RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 23, 2021
I'm gonna do something I've never done before in the next chapter, It will be a 2 part chapter basically what that means is 1 part will be about Hephaestus and the other part will be about Magnesium so I'm gonna hope I don't mess this up so just hang in there!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 23, 2021
(Jul. 23, 2021 5:56 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I'm gonna do something I've never done before in the next chapter, It will be a 2 part chapter basically what that means is 1 part will be about Hephaestus and the other part will be about Magnesium so I'm gonna hope I don't mess this up so just hang in there!
Nice. I'll read it tomorrow.
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Jul. 23, 2021
(Jul. 23, 2021 5:56 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I'm gonna do something I've never done before in the next chapter, It will be a 2 part chapter basically what that means is 1 part will be about Hephaestus and the other part will be about Magnesium so I'm gonna hope I don't mess this up so just hang in there!
alright dont worry take ur time bro!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 23, 2021
Nevermind, the chapter is too long to be a double chapter, when I get the chance tho, I shall do that
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Jul. 23, 2021
(Jul. 23, 2021 6:31 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Nevermind, the chapter is too long to be a double chapter, when I get the chance tho, I shall do that
lol ok, my brain would explode if i even imagined doing a double chapter
(Jul. 23, 2021 6:31 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Nevermind, the chapter is too long to be a double chapter, when I get the chance tho, I shall do that
take it slow, run and go dude!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 23, 2021
Chapter 27 is out! (This might be shorter than usual chapters) USN what do you think about your character?
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 27
Ultimate Balance! Lightning Hephaestus!!
(A bey bursts)
Hanami: Awesome! Hiacan Yurry has just burst Garret’s bey!
Hiacan: Try better next time!
Garret: No.
Hiacan (Thoughts): My bey can become stronger! But how would I achieve that?
Me: Wow, Hiacan looks super strong!
Aiden: Yeah, he’s a tournament favorite!
Pam: They say he’s the only one who can challenge the legends!
Me: I wanna battle him now! See ya later!!
Raina: Like we didn’t see that coming.
(I runoff)
~In The Hallway~
(I run up to Hiacan)
Me: Hey!
Hiacan: Hello Perseus.
Me: You can call me Percy! Do you wanna battle!
(I hold up Poseidon)
Hiacan: Ah, so that’s the famous Poseidon.
Me: Um, what?
Hiacan: The first Beyjitzu Bey, I heard it’s very strong.
Me: You bet it is!
Hiacan: Can I ask you for a favor?
Me: Sure, spill.
Hiacan: I believe my bey can become the strongest in the world! But we need to evolve! Perseus Nakano, will you help me?
Me: Sure, but then you’ll have to battle me!
Hiacan: Don’t worry, I’ll battle and beat you!
~Back At The Raging Bulls~
Valt: Are you still working on it?
Shu: Yeah, I’m gonna make it perfect!
(We walk in through the door)
Me: Yo, Valt!
Hiacan: Valt Aoi is here?
Me: Yeah, pretty cool isn’t it?
Hiacan: I guess.
Valt: You guys got a new friend?
Me: You could say. Anyways, he wants to make a Beyjitzu bey! Can we borrow the workroom?
Valt: You have to use the backup one!
Raina: That’ll work!
~We head into the Workroom~
Hiacan: So this is a Beyjitzu Launcher?
Me: Yeah!
Hiacan: It’s a pretty strong launcher, but don’t you think it could be more?
Raina: What do you mean?
Hiacan: If you were to upgrade the spin unit and make the string harder to pull you’d be able to get a stronger launch!
Aiden: Is this true Percy?
Me: Well, he does make a good point! Give me your launchers so Me and Hiacan can upgrade them!
(Aiden, Raina, and Pam give me their launchers)
Aiden: I’ll ask Valt for his!
(Aiden runs off, I start working on the Launchers while Hiacan works on his bey)
Me: Wow, you’re right! With this upgrade, the Beyjitzu Launchers will be able to power up your bey!
Hiacan: Told you.
Me: I guess you were right!
~1 and 30 minutes Later~
Me/Hiacan: It’s done!
Me: Power Beyjitzu Launcher!
Hiacan: Lightning, Blaze, and Aqua Hephaestus!!
Me: You made three layers?
Hiacan: Yeah, I want Hephaestus to be unbeatable!
Me: You ready to battle?!
Hiacan: So ready!
~In The Raging Bulls Gym~
Raina: First one to claim two points wins! Inspect your opponent's bey!
Me (Thoughts): Hephestus is a Clockwise Spinning bey! It has a Defense Mode, an Attack Mode, and a Defense Mode! Blaze Hephaestus is a right spinning ring that has two shields. They are rounded at the bottom to deflect attacks and use them against the opponent. The ring is red with orange flame motifs surrounding it. Looks like when it takes enough damage the shields forcefully come down. Lightning Hephaestus is a right spinning ring, it has lightning blades on it two big ones and two smaller ones, looks like when it takes enough damage those blades can snap into place and deliver a huge blow! Aqua Hephaestus is a right spinning ring featuring a whirlpool shape. The whole thing is a light see-through blue, with what looks like water droplets, scattered around the ring. The outside has many small blades to reduce attacks and retain stamina. When it takes enough damage magnets to activate and it can absorb attacks! Let’s see how he tries beating me!
Hiacan (Thoughts): I’m going all out with the Lightning Ring!
(Hiacan puts the Lightning Ring on Hephaestus)
Raina: First battle!
Hiacan: Get ready to lose!
Me: I don't lose!
Raina: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Hiacan: Let it… rip!!
(Me and Hiacan pull off powerful Beyjitzu Launches)
Me: Go Poseidon!!
(Poseidon starts speeding around the stadium and heads straight for Hephaestus)
Me: Go! Hydro Strike!!
(Poseidon slams into Hephaestus, Hephaestus gets sent flying)
Me: Yes!
Aiden: The new Beyjitzu Launchers are so powerful!
Raina: Tell me about it.
Hiacan: Go! Thundering Launch!!
Me: Hydro Launch!!
(Hephaestus and Poseidon hit each other with a powerful barrage of strikes)
Raina: So powerful!
Me: Now!
(Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim and speeds up)
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
(Poseidon slams into Hephaestus, Hephaestus slams into the wall, Hephaestus starts clicking)
Hiacan: It’s time!
(Hephaestus’ blade snap together)
Hiacan: Hephaestus!!
(Hiacan’s Resonance Aura flares up Hephaestus blazes out of the bey)
Hiacan: Lightning Blitz!!
(Hephaestus speeds up and slams into Poseidon, Poseidon bursts)
Me: *Gasps*
Raina: It’s Lightning Hephaestus with a burst finish! The winner is Hiacan Yurry!
Hiacan: Yes!
Me: Grr! I lost!
Raina: Wow, Hephaestus is strong!
Hiacan: You guys seem cool, why don’t I hook up with you guys for a while?
Aiden: The more the merrier!
Raina: Battling you will be interesting!
Hiacan: I’ll take you on any day!
Me (Thoughts): I’ve gotta get stronger! Or else I don’t stand a chance against any of the legends!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Jul. 23, 2021
Great chapter!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 23, 2021
(Jul. 23, 2021 6:53 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Great chapter!
Thanks! What was ur favorite part?
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 23, 2021
(Jul. 23, 2021 6:52 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 27 is out! (This might be shorter than usual chapters)
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 27
Ultimate Balance! Lightning Hephaestus!!
(A bey bursts)
Hanami: Awesome! Hiacan Yurry has just burst Garret’s bey!
Hiacan: Try better next time!
Garret: No.
Hiacan (Thoughts): My bey can become stronger! But how would I achieve that?
Me: Wow, Hiacan looks super strong!
Aiden: Yeah, he’s a tournament favorite!
Pam: They say he’s the only one who can challenge the legends!
Me: I wanna battle him now! See ya later!!
Raina: Like we didn’t see that coming.
(I runoff)
~In The Hallway~
(I run up to Hiacan)
Me: Hey!
Hiacan: Hello Perseus.
Me: You can call me Percy! Do you wanna battle!
(I hold up Poseidon)
Hiacan: Ah, so that’s the famous Poseidon.
Me: Um, what?
Hiacan: The first Beyjitzu Bey, I heard it’s very strong.
Me: You bet it is!
Hiacan: Can I ask you for a favor?
Me: Sure, spill.
Hiacan: I believe my bey can become the strongest in the world! But we need to evolve! Perseus Nakano, will you help me?
Me: Sure, but then you’ll have to battle me!
Hiacan: Don’t worry, I’ll battle and beat you!
~Back At The Raging Bulls~
Valt: Are you still working on it?
Shu: Yeah, I’m gonna make it perfect!
(We walk in through the door)
Me: Yo, Valt!
Hiacan: Valt Aoi is here?
Me: Yeah, pretty cool isn’t it?
Hiacan: I guess.
Valt: You guys got a new friend?
Me: You could say. Anyways, he wants to make a Beyjitzu bey! Can we borrow the workroom?
Valt: You have to use the backup one!
Raina: That’ll work!
~We head into the Workroom~
Hiacan: So this is a Beyjitzu Launcher?
Me: Yeah!
Hiacan: It’s a pretty strong launcher, but don’t you think it could be more?
Raina: What do you mean?
Hiacan: If you were to upgrade the spin unit and make the string harder to pull you’d be able to get a stronger launch!
Aiden: Is this true Percy?
Me: Well, he does make a good point! Give me your launchers so Me and Hiacan can upgrade them!
(Aiden, Raina, and Pam give me their launchers)
Aiden: I’ll ask Valt for his!
(Aiden runs off, I start working on the Launchers while Hiacan works on his bey)
Me: Wow, you’re right! With this upgrade, the Beyjitzu Launchers will be able to power up your bey!
Hiacan: Told you.
Me: I guess you were right!
~1 and 30 minutes Later~
Me/Hiacan: It’s done!
Me: Power Beyjitzu Launcher!
Hiacan: Lightning, Blaze, and Aqua Hephaestus!!
Me: You made three layers?
Hiacan: Yeah, I want Hephaestus to be unbeatable!
Me: You ready to battle?!
Hiacan: So ready!
~In The Raging Bulls Gym~
Raina: First one to claim two points wins! Inspect your opponent's bey!
Me (Thoughts): Hephestus is a Clockwise Spinning bey! It has a Defense Mode, an Attack Mode, and a Defense Mode! Blaze Hephaestus is a right spinning ring that has two shields. They are rounded at the bottom to deflect attacks and use them against the opponent. The ring is red with orange flame motifs surrounding it. Looks like when it takes enough damage the shields forcefully come down. Lightning Hephaestus is a right spinning ring, it has lightning blades on it two big ones and two smaller ones, looks like when it takes enough damage those blades can snap into place and deliver a huge blow! Aqua Hephaestus is a right spinning ring featuring a whirlpool shape. The whole thing is a light see-through blue, with what looks like water droplets, scattered around the ring. The outside has many small blades to reduce attacks and retain stamina. When it takes enough damage magnets to activate and it can absorb attacks! Let’s see how he tries beating me!
Hiacan (Thoughts): I’m going all out with the Lightning Ring!
(Hiacan puts the Lightning Ring on Hephaestus)
Raina: First battle!
Hiacan: Get ready to lose!
Me: I don't lose!
Raina: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Hiacan: Let it… rip!!
(Me and Hiacan pull off powerful Beyjitzu Launches)
Me: Go Poseidon!!
(Poseidon starts speeding around the stadium and heads straight for Hephaestus)
Me: Go! Hydro Strike!!
(Poseidon slams into Hephaestus, Hephaestus gets sent flying)
Me: Yes!
Aiden: The new Beyjitzu Launchers are so powerful!
Raina: Tell me about it.
Hiacan: Go! Thundering Launch!!
Me: Hydro Launch!!
(Hephaestus and Poseidon hit each other with a powerful barrage of strikes)
Raina: So powerful!
Me: Now!
(Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim and speeds up)
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
(Poseidon slams into Hephaestus, Hephaestus slams into the wall, Hephaestus starts clicking)
Hiacan: It’s time!
(Hephaestus’ blade snap together)
Hiacan: Hephaestus!!
(Hiacan’s Resonance Aura flares up Hephaestus blazes out of the bey)
Hiacan: Lightning Blitz!!
(Hephaestus speeds up and slams into Poseidon, Poseidon bursts)
Me: *Gasps*
Raina: It’s Lightning Hephaestus with a burst finish! The winner is Hiacan Yurry!
Hiacan: Yes!
Me: Grr! I lost!
Raina: Wow, Hephaestus is strong!
Hiacan: You guys seem cool, why don’t I hook up with you guys for a while?
Aiden: The more the merrier!
Raina: Battling you will be interesting!
Hiacan: I’ll take you on any day!
Me (Thoughts): I’ve gotta get stronger! Or else I don’t stand a chance against any of the legends! Nice Chapter! Hiacan might become Persues’s future rival.
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Jul. 23, 2021
(Jul. 23, 2021 6:53 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 23, 2021 6:53 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Great chapter!
Thanks! What was ur favorite part?
Hican saying they should upgrade the launchers!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Jul. 23, 2021
nice chapter! even if it was short i still enjoyed reading it!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 23, 2021
(Jul. 23, 2021 6:56 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Jul. 23, 2021 6:53 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Thanks! What was ur favorite part?
Hican saying they should upgrade the launchers!
It would be fun if someone said "can you translate?"
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Jul. 23, 2021
(Jul. 23, 2021 8:17 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Jul. 23, 2021 6:56 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Hican saying they should upgrade the launchers!
It would be fun if someone said "can you translate?"
Yeah
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 23, 2021
(Jul. 23, 2021 8:17 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Jul. 23, 2021 6:56 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Hican saying they should upgrade the launchers!
It would be fun if someone said "can you translate?"
Dang it, I should've added that
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - USN - Jul. 23, 2021
(Jul. 23, 2021 6:52 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 27 is out! (This might be shorter than usual chapters) USN what do you think about your character?
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 27
Ultimate Balance! Lightning Hephaestus!!
(A bey bursts)
Hanami: Awesome! Hiacan Yurry has just burst Garret’s bey!
Hiacan: Try better next time!
Garret: No.
Hiacan (Thoughts): My bey can become stronger! But how would I achieve that?
Me: Wow, Hiacan looks super strong!
Aiden: Yeah, he’s a tournament favorite!
Pam: They say he’s the only one who can challenge the legends!
Me: I wanna battle him now! See ya later!!
Raina: Like we didn’t see that coming.
(I runoff)
~In The Hallway~
(I run up to Hiacan)
Me: Hey!
Hiacan: Hello Perseus.
Me: You can call me Percy! Do you wanna battle!
(I hold up Poseidon)
Hiacan: Ah, so that’s the famous Poseidon.
Me: Um, what?
Hiacan: The first Beyjitzu Bey, I heard it’s very strong.
Me: You bet it is!
Hiacan: Can I ask you for a favor?
Me: Sure, spill.
Hiacan: I believe my bey can become the strongest in the world! But we need to evolve! Perseus Nakano, will you help me?
Me: Sure, but then you’ll have to battle me!
Hiacan: Don’t worry, I’ll battle and beat you!
~Back At The Raging Bulls~
Valt: Are you still working on it?
Shu: Yeah, I’m gonna make it perfect!
(We walk in through the door)
Me: Yo, Valt!
Hiacan: Valt Aoi is here?
Me: Yeah, pretty cool isn’t it?
Hiacan: I guess.
Valt: You guys got a new friend?
Me: You could say. Anyways, he wants to make a Beyjitzu bey! Can we borrow the workroom?
Valt: You have to use the backup one!
Raina: That’ll work!
~We head into the Workroom~
Hiacan: So this is a Beyjitzu Launcher?
Me: Yeah!
Hiacan: It’s a pretty strong launcher, but don’t you think it could be more?
Raina: What do you mean?
Hiacan: If you were to upgrade the spin unit and make the string harder to pull you’d be able to get a stronger launch!
Aiden: Is this true Percy?
Me: Well, he does make a good point! Give me your launchers so Me and Hiacan can upgrade them!
(Aiden, Raina, and Pam give me their launchers)
Aiden: I’ll ask Valt for his!
(Aiden runs off, I start working on the Launchers while Hiacan works on his bey)
Me: Wow, you’re right! With this upgrade, the Beyjitzu Launchers will be able to power up your bey!
Hiacan: Told you.
Me: I guess you were right!
~1 and 30 minutes Later~
Me/Hiacan: It’s done!
Me: Power Beyjitzu Launcher!
Hiacan: Lightning, Blaze, and Aqua Hephaestus!!
Me: You made three layers?
Hiacan: Yeah, I want Hephaestus to be unbeatable!
Me: You ready to battle?!
Hiacan: So ready!
~In The Raging Bulls Gym~
Raina: First one to claim two points wins! Inspect your opponent's bey!
Me (Thoughts): Hephestus is a Clockwise Spinning bey! It has a Defense Mode, an Attack Mode, and a Defense Mode! Blaze Hephaestus is a right spinning ring that has two shields. They are rounded at the bottom to deflect attacks and use them against the opponent. The ring is red with orange flame motifs surrounding it. Looks like when it takes enough damage the shields forcefully come down. Lightning Hephaestus is a right spinning ring, it has lightning blades on it two big ones and two smaller ones, looks like when it takes enough damage those blades can snap into place and deliver a huge blow! Aqua Hephaestus is a right spinning ring featuring a whirlpool shape. The whole thing is a light see-through blue, with what looks like water droplets, scattered around the ring. The outside has many small blades to reduce attacks and retain stamina. When it takes enough damage magnets to activate and it can absorb attacks! Let’s see how he tries beating me!
Hiacan (Thoughts): I’m going all out with the Lightning Ring!
(Hiacan puts the Lightning Ring on Hephaestus)
Raina: First battle!
Hiacan: Get ready to lose!
Me: I don't lose!
Raina: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Hiacan: Let it… rip!!
(Me and Hiacan pull off powerful Beyjitzu Launches)
Me: Go Poseidon!!
(Poseidon starts speeding around the stadium and heads straight for Hephaestus)
Me: Go! Hydro Strike!!
(Poseidon slams into Hephaestus, Hephaestus gets sent flying)
Me: Yes!
Aiden: The new Beyjitzu Launchers are so powerful!
Raina: Tell me about it.
Hiacan: Go! Thundering Launch!!
Me: Hydro Launch!!
(Hephaestus and Poseidon hit each other with a powerful barrage of strikes)
Raina: So powerful!
Me: Now!
(Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim and speeds up)
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
(Poseidon slams into Hephaestus, Hephaestus slams into the wall, Hephaestus starts clicking)
Hiacan: It’s time!
(Hephaestus’ blade snap together)
Hiacan: Hephaestus!!
(Hiacan’s Resonance Aura flares up Hephaestus blazes out of the bey)
Hiacan: Lightning Blitz!!
(Hephaestus speeds up and slams into Poseidon, Poseidon bursts)
Me: *Gasps*
Raina: It’s Lightning Hephaestus with a burst finish! The winner is Hiacan Yurry!
Hiacan: Yes!
Me: Grr! I lost!
Raina: Wow, Hephaestus is strong!
Hiacan: You guys seem cool, why don’t I hook up with you guys for a while?
Aiden: The more the merrier!
Raina: Battling you will be interesting!
Hiacan: I’ll take you on any day!
Me (Thoughts): I’ve gotta get stronger! Or else I don’t stand a chance against any of the legends! I really enjoy the integration! Nothing about Hiacan joining feels rushed or out of place. You write him very well.
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 23, 2021
Chapter 28 is out!
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 28
Spirit Of Crimson Flames! Superior Spryzen!!
~In The Workroom~
Shu: Almost done, Spryzen!
(Shu continues to work on his bey)
Shu (Thoughts): Spryzen will be the ultimate balance type! The bey of Crimson Flames!
(Shu gets pulled into a crimson void)
Spryzen: Shu.
Shu: Spryzen.
Spryzen: We will achieve an evolution no bey’s ever had before!
Shu: Yes we will!
(Shu gets pulled out of the white void)
Shu: It’s done! Superior Spryzen!!
(Shu walks out of the workroom)
Valt: Is it done?
Shu: Yep, Superior Spryzen!
Me: That bey looks awesome!
Shu: It is. Percy, do you wanna battle me?
Me: Really? Of course!
Valt: Raina, care to be the referee?
Raina: You’ve got it! Inspect your opponent’s bey!
Me (Thoughts): Superior Spryzen, a dual spinning balance type! It has metal for a wicked strong attack and rubber to absorb spin! The disk is heavy and wait, that’s the B Gear! Looks like it has a locked mode and a free spin mode! Its driver has a Stamina Mode, Defense Mode, and an Attack Mode! Wow, this bey is so strong! But, Poseidon can beat it!
Shu (Thoughts): Percy’s gonna come at me with a strong attack. Let’s play it safe.
(Shu puts Spryzen in Clockwise Defense Mode, Shu puts the Mega Disk in free spin mode)
Raina: First battle!
Me: No hard feelings when I win!
Shu: Sure.
Raina: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Shu: Let it… rip!!
(Me and Shu pull off powerful Beyjitzu Launches)
Shu: Go Spryzen!!
(Spryzen takes the center)
Me: Hydro Launch!!
(Poseidon hits Spryzen with a barrage of attacks, Spryzen blocks all of them)
Hiacan: Poseidon’s attacks aren’t doing anything!
Raina: Percy’s in trouble!
Me: Go! Hydro Geyser!!
(Poseidon speeds up and heads towards Spryzen)
Shu: Superior Spin!!
(Poseidon slams into the Mega Disk, The Mega disk spins and shoots Poseidon into the wall, Poseidon bursts)
All: *Gasps*
Raina: It’s Superior Spryzen with a burst finish! The winner is Shu Kurenai!!
(Shu flips up his hair)
Hiacan: Just one hit.
Pam: Devastating.
Me: One more time!
All: *Gasps*
Me: Please, one more time!
Shu: Sure.
Me: Really?
Shu: Yeah, get ready!
Valt (Thoughts): Shu’s testing him!
Raina: First battle!
(Shu puts Spryzen in Stamina Mode)
Me: TIme to switch it up!
(I put Poseidon in Left Spin Mode)
Shu (Thoughts): Changing your spin won’t help you!
Raina: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Shu: Let it… rip!!
(Me and Shu pull off strong Beyjitzu Launches)
Shu: Go Spryzen!
Me: I don’t think so! Hydro Launch!!
(Spryzen tries taking the center but Poseidon hits it with a barrage of attacks)
Pam: Keep it up Percy!
Shu: Now Spryzen!
(Spryzen hits Poseidon out of the way and takes the center)
Aiden: Knock them out Poseidon!
Me: Knock 'em out! Hydro Ripple!!
(Poseidon speeds up and heads straight towards Spryzen)
Hiacan: Knock him out!
Shu: Superior Spin!!
(Spryzen absorbs the hit)
Me: You’ve gotta be kidding!
Pam: Hit it again!
Me: Hydro Strike!
(Poseidon speeds up and hits Spryzen, Spryzen gets sent flying across the stadium)
Shu: Counter Break!!
(Spryzen leans on its driver and speeds into Poseidon, Poseidon bursts)
Me: *Gasps*
Raina: Its Superior Spryzen with a burst finish! Shu Kurenai is the winner!
Aiden: No way!
Hiacan: Shu Kurenai is that strong?!
Shu: Percy, one more battle!
All: *Gasps*
Me: Ok.
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Aiden: Show Shu how strong you are when you’re serious!
Raina: First battle!
(Shu puts Spryzen in Counterclockwise Attack Mode, Shu puts the Mega Disk in its locked mode)
Me: Bring it on Shu!
Raina: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Shu: Let it… rip!!
(Me and Shu pull off powerful Beyjitzu Launches)
Me: Hydro Launch!!
Shu: Upper Launch!!
(Spryzen and Poseidon pull off a strong barrage of powerful strikes)
Me: Knock ‘em out! Hydro Jet!!
(Poseidon catches onto the stadium rim and picks up speed)
Shu: Catch up to it! Superior Counter Break!!
(Spryzen catches onto the stadium rim and picks up speed, Spryzen sends Poseidon flying in the air)
Me: Poseidon!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Poseidon blazes out of the bey)
Me: Hydro Dive!!
(Poseidon crashes down on Spryzen and sends it sky-high)
Me: Yes!
Shu: Spryzen!!
(Shu’s Resonance Aura flares up Spryzen blazes out of the bey)
Spryzen: *Roars*
(Spryzen lands on the motorized rim and picks up speed and heads straight for Poseidon)
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
Shu: Superior Spin!!
(Spryzen absorbs Poseidon’s attack and picks up speed)
All: *Gasps*
(Spryzen starts going faster and faster)
Shu: Superior Whip!!
(Spryzen slams into Poseidon and sends it flying, Poseidon bursts)
Me: *Gasps*
(Spryzen stops spinning)
Raina: Its Superior Spryzen with a burst finish! The winner is Shu Kurenai!
(I grab Poseidon’s parts and runoff)
Pam/Aiden: Percy!
Shu: I’ll go after him.
~On The Raging Bulls Roof~
(I start a flashback)
Shu: Superior Spin!
(Poseidon hits the wall and bursts)
Shu: Counter Break!!
(Poseidon bursts)
Shu: Superior Whip!!
(Poseidon bursts)
(I end the flashback)
Me: Am I really that pathetic?
???: Is that what you think?
Me: *Gasps*
(I look behind me, Shu looks at me)
Shu: So, you’re up here.
Me: What’re you doing here?
Shu: I could say the same to you.
Me: Touche.
(Shu reaches in his pocket and pulls out a photo of three kids)
Me: Who are they?
Shu: The kid on the right is Justin, on the left it’s Harry and in the middle it's Asher.
Me: Are they friends of yours?
Shu: You could say, they were more like students.
Me: Do you always keep that in your pocket?
Shu: Nah, they just sent me a postcard.
Me: Ok.
Shu: Asher in particular is a strong blader with his Bey Apollo, he gained that from never giving up.
Me: I get it, you’re telling me to not doubt myself.
Shu: Basically, you win some, you lose some. That’s what Beyblade is about, getting up after loss!
(I stand up)
Me: Then what are we waiting for? Let’s get training!
(Shu smiles)
Me: I’ll train hard to beat you, then I’ll become the strongest blader in the world!
(Jul. 23, 2021 10:00 PM)USN Wrote: (Jul. 23, 2021 6:52 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 27 is out! (This might be shorter than usual chapters) USN what do you think about your character?
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 27
Ultimate Balance! Lightning Hephaestus!!
(A bey bursts)
Hanami: Awesome! Hiacan Yurry has just burst Garret’s bey!
Hiacan: Try better next time!
Garret: No.
Hiacan (Thoughts): My bey can become stronger! But how would I achieve that?
Me: Wow, Hiacan looks super strong!
Aiden: Yeah, he’s a tournament favorite!
Pam: They say he’s the only one who can challenge the legends!
Me: I wanna battle him now! See ya later!!
Raina: Like we didn’t see that coming.
(I runoff)
~In The Hallway~
(I run up to Hiacan)
Me: Hey!
Hiacan: Hello Perseus.
Me: You can call me Percy! Do you wanna battle!
(I hold up Poseidon)
Hiacan: Ah, so that’s the famous Poseidon.
Me: Um, what?
Hiacan: The first Beyjitzu Bey, I heard it’s very strong.
Me: You bet it is!
Hiacan: Can I ask you for a favor?
Me: Sure, spill.
Hiacan: I believe my bey can become the strongest in the world! But we need to evolve! Perseus Nakano, will you help me?
Me: Sure, but then you’ll have to battle me!
Hiacan: Don’t worry, I’ll battle and beat you!
~Back At The Raging Bulls~
Valt: Are you still working on it?
Shu: Yeah, I’m gonna make it perfect!
(We walk in through the door)
Me: Yo, Valt!
Hiacan: Valt Aoi is here?
Me: Yeah, pretty cool isn’t it?
Hiacan: I guess.
Valt: You guys got a new friend?
Me: You could say. Anyways, he wants to make a Beyjitzu bey! Can we borrow the workroom?
Valt: You have to use the backup one!
Raina: That’ll work!
~We head into the Workroom~
Hiacan: So this is a Beyjitzu Launcher?
Me: Yeah!
Hiacan: It’s a pretty strong launcher, but don’t you think it could be more?
Raina: What do you mean?
Hiacan: If you were to upgrade the spin unit and make the string harder to pull you’d be able to get a stronger launch!
Aiden: Is this true Percy?
Me: Well, he does make a good point! Give me your launchers so Me and Hiacan can upgrade them!
(Aiden, Raina, and Pam give me their launchers)
Aiden: I’ll ask Valt for his!
(Aiden runs off, I start working on the Launchers while Hiacan works on his bey)
Me: Wow, you’re right! With this upgrade, the Beyjitzu Launchers will be able to power up your bey!
Hiacan: Told you.
Me: I guess you were right!
~1 and 30 minutes Later~
Me/Hiacan: It’s done!
Me: Power Beyjitzu Launcher!
Hiacan: Lightning, Blaze, and Aqua Hephaestus!!
Me: You made three layers?
Hiacan: Yeah, I want Hephaestus to be unbeatable!
Me: You ready to battle?!
Hiacan: So ready!
~In The Raging Bulls Gym~
Raina: First one to claim two points wins! Inspect your opponent's bey!
Me (Thoughts): Hephestus is a Clockwise Spinning bey! It has a Defense Mode, an Attack Mode, and a Defense Mode! Blaze Hephaestus is a right spinning ring that has two shields. They are rounded at the bottom to deflect attacks and use them against the opponent. The ring is red with orange flame motifs surrounding it. Looks like when it takes enough damage the shields forcefully come down. Lightning Hephaestus is a right spinning ring, it has lightning blades on it two big ones and two smaller ones, looks like when it takes enough damage those blades can snap into place and deliver a huge blow! Aqua Hephaestus is a right spinning ring featuring a whirlpool shape. The whole thing is a light see-through blue, with what looks like water droplets, scattered around the ring. The outside has many small blades to reduce attacks and retain stamina. When it takes enough damage magnets to activate and it can absorb attacks! Let’s see how he tries beating me!
Hiacan (Thoughts): I’m going all out with the Lightning Ring!
(Hiacan puts the Lightning Ring on Hephaestus)
Raina: First battle!
Hiacan: Get ready to lose!
Me: I don't lose!
Raina: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Hiacan: Let it… rip!!
(Me and Hiacan pull off powerful Beyjitzu Launches)
Me: Go Poseidon!!
(Poseidon starts speeding around the stadium and heads straight for Hephaestus)
Me: Go! Hydro Strike!!
(Poseidon slams into Hephaestus, Hephaestus gets sent flying)
Me: Yes!
Aiden: The new Beyjitzu Launchers are so powerful!
Raina: Tell me about it.
Hiacan: Go! Thundering Launch!!
Me: Hydro Launch!!
(Hephaestus and Poseidon hit each other with a powerful barrage of strikes)
Raina: So powerful!
Me: Now!
(Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim and speeds up)
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
(Poseidon slams into Hephaestus, Hephaestus slams into the wall, Hephaestus starts clicking)
Hiacan: It’s time!
(Hephaestus’ blade snap together)
Hiacan: Hephaestus!!
(Hiacan’s Resonance Aura flares up Hephaestus blazes out of the bey)
Hiacan: Lightning Blitz!!
(Hephaestus speeds up and slams into Poseidon, Poseidon bursts)
Me: *Gasps*
Raina: It’s Lightning Hephaestus with a burst finish! The winner is Hiacan Yurry!
Hiacan: Yes!
Me: Grr! I lost!
Raina: Wow, Hephaestus is strong!
Hiacan: You guys seem cool, why don’t I hook up with you guys for a while?
Aiden: The more the merrier!
Raina: Battling you will be interesting!
Hiacan: I’ll take you on any day!
Me (Thoughts): I’ve gotta get stronger! Or else I don’t stand a chance against any of the legends! I really enjoy the integration! Nothing about Hiacan joining feels rushed or out of place. You write him very well.
Thanks! I really tried my best!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Jul. 23, 2021
Wow you through back the bionic bros lol great chapter!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Jul. 23, 2021
(Jul. 23, 2021 10:08 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 28 is out!
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 28
Spirit Of Crimson Flames! Superior Spryzen!!
~In The Workroom~
Shu: Almost done, Spryzen!
(Shu continues to work on his bey)
Shu (Thoughts): Spryzen will be the ultimate balance type! The bey of Crimson Flames!
(Shu gets pulled into a crimson void)
Spryzen: Shu.
Shu: Spryzen.
Spryzen: We will achieve an evolution no bey’s ever had before!
Shu: Yes we will!
(Shu gets pulled out of the white void)
Shu: It’s done! Superior Spryzen!!
(Shu walks out of the workroom)
Valt: Is it done?
Shu: Yep, Superior Spryzen!
Me: That bey looks awesome!
Shu: It is. Percy, do you wanna battle me?
Me: Really? Of course!
Valt: Raina, care to be the referee?
Raina: You’ve got it! Inspect your opponent’s bey!
Me (Thoughts): Superior Spryzen, a dual spinning balance type! It has metal for a wicked strong attack and rubber to absorb spin! The disk is heavy and wait, that’s the B Gear! Looks like it has a locked mode and a free spin mode! Its driver has a Stamina Mode, Defense Mode, and an Attack Mode! Wow, this bey is so strong! But, Poseidon can beat it!
Shu (Thoughts): Percy’s gonna come at me with a strong attack. Let’s play it safe.
(Shu puts Spryzen in Clockwise Defense Mode, Shu puts the Mega Disk in free spin mode)
Raina: First battle!
Me: No hard feelings when I win!
Shu: Sure.
Raina: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Shu: Let it… rip!!
(Me and Shu pull off powerful Beyjitzu Launches)
Shu: Go Spryzen!!
(Spryzen takes the center)
Me: Hydro Launch!!
(Poseidon hits Spryzen with a barrage of attacks, Spryzen blocks all of them)
Hiacan: Poseidon’s attacks aren’t doing anything!
Raina: Percy’s in trouble!
Me: Go! Hydro Geyser!!
(Poseidon speeds up and heads towards Spryzen)
Shu: Superior Spin!!
(Poseidon slams into the Mega Disk, The Mega disk spins and shoots Poseidon into the wall, Poseidon bursts)
All: *Gasps*
Raina: It’s Superior Spryzen with a burst finish! The winner is Shu Kurenai!!
(Shu flips up his hair)
Hiacan: Just one hit.
Pam: Devastating.
Me: One more time!
All: *Gasps*
Me: Please, one more time!
Shu: Sure.
Me: Really?
Shu: Yeah, get ready!
Valt (Thoughts): Shu’s testing him!
Raina: First battle!
(Shu puts Spryzen in Stamina Mode)
Me: TIme to switch it up!
(I put Poseidon in Left Spin Mode)
Shu (Thoughts): Changing your spin won’t help you!
Raina: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Shu: Let it… rip!!
(Me and Shu pull off strong Beyjitzu Launches)
Shu: Go Spryzen!
Me: I don’t think so! Hydro Launch!!
(Spryzen tries taking the center but Poseidon hits it with a barrage of attacks)
Pam: Keep it up Percy!
Shu: Now Spryzen!
(Spryzen hits Poseidon out of the way and takes the center)
Aiden: Knock them out Poseidon!
Me: Knock 'em out! Hydro Ripple!!
(Poseidon speeds up and heads straight towards Spryzen)
Hiacan: Knock him out!
Shu: Superior Spin!!
(Spryzen absorbs the hit)
Me: You’ve gotta be kidding!
Pam: Hit it again!
Me: Hydro Strike!
(Poseidon speeds up and hits Spryzen, Spryzen gets sent flying across the stadium)
Shu: Counter Break!!
(Spryzen leans on its driver and speeds into Poseidon, Poseidon bursts)
Me: *Gasps*
Raina: Its Superior Spryzen with a burst finish! Shu Kurenai is the winner!
Aiden: No way!
Hiacan: Shu Kurenai is that strong?!
Shu: Percy, one more battle!
All: *Gasps*
Me: Ok.
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Aiden: Show Shu how strong you are when you’re serious!
Raina: First battle!
(Shu puts Spryzen in Counterclockwise Attack Mode, Shu puts the Mega Disk in its locked mode)
Me: Bring it on Shu!
Raina: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Shu: Let it… rip!!
(Me and Shu pull off powerful Beyjitzu Launches)
Me: Hydro Launch!!
Shu: Upper Launch!!
(Spryzen and Poseidon pull off a strong barrage of powerful strikes)
Me: Knock ‘em out! Hydro Jet!!
(Poseidon catches onto the stadium rim and picks up speed)
Shu: Catch up to it! Superior Counter Break!!
(Spryzen catches onto the stadium rim and picks up speed, Spryzen sends Poseidon flying in the air)
Me: Poseidon!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Poseidon blazes out of the bey)
Me: Hydro Dive!!
(Poseidon crashes down on Spryzen and sends it sky-high)
Me: Yes!
Shu: Spryzen!!
(Shu’s Resonance Aura flares up Spryzen blazes out of the bey)
Spryzen: *Roars*
(Spryzen lands on the motorized rim and picks up speed and heads straight for Poseidon)
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
Shu: Superior Spin!!
(Spryzen absorbs Poseidon’s attack and picks up speed)
All: *Gasps*
(Spryzen starts going faster and faster)
Shu: Superior Whip!!
(Spryzen slams into Poseidon and sends it flying, Poseidon bursts)
Me: *Gasps*
(Spryzen stops spinning)
Raina: Its Superior Spryzen with a burst finish! The winner is Shu Kurenai!
(I grab Poseidon’s parts and runoff)
Pam/Aiden: Percy!
Shu: I’ll go after him.
~On The Raging Bulls Roof~
(I start a flashback)
Shu: Superior Spin!
(Poseidon hits the wall and bursts)
Shu: Counter Break!!
(Poseidon bursts)
Shu: Superior Whip!!
(Poseidon bursts)
(I end the flashback)
Me: Am I really that pathetic?
???: Is that what you think?
Me: *Gasps*
(I look behind me, Shu looks at me)
Shu: So, you’re up here.
Me: What’re you doing here?
Shu: I could say the same to you.
Me: Touche.
(Shu reaches in his pocket and pulls out a photo of three kids)
Me: Who are they?
Shu: The kid on the right is Justin, on the left it’s Harry and in the middle it's Asher.
Me: Are they friends of yours?
Shu: You could say, they were more like students.
Me: Do you always keep that in your pocket?
Shu: Nah, they just sent me a postcard.
Me: Ok.
Shu: Asher in particular is a strong blader with his Bey Apollo, he gained that from never giving up.
Me: I get it, you’re telling me to not doubt myself.
Shu: Basically, you win some, you lose some. That’s what Beyblade is about, getting up after loss!
(I stand up)
Me: Then what are we waiting for? Let’s get training!
(Shu smiles)
Me: I’ll train hard to beat you, then I’ll become the strongest blader in the world!
(Jul. 23, 2021 10:00 PM)USN Wrote: I really enjoy the integration! Nothing about Hiacan joining feels rushed or out of place. You write him very well.
Thanks! I really tried my best! I LOVEED IT!! I like how you give Asher, Justin, and Harry an appearance! it brings back good old memories back to bionic battle!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 23, 2021
(Jul. 23, 2021 10:18 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Wow you through back the bionic bros lol great chapter!
Right now, Harry Justin and Asher are actually in the jungle because they heard someone was trying to start the snake pit again
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Jul. 23, 2021
(Jul. 23, 2021 10:21 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 23, 2021 10:18 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Wow you through back the bionic bros lol great chapter!
Right now, Harry Justin and Asher are actually in the jungle because they heard someone was trying to start the snake pit again
nice! this would make for a goooood season 2 of bionic battle lol
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Jul. 23, 2021
(Jul. 23, 2021 10:21 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 23, 2021 10:18 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Wow you through back the bionic bros lol great chapter!
Right now, Harry Justin and Asher are actually in the jungle because they heard someone was trying to start the snake pit again
You know, I wanted to bring back Jacob, Satsu and Ruckus (Shun Died) but nice nice to know that Harry is now good!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 24, 2021
Percy when he losses the first battle against Shu: It's ok, I can make a comeback
Percy when he losses the second battle: *Shocked Face*
Percy when he loses the third battle: My life is officially over.
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Jul. 24, 2021
(Jul. 24, 2021 12:59 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
Percy when he losses the first battle against Shu: It's ok, I can make a comeback
Percy when he losses the second battle: *Shocked Face*
Percy when he loses the third battle: My life is officially over.
Lol Shu is just like "whaaa?"
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Jul. 24, 2021
(Jul. 24, 2021 12:59 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
Percy when he losses the first battle against Shu: It's ok, I can make a comeback
Percy when he losses the second battle: *Shocked Face*
Percy when he loses the third battle: My life is officially over.
lol poor percy
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - Staron - Jul. 24, 2021
I might be a bit late on it, not sure if I should add Bushi.
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