Beyblade Burst Kings Game - G.O.A.T Blader - Sep. 15, 2021
This is my new fan fic. This takes place in a hypothetical with Shu beating Valt in god and the WBBA is controlled by the snake pit and Shu. But instead of the main character being Valt it’s a kid name Lelouch who wants to change the wbba from its corrupted state to its old good state. Will he be able to make a difference? Or will he be destroyed and proven that the snake pit is unstoppable?
RE: Beyblade Burst Kings Game - UnseenBurst - Sep. 15, 2021
(Sep. 15, 2021 10:56 PM)G.O.A.T Blader Wrote: This is my new fan fic. This takes place in a hypothetical with Shu beating Valt in god and the WBBA is controlled by the snake pit and Shu. But instead of the main character being Valt it’s a kid name Lelouch who wants to change the wbba from its corrupted state to its old good state. Will he be able to make a difference? Or will he be destroyed and proven that the snake pit is unstoppable?
Even if Valt lost to Shu he'd still be good just wanted to point that out but I'm not gonna ruin the potential best fanfiction of WBO! (No offense DeltaZakuro) So, yeah, this Fan Fiction has lots of potential and I'm excited to see where it leads!
RE: Beyblade Burst Kings Game - LegendJustice - Sep. 16, 2021
Interesting plot, im excited to see how this will turn out!
RE: Beyblade Burst Kings Game - G.O.A.T Blader - Sep. 16, 2021
Beyblade Burst Kings Game #1
*6 years ago*
Everyone: Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday dear Shu! Happy birthday to you!
Shu: Thanks everyone!
Shu stares at everyone with a happy smile. Then starts opening his gifts.
Shu: Oh, a new launcher.
Shu looks at the launcher with a fake smile.
Valt: Do you like it!
Shu: Yeah, I do.
Shu then puts the launcher back in its packaging and then opens another one. Shu grabs a lightsaber from the gift package.
Shu: A lightsaber?! I love these things! Who got me this?!
Lelouch: That would be me.
Shu looks at Lelouch with a cheerful smile and Lelouch returns with his own. Valt looks at the two in the corner saddened by Shu’s obvious dislike of the gift. Especially since Valt has been trying to get Shu to blade for years now. Lelouch grabs his own lightsaber and starts fighting Shu with his new one.
Both: *giggles*
*3 years ago*
Shu: Wait you have to leave?
Lelouch: Yeah I’m going to move in a few weeks.
Shu: I’ll miss you when your gone.
Lelouch: Same here.
*During God*
WBBA Announcer: And that’s a burst finish for Red Eye! Strike God Valkyrie has just been shattered into little pieces.
Shu: I win. I WIN!!!!!!
Shu’s aura becomes erratic becoming larger and darker with Shu’s eye and scar glowing a dark red.
Valt: No. Not Valkyrie.
Valt grabs Valkyrie with tears in his eyes,
Valt: How could you do this?
Shu: Your weak Valt. And the only ones who should thrive are the strong.
*In Lelouch’s house*
Lelouch: This can’t be! How could Shu do this? No. This has to be the Bulls doing. Shu would never do this. Shu I promise, one day I’ll come back to Japan; and when I do. I’ll save you.
*Current Day*
A older Lelouch gets on the plane and watches a video.
WBBA Announcer: And that’s another shattered bey! Bel looked like he could beat Shu for a second but those hopes were wiped away in the second round! Can anyone beat Red Eye and his Astral Spriggan?!
Lelouch looks at the video with a discussed face.
Lelouch: Oh I will. I will destroy this beyblade world and make it a new. But first I need my own bey because these beys I use to practice at the WBBA stores aren’t cutting it.
*5 hours later*
Lelouch gets off the plane and leaves the airport. He then gets in his Uber and the Uber drives him to his new apartment. When Lelouch gets there the moving service starts putting his stuff in his apartment. After the workers leave Lelouch lays on his bed thinking.
Lelouch: Should I continue this goal? Is it even realistic?
Lelouch turns his head and sees a photo framed of him, Shu, and Valt all together.
Lelouch: No. What am I even thinking? I must do this. For Shu and for Valt. Even if it means I have to sacrifice my own life and goals.
Lelouch gets up from his bed and gets on his computer doing research and designing his own bey. Lelouch then starts analyzing Shu’s Astral Spriggan and finding ideas to counter it and any bey someone could throw at him.
Lelouch: So since the top bladers are making DB beys right now i guess I’ll do the same. Also since Shu has shown that strongest spin for attack types is likely left spin my bey will be right spin. Then because of this to counter Spriggans attacks I’ll put some rubber on it. But also since it’s only one spin direction and it’s a stamina type I need to get some parts that will allow me to out spin right spins. Or at least let me have good defense against them.
Lelouch looks on his computer and finally decides on his beys design and what it needs for parts.
Lelouch: Alright I’ll get my computer to scan this for any problems which will cause it to not fit on the disc and driver and I’ll go get the parts from the WBBA store.
Lelouch leaves his house and starts walking down the street and sees posters and billboards talking about the best blader in the world Red Eye.
Lelouch: I’m guessing this was posted by the bulls since they have Shu on their team. Though something tells me the bulls alone didn’t do this to Shu. They had to have had help.
Lelouch enters the WBBA store and grabs the disc Giga, the driver Bearing’, and the 3 armor for his DB bey. He then puts the parts on the counter and pays for his parts and leaves the store. Lelouch gets to his house and finds the scans said the beys dimensions were fine and can work. He then started making the beyblade and the next day completed it. Lelouch grabbed his bear and looked at it in happiness.
Lelouch: Now what should I name you?
Lelouch looks at the Blue, white, and gold on the bey and finally comes up with a name.
Lelouch: I’ll name you Dynamite Valac. But one last thing.
Lelouch grabs his new designed F gear on the Dynamite blade completing the bey. Lelouch then looks at the picture of him, Shu, and Valt again and looks at Valac.
Lelouch: Valac. It’s time to get Shu back.
UnseenBurst LegendJustice
RE: Beyblade Burst Kings Game - UnseenBurst - Sep. 16, 2021
(Sep. 16, 2021 3:19 AM)G.O.A.T Blader Wrote: Beyblade Burst Kings Game #1
*6 years ago*
Everyone: Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday dear Shu! Happy birthday to you!
Shu: Thanks everyone!
Shu stares at everyone with a happy smile. Then starts opening his gifts.
Shu: Oh, a new launcher.
Shu looks at the launcher with a fake smile.
Valt: Do you like it!
Shu: Yeah, I do.
Shu then puts the launcher back in its packaging and then opens another one. Shu grabs a lightsaber from the gift package.
Shu: A lightsaber?! I love these things! Who got me this?!
Lelouch: That would be me.
Shu looks at Lelouch with a cheerful smile and Lelouch returns with his own. Valt looks at the two in the corner saddened by Shu’s obvious dislike of the gift. Especially since Valt has been trying to get Shu to blade for years now. Lelouch grabs his own lightsaber and starts fighting Shu with his new one.
Both: *giggles*
*3 years ago*
Shu: Wait you have to leave?
Lelouch: Yeah I’m going to move in a few weeks.
Shu: I’ll miss you when your gone.
Lelouch: Same here.
*During God*
WBBA Announcer: And that’s a burst finish for Red Eye! Strike God Valkyrie has just been shattered into little pieces.
Shu: I win. I WIN!!!!!!
Shu’s aura becomes erratic becoming larger and darker with Shu’s eye and scar glowing a dark red.
Valt: No. Not Valkyrie.
Valt grabs Valkyrie with tears in his eyes,
Valt: How could you do this?
Shu: Your weak Valt. And the only ones who should thrive are the strong.
*In Lelouch’s house*
Lelouch: This can’t be! How could Shu do this? No. This has to be the Bulls doing. Shu would never do this. Shu I promise, one day I’ll come back to Japan; and when I do. I’ll save you.
*Current Day*
A older Lelouch gets on the plane and watches a video.
WBBA Announcer: And that’s another shattered bey! Bel looked like he could beat Shu for a second but those hopes were wiped away in the second round! Can anyone beat Red Eye and his Astral Spriggan?!
Lelouch looks at the video with a discussed face.
Lelouch: Oh I will. I will destroy this beyblade world and make it a new. But first I need my own bey because these beys I use to practice at the WBBA stores aren’t cutting it.
*5 hours later*
Lelouch gets off the plane and leaves the airport. He then gets in his Uber and the Uber drives him to his new apartment. When Lelouch gets there the moving service starts putting his stuff in his apartment. After the workers leave Lelouch lays on his bed thinking.
Lelouch: Should I continue this goal? Is it even realistic?
Lelouch turns his head and sees a photo framed of him, Shu, and Valt all together.
Lelouch: No. What am I even thinking? I must do this. For Shu and for Valt. Even if it means I have to sacrifice my own life and goals.
Lelouch gets up from his bed and gets on his computer doing research and designing his own bey. Lelouch then starts analyzing Shu’s Astral Spriggan and finding ideas to counter it and any bey someone could throw at him.
Lelouch: So since the top bladers are making DB beys right now i guess I’ll do the same. Also since Shu has shown that strongest spin for attack types is likely left spin my bey will be right spin. Then because of this to counter Spriggans attacks I’ll put some rubber on it. But also since it’s only one spin direction and it’s a stamina type I need to get some parts that will allow me to out spin right spins. Or at least let me have good defense against them.
Lelouch looks on his computer and finally decides on his beys design and what it needs for parts.
Lelouch: Alright I’ll get my computer to scan this for any problems which will cause it to not fit on the disc and driver and I’ll go get the parts from the WBBA store.
Lelouch leaves his house and starts walking down the street and sees posters and billboards talking about the best blader in the world Red Eye.
Lelouch: I’m guessing this was posted by the bulls since they have Shu on their team. Though something tells me the bulls alone didn’t do this to Shu. They had to have had help.
Lelouch enters the WBBA store and grabs the disc Giga, the driver Bearing’, and the 3 armor for his DB bey. He then puts the parts on the counter and pays for his parts and leaves the store. Lelouch gets to his house and finds the scans said the beys dimensions were fine and can work. He then started making the beyblade and the next day completed it. Lelouch grabbed his bear and looked at it in happiness.
Lelouch: Now what should I name you?
Lelouch looks at the Blue, white, and gold on the bey and finally comes up with a name.
Lelouch: I’ll name you Dynamite Valac. But one last thing.
Lelouch grabs his new designed F gear on the Dynamite blade completing the bey. Lelouch then looks at the picture of him, Shu, and Valt again and looks at Valac.
Lelouch: Valac. It’s time to get Shu back.
UnseenBurst LegendJustice
(Sep. 16, 2021 3:19 AM)G.O.A.T Blader Wrote: Beyblade Burst Kings Game #1
*6 years ago*
Everyone: Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday dear Shu! Happy birthday to you!
Shu: Thanks everyone!
Shu stares at everyone with a happy smile. Then starts opening his gifts.
Shu: Oh, a new launcher.
Shu looks at the launcher with a fake smile.
Valt: Do you like it!
Shu: Yeah, I do.
Shu then puts the launcher back in its packaging and then opens another one. Shu grabs a lightsaber from the gift package.
Shu: A lightsaber?! I love these things! Who got me this?!
Lelouch: That would be me.
Shu looks at Lelouch with a cheerful smile and Lelouch returns with his own. Valt looks at the two in the corner saddened by Shu’s obvious dislike of the gift. Especially since Valt has been trying to get Shu to blade for years now. Lelouch grabs his own lightsaber and starts fighting Shu with his new one.
Both: *giggles*
*3 years ago*
Shu: Wait you have to leave?
Lelouch: Yeah I’m going to move in a few weeks.
Shu: I’ll miss you when your gone.
Lelouch: Same here.
*During God*
WBBA Announcer: And that’s a burst finish for Red Eye! Strike God Valkyrie has just been shattered into little pieces.
Shu: I win. I WIN!!!!!!
Shu’s aura becomes erratic becoming larger and darker with Shu’s eye and scar glowing a dark red.
Valt: No. Not Valkyrie.
Valt grabs Valkyrie with tears in his eyes,
Valt: How could you do this?
Shu: Your weak Valt. And the only ones who should thrive are the strong.
*In Lelouch’s house*
Lelouch: This can’t be! How could Shu do this? No. This has to be the Bulls doing. Shu would never do this. Shu I promise, one day I’ll come back to Japan; and when I do. I’ll save you.
*Current Day*
A older Lelouch gets on the plane and watches a video.
WBBA Announcer: And that’s another shattered bey! Bel looked like he could beat Shu for a second but those hopes were wiped away in the second round! Can anyone beat Red Eye and his Astral Spriggan?!
Lelouch looks at the video with a discussed face.
Lelouch: Oh I will. I will destroy this beyblade world and make it a new. But first I need my own bey because these beys I use to practice at the WBBA stores aren’t cutting it.
*5 hours later*
Lelouch gets off the plane and leaves the airport. He then gets in his Uber and the Uber drives him to his new apartment. When Lelouch gets there the moving service starts putting his stuff in his apartment. After the workers leave Lelouch lays on his bed thinking.
Lelouch: Should I continue this goal? Is it even realistic?
Lelouch turns his head and sees a photo framed of him, Shu, and Valt all together.
Lelouch: No. What am I even thinking? I must do this. For Shu and for Valt. Even if it means I have to sacrifice my own life and goals.
Lelouch gets up from his bed and gets on his computer doing research and designing his own bey. Lelouch then starts analyzing Shu’s Astral Spriggan and finding ideas to counter it and any bey someone could throw at him.
Lelouch: So since the top bladers are making DB beys right now i guess I’ll do the same. Also since Shu has shown that strongest spin for attack types is likely left spin my bey will be right spin. Then because of this to counter Spriggans attacks I’ll put some rubber on it. But also since it’s only one spin direction and it’s a stamina type I need to get some parts that will allow me to out spin right spins. Or at least let me have good defense against them.
Lelouch looks on his computer and finally decides on his beys design and what it needs for parts.
Lelouch: Alright I’ll get my computer to scan this for any problems which will cause it to not fit on the disc and driver and I’ll go get the parts from the WBBA store.
Lelouch leaves his house and starts walking down the street and sees posters and billboards talking about the best blader in the world Red Eye.
Lelouch: I’m guessing this was posted by the bulls since they have Shu on their team. Though something tells me the bulls alone didn’t do this to Shu. They had to have had help.
Lelouch enters the WBBA store and grabs the disc Giga, the driver Bearing’, and the 3 armor for his DB bey. He then puts the parts on the counter and pays for his parts and leaves the store. Lelouch gets to his house and finds the scans said the beys dimensions were fine and can work. He then started making the beyblade and the next day completed it. Lelouch grabbed his bear and looked at it in happiness.
Lelouch: Now what should I name you?
Lelouch looks at the Blue, white, and gold on the bey and finally comes up with a name.
Lelouch: I’ll name you Dynamite Valac. But one last thing.
Lelouch grabs his new designed F gear on the Dynamite blade completing the bey. Lelouch then looks at the picture of him, Shu, and Valt again and looks at Valac.
Lelouch: Valac. It’s time to get Shu back.
UnseenBurst LegendJustice
This was a good start, but in my opinion, it needs a bit of tweaking. For starters the characters seem out of place, for example, Shu's an awesome friend to Valt he'd do anything for him, and he'd never try to make him upset (If he does he tries fixing it) So just seeing Shu and [Insert Main Character] play with each other leaving Valt just sad that Shu didn't like his gift is just out of character, I know what you're trying to do but try making the characters a bit more like their Anime and/or Manga counterpart. Also, the chapter feels a bit rushed and cramped, I honestly think you could've explained the story a bit better and make it a bit longer. Also, it feels weird that the main character kinda has the same parts as Bell but I can let that slide. Also try putting your chapters in Spoilers, it makes them easier to read. This is how you create spoilers, (Spoiler) {Insert text you want} (/Spoiler) (Replace these () with these []) I'm not trying to be mean here I'm just tryna give some helpful advice, I hope you improve! I know you can!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Kings Game - G.O.A.T Blader - Sep. 16, 2021
(Sep. 16, 2021 4:36 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Sep. 16, 2021 3:19 AM)G.O.A.T Blader Wrote: Beyblade Burst Kings Game #1
*6 years ago*
Everyone: Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday dear Shu! Happy birthday to you!
Shu: Thanks everyone!
Shu stares at everyone with a happy smile. Then starts opening his gifts.
Shu: Oh, a new launcher.
Shu looks at the launcher with a fake smile.
Valt: Do you like it!
Shu: Yeah, I do.
Shu then puts the launcher back in its packaging and then opens another one. Shu grabs a lightsaber from the gift package.
Shu: A lightsaber?! I love these things! Who got me this?!
Lelouch: That would be me.
Shu looks at Lelouch with a cheerful smile and Lelouch returns with his own. Valt looks at the two in the corner saddened by Shu’s obvious dislike of the gift. Especially since Valt has been trying to get Shu to blade for years now. Lelouch grabs his own lightsaber and starts fighting Shu with his new one.
Both: *giggles*
*3 years ago*
Shu: Wait you have to leave?
Lelouch: Yeah I’m going to move in a few weeks.
Shu: I’ll miss you when your gone.
Lelouch: Same here.
*During God*
WBBA Announcer: And that’s a burst finish for Red Eye! Strike God Valkyrie has just been shattered into little pieces.
Shu: I win. I WIN!!!!!!
Shu’s aura becomes erratic becoming larger and darker with Shu’s eye and scar glowing a dark red.
Valt: No. Not Valkyrie.
Valt grabs Valkyrie with tears in his eyes,
Valt: How could you do this?
Shu: Your weak Valt. And the only ones who should thrive are the strong.
*In Lelouch’s house*
Lelouch: This can’t be! How could Shu do this? No. This has to be the Bulls doing. Shu would never do this. Shu I promise, one day I’ll come back to Japan; and when I do. I’ll save you.
*Current Day*
A older Lelouch gets on the plane and watches a video.
WBBA Announcer: And that’s another shattered bey! Bel looked like he could beat Shu for a second but those hopes were wiped away in the second round! Can anyone beat Red Eye and his Astral Spriggan?!
Lelouch looks at the video with a discussed face.
Lelouch: Oh I will. I will destroy this beyblade world and make it a new. But first I need my own bey because these beys I use to practice at the WBBA stores aren’t cutting it.
*5 hours later*
Lelouch gets off the plane and leaves the airport. He then gets in his Uber and the Uber drives him to his new apartment. When Lelouch gets there the moving service starts putting his stuff in his apartment. After the workers leave Lelouch lays on his bed thinking.
Lelouch: Should I continue this goal? Is it even realistic?
Lelouch turns his head and sees a photo framed of him, Shu, and Valt all together.
Lelouch: No. What am I even thinking? I must do this. For Shu and for Valt. Even if it means I have to sacrifice my own life and goals.
Lelouch gets up from his bed and gets on his computer doing research and designing his own bey. Lelouch then starts analyzing Shu’s Astral Spriggan and finding ideas to counter it and any bey someone could throw at him.
Lelouch: So since the top bladers are making DB beys right now i guess I’ll do the same. Also since Shu has shown that strongest spin for attack types is likely left spin my bey will be right spin. Then because of this to counter Spriggans attacks I’ll put some rubber on it. But also since it’s only one spin direction and it’s a stamina type I need to get some parts that will allow me to out spin right spins. Or at least let me have good defense against them.
Lelouch looks on his computer and finally decides on his beys design and what it needs for parts.
Lelouch: Alright I’ll get my computer to scan this for any problems which will cause it to not fit on the disc and driver and I’ll go get the parts from the WBBA store.
Lelouch leaves his house and starts walking down the street and sees posters and billboards talking about the best blader in the world Red Eye.
Lelouch: I’m guessing this was posted by the bulls since they have Shu on their team. Though something tells me the bulls alone didn’t do this to Shu. They had to have had help.
Lelouch enters the WBBA store and grabs the disc Giga, the driver Bearing’, and the 3 armor for his DB bey. He then puts the parts on the counter and pays for his parts and leaves the store. Lelouch gets to his house and finds the scans said the beys dimensions were fine and can work. He then started making the beyblade and the next day completed it. Lelouch grabbed his bear and looked at it in happiness.
Lelouch: Now what should I name you?
Lelouch looks at the Blue, white, and gold on the bey and finally comes up with a name.
Lelouch: I’ll name you Dynamite Valac. But one last thing.
Lelouch grabs his new designed F gear on the Dynamite blade completing the bey. Lelouch then looks at the picture of him, Shu, and Valt again and looks at Valac.
Lelouch: Valac. It’s time to get Shu back.
UnseenBurst LegendJustice
(Sep. 16, 2021 3:19 AM)G.O.A.T Blader Wrote: Beyblade Burst Kings Game #1
*6 years ago*
Everyone: Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday dear Shu! Happy birthday to you!
Shu: Thanks everyone!
Shu stares at everyone with a happy smile. Then starts opening his gifts.
Shu: Oh, a new launcher.
Shu looks at the launcher with a fake smile.
Valt: Do you like it!
Shu: Yeah, I do.
Shu then puts the launcher back in its packaging and then opens another one. Shu grabs a lightsaber from the gift package.
Shu: A lightsaber?! I love these things! Who got me this?!
Lelouch: That would be me.
Shu looks at Lelouch with a cheerful smile and Lelouch returns with his own. Valt looks at the two in the corner saddened by Shu’s obvious dislike of the gift. Especially since Valt has been trying to get Shu to blade for years now. Lelouch grabs his own lightsaber and starts fighting Shu with his new one.
Both: *giggles*
*3 years ago*
Shu: Wait you have to leave?
Lelouch: Yeah I’m going to move in a few weeks.
Shu: I’ll miss you when your gone.
Lelouch: Same here.
*During God*
WBBA Announcer: And that’s a burst finish for Red Eye! Strike God Valkyrie has just been shattered into little pieces.
Shu: I win. I WIN!!!!!!
Shu’s aura becomes erratic becoming larger and darker with Shu’s eye and scar glowing a dark red.
Valt: No. Not Valkyrie.
Valt grabs Valkyrie with tears in his eyes,
Valt: How could you do this?
Shu: Your weak Valt. And the only ones who should thrive are the strong.
*In Lelouch’s house*
Lelouch: This can’t be! How could Shu do this? No. This has to be the Bulls doing. Shu would never do this. Shu I promise, one day I’ll come back to Japan; and when I do. I’ll save you.
*Current Day*
A older Lelouch gets on the plane and watches a video.
WBBA Announcer: And that’s another shattered bey! Bel looked like he could beat Shu for a second but those hopes were wiped away in the second round! Can anyone beat Red Eye and his Astral Spriggan?!
Lelouch looks at the video with a discussed face.
Lelouch: Oh I will. I will destroy this beyblade world and make it a new. But first I need my own bey because these beys I use to practice at the WBBA stores aren’t cutting it.
*5 hours later*
Lelouch gets off the plane and leaves the airport. He then gets in his Uber and the Uber drives him to his new apartment. When Lelouch gets there the moving service starts putting his stuff in his apartment. After the workers leave Lelouch lays on his bed thinking.
Lelouch: Should I continue this goal? Is it even realistic?
Lelouch turns his head and sees a photo framed of him, Shu, and Valt all together.
Lelouch: No. What am I even thinking? I must do this. For Shu and for Valt. Even if it means I have to sacrifice my own life and goals.
Lelouch gets up from his bed and gets on his computer doing research and designing his own bey. Lelouch then starts analyzing Shu’s Astral Spriggan and finding ideas to counter it and any bey someone could throw at him.
Lelouch: So since the top bladers are making DB beys right now i guess I’ll do the same. Also since Shu has shown that strongest spin for attack types is likely left spin my bey will be right spin. Then because of this to counter Spriggans attacks I’ll put some rubber on it. But also since it’s only one spin direction and it’s a stamina type I need to get some parts that will allow me to out spin right spins. Or at least let me have good defense against them.
Lelouch looks on his computer and finally decides on his beys design and what it needs for parts.
Lelouch: Alright I’ll get my computer to scan this for any problems which will cause it to not fit on the disc and driver and I’ll go get the parts from the WBBA store.
Lelouch leaves his house and starts walking down the street and sees posters and billboards talking about the best blader in the world Red Eye.
Lelouch: I’m guessing this was posted by the bulls since they have Shu on their team. Though something tells me the bulls alone didn’t do this to Shu. They had to have had help.
Lelouch enters the WBBA store and grabs the disc Giga, the driver Bearing’, and the 3 armor for his DB bey. He then puts the parts on the counter and pays for his parts and leaves the store. Lelouch gets to his house and finds the scans said the beys dimensions were fine and can work. He then started making the beyblade and the next day completed it. Lelouch grabbed his bear and looked at it in happiness.
Lelouch: Now what should I name you?
Lelouch looks at the Blue, white, and gold on the bey and finally comes up with a name.
Lelouch: I’ll name you Dynamite Valac. But one last thing.
Lelouch grabs his new designed F gear on the Dynamite blade completing the bey. Lelouch then looks at the picture of him, Shu, and Valt again and looks at Valac.
Lelouch: Valac. It’s time to get Shu back.
UnseenBurst LegendJustice
This was a good start, but in my opinion, it needs a bit of tweaking. For starters the characters seem out of place, for example, Shu's an awesome friend to Valt he'd do anything for him, and he'd never try to make him upset (If he does he tries fixing it) So just seeing Shu and [Insert Main Character] play with each other leaving Valt just sad that Shu didn't like his gift is just out of character, I know what you're trying to do but try making the characters a bit more like their Anime and/or Manga counterpart. Also, the chapter feels a bit rushed and cramped, I honestly think you could've explained the story a bit better and make it a bit longer. Also, it feels weird that the main character kinda has the same parts as Bell but I can let that slide. Also try putting your chapters in Spoilers, it makes them easier to read. This is how you create spoilers, (Spoiler) {Insert text you want} (/Spoiler) (Replace these () with these []) I'm not trying to be mean here I'm just tryna give some helpful advice, I hope you improve! I know you can!!
Thanks for the advice I’ll do that
RE: Beyblade Burst Kings Game - G.O.A.T Blader - Sep. 17, 2021
Beyblade Burst Kings Game #2
Lelouch: Now time to test my new bey. From my calculations it should be really good if not the best. Though I don’t know how to get that aura those bladers do. Maybe it’s a process where I have to “bond” with my bey.
Lelouch leaves his house with Valac and goes to a stadium in the street.
Sisco: UNIVERSE DRIFT!
Curse Satan sends a bey out of the ring.
Kid: How is he this good?!
Another kid: I don’t think anyone can beat him!
Sisco smiles at them.
Sisco: If you want to get better you have to practice. Consistent practice and battles with bladers stronger then you will allow you to get better.
Lelouch: Interesting, is that Sisco?
Lelouch comes to the stadium and looks at Sisco with his purple eyes.
Lelouch: I bet I can defeat you.
Sisco: You think so, huh? Well let’s see if you can back up your claim.
Sisco gets in his launching position. Lelouch looks at him and smiles getting into his own stance.
Ref kid: Ok get ready!
Everyone: 3,2,1, GO SHOOT!
Both bladers launch their beys. Satan starts circling the middle of the stadium with Valac in the center.
Sisco: A stamina type huh?
Satan attacks Valac but when it does Sisco notices the blade of Valac is dynamite.
Sisco: Wait a second. You have a stationary attack type huh?
Lelouch smiles at him.
Lelouch: Yep. That was the idea that if I went against a right spin bey when they attack me I’ll be able to cause the same if not more damage to them then they did to me.
Sisco: Well that’s not gonna save you. Satan, Universe Drift!
Satan uses the universe driver to attack Valac.
Lelouch: Your an idiot if you think I didn’t have a plan for that. Dynamite Bomber!
Satan strikes Valac, knocking it out without dynamite bomber even happening.
Lelouch: What?
Sisco: What were you saying about being a idiot kid?
Lelouch: Looks at Sisco with embarrassment and rage. Lelouch angrily fixes his bey’s clicks so he can launch it again.
Sisco: Do you want to know why your move didn’t work?
Lelouch: Fine, enlighten me!
Sisco: You have no resonance with your bey. You need a connection with them for your moves to work.
Lelouch looks at Sisco in curiosity.
Lelouch: And how do I get this “resonance”?
Sisco: You have to battle strongly with your bey. And eventually you will hear your beys voice.
Lelouch: Voice?
Lelouch looks at Valac and smiles. Lelouch then puts Valac on the launcher and gets ready.
Sisco smiles at Lelouch.
Sisco: That’s more like it. Now let’s do this.
Everyone: 3,2,1, GO SHOOT!
Both bladers launch their beys. Valac goes back to the center with Satan slamming into it.
Sisco: Have you not learned from your last battle? Universe Drift!
Lelouch smirks at Sisco. Satan comes flying into Valac but in the last second Valac dodges Satan causing Satan to slam into the stadium wall.
Sisco: Good job! But that’s not gonna be good enough. Triple Spin!
The Ring, driver, and tip of Satan synchronize together making a barter. Satan then starts going slowly into the center. Satan eventually gets to the center and starts fighting Valac for the center.
Lelouch: Get out of there!
Valac listens to Lelouch and gets out of the center.
Lelouch: Wait, it listened?
Sisco: Yes it did. That’s the start of a bond right there.
Lelouch: Valac! Use Dynamite Bomber!
Valac listens and charges at Satan and uses Dynamite Bomber causing Satan to fly in the air and burst.
Kid Ref: Wait how’d he do that?
Lelouch grabs Valac and then hears a voice,
Valac: Hello Lelouch.
Lelouch: What?
Lelouch is transported into a world with a bunch of veins around him and connected to him.
Valac: You did well for your first battle.
Lelouch: Wait how are you talking to me? Sisco said that you need to have a good bond with your bey and it’s only been our first battle.
Valac: Well yes it’s been our first but I bet you’ll be a great partner.
Lelouch: And how’s that?
Valac: You appear to have a reason to battle unlike most bladers who battle for fun or glory you battle for someone. If you had power you could defeat people like him more easily, correct?
Lelouch: Yes. But what are you gonna give me power?
Valac: Sure, I will but we’re gonna have to make a deal first.
Valac’s avatar finally appears in front of Lelouch. The spirit was a knight on a horse. The knight wore blue and silver with a golden sword and helmet. The horse wore a combination of gold and silver with its armor with blue hair on the top of its head.
Valac: But the power of the king will isolate you. If you are prepared for it.
Lelouch: Very well! If this will help me on my goal then I’ll do. I accept this deal!
Lelouch opens his eyes and looks up with Sisco sitting next to him.
Sisco: Hey you ok kid? You were out for like five minute.
Lelouch: Yeah, I am.
Sisco pulls Lelouch up and notices his left eye turned from its normal purple color to a reddish pink with a red V on it.
Sisco: Woah! What’s wrong with your eye?!
Lelouch puts his left hand on his left eye and when he takes it off the V disappears.
Sisco: Wait, where did it go?
Lelouch: I don’t know. But thanks for the help and for the fun battle. I hope I’ll see you around.
Lelouch puts his hands in his pockets and starts walking away from the stadium.
Sisco: Wait, before you go what’s your name?
Lelouch: My name is Lelouch. But you will know me as the strongest blader in the world soon.
Lelouch walks away and goes into his bathroom and puts his left hand on his left eye again causing the eye to turn reddish pink and for the red V to appear.
Lelouch: Where did this come from?
Valac: This was apart of the deal.
Lelouch: What though. Your in the other room. How are you talking to me?
Valac: In our deal it gave me the ability to talk to you through your mind. Without me needing to talk to you through my physical body. But it only works when you have that eye activated.
Lelouch: Interesting.
Valac: Well what’s the next step?
Lelouch: What next step?
Valac: You want to help your friend get back to normal so what are we gonna do?
Lelouch: Oh yes. I forgot about that. I wanted to test you out first but now I can put stage two into motion.
Lelouch opens up a bag that includes a helmet that covers his whole face. Lelouch looks at the glass on the helmet seeing his own reflection with its purple color. Lelouch then grabs the clothing in the bag putting on the suit and finally putting on the cape.
Valac: Lelouch, what is this for?
Lelouch: Well since my main opponent wants to battle anonymous then so shall I. You can call me Zero, the man who holds all the cards.
Valac: Interesting name choice, I like it. But what are you gonna do now?
Lelouch: I need some pawns I can move on the board. I know myself alone isn’t enough to defeat Shu and the Raging Bulls, and whatever third party that caused Shu to become like this.
Lelouch then turns around to the tv where all of Shu’s battle are shown.
Lelouch: And I got a idea who.
*1 hour later*
Lelouch is in a ally way waiting for the people he’s chosen.
Hyuga: I’m telling you we shouldn’t come here! Like a creepy ally way, come on!
Hikaru: He says that he has a idea on how we can get pay back on Red Eye.
The Hizashi brothers then bump into Bell.
Hyuga: Bell? What are you doing here?!
Bell: I got a call from someone named “Zero” saying he has a idea on how I can get payback from Red Eye.
Hikaru: Same. Why would he need us three though?
Bell: You know he needs the power of my Devil Belial!
Hyuga: No?! He needs the power of Hyperion Flame!
Hikaru: No?! My Helios Glory is better then your Hyperion!
Gwyn: I think your both wrong. My Dawn Genesis is likely better then both of you.
Lelouch: Incorrect. My Dynamite Valac will destroy all of you.
Bell: DYNAMITE?! You couldn’t make your own blade?!
Lelouch: It’s not my fault your blade was the best. There was no reason for me to make a new blade when your blade is very good and completes all my needs.
Bell: Well thanks, but my Devil blade is ten times stronger then my Dynamite Blade.
Lelouch: I disagree, but whatever. This is irrelevant. I am Zero, I am the one who called you all. I think we can all agree that what Red Eye is doing is evil and we need to stop him.
Hyuga: Yeah! But what do we do?!
Lelouch: Put these on.
Lelouch tosses a bag with uniforms, masks, and helmets.
*2 hours later*
WBBA podcaster: Now onto our next discussion. I think it’s pretty obvious Red Eye is the best blader in the world.
Other podcaster: Yeah it’s pretty obvious he is—
The channel gets turned off and when it gets turned back on everyone watching sees Zero.
Lelouch: I am Zero.
*At the WBBA headquarters*
Worker: Hey boss, we got a problem.
Theodore: How so?
Theodore gets up from his chair and sees the show has been interrupted by someone named Zero.
Lelouch: Who are you waiting for to beat Red Eye? Is someone going to do it for you? You think if you wait long enough, some day the chance will come? Don’t be naive! What Red Eye is doing is wrong and he should be punished for his actions. If we don’t stop Red Eye, that “some day” will never come! People! We are the Black Knights!
The background of Lelouch brightens up showing Bell, Hyuga, Hikaru, and Gywn all in uniforms and helmets and masks that cover half of their face only showing from the mouth down.
Lelouch: Where those with power attack those without, we shall appear! Here and now, I declare our independence from the WBBA and their corruption by the Raging Bulls and the Snake Pit!
Theodore: How does he know about the Snake Pit?!
Lelouch watches the recording on TV while also watching on a security camera hidden in the WBBA headquarters.
Lelouch: Wakiya’s claims were right. The snake pit is real. Meaning, the ones who turned Shu into Red Eye was the Snake Pit. And also since the owner of the Raging Bulls said this; I wouldn’t be surprised if he was the Snake Pits leaders.
Lelouch’s recording: Those who have none, seek me! For we, the Black Knights, shall judge this beyblade world!
Lelouch in his room moves a black pawn forward on his chessboard.
Lelouch: Now let’s see your next move, Theodore.
The recording ends and causes the channel to go back to the podcasters.
Valac: What are you planning to do with this recording?
Lelouch: I’m gonna create a people, a nation! And together we will destroy the WBBA and the Snake Pit and free Shu from his control.
Valac: Interesting. So what’s your next move?
Lelouch: Oh you’ll see. But I want to see how Theodore responds after this.
UnseenBurst LegendJustice I hope this is a better chapter
RE: Beyblade Burst Kings Game - G.O.A.T Blader - Sep. 19, 2021
Beyblade Burst Kings Game #3
Lelouch hears his phone he uses to contact the Black Knights ringing. Lelouch picks up and hears Hikaru on the other side.
Hikaru: Hey Zero. We got the base that you asked for, I’m sending the coordinates right now.
Lelouch: Alright, thank you Hikaru.
Hikaru: Well one thing before you hang up.
Lelouch: What is it?
Hikaru: How well do you think the video will do?
Lelouch: I don’t know, but it will at least cause some conversation. Though this video isn’t the big move we’re going to make. It’s just a way for us to see how the WBBA will respond.
Hikaru: Oh, ok.
Lelouch hangs up the phone and gets in his Zero attire.
Valac: Are you sure that in the end you’ll win this?
Lelouch: Of coarse I’ll win. Like you said I have a reason for me to win. Which in humans it’s shown to save your loved ones the brain and stress to save someone can cause people to do extraordinary things. Like dads have been able to pick up cars to save their children. So I don’t know how but I will find a way to bring Shu back and defeat the Snake Pit.
Valac: Interesting.
Lelouch leaves his house and sneakily gets to the base. Lelouch enters and sees Hikaru doing research on the computer with Hyuga while Bell and Gwyn were having a chess match.
Bell: Hey Zero! Can you come help me with this?
Lelouch: Yeah, sure.
Lelouch comes to Bell and sees his position in the chess match against Gwyn.
Gwyn: There’s no way your winning. Not even Zero can save you from checkmate.
Lelouch: You sure? May I Bell?
Bell gets up from his seat allowing Lelouch to play against Gwyn. Lelouch grabs the black king and moves it forward.
Gwyn: What are you doing? That’s your king.
Lelouch: If the king doesn’t lead how can he expect his subordinates to follow?
Gwyn: No matter, I’ll still beat you.
Lelouch: We’ll see about that. From this position it will take me only nine minutes to defeat you.
Gwyn: What?
*9 minutes later*
Gwyn looks shocked at the chess board after being checkmated by Lelouch.
Gwyn: How?!
Lelouch: Your strategy was weak, because of this I was able to react and dismantle your offense easily.
Lelouch gets up from his chair and to the front of the room.
Lelouch: All Black Knights come to the meeting room and we’ll discuss our next move.
All of the Black Knights enter the meeting room and take a seat while Lelouch stands in the front of the room.
Hikaru: Hey Hyuga, can you get Zero a chair?
Lelouch: It’s fine, I’ll stand. But first before we discuss this how is the media responding to the recording?
Hikaru: It’s so so right now. Some people think Red Eye shouldn’t be stopped and everyone should just try and get better. While others thinking that we have a point and Red Eye is doing evil. While some think we’re just a joke and don’t take us seriously.
Lelouch: As expected from the media. Has Theodore said anything yet?
Hikaru: Yes, he apologized for the interruption on the broadcast and said he’ll try and trace the ip.
Lelouch: As expected, if he goes off this he’ll think we’re from Germany.
Hikaru: Germany?
Lelouch: I developed my own VPN which only I know how to get through. It’ll take years at the least to find a way through it. But back to our plan, our next step is a forward assault on the Snake Pit to find out what they used on Red Eye.
Gwyn: But how do you know where this place is?
Lelouch: Like I have before. Wakiya’s computer is easy to hack in with barely any fire walls for the virus I have.
Gwyn: You hacked in Wakiya’s computer? How did you do that?
Lelouch: I made a website called “new beyblade system better then DB’s.” Wakiya will click on it for his research and then figure out it’s a troll post but unknowingly allowing me to access his computers files allowing me to learn of the Snake Pit and it’s location.
Gwyn: Interesting, so where is the Snake Pit?
Lelouch: It’s located in a forest in Mexico. I have the direct location so it will be easy to get to it.
Hyuga: Mexico?!
Hikaru: Yeah we can’t go there. Our parents will kill us if we sneak there since asking them too will also result in them rejecting it.
Lelouch: Alright then. Gwyn and Bell, will you be able to join?
Gwyn: I will.
Bell: I should be able to. I’ll ask my butler if we can rent a plane to get to Mexico.
Lelouch: Perfect. Now we’ll leave to Mexico tomorrow night.
Gwyn and Bell: Got it.
Lelouch leaves the meeting room and leaves the base to his apartment to get ready. Lelouch finds his apartment is being searched by masked men with the symbol of the snake pit.
Lelouch: How did he find me?! But even if he did this won’t push back my plans. He can’t know who I am at any cost.
Lelouch grabs a device with a button on top. Lelouch pushes the button and the entire apartment explodes; killing everyone inside. Lelouch walks to the rubble finding one of Theodore’s men holding the picture of him, Valt, and Shu. But because of the frame only some of the picture was able to survive. Which the only thing left of the picture was Shu and Valt with his third being destroyed. Lelouch grabs the picture and leaves the scene. Lelouch comes back to the empty base and finds a room for him that the Black Knights didn’t tell him about. Lelouch enters the room and locks the door giving the password to enter into it as “The only ones should kill are those prepared to be killed.”
Valac: Why did you name it that?
Lelouch: A reminder every time I enter my room.
Valac: But you killed many people in that apartment when it exploded. By this are you saying—?
Lelouch: Yes, I am ready whenever I need to to be killed. I’ve been ready as soon as I took this role as Zero.
Lelouch takes his mask off and puts it down. He then removes his cape and puts it on the table, then he sits down on his chair where the computer is. Lelouch then starts researching on his computer on the Snake Pit from Wakiya’s files.
*The next day*
Bell and Gwyn enter the base.
Gwyn: I’ve called Zero multiple times but he hasn’t answered.
Bell: Do you think he died in that apartment that blew up?
Gwyn: Possilby. But I don’t think Zero would be that dumb to stay in his apartment after the recording. He likely even though his VPN says he’s in Germany is prepared in case they got through it.
Bell: So when do you think he’s coming?
Gwyn: Who knows.
Lelouch wakes up and puts his helmet and cape on and leaves his room.
Gwyn: Zero, you found the room for you in here.
Lelouch: Yes I have and I will now be using this to protect my family in my house.
Gwyn: Will your parents be okay with this?
Lelouch: My parents now think I’m dead. So this worry has no weight. But anyway, Bell, where is the plane?
Bell: It will be here in thirty minutes.
Lelouch: Got it.
*30 minutes later*
The plane lands next to the base and the three enter the plane. The plane then lifts off and they start their journey to Mexico.
Lelouch: This is a interesting plane.
Bell: Thanks! I got it painted black since we’re the Black Knights!
Gwyn: Well it can also be used to hide us in the sky. Since black is hard to see in the early morning since the sky is also still black.
Lelouch: Good point.
*3 hours later*
Tsuijihara: Boys, we’re one mile away from the Snake Pit as planned.
Lelouch: Perfect. We’ll walk the next mile to the Snake Pit.
Bell: A mile?!
Lelouch: Yes, it’s so they won’t detect us as easily as if we used a plane.
The three get off the plane and start their journey to the Snake Pit. On the way there Bell gets scared by a snake and automatically Lelouch grabs his gun and shoots the snake dead.
Bell: You have a gun?!
Lelouch: If we need to yes.
Gwyn: Isn’t a gun a little extreme?
Lelouch: To cause change you have to get your hands dirty.
They continue their journey and finally get to the Snake Pit.
Lelouch: Be carful for any mines or anything that could kill us.
The three enter the Snake Pit and find Boa walking around there.
Lelouch: Freeze Snake Pit scum!
Lelouch grabs his gun and points it at Boa while Bell and Gwyn grab him and tie him up.
Boa: What though— Who are you three?!
Lelouch: I am Zero, and these two are some of the members of the Black Knights. Where are the other Snake Pit members here? Because this place looks abandoned.
Boa: It is abandoned. The Snake Pits operations moved to the Raging Bulls. Though I think their tech is still here.
Lelouch: Good, Black Knights watch him while we continue our search here.
Boa: What are you searching for?
Lelouch: The tech that made Shu Red Eye. Though why are you asking me this? Didn’t Theodore already tell you this?
Boa: I’m not part of the Snake Pit anymore.
Lelouch: Then why are you here?
Boa: The same as you.
Valac: If he’s not a part of the Snake Pit, should we let him go?
Lelouch: No, he could be lying. And even if he is telling the truth it’s better to be safe then sorry.
They then pass a jungle and a ice area and then to a stadium on a bridge. They then pass that and finally reach to the Requiem Project area.
Bell: Is this it?
Gwyn: Most likely.
Lelouch: Gwyn, go check the computers and see what this thing is.
Bell: Keep watch on the Snake Pit leaver while I look around.
Boa: You know I have a name right?
Lelouch: Then why don’t you enlighten me of your name then.
Boa: My name is Boa.
Lelouch: Alright Boa, Bell, watch him!
Lelouch starts looking around and sees a tube like container with wires and things that look like it connects to someone.
Lelouch: I’m guessing this is what changed Shu to Red Eye.
Gwyn: It seems like it. It says right here the last person tested on this was Red Eye which caused the creation of Spriggan Requiem.
Lelouch: Alright. Put in the usb and we’ll go back to base and look at the coding and files.
Gwyn put in the usb and when it was done the three grabbed Boa and went to the plane. Lelouch threw Boa in the back and locked that section of the plane so he can’t escape.
Bell: Why are we bringing him with us?
Lelouch: I have a plan for him.
*3 hours later*
The plane lands back at the base and the three grab Boa and throw him in the meeting room and lock the door.
Lelouch: Good job Black Knights. Tomorrow we’ll do the next step in our plan. So you all can go back to your homes now. The two Black Knights leave the base and too their houses while Lelouch grabs his gun and enters the meeting room.
Lelouch: Hello Boa.
Boa: What have to come to do? Kill me?
Lelouch: No, I need some information.
Boa: What?
Lelouch: What do you know about the device that created Red Eye?
Boa: I don’t know anything about it.
Lelouch: Don’t lie to me!
Boa backs up because of Lelouch’s yell. Lelouch then looks at Boa’s eyes.
Lelouch: Your telling the truth, aren’t you? But anyway, what do you know about Red Eye?
Boa: He used to use a bey called Legend Spriggan and came into the Snake Pit out of no where as the Snake Pits leader right under Theodore. But then after he lost to Lui with his Nightmare Longinus Red Eye’s mask broke and he became the version of Red Eye we see today.
Lelouch: Do you want to defeat Red Eye?
Boa: Yes. That’s why I was at the Snake Pit. To figure out what caused Red Eye to change and find a weakness.
Lelouch: Okay. I know this may sound awarded but do you want to join the Black Knights? Your knowledge would help our cause a lot.
Boa: I’ll think about it because your cause could help me a lot. But since you kidnapped me and held me at gun point multiple times I’m leaning towards no. But give me some time and I’ll make a decision.
Lelouch: Alright, I’ll give you time.
Lelouch leaves the room and locks it giving Boa time to think. Lelouch then enters his room and locks it.
Valac: You know he likely is using this time to escape since he thinks if he doesn’t say yes you’ll kill him right?
Lelouch: Obviously. But it’s possible he might help since we appeal to his goals.
Valac: I guess we’ll see then Lelouch, we’ll see.
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RE: Beyblade Burst Kings Game - GenesisBlader - Sep. 19, 2021
(Sep. 19, 2021 10:47 PM)G.O.A.T Blader Wrote: Beyblade Burst Kings Game #3
Lelouch hears his phone he uses to contact the Black Knights ringing. Lelouch picks up and hears Hikaru on the other side.
Hikaru: Hey Zero. We got the base that you asked for, I’m sending the coordinates right now.
Lelouch: Alright, thank you Hikaru.
Hikaru: Well one thing before you hang up.
Lelouch: What is it?
Hikaru: How well do you think the video will do?
Lelouch: I don’t know, but it will at least cause some conversation. Though this video isn’t the big move we’re going to make. It’s just a way for us to see how the WBBA will respond.
Hikaru: Oh, ok.
Lelouch hangs up the phone and gets in his Zero attire.
Valac: Are you sure that in the end you’ll win this?
Lelouch: Of coarse I’ll win. Like you said I have a reason for me to win. Which in humans it’s shown to save your loved ones the brain and stress to save someone can cause people to do extraordinary things. Like dads have been able to pick up cars to save their children. So I don’t know how but I will find a way to bring Shu back and defeat the Snake Pit.
Valac: Interesting.
Lelouch leaves his house and sneakily gets to the base. Lelouch enters and sees Hikaru doing research on the computer with Hyuga while Bell and Gwyn were having a chess match.
Bell: Hey Zero! Can you come help me with this?
Lelouch: Yeah, sure.
Lelouch comes to Bell and sees his position in the chess match against Gwyn.
Gwyn: There’s no way your winning. Not even Zero can save you from checkmate.
Lelouch: You sure? May I Bell?
Bell gets up from his seat allowing Lelouch to play against Gwyn. Lelouch grabs the black king and moves it forward.
Gwyn: What are you doing? That’s your king.
Lelouch: If the king doesn’t lead how can he expect his subordinates to follow?
Gwyn: No matter, I’ll still beat you.
Lelouch: We’ll see about that. From this position it will take me only nine minutes to defeat you.
Gwyn: What?
*9 minutes later*
Gwyn looks shocked at the chess board after being checkmated by Lelouch.
Gwyn: How?!
Lelouch: Your strategy was weak, because of this I was able to react and dismantle your offense easily.
Lelouch gets up from his chair and to the front of the room.
Lelouch: All Black Knights come to the meeting room and we’ll discuss our next move.
All of the Black Knights enter the meeting room and take a seat while Lelouch stands in the front of the room.
Hikaru: Hey Hyuga, can you get Zero a chair?
Lelouch: It’s fine, I’ll stand. But first before we discuss this how is the media responding to the recording?
Hikaru: It’s so so right now. Some people think Red Eye shouldn’t be stopped and everyone should just try and get better. While others thinking that we have a point and Red Eye is doing evil. While some think we’re just a joke and don’t take us seriously.
Lelouch: As expected from the media. Has Theodore said anything yet?
Hikaru: Yes, he apologized for the interruption on the broadcast and said he’ll try and trace the ip.
Lelouch: As expected, if he goes off this he’ll think we’re from Germany.
Hikaru: Germany?
Lelouch: I developed my own VPN which only I know how to get through. It’ll take years at the least to find a way through it. But back to our plan, our next step is a forward assault on the Snake Pit to find out what they used on Red Eye.
Gwyn: But how do you know where this place is?
Lelouch: Like I have before. Wakiya’s computer is easy to hack in with barely any fire walls for the virus I have.
Gwyn: You hacked in Wakiya’s computer? How did you do that?
Lelouch: I made a website called “new beyblade system better then DB’s.” Wakiya will click on it for his research and then figure out it’s a troll post but unknowingly allowing me to access his computers files allowing me to learn of the Snake Pit and it’s location.
Gwyn: Interesting, so where is the Snake Pit?
Lelouch: It’s located in a forest in Mexico. I have the direct location so it will be easy to get to it.
Hyuga: Mexico?!
Hikaru: Yeah we can’t go there. Our parents will kill us if we sneak there since asking them too will also result in them rejecting it.
Lelouch: Alright then. Gwyn and Bell, will you be able to join?
Gwyn: I will.
Bell: I should be able to. I’ll ask my butler if we can rent a plane to get to Mexico.
Lelouch: Perfect. Now we’ll leave to Mexico tomorrow night.
Gwyn and Bell: Got it.
Lelouch leaves the meeting room and leaves the base to his apartment to get ready. Lelouch finds his apartment is being searched by masked men with the symbol of the snake pit.
Lelouch: How did he find me?! But even if he did this won’t push back my plans. He can’t know who I am at any cost.
Lelouch grabs a device with a button on top. Lelouch pushes the button and the entire apartment explodes; killing everyone inside. Lelouch walks to the rubble finding one of Theodore’s men holding the picture of him, Valt, and Shu. But because of the frame only some of the picture was able to survive. Which the only thing left of the picture was Shu and Valt with his third being destroyed. Lelouch grabs the picture and leaves the scene. Lelouch comes back to the empty base and finds a room for him that the Black Knights didn’t tell him about. Lelouch enters the room and locks the door giving the password to enter into it as “The only ones should kill are those prepared to be killed.”
Valac: Why did you name it that?
Lelouch: A reminder every time I enter my room.
Valac: But you killed many people in that apartment when it exploded. By this are you saying—?
Lelouch: Yes, I am ready whenever I need to to be killed. I’ve been ready as soon as I took this role as Zero.
Lelouch takes his mask off and puts it down. He then removes his cape and puts it on the table, then he sits down on his chair where the computer is. Lelouch then starts researching on his computer on the Snake Pit from Wakiya’s files.
*The next day*
Bell and Gwyn enter the base.
Gwyn: I’ve called Zero multiple times but he hasn’t answered.
Bell: Do you think he died in that apartment that blew up?
Gwyn: Possilby. But I don’t think Zero would be that dumb to stay in his apartment after the recording. He likely even though his VPN says he’s in Germany is prepared in case they got through it.
Bell: So when do you think he’s coming?
Gwyn: Who knows.
Lelouch wakes up and puts his helmet and cape on and leaves his room.
Gwyn: Zero, you found the room for you in here.
Lelouch: Yes I have and I will now be using this to protect my family in my house.
Gwyn: Will your parents be okay with this?
Lelouch: My parents now think I’m dead. So this worry has no weight. But anyway, Bell, where is the plane?
Bell: It will be here in thirty minutes.
Lelouch: Got it.
*30 minutes later*
The plane lands next to the base and the three enter the plane. The plane then lifts off and they start their journey to Mexico.
Lelouch: This is a interesting plane.
Bell: Thanks! I got it painted black since we’re the Black Knights!
Gwyn: Well it can also be used to hide us in the sky. Since black is hard to see in the early morning since the sky is also still black.
Lelouch: Good point.
*3 hours later*
Tsuijihara: Boys, we’re one mile away from the Snake Pit as planned.
Lelouch: Perfect. We’ll walk the next mile to the Snake Pit.
Bell: A mile?!
Lelouch: Yes, it’s so they won’t detect us as easily as if we used a plane.
The three get off the plane and start their journey to the Snake Pit. On the way there Bell gets scared by a snake and automatically Lelouch grabs his gun and shoots the snake dead.
Bell: You have a gun?!
Lelouch: If we need to yes.
Gwyn: Isn’t a gun a little extreme?
Lelouch: To cause change you have to get your hands dirty.
They continue their journey and finally get to the Snake Pit.
Lelouch: Be carful for any mines or anything that could kill us.
The three enter the Snake Pit and find Boa walking around there.
Lelouch: Freeze Snake Pit scum!
Lelouch grabs his gun and points it at Boa while Bell and Gwyn grab him and tie him up.
Boa: What though— Who are you three?!
Lelouch: I am Zero, and these two are some of the members of the Black Knights. Where are the other Snake Pit members here? Because this place looks abandoned.
Boa: It is abandoned. The Snake Pits operations moved to the Raging Bulls. Though I think their tech is still here.
Lelouch: Good, Black Knights watch him while we continue our search here.
Boa: What are you searching for?
Lelouch: The tech that made Shu Red Eye. Though why are you asking me this? Didn’t Theodore already tell you this?
Boa: I’m not part of the Snake Pit anymore.
Lelouch: Then why are you here?
Boa: The same as you.
Valac: If he’s not a part of the Snake Pit, should we let him go?
Lelouch: No, he could be lying. And even if he is telling the truth it’s better to be safe then sorry.
They then pass a jungle and a ice area and then to a stadium on a bridge. They then pass that and finally reach to the Requiem Project area.
Bell: Is this it?
Gwyn: Most likely.
Lelouch: Gwyn, go check the computers and see what this thing is.
Bell: Keep watch on the Snake Pit leaver while I look around.
Boa: You know I have a name right?
Lelouch: Then why don’t you enlighten me of your name then.
Boa: My name is Boa.
Lelouch: Alright Boa, Bell, watch him!
Lelouch starts looking around and sees a tube like container with wires and things that look like it connects to someone.
Lelouch: I’m guessing this is what changed Shu to Red Eye.
Gwyn: It seems like it. It says right here the last person tested on this was Red Eye which caused the creation of Spriggan Requiem.
Lelouch: Alright. Put in the usb and we’ll go back to base and look at the coding and files.
Gwyn put in the usb and when it was done the three grabbed Boa and went to the plane. Lelouch threw Boa in the back and locked that section of the plane so he can’t escape.
Bell: Why are we bringing him with us?
Lelouch: I have a plan for him.
*3 hours later*
The plane lands back at the base and the three grab Boa and throw him in the meeting room and lock the door.
Lelouch: Good job Black Knights. Tomorrow we’ll do the next step in our plan. So you all can go back to your homes now. The two Black Knights leave the base and too their houses while Lelouch grabs his gun and enters the meeting room.
Lelouch: Hello Boa.
Boa: What have to come to do? Kill me?
Lelouch: No, I need some information.
Boa: What?
Lelouch: What do you know about the device that created Red Eye?
Boa: I don’t know anything about it.
Lelouch: Don’t lie to me!
Boa backs up because of Lelouch’s yell. Lelouch then looks at Boa’s eyes.
Lelouch: Your telling the truth, aren’t you? But anyway, what do you know about Red Eye?
Boa: He used to use a bey called Legend Spriggan and came into the Snake Pit out of no where as the Snake Pits leader right under Theodore. But then after he lost to Lui with his Nightmare Longinus Red Eye’s mask broke and he became the version of Red Eye we see today.
Lelouch: Do you want to defeat Red Eye?
Boa: Yes. That’s why I was at the Snake Pit. To figure out what caused Red Eye to change and find a weakness.
Lelouch: Okay. I know this may sound awarded but do you want to join the Black Knights? Your knowledge would help our cause a lot.
Boa: I’ll think about it because your cause could help me a lot. But since you kidnapped me and held me at gun point multiple times I’m leaning towards no. But give me some time and I’ll make a decision.
Lelouch: Alright, I’ll give you time.
Lelouch leaves the room and locks it giving Boa time to think. Lelouch then enters his room and locks it.
Valac: You know he likely is using this time to escape since he thinks if he doesn’t say yes you’ll kill him right?
Lelouch: Obviously. But it’s possible he might help since we appeal to his goals.
Valac: I guess we’ll see then Lelouch, we’ll see.
UnseenBurst LegendJustice if it’s ok i would like to hear what you think of these chapters so I can keep continuing it and the next ones.
dang this looks interesting i'll read it! dang this came out when i couldn't get on my computer
RE: Beyblade Burst Kings Game - UnseenBurst - Sep. 19, 2021
(Sep. 19, 2021 10:47 PM)G.O.A.T Blader Wrote: Beyblade Burst Kings Game #3
Lelouch hears his phone he uses to contact the Black Knights ringing. Lelouch picks up and hears Hikaru on the other side.
Hikaru: Hey Zero. We got the base that you asked for, I’m sending the coordinates right now.
Lelouch: Alright, thank you Hikaru.
Hikaru: Well one thing before you hang up.
Lelouch: What is it?
Hikaru: How well do you think the video will do?
Lelouch: I don’t know, but it will at least cause some conversation. Though this video isn’t the big move we’re going to make. It’s just a way for us to see how the WBBA will respond.
Hikaru: Oh, ok.
Lelouch hangs up the phone and gets in his Zero attire.
Valac: Are you sure that in the end you’ll win this?
Lelouch: Of coarse I’ll win. Like you said I have a reason for me to win. Which in humans it’s shown to save your loved ones the brain and stress to save someone can cause people to do extraordinary things. Like dads have been able to pick up cars to save their children. So I don’t know how but I will find a way to bring Shu back and defeat the Snake Pit.
Valac: Interesting.
Lelouch leaves his house and sneakily gets to the base. Lelouch enters and sees Hikaru doing research on the computer with Hyuga while Bell and Gwyn were having a chess match.
Bell: Hey Zero! Can you come help me with this?
Lelouch: Yeah, sure.
Lelouch comes to Bell and sees his position in the chess match against Gwyn.
Gwyn: There’s no way your winning. Not even Zero can save you from checkmate.
Lelouch: You sure? May I Bell?
Bell gets up from his seat allowing Lelouch to play against Gwyn. Lelouch grabs the black king and moves it forward.
Gwyn: What are you doing? That’s your king.
Lelouch: If the king doesn’t lead how can he expect his subordinates to follow?
Gwyn: No matter, I’ll still beat you.
Lelouch: We’ll see about that. From this position it will take me only nine minutes to defeat you.
Gwyn: What?
*9 minutes later*
Gwyn looks shocked at the chess board after being checkmated by Lelouch.
Gwyn: How?!
Lelouch: Your strategy was weak, because of this I was able to react and dismantle your offense easily.
Lelouch gets up from his chair and to the front of the room.
Lelouch: All Black Knights come to the meeting room and we’ll discuss our next move.
All of the Black Knights enter the meeting room and take a seat while Lelouch stands in the front of the room.
Hikaru: Hey Hyuga, can you get Zero a chair?
Lelouch: It’s fine, I’ll stand. But first before we discuss this how is the media responding to the recording?
Hikaru: It’s so so right now. Some people think Red Eye shouldn’t be stopped and everyone should just try and get better. While others thinking that we have a point and Red Eye is doing evil. While some think we’re just a joke and don’t take us seriously.
Lelouch: As expected from the media. Has Theodore said anything yet?
Hikaru: Yes, he apologized for the interruption on the broadcast and said he’ll try and trace the ip.
Lelouch: As expected, if he goes off this he’ll think we’re from Germany.
Hikaru: Germany?
Lelouch: I developed my own VPN which only I know how to get through. It’ll take years at the least to find a way through it. But back to our plan, our next step is a forward assault on the Snake Pit to find out what they used on Red Eye.
Gwyn: But how do you know where this place is?
Lelouch: Like I have before. Wakiya’s computer is easy to hack in with barely any fire walls for the virus I have.
Gwyn: You hacked in Wakiya’s computer? How did you do that?
Lelouch: I made a website called “new beyblade system better then DB’s.” Wakiya will click on it for his research and then figure out it’s a troll post but unknowingly allowing me to access his computers files allowing me to learn of the Snake Pit and it’s location.
Gwyn: Interesting, so where is the Snake Pit?
Lelouch: It’s located in a forest in Mexico. I have the direct location so it will be easy to get to it.
Hyuga: Mexico?!
Hikaru: Yeah we can’t go there. Our parents will kill us if we sneak there since asking them too will also result in them rejecting it.
Lelouch: Alright then. Gwyn and Bell, will you be able to join?
Gwyn: I will.
Bell: I should be able to. I’ll ask my butler if we can rent a plane to get to Mexico.
Lelouch: Perfect. Now we’ll leave to Mexico tomorrow night.
Gwyn and Bell: Got it.
Lelouch leaves the meeting room and leaves the base to his apartment to get ready. Lelouch finds his apartment is being searched by masked men with the symbol of the snake pit.
Lelouch: How did he find me?! But even if he did this won’t push back my plans. He can’t know who I am at any cost.
Lelouch grabs a device with a button on top. Lelouch pushes the button and the entire apartment explodes; killing everyone inside. Lelouch walks to the rubble finding one of Theodore’s men holding the picture of him, Valt, and Shu. But because of the frame only some of the picture was able to survive. Which the only thing left of the picture was Shu and Valt with his third being destroyed. Lelouch grabs the picture and leaves the scene. Lelouch comes back to the empty base and finds a room for him that the Black Knights didn’t tell him about. Lelouch enters the room and locks the door giving the password to enter into it as “The only ones should kill are those prepared to be killed.”
Valac: Why did you name it that?
Lelouch: A reminder every time I enter my room.
Valac: But you killed many people in that apartment when it exploded. By this are you saying—?
Lelouch: Yes, I am ready whenever I need to to be killed. I’ve been ready as soon as I took this role as Zero.
Lelouch takes his mask off and puts it down. He then removes his cape and puts it on the table, then he sits down on his chair where the computer is. Lelouch then starts researching on his computer on the Snake Pit from Wakiya’s files.
*The next day*
Bell and Gwyn enter the base.
Gwyn: I’ve called Zero multiple times but he hasn’t answered.
Bell: Do you think he died in that apartment that blew up?
Gwyn: Possilby. But I don’t think Zero would be that dumb to stay in his apartment after the recording. He likely even though his VPN says he’s in Germany is prepared in case they got through it.
Bell: So when do you think he’s coming?
Gwyn: Who knows.
Lelouch wakes up and puts his helmet and cape on and leaves his room.
Gwyn: Zero, you found the room for you in here.
Lelouch: Yes I have and I will now be using this to protect my family in my house.
Gwyn: Will your parents be okay with this?
Lelouch: My parents now think I’m dead. So this worry has no weight. But anyway, Bell, where is the plane?
Bell: It will be here in thirty minutes.
Lelouch: Got it.
*30 minutes later*
The plane lands next to the base and the three enter the plane. The plane then lifts off and they start their journey to Mexico.
Lelouch: This is a interesting plane.
Bell: Thanks! I got it painted black since we’re the Black Knights!
Gwyn: Well it can also be used to hide us in the sky. Since black is hard to see in the early morning since the sky is also still black.
Lelouch: Good point.
*3 hours later*
Tsuijihara: Boys, we’re one mile away from the Snake Pit as planned.
Lelouch: Perfect. We’ll walk the next mile to the Snake Pit.
Bell: A mile?!
Lelouch: Yes, it’s so they won’t detect us as easily as if we used a plane.
The three get off the plane and start their journey to the Snake Pit. On the way there Bell gets scared by a snake and automatically Lelouch grabs his gun and shoots the snake dead.
Bell: You have a gun?!
Lelouch: If we need to yes.
Gwyn: Isn’t a gun a little extreme?
Lelouch: To cause change you have to get your hands dirty.
They continue their journey and finally get to the Snake Pit.
Lelouch: Be carful for any mines or anything that could kill us.
The three enter the Snake Pit and find Boa walking around there.
Lelouch: Freeze Snake Pit scum!
Lelouch grabs his gun and points it at Boa while Bell and Gwyn grab him and tie him up.
Boa: What though— Who are you three?!
Lelouch: I am Zero, and these two are some of the members of the Black Knights. Where are the other Snake Pit members here? Because this place looks abandoned.
Boa: It is abandoned. The Snake Pits operations moved to the Raging Bulls. Though I think their tech is still here.
Lelouch: Good, Black Knights watch him while we continue our search here.
Boa: What are you searching for?
Lelouch: The tech that made Shu Red Eye. Though why are you asking me this? Didn’t Theodore already tell you this?
Boa: I’m not part of the Snake Pit anymore.
Lelouch: Then why are you here?
Boa: The same as you.
Valac: If he’s not a part of the Snake Pit, should we let him go?
Lelouch: No, he could be lying. And even if he is telling the truth it’s better to be safe then sorry.
They then pass a jungle and a ice area and then to a stadium on a bridge. They then pass that and finally reach to the Requiem Project area.
Bell: Is this it?
Gwyn: Most likely.
Lelouch: Gwyn, go check the computers and see what this thing is.
Bell: Keep watch on the Snake Pit leaver while I look around.
Boa: You know I have a name right?
Lelouch: Then why don’t you enlighten me of your name then.
Boa: My name is Boa.
Lelouch: Alright Boa, Bell, watch him!
Lelouch starts looking around and sees a tube like container with wires and things that look like it connects to someone.
Lelouch: I’m guessing this is what changed Shu to Red Eye.
Gwyn: It seems like it. It says right here the last person tested on this was Red Eye which caused the creation of Spriggan Requiem.
Lelouch: Alright. Put in the usb and we’ll go back to base and look at the coding and files.
Gwyn put in the usb and when it was done the three grabbed Boa and went to the plane. Lelouch threw Boa in the back and locked that section of the plane so he can’t escape.
Bell: Why are we bringing him with us?
Lelouch: I have a plan for him.
*3 hours later*
The plane lands back at the base and the three grab Boa and throw him in the meeting room and lock the door.
Lelouch: Good job Black Knights. Tomorrow we’ll do the next step in our plan. So you all can go back to your homes now. The two Black Knights leave the base and too their houses while Lelouch grabs his gun and enters the meeting room.
Lelouch: Hello Boa.
Boa: What have to come to do? Kill me?
Lelouch: No, I need some information.
Boa: What?
Lelouch: What do you know about the device that created Red Eye?
Boa: I don’t know anything about it.
Lelouch: Don’t lie to me!
Boa backs up because of Lelouch’s yell. Lelouch then looks at Boa’s eyes.
Lelouch: Your telling the truth, aren’t you? But anyway, what do you know about Red Eye?
Boa: He used to use a bey called Legend Spriggan and came into the Snake Pit out of no where as the Snake Pits leader right under Theodore. But then after he lost to Lui with his Nightmare Longinus Red Eye’s mask broke and he became the version of Red Eye we see today.
Lelouch: Do you want to defeat Red Eye?
Boa: Yes. That’s why I was at the Snake Pit. To figure out what caused Red Eye to change and find a weakness.
Lelouch: Okay. I know this may sound awarded but do you want to join the Black Knights? Your knowledge would help our cause a lot.
Boa: I’ll think about it because your cause could help me a lot. But since you kidnapped me and held me at gun point multiple times I’m leaning towards no. But give me some time and I’ll make a decision.
Lelouch: Alright, I’ll give you time.
Lelouch leaves the room and locks it giving Boa time to think. Lelouch then enters his room and locks it.
Valac: You know he likely is using this time to escape since he thinks if he doesn’t say yes you’ll kill him right?
Lelouch: Obviously. But it’s possible he might help since we appeal to his goals.
Valac: I guess we’ll see then Lelouch, we’ll see.
UnseenBurst LegendJustice if it’s ok i would like to hear what you think of these chapters so I can keep continuing it and the next ones.
This chapter seemed... A bit extreme, I personally thought it was awesome reminding me a bit of Mission Impossible or something like that but just remember that WBO is super strict on violence and that kind of stuff. I'm not saying it was violent but maybe in the next chapter tone it down a bit. Just to be safe.
My Thoughts About The Chapter
This episode was amazing, Gwyn getting beaten at Chess?! Seems highly unlikely but it's the Main Character so I can't argue with that. But seriously, this felt like mission impossible lol. It was cool to see the gang trying to break into the Snake Pit only to find that it is currently been moved to the Raging Bulls. Looks like the gang is going to try breaking into the Raging Bulls in the next chapter. (Poor Hikaru and Hyuga, their parents won't let them go on a death-defying mission  ) Overall I saw no errors, and the story was set up amazingly! I loved it, and from what I saw there were no Grammer Mistakes. (Bell's "Butler" Is actually his Grandpa/Guardian) Anyways, I loved this episode! 10/10 you improved super quickly!
RE: Beyblade Burst Kings Game - GenesisBlader - Sep. 19, 2021
(Sep. 19, 2021 10:47 PM)G.O.A.T Blader Wrote: Beyblade Burst Kings Game #3
Lelouch hears his phone he uses to contact the Black Knights ringing. Lelouch picks up and hears Hikaru on the other side.
Hikaru: Hey Zero. We got the base that you asked for, I’m sending the coordinates right now.
Lelouch: Alright, thank you Hikaru.
Hikaru: Well one thing before you hang up.
Lelouch: What is it?
Hikaru: How well do you think the video will do?
Lelouch: I don’t know, but it will at least cause some conversation. Though this video isn’t the big move we’re going to make. It’s just a way for us to see how the WBBA will respond.
Hikaru: Oh, ok.
Lelouch hangs up the phone and gets in his Zero attire.
Valac: Are you sure that in the end you’ll win this?
Lelouch: Of coarse I’ll win. Like you said I have a reason for me to win. Which in humans it’s shown to save your loved ones the brain and stress to save someone can cause people to do extraordinary things. Like dads have been able to pick up cars to save their children. So I don’t know how but I will find a way to bring Shu back and defeat the Snake Pit.
Valac: Interesting.
Lelouch leaves his house and sneakily gets to the base. Lelouch enters and sees Hikaru doing research on the computer with Hyuga while Bell and Gwyn were having a chess match.
Bell: Hey Zero! Can you come help me with this?
Lelouch: Yeah, sure.
Lelouch comes to Bell and sees his position in the chess match against Gwyn.
Gwyn: There’s no way your winning. Not even Zero can save you from checkmate.
Lelouch: You sure? May I Bell?
Bell gets up from his seat allowing Lelouch to play against Gwyn. Lelouch grabs the black king and moves it forward.
Gwyn: What are you doing? That’s your king.
Lelouch: If the king doesn’t lead how can he expect his subordinates to follow?
Gwyn: No matter, I’ll still beat you.
Lelouch: We’ll see about that. From this position it will take me only nine minutes to defeat you.
Gwyn: What?
*9 minutes later*
Gwyn looks shocked at the chess board after being checkmated by Lelouch.
Gwyn: How?!
Lelouch: Your strategy was weak, because of this I was able to react and dismantle your offense easily.
Lelouch gets up from his chair and to the front of the room.
Lelouch: All Black Knights come to the meeting room and we’ll discuss our next move.
All of the Black Knights enter the meeting room and take a seat while Lelouch stands in the front of the room.
Hikaru: Hey Hyuga, can you get Zero a chair?
Lelouch: It’s fine, I’ll stand. But first before we discuss this how is the media responding to the recording?
Hikaru: It’s so so right now. Some people think Red Eye shouldn’t be stopped and everyone should just try and get better. While others thinking that we have a point and Red Eye is doing evil. While some think we’re just a joke and don’t take us seriously.
Lelouch: As expected from the media. Has Theodore said anything yet?
Hikaru: Yes, he apologized for the interruption on the broadcast and said he’ll try and trace the ip.
Lelouch: As expected, if he goes off this he’ll think we’re from Germany.
Hikaru: Germany?
Lelouch: I developed my own VPN which only I know how to get through. It’ll take years at the least to find a way through it. But back to our plan, our next step is a forward assault on the Snake Pit to find out what they used on Red Eye.
Gwyn: But how do you know where this place is?
Lelouch: Like I have before. Wakiya’s computer is easy to hack in with barely any fire walls for the virus I have.
Gwyn: You hacked in Wakiya’s computer? How did you do that?
Lelouch: I made a website called “new beyblade system better then DB’s.” Wakiya will click on it for his research and then figure out it’s a troll post but unknowingly allowing me to access his computers files allowing me to learn of the Snake Pit and it’s location.
Gwyn: Interesting, so where is the Snake Pit?
Lelouch: It’s located in a forest in Mexico. I have the direct location so it will be easy to get to it.
Hyuga: Mexico?!
Hikaru: Yeah we can’t go there. Our parents will kill us if we sneak there since asking them too will also result in them rejecting it.
Lelouch: Alright then. Gwyn and Bell, will you be able to join?
Gwyn: I will.
Bell: I should be able to. I’ll ask my butler if we can rent a plane to get to Mexico.
Lelouch: Perfect. Now we’ll leave to Mexico tomorrow night.
Gwyn and Bell: Got it.
Lelouch leaves the meeting room and leaves the base to his apartment to get ready. Lelouch finds his apartment is being searched by masked men with the symbol of the snake pit.
Lelouch: How did he find me?! But even if he did this won’t push back my plans. He can’t know who I am at any cost.
Lelouch grabs a device with a button on top. Lelouch pushes the button and the entire apartment explodes; killing everyone inside. Lelouch walks to the rubble finding one of Theodore’s men holding the picture of him, Valt, and Shu. But because of the frame only some of the picture was able to survive. Which the only thing left of the picture was Shu and Valt with his third being destroyed. Lelouch grabs the picture and leaves the scene. Lelouch comes back to the empty base and finds a room for him that the Black Knights didn’t tell him about. Lelouch enters the room and locks the door giving the password to enter into it as “The only ones should kill are those prepared to be killed.”
Valac: Why did you name it that?
Lelouch: A reminder every time I enter my room.
Valac: But you killed many people in that apartment when it exploded. By this are you saying—?
Lelouch: Yes, I am ready whenever I need to to be killed. I’ve been ready as soon as I took this role as Zero.
Lelouch takes his mask off and puts it down. He then removes his cape and puts it on the table, then he sits down on his chair where the computer is. Lelouch then starts researching on his computer on the Snake Pit from Wakiya’s files.
*The next day*
Bell and Gwyn enter the base.
Gwyn: I’ve called Zero multiple times but he hasn’t answered.
Bell: Do you think he died in that apartment that blew up?
Gwyn: Possilby. But I don’t think Zero would be that dumb to stay in his apartment after the recording. He likely even though his VPN says he’s in Germany is prepared in case they got through it.
Bell: So when do you think he’s coming?
Gwyn: Who knows.
Lelouch wakes up and puts his helmet and cape on and leaves his room.
Gwyn: Zero, you found the room for you in here.
Lelouch: Yes I have and I will now be using this to protect my family in my house.
Gwyn: Will your parents be okay with this?
Lelouch: My parents now think I’m dead. So this worry has no weight. But anyway, Bell, where is the plane?
Bell: It will be here in thirty minutes.
Lelouch: Got it.
*30 minutes later*
The plane lands next to the base and the three enter the plane. The plane then lifts off and they start their journey to Mexico.
Lelouch: This is a interesting plane.
Bell: Thanks! I got it painted black since we’re the Black Knights!
Gwyn: Well it can also be used to hide us in the sky. Since black is hard to see in the early morning since the sky is also still black.
Lelouch: Good point.
*3 hours later*
Tsuijihara: Boys, we’re one mile away from the Snake Pit as planned.
Lelouch: Perfect. We’ll walk the next mile to the Snake Pit.
Bell: A mile?!
Lelouch: Yes, it’s so they won’t detect us as easily as if we used a plane.
The three get off the plane and start their journey to the Snake Pit. On the way there Bell gets scared by a snake and automatically Lelouch grabs his gun and shoots the snake dead.
Bell: You have a gun?!
Lelouch: If we need to yes.
Gwyn: Isn’t a gun a little extreme?
Lelouch: To cause change you have to get your hands dirty.
They continue their journey and finally get to the Snake Pit.
Lelouch: Be carful for any mines or anything that could kill us.
The three enter the Snake Pit and find Boa walking around there.
Lelouch: Freeze Snake Pit scum!
Lelouch grabs his gun and points it at Boa while Bell and Gwyn grab him and tie him up.
Boa: What though— Who are you three?!
Lelouch: I am Zero, and these two are some of the members of the Black Knights. Where are the other Snake Pit members here? Because this place looks abandoned.
Boa: It is abandoned. The Snake Pits operations moved to the Raging Bulls. Though I think their tech is still here.
Lelouch: Good, Black Knights watch him while we continue our search here.
Boa: What are you searching for?
Lelouch: The tech that made Shu Red Eye. Though why are you asking me this? Didn’t Theodore already tell you this?
Boa: I’m not part of the Snake Pit anymore.
Lelouch: Then why are you here?
Boa: The same as you.
Valac: If he’s not a part of the Snake Pit, should we let him go?
Lelouch: No, he could be lying. And even if he is telling the truth it’s better to be safe then sorry.
They then pass a jungle and a ice area and then to a stadium on a bridge. They then pass that and finally reach to the Requiem Project area.
Bell: Is this it?
Gwyn: Most likely.
Lelouch: Gwyn, go check the computers and see what this thing is.
Bell: Keep watch on the Snake Pit leaver while I look around.
Boa: You know I have a name right?
Lelouch: Then why don’t you enlighten me of your name then.
Boa: My name is Boa.
Lelouch: Alright Boa, Bell, watch him!
Lelouch starts looking around and sees a tube like container with wires and things that look like it connects to someone.
Lelouch: I’m guessing this is what changed Shu to Red Eye.
Gwyn: It seems like it. It says right here the last person tested on this was Red Eye which caused the creation of Spriggan Requiem.
Lelouch: Alright. Put in the usb and we’ll go back to base and look at the coding and files.
Gwyn put in the usb and when it was done the three grabbed Boa and went to the plane. Lelouch threw Boa in the back and locked that section of the plane so he can’t escape.
Bell: Why are we bringing him with us?
Lelouch: I have a plan for him.
*3 hours later*
The plane lands back at the base and the three grab Boa and throw him in the meeting room and lock the door.
Lelouch: Good job Black Knights. Tomorrow we’ll do the next step in our plan. So you all can go back to your homes now. The two Black Knights leave the base and too their houses while Lelouch grabs his gun and enters the meeting room.
Lelouch: Hello Boa.
Boa: What have to come to do? Kill me?
Lelouch: No, I need some information.
Boa: What?
Lelouch: What do you know about the device that created Red Eye?
Boa: I don’t know anything about it.
Lelouch: Don’t lie to me!
Boa backs up because of Lelouch’s yell. Lelouch then looks at Boa’s eyes.
Lelouch: Your telling the truth, aren’t you? But anyway, what do you know about Red Eye?
Boa: He used to use a bey called Legend Spriggan and came into the Snake Pit out of no where as the Snake Pits leader right under Theodore. But then after he lost to Lui with his Nightmare Longinus Red Eye’s mask broke and he became the version of Red Eye we see today.
Lelouch: Do you want to defeat Red Eye?
Boa: Yes. That’s why I was at the Snake Pit. To figure out what caused Red Eye to change and find a weakness.
Lelouch: Okay. I know this may sound awarded but do you want to join the Black Knights? Your knowledge would help our cause a lot.
Boa: I’ll think about it because your cause could help me a lot. But since you kidnapped me and held me at gun point multiple times I’m leaning towards no. But give me some time and I’ll make a decision.
Lelouch: Alright, I’ll give you time.
Lelouch leaves the room and locks it giving Boa time to think. Lelouch then enters his room and locks it.
Valac: You know he likely is using this time to escape since he thinks if he doesn’t say yes you’ll kill him right?
Lelouch: Obviously. But it’s possible he might help since we appeal to his goals.
Valac: I guess we’ll see then Lelouch, we’ll see.
UnseenBurst LegendJustice if it’s ok i would like to hear what you think of these chapters so I can keep continuing it and the next ones.
huh i read it and it's pretty interesting to have a beyblade series that's focus on chess or checkers! i also like the suspense in this episode, like when lelouch, bell, and gwyn were investigating the snake pit area!
RE: Beyblade Burst Kings Game - G.O.A.T Blader - Sep. 19, 2021
(Sep. 19, 2021 11:12 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: (Sep. 19, 2021 10:47 PM)G.O.A.T Blader Wrote: Beyblade Burst Kings Game #3
Lelouch hears his phone he uses to contact the Black Knights ringing. Lelouch picks up and hears Hikaru on the other side.
Hikaru: Hey Zero. We got the base that you asked for, I’m sending the coordinates right now.
Lelouch: Alright, thank you Hikaru.
Hikaru: Well one thing before you hang up.
Lelouch: What is it?
Hikaru: How well do you think the video will do?
Lelouch: I don’t know, but it will at least cause some conversation. Though this video isn’t the big move we’re going to make. It’s just a way for us to see how the WBBA will respond.
Hikaru: Oh, ok.
Lelouch hangs up the phone and gets in his Zero attire.
Valac: Are you sure that in the end you’ll win this?
Lelouch: Of coarse I’ll win. Like you said I have a reason for me to win. Which in humans it’s shown to save your loved ones the brain and stress to save someone can cause people to do extraordinary things. Like dads have been able to pick up cars to save their children. So I don’t know how but I will find a way to bring Shu back and defeat the Snake Pit.
Valac: Interesting.
Lelouch leaves his house and sneakily gets to the base. Lelouch enters and sees Hikaru doing research on the computer with Hyuga while Bell and Gwyn were having a chess match.
Bell: Hey Zero! Can you come help me with this?
Lelouch: Yeah, sure.
Lelouch comes to Bell and sees his position in the chess match against Gwyn.
Gwyn: There’s no way your winning. Not even Zero can save you from checkmate.
Lelouch: You sure? May I Bell?
Bell gets up from his seat allowing Lelouch to play against Gwyn. Lelouch grabs the black king and moves it forward.
Gwyn: What are you doing? That’s your king.
Lelouch: If the king doesn’t lead how can he expect his subordinates to follow?
Gwyn: No matter, I’ll still beat you.
Lelouch: We’ll see about that. From this position it will take me only nine minutes to defeat you.
Gwyn: What?
*9 minutes later*
Gwyn looks shocked at the chess board after being checkmated by Lelouch.
Gwyn: How?!
Lelouch: Your strategy was weak, because of this I was able to react and dismantle your offense easily.
Lelouch gets up from his chair and to the front of the room.
Lelouch: All Black Knights come to the meeting room and we’ll discuss our next move.
All of the Black Knights enter the meeting room and take a seat while Lelouch stands in the front of the room.
Hikaru: Hey Hyuga, can you get Zero a chair?
Lelouch: It’s fine, I’ll stand. But first before we discuss this how is the media responding to the recording?
Hikaru: It’s so so right now. Some people think Red Eye shouldn’t be stopped and everyone should just try and get better. While others thinking that we have a point and Red Eye is doing evil. While some think we’re just a joke and don’t take us seriously.
Lelouch: As expected from the media. Has Theodore said anything yet?
Hikaru: Yes, he apologized for the interruption on the broadcast and said he’ll try and trace the ip.
Lelouch: As expected, if he goes off this he’ll think we’re from Germany.
Hikaru: Germany?
Lelouch: I developed my own VPN which only I know how to get through. It’ll take years at the least to find a way through it. But back to our plan, our next step is a forward assault on the Snake Pit to find out what they used on Red Eye.
Gwyn: But how do you know where this place is?
Lelouch: Like I have before. Wakiya’s computer is easy to hack in with barely any fire walls for the virus I have.
Gwyn: You hacked in Wakiya’s computer? How did you do that?
Lelouch: I made a website called “new beyblade system better then DB’s.” Wakiya will click on it for his research and then figure out it’s a troll post but unknowingly allowing me to access his computers files allowing me to learn of the Snake Pit and it’s location.
Gwyn: Interesting, so where is the Snake Pit?
Lelouch: It’s located in a forest in Mexico. I have the direct location so it will be easy to get to it.
Hyuga: Mexico?!
Hikaru: Yeah we can’t go there. Our parents will kill us if we sneak there since asking them too will also result in them rejecting it.
Lelouch: Alright then. Gwyn and Bell, will you be able to join?
Gwyn: I will.
Bell: I should be able to. I’ll ask my butler if we can rent a plane to get to Mexico.
Lelouch: Perfect. Now we’ll leave to Mexico tomorrow night.
Gwyn and Bell: Got it.
Lelouch leaves the meeting room and leaves the base to his apartment to get ready. Lelouch finds his apartment is being searched by masked men with the symbol of the snake pit.
Lelouch: How did he find me?! But even if he did this won’t push back my plans. He can’t know who I am at any cost.
Lelouch grabs a device with a button on top. Lelouch pushes the button and the entire apartment explodes; killing everyone inside. Lelouch walks to the rubble finding one of Theodore’s men holding the picture of him, Valt, and Shu. But because of the frame only some of the picture was able to survive. Which the only thing left of the picture was Shu and Valt with his third being destroyed. Lelouch grabs the picture and leaves the scene. Lelouch comes back to the empty base and finds a room for him that the Black Knights didn’t tell him about. Lelouch enters the room and locks the door giving the password to enter into it as “The only ones should kill are those prepared to be killed.”
Valac: Why did you name it that?
Lelouch: A reminder every time I enter my room.
Valac: But you killed many people in that apartment when it exploded. By this are you saying—?
Lelouch: Yes, I am ready whenever I need to to be killed. I’ve been ready as soon as I took this role as Zero.
Lelouch takes his mask off and puts it down. He then removes his cape and puts it on the table, then he sits down on his chair where the computer is. Lelouch then starts researching on his computer on the Snake Pit from Wakiya’s files.
*The next day*
Bell and Gwyn enter the base.
Gwyn: I’ve called Zero multiple times but he hasn’t answered.
Bell: Do you think he died in that apartment that blew up?
Gwyn: Possilby. But I don’t think Zero would be that dumb to stay in his apartment after the recording. He likely even though his VPN says he’s in Germany is prepared in case they got through it.
Bell: So when do you think he’s coming?
Gwyn: Who knows.
Lelouch wakes up and puts his helmet and cape on and leaves his room.
Gwyn: Zero, you found the room for you in here.
Lelouch: Yes I have and I will now be using this to protect my family in my house.
Gwyn: Will your parents be okay with this?
Lelouch: My parents now think I’m dead. So this worry has no weight. But anyway, Bell, where is the plane?
Bell: It will be here in thirty minutes.
Lelouch: Got it.
*30 minutes later*
The plane lands next to the base and the three enter the plane. The plane then lifts off and they start their journey to Mexico.
Lelouch: This is a interesting plane.
Bell: Thanks! I got it painted black since we’re the Black Knights!
Gwyn: Well it can also be used to hide us in the sky. Since black is hard to see in the early morning since the sky is also still black.
Lelouch: Good point.
*3 hours later*
Tsuijihara: Boys, we’re one mile away from the Snake Pit as planned.
Lelouch: Perfect. We’ll walk the next mile to the Snake Pit.
Bell: A mile?!
Lelouch: Yes, it’s so they won’t detect us as easily as if we used a plane.
The three get off the plane and start their journey to the Snake Pit. On the way there Bell gets scared by a snake and automatically Lelouch grabs his gun and shoots the snake dead.
Bell: You have a gun?!
Lelouch: If we need to yes.
Gwyn: Isn’t a gun a little extreme?
Lelouch: To cause change you have to get your hands dirty.
They continue their journey and finally get to the Snake Pit.
Lelouch: Be carful for any mines or anything that could kill us.
The three enter the Snake Pit and find Boa walking around there.
Lelouch: Freeze Snake Pit scum!
Lelouch grabs his gun and points it at Boa while Bell and Gwyn grab him and tie him up.
Boa: What though— Who are you three?!
Lelouch: I am Zero, and these two are some of the members of the Black Knights. Where are the other Snake Pit members here? Because this place looks abandoned.
Boa: It is abandoned. The Snake Pits operations moved to the Raging Bulls. Though I think their tech is still here.
Lelouch: Good, Black Knights watch him while we continue our search here.
Boa: What are you searching for?
Lelouch: The tech that made Shu Red Eye. Though why are you asking me this? Didn’t Theodore already tell you this?
Boa: I’m not part of the Snake Pit anymore.
Lelouch: Then why are you here?
Boa: The same as you.
Valac: If he’s not a part of the Snake Pit, should we let him go?
Lelouch: No, he could be lying. And even if he is telling the truth it’s better to be safe then sorry.
They then pass a jungle and a ice area and then to a stadium on a bridge. They then pass that and finally reach to the Requiem Project area.
Bell: Is this it?
Gwyn: Most likely.
Lelouch: Gwyn, go check the computers and see what this thing is.
Bell: Keep watch on the Snake Pit leaver while I look around.
Boa: You know I have a name right?
Lelouch: Then why don’t you enlighten me of your name then.
Boa: My name is Boa.
Lelouch: Alright Boa, Bell, watch him!
Lelouch starts looking around and sees a tube like container with wires and things that look like it connects to someone.
Lelouch: I’m guessing this is what changed Shu to Red Eye.
Gwyn: It seems like it. It says right here the last person tested on this was Red Eye which caused the creation of Spriggan Requiem.
Lelouch: Alright. Put in the usb and we’ll go back to base and look at the coding and files.
Gwyn put in the usb and when it was done the three grabbed Boa and went to the plane. Lelouch threw Boa in the back and locked that section of the plane so he can’t escape.
Bell: Why are we bringing him with us?
Lelouch: I have a plan for him.
*3 hours later*
The plane lands back at the base and the three grab Boa and throw him in the meeting room and lock the door.
Lelouch: Good job Black Knights. Tomorrow we’ll do the next step in our plan. So you all can go back to your homes now. The two Black Knights leave the base and too their houses while Lelouch grabs his gun and enters the meeting room.
Lelouch: Hello Boa.
Boa: What have to come to do? Kill me?
Lelouch: No, I need some information.
Boa: What?
Lelouch: What do you know about the device that created Red Eye?
Boa: I don’t know anything about it.
Lelouch: Don’t lie to me!
Boa backs up because of Lelouch’s yell. Lelouch then looks at Boa’s eyes.
Lelouch: Your telling the truth, aren’t you? But anyway, what do you know about Red Eye?
Boa: He used to use a bey called Legend Spriggan and came into the Snake Pit out of no where as the Snake Pits leader right under Theodore. But then after he lost to Lui with his Nightmare Longinus Red Eye’s mask broke and he became the version of Red Eye we see today.
Lelouch: Do you want to defeat Red Eye?
Boa: Yes. That’s why I was at the Snake Pit. To figure out what caused Red Eye to change and find a weakness.
Lelouch: Okay. I know this may sound awarded but do you want to join the Black Knights? Your knowledge would help our cause a lot.
Boa: I’ll think about it because your cause could help me a lot. But since you kidnapped me and held me at gun point multiple times I’m leaning towards no. But give me some time and I’ll make a decision.
Lelouch: Alright, I’ll give you time.
Lelouch leaves the room and locks it giving Boa time to think. Lelouch then enters his room and locks it.
Valac: You know he likely is using this time to escape since he thinks if he doesn’t say yes you’ll kill him right?
Lelouch: Obviously. But it’s possible he might help since we appeal to his goals.
Valac: I guess we’ll see then Lelouch, we’ll see.
UnseenBurst LegendJustice if it’s ok i would like to hear what you think of these chapters so I can keep continuing it and the next ones.
huh i read it and it's pretty interesting to have a beyblade series that's focus on chess or checkers! i also like the suspense in this episode, like when lelouch, bell, and gwyn were investigating the snake pit area!
Thanks
(Sep. 19, 2021 11:11 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Sep. 19, 2021 10:47 PM)G.O.A.T Blader Wrote: Beyblade Burst Kings Game #3
Lelouch hears his phone he uses to contact the Black Knights ringing. Lelouch picks up and hears Hikaru on the other side.
Hikaru: Hey Zero. We got the base that you asked for, I’m sending the coordinates right now.
Lelouch: Alright, thank you Hikaru.
Hikaru: Well one thing before you hang up.
Lelouch: What is it?
Hikaru: How well do you think the video will do?
Lelouch: I don’t know, but it will at least cause some conversation. Though this video isn’t the big move we’re going to make. It’s just a way for us to see how the WBBA will respond.
Hikaru: Oh, ok.
Lelouch hangs up the phone and gets in his Zero attire.
Valac: Are you sure that in the end you’ll win this?
Lelouch: Of coarse I’ll win. Like you said I have a reason for me to win. Which in humans it’s shown to save your loved ones the brain and stress to save someone can cause people to do extraordinary things. Like dads have been able to pick up cars to save their children. So I don’t know how but I will find a way to bring Shu back and defeat the Snake Pit.
Valac: Interesting.
Lelouch leaves his house and sneakily gets to the base. Lelouch enters and sees Hikaru doing research on the computer with Hyuga while Bell and Gwyn were having a chess match.
Bell: Hey Zero! Can you come help me with this?
Lelouch: Yeah, sure.
Lelouch comes to Bell and sees his position in the chess match against Gwyn.
Gwyn: There’s no way your winning. Not even Zero can save you from checkmate.
Lelouch: You sure? May I Bell?
Bell gets up from his seat allowing Lelouch to play against Gwyn. Lelouch grabs the black king and moves it forward.
Gwyn: What are you doing? That’s your king.
Lelouch: If the king doesn’t lead how can he expect his subordinates to follow?
Gwyn: No matter, I’ll still beat you.
Lelouch: We’ll see about that. From this position it will take me only nine minutes to defeat you.
Gwyn: What?
*9 minutes later*
Gwyn looks shocked at the chess board after being checkmated by Lelouch.
Gwyn: How?!
Lelouch: Your strategy was weak, because of this I was able to react and dismantle your offense easily.
Lelouch gets up from his chair and to the front of the room.
Lelouch: All Black Knights come to the meeting room and we’ll discuss our next move.
All of the Black Knights enter the meeting room and take a seat while Lelouch stands in the front of the room.
Hikaru: Hey Hyuga, can you get Zero a chair?
Lelouch: It’s fine, I’ll stand. But first before we discuss this how is the media responding to the recording?
Hikaru: It’s so so right now. Some people think Red Eye shouldn’t be stopped and everyone should just try and get better. While others thinking that we have a point and Red Eye is doing evil. While some think we’re just a joke and don’t take us seriously.
Lelouch: As expected from the media. Has Theodore said anything yet?
Hikaru: Yes, he apologized for the interruption on the broadcast and said he’ll try and trace the ip.
Lelouch: As expected, if he goes off this he’ll think we’re from Germany.
Hikaru: Germany?
Lelouch: I developed my own VPN which only I know how to get through. It’ll take years at the least to find a way through it. But back to our plan, our next step is a forward assault on the Snake Pit to find out what they used on Red Eye.
Gwyn: But how do you know where this place is?
Lelouch: Like I have before. Wakiya’s computer is easy to hack in with barely any fire walls for the virus I have.
Gwyn: You hacked in Wakiya’s computer? How did you do that?
Lelouch: I made a website called “new beyblade system better then DB’s.” Wakiya will click on it for his research and then figure out it’s a troll post but unknowingly allowing me to access his computers files allowing me to learn of the Snake Pit and it’s location.
Gwyn: Interesting, so where is the Snake Pit?
Lelouch: It’s located in a forest in Mexico. I have the direct location so it will be easy to get to it.
Hyuga: Mexico?!
Hikaru: Yeah we can’t go there. Our parents will kill us if we sneak there since asking them too will also result in them rejecting it.
Lelouch: Alright then. Gwyn and Bell, will you be able to join?
Gwyn: I will.
Bell: I should be able to. I’ll ask my butler if we can rent a plane to get to Mexico.
Lelouch: Perfect. Now we’ll leave to Mexico tomorrow night.
Gwyn and Bell: Got it.
Lelouch leaves the meeting room and leaves the base to his apartment to get ready. Lelouch finds his apartment is being searched by masked men with the symbol of the snake pit.
Lelouch: How did he find me?! But even if he did this won’t push back my plans. He can’t know who I am at any cost.
Lelouch grabs a device with a button on top. Lelouch pushes the button and the entire apartment explodes; killing everyone inside. Lelouch walks to the rubble finding one of Theodore’s men holding the picture of him, Valt, and Shu. But because of the frame only some of the picture was able to survive. Which the only thing left of the picture was Shu and Valt with his third being destroyed. Lelouch grabs the picture and leaves the scene. Lelouch comes back to the empty base and finds a room for him that the Black Knights didn’t tell him about. Lelouch enters the room and locks the door giving the password to enter into it as “The only ones should kill are those prepared to be killed.”
Valac: Why did you name it that?
Lelouch: A reminder every time I enter my room.
Valac: But you killed many people in that apartment when it exploded. By this are you saying—?
Lelouch: Yes, I am ready whenever I need to to be killed. I’ve been ready as soon as I took this role as Zero.
Lelouch takes his mask off and puts it down. He then removes his cape and puts it on the table, then he sits down on his chair where the computer is. Lelouch then starts researching on his computer on the Snake Pit from Wakiya’s files.
*The next day*
Bell and Gwyn enter the base.
Gwyn: I’ve called Zero multiple times but he hasn’t answered.
Bell: Do you think he died in that apartment that blew up?
Gwyn: Possilby. But I don’t think Zero would be that dumb to stay in his apartment after the recording. He likely even though his VPN says he’s in Germany is prepared in case they got through it.
Bell: So when do you think he’s coming?
Gwyn: Who knows.
Lelouch wakes up and puts his helmet and cape on and leaves his room.
Gwyn: Zero, you found the room for you in here.
Lelouch: Yes I have and I will now be using this to protect my family in my house.
Gwyn: Will your parents be okay with this?
Lelouch: My parents now think I’m dead. So this worry has no weight. But anyway, Bell, where is the plane?
Bell: It will be here in thirty minutes.
Lelouch: Got it.
*30 minutes later*
The plane lands next to the base and the three enter the plane. The plane then lifts off and they start their journey to Mexico.
Lelouch: This is a interesting plane.
Bell: Thanks! I got it painted black since we’re the Black Knights!
Gwyn: Well it can also be used to hide us in the sky. Since black is hard to see in the early morning since the sky is also still black.
Lelouch: Good point.
*3 hours later*
Tsuijihara: Boys, we’re one mile away from the Snake Pit as planned.
Lelouch: Perfect. We’ll walk the next mile to the Snake Pit.
Bell: A mile?!
Lelouch: Yes, it’s so they won’t detect us as easily as if we used a plane.
The three get off the plane and start their journey to the Snake Pit. On the way there Bell gets scared by a snake and automatically Lelouch grabs his gun and shoots the snake dead.
Bell: You have a gun?!
Lelouch: If we need to yes.
Gwyn: Isn’t a gun a little extreme?
Lelouch: To cause change you have to get your hands dirty.
They continue their journey and finally get to the Snake Pit.
Lelouch: Be carful for any mines or anything that could kill us.
The three enter the Snake Pit and find Boa walking around there.
Lelouch: Freeze Snake Pit scum!
Lelouch grabs his gun and points it at Boa while Bell and Gwyn grab him and tie him up.
Boa: What though— Who are you three?!
Lelouch: I am Zero, and these two are some of the members of the Black Knights. Where are the other Snake Pit members here? Because this place looks abandoned.
Boa: It is abandoned. The Snake Pits operations moved to the Raging Bulls. Though I think their tech is still here.
Lelouch: Good, Black Knights watch him while we continue our search here.
Boa: What are you searching for?
Lelouch: The tech that made Shu Red Eye. Though why are you asking me this? Didn’t Theodore already tell you this?
Boa: I’m not part of the Snake Pit anymore.
Lelouch: Then why are you here?
Boa: The same as you.
Valac: If he’s not a part of the Snake Pit, should we let him go?
Lelouch: No, he could be lying. And even if he is telling the truth it’s better to be safe then sorry.
They then pass a jungle and a ice area and then to a stadium on a bridge. They then pass that and finally reach to the Requiem Project area.
Bell: Is this it?
Gwyn: Most likely.
Lelouch: Gwyn, go check the computers and see what this thing is.
Bell: Keep watch on the Snake Pit leaver while I look around.
Boa: You know I have a name right?
Lelouch: Then why don’t you enlighten me of your name then.
Boa: My name is Boa.
Lelouch: Alright Boa, Bell, watch him!
Lelouch starts looking around and sees a tube like container with wires and things that look like it connects to someone.
Lelouch: I’m guessing this is what changed Shu to Red Eye.
Gwyn: It seems like it. It says right here the last person tested on this was Red Eye which caused the creation of Spriggan Requiem.
Lelouch: Alright. Put in the usb and we’ll go back to base and look at the coding and files.
Gwyn put in the usb and when it was done the three grabbed Boa and went to the plane. Lelouch threw Boa in the back and locked that section of the plane so he can’t escape.
Bell: Why are we bringing him with us?
Lelouch: I have a plan for him.
*3 hours later*
The plane lands back at the base and the three grab Boa and throw him in the meeting room and lock the door.
Lelouch: Good job Black Knights. Tomorrow we’ll do the next step in our plan. So you all can go back to your homes now. The two Black Knights leave the base and too their houses while Lelouch grabs his gun and enters the meeting room.
Lelouch: Hello Boa.
Boa: What have to come to do? Kill me?
Lelouch: No, I need some information.
Boa: What?
Lelouch: What do you know about the device that created Red Eye?
Boa: I don’t know anything about it.
Lelouch: Don’t lie to me!
Boa backs up because of Lelouch’s yell. Lelouch then looks at Boa’s eyes.
Lelouch: Your telling the truth, aren’t you? But anyway, what do you know about Red Eye?
Boa: He used to use a bey called Legend Spriggan and came into the Snake Pit out of no where as the Snake Pits leader right under Theodore. But then after he lost to Lui with his Nightmare Longinus Red Eye’s mask broke and he became the version of Red Eye we see today.
Lelouch: Do you want to defeat Red Eye?
Boa: Yes. That’s why I was at the Snake Pit. To figure out what caused Red Eye to change and find a weakness.
Lelouch: Okay. I know this may sound awarded but do you want to join the Black Knights? Your knowledge would help our cause a lot.
Boa: I’ll think about it because your cause could help me a lot. But since you kidnapped me and held me at gun point multiple times I’m leaning towards no. But give me some time and I’ll make a decision.
Lelouch: Alright, I’ll give you time.
Lelouch leaves the room and locks it giving Boa time to think. Lelouch then enters his room and locks it.
Valac: You know he likely is using this time to escape since he thinks if he doesn’t say yes you’ll kill him right?
Lelouch: Obviously. But it’s possible he might help since we appeal to his goals.
Valac: I guess we’ll see then Lelouch, we’ll see.
UnseenBurst LegendJustice if it’s ok i would like to hear what you think of these chapters so I can keep continuing it and the next ones.
This chapter seemed... A bit extreme, I personally thought it was awesome reminding me a bit of Mission Impossible or something like that but just remember that WBO is super strict on violence and that kind of stuff. I'm not saying it was violent but maybe in the next chapter tone it down a bit. Just to be safe.
My Thoughts About The Chapter
This episode was amazing, Gwyn getting beaten at Chess?! Seems highly unlikely but it's the Main Character so I can't argue with that. But seriously, this felt like mission impossible lol. It was cool to see the gang trying to break into the Snake Pit only to find that it is currently been moved to the Raging Bulls. Looks like the gang is going to try breaking into the Raging Bulls in the next chapter. (Poor Hikaru and Hyuga, their parents won't let them go on a death-defying mission ) Overall I saw no errors, and the story was set up amazingly! I loved it, and from what I saw there were no Grammer Mistakes. (Bell's "Butler" Is actually his Grandpa/Guardian) Anyways, I loved this episode! 10/10 you improved super quickly!
Thanks, if you don’t mind can I get your thoughts on the second episode. If you don’t have time or don’t want to you don’t have to. It’s just for interest and to see if I need to improve on anything in that one.
RE: Beyblade Burst Kings Game - UnseenBurst - Sep. 19, 2021
(Sep. 19, 2021 11:30 PM)G.O.A.T Blader Wrote: (Sep. 19, 2021 11:12 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: huh i read it and it's pretty interesting to have a beyblade series that's focus on chess or checkers! i also like the suspense in this episode, like when lelouch, bell, and gwyn were investigating the snake pit area!
Thanks
(Sep. 19, 2021 11:11 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: This chapter seemed... A bit extreme, I personally thought it was awesome reminding me a bit of Mission Impossible or something like that but just remember that WBO is super strict on violence and that kind of stuff. I'm not saying it was violent but maybe in the next chapter tone it down a bit. Just to be safe.
My Thoughts About The Chapter
This episode was amazing, Gwyn getting beaten at Chess?! Seems highly unlikely but it's the Main Character so I can't argue with that. But seriously, this felt like mission impossible lol. It was cool to see the gang trying to break into the Snake Pit only to find that it is currently been moved to the Raging Bulls. Looks like the gang is going to try breaking into the Raging Bulls in the next chapter. (Poor Hikaru and Hyuga, their parents won't let them go on a death-defying mission ) Overall I saw no errors, and the story was set up amazingly! I loved it, and from what I saw there were no Grammer Mistakes. (Bell's "Butler" Is actually his Grandpa/Guardian) Anyways, I loved this episode! 10/10 you improved super quickly!
Thanks, if you don’t mind can I get your thoughts on the second episode. If you don’t have time or don’t want to you don’t have to. It’s just for interest and to see if I need to improve on anything in that one.
The Second chapter was good too! Sisco Vs Lelouch was an awesome battle! And now, Lelouch has a bond with his Bey Valaac, it wasn't as good as this one but an awesome chapter to build up a bond between Blader and Bey! Rating: 7/10! Nice going on that one, you'll get the hang of this soon
RE: Beyblade Burst Kings Game - G.O.A.T Blader - Sep. 19, 2021
(Sep. 19, 2021 11:38 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Sep. 19, 2021 11:30 PM)G.O.A.T Blader Wrote: Thanks
Thanks, if you don’t mind can I get your thoughts on the second episode. If you don’t have time or don’t want to you don’t have to. It’s just for interest and to see if I need to improve on anything in that one.
The Second chapter was good too! Sisco Vs Lelouch was an awesome battle! And now, Lelouch has a bond with his Bey Valaac, it wasn't as good as this one but an awesome chapter to build up a bond between Blader and Bey! Rating: 7/10! Nice going on that one, you'll get the hang of this soon
Alright thanks. I bet I will eventually especially from last chapter.
RE: Beyblade Burst Kings Game - G.O.A.T Blader - Sep. 21, 2021
Beyblade Burst Kings Game #4
*in the morning*
Lelouch wakes up and puts his mask and cape on. Lelouch then leaves his room and goes to the waiting room to see a stretching Boa.
Lelouch: How did you sleep Boa?
Boa: Pretty good, if we’re comparing here to where I was originally sleeping.
Lelouch: So have you made your decision?
Boa: Yes I have actually. I’ll join the Black Knights because of our similar goals. But I will leave in case you start getting suspicious with me.
Lelouch: Well, welcome to the Black Knights Boa. Do you have a bey with you?
Boa: Yes I have my bey. My bey is Roar Bahamut.
Lelouch: Good. Your beys defense will be good when we go against Red Eye in our final attack.
Boa: Final attack? I thought after this we would be raiding the Raging Bulls to kidnap Shu or something.
Lelouch: No. The WBBA has many enemies we can recruit or destroy which will either way help us in our goal.
Boa: How would that?
Lelouch: If we can recruit them we got a new organization to add to our arsenal but if we destroy them we can become stronger and be more threatening by ourselves. Either way it’s a win win. We’ll be more threatening to the WBBA and Snake Pit either way.
Lelouch opens the door to the meeting room.
Lelouch: Now since your a official Black Knight you can come out of here and hang around.
Boa leaves the room and starts looking around. He sees the computer in the front of the base and starts looking through its files.
Boa: You said you have the files from that device in the Snake Pit right?
Lelouch: Yes, I’ve learned many things from it.
Boa: Like what?
Lelouch: The device is titled as the Requiem Project and it’s supposed to connect the mind and the blader into one being. That’s why Red Eye has stated that he is Spriggan in his matches.
Boa: But if the minds are combined how are we gonna bring the original Red Eye back as you planned?
Lelouch: I will find a way, I always do.
Lelouch starts moving to his room.
Boa: Hey one last thing before you go. Do you have a bey? Or are we gonna be doing your dirty work?
Lelouch: My bey is Dynamite Valac.
Boa: You don’t have your own original bey?
Lelouch: No my beys spirit is original but the rest are parts I deemed very good to make the best bey I can.
Lelouch enters his room and locks it behind him. He then removes his mask and his cape and sits in his chair.
Lelouch: The Requiem Project. The device that bonds the minds of bey and blader. If I could rework it to give me the best bey ever but not have our minds fused and corrupted.
Valac: Your planning to evolve me?
Lelouch: Yes. This form I made for you is only temporary. The device is able to make a bey that is the best for the blader and the bey based on the bladers wishes. So I wonder what would happen if I wish for the best bey. It would help us defeat the Snake Pit and take control of the WBBA and free Shu while also making a new organization for bladers.
Valac: So your still planning on making the WBBO huh?
Lelouch: Of coarse I am. Just freeing Shu and leaving the corrupted WBBA would be selfish and unfair to the bladers all around the world.
Valac: Are you ever gonna tell the Black Knights about your actual plan?
Lelouch: No, I don’t know how they would react. I just can’t take that chance.
Valac: You know your trust issues cause you to make decisions that do the opposite of what your trying to do right?
Lelouch: Maybe, but you always have to be cautious. No matter how much your trust someone there’s always a chance they could be faking it to get close to you and destroy your life.
Valac: Your experience with Lui is fueling this isn’t it?
Lelouch: Of coarse it is. After I moved and met Lui he was my best friend but he betrayed me. That’s why I will always be cautious no matter how good they may seem.
Valac: So which organization are we attacking first?
Lelouch: The weakest of the WBBA’s enemy organizations Dead Gran.
Valac: How are they the weakest?
Lelouch: Because of Aiga and their team battle against the WBBA many of their members left so the only ones left are Phi, Hearts, and Evel.
Valac: You sure we can beat Prominence Phoenix, Twilight Hades, and Royal Egis?
Lelouch: Yes I do.
Bell: Hey what are you doing out?!
Boa: I am a part of the Black Knights now!
Gwyn: Yeah, sure you are.
Boa: Zero!
Lelouch puts his helmet and cape back on and leaves his room.
Lelouch: What is it?
Boa: They’re saying I’m not part of the Black Knights.
Bell: Yeah, sure you are!
Lelouch: Yes Boa is the new member of the Black Knights.
Hyuga: What is happening here?
Lelouch: Oh nothing Hyuga, I’m just introducing Gwyn and Bell to our new member Boa.
Hikaru: Well nice to meet your Boa.
Hyuga: Same!
Lelouch: Oh Hikaru is here as well? Perfect! Now I can tell you all our next step.
The group go into the meeting room.
Lelouch: Well after our debatably unsuccessful raid of the Snake Pit we’re gonna have to prepare for our war against the WBBA and the Snake Pit. So because of this we will be trying to recruit people from WBBA’s two enemy organizations. The Dead Gran and the Hell Tower. But we will be going against the weakest of the two first which is the Dead Gran.
Gwyn: How is Dead Gran the weaker of the two?
Lelouch: Since they have only three members in amount of bladers they have they’re the weakest. And in the power of organizations the amount of members you have is your power. So I’m guessing since Dead Tower is located in Japan you will be able to join us, right Hikaru and Hyuga?
Hikaru: Yes we should be able to.
Lelouch: Great but in case we have to do a team battle against them I’m gonna have to use the starting line up I made in case of this.
Boa: So what is it?
Lelouch: The starters are me, Boa, and Bell. Our sub if needed will be Gwyn.
Hyuga: What?! How did I not make it?!
Lelouch: Sorry Hyuga, we’re just better then you.
Hyuga: Yeah, alright.
Lelouch: Hikaru if we do battle can I trust you in recording the battle and giving us information after our match.
Hikaru: Got it.
Lelouch: Bell I need you to get the plane for tomorrow when we go to Dead Gran.
Bell: Go it.
Lelouch: Alright, then the meeting is over. I’ll see you all tomorrow to go to Dead Gran.
Lelouch unlocks the door and goes to his room while everyone else but Boa leaves the base.
*The Next Day*
Lelouch wakes up and leaves his room after he puts his mask and cape back on to see Boa sleeping on the floor with a sleeping bag.
Valac: You feel bad for him don’t you?
Lelouch: Of coarse I do. No kid should sleep like this.
Lelouch shakes Boa to wake him up.
Boa: Hey Zero. You need anything?
Lelouch: No I got something for you.
Boa: What?
Lelouch grabs his wallet and puts five thousand dollars in his hand.
Boa: Five thousand dollars?!
Lelouch: Yeah it should let you get a apartment. I’ll ask Bell if he can help pitch in for you to keep your apartment till after this when you can compete and win money from tournaments. And if he can’t I’ll do it for you.
Boa wipes tears from his eyes and hugs Lelouch.
Boa: Thank you, Zero. You don’t know how much this means to me.
The four other Black Knights enter the base.
Bell: Hey Zero, the plane is outside.
Lelouch: Good. It’s time to go to the Dead Gran.
Everyone gets on the plane and the plane goes to Dead Gran.
*1 hour later*
The plane lands next to the Dead Gran base and the Black Knights leave the plane. Hearts comes out of Dead Tower and runs to the plane.
Hearts: Who are you all?!
Lelouch: I am Zero and we are the Black Knights.
Hearts: Ok, “Black Knights” why are you here?!
Lelouch: We’re interested in seeing if you would like to join our cause to defeat Red Eye and take down the WBBA.
Hearts: Hahahaha! You think we can defeat the WBBA?! With Red Eye we are no chance!
Lelouch: No we’re not.
Hearts: Well how do I even know you all are strong?! If I even consider this idea I need proof you all are strong!
Lelouch: How about a team battle? The Black Knights verses Dead Gran.
Hearts smiles at Lelouch.
Hearts: Interesting, I’ll accept this team battle. Follow me and we’ll get it set up with a live stream.
Lelouch: Alright.
Lelouch and the Black Knights follow Heart to the stadium.
Hearts: Alright hold on, the stream is getting set up by the broadcaster. Phi and Evel will be here in a minute.
*2 minutes later*
Broadcaster: Welcome to the team battle of the Black Knights against Dead Gran! It’s time to see who will win in this team battle which we can obviously tell the Dead Gran will win with no trouble.
Ref: Teams scan in your first bladers.
Lelouch: Bell, I’m sending you in.
Bell: Got it!
Bell scans his bey logger and walks to the stadium. Evel walks onto the stadium as Bells opponent.
Announcer: Now it’s time for the first battle! Bell of the Black Knights against Evel of the Dead Gran.
Ref: It’s time for the first battle!
Everyone: 3,2,1, GO SHOOT!
Egis goes to the center of the stadium using its Quest’ driver to stick to the center.
Bell: Go get it Beliel!
Evel: You really think your Devil Beliel’s attacks can break through the defense of the Royal ring and the 2D chassis?! Don’t make me laugh!
Lelouch: The 2D Chassis?! Where’s the barrier?
Gwyn: It seems like he was able to wear it down causing there to be no rubber.
Lelouch: Interesting.
Bell: Oh you really think so?! Now Beliel! DEVIL BOMBER!
The explosion causes Egis to fly out of the stadium.
Ref: The score is one to zero with Bell getting a ring out finish!
Evel: Impressive but you won’t win next round.
Bell: Sure I won’t.
Announcer: Get ready for the next battle!
Everyone: 3,2,1, GO SHOOT!
Like the last round Egis goes to the center of the stadium with Beliel speeding right towards.
Bell: A easy win again?! DEVIL BOMBER!
The explosion causes Egis to fly in the air but instead of it flying out of the stadium Egis hits the side of the stadium causing it to click to the half way mark allowing Egis to activate its gimmick.
Evel: ROYAL DEFENSE!
A metal barrier comes out of Egis causing all of Beliel’s attacks it give no affect. And finally with one last attack Beliel flies out the stadium because of Egis’s barrier.
Ref: That’s a ring out finish for Royal Egis! The score is one to one.
Announcer: It looks like last round was just a test on Bell for his strength but now Evel is showing us his true power!
Evel: Well that was easy.
Bell looks at Evel angrily and loads his launcher.
Announcer: Get ready for the next battle!
Everyone: 3,2,1, GO SHOOT!
Beliel and Egis slam into each other causing both beys to fall out of the stadium.
Announcer: A draw?! How is this possible? Is Evel toying with him again?!
Ref: That’s a draw! Now get ready for the next battle!
Everyone: 3,2,1, GO SHOOT!
Both beys slam into each other. Egis uses Royal Defense causing it’s metal barrier to appear.
Lelouch: Bell! What are you doing?! Are you just not gonna use the V Gear? I thought you made it for a reason!
Bell: V gear? Wait! I got it! VENTURE SHOOT!
Beliel starts using the V Gear and starts spinning faster gaining power and speed.
Beliel: Now! DEVIL BOMBER!
Combining the V Gear and Devil Bomber Beliel slams into Egis and bursts.
Evel: What?! How?!
Announcer: What?! Beliel was able to break through Egis’s defense?! How’s this possible?!
Ref: That’s a burst finish for Beliel! The winner is Bell with a score of three to two!
Bell grabs Beliel and goes to Lelouch.
Bell: Thanks for the help Zero!
Lelouch: No problem. Boa, your up next. Let’s see what your Bahamut can do.
Boa: Alright, I won’t let you down.
Boa scans his bey logger and walks to the stadium.
Announcer: The next battle is Boa with his Roar Bahamut against Hearts with his Twilight Hades! Let’s see who wins this battle!
UnseenBurst LegendJustice GenesisBlader
RE: Beyblade Burst Kings Game - GenesisBlader - Sep. 21, 2021
(Sep. 21, 2021 1:46 AM)G.O.A.T Blader Wrote: Beyblade Burst Kings Game #4
*in the morning*
Lelouch wakes up and puts his mask and cape on. Lelouch then leaves his room and goes to the waiting room to see a stretching Boa.
Lelouch: How did you sleep Boa?
Boa: Pretty good, if we’re comparing here to where I was originally sleeping.
Lelouch: So have you made your decision?
Boa: Yes I have actually. I’ll join the Black Knights because of our similar goals. But I will leave in case you start getting suspicious with me.
Lelouch: Well, welcome to the Black Knights Boa. Do you have a bey with you?
Boa: Yes I have my bey. My bey is Roar Bahamut.
Lelouch: Good. Your beys defense will be good when we go against Red Eye in our final attack.
Boa: Final attack? I thought after this we would be raiding the Raging Bulls to kidnap Shu or something.
Lelouch: No. The WBBA has many enemies we can recruit or destroy which will either way help us in our goal.
Boa: How would that?
Lelouch: If we can recruit them we got a new organization to add to our arsenal but if we destroy them we can become stronger and be more threatening by ourselves. Either way it’s a win win. We’ll be more threatening to the WBBA and Snake Pit either way.
Lelouch opens the door to the meeting room.
Lelouch: Now since your a official Black Knight you can come out of here and hang around.
Boa leaves the room and starts looking around. He sees the computer in the front of the base and starts looking through its files.
Boa: You said you have the files from that device in the Snake Pit right?
Lelouch: Yes, I’ve learned many things from it.
Boa: Like what?
Lelouch: The device is titled as the Requiem Project and it’s supposed to connect the mind and the blader into one being. That’s why Red Eye has stated that he is Spriggan in his matches.
Boa: But if the minds are combined how are we gonna bring the original Red Eye back as you planned?
Lelouch: I will find a way, I always do.
Lelouch starts moving to his room.
Boa: Hey one last thing before you go. Do you have a bey? Or are we gonna be doing your dirty work?
Lelouch: My bey is Dynamite Valac.
Boa: You don’t have your own original bey?
Lelouch: No my beys spirit is original but the rest are parts I deemed very good to make the best bey I can.
Lelouch enters his room and locks it behind him. He then removes his mask and his cape and sits in his chair.
Lelouch: The Requiem Project. The device that bonds the minds of bey and blader. If I could rework it to give me the best bey ever but not have our minds fused and corrupted.
Valac: Your planning to evolve me?
Lelouch: Yes. This form I made for you is only temporary. The device is able to make a bey that is the best for the blader and the bey based on the bladers wishes. So I wonder what would happen if I wish for the best bey. It would help us defeat the Snake Pit and take control of the WBBA and free Shu while also making a new organization for bladers.
Valac: So your still planning on making the WBBO huh?
Lelouch: Of coarse I am. Just freeing Shu and leaving the corrupted WBBA would be selfish and unfair to the bladers all around the world.
Valac: Are you ever gonna tell the Black Knights about your actual plan?
Lelouch: No, I don’t know how they would react. I just can’t take that chance.
Valac: You know your trust issues cause you to make decisions that do the opposite of what your trying to do right?
Lelouch: Maybe, but you always have to be cautious. No matter how much your trust someone there’s always a chance they could be faking it to get close to you and destroy your life.
Valac: Your experience with Lui is fueling this isn’t it?
Lelouch: Of coarse it is. After I moved and met Lui he was my best friend but he betrayed me. That’s why I will always be cautious no matter how good they may seem.
Valac: So which organization are we attacking first?
Lelouch: The weakest of the WBBA’s enemy organizations Dead Gran.
Valac: How are they the weakest?
Lelouch: Because of Aiga and their team battle against the WBBA many of their members left so the only ones left are Phi, Hearts, and Evel.
Valac: You sure we can beat Prominence Phoenix, Twilight Hades, and Royal Egis?
Lelouch: Yes I do.
Bell: Hey what are you doing out?!
Boa: I am a part of the Black Knights now!
Gwyn: Yeah, sure you are.
Boa: Zero!
Lelouch puts his helmet and cape back on and leaves his room.
Lelouch: What is it?
Boa: They’re saying I’m not part of the Black Knights.
Bell: Yeah, sure you are!
Lelouch: Yes Boa is the new member of the Black Knights.
Hyuga: What is happening here?
Lelouch: Oh nothing Hyuga, I’m just introducing Gwyn and Bell to our new member Boa.
Hikaru: Well nice to meet your Boa.
Hyuga: Same!
Lelouch: Oh Hikaru is here as well? Perfect! Now I can tell you all our next step.
The group go into the meeting room.
Lelouch: Well after our debatably unsuccessful raid of the Snake Pit we’re gonna have to prepare for our war against the WBBA and the Snake Pit. So because of this we will be trying to recruit people from WBBA’s two enemy organizations. The Dead Gran and the Hell Tower. But we will be going against the weakest of the two first which is the Dead Gran.
Gwyn: How is Dead Gran the weaker of the two?
Lelouch: Since they have only three members in amount of bladers they have they’re the weakest. And in the power of organizations the amount of members you have is your power. So I’m guessing since Dead Tower is located in Japan you will be able to join us, right Hikaru and Hyuga?
Hikaru: Yes we should be able to.
Lelouch: Great but in case we have to do a team battle against them I’m gonna have to use the starting line up I made in case of this.
Boa: So what is it?
Lelouch: The starters are me, Boa, and Bell. Our sub if needed will be Gwyn.
Hyuga: What?! How did I not make it?!
Lelouch: Sorry Hyuga, we’re just better then you.
Hyuga: Yeah, alright.
Lelouch: Hikaru if we do battle can I trust you in recording the battle and giving us information after our match.
Hikaru: Got it.
Lelouch: Bell I need you to get the plane for tomorrow when we go to Dead Gran.
Bell: Go it.
Lelouch: Alright, then the meeting is over. I’ll see you all tomorrow to go to Dead Gran.
Lelouch unlocks the door and goes to his room while everyone else but Boa leaves the base.
*The Next Day*
Lelouch wakes up and leaves his room after he puts his mask and cape back on to see Boa sleeping on the floor with a sleeping bag.
Valac: You feel bad for him don’t you?
Lelouch: Of coarse I do. No kid should sleep like this.
Lelouch shakes Boa to wake him up.
Boa: Hey Zero. You need anything?
Lelouch: No I got something for you.
Boa: What?
Lelouch grabs his wallet and puts five thousand dollars in his hand.
Boa: Five thousand dollars?!
Lelouch: Yeah it should let you get a apartment. I’ll ask Bell if he can help pitch in for you to keep your apartment till after this when you can compete and win money from tournaments. And if he can’t I’ll do it for you.
Boa wipes tears from his eyes and hugs Lelouch.
Boa: Thank you, Zero. You don’t know how much this means to me.
The four other Black Knights enter the base.
Bell: Hey Zero, the plane is outside.
Lelouch: Good. It’s time to go to the Dead Gran.
Everyone gets on the plane and the plane goes to Dead Gran.
*1 hour later*
The plane lands next to the Dead Gran base and the Black Knights leave the plane. Hearts comes out of Dead Tower and runs to the plane.
Hearts: Who are you all?!
Lelouch: I am Zero and we are the Black Knights.
Hearts: Ok, “Black Knights” why are you here?!
Lelouch: We’re interested in seeing if you would like to join our cause to defeat Red Eye and take down the WBBA.
Hearts: Hahahaha! You think we can defeat the WBBA?! With Red Eye we are no chance!
Lelouch: No we’re not.
Hearts: Well how do I even know you all are strong?! If I even consider this idea I need proof you all are strong!
Lelouch: How about a team battle? The Black Knights verses Dead Gran.
Hearts smiles at Lelouch.
Hearts: Interesting, I’ll accept this team battle. Follow me and we’ll get it set up with a live stream.
Lelouch: Alright.
Lelouch and the Black Knights follow Heart to the stadium.
Hearts: Alright hold on, the stream is getting set up by the broadcaster. Phi and Evel will be here in a minute.
*2 minutes later*
Broadcaster: Welcome to the team battle of the Black Knights against Dead Gran! It’s time to see who will win in this team battle which we can obviously tell the Dead Gran will win with no trouble.
Ref: Teams scan in your first bladers.
Lelouch: Bell, I’m sending you in.
Bell: Got it!
Bell scans his bey logger and walks to the stadium. Evel walks onto the stadium as Bells opponent.
Announcer: Now it’s time for the first battle! Bell of the Black Knights against Evel of the Dead Gran.
Ref: It’s time for the first battle!
Everyone: 3,2,1, GO SHOOT!
Egis goes to the center of the stadium using its Quest’ driver to stick to the center.
Bell: Go get it Beliel!
Evel: You really think your Devil Beliel’s attacks can break through the defense of the Royal ring and the 2D chassis?! Don’t make me laugh!
Lelouch: The 2D Chassis?! Where’s the barrier?
Gwyn: It seems like he was able to wear it down causing there to be no rubber.
Lelouch: Interesting.
Bell: Oh you really think so?! Now Beliel! DEVIL BOMBER!
The explosion causes Egis to fly out of the stadium.
Ref: The score is one to zero with Bell getting a ring out finish!
Evel: Impressive but you won’t win next round.
Bell: Sure I won’t.
Announcer: Get ready for the next battle!
Everyone: 3,2,1, GO SHOOT!
Like the last round Egis goes to the center of the stadium with Beliel speeding right towards.
Bell: A easy win again?! DEVIL BOMBER!
The explosion causes Egis to fly in the air but instead of it flying out of the stadium Egis hits the side of the stadium causing it to click to the half way mark allowing Egis to activate its gimmick.
Evel: ROYAL DEFENSE!
A metal barrier comes out of Egis causing all of Beliel’s attacks it give no affect. And finally with one last attack Beliel flies out the stadium because of Egis’s barrier.
Ref: That’s a ring out finish for Royal Egis! The score is one to one.
Announcer: It looks like last round was just a test on Bell for his strength but now Evel is showing us his true power!
Evel: Well that was easy.
Bell looks at Evel angrily and loads his launcher.
Announcer: Get ready for the next battle!
Everyone: 3,2,1, GO SHOOT!
Beliel and Egis slam into each other causing both beys to fall out of the stadium.
Announcer: A draw?! How is this possible? Is Evel toying with him again?!
Ref: That’s a draw! Now get ready for the next battle!
Everyone: 3,2,1, GO SHOOT!
Both beys slam into each other. Egis uses Royal Defense causing it’s metal barrier to appear.
Lelouch: Bell! What are you doing?! Are you just not gonna use the V Gear? I thought you made it for a reason!
Bell: V gear? Wait! I got it! VENTURE SHOOT!
Beliel starts using the V Gear and starts spinning faster gaining power and speed.
Beliel: Now! DEVIL BOMBER!
Combining the V Gear and Devil Bomber Beliel slams into Egis and bursts.
Evel: What?! How?!
Announcer: What?! Beliel was able to break through Egis’s defense?! How’s this possible?!
Ref: That’s a burst finish for Beliel! The winner is Bell with a score of three to two!
Bell grabs Beliel and goes to Lelouch.
Bell: Thanks for the help Zero!
Lelouch: No problem. Boa, your up next. Let’s see what your Bahamut can do.
Boa: Alright, I won’t let you down.
Boa scans his bey logger and walks to the stadium.
Announcer: The next battle is Boa with his Roar Bahamut against Hearts with his Twilight Hades! Let’s see who wins this battle!
UnseenBurst LegendJustice GenesisBlader
sorry dude i cant read it right now, i have to go to bed, but i will be sure to read it tomorrow!
RE: Beyblade Burst Kings Game - G.O.A.T Blader - Sep. 28, 2021
Beyblade Burst Kings Game #5
Boa walks to the stadium where Hearts is.
Hearts: You ready to lose little man?
Boa looks at Hearts with anger and ready’s his launcher.
Ref: This is the first battle!
Everyone: 3,2,1, GO SHOOT!
Bahamut goes into the center while Hades circles around it.
Hearts: Well this is a easy win! TWILIGHT IMPACT!
The six red metal points on the Twilight ring glow red with Hades then glowing a dark purple. Hades slams into Bahamut, then again, and again, and again.
Boa: You think that’s gonna do anything?
Hearts looks at Bahamut and sees it hadn’t clicked at all.
Hearts: What?!
Boa: That’s the power of a rubber lock. Now it’s time for me and Bahamut to retaliate.
Bahamut moves from the center of the stadium to the side of the stadium.
Boa: MOMENT CRASH!
Hearts smiles at Boa.
Hearts: You really need to watch your opponent battle before you battle them.
Boa: What?
Hearts: It’s time for TWILIGHT GRAVITY!
Hades slams into Bahamuts side and kept slamming into it creating a triangle shape of attacks. A dark purple circle is created with it shrinking more and more.
Boa: No! BAHAMUT, FINAL GUARD!
Bahamut gets to it’s third click causing the Roar blade to be in a perfect circle and Bahamut to be inside a red dome. Hades’s attacks start having barely a affect to Bahamut.
Bahamut then slams into Hades causing Hades to fly into the side of the stadium bursting from Hades’s momentum.
Ref: That’s a burst finish for Boa! The score is two to zero!
Announcer: What?! Hades has just bursted from Roar Bahamut! How could Hearts lose to someone like Boa?!
Hearts: How did you do that?!
Boa: Hey, you left yourself open to a easy move.
Hades: How did you know to do that?! You could’ve done that against Red Eye but you never did!
Boa: Having the title of Knight of Zero has some perks.
*at the bench*
Bell: The “Knight of Zero”?!
Lelouch: Yes, he is my knight in these battles, my right hand man.
Bell: Why didn’t you choose me?! What does he have over me?!
Lelouch: He’s just the second best blader on the team. And has a connection to Red Eye unlike us.
Valac: Another lie? When will you stop lying to them? It’ll eventually come back to you.
Lelouch: Not now Valac.
Bell: What’s that?
Lelouch: Nothing.
*At the stadium*
Ref: Alright it’s time for the next battle!
Everyone: 3,2,1, GO SHOOT!
Both bladers launch their beys.
Boa: MOMENT CRASH!
Bahamut slams into Hades with a big explosion in the stadium. Hades goes flying but lands in the stadium.
Hearts: Oh we’re going aggressive huh? Well it’s time for TWILIGHT IMPACT!
Hades slams into Bahamut pushing Bahamut back a little.
Hearts: What?! How did that do no damage?!
Boa: My title is the Knight of Zero! And that trumps you Hearts! Now it’s time Bahamut! INFINITE MOMENT CRASH!
Bahamut goes to the edge of the stadium and repeatedly slams into Hades with its momentum causing a lot of damage. Bahamut slams into Hadrs one more time and finally Hades bursts.
Ref: That’s a burst finish for Boa! The score is four to zero! The winner is Boa!
Announcer: Our king Hearts has just been blown out by Boa! How could this be possible?!
Boa walks to the bench.
Boa: Did I do good Zero?
Lelouch: You did exactly has planned. Now it’s time for me to finish this.
Lelouch grabs his bey logger and scans himself to battle in the next round.
Announcer: This is the final battle! The battle is between Phi and the mysterious man Zero!
Lelouch walks up to the stadium and loads his launcher.
Phi: The leader of the Black Knights. May I ask before this battle why are you battling us?
Lelouch: To get you all on our side against the WBBA. But from this performance I truly see no reason for us to work together.
Phi: What?!
Lelouch: If we can blow you out this bad then we have no need for you.
Phi: Well then why don’t you just walk out and leave?
Lelouch: Well that would be disrespectful.
Ref: Are you two done yet?
Phi: No, just one last question.
Lelouch: What is it?
Phi: Why are you going against the WBBA this way? Some could consider this bad sportsmanship. Especially since you said we have no use for you openly on TV. This could cause supporters to go away from you.
Lelouch: Well I can answer this with a easy question for you.
Phi: What is it?
Lelouch: What do you do when there’s a evil you can not defeat by just means? Do you stain your hands with evil to destroy evil? Or do you remain steadfastly just and righteous even if it means surrendering to evil?
*In the crowd*
Gwyn: A paradox, but is this just word play?
*at the stadium*
Phi: That’s a interesting way of seeing things.
Lelouch: What’s your answer?
Phi: Well I choose justice.
Lelouch: I understand, in my case I commit evil to destroy the greater evil.
Ref: Bladers get ready!
Everyone: 3,2,1, GO SHOOT!
Valac goes to the center of the stadium with Phoenix going around it.
Phi: Universe Impact!
Phoenix uses the universe metal driver’s edge to speed up and slam into Valac. Phoenix keeps slamming into Valac repeatedly. Phoenix’s armor flys in the air.
Phi: Let’s end this Phoenix! PROMINENCE CRUSH!
Lelouch: Oh, you really think that’s gonna save you?!
Phi: PHOENIX WILL DESTROY YOU!
The amor and Phoenix slam into Valac.
Lelouch: Well here’s one thing that your forgetting. The only ones that should destroy, ARE THOSE PREPARED TO BE DESTROYED THEMSELVES!
Valac releases a big blast of energy causing Phoenix and the armor to go flying.
Lelouch: it’s time for me to end this, DYNAMITE BOMBER!
Valac flys at Phoenix and using Dynamite Bomber destroys Phoenix.
Ref: That’s a burst finish for Zero! Since Phoenix has been destroyed this is a automatic win for Zero!
Phi drops to the ground shocked to see his Phoenix broken.
Lelouch: This is karma for all of those beys you destroyed.
Lelouch walks off the stadium to the bench.
Bell: That was crazy! You and Valac are very strong!
Lelouch: Yes we are. But not strong enough.
Lelouch looks at Valac with his Blue aura appearing.
Bell: Not strong enough?! You just destroyed Phoenix in one move?!
Lelouch: And Spriggan Requiem never did that before with Twin Nemesis?! I need to be stronger. Strong enough I can obliterate Astral Spriggan.
Lelouch and the Black Knights walk out of Dead Tower and walk onto the plane. The plane gets into take off and starts heading to the base.
*1 hour later*
The plane lands next to the base.
Lelouch: This was a good mission team. Tomorrow we’re gonna plan on how we’ll defeat Hell Tower.
Lelouch walks into the base and goes to his room and locking it behind him. Lelouch puts his mask and cape on the table and looks at Valac.
Valac: So when you evolve me what are you planning to change?
Lelouch: I’m not one hundred percent sure but I’m planning to change you from a stamina type to a attack type. And change you from right to left spin.
Valac: Why these changes?
Lelouch: To make you more aggressive and to let me become stronger causing me to give stronger attacks on Spriggan.
Valac: I’m guessing you’ve already got some ideas on the parts.
Lelouch: Well I’m one hundred percent on using xtreme’ as the driver to give you more speed. Though with the disc I’m not so sure because I’m not one hundred percent on the bey I’m making yet.
Valac: Why do you need to go off what systems other people have been using? Why don’t you make your own?
Lelouch: Fair point. Though I want to use the Requiem Project so I can make a perfect bey for me like it did with Shu.
Valac: Fair, but the dangers that could be created by it.
Lelouch: Yeah, that’s the only thing keeping me away from doing it.
Valac: Though wouldn’t that be hypocritical?
Lelouch: How?
Valac: You said the only people who should destroy are those prepared to be destroyed. And since you destroyed Phoenix you shouldn’t be scared to use the Requiem Project because by this quote you are prepared to be destroyed.
Lelouch: I am. I’m not worried about what will happen to me. I’m worried what will happen to me which will affect everyone else. What if I become a worse threat then Shu. I could destroy the entire beyblade world.
Valac: That’s fair.
Lelouch: That’s why I’m doing research on the device here. But if I can’t get a safer way to use the Requiem Project after we defeat Hell Tower I’m gonna use it so we can defeat the WBBA.
Valac: Why’s that?
Lelouch: We’re gonna need all the strength we can get. Which means I will have to sacrifice myself to this device to defeat Shu. And bring peace to the beyblade world.
*At the WBBA headquarters*
Worker: Hey Theodore something big just happened!
Theodore: What?
Worker: Dead Gran has just been destroyed by the Black Knight!
Theodore: What?!
Worker: Yes the last people that were there were the Black Knights and right after the bladers left Dead Tower the entire place exploded.
Theodore: If Zero is the person I see him as he’ll probably target Hell Tower next.
Worker: How can you be so sure?
Theodore: It seems like Zero is planning to destroy every opposing faction that could fracture his plan.
Worker: So what do we do next?
Theodore: We wait for him to challenge the WBBA. He’ll logically do this after destroying Hell Tower.
The worker leaves with Theodore being alone.
Theodore: This is a interesting game of chess we’re in huh Zero.
Theodore looks at his chess board which mimics Lelouch’s chess board with three black pawns moved forward once. Theodore then grabs a white pawn and moves it forward twice.
Theodore: Zero and me have many similarities it seems. Almost like he’s blood. Though that is impossible. My son is dead.
GenesisBlader UnseenBurst LegendJustice sorry for the late chapter I had school and I also wanted to make this chapter good
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