RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 05, 2021
I'm updating my schedule,
I will release Chapter 14 tommorow (And take two days for one chapter. And starting a new fic on 8 August, Beyblade Burst Kiwami, and the system is going to be a fusion of GT and DB (Kiwami Core, Kiwami Weight (Just like GT Weight), Kiwami Armor (Just like DB armor), Kiwami Blade, Forge Disk (Which supports Lower and Upper modes) and driver.
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - GenesisBlader - Aug. 05, 2021
(Aug. 05, 2021 1:09 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: I'm updating my schedule,
I will release Chapter 14 tommorow (And take two days for one chapter. And starting a new fic on 8 August, Beyblade Burst Kiwami, and the system is going to be a fusion of GT and DB (Kiwami Core, Kiwami Weight (Just like GT Weight), Kiwami Armor (Just like DB armor), Kiwami Blade, Forge Disk (Which supports Lower and Upper modes) and driver.
nice! i cant wait lol
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - LegendJustice - Aug. 05, 2021
(Aug. 05, 2021 1:09 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: I'm updating my schedule,
I will release Chapter 14 tommorow (And take two days for one chapter. And starting a new fic on 8 August, Beyblade Burst Kiwami, and the system is going to be a fusion of GT and DB (Kiwami Core, Kiwami Weight (Just like GT Weight), Kiwami Armor (Just like DB armor), Kiwami Blade, Forge Disk (Which supports Lower and Upper modes) and driver.
Nice! Take your time!
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 06, 2021
Chapter 14 is finally here,
Chapter 14: Holy Sword! Seraph Valtryek!!
Hanami: Ok!! Boys and Girls! The Ranking battle between Drake Kazeryu and Xavier Bogard is going way more intense!!
(The crowd goes wild)
(The Board shows that Drake has one point and Xavier has 0 points)
Ref: Second Battle!
Xavier: You got lucky that time, but (Shows Breaker Xcalius to Drake) the real hero's going to win!
Drake: You're right! (Takes his launching stance) but the I'm the real hero!
Ref: Ready, Set!!
Drake/Xhan: 3! 2! 1! Let it Rip!!
(Dragoon lands on the stadium and began to attack Xcalius ferociously)
Xavier: (Everythings going as planned...)
(Xcalius's disc shifts twice and the five sword points aligns together)
Xavier (Unleashed his aura): Xcalius!!
(Xcalius appears from the blazing aura, and dodges from Dragoon's attacks)
Xavier: Blow him away!
(Xcalibur knocks Dragoon into the wall)
Drake (Smiles): I know what're up to.
Xavier: Saber Wall!!
(Xcalius then delievers a heavy blow and pins Dragoon between itself and the wall, which sends Dragoon flying)
Drake (Unleashes his aura): Let's finish this!
(Dragoon shines with a bright aura)
Drake: Diving Wind Crash!!
(Dragoon crashes at Xcalius with full force which creates a wind vortex and instantly bursts Xcaluis, as Xcaluis bursts, the vortex stopped)
Ref: Viking Dragoon! Burst Finish! With the score of 3-0, Drake Kazeryu is the winner!!
Hanami: It's finished! Drake has been ranked 25th in world!! What can more can expect than the new captain of BC Sol!
Xavier (While looking at Drake): (Unbelievable... 1 week before, his rank was 100....)
(Aiden and Ben were watching the match from Infern Corp.)
Aiden (Turns off the tv): That kid... really is interesting...
Ben (Scrolls his phone and checks his rank): I'm ranked #30....
Aiden: Bladers around the globe are getting stronger.... Shu Kurenai was #5, but now he is #2 Blader in the World. It's rumoured that his skills surpasses that of Aiger's.
(Ben looks at Aiden)
Ben: Something else is rumoured too...
Aiden: What?
Ben: A Blader who keeps destroying beys and has been elevated to #12.
Aiden: Yeah know.... I cannot tolerate weaklings holding on such bigger ranks. Weaklings must be perished. And for me everyone is weakling including you.
(Aiden's eyes turns purple and got covered by corrupted purple aura)
Ben (Looks at Aiden shockingly): Aiden... You're... I'm going out.... for a while.
Aiden : (Laughs Insanely) What's wrong? Did I spooked you?
(Ben leaves)
~Outside of the Beyblade Arena~
Drake: It was a great battle Xavier!
Xavier: Yeah but next time I'm gonna get ya good! Farewell for now.
Drake: Yeah, we'll definetly battle again!
(Xavier leaves)
???: Drake.
Drake (Turns around): Huh? Ben? What are you doing here?
Ben: I wanted to talk to you. It's about Aiden.
Drake: Yeah sure.
(After a While)
Drake: He's going insane?
Ben: Yeah, he's acting strange lately...
Drake: So what do you want me to do?
Ben: I want you to battle him again!
Drake: Battle him again?
Ben: Yeah.
Drake: But how can I trust you? I mean you're his brother and it feels like a trap.
Ben (Looked at him seriously): So let me ask you, do you trust me?
(Drake and Ben stared at each other for 10 seconds)
Drake: Nope.
Ben: What took you so long to answer?
Drake: You know, even if you were telling the truth, I wouldn't help you.
Ben: But why? You're the captain of the strongest team in the world!
Drake (Turns around): I don't care about your personal issues, besides you should be the one to stop him not me.
(Drake starts to walk away)
Ben (Crosses his arms): (I don't know why Valt gave his captaincy to this brat)
~Somewhere in Japan~
Valt: So this is your home huh?
Haruka: Yeah (Points at the lab) Drake created his bey on dad's lab.
Valt: Cool! I wonder if I can.... (Holds Valtryek on his hand).
(Blake gets out from his lab)
Blake: Oh you're back. Where's Drake?
Haruka: He's still in Spain...
Blake (Smiles): I should've fiured that.
Valt: So you're Drake's dad? I've heard about you!
Blake: Oh and you must be Valt Aoi.
(Valt shows Valtryek to Blake, Valtryek's eyes were glowing)
Valt: Valtryek and I wanna become World Champion once again! So please help me to evolve it!
(Blake looks closely at Valt's eyes, his eyes were shining just like Valtryek)
Blake: Fine, come in.
Valt (Follows him): Alright!
(They both entered the lab and began using the computer to project Valt's new Bey)
Blake: Valtryek has 3 wing shaped blades for attacks.... but if I add something more...
(Valtryek's Spring Gimmick appears on the screen)
Valt (Witnesses the bound layer): That's awesome....
(Both of them began working on the layer)
Valt: Valtryek... you are going to be more stronger than you were ever before!
(Suddenly the layer shines)
Valt (his eyes begins shinning too): Huh?
(And suddenly Valt found himself in a white void, Valtryek was in front of him)
Valt: It's you.... Valtryek!
Valtryek: I can't wait to show you my new powers, Valt!
Valt: I can't wait too!
(Suddenly Blake tried to walk Valt up)
Blake (Shakes Valt): Come on wake up! Your bey is ready.
Valt (Realising that he was dreamin): It was a dream?
(Valt looks at his bey and picks it up while smiling)
Valt (While holding Valtreyk): It's finsihed huh...
Blake: So what's gonna be it's name?
Valt (Looks at Valtryek): Partner.... (Valtryek responds by shinning)
Valt: Seraph.... It's Seraph Valtryek!
Blake: Nice!
(Valt gets out of the lab)
Valt: Thank you, Sir! I'm gonna shook the Beyblade world with my partner!
Blake (Nods): But be careful, my son's dream is to surpass you.
Valt (Smiles): Alright then, Bye and Thanks once again!
~At Inferno Corp.~
(Ben returns to the corp disappointed and then he saw someone standing front of him)
Ben: It's you...
Yuito: Yeah it's me!
Ben: Do you want something?
Yuito (Shows his bey to Ben): Take a look at Soar Yinglong!
Ben (Looks at his bey): Soar.... Yinglong?
[To Be Continued]
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Demon Belial - Aug. 06, 2021
(Aug. 06, 2021 1:04 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Chapter 14 is finally here,
Chapter 14: Holy Sword! Seraph Valtryek!!
Hanami: Ok!! Boys and Girls! The Ranking battle between Drake Kazeryu and Xavier Bogard is going way more intense!!
(The crowd goes wild)
(The Board shows that Drake has one point and Xavier has 0 points)
Ref: Second Battle!
Xavier: You got lucky that time, but (Shows Breaker Xcalius to Drake) the real hero's going to win!
Drake: You're right! (Takes his launching stance) but the I'm the real hero!
Ref: Ready, Set!!
Drake/Xhan: 3! 2! 1! Let it Rip!!
(Dragoon lands on the stadium and began to attack Xcalius ferociously)
Xavier: (Everythings going as planned...)
(Xcalius's disc shifts twice and the five sword points aligns together)
Xavier (Unleashed his aura): Xcalius!!
(Xcalius appears from the blazing aura, and dodges from Dragoon's attacks)
Xavier: Blow him away!
(Xcalibur knocks Dragoon into the wall)
Drake (Smiles): I know what're up to.
Xavier: Saber Wall!!
(Xcalius then delievers a heavy blow and pins Dragoon between itself and the wall, which sends Dragoon flying)
Drake (Unleashes his aura): Let's finish this!
(Dragoon shines with a bright aura)
Drake: Diving Wind Crash!!
(Dragoon crashes at Xcalius with full force which creates a wind vortex and instantly bursts Xcaluis, as Xcaluis bursts, the vortex stopped)
Ref: Viking Dragoon! Burst Finish! With the score of 3-0, Drake Kazeryu is the winner!!
Hanami: It's finished! Drake has been ranked 25th in world!! What can more can expect than the new captain of BC Sol!
Xavier (While looking at Drake): (Unbelievable... 1 week before, his rank was 100....)
(Aiden and Ben were watching the match from Infern Corp.)
Aiden (Turns off the tv): That kid... really is interesting...
Ben (Scrolls his phone and checks his rank): I'm ranked #30....
Aiden: Bladers around the globe are getting stronger.... Shu Kurenai was #5, but now he is #2 Blader in the World. It's rumoured that his skills surpasses that of Aiger's.
(Ben looks at Aiden)
Ben: Something else is rumoured too...
Aiden: What?
Ben: A Blader who keeps destroying beys and has been elevated to #12.
Aiden: Yeah know.... I cannot tolerate weaklings holding on such bigger ranks. Weaklings must be perished. And for me everyone is weakling including you.
(Aiden's eyes turns purple and got covered by corrupted purple aura)
Ben (Looks at Aiden shockingly): Aiden... You're... I'm going out.... for a while.
Aiden : (Laughs Insanely) What's wrong? Did I spooked you?
(Ben leaves)
~Outside of the Beyblade Arena~
Drake: It was a great battle Xavier!
Xavier: Yeah but next time I'm gonna get ya good! Farewell for now.
Drake: Yeah, we'll definetly battle again!
(Xavier leaves)
???: Drake.
Drake (Turns around): Huh? Ben? What are you doing here?
Ben: I wanted to talk to you. It's about Aiden.
Drake: Yeah sure.
(After a While)
Drake: He's going insane?
Ben: Yeah, he's acting strange lately...
Drake: So what do you want me to do?
Ben: I want you to battle him again!
Drake: Battle him again?
Ben: Yeah.
Drake: But how can I trust you? I mean you're his brother and it feels like a trap.
Ben (Looked at him seriously): So let me ask you, do you trust me?
(Drake and Ben stared at each other for 10 seconds)
Drake: Nope.
Ben: What took you so long to answer?
Drake: You know, even if you were telling the truth, I wouldn't help you.
Ben: But why? You're the captain of the strongest team in the world!
Drake (Turns around): I don't care about your personal issues, besides you should be the one to stop him not me.
(Drake starts to walk away)
Ben (Crosses his arms): (I don't know why Valt gave his captaincy to this brat)
~Somewhere in Japan~
Valt: So this is your home huh?
Haruka: Yeah (Points at the lab) Drake created his bey on dad's lab.
Valt: Cool! I wonder if I can.... (Holds Valtryek on his hand).
(Blake gets out from his lab)
Blake: Oh you're back. Where's Drake?
Haruka: He's still in Spain...
Blake (Smiles): I should've fiured that.
Valt: So you're Drake's dad? I've heard about you!
Blake: Oh and you must be Valt Aoi.
(Valt shows Valtryek to Blake, Valtryek's eyes were glowing)
Valt: Valtryek and I wanna become World Champion once again! So please help me to evolve it!
(Blake looks closely at Valt's eyes, his eyes were shining just like Valtryek)
Blake: Fine, come in.
Valt (Follows him): Alright!
(They both entered the lab and began using the computer to project Valt's new Bey)
Blake: Valtryek has 3 wing shaped blades for attacks.... but if I add something more...
(Valtryek's Spring Gimmick appears on the screen)
Valt (Witnesses the bound layer): That's awesome....
(Both of them began working on the layer)
Valt: Valtryek... you are going to be more stronger than you were ever before!
(Suddenly the layer shines)
Valt (his eyes begins shinning too): Huh?
(And suddenly Valt found himself in a white void, Valtryek was in front of him)
Valt: It's you.... Valtryek!
Valtryek: I can't wait to show you my new powers, Valt!
Valt: I can't wait too!
(Suddenly Blake tried to walk Valt up)
Blake (Shakes Valt): Come on wake up! Your bey is ready.
Valt (Realising that he was dreamin): It was a dream?
(Valt looks at his bey and picks it up while smiling)
Valt (While holding Valtreyk): It's finsihed huh...
Blake: So what's gonna be it's name?
Valt (Looks at Valtryek): Partner.... (Valtryek responds by shinning)
Valt: Seraph.... It's Seraph Valtryek!
Blake: Nice!
(Valt gets out of the lab)
Valt: Thank you, Sir! I'm gonna shook the Beyblade world with my partner!
Blake (Nods): But be careful, my son's dream is to surpass you.
Valt (Smiles): Alright then, Bye and Thanks once again!
~At Inferno Corp.~
(Ben returns to the corp disappointed and then he saw someone standing front of him)
Ben: It's you...
Yuito: Yeah it's me!
Ben: Do you want something?
Yuito (Shows his bey to Ben): Take a look at Soar Yinglong!
Ben (Looks at his bey): Soar.... Yinglong?
[To Be Continued]
I was expecting a battle.... Anyways nice chapter.
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - GenesisBlader - Aug. 06, 2021
nice chapter!!
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Hollowmind13 - Aug. 06, 2021
I think Ben is going to join Drake's side.
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 06, 2021
I guess I'm gonna take a break from VS, a one-week break I guess (And whenever I release Chapter 15 it will have so many details).
Chapter 15's summary,
The Dragon of Arakawa, Yinglong has been awakened! Baldur struggles defling Yinglong's attack anf match it's defence. Ben thinks that Yinglomg surpasses Dragoon and Baldur on terms of Attack and Defence. Meanwhile Valt heads towards Beigoma Academy and a challenge is waiting for Drake at BC Sol.
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Demon Belial - Aug. 06, 2021
(Aug. 06, 2021 3:15 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: I guess I'm gonna take a break from VS, a one-week break I guess (And whenever I release Chapter 15 it will have so many details).
Chapter 15's summary,
The Dragon of Arakawa, Yinglong has been awakened! Baldur struggles defling Yinglong's attack anf match it's defence. Ben thinks that Yinglomg surpasses Dragoon and Baldur on terms of Attack and Defence. Meanwhile Valt heads towards Beigoma Academy and a challenge is waiting for Drake at BC Sol.
It means you're sticking with Kiwami for a while, nice.
Plus I'm waiting to see Seraph in actuon.
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 10, 2021
So which is your fav character so far (non-canon ones)
Drake
Ben
Aiden
Yuito(I shouldn't had included him lol)
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - GenesisBlader - Aug. 10, 2021
(Aug. 10, 2021 4:05 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: So which is your fav character so far (non-canon ones)
Drake
Ben
Aiden
Yuito(I shouldn't had included him lol)
drake by far
he's too funny to not be my fav character
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 10, 2021
Reign Achilles (Overview)
VS Chip: Achillies, The Warrior who weilds Sword and Shield.
VS Blade: Reign (It looks like the picture I posted) and the left side can be fliped to have the attack mode.
VS Core: Turbo, It has the same Turbo Awakening gimmick which adds burst stoppers automatically when launched. (But can be pushed through so they are more like Burst resistor).
Disk: Wield, It's flippable(Like S Gear) but has fixed sword like blade and free spinning Shield blade.
VS Weight: Sword/Shield, two weights exclusively for achilles. (Just like Sword and Shield blade from Infinite Achillies).
Driver: Augment, it has 4 modes, which are high and lower attack mode. High and low defence mode. (I guess stamina is not Achilles's cup of tea so I didn't added it)
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Hollowmind13 - Aug. 10, 2021
(Aug. 10, 2021 4:28 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Reign Achilles (Overview)
VS Chip: Achillies, The Warrior who weilds Sword and Shield.
VS Core: Turbo, It has the same Turbo Awakening gimmick which adds burst stoppers automatically when launched. (But can be pushed through so they are more like Burst resistor).
Disk: Wield, It's flippable(Like S Gear) but has fixed sword like blade and free spinning Shield blade.
VS Weight: Sword/Shield, two weights exclusively for achilles. (Just like Sword and Shield blade from Infinite Achillies).
Driver: Augment, it has 4 modes, which are high and lower attack mode. High and low defence mode. (I guess stamina is not Achilles's cup of tea so I didn't added it) It seems like you forgot to add Reign
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 10, 2021
(Aug. 10, 2021 4:31 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Aug. 10, 2021 4:28 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Reign Achilles (Overview)
VS Chip: Achillies, The Warrior who weilds Sword and Shield.
VS Core: Turbo, It has the same Turbo Awakening gimmick which adds burst stoppers automatically when launched. (But can be pushed through so they are more like Burst resistor).
Disk: Wield, It's flippable(Like S Gear) but has fixed sword like blade and free spinning Shield blade.
VS Weight: Sword/Shield, two weights exclusively for achilles. (Just like Sword and Shield blade from Infinite Achillies).
Driver: Augment, it has 4 modes, which are high and lower attack mode. High and low defence mode. (I guess stamina is not Achilles's cup of tea so I didn't added it) It seems like you forgot to add Reign
argh... my bad lol
I edited it.
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 13, 2021
I'm gonna release Chapter 15 very soon!
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 23, 2021
Chapter 15:
Chapter 15: The Dragon Of Arakawa!
Yuito (while holding Yinglong): That's right.... (he smirks) I'm here for revenge.
Ben (crosses his arms): Revenge? Oh right.
~Flashback Starts~
Ben: Obstruct Wall!!
(Yuito's bey got destroyed in pieces)
~Flashback Ends~
Ben: That wasn't intentional, but if you think you can do something like that to Baldur... (He shows Baldur to him) you're wrong!
Yuito (smiles): Don't worry, I didn't planned to destroy your bey... a burst is enough to humiliate you...
Ben (Reaches the stadium and takes his shoot stance): Let's find out who'll get humiliated.
"Three!" (Yuito grabs his launcher and bends his left leg)
"Two!" (Yuito's eyes turns gold as he said two)
"One"! (He jumps sky-high)
"Go.... Shoot!!" (He did a backflip while saying go and Launches as soon as he lands on the ground on the call of Shoot)
(Yinglong takes the center and Baldur spins around the slopes of the stadium)
Yuito: Looks like Yinglong took the center before Baldur could even try!
Ben (Smiles): You may have taken the center... but...
(Baldur's driver begans to ride the edge of the stadium)
Ben ('s makes a claw like gesture): Lightspeed Shoot!
(Baldur accelarates at the center and rams on Yinglong)
Yuito ('s eyes turns more bright gold): Soar Defence!
(Yinglong's twelve blades lits up and counters Baldur's attack and send it flying)
Yuito (Laughs): That won't work on Yinglong!
Ben (Gasps and looks at Yuito): (He can't be this strong.... why am I struggling against him..!?)
(Baldur's Driver tip touches the wall and heads towards Yinglong)
Ben ('s hand glows and makes a fist): Magic Obstruction!!
(Baldur clashes at Yinglong which creates purple and yellow sparks around the stadium).
Yuito (unleashed his aura): Yinglong!!
(Yinglong appears removing the aura by flapping it's wings and roars)
Yuito (makes a slash gesture, his arm shines gold as he did that): Soar Reversal!!
(Yinglong's avatar uses his claws to strike and sends Baldur flying yet again)
Ben (looks at Baldur): (Gasps)
(Baldur bursts before his eyes)
Yuito: (Smiles broadly)
(Baldur's parts hits the ground)
Ben (looks at Baldur with a depressing look): ....
Yuito: You see... That's Yinglong's power!
(Yuito walks away and reaches the door)
Ben (picks up Baldur and grips it harder): I... can't lag behind like this...
(Baldur shines)
[To Be Continued]
Sorry for extremely short chapter lol, I was out of ideas but the next one will be longer (I guess)
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 24, 2021
I guess I'm gonna reboot VS, gonna re-make the story with a more great plot, (The characters will be the same but the timeline might be different like after Sparking or just a DB AU)
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