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Hyper Aquario 105F Draft - Primal - Nov. 27, 2011 Primal Wrote:==Face: Aquario== RE: Hyper Aquario 105F Draft - Phoenix Inferno - Nov. 27, 2011 Kabia, It is a stub, but, I'll weigh hyper and get you the weight. RE: Hyper Aquario 105F Draft - Primal - Nov. 27, 2011 For the Face, CW, Track, and Bottom I just copied + pasted for the most part. I added a sentence or so to the CW section, and I honestly couldn't think of anything else to describe an outclassed Metal Wheel. :\ RE: Hyper Aquario 105F Draft - Phoenix Inferno - Nov. 27, 2011 (Nov. 27, 2011 6:47 PM)Kaiba Wrote: For the Face, CW, Track, and Bottom I just copied + pasted for the most part. I added a sentence or so to the CW section, and I honestly couldn't think of anything else to describe an outclassed Metal Wheel. :\ It is fine, here is a few edits (Nov. 27, 2011 6:43 PM)Kaiba Wrote:Kaiba Wrote:Face: Aquario RE: Hyper Aquario 105F Draft - ShadowL-Drago - Nov. 27, 2011 Bold or underline your edits so we can see them... RE: Hyper Aquario 105F Draft - Ga' - Nov. 27, 2011 Those are seriously pointless edits. One of them even has a grammar mistake in it (cough cough last edit). Add a section on Aquario's use in Defense (and stamina?) customizations. RE: Hyper Aquario 105F Draft - Raigeko13 - Nov. 27, 2011 I think this is really all we CAN do with Hyper. I'd weigh it for you if I could Kaiba, but I can't so yeah. Looks nice though. Hmm, add something about lots of recoil. Oh, and from my experiences, it has literally no attack power at all. Maybe this will help? RE: Hyper Aquario 105F Draft - Primal - Nov. 27, 2011 Thanks; I added them in just now. My Hyper Wheel is MIA, so when it comes time to take pictures I'll need somebody else to take them. That, and my Aquario Face is broken; just on the thread part, though. RE: Hyper Aquario 105F Draft - Raigeko13 - Nov. 27, 2011 I would take those in a heatbeat. Howevar Mine is beat up. XD And Beywiki requires mint stuff from what I know... Plus it's gloomy outside so the photos won't be good... If this doesn't get some photos/put up in a couple weeks, I'll go out and buy one and then re-sell it after I take photos. Oh, and thanks for adding my tidbit! RE: Hyper Aquario 105F Draft - Primal - Nov. 29, 2011 Awesome; thanks. My Beat was beat up a bit (haha, punny) and Dan said it wasn't a problem, so I'd say give it a shot. If everyone's okay with the Hyper section, I guess it's picture time RE: Hyper Aquario 105F Draft - Hazel - Nov. 29, 2011 Roughed up pictures are preferable to no pictures, as long as they aren't blurry. RE: Hyper Aquario 105F Draft - Raigeko13 - Nov. 29, 2011 I'll try to have the photos tomorrow then, if the Sun complies with me and shines. RE: Hyper Aquario 105F Draft - Primal - Nov. 29, 2011 Cool. If anyone is able to weigh/has the weight for Hyper, please tell me so I can add it in to the Hyper section. RE: Hyper Aquario 105F Draft - Shabalabadoo - Nov. 29, 2011 I think no pictures are better than photos of a ugly looking Beyblade. Especially since it has a silver/gray paint on it that makes it look super ugly. Some things: -I know you didn't write this part, but "Aquario is an acceptable substitute for Kerbecs". You changed it to Phantom, right? If you did, "Acceptable substitute" is incorrect. If you want Basalt, "Acceptable Substitute" is correct. -I don't even know if "Hollowness" is a word, but it and "Lightness" are really hollow words (Geddit?) -Where you write, "It cannot compare to its predecessor in terms of Attack", I'd take out "in terms of Attack", and even add that the Metal System Aquario was carp as well. -I don't know if this is important enough for you, but maybe a slight mention of the paint on the metal wheel? RE: Hyper Aquario 105F Draft - Hazel - Nov. 29, 2011 (Nov. 29, 2011 3:44 AM)Shabalabadoo Wrote: -I know you didn't write this part, but "Aquario is an acceptable substitute for Kerbecs". You changed it to Phantom, right? If you did, "Acceptable substitute" is incorrect. If you want Basalt, "Acceptable Substitute" is correct. ...I cannot even tell what you're trying to say here. Aquario is the best CW for Phantom and most Basalt combos. Do you mean to say "Kerbecs is not a valid CW on Phantom at all, so Aquario should not be labelled as an acceptable substitute for it."? (Nov. 29, 2011 3:44 AM)Shabalabadoo Wrote: -Where you write, "It cannot compare to its predecessor in terms of Attack", I'd take out "in terms of Attack", and even add that the Metal System Aquario was carp as well. Metal System Aquario was actually pretty good back then, if I recall correctly... I definitely remember seeing it mentioned in a positive light. (Nov. 29, 2011 3:44 AM)Shabalabadoo Wrote: I think no pictures are better than photos of a ugly looking Beyblade. Especially since it has a silver/gray paint on it that makes it look super ugly. Beywiki isn't a beauty pageant, it's for information and reference. RE: Hyper Aquario 105F Draft - Primal - Nov. 29, 2011 Quote:-I know you didn't write this part, but "Aquario is an acceptable substitute for Kerbecs". You changed it to Phantom, right? If you did, "Acceptable substitute" is incorrect. If you want Basalt, "Acceptable Substitute" is correct.Okay, then what is correct? Or is it just completely out of the question for Phantom? Quote:-I don't even know if "Hollowness" is a word, but it and "Lightness" are really hollow words (Geddit?)Hollowness is in fact a word. I'll change it to something like 'its light weight and hollow quality (not sure about that)' if you'd like. Quote:-Where you write, "It cannot compare to its predecessor in terms of Attack", I'd take out "in terms of Attack", and even add that the Metal System Aquario was carp as well.Got it; I'll fix that soon. Quote:-I don't know if this is important enough for you, but maybe a slight mention of the paint on the metal wheel?You mean the sliver coating, or the blue paint in the center, or both? Regardless, I'll add it in. RE: Hyper Aquario 105F Draft - Shabalabadoo - Nov. 29, 2011 Kerbecs doesn't really have good balance and is only good on Basalt. So "Acceptable" isn't the proper term. Of course, there's only so much of a difference that a clear wheel can make. Especially when they're so close in weight. I mean both the silver and blue. RE: Hyper Aquario 105F Draft - Raigeko13 - Nov. 29, 2011 All of Hasbro's re-makes of the Metal System beys are covered in a silver paint, just like their Metal System counterparts are. Note that these do come off just like regular paint, but is more durable. Mention that the center of Hyper is a blue colored circle like SSJ mentioned. RE: Hyper Aquario 105F Draft - Shabalabadoo - Nov. 29, 2011 (Nov. 29, 2011 3:49 AM)Hazel Wrote:Oh whoops, it doesn't really make sense at all, haha. What I meant is that he changed Basalt to Phantom, but it still said "Aquario is an acceptable substitute for Kerbecs", although that's only the case if it were Basalt.(Nov. 29, 2011 3:44 AM)Shabalabadoo Wrote: -I know you didn't write this part, but "Aquario is an acceptable substitute for Kerbecs". You changed it to Phantom, right? If you did, "Acceptable substitute" is incorrect. If you want Basalt, "Acceptable Substitute" is correct. Hazel Wrote:From what I remember (although I wasn't part of this Beyblade era) is that it wasn't necesarilly good, but not necessarily bad either. People just used it for whatever reason, maybe other parts' availability or something like that. Now it definitely is completely horrible though, haha.(Nov. 29, 2011 3:44 AM)Shabalabadoo Wrote: -Where you write, "It cannot compare to its predecessor in terms of Attack", I'd take out "in terms of Attack", and even add that the Metal System Aquario was carp as well. Hazel Wrote:(Nov. 29, 2011 3:44 AM)Shabalabadoo Wrote: I think no pictures are better than photos of a ugly looking Beyblade. Especially since it has a silver/gray paint on it that makes it look super ugly. We've gone the whole time with tons of articles with no pictures. Kei's very strict with the photos that go on and only accepts the finest, so I don't understand why all of a sudden a beat up Beyblade would be acceptable? RE: Hyper Aquario 105F Draft - Hazel - Nov. 29, 2011 We have a couple of articles with very beat-up Beyblades, and even some mis-matched ones, up on Beywiki right now. We also have that horrible picture of Sea Dragon. Don't tout Beywiki as a cistern of pure water after watching other people spit in it. RE: Hyper Aquario 105F Draft - Ultra - Nov. 29, 2011 The metal system Aquario was never good. RE: Hyper Aquario 105F Draft - Raigeko13 - Nov. 30, 2011 True, true. It never was, but it is for a fact better than Hyper. Anyways, my apologies, I wasn't able to take photos today. I will try to have them ASAP. I Brasso'd Hyper, so it should look more "presentable." RE: Hyper Aquario 105F Draft - Primal - Nov. 30, 2011 Added most of the sugestions in; still not sure on how to word the 'hollowness and lightness' part that Shaba pointed out. Rai: No problem; I can wait. Hope they turn out good. RE: Hyper Aquario 105F Draft - Shabalabadoo - Nov. 30, 2011 I would personally change that sentence to this: Quote:It is hollow, lightweight, and has an abundance of recoil that hinders its Attack to the point of having next to none. Here's the original sentence so you know where to put it in: Quote:Its hollowness, lightness, and abudance of recoil hinder its Attack to the point of having next to none. RE: Hyper Aquario 105F Draft - Raigeko13 - Nov. 30, 2011 Spoiler (Click to View) EDIT: 12/4/11 Spoiler (Click to View) |