Beyblade Burst- Zenith of the Gods, A PG-13 Fanfic - The Blacknight - Sep. 30, 2020
THIS IS A PG-13 FANFICTION. DO NOT READ IF YOU ARE YOUNG OR CANNOT HANDLE GORE OR DEATH. THERE WILL BE NO CURSING HOWEVER. ALSO, I WILL BE CHANGING THE CHARACTER'S PERSONALITY A BIT, SO DON'T KILL ME.
Hey all, dis mah fanfic.
Here are the current standings, top 15, 1-8 are god status, 9-15 are legend status, all #6, #11, #14 are the same rank/level(Btw, shu is retired) :
1. Abel Hin, bey: Star Ashura (not for le memes, just because Ashura was my first TT bey)
2. Scorpion, bey: Trap Arachne
3. John Andersen (The leader of Boa's gang of friends in God), bey: Galactic Nyx
4. Raxxon Voltage, bey: Raze Griffin
5. Jin Byakko, bey: Claw Tiger
6. Aiga Akabane (using, English dub last name) bey: Prince Achilles (also Legend status)
6. Valt Aoi, bey: Warrior Valkryie (only blader in top ten that is not God status)
6. Ahmed Ishtar, bey: Illusion Osiris
7. Charon Mortem, bey: Tartarus Cerberus
8. Sera Kinglore, bey: High Seraphim
9. Free de la Hoya, bey: Wicked Fafnir
10. Lui Shirosagi (English dub last name), bey: Blizzard Longinus
11. Hikaru Asahi, bey: Hyper Helios
12: Hyuga Asahi, bey: Titan Hyperion
13: Drum Koryu, bey: Nova Dragon
14: Delta Zakuro, bey: Ancient Diabolos (God tier)
14: Sisco Karlisle(idk if is spelled that right), bey: Menace Satan
15: Boa Alcazaba, bey: End Bahamut
16. Phi, bey: Ignition Pheonix
17. Gwyn, bey: Boom Regalia
18. Laban Vanot, bey: Ataraxis Leopard
18. Suoh Genji, bey: Lotus Salamander
19. Hae-jin Oh, bey: Arrow Hercules
20. Toko Aoi, bey: Laminar Trident
21. Kit Lopez, bey: Wind Knight
22. Hearts, bey: Scythe Hades
23. Cuza Ackermann, bey: Eon Chronos
24. Amir Vanot, bey: Finisher Apocalypse
God tier standings:
1. Abel
2. Ender, bey: Brutality Oroboros
3. Scorpion
4. Apollus Leto, bey: Solar Apollo
5. Arteimun Leto, bey: Lunar Artemis
6. John Andersen
7. Peter Glass, bey: Shining Orichalcum
8. Shu Kurenai, bey: General Spriggan
9. Nika Aoi, bey: Devastation Cupid
10. Raxxon Voltage
11. Jin Byakko
12. Aiga Akabane/Ahmed Ishtar
13. Anai Glass, bey: Darkness Amaterios
14.Charon Mortem
15. Sera Kinglore
16. Delta Zakuro
17. Tenor Ginba, bey: Supersonic Odin
Note: The God Tier ranking system is slightly different. The ranking is based on the power of the blader's aura, and feats(Raxxon Voltage broke 3,038 beys, and he broke the most Gold Turbo beys at one time, 1,569.) of power. You have to be inducted into the god tier. most God tier Bladers do not bother with rankings, which is why you do not see them on the official wbba rankings. I will put more info on this later. And no, Nika Aoi is not a typo, yes, she is more powerful than both of her brothers and Shu kurenai. This is nt a meme.
[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]“So that’s him?” the short, masked, child questioned, looking at a beating from the top of a skyscraper. “Yes, lord Khayo, that is Damian Ketsuki,” his assistant responded. The child in question was an average, orange haired child, of about thirteen years of age. Young Damian was in a brawl, a big one. He was fighting about twelve kids, all at least two years older than him. Damian was losing. Badly. His opponents had massive spiked bats, pipes, and knives. Damian had his fists. “Ooh, that has to hurt,” the masked child winced. The gang leader jeered at Damian, then walked away. The masked child and his assistant jumped off the building. The assistant spread massive, black, bird-like wings from his back and grabbed Khayo. They glided to land in front of Damian. “You freaks want a piece of me? I don’t care if I’m hallucinating a stupid angle, or demon, or magic loser, I'm still gonna kill you, ya friggin uglies,” Damian groaned. “He seems to have quite the inventive vocabulary,” Khayo said. “Little boy, we are here to help you.” “With what?” Damian said. “With power,” the black-winged man said. Damian smiled. [/font]
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[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]One month and 5 days later [/font]
[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]“Well, you’ve been poking holes in me with needles for about a month now. We done?” Damian asked. He had been repeating this question for the past two weeks, and usually, Khayo said: “No, be patient.” Damian was expecting the same answer, but there was not one. “Come in here, and undress,” Khayo said. He did, and Khayo and his assistant were waiting behind a pane of glass. “Turn it on,” Khayo told his assistant. “Turn what o-AAAAAGH!!!” Damian screamed. Thirty or so syringes shot out of the wall, attached to wires, and stabbed Damian. He could feel them sinking into his brain, his lungs, his legs, his arms, his spine, his heart. “C-c-crud, I-I-I'm gonna die...” Damian trailed off. Then- like a shock- his body twisted. Again. And again. It contorted and snapped as various of his bones broke. Then he went rigid. The syringes had done their work. They were small doses of the requiem formula. Damian’s mind was transported. “Where am I?” he asked himself. “Limbo,” a voice said. “Who are you, and how do you know where we are?” Damian said. “I am the end of the gods, and this is where I reside,” The voice chuckled. “Why am I here?” Damian questioned. The voice responded, “You were sent here.” ”What for?” Damian said. “Power,” The voice said. Damian smiled. [/font]
[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]Three days later [/font]
[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]Damian’s hands were covered in blood. Killing jerks took a while, they were resilient. He had killed about eleven of them. The last one, the gang leader, tried to scramble away, but Damian killed him too. His aura was thirsty for more blood. Khayo and his assistant walked towards him. “How do you like your new power?” Khaos asked. Damian smiled. [/font]
Hope you like it! It ain't too good, but I'm hoping to improve going forwards. Plz, put criticism, using this to improve school papers as well as for fun.
RE: Beyblade Burst- Zenith of the Gods, A PG-13 Fanfic - The Blacknight - Oct. 01, 2020
(Sep. 30, 2020 8:06 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: THIS IS A PG-13 FANFICTION. DO NOT READ IF YOU ARE YOUNG OR CANNOT HANDLE GORE OR DEATH. ALSO, I WILL BE CHANGING THE CHARACTER'S PERSONALITY A BIT, SO DON'T KILL ME.
Hey all, dis mah fanfic. I won't be posting as often as some other fanfic writers, so don't expect a rigid schedule. Hope you like it!
Here are the current standings, top 15, 1-8 are god status, 9-15 are legend status, all #6, #11, #14 are the same rank/level(Btw, shu is retired) :
1. Abel Hin, bey: Star Ashura (not for le memes, just because Ashura was my first TT bey)
2. Scorpion, bey: Trap Arachne
3. John Andersen (The leader of Boa's gang of friends in God), bey: Galactic Nyx
4. Raxxon Voltage, bey: Raze Griffin
5. Jin Byakko, bey: Claw Tiger
6. Aiga Akabane (using, English dub last name) bey: Prince Achilles (also Legend status)
6. Valt Aoi, bey: Warrior Valkryie (only blader in top ten that is not God status)
6. Ahmed Ishtar, bey: Illusion Osiris
7. Charon Mortem, bey: Tartarus Cerberus
8. Sera Kinglore, bey: High Seraphim
9. Free de la Hoya, bey: Wicked Fafnir
10. Lui Shirosagi (English dub last name), bey: Blizzard Longinus
11. Hikaru Asahi, bey: Hyper Helios
12: Hyuga Asahi, bey: Titan Hyperion
13: Drum Koryu, bey: Nova Dragon
14: Delta Zakuro, bey: Ancient Diabolos
14: Sisco Karlisle(idk if is spelled that right), bey: Menace Satan
15: Boa Alcazaba, bey: End Bahamut
Prologue: Power
[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]“So that’s him?” the short, masked, child questioned, looking at a beating from the top of a skyscraper. “Yes, lord Khayo, that is Damian Ketsuki,” his assistant responded. The child in question was an average, orange haired child, of about thirteen years of age. Young Damian was in a brawl, a big one. He was fighting about twelve kids, all at least two years older than him. Damian was losing. Badly. His opponents had massive spiked bats, pipes, and knives. Damian had his fists. “Ooh, that has to hurt,” the masked child winced. The gang leader jeered at Damian, then walked away. The masked child and his assistant jumped off the building. The assistant spread massive, black, bird-like wings from his back and grabbed Khayo. They glided to land in front of Damian. “You freaks want a piece of me? I don’t care if I’m hallucinating a stupid angle, or demon, or magic loser, I'm still gonna kill you, ya friggin uglies,” Damian groaned. “He seems to have quite the inventive vocabulary,” Khayo said. “Little boy, we are here to help you.” “With what?” Damian said. “With power,” the black-winged man said. Damian smiled. [/font]
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[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]One month and 5 days later [/font]
[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]“Well, you’ve been poking holes in me with needles for about a month now. We done?” Damian asked. He had been repeating this question for the past two weeks, and usually, Khayo said: “No, be patient.” Damian was expecting the same answer, but there was not one. “Come in here, and undress,” Khayo said. He did, and Khayo and his assistant were waiting behind a pane of glass. “Turn it on,” Khayo told his assistant. “Turn what o-AAAAAGH!!!” Damian screamed. Thirty or so syringes shot out of the wall, attached to wires, and stabbed Damian. He could feel them sinking into his brain, his lungs, his legs, his arms, his spine, his heart. “C-c-crud, I-I-I'm gonna die...” Damian trailed off. Then- like a shock- his body twisted. Again. And again. It contorted and snapped as various of his bones broke. Then he went rigid. The syringes had done their work. They were small doses of the requiem formula. Damian’s mind was transported. “Where am I?” he asked himself. “Limbo,” a voice said. “Who are you, and how do you know where we are?” Damian said. “I am the end of the gods, and this is where I reside,” The voice chuckled. “Why am I here?” Damian questioned. The voice responded, “You were sent here.” ”What for?” Damian said. “Power,” The voice said. Damian smiled. [/font]
[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]Three days later [/font]
[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]Damian’s hands were covered in blood. Killing jerks took a while, they were resilient. He had killed about eleven of them. The last one, the gang leader, tried to scramble away, but Damian killed him too. His aura was thirsty for more blood. Khayo and his assistant walked towards him. “How do you like your new power?” Khaos asked. Damian smiled. [/font]
Hope you like it! It ain't too good, but I'm hoping to improve going forwards. Plz, put criticism, using this to improve school papers as well as for fun.
Update: The first chapter will be called: The Devil's Name and the Children Lost, the Salamander and the King of Frost
(ik its cheesy but dont kill me lol)
btw 4 those who thought the top 15 r the only returning bladers, you are totally wrong, planning on adding a ton of characters
RE: Beyblade Burst- Zenith of the Gods, A PG-13 Fanfic - The Blacknight - Oct. 06, 2020
(Oct. 01, 2020 5:11 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: (Sep. 30, 2020 8:06 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: THIS IS A PG-13 FANFICTION. DO NOT READ IF YOU ARE YOUNG OR CANNOT HANDLE GORE OR DEATH. ALSO, I WILL BE CHANGING THE CHARACTER'S PERSONALITY A BIT, SO DON'T KILL ME.
Hey all, dis mah fanfic. I won't be posting as often as some other fanfic writers, so don't expect a rigid schedule. Hope you like it!
Here are the current standings, top 15, 1-8 are god status, 9-15 are legend status, all #6, #11, #14 are the same rank/level(Btw, shu is retired) :
1. Abel Hin, bey: Star Ashura (not for le memes, just because Ashura was my first TT bey)
2. Scorpion, bey: Trap Arachne
3. John Andersen (The leader of Boa's gang of friends in God), bey: Galactic Nyx
4. Raxxon Voltage, bey: Raze Griffin
5. Jin Byakko, bey: Claw Tiger
6. Aiga Akabane (using, English dub last name) bey: Prince Achilles (also Legend status)
6. Valt Aoi, bey: Warrior Valkryie (only blader in top ten that is not God status)
6. Ahmed Ishtar, bey: Illusion Osiris
7. Charon Mortem, bey: Tartarus Cerberus
8. Sera Kinglore, bey: High Seraphim
9. Free de la Hoya, bey: Wicked Fafnir
10. Lui Shirosagi (English dub last name), bey: Blizzard Longinus
11. Hikaru Asahi, bey: Hyper Helios
12: Hyuga Asahi, bey: Titan Hyperion
13: Drum Koryu, bey: Nova Dragon
14: Delta Zakuro, bey: Ancient Diabolos
14: Sisco Karlisle(idk if is spelled that right), bey: Menace Satan
15: Boa Alcazaba, bey: End Bahamut
Prologue: Power
[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]“So that’s him?” the short, masked, child questioned, looking at a beating from the top of a skyscraper. “Yes, lord Khayo, that is Damian Ketsuki,” his assistant responded. The child in question was an average, orange haired child, of about thirteen years of age. Young Damian was in a brawl, a big one. He was fighting about twelve kids, all at least two years older than him. Damian was losing. Badly. His opponents had massive spiked bats, pipes, and knives. Damian had his fists. “Ooh, that has to hurt,” the masked child winced. The gang leader jeered at Damian, then walked away. The masked child and his assistant jumped off the building. The assistant spread massive, black, bird-like wings from his back and grabbed Khayo. They glided to land in front of Damian. “You freaks want a piece of me? I don’t care if I’m hallucinating a stupid angle, or demon, or magic loser, I'm still gonna kill you, ya friggin uglies,” Damian groaned. “He seems to have quite the inventive vocabulary,” Khayo said. “Little boy, we are here to help you.” “With what?” Damian said. “With power,” the black-winged man said. Damian smiled. [/font]
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[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]One month and 5 days later [/font]
[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]“Well, you’ve been poking holes in me with needles for about a month now. We done?” Damian asked. He had been repeating this question for the past two weeks, and usually, Khayo said: “No, be patient.” Damian was expecting the same answer, but there was not one. “Come in here, and undress,” Khayo said. He did, and Khayo and his assistant were waiting behind a pane of glass. “Turn it on,” Khayo told his assistant. “Turn what o-AAAAAGH!!!” Damian screamed. Thirty or so syringes shot out of the wall, attached to wires, and stabbed Damian. He could feel them sinking into his brain, his lungs, his legs, his arms, his spine, his heart. “C-c-crud, I-I-I'm gonna die...” Damian trailed off. Then- like a shock- his body twisted. Again. And again. It contorted and snapped as various of his bones broke. Then he went rigid. The syringes had done their work. They were small doses of the requiem formula. Damian’s mind was transported. “Where am I?” he asked himself. “Limbo,” a voice said. “Who are you, and how do you know where we are?” Damian said. “I am the end of the gods, and this is where I reside,” The voice chuckled. “Why am I here?” Damian questioned. The voice responded, “You were sent here.” ”What for?” Damian said. “Power,” The voice said. Damian smiled. [/font]
[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]Three days later [/font]
[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]Damian’s hands were covered in blood. Killing jerks took a while, they were resilient. He had killed about eleven of them. The last one, the gang leader, tried to scramble away, but Damian killed him too. His aura was thirsty for more blood. Khayo and his assistant walked towards him. “How do you like your new power?” Khaos asked. Damian smiled. [/font]
Hope you like it! It ain't too good, but I'm hoping to improve going forwards. Plz, put criticism, using this to improve school papers as well as for fun.
Update: The first chapter will be called: The Devil's Name and the Children Lost, the Salamander and the King of Frost
(ik its cheesy but dont kill me lol)
btw 4 those who thought the top 15 r the only returning bladers, you are totally wrong, planning on adding a ton of characters
Ch 1 pt 1 of 5: The Devil's name and the Children Lost, Part 1. Hope ya like!
[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]Chapter 1, part 1 of 5: The Devil’s name and the Children Lost [/font]
[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]“For every story, there is a beginning. But time waits for no one. Don’t wait for the story to begin, begin it yourself. Make your own reality. Live on. Breathe life into your words and write. Write, young child.” As Chay lay in his broken reality, his shattered world, he shed a single tear. The back of his long hair turned a staggering white a few days prior. His tattered clothes were bloodied with gore, and wet with sweat and anger. “carp, I must’ve hit a rock,” he thought. Or whatever the messed-up land he was on was. Exactly two hundred- and thirty-five-seconds before then, he had made one of the biggest mistakes of his life. [/font]
[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]Five minutes prior [/font]
[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]“LET IT RIP!” Chay and Kai yelled. Chay’s combination was a green Arc Bahamut Wheel Orbit, and Kai’s was an orange Slash Achilles Zenith Destroy Gen. The beys clashed. Achilles’ superior attack power shot Bahamut to the wall, but Orbit’s tab stopped Bahamut from spiraling out of control. ACHILLES! GOLD TURBO! Achilles exploded into a shining golden color and charged at Bahamut. BAHAMUT! SILVER TURBO! Kai smiled at Bahamut’s gleaming silver shade. “Gold is better than silver,” Kai said. Achilles and Bahamut clashed in the center. Achilles shot Bahamut into the sky. “No burst?” Kai said inquisitively. “Silver is better than nothing,” Chay replied. “Again then,” Kai said. [/font]
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[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]“LET IT RIP!” the two boys yelled. Their beys were off. “Let me show you a little trick,” Kai said. “Gold turbo increases your beys attack, defense, and stamina, right?” “Yes?” Chay said. “Well, what if I transfer all of that power to attack?” “Uhm, don’t do drugs,” Chay said with and incredulous look on his face (srsly don’t do drugs tho). “I’m not crazy,” Kai chuckled. “That was funny, but it’s the end. ACHILLES, STRIKE TURBO!” Achilles glowed, then burst into a glowing ruby red. “Now, ZENITH SLASH!” Achilles used its immense power to crash into the walls and have its Slash layer base align with Zenith’s rubber. Chay smirked. “Let’s go Bahamut, OBSIDIAN TURBO!” Bahamut changed colors and looked like it was made of gleaming obsidian.“What?!?” Kai yelled. “Charge with ORBIT ARC!” Orbit’s tabs and ball combined to shoot Bahamut in a wide arc to the center. “AAAAAATTACK!!!” both bladers screamed at the top of their lungs. “No!” A hidden figure yelled. A red and black bey appeared from the shadows, but it was too late. The beys collided. A bolt of lightning appeared in the middle of the beys. From the center of the stadium, an explosion of inverted color appeared. The mysterious bey pierced it, and the hidden blader was able to enter. However, the explosion continued, then stopped as suddenly as it began, Kai and Chay opened their eyes to a world with a purple sky. They sat up to a rocky barren wasteland, like a mountain was destroyed thousands of years ago. “Where am I?” Kai asked. The hidden blader picked up his bey. “Limbo,” he said. “And who are you?” Chay questioned. The hidden blader smirked. “My name is Delta Zakuro, and I’m getting you out.” [/font]
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RE: Beyblade Burst- Zenith of the Gods, A PG-13 Fanfic - The Blacknight - Oct. 07, 2020
(Oct. 06, 2020 6:59 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: (Oct. 01, 2020 5:11 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: Update: The first chapter will be called: The Devil's Name and the Children Lost, the Salamander and the King of Frost
(ik its cheesy but dont kill me lol)
btw 4 those who thought the top 15 r the only returning bladers, you are totally wrong, planning on adding a ton of characters
Ch 1 pt 1 of 5: The Devil's name and the Children Lost, Part 1. Hope ya like!
[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]Chapter 1, part 1 of 5: The Devil’s name and the Children Lost [/font]
[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]“For every story, there is a beginning. But time waits for no one. Don’t wait for the story to begin, begin it yourself. Make your own reality. Live on. Breathe life into your words and write. Write, young child.” As Chay lay in his broken reality, his shattered world, he shed a single tear. The back of his long hair turned a staggering white a few days prior. His tattered clothes were bloodied with gore, and wet with sweat and anger. “carp, I must’ve hit a rock,” he thought. Or whatever the messed-up land he was on was. Exactly two hundred- and thirty-five-seconds before then, he had made one of the biggest mistakes of his life. [/font]
[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]Five minutes prior [/font]
[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]“LET IT RIP!” Chay and Kai yelled. Chay’s combination was a green Arc Bahamut Wheel Orbit, and Kai’s was an orange Slash Achilles Zenith Destroy Gen. The beys clashed. Achilles’ superior attack power shot Bahamut to the wall, but Orbit’s tab stopped Bahamut from spiraling out of control. ACHILLES! GOLD TURBO! Achilles exploded into a shining golden color and charged at Bahamut. BAHAMUT! SILVER TURBO! Kai smiled at Bahamut’s gleaming silver shade. “Gold is better than silver,” Kai said. Achilles and Bahamut clashed in the center. Achilles shot Bahamut into the sky. “No burst?” Kai said inquisitively. “Silver is better than nothing,” Chay replied. “Again then,” Kai said. [/font]
[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]3... [/font]
[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]2... [/font]
[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]1... [/font]
[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]“LET IT RIP!” the two boys yelled. Their beys were off. “Let me show you a little trick,” Kai said. “Gold turbo increases your beys attack, defense, and stamina, right?” “Yes?” Chay said. “Well, what if I transfer all of that power to attack?” “Uhm, don’t do drugs,” Chay said with and incredulous look on his face (srsly don’t do drugs tho). “I’m not crazy,” Kai chuckled. “That was funny, but it’s the end. ACHILLES, STRIKE TURBO!” Achilles glowed, then burst into a glowing ruby red. “Now, ZENITH SLASH!” Achilles used its immense power to crash into the walls and have its Slash layer base align with Zenith’s rubber. Chay smirked. “Let’s go Bahamut, OBSIDIAN TURBO!” Bahamut changed colors and looked like it was made of gleaming obsidian.“What?!?” Kai yelled. “Charge with ORBIT ARC!” Orbit’s tabs and ball combined to shoot Bahamut in a wide arc to the center. “AAAAAATTACK!!!” both bladers screamed at the top of their lungs. “No!” A hidden figure yelled. A red and black bey appeared from the shadows, but it was too late. The beys collided. A bolt of lightning appeared in the middle of the beys. From the center of the stadium, an explosion of inverted color appeared. The mysterious bey pierced it, and the hidden blader was able to enter. However, the explosion continued, then stopped as suddenly as it began, Kai and Chay opened their eyes to a world with a purple sky. They sat up to a rocky barren wasteland, like a mountain was destroyed thousands of years ago. “Where am I?” Kai asked. The hidden blader picked up his bey. “Limbo,” he said. “And who are you?” Chay questioned. The hidden blader smirked. “My name is Delta Zakuro, and I’m getting you out.” [/font]
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Update: Chapter 1 pt two will be out soon, and it will be about Lui, Suoh, and a surprise character! Ch1 pt 3 will return to Delta, Chay, and Kai! I'm working on Pt2 now, so stay tuned!
(Oct. 07, 2020 8:27 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: (Oct. 06, 2020 6:59 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: Ch 1 pt 1 of 5: The Devil's name and the Children Lost, Part 1. Hope ya like!
[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]Chapter 1, part 1 of 5: The Devil’s name and the Children Lost [/font]
[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]“For every story, there is a beginning. But time waits for no one. Don’t wait for the story to begin, begin it yourself. Make your own reality. Live on. Breathe life into your words and write. Write, young child.” As Chay lay in his broken reality, his shattered world, he shed a single tear. The back of his long hair turned a staggering white a few days prior. His tattered clothes were bloodied with gore, and wet with sweat and anger. “carp, I must’ve hit a rock,” he thought. Or whatever the messed-up land he was on was. Exactly two hundred- and thirty-five-seconds before then, he had made one of the biggest mistakes of his life. [/font]
[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]Five minutes prior [/font]
[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]“LET IT RIP!” Chay and Kai yelled. Chay’s combination was a green Arc Bahamut Wheel Orbit, and Kai’s was an orange Slash Achilles Zenith Destroy Gen. The beys clashed. Achilles’ superior attack power shot Bahamut to the wall, but Orbit’s tab stopped Bahamut from spiraling out of control. ACHILLES! GOLD TURBO! Achilles exploded into a shining golden color and charged at Bahamut. BAHAMUT! SILVER TURBO! Kai smiled at Bahamut’s gleaming silver shade. “Gold is better than silver,” Kai said. Achilles and Bahamut clashed in the center. Achilles shot Bahamut into the sky. “No burst?” Kai said inquisitively. “Silver is better than nothing,” Chay replied. “Again then,” Kai said. [/font]
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[font="Segoe UI", "Segoe UI Web", Arial, Verdana, sans-serif]“LET IT RIP!” the two boys yelled. Their beys were off. “Let me show you a little trick,” Kai said. “Gold turbo increases your beys attack, defense, and stamina, right?” “Yes?” Chay said. “Well, what if I transfer all of that power to attack?” “Uhm, don’t do drugs,” Chay said with and incredulous look on his face (srsly don’t do drugs tho). “I’m not crazy,” Kai chuckled. “That was funny, but it’s the end. ACHILLES, STRIKE TURBO!” Achilles glowed, then burst into a glowing ruby red. “Now, ZENITH SLASH!” Achilles used its immense power to crash into the walls and have its Slash layer base align with Zenith’s rubber. Chay smirked. “Let’s go Bahamut, OBSIDIAN TURBO!” Bahamut changed colors and looked like it was made of gleaming obsidian.“What?!?” Kai yelled. “Charge with ORBIT ARC!” Orbit’s tabs and ball combined to shoot Bahamut in a wide arc to the center. “AAAAAATTACK!!!” both bladers screamed at the top of their lungs. “No!” A hidden figure yelled. A red and black bey appeared from the shadows, but it was too late. The beys collided. A bolt of lightning appeared in the middle of the beys. From the center of the stadium, an explosion of inverted color appeared. The mysterious bey pierced it, and the hidden blader was able to enter. However, the explosion continued, then stopped as suddenly as it began, Kai and Chay opened their eyes to a world with a purple sky. They sat up to a rocky barren wasteland, like a mountain was destroyed thousands of years ago. “Where am I?” Kai asked. The hidden blader picked up his bey. “Limbo,” he said. “And who are you?” Chay questioned. The hidden blader smirked. “My name is Delta Zakuro, and I’m getting you out.” [/font]
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Update: Chapter 1 pt two will be out soon, and it will be about Lui, Suoh, and a surprise character! Ch1 pt 3 will return to Delta, Chay, and Kai! I'm working on Pt2 now, so stay tuned!
oh, one more thing, i will take TWO character requests for my one of my next two arcs! whichever I like best will be in!
Requierments:
must not be existing character or bey, no hasbro and tt exclusive beys
For arc 1: must have jungle/beast themed bey, must be antagonist
For arc 2: must have bey based off egyptian mythology
RE: Beyblade Burst- Zenith of the Gods, A PG-13 Fanfic - The Blacknight - Oct. 08, 2020
Hey all, I am going on a COVID safe vacay so prob won’t be able to finish ch 1 pt2. May upload Rly short stories over the weekend, but prob won’t post any fanfic in at least 5 days, have a good rest of ur day!😄
RE: Beyblade Burst- Zenith of the Gods, A PG-13 Fanfic - Eclipse Force - Oct. 09, 2020
(Oct. 08, 2020 11:43 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: Hey all, I am going on a COVID safe vacay so prob won’t be able to finish ch 1 pt2. May upload Rly short stories over the weekend, but prob won’t post any fanfic in at least 5 days, have a good rest of ur day!😄
Nice, I got to go on a trip during Covid as well, stay safe!
RE: Beyblade Burst- Zenith of the Gods, A PG-13 Fanfic - TheGolden Blade - Oct. 09, 2020
Thanks! I really look forward to future chapters!
RE: Beyblade Burst- Zenith of the Gods, A PG-13 Fanfic - The Blacknight - Oct. 09, 2020
well, my cuz (im on vacay w/him) wanted me to do a short (turned into a short chapter lol) about Ronald Mc Donald. So here it is. btw, the writing is trash. Still PG-13.
Ronald was tired of being the Mc Donald's mascot. He hated it. Kids screamed and ran when they saw him. Though Temcc( The Eat Mor Chikin Cow) tried to help him, Ronald soon fell into a downwards spiral. The Burger King King and Chuck E. Cheese bullied Ronald. However, Temcc had one more idea. "Hey, challenge those two losers to a Beyblade battle," Temcc said in their favorite cafe. "I don't have a bey," Ronald grumbled. "Well, here's one," Temcc told Ronald as he handed Ronald a yellow bey with the Mc. Donald's symbol in the middle. "A stamina type?" Ronald asked. "Yep, Unhealthy Mc. Guffin 0proof eternal," Temcc said. "Now go get em!" Suddenly, The Burger King King and Chuck burst into the cafe. "Hey, whatcha got there?" The Burger King King asked. "A bey, I think," Chuck answered. "Let's battle!" Ronald yelled. "Oh really? Two on one? You're too confident for your own good." The Burger King King said. "Fine, but if we win, we get your bey," Chuck said. "Don't wimp out," Temcc consoled Ronald. "You got this!" The four went to the beystadium.
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"LET IT RIP!" The three shouted. "Go, Cheap Maybenotmeat! Mega Whopper!" The Burger King King shouted. "Attack, Tourist (Mouse)Trap! Rigged Arcade!" Chuck yelled. "NOW MC GUFFIN, BIG MAC WHIP!!!!" The beystadium exploded, and Maybenotmeat and (Mouse)Trap burst. "Yeah! Thanks, Mc Guffin!" Ronald happily yelled.
Later
"Give us our pay!" Chuck yelled in the dark alleyway. "We don't like bullying Ronald, but we had to or you would overrun us!" "Yeah!" The Burger King King chimed in. "You lost. You failed. I wanted to have some fun and crush his spirits, but now his spirits are raised, because of you." the hidden figure said. "You're sick, Temcc." The Burger King King snarled. "Don't say my other name in public," Temcc said. "I suppose torturing you will show you not to fail again." Temcc said. "No... no no no no no no," The Burger King King and Chuck pleaded. "Too late," Temcc spoke with a sadistic smile on his face.
The screams could be heard throughout the city.
Hope ya liked it!
RE: Beyblade Burst- Zenith of the Gods, A PG-13 Fanfic - The Blacknight - Oct. 14, 2020
ch1 pt 2, also i summon BuilderROB to plez rate mah fanfic
Chapter one part two: The Salamander and the King of Frost, pt 1
Lui Shirosagi was tired of using the stupid single layers. Suoh kept consoling him that he would get his bey back soon, but right spin beys were too weak. You see, Lui Shirosagi and Suoh Genji were great friends (except when blading) and decided to join the South Korean team, SO Springtime. They had given the team their beys to upgrade and were waiting to hear back. Lui and Suoh were both from Canada, but Lui moved to his uncle’s house in Japan after having a falling-out with Suoh. Their parents (being parents) forced them to make up, and they did. Lui was practicing battling Sparking beys with a single layer bey, Trident Heavy Claw. As usual, Lui launched, the Sparking bey burst after being shot a few yards, and Trident shattered into pieces. “Hey, we got any more single layer boosters?” Lui yelled. “One more, but these things are expensive,” Suoh called back. “Bring it here!” Lui said. “Hold on, doing my hair,” Suoh responded. Suoh’s hair grew like crazy, and the barber was getting expensive. It was either the hair or the random boosters, and since Suoh was getting tired of his style, he decided to change it. Suoh came out of Lui’s house with random booster in one hand, and a Snickers bar in the other. They usually practiced at Lui’s house instead of the bey park, as Lui’s parents gave them food. Suoh said, “Look at this! My hair is straight and down to my hips, and there is a ponytail to keep it from being too long and in the way! And there’s more! Instead of my signature bangs, I have a long braid so I can see where I’m going when I’m riding my bike! This is perfect!” Lui fell to the floor laughing. “Bruh, what the heck is that carp on your head?!?!?” Lui managed between breaths. Suoh snapped his eyes open. “Making fun of my hair? Have a Snickers.” Suoh eerily whispered. “Ahem,” a voice said. “Are you Suoh Genji and Lui Shirosagi?” “Yes,” the two boys said. “I am Hae-jin Oh, and I have come with your beys. However, I must test you, as I do not think you are who you say you are. We will battle.” “Of course, I’m Lui, stupid, are you blind?” Lui sneered. "Calm down, Lui. Our beys?” Suoh asked. “Here, but I will keep Longinus until you win, ‘Suoh’. ‘Lui’, you will referee.” “You had better win Suoh, or I’m going to hurt you,” Lui snarled. “This is my bey, Arrow Hercules wheel Eternal Full metal,” Hae-jin said. It had two bows on the side, curved so it looked like a four-leaf clover. There was also an arrow in the middle of each bow. Salamander, on the other hand, had three large blades of three metal pieces. “Oh?” Suoh spoke with a hint of surprise in his voice. After fiddling with his bey, Suoh changed the three blades to six blades, like Blitz Unicorno. He then changed it again, so that there were nine separate blades. “I assume my tip can change modes as well?” Suoh asked. Hae-Jin responded with, “Yes, a Zephyr-like, Operate-like, and a Survive-like tip. “Well, let’s start,” Suoh said. “Agreed,” Hae-jin rumbled.
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“LET IT RIP!” The two bladers simultaneously shouted. Hercules’s wings extended in midair. Both beys landed with a metallic thud. Salamander started speedily circling the stadium as Hercules sprinted to the center. “Attack mode? That was not a good choice. Now, Hercules, Arrow Wind!” Hae-jin commanded.Hercules took the center and, though it was wobbling slightly, seemed to completely stop losing spin. “Well, well, well, it seems like you can do something. Leaning on the POM plastic of your Eternal Full Metal? Clever. However, a little wobble can go a long way. Salamander, Lotus Flame!” Salamander encased itself in a maroon blaze, and attacked in a tight flower pattern, never straying from a tight-knit path. “Incredible! Such thought-out attack patterns and powerful resonance in his first battle?” Hae-jin gasped. “Well, this is my bey,” Suoh said. “Wait... something’s wrong, I’m not getting anywhere...” Suoh wondered. Hae-jin smiled in his weird creepy way. “No way... How is that not illegal?!” Suoh and Lui simultaneously yelled with terrified looks on their faces. “That’s right, almost all of Hercules’s weight is focused on the outside, especially when the bows are out. However, the real secret lies in my Eternal Full Metal. It is made in such a way that most of the weight is always pointing upwards, making its center of gravity impeccable.” “Is that a challenge?” Suoh said. End him! Salamander!” Salamander strayed from its path and went for a diving attack, racing along the stadium at incredible speeds. Lui frowned. “You fell for that?” “Fell for what?” Suoh asked. “MY TRAP! HERCULES!” Hercules’s avatar appeared, a warrior with a lion-skin coat and a full-length bow.” Salamander smashed into Hercules, sending Hercules across the stadium to the very edge. “Now, ARROW COUNTER!” Hercules used its heavy weight to fly down the stadium. “You really fell for it!” Lui cackled. “What?” Hae-jin questioned. “MY TRAP!” Suoh snapped his eyes open to reveal eerie, yellow, cat-like irises, and creepily grinned. “SALAMANDER!” Suoh’s menacing resonance exploded, making Ryuga’s aura look like a timid puppy. Salamander manifested itself. It was covered in a pink flame, roaring in its devastating glory, beautiful in a destructive way. Hercules smashed into Salamander and sent it careening into the opposite wall. “Lotus Salamander,” Suoh eerily said. “Yes, that is a good name. NOW SALMANDER, CRIMSON ROARING ROSE!!!” Salamander struck the wall so hard that a massive crack appeared. “A ricochete?” Hae-jin said. Salamander changed its stance so its whole tip was touching the floor. It shot forwards like a bullet and instantly burst Hercules. “Impossible...” Hae-jin whispered. Suoh grabbed Salamander. “I am very sorry for testing you like this. Please forgive my insolence.” Hae-jin said as he bowed. ” It’s fine,” Suoh cheerily smiled. “Besides, we were both being morons.” “You mean you were being a moron. I was fine.” Lui said. “You do know the difference between ‘You’ and ’I’, right?” Suoh retorted. “Of course, I do!” Lui snapped back. Hae-jin normally smiled as he watched the boys bicker. “This is going to be fun,” he thought.
RE: Beyblade Burst- Zenith of the Gods, A PG-13 Fanfic - 6Jupiter5 - Oct. 14, 2020
Ashura best bey
RE: Beyblade Burst- Zenith of the Gods, A PG-13 Fanfic - The Blacknight - Oct. 14, 2020
(Oct. 14, 2020 9:51 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: Ashura best bey
bruh i legit have plans for it to be like one hit KOing everybody. Jin byakko full pwr is stronger tho
RE: Beyblade Burst- Zenith of the Gods, A PG-13 Fanfic - The Blacknight - Oct. 15, 2020
update:
I decided to move on. i will continue the rest of the limbo arc in a flashback at a later date(prob. I will start the first tournament arc now. here is the arc list and other related updates:
SCB Toronto Tournament
H.E.L.L. Takedown
Damian vs. the world
God Tier intro(this and Khaos are probably going to be the longest)
That one Training arc
The hunting of Khaos
Ashtem's Plan
To the top/Abel
I am planning to kill off some characters in 3rd-6th arcs btw so don't get attached
SBC Toronto characters:
Ahmed
Kai
Delta
Chay
Lui
Suoh
Laban
Phi
Hearts
Hae-jin
Damian
Khaos/Khaos' assistant
Amir Vanot
Gwyn(maybe)
Silas
and other new characters(unintroduced/my creation).
Finally, the next three chapters(they are about the length of a part now) will be called:
The New Beys: Tengu and Basilisk!
Clash of the Two Demon Kings!
(2 year timeskip)
The Start of the SBC Tourney!
spent a good amount of time cooking these updates up. hope ya like!(thats like my catchphrase now lol)
RE: Beyblade Burst- Zenith of the Gods, A PG-13 Fanfic - The Blacknight - Dec. 01, 2020
sry for the wait, doing the next chapter
RE: Beyblade Burst- Zenith of the Gods, A PG-13 Fanfic - The Blacknight - Dec. 07, 2020
Clarification: The rest of the whole limbo thing will be in a flashback, possibly even in a story on it's own.
The New Beys: Tengu and Basilisk!
Part One: Arrival
Chay, Kai, and Delta entered the large building located in New York City. LET IT RIP! Two black beys landed in the stadium, owned by two black clothed bladers “Attack, Lucifer!” one of them, Lane Valhalla, yelled. “Bahamut, End Spin!” the other, Boa Alcazaba, countered. The rubber on Bahamut’s chassis and layer let it spin steal from Lucifer. “Lucifer Obliteration Mobius Metal and End Bahamut Orbit’. I know those beys very well,” Delta smirked. As the two beys clashed, Chay asked, “I thought you were a member of the Victories, then the successor to Kristina Kuroda and Wakyia Murasaki as the leader of the WBBA.” “I still am, but my bey, Ancient Diabolos, was created here. I trust these people almost more than Taiga to make beys.” Delta responded. “That’s why you, Aiga, and Shu will be making -” Delta stopped as Bahamut made the grave mistake of attacking Lucifer’s chassis. A cold wind seemed to fill the room. All color seemed to be tinged with a noir setting, but Lane’s tint seemed to pop. His yellow eyes crackled like lightning, his white teeth gleaming with a crooked grin as he screeched, “SHATTER IT, LUCIFER! LIMIT BREAK: OBLITERATION!” Lucifer’s avatar appeared: the shadowy, menacing, power-hungry figure of a fallen angel. Lucifer’s chassis started spinning, slowly at first, then quicker. Though Chay was still in shock, Kai’s face spread into an immense smile. “LUCIFER, OBLITERATION COUNTER!” Lucifer and its spinning chassis charged at Bahamut, sending Boa’s bey flying. “Ha, weak.” Boa spoke as the freezing cold snap disappeared instantly. “Bahamut, Chassis Limit Break: End.” Bahamut’s rubber chassis expanded into a perfect circle while in midair. “Bahamut, burst it with End Lance!” Bahamut’s Avatar appeared, a darker yet more regal version of its former self. “NOT ON MY WATCH!” Lane screamed. “OBLITERATION...DISASTER!!!” Bahamut fell from the sky like a meteor, while Lucifer sprinted towards the point of impact. The two beys clashed, sending a shockwave through the stadium. However, Bahamut pushed through and sent Lucifer flying vertically while its round chassis protected it from the ground. “I thought you were going to burst me!” Lane mocked. “I am.” Boa calmly smirked. “DOUBLE END LANCE!” Bahamut’s chassis fully struck the stadium, then the friction made it blast up towards Lucifer like a rocket. Lucifer was knocked to the side, and bursted a second after. “Wow...” Chay whispered. “I know, right? Those two are siiiiiiick.” a new voice entered. “I take it you two are Delta’s students. Hi, my name is Aiga!”
Part Two: Enter Tyranny
“It seems we have guests,” another voice said. Chay and Kai’s awe magnified as they saw another God-tier blader. “Come on,” said the legendary Shu Kurenai. The two speechless bladers gaped at Shu and Aiga, then slowly followed. Delta, Chay, Kai, Aiga, and Shu entered a small room with a laptop, craftmanship tools, a 3D printer, and other assorted tinkering necessities. “Your beys?” Shu beckoned. The two novice bladers handed their spinning tops to the legend. “Interesting,” Shu said. “Aiga, can you handle the metalworking?” “Yeah, but what should I do? I don’t even have a basis,” Aiga questioned. “We haven’t said anythi-” Chay stopped, as a cold sensation arose. He and Kai were transported to a shadowy realm, and a dark aura enveloped them. “Hello,” a white-haired man with a trench coat said as he walked from the darkness. “The Achilles Meditator told me you’d be coming.” “Who’s this Achilles Mediator? And who are you?” Kai forcefully asked. “Yeah, and where are we?” Chay added. “I see. So, the Ares and Nemesis Mediators said nothing? I am known as Tyranny, the Hephaestus Mediator. I could kill you where you stand, or you accept my little gifts for you,” Tyranny threatened. “T-the gifts, I guess,” Kai muttered. “Good choice,” Tyranny boomed with a crooked grin. Tyranny removed two orbs, each the size of a marble, from his coat. “Here are your spirits,” Tyranny said as he handed the spheres to the children. “What are they?” Chay questioned. “I told you, your spirits,” Tyranny said, as the space around them began to warp. “Anyways, have fun!”
RE: Beyblade Burst- Zenith of the Gods, A PG-13 Fanfic - kai edits - Dec. 07, 2020
(Dec. 07, 2020 11:14 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: Clarification: The rest of the whole limbo thing will be in a flashback, possibly even in a story on it's own.
The New Beys: Tengu and Basilisk!
Part One: Arrival
Chay, Kai, and Delta entered the large building located in New York City. LET IT RIP! Two black beys landed in the stadium, owned by two black clothed bladers “Attack, Lucifer!” one of them, Lane Valhalla, yelled. “Bahamut, End Spin!” the other, Boa Alcazaba, countered. The rubber on Bahamut’s chassis and layer let it spin steal from Lucifer. “Lucifer Obliteration Mobius Metal and End Bahamut Orbit’. I know those beys very well,” Delta smirked. As the two beys clashed, Chay asked, “I thought you were a member of the Victories, then the successor to Kristina Kuroda and Wakyia Murasaki as the leader of the WBBA.” “I still am, but my bey, Ancient Diabolos, was created here. I trust these people almost more than Taiga to make beys.” Delta responded. “That’s why you, Aiga, and Shu will be making -” Delta stopped as Bahamut made the grave mistake of attacking Lucifer’s chassis. A cold wind seemed to fill the room. All color seemed to be tinged with a noir setting, but Lane’s tint seemed to pop. His yellow eyes crackled like lightning, his white teeth gleaming with a crooked grin as he screeched, “SHATTER IT, LUCIFER! LIMIT BREAK: OBLITERATION!” Lucifer’s avatar appeared: the shadowy, menacing, power-hungry figure of a fallen angel. Lucifer’s chassis started spinning, slowly at first, then quicker. Though Chay was still in shock, Kai’s face spread into an immense smile. “LUCIFER, OBLITERATION COUNTER!” Lucifer and its spinning chassis charged at Bahamut, sending Boa’s bey flying. “Ha, weak.” Boa spoke as the freezing cold snap disappeared instantly. “Bahamut, Chassis Limit Break: End.” Bahamut’s rubber chassis expanded into a perfect circle while in midair. “Bahamut, burst it with End Lance!” Bahamut’s Avatar appeared, a darker yet more regal version of its former self. “NOT ON MY WATCH!” Lane screamed. “OBLITERATION...DISASTER!!!” Bahamut fell from the sky like a meteor, while Lucifer sprinted towards the point of impact. The two beys clashed, sending a shockwave through the stadium. However, Bahamut pushed through and sent Lucifer flying vertically while its round chassis protected it from the ground. “I thought you were going to burst me!” Lane mocked. “I am.” Boa calmly smirked. “DOUBLE END LANCE!” Bahamut’s chassis fully struck the stadium, then the friction made it blast up towards Lucifer like a rocket. Lucifer was knocked to the side, and bursted a second after. “Wow...” Chay whispered. “I know, right? Those two are siiiiiiick.” a new voice entered. “I take it you two are Delta’s students. Hi, my name is Aiga!”
Part Two: Enter Tyranny
“It seems we have guests,” another voice said. Chay and Kai’s awe magnified as they saw another God-tier blader. “Come on,” said the legendary Shu Kurenai. The two speechless bladers gaped at Shu and Aiga, then slowly followed. Delta, Chay, Kai, Aiga, and Shu entered a small room with a laptop, craftmanship tools, a 3D printer, and other assorted tinkering necessities. “Your beys?” Shu beckoned. The two novice bladers handed their spinning tops to the legend. “Interesting,” Shu said. “Aiga, can you handle the metalworking?” “Yeah, but what should I do? I don’t even have a basis,” Aiga questioned. “We haven’t said anythi-” Chay stopped, as a cold sensation arose. He and Kai were transported to a shadowy realm, and a dark aura enveloped them. “Hello,” a white-haired man with a trench coat said as he walked from the darkness. “The Achilles Meditator told me you’d be coming.” “Who’s this Achilles Mediator? And who are you?” Kai forcefully asked. “Yeah, and where are we?” Chay added. “I see. So, the Ares and Nemesis Mediators said nothing? I am known as Tyranny, the Hephaestus Mediator. I could kill you where you stand, or you accept my little gifts for you,” Tyranny threatened. “T-the gifts, I guess,” Kai muttered. “Good choice,” Tyranny boomed with a crooked grin. Tyranny removed two orbs, each the size of a marble, from his coat. “Here are your spirits,” Tyranny said as he handed the spheres to the children. “What are they?” Chay questioned. “I told you, your spirits,” Tyranny said, as the space around them began to warp. “Anyways, have fun!” Did you forget something?
RE: Beyblade Burst- Zenith of the Gods, A PG-13 Fanfic - The Blacknight - Dec. 07, 2020
(Dec. 07, 2020 11:19 PM)kai edits Wrote: (Dec. 07, 2020 11:14 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: Clarification: The rest of the whole limbo thing will be in a flashback, possibly even in a story on it's own.
The New Beys: Tengu and Basilisk!
Part One: Arrival
Chay, Kai, and Delta entered the large building located in New York City. LET IT RIP! Two black beys landed in the stadium, owned by two black clothed bladers “Attack, Lucifer!” one of them, Lane Valhalla, yelled. “Bahamut, End Spin!” the other, Boa Alcazaba, countered. The rubber on Bahamut’s chassis and layer let it spin steal from Lucifer. “Lucifer Obliteration Mobius Metal and End Bahamut Orbit’. I know those beys very well,” Delta smirked. As the two beys clashed, Chay asked, “I thought you were a member of the Victories, then the successor to Kristina Kuroda and Wakyia Murasaki as the leader of the WBBA.” “I still am, but my bey, Ancient Diabolos, was created here. I trust these people almost more than Taiga to make beys.” Delta responded. “That’s why you, Aiga, and Shu will be making -” Delta stopped as Bahamut made the grave mistake of attacking Lucifer’s chassis. A cold wind seemed to fill the room. All color seemed to be tinged with a noir setting, but Lane’s tint seemed to pop. His yellow eyes crackled like lightning, his white teeth gleaming with a crooked grin as he screeched, “SHATTER IT, LUCIFER! LIMIT BREAK: OBLITERATION!” Lucifer’s avatar appeared: the shadowy, menacing, power-hungry figure of a fallen angel. Lucifer’s chassis started spinning, slowly at first, then quicker. Though Chay was still in shock, Kai’s face spread into an immense smile. “LUCIFER, OBLITERATION COUNTER!” Lucifer and its spinning chassis charged at Bahamut, sending Boa’s bey flying. “Ha, weak.” Boa spoke as the freezing cold snap disappeared instantly. “Bahamut, Chassis Limit Break: End.” Bahamut’s rubber chassis expanded into a perfect circle while in midair. “Bahamut, burst it with End Lance!” Bahamut’s Avatar appeared, a darker yet more regal version of its former self. “NOT ON MY WATCH!” Lane screamed. “OBLITERATION...DISASTER!!!” Bahamut fell from the sky like a meteor, while Lucifer sprinted towards the point of impact. The two beys clashed, sending a shockwave through the stadium. However, Bahamut pushed through and sent Lucifer flying vertically while its round chassis protected it from the ground. “I thought you were going to burst me!” Lane mocked. “I am.” Boa calmly smirked. “DOUBLE END LANCE!” Bahamut’s chassis fully struck the stadium, then the friction made it blast up towards Lucifer like a rocket. Lucifer was knocked to the side, and bursted a second after. “Wow...” Chay whispered. “I know, right? Those two are siiiiiiick.” a new voice entered. “I take it you two are Delta’s students. Hi, my name is Aiga!”
Part Two: Enter Tyranny
“It seems we have guests,” another voice said. Chay and Kai’s awe magnified as they saw another God-tier blader. “Come on,” said the legendary Shu Kurenai. The two speechless bladers gaped at Shu and Aiga, then slowly followed. Delta, Chay, Kai, Aiga, and Shu entered a small room with a laptop, craftmanship tools, a 3D printer, and other assorted tinkering necessities. “Your beys?” Shu beckoned. The two novice bladers handed their spinning tops to the legend. “Interesting,” Shu said. “Aiga, can you handle the metalworking?” “Yeah, but what should I do? I don’t even have a basis,” Aiga questioned. “We haven’t said anythi-” Chay stopped, as a cold sensation arose. He and Kai were transported to a shadowy realm, and a dark aura enveloped them. “Hello,” a white-haired man with a trench coat said as he walked from the darkness. “The Achilles Meditator told me you’d be coming.” “Who’s this Achilles Mediator? And who are you?” Kai forcefully asked. “Yeah, and where are we?” Chay added. “I see. So, the Ares and Nemesis Mediators said nothing? I am known as Tyranny, the Hephaestus Mediator. I could kill you where you stand, or you accept my little gifts for you,” Tyranny threatened. “T-the gifts, I guess,” Kai muttered. “Good choice,” Tyranny boomed with a crooked grin. Tyranny removed two orbs, each the size of a marble, from his coat. “Here are your spirits,” Tyranny said as he handed the spheres to the children. “What are they?” Chay questioned. “I told you, your spirits,” Tyranny said, as the space around them began to warp. “Anyways, have fun!” Did you forget something?
no, i'm showing off the new beys in the next chapter.
RE: Beyblade Burst- Zenith of the Gods, A PG-13 Fanfic - kai edits - Dec. 07, 2020
(Dec. 07, 2020 11:22 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: (Dec. 07, 2020 11:19 PM)kai edits Wrote: Did you forget something?
no, i'm showing off the new beys in the next chapter. What you pmed me about
RE: Beyblade Burst- Zenith of the Gods, A PG-13 Fanfic - The Blacknight - Dec. 08, 2020
(Dec. 07, 2020 11:30 PM)kai edits Wrote: (Dec. 07, 2020 11:22 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: no, i'm showing off the new beys in the next chapter. What you pmed me about
i have to finish the next chapter to introduce the beys. there should be a 2 year timeskip after that, and it can happen between then.
RE: Beyblade Burst- Zenith of the Gods, A PG-13 Fanfic - kai edits - Dec. 08, 2020
(Dec. 08, 2020 12:43 AM)The Blacknight Wrote: (Dec. 07, 2020 11:30 PM)kai edits Wrote: What you pmed me about
i have to finish the next chapter to introduce the beys. there should be a 2 year timeskip after that, and it can happen between then. Not that we are collaborating remember
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