RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Sep. 17, 2021
Bell fixes his Beyblade
Bell: Alright, now--
Parker bursts in through the door
Tyler: What the--
Parker: I'm for Bell DAIKOKUTEN AND TYLER (I forgot his last name)
I'm sorry, I had to meme this.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight (Character Contest) - LJ-Blader - Sep. 17, 2021
Beautiful! Magnificent!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight (Character Contest) - LJ-Blader - Sep. 18, 2021
Episode 15
The Underwater King! Perseus Boldbringer!
“You ready to go?” Asked Bell as he held up the newly completed Devil Belial. “You don’t stand a chance against me and Belial!”
“Oh really now? Perseus and I will drown you in our power!” Said Parker as he held up his bey.
Both boys take off running to the stadium clashing all the way there the others laugh and follow them. Bell and Parker get ready to face off.
“Fall to the Demon King!” Said Bell as he attached Belial to his launcher.
“Perseus will crush you under his might!” Said Parker as Perseus was put onto his launcher.
“I will go with Defense mode as Belial is an Attack Type. Even with his upgrades he doesn’t stand a chance!” Thinks Parker as he prepares for battle.
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
“Go Perseus! Take your hold over the center! Bold Launch!” Cries Parker as Perseus goes straight for the center.
“Ha! Like that will work on me! Belial! True Venture Shoot!” Cries Bell and Belial begins moving in a flower pattern.
“Whoah! It is moving so much faster!” Said Aki from nearby.
“Like a little speed boost will help you! Perseus hold your ground!” Said Parker as he shot his hand out.
Belial and Perseus clash in the center. Belial then pushes past Perseus.
“Ha! You couldn’t shake me if you tried!” Said Parker Confidently.
Belial starts to circle back around.
“We’ll see…” said Bell mischievously. “Belial! Devil Wing!”
Belial’s blades and rubber glowed red as he charged toward Perseus.
“Perseus! Bold Guard!” Cried Parker as he shot both his hands out.
“Kill his spin Belial!” Said Bell as he flipped his cape.
Then Belial slams into Perseus with his rubber and kills most of Perseus’s spin.
“What! How did that happen? No matter Perseus! End it here! Bold Counter!” “Says Parker as Perseus runs out of Stamina.
“Belial with a spin finish! The score is currently 1-0.” Said Tyler as the bladers reattached their beys.
“Grr, I guess stamina mode would work better…” thought Parker as he changed his tip.
“You ready to lose again?” Asked Bell as he prepared to launch Belial.
Parker just grunted.
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Perseus heads toward the center while Belial circles the outside.
“Belial! Hit him hard! True Venture Shoot!” Cries Bell as Belial gains another huge speed boost.
“Ha! That move won’t do anything! Go Bold Zone!” Cried Parker as Perseus began to spin faster.
“Attack Belial! No holding back!” Yells Bell as Perseus and Belial clash in the center in multiple times.
“Belial finish it! Devil Wing!” Said Bell as Belial charged toward Perseus.
“Haha! Not this time! Dodge it Perseus!” Cries Parker as Perseus dodges Belial attack and Belial slams into the wall losing some spin.
“Belial! Again Fight for it!” Yells Bell as Belial appears behind him. “Devil Wing!”
Perseus and Belial clash quickly draining each other’s stamina.
“Perseus! Hold on! Bold Zone!” Tells Parker and Perseus appears and starts clashing with Belial.
“Aaaaggggghhhhh! Don’t give up!” Yell both bladers at once.
Belial slows down to a stop while Perseus spins around him.
“Perseus with a spin finish! The score is now 1-1!” Said Tyler as Belial and Perseus stand behind their bladers.
“Whoah, they’re getting series.” Says Athena in awe.
“Yeah, they have been competing since we were little. I alway refereed and they alway battled.” Said Tyler with a smile as he remember the good times.
“This will be the final battle!” Thinks Bell. “The L gear will help be obliterate Perseus!”
Bell attaches the L gear in Belial’s high mode.
“This will be the end Bell!” Said Parker.
“No chance, start the battle Tyler!” Said Bell as he flipped his cape one more time.
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Again Perseus heads to the center while Belial raced around the outside.
“Belial! You know what to do! True Venture Shoot! Called Bell as his aura flared up.
“What do you expect to do different- Wait! What is the armor on the new Belial…” Asked Parker with concern.
“It is 2.” Said Bell. “Except in high mode when it is L Gear!”
Bell laughed while Belial hit Perseus around like it was nothing.
“I will show you what’s so funny! Perseus! Bold Zone!” Said Parker as Perseus appeared and started to spin faster.
“Ha! Like faster spin will help you! Belial! Devil Burst!” Cried Bell as Belial appeared and started clashing with Perseus.
Belial hit the wall and shot up into the sky. Then came crashing down heading straight toward Perseus.
“Perseus! Don’t give in!” Cried Parker as Belial’s avatar started to over power Perseus.
“Belial! Finish it!” Said Bell as he flipped his cape for the final time of this battle.
Belial hit Perseus from the sky and Perseus bursted.
“Belial with a burst finish! The score is now 3-1 meaning Bell wins!” Said Tyler as the two opponents shook hands.
“Belial is just as strong as I remember!” Said Parker as he a Bell walked over to there friends.
“Yeah well I guess Perseus isn’t awful.” Said Bell in his usual tone of voice.
“Well neither of them could beat me.” Said someone from the corner of the room.
“Hey brother! Nice to see you again!” Said Athena as she ran over to hug her brother. “What are you doing here?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Sep. 18, 2021
(Sep. 18, 2021 7:59 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: Episode 15
The Underwater King! Perseus Boldbringer!
“You ready to go?” Asked Bell as he held up the newly completed Devil Belial. “You don’t stand a chance against me and Belial!”
“Oh really now? Perseus and I will drown you in our power!” Said Parker as he held up his bey.
Both boys take off running to the stadium clashing all the way there the others laugh and follow them. Bell and Parker get ready to face off.
“Fall to the Demon King!” Said Bell as he attached Belial to his launcher.
“Perseus will crush you under his might!” Said Parker as Perseus was put onto his launcher.
“I will go with Defense mode as Belial is an Attack Type. Even with his upgrades he doesn’t stand a chance!” Thinks Parker as he prepares for battle.
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
“Go Perseus! Take your hold over the center! Bold Launch!” Cries Parker as Perseus goes straight for the center.
“Ha! Like that will work on me! Belial! True Venture Shoot!” Cries Bell and Belial begins moving in a flower pattern.
“Whoah! It is moving so much faster!” Said Aki from nearby.
“Like a little speed boost will help you! Perseus hold your ground!” Said Parker as he shot his hand out.
Belial and Perseus clash in the center. Belial then pushes past Perseus.
“Ha! You couldn’t shake me if you tried!” Said Parker Confidently.
Belial starts to circle back around.
“We’ll see…” said Bell mischievously. “Belial! Devil Wing!”
Belial’s blades and rubber glowed red as he charged toward Perseus.
“Perseus! Bold Guard!” Cried Parker as he shot both his hands out.
“Kill his spin Belial!” Said Bell as he flipped his cape.
Then Belial slams into Perseus with his rubber and kills most of Perseus’s spin.
“What! How did that happen? No matter Perseus! End it here! Bold Counter!” “Says Parker as Perseus runs out of Stamina.
“Belial with a spin finish! The score is currently 1-0.” Said Tyler as the bladers reattached their beys.
“Grr, I guess stamina mode would work better…” thought Parker as he changed his tip.
“You ready to lose again?” Asked Bell as he prepared to launch Belial.
Parker just grunted.
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Perseus heads toward the center while Belial circles the outside.
“Belial! Hit him hard! True Venture Shoot!” Cries Bell as Belial gains another huge speed boost.
“Ha! That move won’t do anything! Go Bold Zone!” Cried Parker as Perseus began to spin faster.
“Attack Belial! No holding back!” Yells Bell as Perseus and Belial clash in the center in multiple times.
“Belial finish it! Devil Wing!” Said Bell as Belial charged toward Perseus.
“Haha! Not this time! Dodge it Perseus!” Cries Parker as Perseus dodges Belial attack and Belial slams into the wall losing some spin.
“Belial! Again Fight for it!” Yells Bell as Belial appears behind him. “Devil Wing!”
Perseus and Belial clash quickly draining each other’s stamina.
“Perseus! Hold on! Bold Zone!” Tells Parker and Perseus appears and starts clashing with Belial.
“Aaaaggggghhhhh! Don’t give up!” Yell both bladers at once.
Belial slows down to a stop while Perseus spins around him.
“Perseus with a spin finish! The score is now 1-1!” Said Tyler as Belial and Perseus stand behind their bladers.
“Whoah, they’re getting series.” Says Athena in awe.
“Yeah, they have been competing since we were little. I alway refereed and they alway battled.” Said Tyler with a smile as he remember the good times.
“This will be the final battle!” Thinks Bell. “The L gear will help be obliterate Perseus!”
Bell attaches the L gear in Belial’s high mode.
“This will be the end Bell!” Said Parker.
“No chance, start the battle Tyler!” Said Bell as he flipped his cape one more time.
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Again Perseus heads to the center while Belial raced around the outside.
“Belial! You know what to do! True Venture Shoot! Called Bell as his aura flared up.
“What do you expect to do different- Wait! What is the armor on the new Belial…” Asked Parker with concern.
“It is 2.” Said Bell. “Except in high mode when it is L Gear!”
Bell laughed while Belial hit Perseus around like it was nothing.
“I will show you what’s so funny! Perseus! Bold Zone!” Said Parker as Perseus appeared and started to spin faster.
“Ha! Like faster spin will help you! Belial! Devil Burst!” Cried Bell as Belial appeared and started clashing with Perseus.
Belial hit the wall and shot up into the sky. Then came crashing down heading straight toward Perseus.
“Perseus! Don’t give in!” Cried Parker as Belial’s avatar started to over power Perseus.
“Belial! Finish it!” Said Bell as he flipped his cape for the final time of this battle.
Belial hit Perseus from the sky and Perseus bursted.
“Belial with a burst finish! The score is now 3-1 meaning Bell wins!” Said Tyler as the two opponents shook hands.
“Belial is just as strong as I remember!” Said Parker as he a Bell walked over to there friends.
“Yeah well I guess Perseus isn’t awful.” Said Bell in his usual tone of voice.
“Well neither of them could beat me.” Said someone from the corner of the room.
“Hey brother! Nice to see you again!” Said Athena as she ran over to hug her brother. “What are you doing here?
PARKER LOST?! EXCUSE ME?! In all seriousness why'd you just go on the defense/Stamina Parker? *Sighs* Anyways, what I find funny was when I made this I didn't know the Perseus Core was a thing yet. lol! So, good thing I made this lol, the battle was amazing! I loved how Bell won, Parker, you put up a good fight but you lost. Anywys, awesome episode could've been longer but still amazing! Brother?! Is Lane coming back? Lol, this should be interesting, anyways 7/10. nice job!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight (Character Contest) - Kiryu Kazuma - Sep. 18, 2021
Here's my entry.
Sachio Goushin
Appearance:-
Hair Color: White
Eye Color: Purple
Attire: He wears a red shirt under a black coat, on the back of the coat, A dragon shaped "S" symbol is drawn. he also wears brown pants, black belt with a beyblade symbol and black boots.
Personality: He has a sense of superiority, holding himself above nearly everyone he encounters. He is immensely proud of his bey, Abaddon Salamander and believes that he's the most powerful blader in the world. Despite having a sense of superiority towards others, he actually admits his defeat if he lost to someone. He's fond of having good battles with others and seeks bladers who can push him to go beyond his limits and doesn't have any interest on amature bladers who do silly mistakes in the middle of battle.
Age: 13
Nationality: Japanese
Beyblade: Abaddon Salamander Incenerate Blaze-Caust.
Spin Direction and Type: Left-spin Balance type.
Core Bolt: Salamander, the mythical Salamander who feeds on and lives in fire.
Battle Blade: Abaddon, it can be changed from a defense mode by hitting 12 blades repeatedly to the attack mode with 6 overlapping blades. The blades have a huge gap between them in defense mode, making it have more defense potential than it's predecessor. And in attack mode, the 6 blades have a spear shape increasing the attack potential. (Color scheme of the blade is purple and red)
Driver: Incenerate, a driver featuring an adjustable POM ball tip and a shot driver gimmick within the driver. In first mode, the driver's ball tip is fixed and in this mode, the bey usually takes the center. In the second mode, by moving the bottom part of the tip, it makes the bey bounce around the stadium. If the bey is launched harder in attack mode, the driver automatically activates and makes a big jump, making bey jump more in the stadium and more agressively.
Gimmick Lock (Double): Blaze-Caust, A 8 bladed rubber gimmick lock. The rubber has two purposes, in defense mode it will help to deflect the attacks and in attack mode, it will help to increase the attack potential of the combo.
Special Moves:
Abaddon Defense: By utilizing the gimmick of the blade and gimmick lock, the bey deflects the opposing bey's attacks.
Incenerate Upper: By using the driver's gimmick, (in attack mode) Salamander jumps and strikes the opposing bey in mid-air.
Abaddon Caust: A slash attack move performed in attack mode by making use of the six blades and the rubber blades on the gimmick lock, Salamander tear aparts it's opponents.
Rebellious Hell Slash: Salamander jumps into the air by either making use of it's driver in attack mode or if it got blown away by the opposing bey, it slams into the opposing bey with sheer force (It can be performed in both modes).
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight (Character Contest) - LJ-Blader - Sep. 19, 2021
What? Arc Two released already??
Arc 2 The Metal Burst Tournament!
Episode 9: First Stage! Battle Royale!
Episode 10: Capture the Bey?
Episode 11: Battle in the Eternal Landscapes!
Episode 12: The Quarter Finals are Here!
Episode 13: Rivals Vs. Siblings! Intense Passion!
Episode 14: Finals! Darkness Creeps!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight (Character Contest) - Dark red - Sep. 19, 2021
(Sep. 19, 2021 12:47 AM)LJ-Blader Wrote: What? Arc Two released already??
Arc 2 The Metal Burst Tournament!
Episode 9: First Stage! Battle Royale!
Episode 10: Capture the Bey?
Episode 11: Battle in the Eternal Landscapes!
Episode 12: The Quarter Finals are Here!
Episode 13: Rivals Vs. Siblings! Intense Passion!
Episode 14: Finals! Darkness Creeps! Was my character entry accepted?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight (Character Contest) - LJ-Blader - Sep. 19, 2021
Yes, that does not mean you get in. It is a contest and only the winners characters will get in.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight (Character Contest) - GenesisBlader - Sep. 19, 2021
(Sep. 19, 2021 2:57 AM)LJ-Blader Wrote: Yes, that does not mean you get in. It is a contest and only the winners characters will get in.
huh... e
i dunno if i'll enter i'll try to enter later
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight (Character Contest) - LJ-Blader - Sep. 20, 2021
The winners of the contest are…
1st UnseenBurst
2nd @Hollowmind8
Good Job everyone! I might have another contest for characters in arc 4 sometime, I am not sure yet.
Episode 7: The Mini Demon King! Peril Belial!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Sep. 20, 2021
(Sep. 20, 2021 2:30 AM)LJ-Blader Wrote: The winners of the contest are…
1st UnseenBurst
2nd Hollowmind8
Good Job everyone! I might have another contest for characters in arc 4 sometime, I am not sure yet.
Episode 7: The Mini Demon King! Peril Belial!
I'm literally choking right now, the chapter name is the best thing ever lol!! Anyways, thanks for choosing me as the winner.
(Sep. 13, 2021 8:36 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: Chapter One
Worlds Collide! Heroes Reborn!
In the Snake Pit
Edwin: Father the portal is ready to be opened. Then as soon as a new system is created I will enlist the bladers.
Theodore: Very good, how long till it opens.
Edwin: A couple of hours at most.
Theodore: Well then, how about we fix this place up?
Theodore Smirks, then laughs evilly.
At the Aoi household.
Valt: I used to be just like him… *pulls out megaphone* WAKE UP VLAIN!
Vlain jumps out of bed sending his covers flying.
Vlain: I’m up! What was that for Dad? *Vlain proceeds to put on his close*
Valt: Did you really forget that today you have school? Now don’t forget Valkyrie and grab some bey bread on your way out. You need energy to get into the Beigoma Bey Club.
Vlain: Oh shoot! I completely forgot! *Blain picks up Valkyrie and runs downstairs grabs some bey bread and heads out*
As Vlain walks past the beypark he hears a beyblade spinning. He runs over and sees a small beyblade spinning in the stadium. Nearby a kid is cheering.
???: Pegasus! Show them your fury! Samurai Wing!
The bey shimmers as it hits the wall of the stadium.
Vlain: Whoa! Cool beyblade! What’s your name?
The beyblade spins into the wall and flies up into the boys hand.
Percy: I am Percy Hagane! Son of the worlds number one ranked blader Gingka Hagane! I am Percy Hagane! This is Samurai Pegasus!
Vlain looks at him at confusion, he thought his dad was the best. Then remembers that he was late to school!
Vlain: Nice to meet you Percy, but I am late for school!
Vlain runs off and barely slide into his desk before the last bell rings.
After school that day Vlain is on his way home when he hears someone in the bey park. He walks over and sees Percy practicing.
Vlain: You want to battle Percy? *Vlain holds up Savior Valkyrie*
Percy: Sure, but where is the metal, and why is it so big?
Vlain looks at him like he is crazy.
Vlain: Ah, never mind… you ready?
Both bladers pull out there launchers and but their beys on them.
Vlain: That’s an interesting launcher…
Percy: Your looks different too…
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Both bladers launch there beys into the stadium. Both beys start doing a rush launch and clash in the middle.
Percy: Pegasus! Samurai Wing!
Pegasus’ winner shimmers and it slams into Valkyrie and gets sent flying out of the stadium.
Percy: Wha-What! How did Pegasus get sent flying! Your bey is so heavy!
Vlain got even more confused.
Vlain: How old is your bey?
Percy: Relatively new, why?
Vlain: Never mind, let’s just do the second battle.
Both bladers prepared again. This time Percy didn’t angle his launch.
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Pegasus flies around the edge, while Valkyrie does a rush launch.
Percy: Pegasus! Samurai Wing!
Pegasus and Valkyrie clash, the savior ring cracks a little bit from the metal impact.
Vlain: Valkyrie! Shot Upper!
Valkyrie jumps up and stats moving much faster. Valkyrie is chasing Pegasus.
Percy: Pegasus! Don’t let it catch you!
Vlain: Finish Him! Savior Bound!
Savior Valkyrie uses it’s bound gimmick to send Pegasus flying. Pegasus then slams into a near by wall and the metal wheel shatters. At the same moment the savior ring snaps right in half.
Percy/Vlain: *Gasp* You broke my Beyblade! No I did not you did!
Both of them calm down as they see the other bey broke as well.
Vlain: I didn’t mean to brake your bey, my dad might be able to help upgrade both of our beys, but you might have to eat dinner with us.
Percy: Sure! As long as I get to evolve Pegasus I am good! Let me call my dad.
Percy and Vlain walk to the Aoi house and see Valt making burgers in the back yard.
Vlain: Hey Dad! We have one more for dinner! Meet my new friend Percy!
Valt: Hi Percy! Let me guess you met beyblading, am I right?
Percy: Yeah! But are beys kinda broke.
The boys hold out the fragments of their beys. Valt notices the metal on Samurai Pegasus.
Valt *With Suprise*: What was your last name again?
Percy: Percy Hagane! The son of the number one ranked blader Gingka Hagane!
Valt: That’s weird, because I am number one! *Starts getting excited* I can’t believe it really exist! I thought it was just a legend!
The boys are confused as Valt gets increasingly excited. Then the burgers start to burn.
Valt: Aaagggh! Burgers! Look, I will explain over dinner. Vlain go set the table!
Vlain sets the table and the three of them sit down to dinner.
Valt: When I was little I was told of a different world were Beyblades were made of metal. I was told stories of the legendary Gingka Hagane and his bey Pegasus! I didn’t believe it was true until you told me about who you were and I saw your bey.
Percy: What, so your saying I came from another dimension?
Vlain: That is so cool!
Valt: Yep! Now how about some upgrades, I bet if we fuse the metal system and the burst system you two will go to the top of the rankings!
Percy/Vlain: Oh yeah! Let’s do it!
The three walk to Valt’s workshop where there is everything needed to create a bey. Percy explains the metal system while Valt and Valin tell of the burst systems.
Vlain: So all Metal beys have a Bolt? What if we combined the bolt and core!
Percy: So a Core Bolt, I like it! And the blades should be a mix of plastic, metal, and sometimes rubber!
Valt: So we have the Core Bolt, Battle Blade, Disk and Driver, what was the thing that went above the driver?
Percy: The spin track?
Valt: Yes! How about we combined spin tracks and Chassis!
Vlain: Oh yeah! The system is ready! Metal Burst is a go!
Vlain pumps his fist in the air as they start working on the boys beys.
Valin *Thoughts*: Valkyrie is going to have to have rubber, but what if it’s behind the blades? Then I will incorporate a spring load gimmick into the gimmick lock and give it Volcanic’!
Percy *Thoughts*: Pegasus! You will be based of the Pegasus wheel, then my dads forgotten bey wing will be incorporated, my favorite spin track will combined with this disk and this driver won’t work… Hang on! What about an attachment!
A few hours later…
Vlain: It’s done!
Percy: My Partner!
Vlain: Champion Valkyrie!
Percy: Stardust Pegasus!
Valt: Wow! So cool! How about a battle! There is a stadium in the back yard.
Percy: This time I won’t lose!
Vlain: Well sorry, but I am not losing either!
The two boys run out side to the stadiums and forget launchers…
Vlain: Whoops…
Valt: Here you guys go! *Valt tosses the boys each a launcher* I design them so that they incorporated more power!
Each launcher had a a color scheme as well as a few custom features.
Vlain’s was blue and gold with a angle chang incorporated into the grip for easy angling.
Percy’s was dark blue and red with the same gimmick.
Valt: These are the Metal Burst Attack Type Launchers!
Vlain: Ahh sweet!
Percy: This will work great!
Valt: I will ref! Bladers ready? Set! 3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Both bladers had there grips at a sloping angle. And both did a rich launch.
Percy *Thoughts*: I put Pegasus in smash mode! I will K.O Valkyrie for sure! *Out Loud* Pegasus head straight to the center! Stardust Wing!
Vlain: No you won’t! Valkyrie! Champion Bound!
The beys collide and both are sent flying and burst!
Percy: Whoah a burst finish! So cool!
Valt filmed the round and sent it to his friend in the higher ups. He knew he could get this new system and the news of the worlds colliding to spread like wild fire.
Man that was a long chapter… I love writing it though. Episode 15 of Demonic come out Saturday.
Valt?! Making burgers?! Who thought this was a good idea?! LOL
So I just read this chapter, for some reason I didn't see it before.
I liked this chapter and I think I'm going to like this fanfiction. This reminds me of my fanfiction Beyblade Burst Dynachi so it kinda feels good reading this. Percy and Vlain look like they're going to be awesome rivals. Anyways, if Vlain's Valt's dad then who's Vlain's Mom? The suspense has risen! Anyways, I loved this chapter keep up the amazing work 8/10!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight (Character Contest) - LJ-Blader - Sep. 26, 2021
Okay, sorry!
I was busy with school, the chapter is almost done. I will post three new character beys as well.
Fafnir, Dragon, and Your Choice!
You guys check out the character list on page nine and tell me who bey/character description you want! 
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight (Character Contest) - Hollowmind13 - Sep. 26, 2021
(Sep. 26, 2021 2:54 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: Okay, sorry!
I was busy with school, the chapter is almost done. I will post three new character beys as well.
Fafnir, Dragon, and Your Choice!
You guys check out the character list on page nine and tell me who bey/character description you want! :)
"Ben Hayama- Mercenary Bahamoote Accel’ 4-Spike (Mc. Bm. Ac’. 4-S)"
Bahamoote sounds interesting, so I'll vote on it.
By the way, it would be funny if Anna had Paris (the guy that killed Achilles)
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight (Character Contest) - LJ-Blader - Sep. 26, 2021
Yes! That would be, but they…
You’ll see soon enough.
Bahamoote -1
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Sep. 26, 2021
I liked Chapter 1 has chapter 2 come out? (I'm talking about Crows Fight)
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight (Character Contest) - LJ-Blader - Sep. 26, 2021
Soon, give me a few minutes.
Chapter Two
WBBA Approaches! Exhibition!
Valt: *On the phone* Yes, tomorrow sound good? Okay thanks Wakiya. *Hangs up*
Percy and Vlain are peeking around the wall. Percy had moved in on an air mattress in Vlain’s room until they found a way back to his world.
Valt: I see you two, don’t worry your not in trouble. Why don’t we go turn on the TV?
The boys run to the main area of the home where the TV is. They quickly turn it on. Wakiya appears on screen.
Wakiya: Hello Bey fans! Welcome to a WBBA special announcement! We have noticed that some people have randomly appeared at spots throughout the world. They are from a world like our own that we have named the Metal Dimension! If you meet someone like this please contact the WBBA right away! These bladers have beyblades made 90% of Metal! Later today we will show you a match between two bladers with the new Metal Burst system! A system that mixed burst beyblades with these metal beys!
The boys watch in excitement as Wakiya
explains the system.
Wakiya: The core bold holds the whole layer together and has your Beyblade spirit on it. The Battle Blade is where impact is made, lots have metal on them. The gimmick lock is like a chassis that screws to the layer. It contains the gimmick and the teeth. Then a normal disk and driver.
The broadcast ends and the two boys get excited.
Percy: Who’s battling with our system?
Vlain: What are there beys?
Percy: How did they get the details!
Vlain: What’s there name?
Vlain/Percy: Can we battle them!
Valt remembers he got this excited when a new challenger approached him.
Valt: Well, they use Champion Valkyrie and Stardust Pegasus and they are named Percy and Vlain.
The boys pupils grow to fill there entire eye.
Vlain/Percy: We are battling! When do we leave for the stadium!?!
Valt: Soon, so you better get ready!
The boys run upstairs butting shoulders all the way up. They grab their beys and run downstairs. Outside the boys are so excited that they start running in place.
Valt: You ready to go? To the Sparking Arena!
The boys cheer and get in the car. They drive to the sparking arena. When they arrive they see Wakiya walking out to meet them.
Wakiya: So these are the two youngsters who are going to battle. Let’s see your beys. *The boys hand Wakiya their beys* Interesting… I heard of this system but is is more impressive in person.
Percy: Thanks! Pegasus is the best attack type ever!
Vlain: Nah, I think Valkyrie is!
The boys start clashing and electric sparks between them.
Wakiya: I love the passion, but how about we wait till inside. *Wakiya laughs*
The gates open and the boys run in not noticing the figures in the corner. They set up at the bey stadium ready for battle.
???: Ineresting.
The crowds fill up the seats as the boys prepare to face off.
Percy: Ready for this Vlain?
Vlain: I was born ready.
Wakiya: *From the commentary booth* Welcome Bey Fans! Today we have a exciting battle between two budding bladers! Vlain Aoi and… *Valt whispers in his ear* Percy Hagane! And their metal burst beys! Champion Valkyrie and Stardust Pegasus!
The crowd cheers like crazy.
Wakiya: Now I hand it over to Hans!
Hans: Hey you bey fans! You ready for a rumble?!?!
Crowd: Yeah!!!!!!
Ref: Bladers ready? Set!
Percy: 3!
Vlain: 2!
Both: 1!
Entire Arena: Go Shoot!
Hans: Both Bladers pull off intense shoots! Their beys are currently circling around the edge of the stadium!
Vlain: Valkyrie! Go after him!
Valkyrie charges trying to charge up to Pegasus
Percy: Pegasus! Head to the center!
Hans: Pegasus starts moving in a great flower pattern!
Percy: *Thoughts* With Pegasus in smash mode, Valkyrie will burst! *Out loud* Pegasus! Send Valkyrie flying! Stardust Wing!
Pegasus’ blade shimmers as he slams into Valkyrie.
Hans: What a judge attack from Pegasus!
Vlain: Valkyrie! Appear! Attack with all your might!
Valkyrie’s avatar appears as the Beyblade Valkyrie hits the wall.
Vlain: Now! Champion Bound!
Valkyrie uses its bound gimmick and springs back toward Pegasus.
Percy: Whoah! I can see Valkyrie! Can Pegasus do that? Pegasus!
Nothing happens…
Percy: Oh man, we are still gonna win! Pegasus! Stardust Wing once more!
Valkyrie and Pegasus collide and both get sent flying. Pegasus landed on the ground then bursted a second before Valkyrie landed on the ground.
Ref: Valkyrie with an over finish! The score is 1-0!
Hans: Oh so close! Pegasus almost bursted but instead got ringed out! Percy is probably chewing his lip in worry as Valkyrie showed an impressive show of force!
Somewhere in the back of the arena.
???: Let’s see how you will over come Percy…
???: There you are, Uncle is looking for you.
???: Whatever.
Back by the arena.
Percy: *Thoughts* Why couldn’t I some Pegasus like Vlain summoned Valkyrie… I could have won if I did.
Percy gets pulled into a realm full of stars, a winged horse is flying above.
Percy: Pegasus, I see you!
Pegasus comes done and kneels before Percy.
Percy: I won’t let you down this time!
Percy is brought back to the real world.
Valt: Huh, looks like Percy was in the avatar world.
Hans: Who is ready for a second battle!
The crowd roars with delight.
Vlain: Looks like they are enjoying are battle, I know I am!
Percy: Yeah! But don’t expect to win!
Ref: Bladers Ready? Set!
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Hans: With two intense shoots who will win?
Percy: I plan on winning! Go Stardust Wing!
Pegasus heads straight toward Valkyrie.
Hans: Is Percy trying the same thing again? Does he not remember what happened last time?
Percy: Pegasus! Send him flying!
Pegasus and Valkyrie make contact and Valkyrie gets sent flying back.
Vlain: Did you forget? Valkyrie! Champion Bound!
Valkyrie appears and is charging straight towards Pegasus.
Percy: Pegasus! Show them our bond! Stardust Flight!
Pegasus begins to glitter with stardust and leave a trail of stardust as Percy’s aura shines and stars appear around him. But only for a brief second. Pegasus’s avatar appears and Pegasus then dashes around Valkyrie’s incoming attack.
Vlain: What!?! Why were there so many sparkles?
Percy: Pegasus! Stardust Wing once more!
Pegasus slams into Valkyrie and sends him flying out of the stadium.
Ref: Pegasus with an over finish! The score is now 1-1!
Hans: Woah! With a burst of power Percy scored a point! For a split second I could have sworn he was glowing!
Percy: *Thoughts* What was that, it was like I could read Pegasus’s mind! It told me how to score a point!
Vlain: *Thoughts* That new aura, it was unlike my dads or mine! I have got to reach that new limit! Valkyrie, can I count on you to help?
Vlain is transported to the avatar realm.
Vlain: Valkyrie, we must transcend all a boundaries! I will be better then my dad ever was!
Valkyrie smiled and motioned Vlain to kneel. Valkyrie then knighted Vlain.
Vlain: Thank you Valkyrie.
Vlain gets transported back to the real world.
Hans: Now! On to the third battle!
Percy: You ready for this?
Vlain: Oh yeah I am!
Ref: Bladers Ready? Set!
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Hans: With both bladers having one point this is the deciding match!
Percy: This last point will go to me!
Vlain: Not on my honor! Valkyrie! Champion Bound!
Valkyrie slams into the wall then speeds forward Pegasus!
Percy: Dodge it! Don’t let it hit you!
Pegasus moves out of the way at the last second.
Percy: Now Stardust Wing! Show them your force!
Pegasus hits Valkyrie into the wall.
Vlain: Now! Full Force Valkyrie! Champion Revolution!
Valkyrie started to gleam a dark blue and red and leave a trail of the two colors as well. Vlain’s aura flares as ribbons of Valkyrie’s colors swirl around him. Then it’s gone and Valkyrie appears swinging his sword at Pegasus.
Percy: Two can play at that game! Pegasus! Stardust Flight!
Percy power appears for a split second again, then as they fade away Pegasus comes out.
Vlain: Attack! Show no mercy!
Valkyrie and Pegasus Clash above and in the stadium.
Percy: Give it your all Pegasus!
Pegasus Slams into Valkyrie sending him flying back.
Vlain: End it here! Champion Bound!
Valkyrie uses the bound gimmick to fly straight toward Pegasus flinging him out of the stadium.
Ref: Valkyrie with an over finish! The score is now 2-1 meaning Vlain wins!
Hans: What an incredible battle! The blading world better watch out! These two bladers are ready to rise to the top!
Percy and Vlain fist bump and smile, they were ready to be the best!
Omega Dragon Ignition’ Double-Blade
(Right Spin Attack Type)
Omega: Tempest with blades permanently out.
Ignition’
Double Blade: Imperial but smaller with a awakening gimmick that exposes rubber. Has 2 Big Teeth and one small tooth
Delusion Fafnir Dwindle Halo Rubber-Brace (Left Spin Stamina Type)
Delusion: Vanish but without the gaps
Fafnir: Fafnir motif
Dwindle: Tapered for normal beys
Halo: Crazy Ares’ halo driver
Rubber-Brace: A triangular gimmick lock with rubber on the edges. Has 5 small teeth
Mercenary Bahamoote Accel’ 4-Spike
(Right Spin Balance Type)
Mercenary: On tip a circular ring leading to a metal claw on the bottom, has a face up on the circular part
Bahamoote: The massive dragon that destroys all motif
Accel’
4-Spike: A circular plate with 3 plastics spikes and one metal spike, can align and misalign with Mercenary. Has 3 medium locks
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight (Character Contest) - LJ-Blader - Sep. 30, 2021
Dan Koryu, Age 10, Europe
Has blonde hair. He wears a jacket with a D on a sleeve. His shirt is white while his jacket is dark blue. Happy all the time, gets angry easily and when he does he doesn’t talk to you until he’s over it.
Freyr de la Hoya, Age 13, Europe
Wears a yellow tank top and jeans he has yellow hair which he wears in a pony tail. Prefers to go bare foot. Thinks that he is best, last like Free. Very relaxed, doesn’t really care.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight (Character Contest) - LJ-Blader - Oct. 02, 2021
Episode 16
Clash of Blood, The Valhalla Battle!
“Hello little sister.” Said Lane as he stepped out of the shadows.
“Lane Valhalla!” Said Tyler excitedly. “Bell, he might be the true demon king.
Tyler snickered as Bell gave him the stink eye.
“Humph, whatever.” Said Bell as he walked away in a huff.
“You here to battle?” Asked Tyler really hoping he could try out Chaotic Titan.
“Yes, but not you.” Said Lane as his aura flared and he gave his sister a glare.
“Me! Oh I don’t know… why would you want to battle me?” Said Athena nervously aware that the whole room was looking at her.
“You are in the guilds aren’t you? I want to see if you are fully worthy of being related to me!!” Says Lane as his aura flares up.
“Okay… sure!” Said Athena as her aura flared and Adeona appeared behind her.
Athena starts to walk over to the stadium where Parker and Bell just battled.
“Not here though, on the roof!” Said Lane.
Tyler looks concerned as the group heads up to the tower.
“You ready girl?!?” Asked Lane as his eyes were engulfed in black.
“Athena be careful.” Said Tyler nervously. “Lane seems evil…”
“Not again…” says Athena in a depressing tone. “Lane! I thought you were over this!”
Lane smirked as he attacked Lucifer to his launcher.
“Whatever.” Lane said unsympathetically.
“I’ll ref.” Tyler said as he moved over to the stadium.
Everyone was so nervous, you could cut the tension with a butter knife.
“Are ready to loose?” Lane as he began to be consumed by darkness.
“Not to you I’m not!” Athena said determinedly as she attached Adeona to her launcher.
“Ready, Set!” Said Tyler.
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
“Now! Infernal shoot!” Said Athena as Adeona headed toward Lucifer.
“Weak!” Said Lane as his aura burned harder. “Lucifer! Shadow Wall!”
A barrier formed around Lucifer guarding it from attacks and sight.
“Keep in going Adeona! Charge ahead!” Adeona cried as she shot both her hands out.
Lane smirks as Adeona charges toward Lucifer.
“Lucifer! Drift Counter!” Cried Lane as Lucifers shield dropped.
Adeona made impact on Lucifer but just got sent flying out of the stadium from the free spin ring.
“Lucifer with an over finish, the score is 1-0” Said Tyler nervously.
“Haha! You’ll have to do better then that to beat me!” Said Lane as he picked up Lucifer.
“Don’t worry, it isn’t over yet!” Said Athena fiercely as she put Adeona on her launcher.
“Second Battle! Ready, Set!” Said Tyler as both blader’s auras came to life.
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Lucifer heads to the center while Adeona heads straight towards it.
“Adeona Appear!! End it before it begins! Soul Sword!” Said Athena as Adeona appeared and charged straight at Lucifer.
“Lucifer! Shadow Wall.” Lane said with a smirk.
“Adeona keep going!” Said Athena, but her confidence was waning.
“Lucifer don’t move.” Said Lane now just toying with Athena.
Adeona keeps up the attack. Much to no avail.
“Lucifer! Show her your strength!” Called Lane as Lucifer appeared.
The two avatars appeared and start clashing while the beys clash below.
“Ugh! Why Lane! You used to be so nice! Adeona! Finish it!” Adeona Yelled as Adeona slashed down on Lucifer.
Adeona Charges at Lucifer as Lane is consumed by darkness.
“Lucifer!” Drift Counter!” Said Demonic Lane.
This time Adeona survived the free spin blades, but then Lucifer skidded on its driver and charged at Adeona sending it flying.
“Adeona! It’s not over!” Called Athena as her aura flared up lighting up the roof. “Soul Whip!”
Adeona whip Lucifer sending it straight into Lane’s hand. He he held it there for a second before he growled at Athena.
“That will be the last point you ever earn!” Yelled Lane in a demonic tone.
“I don’t think so!” Athena yelled as she switched Adeona to high mode. “Adeona, I know we can do this.”
“Final Battle!” Said Tyler as the bladers prepared themselves.
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Both beys head straight toward the center.
“Lucifer! Turn her to nothing! Shadow Wall!!” Lane screamed.
“Adeona! Take him down! Soul Sword!” Yelled Athena with a smile.
The beys meet and both are thrown back into the wall.
“Adeona! Attack again! Go Soul Sword!” Called Athena as Adeona charges at Lucifer..
“Don’t let her through! Lucifer! False Shadow Wall!” Lane called as Lucifers barrier grew larger and larger.
Lucifer claims the center while Adeona tries to knock it out. Then Lucifers barrier starts to shrink.
“It’s time… Lucifer! Creeping Shadows!” Called Lane with a creepy voice and smile.
Then Lucifer disappeared.
“Where did it go?” Athena said nervously. “Adeona! What’s hitting you!”
Adeona stated to get knocked around.
“Get ready to perish sister. Lucifer!” Lane said as he summoned Lucifer and it charged at Adeona.
“Adeona… don’t give up. We got this!” Adeona!” Called Athena as Adeona appeared and clashed with Lucifer. “Soul Harbringer!”
Adeona’s blades glowed a bright purple as Adeona charged at the place Lucifer’s avatar was and smashed her blade down on the core.
“End this Adeona! Bring Lane Back!” Athena screamed as the Lucifer bursted and the Lucifer core broke.
“Adeona with a burst finish! The score is now 3-1 meaning, Athena wins!” Tyler says as Athena smiles wearily and then faints.
“Grr, next time sister next time.” Lane says as he stomps off.
I am going to take a break from Demonic to work on Cross Fight, don’t worry! Tyler, Bell, Parker, Aki, and Athena will be back!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight - LJ-Blader - Oct. 03, 2021
https://www.wattpad.com/user/LJ-Writer
I copied UnseenBurst...
Or I just wanted to do it
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight - Lucha Burst - Oct. 03, 2021
(Oct. 03, 2021 11:11 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: https://www.wattpad.com/user/LJ-Writer
I copied UnseenBurst...
Or I just wanted to do it
don't worry I also copied Unseen
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight - UnseenBurst - Oct. 03, 2021
Why is everyone copying me?! Lol XD
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight - Lucha Burst - Oct. 04, 2021
(Oct. 03, 2021 11:55 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Why is everyone copying me?! Lol XD
because wattpad
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight - Hollowmind13 - Oct. 04, 2021
(Oct. 03, 2021 11:55 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Why is everyone copying me?! Lol XD
To be fair, your idea is not that bad. (Although I'll never use Wattpad)
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight - Kiryu Kazuma - Oct. 04, 2021
(Oct. 03, 2021 11:55 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Why is everyone copying me?! Lol XD
What a coincidence. Yesterday, I was thinking to post my fic on wattpad too.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic/Cross Fight - LJ-Blader - Oct. 08, 2021
Chapter 4 is now called
Tag Team! The Twin Heirs of BC Sol
@Hollowmind8 you should probably be interested in this.
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