RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 31, 2021
Reign Achilles
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Demon Belial - Jul. 31, 2021
(Jul. 31, 2021 8:31 AM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Reign Achilles
You drawed it?!?
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 31, 2021
(Jul. 31, 2021 12:30 PM)Demon Belial Wrote: (Jul. 31, 2021 8:31 AM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Reign Achilles
You drawed it?!?
Nope
Beyblade Burst: VS Opening "The Asterisk War"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pc_0jNuLhEw
I've updated my first post(First page of this thread), you can check it out.
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Demon Belial - Jul. 31, 2021
(Jul. 31, 2021 12:53 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: (Jul. 31, 2021 12:30 PM)Demon Belial Wrote: You drawed it?!?
Nope
Beyblade Burst: VS Opening "The Asterisk War"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pc_0jNuLhEw
I've updated my first post(First page of this thread), you can check it out. Then where did you found it??
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 31, 2021
(Jul. 31, 2021 2:47 PM)Demon Belial Wrote: (Jul. 31, 2021 12:53 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Nope
Beyblade Burst: VS Opening "The Asterisk War"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pc_0jNuLhEw
I've updated my first post(First page of this thread), you can check it out. Then where did you found it??
It’s a concept art for Union Achilles.
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - LegendJustice - Jul. 31, 2021
Nice! Also cool opening!
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 31, 2021
I’ll definitely release Chapter 13 tomorrow (Today was a busy day)
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - LegendJustice - Jul. 31, 2021
Nice, I'll defentily read it!
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 01, 2021
Chapter 13 is here (The Best Chapter Yet)
𝐂𝐡𝐚𝐩𝐭𝐞𝐫 𝟏𝟑: 𝐃𝐫𝐚𝐠𝐨𝐨𝐧 𝐕𝐒 𝐁𝐚𝐥𝐝𝐮𝐫!!
𝘼𝙩 𝙄𝙣𝙛𝙚𝙧𝙣𝙤 𝘾𝙤𝙧𝙥.
𝗔𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗻: Why are you even interested in that kid?
𝗕𝗲𝗻: I'm not interested to battle him, Baldur is.
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦𝘴 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘶𝘯𝘭𝘦𝘢𝘴𝘩𝘦𝘥 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘢𝘶𝘳𝘢
𝗕𝗲𝗻(𝗦𝗺𝗶𝗹𝗲𝘀): I've never seen Baldur too excited.
𝗔𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗻: Then do whatever you want, just don't lose against that kid.
𝗕𝗲𝗻(𝗟𝗼𝗼𝗸𝘀 𝗮𝘁 𝗵𝗶𝗺 𝘀𝗲𝗿𝗶𝗼𝘂𝘀𝗹𝘆): Do you really think I'll lose?
𝗔𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗻(𝗖𝗵𝘂𝗰𝗸𝗹𝗲𝘀): Who knows.... Drake has the Viking Layer so he could give you fight.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: I've already defeated him once..... and I know how he fight.
𝘉𝘦𝘯 𝘸𝘢𝘭𝘬𝘴 𝘢𝘸𝘢𝘺 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘤𝘭𝘰𝘴𝘦𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘥𝘰𝘰𝘳.
𝗔𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗻: I guess you pulled off a fluke against him.
𝘚𝘤𝘦𝘯𝘦 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘧𝘵𝘴 𝘵𝘰 𝘠𝘶𝘪𝘵𝘰, 𝘩𝘦 𝘸𝘢𝘴 𝘳𝘦𝘵𝘶𝘳𝘯𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘰 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘩𝘰𝘮𝘦
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼 (𝗟𝗼𝗼𝗸𝘀 𝗮𝘁 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗯𝗿𝗼𝗸𝗲𝗻 𝗯𝗲𝘆): ......
𝙁𝙡𝙖𝙨𝙝𝙗𝙖𝙘𝙠 𝙨𝙩𝙖𝙧𝙩𝙨
𝗕𝗲𝗻: Obstruct Wall!
𝘠𝘶𝘪𝘵𝘰'𝘴 𝘣𝘦𝘺 𝘨𝘰𝘵 𝘥𝘦𝘴𝘵𝘳𝘰𝘺𝘦𝘥 𝘪𝘯 𝘱𝘪𝘦𝘤𝘦𝘴.
𝙁𝙡𝙖𝙨𝙝𝙗𝙖𝙘𝙠 𝙚𝙣𝙙𝙨
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼(𝗪𝗵𝗶𝗹𝗲 𝗹𝗼𝗼𝗸𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝗮𝘁 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗯𝗿𝗼𝗸𝗲𝗻 𝗯𝗲𝘆): What am I gonna do now....?
𝘠𝘶𝘪𝘵𝘰 𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘤𝘩𝘦𝘴 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘮𝘢𝘯𝘴𝘪𝘰𝘯
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼: I'm home......
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼'𝘀 𝗚𝗿𝗮𝗻𝗱𝗽𝗮: Home already? That's perfect.
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼: What is it?
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼'𝘀 𝗚𝗿𝗮𝗻𝗱𝗽𝗮: I'm gonna finish the story I told you about Yinglong.
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼: I'm not interested.... get aside from my way.
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼'𝘀 𝗚𝗿𝗮𝗻𝗱𝗽𝗮: At least let me finish it, Yinglong's spirit is here on our home.
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼: What?
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼'𝘀 𝗴𝗿𝗮𝗻𝗱𝗽𝗮 (𝗣𝗼𝗶𝗻𝘁𝘀 𝗮𝘁 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗺𝗲𝗱𝗮𝗹𝗹𝗶𝗼𝗻): That thing you see... It has Yinglong's spirit, It's here for 8102 Years!
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼 (𝗧𝗮𝗸𝗲𝘀 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗺𝗲𝗱𝗮𝗹𝗹𝗶𝗼𝗻): You don't mind if I take it?
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼'𝘀 𝗚𝗿𝗮𝗻𝗱𝗽𝗮: Go ahead... take it. It's a lucky charm for the Arakawa family, you might find your way to the top if you carry it.
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼 (𝗦𝗺𝗶𝗹𝗲𝘀 𝗕𝗿𝗼𝗮𝗱𝗹𝘆): Thanks!
𝘼𝙩 𝘽𝘾 𝙎𝙤𝙡
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘬𝘦 𝘸𝘢𝘴 𝘱𝘳𝘢𝘤𝘵𝘪𝘤𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘭𝘢𝘶𝘯𝘤𝘩
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Let it Rip!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘢𝘤𝘤𝘦𝘭𝘦𝘳𝘢𝘵𝘦𝘴 𝘣𝘺 𝘶𝘴𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘦𝘥𝘨𝘦𝘴 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮.
𝗩𝗮𝗹𝘁: It's spinning more faster than before.....
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: I've only got 30 minutes before the match starts!
𝗩𝗮𝗹𝘁: And you look more than ready.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Yeah! And sorry I didn't asked it earlier... but where are your other friends?
𝗩𝗮𝗹𝘁 (𝗣𝗼𝗶𝗻𝘁𝘀 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗳𝗶𝗻𝗴𝗲𝗿 𝗼𝗻 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗵𝗲𝗮𝗱): Well..... Honcho is in Japan and Kit is also with him and Sisco's been looking for Free.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: That's why this place feels a little bit empty...
𝗩𝗮𝗹𝘁: I'll go to Japan tommorow, to see how Honcho is doing!
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: I'll go with you too. I wanna make sure Haruka is at home, then I can practice without any interruption!
𝘛𝘩𝘦 𝘛𝘝 𝘧𝘭𝘪𝘤𝘬𝘦𝘳𝘴 𝘰𝘯
𝗛𝗮𝗻𝗮𝗺𝗶: Okay! Boys and Girls! The Rematch between Drake and Ben is about to begin!
𝗩𝗮𝗹𝘁: Alright, Let's go!
𝘉𝘰𝘵𝘩 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘮 𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘤𝘩𝘦𝘥 𝘰𝘯 𝘵𝘪𝘮𝘦.
𝗛𝗮𝗻𝗮𝗺𝗶: Alright! It's time for the battle you've all been waiting for!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘬𝘦 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘉𝘦𝘯 𝘸𝘢𝘭𝘬𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘪𝘳 𝘸𝘢𝘺 𝘵𝘰 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: I thought you weren't going to show up.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Why? Cuz you don't wanna lose against me?
𝗕𝗲𝗻 (𝗟𝗮𝘂𝗴𝗵𝘀): Lose? Against You? Don't make me laugh!
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: You can laugh as loud as you can after this match.
𝗥𝗲𝗳: The battle will be held in the two points format.
𝗛𝗮𝗻𝗮𝗺𝗶 (𝗦𝗮𝘆𝘀 𝘀𝗹𝗼𝘄𝗹𝘆 𝗼𝗻 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗺𝗶𝗰): Ben Sumeragi and Drake Kazeryu's match is finally starting!
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲 (𝗟𝗼𝗼𝗸𝘀 𝗮𝘁 𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗴𝗼𝗼𝗻): 𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯... 𝘐'𝘮 𝘨𝘰𝘯𝘯𝘢 𝘸𝘪𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘬𝘦 𝘶𝘯𝘭𝘦𝘢𝘴𝘩𝘦𝘥 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘢𝘶𝘳𝘢 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘢𝘱𝘱𝘦𝘢𝘳𝘴 𝘣𝘦𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘥 𝘩𝘪𝘮.
𝗕𝗲𝗻 (𝗦𝗮𝘄 𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗴𝗼𝗼𝗻 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝘀𝗺𝗶𝗹𝗲𝘀 𝗦𝘂𝗿𝗽𝗿𝗶𝘀𝗶𝗻𝗴𝗹𝘆): Heh...
𝗥𝗲𝗳: First Battle!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘬𝘦 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘉𝘦𝘯 𝘵𝘢𝘬𝘦𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘪𝘳 𝘭𝘢𝘶𝘯𝘤𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘯𝘤𝘦𝘴.
𝗥𝗲𝗳: Ready Set!
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲/𝗕𝗲𝗻: 3! 2! 1! Let it Rip!!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘢𝘤𝘤𝘦𝘭𝘦𝘳𝘢𝘵𝘦𝘴 𝘣𝘺 𝘶𝘴𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘭𝘰𝘱𝘦𝘴 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘵𝘰𝘰𝘬 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘤𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘦𝘳.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Go, Dragoon!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘭𝘢𝘯𝘥𝘴 𝘢 𝘣𝘢𝘳𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘦 𝘰𝘧 𝘢𝘵𝘵𝘢𝘤𝘬𝘴 𝘣𝘶𝘵 𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘥𝘪𝘥𝘯'𝘵 𝘮𝘰𝘷𝘦𝘥 𝘧𝘳𝘰𝘮 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘤𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘦𝘳.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: It's getting boring....
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳'𝘴 𝘦𝘺𝘦𝘴 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦𝘴 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘪𝘵 𝘨𝘦𝘵𝘴 𝘤𝘰𝘷𝘦𝘳𝘦𝘥 𝘣𝘺 𝘢 𝘣𝘭𝘢𝘤𝘬 𝘣𝘢𝘳𝘳𝘪𝘦𝘳.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: Obstruct Wall!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘩𝘪𝘵𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘸𝘢𝘭𝘭 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘨𝘦𝘵𝘴 𝘣𝘭𝘰𝘸𝘯 𝘢𝘸𝘢𝘺.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲 (𝗪𝗵𝗶𝗹𝗲 𝗦𝗺𝗶𝗹𝗶𝗻𝗴): I knew you would use a new move.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: Baldur is just getting started!
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲 (𝗨𝗻𝗹𝗲𝗮𝘀𝗵𝗲𝗱 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗮𝘂𝗿𝗮): Same here!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦𝘴 𝘪𝘯 𝘮𝘪𝘥-𝘢𝘪𝘳 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘢𝘱𝘱𝘦𝘢𝘳𝘴 𝘴𝘤𝘰𝘳𝘤𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘩𝘳𝘰𝘶𝘨𝘩 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘢𝘶𝘳𝘢.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Here goes!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘴𝘶𝘳𝘷𝘪𝘷𝘦𝘥 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘭𝘢𝘯𝘥𝘴 𝘣𝘢𝘤𝘬 𝘰𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮.
𝗛𝗮𝗻𝗮𝗺𝗶: Unbelievable! Dragoon survived!!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘴𝘱𝘪𝘯𝘴 𝘸𝘢𝘺 𝘮𝘰𝘳𝘦 𝘧𝘢𝘴𝘵𝘦𝘳 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘯 𝘣𝘦𝘧𝘰𝘳𝘦.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Triple Wing Cyclone!!
𝘛𝘩𝘦 𝘸𝘪𝘯𝘥 𝘸𝘦𝘪𝘨𝘩𝘵 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦𝘴 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘤𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘵𝘦𝘴 𝘢 𝘤𝘺𝘤𝘭𝘰𝘯𝘦.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: What the-?
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘨𝘰𝘵 𝘤𝘢𝘶𝘨𝘩𝘵 𝘪𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘷𝘰𝘳𝘵𝘦𝘹 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘨𝘦𝘵𝘴 𝘬𝘯𝘰𝘤𝘬𝘦𝘥 𝘰𝘶𝘵 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮.
𝗥𝗲𝗳: Viking Dragoon! Ring-Out Finish! The Score is 1-0!
𝗛𝗮𝗻𝗮𝗺𝗶: Wow! Drake earned a point against Ben!
𝗔𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗻 (𝗪𝗮𝘁𝗰𝗵𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝗳𝗿𝗼𝗺 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗖𝗼𝗿𝗽.): Amazing....
𝗕𝗲𝗻 (𝗣𝗶𝗰𝗸𝘀 𝘂𝗽 𝗕𝗮𝗹𝗱𝘂𝗿): Heh, You've gotten a little bit improved.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: I've gotten super improved!
𝗕𝗲𝗻: This time I'll show you what really Baldur is capable of!
𝗥𝗲𝗳: Second Battle! Ready Set!
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲/𝗕𝗲𝗻: 3! 2! 1! Let it Rip!!
𝘉𝘦𝘯 𝘭𝘢𝘶𝘯𝘤𝘩𝘦𝘥 𝘷𝘦𝘳𝘵𝘪𝘤𝘢𝘭𝘭𝘺.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: 𝘏𝘦 𝘤𝘩𝘢𝘯𝘨𝘦𝘥 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘭𝘢𝘶𝘯𝘤𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘨𝘦𝘴𝘵𝘶𝘳𝘦!
𝗕𝗲𝗻: Lightspeed Launch!
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘳𝘪𝘥𝘦𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘦𝘥𝘨𝘦 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘴𝘱𝘦𝘦𝘥𝘴 𝘶𝘱 𝘳𝘢𝘱𝘪𝘥𝘭𝘺.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Dragoon! Knock him away!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘴𝘱𝘦𝘦𝘥𝘴 𝘶𝘱 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘩𝘦𝘢𝘥𝘴 𝘵𝘰𝘸𝘢𝘳𝘥𝘴 𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: It's no use!
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘥𝘰𝘥𝘨𝘦𝘥 𝘣𝘺 𝘳𝘪𝘥𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘦𝘥𝘨𝘦 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘩𝘪𝘵𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘸𝘢𝘭𝘭 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘨𝘦𝘵𝘴 𝘴𝘭𝘰𝘸𝘯 𝘥𝘰𝘸𝘯.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: No way!
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘩𝘦𝘢𝘥𝘴 𝘵𝘰𝘸𝘢𝘳𝘥𝘴 𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 𝘪𝘯𝘤𝘳𝘦𝘥𝘪𝘣𝘭𝘦 𝘴𝘱𝘦𝘦𝘥.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Dragoon!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘣𝘦𝘨𝘢𝘯𝘴 𝘵𝘰 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: Burst him into pieces! Obstruct Calamity!!
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘩𝘪𝘵𝘴 𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 𝘧𝘶𝘭𝘭 𝘧𝘰𝘳𝘤𝘦 𝘸𝘩𝘪𝘤𝘩 𝘭𝘦𝘥 𝘵𝘰 𝘢 𝘩𝘶𝘨𝘦 𝘦𝘹𝘱𝘭𝘰𝘴𝘪𝘰𝘯 𝘪𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮.
𝗕𝗲𝗻 (𝗟𝗮𝘂𝗴𝗵𝘀): I won!
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Tch!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘤𝘢𝘮𝘦𝘴 𝘰𝘶𝘵 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘮𝘰𝘬𝘦 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘧𝘦𝘭𝘭𝘴 𝘥𝘰𝘸𝘯 𝘰𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘨𝘳𝘰𝘶𝘯𝘥.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: Huh?
𝗥𝗲𝗳: Magic Baldur! Ring-Out Finish! The score is 1-1!
𝗛𝗮𝗻𝗮𝗺𝗶: Wow! Wow! Wow!!! Looks like Dragoon survived the huge impact from Baldur!!
𝗩𝗮𝗹𝘁: It was so close....
𝘛𝘩𝘦 𝘤𝘳𝘰𝘸𝘥 𝘨𝘰𝘦𝘴 𝘸𝘪𝘭𝘥.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲 (𝗣𝗶𝗰𝗸𝘀 𝘂𝗽 𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗴𝗼𝗼𝗻): You did well, partner!
𝗕𝗲𝗻: This won't happen again!
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲 (𝗦𝗵𝗼𝘄𝘀 𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗴𝗼𝗼𝗻 𝘁𝗼 𝗕𝗲𝗻): My partner will burst Baldur in this round!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘬𝘦'𝘴 𝘦𝘺𝘦𝘴 𝘣𝘦𝘨𝘪𝘯𝘴 𝘵𝘰 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦 𝘣𝘭𝘶𝘦.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: 𝘛𝘩𝘦𝘳𝘦'𝘴 𝘴𝘰𝘮𝘦𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘥𝘪𝘧𝘧𝘦𝘳𝘦𝘯𝘵 𝘢𝘣𝘰𝘶𝘵 𝘩𝘪𝘮....
𝗥𝗲𝗳: Third Battle! Ready Set!
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲/𝗕𝗲𝗻: 3! 2! 1! Let it Rip!!
𝗕𝗲𝗻: Lightspeed Launch!
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘳𝘪𝘥𝘦𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘦𝘥𝘨𝘦 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘴𝘱𝘦𝘦𝘥𝘴 𝘶𝘱 𝘳𝘢𝘱𝘪𝘥𝘭𝘺.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲 (𝗨𝗻𝗹𝗲𝗮𝘀𝗵𝗲𝗱 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗮𝘂𝗿𝗮): I'M GOING TO WIN!!!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦𝘴 𝘪𝘯 𝘮𝘪𝘥-𝘢𝘪𝘳 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘢𝘱𝘱𝘦𝘢𝘳𝘴 𝘴𝘤𝘰𝘳𝘤𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘩𝘳𝘰𝘶𝘨𝘩 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘢𝘶𝘳𝘢.
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘳𝘪𝘥𝘦𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘦𝘥𝘨𝘦 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘩𝘪𝘵𝘴 𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳.
𝗛𝗮𝗻𝗮𝗺𝗶: Dragoon stopped Baldur!!
𝗕𝗲𝗻 (𝗨𝗻𝗹𝗲𝗮𝘀𝗵𝗲𝗱 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗮𝘂𝗿𝗮): Baldur!
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘢𝘱𝘱𝘦𝘢𝘳𝘴 𝘧𝘳𝘰𝘮 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘢𝘶𝘳𝘢.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: Magic Obstruction!!
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳'𝘴 𝘋𝘳𝘪𝘷𝘦𝘳 𝘩𝘪𝘵𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘸𝘢𝘭𝘭 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘪𝘵 𝘩𝘦𝘢𝘥𝘴 𝘵𝘰𝘸𝘢𝘳𝘥𝘴 𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Ultra Viking Whip!!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘩𝘦𝘢𝘥𝘴 𝘵𝘰𝘸𝘢𝘳𝘥𝘴 𝘦𝘢𝘤𝘩 𝘰𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘳 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘸𝘦𝘳𝘦 𝘢𝘣𝘰𝘶𝘵 𝘵𝘰 𝘤𝘭𝘢𝘴𝘩.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: My Defence is......
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: My Attacks is......
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲/𝗕𝗲𝗻: UNBEATABLE!!!!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘤𝘭𝘢𝘴𝘩𝘦𝘥.
𝘈 𝘩𝘶𝘨𝘦 𝘦𝘹𝘱𝘭𝘰𝘴𝘪𝘰𝘯 𝘰𝘤𝘤𝘶𝘳𝘴 𝘰𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘴𝘱𝘢𝘳𝘬𝘴 𝘸𝘦𝘳𝘦 𝘤𝘰𝘮𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘰𝘶𝘵.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Dragoon!!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘴𝘦𝘯𝘥𝘴 𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘧𝘭𝘺𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘉𝘶𝘳𝘴𝘵𝘴.
𝘉𝘦𝘯 𝘧𝘦𝘭𝘭𝘴 𝘰𝘯 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘬𝘯𝘦𝘦𝘴.
𝗥𝗲𝗳: Viking Dragoon! Burst Finish!! With the score of 3-1, Drake Kazeryu is the winner!
𝗛𝗮𝗻𝗮𝗺𝗶: It's finished! Baldur has been bursted!!
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲 (𝗝𝘂𝗺𝗽𝘀 𝗶𝗻 𝗲𝘅𝗰𝗶𝘁𝗲𝗺𝗲𝗻𝘁): I did it!!
𝗕𝗲𝗻 (𝗽𝗶𝗰𝗸𝘀 𝘂𝗽 𝗯𝗮𝗹𝗱𝘂𝗿): Baldur....
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳'𝘴 𝘭𝘢𝘺𝘦𝘳 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦𝘴
𝘉𝘦𝘯 (𝘚𝘮𝘪𝘭𝘦𝘴 𝘩𝘢𝘱𝘱𝘪𝘭𝘺): We'll beat him next time.
𝗩𝗮𝗹𝘁 (𝗟𝗼𝗼𝗸𝘀 𝗮𝘁 𝗩𝗮𝗹𝘁𝗿𝘆𝗲𝗸): Valtryek.... That was an intense battle! I wanna get more stroger now, partner!
𝘝𝘢𝘭𝘵𝘳𝘺𝘦𝘬 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦𝘴.
𝘉𝘦𝘯 𝘳𝘦𝘵𝘶𝘳𝘯𝘦𝘥 𝘵𝘰 𝘐𝘯𝘧𝘦𝘳𝘯𝘰 𝘊𝘰𝘳𝘱.
𝗔𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗻: So you lost huh?
𝗕𝗲𝗻 (𝗦𝗺𝗶𝗹𝗲𝘀): Yeah he was strong....
𝗔𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗻: I've never saw you smile like this in a long time....
𝗕𝗲𝗻: Then don't ruin it, step away from my way.
𝘉𝘦𝘯 𝘸𝘢𝘭𝘬𝘴 𝘸𝘢𝘺
𝗔𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗻 (𝗟𝗼𝗼𝗸𝘀 𝗮𝘁 𝗔𝗿𝗲𝘀): Looks like it's time to finish your hunger.... Ares.
𝘈𝘳𝘦𝘴 𝘶𝘯𝘭𝘦𝘢𝘴𝘩𝘦𝘥 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘤𝘰𝘳𝘳𝘶𝘱𝘵𝘦𝘥 𝘢𝘶𝘳𝘢.
𝙏𝙤 𝘽𝙚 𝘾𝙤𝙣𝙩𝙞𝙣𝙪𝙚𝙙.
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𝐂𝐡𝐚𝐩𝐭𝐞𝐫 𝟏𝟑: 𝐃𝐫𝐚𝐠𝐨𝐨𝐧 𝐕𝐒 𝐁𝐚𝐥𝐝𝐮𝐫!!
𝘼𝙩 𝙄𝙣𝙛𝙚𝙧𝙣𝙤 𝘾𝙤𝙧𝙥.
𝗔𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗻: Why are you even interested in that kid?
𝗕𝗲𝗻: I'm not interested to battle him, Baldur is.
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦𝘴 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘶𝘯𝘭𝘦𝘢𝘴𝘩𝘦𝘥 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘢𝘶𝘳𝘢
𝗕𝗲𝗻(𝗦𝗺𝗶𝗹𝗲𝘀): I've never seen Baldur too excited.
𝗔𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗻: Then do whatever you want, just don't lose against that kid.
𝗕𝗲𝗻(𝗟𝗼𝗼𝗸𝘀 𝗮𝘁 𝗵𝗶𝗺 𝘀𝗲𝗿𝗶𝗼𝘂𝘀𝗹𝘆): Do you really think I'll lose?
𝗔𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗻(𝗖𝗵𝘂𝗰𝗸𝗹𝗲𝘀): Who knows.... Drake has the Viking Layer so he could give you fight.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: I've already defeated him once..... and I know how he fight.
𝘉𝘦𝘯 𝘸𝘢𝘭𝘬𝘴 𝘢𝘸𝘢𝘺 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘤𝘭𝘰𝘴𝘦𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘥𝘰𝘰𝘳.
𝗔𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗻: I guess you pulled off a fluke against him.
𝘚𝘤𝘦𝘯𝘦 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘧𝘵𝘴 𝘵𝘰 𝘠𝘶𝘪𝘵𝘰, 𝘩𝘦 𝘸𝘢𝘴 𝘳𝘦𝘵𝘶𝘳𝘯𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘰 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘩𝘰𝘮𝘦
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼 (𝗟𝗼𝗼𝗸𝘀 𝗮𝘁 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗯𝗿𝗼𝗸𝗲𝗻 𝗯𝗲𝘆): ......
𝙁𝙡𝙖𝙨𝙝𝙗𝙖𝙘𝙠 𝙨𝙩𝙖𝙧𝙩𝙨
𝗕𝗲𝗻: Obstruct Wall!
𝘠𝘶𝘪𝘵𝘰'𝘴 𝘣𝘦𝘺 𝘨𝘰𝘵 𝘥𝘦𝘴𝘵𝘳𝘰𝘺𝘦𝘥 𝘪𝘯 𝘱𝘪𝘦𝘤𝘦𝘴.
𝙁𝙡𝙖𝙨𝙝𝙗𝙖𝙘𝙠 𝙚𝙣𝙙𝙨
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼(𝗪𝗵𝗶𝗹𝗲 𝗹𝗼𝗼𝗸𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝗮𝘁 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗯𝗿𝗼𝗸𝗲𝗻 𝗯𝗲𝘆): What am I gonna do now....?
𝘠𝘶𝘪𝘵𝘰 𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘤𝘩𝘦𝘴 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘮𝘢𝘯𝘴𝘪𝘰𝘯
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼: I'm home......
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼'𝘀 𝗚𝗿𝗮𝗻𝗱𝗽𝗮: Home already? That's perfect.
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼: What is it?
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼'𝘀 𝗚𝗿𝗮𝗻𝗱𝗽𝗮: I'm gonna finish the story I told you about Yinglong.
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼: I'm not interested.... get aside from my way.
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼'𝘀 𝗚𝗿𝗮𝗻𝗱𝗽𝗮: At least let me finish it, Yinglong's spirit is here on our home.
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼: What?
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼'𝘀 𝗴𝗿𝗮𝗻𝗱𝗽𝗮 (𝗣𝗼𝗶𝗻𝘁𝘀 𝗮𝘁 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗺𝗲𝗱𝗮𝗹𝗹𝗶𝗼𝗻): That thing you see... It has Yinglong's spirit, It's here for 8102 Years!
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼 (𝗧𝗮𝗸𝗲𝘀 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗺𝗲𝗱𝗮𝗹𝗹𝗶𝗼𝗻): You don't mind if I take it?
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼'𝘀 𝗚𝗿𝗮𝗻𝗱𝗽𝗮: Go ahead... take it. It's a lucky charm for the Arakawa family, you might find your way to the top if you carry it.
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼 (𝗦𝗺𝗶𝗹𝗲𝘀 𝗕𝗿𝗼𝗮𝗱𝗹𝘆): Thanks!
𝘼𝙩 𝘽𝘾 𝙎𝙤𝙡
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘬𝘦 𝘸𝘢𝘴 𝘱𝘳𝘢𝘤𝘵𝘪𝘤𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘭𝘢𝘶𝘯𝘤𝘩
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Let it Rip!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘢𝘤𝘤𝘦𝘭𝘦𝘳𝘢𝘵𝘦𝘴 𝘣𝘺 𝘶𝘴𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘦𝘥𝘨𝘦𝘴 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮.
𝗩𝗮𝗹𝘁: It's spinning more faster than before.....
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: I've only got 30 minutes before the match starts!
𝗩𝗮𝗹𝘁: And you look more than ready.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Yeah! And sorry I didn't asked it earlier... but where are your other friends?
𝗩𝗮𝗹𝘁 (𝗣𝗼𝗶𝗻𝘁𝘀 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗳𝗶𝗻𝗴𝗲𝗿 𝗼𝗻 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗵𝗲𝗮𝗱): Well..... Honcho is in Japan and Kit is also with him and Sisco's been looking for Free.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: That's why this place feels a little bit empty...
𝗩𝗮𝗹𝘁: I'll go to Japan tommorow, to see how Honcho is doing!
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: I'll go with you too. I wanna make sure Haruka is at home, then I can practice without any interruption!
𝘛𝘩𝘦 𝘛𝘝 𝘧𝘭𝘪𝘤𝘬𝘦𝘳𝘴 𝘰𝘯
𝗛𝗮𝗻𝗮𝗺𝗶: Okay! Boys and Girls! The Rematch between Drake and Ben is about to begin!
𝗩𝗮𝗹𝘁: Alright, Let's go!
𝘉𝘰𝘵𝘩 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘮 𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘤𝘩𝘦𝘥 𝘰𝘯 𝘵𝘪𝘮𝘦.
𝗛𝗮𝗻𝗮𝗺𝗶: Alright! It's time for the battle you've all been waiting for!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘬𝘦 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘉𝘦𝘯 𝘸𝘢𝘭𝘬𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘪𝘳 𝘸𝘢𝘺 𝘵𝘰 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: I thought you weren't going to show up.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Why? Cuz you don't wanna lose against me?
𝗕𝗲𝗻 (𝗟𝗮𝘂𝗴𝗵𝘀): Lose? Against You? Don't make me laugh!
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: You can laugh as loud as you can after this match.
𝗥𝗲𝗳: The battle will be held in the two points format.
𝗛𝗮𝗻𝗮𝗺𝗶 (𝗦𝗮𝘆𝘀 𝘀𝗹𝗼𝘄𝗹𝘆 𝗼𝗻 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗺𝗶𝗰): Ben Sumeragi and Drake Kazeryu's match is finally starting!
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲 (𝗟𝗼𝗼𝗸𝘀 𝗮𝘁 𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗴𝗼𝗼𝗻): 𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯... 𝘐'𝘮 𝘨𝘰𝘯𝘯𝘢 𝘸𝘪𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘬𝘦 𝘶𝘯𝘭𝘦𝘢𝘴𝘩𝘦𝘥 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘢𝘶𝘳𝘢 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘢𝘱𝘱𝘦𝘢𝘳𝘴 𝘣𝘦𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘥 𝘩𝘪𝘮.
𝗕𝗲𝗻 (𝗦𝗮𝘄 𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗴𝗼𝗼𝗻 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝘀𝗺𝗶𝗹𝗲𝘀 𝗦𝘂𝗿𝗽𝗿𝗶𝘀𝗶𝗻𝗴𝗹𝘆): Heh...
𝗥𝗲𝗳: First Battle!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘬𝘦 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘉𝘦𝘯 𝘵𝘢𝘬𝘦𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘪𝘳 𝘭𝘢𝘶𝘯𝘤𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘯𝘤𝘦𝘴.
𝗥𝗲𝗳: Ready Set!
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲/𝗕𝗲𝗻: 3! 2! 1! Let it Rip!!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘢𝘤𝘤𝘦𝘭𝘦𝘳𝘢𝘵𝘦𝘴 𝘣𝘺 𝘶𝘴𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘭𝘰𝘱𝘦𝘴 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘵𝘰𝘰𝘬 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘤𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘦𝘳.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Go, Dragoon!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘭𝘢𝘯𝘥𝘴 𝘢 𝘣𝘢𝘳𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘦 𝘰𝘧 𝘢𝘵𝘵𝘢𝘤𝘬𝘴 𝘣𝘶𝘵 𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘥𝘪𝘥𝘯'𝘵 𝘮𝘰𝘷𝘦𝘥 𝘧𝘳𝘰𝘮 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘤𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘦𝘳.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: It's getting boring....
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳'𝘴 𝘦𝘺𝘦𝘴 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦𝘴 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘪𝘵 𝘨𝘦𝘵𝘴 𝘤𝘰𝘷𝘦𝘳𝘦𝘥 𝘣𝘺 𝘢 𝘣𝘭𝘢𝘤𝘬 𝘣𝘢𝘳𝘳𝘪𝘦𝘳.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: Obstruct Wall!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘩𝘪𝘵𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘸𝘢𝘭𝘭 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘨𝘦𝘵𝘴 𝘣𝘭𝘰𝘸𝘯 𝘢𝘸𝘢𝘺.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲 (𝗪𝗵𝗶𝗹𝗲 𝗦𝗺𝗶𝗹𝗶𝗻𝗴): I knew you would use a new move.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: Baldur is just getting started!
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲 (𝗨𝗻𝗹𝗲𝗮𝘀𝗵𝗲𝗱 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗮𝘂𝗿𝗮): Same here!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦𝘴 𝘪𝘯 𝘮𝘪𝘥-𝘢𝘪𝘳 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘢𝘱𝘱𝘦𝘢𝘳𝘴 𝘴𝘤𝘰𝘳𝘤𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘩𝘳𝘰𝘶𝘨𝘩 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘢𝘶𝘳𝘢.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Here goes!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘴𝘶𝘳𝘷𝘪𝘷𝘦𝘥 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘭𝘢𝘯𝘥𝘴 𝘣𝘢𝘤𝘬 𝘰𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮.
𝗛𝗮𝗻𝗮𝗺𝗶: Unbelievable! Dragoon survived!!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘴𝘱𝘪𝘯𝘴 𝘸𝘢𝘺 𝘮𝘰𝘳𝘦 𝘧𝘢𝘴𝘵𝘦𝘳 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘯 𝘣𝘦𝘧𝘰𝘳𝘦.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Triple Wing Cyclone!!
𝘛𝘩𝘦 𝘸𝘪𝘯𝘥 𝘸𝘦𝘪𝘨𝘩𝘵 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦𝘴 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘤𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘵𝘦𝘴 𝘢 𝘤𝘺𝘤𝘭𝘰𝘯𝘦.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: What the-?
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘨𝘰𝘵 𝘤𝘢𝘶𝘨𝘩𝘵 𝘪𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘷𝘰𝘳𝘵𝘦𝘹 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘨𝘦𝘵𝘴 𝘬𝘯𝘰𝘤𝘬𝘦𝘥 𝘰𝘶𝘵 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮.
𝗥𝗲𝗳: Viking Dragoon! Ring-Out Finish! The Score is 1-0!
𝗛𝗮𝗻𝗮𝗺𝗶: Wow! Drake earned a point against Ben!
𝗔𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗻 (𝗪𝗮𝘁𝗰𝗵𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝗳𝗿𝗼𝗺 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗖𝗼𝗿𝗽.): Amazing....
𝗕𝗲𝗻 (𝗣𝗶𝗰𝗸𝘀 𝘂𝗽 𝗕𝗮𝗹𝗱𝘂𝗿): Heh, You've gotten a little bit improved.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: I've gotten super improved!
𝗕𝗲𝗻: This time I'll show you what really Baldur is capable of!
𝗥𝗲𝗳: Second Battle! Ready Set!
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲/𝗕𝗲𝗻: 3! 2! 1! Let it Rip!!
𝘉𝘦𝘯 𝘭𝘢𝘶𝘯𝘤𝘩𝘦𝘥 𝘷𝘦𝘳𝘵𝘪𝘤𝘢𝘭𝘭𝘺.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: 𝘏𝘦 𝘤𝘩𝘢𝘯𝘨𝘦𝘥 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘭𝘢𝘶𝘯𝘤𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘨𝘦𝘴𝘵𝘶𝘳𝘦!
𝗕𝗲𝗻: Lightspeed Launch!
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘳𝘪𝘥𝘦𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘦𝘥𝘨𝘦 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘴𝘱𝘦𝘦𝘥𝘴 𝘶𝘱 𝘳𝘢𝘱𝘪𝘥𝘭𝘺.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Dragoon! Knock him away!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘴𝘱𝘦𝘦𝘥𝘴 𝘶𝘱 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘩𝘦𝘢𝘥𝘴 𝘵𝘰𝘸𝘢𝘳𝘥𝘴 𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: It's no use!
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘥𝘰𝘥𝘨𝘦𝘥 𝘣𝘺 𝘳𝘪𝘥𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘦𝘥𝘨𝘦 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘩𝘪𝘵𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘸𝘢𝘭𝘭 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘨𝘦𝘵𝘴 𝘴𝘭𝘰𝘸𝘯 𝘥𝘰𝘸𝘯.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: No way!
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘩𝘦𝘢𝘥𝘴 𝘵𝘰𝘸𝘢𝘳𝘥𝘴 𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 𝘪𝘯𝘤𝘳𝘦𝘥𝘪𝘣𝘭𝘦 𝘴𝘱𝘦𝘦𝘥.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Dragoon!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘣𝘦𝘨𝘢𝘯𝘴 𝘵𝘰 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: Burst him into pieces! Obstruct Calamity!!
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘩𝘪𝘵𝘴 𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 𝘧𝘶𝘭𝘭 𝘧𝘰𝘳𝘤𝘦 𝘸𝘩𝘪𝘤𝘩 𝘭𝘦𝘥 𝘵𝘰 𝘢 𝘩𝘶𝘨𝘦 𝘦𝘹𝘱𝘭𝘰𝘴𝘪𝘰𝘯 𝘪𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮.
𝗕𝗲𝗻 (𝗟𝗮𝘂𝗴𝗵𝘀): I won!
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Tch!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘤𝘢𝘮𝘦𝘴 𝘰𝘶𝘵 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘮𝘰𝘬𝘦 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘧𝘦𝘭𝘭𝘴 𝘥𝘰𝘸𝘯 𝘰𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘨𝘳𝘰𝘶𝘯𝘥.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: Huh?
𝗥𝗲𝗳: Magic Baldur! Ring-Out Finish! The score is 1-1!
𝗛𝗮𝗻𝗮𝗺𝗶: Wow! Wow! Wow!!! Looks like Dragoon survived the huge impact from Baldur!!
𝗩𝗮𝗹𝘁: It was so close....
𝘛𝘩𝘦 𝘤𝘳𝘰𝘸𝘥 𝘨𝘰𝘦𝘴 𝘸𝘪𝘭𝘥.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲 (𝗣𝗶𝗰𝗸𝘀 𝘂𝗽 𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗴𝗼𝗼𝗻): You did well, partner!
𝗕𝗲𝗻: This won't happen again!
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲 (𝗦𝗵𝗼𝘄𝘀 𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗴𝗼𝗼𝗻 𝘁𝗼 𝗕𝗲𝗻): My partner will burst Baldur in this round!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘬𝘦'𝘴 𝘦𝘺𝘦𝘴 𝘣𝘦𝘨𝘪𝘯𝘴 𝘵𝘰 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦 𝘣𝘭𝘶𝘦.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: 𝘛𝘩𝘦𝘳𝘦'𝘴 𝘴𝘰𝘮𝘦𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘥𝘪𝘧𝘧𝘦𝘳𝘦𝘯𝘵 𝘢𝘣𝘰𝘶𝘵 𝘩𝘪𝘮....
𝗥𝗲𝗳: Third Battle! Ready Set!
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲/𝗕𝗲𝗻: 3! 2! 1! Let it Rip!!
𝗕𝗲𝗻: Lightspeed Launch!
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘳𝘪𝘥𝘦𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘦𝘥𝘨𝘦 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘴𝘱𝘦𝘦𝘥𝘴 𝘶𝘱 𝘳𝘢𝘱𝘪𝘥𝘭𝘺.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲 (𝗨𝗻𝗹𝗲𝗮𝘀𝗵𝗲𝗱 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗮𝘂𝗿𝗮): I'M GOING TO WIN!!!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦𝘴 𝘪𝘯 𝘮𝘪𝘥-𝘢𝘪𝘳 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘢𝘱𝘱𝘦𝘢𝘳𝘴 𝘴𝘤𝘰𝘳𝘤𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘩𝘳𝘰𝘶𝘨𝘩 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘢𝘶𝘳𝘢.
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘳𝘪𝘥𝘦𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘦𝘥𝘨𝘦 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘩𝘪𝘵𝘴 𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳.
𝗛𝗮𝗻𝗮𝗺𝗶: Dragoon stopped Baldur!!
𝗕𝗲𝗻 (𝗨𝗻𝗹𝗲𝗮𝘀𝗵𝗲𝗱 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗮𝘂𝗿𝗮): Baldur!
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘢𝘱𝘱𝘦𝘢𝘳𝘴 𝘧𝘳𝘰𝘮 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘢𝘶𝘳𝘢.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: Magic Obstruction!!
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳'𝘴 𝘋𝘳𝘪𝘷𝘦𝘳 𝘩𝘪𝘵𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘸𝘢𝘭𝘭 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘪𝘵 𝘩𝘦𝘢𝘥𝘴 𝘵𝘰𝘸𝘢𝘳𝘥𝘴 𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Ultra Viking Whip!!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘩𝘦𝘢𝘥𝘴 𝘵𝘰𝘸𝘢𝘳𝘥𝘴 𝘦𝘢𝘤𝘩 𝘰𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘳 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘸𝘦𝘳𝘦 𝘢𝘣𝘰𝘶𝘵 𝘵𝘰 𝘤𝘭𝘢𝘴𝘩.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: My Defence is......
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: My Attacks is......
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲/𝗕𝗲𝗻: UNBEATABLE!!!!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘤𝘭𝘢𝘴𝘩𝘦𝘥.
𝘈 𝘩𝘶𝘨𝘦 𝘦𝘹𝘱𝘭𝘰𝘴𝘪𝘰𝘯 𝘰𝘤𝘤𝘶𝘳𝘴 𝘰𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘴𝘱𝘢𝘳𝘬𝘴 𝘸𝘦𝘳𝘦 𝘤𝘰𝘮𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘰𝘶𝘵.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Dragoon!!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘴𝘦𝘯𝘥𝘴 𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘧𝘭𝘺𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘉𝘶𝘳𝘴𝘵𝘴.
𝘉𝘦𝘯 𝘧𝘦𝘭𝘭𝘴 𝘰𝘯 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘬𝘯𝘦𝘦𝘴.
𝗥𝗲𝗳: Viking Dragoon! Burst Finish!! With the score of 3-1, Drake Kazeryu is the winner!
𝗛𝗮𝗻𝗮𝗺𝗶: It's finished! Baldur has been bursted!!
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲 (𝗝𝘂𝗺𝗽𝘀 𝗶𝗻 𝗲𝘅𝗰𝗶𝘁𝗲𝗺𝗲𝗻𝘁): I did it!!
𝗕𝗲𝗻 (𝗽𝗶𝗰𝗸𝘀 𝘂𝗽 𝗯𝗮𝗹𝗱𝘂𝗿): Baldur....
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳'𝘴 𝘭𝘢𝘺𝘦𝘳 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦𝘴
𝘉𝘦𝘯 (𝘚𝘮𝘪𝘭𝘦𝘴 𝘩𝘢𝘱𝘱𝘪𝘭𝘺): We'll beat him next time.
𝗩𝗮𝗹𝘁 (𝗟𝗼𝗼𝗸𝘀 𝗮𝘁 𝗩𝗮𝗹𝘁𝗿𝘆𝗲𝗸): Valtryek.... That was an intense battle! I wanna get more stroger now, partner!
𝘝𝘢𝘭𝘵𝘳𝘺𝘦𝘬 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦𝘴.
𝘉𝘦𝘯 𝘳𝘦𝘵𝘶𝘳𝘯𝘦𝘥 𝘵𝘰 𝘐𝘯𝘧𝘦𝘳𝘯𝘰 𝘊𝘰𝘳𝘱.
𝗔𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗻: So you lost huh?
𝗕𝗲𝗻 (𝗦𝗺𝗶𝗹𝗲𝘀): Yeah he was strong....
𝗔𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗻: I've never saw you smile like this in a long time....
𝗕𝗲𝗻: Then don't ruin it, step away from my way.
𝘉𝘦𝘯 𝘸𝘢𝘭𝘬𝘴 𝘸𝘢𝘺
𝗔𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗻 (𝗟𝗼𝗼𝗸𝘀 𝗮𝘁 𝗔𝗿𝗲𝘀): Looks like it's time to finish your hunger.... Ares.
𝘈𝘳𝘦𝘴 𝘶𝘯𝘭𝘦𝘢𝘴𝘩𝘦𝘥 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘤𝘰𝘳𝘳𝘶𝘱𝘵𝘦𝘥 𝘢𝘶𝘳𝘢.
𝙏𝙤 𝘽𝙚 𝘾𝙤𝙣𝙩𝙞𝙣𝙪𝙚𝙙.
Grammar: 4.9/5 - I spotted the most slight errors, but other than that, its fine!
Dialogue: 5/5 - Lol you make the dialogue very good and it looks like they are spreading their emotions very professional!
Writing: 5/5 - The writing was great and it really looked like you was happy to have done this, nicely done!
Characters: 5/5 - It seems the characters have emotion! Great job!
Story: 5/5 - I like how this episode is the result of all of the other episodes, it really shows how far Drake has come!
All 'n All (Total): 24.9/25 - Please, don't stop doing what you're doing! Amazing episode!!
this has to be my favorite chapter from you
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 01, 2021
(Aug. 01, 2021 3:15 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Aug. 01, 2021 2:50 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Chapter 13 is here (The Best Chapter Yet)
𝐂𝐡𝐚𝐩𝐭𝐞𝐫 𝟏𝟑: 𝐃𝐫𝐚𝐠𝐨𝐨𝐧 𝐕𝐒 𝐁𝐚𝐥𝐝𝐮𝐫!!
𝘼𝙩 𝙄𝙣𝙛𝙚𝙧𝙣𝙤 𝘾𝙤𝙧𝙥.
𝗔𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗻: Why are you even interested in that kid?
𝗕𝗲𝗻: I'm not interested to battle him, Baldur is.
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦𝘴 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘶𝘯𝘭𝘦𝘢𝘴𝘩𝘦𝘥 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘢𝘶𝘳𝘢
𝗕𝗲𝗻(𝗦𝗺𝗶𝗹𝗲𝘀): I've never seen Baldur too excited.
𝗔𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗻: Then do whatever you want, just don't lose against that kid.
𝗕𝗲𝗻(𝗟𝗼𝗼𝗸𝘀 𝗮𝘁 𝗵𝗶𝗺 𝘀𝗲𝗿𝗶𝗼𝘂𝘀𝗹𝘆): Do you really think I'll lose?
𝗔𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗻(𝗖𝗵𝘂𝗰𝗸𝗹𝗲𝘀): Who knows.... Drake has the Viking Layer so he could give you fight.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: I've already defeated him once..... and I know how he fight.
𝘉𝘦𝘯 𝘸𝘢𝘭𝘬𝘴 𝘢𝘸𝘢𝘺 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘤𝘭𝘰𝘴𝘦𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘥𝘰𝘰𝘳.
𝗔𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗻: I guess you pulled off a fluke against him.
𝘚𝘤𝘦𝘯𝘦 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘧𝘵𝘴 𝘵𝘰 𝘠𝘶𝘪𝘵𝘰, 𝘩𝘦 𝘸𝘢𝘴 𝘳𝘦𝘵𝘶𝘳𝘯𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘰 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘩𝘰𝘮𝘦
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼 (𝗟𝗼𝗼𝗸𝘀 𝗮𝘁 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗯𝗿𝗼𝗸𝗲𝗻 𝗯𝗲𝘆): ......
𝙁𝙡𝙖𝙨𝙝𝙗𝙖𝙘𝙠 𝙨𝙩𝙖𝙧𝙩𝙨
𝗕𝗲𝗻: Obstruct Wall!
𝘠𝘶𝘪𝘵𝘰'𝘴 𝘣𝘦𝘺 𝘨𝘰𝘵 𝘥𝘦𝘴𝘵𝘳𝘰𝘺𝘦𝘥 𝘪𝘯 𝘱𝘪𝘦𝘤𝘦𝘴.
𝙁𝙡𝙖𝙨𝙝𝙗𝙖𝙘𝙠 𝙚𝙣𝙙𝙨
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼(𝗪𝗵𝗶𝗹𝗲 𝗹𝗼𝗼𝗸𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝗮𝘁 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗯𝗿𝗼𝗸𝗲𝗻 𝗯𝗲𝘆): What am I gonna do now....?
𝘠𝘶𝘪𝘵𝘰 𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘤𝘩𝘦𝘴 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘮𝘢𝘯𝘴𝘪𝘰𝘯
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼: I'm home......
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼'𝘀 𝗚𝗿𝗮𝗻𝗱𝗽𝗮: Home already? That's perfect.
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼: What is it?
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼'𝘀 𝗚𝗿𝗮𝗻𝗱𝗽𝗮: I'm gonna finish the story I told you about Yinglong.
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼: I'm not interested.... get aside from my way.
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼'𝘀 𝗚𝗿𝗮𝗻𝗱𝗽𝗮: At least let me finish it, Yinglong's spirit is here on our home.
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼: What?
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼'𝘀 𝗴𝗿𝗮𝗻𝗱𝗽𝗮 (𝗣𝗼𝗶𝗻𝘁𝘀 𝗮𝘁 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗺𝗲𝗱𝗮𝗹𝗹𝗶𝗼𝗻): That thing you see... It has Yinglong's spirit, It's here for 8102 Years!
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼 (𝗧𝗮𝗸𝗲𝘀 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗺𝗲𝗱𝗮𝗹𝗹𝗶𝗼𝗻): You don't mind if I take it?
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼'𝘀 𝗚𝗿𝗮𝗻𝗱𝗽𝗮: Go ahead... take it. It's a lucky charm for the Arakawa family, you might find your way to the top if you carry it.
𝗬𝘂𝗶𝘁𝗼 (𝗦𝗺𝗶𝗹𝗲𝘀 𝗕𝗿𝗼𝗮𝗱𝗹𝘆): Thanks!
𝘼𝙩 𝘽𝘾 𝙎𝙤𝙡
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘬𝘦 𝘸𝘢𝘴 𝘱𝘳𝘢𝘤𝘵𝘪𝘤𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘭𝘢𝘶𝘯𝘤𝘩
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Let it Rip!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘢𝘤𝘤𝘦𝘭𝘦𝘳𝘢𝘵𝘦𝘴 𝘣𝘺 𝘶𝘴𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘦𝘥𝘨𝘦𝘴 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮.
𝗩𝗮𝗹𝘁: It's spinning more faster than before.....
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: I've only got 30 minutes before the match starts!
𝗩𝗮𝗹𝘁: And you look more than ready.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Yeah! And sorry I didn't asked it earlier... but where are your other friends?
𝗩𝗮𝗹𝘁 (𝗣𝗼𝗶𝗻𝘁𝘀 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗳𝗶𝗻𝗴𝗲𝗿 𝗼𝗻 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗵𝗲𝗮𝗱): Well..... Honcho is in Japan and Kit is also with him and Sisco's been looking for Free.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: That's why this place feels a little bit empty...
𝗩𝗮𝗹𝘁: I'll go to Japan tommorow, to see how Honcho is doing!
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: I'll go with you too. I wanna make sure Haruka is at home, then I can practice without any interruption!
𝘛𝘩𝘦 𝘛𝘝 𝘧𝘭𝘪𝘤𝘬𝘦𝘳𝘴 𝘰𝘯
𝗛𝗮𝗻𝗮𝗺𝗶: Okay! Boys and Girls! The Rematch between Drake and Ben is about to begin!
𝗩𝗮𝗹𝘁: Alright, Let's go!
𝘉𝘰𝘵𝘩 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘮 𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘤𝘩𝘦𝘥 𝘰𝘯 𝘵𝘪𝘮𝘦.
𝗛𝗮𝗻𝗮𝗺𝗶: Alright! It's time for the battle you've all been waiting for!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘬𝘦 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘉𝘦𝘯 𝘸𝘢𝘭𝘬𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘪𝘳 𝘸𝘢𝘺 𝘵𝘰 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: I thought you weren't going to show up.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Why? Cuz you don't wanna lose against me?
𝗕𝗲𝗻 (𝗟𝗮𝘂𝗴𝗵𝘀): Lose? Against You? Don't make me laugh!
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: You can laugh as loud as you can after this match.
𝗥𝗲𝗳: The battle will be held in the two points format.
𝗛𝗮𝗻𝗮𝗺𝗶 (𝗦𝗮𝘆𝘀 𝘀𝗹𝗼𝘄𝗹𝘆 𝗼𝗻 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗺𝗶𝗰): Ben Sumeragi and Drake Kazeryu's match is finally starting!
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲 (𝗟𝗼𝗼𝗸𝘀 𝗮𝘁 𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗴𝗼𝗼𝗻): 𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯... 𝘐'𝘮 𝘨𝘰𝘯𝘯𝘢 𝘸𝘪𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘬𝘦 𝘶𝘯𝘭𝘦𝘢𝘴𝘩𝘦𝘥 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘢𝘶𝘳𝘢 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘢𝘱𝘱𝘦𝘢𝘳𝘴 𝘣𝘦𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘥 𝘩𝘪𝘮.
𝗕𝗲𝗻 (𝗦𝗮𝘄 𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗴𝗼𝗼𝗻 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝘀𝗺𝗶𝗹𝗲𝘀 𝗦𝘂𝗿𝗽𝗿𝗶𝘀𝗶𝗻𝗴𝗹𝘆): Heh...
𝗥𝗲𝗳: First Battle!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘬𝘦 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘉𝘦𝘯 𝘵𝘢𝘬𝘦𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘪𝘳 𝘭𝘢𝘶𝘯𝘤𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘯𝘤𝘦𝘴.
𝗥𝗲𝗳: Ready Set!
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲/𝗕𝗲𝗻: 3! 2! 1! Let it Rip!!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘢𝘤𝘤𝘦𝘭𝘦𝘳𝘢𝘵𝘦𝘴 𝘣𝘺 𝘶𝘴𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘭𝘰𝘱𝘦𝘴 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘵𝘰𝘰𝘬 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘤𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘦𝘳.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Go, Dragoon!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘭𝘢𝘯𝘥𝘴 𝘢 𝘣𝘢𝘳𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘦 𝘰𝘧 𝘢𝘵𝘵𝘢𝘤𝘬𝘴 𝘣𝘶𝘵 𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘥𝘪𝘥𝘯'𝘵 𝘮𝘰𝘷𝘦𝘥 𝘧𝘳𝘰𝘮 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘤𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘦𝘳.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: It's getting boring....
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳'𝘴 𝘦𝘺𝘦𝘴 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦𝘴 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘪𝘵 𝘨𝘦𝘵𝘴 𝘤𝘰𝘷𝘦𝘳𝘦𝘥 𝘣𝘺 𝘢 𝘣𝘭𝘢𝘤𝘬 𝘣𝘢𝘳𝘳𝘪𝘦𝘳.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: Obstruct Wall!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘩𝘪𝘵𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘸𝘢𝘭𝘭 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘨𝘦𝘵𝘴 𝘣𝘭𝘰𝘸𝘯 𝘢𝘸𝘢𝘺.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲 (𝗪𝗵𝗶𝗹𝗲 𝗦𝗺𝗶𝗹𝗶𝗻𝗴): I knew you would use a new move.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: Baldur is just getting started!
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲 (𝗨𝗻𝗹𝗲𝗮𝘀𝗵𝗲𝗱 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗮𝘂𝗿𝗮): Same here!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦𝘴 𝘪𝘯 𝘮𝘪𝘥-𝘢𝘪𝘳 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘢𝘱𝘱𝘦𝘢𝘳𝘴 𝘴𝘤𝘰𝘳𝘤𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘩𝘳𝘰𝘶𝘨𝘩 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘢𝘶𝘳𝘢.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Here goes!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘴𝘶𝘳𝘷𝘪𝘷𝘦𝘥 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘭𝘢𝘯𝘥𝘴 𝘣𝘢𝘤𝘬 𝘰𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮.
𝗛𝗮𝗻𝗮𝗺𝗶: Unbelievable! Dragoon survived!!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘴𝘱𝘪𝘯𝘴 𝘸𝘢𝘺 𝘮𝘰𝘳𝘦 𝘧𝘢𝘴𝘵𝘦𝘳 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘯 𝘣𝘦𝘧𝘰𝘳𝘦.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Triple Wing Cyclone!!
𝘛𝘩𝘦 𝘸𝘪𝘯𝘥 𝘸𝘦𝘪𝘨𝘩𝘵 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦𝘴 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘤𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘵𝘦𝘴 𝘢 𝘤𝘺𝘤𝘭𝘰𝘯𝘦.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: What the-?
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘨𝘰𝘵 𝘤𝘢𝘶𝘨𝘩𝘵 𝘪𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘷𝘰𝘳𝘵𝘦𝘹 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘨𝘦𝘵𝘴 𝘬𝘯𝘰𝘤𝘬𝘦𝘥 𝘰𝘶𝘵 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮.
𝗥𝗲𝗳: Viking Dragoon! Ring-Out Finish! The Score is 1-0!
𝗛𝗮𝗻𝗮𝗺𝗶: Wow! Drake earned a point against Ben!
𝗔𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗻 (𝗪𝗮𝘁𝗰𝗵𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝗳𝗿𝗼𝗺 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗖𝗼𝗿𝗽.): Amazing....
𝗕𝗲𝗻 (𝗣𝗶𝗰𝗸𝘀 𝘂𝗽 𝗕𝗮𝗹𝗱𝘂𝗿): Heh, You've gotten a little bit improved.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: I've gotten super improved!
𝗕𝗲𝗻: This time I'll show you what really Baldur is capable of!
𝗥𝗲𝗳: Second Battle! Ready Set!
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲/𝗕𝗲𝗻: 3! 2! 1! Let it Rip!!
𝘉𝘦𝘯 𝘭𝘢𝘶𝘯𝘤𝘩𝘦𝘥 𝘷𝘦𝘳𝘵𝘪𝘤𝘢𝘭𝘭𝘺.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: 𝘏𝘦 𝘤𝘩𝘢𝘯𝘨𝘦𝘥 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘭𝘢𝘶𝘯𝘤𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘨𝘦𝘴𝘵𝘶𝘳𝘦!
𝗕𝗲𝗻: Lightspeed Launch!
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘳𝘪𝘥𝘦𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘦𝘥𝘨𝘦 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘴𝘱𝘦𝘦𝘥𝘴 𝘶𝘱 𝘳𝘢𝘱𝘪𝘥𝘭𝘺.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Dragoon! Knock him away!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘴𝘱𝘦𝘦𝘥𝘴 𝘶𝘱 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘩𝘦𝘢𝘥𝘴 𝘵𝘰𝘸𝘢𝘳𝘥𝘴 𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: It's no use!
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘥𝘰𝘥𝘨𝘦𝘥 𝘣𝘺 𝘳𝘪𝘥𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘦𝘥𝘨𝘦 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘩𝘪𝘵𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘸𝘢𝘭𝘭 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘨𝘦𝘵𝘴 𝘴𝘭𝘰𝘸𝘯 𝘥𝘰𝘸𝘯.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: No way!
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘩𝘦𝘢𝘥𝘴 𝘵𝘰𝘸𝘢𝘳𝘥𝘴 𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 𝘪𝘯𝘤𝘳𝘦𝘥𝘪𝘣𝘭𝘦 𝘴𝘱𝘦𝘦𝘥.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Dragoon!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘣𝘦𝘨𝘢𝘯𝘴 𝘵𝘰 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: Burst him into pieces! Obstruct Calamity!!
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘩𝘪𝘵𝘴 𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 𝘧𝘶𝘭𝘭 𝘧𝘰𝘳𝘤𝘦 𝘸𝘩𝘪𝘤𝘩 𝘭𝘦𝘥 𝘵𝘰 𝘢 𝘩𝘶𝘨𝘦 𝘦𝘹𝘱𝘭𝘰𝘴𝘪𝘰𝘯 𝘪𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮.
𝗕𝗲𝗻 (𝗟𝗮𝘂𝗴𝗵𝘀): I won!
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Tch!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘤𝘢𝘮𝘦𝘴 𝘰𝘶𝘵 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘮𝘰𝘬𝘦 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘧𝘦𝘭𝘭𝘴 𝘥𝘰𝘸𝘯 𝘰𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘨𝘳𝘰𝘶𝘯𝘥.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: Huh?
𝗥𝗲𝗳: Magic Baldur! Ring-Out Finish! The score is 1-1!
𝗛𝗮𝗻𝗮𝗺𝗶: Wow! Wow! Wow!!! Looks like Dragoon survived the huge impact from Baldur!!
𝗩𝗮𝗹𝘁: It was so close....
𝘛𝘩𝘦 𝘤𝘳𝘰𝘸𝘥 𝘨𝘰𝘦𝘴 𝘸𝘪𝘭𝘥.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲 (𝗣𝗶𝗰𝗸𝘀 𝘂𝗽 𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗴𝗼𝗼𝗻): You did well, partner!
𝗕𝗲𝗻: This won't happen again!
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲 (𝗦𝗵𝗼𝘄𝘀 𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗴𝗼𝗼𝗻 𝘁𝗼 𝗕𝗲𝗻): My partner will burst Baldur in this round!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘬𝘦'𝘴 𝘦𝘺𝘦𝘴 𝘣𝘦𝘨𝘪𝘯𝘴 𝘵𝘰 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦 𝘣𝘭𝘶𝘦.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: 𝘛𝘩𝘦𝘳𝘦'𝘴 𝘴𝘰𝘮𝘦𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘥𝘪𝘧𝘧𝘦𝘳𝘦𝘯𝘵 𝘢𝘣𝘰𝘶𝘵 𝘩𝘪𝘮....
𝗥𝗲𝗳: Third Battle! Ready Set!
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲/𝗕𝗲𝗻: 3! 2! 1! Let it Rip!!
𝗕𝗲𝗻: Lightspeed Launch!
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘳𝘪𝘥𝘦𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘦𝘥𝘨𝘦 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘴𝘱𝘦𝘦𝘥𝘴 𝘶𝘱 𝘳𝘢𝘱𝘪𝘥𝘭𝘺.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲 (𝗨𝗻𝗹𝗲𝗮𝘀𝗵𝗲𝗱 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗮𝘂𝗿𝗮): I'M GOING TO WIN!!!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦𝘴 𝘪𝘯 𝘮𝘪𝘥-𝘢𝘪𝘳 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘢𝘱𝘱𝘦𝘢𝘳𝘴 𝘴𝘤𝘰𝘳𝘤𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘩𝘳𝘰𝘶𝘨𝘩 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘢𝘶𝘳𝘢.
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘳𝘪𝘥𝘦𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘦𝘥𝘨𝘦 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘩𝘪𝘵𝘴 𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳.
𝗛𝗮𝗻𝗮𝗺𝗶: Dragoon stopped Baldur!!
𝗕𝗲𝗻 (𝗨𝗻𝗹𝗲𝗮𝘀𝗵𝗲𝗱 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗮𝘂𝗿𝗮): Baldur!
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘢𝘱𝘱𝘦𝘢𝘳𝘴 𝘧𝘳𝘰𝘮 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘢𝘶𝘳𝘢.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: Magic Obstruction!!
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳'𝘴 𝘋𝘳𝘪𝘷𝘦𝘳 𝘩𝘪𝘵𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘸𝘢𝘭𝘭 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘪𝘵 𝘩𝘦𝘢𝘥𝘴 𝘵𝘰𝘸𝘢𝘳𝘥𝘴 𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Ultra Viking Whip!!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘩𝘦𝘢𝘥𝘴 𝘵𝘰𝘸𝘢𝘳𝘥𝘴 𝘦𝘢𝘤𝘩 𝘰𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘳 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘸𝘦𝘳𝘦 𝘢𝘣𝘰𝘶𝘵 𝘵𝘰 𝘤𝘭𝘢𝘴𝘩.
𝗕𝗲𝗻: My Defence is......
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: My Attacks is......
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲/𝗕𝗲𝗻: UNBEATABLE!!!!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘤𝘭𝘢𝘴𝘩𝘦𝘥.
𝘈 𝘩𝘶𝘨𝘦 𝘦𝘹𝘱𝘭𝘰𝘴𝘪𝘰𝘯 𝘰𝘤𝘤𝘶𝘳𝘴 𝘰𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘶𝘮 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘴𝘱𝘢𝘳𝘬𝘴 𝘸𝘦𝘳𝘦 𝘤𝘰𝘮𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘰𝘶𝘵.
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲: Dragoon!!
𝘋𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘯 𝘴𝘦𝘯𝘥𝘴 𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘧𝘭𝘺𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳 𝘉𝘶𝘳𝘴𝘵𝘴.
𝘉𝘦𝘯 𝘧𝘦𝘭𝘭𝘴 𝘰𝘯 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘬𝘯𝘦𝘦𝘴.
𝗥𝗲𝗳: Viking Dragoon! Burst Finish!! With the score of 3-1, Drake Kazeryu is the winner!
𝗛𝗮𝗻𝗮𝗺𝗶: It's finished! Baldur has been bursted!!
𝗗𝗿𝗮𝗸𝗲 (𝗝𝘂𝗺𝗽𝘀 𝗶𝗻 𝗲𝘅𝗰𝗶𝘁𝗲𝗺𝗲𝗻𝘁): I did it!!
𝗕𝗲𝗻 (𝗽𝗶𝗰𝗸𝘀 𝘂𝗽 𝗯𝗮𝗹𝗱𝘂𝗿): Baldur....
𝘉𝘢𝘭𝘥𝘶𝘳'𝘴 𝘭𝘢𝘺𝘦𝘳 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦𝘴
𝘉𝘦𝘯 (𝘚𝘮𝘪𝘭𝘦𝘴 𝘩𝘢𝘱𝘱𝘪𝘭𝘺): We'll beat him next time.
𝗩𝗮𝗹𝘁 (𝗟𝗼𝗼𝗸𝘀 𝗮𝘁 𝗩𝗮𝗹𝘁𝗿𝘆𝗲𝗸): Valtryek.... That was an intense battle! I wanna get more stroger now, partner!
𝘝𝘢𝘭𝘵𝘳𝘺𝘦𝘬 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦𝘴.
𝘉𝘦𝘯 𝘳𝘦𝘵𝘶𝘳𝘯𝘦𝘥 𝘵𝘰 𝘐𝘯𝘧𝘦𝘳𝘯𝘰 𝘊𝘰𝘳𝘱.
𝗔𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗻: So you lost huh?
𝗕𝗲𝗻 (𝗦𝗺𝗶𝗹𝗲𝘀): Yeah he was strong....
𝗔𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗻: I've never saw you smile like this in a long time....
𝗕𝗲𝗻: Then don't ruin it, step away from my way.
𝘉𝘦𝘯 𝘸𝘢𝘭𝘬𝘴 𝘸𝘢𝘺
𝗔𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗻 (𝗟𝗼𝗼𝗸𝘀 𝗮𝘁 𝗔𝗿𝗲𝘀): Looks like it's time to finish your hunger.... Ares.
𝘈𝘳𝘦𝘴 𝘶𝘯𝘭𝘦𝘢𝘴𝘩𝘦𝘥 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘤𝘰𝘳𝘳𝘶𝘱𝘵𝘦𝘥 𝘢𝘶𝘳𝘢.
𝙏𝙤 𝘽𝙚 𝘾𝙤𝙣𝙩𝙞𝙣𝙪𝙚𝙙.
Grammar: 4.9/5 - I spotted the most slight errors, but other than that, its fine!
Dialogue: 5/5 - Lol you make the dialogue very good and it looks like they are spreading their emotions very professional!
Writing: 5/5 - The writing was great and it really looked like you was happy to have done this, nicely done!
Characters: 5/5 - It seems the characters have emotion! Great job!
Story: 5/5 - I like how this episode is the result of all of the other episodes, it really shows how far Drake has come!
All 'n All (Total): 24.9/25 - Please, don't stop doing what you're doing! Amazing episode!!
this has to be my favorite chapter from you
I'm glad you liked it. What was your fav part?
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - GenesisBlader - Aug. 01, 2021
(Aug. 01, 2021 3:34 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: (Aug. 01, 2021 3:15 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: Grammar: 4.9/5 - I spotted the most slight errors, but other than that, its fine!
Dialogue: 5/5 - Lol you make the dialogue very good and it looks like they are spreading their emotions very professional!
Writing: 5/5 - The writing was great and it really looked like you was happy to have done this, nicely done!
Characters: 5/5 - It seems the characters have emotion! Great job!
Story: 5/5 - I like how this episode is the result of all of the other episodes, it really shows how far Drake has come!
All 'n All (Total): 24.9/25 - Please, don't stop doing what you're doing! Amazing episode!!
this has to be my favorite chapter from you
I'm glad you liked it. What was your fav part? definitely had to be when dragoon countered baldur's dread vertical type move!
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Demon Belial - Aug. 01, 2021
It was great! But I had to use my pc to read it. Cuz the fonts were not visible on my phone.
And Im bad at rating sorry.
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 01, 2021
(Aug. 01, 2021 4:13 PM)Thank Demon Belial Wrote: It was great! But I had to use my pc to read it. Cuz the fonts were not visible on my phone.
And Im bad at rating sorry.
Alright, then I won’t use different fonts
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - LegendJustice - Aug. 01, 2021
I could not see the character some square was voted blocking it I'm gonna need to read it in computer
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 01, 2021
Chapter 14 will mainly focus Valt and Free.
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 02, 2021
The Turbo Festival Competitors
Drake Kazeryu (Viking Dragoon)
Ben Sumeragi (Magic Baldur)
Yuito Arakawa (Soar Yinglong)
Aiden Sumeragi (Viking Ares)
Julian Kazuchi (Lightning Jupiter)
Phi (Redux Phoenix)
Hyde (Terror Hades)
Akira Sakurai (Meteo Aqen)
Kieran Winters (Trickster Kelpie)
Lui Shirosagi (Massacre Luinor)
Free Dela Hoya (Divine Fafnir)
Valt Aoi (Seraph Valtryek)
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Demon Belial - Aug. 02, 2021
(Aug. 02, 2021 11:04 AM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: The Turbo Festival Competitors
Drake Kazeryu (Viking Dragoon)
Ben Sumeragi (Magic Baldur)
Yuito Arakawa (Soar Yinglong)
Aiden Sumeragi (Viking Ares)
Julian Kazuchi (Lightning Jupiter)
Phi (Redux Phoenix)
Hyde (Terror Hades)
Akira Sakurai (Meteorite Aqen)
Red Eye (Sacred Spryzen)
Lui Shirosagi (Massacre Luinor)
Free Dela Hoya (Divine Fafnir)
Valt Aoi (Seraph Valtryek)
I like the name aqen
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 02, 2021
This is how Seraph Valtryek looks
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Demon Belial - Aug. 02, 2021
(Aug. 02, 2021 12:28 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: This is how Seraph Valtryek looks
The bey looks purple... But Valkyrie always is blue.
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 03, 2021
(Aug. 02, 2021 7:04 PM)Demon Belial Wrote: (Aug. 02, 2021 12:28 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: This is how Seraph Valtryek looks
The bey looks purple... But Valkyrie always is blue.
I guess I made a mistake lol.
Red Eye's face reveal
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Demon Belial - Aug. 03, 2021
(Jul. 26, 2021 10:36 AM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Redux Phoenix .Diminute Variance(Driver + Disc) -Secure
VS Chip: Phoenix
VS Layer: Redux, It has eight blades, just like Revive Phoenix, but these are more thick.
VS Core: Diminute, It is aligned with the eight blades of Redux Layer.
Disc+Driver: Variance, It has a lot of metal on it, It's used to make the layer more heavier and the driver has two modes, defence mode and counter mode. In Defence mode, The tip has a free-spinning metal ball, and in counter mode, It's a free-spinnning rubber ball,(The modes can be switched)
VS Weight: Secure, It has two modes, one for prevent the armor from falling and the second to make it fall from the layer.
Plus that's this is the new Red Eye. (It took me 2 hours to edit it)
I never noticed it
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - LegendJustice - Aug. 03, 2021
Sheesh new red eye is sick!!!
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 03, 2021
Upcoming Chapters (I did some changes)
Chapter 15: The Dragon of Arakawa!
Chapter 16: Thunderstorm! Lightning Jupiter!!
Chapter 17: The Turbo Festival Begins!!
Chapter 18: The Soul Keeper! Meteo Aqen!!
Chapter 19: Twin Dragon Strategy! Beat'em all!!
Chapter 20: Fly Once Again! Redux Phoenix!!
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Hollowmind13 - Aug. 03, 2021
(Aug. 03, 2021 12:15 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Upcoming Chapters (I did some changes)
Chapter 15: The Dragon of Arakawa!
Chapter 16: Thunderstorm! Lightning Jupiter!!
Chapter 17: The Turbo Festival Begins!!
Chapter 18: The Soul Keeper! Meteo Aqen!!
Chapter 19: Twin Dragon Strategy! Beat'em all!!
Chapter 20: Fly Once Again! Redux Phoenix!! Lightning Jupiter... There's a constant storm on Jupiter BUT also Jupiter is the roman version of Zeus, the greek god of lightning.
I see what you did there, nice.
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