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RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Jul. 06, 2021

(Jul. 06, 2021  9:57 PM)USN Wrote:
(Jul. 03, 2021  5:54 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: The Winners Of The Beyjitzu Character Contest are...

2nd @"Hollowmind8"!!

1st USN!!

Thank you all for joining my character contest and I hope there are no hard feelings!!

Sorry I missed it! I have been on vacation so I just haven't been here for a while. I'll get to reading the newest parts in a bit!

Hope you had a good vacation must have been longer than mine!


RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 06, 2021

17) Spryzen Vs Spryzen!!!

18) Evil Ruler!! Vile Overlord!!

19) Protectors Of The Sun!! Aether Helios and Combust Hyperion!!!

20) Junior World Championships!!!

21) Roaring Dragon!! Wicked Balkesh!!

22) Flames from within!! Flare Salamander!!!

23) The Rampaging Dragon!! Rampage Luinor!!!


RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Jul. 07, 2021

Nice! I look forward to these chapters!


RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 07, 2021

Chapter 17 is out



RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Jul. 07, 2021

this was a great chapter since only busy I will rate it

Length: 4/5 it's was 5 words away from being your usual chapters!

Dialogue: 5/5 I don't know what to say!

Characters: 5/5 You did great on being them alive!

Grammar: 4/5 I notice 2 mistakes

Over all 19/20 Great chapter!


RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 07, 2021

(Jul. 07, 2021  2:59 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: this was a great chapter since only busy I will rate it

Length: 4/5 it's was 5 words away from being your usual chapters!

Dialogue: 5/5 I don't know what to say!

Characters: 5/5 You did great on being them alive!

Grammar: 4/5 I notice 2 mistakes

Over all 19/20 Great chapter!

Thx, I'm glad you enjoyed it


RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Jul. 07, 2021

(Jul. 07, 2021  3:00 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 07, 2021  2:59 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: this was a great chapter since only busy I will rate it

Length: 4/5 it's was 5 words away from being your usual chapters!

Dialogue: 5/5 I don't know what to say!

Characters: 5/5 You did great on being them alive!

Grammar: 4/5 I notice 2 mistakes

Over all 19/20 Great chapter!

Thx, I'm glad you enjoyed it
No problem, Now I have to go rate myself lol


RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 07, 2021

Chapter 18 is out!!
(This is not relevant to the plot)

Me: Happy Birthday #Fafnir!!

(Raina and the gang throw confetti in the air)

Aiden: We hope you have a happy birthday :)

(I'll be doing this for all birthdays so if you want me to just ask, Happy Birthday #Fafnir


RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Jul. 07, 2021

Great chapter!


RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 07, 2021

(Jul. 07, 2021  5:11 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Great chapter!

Thx ;0


RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 07, 2021

(Jul. 07, 2021  5:04 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 18 is out!!
(This is not relevant to the plot)

Me: Happy Birthday "#Fafnir"!!

(Raina and the gang throw confetti in the air)

Aiden: We hope you have a happy birthday Smile

(I'll be doing this for all birthdays so if you want me to just ask, Happy Birthday #Fafnir
It's looks relevant for me. Because he is basically a Requiem 2


RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 07, 2021

(Jul. 07, 2021  10:11 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
(Jul. 07, 2021  5:04 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 18 is out!!
(This is not relevant to the plot)

Me: Happy Birthday "#Fafnir"!!

(Raina and the gang throw confetti in the air)

Aiden: We hope you have a happy birthday Smile

(I'll be doing this for all birthdays so if you want me to just ask, Happy Birthday #Fafnir
It's looks relevant for me. Because he is basically a Requiem 2

What I meant was the birthday stuff wasn't relevant to the plot


RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Jul. 07, 2021

(Jul. 07, 2021  5:04 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 18 is out!!
(This is not relevant to the plot)

Me: Happy Birthday "#Fafnir"!!

(Raina and the gang throw confetti in the air)

Aiden: We hope you have a happy birthday Smile

(I'll be doing this for all birthdays so if you want me to just ask, Happy Birthday #Fafnir
nice job!


RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 07, 2021

(Jul. 07, 2021  10:29 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:
(Jul. 07, 2021  5:04 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 18 is out!!
(This is not relevant to the plot)

Me: Happy Birthday "#Fafnir"!!

(Raina and the gang throw confetti in the air)

Aiden: We hope you have a happy birthday Smile

(I'll be doing this for all birthdays so if you want me to just ask, Happy Birthday #Fafnir
nice job!

Thx #EvilOribe


RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Jul. 07, 2021

(Jul. 07, 2021  10:39 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 07, 2021  10:29 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: nice job!

Thx #EvilOribe

lol wait no-



RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 07, 2021

(Jul. 07, 2021  10:45 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:
(Jul. 07, 2021  10:39 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Thx #EvilOribe

lol wait no-

Nope, Raina's part of the Main Cast I'm also trying to give Valt some more time in the spotlight because I feel like he's kinda getting forgotten in these past seasons


RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Jul. 07, 2021

(Jul. 07, 2021  10:51 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 07, 2021  10:45 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: lol wait no-

Nope, Raina's part of the Main Cast I'm also trying to give Valt some more time in the spotlight because I feel like he's kinda getting forgotten in these past seasons

same thats why i give valt cameos throughout the season, it just feels like he's a supporting character rather than a real legend


RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Jul. 07, 2021

Now I see Maybe I should just being Valt back for good


RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Jul. 07, 2021

*sigh* i thought a vile overlord was actually coming and not the beyblade


RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 08, 2021

(Jul. 07, 2021  11:52 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: *sigh* i thought a vile overlord was actually coming and not the beyblade

Oh trust me, Vile Overlord will be a real Vile Overlord!


RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Jul. 08, 2021

(Jul. 08, 2021  12:01 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 07, 2021  11:52 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: *sigh* i thought a vile overlord was actually coming and not the beyblade

Oh trust me, Vile Overlord will be a real Vile Overlord!

lol this'll be interesting


RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Name Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jul. 08, 2021

Hello everyone!! We're gonna do a name contest for Bejitzu Spryzen (Honestly because I'm stumped) If you have any good ideas please post them here


RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Name Contest) - LegendJustice - Jul. 08, 2021

My list:

Lock Spryzen

Raging Spryzen

Echo Spryze


RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Name Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jul. 08, 2021

(Jul. 08, 2021  4:26 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: My list:

Lock Spryzen

Raging Spryzen

Echo Spryze

Roktavor already stole the Raging name sooooo


RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Name Contest) - LegendJustice - Jul. 08, 2021

Forgotten Spryzen!!