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RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight - GenesisBlader - Oct. 08, 2021
(Oct. 04, 2021 12:30 AM)Lucha Burst Wrote:(Oct. 03, 2021 11:55 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Why is everyone copying me?! Lol XD
because wattpad
ah yes, wattpad
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight - Hollowmind13 - Oct. 08, 2021
(Oct. 08, 2021 5:14 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: Chapter 4 is now called
Tag Team! The Twin Heirs of BC Sol
Hollowmind8 you should probably be interested in this.
But I'm already interested
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight - LJ-Blader - Oct. 11, 2021
Chapter 3
The World Tour Begins! Trip to BC Sol!
Spoiler (Click to View)
On the way to the Aoi House hold
Vlain: I still can’t believe how awesome are battle was!
Percy: Yeah! What was that glowing though. Is that normal for this world?
Vlain: So you noticed it too! No, it is normally just the beys that glow, not us.
Valt: I saw it and it looked incredible! Vlain, you were colored in Valkyrie’s colors, and Percy was covered in stars! It reminded me of Hyper Flux! Or Flare!
The boys listen in amazement as Valt explains the past forms of resonance.
Percy: So it happens when you have a strong connection with your beyblade right? Well I was only able to use this new power after Pegasus knelt before me…
Vlain: I could only use it after Valkyrie knighted me!
Valt: So, each bey has its own way to show respect. Interesting. What should we call it?
Vlain: How about Hyper Flare!
Percy: Or Flare Flux!
Valt: Or how about something new?
The boys get pulled into the avatar world.
Vlain: Wow, Valkyrie!
Percy: Pegasus!
Valkyrie: This new power, it is a blader’s X Fury!
Pegasus: It is a powerful fusion between bey and blader.
Valkyrie: And can only be accessed by acceptance of each other.
In the real world
Vlain/Percy: X Fury! Ginx! Double Ginx!
The boys erupted in laughter.
Valt: *Thoughts* X Fury huh. This new type of resonance is like nothing else…
The group arrives home and the boys run to the back yard.
Percy: This time I will win!
Vlain: Not a chance!
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Vlain: I saw dad use a launch style once… what was it, oh yeah! Rush Shoot!
Valkyrie starts doing the classic Rush Shoot.
Percy: Pegasus! Star Jolt!
Pegasus starts moving in an infinity patterns the beys clashing at different intervals.
Vlain/Percy: Aaaaggggghhhhh! Att-
Valt: Are you two battling? Well I got a surprise for you guys!
Vlain: What is it? Is it a new stadium?
Percy: Or a new launcher?
Valt: No, but we are going to…
Vlain: Where!
Percy: Tell us!
Valt: Spain!
The boys cheer as they pick up their beyblades which have stopped spinning.
Valt: One of my old friends has asked if you two would come battle, you guys our in for a treat!
The boys get ready to go and then head to Spain. They arrive and are walking along the city streets.
Valt: Okay, you guys stay here. I am going to get some dinner.
Vlain: Okay Dad! Be quick though I am so excited!
Valt smiles as he walks off Percy and Vlain start to talk but then here the sound of a beyblade spinning.
Vlain: Do you here that…
Percy: It sounds like…
Both: A Beyblade!
The boys jump up from their seat and run to where the sound is coming from. They ran into a near by woods and see a stadium with a boy standing off to the side.
???: Oh hello their, my dad said I should expect guest soon.
Percy: And you are…
Freyr: Freyr De La Hoya, why? And why do you look familiar?
Vlain: I am Vlain Aoi and this is Percy Hagane, and probably because you saw us battle on tv.
Freyr: Right, right. You would be no match for Fafnir though.
Percy: *Growling* What did you say…
Freyr: I said you wouldn’t stand a chance against Fafnir.
Freyr smirks as he picks up Delusion Fafnir and shows it to them.
Vlain: Oh your on!
Percy: I’ll take him first!
Freyr: Nan, I fight both of you.
Vlain: Oh now your really asking for it.
Vlain and Percy move to the stadium and prepare themselves. Freyr changes something on his launcher.
All: Set!
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Fafnir barely wobbles off the launcher moving straight to the center of the stadium. Valkyrie and Perseus are headed that way too.
Vlain: Rush Shoot Valkyrie!
Percy: Pegasus! Hit him with Star Jolt!
Both beys head straight toward Fafnir but instead if stopping it’s spin it sped it up. Vlain then face palms.
Vlain: It is a left spin with lots of rubber, what was I thinking?
Percy: Wait, you mean people use left spins casually in your dimension? Because they don’t in mine!
Vlain: Yeah it’s pretty normal…
Freyr: Oh no, your beys ran out of spin.
Vlain: Oh course they did.
Percy: One more time! This time I will send you into orbit!
Freyr: Right. Just like last time.
All three pick up their beys.
Percy: *Thoughts* Now is time to show them upper mode!
Percy changes Pegasus to upper mode.
Vlain: Ready?
All: Set!
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Fafnir again wobbles to the center while the two attack types circle the stadium.
Percy: Star Jolt, Pegasus!
Vlain: Rush Shoot! Send Fafnir flying!
As the beyblades clash in the stadium Balt and Free stand over to the side.
Vlain: Valkyrie! Champion’s Bound!
Valkyrie hit the wall and went flying straight toward Fafnir.
Freyr: Fafnir, Dwindling Counter.
When Valkyrie hit Fafnir Valkyrie got sent flying out of the stadium.
Percy: Our turn Pegasus! Starlight Flight!
Percy enters his X Fury for a second then going back to normal Pegasus charges at Fafnir.
Freyr: What was that? Whatever. This is over. Fafnir. Delusion Claw!
Fafnir slashes Pegasus sending him flying.
Percy: So strong…
Vlain: This is the power of left spins.
Valt: Haha! Good battle! I was watching the whole time, but next time stay where I ask.
The boys smile sheepishly as Freyr and Free take them to BC Sol. At the gate a girl is waiting for them.
???: Took you long enough, I mean Satomb was getting antsy.
Valt: *Laughs* I bet I know who your dad is!
Vlain: I still can’t believe how awesome are battle was!
Percy: Yeah! What was that glowing though. Is that normal for this world?
Vlain: So you noticed it too! No, it is normally just the beys that glow, not us.
Valt: I saw it and it looked incredible! Vlain, you were colored in Valkyrie’s colors, and Percy was covered in stars! It reminded me of Hyper Flux! Or Flare!
The boys listen in amazement as Valt explains the past forms of resonance.
Percy: So it happens when you have a strong connection with your beyblade right? Well I was only able to use this new power after Pegasus knelt before me…
Vlain: I could only use it after Valkyrie knighted me!
Valt: So, each bey has its own way to show respect. Interesting. What should we call it?
Vlain: How about Hyper Flare!
Percy: Or Flare Flux!
Valt: Or how about something new?
The boys get pulled into the avatar world.
Vlain: Wow, Valkyrie!
Percy: Pegasus!
Valkyrie: This new power, it is a blader’s X Fury!
Pegasus: It is a powerful fusion between bey and blader.
Valkyrie: And can only be accessed by acceptance of each other.
In the real world
Vlain/Percy: X Fury! Ginx! Double Ginx!
The boys erupted in laughter.
Valt: *Thoughts* X Fury huh. This new type of resonance is like nothing else…
The group arrives home and the boys run to the back yard.
Percy: This time I will win!
Vlain: Not a chance!
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Vlain: I saw dad use a launch style once… what was it, oh yeah! Rush Shoot!
Valkyrie starts doing the classic Rush Shoot.
Percy: Pegasus! Star Jolt!
Pegasus starts moving in an infinity patterns the beys clashing at different intervals.
Vlain/Percy: Aaaaggggghhhhh! Att-
Valt: Are you two battling? Well I got a surprise for you guys!
Vlain: What is it? Is it a new stadium?
Percy: Or a new launcher?
Valt: No, but we are going to…
Vlain: Where!
Percy: Tell us!
Valt: Spain!
The boys cheer as they pick up their beyblades which have stopped spinning.
Valt: One of my old friends has asked if you two would come battle, you guys our in for a treat!
The boys get ready to go and then head to Spain. They arrive and are walking along the city streets.
Valt: Okay, you guys stay here. I am going to get some dinner.
Vlain: Okay Dad! Be quick though I am so excited!
Valt smiles as he walks off Percy and Vlain start to talk but then here the sound of a beyblade spinning.
Vlain: Do you here that…
Percy: It sounds like…
Both: A Beyblade!
The boys jump up from their seat and run to where the sound is coming from. They ran into a near by woods and see a stadium with a boy standing off to the side.
???: Oh hello their, my dad said I should expect guest soon.
Percy: And you are…
Freyr: Freyr De La Hoya, why? And why do you look familiar?
Vlain: I am Vlain Aoi and this is Percy Hagane, and probably because you saw us battle on tv.
Freyr: Right, right. You would be no match for Fafnir though.
Percy: *Growling* What did you say…
Freyr: I said you wouldn’t stand a chance against Fafnir.
Freyr smirks as he picks up Delusion Fafnir and shows it to them.
Vlain: Oh your on!
Percy: I’ll take him first!
Freyr: Nan, I fight both of you.
Vlain: Oh now your really asking for it.
Vlain and Percy move to the stadium and prepare themselves. Freyr changes something on his launcher.
All: Set!
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Fafnir barely wobbles off the launcher moving straight to the center of the stadium. Valkyrie and Perseus are headed that way too.
Vlain: Rush Shoot Valkyrie!
Percy: Pegasus! Hit him with Star Jolt!
Both beys head straight toward Fafnir but instead if stopping it’s spin it sped it up. Vlain then face palms.
Vlain: It is a left spin with lots of rubber, what was I thinking?
Percy: Wait, you mean people use left spins casually in your dimension? Because they don’t in mine!
Vlain: Yeah it’s pretty normal…
Freyr: Oh no, your beys ran out of spin.
Vlain: Oh course they did.
Percy: One more time! This time I will send you into orbit!
Freyr: Right. Just like last time.
All three pick up their beys.
Percy: *Thoughts* Now is time to show them upper mode!
Percy changes Pegasus to upper mode.
Vlain: Ready?
All: Set!
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Fafnir again wobbles to the center while the two attack types circle the stadium.
Percy: Star Jolt, Pegasus!
Vlain: Rush Shoot! Send Fafnir flying!
As the beyblades clash in the stadium Balt and Free stand over to the side.
Vlain: Valkyrie! Champion’s Bound!
Valkyrie hit the wall and went flying straight toward Fafnir.
Freyr: Fafnir, Dwindling Counter.
When Valkyrie hit Fafnir Valkyrie got sent flying out of the stadium.
Percy: Our turn Pegasus! Starlight Flight!
Percy enters his X Fury for a second then going back to normal Pegasus charges at Fafnir.
Freyr: What was that? Whatever. This is over. Fafnir. Delusion Claw!
Fafnir slashes Pegasus sending him flying.
Percy: So strong…
Vlain: This is the power of left spins.
Valt: Haha! Good battle! I was watching the whole time, but next time stay where I ask.
The boys smile sheepishly as Freyr and Free take them to BC Sol. At the gate a girl is waiting for them.
???: Took you long enough, I mean Satomb was getting antsy.
Valt: *Laughs* I bet I know who your dad is!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight - Hollowmind13 - Oct. 11, 2021
(Oct. 11, 2021 2:52 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: Chapter 3
The World Tour Begins! Trip to BC Sol!
Spoiler (Click to View)On the way to the Aoi House hold
Vlain: I still can’t believe how awesome are battle was!
Percy: Yeah! What was that glowing though. Is that normal for this world?
Vlain: So you noticed it too! No, it is normally just the beys that glow, not us.
Valt: I saw it and it looked incredible! Vlain, you were colored in Valkyrie’s colors, and Percy was covered in stars! It reminded me of Hyper Flux! Or Flare!
The boys listen in amazement as Valt explains the past forms of resonance.
Percy: So it happens when you have a strong connection with your beyblade right? Well I was only able to use this new power after Pegasus knelt before me…
Vlain: I could only use it after Valkyrie knighted me!
Valt: So, each bey has its own way to show respect. Interesting. What should we call it?
Vlain: How about Hyper Flare!
Percy: Or Flare Flux!
Valt: Or how about something new?
The boys get pulled into the avatar world.
Vlain: Wow, Valkyrie!
Percy: Pegasus!
Valkyrie: This new power, it is a blader’s X Fury!
Pegasus: It is a powerful fusion between bey and blader.
Valkyrie: And can only be accessed by acceptance of each other.
In the real world
Vlain/Percy: X Fury! Ginx! Double Ginx!
The boys erupted in laughter.
Valt: *Thoughts* X Fury huh. This new type of resonance is like nothing else…
The group arrives home and the boys run to the back yard.
Percy: This time I will win!
Vlain: Not a chance!
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Vlain: I saw dad use a launch style once… what was it, oh yeah! Rush Shoot!
Valkyrie starts doing the classic Rush Shoot.
Percy: Pegasus! Star Jolt!
Pegasus starts moving in an infinity patterns the beys clashing at different intervals.
Vlain/Percy: Aaaaggggghhhhh! Att-
Valt: Are you two battling? Well I got a surprise for you guys!
Vlain: What is it? Is it a new stadium?
Percy: Or a new launcher?
Valt: No, but we are going to…
Vlain: Where!
Percy: Tell us!
Valt: Spain!
The boys cheer as they pick up their beyblades which have stopped spinning.
Valt: One of my old friends has asked if you two would come battle, you guys our in for a treat!
The boys get ready to go and then head to Spain. They arrive and are walking along the city streets.
Valt: Okay, you guys stay here. I am going to get some dinner.
Vlain: Okay Dad! Be quick though I am so excited!
Valt smiles as he walks off Percy and Vlain start to talk but then here the sound of a beyblade spinning.
Vlain: Do you here that…
Percy: It sounds like…
Both: A Beyblade!
The boys jump up from their seat and run to where the sound is coming from. They ran into a near by woods and see a stadium with a boy standing off to the side.
???: Oh hello their, my dad said I should expect guest soon.
Percy: And you are…
Freyr: Freyr De La Hoya, why? And why do you look familiar?
Vlain: I am Vlain Aoi and this is Percy Hagane, and probably because you saw us battle on tv.
Freyr: Right, right. You would be no match for Fafnir though.
Percy: *Growling* What did you say…
Freyr: I said you wouldn’t stand a chance against Fafnir.
Freyr smirks as he picks up Delusion Fafnir and shows it to them.
Vlain: Oh your on!
Percy: I’ll take him first!
Freyr: Nan, I fight both of you.
Vlain: Oh now your really asking for it.
Vlain and Percy move to the stadium and prepare themselves. Freyr changes something on his launcher.
All: Set!
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Fafnir barely wobbles off the launcher moving straight to the center of the stadium. Valkyrie and Perseus are headed that way too.
Vlain: Rush Shoot Valkyrie!
Percy: Pegasus! Hit him with Star Jolt!
Both beys head straight toward Fafnir but instead if stopping it’s spin it sped it up. Vlain then face palms.
Vlain: It is a left spin with lots of rubber, what was I thinking?
Percy: Wait, you mean people use left spins casually in your dimension? Because they don’t in mine!
Vlain: Yeah it’s pretty normal…
Freyr: Oh no, your beys ran out of spin.
Vlain: Oh course they did.
Percy: One more time! This time I will send you into orbit!
Freyr: Right. Just like last time.
All three pick up their beys.
Percy: *Thoughts* Now is time to show them upper mode!
Percy changes Pegasus to upper mode.
Vlain: Ready?
All: Set!
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Fafnir again wobbles to the center while the two attack types circle the stadium.
Percy: Star Jolt, Pegasus!
Vlain: Rush Shoot! Send Fafnir flying!
As the beyblades clash in the stadium Balt and Free stand over to the side.
Vlain: Valkyrie! Champion’s Bound!
Valkyrie hit the wall and went flying straight toward Fafnir.
Freyr: Fafnir, Dwindling Counter.
When Valkyrie hit Fafnir Valkyrie got sent flying out of the stadium.
Percy: Our turn Pegasus! Starlight Flight!
Percy enters his X Fury for a second then going back to normal Pegasus charges at Fafnir.
Freyr: What was that? Whatever. This is over. Fafnir. Delusion Claw!
Fafnir slashes Pegasus sending him flying.
Percy: So strong…
Vlain: This is the power of left spins.
Valt: Haha! Good battle! I was watching the whole time, but next time stay where I ask.
The boys smile sheepishly as Freyr and Free take them to BC Sol. At the gate a girl is waiting for them.
???: Took you long enough, I mean Satomb was getting antsy.
Valt: *Laughs* I bet I know who your dad is!
Cool, I wonder who that girl at the end is.
About the chapter, I'd say 83/100. (not really in the mood to explain every detail, but you should polish the dialog a little bit (Freyr dialog is good), but nothing really that big)
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight - LJ-Blader - Oct. 17, 2021
Chapter 4
Spoiler (Click to View)
Episode 4: Tag Team! The Twin Heirs of BC Sol!
Vlain: Wow! Is that your bey? Are you a Blader?
Sora: Well, I have a beyblade and a launcher so yes, I think I am a blader.
Freyr rolls his eyes at Sora’s sarcasm.
Percy: We should battle!
Sora: You wouldn’t stand a chance.
Percy: Grr…
Valt: How about a tag team! Freyr and Sora vs Vlain and Percy!
Vlain: Oh yeah!
Percy: This is going to be epic!
The bladers walk to a stadium nearby and prepare for battle.
Sora: Satomb will bring you to your knees!
Sora smirked as Freyr changed his launcher to hard launch mode.
Valt: Bladers Set!
All four bladers are ready and waiting for the start.
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
All four bladers bey head to the center. Fafnir makes it there first while Pegasus and Valkyrie follow it.
Percy: Start of strong with Star Jolt!
Pegasus slams into Fafnir multiple times not doing much of anything to it.
Sora: That’s what you call an attack? Ha! Watch this! Satomb! Roller Defense!
Satomb blocked Pegasus from hitting Fafnir but a the cost of knocking it off balance.
Sora: Oh now you’ve done it… *Smirks* Satomb! Helix Drift!
Vlain: Not so fast!
Valkyrie comes out of no where and slams into Satomb seriously draining its stamina.
Sora: Again! Helix Drift!
Satomb starts jerking around and hits Pegasus up into the air.
Percy: Pegasus! Stardust Wing!
Pegasus and Satomb collide and the rollers reflect Pegasus’s attack sent it flying in the wall knocking it out of the arena.
Percy: Aww man… I’m out. Vlain! You have got to win it!
Vlain smiled at his friends encouragement.
Freyr: This is getting boring.
Sora: I guess it’s time to finish it! Satomb! Helix Drift one more time!
Satomb appered holding its trident as its beyblade charges at Valkyrie.
Vlain: Valkyrie! We have to win it! Champion Revolution!
Vlain enters his X Fury for a little longer than last time. Valkyrie appears and charges at Satomb slashing across it and sending it flying out of the stadium.
Sora: Grr, Sora you are a failure!
Sora stomps as she picks up Satomb.
Freyr: Oh well. You coming for me next?
Vlain: You know it! Valkyrie! Hit the wall!
Valkyrie charges into the wall and shoots at Fafnir.
Valin: *Smiles* Champion’s Bound!
Freyr: Delusion Claw.
Fafnir as it was low on spin hit Valkyrie and slow mo burst it. Vlain and Percy are shocked.
Freyr: Nice try. Too bad though.
Percy: One more time!
Vlain: An this time!
Both: *There auras flared up and started mixing together* We are going to win!
Valt: *Thoughts* Huh, I really shouldn’t be surprised anymore.
Freyr: Sure why not. I am going to be bored either way.
Sora: Let’s get this over with. *Thoughts* Time for redemption.
Valt: Bladers Ready!
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Fafnir heads to the center again while Valkyrie and Pegasus charge right at him.
Freyr: Delusion Counter.
When the two attack types hit Fafnir they both go flying into the wall.
Percy: Pegasus! Hit it with Stardust Jolt!
Pegasus slashes Fafnir rapidly giving it more and more spin.
Vlain: Valkyrie don’t give up!
Valkyrie starts charging toward the center.
Sora: Don’t leave me out! Satomb! Roller Defense!
Valkyrie hits Satomb and they both go flying. Both hitting the wall and losing a lot of stamina.
Sora: It is not over! Satomb! Helix Drift!
Satomb appears and slashes with its trident while its bey continuously clashed with Valkyrie.
Vlain: Valkyrie! Champion Revolution!
Valkyrie appears as Vlain enters his X Fury for a brief second and sends Satomb flying. Satomb falls at Sora feet as she picks it up and stomps away.
Percy: Pegasus!
Vlain: Valkyrie!
Both: It’s time to finish it! Vegasus!
Both Vlain and Percy entered X Fury and they mixed together as well as Pegasus and Valkyrie.
Vlain/Percy: Stardust Bound!
Valkyrie and Pegasus charge towards Fafnir at opposite sides.
Freyr: Oh well. Fafnir. Delusion Counter!
The three beys collide and in a flash of light and an explosion Fafnir flys up and burst. Freyrs eyes grow huge. As Valkyrie and Pegasus pass by each other and exit their X-Fury.
Vlain: We won!
Percy: That was awesome!
Valt: That was incredible… I haven’t seen any one fuse auras.
In the woods after the battle.
Sora: I lost, I have to get stronger! Satomb and I will send them to the underworld!
???: Sounds like you need some people to train with.
Sora: Who are you?!!
???: Doesn’t matter, this is Leone and you need to join us to defeat them. Meet team Predator.
Another girl walked out from behind the tree.
???: Now, do you want to beat those chumps or what?
Sora: *Thoughts* What do think Satomb.
Satomb glows dark green.
Sora: *Smirks* We’re in.
Vlain: Wow! Is that your bey? Are you a Blader?
Sora: Well, I have a beyblade and a launcher so yes, I think I am a blader.
Freyr rolls his eyes at Sora’s sarcasm.
Percy: We should battle!
Sora: You wouldn’t stand a chance.
Percy: Grr…
Valt: How about a tag team! Freyr and Sora vs Vlain and Percy!
Vlain: Oh yeah!
Percy: This is going to be epic!
The bladers walk to a stadium nearby and prepare for battle.
Sora: Satomb will bring you to your knees!
Sora smirked as Freyr changed his launcher to hard launch mode.
Valt: Bladers Set!
All four bladers are ready and waiting for the start.
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
All four bladers bey head to the center. Fafnir makes it there first while Pegasus and Valkyrie follow it.
Percy: Start of strong with Star Jolt!
Pegasus slams into Fafnir multiple times not doing much of anything to it.
Sora: That’s what you call an attack? Ha! Watch this! Satomb! Roller Defense!
Satomb blocked Pegasus from hitting Fafnir but a the cost of knocking it off balance.
Sora: Oh now you’ve done it… *Smirks* Satomb! Helix Drift!
Vlain: Not so fast!
Valkyrie comes out of no where and slams into Satomb seriously draining its stamina.
Sora: Again! Helix Drift!
Satomb starts jerking around and hits Pegasus up into the air.
Percy: Pegasus! Stardust Wing!
Pegasus and Satomb collide and the rollers reflect Pegasus’s attack sent it flying in the wall knocking it out of the arena.
Percy: Aww man… I’m out. Vlain! You have got to win it!
Vlain smiled at his friends encouragement.
Freyr: This is getting boring.
Sora: I guess it’s time to finish it! Satomb! Helix Drift one more time!
Satomb appered holding its trident as its beyblade charges at Valkyrie.
Vlain: Valkyrie! We have to win it! Champion Revolution!
Vlain enters his X Fury for a little longer than last time. Valkyrie appears and charges at Satomb slashing across it and sending it flying out of the stadium.
Sora: Grr, Sora you are a failure!
Sora stomps as she picks up Satomb.
Freyr: Oh well. You coming for me next?
Vlain: You know it! Valkyrie! Hit the wall!
Valkyrie charges into the wall and shoots at Fafnir.
Valin: *Smiles* Champion’s Bound!
Freyr: Delusion Claw.
Fafnir as it was low on spin hit Valkyrie and slow mo burst it. Vlain and Percy are shocked.
Freyr: Nice try. Too bad though.
Percy: One more time!
Vlain: An this time!
Both: *There auras flared up and started mixing together* We are going to win!
Valt: *Thoughts* Huh, I really shouldn’t be surprised anymore.
Freyr: Sure why not. I am going to be bored either way.
Sora: Let’s get this over with. *Thoughts* Time for redemption.
Valt: Bladers Ready!
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Fafnir heads to the center again while Valkyrie and Pegasus charge right at him.
Freyr: Delusion Counter.
When the two attack types hit Fafnir they both go flying into the wall.
Percy: Pegasus! Hit it with Stardust Jolt!
Pegasus slashes Fafnir rapidly giving it more and more spin.
Vlain: Valkyrie don’t give up!
Valkyrie starts charging toward the center.
Sora: Don’t leave me out! Satomb! Roller Defense!
Valkyrie hits Satomb and they both go flying. Both hitting the wall and losing a lot of stamina.
Sora: It is not over! Satomb! Helix Drift!
Satomb appears and slashes with its trident while its bey continuously clashed with Valkyrie.
Vlain: Valkyrie! Champion Revolution!
Valkyrie appears as Vlain enters his X Fury for a brief second and sends Satomb flying. Satomb falls at Sora feet as she picks it up and stomps away.
Percy: Pegasus!
Vlain: Valkyrie!
Both: It’s time to finish it! Vegasus!
Both Vlain and Percy entered X Fury and they mixed together as well as Pegasus and Valkyrie.
Vlain/Percy: Stardust Bound!
Valkyrie and Pegasus charge towards Fafnir at opposite sides.
Freyr: Oh well. Fafnir. Delusion Counter!
The three beys collide and in a flash of light and an explosion Fafnir flys up and burst. Freyrs eyes grow huge. As Valkyrie and Pegasus pass by each other and exit their X-Fury.
Vlain: We won!
Percy: That was awesome!
Valt: That was incredible… I haven’t seen any one fuse auras.
In the woods after the battle.
Sora: I lost, I have to get stronger! Satomb and I will send them to the underworld!
???: Sounds like you need some people to train with.
Sora: Who are you?!!
???: Doesn’t matter, this is Leone and you need to join us to defeat them. Meet team Predator.
Another girl walked out from behind the tree.
???: Now, do you want to beat those chumps or what?
Sora: *Thoughts* What do think Satomb.
Satomb glows dark green.
Sora: *Smirks* We’re in.
The Twin Warriors are here!
Characters
Spoiler (Click to View)
Abigail Akabane, Age 11, Japan, Warriors
The younger of the Akabane twins, she has a fiery personality and she has some anger problems. She also is mad that her sister gets everything she wants, including Achilles. She wears clothes similar to Agia in Cho-z.
Anna Akabane, Age 12, Japan, Warriors
The older of the Akabane twins. She gets everything she wants, she even inherited Achilles. She is calm and kind much in contrast to her sister. She wears clothes similar to Agia in GT.
The younger of the Akabane twins, she has a fiery personality and she has some anger problems. She also is mad that her sister gets everything she wants, including Achilles. She wears clothes similar to Agia in Cho-z.
Anna Akabane, Age 12, Japan, Warriors
The older of the Akabane twins. She gets everything she wants, she even inherited Achilles. She is calm and kind much in contrast to her sister. She wears clothes similar to Agia in GT.
Spoiler (Click to View)
Abigail Akabane - Valiant Ares Zeta’ Twin-Armor (Dual Spin Balance Type)
Valiant: Vari but not as bulky
Ares: Warrior facing to the left
Zeta’
Twin-Armor: Only works on Valiant, let’s you change the yellow numbers from out to in has three big teeth
Anna Akabane- Hero Achilles Xtend+ 2-Sword (Right Spinning Balance Type)
Hero: Infinite without an attachment but bigger is able to change from to swords (attack) to a shield (defense)
Achilles: Warrior facing right
Xtend+
2-Sword: Changes from attack to defense based on the battle blade (like 2B) has 3 medium teeth and one big tooth
Valiant: Vari but not as bulky
Ares: Warrior facing to the left
Zeta’
Twin-Armor: Only works on Valiant, let’s you change the yellow numbers from out to in has three big teeth
Anna Akabane- Hero Achilles Xtend+ 2-Sword (Right Spinning Balance Type)
Hero: Infinite without an attachment but bigger is able to change from to swords (attack) to a shield (defense)
Achilles: Warrior facing right
Xtend+
2-Sword: Changes from attack to defense based on the battle blade (like 2B) has 3 medium teeth and one big tooth
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight - LJ-Blader - Nov. 11, 2021
My life got very busy recently so I haven’t been able to write much. So sorry! I am still writing though. Here is the final two arcs for cross fight! :)
Arc 3 Team World Tour!
Episode 15: Teams are Formed! Train to be the Best!
Episode 16: Predator vs. Prey! Pt. 1
Episode 17: Predator vs. Prey! Pt. 2
Episode 18: The Prophecy! Pt. 1
Episode 19: The Prophecy! Pt. 2
Episode 20: Phoenix’s Revelation!
Episode 21: Dragons in Space? Pt. 1
Episode 22: Dragons in Space? Pt. 2
Episode 23: Five Star Fight! Pt. 1
Episode 24: Five Star Fight! Pt. 2
Episode 25: Darkness Rises Pt. 1
Episode 26: Darkness Rises Pt. 2
Episode 27: The Final Match Up! Pt. 1
Episode 28: The Final Match Up! Pt. 2
Arc 4
Episode 29: The Snake Pit’s Scheme
Episode 30: Evil Force Awakens!
Episode 31: Siblings Squabble!
Episode 32: The Mercenary’s Hunt!
Episode 33: Masters of the Underworld!
Episode 34: Shadows of Destiny Pt. 1
Episode 35: Shadows of Destiny Pt. 2
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight - LJ-Blader - Dec. 03, 2021
Okay guess what!
Chapter 5
The Heroes of Legend! Achllies vs. Ares!
Spoiler (Click to View)
In Japan’s country side.
Agia: Okay, Anna I think it’s time for you to inherit Achilles.
Anna: Yes! I have been waiting so long for this! Am I going to make it a Metal Burst Bey?
Agia: Yep! I will help a little but it will mainly be you doing it.
Anna: Cmon let’s go!
Anna runs to her dads workshop while Abigail sulks in the corner.
Abigail: Why does she get everything. I wanted Achilles. She doesn’t deserve him!
Abigail stops off into the forest.
Abigail: I always get the short hand! The hand me downs! The already used items! I just want my own bey!
Anna sees a faint yellow and gray glow and walks towards it picking up the hunk of metal. She is then transported to the avatar realm.
Abigail: Achilles!? But why are you silver and not red?
Ares: How dare thy small human insult thy’s honor by calling thy Achilles!
Abigail: What did you say? Was that another language?
Ares: Stop insulting thy! I am Ares! Mightiest of Warriors! And you are?
Abigail: Abigail! Do you want to be my partner? Together we can destroy my sister and Achilles!
Ares: Hold on tiny Abigail, destruction is hateful. Thy will not permit it.
Abigail: But, I thought you hated Achilles?
Ares: Thy doesn’t hate Achilles, he is thy’s rival! I will defeat him in combat but then be his friend once more.
Abigail: Well, first I have to upgrade you! To the workshop! Oh, but not till tonight. I can’t let my dad see yet.
Abigail exits the avatar world and heads to her room. While in the work room Abigail starts on Achilles.
Anna: Hmm…
Aiga: You going to start?
Anna: I had to make sure it was perfect. I can’t let Achilles down.
Anna gets transported to the avatar realm.
Achilles: Are you ready to shine my new partner?
Anna: I want to, but I am not sure how to evolve you.
Achilles: Take my evolutions. Fuse them. Make my ultimate form!
Anna smiles as a red, blue, and gold aura forms around her and she leaves the spirit world.
Anna draws out Achilles and she starts on Achilles.
A couple hours later.
Anna: Hero Achilles. Who will we battle first!
Achilles loomed over her as Aiga smiled at seeing his old partner.
Later that evening.
Abigail: Okay Ares, what do you to look like?
Abigail gets a vision of Ares and starts making him. Aiga sees sparks coming from the workshop and sneaks quietly up there.
Aiga: *Thoughts* So, Abigail found a bey to call her own. I might as well help her.
Aiga walks around the corner.
Aiga: Hey Abby. Want some help.
Abigail turns her head and is surprised to see her dad smiling at her.
Abigail: D-dad? I was uh just uh…
Aiga: It’s okay, what’s your partners name?
Abigail: Ares, the fiercest warrior ever!
Aiga: *Smiles* So both my daughters use balance warriors. Interesting.
Abigail explains her plans for Ares to Aiga and in a couple hours it is done.
Abigail: Welcome Valiant Ares.
Ares shines a gold and silver light illuminating Anna’s face. Aiga walks out as Anna calls them for dinner.
After dinner.
Abigail: Anna! I challenge you! Ares versus Achilles!
Anna: Abby, are you sure?
Abigail: Yes! Tomorrow morning! I plan on winning!
Aiga: Okay! To bed you two!
Abigail runs upstairs giggling and Anna walks upstairs shaking her head.
Aiga: Valt is going to want to watch this. *Dials his phone* Match tomorrow, probably want to come and watch, Anna and Abigail.
In Spain
Valt: Wake up Vlain sand Percy! We are honing to back to Japan!
Vlain and Percy groggily get out of bed and pack up.
Vlain: *Yawn* Why did we have to leave so early?
Percy: Yeah. *Yawn* I am still tired.
Valt: Well you could sleep longer but then you would miss a battle between two new bladers.
Vlain: Who? I want to know!
Valt: Anna and Abigail finally got their own beys.
Vlain: Really? That’s awesome! I can’t wait to battle them!
Percy: Uhh, who are they?
Vlain: Their dad used to be one of the best! And, wait their is only one Achilles. Who got him?
Valt: I guess we will find out.
The trio gets on the plane and heads off for Japan. A few hours later the trio arrives at Aiga’s farm.
Aiga: Welcome Valt! And Vlain! You’ve grown!
Vlain: *Blushes* Thanks…
Percy snickers.
Aiga: You must be Percy! Welcome! Anna and Abigail are about to begin. I stepped away because their was some uh, disagreement between them.
Everyone walks over to the stadium where two girls are bickering.
Abigail: You will lose Ms. Pretty Perfect!
Anna: I don’t do everything right! I make mistakes too!
The girls put their beyblades on their launchers.
Abigail: *Thoughts* I am going to go with attack mode! I gonna blow her away!
Anna: *Thoughts* Knowing Abby, she will attack. So I will defend.
Both Girls: Dad! Ref!
Anna: Please.
Aiga: Okay, Bladers Ready?
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Achilles (In shield mode) heads straight to the center. While Ares circles around the stadium in attack mode.
Abigail: Prepare to face Ares wrath! Go! Attack Achilles!
Ares heads towards the center and the two beys start clashing.
Anna: Just like I thought. You went with attack mode. Achilles! Heroic Shield!
Two yellow shields form around Achilles protecting it from Ares relentless barrages.
Abigail: Attack Ares! Don’t stop!
No matter what Ares does it can’t break through Achilles shield.
Abigail: Grrr, Now Ares! Valiant Sword! Send Achilles flying!
Ares blades glow yellow as it slashes and breaks Achilles shield but doesn’t move it from the center.
Anna: Impressive, I am still winning this though.
Abigail: Again! Valiant Sword! This will end it!
Ares circles around and charged at Achilles again.
Anna: You’re right! It is then end! For you! Achilles! Heroic Counter!
Achilles dodges Ares attack and slams Ares into the wall sending it flying out of the stadium.
Aiga: Achilles with and over finish! The score is 1-0.
Abigail: That was luck and nothing more! I am going to win this time!
Anna: No, it was calculations and strategy. There ways no luck involved. *Picks up Achilles* And this battle will prove it!
Anna puts Achilles in attack mode and changes the Xtend+ driver to attack mode.
Abigail: *Thoughts* I will attack again and again! I will burst her and blow her away!
Ares appears in front of her.
Ares: Are you sure? What if you used your brain instead of rushing to battle?
Anna: No chance!
Aiga: Bladers Ready? Set!
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Achilles heads to the center again while Ares circles around once again.
Abigail: I won’t lose again! Ares! Valiant Sword!
Ares smashed into Achilles but to no avail.
Abigail: Again! Blow them away!
Ares continuously hits Achilles.
Anna: *Thoughts* Achilles. I think it is thing to end this… *Out loud* Now change!
When Ares hit Achilles, Achilles’ blades went from shield mode to sword mode.
Anna: This is showing true strategic power! Achilles! Heroic Blade!
Achilles charges at Ares and slams into him with glowing blue blades sending Ares flying towards Abigail. Abigail grabs Ares right in front of her face.
Aiga: The score is 2-0 meaning Anna wins!
Anna: Thanks Achilles, you were awesome.
Abigail: Aww well, I guess I am going to have to train more… C’mon Ares! We are going to be the best of the best!
Aiga: *Thoughts* That’s my girls, let that fiery passion never change!
Percy: I know really want to battle!
Vlain: Me too!
A beyblade shoots out of the woods and into the arena.
???: Well then, how about a team battle. Meet us in the forest tonight.
Agia: Okay, Anna I think it’s time for you to inherit Achilles.
Anna: Yes! I have been waiting so long for this! Am I going to make it a Metal Burst Bey?
Agia: Yep! I will help a little but it will mainly be you doing it.
Anna: Cmon let’s go!
Anna runs to her dads workshop while Abigail sulks in the corner.
Abigail: Why does she get everything. I wanted Achilles. She doesn’t deserve him!
Abigail stops off into the forest.
Abigail: I always get the short hand! The hand me downs! The already used items! I just want my own bey!
Anna sees a faint yellow and gray glow and walks towards it picking up the hunk of metal. She is then transported to the avatar realm.
Abigail: Achilles!? But why are you silver and not red?
Ares: How dare thy small human insult thy’s honor by calling thy Achilles!
Abigail: What did you say? Was that another language?
Ares: Stop insulting thy! I am Ares! Mightiest of Warriors! And you are?
Abigail: Abigail! Do you want to be my partner? Together we can destroy my sister and Achilles!
Ares: Hold on tiny Abigail, destruction is hateful. Thy will not permit it.
Abigail: But, I thought you hated Achilles?
Ares: Thy doesn’t hate Achilles, he is thy’s rival! I will defeat him in combat but then be his friend once more.
Abigail: Well, first I have to upgrade you! To the workshop! Oh, but not till tonight. I can’t let my dad see yet.
Abigail exits the avatar world and heads to her room. While in the work room Abigail starts on Achilles.
Anna: Hmm…
Aiga: You going to start?
Anna: I had to make sure it was perfect. I can’t let Achilles down.
Anna gets transported to the avatar realm.
Achilles: Are you ready to shine my new partner?
Anna: I want to, but I am not sure how to evolve you.
Achilles: Take my evolutions. Fuse them. Make my ultimate form!
Anna smiles as a red, blue, and gold aura forms around her and she leaves the spirit world.
Anna draws out Achilles and she starts on Achilles.
A couple hours later.
Anna: Hero Achilles. Who will we battle first!
Achilles loomed over her as Aiga smiled at seeing his old partner.
Later that evening.
Abigail: Okay Ares, what do you to look like?
Abigail gets a vision of Ares and starts making him. Aiga sees sparks coming from the workshop and sneaks quietly up there.
Aiga: *Thoughts* So, Abigail found a bey to call her own. I might as well help her.
Aiga walks around the corner.
Aiga: Hey Abby. Want some help.
Abigail turns her head and is surprised to see her dad smiling at her.
Abigail: D-dad? I was uh just uh…
Aiga: It’s okay, what’s your partners name?
Abigail: Ares, the fiercest warrior ever!
Aiga: *Smiles* So both my daughters use balance warriors. Interesting.
Abigail explains her plans for Ares to Aiga and in a couple hours it is done.
Abigail: Welcome Valiant Ares.
Ares shines a gold and silver light illuminating Anna’s face. Aiga walks out as Anna calls them for dinner.
After dinner.
Abigail: Anna! I challenge you! Ares versus Achilles!
Anna: Abby, are you sure?
Abigail: Yes! Tomorrow morning! I plan on winning!
Aiga: Okay! To bed you two!
Abigail runs upstairs giggling and Anna walks upstairs shaking her head.
Aiga: Valt is going to want to watch this. *Dials his phone* Match tomorrow, probably want to come and watch, Anna and Abigail.
In Spain
Valt: Wake up Vlain sand Percy! We are honing to back to Japan!
Vlain and Percy groggily get out of bed and pack up.
Vlain: *Yawn* Why did we have to leave so early?
Percy: Yeah. *Yawn* I am still tired.
Valt: Well you could sleep longer but then you would miss a battle between two new bladers.
Vlain: Who? I want to know!
Valt: Anna and Abigail finally got their own beys.
Vlain: Really? That’s awesome! I can’t wait to battle them!
Percy: Uhh, who are they?
Vlain: Their dad used to be one of the best! And, wait their is only one Achilles. Who got him?
Valt: I guess we will find out.
The trio gets on the plane and heads off for Japan. A few hours later the trio arrives at Aiga’s farm.
Aiga: Welcome Valt! And Vlain! You’ve grown!
Vlain: *Blushes* Thanks…
Percy snickers.
Aiga: You must be Percy! Welcome! Anna and Abigail are about to begin. I stepped away because their was some uh, disagreement between them.
Everyone walks over to the stadium where two girls are bickering.
Abigail: You will lose Ms. Pretty Perfect!
Anna: I don’t do everything right! I make mistakes too!
The girls put their beyblades on their launchers.
Abigail: *Thoughts* I am going to go with attack mode! I gonna blow her away!
Anna: *Thoughts* Knowing Abby, she will attack. So I will defend.
Both Girls: Dad! Ref!
Anna: Please.
Aiga: Okay, Bladers Ready?
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Achilles (In shield mode) heads straight to the center. While Ares circles around the stadium in attack mode.
Abigail: Prepare to face Ares wrath! Go! Attack Achilles!
Ares heads towards the center and the two beys start clashing.
Anna: Just like I thought. You went with attack mode. Achilles! Heroic Shield!
Two yellow shields form around Achilles protecting it from Ares relentless barrages.
Abigail: Attack Ares! Don’t stop!
No matter what Ares does it can’t break through Achilles shield.
Abigail: Grrr, Now Ares! Valiant Sword! Send Achilles flying!
Ares blades glow yellow as it slashes and breaks Achilles shield but doesn’t move it from the center.
Anna: Impressive, I am still winning this though.
Abigail: Again! Valiant Sword! This will end it!
Ares circles around and charged at Achilles again.
Anna: You’re right! It is then end! For you! Achilles! Heroic Counter!
Achilles dodges Ares attack and slams Ares into the wall sending it flying out of the stadium.
Aiga: Achilles with and over finish! The score is 1-0.
Abigail: That was luck and nothing more! I am going to win this time!
Anna: No, it was calculations and strategy. There ways no luck involved. *Picks up Achilles* And this battle will prove it!
Anna puts Achilles in attack mode and changes the Xtend+ driver to attack mode.
Abigail: *Thoughts* I will attack again and again! I will burst her and blow her away!
Ares appears in front of her.
Ares: Are you sure? What if you used your brain instead of rushing to battle?
Anna: No chance!
Aiga: Bladers Ready? Set!
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Achilles heads to the center again while Ares circles around once again.
Abigail: I won’t lose again! Ares! Valiant Sword!
Ares smashed into Achilles but to no avail.
Abigail: Again! Blow them away!
Ares continuously hits Achilles.
Anna: *Thoughts* Achilles. I think it is thing to end this… *Out loud* Now change!
When Ares hit Achilles, Achilles’ blades went from shield mode to sword mode.
Anna: This is showing true strategic power! Achilles! Heroic Blade!
Achilles charges at Ares and slams into him with glowing blue blades sending Ares flying towards Abigail. Abigail grabs Ares right in front of her face.
Aiga: The score is 2-0 meaning Anna wins!
Anna: Thanks Achilles, you were awesome.
Abigail: Aww well, I guess I am going to have to train more… C’mon Ares! We are going to be the best of the best!
Aiga: *Thoughts* That’s my girls, let that fiery passion never change!
Percy: I know really want to battle!
Vlain: Me too!
A beyblade shoots out of the woods and into the arena.
???: Well then, how about a team battle. Meet us in the forest tonight.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight - Hollowmind13 - Dec. 03, 2021
(Dec. 03, 2021 2:48 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: Okay guess what!.
Chapter 5
The Heroes of Legend! Achllies vs. Ares!
Spoiler (Click to View)In Japan’s country side.
Agia: Okay, Abigail I think it’s time for you to inherit Achilles.
Abigail: Yes! I have been waiting so long for this! Am I going to make it a Metal Burst Bey?
Agia: Yep! I will help a little but it will mainly be you doing it.
Abigail: Cmon let’s go!
Abigail runs to her dads workshop while Anna sulks in the corner.
Anna: Why does she get everything. I wanted Achilles. She doesn’t deserve him!
Anna stops off into the forest.
Anna: I always get the short hand! The hand me downs! The already used items! I just want my own bey!
Anna sees a faint yellow and gray glow and walks towards it picking up the hunk of metal. She is then transported to the avatar realm.
Anna: Achilles!? But why are you silver and not red?
Ares: How dare thy small human insult thy’s honor by calling thy Achilles!
Anna: What did you say? Was that another language?
Ares: Stop insulting thy! I am Ares! Mightiest of Warriors! And you are?
Anna: Anna! Do you want to be my partner? Together we can destroy my sister and Achilles!
Ares: Hold on tiny Anna, destruction is hateful. Thy will not permit it.
Anna: But, I thought you hated Achilles?
Ares: Thy doesn’t hate Achilles, he is thy’s rival! I will defeat him in combat but then be his friend once more.
Anna: Well, first I have to upgrade you! To the workshop! Oh, but not till tonight. I can’t let my dad see yet.
Anna exits the avatar world and heads to her room. While in the work room Abigail starts on Achilles.
Abigail: Hmm…
Aiga: You going to start?
Abigail: I had to make sure it was perfect. I can’t let Achilles down.
Abigail gets transported to the avatar realm.
Achilles: Are you ready to shine my new partner?
Abigail: I want to, but I am not sure how to evolve you.
Achilles: Take my evolutions. Fuse them. Make my ultimate form!
Abigail smiles as a red, blue, and gold aura forms around her and she leaves the spirit world.
Abigail draws out Achilles and she starts on Achilles.
A couple hours later.
Abigail: Hero Achilles. Who will we battle first!
Achilles loomed over her as Aiga smiled at seeing his old partner.
Later that evening.
Anna: Okay Ares, what do you to look like?
Anna gets a vision of Ares and starts making him. Aiga sees sparks coming from the workshop and sneaks quietly up there.
Aiga: *Thoughts* So, Anna found a bey to call her own. I might as well help her.
Aiga walks around the corner.
Aiga: Hey Anna Banana. Want some help.
Anna turns her head and is surprised to see her dad smiling at her.
Anna: D-dad? I was uh just uh…
Aiga: It’s okay, what’s your partners name?
Anna: Ares, the fiercest warrior ever!
Aiga: *Smiles* So both my daughters use balance warriors. Interesting.
Anna explains her plans for Ares to Aiga and in a couple hours it is done.
Anna: Welcome Valiant Ares.
Ares shines a gold and silver light illuminating Anna’s face. Aiga walks out as Abigail calls them for dinner.
After dinner.
Anna: Abby! I challenge you! Ares versus Achilles!
Abigail: Anna, are you sure?
Anna: Yes! Tomorrow morning! I plan on winning!
Aiga: Okay! To bed you two!
Anna runs upstairs giggling and Abigail walks upstairs shaking her head.
Aiga: Valt is going to want to watch this. *Dials his phone* Match tomorrow, probably want to come and watch, Anna and Abigail.
In Spain
Valt: Wake up Vlain sand Percy! We are honing to back to Japan!
Vlain and Percy groggily get out of bed and pack up.
Vlain: *Yawn* Why did we have to leave so early?
Percy: Yeah. *Yawn* I am still tired.
Valt: Well you could sleep longer but then you would miss a battle between two new bladers.
Vlain: Who? I want to know!
Valt: Anna and Abigail finally got their own beys.
Vlain: Really? That’s awesome! I can’t wait to battle them!
Percy: Uhh, who are they?
Vlain: Their dad used to be one of the best! And, wait their is only one Achilles. Who got him?
Valt: I guess we will find out.
The trio gets on the plane and heads off for Japan. A few hours later the trio arrives at Aiga’s farm.
Aiga: Welcome Valt! And Vlain! You’ve grown!
Vlain: *Blushes* Thanks…
Percy snickers.
Aiga: You must be Percy! Welcome! Anna and Abigail are about to begin. I stepped away because their was some uh, disagreement between them.
Everyone walks over to the stadium where two girls are bickering.
Abigail: You will lose Ms. Pretty Perfect!
Anna: I don’t do everything right! I make mistakes too!
The girls put their beyblades on their launchers.
Abigail: *Thoughts* I am going to go with attack mode! I gonna blow her away!
Anna: *Thoughts* Knowing Aby, she will attack. So I will defend.
Both Girls: Dad! Ref!
Anna: Please.
Aiga: Okay, Bladers Ready?
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Achilles (In shield mode) heads straight to the center. While Ares circles around the stadium in attack mode.
Abigail: Prepare to face Ares wrath! Go! Attack Achilles!
Ares heads towards the center and the two beys start clashing.
Anna: Just like I thought. You went with attack mode. Achilles! Heroic Shield!
Two yellow shields form around Achilles protecting it from Ares relentless barrages.
Abigail: Attack Ares! Don’t stop!
No matter what Ares does it can’t break through Achilles shield.
Abigail: Grrr, Now Ares! Valiant Sword! Send Achilles flying!
Ares blades glow yellow as it slashes and breaks Achilles shield but doesn’t move it from the center.
Anna: Impressive, I am still winning this though.
Abigail: Again! Valiant Sword! This will end it!
Ares circles around and charged at Achilles again.
Anna: You’re right! It is then end! For you! Achilles! Heroic Counter!
Achilles dodges Ares attack and slams Ares into the wall sending it flying out of the stadium.
Aiga: Achilles with and over finish! The score is 1-0.
Abigail: That was luck and nothing more! I am going to win this time!
Anna: No, it was calculations and strategy. There ways no luck involved. *Picks up Achilles* And this battle will prove it!
Anna puts Achilles in attack mode and changes the Xtend+ driver to attack mode.
Abigail: *Thoughts* I will attack again and again! I will burst her and blow her away!
Ares appears in front of her.
Ares: Are you sure? What if you used your brain instead of rushing to battle?
Anna: No chance!
Aiga: Bladers Ready? Set!
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Achilles heads to the center again while Ares circles around once again.
Abigail: I won’t lose again! Ares! Valiant Sword!
Ares smashed into Achilles but to no avail.
Abigail: Again! Blow them away!
Ares continuously hits Achilles.
Anna: *Thoughts* Achilles. I think it is thing to end this… *Out loud* Now change!
When Ares hit Achilles, Achilles’ blades went from shield mode to sword mode.
Anna: This is showing true strategic power! Achilles! Heroic Blade!
Achilles charges at Ares and slams into him with glowing blue blades sending Ares flying towards Abigail. Abigail grabs Ares right in front of her face.
Aiga: The score is 2-0 meaning Anna wins!
Anna: Thanks Achilles, you were awesome.
Abigail: Aww well, I guess I am going to have to train more… C’mon Ares! We are going to be the best of the best!
Aiga: *Thoughts* That’s my girls, let that fiery passion never change!
Percy: I know really want to battle!
Vlain: Me too!
A beyblade shoots out of the woods and into the arena.
???: Well then, how about a team battle. Meet us in the forest tonight.
Ok so, on the beginning Abigail had Achilles, but in the battle she had Ares... Wat?
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Not in the mood to do a full rating thing, I'd say it is a good chapter, but you can always improve. 7.919/10
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight - LJ-Blader - Dec. 03, 2021
Don’t you love auto correct? I will change it…
All fixes!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight - UnseenBurst - Dec. 04, 2021
(Dec. 03, 2021 2:48 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: Okay guess what!
Chapter 5
The Heroes of Legend! Achllies vs. Ares!
Spoiler (Click to View)In Japan’s country side.
Agia: Okay, Anna I think it’s time for you to inherit Achilles.
Anna: Yes! I have been waiting so long for this! Am I going to make it a Metal Burst Bey?
Agia: Yep! I will help a little but it will mainly be you doing it.
Anna: Cmon let’s go!
Anna runs to her dads workshop while Abigail sulks in the corner.
Abigail: Why does she get everything. I wanted Achilles. She doesn’t deserve him!
Abigail stops off into the forest.
Abigail: I always get the short hand! The hand me downs! The already used items! I just want my own bey!
Anna sees a faint yellow and gray glow and walks towards it picking up the hunk of metal. She is then transported to the avatar realm.
Abigail: Achilles!? But why are you silver and not red?
Ares: How dare thy small human insult thy’s honor by calling thy Achilles!
Abigail: What did you say? Was that another language?
Ares: Stop insulting thy! I am Ares! Mightiest of Warriors! And you are?
Abigail: Abigail! Do you want to be my partner? Together we can destroy my sister and Achilles!
Ares: Hold on tiny Abigail, destruction is hateful. Thy will not permit it.
Abigail: But, I thought you hated Achilles?
Ares: Thy doesn’t hate Achilles, he is thy’s rival! I will defeat him in combat but then be his friend once more.
Abigail: Well, first I have to upgrade you! To the workshop! Oh, but not till tonight. I can’t let my dad see yet.
Abigail exits the avatar world and heads to her room. While in the work room Abigail starts on Achilles.
Anna: Hmm…
Aiga: You going to start?
Anna: I had to make sure it was perfect. I can’t let Achilles down.
Anna gets transported to the avatar realm.
Achilles: Are you ready to shine my new partner?
Anna: I want to, but I am not sure how to evolve you.
Achilles: Take my evolutions. Fuse them. Make my ultimate form!
Anna smiles as a red, blue, and gold aura forms around her and she leaves the spirit world.
Anna draws out Achilles and she starts on Achilles.
A couple hours later.
Anna: Hero Achilles. Who will we battle first!
Achilles loomed over her as Aiga smiled at seeing his old partner.
Later that evening.
Abigail: Okay Ares, what do you to look like?
Abigail gets a vision of Ares and starts making him. Aiga sees sparks coming from the workshop and sneaks quietly up there.
Aiga: *Thoughts* So, Abigail found a bey to call her own. I might as well help her.
Aiga walks around the corner.
Aiga: Hey Abby. Want some help.
Abigail turns her head and is surprised to see her dad smiling at her.
Abigail: D-dad? I was uh just uh…
Aiga: It’s okay, what’s your partners name?
Abigail: Ares, the fiercest warrior ever!
Aiga: *Smiles* So both my daughters use balance warriors. Interesting.
Abigail explains her plans for Ares to Aiga and in a couple hours it is done.
Abigail: Welcome Valiant Ares.
Ares shines a gold and silver light illuminating Anna’s face. Aiga walks out as Anna calls them for dinner.
After dinner.
Abigail: Anna! I challenge you! Ares versus Achilles!
Anna: Abby, are you sure?
Abigail: Yes! Tomorrow morning! I plan on winning!
Aiga: Okay! To bed you two!
Abigail runs upstairs giggling and Anna walks upstairs shaking her head.
Aiga: Valt is going to want to watch this. *Dials his phone* Match tomorrow, probably want to come and watch, Anna and Abigail.
In Spain
Valt: Wake up Vlain sand Percy! We are honing to back to Japan!
Vlain and Percy groggily get out of bed and pack up.
Vlain: *Yawn* Why did we have to leave so early?
Percy: Yeah. *Yawn* I am still tired.
Valt: Well you could sleep longer but then you would miss a battle between two new bladers.
Vlain: Who? I want to know!
Valt: Anna and Abigail finally got their own beys.
Vlain: Really? That’s awesome! I can’t wait to battle them!
Percy: Uhh, who are they?
Vlain: Their dad used to be one of the best! And, wait their is only one Achilles. Who got him?
Valt: I guess we will find out.
The trio gets on the plane and heads off for Japan. A few hours later the trio arrives at Aiga’s farm.
Aiga: Welcome Valt! And Vlain! You’ve grown!
Vlain: *Blushes* Thanks…
Percy snickers.
Aiga: You must be Percy! Welcome! Anna and Abigail are about to begin. I stepped away because their was some uh, disagreement between them.
Everyone walks over to the stadium where two girls are bickering.
Abigail: You will lose Ms. Pretty Perfect!
Anna: I don’t do everything right! I make mistakes too!
The girls put their beyblades on their launchers.
Abigail: *Thoughts* I am going to go with attack mode! I gonna blow her away!
Anna: *Thoughts* Knowing Abby, she will attack. So I will defend.
Both Girls: Dad! Ref!
Anna: Please.
Aiga: Okay, Bladers Ready?
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Achilles (In shield mode) heads straight to the center. While Ares circles around the stadium in attack mode.
Abigail: Prepare to face Ares wrath! Go! Attack Achilles!
Ares heads towards the center and the two beys start clashing.
Anna: Just like I thought. You went with attack mode. Achilles! Heroic Shield!
Two yellow shields form around Achilles protecting it from Ares relentless barrages.
Abigail: Attack Ares! Don’t stop!
No matter what Ares does it can’t break through Achilles shield.
Abigail: Grrr, Now Ares! Valiant Sword! Send Achilles flying!
Ares blades glow yellow as it slashes and breaks Achilles shield but doesn’t move it from the center.
Anna: Impressive, I am still winning this though.
Abigail: Again! Valiant Sword! This will end it!
Ares circles around and charged at Achilles again.
Anna: You’re right! It is then end! For you! Achilles! Heroic Counter!
Achilles dodges Ares attack and slams Ares into the wall sending it flying out of the stadium.
Aiga: Achilles with and over finish! The score is 1-0.
Abigail: That was luck and nothing more! I am going to win this time!
Anna: No, it was calculations and strategy. There ways no luck involved. *Picks up Achilles* And this battle will prove it!
Anna puts Achilles in attack mode and changes the Xtend+ driver to attack mode.
Abigail: *Thoughts* I will attack again and again! I will burst her and blow her away!
Ares appears in front of her.
Ares: Are you sure? What if you used your brain instead of rushing to battle?
Anna: No chance!
Aiga: Bladers Ready? Set!
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Achilles heads to the center again while Ares circles around once again.
Abigail: I won’t lose again! Ares! Valiant Sword!
Ares smashed into Achilles but to no avail.
Abigail: Again! Blow them away!
Ares continuously hits Achilles.
Anna: *Thoughts* Achilles. I think it is thing to end this… *Out loud* Now change!
When Ares hit Achilles, Achilles’ blades went from shield mode to sword mode.
Anna: This is showing true strategic power! Achilles! Heroic Blade!
Achilles charges at Ares and slams into him with glowing blue blades sending Ares flying towards Abigail. Abigail grabs Ares right in front of her face.
Aiga: The score is 2-0 meaning Anna wins!
Anna: Thanks Achilles, you were awesome.
Abigail: Aww well, I guess I am going to have to train more… C’mon Ares! We are going to be the best of the best!
Aiga: *Thoughts* That’s my girls, let that fiery passion never change!
Percy: I know really want to battle!
Vlain: Me too!
A beyblade shoots out of the woods and into the arena.
???: Well then, how about a team battle. Meet us in the forest tonight.
This Chapter was really cool not going to lie. A Battle between Sisters and Ares seems like it'll be a really cool Bey. Percy reminds me of one of my Fanfic Characters but I can't put my finger on it Anyways it was cool to see Vlain and Percy to come watch the match and both of their inspiration to make their Beys was really good. Sorry for the short review but this chapter was cool, it could've been stretched out a bit but so far really good! 7.5/10