RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Name Contest) - Dragon Blader Z - Jul. 08, 2021
(Jul. 08, 2021 6:52 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: Super Spryzen
(Jul. 08, 2021 6:52 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Oh there's a Driver named Power afaik
ill change it
changed it!!!
Scratch Spryzen
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Name Contest) - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 08, 2021
This is getting off hand
what about you guys create an spoiler and shuffle all the names there?
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Name Contest) - Dragon Blader Z - Jul. 08, 2021
Missile Spryzen
(Jul. 08, 2021 6:56 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: This is getting off hand
Yeah
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Name Contest) - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 08, 2021
(Jul. 08, 2021 6:56 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: Missile Spryzen
(Jul. 08, 2021 6:56 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: This is getting off hand
Yeah I've edited it
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Name Contest) - Dragon Blader Z - Jul. 08, 2021
Render Spryzen
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Name Contest) - LegendJustice - Jul. 08, 2021
Rocket Spryzen
Jail Spryzen
ForceField Spryzen
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Name Contest) - Dragon Blader Z - Jul. 08, 2021
(Jul. 08, 2021 6:56 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: This is getting off hand
what about you guys create an spoiler and shuffle all the names there?
ok, but if I pm the creator it wont come to him cause he has pm off.
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Name Contest) - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 08, 2021
(Jul. 08, 2021 7:00 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: (Jul. 08, 2021 6:56 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: This is getting off hand
what about you guys create an spoiler and shuffle all the names there?
ok, but if I pm the creator it wont come to him cause he has pm off. I was talking about making a spoiler
like this, and then you shuffle the names like Legend did
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Name Contest) - Dragon Blader Z - Jul. 08, 2021
(Jul. 08, 2021 7:01 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Jul. 08, 2021 7:00 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: ok, but if I pm the creator it wont come to him cause he has pm off. I was talking about making a spoiler
like this, and then you shuffle the names like Legend did
oh ok
Nani Spryzen
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Name Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jul. 08, 2021
Chapter 19 is out!! I hope you enjoy it!!
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 19
Protectors Of The Sun!! Aether Helios and Pyro Hyperion!!
Valt: Heroic Recoil!!
(Helios and Hyperion get knocked out of the stadium)
Hikaru/Hyuga: *Gasps*
Pam: Valt wins!!
Hyuga: Grr!!
Me: Valt’s really on a roll now!!
Hikaru (Thoughts): Man, these Beyjitzu beys are really strong, I think it’s time Helios and Hyperion evolved!
Hyuga (Thoughts): I want Hyperion to go Kablamo more!!
Hikaru: Shu, can me and Hyuga use the workroom?
Shu: Sure, planning on making Beyjitzu beys?
Hyuga: You read our minds!!
(Hyuga and Hikaru run over to the Work Room)
Hikaru (Thoughts): I want Helios to be even more balanced than it was before, it’ll be the perfect bey!!
Hyuga (Thoughts): I want Hyperion to go Zoom boom bang even faster!!
(Hyuga and Hikaru start working on their beys, Helios and Hyperion stand behind them)
Helios: Hikaru, we’ll evolve past our limits!!
Hikaru: You’ve got it, Helios!
Hyperion: We’ll crash into them harder to break our limits!!
Hyuga: Don’t worry, Hyperion!
~While Hyuga and Hikaru work on their beys~
Pam: How do you think Hyuga and Hikaru are doing?
Me: They’re legends, they should be fine!!
Valt: Yeah, Hikaru and Hyuga are capable of creating Beyjitzu beys!!
Shu/Robots: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(Shu does a Lightning Launch)
Shu: World Whip!!
(Spryzen bursts all the robots beys)
Me: That’s so cool!!
Shu: It’s just my training.
Me: Can I try?
Shu: Sure.
Me/Robots: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(I pull off a Beyjitzu Launch)
Me: Go, Poseidon!!
(Poseidon speeds up and sends 2 of the robots bey’s flying out of the stadium)
Shu: *Gasps*
Me: Poseidon!!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Poseidon blazes out of the bey)
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
(Poseidon smashes into the remaining beys, All the bey's burst)
Shu (Thoughts): It takes some serious strength to do that.
(Hikaru and Hyuga run out of the workroom)
Hikaru/Hyuga: It’s finished!!
Hikaru: Aether Helios!!
Hyuga: Pyro Hyperion!!
Valt: Awesome!
Hikaru: Valt, Shu! Are you up for a tag battle?
Shu: Sure.
Valt: Of course!!
Me: Did you make--
Hikaru: Beyjitzu Launchers?
(Hikaru and Hyuga hold up their Beyjitzu Launchers)
Raina: That’s seriously cool!!
Me: I’ll be the referee!! Inspect your opponent's bey!!
Shu (Thoughts): Aether Helios, a counterclockwise spinning balance type! It has 5 blades but once it takes enough damage the blades shift to expose 5 more blades to amp its defense.
(Shu puts Spryzen in Counterclockwise Attack Mode)
Valt (Thoughts): Pyro Hyperion, a clockwise spinning attack type, has 2 large blades that can deal massive damage, once it takes enough damage 2 blades come out to add more damage to every blow!!
Me: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Hyuga/Hikaru/Valt/Shu: Let it rip!!
(Valt, Hyuga, and Hikaru pull off Beyjitzu Launches, Shu pulls off a Lightning Launch)
Valt: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek hits Helios with a barrage of attacks)
Hyuga: Vroom zoom bang!!
(Hyperion speeds into Valtryek, Spryzen hits it away)
Shu: Counter Break!!
Hyuga: Kablamo!!
(Hyperion speeds into Spryzen, Spryzen counterstrikes, Hyperion and Spryzen shoot up in the air)
Hikaru: Hang in there, Helios!!
(Helios gets shot up in the air, Helios starts wobbling)
Valt: Go get ‘em!!
(Valtryek rushes a barrage of attacks as it chases Helios)
Hikaru: Helios!!
(Hikaru’s Resonance Aura flares up Helios blazes out of the bey)
Valt: Valtryek!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up Valtryek blazes out of the bey)
Hikaru: Whirl Counter!!
Valt: Stand your ground!
(Valktryek and Helios hit each other with a barrage of attacks)
Hyuga: Hyperion!!
(Hyuga’s Resonance Aura flares up Hyperion blazes out of the bey)
Hyuga: Pyro Strike!!
(Hyperion speeds right into Spryzen)
Shu: Spryzen!!
(Shu’s Resonance Aura flares up Spryzen blazes out of the bey)
Shu: World Whip!!
(Hyperion and Spryzen start clashing hard)
Hyuga: Pyro Breaker!!
(Hyperion’s 2 blades extend out, Spryzen and Hyperion get sent flying out of the stadium)
Shu/Hyuga: *Gasps*
(Valtryek and Helios start clashing hard)
Hikaru: Aether Breaker!!
(Helios’ 5 blades spin fast and expose 5 more blades)
Raina: This is how legends battle.
Me: So cool.
Valt: Heroic Winged Launch!!
(Valtryek slams into the wall and speeds up, Valtryek and Helios start clashing)
Valt: Heroic Sword!!
(Valtryek starts pushing against Helios, Helios gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Hikaru: *Gasps*
Me: it’s Valt Aoi with a ring-out finish!! Spryzen and Valtryek win the tag battle!
Hikaru/Hyuga: *Panting*
Valt: That was really fun!
Hikaru: Amazing!
Hyuga: I broke my limits!
(Hyuga falls asleep)
Hikaru: Are you kidding me?!
All: *Laughs*
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Name Contest) - Dragon Blader Z - Jul. 08, 2021
good chapter
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Name Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jul. 08, 2021
(Jul. 08, 2021 7:26 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: good chapter
Thanks, what was you're fave part?
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Name Contest) - Dragon Blader Z - Jul. 08, 2021
(Jul. 08, 2021 7:31 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 08, 2021 7:26 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: good chapter
Thanks, what was you're fave part?
Fave part: When Helios talks to Hikaru and when Hyperion talks to Hyuga.
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Name Contest) - GenesisBlader - Jul. 08, 2021
(Jul. 08, 2021 7:19 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 19 is out!! I hope you enjoy it!!
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 19
Protectors Of The Sun!! Aether Helios and Pyro Hyperion!!
Valt: Heroic Recoil!!
(Helios and Hyperion get knocked out of the stadium)
Hikaru/Hyuga: *Gasps*
Pam: Valt wins!!
Hyuga: Grr!!
Me: Valt’s really on a roll now!!
Hikaru (Thoughts): Man, these Beyjitzu beys are really strong, I think it’s time Helios and Hyperion evolved!
Hyuga (Thoughts): I want Hyperion to go Kablamo more!!
Hikaru: Shu, can me and Hyuga use the workroom?
Shu: Sure, planning on making Beyjitzu beys?
Hyuga: You read our minds!!
(Hyuga and Hikaru run over to the Work Room)
Hikaru (Thoughts): I want Helios to be even more balanced than it was before, it’ll be the perfect bey!!
Hyuga (Thoughts): I want Hyperion to go Zoom boom bang even faster!!
(Hyuga and Hikaru start working on their beys, Helios and Hyperion stand behind them)
Helios: Hikaru, we’ll evolve past our limits!!
Hikaru: You’ve got it, Helios!
Hyperion: We’ll crash into them harder to break our limits!!
Hyuga: Don’t worry, Hyperion!
~While Hyuga and Hikaru work on their beys~
Pam: How do you think Hyuga and Hikaru are doing?
Me: They’re legends, they should be fine!!
Valt: Yeah, Hikaru and Hyuga are capable of creating Beyjitzu beys!!
Shu/Robots: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(Shu does a Lightning Launch)
Shu: World Whip!!
(Spryzen bursts all the robots beys)
Me: That’s so cool!!
Shu: It’s just my training.
Me: Can I try?
Shu: Sure.
Me/Robots: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(I pull off a Beyjitzu Launch)
Me: Go, Poseidon!!
(Poseidon speeds up and sends 2 of the robots bey’s flying out of the stadium)
Shu: *Gasps*
Me: Poseidon!!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Poseidon blazes out of the bey)
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
(Poseidon smashes into the remaining beys, All the bey's burst)
Shu (Thoughts): It takes some serious strength to do that.
(Hikaru and Hyuga run out of the workroom)
Hikaru/Hyuga: It’s finished!!
Hikaru: Aether Helios!!
Hyuga: Pyro Hyperion!!
Valt: Awesome!
Hikaru: Valt, Shu! Are you up for a tag battle?
Shu: Sure.
Valt: Of course!!
Me: Did you make--
Hikaru: Beyjitzu Launchers?
(Hikaru and Hyuga hold up their Beyjitzu Launchers)
Raina: That’s seriously cool!!
Me: I’ll be the referee!! Inspect your opponent's bey!!
Shu (Thoughts): Aether Helios, a counterclockwise spinning balance type! It has 5 blades but once it takes enough damage the blades shift to expose 5 more blades to amp its defense.
(Shu puts Spryzen in Counterclockwise Attack Mode)
Valt (Thoughts): Pyro Hyperion, a clockwise spinning attack type, has 2 large blades that can deal massive damage, once it takes enough damage 2 blades come out to add more damage to every blow!!
Me: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Hyuga/Hikaru/Valt/Shu: Let it rip!!
(Valt, Hyuga, and Hikaru pull off Beyjitzu Launches, Shu pulls off a Lightning Launch)
Valt: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek hits Helios with a barrage of attacks)
Hyuga: Vroom zoom bang!!
(Hyperion speeds into Valtryek, Spryzen hits it away)
Shu: Counter Break!!
Hyuga: Kablamo!!
(Hyperion speeds into Spryzen, Spryzen counterstrikes, Hyperion and Spryzen shoot up in the air)
Hikaru: Hang in there, Helios!!
(Helios gets shot up in the air, Helios starts wobbling)
Valt: Go get ‘em!!
(Valtryek rushes a barrage of attacks as it chases Helios)
Hikaru: Helios!!
(Hikaru’s Resonance Aura flares up Helios blazes out of the bey)
Valt: Valtryek!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up Valtryek blazes out of the bey)
Hikaru: Whirl Counter!!
Valt: Stand your ground!
(Valktryek and Helios hit each other with a barrage of attacks)
Hyuga: Hyperion!!
(Hyuga’s Resonance Aura flares up Hyperion blazes out of the bey)
Hyuga: Pyro Strike!!
(Hyperion speeds right into Spryzen)
Shu: Spryzen!!
(Shu’s Resonance Aura flares up Spryzen blazes out of the bey)
Shu: World Whip!!
(Hyperion and Spryzen start clashing hard)
Hyuga: Pyro Breaker!!
(Hyperion’s 2 blades extend out, Spryzen and Hyperion get sent flying out of the stadium)
Shu/Hyuga: *Gasps*
(Valtryek and Helios start clashing hard)
Hikaru: Aether Breaker!!
(Helios’ 5 blades spin fast and expose 5 more blades)
Raina: This is how legends battle.
Me: So cool.
Valt: Heroic Winged Launch!!
(Valtryek slams into the wall and speeds up, Valtryek and Helios start clashing)
Valt: Heroic Sword!!
(Valtryek starts pushing against Helios, Helios gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Hikaru: *Gasps*
Me: it’s Valt Aoi with a ring-out finish!! Spryzen and Valtryek win the tag battle!
Hikaru/Hyuga: *Panting*
Valt: That was really fun!
Hikaru: Amazing!
Hyuga: I broke my limits!
(Hyuga falls asleep)
Hikaru: Are you kidding me?!
All: *Laughs*
this chapter was good! my favorite part was when helios' gimmick activated and then he clashed with valtryek
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Name Contest) - LegendJustice - Jul. 08, 2021
Great chapter I was eating popcorn while reading it!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Name Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jul. 08, 2021
(Jul. 08, 2021 7:36 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: (Jul. 08, 2021 7:31 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Thanks, what was you're fave part?
Fave part: When Helios talks to Hikaru and when Hyperion talks to Hyuga.
(Jul. 08, 2021 7:36 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jul. 08, 2021 7:19 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 19 is out!! I hope you enjoy it!!
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 19
Protectors Of The Sun!! Aether Helios and Pyro Hyperion!!
Valt: Heroic Recoil!!
(Helios and Hyperion get knocked out of the stadium)
Hikaru/Hyuga: *Gasps*
Pam: Valt wins!!
Hyuga: Grr!!
Me: Valt’s really on a roll now!!
Hikaru (Thoughts): Man, these Beyjitzu beys are really strong, I think it’s time Helios and Hyperion evolved!
Hyuga (Thoughts): I want Hyperion to go Kablamo more!!
Hikaru: Shu, can me and Hyuga use the workroom?
Shu: Sure, planning on making Beyjitzu beys?
Hyuga: You read our minds!!
(Hyuga and Hikaru run over to the Work Room)
Hikaru (Thoughts): I want Helios to be even more balanced than it was before, it’ll be the perfect bey!!
Hyuga (Thoughts): I want Hyperion to go Zoom boom bang even faster!!
(Hyuga and Hikaru start working on their beys, Helios and Hyperion stand behind them)
Helios: Hikaru, we’ll evolve past our limits!!
Hikaru: You’ve got it, Helios!
Hyperion: We’ll crash into them harder to break our limits!!
Hyuga: Don’t worry, Hyperion!
~While Hyuga and Hikaru work on their beys~
Pam: How do you think Hyuga and Hikaru are doing?
Me: They’re legends, they should be fine!!
Valt: Yeah, Hikaru and Hyuga are capable of creating Beyjitzu beys!!
Shu/Robots: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(Shu does a Lightning Launch)
Shu: World Whip!!
(Spryzen bursts all the robots beys)
Me: That’s so cool!!
Shu: It’s just my training.
Me: Can I try?
Shu: Sure.
Me/Robots: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(I pull off a Beyjitzu Launch)
Me: Go, Poseidon!!
(Poseidon speeds up and sends 2 of the robots bey’s flying out of the stadium)
Shu: *Gasps*
Me: Poseidon!!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Poseidon blazes out of the bey)
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
(Poseidon smashes into the remaining beys, All the bey's burst)
Shu (Thoughts): It takes some serious strength to do that.
(Hikaru and Hyuga run out of the workroom)
Hikaru/Hyuga: It’s finished!!
Hikaru: Aether Helios!!
Hyuga: Pyro Hyperion!!
Valt: Awesome!
Hikaru: Valt, Shu! Are you up for a tag battle?
Shu: Sure.
Valt: Of course!!
Me: Did you make--
Hikaru: Beyjitzu Launchers?
(Hikaru and Hyuga hold up their Beyjitzu Launchers)
Raina: That’s seriously cool!!
Me: I’ll be the referee!! Inspect your opponent's bey!!
Shu (Thoughts): Aether Helios, a counterclockwise spinning balance type! It has 5 blades but once it takes enough damage the blades shift to expose 5 more blades to amp its defense.
(Shu puts Spryzen in Counterclockwise Attack Mode)
Valt (Thoughts): Pyro Hyperion, a clockwise spinning attack type, has 2 large blades that can deal massive damage, once it takes enough damage 2 blades come out to add more damage to every blow!!
Me: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Hyuga/Hikaru/Valt/Shu: Let it rip!!
(Valt, Hyuga, and Hikaru pull off Beyjitzu Launches, Shu pulls off a Lightning Launch)
Valt: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek hits Helios with a barrage of attacks)
Hyuga: Vroom zoom bang!!
(Hyperion speeds into Valtryek, Spryzen hits it away)
Shu: Counter Break!!
Hyuga: Kablamo!!
(Hyperion speeds into Spryzen, Spryzen counterstrikes, Hyperion and Spryzen shoot up in the air)
Hikaru: Hang in there, Helios!!
(Helios gets shot up in the air, Helios starts wobbling)
Valt: Go get ‘em!!
(Valtryek rushes a barrage of attacks as it chases Helios)
Hikaru: Helios!!
(Hikaru’s Resonance Aura flares up Helios blazes out of the bey)
Valt: Valtryek!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up Valtryek blazes out of the bey)
Hikaru: Whirl Counter!!
Valt: Stand your ground!
(Valktryek and Helios hit each other with a barrage of attacks)
Hyuga: Hyperion!!
(Hyuga’s Resonance Aura flares up Hyperion blazes out of the bey)
Hyuga: Pyro Strike!!
(Hyperion speeds right into Spryzen)
Shu: Spryzen!!
(Shu’s Resonance Aura flares up Spryzen blazes out of the bey)
Shu: World Whip!!
(Hyperion and Spryzen start clashing hard)
Hyuga: Pyro Breaker!!
(Hyperion’s 2 blades extend out, Spryzen and Hyperion get sent flying out of the stadium)
Shu/Hyuga: *Gasps*
(Valtryek and Helios start clashing hard)
Hikaru: Aether Breaker!!
(Helios’ 5 blades spin fast and expose 5 more blades)
Raina: This is how legends battle.
Me: So cool.
Valt: Heroic Winged Launch!!
(Valtryek slams into the wall and speeds up, Valtryek and Helios start clashing)
Valt: Heroic Sword!!
(Valtryek starts pushing against Helios, Helios gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Hikaru: *Gasps*
Me: it’s Valt Aoi with a ring-out finish!! Spryzen and Valtryek win the tag battle!
Hikaru/Hyuga: *Panting*
Valt: That was really fun!
Hikaru: Amazing!
Hyuga: I broke my limits!
(Hyuga falls asleep)
Hikaru: Are you kidding me?!
All: *Laughs*
this chapter was good! my favorite part was when helios' gimmick activated and then he clashed with valtryek
I'm glad you guys enjoyed it!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Name Contest) - GenesisBlader - Jul. 08, 2021
(Jul. 08, 2021 7:36 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 08, 2021 7:36 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: Fave part: When Helios talks to Hikaru and when Hyperion talks to Hyuga.
(Jul. 08, 2021 7:36 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: this chapter was good! my favorite part was when helios' gimmick activated and then he clashed with valtryek
I'm glad you guys enjoyed it!
yeah it was pretty awesome, now ima go post an episode on my fanfic
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Name Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jul. 08, 2021
17) Spryzen Vs Spryzen!!!
18) Evil Ruler!! Vile Overlord!!
19) Protectors Of The Sun!! Aether Helios and Combust Hyperion!!!
20) Junior World Championships!!!
21) Roaring Dragon!! Wicked Balkesh!!
22) Flames from within!! Flare Salamander!!!
23) Shark Attack!! Monarch Forneus!!
24) Rampaging Dragon!! Rampage Luinor!!
25) Rootin For The Enemy!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Name Contest) - LegendJustice - Jul. 08, 2021
(Jul. 08, 2021 8:54 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: 17) Spryzen Vs Spryzen!!!
18) Evil Ruler!! Vile Overlord!!
19) Protectors Of The Sun!! Aether Helios and Combust Hyperion!!!
20) Junior World Championships!!!
21) Roaring Dragon!! Wicked Balkesh!!
22) Flames from within!! Flare Salamander!!!
23) Shark Attack!! Monarch Forneus!!
24) Rampaging Dragon!! Rampage Luinor!!
25) Rootin For The Enemy!!
Great Work!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Name Contest) - TylerOfChaos - Jul. 08, 2021
Blader: Ryan Evenos
Persona: cocky
Age: 11
Appearance: Messy, Spiky, Black and Purple hair, 4'7
Bey: Tenebris Reaper (attack type, counterclockwise rotation, 2 bladed, chassis 3a (rage longinus chassis)
(Jul. 08, 2021 8:54 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: 17) Spryzen Vs Spryzen!!!
18) Evil Ruler!! Vile Overlord!!
19) Protectors Of The Sun!! Aether Helios and Combust Hyperion!!!
20) Junior World Championships!!!
21) Roaring Dragon!! Wicked Balkesh!!
22) Flames from within!! Flare Salamander!!!
23) Shark Attack!! Monarch Forneus!!
24) Rampaging Dragon!! Rampage Luinor!!
25) Rootin For The Enemy!! wow bro i actually made an aether helios lol. one of its moves is Swirling Aether
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Name Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jul. 08, 2021
(Jul. 08, 2021 9:39 PM)TylerOfChaos Wrote: Blader: Ryan Evenos
Persona: cocky
Age: 11
Appearance: Messy, Spiky, Black and Purple hair, 4'7
Bey: Tenebris Reaper (attack type, counterclockwise rotation, 2 bladed, chassis 3a (rage longinus chassis)
(Jul. 08, 2021 8:54 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: 17) Spryzen Vs Spryzen!!!
18) Evil Ruler!! Vile Overlord!!
19) Protectors Of The Sun!! Aether Helios and Combust Hyperion!!!
20) Junior World Championships!!!
21) Roaring Dragon!! Wicked Balkesh!!
22) Flames from within!! Flare Salamander!!!
23) Shark Attack!! Monarch Forneus!!
24) Rampaging Dragon!! Rampage Luinor!!
25) Rootin For The Enemy!! wow bro i actually made an aether helios lol. one of its moves is Swirling Aether
Srry Ty but currently I'm not having any character contests
Chapter 20 is out!!
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 20
Junior World Championships!!!
~In America’s Arena~
Receptionist: Perseus Nakano, Pam Hope, Aiden Kusaba, and Raina Reinhart! You are all registered for the tournament!!
Me/Aiden/Raina/Pam: Awesome!!
Valt: You guys better win!
Me: Don’t worry I will!!
(Oribe walks up to the Receptionist)
Oribe: Sign me up.
Receptionist: I’ll need your first and last name!
Oribe: Oribe Abiko.
Receptionist: I’ll need you to put your bey logger here.
(Oribe places his Bey Logger on the machine)
Receptionist: Thank you! We look forward to--
(Oribe walks away)
Receptionist: How rude! Hmp!
Shu: (Something seems different about him).
Pam: Shu? Did you say something?
Shu: Nothing.
(We head back to the Raging Bulls)
Shu: How about we do some practice?
Me: Sure!
Pam: I’m going first!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Pam/Robot: Let it rip!!
Pam: Take the center! Pegasus!!
(Pegasus locks down the center, The Robot’s bey starts attacking)
Shu (Thoughts): Wow, he's a master of defending while keeping her stamina in check, Pegasus is a strong bey!
(The Robot’s bey sends Pegasus flying up the slope)
Pam: Peaceful Thunder!!
(Pegasus counterstrikes, The robot’s bey gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Pam: Well alright!
Hikaru: I want a shot at this!!
Shu: Give it a go.
All: 3! 2! 1!
Hikaru/Robot: Let it rip!!
(The Robot’s bey takes the center, Helios starts attacking)
Hikaru: Take ‘em down! Helios!!
(Helios’ flare blazes wildly, Helios speeds up and knocks it out of the stadium)
Hikaru: Oh yeah!!
Hyuga: I wanna kablam them out of there!!
Raina: Um, they do realize we're the ones battling, right?
Valt: A little practice doesn't hurt anyone!
(My stomach growls)
Me: Sorry, I haven’t eaten in a while.
Valt: You should try Shu’s spaghetti!!
Raina: Shu makes spaghetti?
Valt: Yup, it’s the best thing in the world!!
Shu: I wouldn’t say best.
Me: I wanna try some!
Shu: I guess I’ll start making some.
~In The Cafeteria 15 minutes later~
(Shu comes out of the kitchen with a big plate of spaghetti and places it on the table)
Valt: This is gonna be good!!
(We all put some spaghetti on our plates)
Me: Let’s dive in!
(We slowly put the fork in our mouths, the whole room goes silent)
Shu: So?
All (Except Shu): It’s so good!!
Hyuga: This is the best spaghetti ever!!
Hikaru: I think Dad would be upset if he heard that!
(Hyuga falls asleep)
Hikaru: I can’t believe it, he liked it so much he fell asleep!
Valt: This tastes better than ever!!
~10 Minutes Later~
Raina: That was the best thing I’ve ever eaten!
Pam: That’s an understatement.
Aiden: I never wanna eat anything else again!
Me: I could live off this!
(Shu smiles)
Shu: Glad you liked it!
(Hyuga holds Hyperion up in the air)
Hyuga: Who wants to battle!!
(I glance at Hyperion’s driver)
Me: *Gasps*
(I run out of the cafeteria)
Valt: What’s up with him?
Aiden: It looks like he just had an idea.
(I run into the workroom)
Me: I can evolve Poseidon’s driver!
Poseidon: Can you now?
(Poseidon pulls me into a white void)
Me: With your new evolution you’ll be able to speed up like crazy!!
Poseidon: Wise decision!
(I get pulled out of the void)
Me: Let’s get started!
(I start working on the part)
Valt: I made some Beybread!
(Valt puts it to my side, I grab one and put it in my mouth as I work)
Me (Muffled): Thanks.
~1 hour later~
Me: It’s done!!
(I hold up the part)
Aiden: You’ve finally finished?
Me: Yup, this is the Accelerate Part!!
(I attach it to Poseidon)
Raina: Wow, this part looks amazing!
Pam: What does it do?
Me: It stops it from free spinning but makes it faster!!
Pam: Sweet!
Me: Raina! Wanna battle?
Raina: thought you’d never ask!
(Shu comes up)
Shu: I guess I’ll judge.
Me: Ok, thanks, Shu!
Shu: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Raina: Let it rip!!
Me: Flood Launch!!
(Poseidon hits Ridley with a quick barrage of attacks)
Raina: Pirate Launch!!
(Ridley starts picking up speed and countering all Poseidon’s attacks)
Me: Hydro Jet!!
(Poseidon leans on its driver, Poseidon starts picking up a lot of speed, Ridley gets sent flying)
Raina: RIDLEY!!!
(Raina’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Raina: Pirate Rush!!
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
(Poseidon and Ridley speed up, Poseidon and Ridley start clashing, the whole stadium blows up)
Me: Burst it!!
(Both beys get shot up in the air, Ridley bursts)
Raina: *Gasps*
Shu: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a burst finish!! The winner is Perseus Nakano!!
Me: Can I get a boo ya!!
Shu (Thoughts): Hydro Poseidon is a strong bey, I’ll have to keep evolving to keep up with it!
~The Next Day~
Hanami: Hello all you bladers!! Today we’ll be starting the ultimate Junior World Championships!! Today the very few 16 competitors we have will be battling it out to go out to the world stage with our legendary bladers!! We’ll be starting our first round in A group very soon!!
Me: I’m in A Group! What group are you guys in?
Pam: I’m in A Group as well!!
Adam: I’m in B Group!!
Raina: So am I! Get ready to lose Aiden!
Aiden: Hah, in your dreams!
Pam: You’re going down Hydro King!
Me: You can dream!
(The first match is… Ben Aoki Vs Perseus Nakano)
Aiden: We’ll be cheering for you buddy!
Me: Thanks, but I’ll win anyway!
(I walk up to the stage)
Hanami: And there he is!! Running his way to his first match!!
Ben: Ready to lose kid?
Me: You should be asking yourself that question!
Referee: First battle! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Ben: Let it rip!!
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
(Poseidon bursts Ben’s bey)
Ben: No way!!
Referee: Hydro Poseidon claims 2 points with a burst finish!! Perseus Nakano wins with a score of 2-0!!
Hanami: Hydro Poseidon a bey we barely know about just burst the daylights out of Ben’s bey!!
Me: I’m gonna keep bursting beys!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Name Contest) - LegendJustice - Jul. 08, 2021
(Jul. 08, 2021 9:43 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 08, 2021 9:39 PM)TylerOfChaos Wrote: Blader: Ryan Evenos
Persona: cocky
Age: 11
Appearance: Messy, Spiky, Black and Purple hair, 4'7
Bey: Tenebris Reaper (attack type, counterclockwise rotation, 2 bladed, chassis 3a (rage longinus chassis)
wow bro i actually made an aether helios lol. one of its moves is Swirling Aether
Srry Ty but currently I'm not having any character contests
Chapter 20 is out!!
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 20
Junior World Championships!!!
~In America’s Arena~
Receptionist: Perseus Nakano, Pam Hope, Aiden Kusaba, and Raina Reinhart! You are all registered for the tournament!!
Me/Aiden/Raina/Pam: Awesome!!
Valt: You guys better win!
Me: Don’t worry I will!!
(Oribe walks up to the Receptionist)
Oribe: Sign me up.
Receptionist: I’ll need your first and last name!
Oribe: Oribe Abiko.
Receptionist: I’ll need you to put your bey logger here.
(Oribe places his Bey Logger on the machine)
Receptionist: Thank you! We look forward to--
(Oribe walks away)
Receptionist: How rude! Hmp!
Shu: (Something seems different about him).
Pam: Shu? Did you say something?
Shu: Nothing.
(We head back to the Raging Bulls)
Shu: How about we do some practice?
Me: Sure!
Pam: I’m going first!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Pam/Robot: Let it rip!!
Pam: Take the center! Pegasus!!
(Pegasus locks down the center, The Robot’s bey starts attacking)
Shu (Thoughts): Wow, he's a master of defending while keeping her stamina in check, Pegasus is a strong bey!
(The Robot’s bey sends Pegasus flying up the slope)
Pam: Peaceful Thunder!!
(Pegasus counterstrikes, The robot’s bey gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Pam: Well alright!
Hikaru: I want a shot at this!!
Shu: Give it a go.
All: 3! 2! 1!
Hikaru/Robot: Let it rip!!
(The Robot’s bey takes the center, Helios starts attacking)
Hikaru: Take ‘em down! Helios!!
(Helios’ flare blazes wildly, Helios speeds up and knocks it out of the stadium)
Hikaru: Oh yeah!!
Hyuga: I wanna kablam them out of there!!
Raina: Um, they do realize we're the ones battling, right?
Valt: A little practice doesn't hurt anyone!
(My stomach growls)
Me: Sorry, I haven’t eaten in a while.
Valt: You should try Shu’s spaghetti!!
Raina: Shu makes spaghetti?
Valt: Yup, it’s the best thing in the world!!
Shu: I wouldn’t say best.
Me: I wanna try some!
Shu: I guess I’ll start making some.
~In The Cafeteria 15 minutes later~
(Shu comes out of the kitchen with a big plate of spaghetti and places it on the table)
Valt: This is gonna be good!!
(We all put some spaghetti on our plates)
Me: Let’s dive in!
(We slowly put the fork in our mouths, the whole room goes silent)
Shu: So?
All (Except Shu): It’s so good!!
Hyuga: This is the best spaghetti ever!!
Hikaru: I think Dad would be upset if he heard that!
(Hyuga falls asleep)
Hikaru: I can’t believe it, he liked it so much he fell asleep!
Valt: This tastes better than ever!!
~10 Minutes Later~
Raina: That was the best thing I’ve ever eaten!
Pam: That’s an understatement.
Aiden: I never wanna eat anything else again!
Me: I could live off this!
(Shu smiles)
Shu: Glad you liked it!
(Hyuga holds Hyperion up in the air)
Hyuga: Who wants to battle!!
(I glance at Hyperion’s driver)
Me: *Gasps*
(I run out of the cafeteria)
Valt: What’s up with him?
Aiden: It looks like he just had an idea.
(I run into the workroom)
Me: I can evolve Poseidon’s driver!
Poseidon: Can you now?
(Poseidon pulls me into a white void)
Me: With your new evolution you’ll be able to speed up like crazy!!
Poseidon: Wise decision!
(I get pulled out of the void)
Me: Let’s get started!
(I start working on the part)
Valt: I made some Beybread!
(Valt puts it to my side, I grab one and put it in my mouth as I work)
Me (Muffled): Thanks.
~1 hour later~
Me: It’s done!!
(I hold up the part)
Aiden: You’ve finally finished?
Me: Yup, this is the Accelerate Part!!
(I attach it to Poseidon)
Raina: Wow, this part looks amazing!
Pam: What does it do?
Me: It stops it from free spinning but makes it faster!!
Pam: Sweet!
Me: Raina! Wanna battle?
Raina: thought you’d never ask!
(Shu comes up)
Shu: I guess I’ll judge.
Me: Ok, thanks, Shu!
Shu: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Raina: Let it rip!!
Me: Flood Launch!!
(Poseidon hits Ridley with a quick barrage of attacks)
Raina: Pirate Launch!!
(Ridley starts picking up speed and countering all Poseidon’s attacks)
Me: Hydro Jet!!
(Poseidon leans on its driver, Poseidon starts picking up a lot of speed, Ridley gets sent flying)
Raina: RIDLEY!!!
(Raina’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Raina: Pirate Rush!!
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
(Poseidon and Ridley speed up, Poseidon and Ridley start clashing, the whole stadium blows up)
Me: Burst it!!
(Both beys get shot up in the air, Ridley bursts)
Raina: *Gasps*
Shu: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a burst finish!! The winner is Perseus Nakano!!
Me: Can I get a boo ya!!
Shu (Thoughts): Hydro Poseidon is a strong bey, I’ll have to keep evolving to keep up with it!
~The Next Day~
Hanami: Hello all you bladers!! Today we’ll be starting the ultimate Junior World Championships!! Today the very few 16 competitors we have will be battling it out to go out to the world stage with our legendary bladers!! We’ll be starting our first round in A group very soon!!
Me: I’m in A Group! What group are you guys in?
Pam: I’m in A Group as well!!
Adam: I’m in B Group!!
Raina: So am I! Get ready to lose Aiden!
Aiden: Hah, in your dreams!
Pam: You’re going down Hydro King!
Me: You can dream!
(The first match is… Ben Aoki Vs Perseus Nakano)
Aiden: We’ll be cheering for you buddy!
Me: Thanks, but I’ll win anyway!
(I walk up to the stage)
Hanami: And there he is!! Running his way to his first match!!
Ben: Ready to lose kid?
Me: You should be asking yourself that question!
Referee: First battle! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Ben: Let it rip!!
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
(Poseidon bursts Ben’s bey)
Ben: No way!!
Referee: Hydro Poseidon claims 2 points with a burst finish!! Perseus Nakano wins with a score of 2-0!!
Hanami: Hydro Poseidon a bey we barely know about just burst the daylights out of Ben’s bey!!
Me: I’m gonna keep bursting beys!!
Nice! I'll rate in a while I'm on MK chat!?
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Name Contest) - GenesisBlader - Jul. 08, 2021
i'll rate
Characters: 5/5 - You expressed the characters so well, I was able to fully understand their motives! Greatness!
Grammar: 5/5 - really?
Writing: 4/5 - It's great (but in my perspective some stuff looks a (bit) jumbled up) but only some stuff. Nice!
Length: 4/5 - This chapter wasn't your longest chapter, but definitely wasn't your shortest. Great job!
Plot: 5/5 - I understand how to plot progresses throughout the story very well. Awesome!
All 'n All (Total): 23/25 - Great job with this chapter, and keep on improving!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Name Contest) - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 08, 2021
(Jul. 08, 2021 9:43 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 08, 2021 9:39 PM)TylerOfChaos Wrote: Blader: Ryan Evenos
Persona: cocky
Age: 11
Appearance: Messy, Spiky, Black and Purple hair, 4'7
Bey: Tenebris Reaper (attack type, counterclockwise rotation, 2 bladed, chassis 3a (rage longinus chassis)
wow bro i actually made an aether helios lol. one of its moves is Swirling Aether
Srry Ty but currently I'm not having any character contests
Chapter 20 is out!!
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 20
Junior World Championships!!!
~In America’s Arena~
Receptionist: Perseus Nakano, Pam Hope, Aiden Kusaba, and Raina Reinhart! You are all registered for the tournament!!
Me/Aiden/Raina/Pam: Awesome!!
Valt: You guys better win!
Me: Don’t worry I will!!
(Oribe walks up to the Receptionist)
Oribe: Sign me up.
Receptionist: I’ll need your first and last name!
Oribe: Oribe Abiko.
Receptionist: I’ll need you to put your bey logger here.
(Oribe places his Bey Logger on the machine)
Receptionist: Thank you! We look forward to--
(Oribe walks away)
Receptionist: How rude! Hmp!
Shu: (Something seems different about him).
Pam: Shu? Did you say something?
Shu: Nothing.
(We head back to the Raging Bulls)
Shu: How about we do some practice?
Me: Sure!
Pam: I’m going first!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Pam/Robot: Let it rip!!
Pam: Take the center! Pegasus!!
(Pegasus locks down the center, The Robot’s bey starts attacking)
Shu (Thoughts): Wow, he's a master of defending while keeping her stamina in check, Pegasus is a strong bey!
(The Robot’s bey sends Pegasus flying up the slope)
Pam: Peaceful Thunder!!
(Pegasus counterstrikes, The robot’s bey gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Pam: Well alright!
Hikaru: I want a shot at this!!
Shu: Give it a go.
All: 3! 2! 1!
Hikaru/Robot: Let it rip!!
(The Robot’s bey takes the center, Helios starts attacking)
Hikaru: Take ‘em down! Helios!!
(Helios’ flare blazes wildly, Helios speeds up and knocks it out of the stadium)
Hikaru: Oh yeah!!
Hyuga: I wanna kablam them out of there!!
Raina: Um, they do realize we're the ones battling, right?
Valt: A little practice doesn't hurt anyone!
(My stomach growls)
Me: Sorry, I haven’t eaten in a while.
Valt: You should try Shu’s spaghetti!!
Raina: Shu makes spaghetti?
Valt: Yup, it’s the best thing in the world!!
Shu: I wouldn’t say best.
Me: I wanna try some!
Shu: I guess I’ll start making some.
~In The Cafeteria 15 minutes later~
(Shu comes out of the kitchen with a big plate of spaghetti and places it on the table)
Valt: This is gonna be good!!
(We all put some spaghetti on our plates)
Me: Let’s dive in!
(We slowly put the fork in our mouths, the whole room goes silent)
Shu: So?
All (Except Shu): It’s so good!!
Hyuga: This is the best spaghetti ever!!
Hikaru: I think Dad would be upset if he heard that!
(Hyuga falls asleep)
Hikaru: I can’t believe it, he liked it so much he fell asleep!
Valt: This tastes better than ever!!
~10 Minutes Later~
Raina: That was the best thing I’ve ever eaten!
Pam: That’s an understatement.
Aiden: I never wanna eat anything else again!
Me: I could live off this!
(Shu smiles)
Shu: Glad you liked it!
(Hyuga holds Hyperion up in the air)
Hyuga: Who wants to battle!!
(I glance at Hyperion’s driver)
Me: *Gasps*
(I run out of the cafeteria)
Valt: What’s up with him?
Aiden: It looks like he just had an idea.
(I run into the workroom)
Me: I can evolve Poseidon’s driver!
Poseidon: Can you now?
(Poseidon pulls me into a white void)
Me: With your new evolution you’ll be able to speed up like crazy!!
Poseidon: Wise decision!
(I get pulled out of the void)
Me: Let’s get started!
(I start working on the part)
Valt: I made some Beybread!
(Valt puts it to my side, I grab one and put it in my mouth as I work)
Me (Muffled): Thanks.
~1 hour later~
Me: It’s done!!
(I hold up the part)
Aiden: You’ve finally finished?
Me: Yup, this is the Accelerate Part!!
(I attach it to Poseidon)
Raina: Wow, this part looks amazing!
Pam: What does it do?
Me: It stops it from free spinning but makes it faster!!
Pam: Sweet!
Me: Raina! Wanna battle?
Raina: thought you’d never ask!
(Shu comes up)
Shu: I guess I’ll judge.
Me: Ok, thanks, Shu!
Shu: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Raina: Let it rip!!
Me: Flood Launch!!
(Poseidon hits Ridley with a quick barrage of attacks)
Raina: Pirate Launch!!
(Ridley starts picking up speed and countering all Poseidon’s attacks)
Me: Hydro Jet!!
(Poseidon leans on its driver, Poseidon starts picking up a lot of speed, Ridley gets sent flying)
Raina: RIDLEY!!!
(Raina’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Raina: Pirate Rush!!
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
(Poseidon and Ridley speed up, Poseidon and Ridley start clashing, the whole stadium blows up)
Me: Burst it!!
(Both beys get shot up in the air, Ridley bursts)
Raina: *Gasps*
Shu: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a burst finish!! The winner is Perseus Nakano!!
Me: Can I get a boo ya!!
Shu (Thoughts): Hydro Poseidon is a strong bey, I’ll have to keep evolving to keep up with it!
~The Next Day~
Hanami: Hello all you bladers!! Today we’ll be starting the ultimate Junior World Championships!! Today the very few 16 competitors we have will be battling it out to go out to the world stage with our legendary bladers!! We’ll be starting our first round in A group very soon!!
Me: I’m in A Group! What group are you guys in?
Pam: I’m in A Group as well!!
Adam: I’m in B Group!!
Raina: So am I! Get ready to lose Aiden!
Aiden: Hah, in your dreams!
Pam: You’re going down Hydro King!
Me: You can dream!
(The first match is… Ben Aoki Vs Perseus Nakano)
Aiden: We’ll be cheering for you buddy!
Me: Thanks, but I’ll win anyway!
(I walk up to the stage)
Hanami: And there he is!! Running his way to his first match!!
Ben: Ready to lose kid?
Me: You should be asking yourself that question!
Referee: First battle! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Ben: Let it rip!!
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
(Poseidon bursts Ben’s bey)
Ben: No way!!
Referee: Hydro Poseidon claims 2 points with a burst finish!! Perseus Nakano wins with a score of 2-0!!
Hanami: Hydro Poseidon a bey we barely know about just burst the daylights out of Ben’s bey!!
Me: I’m gonna keep bursting beys!! Nice chapter, nothing too much, just an attachment for the driver and the first battle, but still nice
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Name Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jul. 08, 2021
(Jul. 08, 2021 11:01 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Jul. 08, 2021 9:43 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Srry Ty but currently I'm not having any character contests
Chapter 20 is out!!
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 20
Junior World Championships!!!
~In America’s Arena~
Receptionist: Perseus Nakano, Pam Hope, Aiden Kusaba, and Raina Reinhart! You are all registered for the tournament!!
Me/Aiden/Raina/Pam: Awesome!!
Valt: You guys better win!
Me: Don’t worry I will!!
(Oribe walks up to the Receptionist)
Oribe: Sign me up.
Receptionist: I’ll need your first and last name!
Oribe: Oribe Abiko.
Receptionist: I’ll need you to put your bey logger here.
(Oribe places his Bey Logger on the machine)
Receptionist: Thank you! We look forward to--
(Oribe walks away)
Receptionist: How rude! Hmp!
Shu: (Something seems different about him).
Pam: Shu? Did you say something?
Shu: Nothing.
(We head back to the Raging Bulls)
Shu: How about we do some practice?
Me: Sure!
Pam: I’m going first!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Pam/Robot: Let it rip!!
Pam: Take the center! Pegasus!!
(Pegasus locks down the center, The Robot’s bey starts attacking)
Shu (Thoughts): Wow, he's a master of defending while keeping her stamina in check, Pegasus is a strong bey!
(The Robot’s bey sends Pegasus flying up the slope)
Pam: Peaceful Thunder!!
(Pegasus counterstrikes, The robot’s bey gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Pam: Well alright!
Hikaru: I want a shot at this!!
Shu: Give it a go.
All: 3! 2! 1!
Hikaru/Robot: Let it rip!!
(The Robot’s bey takes the center, Helios starts attacking)
Hikaru: Take ‘em down! Helios!!
(Helios’ flare blazes wildly, Helios speeds up and knocks it out of the stadium)
Hikaru: Oh yeah!!
Hyuga: I wanna kablam them out of there!!
Raina: Um, they do realize we're the ones battling, right?
Valt: A little practice doesn't hurt anyone!
(My stomach growls)
Me: Sorry, I haven’t eaten in a while.
Valt: You should try Shu’s spaghetti!!
Raina: Shu makes spaghetti?
Valt: Yup, it’s the best thing in the world!!
Shu: I wouldn’t say best.
Me: I wanna try some!
Shu: I guess I’ll start making some.
~In The Cafeteria 15 minutes later~
(Shu comes out of the kitchen with a big plate of spaghetti and places it on the table)
Valt: This is gonna be good!!
(We all put some spaghetti on our plates)
Me: Let’s dive in!
(We slowly put the fork in our mouths, the whole room goes silent)
Shu: So?
All (Except Shu): It’s so good!!
Hyuga: This is the best spaghetti ever!!
Hikaru: I think Dad would be upset if he heard that!
(Hyuga falls asleep)
Hikaru: I can’t believe it, he liked it so much he fell asleep!
Valt: This tastes better than ever!!
~10 Minutes Later~
Raina: That was the best thing I’ve ever eaten!
Pam: That’s an understatement.
Aiden: I never wanna eat anything else again!
Me: I could live off this!
(Shu smiles)
Shu: Glad you liked it!
(Hyuga holds Hyperion up in the air)
Hyuga: Who wants to battle!!
(I glance at Hyperion’s driver)
Me: *Gasps*
(I run out of the cafeteria)
Valt: What’s up with him?
Aiden: It looks like he just had an idea.
(I run into the workroom)
Me: I can evolve Poseidon’s driver!
Poseidon: Can you now?
(Poseidon pulls me into a white void)
Me: With your new evolution you’ll be able to speed up like crazy!!
Poseidon: Wise decision!
(I get pulled out of the void)
Me: Let’s get started!
(I start working on the part)
Valt: I made some Beybread!
(Valt puts it to my side, I grab one and put it in my mouth as I work)
Me (Muffled): Thanks.
~1 hour later~
Me: It’s done!!
(I hold up the part)
Aiden: You’ve finally finished?
Me: Yup, this is the Accelerate Part!!
(I attach it to Poseidon)
Raina: Wow, this part looks amazing!
Pam: What does it do?
Me: It stops it from free spinning but makes it faster!!
Pam: Sweet!
Me: Raina! Wanna battle?
Raina: thought you’d never ask!
(Shu comes up)
Shu: I guess I’ll judge.
Me: Ok, thanks, Shu!
Shu: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Raina: Let it rip!!
Me: Flood Launch!!
(Poseidon hits Ridley with a quick barrage of attacks)
Raina: Pirate Launch!!
(Ridley starts picking up speed and countering all Poseidon’s attacks)
Me: Hydro Jet!!
(Poseidon leans on its driver, Poseidon starts picking up a lot of speed, Ridley gets sent flying)
Raina: RIDLEY!!!
(Raina’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Raina: Pirate Rush!!
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
(Poseidon and Ridley speed up, Poseidon and Ridley start clashing, the whole stadium blows up)
Me: Burst it!!
(Both beys get shot up in the air, Ridley bursts)
Raina: *Gasps*
Shu: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a burst finish!! The winner is Perseus Nakano!!
Me: Can I get a boo ya!!
Shu (Thoughts): Hydro Poseidon is a strong bey, I’ll have to keep evolving to keep up with it!
~The Next Day~
Hanami: Hello all you bladers!! Today we’ll be starting the ultimate Junior World Championships!! Today the very few 16 competitors we have will be battling it out to go out to the world stage with our legendary bladers!! We’ll be starting our first round in A group very soon!!
Me: I’m in A Group! What group are you guys in?
Pam: I’m in A Group as well!!
Adam: I’m in B Group!!
Raina: So am I! Get ready to lose Aiden!
Aiden: Hah, in your dreams!
Pam: You’re going down Hydro King!
Me: You can dream!
(The first match is… Ben Aoki Vs Perseus Nakano)
Aiden: We’ll be cheering for you buddy!
Me: Thanks, but I’ll win anyway!
(I walk up to the stage)
Hanami: And there he is!! Running his way to his first match!!
Ben: Ready to lose kid?
Me: You should be asking yourself that question!
Referee: First battle! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Ben: Let it rip!!
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
(Poseidon bursts Ben’s bey)
Ben: No way!!
Referee: Hydro Poseidon claims 2 points with a burst finish!! Perseus Nakano wins with a score of 2-0!!
Hanami: Hydro Poseidon a bey we barely know about just burst the daylights out of Ben’s bey!!
Me: I’m gonna keep bursting beys!! Nice chapter, nothing too much, just an attachment for the driver and the first battle, but still nice
Thanks, it was supposed to be one of those filer episodes if you get what I'm saying where nothing too important happens
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