Beyblade Fanfiction: The Spontaneous Misadventures of Emerson Ward - DrPepsidew - Jun. 26, 2012
Chapter 1
"Emerson, wake up."
A recording of my father's voice said to me through my phone. Having no sleep the previous night, I rose slowly off of the bench at Moscow's international airport. A woman took my hand and we started walking towards his terminal. I thought to myself: if only there were any good bladers here in Moscow, I wouldn't be leaving. But my thirst for a challenge is bringing me to a tournament in Germany, and if there aren't any good bladers there, I'll have to go trans-continental. We were nearing the terminal gate and just as I passed through, out of the corner of my eye, I saw two people staring at me. I ignored it for the time being and kept walking.
On the plane I can't help but think about what other people are thinking when they see a kinda tall 16 year old with black hair and hazel eyes in first class air service. I turn my head just enough to look back, and sure enough, one of the two people I saw while I was walking onto the plane, he was wearing kind of a beachy look, with rolled up pants, and a blue button up shirt.
He knew I was looking at him and he gave me a wry smile and a sarcastic wave. Wondering who he was, I turned back and slowly readied Basalt Jailer S130 EWD, a beyblade that my father passed down to me eight years ago right before he passed away due to lung cancer.
But on the intercom, a maddened voice said,"It seems we've encountered some turbulence! This ride's about to get bumpy!" The voice laughed uncontrollably and I whipped around only to see a bey launched at me.
"GO JAILER!"
What'd you guys think? suggestions please and first come first serve i need about 4/5 characters with personalities and such, looks, and bey.
Chapter 2 The Desperate Freefall! Save or Surrender?!
The two beys clashed midair, metal grinding on metal, he wasn't putting up much of a fight. As I was about to finish him off, another bey knocked me aside and away from my path and hit me into the hull of the plane. We all paused, the impact of the hit had put a crack in the hull!
I returned my attention to the battle, I had always played defense but it'd never been this bad. I studied both of their beys, as if time stopped, I could identify the different parts they consisted of, the one I'd been battling originally, it was Flame ______ WD145 MB, easily a stamina defense combo like me, I couldn't tell what the energy ring was, it was almost new. but the odd thing is, it had a dangerous feel to it's attacks, like it didn't want to stop. The other was a mystery, I couldn't see it, it was too fast, even for me. Suddenly, the plane cracked in two!
The cockpit went one way, there was no one on that part. The passengers went the other. And we were smack dab in the middle. I was worried, I couldn't beat these guys and save the people at the same time, just then, another bey was launched! How many bladers were onboard?!
He said,"Don't worry about these guys, I got 'em! Save the passengers! I'm Kandayu by the way!"
Chapter 3 A New Ally
I trusted him already, for I'd dove towards them.
Immediately I yelled at the top of my lungs,"Jailer! Imprisonment Impact!"
A dark blue aura surrounded the plane, chains had wrapped around the plane, locks and bolts secured them in place and the plane drastically increased speed and plummeted towards the ground. They'd be fine, on the inside, they'd be chained too and the hit from the ground would be absorbed by the cradle they were in.
I could return to the battle now. My quarrel was with the Flame bey, Kandayu and his opponent were a blur of colors, they were both attack types, an uncontrollable force of vengeance, as if they channeled their rage and ferocity into their beys. I myself prefered a quiet riot if you will. Tranquility to think of strategy than just blindly attacking with all your might.
My foe yelled,"I'm Antoine Lenkun and this is my bey, Flame Spetznaz. Good luck comrade!" It was obviously sarcasm.
What an a**.
Our beys clashed once again, but it wasn't the same as before, he'd been hiding his power. One could feel the heat from the burning metal, constantly grinding, there was no end, we were at a stalemate. But he pulled his bey away and held his hand up to his ear, and called his partner and they dove away.
"Until next time eh friend?"
With that, Antoine and his friend were gone.
Chapter 4 Landing Everything was taken care of, the goons, the passengers, and the plane. Except for us. I'd returned my bey and I could've used my special move again, but I wouldn't have enough power to keep it up. Worrying, I looked to Kandayu, calm as a spring meadow, just freefalling. Right up until I screamed his name in his ear.
Awakened from his daze, he looked at me and I could read,"Oh right." He motioned below us and his bey, sank below and span increasingly faster. Before doing so, Kandayu gestured to hold my breath, so I did. Fox began to distort the air around us and created a vacuum, sending us rocketing toward the earth underneath us. My eyes widened in discomfort as I realized: Hey, we'll die if we don't slow down!
I looked at Kandayu once more, still calm, as I was flailing about. Right before hitting the ground, the vacuum stopped, I could breathe and I hit a hard platform of air. I'm not complaining, seeing as two feet more would have been certain death.
I stepped down and he said,"So, how're you?"
"How am I? How am I? I almost di-"
"Hey do you like beef jerky? I have some if you want it."
"Oh I'd lo- Wait! We were just attacked by random bladers, saved a plane crash, and almost plummeted to our deaths! This isn't a time to discuss beef jerky! How could you even eat after that?!"
Taking a bite,"It's always jerky time."
Chapter 5 Mere Aquaintences
"Whatever." I said in frustration.
"Who are you anyway?"
"Name's Kandayu Kiraken, and here's my bey: Hell Fox C145 MF. What's your beef with those guys?"
"I told you once already, I didn't know them, hence 'Random'."
"Don't get stingy, where ya' headed?"
"Same as you, Germany. Probobly for the same thing too."
"Yeah? And what's that?"
"Um, the tournament?"
"Oh yeah! Almost forgot about that gig. Wanna be buds?"
"No."
"Friends?"
"No."
"Aww. Why not?"
"I need nothing from you, and you need nothing from me."
"You look like you have a pretty penny in your pocket, a ride would be nice."
"Just this once. I got a guy."
We waited for my father's friend to come pick us up. His name was Kip, nothing more, nothing less. He was a nice guy, he flew the prisoners into the penitentiary. While in the helicopter headed for Berlin, I dosed off to Kandayu rambling on about how cool the day was and why we should do it again. Crazy guy I swear, but I think he was growing on me. Chapter 6 Berlin Battle Association Kip woke me up over the intercom in a deep Russian accent.
"Master Emerson, we've arrived in Berlin." Kandayu woke up shortly after I did,"No mom! No Blueberries! Oh... we're here."
I just looked at him. We both stepped of the helicopter and were greeted by two people. A tall, lanky kid with pale brown hair with baggy pants and a blue jacket with gold markings stepped forward and reached for my hand. I pulled away and he tried to make his embarrassment subtle. Instead, he clutched his hands together and spoke.
"Welcome to Berlin my friends! I am Ryan Pongal, I am the leader of the German team, and I will also be your guide here in wonderful Germany!"
"Great, another happy go-lucky person," I whispered under my breath.
"What was that Emerson?" Kandayu had to say something.
"Oh, it's alright, leave him be. I'm sure he'll have a grand time here in the homeland."
A sleek, mid-height girl walked forward. And instead of reaching for my hand, she lunged forward and grabbed it. Ryan glared at her in disbelief, and she led me to what looked like a stadium. Kandayu and Ryan were quick on our heels. She suddenly let go and leaped across, but midair she launched a bey, and from behind me so did Ryan. In unison, they both exclaimed,"Jump in Emerson! Let's see what you got!" Chapter 7 Another Drag. I ignored them the first time, reaching up to put in my earbud, scrolling through my music and settling on a couple suggestively explicit songs. Although dubbed by the populace as emo, I'm just a realist. As I played The Sharpest Lives I turned it up to an otherwise painful volume. As I glanced left from the front steps before the stadium, Ryan was laughing as he sat from the sidelines and watched the situation; I didn't know if I liked the guy yet, something was off about him. Who knows, I could be wrong.
Still in the thought and mood of the music, I was crudely interrupted by a large gust of wind. Kandayu I thought before I looked up. Surely enough when I did, he was motioning me forward. Fed up, I rose from comfort and walked to the stadium, glanced at my two opponents. I couldn't care less what bey the chick had, I was pissed. I readied my launcher, launched directly into the air, it bewildered Kandayu and the girl.
They searched for Jailer as I yelled, "JAILER DROP!"
It was no subtle move, the sky and environment around us turned dark and dreary and one could hear the whistle of Jailer as it surged towards the stadium. On impact, both opposing beys were instantly crushed into the ground as if on cue. Not broken by their luck, they should be happy I held back.
I withdrew my bey, and retreated to my steps. The girl stared, switching from her bey to me, and back to her bey.
Kandayu shouted, "WHAT THE HELL MAN!?"
They went into the stadium and picked their blades out of the stadium floor.
I could hear the girl, "A p-perfect imprint? How could something like that be so precise...?"
I was just doing what my family does best, keeping things controlled my way, no mercy, no breathing room.
RE: Beyblade Fanfiction: The Spontaneous Misadventures of Emerson Ward - Kai-V - Jun. 26, 2012
You are not even talking about the actual characters of the Beyblade shows, which is what the Beyblade Anime and Manga forum is for ... This should have been posted in the Your Creations forum ...
RE: Beyblade Fanfiction: The Spontaneous Misadventures of Emerson Ward - DrPepsidew - Jun. 27, 2012
sorry ._. is there any way i could transfer the story? like copy->paste?
RE: Beyblade Fanfiction: The Spontaneous Misadventures of Emerson Ward - Duck - Jun. 27, 2012
Kai-V moved it for you. There's no need to worry. Anyways, you have good grammar! *thumbs up* Keep up the great writing!
RE: Beyblade Fanfiction: The Spontaneous Misadventures of Emerson Ward - DefStamina88 - Jun. 28, 2012
Hmmm...pretty good! Started off well... Here's my character for ya...
Name: Antoine Lenkun (Male)
Bey: Flame Spetznaz WD145MB (Special Moves: Rapid Fire, Brute Force)
Appearance: Red T-Shirt, Black Pants, Shades, Black sneakers, and a Gold Necklace with the letters "R.U.S." on it...
Personality: Gets angry after a loss, and appears for revenge a few times (similar to Masamune in the anime...) Laughs and insults his opponent during battle...
Background: A Junior World Soccer League Player, Antoine is the Russian Soccer Team's Striker... Now suspended for the season, he has found BeyBlade. Flame Spetznaz was his first bey, and it has evolved several times... He despises any unfamiliar players, and has won one tournament...
RE: Beyblade Fanfiction: The Spontaneous Misadventures of Emerson Ward - Tri - Jun. 28, 2012
Good start with your story!
Here is my request...
Name: Kandayu Kiraken
Bey: Hell Fox C145MF
Appearance:Caucasian, Blue Tapout T-Shirt, Black/White Basketball Shorts, Flat-Bill Hat, Sneakers
Personality: A nice young boy that congradulates an opponent even if they won or loss in a bey battle. He battles whenever he can.
Background: A japanese Basketball Player that uses skills he has learned from basketball into bey battles. He works with his mother at a restraunt that sells many foods based on bey names. Such as the "Bull Burger" and the least sold food at the store "Scorpio Stick".
RE: Beyblade Fanfiction: The Spontaneous Misadventures of Emerson Ward - DrPepsidew - Jun. 28, 2012
(Jun. 28, 2012 3:06 AM)DefStamina88 Wrote: Hmmm...pretty good! Started off well... Here's my character for ya...
Name: Antoine Lenkun (Male)
Bey: Flame Spetznaz WD145MB (Special Moves: Rapid Fire, Brute Force)
Appearance: Red T-Shirt, Black Pants, Shades, Black sneakers, and a Gold Necklace with the letters "R.U.S." on it...
Personality: Gets angry after a loss, and appears for revenge a few times (similar to Masamune in the anime...) Laughs and insults his opponent during battle...
Background: A Junior World Soccer League Player, Antoine is the Russian Soccer Team's Striker... Now suspended for the season, he has found BeyBlade. Flame Spetznaz was his first bey, and it has evolved several times... He despises any unfamiliar players, and has won one tournament... you mind if i use hi as one of the bad guys?
RE: Beyblade Fanfiction: The Spontaneous Misadventures of Emerson Ward - DefStamina88 - Jun. 28, 2012
(Jun. 28, 2012 8:45 PM)DrPepsidew Wrote: (Jun. 28, 2012 3:06 AM)DefStamina88 Wrote: Hmmm...pretty good! Started off well... Here's my character for ya...
Name: Antoine Lenkun (Male)
Bey: Flame Spetznaz WD145MB (Special Moves: Rapid Fire, Brute Force)
Appearance: Red T-Shirt, Black Pants, Shades, Black sneakers, and a Gold Necklace with the letters "R.U.S." on it...
Personality: Gets angry after a loss, and appears for revenge a few times (similar to Masamune in the anime...) Laughs and insults his opponent during battle...
Background: A Junior World Soccer League Player, Antoine is the Russian Soccer Team's Striker... Now suspended for the season, he has found BeyBlade. Flame Spetznaz was his first bey, and it has evolved several times... He despises any unfamiliar players, and has won one tournament... you mind if i use hi as one of the bad guys?
I kinda implied him to be evil, see...?
RE: Beyblade Fanfiction: The Spontaneous Misadventures of Emerson Ward - DrPepsidew - Jun. 28, 2012
(Jun. 28, 2012 8:51 PM)DefStamina88 Wrote: (Jun. 28, 2012 8:45 PM)DrPepsidew Wrote: (Jun. 28, 2012 3:06 AM)DefStamina88 Wrote: Hmmm...pretty good! Started off well... Here's my character for ya...
Name: Antoine Lenkun (Male)
Bey: Flame Spetznaz WD145MB (Special Moves: Rapid Fire, Brute Force)
Appearance: Red T-Shirt, Black Pants, Shades, Black sneakers, and a Gold Necklace with the letters "R.U.S." on it...
Personality: Gets angry after a loss, and appears for revenge a few times (similar to Masamune in the anime...) Laughs and insults his opponent during battle...
Background: A Junior World Soccer League Player, Antoine is the Russian Soccer Team's Striker... Now suspended for the season, he has found BeyBlade. Flame Spetznaz was his first bey, and it has evolved several times... He despises any unfamiliar players, and has won one tournament... you mind if i use hi as one of the bad guys?
I kinda implied him to be evil, see...?
just checking XD
RE: Beyblade Fanfiction: The Spontaneous Misadventures of Emerson Ward - bennettcarroll - Jul. 05, 2012
awsome story
Name: Ryan Pongal (Male)16 years old
Bey: Cyclone Ra DF145XF
Bio: meets Emerson in Germany and is his guide in germany
he is the team leader for the german team
Personality: Very Kind And Stays in the shadows protaginist excelent blader
Appearance: Tall weres a blue jacket with golden markings and fur on the flaps of his jacket spikey grey-ish brown hair saggy black jeans and brown boots
RE: Beyblade Fanfiction: The Spontaneous Misadventures of Emerson Ward - DrPepsidew - Jul. 28, 2012
does anyone actually like the story so far?
RE: Beyblade Fanfiction: The Spontaneous Misadventures of Emerson Ward - Zanymidgt - Jul. 29, 2012
Aren't you reading the posts above?
Quote:awsome story
Quote: Good start with your story!
Quote: Hmmm...pretty good!
I think they might like it a little bit... it's good! good grammar and climaxes!
RE: Beyblade Fanfiction: The Spontaneous Misadventures of Emerson Ward - SoulEater57 - Jul. 30, 2012
Bro, you might wanna use Spoilers for the chapters, other than that, I like it.
RE: Beyblade Fanfiction: The Spontaneous Misadventures of Emerson Ward - DrPepsidew - Jul. 30, 2012
I have no idea how to use spoilers XD
RE: Beyblade Fanfiction: The Spontaneous Misadventures of Emerson Ward - SoulEater57 - Jul. 30, 2012
(Jul. 30, 2012 8:52 AM)DrPepsidew Wrote: I have no idea how to use spoilers XD
do this:
reply to my post to see how
RE: Beyblade Fanfiction: The Spontaneous Misadventures of Emerson Ward - DrPepsidew - Jul. 30, 2012
i wanna see how
RE: Beyblade Fanfiction: The Spontaneous Misadventures of Emerson Ward - SoulEater57 - Jul. 30, 2012
(Jul. 30, 2012 8:58 AM)DrPepsidew Wrote: i wanna see how
if you quote my last post you would see. XD
RE: Beyblade Fanfiction: The Spontaneous Misadventures of Emerson Ward - DrPepsidew - Jul. 30, 2012
BAYUM
RE: Beyblade Fanfiction: The Spontaneous Misadventures of Emerson Ward - SoulEater57 - Jul. 30, 2012
(Jul. 30, 2012 9:09 AM)DrPepsidew Wrote: BAYUM
you're welcome.
RE: Beyblade Fanfiction: The Spontaneous Misadventures of Emerson Ward - thelegISlAtive - Mar. 16, 2013
i got a character requets for ya
name:ken Rigoro
bey: flash paladin AD145 MWB (special moves great axe, solar sword,revive)
Apperance: smallish like 5 feet tall he is 15 he has long black hair part of it sticks out like doji
but is black instead of gold he wears heavy weights under his clothing which is a jean jacket with a a pure white sun and a slightly baggy jeans with a blue shirt under it and black and blue shoes
bio: He is a English boy that moved from Iceland to do training and to get stronger to make up for being strong is a hard core person and is very skilled but is also bitter sweat at moments and is sometimes nice. he is not big but very strong he benches 250.
RE: Beyblade Fanfiction: The Spontaneous Misadventures of Emerson Ward - DrPepsidew - Aug. 14, 2013
Good news, I'm picking up this story again and will continue it! Expect to see new chapters every once in awhile, chapter 7 is up!
Character requests are welcome!
RE: Beyblade Fanfiction: The Spontaneous Misadventures of Emerson Ward - LimiTTrickster - Aug. 14, 2013
Does anyone here want to post a character - if they do the there is a thread below which is where you should post it.
Really good grammar so far in the story, a very good story. 9/10. Also, if you want to take characters, I made one in my thread, see if you can use it Dr Pepsidew.
RE: Beyblade Fanfiction: The Spontaneous Misadventures of Emerson Ward - DrPepsidew - Aug. 14, 2013
I'll consider it, but you should specify what the parts you made for Howlgust do
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