RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - NamanSpryzen - Jun. 30, 2021
Name: Nami Kurenai
Bey Name: Scorpion Spriggan 7B Zeta''
Ring- Nami's dad (Shu) made Scorpion Belial (not really just for this fan fic), so he made another Scorpion ring (with rubber since Nami wanted that) and Nami used it.
Chip- Since Shu is a part-time bey maker and part-time player, he showed Nami how to create a chip, and Nami made Spriggan. Now his bey is Belial and Spriggan COMBINED! (Nami made Spriggan dual spin, like always)
Chassis- Once again, Nami knows how to make a bey. So, Nami made an extra tooth chassis, so it's VERY hard to burst! It's a balance type, switching from stamina to defense. Stamina type is when the spikes on the ring of the chassis get removed before launching. Defense is when the spikes AREN'T removed.
Driver- Zeta'' is Zeta' but the grip on the chassis is just stronger and it can switch to Attack, Stamina, and Defense.
Age: 13 and a half
Personality: Nami is very into Beyblade. He broke a bey with such a powerful launch that the bey broke in one hit! Nami strives to beat Aiger and become World Champion. (P.S. Whenever something goes wrong or he forgets something, his pet word is "FLIP")
What you look like- Nami has a blood red jacket and he has black pants. He has hair like his dad when he was Red Eye, and unmasked.
Bey Moves: Scorpion Spriggan- the special move where the avatar comes from a yellow-and red aura.
Storm Clash- used in stamina mode (and Zeta'' is stamina too), the bey spins so fast that the bey makes a whirlwind and spin steals all of the other bey's stamina
Guardian Clash- used in defense mode (for chassis, for tip its the same) the bey spins so fast that the bey makes a whirlwind and then the spikes hit the opposing bey and then taht bey bursts
(Hey UnseenBurst don't judge me I didn't have the time to type anything so I copy and pasted my entry for Dynachi and made some edits and I hope I get picked. LegendJustice I hope you like my entry!)
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Jun. 30, 2021
(Jun. 30, 2021 7:51 PM)NamanSpryzen Wrote: Name: Nami Kurenai
Bey Name: Scorpion Spriggan 7B Zeta''
Ring- Nami's dad (Shu) made Scorpion Belial (not really just for this fan fic), so he made another Savior ring (with rubber since Nami wanted that) and Nami used it.
Chip- Since Shu is a part-time bey maker and part-time player, he showed Nami how to create a chip, and Nami made Spriggan. Now his bey is Belial and Spriggan COMBINED!
Chassis- Once again, Nami knows how to make a bey. So, Nami made an extra tooth chassis, so it's VERY hard to burst! It's a balance type, switching from stamina to defense. Stamina type is when the spikes on the ring of the chassis get removed before launching. Defense is when the spikes AREN'T removed.
Driver- Zeta'' is Zeta' but the grip on the chassis is just stronger and it can switch to Attack, Stamina, and Defense.
Age: 13 and a half
Personality: Nami is very into Beyblade. He broke a bey with such a powerful launch that the bey broke in one hit! Nami strives to beat Aiger and become World Champion. (P.S. Whenever something goes wrong or he forgets something, his pet word is "FLIP")
What you look like- Nami has a blood red jacket and he has black pants. He has hair like his dad when he was Red Eye, and unmasked.
Bey Moves: Scorpion Spriggan- the special move where the avatar comes from a yellow-and red aura.
Storm Clash- used in stamina mode (and Zeta'' is stamina too), the bey spins so fast that the bey makes a whirlwind and spin steals all of the other bey's stamina
Guardian Clash- used in defense mode (for chassis, for tip its the same) the bey spins so fast that the bey makes a whirlwind and then the spikes hit the opposing bey and then taht bey bursts
(Hey UnseenBurst don't judge me I didn't have the time to type anything so I copy and pasted my entry for Dynachi and made some edits and I hope I get picked. LegendJustice I hope you like my entry!)
I love it but it’s strange cause in this fan fic valt was just on the phone with shu
(Jun. 30, 2021 7:51 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Jun. 30, 2021 7:49 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Okay thx for the info I’m kinda scared of loosing to you Don't be scared, I'm aiming to 2nd spot. All I can say is the bey name and only if you want
Okay! What is the name?
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jun. 30, 2021
(Jun. 30, 2021 7:51 PM)NamanSpryzen Wrote: Name: Nami Kurenai
Bey Name: Scorpion Spriggan 7B Zeta''
Ring- Nami's dad (Shu) made Scorpion Belial (not really just for this fan fic), so he made another Savior ring (with rubber since Nami wanted that) and Nami used it.
Chip- Since Shu is a part-time bey maker and part-time player, he showed Nami how to create a chip, and Nami made Spriggan. Now his bey is Belial and Spriggan COMBINED!
Chassis- Once again, Nami knows how to make a bey. So, Nami made an extra tooth chassis, so it's VERY hard to burst! It's a balance type, switching from stamina to defense. Stamina type is when the spikes on the ring of the chassis get removed before launching. Defense is when the spikes AREN'T removed.
Driver- Zeta'' is Zeta' but the grip on the chassis is just stronger and it can switch to Attack, Stamina, and Defense.
Age: 13 and a half
Personality: Nami is very into Beyblade. He broke a bey with such a powerful launch that the bey broke in one hit! Nami strives to beat Aiger and become World Champion. (P.S. Whenever something goes wrong or he forgets something, his pet word is "FLIP")
What you look like- Nami has a blood red jacket and he has black pants. He has hair like his dad when he was Red Eye, and unmasked.
Bey Moves: Scorpion Spriggan- the special move where the avatar comes from a yellow-and red aura.
Storm Clash- used in stamina mode (and Zeta'' is stamina too), the bey spins so fast that the bey makes a whirlwind and spin steals all of the other bey's stamina
Guardian Clash- used in defense mode (for chassis, for tip its the same) the bey spins so fast that the bey makes a whirlwind and then the spikes hit the opposing bey and then taht bey bursts
(Hey UnseenBurst don't judge me I didn't have the time to type anything so I copy and pasted my entry for Dynachi and made some edits and I hope I get picked. LegendJustice I hope you like my entry!)
k ur in
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Jun. 30, 2021
(Jun. 30, 2021 7:55 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jun. 30, 2021 7:51 PM)NamanSpryzen Wrote: Name: Nami Kurenai
Bey Name: Scorpion Spriggan 7B Zeta''
Ring- Nami's dad (Shu) made Scorpion Belial (not really just for this fan fic), so he made another Savior ring (with rubber since Nami wanted that) and Nami used it.
Chip- Since Shu is a part-time bey maker and part-time player, he showed Nami how to create a chip, and Nami made Spriggan. Now his bey is Belial and Spriggan COMBINED!
Chassis- Once again, Nami knows how to make a bey. So, Nami made an extra tooth chassis, so it's VERY hard to burst! It's a balance type, switching from stamina to defense. Stamina type is when the spikes on the ring of the chassis get removed before launching. Defense is when the spikes AREN'T removed.
Driver- Zeta'' is Zeta' but the grip on the chassis is just stronger and it can switch to Attack, Stamina, and Defense.
Age: 13 and a half
Personality: Nami is very into Beyblade. He broke a bey with such a powerful launch that the bey broke in one hit! Nami strives to beat Aiger and become World Champion. (P.S. Whenever something goes wrong or he forgets something, his pet word is "FLIP")
What you look like- Nami has a blood red jacket and he has black pants. He has hair like his dad when he was Red Eye, and unmasked.
Bey Moves: Scorpion Spriggan- the special move where the avatar comes from a yellow-and red aura.
Storm Clash- used in stamina mode (and Zeta'' is stamina too), the bey spins so fast that the bey makes a whirlwind and spin steals all of the other bey's stamina
Guardian Clash- used in defense mode (for chassis, for tip its the same) the bey spins so fast that the bey makes a whirlwind and then the spikes hit the opposing bey and then taht bey bursts
(Hey UnseenBurst don't judge me I didn't have the time to type anything so I copy and pasted my entry for Dynachi and made some edits and I hope I get picked. LegendJustice I hope you like my entry!)
k ur in
Ah, K ur in is how I created a name I just made it Kurin
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - NamanSpryzen - Jun. 30, 2021
(Jun. 30, 2021 7:55 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jun. 30, 2021 7:51 PM)NamanSpryzen Wrote: Name: Nami Kurenai
Bey Name: Scorpion Spriggan 7B Zeta''
Ring- Nami's dad (Shu) made Scorpion Belial (not really just for this fan fic), so he made another Savior ring (with rubber since Nami wanted that) and Nami used it.
Chip- Since Shu is a part-time bey maker and part-time player, he showed Nami how to create a chip, and Nami made Spriggan. Now his bey is Belial and Spriggan COMBINED!
Chassis- Once again, Nami knows how to make a bey. So, Nami made an extra tooth chassis, so it's VERY hard to burst! It's a balance type, switching from stamina to defense. Stamina type is when the spikes on the ring of the chassis get removed before launching. Defense is when the spikes AREN'T removed.
Driver- Zeta'' is Zeta' but the grip on the chassis is just stronger and it can switch to Attack, Stamina, and Defense.
Age: 13 and a half
Personality: Nami is very into Beyblade. He broke a bey with such a powerful launch that the bey broke in one hit! Nami strives to beat Aiger and become World Champion. (P.S. Whenever something goes wrong or he forgets something, his pet word is "FLIP")
What you look like- Nami has a blood red jacket and he has black pants. He has hair like his dad when he was Red Eye, and unmasked.
Bey Moves: Scorpion Spriggan- the special move where the avatar comes from a yellow-and red aura.
Storm Clash- used in stamina mode (and Zeta'' is stamina too), the bey spins so fast that the bey makes a whirlwind and spin steals all of the other bey's stamina
Guardian Clash- used in defense mode (for chassis, for tip its the same) the bey spins so fast that the bey makes a whirlwind and then the spikes hit the opposing bey and then taht bey bursts
(Hey UnseenBurst don't judge me I didn't have the time to type anything so I copy and pasted my entry for Dynachi and made some edits and I hope I get picked. LegendJustice I hope you like my entry!)
k ur in
Oh no wait I'ma have to change one word D:
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - Hollowmind13 - Jun. 30, 2021
(Jun. 30, 2021 7:54 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Jun. 30, 2021 7:51 PM)NamanSpryzen Wrote: Name: Nami Kurenai
Bey Name: Scorpion Spriggan 7B Zeta''
Ring- Nami's dad (Shu) made Scorpion Belial (not really just for this fan fic), so he made another Savior ring (with rubber since Nami wanted that) and Nami used it.
Chip- Since Shu is a part-time bey maker and part-time player, he showed Nami how to create a chip, and Nami made Spriggan. Now his bey is Belial and Spriggan COMBINED!
Chassis- Once again, Nami knows how to make a bey. So, Nami made an extra tooth chassis, so it's VERY hard to burst! It's a balance type, switching from stamina to defense. Stamina type is when the spikes on the ring of the chassis get removed before launching. Defense is when the spikes AREN'T removed.
Driver- Zeta'' is Zeta' but the grip on the chassis is just stronger and it can switch to Attack, Stamina, and Defense.
Age: 13 and a half
Personality: Nami is very into Beyblade. He broke a bey with such a powerful launch that the bey broke in one hit! Nami strives to beat Aiger and become World Champion. (P.S. Whenever something goes wrong or he forgets something, his pet word is "FLIP")
What you look like- Nami has a blood red jacket and he has black pants. He has hair like his dad when he was Red Eye, and unmasked.
Bey Moves: Scorpion Spriggan- the special move where the avatar comes from a yellow-and red aura.
Storm Clash- used in stamina mode (and Zeta'' is stamina too), the bey spins so fast that the bey makes a whirlwind and spin steals all of the other bey's stamina
Guardian Clash- used in defense mode (for chassis, for tip its the same) the bey spins so fast that the bey makes a whirlwind and then the spikes hit the opposing bey and then taht bey bursts
(Hey UnseenBurst don't judge me I didn't have the time to type anything so I copy and pasted my entry for Dynachi and made some edits and I hope I get picked. LegendJustice I hope you like my entry!)
I love it but it’s strange cause in this fan fic valt was just on the phone with shu
(Jun. 30, 2021 7:51 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Don't be scared, I'm aiming to 2nd spot. All I can say is the bey name and only if you want
Okay! What is the name? Minus/Plus Magnesium (Yes it has another ring but relax, Plus was a prototype(it is still used tho)) no, it doesn't affect other beys
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - NamanSpryzen - Jun. 30, 2021
(Jun. 30, 2021 7:56 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Jun. 30, 2021 7:55 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: k ur in
Ah, K ur in is how I created a name I just made it Kurin
Oh no wait I'ma have to change one word D: because my combo was Savior spriggan but now its Scorpion and I said tha Nami wanted a SAVIOR ring FLIP
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - GenesisBlader - Jun. 30, 2021
(Jun. 30, 2021 7:56 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Jun. 30, 2021 7:55 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: k ur in
Ah, K ur in is how I created a name I just made it Kurin
lol
(Jun. 30, 2021 7:58 PM)NamanSpryzen Wrote: (Jun. 30, 2021 7:56 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Ah, K ur in is how I created a name I just made it Kurin
Oh no wait I'ma have to change one word D: because my combo was Savior spriggan but now its Scorpion and I said tha Nami wanted a SAVIOR ring FLIP
im thinking that you really love spyrzen
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jun. 30, 2021
Chapter 11 is out
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 11
Taking The World By Storm!!!
(I shove some clothes in a backpack)
Dad: So we’re going to Spain?
Me: Yup.
Dad: I’m already packed up!!
(We leave for the airport)
Valt: You guys ready?!
Aiden: As ready as I’ll ever be!!
Raina: I can’t wait, I'm gonna battle strong bladers!!
(Pam looks sadly at Doomsizer’s fragments)
Me: Don’t worry, I’m sure we can get it fixed at El Astro.
Pam: Thanks.
(Attention!! Plane C27 is leaving in 5 minutes)
Dad: Come on!! We’re gonna be late!!
(We run over to the plane)
Valt: Looks like it’s just us.
Me: Awesome!!
Dad: World Ranked Bladers get their own private jet!!
Aiden: Sign me up!!
Raina: So who are we going to battle in El Astro?
Valt: Well, Free’s been waiting to take on Percy in a rematch!!
Pam: Really?
Valt: Yeah, he even created a Beyjitzu Bey and Launcher!!
Me: I can’t wait to battle him!!
Aiden: You’re probably going to get wrecked!
Me: Say you!!
Aiden: Excuse me!!
Aiden/Me: Grr!!
(Valt laughs)
(13 hours later)
Me: Are we there yet?
Raina: FOR THE 400TH TIME WE’RE NOT THERE!!!
Valt: Actually we are!!
(I look down at El Astro)
Aiden: Wow, this is awesome!!
Me: This is where I’m gonna battle Free?!
Valt: Yup.
Raina/Pam: So awesome!!
(We land and get out of the plane)
Valt: Home sweet home!!
Me: Where’s BC Sol!!
(I run off)
Aiden: And there he goes.
~I Run On The Sidewalk~
Me: I’m coming for you Free!!
(Poseidon falls out of my pocket and starts rolling away into the forest)
Me: No!! Poseidon!!!
(I start running after my bey)
Aiden: Percy! Come back!!
(Aiden starts running after me)
Me: Gotta get Poseidon!!
Aiden: Guess I’ll race you there!!
(Me and Adam start speeding up)
Aiden/Me: HAAAAA!!!
(We both trip over a rock and roll all the way to the middle of the forest)
Me: I won!!
Aiden: No I won!!
Me/Aiden: Grr!!
???: The kid in the green shirt won.
Me/Aiden: Huh? Free De La Hoya?!
Free: Let it rip!!
(Free pulls off a strong Beyjitzu Launch, the wind blows us off our feet)
Me/Aiden: Ah!!
(Fafnir speeds up fast, Fafnir hits the wall and Free catches it)
Free: Well what do you know, the Beyjitzu System is pretty strong.
Me: Well duh, I made it!
Free: So, you came to battle?
Me: Yup, let’s go, right now!!
Aiden: Percy I’m going first.
Me: Wait but--
(Aiden’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Free: Alright.
(Pam Raina and Valt catch up to us)
Valt: Wow, that was a good run!!
Raina: Easy for you to say.
Me: Aiden’s having a battle with Free!
Valt: Guess I’ll ref!! Inspect your opponent's bey!!
Free: Meet Illusion Fafnir.
(Fafnir glimmers)
Aiden (Thoughts): Ilusion Fafnir a counterclockwise spinning stamina type.
It looks like with its upgrade it can absorb attacks and shocks turning them into spin power. But I can handle this.
(Free takes Fafnir Back)
Aiden: Aren’t you gonna get your launcher?
Free: Nah, I’m launching it with my hand.
Aiden: Aren’t you taking me seriously?!
Free: Totally.
Valt: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Free/Aiden: Let it rip!!
(Aiden pulls off a Beyjitzu Launch)
Aiden: Ashindra!!
(Aiden’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Aiden: Attack!!
(Ashindra hits Fafnir hard, Fafnir starts speeding up fast)
Free: Thanks.
Aiden: *Gasps*
Me: Fafnir just absorbed half of Ashindra’s stamina!!
Free: Fafnir!!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Free: Illusion Claw!!
(Fafnir sends Ashindra flying after a black slash, Ashindra bursts)
Aiden: *Gasps*
Valt: It’s Ilusion Fafnir with a burst finish!! Free wins!!
(Aiden punches his hand into the ground)
Free: Oh I’m sorry, did I not take you seriously?
Aiden: Grr!!
Me (Thoughts): If I’m gonna beat a bey that strong I’ll need a level up. I think I need to upgrade Poseidon. Tell me what your favorite part?
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - Hollowmind13 - Jun. 30, 2021
Here comes something: v1.3.5 now with the type! Also the bey don't attract or repel other beys
Also chassis and weight were added
Name: Max Hill (max is both a feminine and masculine name, don't judge me)
Gender: female
Age: almost 14, like, really close. Basically 14.
Appearance: She has chin-length brown hair and brown eyes; she wears a gray long-sleeve, high collar shirt with a ≠ stamp on the middle; black trousers with a rubber square on the knees; a white backpack with a lot of "usefull things", mainly tools; regular sneakers, one is red and the other blue, also she wears fresh but resilient gloves because she has a lot of cuts on her hands.
Personality: she's a energetic girl with a big brain! Though she has problems with expressing her thoughts to others. She thinks about everything, really, she even thinks about her own thoughts (which makes her have some headaches). She spends most of her time studying anything, but specially coding (she's a rookie at coding), she always prefer her way and gathers all information to make her way the "best" way, it's a result of her hate of being wrong. She seems ignorant but actually knows a lot and use any data to her favor (thus the most "tricks" doesn't work on her(let's be real since God-system everyone would at least know that fafnir spin steals, like, He's famous!))
She's always trying something new ((in this case, creating sth new) she has her own 3D printer). Due to her difficulty to express herself and her excessive thinking she can't make friends (by herself).
(Also she can't resonate like others, Magnesium don't speak to her and vice versa, they're connected all the time(like they're always resonating, each second))
Bey (Describe new parts):
1. (And main one) Compass Magnesium Thin Rush 1S (Defense type, clockwise)
Chip/Ring: it's a fused layer. It has a compass shape, one tip is red and the other blue. About 5 cm from around the layer to inside is metal (the weight is layer+forge disc) with a layer of plastic around the layer to prevent damaging opponent beys. On the middle there's a square (made out of metal) with Mg written on it. The layer has two modes, Minus and Plus.
Minus: on Minus mode, The compass blades are in and it has more defensive power (dealing less knockback and more chances of winning by OS)
Plus: on Plus mode, the compass blades are out and has more offensive power (dealing more knockback and more chances of winning by BF (burst))
Switching: to switch between modes flip the layer, unlock the thing, spin 180° degrees for any side and lock again. Guess how the compass tips come out? Magnetic force! Strong ones.
Chassis: 1S
Weight: Sen
Disk: Thin: Thin is made out 75%entirely of plastic and 25%metal. It also has 6 rubber dots making contact with the layer, giving awesome Burst resistance.
Driver: Rush: Rush is a defensive counter-attack driver with a ring similar to Just but lower and larger made out of rubber and a free spinning ball ½ smaller than atomic. When spinning fast the plate locks on and since it's rubber it would go insane when touching the arena BUT when it slows down it becomes free-spinning and it's going to be hard to move it out of the place.
Attacks: Rush counter: happens when the bey tilts and touches the driver ring on the floor, going into either a uncontrollable rampage because of it's weight or a unbeatable defense.
Rush counter sub-moves:
(With rush counter locked) Magnetic Mayhem: It goes insane hitting hard everything on the way with it's weight, it's almost uncontrollable (almost, she can control by a little)
(With rush counter unlocked)
Magnetic defense: so it stays kinda tilted and when a bey tries to push it, the rush ring would nullify the knockback.
Quotes:
"Hello! I am Max and I... Nevermind!" (on the first day of school)
"Huh... Unexpected, Still it can be better and I GOT AN IDEA!!" (when she made the prototype of Magnesium (talking alone))
"Talking to a spirit inside a bey!? Are you guys crazy!?" (When she heard about "resonance")
"Look, I don't just blade so STOP ASKING ME TO!!" (When her class (half of it) was asking her if they could battle her)
(The bey name changed)
I am still not able to grammatically write correctly in english. Any question about the bey would be appreciated for no misunderstanding. Also, this is my first time writing this character, I may or may not change somethings on the description.
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jun. 30, 2021
(Jun. 30, 2021 10:05 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Here comes something:
Name: Max Hill (first and last name) (max is both a feminine and masculine name)
(Gender: female)
Age: 14
(Appearance: She has chin-length brown hair and brown eyes; she wears a gray long-sleeve, high collar shirt with a ≠ stamp on the middle; black trousers with a rubber square on the knees; a white backpack with a lot of "usefull things", mainly tools; regular sneakers, one is red and the other blue, also she wears fresh but resilient gloves because she has a lot of cuts on her hands)
Personality: she's a energetic girl with a big brain! Though she has problems with expressing her thoughts to others. She thinks about everything, really, she even thinks about her own thoughts (which makes her have some headaches).
She's always trying something new ((in this case, creating sth new) she has her own 3D printer). Due to her difficulty to express herself and her excessive thinking she can't make friends (by herself).
(Also she can't resonate like others, Magnesium don't speak to her and vice versa, they're connected all the time(like they're always resonating, each second))
Bey (Describe new parts):
1. (And main one) Compass Magnesium Thin Rush 1B
2. (The prototype) the same but without fused layer and the other parts are always switched up. (This one is useless)
Chip/Ring: it's a fused layer. It has a compass shape, one tip is red and the other blue. About 5 cm from around the layer to inside is metal (the weight is layer+forge disc) with a layer of plastic around the layer to prevent damaging opponent beys. On the middle there's a square (made out of metal) with Mg written on it. The layer has two modes: Minus and Plus.
Minus: on Minus mode, The compass blades are in and it has more defensive power (dealing less knockback and more chances of winning by OS)
Plus: on Plus mode, the compass blades are out and has more offensive power (dealing more knockback and more chances of winning by BF (burst))
Switching: to switch between modes flip the layer, unlock the thing, spin 180° degrees for any side and lock again. Guess how the compass tips come out? Magnetic force! Strong ones.
Disk: Thin: Thin is made out 65%entirely of plastic and 35%metal (around it (still light)). Nothing more than that. It also rubber on top (having contact with the layer, about 33% of the surface)
Driver: Rush: Rush is a defensive counter-attack driver with a ring similar to just but lower and larger made out of rubber and a free spinning ball ½ smaller than atomic. It's for having extreme power at the beginning and resistance at the end, lemme explain:
Centrifugal force... Well, when spinning fast the plate locks on and since it's rubber it would go insane when touching the arena (and incontrollable, hitting everything on the way) BUT when it slows down it becomes free-spinning and it's going to be hard to move magnesium out of the place.
Attacks: Rush counter: happens when the bey tilts and touches the driver ring on the floor, going into a uncontrollable rampage because of it's weight.
Bonus fact and important one!!
Due to thin being so light and having some rubber touching the layer, it is basically unburstable!!! Not really, just being dramatic. It's teeth aren't that great but it's not like you could burst it 3 times in a row
(science: for a bey to burst, the weight from the bottom needs to go with the momentum of the bey spinning while the layer slows down by hitting something, that's why slow burst works: they equalize some spin but the forge disc justs zooms and they pop! Burst!!, So having a lighter forge disc would theorically be harder to burst)
(Quotes(for people to understand how she speaks):
Hello! I am Max and I... Nevermind (on the first day of school)
Huh... Unexpected, Still it can be better and I GOT AN IDEA!! (when she made the prototype of Magnesium)
Talking to a spirit inside a bey!? Are you guys crazy!? (When she heard about "resonance")
(The bey name changed)
I am still not able to grammatically write correctly in english. Any question about the bey would be appreciated for no misunderstanding. Also, this is my first time writing this character, I may or may not change somethings on the description.
Ur in
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - Hollowmind13 - Jun. 30, 2021
(Jun. 30, 2021 10:07 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jun. 30, 2021 10:05 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Here comes something:
Name: Max Hill (first and last name) (max is both a feminine and masculine name)
(Gender: female)
Age: 14
(Appearance: She has chin-length brown hair and brown eyes; she wears a gray long-sleeve, high collar shirt with a ≠ stamp on the middle; black trousers with a rubber square on the knees; a white backpack with a lot of "usefull things", mainly tools; regular sneakers, one is red and the other blue, also she wears fresh but resilient gloves because she has a lot of cuts on her hands)
Personality: she's a energetic girl with a big brain! Though she has problems with expressing her thoughts to others. She thinks about everything, really, she even thinks about her own thoughts (which makes her have some headaches).
She's always trying something new ((in this case, creating sth new) she has her own 3D printer). Due to her difficulty to express herself and her excessive thinking she can't make friends (by herself).
(Also she can't resonate like others, Magnesium don't speak to her and vice versa, they're connected all the time(like they're always resonating, each second))
Bey (Describe new parts):
1. (And main one) Compass Magnesium Thin Rush 1B
2. (The prototype) the same but without fused layer and the other parts are always switched up. (This one is useless)
Chip/Ring: it's a fused layer. It has a compass shape, one tip is red and the other blue. About 5 cm from around the layer to inside is metal (the weight is layer+forge disc) with a layer of plastic around the layer to prevent damaging opponent beys. On the middle there's a square (made out of metal) with Mg written on it. The layer has two modes: Minus and Plus.
Minus: on Minus mode, The compass blades are in and it has more defensive power (dealing less knockback and more chances of winning by OS)
Plus: on Plus mode, the compass blades are out and has more offensive power (dealing more knockback and more chances of winning by BF (burst))
Switching: to switch between modes flip the layer, unlock the thing, spin 180° degrees for any side and lock again. Guess how the compass tips come out? Magnetic force! Strong ones.
Disk: Thin: Thin is made out 65%entirely of plastic and 35%metal (around it (still light)). Nothing more than that. It also rubber on top (having contact with the layer, about 33% of the surface)
Driver: Rush: Rush is a defensive counter-attack driver with a ring similar to just but lower and larger made out of rubber and a free spinning ball ½ smaller than atomic. It's for having extreme power at the beginning and resistance at the end, lemme explain:
Centrifugal force... Well, when spinning fast the plate locks on and since it's rubber it would go insane when touching the arena (and incontrollable, hitting everything on the way) BUT when it slows down it becomes free-spinning and it's going to be hard to move magnesium out of the place.
Attacks: Rush counter: happens when the bey tilts and touches the driver ring on the floor, going into a uncontrollable rampage because of it's weight.
Bonus fact and important one!!
Due to thin being so light and having some rubber touching the layer, it is basically unburstable!!! Not really, just being dramatic. It's teeth aren't that great but it's not like you could burst it 3 times in a row
(science: for a bey to burst, the weight from the bottom needs to go with the momentum of the bey spinning while the layer slows down by hitting something, that's why slow burst works: they equalize some spin but the forge disc justs zooms and they pop! Burst!!, So having a lighter forge disc would theorically be harder to burst)
(Quotes(for people to understand how she speaks):
Hello! I am Max and I... Nevermind (on the first day of school)
Huh... Unexpected, Still it can be better and I GOT AN IDEA!! (when she made the prototype of Magnesium)
Talking to a spirit inside a bey!? Are you guys crazy!? (When she heard about "resonance")
(The bey name changed)
I am still not able to grammatically write correctly in english. Any question about the bey would be appreciated for no misunderstanding. Also, this is my first time writing this character, I may or may not change somethings on the description.
Ur in Any question?
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jun. 30, 2021
(Jun. 30, 2021 10:08 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Jun. 30, 2021 10:07 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Ur in Any question?
Nope thank you for joining
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - NamanSpryzen - Jun. 30, 2021
(Jun. 30, 2021 5:33 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 10 is out (This chapter is important for the rest of the story so I recommend you read it)
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 10
Trust In Poseidon!!!
Pam: Go Doomsizer!!
(Doomsizer hits Ridley off-balanced)
Possessed Raina: RIDLEY!!!
(Raina’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Raina: Pirate Rush!!
(Ridley’s avatar’s sword slashes Doomsizer in the middle, Doomsizer starts cracking then breaks)
All: *Gasps*
Pam: No.
Possessed Raina: YES, I’M INVINCIBLE!!!
(Pam’s expression turns depressed)
Pam: No.
(Raina blacks out)
Valt (Thoughts): I can’t believe it. Her power is scary and dangerous.
(Pam pushes Doomsizer’s parts together)
Pam: Doomsizer…
(Pam goes and sits on the bench in shock looking at Doomsizer)
Me: Pam..
Pam: Don’t worry about me, just beat Valt.
Valt: I’ll battle you in a bit, just give me some time.
(Valt goes in the on top of the roof)
Aiden: Wonder what Valt’s doing?
(Aiden tries running after Valt but I stop him)
Me: If Valt wanted us to know what he was doing he would do it here, let’s give him some time to himself.
~On The Top Of The Roof~
(Valt calls someone on his phone)
Valt: Hey, I’ve noticed that Percy’s friend Raina, has quite a Resonance and I knew you could help me.
???: Have you told her?
Valt: She wouldn’t listen, Aiger didn’t when you tried.
???: If someone she can trust tells her then maybe…
Valt: You’re right, I’ll talk to Percy, thanks. Shu.
Shu: No problem.
(Shu hangs up)
Valt: Well, guess I’m battling Percy now.
~Back Inside The Warehouse~
Raina: Battling you was so much fun!!
Pam: Yeah, fun.
(Pam shoves Doomsizer’s 2 fragments deep inside his pocket)
(Valt runs in through the door)
Valt: Yo, Percy let’s battle!!
Hanami: Our wonder boy runs in!!
Valt: Hanami?
Hanami: Percy told us about this match and said it was going to be awesome!! So I decided to come to do commentary here!!
Me: And we’re already live!!
Valt: Alright, don’t think you’re getting off easy though!!
(Valt holds Valtryek up)
Me: Poseidon is winning this!!
(I hold Poseidon up)
Raina: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Valt/Me: Let it rip!!
(Valt and I pull of Beyjitzu Launches)
Hanami: Amazing Beyjitzu Launches right out of the gate!!
Valt: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek rushes a strike at Poseidon, Poseidon gets sent flying sky high)
Hanami: Poseidon is sent flying up in the air!!
Me: Hang in there!!
(Poseidon starts flashing blue as it falls back to the stadium)
Valt: *Gasps*
(Poseidon leans on its driver and speeds up)
Me: Hydro Striker!!
(Valtryek gets sent flying in the air)
Hanami: Now it’s Valtryek’s turn to take a ride in the sky!!
Valt: You’ve gotten stronger!!
Me: You think that’s all?!
(Valtryek lands on the stadium floor)
Valt: Valtryek!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up)
(Valtryek speeds up and heads straight for Poseidon)
Aiden: Dodge the move!! Counter attacking would be too reckless!!
Me/Poseidon: Reckless? That’s how we like it!! Poseidon!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
(My hair flares up and my eyes glow)
Valt: *Gasps*
Me: Hydro Jet!!
(Poseidon leans on it’s driver and speeds right into Valtryek)
(The whole stadium blows up)
Hanami: Electrifying!!
(Valtryek and Poseidon are sent flying, Valtryek burst right in front of Valt)
Me: *Gasps*
(Poseidon hits the ground)
Raina: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a burst finish!! The winner is Perceus Nakano!!
Hanami: It looks like luck was on Perseus’s side because he just burst Valtryek!!
Aiden/Pam: IT WAS NOT LUCK!!!
Hanami: Um, looks like Perseus has got skill!!
(Valt walks up to me)
Valt: Yo.
Me: *Gulps* Hey.
Valt: That was an awesome match!!
Me: I know right!!
~At BC Sol~
Free: Looks like he’s gotten stronger. I think I need to take him down a notch, do you, Illusion Fafnir?
(Fafnir glimmers in response)
~Back At The Warehouse~
(Valt climbs up to the roof of the Warehouse)
Valt (Thoughts): Man, battling him was awesome.
(I climb up to the roof)
Me: Hey.
Valt: Hey.
Me: So, you’re going back to Spain tomorrow?
Valt: Yup.
Me: What’s it like?
Valt: What do you mean?
Me: You’ve been battling all around the world, there must be super strong bladers out there.
Valt: Totally, bladers out in the world are super strong!!
Me: Man, that must be epic.
Valt: Do you wanna come to Spain with me tomorrow?
Me: Well.
(Poseidon glimmers in response)
Me: Sure.
???: Don’t think you’re leaving without us!!
(I look behind me)
Raina: You’re taking us with you!!
Pam: Yeah, we’re your friends, you're totally not leaving without us!!
(My eyes start tearing up)
Me: Well, you better start packing!!
Aiden/Pam/Raina: Yeah!!
(They get off the roof)
Valt: Hey, Percy.
Me: What?
Valt: I wanna talk about Raina.
Me: What about her?
Valt: Well… Never mind go get ready!!
(I run down the ladder)
Valt: Raina Reinhart. You’ve gotta be stopped.
Grammar: 10/10- Great vocabulary and spelling!
Plot 20/10- this chapter was awesome! Really wants me to read the rest of the fanfic
Bigness of chapter: 9/10- it’s awesome.
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jun. 30, 2021
(Jun. 30, 2021 10:21 PM)NamanSpryzen Wrote: (Jun. 30, 2021 5:33 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 10 is out (This chapter is important for the rest of the story so I recommend you read it)
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 10
Trust In Poseidon!!!
Pam: Go Doomsizer!!
(Doomsizer hits Ridley off-balanced)
Possessed Raina: RIDLEY!!!
(Raina’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Raina: Pirate Rush!!
(Ridley’s avatar’s sword slashes Doomsizer in the middle, Doomsizer starts cracking then breaks)
All: *Gasps*
Pam: No.
Possessed Raina: YES, I’M INVINCIBLE!!!
(Pam’s expression turns depressed)
Pam: No.
(Raina blacks out)
Valt (Thoughts): I can’t believe it. Her power is scary and dangerous.
(Pam pushes Doomsizer’s parts together)
Pam: Doomsizer…
(Pam goes and sits on the bench in shock looking at Doomsizer)
Me: Pam..
Pam: Don’t worry about me, just beat Valt.
Valt: I’ll battle you in a bit, just give me some time.
(Valt goes in the on top of the roof)
Aiden: Wonder what Valt’s doing?
(Aiden tries running after Valt but I stop him)
Me: If Valt wanted us to know what he was doing he would do it here, let’s give him some time to himself.
~On The Top Of The Roof~
(Valt calls someone on his phone)
Valt: Hey, I’ve noticed that Percy’s friend Raina, has quite a Resonance and I knew you could help me.
???: Have you told her?
Valt: She wouldn’t listen, Aiger didn’t when you tried.
???: If someone she can trust tells her then maybe…
Valt: You’re right, I’ll talk to Percy, thanks. Shu.
Shu: No problem.
(Shu hangs up)
Valt: Well, guess I’m battling Percy now.
~Back Inside The Warehouse~
Raina: Battling you was so much fun!!
Pam: Yeah, fun.
(Pam shoves Doomsizer’s 2 fragments deep inside his pocket)
(Valt runs in through the door)
Valt: Yo, Percy let’s battle!!
Hanami: Our wonder boy runs in!!
Valt: Hanami?
Hanami: Percy told us about this match and said it was going to be awesome!! So I decided to come to do commentary here!!
Me: And we’re already live!!
Valt: Alright, don’t think you’re getting off easy though!!
(Valt holds Valtryek up)
Me: Poseidon is winning this!!
(I hold Poseidon up)
Raina: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Valt/Me: Let it rip!!
(Valt and I pull of Beyjitzu Launches)
Hanami: Amazing Beyjitzu Launches right out of the gate!!
Valt: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek rushes a strike at Poseidon, Poseidon gets sent flying sky high)
Hanami: Poseidon is sent flying up in the air!!
Me: Hang in there!!
(Poseidon starts flashing blue as it falls back to the stadium)
Valt: *Gasps*
(Poseidon leans on its driver and speeds up)
Me: Hydro Striker!!
(Valtryek gets sent flying in the air)
Hanami: Now it’s Valtryek’s turn to take a ride in the sky!!
Valt: You’ve gotten stronger!!
Me: You think that’s all?!
(Valtryek lands on the stadium floor)
Valt: Valtryek!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up)
(Valtryek speeds up and heads straight for Poseidon)
Aiden: Dodge the move!! Counter attacking would be too reckless!!
Me/Poseidon: Reckless? That’s how we like it!! Poseidon!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
(My hair flares up and my eyes glow)
Valt: *Gasps*
Me: Hydro Jet!!
(Poseidon leans on it’s driver and speeds right into Valtryek)
(The whole stadium blows up)
Hanami: Electrifying!!
(Valtryek and Poseidon are sent flying, Valtryek burst right in front of Valt)
Me: *Gasps*
(Poseidon hits the ground)
Raina: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a burst finish!! The winner is Perceus Nakano!!
Hanami: It looks like luck was on Perseus’s side because he just burst Valtryek!!
Aiden/Pam: IT WAS NOT LUCK!!!
Hanami: Um, looks like Perseus has got skill!!
(Valt walks up to me)
Valt: Yo.
Me: *Gulps* Hey.
Valt: That was an awesome match!!
Me: I know right!!
~At BC Sol~
Free: Looks like he’s gotten stronger. I think I need to take him down a notch, do you, Illusion Fafnir?
(Fafnir glimmers in response)
~Back At The Warehouse~
(Valt climbs up to the roof of the Warehouse)
Valt (Thoughts): Man, battling him was awesome.
(I climb up to the roof)
Me: Hey.
Valt: Hey.
Me: So, you’re going back to Spain tomorrow?
Valt: Yup.
Me: What’s it like?
Valt: What do you mean?
Me: You’ve been battling all around the world, there must be super strong bladers out there.
Valt: Totally, bladers out in the world are super strong!!
Me: Man, that must be epic.
Valt: Do you wanna come to Spain with me tomorrow?
Me: Well.
(Poseidon glimmers in response)
Me: Sure.
???: Don’t think you’re leaving without us!!
(I look behind me)
Raina: You’re taking us with you!!
Pam: Yeah, we’re your friends, you're totally not leaving without us!!
(My eyes start tearing up)
Me: Well, you better start packing!!
Aiden/Pam/Raina: Yeah!!
(They get off the roof)
Valt: Hey, Percy.
Me: What?
Valt: I wanna talk about Raina.
Me: What about her?
Valt: Well… Never mind go get ready!!
(I run down the ladder)
Valt: Raina Reinhart. You’ve gotta be stopped.
Grammar: 10/10- Great vocabulary and spelling!
Plot 20/10- this chapter was awesome! Really wants me to read the rest of the fanfic
Bigness of chapter: 9/10- it’s awesome.
Thanks for the rating!! What were you're Favorite and least favorite part (I'm asking to know where I can get better)
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - Hollowmind13 - Jun. 30, 2021
(Jun. 30, 2021 10:32 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jun. 30, 2021 10:21 PM)NamanSpryzen Wrote: Grammar: 10/10- Great vocabulary and spelling!
Plot 20/10- this chapter was awesome! Really wants me to read the rest of the fanfic
Bigness of chapter: 9/10- it’s awesome.
Thanks for the rating!! What were you're Favorite and least favorite part (I'm asking to know where I can get better) Since will never have this chance later, I guess I'll say here. (Only relevant to UnseenBurst)(i'm guessing what's going to happen)
Raina discovers that doomscizer broke because of her when Pam gets his Pegasus? (Like Aiden or Percy saying:" hope it not breaks this time!" and she would be curious and Pam would be trying to make the things better but failing.
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jun. 30, 2021
(Jun. 30, 2021 10:45 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Jun. 30, 2021 10:32 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Thanks for the rating!! What were you're Favorite and least favorite part (I'm asking to know where I can get better) Since will never have this chance later, I guess I'll say here. (Only relevant to UnseenBurst)(i'm guessing what's going to happen)
Raina discovers that doomscizer broke because of her when Pam gets his Pegasus? (Like Aiden or Percy saying:" hope it not breaks this time!" and she would be curious and Pam would be trying to make the things better but failing.
All I can tell you is more of Raina's Resonance will be addressed in the next chapter
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RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - NamanSpryzen - Jul. 01, 2021
(Jun. 30, 2021 10:32 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jun. 30, 2021 10:21 PM)NamanSpryzen Wrote: Grammar: 10/10- Great vocabulary and spelling!
Plot 20/10- this chapter was awesome! Really wants me to read the rest of the fanfic
Bigness of chapter: 9/10- it’s awesome.
Thanks for the rating!! What were you're Favorite and least favorite part (I'm asking to know where I can get better) There IS no least fav part! My favorite part was where valt mentions Raina’s resonance and the second fav is are the battles!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jul. 01, 2021
Chapter 12 is out!!
Beyblade Burst Beyjizu
Chapter 12
Upgrade!! Ultra Gear!!!
~At BC Sol~
Aiden: He beat me in one move!!
(Aiden smashes his hand into the floor)
Me: Well, he is a legend.
Aiden: So? You beat him!!
Me: Woah, there is a huge power difference between you and--
(Pam punches me in the arm)
Me: Ow.
Aiden: *Sighs*
Raina: Don’t worry, you’ll get him next time!
Me (Thoughts): What was Valt going to say about Raina?
(I flashback)
Raina: RIDLEY!!!
Valt: Valtryek!!
Raina: End this!!
(A purple and black aura surrounds Raina)
(I end my flashback)
Me (Thoughts): Was it because of that?
Aiden: Percy!!
Me: What! Sorry, I lost my train of thought.
Aiden: No problem.
Me: I’ll catch you guys later.
(I walk away)
Raina: Where are you going!
(I continue walking, I leave a note by Valt’s door then knock, Valt opens the door)
Valt: “Meet me at the stadium in the Forest”
~In The Forest~
(Valt walks up to the stadium)
Me: I hope you brought your bey!
Valt: Never leave home without it!
Me/Valt: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(Me and Valt pull off Beyjitzu Launches)
Valt: Rush Launch!!
Me: Flood Launch!!
(Valtryek and Poseidon hit each other with a barrage of strikes)
Me: Why did you want to talk to me after they guys left?
(Valtryek and Poseidon send each other flying away, Valtryek rushes in for another strike)
Valt: I wanted to talk to you about Raina.
(Poseidon gets sent flying in the air)
Me: Why?
(Poseidon hits the wall and stays in)
Valt: Her Resonance is out of control.
(Poseidon leans on its driver and speeds up big time)
Me: Hydro Striker!!
(Valtryek gets sent flying in the air)
Valt: *Gasps*
Me: Isn’t Resonance the bond you have with your bey?
Valt: Yup. Now Brave Sword!!
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
(Valtryek and Poseidon get sent flying out of the stadium)
Valt: Looks like a draw.
Me: What do you mean by “Her Resonance is out of control”
Valt: She’s going through a stage where she is dominating Ridley, I’ve seen this before it doesn't end well.
Me: So her breaking Doomsizer, was on purpose?
Valt: Yup.
Me: I can’t believe it.
Valt: You’re the only person she’ll listen to.
Me: So I have to risk losing my friend to help her.
Valt: She’ll come to her senses.
(Valt smiles at me)
Me: Thanks Valt. But I have a question.
Valt: Hit me.
Me: Tomorrow afternoon I’m gonna be battling Free, I feel like I need an upgrade but I don’t know what to upgrade it into.
Valt: What would be your most useful asset?
Me: Good question.
(Valt gets up, Valtryek’s rubber glimmers)
Me: *Gasps* I know what to upgrade it into!!
(I run past Valt at lightning speed)
Valt: Well, looks like he’s figured it out!
~At BC Sol~
(I run into the workshop right past my friends)
Raina: Wait!!
(Raina and the gang run after me)
Me: Time to get to it!!
Raina: Percy!!
Me: What’s up?
(I start drawing the upgraded part)
Raina: Where did you go?
Aiden: You had us worried.
Me: Um, hey look at what I’m making!!
(I show them the design)
Pam: So you’re gonna add rubber.
Me: Yup, with each blow against opposite spinning beys, gives me extra spin!!
(I start working on the upgrade)
~2 Hours Later~
Me: It’s finished!!
(I hold up the part)
Aiden: That looks awesome!!
Pam: What’s it called?
Me: Ultra Gear!!
(I attach it on Poseidon)
Me: Now, who’s brave enough to battle me!!
Aiden: That would be me!!
(We head over to the Gym in BC Sol)
Aiden: Ready to lose?
Me: Nope.
(I put Poseidon in left spin mode, Our Resonance Aura flares up, a crowd starts gathering)
Raina: Looks like we attracted some attention.
Pam: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Aiden: Let it rip!!
(Me and Aiden pull of Beyjitzu Launches)
Aiden: Take the center!!
(Ashindra takes the center)
Aiden: Noble Guard!!
(Ashindra creates a tornado or swords)
Me: Flood Launch!!
(Poseidon hits Ashindra with a barrage of strong strikes)
Aiden: *Gasps*
(I hit Ashindra hard and absorb some of it’s spin)
Me: Do you wanna see true power?! Poseidon!!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Aiden: We’ll take on whatever you throw at us!! Ashindra!!!
(Aiden’s Resonance Aura flares up, Poseidon hits Ashindra up the stadium slope)
Aiden: Orbit Counter!!
(Ashindra starts crashing down)
Me: Grr!! End this!! Hydro Geyser!!
(My voice echoes loudly)
Crowd: Go Aiden Go Percy!!
(Ashindra and Poseidon start clashing Ashindra gets sent flying in the air then bursts)
Aiden *Gasps*
Pam: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a burst finish!! The winner is Perseus Nakano!!
Me: Aw yeah!!
Aiden: GG man!!
Me: Thanks!!
(We shake hands)
Free: That match wasn’t bad. I’ll be waiting to battle you on the big stage.
Me: With my new upgraded Poseidon we’ll beat you!!
(I hold out Poseidon, Free eyes glow)
Free: We’ll see about that!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Jul. 01, 2021
This is great can’t rate it yet tho
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - GenesisBlader - Jul. 01, 2021
(Jun. 30, 2021 11:10 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jun. 30, 2021 10:45 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Since will never have this chance later, I guess I'll say here. (Only relevant to UnseenBurst)(i'm guessing what's going to happen)
Raina discovers that doomscizer broke because of her when Pam gets his Pegasus? (Like Aiden or Percy saying:" hope it not breaks this time!" and she would be curious and Pam would be trying to make the things better but failing.
All I can tell you is more of Raina's Resonance will be addressed in the next chapter
@BladekingX I found you an avatar https://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=https%3A%2F%2Flookaside.fbsbx.com%2Flookaside%2Fcrawler%2Fmedia%2F%3Fmedia_id%3D619725458455625&imgrefurl=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.facebook.com%2F411778449250328%2Fposts%2Fhappy-birthday-valt-32118nika-aoi%2F619725565122281%2F&tbnid=AD_puNT5QdJ9rM&vet=1&docid=xzuvCd3s2OVsOM&w=960&h=960&itg=1&source=sh%2Fx%2Fim
OML THANK YOU
also if ya'll wondering why i didnt post in a long time its because i was going to church with my friend
aw yeah, snap into a slim jim!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jul. 01, 2021
(Jul. 01, 2021 1:51 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jun. 30, 2021 11:10 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: All I can tell you is more of Raina's Resonance will be addressed in the next chapter
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OML THANK YOU
also if ya'll wondering why i didnt post in a long time its because i was going to church with my friend
aw yeah, snap into a slim jim!
Do u like the Avatar?
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - GenesisBlader - Jul. 01, 2021
(Jul. 01, 2021 2:04 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 01, 2021 1:51 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: OML THANK YOU
also if ya'll wondering why i didnt post in a long time its because i was going to church with my friend
aw yeah, snap into a slim jim!
Do u like the Avatar? yes, but how do you make it ur profile image
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jul. 01, 2021
(Jul. 01, 2021 2:27 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jul. 01, 2021 2:04 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Do u like the Avatar? yes, but how do you make it ur profile image
Right click to download it then go to settings and hit the avatar then click on then click on the download
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - GenesisBlader - Jul. 01, 2021
(Jul. 01, 2021 2:54 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 01, 2021 2:27 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: yes, but how do you make it ur profile image
Right click to download it then go to settings and hit the avatar then click on then click on the download
alright thanks
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