pam: I’m going to create a new Pegasus!
~At BC Sol’s Main Gym~
Valt: So, where’s Raina?
Aiden: She’s out practicing.
Valt: Good, there’s something I need to tell you guys about her.
(Valt explains Raina’s Resonance)
Aiden: So Percy knew about this?!
(I nod my head silently)
Aiden: How could you not tell us?!
(Aiden’s voice turns angry)
Valt: I’m gonna let you work this out.
(Valt gets up and leaves)
Me: So.
Aiden: You knew about this and didn’t tell any of us?
Me: I couldn’t!!
Aiden: *Sighs* I’ll keep this, but next time you gotta trust us more.
Me: Promise.
~At The BC Sol Workshop~
Pam: Finally, it’s finished!!
(Pam holds up his new bey)
Pam: Peacebringer Pegasus!!
(Pegasus glimmers in the sun, Pam runs off)
~At The Stadium In The Woods~
(Me Aiden and Raina walk into the forest)
Aiden: What’s up Pam?
Pam: Meet Peacebringer Pegasus!!
Raina: Awesome!!
Me: That’s so cool!!
Aiden: That’s so cool!! Who are you gonna battle first!
Pam: I’m still bummed about losing to Raina, so she’s up first!!
Raina: I’m gonna win!!
Me: I’ll be the judge!! Inspect your opponent's bey!!
Raina (Thoughts): Peacebringer Pegasus, a clockwise spinning stamina type!! It’s very circular and it looks like golden wings can come out when it’s about to burst, but what are they for?
Me: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Raina/Pam: Let it rip!!
(Pegasus takes the center)
Raina: Pirate Launch!!
(Ridley rushes at Pegasus with a barrage of attacks)
Pam: Peaceful Zone!!
(Pegasus puts itself into a defensive position, Pegasus blocks all of Ridley’s attacks)
[Possessed Raina: RIDLEY!!!
(Raina’s Evil Resonance Aura flares up, Ridley sends Pegasus flying)
Pam: Pegasus!!
(Pam’s Resonance Aura flares up, Pegasus lands back on the stadium floor)
Possessed Raina: You shall be broken!!
(Ridley speeds up and heads straight for Pegasus)
Pam: Peaceful Feather Storm!!
(Pegasus creates a huge tornado, Ridley hits Pegasus hard but it gets deflected)
Me: Wow, Pegasus can counter anything!!
(Purple smoke around Raina blows up and her eyes glow purple)
Possessed Raina: Pirate Rush!!
(Pegasus gets sent flying, It’s golden blades stick out)
Possessed Raina: End this!!
(Ridley speeds up and hits Pegasus’ golden blades)
Pam: Peaceful Heal!!
(Pegasus reverses its locks)
Possessed Raina: What the?!
(Pegasus starts picking up speed and heads straight for Ridley)
Pam: Peaceful Thunder!!
Possessed Raina: Once again!! Pirate Rush!!
(Raina roars, Raina sees herself in a puddle)
Raina: *Gasps*
Aiden: So this is what Valt was talking about.
(I nod silently, The whole stadium explodes)
Pam: Come on, Pegasus!!
(Ridley gets sent flying in the air, Ridley bursts)
Me: It's Peacebringer Pegasus with a burst finish!! The winner is--
Raina: What was that?!
Pam: What do you mean?
Raina: I saw a dark aura engulfing me in it!
(Me and Aiden look at each other worried)
Pam: I saw it too.
Raina: Percy!!
Me: um, yes?
Raina: You seem to know what I’m talking about!!
(I gulp)
Me: Um well, you see!
(I explain everything that happened, Valt runs into the forest)
Valt: Yo--
Raina: Why didn’t you tell me?!!
Me: Because I couldn’t!!
Raina: Wait a minute, I never saw Doomsizer after our battle.
Pam: Uh Oh.
Raina: What happened to Doomsizer!!
Pam: It broke.
Raina: You!!
(Raina points her finger at me fiercely)
Me: How is this my fault?!
Possessed Raina: YOU DIDN’T TELL ME!!!
Me: *Gasps*
Possessed Raina: I CAUSED SO MUCH TROUBLE AND YOU LET IT HAPPEN!!
(Her dark resonance aura flares up)
Me: It’s not my fault that you're a bad blader!!!
Valt: Uh oh.
Raina: IT’S YOUR FAULT THAT YOU’RE A BAD FRIEND!!!
Me: *Gasps*
(I run off, Raina storms off)
Valt: Did Percy tell her?
Pam: No, she found out.
Valt: *Sighs* I started this and I'm gonna end it.
Aiden: What do you mean?
Valt: You’ll see.
(Valt gets up and walks away)
This is crazy!!!!! And Raina and Percy have to fix there problems
They need some tissues for their issues (Sorry I feel really punny today)
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Jul. 03, 2021
(Jul. 03, 2021 9:58 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: 15) World Champions!! Heroic Valtryek!!
16) Teamwork!! Helios Blazebringer And Hyperion Flamebringer!!
17) Spryzen Vs Spryzen
18) Lord Of Darkness!! Vile Overlord!!
19) The Junior World Championships!!
20) Fiery Dragon!! Cinder Salamander!!
21) The Roaring Dragon!! Wicked Balkesh!!
I wish i had your talent
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - GenesisBlader - Jul. 03, 2021
(Jul. 03, 2021 10:01 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:(Jul. 03, 2021 10:00 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: This is crazy!!!!! And Raina and Percy have to fix there problems
They need some tissues for their issues (Sorry I feel really punny today)
lol nice one