RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - Hollowmind13 - Jun. 27, 2021
(Jun. 27, 2021 10:20 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: yo my boy Pam getting a new beyblade sick Hoping is a good pegasus this time?
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jun. 27, 2021
(Jun. 27, 2021 10:44 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Jun. 27, 2021 10:20 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: yo my boy Pam getting a new beyblade sick Hoping is a good pegasus this time?
It'll be good
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Jun. 27, 2021
awesome!!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jun. 28, 2021
(Jun. 27, 2021 10:44 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Jun. 27, 2021 10:20 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: yo my boy Pam getting a new beyblade sick Hoping is a good pegasus this time?
Do you like this fanfic?
Chapter 7 is out!!
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 7
Bey Of Vengeance!! Pirate Ridley!!!
(Doomsizer bursts)
Pam: Are you kidding?!
(Pam slams his arms onto the ground)
Me: You wanna go again?
Pam: I’m not gonna stop until I win!!
~20 Burst Finishes Later~
Aiden: Maybe take a break.
(Aiden throws popcorn into his mouth)
Pam: I can’t believe it. I lost 21 times.
Me: We’ve got school tomorrow, we can battle after school!
Aiden: Yeah!
Pam: I guess.
(Aiden and Pam go home)
~Next Day At Recess~
Pam: Percy, ready to get destroyed after school?!
Me: In your dreams!!
Aiden: I want in on this!
???: Battle me or else!!
Aiden: What’s that?
(Pam looks over at the bey stadium and sees 2 kids bullying another kid)
Pam: We’ve gotta help!!
(I run over there)
Me: Yo, leave her alone!!
Bully 1: Stay outta this! She wanted to battle us.
Bully 2: And we’re gonna show her that she’s not as tough as she says!!
Me: What’s your name?
Raina: Raina Reinhart.
Bully: Yo, let’s get started.
(Pam and Aiden run over)
Aiden: What’s going on?
(I explain to them what’s happening)
Pam: This is not ok!!
Bully 2: Well, deal with it!!
Me: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Bully 1/Bully 2/Raina: Let it rip!!
(All of them pull off Lightning Launches)
(Both of the bullies bey’s charge right into Raina’s bey)
Raina: Go, Heaven Dragon!!
Bully 1/Bully 2: Go!!
(All of the beys get sent flying)
Raina: Heaven Dragon, let’s go!!
(Dragon comes rushing at them)
Bully 1/Bully 2: It’s time for our special move!! Double Crush!!
(Both of the Bullies bey’s start crushing Heaven Dragon from both sides)
Raina: No!!
(Raina shoves her hand forward in concern)
(Heaven Dragon starts cracking then breaks)
Raina/Me/Aiden/Pam: *Gasps*
(Her eyes widen)
Me: It’s Bob and Fob with a burst finish. They win.
(Raina runs away crying)
Pam: We’ll help Raina, teach these guys a lesson.
(I crack my knuckles)
Me: Couldn’t have said it better myself!!
Bob: You’re so short!! How do you think you’ll beat us?
Fob: He could beat us. By crying to death!!
(Fob and Bob start laughing hard)
Me: I don't cry!
~In The Middle Of The Battle~
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
(Bob and Fob’s bey bursts)
Bob/Fob: Are you kidding?!
Me: HAHAHA!! Who’s short now?!
Bob/Flob: TEACHER!!!
(Bob and Flob run away crying)
Me: Crud.
~At The Back Of The Schoolyard~
(Raina sits down crying)
Pam: Hey, are you ok?
Raina: No. They broke the bey my parents got me for my birthday.
Aiden: *Sighs* I know how that feels.
Raina: You do?
Aiden: Yup, I was being reckless while battling then Ashindra got busted up.
Raina: Really? How did you fix it?
Aiden: Pam took me to Percy, and we got the bey fixed up!
Raina: Do you think he’d be willing to help me?
Pam: Of course!
Aiden: We’ll take you there after school!!
~At The Warehouse~
Raina: This is where he lives?
Pam: No, he just waits for challengers here.
Raina: Awesome.
(I run into the room)
Me: Sorry, I had to stay after school because of Bob and Flob.
Aiden: I’m guessing you beat them?
Me: Yup. Anyways let’s get started on Heaven Dragon!!
(Raina lays out the fragments of Heaven Dragon)
Me: Hmm.
Raina: Is it good or bad?
Me: Kinda both. The bad news is I can’t fix this.
Raina: Oh.
Me: Good news is I can help you create a new bey!! And it will be a Beyjitzu bey!
Raina: Awesome!! Let’s do it!
(I fire up the printer)
Aiden: Ooh!! What type is it going to be?
Raina: It’s going to be a clockwise attack type!!
Pam: Battling this should be interesting!!
(Raina starts working on her bey)
Raina: Hang in there! I’ll be done soon, Ridley.
(2 hours later)
Raina: It’s done!! Pirate Ridley!!
(Raina holds Ridley up proudly in the air)
Me: You did a great job on it!!
(I rub my nose)
Raina: Ridley, don’t worry we’ll beat those bullies.
Aiden: So when are you testing it out?!
Raina: Tomorrow. I’ll beat those bullies like they’ve never burst before!!
~Next Day At Recess~
Raina: Bob and Flob, I’m here to teach you not to mess with us!!
Bob: I’ll break you again!!
(I cross my arms and give Bob and Flob a mad look)
(Bob and Flob jump up in fear)
Me: Inspect your opponent's bey!!
Bob: Pirate Ridley, an attack type. It has a lot of metal and it has 2 modes: Absorb mode and Strike mode. Absorb mode has 2 green blades that can absorb attack shocks and spin steal. The strike mode has 4 blades and immense metal that adds a lot of extra weight. This should be easy!!
Me: First battle!! Ready? Set!
Bob/Flob/Raina: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
Raina: HAAA!! RIDLEY!!!
(Raina’s Resonance Aura flares up)
(Raina’s eyes glow purple)
All: *Gasps*
Possessed Raina: Pirate Rush!!
(Bob and Flob’s beys break)
All: *Gasps*
Possessed Raina: VENGEANCE IS MINE!!!
Me: It’s Pirate Ridley with a double burst finish!! Raina’s the winner!!
(Raina falls to the ground)
Raina: Did I win?
Aiden: You totally demolished them?
Raina: For some reason, I can’t remember any of that battle.
Bob/Flob: We’re sorry! We’ll never mess with you again!!
(Bob and Flob runoff)
Raina: Pirate Ridley’s that strong huh?
Me: You did awesome!!
Raina: You guys seem cool! I’m gonna be hanging out with you way more!!
Me: Awesome!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - Hollowmind13 - Jun. 28, 2021
(Jun. 28, 2021 5:01 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jun. 27, 2021 10:44 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Hoping is a good pegasus this time?
Do you like this fanfic?
Chapter 7 is out!!
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 7
Bey Of Vengeance!! Pirate Ridley!!!
(Doomsizer bursts)
Pam: Are you kidding?!
(Pam slams his arms onto the ground)
Me: You wanna go again?
Pam: I’m not gonna stop until I win!!
~20 Burst Finishes Later~
Aiden: Maybe take a break.
(Aiden throws popcorn into his mouth)
Pam: I can’t believe it. I lost 21 times.
Me: We’ve got school tomorrow, we can battle after school!
Aiden: Yeah!
Pam: I guess.
(Aiden and Pam go home)
~Next Day At Recess~
Pam: Percy, ready to get destroyed after school?!
Me: In your dreams!!
Aiden: I want in on this!
???: Battle me or else!!
Aiden: What’s that?
(Pam looks over at the bey stadium and sees 2 kids bullying another kid)
Pam: We’ve gotta help!!
(I run over there)
Me: Yo, leave her alone!!
Bully 1: Stay outta this! She wanted to battle us.
Bully 2: And we’re gonna show her that she’s not as tough as she says!!
Me: What’s your name?
Raina: Raina Reinhart.
Bully: Yo, let’s get started.
(Pam and Aiden run over)
Aiden: What’s going on?
(I explain to them what’s happening)
Pam: This is not ok!!
Bully 2: Well, deal with it!!
Me: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Bully 1/Bully 2/Raina: Let it rip!!
(All of them pull off Lightning Launches)
(Both of the bullies bey’s charge right into Raina’s bey)
Raina: Go, Heaven Dragon!!
Bully 1/Bully 2: Go!!
(All of the beys get sent flying)
Raina: Heaven Dragon, let’s go!!
(Dragon comes rushing at them)
Bully 1/Bully 2: It’s time for our special move!! Double Crush!!
(Both of the Bullies bey’s start crushing Heaven Dragon from both sides)
Raina: No!!
(Raina shoves her hand forward in concern)
(Heaven Dragon starts cracking then breaks)
Raina/Me/Aiden/Pam: *Gasps*
(Her eyes widen)
Me: It’s Bob and Fob with a burst finish. They win.
(Raina runs away crying)
Pam: We’ll help Raina, teach these guys a lesson.
(I crack my knuckles)
Me: Couldn’t have said it better myself!!
Bob: You’re so short!! How do you think you’ll beat us?
Fob: He could beat us. By crying to death!!
(Fob and Bob start laughing hard)
Me: I don't cry!
~In The Middle Of The Battle~
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
(Bob and Fob’s bey bursts)
Bob/Fob: Are you kidding?!
Me: HAHAHA!! Who’s short now?!
Bob/Flob: TEACHER!!!
(Bob and Flob run away crying)
Me: Crud.
~At The Back Of The Schoolyard~
(Raina sits down crying)
Pam: Hey, are you ok?
Raina: No. They broke the bey my parents got me for my birthday.
Aiden: *Sighs* I know how that feels.
Raina: You do?
Aiden: Yup, I was being reckless while battling then Ashindra got busted up.
Raina: Really? How did you fix it?
Aiden: Pam took me to Percy, and we got the bey fixed up!
Raina: Do you think he’d be willing to help me?
Pam: Of course!
Aiden: We’ll take you there after school!!
~At The Warehouse~
Raina: This is where he lives?
Pam: No, he just waits for challengers here.
Raina: Awesome.
(I run into the room)
Me: Sorry, I had to stay after school because of Bob and Flob.
Aiden: I’m guessing you beat them?
Me: Yup. Anyways let’s get started on Heaven Dragon!!
(Raina lays out the fragments of Heaven Dragon)
Me: Hmm.
Raina: Is it good or bad?
Me: Kinda both. The bad news is I can’t fix this.
Raina: Oh.
Me: Good news is I can help you create a new bey!! And it will be a Beyjitzu bey!
Raina: Awesome!! Let’s do it!
(I fire up the printer)
Aiden: Ooh!! What type is it going to be?
Raina: It’s going to be a clockwise attack type!!
Pam: Battling this should be interesting!!
(Raina starts working on her bey)
Raina: Hang in there! I’ll be done soon, Ridley.
(2 hours later)
Raina: It’s done!! Pirate Ridley!!
(Raina holds Ridley up proudly in the air)
Me: You did a great job on it!!
(I rub my nose)
Raina: Ridley, don’t worry we’ll beat those bullies.
Aiden: So when are you testing it out?!
Raina: Tomorrow. I’ll beat those bullies like they’ve never burst before!!
~Next Day At Recess~
Raina: Bob and Flob, I’m here to teach you not to mess with us!!
Bob: I’ll break you again!!
(I cross my arms and give Bob and Flob a mad look)
(Bob and Flob jump up in fear)
Me: Inspect your opponent's bey!!
Bob: Pirate Ridley, an attack type. It has a lot of metal and it has 2 modes: Absorb mode and Strike mode. Absorb mode has 2 green blades that can absorb attack shocks and spin steal. The strike mode has 4 blades and immense metal that adds a lot of extra weight. This should be easy!!
Me: First battle!! Ready? Set!
Bob/Flob/Raina: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
Raina: HAAA!! RIDLEY!!!
(Raina’s Resonance Aura flares up)
(Raina’s eyes glow purple)
All: *Gasps*
Possessed Raina: Pirate Rush!!
(Bob and Flob’s beys break)
All: *Gasps*
Possessed Raina: VENGEANCE IS MINE!!!
Me: It’s Pirate Ridley with a double burst finish!! Raina’s the winner!!
(Raina falls to the ground)
Raina: Did I win?
Aiden: You totally demolished them?
Raina: For some reason, I can’t remember any of that battle.
Bob/Flob: We’re sorry! We’ll never mess with you again!!
(Bob and Flob runoff)
Raina: Pirate Ridley’s that strong huh?
Me: You did awesome!!
Raina: You guys seem cool! I’m gonna be hanging out with you way more!!
Me: Awesome!! Kinda yes, kinda no. My head just adapts what I read so it's easier to me for like fanfics, that's why I dont use a rating system, that would be unprecise.
Also, Possessed Raina arc let's gooo
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Jun. 28, 2021
Woah 🤯 mind blown
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jun. 28, 2021
Next Episode is Valt Vs Percy get hyped
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Jun. 28, 2021
lol dont need to tell me that twice
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Jun. 28, 2021
(Jun. 28, 2021 6:35 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Next Episode is Valt Vs Percy get hyped
I’m hyped
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jun. 29, 2021
Chapter 8 You've been waiting but it's finally here.
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 8
Valtryek Vs Poseidon!!!
Me: Guys, I’ve created something amazing!!
Pam: What is it?!
Aiden: Tell us!!
Me: Now, now, patience.
Aiden: Don’t “Patience” me! Tell us!!
Me: You wanna go?!
Aiden: Sure!!
(Aiden pulls out his bey)
Raina: Guys!!
Aiden: Hmp!
Me: Anyways, I’ve created the ultimate launcher!!
(I show them the Launcher)
Raina: Woah!! What is it?! What does it do?!
Me: The Beyjitzu Launcher!!
Aiden: Wow, so cool!!
(I give Raina, Aiden, and Pam a Beyjitzu Launcher)
Me: Watch!
All: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(I pull the launching string hard and a swirling blue tornado with electricity comes out)
Me: See.
(I start panting)
Raina: You ok?
Me: Yeah, it’s just that it takes a lot of power to pull that off but you’ll get used to it.
Pam: Can’t be that hard!
(Pam launches his bey)
Aiden: Big talker!!
Pam: Why you!!
Dad: Percy!!
Me: Hey dad, what’s up?
Dad: Someone’s coming in from the airport to challenge you. Can you go pick them up?
Me: Who is it?
Dad: That would ruin the surprise!
(Dad smiles)
Me: Um, ok let’s go!!
(We head over to the Airport)
Raina: So this is where we’re gonna meet the blader?
Me: Apparently.
Aiden: I hope this blader is strong!!
Me: Bet you 20 dollars he’ll wreck you!
Aiden: Grr!!
???: Excuse me, are you Perceus Nakano?
Me: Yes.
(I look behind me)
Me: *Gasps* Valt Aoi?!
Raina/Aiden/Pam: Wait what?!
Valt: Hey guys, what’s up!!
(Aiden give me a 20 dollar bill)
Me: I’m Perceus Nakano! You can call me Percy!!
Valt: I’m Valt, Valt Aoi!!
Raina: You came all the way out here to battle Percy?!
Valt: Yes I did!!
Me: Then what are we waiting for?!
Valt: Um, my luggage.
Pam: Awkward.
Aiden: This is going to be amazing!!
Me: I know right!!
Aiden: If I win against Valt do I get my 20 dollars back?
Me: Oh, we’ll see how you do.
~At The Warehouse~
Dad: Valt, glad you could make it!!
Valt: Thanks for letting me come!!
Me: Valt, let’s get right into our battle!
Valt: Sure, let’s go!!
(Dad sets everything up for the livestream)
Pam: This battle is going to be awesome!!
Raina (Thoughts): Valt Aoi, after you battle Percy you're going to fall to Ridley’s ultimate strikes!!
Dad: Ok, everything is set up, I even got Hanami to judge!
Me: Valt, I wanna have a title match!!
Valt: You’re not ready for a title match, but let’s have an awesome battle anyways!!
Me: Fine, but I’m winning!!
Dad: We’re live in 3! 2! 1!
Hanami: Boys and girls from around the world!! We’ve got an awesome match for you!! It’s Valt Aoi Vs Perceus Nakano!! Perseus has slowly been climbing up the ranks and he thinks he’s ready to take on the World Champion!! Will he win or will Valt Aoi shoot him back down the ranks?! Let’s find out in this match!!
Me (Thoughts): Since I’m facing Valt I’m gonna give him something special!!
(I put Poseidon in left spin mode)
Valt: Let’s get right into this!!
Pam: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(Valt does an explosive Lightning Launch, I do a Beyjitzu Launch)
Me: Flood Launch!!
Valt: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek and Poseidon hit each other with a barrage of strong strikes)
Hanami: Valtryek and Poseidon are giving each other the strikes of their lives!!
Me: Hydro Striker!!
(Poseidon speeds up and sends Valtryek flying)
Hanami: Poseidon picks up speed and sends Valtryek sky high!!
Valt: Not giving up!!
(Valtryek glows and hits the wall)
Me: *Gasps*
Hanami: Valtryek hangs in there and totally survives Poseidon’s strong attack!!
Me: One more time!! Flood Launch!!
Valt: I don’t think so!
(Poseidon charges at Valtryek, Valtryek speeds up and dodges Poseidon)
Hanami: Call the ambulance! Because Valtryek just broke Poseidon’s ankles!!
Me: How is he dodging all my attacks?!
Valt: Attack! End this!!
(Valtryek speeds toward Poseidon)
Me: Go--
(I flashback)
Aiden: Ashindra broke because I was reckless.
(I end my flashback)
Me: No, Poseidon!!
(Poseidon leans on its driver and speeds away)
Valt: *Gasps*
Hanami: Poseidon dodges Valtryek’s attack at the last second!! But Valtryek is speeding up?!
(Valtryek catches onto the rim)
Valt: Valtryek!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up)
(Valtryek speeds up around the stadium)
Valt: Brave Flash!!
(Valt slashes his arm forward)
Me: *Gasps*
(Valtryek sends Poseidon flying in the air, Poseidon bursts)
(My eyes widen as I gasp in total shock)
Pam: It’s Brave Valtryek with a burst finish!! The winner is Valt Aoi!!
Hanami: Valt beats Perseus Nakano with style!! Valt just showed Percy not to mess with him!!
Aiden: Percy lost?!
(I pick up Poseidon’s parts, a tear falls on Poseidon)
Poseidon: I thought you didn’t cry.
(Poseidon pulls me into a white void, we float above water)
Poseidon: We lost.
Me: I know.
Poseidon: Do you want to know why?
Me: Yes.
(Tears start dropping from my face)
Poseidon: You didn’t trust in yourself or me. You could’ve finished Valtrek if you attacked but instead, you chose to dodge.
Me: I remembered what Aiden said about Ashindra.
Poseidon: Are you saying I’m Ashindra?
Me: No.
Poseidon: You need to trust in me and yourself, you knew how to defeat Valt but you didn’t go for it.
Me: I’m sorry.
Poseidon: Don’t be.
Valt: Percy, Percy!
(I wake up)
Me: *Gasps*
Valt: I just wanted to say that was an awesome match!!
Me: Yep, that was awesome!!
Pam: Don’t beat yourself up, you did awesome!!
Aiden: I thought you had him!
Raina: He’s right, you know.
(Valt pulls out his phone)
Valt: Dang it.
Me: What is it?
Valt: My flight got held up!
Raina: I heard some kids messed up the runway!
Dad: You can stay with us Valt!
Valt: Really?!
Dad: Yup, we’ve got a room.
Valt: Ok!!
Me: Can I get a rematch soon?!
Valt: Of course!
Raina: Valt Aoi you're battling me!
Dad: Guys it’s getting late, you can battle tomorrow.
Raina/Aiden/Pam: Ok, bye Percy!
Me: Bye guys!!
Me (Thoughts): Poseidon, I won’t let you down again, next time we’re winning!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Jun. 29, 2021
YEAH AWESOME
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jun. 29, 2021
(Jun. 29, 2021 3:45 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: YEAH AWESOME
I'm guessing you liked it
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Jun. 29, 2021
(Jun. 29, 2021 3:54 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jun. 29, 2021 3:45 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: YEAH AWESOME
I'm guessing you liked it
mhm this episode was awesome kinda sad though
also how do you make a character profile image? idk how
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jun. 29, 2021
(Jun. 29, 2021 3:55 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jun. 29, 2021 3:54 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I'm guessing you liked it
mhm this episode was awesome kinda sad though
also how do you make a character profile image? idk how
Well, he needed to learn how to accept loss and Poseidon taught him that because he was so used to winning
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Jun. 29, 2021
alright thanks
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - BeybladeManiac0 - Jun. 29, 2021
(Jun. 28, 2021 5:01 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jun. 27, 2021 10:44 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Hoping is a good pegasus this time?
Do you like this fanfic?
Chapter 7 is out!!
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 7
Bey Of Vengeance!! Pirate Ridley!!!
(Doomsizer bursts)
Pam: Are you kidding?!
(Pam slams his arms onto the ground)
Me: You wanna go again?
Pam: I’m not gonna stop until I win!!
~20 Burst Finishes Later~
Aiden: Maybe take a break.
(Aiden throws popcorn into his mouth)
Pam: I can’t believe it. I lost 21 times.
Me: We’ve got school tomorrow, we can battle after school!
Aiden: Yeah!
Pam: I guess.
(Aiden and Pam go home)
~Next Day At Recess~
Pam: Percy, ready to get destroyed after school?!
Me: In your dreams!!
Aiden: I want in on this!
???: Battle me or else!!
Aiden: What’s that?
(Pam looks over at the bey stadium and sees 2 kids bullying another kid)
Pam: We’ve gotta help!!
(I run over there)
Me: Yo, leave her alone!!
Bully 1: Stay outta this! She wanted to battle us.
Bully 2: And we’re gonna show her that she’s not as tough as she says!!
Me: What’s your name?
Raina: Raina Reinhart.
Bully: Yo, let’s get started.
(Pam and Aiden run over)
Aiden: What’s going on?
(I explain to them what’s happening)
Pam: This is not ok!!
Bully 2: Well, deal with it!!
Me: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Bully 1/Bully 2/Raina: Let it rip!!
(All of them pull off Lightning Launches)
(Both of the bullies bey’s charge right into Raina’s bey)
Raina: Go, Heaven Dragon!!
Bully 1/Bully 2: Go!!
(All of the beys get sent flying)
Raina: Heaven Dragon, let’s go!!
(Dragon comes rushing at them)
Bully 1/Bully 2: It’s time for our special move!! Double Crush!!
(Both of the Bullies bey’s start crushing Heaven Dragon from both sides)
Raina: No!!
(Raina shoves her hand forward in concern)
(Heaven Dragon starts cracking then breaks)
Raina/Me/Aiden/Pam: *Gasps*
(Her eyes widen)
Me: It’s Bob and Fob with a burst finish. They win.
(Raina runs away crying)
Pam: We’ll help Raina, teach these guys a lesson.
(I crack my knuckles)
Me: Couldn’t have said it better myself!!
Bob: You’re so short!! How do you think you’ll beat us?
Fob: He could beat us. By crying to death!!
(Fob and Bob start laughing hard)
Me: I don't cry!
~In The Middle Of The Battle~
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
(Bob and Fob’s bey bursts)
Bob/Fob: Are you kidding?!
Me: HAHAHA!! Who’s short now?!
Bob/Flob: TEACHER!!!
(Bob and Flob run away crying)
Me: Crud.
~At The Back Of The Schoolyard~
(Raina sits down crying)
Pam: Hey, are you ok?
Raina: No. They broke the bey my parents got me for my birthday.
Aiden: *Sighs* I know how that feels.
Raina: You do?
Aiden: Yup, I was being reckless while battling then Ashindra got busted up.
Raina: Really? How did you fix it?
Aiden: Pam took me to Percy, and we got the bey fixed up!
Raina: Do you think he’d be willing to help me?
Pam: Of course!
Aiden: We’ll take you there after school!!
~At The Warehouse~
Raina: This is where he lives?
Pam: No, he just waits for challengers here.
Raina: Awesome.
(I run into the room)
Me: Sorry, I had to stay after school because of Bob and Flob.
Aiden: I’m guessing you beat them?
Me: Yup. Anyways let’s get started on Heaven Dragon!!
(Raina lays out the fragments of Heaven Dragon)
Me: Hmm.
Raina: Is it good or bad?
Me: Kinda both. The bad news is I can’t fix this.
Raina: Oh.
Me: Good news is I can help you create a new bey!! And it will be a Beyjitzu bey!
Raina: Awesome!! Let’s do it!
(I fire up the printer)
Aiden: Ooh!! What type is it going to be?
Raina: It’s going to be a clockwise attack type!!
Pam: Battling this should be interesting!!
(Raina starts working on her bey)
Raina: Hang in there! I’ll be done soon, Ridley.
(2 hours later)
Raina: It’s done!! Pirate Ridley!!
(Raina holds Ridley up proudly in the air)
Me: You did a great job on it!!
(I rub my nose)
Raina: Ridley, don’t worry we’ll beat those bullies.
Aiden: So when are you testing it out?!
Raina: Tomorrow. I’ll beat those bullies like they’ve never burst before!!
~Next Day At Recess~
Raina: Bob and Flob, I’m here to teach you not to mess with us!!
Bob: I’ll break you again!!
(I cross my arms and give Bob and Flob a mad look)
(Bob and Flob jump up in fear)
Me: Inspect your opponent's bey!!
Bob: Pirate Ridley, an attack type. It has a lot of metal and it has 2 modes: Absorb mode and Strike mode. Absorb mode has 2 green blades that can absorb attack shocks and spin steal. The strike mode has 4 blades and immense metal that adds a lot of extra weight. This should be easy!!
Me: First battle!! Ready? Set!
Bob/Flob/Raina: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
Raina: HAAA!! RIDLEY!!!
(Raina’s Resonance Aura flares up)
(Raina’s eyes glow purple)
All: *Gasps*
Possessed Raina: Pirate Rush!!
(Bob and Flob’s beys break)
All: *Gasps*
Possessed Raina: VENGEANCE IS MINE!!!
Me: It’s Pirate Ridley with a double burst finish!! Raina’s the winner!!
(Raina falls to the ground)
Raina: Did I win?
Aiden: You totally demolished them?
Raina: For some reason, I can’t remember any of that battle.
Bob/Flob: We’re sorry! We’ll never mess with you again!!
(Bob and Flob runoff)
Raina: Pirate Ridley’s that strong huh?
Me: You did awesome!!
Raina: You guys seem cool! I’m gonna be hanging out with you way more!!
Me: Awesome!!
Pretty awesome!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jun. 29, 2021
Chapter 9 is out!!
Beyblade Burst Beyjizu
Chapter 9
Pure Resonance Vs Dark Resonance!!!
(I wake up)
Me: Well, time to get up!!
(I hop off my bunk bed, and grab Poseidon off my desk)
Me: Good Morning Poseidon!!
(Poseidon glimmers in response)
(I run out of my room)
Me: Today is epic!!
(I trip)
Me: Woah!!
(Someone grabs my hood before I fall to the ground)
Valt: You gotta be careful!
Me: Thanks.
(Valt pulls me up)
Valt: So, you gonna eat something?
Me: I take breakfast to go and do some practice before the gang shows up.
Valt: Alright!
(Me and Valt grab some eggs and bacon then run off to the warehouse)
~At The Warehouse~
Me: Valt, last night I made something for you!!
(I throw Valt a Blue Beyjitzu Launcher)
Valt: Woah, this is awesome!
Me: Give it a try!!
Me/Valt: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(Valt pulls the launching string so hard that wind blows in all directions, Valt pulls off a strong Beyjitzu Launch)
Me: *Gasps*
(Valtryek speeds around the stadium like a rocket, Valtryek hits the wall and gets sent flying)
Valt: *Gasps*
(Someone catches Valtryek)
Pam: Wow, that’s some power!
(Pam gives Valt Valtryek)
Valt: Thanks!!
Aiden: Valt, you’re battling me!!
Raina: No, he’s battling me.
(Raina’s evil Resonance Aura flares up)
Valt: *Gasps*
Me: What is it?
Valt: Nothing, I accept your challenge!!
(I set up everything for the Livestream)
Me: I’ve given Hanami the rundown. So we’re live in 3! 2! 1!
Hanami: Hello beyfans!! Today we’ll be having a match between the new up-and-coming blader Raina Reinhart!! Vs The Strongest Blader In The World!! Valt Aoi!!
Valt: Don’t worry I’m winning this battle!!
Possessed Raina: Really?! BECAUSE I’M GONNA SHATTER YOU TO PIECES!!!
All: *Gasps*
~Deep In The Jungle~
(Aiger watches the match on his phone)
Aiger: Is she--
(Aiger flashbacks)
Aiger: I AM ACHILLES!!!
(Achilles breaks Wonder Valtryek into 2)
Valt: *Gasps*
(Aiger ends his flashback)
Aiger: She’s going to destroy herself.
~Back At The Warehouse~
Raina (Thoughts): Valt Aoi, I’m determined to beat you no matter what!!
Valt (Thoughts): Raina Reinhart, her Resonance is out of control I need to beat her!!
Raina: Valt Aoi!! I’m taking you down with Strike Mode!!
Valt: I’ll take you down with these 6 Blades!!
(Valt puts Valtryek in 6 Blade mode)
Me: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Valt/Raina: Let it rip!!
(Valt and Raina pull of strong Beyjitzu Launches)
(Valtryek speeds up)
Hanami: They pull off two explosives-- Um what’s that called?
Me: Beyjizu Launch.
(I say that coughing to him silently)
Hanami: Beyjitzu Launches!!
Valt: Rush Launch!!
Raina: Intercept it!! Pirate Launch!!
(Valtryek and Ridley rush a barrage of attacks at each other)
Hanami: Valtryek and Ridley hit each other with a barrage of strikes!!
Valt: Valtryek!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Raina: Ridley!!
(Raina’s Dark Resonance Aura flares up)
(Valtryek catches onto the stadium rim, Valtryek starts speeding up)
Valt: Brave Flash!!
(A raging purple fire surrounds Raina)
Possessed Raina: Pirate Rush!!
(Valtryek and Ridley get sent flying)
Hanami: Valtryek and Ridley get sent flying from a super impact!!
(Ridley hits the ground, Valtryek bursts)
Me: It’s Brave Valtryek with a ring-out finish!! Valt Aoi claims 1 point!!
Hanami: Valtryek barely hangs in there!!
Possessed Raina: Grr!!
(Raina’s eye glows purple)
Possessed Raina: *Roars*
Me (Thoughts): What’s going on with Raina?
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Valt: I’m gonna take you down!!
Me: Second Battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Raina/Valt: Let it rip!!
(Valt pulls off a strong Beyjitzu launch, Raina pulls of a mega strong Beyjitzu Launch)
Possessed Raina: Destroy Them!!
Valt: Brave Sword!!
(An enormous explosion occurs)
Hanami: They both go in for it!!
Possessed Raina: You’re done!!
Valt: Valtryek!!
(Valtryek’s avatar smashes out from the ground)
Possessed Raina: RIDLEY!!!
(Ridley’s Avatar falls out of the sky)
Valt: Brave Sword!!
Possessed Raina: Pirate Rush!!
(Valtryek and Ridley start clashing hard)
(Valtryek and Ridley’s Avatar’s swords start clashing against each other)
(An enormous explosion occurs, wind blows in each direction)
Hanami: The energy is explosive!!
(Valtryek’s avatar slashes at Ridley)
(A purple line slashes at Raina)
Raina: *Groans*
(Ridley gets sent up flying in the air, Ridley bursts)
All: *Gasps*
Me: It’s Brave Valtryek with a burst finish!! With a score of 3-0, the winner is Valt Aoi!!
Hanami: Valt Aoi proves his dominance by crushing Raina Reinhart!!
(Raina blacks out)
~10 Minutes Later~
(Raina wakes up)
Pam: Are you ok?!
Raina: Yeah.
(Valt looks down at Raina seriously)
Valt (Thoughts): Is this what blading means to you?
Me: I’ve gotta get practicing for my rematch with Valt!!
(Jun. 29, 2021 6:22 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote: (Jun. 28, 2021 5:01 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Do you like this fanfic?
Chapter 7 is out!!
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 7
Bey Of Vengeance!! Pirate Ridley!!!
(Doomsizer bursts)
Pam: Are you kidding?!
(Pam slams his arms onto the ground)
Me: You wanna go again?
Pam: I’m not gonna stop until I win!!
~20 Burst Finishes Later~
Aiden: Maybe take a break.
(Aiden throws popcorn into his mouth)
Pam: I can’t believe it. I lost 21 times.
Me: We’ve got school tomorrow, we can battle after school!
Aiden: Yeah!
Pam: I guess.
(Aiden and Pam go home)
~Next Day At Recess~
Pam: Percy, ready to get destroyed after school?!
Me: In your dreams!!
Aiden: I want in on this!
???: Battle me or else!!
Aiden: What’s that?
(Pam looks over at the bey stadium and sees 2 kids bullying another kid)
Pam: We’ve gotta help!!
(I run over there)
Me: Yo, leave her alone!!
Bully 1: Stay outta this! She wanted to battle us.
Bully 2: And we’re gonna show her that she’s not as tough as she says!!
Me: What’s your name?
Raina: Raina Reinhart.
Bully: Yo, let’s get started.
(Pam and Aiden run over)
Aiden: What’s going on?
(I explain to them what’s happening)
Pam: This is not ok!!
Bully 2: Well, deal with it!!
Me: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Bully 1/Bully 2/Raina: Let it rip!!
(All of them pull off Lightning Launches)
(Both of the bullies bey’s charge right into Raina’s bey)
Raina: Go, Heaven Dragon!!
Bully 1/Bully 2: Go!!
(All of the beys get sent flying)
Raina: Heaven Dragon, let’s go!!
(Dragon comes rushing at them)
Bully 1/Bully 2: It’s time for our special move!! Double Crush!!
(Both of the Bullies bey’s start crushing Heaven Dragon from both sides)
Raina: No!!
(Raina shoves her hand forward in concern)
(Heaven Dragon starts cracking then breaks)
Raina/Me/Aiden/Pam: *Gasps*
(Her eyes widen)
Me: It’s Bob and Fob with a burst finish. They win.
(Raina runs away crying)
Pam: We’ll help Raina, teach these guys a lesson.
(I crack my knuckles)
Me: Couldn’t have said it better myself!!
Bob: You’re so short!! How do you think you’ll beat us?
Fob: He could beat us. By crying to death!!
(Fob and Bob start laughing hard)
Me: I don't cry!
~In The Middle Of The Battle~
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
(Bob and Fob’s bey bursts)
Bob/Fob: Are you kidding?!
Me: HAHAHA!! Who’s short now?!
Bob/Flob: TEACHER!!!
(Bob and Flob run away crying)
Me: Crud.
~At The Back Of The Schoolyard~
(Raina sits down crying)
Pam: Hey, are you ok?
Raina: No. They broke the bey my parents got me for my birthday.
Aiden: *Sighs* I know how that feels.
Raina: You do?
Aiden: Yup, I was being reckless while battling then Ashindra got busted up.
Raina: Really? How did you fix it?
Aiden: Pam took me to Percy, and we got the bey fixed up!
Raina: Do you think he’d be willing to help me?
Pam: Of course!
Aiden: We’ll take you there after school!!
~At The Warehouse~
Raina: This is where he lives?
Pam: No, he just waits for challengers here.
Raina: Awesome.
(I run into the room)
Me: Sorry, I had to stay after school because of Bob and Flob.
Aiden: I’m guessing you beat them?
Me: Yup. Anyways let’s get started on Heaven Dragon!!
(Raina lays out the fragments of Heaven Dragon)
Me: Hmm.
Raina: Is it good or bad?
Me: Kinda both. The bad news is I can’t fix this.
Raina: Oh.
Me: Good news is I can help you create a new bey!! And it will be a Beyjitzu bey!
Raina: Awesome!! Let’s do it!
(I fire up the printer)
Aiden: Ooh!! What type is it going to be?
Raina: It’s going to be a clockwise attack type!!
Pam: Battling this should be interesting!!
(Raina starts working on her bey)
Raina: Hang in there! I’ll be done soon, Ridley.
(2 hours later)
Raina: It’s done!! Pirate Ridley!!
(Raina holds Ridley up proudly in the air)
Me: You did a great job on it!!
(I rub my nose)
Raina: Ridley, don’t worry we’ll beat those bullies.
Aiden: So when are you testing it out?!
Raina: Tomorrow. I’ll beat those bullies like they’ve never burst before!!
~Next Day At Recess~
Raina: Bob and Flob, I’m here to teach you not to mess with us!!
Bob: I’ll break you again!!
(I cross my arms and give Bob and Flob a mad look)
(Bob and Flob jump up in fear)
Me: Inspect your opponent's bey!!
Bob: Pirate Ridley, an attack type. It has a lot of metal and it has 2 modes: Absorb mode and Strike mode. Absorb mode has 2 green blades that can absorb attack shocks and spin steal. The strike mode has 4 blades and immense metal that adds a lot of extra weight. This should be easy!!
Me: First battle!! Ready? Set!
Bob/Flob/Raina: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
Raina: HAAA!! RIDLEY!!!
(Raina’s Resonance Aura flares up)
(Raina’s eyes glow purple)
All: *Gasps*
Possessed Raina: Pirate Rush!!
(Bob and Flob’s beys break)
All: *Gasps*
Possessed Raina: VENGEANCE IS MINE!!!
Me: It’s Pirate Ridley with a double burst finish!! Raina’s the winner!!
(Raina falls to the ground)
Raina: Did I win?
Aiden: You totally demolished them?
Raina: For some reason, I can’t remember any of that battle.
Bob/Flob: We’re sorry! We’ll never mess with you again!!
(Bob and Flob runoff)
Raina: Pirate Ridley’s that strong huh?
Me: You did awesome!!
Raina: You guys seem cool! I’m gonna be hanging out with you way more!!
Me: Awesome!!
Pretty awesome!
I'm glad you liked it
Dynachi is going on a 1-week break so I can focus a bit more on Beyjitzu but doesn't worry next on July 5th Dynachi will come back then Beyjitzu will go on a break so I can focus on Dyanchi don't worry this is one time thing after Dynachi goes on a break I will go to my regular schedule 2 Dynachi Chapters and 2 Beyjitzu Chapters
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Jun. 29, 2021
alright kewl
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - Hollowmind13 - Jun. 30, 2021
(Jun. 29, 2021 9:26 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 9 is out!!
Beyblade Burst Beyjizu
Chapter 9
Pure Resonance Vs Dark Resonance!!!
(I wake up)
Me: Well, time to get up!!
(I hop off my bunk bed, and grab Poseidon off my desk)
Me: Good Morning Poseidon!!
(Poseidon glimmers in response)
(I run out of my room)
Me: Today is epic!!
(I trip)
Me: Woah!!
(Someone grabs my hood before I fall to the ground)
Valt: You gotta be careful!
Me: Thanks.
(Valt pulls me up)
Valt: So, you gonna eat something?
Me: I take breakfast to go and do some practice before the gang shows up.
Valt: Alright!
(Me and Valt grab some eggs and bacon then run off to the warehouse)
~At The Warehouse~
Me: Valt, last night I made something for you!!
(I throw Valt a Blue Beyjitzu Launcher)
Valt: Woah, this is awesome!
Me: Give it a try!!
Me/Valt: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(Valt pulls the launching string so hard that wind blows in all directions, Valt pulls off a strong Beyjitzu Launch)
Me: *Gasps*
(Valtryek speeds around the stadium like a rocket, Valtryek hits the wall and gets sent flying)
Valt: *Gasps*
(Someone catches Valtryek)
Pam: Wow, that’s some power!
(Pam gives Valt Valtryek)
Valt: Thanks!!
Aiden: Valt, you’re battling me!!
Raina: No, he’s battling me.
(Raina’s evil Resonance Aura flares up)
Valt: *Gasps*
Me: What is it?
Valt: Nothing, I accept your challenge!!
(I set up everything for the Livestream)
Me: I’ve given Hanami the rundown. So we’re live in 3! 2! 1!
Hanami: Hello beyfans!! Today we’ll be having a match between the new up-and-coming blader Raina Reinhart!! Vs The Strongest Blader In The World!! Valt Aoi!!
Valt: Don’t worry I’m winning this battle!!
Possessed Raina: Really?! BECAUSE I’M GONNA SHATTER YOU TO PIECES!!!
All: *Gasps*
~Deep In The Jungle~
(Aiger watches the match on his phone)
Aiger: Is she--
(Aiger flashbacks)
Aiger: I AM ACHILLES!!!
(Achilles breaks Wonder Valtryek into 2)
Valt: *Gasps*
(Aiger ends his flashback)
Aiger: She’s going to destroy herself.
~Back At The Warehouse~
Raina (Thoughts): Valt Aoi, I’m determined to beat you no matter what!!
Valt (Thoughts): Raina Reinhart, her Resonance is out of control I need to beat her!!
Raina: Valt Aoi!! I’m taking you down with Strike Mode!!
Valt: I’ll take you down with these 6 Blades!!
(Valt puts Valtryek in 6 Blade mode)
Me: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Valt/Raina: Let it rip!!
(Valt and Raina pull of strong Beyjitzu Launches)
(Valtryek speeds up)
Hanami: They pull off two explosives-- Um what’s that called?
Me: Beyjizu Launch.
(I say that coughing to him silently)
Hanami: Beyjitzu Launches!!
Valt: Rush Launch!!
Raina: Intercept it!! Pirate Launch!!
(Valtryek and Ridley rush a barrage of attacks at each other)
Hanami: Valtryek and Ridley hit each other with a barrage of strikes!!
Valt: Valtryek!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Raina: Ridley!!
(Raina’s Dark Resonance Aura flares up)
(Valtryek catches onto the stadium rim, Valtryek starts speeding up)
Valt: Brave Flash!!
(A raging purple fire surrounds Raina)
Possessed Raina: Pirate Rush!!
(Valtryek and Ridley get sent flying)
Hanami: Valtryek and Ridley get sent flying from a super impact!!
(Ridley hits the ground, Valtryek bursts)
Me: It’s Brave Valtryek with a ring-out finish!! Valt Aoi claims 1 point!!
Hanami: Valtryek barely hangs in there!!
Possessed Raina: Grr!!
(Raina’s eye glows purple)
Possessed Raina: *Roars*
Me (Thoughts): What’s going on with Raina?
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Valt: I’m gonna take you down!!
Me: Second Battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Raina/Valt: Let it rip!!
(Valt pulls off a strong Beyjitzu launch, Raina pulls of a mega strong Beyjitzu Launch)
Possessed Raina: Destroy Them!!
Valt: Brave Sword!!
(An enormous explosion occurs)
Hanami: They both go in for it!!
Possessed Raina: You’re done!!
Valt: Valtryek!!
(Valtryek’s avatar smashes out from the ground)
Possessed Raina: RIDLEY!!!
(Ridley’s Avatar falls out of the sky)
Valt: Brave Sword!!
Possessed Raina: Pirate Rush!!
(Valtryek and Ridley start clashing hard)
(Valtryek and Ridley’s Avatar’s swords start clashing against each other)
(An enormous explosion occurs, wind blows in each direction)
Hanami: The energy is explosive!!
(Valtryek’s avatar slashes at Ridley)
(A purple line slashes at Raina)
Raina: *Groans*
(Ridley gets sent up flying in the air, Ridley bursts)
All: *Gasps*
Me: It’s Brave Valtryek with a burst finish!! With a score of 3-0, the winner is Valt Aoi!!
Hanami: Valt Aoi proves his dominance by crushing Raina Reinhart!!
(Raina blacks out)
~10 Minutes Later~
(Raina wakes up)
Pam: Are you ok?!
Raina: Yeah.
(Valt looks down at Raina seriously)
Valt (Thoughts): Is this what blading means to you?
Me: I’ve gotta get practicing for my rematch with Valt!!
(Jun. 29, 2021 6:22 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote: Pretty awesome!
I'm glad you liked it
Dynachi is going on a 1-week break so I can focus a bit more on Beyjitzu but doesn't worry next on July 5th Dynachi will come back then Beyjitzu will go on a break so I can focus on Dyanchi don't worry this is one time thing after Dynachi goes on a break I will go to my regular schedule 2 Dynachi Chapters and 2 Beyjitzu Chapters Opinion time!
Well, she went to max dark resonance really fast. Other than that I guess it's fine, idk how the warehouse is still intact after that. Nice overall
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Jun. 30, 2021
episode 9 is pretty awesome the battle wasnt really like, MASSIVE, but I understand that great job
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jun. 30, 2021
(Jun. 30, 2021 9:05 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Jun. 29, 2021 9:26 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 9 is out!!
Beyblade Burst Beyjizu
Chapter 9
Pure Resonance Vs Dark Resonance!!!
(I wake up)
Me: Well, time to get up!!
(I hop off my bunk bed, and grab Poseidon off my desk)
Me: Good Morning Poseidon!!
(Poseidon glimmers in response)
(I run out of my room)
Me: Today is epic!!
(I trip)
Me: Woah!!
(Someone grabs my hood before I fall to the ground)
Valt: You gotta be careful!
Me: Thanks.
(Valt pulls me up)
Valt: So, you gonna eat something?
Me: I take breakfast to go and do some practice before the gang shows up.
Valt: Alright!
(Me and Valt grab some eggs and bacon then run off to the warehouse)
~At The Warehouse~
Me: Valt, last night I made something for you!!
(I throw Valt a Blue Beyjitzu Launcher)
Valt: Woah, this is awesome!
Me: Give it a try!!
Me/Valt: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(Valt pulls the launching string so hard that wind blows in all directions, Valt pulls off a strong Beyjitzu Launch)
Me: *Gasps*
(Valtryek speeds around the stadium like a rocket, Valtryek hits the wall and gets sent flying)
Valt: *Gasps*
(Someone catches Valtryek)
Pam: Wow, that’s some power!
(Pam gives Valt Valtryek)
Valt: Thanks!!
Aiden: Valt, you’re battling me!!
Raina: No, he’s battling me.
(Raina’s evil Resonance Aura flares up)
Valt: *Gasps*
Me: What is it?
Valt: Nothing, I accept your challenge!!
(I set up everything for the Livestream)
Me: I’ve given Hanami the rundown. So we’re live in 3! 2! 1!
Hanami: Hello beyfans!! Today we’ll be having a match between the new up-and-coming blader Raina Reinhart!! Vs The Strongest Blader In The World!! Valt Aoi!!
Valt: Don’t worry I’m winning this battle!!
Possessed Raina: Really?! BECAUSE I’M GONNA SHATTER YOU TO PIECES!!!
All: *Gasps*
~Deep In The Jungle~
(Aiger watches the match on his phone)
Aiger: Is she--
(Aiger flashbacks)
Aiger: I AM ACHILLES!!!
(Achilles breaks Wonder Valtryek into 2)
Valt: *Gasps*
(Aiger ends his flashback)
Aiger: She’s going to destroy herself.
~Back At The Warehouse~
Raina (Thoughts): Valt Aoi, I’m determined to beat you no matter what!!
Valt (Thoughts): Raina Reinhart, her Resonance is out of control I need to beat her!!
Raina: Valt Aoi!! I’m taking you down with Strike Mode!!
Valt: I’ll take you down with these 6 Blades!!
(Valt puts Valtryek in 6 Blade mode)
Me: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Valt/Raina: Let it rip!!
(Valt and Raina pull of strong Beyjitzu Launches)
(Valtryek speeds up)
Hanami: They pull off two explosives-- Um what’s that called?
Me: Beyjizu Launch.
(I say that coughing to him silently)
Hanami: Beyjitzu Launches!!
Valt: Rush Launch!!
Raina: Intercept it!! Pirate Launch!!
(Valtryek and Ridley rush a barrage of attacks at each other)
Hanami: Valtryek and Ridley hit each other with a barrage of strikes!!
Valt: Valtryek!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Raina: Ridley!!
(Raina’s Dark Resonance Aura flares up)
(Valtryek catches onto the stadium rim, Valtryek starts speeding up)
Valt: Brave Flash!!
(A raging purple fire surrounds Raina)
Possessed Raina: Pirate Rush!!
(Valtryek and Ridley get sent flying)
Hanami: Valtryek and Ridley get sent flying from a super impact!!
(Ridley hits the ground, Valtryek bursts)
Me: It’s Brave Valtryek with a ring-out finish!! Valt Aoi claims 1 point!!
Hanami: Valtryek barely hangs in there!!
Possessed Raina: Grr!!
(Raina’s eye glows purple)
Possessed Raina: *Roars*
Me (Thoughts): What’s going on with Raina?
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Valt: I’m gonna take you down!!
Me: Second Battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Raina/Valt: Let it rip!!
(Valt pulls off a strong Beyjitzu launch, Raina pulls of a mega strong Beyjitzu Launch)
Possessed Raina: Destroy Them!!
Valt: Brave Sword!!
(An enormous explosion occurs)
Hanami: They both go in for it!!
Possessed Raina: You’re done!!
Valt: Valtryek!!
(Valtryek’s avatar smashes out from the ground)
Possessed Raina: RIDLEY!!!
(Ridley’s Avatar falls out of the sky)
Valt: Brave Sword!!
Possessed Raina: Pirate Rush!!
(Valtryek and Ridley start clashing hard)
(Valtryek and Ridley’s Avatar’s swords start clashing against each other)
(An enormous explosion occurs, wind blows in each direction)
Hanami: The energy is explosive!!
(Valtryek’s avatar slashes at Ridley)
(A purple line slashes at Raina)
Raina: *Groans*
(Ridley gets sent up flying in the air, Ridley bursts)
All: *Gasps*
Me: It’s Brave Valtryek with a burst finish!! With a score of 3-0, the winner is Valt Aoi!!
Hanami: Valt Aoi proves his dominance by crushing Raina Reinhart!!
(Raina blacks out)
~10 Minutes Later~
(Raina wakes up)
Pam: Are you ok?!
Raina: Yeah.
(Valt looks down at Raina seriously)
Valt (Thoughts): Is this what blading means to you?
Me: I’ve gotta get practicing for my rematch with Valt!!
I'm glad you liked it
Dynachi is going on a 1-week break so I can focus a bit more on Beyjitzu but doesn't worry next on July 5th Dynachi will come back then Beyjitzu will go on a break so I can focus on Dyanchi don't worry this is one time thing after Dynachi goes on a break I will go to my regular schedule 2 Dynachi Chapters and 2 Beyjitzu Chapters Opinion time!
Well, she went to max dark resonance really fast. Other than that I guess it's fine, idk how the warehouse is still intact after that. Nice overall
Valt ended her quick because he knew she would lol
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Jun. 30, 2021
(Jun. 30, 2021 3:28 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jun. 30, 2021 9:05 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Opinion time!
Well, she went to max dark resonance really fast. Other than that I guess it's fine, idk how the warehouse is still intact after that. Nice overall
Valt ended her quick because he knew she would lol
lol
hey unseen you know how to make a profile image?
ik what mines is gonna be
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Jun. 30, 2021
(Jun. 30, 2021 3:32 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jun. 30, 2021 3:28 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Valt ended her quick because he knew she would lol
lol
hey unseen you know how to make a profile image?
ik what mines is gonna be
https://worldbeyblade.org/usercp.php press on your picture it will show you where you want to change it to
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Jun. 30, 2021
(Jun. 30, 2021 4:27 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Jun. 30, 2021 3:32 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: lol
hey unseen you know how to make a profile image?
ik what mines is gonna be
https://worldbeyblade.org/usercp.php press on your picture it will show you where you want to change it to
alright thanks jit
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Jun. 30, 2021
(Jun. 30, 2021 4:28 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jun. 30, 2021 4:27 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: https://worldbeyblade.org/usercp.php press on your picture it will show you where you want to change it to
alright thanks jit
Np
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