RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 03, 2021
I updated my first post (Again)
This is what I added (And I'll add more)
Characters:
1) Drake Kazeryu
"Viking Dragoon is going to be the strongest bey in the World!!"
Appearance: He has black hair and blue eyes. Drake wears a white shirt which has a big letter "D" on it. And a Sky Blue jacket (which a dragon on the back), A black jeans, a belt (which has beyblade logo) and white Shoes.
Height: 138 cm
Personality: He has long green hair and brown eyes. He's very overconfident and strategic type of blader. Once he decides something to do, He gets it done in less time. He has a unbreakable bond with Dragoon, both Drake and Dragoon consider themselves as partners. He thinks Aiger is not worthy to be the World Champion. He is always in sync with Dragoon which helps both of them to unleashe their full potential.
Beyblade: Viking Dragoon .Breeze Instinct Quick' -Wind. (Left-Spin Attack Type).
2) Aiden Sumeragi
"Viking Ares is gonna rule the world of Beyblade!!"
Appearance: He wears a Half-Sleeves Red Shirt, a Grey coat (Which has a fire symbol on the back and and a small fiery dragoon on the front left of his coat), blue jeans, a belt(Which has a big letter "I") and black shoes.
Height: 165 cm
Personality: He's a greedy guy and want to become the emperor of beyblade no matter what. He always fakes his nice self to everybody. He's very jealous of Valt and the other stronger bladers.
Beyblade: Viking Ares .Treble Instinct Destroy -Nullify
3) Ben Sumeragi
"You're looking at the World's Strongest Blader!"
Appearance: His hair is white and eyes are yellow. He wears a Black Shirt with a blue tie, a half sleeves purple jacket (Which has a demon on the back), brown jeans and black shoes.
Height: 162 cm
Personality: Ben is a hard-working Blader who trains more than anyone else. He has a great connection with his bey. He looks down on his opponents (No matter who it is). He developed an interest for Drake, as he was in complete sync with his bey in every battle.
Beyblade: Magic Baldur .Cease 10 Atomic -Obstruct.
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Demon Belial - Aug. 03, 2021
(Aug. 03, 2021 12:15 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Upcoming Chapters (I did some changes)
Chapter 15: The Dragon of Arakawa!
Chapter 16: Thunderstorm! Lightning Jupiter!!
Chapter 17: The Turbo Festival Begins!!
Chapter 18: The Soul Keeper! Meteo Aqen!!
Chapter 19: Twin Dragon Strategy! Beat'em all!!
Chapter 20: Fly Once Again! Redux Phoenix!!
twin dragon? Is it a upgrade for Dragoon? Or a team battle?
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 03, 2021
(Aug. 03, 2021 6:01 PM)Demon Belial Wrote: (Aug. 03, 2021 12:15 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Upcoming Chapters (I did some changes)
Chapter 15: The Dragon of Arakawa!
Chapter 16: Thunderstorm! Lightning Jupiter!!
Chapter 17: The Turbo Festival Begins!!
Chapter 18: The Soul Keeper! Meteo Aqen!!
Chapter 19: Twin Dragon Strategy! Beat'em all!!
Chapter 20: Fly Once Again! Redux Phoenix!!
twin dragon? Is it a upgrade for Dragoon? Or a team battle?
You’ll get to know when I’ll release it.
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - LegendJustice - Aug. 03, 2021
Me likely the name of de episode!
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Hollowmind13 - Aug. 03, 2021
Tag team special move maybe?
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 03, 2021
Lightning Jupiter .Quint Element Pulse -Nebula
It's a right-spinning Defense Type
VS Chip: Jupiter, the lord of thunder.
VS Blade: Lightning, The blade has 4 blades covered with metal in a semi-circular shape to improve the stamina, defence and balance of the bey. The blade has rubber burst stoppers, but the burst stoppers can be clicked through, I mean they won't make it immune to burst but instead increases burst resistance.
VS Core: Quint, The core has 5 huge metal points, 3 on one side and 2 on the other side.
Forge Disc: Element, The disk has a oval shape and has plastic wings on the outer side which pops out when the bey is launched hardly.
Driver: Pulse, a very sharp tip to improve the defense and it has two plastic blades which are free-spining. Whenever the bey gets off-balanced it will increase LAD.
VS Weight: Nebula, If the Bey is hard launched, it will surround the layer with a circular ring (Improved version of 2D), (And when the ring is worn down, it will be awakened. Then it'll be more circular for improved defense and stamina).
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 04, 2021
The Beyblades of Olympus: (A thing I planned for third arc)
Disaster Minokawa (Balance)
Hallow Terra (Attack)
Sol Phoebus (Defense)
Lunar Diana (Stamina)
You can search these names, It's a reference to something.
Update:
1) Jupiter's gimmick, I decided to make it more gimmick-ish,
Lightning Blade: The blade has rubber burst stoppers, but the burst stoppers can be clicked through, I mean they won't make it immune to burst but instead increases burst resistance.
Nebula Weight: So I changed it's gimmick. If the Bey is hard launched, it will surround the layer with a circular ring (Improved version of 2D), (And when the ring is worn down, it will be awakened. Then it'll be more circular for improved defense and stamina).
2) There will be a 1 week time-skip between chapter 13 and 14.
3) Aqen is going to be dual-spin Attack type
4) I removed Red Eye from the tournament.
5) About Chapter 19, It will be a team battle, Drake and Aiden VS Valt and Hyde.
That's all
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Hollowmind13 - Aug. 04, 2021
(Aug. 04, 2021 8:40 AM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: The Beyblades of Olympus: (A thing I planned for third arc)
Disaster Minokawa (Balance)
Hallow Terra (Attack)
Sol Phoebus (Defense)
Lunar Diana (Stamina)
You can search these names, It's a reference to something.
Update:
1) Jupiter's gimmick, I decided to make it more gimmick-ish,
Lightning Blade: The blade has rubber burst stoppers, but the burst stoppers can be clicked through, I mean they won't make it immune to burst but instead increases burst resistance.
Nebula Weight: So I changed it's gimmick. If the Bey is hard launched, it will surround the layer with a circular ring (Improved version of 2D), (And when the ring is worn down, it will be awakened. Then it'll be more circular for improved defense and stamina).
2) There will be a 1 week time-skip between chapter 13 and 14.
3) Aqen is going to be dual-spin Attack type
4) I removed Red Eye from the tournament.
5) About Chapter 19, It will be a team battle, Drake and Aiden VS Valt and Hyde.
That's all You're using roman names... That's smart.
Anyways, for those who will not search:
Terra = Gaia (aka Mother Earth)
Phoebos = Apollo
Diana = Artemis
Minokawa = A big dragon-like bird from philippine legends
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 04, 2021
(Aug. 04, 2021 10:43 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Aug. 04, 2021 8:40 AM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: The Beyblades of Olympus: (A thing I planned for third arc)
Disaster Minokawa (Balance)
Hallow Terra (Attack)
Sol Phoebus (Defense)
Lunar Diana (Stamina)
You can search these names, It's a reference to something.
Update:
1) Jupiter's gimmick, I decided to make it more gimmick-ish,
Lightning Blade: The blade has rubber burst stoppers, but the burst stoppers can be clicked through, I mean they won't make it immune to burst but instead increases burst resistance.
Nebula Weight: So I changed it's gimmick. If the Bey is hard launched, it will surround the layer with a circular ring (Improved version of 2D), (And when the ring is worn down, it will be awakened. Then it'll be more circular for improved defense and stamina).
2) There will be a 1 week time-skip between chapter 13 and 14.
3) Aqen is going to be dual-spin Attack type
4) I removed Red Eye from the tournament.
5) About Chapter 19, It will be a team battle, Drake and Aiden VS Valt and Hyde.
That's all You're using roman names... That's smart.
Anyways, for those who will not search:
Terra = Gaia (aka Mother Earth)
Phoebos = Apollo
Diana = Artemis
Minokawa = A big dragon-like bird from philippine legends
There's a lil bit more
Minokawa lives in outer space which can devour the sun and the moon, and would try to do the same with the earth.
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Demon Belial - Aug. 04, 2021
I can see the plot.... So Aiden will be irrelevant in 3rd arc?
and now Jupiter's a defense type?
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 04, 2021
(Aug. 04, 2021 11:23 AM)Demon Belial Wrote: I can see the plot.... So Aiden will be irrelevant in 3rd arc?
and now Jupiter's a defense type?
Yeah I decided to make it a defense type. And Aiden will be relevant until the end.
As it was a 1 week timeskip, Every blader, except Drake, Ben, Aiden and Yuito will wear different clothes
Valt
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Hollowmind13 - Aug. 04, 2021
(Aug. 04, 2021 11:36 AM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: (Aug. 04, 2021 11:23 AM)Demon Belial Wrote: I can see the plot.... So Aiden will be irrelevant in 3rd arc?
and now Jupiter's a defense type?
Yeah I decided to make it a defense type. And Aiden will be relevant until the end.
As it was a 1 week timeskip, Every blader, except Drake, Ben, Aiden and Yuito will wear different clothes
Valt
Is there going to be Roman version vs Greek version thing? (Zeus vs Jupiter; Artemis vs Diana; etc...)
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 04, 2021
(Aug. 04, 2021 11:42 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Aug. 04, 2021 11:36 AM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Yeah I decided to make it a defense type. And Aiden will be relevant until the end.
As it was a 1 week timeskip, Every blader, except Drake, Ben, Aiden and Yuito will wear different clothes
Valt
Is there going to be Roman version vs Greek version thing? (Zeus vs Jupiter; Artemis vs Diana; etc...)
No that's not going to happen. Taking Zeus in means bringing Zac back (Zeus is Zeutron) And same goes for Artemis.
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Demon Belial - Aug. 04, 2021
(Aug. 04, 2021 11:42 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Aug. 04, 2021 11:36 AM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Yeah I decided to make it a defense type. And Aiden will be relevant until the end.
As it was a 1 week timeskip, Every blader, except Drake, Ben, Aiden and Yuito will wear different clothes
Valt
Is there going to be Roman version vs Greek version thing? (Zeus vs Jupiter; Artemis vs Diana; etc...)
That would be cool if that happened!
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Hollowmind13 - Aug. 04, 2021
(Aug. 04, 2021 11:47 AM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: (Aug. 04, 2021 11:42 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Is there going to be Roman version vs Greek version thing? (Zeus vs Jupiter; Artemis vs Diana; etc...)
No that's not going to happen. Taking Zeus in means bringing Zac back (Zeus is Zeutron) And same goes for Artemis.
I mean, in a world where you can create your own bey and it becomes legal to use, anyone can have a evolution of Zeus... (same for the others).
But you do you, it's your fanfic after all
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 04, 2021
(Aug. 04, 2021 11:54 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Aug. 04, 2021 11:47 AM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: No that's not going to happen. Taking Zeus in means bringing Zac back (Zeus is Zeutron) And same goes for Artemis.
I mean, in a world where you can create your own bey and it becomes legal to use, anyone can have a evolution of Zeus... (same for the others).
But you do you, it's your fanfic after all
I guess I'll add Zac himself, But the arc 3 is a little different and I guess the battle btw Phoebus VS Apollo and Diana VS Artemis might not happen.
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Demon Belial - Aug. 04, 2021
Ya know It'll be interesting to see a battle between zuetron and jupiter.
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 04, 2021
The Ranking
Aiger: #1
Shu: #2
Valt: #5
Free: #6
Lui: #7
Aiden: #12
Drake: #25
Ben: #30
Yuito: #35
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - GenesisBlader - Aug. 04, 2021
(Aug. 04, 2021 1:34 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: The Ranking
Aiger: #1
Shu: #2
Valt: #5
Free: #6
Lui: #7
Aiden: #12
Drake: #25
Ben: #30
Yuito: #35
when did shu become stronger than Valt
nice rankings!
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 04, 2021
Teaser of my new fan-fic (I discontinued WOLD)
Beyblade Burst: Kiwami
The main character is Ichiban Dojima, The name Ichiban means No.1
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - GenesisBlader - Aug. 04, 2021
(Aug. 04, 2021 3:17 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Teaser of my new fan-fic (I discontinued WOLD)
Beyblade Burst: Kiwami
The main character is Ichiban Dojima, The name Ichiban means No.1
holy heaven pegasus, this is awesome!!!
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 04, 2021
Chapter 14 preview:
Hanami: Ok!! Boys and Girls! The Ranking battle between Drake Kazeryu and Xavier Bogard is going way more intense!!
(The crowd goes wild)
(The Board shows that Drake has one point and Xavier has 0 points)
Ref: Second Battle!
Xavier: You got lucky that time, but (Shows Breaker Xcalius to Drake) the real hero's going to win!
Drake: You're right! (Takes his launching stance) but the I'm the real hero!
Ref: Ready, Set!!
Drake/Xhan: 3! 2! 1! Let it Rip!!
(Dragoon lands on the stadium and began to attack Xcalius ferociously)
Xavier: (Everythings going as planned...)
(Xcalius's disc shifts twice and the five sword points aligns together)
Xavier (Unleashed his aura): Xcalius!!
(Xcalius appears from the blazing aura, and dodges from Dragoon's attacks)
Xavier: Blow him away!
(Xcalibur knocks Dragoon into the wall)
Drake (Smiles): I know what're up to.
Xavier: Saber Wall!!
(Xcalius then delievers a heavy blow and pins Dragoon between itself and the wall, which sends Dragoon flying)
Chapter 14 will release on Thursday
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Demon Belial - Aug. 04, 2021
(Aug. 04, 2021 4:01 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Chapter 14 preview:
Hanami: Ok!! Boys and Girls! The Ranking battle between Drake Kazeryu and Xavier Bogard is going way more intense!!
(The crowd goes wild)
(The Board shows that Drake has one point and Xavier has 0 points)
Ref: Second Battle!
Xavier: You got lucky that time, but (Shows Breaker Xcalius to Drake) the real hero's going to win!
Drake: You're right! (Takes his launching stance) but the I'm the real hero!
Ref: Ready, Set!!
Drake/Xhan: 3! 2! 1! Let it Rip!!
(Dragoon lands on the stadium and began to attack Xcalius ferociously)
Xavier: (Everythings going as planned...)
(Xcalius's disc shifts twice and the five sword points aligns together)
Xavier (Unleashed his aura): Xcalius!!
(Xcalius appears from the blazing aura, and dodges from Dragoon's attacks)
Xavier: Blow him away!
(Xcalibur knocks Dragoon into the wall)
Drake (Smiles): I know what're up to.
Xavier: Saber Wall!!
(Xcalius then delievers a heavy blow and pins Dragoon between itself and the wall, which sends Dragoon flying)
Chapter 14 will release on Thursday
Ok I knkw this move, xhan did it on aiger
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 05, 2021
Picture of Dragoon Chip and Breeze Core. (It's just a picture, the gimmick of Breeze works in fic)
![[Image: Dragoon.jpg]](https://i.ibb.co/dfPtnyQ/Dragoon.jpg)
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Demon Belial - Aug. 05, 2021
(Aug. 05, 2021 11:19 AM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Picture of Dragoon Chip and Breeze Core. (It's just a picture, the gimmick of Breeze works in fic)
Breeze's gimmick is teeth hardening?
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![[Image: Valt.png]](https://i.ibb.co/8PM86hV/Valt.png)