RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - Lucha Burst - Jul. 30, 2021
(Jul. 30, 2021 10:27 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: We are gathered here today to celebrate the best bey that ever was created, Hydro Poseidon, he was a friend and companion, and dare I say, Family, he was slain at the hands of Vile Overlord crushing it against the wall and broke. Poseidon always gave guidance and was a good friend to us all, he taught us all the true meaning of Beyblade. *Cries*
*sadness*
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Jul. 30, 2021
*cries* Yes we're all here to celebrate him.... He was a friend a Rival and family...
UnseenBurst this is how I pictured Poseidon 's avatar https://www.bing.com/images/search?view=detailV2&ccid=DbwtHd%2ff&id=8E357BAF1B634FC8C7D5B3245CB97E8FC967AC43&thid=OIP.DbwtHd_f7uDvc90QmQcdJwHaEK&mediaurl=https%3a%2f%2fimages4.alphacoders.com%2f814%2fthumb-1920-814560.jpg&cdnurl=https%3a%2f%2fth.bing.com%2fth%2fid%2fR.0dbc2d1ddfdfeee0ef73dd1099071d27%3frik%3dQ6xnyY9%252buVwksw%26pid%3dImgRaw&exph=1080&expw=1920&q=poseidon&simid=607989858256519099&FORM=IRPRST&ck=E638A496E2D9FA8CEBE6B6079B43188E&selectedIndex=9 when he broke
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 30, 2021
(Jul. 30, 2021 10:33 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: *cries* Yes we're all here to celebrate him.... He was a friend a Rival and family...
UnseenBurst this is how I pictured Poseidon 's avatar https://www.bing.com/images/search?view=detailV2&ccid=DbwtHd%2ff&id=8E357BAF1B634FC8C7D5B3245CB97E8FC967AC43&thid=OIP.DbwtHd_f7uDvc90QmQcdJwHaEK&mediaurl=https%3a%2f%2fimages4.alphacoders.com%2f814%2fthumb-1920-814560.jpg&cdnurl=https%3a%2f%2fth.bing.com%2fth%2fid%2fR.0dbc2d1ddfdfeee0ef73dd1099071d27%3frik%3dQ6xnyY9%252buVwksw%26pid%3dImgRaw&exph=1080&expw=1920&q=poseidon&simid=607989858256519099&FORM=IRPRST&ck=E638A496E2D9FA8CEBE6B6079B43188E&selectedIndex=9 when he broke
That's very accurate, if I wrote on Wattpad I'd probably use that for its avatar.
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Jul. 30, 2021
(Jul. 30, 2021 10:27 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: We are gathered here today to celebrate the best bey that ever was created, Hydro Poseidon, he was a friend and companion, and dare I say, Family, he was slain at the hands of Vile Overlord crushing it against the wall and broke. Poseidon always gave guidance and was a good friend to us all, he taught us all the true meaning of Beyblade. *Cries*
*Cries* Hydro Poseidon will be remembered...
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 30, 2021
(Jul. 30, 2021 10:52 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jul. 30, 2021 10:27 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: We are gathered here today to celebrate the best bey that ever was created, Hydro Poseidon, he was a friend and companion, and dare I say, Family, he was slain at the hands of Vile Overlord crushing it against the wall and broke. Poseidon always gave guidance and was a good friend to us all, he taught us all the true meaning of Beyblade. *Cries*
*Cries* Hydro Poseidon will be remembered...
What was it's combo? I don't remember and I can't find it either
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 30, 2021
(Jul. 30, 2021 10:58 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Jul. 30, 2021 10:52 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: *Cries* Hydro Poseidon will be remembered...
What was it's combo? I don't remember and I can't find it either
I think it was Hydro Poseidon M1A Flood
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 31, 2021
(Jul. 30, 2021 10:27 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: We are gathered here today to celebrate the best bey that ever was created, Hydro Poseidon, he was a friend and companion, and dare I say, Family, he was slain at the hands of Vile Overlord crushing it against the wall and broke. Poseidon always gave guidance and was a good friend to us all, he taught us all the true meaning of Beyblade *The Next Day*
Poseidon: I'm back
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 31, 2021
Chapter 36 has been found in the depths of the seas but by who? 
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 36
Rebirth! Brine Poseidon!!
~In My Room~
(Someone knocks on the door)
Me: Come in, or not.
(Aiden opens the door)
Aiden: Are you ok?
Me: I’m fine.
Raina: Come on, you’ve been in here ever since we’ve come back from the Airship, you’ve gotta do something!
Me: I’m fine here.
Hiacan: We can fix Poseidon, we’ve just gotta try!
Me: Why should I?
Raina: You’re not just gonna stay here, you’ve gotta fix Poseidon and get Oribe back for what he did!
Me: What’s the point?
Pam: Is that seriously going to be your response to everything!
Me: Yeah, pretty much.
Hiacan: He just needs some time to himself, let’s go.
(Hiacan and the gang leave)
Dad: He still won’t do anything?
Aiden: Nope.
Raina: I’ve got an idea, it’s a long shot but it might work!
(Raina pulls her phone out of her pocket and dials a number)
Aiden: Who are you calling?
Raina: You’ll find out soon enough!
???: Hello?
Raina: Hey, it’s me, Raina!
???: What’s going on, Raina?
Raina: It’s Percy, he--
???: I watched the battle, is he ok?
Raina: That’s what I’m calling you about, he’s in a real stump!
???: Alright, I’m in Japan for a bit so I can come over.
Raina: Thanks, Shu.
Shu: No problem.
(Raina hangs up)
Aiden: That was Shu on the phone?
Raina: Yeah, with him coming, Percy’s sure to get out of his funk!
Pam: I really hope so.
~At BC Sol Deep In The Forest~
Valt: Let it… rip!!
(Valt pulls off a powerful Beyjitzu Launch, Valtryek speeds around the stadium like a rocket)
Valt: That’s the stuff, now go even faster!
(Valtryek speeds up but then starts wobbling and stops spinning)
???: So, this is where you are.
Valt: Hey Free, what’s up!
Free: Nothin much, I was just about to do some training. What are you doing?
Valt: You heard about our new World Champion, have you?
Free: Yeah, that’s why I was looking for you.
Valt: I can’t let someone like that be the World Champion, I’m going to take him down in a title match!
Free: If you wanna take him down, I suggest upgrading Valtryek.
Valt: *Gasps* What do you mean?
Free: Your driver can awaken, can it?
Valt: Yeah.
Free: And if you find a way to boost Valtryek’s attack power, you’ll be able to beat Oribe and Overlord.
Valt (Thoughts): Maybe instead of a bound attack, I could go for a hardcore rubber slam attack.
Free: Valt.
Valt: Yes Free?
(Free’s eyes glow)
Free: Beat Oribe, he’s not ready to be World Champion.
Valt: Free, you can bet your deers on it!
Free: *Smiles* I know you can!
~In My Room~
(Someone knocks on my door)
Me: If it’s you guys then leave me be.
(Shu opens the door)
Me: Hey Shu.
Shu: Hey Percy, are you alright?
Me: I’m sitting here with all my life dreams crushed, yes I’m ok.
Shu: If I’m being completely honest, right now it’s you who’s ruining your life dreams.
Me: Excuse me?
Shu: You're sitting there instead of fixing your bey and getting back up again.
Me: *Sighs* I’m scared.
Shu: Of what?
Me: Poseidon being destroyed again, it was hard, I never want it to go through that again.
Shu: You can’t run away from your problems, you need to charge in and face them head first!
Me: Easy for you to say, you’re one of the strongest Bladers in the world!
Shu: You think getting there was easy? It was one of the hardest times in my life, but I had a friend, a friend who supported me no matter what was going on, even when I wasn’t supportive back.
Me: *Sighs* Do you always have to be so sappy?
Shu: Learned from the best.
Me: What are we doing, we’ve got a bey to fix!
Shu: That’s the attitude!
(I run out of my room and head straight for the workroom)
Raina: Wow Shu, you work miracles!
Shu: It was nothing.
Hiacan: Why don’t we help Percy create the new Poseidon!
Raina: That’s a great idea!
~In The Workroom~
Hiacan: So Percy, have any idea of what you want Poseidon’s evolution to be?
Me: Well, Poseidon’s evolution will feature all of the past upgrades, it's also going to be way more powerful than before!
(Me and Hiacan start typing fast)
Raina: So, what should we do?
Me: Fire up the printer!
Aiden: You’ve got it!
(Aiden and Raina turn the printer on and get it ready)
Hiacan: If you put a bit more metal here.
Me: And two huge blades here!
Hiacan: Add some rubber.
(The image pops up on the screen)
Me: This is going to be awesome!
Pam: Um, can you translate all of that?
Hiacan: Basically, Poseidon is going to be stronger than ever!
Pam: Alright, that I can understand!
Me/Hiacan: Let’s get working!
~In BC Sol’s Workroom~
(Valt works on his bey)
Valt (Thoughts): If I take away Valtryek’s bound attack, it’ll be able to hit harder and be able to go faster!
(Valt finished his upgrades and attaches them to Valtryek)
Valt: It’s done! Heroic Valtryek is completely upgraded!
Free: So, you upgraded Valtryek, just like how Percy upgraded his bey.
Valt: You could say I got inspired by him!
Free: Then why don’t we test it out?
Valt: Sure, I still want Valtryek to awaken so it can go way faster!
~At The Stadium In The Forest~
Free: Ready?
Valt: You bet!
Free/Valt: 3! 2! 1! Let it… rip!!
(Free and Valt pull off powerful Beyjitzu Launches)
Valt: Go Valtryek!!
Free: Take the center, Fafnir!
(Valtryek hits Fafnir with a barrage of attacks, Fafnir takes the center)
Valt: Rush, rush, rush!
(Free flashbacks)
Young Valt: Rush, rush, rush!
(Genesis Valtryek hits Drain Fafnir with a flurry of attacks)
Young Valt: It’s time for a Spring Attack!
(Valtryek slams into Fafnir, Fafnir, and Valtryek both get shot out of the stadium, Free ends his flashback)
Free: You never change, do you?
Valt: Hit it, Valtryek!
(Valtryek slams into Fafnir, Valtryek gets sent flying)
Free: Attacks like those won’t get through.
(Valtryek catches onto the stadium rim and picks up speed)
Valt: Go, Partner!
(Valtryek’s driver awakens, Valtryek starts going super fast)
Free: *Gasps*
Valt: Ultra Heroic Flash!
(Valtryek speeds up and heads straight for Fafnir, Fafnir and Valtryek start wildly clashing, energy bursts all around the forest making leaves blow in all directions)
Free: Drain Break!
(Fafnir speeds up and races around the stadium)
Valt: Valtryek!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up Valtryek blazes out of the bey)
Valt: Time to end this! Heroic Saber!!
(Valtryek picks up speed and slashes at Fafnir with full power, Fafnir bursts)
Free: *Gasps*
Valt: That’s our true power!
(Valt smiles)
~Back At My House~
(Poseidon’s shadow stands behind me as I work)
Me (Thoughts): Poseidon, I’m almost done! You’ve just gotta trust me!
Poseidon: I trust you to unlock our true power!
Me: I’ll beat Oribe, and I’ll create the strongest Hydro Blaze ever because that’s how strong our bond is!
Poseidon: Yes, that is what Beyblade is about!
Poseidon/Me: We’ll take the world by storm!
(I finish working)
Me: It’s done! Brine Poseidon!!
(I hold up Poseidon)
Raina: It took you four hours but you finally did it.
Me: You mean we did it.
Shu: We sure did.
Me: How are you feeling Poseidon?
Poseidon: Good.
Shu: Percy, do you wanna battle me?
Raina: Are you serious?!
Shu: As serious as I’ve ever been.
Aiden: Awesome!
Me: We accept!
~In The Warehouse~
Shu: So this is where you battled Valt and Free.
Me: Yeah, I’ve battled all types of Bladers and won!
Raina: We’ve battled here too you know!
Shu: Well then, shall we get started?
Pam: Right, Inspect your opponent's bey!
Shu (Thoughts): Brine Poseidon, a Clockwise spinning Balance type. It looks like it has two huge blades that have rubber on them and two smaller ones. Looks like he kept all of its upgrades on it except you can’t remove them. The B Gear keeps its free-spinning and locked motions and Poseidon’s layer has two small rubber blades to absorb spin. Wow, Percy did a great job on this, but unfortunately, I’ll have to beat him!
Pam: First battle!
Me: So, what do you think about Brine Poseidon?
Shu: It’s a cool bey, but I’ll have to beat it!
Me: In your dreams!
(Shu puts Spryzen in Counterclockwise Attack Mode)
Pam: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Shu: Let it… rip!!
(Me and Shu pull off mega-powerful Beyjitzu Launches)
Hiacan: Woah, strong launches from both sides!
Shu: Go Spryzen!
Me: Let’s do this, Poseidon!
(Poseidon and Spryzen slam into each other, Spryzen gets sent flying up)
Shu: *Gasps*’
Raina: Poseidon’s still a heavy tank!
Shu: Counter Break!
Me: Counter that, Brine Launch!
(Poseidon and Spryzen hit each other with a mega-powerful barrage of attacks, energy bursts out of the stadium)
Aiden: How is he keeping up with Shu?
Raina: I don’t know, but it’s working!
Shu: Time to end this! Spryzen!!
(Shu’s scar glows brightly as his Resonance Aura flares up and Spryzen blazes out of the bey)
Shu: Superior Whip!
(Spryzen speeds up and slams into Poseidon sending it flying in the air)
Me: Poseidon!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Poseidon blazes out of the bey)
Me: Trident Geyser!!
(Poseidon slams down on Spryzen, a huge explosion ouccers blowing smoke in all directions)
All: *Gasps*
(Spryzen gets shot out of the smoke and lands out of the stadium)
Shu: *Gasps*
Pam: It’s Brine Poseidon, with a ring-out finish! Percy wins!
Me: I won!
Aiden: No way, he beat Shu.
(Shu walks up to me)
Shu: That was an awesome match, I can’t wait to battle you again!
Me: Same, here, but don’t be surprised if I beat you!
Shu: Well--
(The TV flickers on)
Hanami (ON TV): Important news Bladers and Beyfans! Tomorrow, Valt Aoi will be facing our new World Champion, Oribe Abiko! This match is going to be skill vs skill! And I personally can’t wait for this battle! It’ll be live tomorrow in Japan! So I’ll see you all there!
(The TV turns off)
Me: Valt’s going up against Oribe?
Shu: It looks like it.
Raina: Valt needs to take him down, tomorrow, we’re going to cheer on Valt and help him beat Oribe!
Aiden: We sure will!
Me (Thoughts): I hope Valtryek doesn't get destroyed.
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 31, 2021
(Jul. 31, 2021 6:24 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 36 has been found in the depths of the seas but by who?
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 36
Rebirth! Brine Poseidon!!
~In My Room~
(Someone knocks on the door)
Me: Come in, or not.
(Aiden opens the door)
Aiden: Are you ok?
Me: I’m fine.
Raina: Come on, you’ve been in here ever since we’ve come back from the Airship, you’ve gotta do something!
Me: I’m fine here.
Hiacan: We can fix Poseidon, we’ve just gotta try!
Me: Why should I?
Raina: You’re not just gonna stay here, you’ve gotta fix Poseidon and get Oribe back for what he did!
Me: What’s the point?
Pam: Is that seriously going to be your response to everything!
Me: Yeah, pretty much.
Hiacan: He just needs some time to himself, let’s go.
(Hiacan and the gang leave)
Dad: He still won’t do anything?
Aiden: Nope.
Raina: I’ve got an idea, it’s a long shot but it might work!
(Raina pulls her phone out of her pocket and dials a number)
Aiden: Who are you calling?
Raina: You’ll find out soon enough!
???: Hello?
Raina: Hey, it’s me, Raina!
???: What’s going on, Raina?
Raina: It’s Percy, he--
???: I watched the battle, is he ok?
Raina: That’s what I’m calling you about, he’s in a real stump!
???: Alright, I’m in Japan for a bit so I can come over.
Raina: Thanks, Shu.
Shu: No problem.
(Raina hangs up)
Aiden: That was Shu on the phone?
Raina: Yeah, with him coming, Percy’s sure to get out of his funk!
Pam: I really hope so.
~At BC Sol Deep In The Forest~
Valt: Let it… rip!!
(Valt pulls off a powerful Beyjitzu Launch, Valtryek speeds around the stadium like a rocket)
Valt: That’s the stuff, now go even faster!
(Valtryek speeds up but then starts wobbling and stops spinning)
???: So, this is where you are.
Valt: Hey Free, what’s up!
Free: Nothin much, I was just about to do some training. What are you doing?
Valt: You heard about our new World Champion, have you?
Free: Yeah, that’s why I was looking for you.
Valt: I can’t let someone like that be the World Champion, I’m going to take him down in a title match!
Free: If you wanna take him down, I suggest upgrading Valtryek.
Valt: *Gasps* What do you mean?
Free: Your driver can awaken, can it?
Valt: Yeah.
Free: And if you find a way to boost Valtryek’s attack power, you’ll be able to beat Oribe and Overlord.
Valt (Thoughts): Maybe instead of a bound attack, I could go for a hardcore rubber slam attack.
Free: Valt.
Valt: Yes Free?
(Free’s eyes glow)
Free: Beat Oribe, he’s not ready to be World Champion.
Valt: Free, you can bet your deers on it!
Free: *Smiles* I know you can!
~In My Room~
(Someone knocks on my door)
Me: If it’s you guys then leave me be.
(Shu opens the door)
Me: Hey Shu.
Shu: Hey Percy, are you alright?
Me: I’m sitting here with all my life dreams crushed, yes I’m ok.
Shu: If I’m being completely honest, right now it’s you who’s ruining your life dreams.
Me: Excuse me?
Shu: You're sitting there instead of fixing your bey and getting back up again.
Me: *Sighs* I’m scared.
Shu: Of what?
Me: Poseidon being destroyed again, it was hard, I never want it to go through that again.
Shu: You can’t run away from your problems, you need to charge in and face them head first!
Me: Easy for you to say, you’re one of the strongest Bladers in the world!
Shu: You think getting there was easy? It was one of the hardest times in my life, but I had a friend, a friend who supported me no matter what was going on, even when I wasn’t supportive back.
Me: *Sighs* Do you always have to be so sappy?
Shu: Learned from the best.
Me: What are we doing, we’ve got a bey to fix!
Shu: That’s the attitude!
(I run out of my room and head straight for the workroom)
Raina: Wow Shu, you work miracles!
Shu: It was nothing.
Hiacan: Why don’t we help Percy create the new Poseidon!
Raina: That’s a great idea!
~In The Workroom~
Hiacan: So Percy, have any idea of what you want Poseidon’s evolution to be?
Me: Well, Poseidon’s evolution will feature all of the past upgrades, it's also going to be way more powerful than before!
(Me and Hiacan start typing fast)
Raina: So, what should we do?
Me: Fire up the printer!
Aiden: You’ve got it!
(Aiden and Raina turn the printer on and get it ready)
Hiacan: If you put a bit more metal here.
Me: And two huge blades here!
Hiacan: Add some rubber.
(The image pops up on the screen)
Me: This is going to be awesome!
Pam: Um, can you translate all of that?
Hiacan: Basically, Poseidon is going to be stronger than ever!
Pam: Alright, that I can understand!
Me/Hiacan: Let’s get working!
~In BC Sol’s Workroom~
(Valt works on his bey)
Valt (Thoughts): If I take away Valtryek’s bound attack, it’ll be able to hit harder and be able to go faster!
(Valt finished his upgrades and attaches them to Valtryek)
Valt: It’s done! Heroic Valtryek is completely upgraded!
Free: So, you upgraded Valtryek, just like how Percy upgraded his bey.
Valt: You could say I got inspired by him!
Free: Then why don’t we test it out?
Valt: Sure, I still want Valtryek to awaken so it can go way faster!
~At The Stadium In The Forest~
Free: Ready?
Valt: You bet!
Free/Valt: 3! 2! 1! Let it… rip!!
(Free and Valt pull off powerful Beyjitzu Launches)
Valt: Go Valtryek!!
Free: Take the center, Fafnir!
(Valtryek hits Fafnir with a barrage of attacks, Fafnir takes the center)
Valt: Rush, rush, rush!
(Free flashbacks)
Young Valt: Rush, rush, rush!
(Genesis Valtryek hits Drain Fafnir with a flurry of attacks)
Young Valt: It’s time for a Spring Attack!
(Valtryek slams into Fafnir, Fafnir, and Valtryek both get shot out of the stadium, Free ends his flashback)
Free: You never change, do you?
Valt: Hit it, Valtryek!
(Valtryek slams into Fafnir, Valtryek gets sent flying)
Free: Attacks like those won’t get through.
(Valtryek catches onto the stadium rim and picks up speed)
Valt: Go, Partner!
(Valtryek’s driver awakens, Valtryek starts going super fast)
Free: *Gasps*
Valt: Ultra Heroic Flash!
(Valtryek speeds up and heads straight for Fafnir, Fafnir and Valtryek start wildly clashing, energy bursts all around the forest making leaves blow in all directions)
Free: Drain Break!
(Fafnir speeds up and races around the stadium)
Valt: Valtryek!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up Valtryek blazes out of the bey)
Valt: Time to end this! Heroic Saber!!
(Valtryek picks up speed and slashes at Fafnir with full power, Fafnir bursts)
Free: *Gasps*
Valt: That’s our true power!
(Valt smiles)
~Back At My House~
(Poseidon’s shadow stands behind me as I work)
Me (Thoughts): Poseidon, I’m almost done! You’ve just gotta trust me!
Poseidon: I trust you to unlock our true power!
Me: I’ll beat Oribe, and I’ll create the strongest Hydro Blaze ever because that’s how strong our bond is!
Poseidon: Yes, that is what Beyblade is about!
Poseidon/Me: We’ll take the world by storm!
(I finish working)
Me: It’s done! Brine Poseidon!!
(I hold up Poseidon)
Raina: It took you four hours but you finally did it.
Me: You mean we did it.
Shu: We sure did.
Me: How are you feeling Poseidon?
Poseidon: Good.
Shu: Percy, do you wanna battle me?
Raina: Are you serious?!
Shu: As serious as I’ve ever been.
Aiden: Awesome!
Me: We accept!
~In The Warehouse~
Shu: So this is where you battled Valt and Free.
Me: Yeah, I’ve battled all types of Bladers and won!
Raina: We’ve battled here too you know!
Shu: Well then, shall we get started?
Pam: Right, Inspect your opponent's bey!
Shu (Thoughts): Brine Poseidon, a Clockwise spinning Balance type. It looks like it has two huge blades that have rubber on them and two smaller ones. Looks like he kept all of its upgrades on it except you can’t remove them. The B Gear keeps its free-spinning and locked motions and Poseidon’s layer has two small rubber blades to absorb spin. Wow, Percy did a great job on this, but unfortunately, I’ll have to beat him!
Pam: First battle!
Me: So, what do you think about Brine Poseidon?
Shu: It’s a cool bey, but I’ll have to beat it!
Me: In your dreams!
(Shu puts Spryzen in Counterclockwise Attack Mode)
Pam: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Shu: Let it… rip!!
(Me and Shu pull off mega-powerful Beyjitzu Launches)
Hiacan: Woah, strong launches from both sides!
Shu: Go Spryzen!
Me: Let’s do this, Poseidon!
(Poseidon and Spryzen slam into each other, Spryzen gets sent flying up)
Shu: *Gasps*’
Raina: Poseidon’s still a heavy tank!
Shu: Counter Break!
Me: Counter that, Brine Launch!
(Poseidon and Spryzen hit each other with a mega-powerful barrage of attacks, energy bursts out of the stadium)
Aiden: How is he keeping up with Shu?
Raina: I don’t know, but it’s working!
Shu: Time to end this! Spryzen!!
(Shu’s scar glows brightly as his Resonance Aura flares up and Spryzen blazes out of the bey)
Shu: Superior Whip!
(Spryzen speeds up and slams into Poseidon sending it flying in the air)
Me: Poseidon!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Poseidon blazes out of the bey)
Me: Trident Geyser!!
(Poseidon slams down on Spryzen, a huge explosion ouccers blowing smoke in all directions)
All: *Gasps*
(Spryzen gets shot out of the smoke and lands out of the stadium)
Shu: *Gasps*
Pam: It’s Brine Poseidon, with a ring-out finish! Percy wins!
Me: I won!
Aiden: No way, he beat Shu.
(Shu walks up to me)
Shu: That was an awesome match, I can’t wait to battle you again!
Me: Same, here, but don’t be surprised if I beat you!
Shu: Well--
(The TV flickers on)
Hanami (ON TV): Important news Bladers and Beyfans! Tomorrow, Valt Aoi will be facing our new World Champion, Oribe Abiko! This match is going to be skill vs skill! And I personally can’t wait for this battle! It’ll be live tomorrow in Japan! So I’ll see you all there!
(The TV turns off)
Me: Valt’s going up against Oribe?
Shu: It looks like it.
Raina: Valt needs to take him down, tomorrow, we’re going to cheer on Valt and help him beat Oribe!
Aiden: We sure will!
Me (Thoughts): I hope Valtryek doesn't get destroyed.
I'll rate it.
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Jul. 31, 2021
I’ll rate after I read the chapter!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Jul. 31, 2021
this chapter was awesome!
also the reason whyy i was so late to rate is because I was reading a harry potter book at the time
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 31, 2021
(Jul. 31, 2021 6:26 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: (Jul. 31, 2021 6:24 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 36 has been found in the depths of the seas but by who?
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 36
Rebirth! Brine Poseidon!!
~In My Room~
(Someone knocks on the door)
Me: Come in, or not.
(Aiden opens the door)
Aiden: Are you ok?
Me: I’m fine.
Raina: Come on, you’ve been in here ever since we’ve come back from the Airship, you’ve gotta do something!
Me: I’m fine here.
Hiacan: We can fix Poseidon, we’ve just gotta try!
Me: Why should I?
Raina: You’re not just gonna stay here, you’ve gotta fix Poseidon and get Oribe back for what he did!
Me: What’s the point?
Pam: Is that seriously going to be your response to everything!
Me: Yeah, pretty much.
Hiacan: He just needs some time to himself, let’s go.
(Hiacan and the gang leave)
Dad: He still won’t do anything?
Aiden: Nope.
Raina: I’ve got an idea, it’s a long shot but it might work!
(Raina pulls her phone out of her pocket and dials a number)
Aiden: Who are you calling?
Raina: You’ll find out soon enough!
???: Hello?
Raina: Hey, it’s me, Raina!
???: What’s going on, Raina?
Raina: It’s Percy, he--
???: I watched the battle, is he ok?
Raina: That’s what I’m calling you about, he’s in a real stump!
???: Alright, I’m in Japan for a bit so I can come over.
Raina: Thanks, Shu.
Shu: No problem.
(Raina hangs up)
Aiden: That was Shu on the phone?
Raina: Yeah, with him coming, Percy’s sure to get out of his funk!
Pam: I really hope so.
~At BC Sol Deep In The Forest~
Valt: Let it… rip!!
(Valt pulls off a powerful Beyjitzu Launch, Valtryek speeds around the stadium like a rocket)
Valt: That’s the stuff, now go even faster!
(Valtryek speeds up but then starts wobbling and stops spinning)
???: So, this is where you are.
Valt: Hey Free, what’s up!
Free: Nothin much, I was just about to do some training. What are you doing?
Valt: You heard about our new World Champion, have you?
Free: Yeah, that’s why I was looking for you.
Valt: I can’t let someone like that be the World Champion, I’m going to take him down in a title match!
Free: If you wanna take him down, I suggest upgrading Valtryek.
Valt: *Gasps* What do you mean?
Free: Your driver can awaken, can it?
Valt: Yeah.
Free: And if you find a way to boost Valtryek’s attack power, you’ll be able to beat Oribe and Overlord.
Valt (Thoughts): Maybe instead of a bound attack, I could go for a hardcore rubber slam attack.
Free: Valt.
Valt: Yes Free?
(Free’s eyes glow)
Free: Beat Oribe, he’s not ready to be World Champion.
Valt: Free, you can bet your deers on it!
Free: *Smiles* I know you can!
~In My Room~
(Someone knocks on my door)
Me: If it’s you guys then leave me be.
(Shu opens the door)
Me: Hey Shu.
Shu: Hey Percy, are you alright?
Me: I’m sitting here with all my life dreams crushed, yes I’m ok.
Shu: If I’m being completely honest, right now it’s you who’s ruining your life dreams.
Me: Excuse me?
Shu: You're sitting there instead of fixing your bey and getting back up again.
Me: *Sighs* I’m scared.
Shu: Of what?
Me: Poseidon being destroyed again, it was hard, I never want it to go through that again.
Shu: You can’t run away from your problems, you need to charge in and face them head first!
Me: Easy for you to say, you’re one of the strongest Bladers in the world!
Shu: You think getting there was easy? It was one of the hardest times in my life, but I had a friend, a friend who supported me no matter what was going on, even when I wasn’t supportive back.
Me: *Sighs* Do you always have to be so sappy?
Shu: Learned from the best.
Me: What are we doing, we’ve got a bey to fix!
Shu: That’s the attitude!
(I run out of my room and head straight for the workroom)
Raina: Wow Shu, you work miracles!
Shu: It was nothing.
Hiacan: Why don’t we help Percy create the new Poseidon!
Raina: That’s a great idea!
~In The Workroom~
Hiacan: So Percy, have any idea of what you want Poseidon’s evolution to be?
Me: Well, Poseidon’s evolution will feature all of the past upgrades, it's also going to be way more powerful than before!
(Me and Hiacan start typing fast)
Raina: So, what should we do?
Me: Fire up the printer!
Aiden: You’ve got it!
(Aiden and Raina turn the printer on and get it ready)
Hiacan: If you put a bit more metal here.
Me: And two huge blades here!
Hiacan: Add some rubber.
(The image pops up on the screen)
Me: This is going to be awesome!
Pam: Um, can you translate all of that?
Hiacan: Basically, Poseidon is going to be stronger than ever!
Pam: Alright, that I can understand!
Me/Hiacan: Let’s get working!
~In BC Sol’s Workroom~
(Valt works on his bey)
Valt (Thoughts): If I take away Valtryek’s bound attack, it’ll be able to hit harder and be able to go faster!
(Valt finished his upgrades and attaches them to Valtryek)
Valt: It’s done! Heroic Valtryek is completely upgraded!
Free: So, you upgraded Valtryek, just like how Percy upgraded his bey.
Valt: You could say I got inspired by him!
Free: Then why don’t we test it out?
Valt: Sure, I still want Valtryek to awaken so it can go way faster!
~At The Stadium In The Forest~
Free: Ready?
Valt: You bet!
Free/Valt: 3! 2! 1! Let it… rip!!
(Free and Valt pull off powerful Beyjitzu Launches)
Valt: Go Valtryek!!
Free: Take the center, Fafnir!
(Valtryek hits Fafnir with a barrage of attacks, Fafnir takes the center)
Valt: Rush, rush, rush!
(Free flashbacks)
Young Valt: Rush, rush, rush!
(Genesis Valtryek hits Drain Fafnir with a flurry of attacks)
Young Valt: It’s time for a Spring Attack!
(Valtryek slams into Fafnir, Fafnir, and Valtryek both get shot out of the stadium, Free ends his flashback)
Free: You never change, do you?
Valt: Hit it, Valtryek!
(Valtryek slams into Fafnir, Valtryek gets sent flying)
Free: Attacks like those won’t get through.
(Valtryek catches onto the stadium rim and picks up speed)
Valt: Go, Partner!
(Valtryek’s driver awakens, Valtryek starts going super fast)
Free: *Gasps*
Valt: Ultra Heroic Flash!
(Valtryek speeds up and heads straight for Fafnir, Fafnir and Valtryek start wildly clashing, energy bursts all around the forest making leaves blow in all directions)
Free: Drain Break!
(Fafnir speeds up and races around the stadium)
Valt: Valtryek!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up Valtryek blazes out of the bey)
Valt: Time to end this! Heroic Saber!!
(Valtryek picks up speed and slashes at Fafnir with full power, Fafnir bursts)
Free: *Gasps*
Valt: That’s our true power!
(Valt smiles)
~Back At My House~
(Poseidon’s shadow stands behind me as I work)
Me (Thoughts): Poseidon, I’m almost done! You’ve just gotta trust me!
Poseidon: I trust you to unlock our true power!
Me: I’ll beat Oribe, and I’ll create the strongest Hydro Blaze ever because that’s how strong our bond is!
Poseidon: Yes, that is what Beyblade is about!
Poseidon/Me: We’ll take the world by storm!
(I finish working)
Me: It’s done! Brine Poseidon!!
(I hold up Poseidon)
Raina: It took you four hours but you finally did it.
Me: You mean we did it.
Shu: We sure did.
Me: How are you feeling Poseidon?
Poseidon: Good.
Shu: Percy, do you wanna battle me?
Raina: Are you serious?!
Shu: As serious as I’ve ever been.
Aiden: Awesome!
Me: We accept!
~In The Warehouse~
Shu: So this is where you battled Valt and Free.
Me: Yeah, I’ve battled all types of Bladers and won!
Raina: We’ve battled here too you know!
Shu: Well then, shall we get started?
Pam: Right, Inspect your opponent's bey!
Shu (Thoughts): Brine Poseidon, a Clockwise spinning Balance type. It looks like it has two huge blades that have rubber on them and two smaller ones. Looks like he kept all of its upgrades on it except you can’t remove them. The B Gear keeps its free-spinning and locked motions and Poseidon’s layer has two small rubber blades to absorb spin. Wow, Percy did a great job on this, but unfortunately, I’ll have to beat him!
Pam: First battle!
Me: So, what do you think about Brine Poseidon?
Shu: It’s a cool bey, but I’ll have to beat it!
Me: In your dreams!
(Shu puts Spryzen in Counterclockwise Attack Mode)
Pam: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Shu: Let it… rip!!
(Me and Shu pull off mega-powerful Beyjitzu Launches)
Hiacan: Woah, strong launches from both sides!
Shu: Go Spryzen!
Me: Let’s do this, Poseidon!
(Poseidon and Spryzen slam into each other, Spryzen gets sent flying up)
Shu: *Gasps*’
Raina: Poseidon’s still a heavy tank!
Shu: Counter Break!
Me: Counter that, Brine Launch!
(Poseidon and Spryzen hit each other with a mega-powerful barrage of attacks, energy bursts out of the stadium)
Aiden: How is he keeping up with Shu?
Raina: I don’t know, but it’s working!
Shu: Time to end this! Spryzen!!
(Shu’s scar glows brightly as his Resonance Aura flares up and Spryzen blazes out of the bey)
Shu: Superior Whip!
(Spryzen speeds up and slams into Poseidon sending it flying in the air)
Me: Poseidon!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Poseidon blazes out of the bey)
Me: Trident Geyser!!
(Poseidon slams down on Spryzen, a huge explosion ouccers blowing smoke in all directions)
All: *Gasps*
(Spryzen gets shot out of the smoke and lands out of the stadium)
Shu: *Gasps*
Pam: It’s Brine Poseidon, with a ring-out finish! Percy wins!
Me: I won!
Aiden: No way, he beat Shu.
(Shu walks up to me)
Shu: That was an awesome match, I can’t wait to battle you again!
Me: Same, here, but don’t be surprised if I beat you!
Shu: Well--
(The TV flickers on)
Hanami (ON TV): Important news Bladers and Beyfans! Tomorrow, Valt Aoi will be facing our new World Champion, Oribe Abiko! This match is going to be skill vs skill! And I personally can’t wait for this battle! It’ll be live tomorrow in Japan! So I’ll see you all there!
(The TV turns off)
Me: Valt’s going up against Oribe?
Shu: It looks like it.
Raina: Valt needs to take him down, tomorrow, we’re going to cheer on Valt and help him beat Oribe!
Aiden: We sure will!
Me (Thoughts): I hope Valtryek doesn't get destroyed.
I'll rate it.
(Jul. 31, 2021 6:29 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: I’ll rate after I read the chapter!
Go for it
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Jul. 31, 2021
UnseenBurst
Grammar: 4.1/5 I noticed some mistakes but not that much good job!
Characters: 5/5 I liked it you brought them to life just felt like we’re seeing less and less of Pam…
Diolouge: 4/5 So I felt like the switch with Valt then Percy was cool but I felt like the one with Valt was short…
Plot: 5/5 it was very easy to find out where they were and stuff!
Writing: 5/5 it’s nice and most likely to be understood by a 14 year old and under! Or more ages!
Length: 5/5 It was awesome it wasn’t super long which is good and you have everything you needed!
Over all: 28/30 You are getting way better! Keep it up!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 31, 2021
Plot: 4/5, Valt is gonna challenge Oribe, which is great! (But it feels like it something similar happened in Turbo)
Dailouge: 5/5, I liked it.(The best part was "you can bet your deers on it").
Battle: 4/5, It was good, But Percy's match was a lil bit short.
Characterization: 4/5, Not bad I liked how you handeled Shu.
Overall 17/20, It was a nice Chapter.
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 31, 2021
(Jul. 31, 2021 6:51 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: UnseenBurst
Grammar: 4.1/5 I noticed some mistakes but not that much good job!
Characters: 5/5 I liked it you brought them to life just felt like we’re seeing less and less of Pam…
Diolouge: 4/5 So I felt like the switch with Valt then Percy was cool but I felt like the one with Valt was short…
Plot: 5/5 it was very easy to find out where they were and stuff!
Writing: 5/5 it’s nice and most likely to be understood by a 14 year old and under! Or more ages!
Length: 5/5 It was awesome it wasn’t super long which is good and you have everything you needed!
Over all: 28/30 You are getting way better! Keep it up!
(Jul. 31, 2021 6:53 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Plot: 4/5, Valt is gonna challenge Oribe, which is great! (But it feels like it something similar happened in Turbo)
Dailouge: 5/5, I liked it.(The best part was "you can bet your deers on it").
Battle: 4/5, It was good, But Percy's match was a lil bit short.
Characterization: 4/5, Not bad I liked how you handeled Shu.
Overall 17/20, It was a nice Chapter.
Thanks, both of you! I'll try my best to improve but still, thanks for the ratings
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 31, 2021
Nice chapter! and Brine fits very well too! But genesis valtryek does seems familiar...
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 31, 2021
(Jul. 31, 2021 7:03 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Nice chapter! and Brine fits very well too! But genesis valtryek does seems familiar...
Yeah, Free had a Flashback of battling Valt in Evolution/God it was to kinda point out that Valt will always be the reckless fun kid type of person.
Chapter 37 The Bold Valkryie!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 31, 2021
(Jul. 31, 2021 7:04 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 31, 2021 7:03 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Nice chapter! and Brine fits very well too! But genesis valtryek does seems familiar...
Yeah, Free had a Flashback of battling Valt in Evolution/God it was to kinda point out that Valt will always be the reckless fun kid type of person.
Chapter 37 The Bold Valkryie!
Valkyrie? You sticking with the jp ver.?
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 31, 2021
(Jul. 31, 2021 8:07 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: (Jul. 31, 2021 7:04 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Yeah, Free had a Flashback of battling Valt in Evolution/God it was to kinda point out that Valt will always be the reckless fun kid type of person.
Chapter 37 The Bold Valkryie!
Valkyrie? You sticking with the jp ver.?
No, Valtryek's a Valkyrie it's just a title
Try Imaging Shu babysitting Percy XD
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - Hollowmind13 - Aug. 01, 2021
(Jul. 31, 2021 7:04 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 31, 2021 7:03 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Nice chapter! and Brine fits very well too! But genesis valtryek does seems familiar...
Yeah, Free had a Flashback of battling Valt in Evolution/God it was to kinda point out that Valt will always be the reckless fun kid type of person.
Chapter 37 The Bold Valkryie! Not gonna lie, at the first time I thought it was "The Bald Valkyrie" lol
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Aug. 01, 2021
Chapter 37 has been found in the darkest Abyss.
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 37
The Bold Valkyrie!
(Valt arrives in Japan)
~At The Airport~
Me: So, we’re waiting for Valt here?
Shu: Yeah, I texted him a map-- I've realised my mistake.
Pam: Well, I guess we’d better start searching!
Valt: Hey, guys!
(Valt starts running towards us)
Raina: How’d you find us?
Valt: Well--
(Valt trips and rolls over to us)
Shu: Of course.
Valt: Hey, Shu, it's been a while!
Shu: Hey, Valt! Are you excited about your title match?
Valt: Yeah, but I also have to do this, I can’t let him be World Champion.
Me: Ugh! This is my fault, if I could’ve won then this would’ve never happened!
Shu: Don’t blame yourself, there are some battles you just can’t win.
Raina: He’s got a point, you did all you could.
Me: I guess.
(Valt puts his hand on my shoulder)
Valt: Hey, don’t worry, I’ve got this.
Aiden: Yeah, if anyone can beat him, it’s Valt!
Me: I guess.
Valt: I’ve got a bit of time before my match! Wanna practice?
Me: You bet!
~At The Warehouse~
Me/Valt: Let it… rip!!
(Me and Valt pull off powerful Beyjitzu Launches)
Me: Brine Launch!
Valt: Rush Launch!
(Valtryek and Poseidon hit each other with a powerful flurry of attacks)
Valt: Hit it! Heroic Saber!!
Me: Trident Geyser!!
(Poseidon and Valtryek slam into each other and send each other flying out of the stadium)
Me/Valt: *Gasps*
Raina: It’s a simultaneous ring-out finish! No points were awarded!
Aiden: It looks like you two are equal in attack power.
Valt: Really?
Shu: Yeah, if you wanna beat Oribe Valtryek’s attack power’s got to go way higher!
Valt: How do I do that?
Shu: Hardcore training.
Valt: *Gasps*
~1 Hour Later In The Neo Bey Arena~
Hanami: Hello all you Bladers and Beyfans! Today, we’ll be having a Title Match! It’s our current World Champion! Oribe Abiko Vs The Wonder Boy who never gives up! Valt Aoi!
(Valt and Oribe walk up to the stage)
Oribe: Valt Aoi, the former World Champion, what are you doing here?
Valt: Sorry, but I can’t let someone like you be World Champion! I’m gonna need my title back!
Oribe: Overlord won’t let you get it back!
(Oribe’s eyes glow bright purple)
Valt: Are you sure? Because Valtryek said I’m getting it back!
Overlord: I’m feeling hungry for despair, let’s break Valtryek!
Oribe: Yes we will!
Hanami: Both our Bladers are fired up, so let’s get started!
Referee: First battle!
Valt: Oribe, don’t hold back!
Oribe: Don’t worry, I’ll break Valtryek!
Valt: I won’t let you!
(Valt holds onto his launcher tightly)
Me: Why is he holding his launcher so tight?
Shu: Either he’s tense or he’s about to pull off a powerful launch.
Raina: I vote for a strong launch!
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Valt/Oribe: Let it… rip!!
(Valt and Oribe pull off mega-powerful Beyjitzu Launches)
Hanami: Both Bladers have pulled off powerful Beyjitzu Launches!
Valt: Rush Launch!
(Valtryek hits Overlord with a super-fast flurry of powerful attacks)
Oribe: *Gasps*
Hanami: Valtryek hits Overlord with a powerful flurry of attacks!
Oribe: Vile Pulse!!
(Overlord blocks all of Valtryek’s attacks)
Hanami: Overlord is now blocking all of Valtryek’s attacks!
Valt: Time to speed up! Ultra Heroic Flash!
(Valtryek catches onto the stadium rim and picks up speed, Valtryek slams into Overlord, Valtryek and Overlord get shot out of the stadium)
Valt/Oribe: *Gasps*
Referee: It’s Heroic Valtryek, with a ring-out finish! Valt Aoi claims 1 point!
Valt: Yes!
Oribe: Grr!!
Hanami: Our Former World Champion has stolen a point from our new World Champion!
Shu: Nice!
Me: He did it, In your face Oribe!!
(It goes silent)
Me: Too much?
Raina: Nah.
Valt: *Sheepishly Laughs*
Oribe: Be quiet peasant!
Me: Oh, this just got real!
(I run in place as Raina holds me by my hood)
Raina: Let Valt settle this.
Me: Let me at him!
Valt: Let’s go again!
Oribe: I’ll break you!!
Referee: Second battle!
Oribe: I’ll destroy you, and laugh as Valtryek’s fragments are on the floor!
Valt: I won’t let you!
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Valt/Oribe: Let it… rip!!
(Valt and Oribe pull off powerful Beyjitzu Launches)
Hanami: Double powerful launches!
Oribe: Take the--
Valt: Rush Launch!
(Valtryek slams into Overlord and sends it flying in the air)
Hanami: Valtryek starts off with a strong attack!
Oribe: Vile--
Valt: Ultra Rush Launch!
(Valtryek continuously hits Overlord back and forth into the air with a powerful barrage)
Hanami: Valtryek’s Rush Launch has powered up!
Oribe: Vile Overlord!!
(Oribe’s Resonance Aura flares up Overlord blazes out of the bey, Overlord lands back on the stadium floor and picks up speed)
Oribe: Vile Doomsday!!
(Overlord catches onto the motorized rim, Overlord slams into Valtryek and sends it flying out of the stadium)
Valt: *Gasps*
Referee: It’s Vile Overlord, with a ring-out finish! Oribe Abiko claims 1 point!
Hanami: Incredible! Oribe has just taken a point from Valt Aoi, proving his dominance!
Oribe: I didn’t break!
Valt: I already told you, you're not breaking Valtryek!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Oribe: We’ll see about that!
(Oribe’s Resonance Aura blazes up)
Hanami: Our World Champion and Former World Champion start each other down, who will win?
Referee: Third battle!
Valt (Thoughts): I won’t let him break you, Valtryek!
Oribe (Thoughts): We’ll crush him, and he’ll never blade again!
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Oribe/Valt: Let it… rip!!
(Valt and Oribe pull off powerful launches sending a surge of energy around the stadium)
Valt: Flash Launch!
(Valtryek rapidly hits Overlord away from the center and closer to the stadium wall)
Hanami: Valtryek’s trying to knock Overlord out of the stadium with a flurry of powerful blows!
Oribe: Let go of me!
(Oribe’s purple dark Resonance Aura flames up)
Oribe: Overlord!!
(Overlord blazes out of the bey as Oribe’s Resonance Aura flames up into a dark holocaust)
Valt: I can’t let you do this! Valtryek!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up Valtryek blazes out of the bey)
Oribe: Grr!! Vile Doomsday!!
Valt: Counter! Ultra Heroic Flash!
(Valtryek catches onto the stadium rim and picks up speed, Valtryek heads straight towards Overlord)
Valt: Ultra Heroic Saber!!
(Valtryek slashes at Overlord with all its power, Overlord gets shot up in the air)
Oribe: *Gasps*
(Overlord bursts)
Oribe: Grr!! I lost!!
Valt: I won!
Referee: It’s Heroic Valtryek with a burst finish! Valt Aoi is the new World Champion!
(Oribe walks away)
Me: He did it!
Raina: He really did.
Hanami: Our Wonder Boy claims his rightful spot as World Champion again, And what a win it was!
Shu (Thoughts): Nice job Valt, you never cease to amaze me.
~Outside The Neo Bey Arena~
Me: Valt, that match was epic!
Valt: I just did what I had to do, I couldn’t let Oribe win.
(Oribe walks by us, Valt and Oribe’s eyes meet)
Me: I hope you learned your lesson!
Oribe: Don’t worry, Perseus Nakano, I’ll snuff out that light of yours again!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: I’d like to see you try!
(Oribe’s Dark Resonance Aura blazes up)
Oribe: Enjoy your time with Poseidon now, it’ll be destroyed in a matter of time.
Shu (Thoughts): What’s his game here, what does he want from Percy and Valt?
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - Hollowmind13 - Aug. 01, 2021
(Aug. 01, 2021 6:38 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 37 has been found in the darkest Abyss.
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 37
The Bold Valkyrie!
(Valt arrives in Japan)
~At The Airport~
Me: So, we’re waiting for Valt here?
Shu: Yeah, I texted him a map-- I've realised my mistake.
Pam: Well, I guess we’d better start searching!
Valt: Hey, guys!
(Valt starts running towards us)
Raina: How’d you find us?
Valt: Well--
(Valt trips and rolls over to us)
Shu: Of course.
Valt: Hey, Shu, it's been a while!
Shu: Hey, Valt! Are you excited about your title match?
Valt: Yeah, but I also have to do this, I can’t let him be World Champion.
Me: Ugh! This is my fault, if I could’ve won then this would’ve never happened!
Shu: Don’t blame yourself, there are some battles you just can’t win.
Raina: He’s got a point, you did all you could.
Me: I guess.
(Valt puts his hand on my shoulder)
Valt: Hey, don’t worry, I’ve got this.
Aiden: Yeah, if anyone can beat him, it’s Valt!
Me: I guess.
Valt: I’ve got a bit of time before my match! Wanna practice?
Me: You bet!
~At The Warehouse~
Me/Valt: Let it… rip!!
(Me and Valt pull off powerful Beyjitzu Launches)
Me: Brine Launch!
Valt: Rush Launch!
(Valtryek and Poseidon hit each other with a powerful flurry of attacks)
Valt: Hit it! Heroic Saber!!
Me: Trident Geyser!!
(Poseidon and Valtryek slam into each other and send each other flying out of the stadium)
Me/Valt: *Gasps*
Raina: It’s a simultaneous ring-out finish! No points were awarded!
Aiden: It looks like you two are equal in attack power.
Valt: Really?
Shu: Yeah, if you wanna beat Oribe Valtryek’s attack power’s got to go way higher!
Valt: How do I do that?
Shu: Hardcore training.
Valt: *Gasps*
~1 Hour Later In The Neo Bey Arena~
Hanami: Hello all you Bladers and Beyfans! Today, we’ll be having a Title Match! It’s our current World Champion! Oribe Abiko Vs The Wonder Boy who never gives up! Valt Aoi!
(Valt and Oribe walk up to the stage)
Oribe: Valt Aoi, the former World Champion, what are you doing here?
Valt: Sorry, but I can’t let someone like you be World Champion! I’m gonna need my title back!
Oribe: Overlord won’t let you get it back!
(Oribe’s eyes glow bright purple)
Valt: Are you sure? Because Valtryek said I’m getting it back!
Overlord: I’m feeling hungry for despair, let’s break Valtryek!
Oribe: Yes we will!
Hanami: Both our Bladers are fired up, so let’s get started!
Referee: First battle!
Valt: Oribe, don’t hold back!
Oribe: Don’t worry, I’ll break Valtryek!
Valt: I won’t let you!
(Valt holds onto his launcher tightly)
Me: Why is he holding his launcher so tight?
Shu: Either he’s tense or he’s about to pull off a powerful launch.
Raina: I vote for a strong launch!
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Valt/Oribe: Let it… rip!!
(Valt and Oribe pull off mega-powerful Beyjitzu Launches)
Hanami: Both Bladers have pulled off powerful Beyjitzu Launches!
Valt: Rush Launch!
(Valtryek hits Overlord with a super-fast flurry of powerful attacks)
Oribe: *Gasps*
Hanami: Valtryek hits Overlord with a powerful flurry of attacks!
Oribe: Vile Pulse!!
(Overlord blocks all of Valtryek’s attacks)
Hanami: Overlord is now blocking all of Valtryek’s attacks!
Valt: Time to speed up! Ultra Heroic Flash!
(Valtryek catches onto the stadium rim and picks up speed, Valtryek slams into Overlord, Valtryek and Overlord get shot out of the stadium)
Valt/Oribe: *Gasps*
Referee: It’s Heroic Valtryek, with a ring-out finish! Valt Aoi claims 1 point!
Valt: Yes!
Oribe: Grr!!
Hanami: Our Former World Champion has stolen a point from our new World Champion!
Shu: Nice!
Me: He did it, In your face Oribe!!
(It goes silent)
Me: Too much?
Raina: Nah.
Valt: *Sheepishly Laughs*
Oribe: Be quiet peasant!
Me: Oh, this just got real!
(I run in place as Raina holds me by my hood)
Raina: Let Valt settle this.
Me: Let me at him!
Valt: Let’s go again!
Oribe: I’ll break you!!
Referee: Second battle!
Oribe: I’ll destroy you, and laugh as Valtryek’s fragments are on the floor!
Valt: I won’t let you!
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Valt/Oribe: Let it… rip!!
(Valt and Oribe pull off powerful Beyjitzu Launches)
Hanami: Double powerful launches!
Oribe: Take the--
Valt: Rush Launch!
(Valtryek slams into Overlord and sends it flying in the air)
Hanami: Valtryek starts off with a strong attack!
Oribe: Vile--
Valt: Ultra Rush Launch!
(Valtryek continuously hits Overlord back and forth into the air with a powerful barrage)
Hanami: Valtryek’s Rush Launch has powered up!
Oribe: Vile Overlord!!
(Oribe’s Resonance Aura flares up Overlord blazes out of the bey, Overlord lands back on the stadium floor and picks up speed)
Oribe: Vile Doomsday!!
(Overlord catches onto the motorized rim, Overlord slams into Valtryek and sends it flying out of the stadium)
Valt: *Gasps*
Referee: It’s Vile Overlord, with a ring-out finish! Oribe Abiko claims 1 point!
Hanami: Incredible! Oribe has just taken a point from Valt Aoi, proving his dominance!
Oribe: I didn’t break!
Valt: I already told you, you're not breaking Valtryek!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Oribe: We’ll see about that!
(Oribe’s Resonance Aura blazes up)
Hanami: Our World Champion and Former World Champion start each other down, who will win?
Referee: Third battle!
Valt (Thoughts): I won’t let him break you, Valtryek!
Oribe (Thoughts): We’ll crush him, and he’ll never blade again!
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Oribe/Valt: Let it… rip!!
(Valt and Oribe pull off powerful launches sending a surge of energy around the stadium)
Valt: Flash Launch!
(Valtryek rapidly hits Overlord away from the center and closer to the stadium wall)
Hanami: Valtryek’s trying to knock Overlord out of the stadium with a flurry of powerful blows!
Oribe: Let go of me!
(Oribe’s purple dark Resonance Aura flames up)
Oribe: Overlord!!
(Overlord blazes out of the bey as Oribe’s Resonance Aura flames up into a dark holocaust)
Valt: I can’t let you do this! Valtryek!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up Valtryek blazes out of the bey)
Oribe: Grr!! Vile Doomsday!!
Valt: Counter! Ultra Heroic Flash!
(Valtryek catches onto the stadium rim and picks up speed, Valtryek heads straight towards Overlord)
Valt: Ultra Heroic Saber!!
(Valtryek slashes at Overlord with all its power, Overlord gets shot up in the air)
Oribe: *Gasps*
(Overlord bursts)
Oribe: Grr!! I lost!!
Valt: I won!
Referee: It’s Heroic Valtryek with a burst finish! Valt Aoi is the new World Champion!
(Oribe walks away)
Me: He did it!
Raina: He really did.
Hanami: Our Wonder Boy claims his rightful spot as World Champion again, And what a win it was!
Shu (Thoughts): Nice job Valt, you never cease to amaze me.
~Outside The Neo Bey Arena~
Me: Valt, that match was epic!
Valt: I just did what I had to do, I couldn’t let Oribe win.
(Oribe walks by us, Valt and Oribe’s eyes meet)
Me: I hope you learned your lesson!
Oribe: Don’t worry, Perseus Nakano, I’ll snuff out that light of yours again!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: I’d like to see you try!
(Oribe’s Dark Resonance Aura blazes up)
Oribe: Enjoy your time with Poseidon now, it’ll be destroyed in a matter of time.
Shu (Thoughts): What’s his game here, what does he want from Percy and Valt?
I think next major battle is going to be Oribe vs Percy and then Percy will challenge Valt to a title match or the other way around. Anyways nice chapter!
Oribe seems way less human than he is (If he is), I mean, He only wants to destroy beys, and win I guess.
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Aug. 01, 2021
WOOOOOOOO!!!! POISIDEN IS ALIVE AND VALT IS BACK TO THE CHAMPION!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Aug. 01, 2021
So, I can't decide if I should do Japanese Vr Or English Vr so ima put it for a vote, the vote ends Wednesday if more people say Japanese VR then I'll do that, if more say English then I'll do that, don't be afraid to hurt my feelings lol I can handle anything so just speak your truth!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Aug. 01, 2021
Hmm Wizard Guess! I'll vote now! Allow is it a public vote?
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