(Jul. 08, 2021  11:03 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:

(Jul. 08, 2021  11:01 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Nice chapter, nothing too much, just an attachment for the driver and the first battle, but still nice

Thanks, it was supposed to be one of those filer episodes if you get what I'm saying where nothing too important happens

(Jul. 08, 2021  11:01 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: i'll rate

Characters: 5/5 - You expressed the characters so well, I was able to fully understand their motives! Greatness!

Grammar: 5/5 - really?

Writing: 4/5 - It's great (but in my perspective some stuff looks a (bit) jumbled up) but only some stuff. Nice!

Length: 4/5 - This chapter wasn't your longest chapter, but definitely wasn't your shortest. Great job!

Plot: 5/5 - I understand how to plot progresses throughout the story very well. Awesome!

All 'n All (Total): 23/25 - Great job with this chapter, and keep on improving!

(Jul. 08, 2021  10:56 PM)LegendJustice Wrote:

(Jul. 08, 2021  9:43 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Srry Ty but currently I'm not having any character contests

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Chapter 20 is out!!

Spoiler (Click to View)

Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
                    Chapter 20
        Junior World Championships!!!

~In America’s Arena~

Receptionist: Perseus Nakano, Pam Hope, Aiden Kusaba, and Raina Reinhart! You are all registered for the tournament!!

Me/Aiden/Raina/Pam: Awesome!!

Valt: You guys better win!

Me: Don’t worry I will!!

(Oribe walks up to the Receptionist)

Oribe: Sign me up.

Receptionist: I’ll need your first and last name!

Oribe: Oribe Abiko.

Receptionist: I’ll need you to put your bey logger here.

(Oribe places his Bey Logger on the machine)

Receptionist: Thank you! We look forward to--

(Oribe walks away)

Receptionist: How rude! Hmp!

Shu: (Something seems different about him).

Pam: Shu? Did you say something?

Shu: Nothing.

(We head back to the Raging Bulls)

Shu: How about we do some practice?

Me: Sure!

Pam: I’m going first!!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Pam/Robot: Let it rip!!

Pam: Take the center! Pegasus!!

(Pegasus locks down the center, The Robot’s bey starts attacking)

Shu (Thoughts): Wow, he's a master of defending while keeping her stamina in check, Pegasus is a strong bey!

(The Robot’s bey sends Pegasus flying up the slope)

Pam: Peaceful Thunder!!

(Pegasus counterstrikes, The robot’s bey gets sent flying out of the stadium)

Pam: Well alright!

Hikaru: I want a shot at this!!

Shu: Give it a go.

All: 3! 2! 1!

Hikaru/Robot: Let it rip!!

(The Robot’s bey takes the center, Helios starts attacking)

Hikaru: Take ‘em down! Helios!!

(Helios’ flare blazes wildly, Helios speeds up and knocks it out of the stadium)

Hikaru: Oh yeah!!

Hyuga: I wanna kablam them out of there!!

Raina: Um, they do realize we're the ones battling, right?

Valt: A little practice doesn't hurt anyone!

(My stomach growls)

Me: Sorry, I haven’t eaten in a while.

Valt: You should try Shu’s spaghetti!!

Raina: Shu makes spaghetti?

Valt: Yup, it’s the best thing in the world!!

Shu: I wouldn’t say best.

Me: I wanna try some!

Shu: I guess I’ll start making some.

~In The Cafeteria 15 minutes later~

(Shu comes out of the kitchen with a big plate of spaghetti and places it on the table)

Valt: This is gonna be good!!

(We all put some spaghetti on our plates)

Me: Let’s dive in!

(We slowly put the fork in our mouths, the whole room goes silent)

Shu: So?

All (Except Shu): It’s so good!!

Hyuga: This is the best spaghetti ever!!

Hikaru: I think Dad would be upset if he heard that!

(Hyuga falls asleep)

Hikaru: I can’t believe it, he liked it so much he fell asleep!

Valt: This tastes better than ever!!

~10 Minutes Later~

Raina: That was the best thing I’ve ever eaten!

Pam: That’s an understatement.

Aiden: I never wanna eat anything else again!

Me: I could live off this!

(Shu smiles)

Shu: Glad you liked it!

(Hyuga holds Hyperion up in the air)

Hyuga: Who wants to battle!!

(I glance at Hyperion’s driver)

Me: *Gasps*

(I run out of the cafeteria)

Valt: What’s up with him?

Aiden: It looks like he just had an idea.

(I run into the workroom)

Me: I can evolve Poseidon’s driver!

Poseidon: Can you now?

(Poseidon pulls me into a white void)

Me: With your new evolution you’ll be able to speed up like crazy!!

Poseidon: Wise decision!

(I get pulled out of the void)

Me: Let’s get started!

(I start working on the part)

Valt: I made some Beybread!

(Valt puts it to my side, I grab one and put it in my mouth as I work)

Me (Muffled): Thanks.

~1 hour later~

Me: It’s done!!

(I hold up the part)

Aiden: You’ve finally finished?

Me: Yup, this is the Accelerate Part!!

(I attach it to Poseidon)

Raina: Wow, this part looks amazing!

Pam: What does it do?

Me: It stops it from free spinning but makes it faster!!
Pam: Sweet!

Me: Raina! Wanna battle?

Raina: thought you’d never ask!

(Shu comes up)

Shu: I guess I’ll judge.

Me: Ok, thanks, Shu!

Shu: First battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Raina: Let it rip!!

Me: Flood Launch!!

(Poseidon hits Ridley with a quick barrage of attacks)

Raina: Pirate Launch!!

(Ridley starts picking up speed and countering all Poseidon’s attacks)

Me: Hydro Jet!!

(Poseidon leans on its driver, Poseidon starts picking up a lot of speed, Ridley gets sent flying)

Raina: RIDLEY!!!

(Raina’s Resonance Aura flares up)

Raina: Pirate Rush!!

Me: Hydro Geyser!!

(Poseidon and Ridley speed up, Poseidon and Ridley start clashing, the whole stadium blows up)

Me: Burst it!!

(Both beys get shot up in the air, Ridley bursts)

Raina: *Gasps*

Shu: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a burst finish!! The winner is Perseus Nakano!!

Me: Can I get a boo ya!!

Shu (Thoughts): Hydro Poseidon is a strong bey, I’ll have to keep evolving to keep up with it!

~The Next Day~

Hanami: Hello all you bladers!! Today we’ll be starting the ultimate Junior World Championships!! Today the very few 16 competitors we have will be battling it out to go out to the world stage with our legendary bladers!! We’ll be starting our first round in A group very soon!!

Me: I’m in A Group! What group are you guys in?

Pam: I’m in A Group as well!!

Adam: I’m in B Group!!

Raina: So am I! Get ready to lose Aiden!

Aiden: Hah, in your dreams!

Pam: You’re going down Hydro King!

Me: You can dream!

(The first match is… Ben Aoki Vs Perseus Nakano)

Aiden: We’ll be cheering for you buddy!

Me: Thanks, but I’ll win anyway!

(I walk up to the stage)

Hanami: And there he is!! Running his way to his first match!!

Ben: Ready to lose kid?

Me: You should be asking yourself that question!

Referee: First battle! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Ben: Let it rip!!

Me: Hydro Geyser!!

(Poseidon bursts Ben’s bey)

Ben: No way!!

Referee: Hydro Poseidon claims 2 points with a burst finish!! Perseus Nakano wins with a score of 2-0!!

Hanami: Hydro Poseidon a bey we barely know about just burst the daylights out of Ben’s bey!!

Me: I’m gonna keep bursting beys!!

LegendJustice can you rate this chapter? I'll rate ur's later promise

Nice! I'll rate in a while I'm on MK chat!?

(Jul. 08, 2021  11:05 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:

(Jul. 08, 2021  11:01 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: i'll rate

Characters: 5/5 - You expressed the characters so well, I was able to fully understand their motives! Greatness!

Grammar: 5/5 - really?

Writing: 4/5 - It's great (but in my perspective some stuff looks a (bit) jumbled up) but only some stuff. Nice!

Length: 4/5 - This chapter wasn't your longest chapter, but definitely wasn't your shortest. Great job!

Plot: 5/5 - I understand how to plot progresses throughout the story very well. Awesome!

All 'n All (Total): 23/25 - Great job with this chapter, and keep on improving!

Thanks!!

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(Jul. 08, 2021  10:56 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Nice! I'll rate in a while I'm on MK chat!?

Ok thanks

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I just wanted to thank everyone for their support for Bejitzu even tho it's kinda bad lol

(Jul. 08, 2021  11:14 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Dang USN 's on a role becuase the name I chose for the new Spryzen was Superior Spryzen

(Jul. 09, 2021  1:09 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Lol this is just 😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱

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UnseenBurst so it's true.... Vlad is the strongest?

(Jul. 09, 2021  1:09 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Lol this is just 😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱

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UnseenBurst so it's true.... Vlad is the strongest?

(Jul. 09, 2021  1:15 AM)BladeKingX Wrote:

(Jul. 09, 2021  1:09 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Lol this is just 😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱

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UnseenBurst so it's true.... Vlad is the strongest?

wow... vlad is the strongest!

(Jul. 09, 2021  1:18 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:

(Jul. 09, 2021  1:09 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Lol this is just 😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱

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UnseenBurst so it's true.... Vlad is the strongest?

(Jul. 09, 2021  1:15 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: wow... vlad is the strongest!

Yes, becuase he's the Legend Champion and he's squared off with Valt before so yeah.

(Jul. 09, 2021  1:21 AM)BladeKingX Wrote:

(Jul. 09, 2021  1:18 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Yes, becuase he's the Legend Champion and he's squared off with Valt before so yeah.

wait was that the last episode of DYNAAACHI

(Jul. 09, 2021  1:21 AM)BladeKingX Wrote:

(Jul. 09, 2021  1:18 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Yes, becuase he's the Legend Champion and he's squared off with Valt before so yeah.

wait was that the last episode of DYNAAACHI

(Jul. 09, 2021  1:23 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:

(Jul. 09, 2021  1:21 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: wait was that the last episode of DYNAAACHI

Oop srry I thought we we were talking about Asher well yeah Vlad's the strongest as of the battle with Apocalypse and he's already surpassed Valt at this point

(Jul. 09, 2021  1:34 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I'd have to say Percy right now. Percy fans be like *Screams*

(Jul. 09, 2021  1:35 AM)LegendJustice Wrote:

(Jul. 09, 2021  1:34 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I'd have to say Percy right now. Percy fans be like *Screams*

Being a vlad fan: Whatever

(Jul. 09, 2021  2:46 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 21 is out!!

Spoiler (Click to View)

Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
                     Chapter 21
    Roaring Dragon!! Wicked Balkesh!!

(A bey bursts)

Hanami: Holy guacamole!! Pam effortlessly wins the 4th match of A group!!

Aiden: That was awesome Pam!!

Pam: Thanks Aiden!

Raina: Aiden, isn’t your match the next?

Aiden: Yup, and I’m going to ace it!

Raina: But it says you’re up against a blader named Baabar! It also says he’s really strong!!

Aiden: It doesn't matter, I'll beat him in seconds!!

Me: You should never take your opponent's as jokes.

Aiden: That’s coming from you?

Me: I know, but I suggest we do some training before your battle!

Aiden: Nope, I’ve got this in the bag!

Hanami: We’ll be continuing our matches tomorrow! And our first match will be Aiden Kusaba Vs Baabar Blakenstone!!

(A tall kid walks up to us)

Baabar: I’m Baabar and I’ve seen all your battles so you should be worried.

Aiden: I’m not, you should get training, kid I’m a tough nut to crack!

Baabar: You’ll eat those words.

(Baabar walks away, Pam walks by Baabar)

Pam: What’s up with him?

Me: He’s mad because Aiden is getting overconfident.

Pam: Wait what?

Raina: *Sighs* We’ll explain on the way back.

~At The Raging Bulls~

Pam: Seriously Aiden, you can’t underestimate him!

Aiden: You’re just saying that because you scared you’re gonna lose to him!

(We walk inside the building)

Raina: I bet that you’re going to lose tomorrow!

Hikaru: Woah, what’s going on?

(I explain to Hikaru and Hyuga what’s going on)

Hikaru: Aiden, you should probably train.

Aiden: Training would be a waste of time!

Hyuga: But you won’t be able to go zoom boom bang!!

Aiden: That’s your thing Hyuga!

(Aiden lays on the coach)

Me: Get up and battle me!!

Aiden: Battle Pam.

Raina: Seriously!!

(Valt walks in the room)

Valt: Yo, what’s going on?

Me: He won’t train!

Raina: And he’s got a match with Baabar tomorrow!

Valt: Baabar?

Me: You know him?

Valt: I don’t know him personally, but he’s a worldwide tournament winner!!

Aiden: Seriously?

Valt: Yup!

Aiden: That should make my victory sweeter!

Pam: Ugh!

Raina: Will you at least battle me?!

Aiden: Nope, gotta save my energy for tomorrow!

All (Except Valt): Get up!!

~In Baabar’s House!

Baabar: Aiden Kusaba’s main strategy is to defend all the way to counter-attack! It’s time to evolve Balkesh!

(Roar Balkesh glimmers back at Baabar, Baabar fires up his Printer)

Baabar: My Balkesh will become the strongest defense type in the world!!

(Baabar starts working on his bey)

~At The Raging Bulls~

Me: Hydro Strike!!

Pam: Feather Storm!!

(Poseidon and Pegasus get sent flying)

Aiden: That’s a draw.

Pam: Stop being so lazy!!

Aiden: It’s not being lazy it's called conserving energy.

Raina: That’s just an excuse not to do anything!!

Me: After looking at some of your battles and what you could work on is your defense--

Aiden: Chill, Ashindra has the best defense ever!

Raina: He’s right you could work on your defense!

Aiden: Trust me, I’ll win this match! No matter what!!

(Shu walks in)

Me: You’re not going to win if you spend all your time sitting on the couch!!

Aiden: I’ve had to tell you guys so many times, don’t worry about it!

Shu: What’s going on?

(We explain what’s going on to Shu)

Shu: Aiden, do you want to battle me on the world stage?

Aiden: Of course!

Shu: Then you’re going to have to train or else you won’t stand a chance!

Aiden: With all due respect Shu, I’m going to win our battle with a burst finish!

Shu: Ok, don’t train.

Aiden: Thank you!

(Shu walks away, I run after him)

Me: Why’d you tell him that?

Shu: Because he’s going to learn eventually that laziness brings you nothing.

~At Baabar’s House~

Baabar: It’s done!! Wicked Balkesh!!

(Baabar holds up Balkesh in the air)

Baabar: With this bey, I’ll defeat Ashindra and become the world’s best blader!!

~The Next Day~

Hanami: Ok all you bladers!! Today we’ll start the B group with a clash of shields!! It’s Noble Ashindra Vs Wicked Balkesh!!

Raina/Me/Pam: Wicked?!

Hanami: That’s right folks! Baabar Blakenstone has evolved his bey!!

Referee: Inspect your opponent’s bey!!

Aiden (Thoughts): Wicked Balkesh, a counterclockwise spinning defense type. It doesn't have any teeth, it only has rubber to protect it from bursting. It has 6 blades to use as defense. This should be easy!

Referee: First battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Baabar: Let it rip!!

(Baabar pulls off a Beyjitzu Launch)

Aiden: *Gasps*

Hanami: Apparently only Baabar pulls off the Beyjitzu launch!!

(I facepalm)

Raina: That’s what happens when you don’t practice!

Shu: I knew this would happen!

(Balkesh takes the center before Ashidra)

Aiden: *Gasps*

Hanami: Looks like Balkesh takes the center stage!

Aiden: The center is ours!!

(Ashindra hits Balkesh with a barrage of attacks, But they do nothing)

Hanami: Apparently Ashindra attacks are wimpy!

Baabar: You were bragging about this?!

Aiden: We’ve got more!!

(Ashindra catches onto the motorized rim and flies in the air to attack Ashindra)

Aiden: Orbit Counter!!

(Ashindra hits Balkesh with a strong blow, 6 blades come out of Balkesh)

Aiden: *Gasps*

Hanami: Apparently 6 blades just popped out of Balkesh!!

Aiden: What was that!!

Baabar: When Balkesh takes enough damage 6 blades come out to make a more circle-like to amp its defense!!

Aiden: I don’t care! Again!! Orbit Counter!!

Hanami: Ashindra gears up for a huge counterstrike!!

Baabar: Balkesh!!

(Baabar’s Resonance Aura flares up Balkesh blazes out of the bey)

Aiden: It’s over!!

(Ashindra hits Balkesh hard, Balkesh catches onto the motorized rim)

Baabar: Corrupt Crash!!

(Balkesh picks up speed and crashes into Ashindra, Ashindra bursts)

Aiden: *Gasps*

Referee: It’s Wicked Balkesh with a burst finish!! The winner is Baabar Blakestone!!

Baabar: That was pathetic.

(Baabar picks up his bey and leaves)

Hanami: I can’t believe it! Balkesh used Ashindra’s counterattack to create its own counterattack!!

(Aiden picks up Ashindra’s parts and leaves, We meet Aiden in the hallway)

Raina: He was right, that was a pathetic battle.

(Aiden’s hair shadows his eyes)

Me: If you would’ve practiced you would’ve probably won.

Pam: You couldn’t even pull off a Beyjitzu Launch.

Shu: I told you “You won’t achieve anything with laziness” but you wouldn’t listen.

Aiden: I’m sorry.

(Tears start dropping out of Aiden’s face slowly)

Aiden: I should’ve listened to you, but instead I was lazy, now I’ll never become a world-ranked blader!

Me: It’s all good pal!

Raina: Don’t worry, you’ll become a world-ranked blader someday.

Pam: She’s right, you’ve got this man!

(Aiden raises his head)

Aiden: I’ll never be lazy again!! I’ll always give it my all no matter what!!

(Shu smiles)

All: Don’t worry, we’ll always be helping you out!!

(Jul. 09, 2021  2:53 AM)BladeKingX Wrote:

(Jul. 09, 2021  2:46 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 21 is out!!

Spoiler (Click to View)

Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
                     Chapter 21
    Roaring Dragon!! Wicked Balkesh!!

(A bey bursts)

Hanami: Holy guacamole!! Pam effortlessly wins the 4th match of A group!!

Aiden: That was awesome Pam!!

Pam: Thanks Aiden!

Raina: Aiden, isn’t your match the next?

Aiden: Yup, and I’m going to ace it!

Raina: But it says you’re up against a blader named Baabar! It also says he’s really strong!!

Aiden: It doesn't matter, I'll beat him in seconds!!

Me: You should never take your opponent's as jokes.

Aiden: That’s coming from you?

Me: I know, but I suggest we do some training before your battle!

Aiden: Nope, I’ve got this in the bag!

Hanami: We’ll be continuing our matches tomorrow! And our first match will be Aiden Kusaba Vs Baabar Blakenstone!!

(A tall kid walks up to us)

Baabar: I’m Baabar and I’ve seen all your battles so you should be worried.

Aiden: I’m not, you should get training, kid I’m a tough nut to crack!

Baabar: You’ll eat those words.

(Baabar walks away, Pam walks by Baabar)

Pam: What’s up with him?

Me: He’s mad because Aiden is getting overconfident.

Pam: Wait what?

Raina: *Sighs* We’ll explain on the way back.

~At The Raging Bulls~

Pam: Seriously Aiden, you can’t underestimate him!

Aiden: You’re just saying that because you scared you’re gonna lose to him!

(We walk inside the building)

Raina: I bet that you’re going to lose tomorrow!

Hikaru: Woah, what’s going on?

(I explain to Hikaru and Hyuga what’s going on)

Hikaru: Aiden, you should probably train.

Aiden: Training would be a waste of time!

Hyuga: But you won’t be able to go zoom boom bang!!

Aiden: That’s your thing Hyuga!

(Aiden lays on the coach)

Me: Get up and battle me!!

Aiden: Battle Pam.

Raina: Seriously!!

(Valt walks in the room)

Valt: Yo, what’s going on?

Me: He won’t train!

Raina: And he’s got a match with Baabar tomorrow!

Valt: Baabar?

Me: You know him?

Valt: I don’t know him personally, but he’s a worldwide tournament winner!!

Aiden: Seriously?

Valt: Yup!

Aiden: That should make my victory sweeter!

Pam: Ugh!

Raina: Will you at least battle me?!

Aiden: Nope, gotta save my energy for tomorrow!

All (Except Valt): Get up!!

~In Baabar’s House!

Baabar: Aiden Kusaba’s main strategy is to defend all the way to counter-attack! It’s time to evolve Balkesh!

(Roar Balkesh glimmers back at Baabar, Baabar fires up his Printer)

Baabar: My Balkesh will become the strongest defense type in the world!!

(Baabar starts working on his bey)

~At The Raging Bulls~

Me: Hydro Strike!!

Pam: Feather Storm!!

(Poseidon and Pegasus get sent flying)

Aiden: That’s a draw.

Pam: Stop being so lazy!!

Aiden: It’s not being lazy it's called conserving energy.

Raina: That’s just an excuse not to do anything!!

Me: After looking at some of your battles and what you could work on is your defense--

Aiden: Chill, Ashindra has the best defense ever!

Raina: He’s right you could work on your defense!

Aiden: Trust me, I’ll win this match! No matter what!!

(Shu walks in)

Me: You’re not going to win if you spend all your time sitting on the couch!!

Aiden: I’ve had to tell you guys so many times, don’t worry about it!

Shu: What’s going on?

(We explain what’s going on to Shu)

Shu: Aiden, do you want to battle me on the world stage?

Aiden: Of course!

Shu: Then you’re going to have to train or else you won’t stand a chance!

Aiden: With all due respect Shu, I’m going to win our battle with a burst finish!

Shu: Ok, don’t train.

Aiden: Thank you!

(Shu walks away, I run after him)

Me: Why’d you tell him that?

Shu: Because he’s going to learn eventually that laziness brings you nothing.

~At Baabar’s House~

Baabar: It’s done!! Wicked Balkesh!!

(Baabar holds up Balkesh in the air)

Baabar: With this bey, I’ll defeat Ashindra and become the world’s best blader!!

~The Next Day~

Hanami: Ok all you bladers!! Today we’ll start the B group with a clash of shields!! It’s Noble Ashindra Vs Wicked Balkesh!!

Raina/Me/Pam: Wicked?!

Hanami: That’s right folks! Baabar Blakenstone has evolved his bey!!

Referee: Inspect your opponent’s bey!!

Aiden (Thoughts): Wicked Balkesh, a counterclockwise spinning defense type. It doesn't have any teeth, it only has rubber to protect it from bursting. It has 6 blades to use as defense. This should be easy!

Referee: First battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Baabar: Let it rip!!

(Baabar pulls off a Beyjitzu Launch)

Aiden: *Gasps*

Hanami: Apparently only Baabar pulls off the Beyjitzu launch!!

(I facepalm)

Raina: That’s what happens when you don’t practice!

Shu: I knew this would happen!

(Balkesh takes the center before Ashidra)

Aiden: *Gasps*

Hanami: Looks like Balkesh takes the center stage!

Aiden: The center is ours!!

(Ashindra hits Balkesh with a barrage of attacks, But they do nothing)

Hanami: Apparently Ashindra attacks are wimpy!

Baabar: You were bragging about this?!

Aiden: We’ve got more!!

(Ashindra catches onto the motorized rim and flies in the air to attack Ashindra)

Aiden: Orbit Counter!!

(Ashindra hits Balkesh with a strong blow, 6 blades come out of Balkesh)

Aiden: *Gasps*

Hanami: Apparently 6 blades just popped out of Balkesh!!

Aiden: What was that!!

Baabar: When Balkesh takes enough damage 6 blades come out to make a more circle-like to amp its defense!!

Aiden: I don’t care! Again!! Orbit Counter!!

Hanami: Ashindra gears up for a huge counterstrike!!

Baabar: Balkesh!!

(Baabar’s Resonance Aura flares up Balkesh blazes out of the bey)

Aiden: It’s over!!

(Ashindra hits Balkesh hard, Balkesh catches onto the motorized rim)

Baabar: Corrupt Crash!!

(Balkesh picks up speed and crashes into Ashindra, Ashindra bursts)

Aiden: *Gasps*

Referee: It’s Wicked Balkesh with a burst finish!! The winner is Baabar Blakestone!!

Baabar: That was pathetic.

(Baabar picks up his bey and leaves)

Hanami: I can’t believe it! Balkesh used Ashindra’s counterattack to create its own counterattack!!

(Aiden picks up Ashindra’s parts and leaves, We meet Aiden in the hallway)

Raina: He was right, that was a pathetic battle.

(Aiden’s hair shadows his eyes)

Me: If you would’ve practiced you would’ve probably won.

Pam: You couldn’t even pull off a Beyjitzu Launch.

Shu: I told you “You won’t achieve anything with laziness” but you wouldn’t listen.

Aiden: I’m sorry.

(Tears start dropping out of Aiden’s face slowly)

Aiden: I should’ve listened to you, but instead I was lazy, now I’ll never become a world-ranked blader!

Me: It’s all good pal!

Raina: Don’t worry, you’ll become a world-ranked blader someday.

Pam: She’s right, you’ve got this man!

(Aiden raises his head)

Aiden: I’ll never be lazy again!! I’ll always give it my all no matter what!!

(Shu smiles)

All: Don’t worry, we’ll always be helping you out!!

this episode is awesome! it helps teach aiden a valuable lesson!

(Jul. 09, 2021  3:17 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Wait Aiden? Don't you mean ADAM?!!!

(Jul. 09, 2021  3:17 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Wait Aiden? Don't you mean ADAM?!!!