RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - Dread hades12 - Aug. 12, 2021
Yeah Valt is too strong to break but can be bursted
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Aug. 13, 2021
bruh valt lost?
ORIBE YOU LOT GOING ON DEFEATING LEGENDS LIKE ITS NO PROBLEM WELL TAKE AWAY THAT PLOT ARMOR AND SEE WHAT HAPPENS?!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - Dread hades12 - Aug. 13, 2021
Oribe is the new Lain
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Aug. 13, 2021
Chapter 52 go brrr!!!
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 52
The Legendary Tag Battle!
Hanami: After that crazy turn of events, we have all our Finalists! It’s Valt Aoi, Oribe Abiko, Shu Kurenai, and Perseus Nakano! They’ll be battling in the Semi-Finals! But, our commissioner, Wakiya Komurasaki, decided to have a Tag-Battle with our four finalists! So get ready, because it’s going to be, Valt Aoi and Perseus Nakano Vs Shu Kurenai and Oribe Abiko, I can’t wait to see you all there!
Raina: Valt gave it his all and still lost.
Aiden: I know, it was super hard to watch.
Me: Don’t worry, Valt and I are going to win the Tag-Battle!
Valt: You said it, Percy!
(Valt walks up to us on the bleachers)
Shu: Man, Oribe’s something else, no telling whether someone will get to him in time.
Me: Don’t worry, we’ll show him the best Tag-Battle in the world, then he’ll realize what Blading really is!
Valt: Yeah, we’re going to defeat both of you!
Shu: I wouldn’t be so sure about that.
(Shu gets up and walks away)
~In Oribe’s Locker Room~
Oribe: Why didn’t Valkyrie break?!
Shu: It’s because you’re not strong enough to break it.
Oribe: *Gasps*
(Oribe looks behind him to see Shu)
Oribe: I’m stronger than you, so I definitely should be able to destroy Valkyrie!
Shu: Correction, you beat me, you have a lot to learn if you want to get on my level.
Oribe: Why do I have to take orders from you all of a sudden?!
Shu: If you wanna win this battle, I suggest you listen.
Oribe: I’ll do it my own way!
Shu: Fine, if you wanna lose, be my guest.
Oribe: Grr! Fine, what is your big idea?!
Shu: I’ve got plenty.
~In Valt’s Locker Room~
Me: Trident Geyser!!
Valt: True Heroic Saber!!
(Valkyrie and Poseidon slam into each other, Both Beys get shot out of the stadium)
Me/Valt: *Gasps*
Pam: It’s a simultaneous Over Finish! No Points!
Me: So, you’re still hanging in there?!
Valt: Yeah, I’m not stopping till you do!
Hiacan: Both Valkyrie and Poseidon have a high amount of attack power, maybe, if Valt and Percy can power up their shoots, they’d be able to use that explosive attack power together!
Raina: Combine both of their attack power into one and bomb! Explosive victory on their side!
Valt: So, we’ve just gotta power up!
Me: Wicked! I can do that!!
Pam: Ready Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Valt: Go, Shoot!
(Me and Valt pull off powerful Beyjitzu Shoots)
~On The Main Stage~
Hanami: Welcome back all you Bladers and Beyfans! Right now, we’ll be diving into our Tag-Battle! Valt Aoi, Perseus Nakano, Shu Kurenai, and Oribe Abiko will be ducking it out altogether on the big stage!
(Me, Valt, Shu, and Oribe walk out to the stage)
Me: Aw yeah, we’re so going to win this thing!
Valt: You could say that again, we’re unstoppable!
Shu: I’d like to see you try!
Oribe: I’ll get to crush Valt Aoi and Perseus Nakano again, This’ll be fun!!
Me: Buddy, you and I have some very different ideas of what the word fun means!
Hanami: Our Bladers are ready to rumble, so why don’t we jump in!
Referee: First battle!
Me (Thoughts): Me and Valt have got this in the bag, we just need to focus and move in sync!
Valt (Thoughts): Percy, I know you have what it takes to help me win this thing, so, don’t disappoint!
Shu (Thoughts): Battling Valt, it hasn’t been long since we’ve done this before, but this time, I’m going to win!
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Valt/Me/Shu/Oribe: Go, Shoot!
(Oribe, Valt, Shu, and I pull off powerful Beyjitzu Shoots)
Me/Valt: Go!
(Valkyrie and Poseidon move side by side in perfect sync heading for Overlord)
Hanami: In perfect sync, Valkyrie and Poseidon aim right at Overlord!
Oribe: Bring it on!!
Shu: No.
(Spriggan hits Overlord away from Valkyrie and Poseidon)
Oribe: *Gasps* What do you think you’re doing?!
Shu: Helping.
Hanami: Spriggan comes and saves Overlord!
Me: Valt, it’s time!
Valt: Got it!
Me/Valt: Synchro Shoot!
(Valkyrie and Poseidon hit Overlord with a powerful barrage of attacks)
Hanami: Overlord is being squished by Valkyrie and Poseidon!
(Oribe’s Resonance Aura flares up like a raging fire)
Oribe: Let go of me!
Shu: Go, Spriggan!
(Spriggan speeds up on the spinning plate hits the wall and slams down on Overlord)
Oribe: Withering Doomsday!
Me: *Gasps*
Valt: Valkyrie!
(Valkyrie speeds up quickly on the spinning plate and knocks Poseidon out of the way)
Oribe: Grr!!
Hanami: Awesome! Poseidon and Valkyrie quickly dodge Withering Doomsday!
Valt: Percy, we’ve gotta switch gears!
Me: Got it, Poseidon!
(Poseidon speeds up on the spinning plate and slams into Overlord, Overlord gets sent flying)
Hanami: Overlord’s been sent flying!
Oribe: C’mon! Overlord!!
(Oribe’s Resonance Aura flares up Overlord blazes out of the Bey)
Me: This is what I’ve been waiting for! Poseidon!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Poseidon blazes out of the Bey)
Oribe: Withering Harbinger!
Valt: True Heroic Flash!
(Valkyrie speeds up on the spinning plate and slams into Overlord, Overlord gets shot up in the air)
Hanami: I can’t believe it, Overlord is rapidly being sent up in the air!
Shu: Superior Counter Break!
Valt: Rush Shoot!
(Valkyrie and Spriggan hit each other with a powerful barrage of attacks sending each other flying around the stadium)
Hanami: Valt Aoi and Shu Kurenai are going in for it!
Valt: This is our last move, make it count… Percy!
Me: I will!
(Valkyrie speeds up on the spinning plate and slams into Poseidon, Poseidon gets sent flying into the air)
Hanami: Did Valkyrie turn on Poseidon?!
Oribe: One more time! Withering Harbinger!!
Shu: Superior Slash!
Valt: True Heroic Saber!!
(Valkyrie, Overlord, and Spriggan start clashing wildly in the center)
Hanami: Valkyrie, Spriggan, and Overlord are going in for it!
Me: Trident Impact!!
(Poseidon slams down on Spriggan, Valkyrie, and Overlord with force causing a huge explosion)
Shu//Oribe: *Gasps*
(Valkyrie, Spriggan, and Overlord emerge from the explosion, Valkyrie and Spriggan burst, Overlord gets shot out of the stadium)
Valt/Me: Yes!
Referee: Heroic Valkyrie and Brine Poseidon are the winners!
Raina: Yes!
Hanami: Amazing, Valkyrie sent Poseidon in the air so it can get a powerful dive attack!!
Shu: I must admit, that was a powerful move.
Valt: Thanks, we had a last resort up our sleeves! Knowing you two, you’d counter our other strategies!
(Oribe’s Resonance Aura blazes up like a raging fire)
Oribe: I… lost?! What is the meaning of this?!
Shu: You lost, it happens to everyone.
Oribe: It doesn’t happen to me!!
Shu: Well, it just did.
(Shu walks away)
Oribe: Grr!!
Hanami: We’ve got our Semi-Final matches! It’s Valt Aoi Vs Perseus Nakano! And after that, we’ve got Shu Kurenai Vs Oribe Abiko!!
All: *Gasps*
Oribe: I get to crush Shu, again!
(Shu smiles evilly)
Me: *Gasps* I’m up against... Valt?!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Aug. 13, 2021
HECK YEAH CANT WAIT TO READ THIS!
nice chapter! percy and valt really let them have it!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Aug. 13, 2021
Chapter 53 Preview
Me: I'm going up against Valt, this is going to be fun!
Valt: I'm not holding back!
(Valkyrie starts clashing with Poseidon from the back)
Me: I'm not holding anything back either!
(Valkyrie slams into Poseidon, Poseidon leans on the A Gear and picks up speed)
Me: We're going all out!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Next time on Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu, Defeat Valkyrie!
3! 2! 1! Go, Shoot!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - Dread hades12 - Aug. 13, 2021
I love this chapter
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Aug. 13, 2021
Chapter 53 took my soul.
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 53
Defeat Valkyrie!
~In My Locker Room~
Aiden: Go, Ashura!
Me: Brine Shoot!
(Poseidon slams into Ashura sending it flying out of the stadium)
Aiden: *Gasps*
Pam: It’s Brine Poseidon, with an Over Finish! Percy is the winner!
Me: Yeah, I’m so ready to battle, Valt!
Raina: It’s one thing to beat us, but Valt’s a whole other thing!
Me: You’re right, I’ve gotta get stronger!
Speaker: Perseus Nakano, your match with Valt Aoi is starting!
Raina: Good luck, I know you can win this!
Me: Thanks, I’m not holding anything back!
~On The Main Stage~
Hanami: Hello everyone! Today, we’ll be diving into the first Semi-Final match! It’s Valt Aoi Vs, Perseus Nakano!!
(Me and Valt walk out to the stage)
Valt: You’d better not hold back, because I’m going all out!
Me: I won’t, you’d better be the one who better doesn’t hold back!
Hanami: Our Bladers are ready for battle, so why don’t we hop right in!
Referee: First battle!
Me (Thoughts): Valt, I’m gonna defeat you once and for all!
Valt: Percy, I won’t let you defeat me this time!
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Valt: Go, Shoot!
(Me and Valt pull off powerful Beyjitzu Shoots)
Valt: Rush Shoot!
Me: Brine Shoot!
(Poseidon and Valkyrie hit each other with a powerful barrage of attacks)
Hanami: Valkyrie and Poseidon hit each other with a powerful barrage of strikes!
Me: Speed up, buddy!
(Poseidon speeds up on the spinning plate and heads straight for Valkyrie)
Valt: True Heroic Saber!!
(Valkyrie slams into Poseidon sending it flying in the air)
Hanami: Poseidon’s been sent flying into the sky!
Me: I knew you’d do that, Poseidon!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Poseidon blazes out of the Bey)
Me: Trident Impact!
Valt: I knew you’d do that! Valkyrie!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up Valkyrie blazes out of the Bey)
Valt: Once again, True Heroic Saber!!
(Valkyrie slashes at Poseidon, Poseidon gets shot up in the air and bursts)
Me: *Gasps*
Referee: It’s Heroic Valkyrie with a Burst Finish! Valt Aoi claims 2 points!
Hanami: Incredible! Valkyrie bursts Poseidon in one hit!
(Poseidon’s parts fall to my feet)
Me: Poseidon…
(I pick up Poseidon’s parts, Poseidon pulls me into a white void)
Poseidon: What is troubling you?
Me: It’s just… Valt’s so strong, I don’t know how to beat him!
Poseidon: The only thing we can do is counter with more powerful attacks, trust in me and give it your all, don’t give up till the end!
(My Resonance Aura flares up, my eyes glow green)
Poseidon: Exactly like that! go out there and give it you're all!!
(I get pulled out of the white void)
Me: Valt, I’m taking you down here and now!
Valt: I’d like to see you try!
Referee: Second battle!
Valt (Thoughts): Percy’s in sync with Poseidon, I’ll have to go all out in this battle!
(I put the B Gear in Free-Spin Mode)
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Valt: Go, Shoot!
(Valt pulls off a powerful Beyjitzu Shoot, I pull off a mega-powerful Beyjitzu Shoot)
Me: True Brine Shoot!
(Poseidon speeds up on the spinning plate and hits Valkyrie with a powerful barrage of attacks)
Hanami: Valkyrie is being pulverized by Poseidon’s onslaught!
Valt: Counter with Rush Shoot!
Me: Nexus Spin!
(Valkyrie tries hitting Poseidon but hits the B Gear getting sent flying into the wall)
Hanami: Valkyrie’s been sent flying into the wall!!
Valt: True Heroic Jet Shoot!
(Valkyrie bounces off the wall and speeds up on the spinning plate)
Me: Brine Strike!
(Poseidon speeds up on the spinning plate, Valkyrie and Poseidon start clashing wildly)
Hanami: Valkyrie and Poseidon are going in for it!
Me: Poseidon!!
(My hair bursts out of control as my Resonance Aura flares up and Poseidon blazes out of the Bey)
Valt: Ah! Valkyrie!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up Valkyrie blazes out of the Bey)
Valt: True Heroic Flash!
Me: True Trident Geyser!!
(Valkyrie and Poseidon speed up on the spinning plate and start clashing causing a surge of power around the stadium)
Me/Valt: Ah!!
Hanami: They’re both going in for it!
(Poseidon speeds up and slams into Valkyrie, Valkyrie gets shot out of the stadium)
Valt: *Gasps*
Referee: It’s Brine Poseidon, with a Burst Finish! Perseus claims 1 point!
Me: Aw yeah!
Raina: Yes!
Hanami: The Hydro King has dominated the Second Battle! He’s still behind our Wonder Boy though!
Referee: Third battle!
Me: I’m gonna beat you in this battle!
Valt: In your dreams!
(I put B Gear in Locked Mode)
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Valt: Go, Shoot!
(Me and Valt mega-powerful Beyjitzu Shoots)
Me: True Brine Shoot!
Valt: True Rush Shoot!
(Valkyrie and Poseidon speed up and hit each other with a powerful barrage of attacks sending a shockwave through the stadium)
Hanami: Valkyrie and Poseidon are going all the way!
Me: True Trident Strike!
(Poseidon speeds up and slams into Valkyrie sending it flying in the air)
Valt: We’re not giving up! Valkyrie!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura bursts up Valkyrie blazes out of the Bey)
Valt: True Heroic Sword!
(Valkyrie slams down on Poseidon sending it high in the sky)
Hanami: Poseidon’s been sent flying!!
All: *Gasps*
(Everything turns white as time slows down, My heartbeat creates a loud echo)
Me: Time to get reckless!! Poseidon!!!
(My hair bursts out of control as my Resonance Aura rages into a blazing fire, Poseidon blazes out of the Bey and turns into a bright raging fireball)
Oribe: *Gasps*
(Poseidon lands on the stadium ground and picks up speed)
Valt: *Gasps* What the?!
Me: Go!! True Trident Geyser!!!
Hanami: Oh my soaring Beys!! Poseidon is back and ready to fight!!!
Valt: True Heroic Saber!!
(Valkyrie and Poseidon continuously slam into each other with mega-powerful all around the stadium)
Me/Valt: C’mon, give it everything you’ve got!!
(Valkyrie and Poseidon slam into each other shooting both of them up in the air, Poseidon and Valkyrie burst)
All: *Gasps*
Hanami: Both Beys have burst, but which one burst first?
Referee: It’s… Brine Poseidon with a Burst Finish! Perseus Nakano is the winner with a score of 3-2!!
(Me and Valt fall to the ground in exhaustion)
Hanami: Valt Aoi has fallen, Percy is going to the finals!!
Raina: He did it!
Aiden: That was amazing bro!
Hiacan: Best battle ever!
Pam: You were amazing!
Valt: Percy, promise me you’ll win this thing!
Me: I will, I promise!
(Me and Valt start laughing as we lay on the ground in exhaustion)
Oribe: Shu Kurenai, I’ll defeat you then crush Percy!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Aug. 13, 2021
bruh the episode was so epic! we all know who's gonna win the fight between shu and oribe tho
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Aug. 13, 2021
GREAT chwpter!!!!!!!!! But I did see some mistakes
Referee: Its brine Poisiden we a burst finish Percy gets 1 Poin
Me: what? I'm confused
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Aug. 16, 2021
I just watched episode 50 and I need to talk to burst, I'm kinda mad, Hyuga said quote "Time to get reckless" And that's Percy's catchphrase >
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Aug. 16, 2021
I wrote Chapter 54 so you don't have to
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 54
The Darkest Blaze!
Oribe: Go, Shoot!
(Oribe pulls off a powerful Beyjitzu Shoot)
Oribe: *Roars*
(Overlord glows brightly, the stadium breaks)
Oribe: Shu Kurenai, I’ll crush you in this battle!
~In Shu’s Locker Room~
Shu: I can’t let Oribe win this battle, if he does, he’ll be… lost.
(Spriggan speeds up around the stadium)
Shu: I’ll crush his Blaze, no matter what!!
(Shu’s scar glows as his Resonance Aura flares up, Valt, Me and the gang walk-in)
Valt: Hey, Shu!
Shu: Hey, guys.
Me: So, you’re going up against Oribe?
Shu: Yeah, I’ve got to win this battle no matter what, and I’ll be facing you in the finals!
Me: Yeah, and I’ll be winning!
Pam: This battle is going to be awesome!
Raina: I can’t wait, Shu’s so gonna win!
Speaker: Shu Kurenai, your match is starting!
Shu: Well, I’ll see you guys on the other end.
Hiacan: Good luck!
Shu (Thoughts): I won’t need luck.
~On The Main Stage~
Hanami: Hello all you Bladers and Beyfans! Today, we’ll be having a match that’ll go down in history! It’s the Blader From The Abyss! Oribe Abiko!
(Oribe walks out to the stage)
Hanami: And we’ve got our Crimson Red Legend! Shu Kurenai!
(Shu walks out to the stage)
Hanami: Both of our Bladers are powerful powerhouses, but which one will be powerful enough to join Perseus Nakano in the finals! Let’s find out!
Referee: First battle!
Oribe: Shu Kurenai, I’ll crush you no matter what!
Shu: I’ll win this battle and extinguish your Blaze!
(Shu puts Spriggan in Clockwise Attack Mode)
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Shu/Oribe: Go, Shoot!
(Shu and Oribe pull off powerful Beyjitzu Shoots)
Shu: Go, Spriggan!
Oribe: Pull out all the stops!
(Spriggan speeds up and slams into Overlord sending it flying)
Oribe: *Gasps*
Hanami: Overlord has been sent flying!
Shu: Superior Spark!!
(Spriggan uses the spinning plate to hit Overlord with a powerful barrage of attacks)
Hanami: Spriggan’s laying it on Overlord with a powerful barrage of attacks!
Oribe: Grr!! Get outta there!
Shu: Spriggan!!!
(Shu’s Resonance Aura bursts up Spriggan blazes out of the Bey, Shu’s scar and eyes glow red)
Shu: Superior Slash!!
(Spriggan speeds up on the spinning plate and slashes at Overlord, Overlord bursts)
Oribe: *Gasps*
Referee: It’s Superior Spriggan with a Burst Finish! Shu Kurenai claims 2 points!
Hanami: Spriggan uses all its power to burst Overlord and it succeeds! Shu leads with two points!!
Oribe: How did you--
Shu: I’ve been training so long, just to crush your Blaze and show you what Blading really is! You’re not becoming World Champion!! I’m not going to rest till you're defeated!!!
(Oribe’s Resonance Aura fiercely flares up)
Oribe: You’re wrong, I’ll swallow you whole!!
(Shu’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Shu: I won’t let you!
Referee: Second battle!
Shu (Thoughts): He’ll be hitting my way harder than last time, I’ve gotta win!
(Shu puts Spriggan in Counterclockwise Attack Mode)
Oribe: I’ll crush you with my Ultimate Blaze!!
(Oribe’s Resonance Aura wildly bursts up)
Me: “Ultimate Flare?”
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Shu/Oribe: Go, Shoot!
(Shu and Oribe pull off mega-powerful Beyjitzu Shoots)
Oribe: Go, Overlord!
(Overlord speeds up on the spinning plate and heads towards Spriggan)
Shu: Counter Break!
(Spriggan speeds up and slams into Overlord, Overlord, and Spriggan get sent flying)
Hanami: Both Beys have been sent flying!
(Overlord catches onto the rim and speeds up)
Shu: True Superior Counter Break!!
(Spriggan speeds up om the rim and slams into Overlord, Overlord gets sent flying across the stadium)
Hanami: Overlord’s been sent flying!
Oribe: Overlord!!
(Oribe’s Resonance Aura flares up Overlord blazes out of the Bey)
Shu: Spriggan!!
(Shu’s Resonance Aura flares up Spriggan blazes out of the Bey)
Shu: Superior Slash!
(Spriggan starts slashing at Overlord with full power)
Oribe: Withering Doomsday!!
(A huge black plate slams down on Spriggan sending it flying out of the stadium)
Shu: *Gasps*
Referee: It’s Wither Overlord with an Over Finish! Oribe Abiko claims 1 point!
Oribe *Smiles Evilly*
Hanami: Overlord counters Spriggan’s powerful attack and knocks it out of the stadium!!
(Shu picks up Spriggan)
Oribe: Are you feeling that despair in the air?!
Shu: No, I’m crushing you in this match!!
(Shu’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Referee: Third battle!
Me: C’mon Shu! You’ve got this in the bag!!
Valt: End this thing!!
Aiden/Pam: You’ve got this!
Shu: *Smiles*
Oribe: I can’t wait to destroy you! I’ll crush everything and everyone who gets in my way!!
(Oribe’s Resonance Aura bursts into wild flames)
Shu: I’ll crush that Blaze!
(The Blaze wraps around Oribe)
Oribe: I, Overlord will destroy you!!
Shu: (Thoughts): He’s almost lost, I can’t let him go any further!
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Shu/Oribe: Go, Shoot!
(Shu and Oribe pull off powerful Beyjitzu Shoots)
Oribe: This is the end for you, Overlord!!
(Oribe’s Resonance Aura bursts into flames Overlord blazes out of the Bey)
Shu: Superior Spark!
(Spriggan slams into Overlord)
Oribe: Withering Doomsday!!
(A black plate slams down on Spriggan sending it flying in the air)
Hanami: Spriggan’s been sent flying!
Shu: Spriggan!!
(Shu’s Resonance Aura bursts up Spriggan blazes out of the Bey)
Shu: Superior Slash!
(Spriggan lands on Overlord sending it flying across the stadium)
Hanami: Spriggan has sent Overlord flying!
Oribe: Final Withering Harbinger!!
Shu: Superior Upper Shoot!
(Overlord and Spriggan hit each other with a powerful barrage of attacks)
Hanami: Spriggan and Overlord are hitting each other over and over!!
Shu: End this! True Superior Slash!!
Oribe: Final Withering Bale!!
(Spriggan and Overlord start clashing wildly, a purple and red surge explodes from the stadium)
Hanami: Spriggan and Overlord are clashing like crazy!!
(Overlord pushes Spriggan into the wall and starts crushing it)
Shu: *Gasps*
Oribe: Break! Withering Crush!!!
(Overlord crushes Spriggan into the wall, Spriggan cracks then bursts into fragments)
Shu: *Gasps*
(Shu falls to his knees)
Oribe: *Roars*
Referee: It’s Wither Overlord with a Burst Finish! Oribe Abiko is the winner, with a score of 3-2!!
Hanami: Overlord has… Destroyed Spriggan.
Me: Spriggan… No.
(Shu’s hair covers his eyes as he picks up Spriggan’s fragments)
Oribe: How are you feeling, Shu Kurenai?
Me: Leave him alone!!
All: *Gasps*
Me: I’m taking you down in the finals, no matter what!!
Oribe: I’ll destroy Poseidon, even if it scorches me!!
Hanami: Folks, we’re going to have the greatest finals ever! It’s Oribe Abiko Vs, Perseus Nakano!! You’d better be there because this showdown will go down in history!!
~In Shu’s Locker Room~
(Valt, Me, and the gang run into Shu’s Locker Room)
Valt: Shu! Are you ok?
Shu: I’m fine, It’s just upsetting that I couldn’t bring him back.
Me: Don’t worry, I’ll bring him back no matter what the cost by winning the finals!
Shu: We’re counting on you, win this thing!
Me: You’ve got it!
All: You’ve got this, just give it your all!!
Me: I will!
~Later That Night In My Dorm~
(The door creaks open)
Me: *Gasps* Who’s there?!
(The mysterious person goes through my backpack)
Me: What do you think you’re doing?!
(I jump on the mysterious person)
???: Ouch, you’ve gotten stronger since I’ve last seen you!
Me: Um, do I know you?
(The mystery man takes off his mask)
Me: *Gasps*
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Aug. 17, 2021
Chapter 55 Start Of The Finals!!
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 55
The True Legend!
Me: Dad?!
Dad: I told you I’d be here in time for the finals, didn’t I?
Me: Yeah, but you didn’t mention scaring the living daylights out of me!
Dad: That was for fun!
Me: I’ve got to get some sleep for my match tomorrow, I’ll see you there.
(I pull the blanket over me)
Dad: I guess I’ll see you there!
~The Next Day~
Me: Go, Shoot!
(I pull off a powerful Beyjitzu Shoot)
Me: That’s the stuff, I’m sure to win with these moves!
Shu: Don’t be so sure.
Me: *Gasps*
(Valt Shu and the gang walk up to me)
Valt: Oribe has to be the toughest threat the Blading world has ever faced! Beating him won’t be an easy task.
Me: I’ll defeat him anyways! It’s win or bust, if I lose this… the Blading world will be lost.
Shu: We’re not saying you can’t win, we’re just saying you need more practice, Valt and I will train you!
All: *Gasps*
Raina: You serious?!
Pam: He’s strong, but not that strong!
Shu: Well, not just us.
Drum: Sorry for being late!!
(Drum runs toward us at lightning speed)
Valt: I asked Drum here if he could help train Percy!
Drum: Yeah, this’ll be the most intense training you’ve ever gotten!
Me: I appreciate the help, but isn’t Spriggan--
Shu: Worked all night reviving it!
(Shu holds up Spriggan)
Me: Awesome, I’m totally up for training! But first.
(I take the bandages off my hand)
All: *Gasps*
Me: Doctor said my hand is fully healed!
Aiden: Awesome!
Drum: Can we battle already?!
Valt: Alright, let’s get right into it!
Shu: It’s us versus Percy!
All: *Gasps*
Pam: You didn’t say anything about a 3 V 1!
Shu: This is the only way he’ll be strong enough to beat Oribe!
Hiacan: He’s right.
Drum: C’mon, let’s battle!
Raina: First battle!
Me (Thoughts): I’ll have to shoot harder than ever if I want to defeat all of them at the same time, I’ve just gotta… win!
Raina: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Shu/Drum/Valt/Me: Go, Shoot!
(Me, Shu, Drum, and Valt pull off mega-powerful Beyjitzu Shoots)
Me: Brine Shoot!
Valt: Rush Shoot!
Shu: Upper Shoot!
Drum: Dragon Shoot!
(Valkyrie, Dragon, and Spriggan hit Poseidon with a powerful barrage of attacks, Poseidon counters all the hits with the spinning plate)
Shu: Counter Break!
(Spriggan speeds up and slams into Poseidon shooting it up in the air)
Me: *Gasps*
Drum: Bound Wing!
(Dragon slams into Poseidon with its Bound Blade sending it flying into the wall)
Me: Hang--
Valt: True Heroic Flash!!
(Valkyrie speeds up on the rim and slams into Poseidon, Poseidon gets sent flying across the stadium)
Me: That’s enough, Poseidon!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Poseidon blazes out of the Bey, Poseidon turns into a raging fireball and glows brightly)
Me: Go!!
(Poseidon speeds up on the spinning plate and slams into Dragon, Dragon gets shot out of the stadium)
Drum: *Gasps*
Shu: Spriggan!!
(Shu’s Resonance Aura flares up Spriggan blazes out of the Bey)
Valt: Valkyrie!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up Valkyrie blazes out of the Bey)
Valt/Shu: Double Slash!!
(Valkyrie and Spriggan slash at Poseidon shooting it in the air)
Me: This is it! True Trident Geyser!!!
(Poseidon slams down on Spriggan and Valkyrie causing a huge explosion with smoke, Valkyrie and Spriggan get shot out of the stadium)
Me: Yes!!
Shu/Valt: *Gasps*
Raina: Brine Poseidon is the winner!!
Drum: Grr!! We lost!!
Valt: That was awesome! Battle exactly like that tomorrow
Shu: Teach Oribe a lesson!
Me: Don’t worry, I’ll definitely win!
~In Oribe’s Locker Room~
(Oribe’s Resonance Aura flares up emitting scarlet flames around it)
Oribe: What’s going on with my Resonance?!
Shu: It’s your true desire.
(Shu walks in)
Oribe: *Gasps* What do you mean?!
Shu: Whether you like it or not, that’s your true power!
Oribe: And how did I stumble upon this now?!
Shu: You're jealous that Percy beat Valt without having to break Valkyrie, your true self is screaming out but you keep it locked away!
Oribe: What do--
Shu: It’s my turn to talk and you're not stopping me!!
Oribe: *Gasps*
Shu: You forced yourself to do this by combining yourself with your Bey, now, your true self is begging to come out, Percy will bring the real you back!
Oribe: *Gasps*
(Shu leaves the room)
~In The Hallway~
(Lui walks up to me with a mad expression)
Me: Want something dude?
Lui: Listen up!!
Me: *Gasps*
Lui: You better show me the best battle ever, or I’ll crush you right before your eyes!!
Me: You’ve got it!
(Lui walks away)
~On The Main Stage~
Hanami: It’s the finals!! The match everyone’s been waiting for! The top two powerhouses will be facing off to see who’s boss!!
(The whole crowd starts cheering and screaming)
Aiden/Pam/Hiacan: You’ve got this!
Hanami: Alright, in the red corner, we’ve got our Blader From The Dark! Oribe Abiko!!
(Oribe walks out to the stage)
Hanami: In the blue corner! We’ve got our Hydro King! Perseus Nakano!!
(I run onto the stage)
Hanami: This will be our final match and I just can’t wait to see how it’ll all play out! So, what are we waiting for? Let’s jump right in!!
Referee: First battle!
Me: I’m going to defeat you and become the new World Champion!!
Oribe: You think you can defeat me?!
(Oribe’s Resonance Aura flares up wildly, Oribe’s eyes glow purple)
Me: *Gasps*
Oribe: I’ll crush you!
(My Resonance Aura flares up like a raging fire, my eyes glow yellow)
Me: I’m not afraid, I’m going to take you down!!
Valt: Yeah, keep it up!
Raina: You’ve got this!
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Oribe: Go, Shoot!
(Me and Oribe pull off mega-powerful Beyjitzu Shoots)
Me: Brine Shoot!
(Poseidon hits Overlord with a powerful barrage of attacks)
Hanami: Poseidon starts off with a powerful barrage of attacks!
Oribe: Overlord!
(Overlord speeds up on the spinning plate and goes on the motorized ramp)
Hanami: Overlord evades!
Oribe: Destroy!!
(Overlord speeds up and chases Poseidon)
Hanami: Overlord is on the attack!
Me: Aqua Flash!!
(Poseidon catches onto the stadium rim and speeds up, Poseidon slams into Overlord sending it flying in the air)
Hanami: Overlord has been sent flying!
Me: Now, Brine Cannon!!
(Poseidon slams into Overlord sending it flying out of the stadium)
Oribe: *Gasps*
Referee: It’s Brine Poseidon with an Over Finish! Perseus Nakano claims 1 point!!
Me: Oh yeah!!
Hanami: Poseidon has just claimed the first point! It knocked Overlord out with style!!
(Oribe picks up Overlord)
Oribe (Thoughts): Finally, a true prey for Overlord to devour!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Aug. 17, 2021
Bruh it’s one chapter after another lol great 2 chapters!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Aug. 17, 2021
Chapter 56 will be called: Ultimate Finale, True Blaze!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Aug. 17, 2021
Take all the time you need but
WHEN'S THE NEXT CHAPTER?! The suspense is killing me!!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Aug. 18, 2021
Chapter 56 The Finale 😭😭
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Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 56
Ultimate Finale, True Blaze!
Me: See that Oribe? That’s me and Poseidon’s true bond!
Oribe: Really?! Then I’ll just destroy that along with Poseidon!!
Me: Our bond is something you can never destroy!
Oribe: Let’s test that theory!
Hanami: The score is currently 1-0, and both Bladers are fired up and determined! Let’s jump right into the second battle!!
Referee: Second battle!
Oribe (Thoughts): He’s worthy of my full power, I’ll destroy him with my true power!!
(Oribe has a flashback)
Shu: Your true self is screaming out, but will you let it out?
(Oribe ends the flashback)
Oribe: No, this is my true self!!
(Oribe’s Resonance Aura flares up frantically)
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Oribe: Go, Shoot!
(Me and Oribe pull off mega-powerful Beyjitzu Shoots)
Me: Go!
(Poseidon speeds up and aims for Overlord)
Hanami: Poseidon is speeding up and has Overlord in its sights!!
Oribe: Don’t touch Overlord!!
(Overlord speeds up on the spinning plate and dodges Poseidon’s attack)
Me: *Gasps*
Oribe: Overlord!!
(Oribe’s Resonance Aura flares up wildly, Overlord blazes out of the Bey)
Me: Go!!
(Poseidon slams into Overlord sending it flying in the air)
Hanami: Overlord’s been sent flying!!
Oribe (Thoughts): I don’t need to listen to Shu, I’m stronger without him!
Overlord: You should listen!
Oribe: *Gasps*
Overlord: He knows what he’s talking about and your true inner self is tired of causing pain! Beat Percy with your true self!!
(Oribe’s purple Resonance Aura turns to ash, A dark scarlet Resonance Aura flares up)
Oribe: Go, Overlord!!
(Overlord starts crashing back to the ground)
Oribe: Final Withering Doomsday!!
(Overlord slams down on Poseidon with a black plate, Poseidon gets shot up in the air and hits the stadium wall and bursts)
Me: *Gasps*
Referee: It’s Wither Overlord with a Burst Finish! Oribe Abiko claims 2 points!
Hanami: Incredible! Overlord has just burst Poseidon with one devastating strike!!
Oribe: Percy, I’ll be beating you fair and square! So, give me your all!!
(I put Poseidon together)
Me: Not if I have anything to say about it!
(I hold up Poseidon)
Raina: Yo, Shu, what’s going on with Oribe?
Shu: He’s found his true self and realized that his Blading style is wrong, he’s also having fun battling Percy!
Aiden: That’s so cool, win this, Percy!
Referee: Third battle!
(Everything turns white as we click our Beys into place, Overlord stands next to Oribe, Poseidon stands next to Me)
Me: Poseidon, I wanna win this thing, so, let’s do this thing!!
Poseidon: I want to win this battle too, I trust in you Percy!!
Oribe: Overlord, let’s crush ‘em fast!
Overlord: I won’t hold anything back!!
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Oribe: Go, Shoot!
(Me and Oribe pull off mega-powerful Beyjitzu Shoots causing humongous explosions)
Me/Oribe: Go for it!!
(Poseidon and Overlord hit each other with a powerful barrage of attacks)
Hanami: Overlord and Poseidon are going for it!!
Me: Trident Geyser!!
(I rush at Oribe with my Flaming Resonance Aura surrounding me)
Oribe: Withering Doomsday!!
(Oribe slams his hand down to the ground, sending me flying away. A black plate slams down on Poseidon sending it flying into the air)
Me: *Gasps*
Hanami: Overlord’s sent Poseidon in the air, is it over?!
(I slam my foot onto the ground)
Me: There’s no way it’s ending like this!! True Trident Impact!!
(Poseidon slams down on Overlord sending it flying into the wall)
Hanami: Overlord’s been sent flying!!
Me: We’re getting reckless!! Poseidon!!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Poseidon’s avatar crashes down to the ground, Poseidon starts glowing Rainbow)
Me: Rainbow Hydro Blaze!!
(Rainbow Poseidon hits Overlord with a powerful barrage of attacks)
Hanami: Poseidon is on the attack!!
Oribe: We’re not giving up! Overlord!!
(Oribe’s Resonance Aura bursts up Overlord bursts out of the Bey, Overlord glows bright scarlet)
Me/Oribe: Attack!!
(Poseidon and Overlord hit each other with a mega-powerful barrage of attacks sending shockwaves around the stadium with each hit)
Hanami: They’re going for it!
Me/Oribe: Finish this!!!
(Poseidon and Overlord’s avatar’s slam right into each other, Both Beys slam into each other and get sent flying in the air, Poseidon and Overlord burst)
All: *Gasps*
Me (Thoughts): Who won?
Referee: It’s Brine Poseidon with a Burst Finish! Perseus Nakano is the new World Champion!!
Me: Yes, we did it!!
(The crowd starts cheering)
Aiden: You did it, buddy!!
Raina: Our new World Champion!!
(Tears start dripping from Hiacan’s face)
Hiacan: You did good!!
Dad: That’s my son!
(Valt and Shu high five, I fall to the ground)
Me: Man, I’m beat!
Poseidon: You should be proud!
Me: Nah, we should be proud!
Poseidon: :)
(Oribe walks up to me and pulls me up)
Oribe: That was super fun! Battling with you is the best!!
Me: Battling with you was fun too!
Oribe: I’m… sorry for everything, I just wanted to become stronger.
Me: There are other ways to become stronger, but, I accept your apology!!
(Oribe and I shake hands)
~In The Hallway~
(Valt, Shu, and the gang run up to me)
Valt: That was an amazing battle, World Champion!!
Shu: You really did it, I’m proud!
Me: Thanks!
All: You were awesome!!
Raina: And that’s not the only good news!
(Raina, Hiacan, Aiden, and Pam hold up a letter)
Me: What is it?!
Aiden: We got accepted into BC Sol!
Me: Wow, that’s awesome! I can come too, right?!
Valt: Of course you can, let’s start packing. We leave tomorrow!
Me: Awesome, I’ll get right to it!
Dad: I’ve got to get back to work, I’ll catch up with you later, Percy!
Me: You’re not coming?
Dad: Nah, I’ve got to stay home, just do my proud, ok?
Me: I promise!
~The Next Day At The Airport~
Aiden: I’m so excited, I’ll be joining BC Sol!
Me: I’m with you guys all the way!
(A woman runs up to me)
Manager: Hello, Perseus Nakano.
Me: Um, hi.
Manager: You’ve got a challenger in Brazil waiting to battle you!
All: Already?! You’ve gotta be kidding!!
Manager: Yes, so, we’ve got to go, right now!
Me: But my friends.
Manager: They’ll be fine, we’ve got to go, now!
Me: Ok, but please, give me time to say goodbye.
Manager: Fine, but we’re on a schedule, so hurry up!
Aiden: So, you can’t come with us?
Me: It looks like it, I don’t even know how I’ll win without you guys.
Pam: You’ll be fine, we’ll be supporting you all the way on TV!
Hiacan: Yeah, we won’t stop cheering until we lose our voices!
Raina: We’ll miss you.
Me: You guys were the greatest friends ever, always having my back no matter what, I’ll really miss you.
(I start tearing up)
Valt: We’ll miss you too.
(Valt puts his hand on my shoulder, tears stream down my face)
Me: It won’t be the same, but I promise I’ll win!
Raina: We know you will.
~At The B32 Boarding Area~
Manager: Alright, we should be there right on time if we take this route.
Me (Thoughts): I’ll miss you guys, so much.
(A group of people runs up to me)
Me: *Gasps* Guys?!
Aiden: *Panting* Percy, we came as fast as we could!
Raina: Yeah, *Pants* We’re coming with you!
Me: *Gasps* You're not joining BC Sol?!
(Raina and the gang rip the envelope in unison)
Pam: Nah, we’re staying with you till the end!
Hiacan: And besides, I’m sure we can make the warehouse into the best Bey Club ever!!
(I start tearing up)
Me: You did that… for me?
Raina: Like I always say--
Me: “What’re friends for?”
(We all laugh as we walk into the plane, the plane takes off)
Me: Watch out world, me and Poseidon are coming in hot!!
[The End]
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Aug. 18, 2021
YES! BEST CHAPtER EVERRRR
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Aug. 18, 2021
Why is the Final always the Best chapter? AMAZING CHAPTER I WAS TEARING SO BADDLY
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - Hollowmind13 - Aug. 18, 2021
Bruh, being 4 hrs ahead have some bad parts too.
Anyways, Nice chapter. I don't have much to say really.
Also, I'm not going to do another thing like I did in Dynashi, it takes so much time.
And yeah, Goodbye Beyjitzu (which turns out didn't have anything to do with a fighting/self-defense technique)
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Aug. 21, 2021
I'll be ranking all the Bladers in Beyjitzu by classes Master is the highest S is the second-highest A is the third Highest
Master: Perseus Nakano, Valt Aoi, Shu Kurenai, Oribe Abiko,
S: Hikaru Ashi, Hyuga Ashi, Drum Koryu, Aiga Akaba Free De La Hoya, Lui Shirosagi,
A Class: Hiacan Yurry, Max Hill, Baabar Blakenstone, Sulien Genji, Raina (Forgot last name lol) Aidan Kusaba, Pam Hope,
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Aug. 21, 2021
(Aug. 21, 2021 4:59 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I'll be ranking all the Bladers in Beyjitzu by classes Master is the highest S is the second-highest A is the third Highest
Master: Perseus Nakano, Valt Aoi, Shu Kurenai, Oribe Abiko,
S: Hikaru Ashi, Hyuga Ashi, Drum Koryu, Aiga Akaba Free De La Hoya, Lui Shirosagi,
A Class: Hiacan Yurry, Max Hill, Baabar Blakenstone, Sulien Genji, Raina (Forgot last name lol) Aidan Kusaba, Pam Hope,
hiacan is the strongest? yey
(Aug. 21, 2021 4:59 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I'll be ranking all the Bladers in Beyjitzu by classes Master is the highest S is the second-highest A is the third Highest
Master: Perseus Nakano, Valt Aoi, Shu Kurenai, Oribe Abiko,
S: Hikaru Ashi, Hyuga Ashi, Drum Koryu, Aiga Akaba Free De La Hoya, Lui Shirosagi,
A Class: Hiacan Yurry, Max Hill, Baabar Blakenstone, Sulien Genji, Raina (Forgot last name lol) Aidan Kusaba, Pam Hope,
oh and its raina reinhart, dont worry i had to think of it too lol
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - Hollowmind13 - Aug. 21, 2021
(Aug. 21, 2021 5:02 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: (Aug. 21, 2021 4:59 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I'll be ranking all the Bladers in Beyjitzu by classes Master is the highest S is the second-highest A is the third Highest
Master: Perseus Nakano, Valt Aoi, Shu Kurenai, Oribe Abiko,
S: Hikaru Ashi, Hyuga Ashi, Drum Koryu, Aiga Akaba Free De La Hoya, Lui Shirosagi,
A Class: Hiacan Yurry, Max Hill, Baabar Blakenstone, Sulien Genji, Raina (Forgot last name lol) Aidan Kusaba, Pam Hope,
hiacan is the strongest? yey
(Aug. 21, 2021 4:59 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I'll be ranking all the Bladers in Beyjitzu by classes Master is the highest S is the second-highest A is the third Highest
Master: Perseus Nakano, Valt Aoi, Shu Kurenai, Oribe Abiko,
S: Hikaru Ashi, Hyuga Ashi, Drum Koryu, Aiga Akaba Free De La Hoya, Lui Shirosagi,
A Class: Hiacan Yurry, Max Hill, Baabar Blakenstone, Sulien Genji, Raina (Forgot last name lol) Aidan Kusaba, Pam Hope,
oh and its raina reinhart, dont worry i had to think of it too lol I know her name because of Reinhart from Overwatch.
Anyways, I guess Oribe is Percy (Jackson) Rival, similar to Valt and Shu.
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Aug. 21, 2021
(Aug. 21, 2021 5:39 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Aug. 21, 2021 5:02 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: hiacan is the strongest? yey
oh and its raina reinhart, dont worry i had to think of it too lol I know her name because of Reinhart from Overwatch.
Anyways, I guess Oribe is Percy (Jackson) Rival, similar to Valt and Shu.
Lol, we were actually watching Percy Jackson and the Lightning Thief with my class and then Beyjitzu all formed in my head
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - Hollowmind13 - Aug. 21, 2021
(Aug. 21, 2021 5:44 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Aug. 21, 2021 5:39 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: I know her name because of Reinhart from Overwatch.
Anyways, I guess Oribe is Percy (Jackson) Rival, similar to Valt and Shu.
Lol, we were actually watching Percy Jackson and the Lightning Thief with my class and then Beyjitzu all formed in my head
Totally unrelated stuff: The Percy Jackson films are considered trash to almost all Percy Jackson fans.
Anyways, at first glance I thought Beyjitzu would have some kind of technique to beyblade, similar to marcial arts or sth. I can say it was a clickbait, but at least a good one.
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