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One burst man - 6Jupiter5 - Nov. 02, 2020
A parody of one punch man. Here is the key.
Saitama = Aiga with Cho-z Achilles
Genos = Hikaru with
That’s all I’ve decided. First chapter coming soon. (Also who reported my fanfic final crisis?) I’ve decided to close the villains fanfic so please don’t report this one (I can take on both of them at once).
RE: One burst man - BeybladeManiac0 - Nov. 02, 2020
SAITAMA!!!
RE: One burst man - 6Jupiter5 - Nov. 02, 2020
I’m splitting it by each fight. First chapter is the vaccine man fight. I would like to credit a site with the script of the show which I’m using. https://www.animecharactersdatabase.com/episodetranscript.php?pid=104254&epid=1
*In the Blader association*
Worker 1: What the hell!
Worker 2: something’s closing in
Worker 1: Who’s available?
Worker 2: I have word that Storm Spriggan and Kinetic Satomb are on there way
Worker 1: I need a threat assessment this instant
Worker 2: As you can see, loud explosions are going off behind me! The damage left by the monster is at an unprecedented scale.
*A large explosion in city A is shown*
Announcer: the Blader association is currently assessing the threat level
Aiga: guess I’ll go
Little girl: Mommy Daddy 😰
Dead Phoenix: well, well, well who are you
Aiga: just a Blader for fun
Dead Phoenix: What kind of half-assed backstory is that? I was formed from the constant stream of toxicity which you humans have suffused the community with. I am Dead Phoenix. The WBO is a single community. You humans are nothing but a disease-causing bacteria eating away at it’s lifeforce. In order to obliterate humans and their toxic communities, You say you do this for fun? For fun? How dare you confront me,Mother Earth's apostle, for that inane reason! Yet, what more could be expected from a hu--
*Aiga launches his Achilles*
Aiga: Not again... All it took was one hit!
RE: One burst man - 6Jupiter5 - Nov. 03, 2020
Got some more characters decided:
Mumen Rider=Toko/treptune
Blast=Valt
Tatsumaki=Valt’s sister
Silver fang=Shu/Spriggan
Atomic Samurai = Lane/Lucifer
Metal Knight = Ashtem
Puri puri prisoner=puri puri prisoner (with a Beyblade)
Drive knight = Free
Child emperor = Gwyn
Boros = Phi
Chapter 1B is due sometime this weekend
RE: One burst man - 6Jupiter5 - Nov. 05, 2020
GreenK9148 try to take some tips from this
*THREE YEARS EARLIER*
Citizen: Run, it’s a monster!
Gasher: Huh? Are you sure you don’t want to run away? Oh, I know, you’re probably a just employed business man already tired of work. I became Gasher after eating too much crab. You should be running by now, you got a death wish? Is that it?
Aiga: Well, not quite. I’m unemployed. Right now I’m looking for a job. I had an interview today and was royally rejected. I’m not in the mood to run just because the mighty Gasher appeared, as I could care less about anything. What will happen now that I haven’t decided to run?
Gasher: Your eyes are lifeless, just like mine. From one set of lifeless eyes to another, I'll let you go. Besides, I’m hunting a big-chinned brat right now, and when O find him I’m going to pinch his arms right off.
Big-chinned kid: What’re you looking at?
Aiga: A big-chinned brat... if Gasher catches him, he's dead! Hey, kid. Were you messing with a big crab monster?
Big-Chinned kid: He was asleep in the park, so I drew something, which I can’t seem to remember, with a permanent marker
Aiga: It's definitely him He has no idea what he's done. What do I do? I could still help, but this kid isn’t the best looking. I feel like I should walk away, it’s none of my business. Who cares anyway?
Gasher: found you
Aiga: *swoops and saves the kid* What the hell am I doing?
Gasher: *is suprised*
Aiga: this man is after you, kid you gotta get the hell out of here
Kid: but, my soccer ball
Aiga: you’re concerned about you’re ball right now?
Gasher: Hey, what's the big idea? Don't tell me you're gonna protect that stinkin' brat!
Aiga: think about it, you are about to take an innocent life over a harmless prank
Gasher: I’ve already murdered several others. Whoever makes fun of the way I look pays the ultimate price. No exceptions. Just telling you, the brat drew nipples on my body using a permanent marker. I can’t wash that off with my claws! Get in my way, and I'll make sure you never go job hunting again! *Gasher throws Aiga across into a nearby structure*
Aiga: *gets up* It just came to me. You look exactly like a villain from this anime I used to watch!
Gasher: die already
Aiga: Hold it right there. In this age of decling birth rates, I can't just let you kill a kid. You know what? When I was a little boy, I wanted to be a hero. Not a businessman, but a hero who could send rotten villains like you flying with one punch. Screw looking for a job! Bring it on!
Gasher: Some hero you are. You don't stand a chance against me.
*Aiga does that gross thing with his tie to Gasher that Saitama did to Crablante*
Aiga monologue: Has it really been three years since then? After that day, I trained so hard my bey gained burst stoppers. I became so powerful, no one can burst me. Even after becoming everything I wanted to, why do I feel so empty?
TBC in episode 1C
RE: One burst man - SunBlader98 - Nov. 05, 2020
Ngl this is good
RE: One burst man - 6Jupiter5 - Nov. 05, 2020
(Nov. 05, 2020 2:23 AM)SunBlader98 Wrote: Ngl this is good
I used the script of opm and modified it (I didn’t directly copy it I changed words around and modified it quite a bit)
RE: One burst man - GreenK9148 - Nov. 05, 2020
I watched all the episodes on One Punch Man, so I’ll enjoy this fanfic
RE: One burst man - Valtryek Aoi - Nov. 05, 2020
(Nov. 05, 2020 2:36 AM)GreenK9148 Wrote: I watched all the episodes on One Punch Man, so I’ll enjoy this fanfic
Oh goodness, Saitama VS Boros?
Lemme guess, Aiga VS Phi?
That's gonna be an insane fight.
RE: One burst man - GreenK9148 - Nov. 05, 2020
(Nov. 05, 2020 2:39 AM)Valtryek Aoi Wrote:(Nov. 05, 2020 2:36 AM)GreenK9148 Wrote: I watched all the episodes on One Punch Man, so I’ll enjoy this fanfic
Oh goodness, Saitama VS Boros?
Lemme guess, Aiga VS Phi?
That's gonna be an insane fight.
Bro, that fight wasn’t even close. We don’t know Saitama’s full power yet
RE: One burst man - Valtryek Aoi - Nov. 05, 2020
(Nov. 05, 2020 2:48 AM)GreenK9148 Wrote:(Nov. 05, 2020 2:39 AM)Valtryek Aoi Wrote: Oh goodness, Saitama VS Boros?
Lemme guess, Aiga VS Phi?
That's gonna be an insane fight.
Bro, that fight wasn’t even close. We don’t know Saitama’s full power yet
I know that, but it was still cool to see Boros go all out only to get shut down.
Plus, the animation in that fight was on point.
RE: One burst man - GreenK9148 - Nov. 05, 2020
(Nov. 05, 2020 2:49 AM)Valtryek Aoi Wrote:(Nov. 05, 2020 2:48 AM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Bro, that fight wasn’t even close. We don’t know Saitama’s full power yet
I know that, but it was still cool to see Boros go all out only to get shut down.
Plus, the animation in that fight was on point.
Yes, it was.
RE: One burst man - 6Jupiter5 - Nov. 05, 2020
Phi is the perfect candidate for boros. Boros has an armor, Phi has a plot armor. That’s really the only thing I can think off, but Boros v saitama is Phi v Aiga
RE: One burst man - Valtryek Aoi - Nov. 05, 2020
(Nov. 05, 2020 3:23 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: Phi is the perfect candidate for boros. Boros has an armor, Phi has a plot armor. That’s really the only thing I can think off, but Boros v saitama is Phi v Aiga
Phi kinda had that alien factor, not only look like one with those black scleras and heterochromia iridium, but also being rumored to appear from a meteor.
RE: One burst man - 6Jupiter5 - Nov. 05, 2020
(Nov. 05, 2020 3:36 AM)Valtryek Aoi Wrote:(Nov. 05, 2020 3:23 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: Phi is the perfect candidate for boros. Boros has an armor, Phi has a plot armor. That’s really the only thing I can think off, but Boros v saitama is Phi v Aiga
Phi kinda had that alien factor, not only look like one with those black scleras and heterochromia iridium, but also being rumored to appear from a meteor.
That was a misunderstanding. It was Phoenix and Hades that were created from meteors.
RE: One burst man - 6Jupiter5 - Nov. 10, 2020
Episode 1C:
Cashier: 482 yen please
Aiga: Oh shoot, I only have 82 yen
Dr.Evel: Incredible... This is incredible, my bey! I never thought it would work so well.
Orb Egis: Yes, it's more than I ever imagined, owner. My goal was to become the strongest man in the world. The very best was my dream.
*flashback*
Dr.Evel: At last, the ultimate defense driver, "quest," is complete! After drinking this, my bey, you will become the strongest man in all exsistance.
Egis: Drink that?
Dr. Evel: I added strawberry flavoring, to make it go down easier.
Egis: thanks
Dr.Evel: yes this shall work just fine
*flashback ends*
Dr. Evel: My brains and your brawn! By combining the greatest of minds and the strongest of bodies, we will conquer everything in this planet
*Orb Egis takes a foot step*
Dr. Evel: Well done, little brother. Thousands have perished. Let’s destroy the next town
Announcer: This is an emergency evacuation warning. A giant bey has appeared in City D. The bey is currently heading towards City B. All residents of the area, please evacuate immediately. I repeat, the giant creature is currently heading for--
Dr.Evel: Yes, that's right! Scatter like rats! Kill them!
Orb Egis: I’m the strongest bey!
Dr. Evel: how does this power feel?
Aiga: How does it fell to be the strongest?
Dr.Evel: There’s someone on your shoulder
*Orb Egis proceeds to kill Dr.Evel*
Orb Egis: how did this happen!? I just wanted to be the strongest there is. I don't know who you are, but it's your fault my owner is dead!
*proceeds to launch Aiga through a building and into the ground*
Orb Egis: I am the strongest. So what if I am? I feel empty.
Aiga: Having overwhelming strength is pretty boring
*launches Achilles and breaks orb egis*
Aiga: oh no!
RE: One burst man - EarthHelios - Nov. 10, 2020
(Nov. 10, 2020 1:56 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: Episode 1C:
Cashier: 482 yen please
Aiga: Oh shoot, I only have 82 yen
Dr.Evel: Incredible... This is incredible, my bey! I never thought it would work so well.
Orb Egis: Yes, it's more than I ever imagined, owner. My goal was to become the strongest man in the world. The very best was my dream.
*flashback*
Dr.Evel: At last, the ultimate defense driver, "quest," is complete! After drinking this, my bey, you will become the strongest man in all exsistance.
Egis: Drink that?
Dr. Evel: I added strawberry flavoring, to make it go down easier.
Egis: thanks
Dr.Evel: yes this shall work just fine
*flashback ends*
Dr. Evel: My brains and your brawn! By combining the greatest of minds and the strongest of bodies, we will conquer everything in this planet
*Orb Egis takes a foot step*
Dr. Evel: Well done, little brother. Thousands have perished. Let’s destroy the next town
Announcer: This is an emergency evacuation warning. A giant bey has appeared in City D. The bey is currently heading towards City B. All residents of the area, please evacuate immediately. I repeat, the giant creature is currently heading for--
Dr.Evel: Yes, that's right! Scatter like rats! Kill them!
Orb Egis: I’m the strongest bey!
Dr. Evel: how does this power feel?
Aiga: How does it fell to be the strongest?
Dr.Evel: There’s someone on your shoulder
*Orb Egis proceeds to kill Dr.Evel*
Orb Egis: how did this happen!? I just wanted to be the strongest there is. I don't know who you are, but it's your fault my owner is dead!
*proceeds to launch Aiga through a building and into the ground*
Orb Egis: I am the strongest. So what if I am? I feel empty.
Aiga: Having overwhelming strength is pretty boring
*launches Achilles and breaks orb egis*
Aiga: oh no!
I like your fanfic