Discontinued Fan-Fic - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 16, 2021
It's a Sparking AU.(And my second fan-fic). Hearing about the Sparking Beys, Pierce Kasuga vows to destroy every bey in existence and creates his own Sparking bey, Azure Poseidon.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Whereabouts of Light and Darkness - GenesisBlader - Jul. 16, 2021
(Jul. 16, 2021 8:04 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: It's a Sparking AU.(And my second fan-fic). Hearing about the Sparking Beys, Pierce Kasuga vows to destroy every bey in existence and creates his own Sparking bey, Azure Poseidon.
lol nice, looking forward to it
RE: Beyblade Burst: Whereabouts of Light and Darkness - UnseenBurst - Jul. 16, 2021
(Jul. 16, 2021 8:04 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: It's a Sparking AU.(And my second fan-fic). Hearing about the Sparking Beys, Pierce Kasuga vows to destroy every bey in existence and creates his own Sparking bey, Azure Poseidon.
Poseidon sounds familiar.. Anyways I'll be following!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Whereabouts of Light and Darkness - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 16, 2021
Thanks, both you!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Whereabouts of Light and Darkness - Lucha Burst - Jul. 16, 2021
Will be following
RE: Beyblade Burst: Whereabouts of Light and Darkness - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 17, 2021
I will post chapter 1 on sunday
RE: Beyblade Burst: Whereabouts of Light and Darkness - Demon Belial - Jul. 17, 2021
The name is catchy, I'll follow
Anti-hero Protagonist?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Whereabouts of Light and Darkness - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 17, 2021
Yeah.
And the antagonist will be anti-villain XD
RE: Beyblade Burst: Whereabouts of Light and Darkness - Demon Belial - Jul. 17, 2021
(Jul. 17, 2021 12:02 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Yeah.
And the antagonist will be anti-villain XD
I see...
RE: Beyblade Burst: Whereabouts of Light and Darkness - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 17, 2021
Main Character
Name: Pierce Kasuga(Protagonist)
Age: 14
Beyblade: Azure Poseidon 00Bump Ultimate Reboot 4A(Attack Type)
Personality: Pierce is very arrogant and extremely jealous of Valt Aoi, his main goal is to destroy Valt's Blading Career but in the process to become stronger he started gaining pleasure by destroying beys. After creating Poseidon, he began to suffer split personality disorder. His one persona is being serious and evilish and in the second he puts excitement and the pursuit of pleasure above all else.
Bey overview:
Sparking Chip: Poseidon (The God of Sea) is a right-spinning sparking chip.
Sparking Ring: Azure, is an attack type ring which features Two Strong Blades shaped as Trident and other two smaller blades shaped as Swords.
Chassis: 4A, A dual-spin Attack Type Single Chassis that raises the attack power with a hard lock and eccentric center of gravity performance with different weights on the left and right sides.
Driver: Ultimate Reboot', Early in battle, the Centrifugal Force of the Beyblade's spin will force two spring loaded tabs outward which will in turn force the round tip out.
Special moves:
Azure shoot: Uses the rails of the stadium to speed up and attack the opponent.
Azure Reboot: Just like Ultimate God Reboot
Trident Strike: Uses it's smaller blades to strike the opponent with full force.
Azure Trident: Uses the longer blades to strike the opponent, this is stronger version of Trident Strike.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Whereabouts of Light and Darkness - Demon Belial - Jul. 17, 2021
Extremely jealous of Valt? And I like the detail to the trident blades
RE: Beyblade Burst: Whereabouts of Light and Darkness - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 17, 2021
I edited the information on the main character.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Whereabouts of Light and Darkness - LegendJustice - Jul. 17, 2021
where have i heard poisiden before... I'll be following!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Whereabouts of Light and Darkness - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 17, 2021
(Jul. 17, 2021 5:54 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: where have i heard poisiden before... I'll be following!
It was a fan-fic, Unseenburst's character had Poseidon, but actually I took inspiration from God of War's Poseidon.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Whereabouts of Light and Darkness - UnseenBurst - Jul. 17, 2021
(Jul. 17, 2021 7:25 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: (Jul. 17, 2021 5:54 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: where have i heard poisiden before... I'll be following!
It was a fan-fic, Unseenburst's character had Poseidon, but actually I took inspiration from God of War's Poseidon.
We knew that, we were just messing with you
RE: Beyblade Burst: Whereabouts of Light and Darkness - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 18, 2021
Proluge is here!
~Somewhere in Japan~
[Pierce was walking around the town and suddenly saw a advertisement of Valt Aoi showing off his Brave Valkyrie]
Valt: Everyone! We are starting a revolution in the Beyblade World! This is a revolutionary class of bey, Sparking Bey!
Pierce: Revolutionary.... Huh?
[Pierce walks way and began to think]
Pierce: *The real revolution will happen when you're out of the picture Valt Aoi.*
[Pierce pulls out his bey from his pocket(It was Bushin Joker Blitz Friction)]
Pierce: Looks like I don't need you anymore.
[He throws his bey away]
[Pierce reached to his hideout and began to make a Sparking Bey]
[His underling reached him]
Dan: B- boss... Are you makin-
[Pierce stares at him]
Pierce: It doesn't concern you.
Dan: O-okay!
[Pierce looked at the molten metal and began to think]
Pierce: *My Bey is gonna replace Valkyrie.... So it will be blue!*
[He began to work on his bey and starts making the ring]
Pierce: *Valkyrie has three blades, mine will have 4, I'm gonna destroy Valkyrie for good!*
~After a while~
[Pierce's bey was ready, he grabs it]
Pierce: Dan
Dan: Yes?
Pierce: From now on you're in charge of Venom Bladers.
Dan: What?
Pierce: I'm going for a trip with Poseidon.
[He shows his bey to him]
Dan: Poseidon...?
[But suddenly Pierce's eyes changed from purple to red and his tone changed too]
Pierce: So... Dan! Take care of your underlings, I'm off! [He began to laugh insanely]
Dan: Wh- what's wrong with him?
[Pierce body language changed and he began to swing his arms rapidly while he was walking way from his hideout]
[To Be Continued]
Summary of first chapter:
"Whoever comes in my way shall be perished!" Pierce Kasuga threatens Rantaro, But Rantaro challenges Pierce for a bey-battle, but discovers a disturbing aura from his bey.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Whereabouts of Light and Darkness - Demon Belial - Jul. 18, 2021
Man the mc has two personalities? Cool
RE: Beyblade Burst: Whereabouts of Light and Darkness - LegendJustice - Jul. 18, 2021
This is nice I think he is a little obbsed with valt tho...
RE: Beyblade Burst: Whereabouts of Light and Darkness - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 18, 2021
(Jul. 18, 2021 6:14 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: This is nice I think he is a little obbsed with valt tho...
Yeah he's jealous of Valt
RE: Beyblade Burst: Whereabouts of Light and Darkness - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 21, 2021
I'll post chapter 1 Today
RE: Beyblade Burst: Whereabouts of Light and Darkness - GenesisBlader - Jul. 21, 2021
(Jul. 21, 2021 1:34 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: I'll post chapter 1 Today
nice looking forward to it man
RE: Beyblade Burst: Whereabouts of Light and Darkness - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 21, 2021
Chapter 1 is here!
Chapter 1: Devil's Trident! Azure Poseidon!
~At the National Training Center~
[Rantaro and Sisco were Training]
Rantaro: Get to the center, Ragnaruk!
Sisco: The center's reserved for Satan!
[Ragnaruk and Satan clashes with each other both got knocked out of the stadium at the same time]
Sisco: Looks like you've got a lil bit stronger.
Rantaro: It should be me to say that.
[Suddenly someone kicks the door open]
Rantaro: Hey you're not allowed here! Only bladers chosen by WBBA are allowed to train here.
Pierce: WHERE IS VALT AOI!! [He shouts very loudly]
[Pierce's eyes were purple]
Sisco: Valt's not here and you should not be here too.
Pierce: Then tell me where he is.
Rantaro: Are you ignoring me?!
Pierce: Just tell me where he is and I'll go.
Rantaro: So you wanna know where is Valt so badly? Then battle me and I'll tell you.
Pierce: Heh, If you come in my way then your bey will be perished! [Pierce shows his bey to Rantaro]
[Poseidon begins to emit black aura]
Rantaro: A sparking bey huh? And that aura.... it's disturbing...
Pierce: So you ready for battle?
Sisco: You sure to battle this beginner?
Pierce: Say whatever you want. I don't even wanna battle weaklings like both of you.
Sisco: How dar-
Rantaro: Enough, Ragnaruk is going to shred your bey into pieces!
Sisco: First Battle! Ready, Set!
Rantaro/Pierce: Three.... Two... One..! Go Shoot!!
[Rantaro did a Sparking Launch but Pierce couldn't pull it off]
[Ragnaruk and Poseidon lands on the stadium perfectly]
Rantaro: Heh, You cannot even do a Sparking launch and you dare to challenge Ragnaruk?
Sisco: He was beginner, I told you earlier.
Pierce: Poseidon! go destroy Ragnaruk into pieces!
Rataro: Ragnaruk! Dodge it and take the center!
[Ragnaruk dodges Poseidon's attack and takes the center]
Rantaro: Time to finish this, Glide Tornado!!
[Ragnaruk's wing begins to create a tornado and Poseidon succumbs into it and got knocked out of the stadium]
Sisco: Glide Ragnaruk, Over finish! Glide Ragnaruk earns one point!
Rantaro: I knew it. You were only good in trash-talk. *Laughs*
[Pierce's eyes turns red and his tone changes too]
Pierce: Now I'm really feelin' it! [He gets overjoyed and jumps]
Rantaro/Sisco: Huh?
Pierce: Looks like Ragnaruk is worthyyyy for beinnng destroyed by Posiedon!
Rantaro: Wh-what's wrong with him? It feels he's completely a different person.
Sisco: Whatever... Second Battle! Ready, Set!
Rantaro: 3! 2! 1!
Pierce/Rantaro: Go Shoot!
[Both of them pulls off Sparking Launch]
Rantaro: Ragnaruk! Take the center!
Pierce: As If I'll let yooou!
[Poseidon lands a barrage of attacks on Ragnaruk]
Rantaro: [Breaks his lolipop with his teeths and his aura flares up] Ragnaruk!
[Ragnaruk appears from it's blazing aura]
Rantaro: Glide Tornado!!
Pierce: Poseidon, Azure Reeebot!!
[Poseidon breaks through the tornado and sends Ragnaruk flying]
Pierce: What's the matter? Ki-Ya-Ma?
Rantaro: Stop mocking me! It's not over yet!
[Pierce's aura flares up]
Pierce: Yeah it's not over yet....
[Poseidon turns black and it's avatar appears from it's blazing dark aura]
Pierce: Trident Striiiike!!
[Posiedon hits Ragnaruk's sparking chip and bursts it]
Rantaro: What The!!
[Ragnaruk's layer breaks into small pieces]
[Sisco got shocked and looks at Pierce]
Pierce: [Laughs maniacally]
Sisco: This guy's a riot....
[To Be Continued].
This chapter is short (But the 2nd one will be longer)
RE: Beyblade Burst: Whereabouts of Light and Darkness - GenesisBlader - Jul. 21, 2021
(Jul. 21, 2021 3:01 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Chapter 1 is here!
Chapter 1: Devil's Trident! Azure Poseidon!
~At the National Training Center~
[Rantaro and Sisco were Training]
Rantaro: Get to the center, Ragnaruk!
Sisco: The center's reserved for Satan!
[Ragnaruk and Satan clashes with each other both got knocked out of the stadium at the same time]
Sisco: Looks like you've got a lil bit stronger.
Rantaro: It should be me to say that.
[Suddenly someone kicks the door open]
Rantaro: Hey you're not allowed here! Only bladers chosen by WBBA are allowed to train here.
Pierce: WHERE IS VALT AOI!! [He shouts very loudly]
[Pierce's eyes were purple]
Sisco: Valt's not here and you should not be here too.
Pierce: Then tell me where he is.
Rantaro: Are you ignoring me?!
Pierce: Just tell me where he is and I'll go.
Rantaro: So you wanna know where is Valt so badly? Then battle me and I'll tell you.
Pierce: Heh, If you come in my way then your bey will be perished! [Pierce shows his bey to Rantaro]
[Poseidon begins to emit black aura]
Rantaro: A sparking bey huh? And that aura.... it's disturbing...
Pierce: So you ready for battle?
Sisco: You sure to battle this beginner?
Pierce: Say whatever you want. I don't even wanna battle weaklings like both of you.
Sisco: How dar-
Rantaro: Enough, Ragnaruk is going to shred your bey into pieces!
Sisco: First Battle! Ready, Set!
Rantaro/Pierce: Three.... Two... One..! Go Shoot!!
[Rantaro did a Sparking Launch but Pierce couldn't pull it off]
[Ragnaruk and Poseidon lands on the stadium perfectly]
Rantaro: Heh, You cannot even do a Sparking launch and you dare to challenge Ragnaruk?
Sisco: He was beginner, I told you earlier.
Pierce: Poseidon! go destroy Ragnaruk into pieces!
Rataro: Ragnaruk! Dodge it and take the center!
[Ragnaruk dodges Poseidon's attack and takes the center]
Rantaro: Time to finish this, Glide Tornado!!
[Ragnaruk's wing begins to create a tornado and Poseidon succumbs into it and got knocked out of the stadium]
Sisco: Glide Ragnaruk, Over finish! Glide Ragnaruk earns one point!
Rantaro: I knew it. You were only good in trash-talk. *Laughs*
[Pierce's eyes turns red and his tone changes too]
Pierce: Now I'm really feelin' it! [He gets overjoyed and jumps]
Rantaro/Sisco: Huh?
Pierce: Looks like Ragnaruk is worthyyyy for beinnng destroyed by Posiedon!
Rantaro: Wh-what's wrong with him? It feels he's completely a different person.
Sisco: Whatever... Second Battle! Ready, Set!
Rantaro: 3! 2! 1!
Pierce/Rantaro: Go Shoot!
[Both of them pulls off Sparking Launch]
Rantaro: Ragnaruk! Take the center!
Pierce: As If I'll let yooou!
[Poseidon lands a barrage of attacks on Ragnaruk]
Rantaro: [Breaks his lolipop with his teeths and his aura flares up] Ragnaruk!
[Ragnaruk appears from it's blazing aura]
Rantaro: Glide Tornado!!
Pierce: Poseidon, Azure Reeebot!!
[Poseidon breaks through the tornado and sends Ragnaruk flying]
Pierce: What's the matter? Ki-Ya-Ma?
Rantaro: Stop mocking me! It's not over yet!
[Pierce's aura flares up]
Pierce: Yeah it's not over yet....
[Poseidon turns black and it's avatar appears from it's blazing dark aura]
Pierce: Trident Striiiike!!
[Posiedon hits Ragnaruk's sparking chip and bursts it]
Rantaro: What The!!
[Ragnaruk's layer breaks into small pieces]
[Sisco got shocked and looks at Pierce]
Pierce: [Laughs maniacally]
Sisco: This guy's a riot....
[To Be Continued].
This chapter is short (But the 2nd one will be longer) nice chapter! the grammar wasn't the best tho and i also didnt like how pierce shredded a legend's bey at episode 1, but nice job anyway i'm looking forward to future episodes!
i also like the name of episode 1 a lot
RE: Beyblade Burst: Whereabouts of Light and Darkness - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 21, 2021
(Jul. 21, 2021 3:08 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jul. 21, 2021 3:01 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Chapter 1 is here!
Chapter 1: Devil's Trident! Azure Poseidon!
~At the National Training Center~
[Rantaro and Sisco were Training]
Rantaro: Get to the center, Ragnaruk!
Sisco: The center's reserved for Satan!
[Ragnaruk and Satan clashes with each other both got knocked out of the stadium at the same time]
Sisco: Looks like you've got a lil bit stronger.
Rantaro: It should be me to say that.
[Suddenly someone kicks the door open]
Rantaro: Hey you're not allowed here! Only bladers chosen by WBBA are allowed to train here.
Pierce: WHERE IS VALT AOI!! [He shouts very loudly]
[Pierce's eyes were purple]
Sisco: Valt's not here and you should not be here too.
Pierce: Then tell me where he is.
Rantaro: Are you ignoring me?!
Pierce: Just tell me where he is and I'll go.
Rantaro: So you wanna know where is Valt so badly? Then battle me and I'll tell you.
Pierce: Heh, If you come in my way then your bey will be perished! [Pierce shows his bey to Rantaro]
[Poseidon begins to emit black aura]
Rantaro: A sparking bey huh? And that aura.... it's disturbing...
Pierce: So you ready for battle?
Sisco: You sure to battle this beginner?
Pierce: Say whatever you want. I don't even wanna battle weaklings like both of you.
Sisco: How dar-
Rantaro: Enough, Ragnaruk is going to shred your bey into pieces!
Sisco: First Battle! Ready, Set!
Rantaro/Pierce: Three.... Two... One..! Go Shoot!!
[Rantaro did a Sparking Launch but Pierce couldn't pull it off]
[Ragnaruk and Poseidon lands on the stadium perfectly]
Rantaro: Heh, You cannot even do a Sparking launch and you dare to challenge Ragnaruk?
Sisco: He was beginner, I told you earlier.
Pierce: Poseidon! go destroy Ragnaruk into pieces!
Rataro: Ragnaruk! Dodge it and take the center!
[Ragnaruk dodges Poseidon's attack and takes the center]
Rantaro: Time to finish this, Glide Tornado!!
[Ragnaruk's wing begins to create a tornado and Poseidon succumbs into it and got knocked out of the stadium]
Sisco: Glide Ragnaruk, Over finish! Glide Ragnaruk earns one point!
Rantaro: I knew it. You were only good in trash-talk. *Laughs*
[Pierce's eyes turns red and his tone changes too]
Pierce: Now I'm really feelin' it! [He gets overjoyed and jumps]
Rantaro/Sisco: Huh?
Pierce: Looks like Ragnaruk is worthyyyy for beinnng destroyed by Posiedon!
Rantaro: Wh-what's wrong with him? It feels he's completely a different person.
Sisco: Whatever... Second Battle! Ready, Set!
Rantaro: 3! 2! 1!
Pierce/Rantaro: Go Shoot!
[Both of them pulls off Sparking Launch]
Rantaro: Ragnaruk! Take the center!
Pierce: As If I'll let yooou!
[Poseidon lands a barrage of attacks on Ragnaruk]
Rantaro: [Breaks his lolipop with his teeths and his aura flares up] Ragnaruk!
[Ragnaruk appears from it's blazing aura]
Rantaro: Glide Tornado!!
Pierce: Poseidon, Azure Reeebot!!
[Poseidon breaks through the tornado and sends Ragnaruk flying]
Pierce: What's the matter? Ki-Ya-Ma?
Rantaro: Stop mocking me! It's not over yet!
[Pierce's aura flares up]
Pierce: Yeah it's not over yet....
[Poseidon turns black and it's avatar appears from it's blazing dark aura]
Pierce: Trident Striiiike!!
[Posiedon hits Ragnaruk's sparking chip and bursts it]
Rantaro: What The!!
[Ragnaruk's layer breaks into small pieces]
[Sisco got shocked and looks at Pierce]
Pierce: [Laughs maniacally]
Sisco: This guy's a riot....
[To Be Continued].
This chapter is short (But the 2nd one will be longer) nice chapter! the grammar wasn't the best tho and i also didnt like how pierce shredded a legend's bey at episode 1, but nice job anyway i'm looking forward to future episodes!
i also like the name of episode 1 a lot
Yeah I know, this chapter was rushed. That's why grammer was a little bit bad.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Whereabouts of Light and Darkness - GenesisBlader - Jul. 21, 2021
(Jul. 21, 2021 3:12 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: (Jul. 21, 2021 3:08 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: nice chapter! the grammar wasn't the best tho and i also didnt like how pierce shredded a legend's bey at episode 1, but nice job anyway i'm looking forward to future episodes!
i also like the name of episode 1 a lot
Yeah I know, this chapter was rushed. That's why grammer was a little bit bad.
i feel you dawg, sometimes i rush my chapters aswell
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