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Pirates Orojya 145D Draft - Primal - Jun. 04, 2012 Primal Wrote:==Metal Stone Face: Orojya== Any feedback on this is appreciated. For the most part, I went off of Kai-V's stub, and added in parts that I thought are worth mentioning. RE: Pirates Orojya 145D Draft - Imperial - Jun. 05, 2012 Maybe you should mention the skull on the Crystal Wheel, which goes along with the Pirate theme. It seems significant enough. RE: Pirates Orojya 145D Draft - Primal - Jun. 05, 2012 Thanks for bumping this for me, haha. Didn't want to double post. That seems like a good idea. I'll try and add that in there. RE: Pirates Orojya 145D Draft - Primal - Jun. 07, 2012 I'd really like some feedback on this. I know that some articles are still being revised, but Imperial has been the only one to actually give a suggestion... RE: Pirates Orojya 145D Draft - Luck - Jun. 07, 2012 I have a question? Do you gain anything for drafting things to help the bey wiki project? I forget . Hope this helps bump it--plus I wanna know :L RE: Pirates Orojya 145D Draft - Raigeko13 - Jun. 07, 2012 Use the Questions About the WBO topic. I still believe it is entirely too early to be writing articles on Zero-G. Given that yes they HAVE been proven inferior, they still might have some use in a combination that we don't know yet, as Zero-G in general is still in its early stages. RE: Pirates Orojya 145D Draft - DefStamina88 - Jun. 07, 2012 (Jun. 07, 2012 7:18 PM)Raigeko13 Wrote: Use the Questions About the WBO topic. Yeah, but isn't that what rewrites are for? Just say how they do now, then change it if something good comes along? RE: Pirates Orojya 145D Draft - th!nk - Jun. 08, 2012 I personally am with Primal and DefStamina88 on this, given how light this particular wheel is, and that it's basically been instantly outclassed by Revizer, AND the fact that if something comes out with amazing synergy, we can rewrite it fairly quickly given we finally have someone actively checking and approving articles. Few things about the draft: Chrome Wheel section NEEDS to actually discuss the performance, even if it sucks, and mentioning any minor use it may have would be good. The 145 section, you should start from the one we have in the basalt horogium article and update that a little (the 85 and 230-wobbler stuff isn't quite correct), and the 14.5mm thing in the title isn't standard beywiki format. Replace "retains balance more easily" with "retains balance better than" in the D section (a change that should be made to other uses of that description too. Overall section: Replace revizer revizer with just one revizer as we're not talking about orojya orojya here. In terms of D's availability, which beyblades are easier to obtain it from? From what I can remember, this is probably one of the easier ways to get it nowadays. RE: Pirates Orojya 145D Draft - Primal - Jun. 08, 2012 The beys I was thinking about when I typed that were Counter Leone, Torch Aries, etc., seeing as those are at actual stores as opposed to online. Then again, Metal Fury is soon to come out, so we probably won't be seeing very many of those for too much longer. I'll fix everything once I can get on my desktop. RE: Pirates Orojya 145D Draft - th!nk - Jun. 08, 2012 Honestly, for me it's probably easier to get Pirates Oroja because going to the store is a hassle whereas ordering online, I can do that now if I want. More wait, and perhaps more expensive for some, but because of Australia's prices it's not really much more expensive for me. Neither of those are available from Takara either. I guess the few RB beys that have D would be cheaper off ebay, but I'd still consider Pirates Orojya a good source for D tips, and it's probably what I'd buy if I needed one, given that Orojya, while not great, is still more useful than Counter, Divine, Forbidden and Torch. RE: Pirates Orojya 145D Draft - Primal - Jun. 08, 2012 Would that change the last bit of the overall section to something like 'this Beyblade should only be purchased for the D Bottom' or something like that? I added in the rest of your suggestions. RE: Pirates Orojya 145D Draft - th!nk - Jun. 08, 2012 "This track is a regular, non-gimmicked track at the 145 height. It can be used in [[Stamina]] customs to great effect to to its tall height, but has been outclassed by AD145. It used to be on par for Stamina customs with DF145, but AD145 offers better Stamina on a 145 height. Thus, it's outclassed. " Should be 'due to'. Would also change the It's at the end there to "it is", for consistency with beywiki's usual tone. "===Use in Stamina Customization=== If AD145 isn't accessible, 145 still can be used in the custom ''Phantom Cancer/Cygnus 145WD''. Though outclassed, it is still good." "it is still competitive." would be a more appropriate way to end the sentence. In the overall section, I would change "As a result" to "Overall" at the start of the last sentence, as it follows on from a positive comment. Also: "the Orojya Chrome Wheel has been proven to be" remove the "been" and probably the "to be" as well. The orojya section still needs to discuss its performance. RE: Pirates Orojya 145D Draft - Fantomu - Jun. 08, 2012 Not sure if this is useful or not but maybe changing the reccomended combo at the "D" section to something like Duo/Phantom TH170D would be better. "D can be put to use in the top-tier combination Duo Aquario TH170D. D is a superior choice for TH170 because it retains balance better than WD." RE: Pirates Orojya 145D Draft - Primal - Jun. 08, 2012 @th!nk: Would this be alright? Primal Wrote:When used in Synchrom with another Orojya, its stamina and defense are not up to par with the current top-tier customizations of each type, managing win rates less than 50% against other competitive customizations. Fantomu: I was thinking about that. The combo that's in there right now can't really stand up to Duo and other top-tiers, so I'll go ahead and change it. RE: Pirates Orojya 145D Draft - th!nk - Jun. 08, 2012 Not bad, though I would try to be a bit more positive, if there's anything to be positive about, mention that it has some use for ___ but is outclassed by other wheels including ____ (though obviously write it better, haha). RE: Pirates Orojya 145D Draft - Primal - Jun. 08, 2012 Fixed it up some. Regarding pictures, does anyone have a Pirates Orojya that is fairly mint? Mine has been used enough to not be Beywiki quality, and my camera doesn't work well for pictures (as is evident by my Beat Lynx photos that kept resizing themselves ). RE: Pirates Orojya 145D Draft - Fantomu - Jun. 09, 2012 Some grammatical errors : Chrome Wheel : Line 4 customiaztion (should be customization) , som (should be some) RE: Pirates Orojya 145D Draft - Primal - Jun. 09, 2012 Thank you! Nice to see that people are noticing the smaller errors; I personally wouldn't have noticed them myself. RE: Pirates Orojya 145D Draft - Ultra - Jun. 09, 2012 It's obvious atm that it doesn't stick up to things like Duo, Phantom and Death. The more important comparison IMO is how it compares to other Zero G synchroms which you haven't said anything about. RE: Pirates Orojya 145D Draft - Primal - Jun. 13, 2012 Ultra: Added some stuff about Saramanda and Revizer into the Chrome Wheel section. I'd really like to know if there's anyone that can take pictures. My camera was odd with them before, so I want to be on the safe side. RE: Pirates Orojya 145D Draft - Ultra - Jun. 13, 2012 I meant like add an extra sentence or two. Not add it onto a sentence where it bearly applies. (I'm sure that sounds harsh but I can't think of another way to word it which would get my meaning across in the way I want). RE: Pirates Orojya 145D Draft - Primal - Jun. 13, 2012 Wasn't quite sure what you wanted before, so I did it the easy way, haha. Should be better now. RE: Pirates Orojya 145D Draft - Ultra - Jun. 13, 2012 I don't think that's true though is it? I mean there hasn't been much testing of synchrom customs against each other. I meant in comparison to others. Also I doubt that Reviser would outclass Oroyja in terms of attack. And outclass is too strong a word. The difference in performance isn't big enough to call it that. At least not between it and Saramanda. RE: Pirates Orojya 145D Draft - Primal - Jun. 13, 2012 I rephrased it again so that the comparisons sounded more correct. I wasn't quite sure how to explain that Orojya has more attack than Revizer... Neither of them are good for attack, but I think what I added is the best I can do. RE: Pirates Orojya 145D Draft - Primal - Jun. 28, 2012 Bumping this (is 2 weeks an acceptable time between bumps? I'd imagine so.) because I want to have more people examine it. I personally don't see anything obvious that needs to be fixed, but you guys may see something that I don't. I'll be out of town until the 9th of July, so chances are slim that I'll be able to update this. Still want to get some more opinions, though. |