RE: Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown - GenesisBlader - Jul. 12, 2021
(Jul. 12, 2021 11:28 AM)Valt Aoi01 Wrote: (Jul. 12, 2021 11:27 AM)Demon Belial Wrote: Okay... But Fafnir should have give a fight against Baldur. I liked the chapters but still.... Anyways thanks for this overview.
Thnx for the feedback
Chapter 4 is here
Beyblade Burst: Viking Showdown
Chapter 4 Pefecting the Launch!
Aiden: This is the first ever made VS bey, Viking Ares!!
Drake: That can't be...
Valt: Wait didn't you said you created this system?
Drake: I did! That guy is just lying...
Haruka: We weDrake: Aiden's lab.. He said he was only going to analyze Dragoon.. wait.. So he stole the blueprints from your bag!
Drake: I won't forgive him for what he did... I am going straight to his corporation right now!
Valt: Don't do that.
Drake: huh? But why?
Valt: It's a whole corporation, do you think you can stand up against them all by your own? Besides you don't have any proof to show as well.
Drake: Well I can't just sit here either!
Valt: We will get to them later. Why not we practice together?
Drake: Yeah why not
Valt  Smiles)
Haruka: Yeah Drake does need to practice... He don't even know how to lau-
Drake That's enough Haruka! I can win, even if I don't know how to launch... I got this!
Valt: What? You don't know how to launch? You need to learn the basics. Ba-Si-Cs. I remember the day when I couldn't launch Valtryek properly... But know look how much I've grown! Not only me my partner has grown too!(Shows Turbo Vaktryek)
Drake: Partner huh...?
Haruka: Huh? Even you didn't knew how to launch. That means Drake can grow just like you?
Valt: He can even surpass me if he trains harder. But the most important thing is to believe in your bey.
Drake: Fine then. What I have to do first?
Valt: First of all you need to is 200 push-ups and 1000 launches.
(Drake got shocked by how many training he has to do on his first day, but he still agreed to do it)
Drake: F- fine then.... I'll do it! I'll do Whatever it takes to become the best!
(At El Santa, Free was leaving from but suddenly)
Lui: I can't believe this Free...
Free Looks at Lui) Lui...
Lui: My old friend! You've become great at losing! Maybe even the best! [Laughs like he always laugh(Y'all know how Lui laughs)
Free: Maybe you should take him on, you might be able to put up a better fight against Ben.
Lui: A better fight? I will crush him! And it's been so long I haven't found a prey, Luinor will wreck Baldur!
(Free was leaving without saying a word)
Lui: Tell me one thing Free... Are you really gonna quit blading?
Free: I don't know..... It looks like I have forgotten my own path. I cannot keep up with others... I've forgotten why do I even battle. I just wanna be alone for a while, maybe I'll come back later...
Lui: heh, then I'll be waiting for you Free! Don't lose to anyone else before you battle me.
(Back at BC Sol, Drake completed his training, but it didn't help to improve his launch)
Drake: What am I doing wrong? I even trained as well...
Valt: Looks like you need a break.
Drake: I won't take any break! I have to learn how to launch!!!
Valt: Fine then, come sit with me
(Valt pulls out his phone and shows Drake Shu's picture)
Drake: That's...
Valt: He's Shu, he's my childhood friend!
Drake: I know, I've seen how he battles, Spryzen is an impressive bey...
Valt Shows His battle with Lui(Season 1 battle)) He used his right hand and made his bey more stable and faster.
Drake: I see.... I feel like I'm ready Valt! I'm gonna battle you right now!
Valt: Alright then!
(Valt and Drake took their places at the stadium)
Drake: Don't hold back anything.
Valt: I won't!
Drake(thinking): If I can't launch my bey using my left hand, then I'll use my right hand).
Drake:3!2!1!
(Drake Copies Valt's Launch while holding the launcher with his right hand and then launches his bey Vertically, like Crux Boost)
Drake/Valt: Let it rip!!!
(Valtryek's Turbo Wings came out)
(Dragoon spins more rapidly than it usually spins and became more stable)
Drake: Alright! Now Dragoon, send Valtryek out of the stadium!!
(Dragoon heads towards Valtryek and hits it)
[To Be Continued]
I tried to make it a bit longer
Next Chapter's summary
Explosive Sword! Valtryek!
Dragoon and Valtryek clashes for the first time! Valt shows Valtryek's true strength, Drake asks Dragoon to attack but it refuses!?!? there's no problem with this chapter, except that it's one of the best i've read! lol
RE: Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 12, 2021
(Jul. 12, 2021 5:51 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jul. 12, 2021 11:28 AM)Valt Aoi01 Wrote: Thnx for the feedback
Chapter 4 is here
Beyblade Burst: Viking Showdown
Chapter 4 Pefecting the Launch!
Aiden: This is the first ever made VS bey, Viking Ares!!
Drake: That can't be...
Valt: Wait didn't you said you created this system?
Drake: I did! That guy is just lying...
Haruka: We weDrake: Aiden's lab.. He said he was only going to analyze Dragoon.. wait.. So he stole the blueprints from your bag!
Drake: I won't forgive him for what he did... I am going straight to his corporation right now!
Valt: Don't do that.
Drake: huh? But why?
Valt: It's a whole corporation, do you think you can stand up against them all by your own? Besides you don't have any proof to show as well.
Drake: Well I can't just sit here either!
Valt: We will get to them later. Why not we practice together?
Drake: Yeah why not
Valt Smiles)
Haruka: Yeah Drake does need to practice... He don't even know how to lau-
Drake That's enough Haruka! I can win, even if I don't know how to launch... I got this!
Valt: What? You don't know how to launch? You need to learn the basics. Ba-Si-Cs. I remember the day when I couldn't launch Valtryek properly... But know look how much I've grown! Not only me my partner has grown too!(Shows Turbo Vaktryek)
Drake: Partner huh...?
Haruka: Huh? Even you didn't knew how to launch. That means Drake can grow just like you?
Valt: He can even surpass me if he trains harder. But the most important thing is to believe in your bey.
Drake: Fine then. What I have to do first?
Valt: First of all you need to is 200 push-ups and 1000 launches.
(Drake got shocked by how many training he has to do on his first day, but he still agreed to do it)
Drake: F- fine then.... I'll do it! I'll do Whatever it takes to become the best!
(At El Santa, Free was leaving from but suddenly)
Lui: I can't believe this Free...
Free Looks at Lui) Lui...
Lui: My old friend! You've become great at losing! Maybe even the best! [Laughs like he always laugh(Y'all know how Lui laughs)
Free: Maybe you should take him on, you might be able to put up a better fight against Ben.
Lui: A better fight? I will crush him! And it's been so long I haven't found a prey, Luinor will wreck Baldur!
(Free was leaving without saying a word)
Lui: Tell me one thing Free... Are you really gonna quit blading?
Free: I don't know..... It looks like I have forgotten my own path. I cannot keep up with others... I've forgotten why do I even battle. I just wanna be alone for a while, maybe I'll come back later...
Lui: heh, then I'll be waiting for you Free! Don't lose to anyone else before you battle me.
(Back at BC Sol, Drake completed his training, but it didn't help to improve his launch)
Drake: What am I doing wrong? I even trained as well...
Valt: Looks like you need a break.
Drake: I won't take any break! I have to learn how to launch!!!
Valt: Fine then, come sit with me
(Valt pulls out his phone and shows Drake Shu's picture)
Drake: That's...
Valt: He's Shu, he's my childhood friend!
Drake: I know, I've seen how he battles, Spryzen is an impressive bey...
Valt Shows His battle with Lui(Season 1 battle)) He used his right hand and made his bey more stable and faster.
Drake: I see.... I feel like I'm ready Valt! I'm gonna battle you right now!
Valt: Alright then!
(Valt and Drake took their places at the stadium)
Drake: Don't hold back anything.
Valt: I won't!
Drake(thinking): If I can't launch my bey using my left hand, then I'll use my right hand).
Drake:3!2!1!
(Drake Copies Valt's Launch while holding the launcher with his right hand and then launches his bey Vertically, like Crux Boost)
Drake/Valt: Let it rip!!!
(Valtryek's Turbo Wings came out)
(Dragoon spins more rapidly than it usually spins and became more stable)
Drake: Alright! Now Dragoon, send Valtryek out of the stadium!!
(Dragoon heads towards Valtryek and hits it)
[To Be Continued]
I tried to make it a bit longer
Next Chapter's summary
Explosive Sword! Valtryek!
Dragoon and Valtryek clashes for the first time! Valt shows Valtryek's true strength, Drake asks Dragoon to attack but it refuses!?!? there's no problem with this chapter, except that it's one of the best i've read! lol
Thanks, I'm planning to make Chapter 5 more longer and there will be more improvements.
(Jul. 12, 2021 5:43 PM)Demon Belial Wrote: (Jul. 12, 2021 11:28 AM)Valt Aoi01 Wrote: Thnx for the feedback
Chapter 4 is here
Beyblade Burst: Viking Showdown
Chapter 4 Pefecting the Launch!
Aiden: This is the first ever made VS bey, Viking Ares!!
Drake: That can't be...
Valt: Wait didn't you said you created this system?
Drake: I did! That guy is just lying...
Haruka: We weDrake: Aiden's lab.. He said he was only going to analyze Dragoon.. wait.. So he stole the blueprints from your bag!
Drake: I won't forgive him for what he did... I am going straight to his corporation right now!
Valt: Don't do that.
Drake: huh? But why?
Valt: It's a whole corporation, do you think you can stand up against them all by your own? Besides you don't have any proof to show as well.
Drake: Well I can't just sit here either!
Valt: We will get to them later. Why not we practice together?
Drake: Yeah why not
Valt Smiles)
Haruka: Yeah Drake does need to practice... He don't even know how to lau-
Drake That's enough Haruka! I can win, even if I don't know how to launch... I got this!
Valt: What? You don't know how to launch? You need to learn the basics. Ba-Si-Cs. I remember the day when I couldn't launch Valtryek properly... But know look how much I've grown! Not only me my partner has grown too!(Shows Turbo Vaktryek)
Drake: Partner huh...?
Haruka: Huh? Even you didn't knew how to launch. That means Drake can grow just like you?
Valt: He can even surpass me if he trains harder. But the most important thing is to believe in your bey.
Drake: Fine then. What I have to do first?
Valt: First of all you need to is 200 push-ups and 1000 launches.
(Drake got shocked by how many training he has to do on his first day, but he still agreed to do it)
Drake: F- fine then.... I'll do it! I'll do Whatever it takes to become the best!
(At El Santa, Free was leaving from but suddenly)
Lui: I can't believe this Free...
Free Looks at Lui) Lui...
Lui: My old friend! You've become great at losing! Maybe even the best! [Laughs like he always laugh(Y'all know how Lui laughs)
Free: Maybe you should take him on, you might be able to put up a better fight against Ben.
Lui: A better fight? I will crush him! And it's been so long I haven't found a prey, Luinor will wreck Baldur!
(Free was leaving without saying a word)
Lui: Tell me one thing Free... Are you really gonna quit blading?
Free: I don't know..... It looks like I have forgotten my own path. I cannot keep up with others... I've forgotten why do I even battle. I just wanna be alone for a while, maybe I'll come back later...
Lui: heh, then I'll be waiting for you Free! Don't lose to anyone else before you battle me.
(Back at BC Sol, Drake completed his training, but it didn't help to improve his launch)
Drake: What am I doing wrong? I even trained as well...
Valt: Looks like you need a break.
Drake: I won't take any break! I have to learn how to launch!!!
Valt: Fine then, come sit with me
(Valt pulls out his phone and shows Drake Shu's picture)
Drake: That's...
Valt: He's Shu, he's my childhood friend!
Drake: I know, I've seen how he battles, Spryzen is an impressive bey...
Valt Shows His battle with Lui(Season 1 battle)) He used his right hand and made his bey more stable and faster.
Drake: I see.... I feel like I'm ready Valt! I'm gonna battle you right now!
Valt: Alright then!
(Valt and Drake took their places at the stadium)
Drake: Don't hold back anything.
Valt: I won't!
Drake(thinking): If I can't launch my bey using my left hand, then I'll use my right hand).
Drake:3!2!1!
(Drake Copies Valt's Launch while holding the launcher with his right hand and then launches his bey Vertically, like Crux Boost)
Drake/Valt: Let it rip!!!
(Valtryek's Turbo Wings came out)
(Dragoon spins more rapidly than it usually spins and became more stable)
Drake: Alright! Now Dragoon, send Valtryek out of the stadium!!
(Dragoon heads towards Valtryek and hits it)
[To Be Continued]
I tried to make it a bit longer
Next Chapter's summary
Explosive Sword! Valtryek!
Dragoon and Valtryek clashes for the first time! Valt shows Valtryek's true strength, Drake asks Dragoon to attack but it refuses!?!? No problem. And I am reading the chapter. So far looks good
I have one request don't make Lui lose to Ben. Lol
lol I'll try
RE: Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown - Demon Belial - Jul. 13, 2021
(Jul. 12, 2021 7:27 PM)Valt Aoi01 Wrote: (Jul. 12, 2021 5:51 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: there's no problem with this chapter, except that it's one of the best i've read! lol
Thanks, I'm planning to make Chapter 5 more longer and there will be more improvements.
(Jul. 12, 2021 5:43 PM)Demon Belial Wrote: No problem. And I am reading the chapter. So far looks good
I have one request don't make Lui lose to Ben. Lol
lol I'll try
ok
RE: Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 13, 2021
Viking Dragoon looks like this
![[Image: dragoon.jpg]](https://i.ibb.co/FxWnJgs/dragoon.jpg) I tried drawing it on MS paint. I guess it's a lil bit bad
RE: Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown - Demon Belial - Jul. 13, 2021
(Jul. 13, 2021 7:38 AM)Valt Aoi01 Wrote: Viking Dragoon looks like this
I tried drawing it on MS paint. I guess it's a lil bit bad
Nice try! The blades looks weird but the chip is cool!
RE: Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 13, 2021
Next Chapter's titles:
Chapter 5: Wielder of the Sword of Hope! Valtryek!
Chapter 6: Insanely Strong! Brutal Spiral!
Chapter 7: The Cursed Demon! Spector Satomb!
Chapter 8: Defeat Phi!
I changed chapter 6's name cuz I want to make it more longer
RE: Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown - Demon Belial - Jul. 13, 2021
(Jul. 13, 2021 3:29 PM)Valt Aoi01 Wrote: Next Chapter's titles:
Chapter 5: Wielder of the Sword of Hope! Valtryek!
Chapter 6: Insanely Strong! Brutal Spiral!
Chapter 7: The Cursed Demon! Spector Satomb!
Chapter 8: Defeat Phi!
I changed chapter 6's name cuz I want to make it more longer
You changed Chapter 5 too. But I like the name of new Satomb
RE: Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown - LegendJustice - Jul. 13, 2021
Hmm look forward t9 it
RE: Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown - GenesisBlader - Jul. 13, 2021
wow he's gonna be defeating or attempting to defeat phi! interesting
RE: Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown - LegendJustice - Jul. 13, 2021
I did see some grammar problems in the chapters but this is good!
RE: Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 13, 2021
(Jul. 13, 2021 5:12 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: wow he's gonna be defeating or attempting to defeat phi! interesting
Yeah, Phi is gonna play a important role for Drake’s development.
RE: Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 14, 2021
Chapter 5 is out! (I tried to make the best chapter I've ever posted. Do let me know your thoughts about it)
Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown
Chapter 5: Wielder of the sword of hope! Valtryek!
Drake/Valt: Let it rip!!
Valt: (In his thought): That shoot pose....
(Valtryek's Turbo wings came out)
(Dragoon lands perfectly and more stable and it was ever before and heads towards Valtryek)
Drake: Go! Go! Dragoon!!
(Dragoon clashes with Valtryek)
Valt: Break through, Valtryek!
(Valtryek sends Dragoon flying)
Drake: Hang in there, Dragoon!
(Dragoon hits the wall of the stadium and survived)
Valt: Now it's time for rush launch!
(Valtryek lands a barrage of attacks from all the directions.)
Drake: S- so fast....
(Valtryek knocks Dragoon out from the stadium)
Drake: I- it's not over yet!
Valt: Yeah, this time I'm gonna burst Dragoon!
Haruka: Drake, you can do this just focus.
(Drake looks at Dragoon and suddenly he saw him right front of him)
Drake: Dragoon....?
Dragoon: Are you qualified to fight with this Viking Dragoon?
Drake: Qualified to..?
Dragoon: Only the strongest and invincible blader can make use of the Viking Layer.
Drake: I- I'm the strongest I'll prove you!
(Dragoon disappears, then Drake looks at Valt, he saw Valtryek behind him. Then he remembers Aiden's words that Valtryek is the strongest bey in the world despite Aiger being the world champion)
Drake: Valt, I'm gonna beat you and prove that I'm the strongest blader!
Valt: Fine then let's do this.
Drake/Valt: 3!2!1! Let it rip!!
(Valtryek's Turbo Wings came out)
(Both Dragoon and Valtryek lands on the stadium and heads towards each other)
Valt: Valtryek, Rush launch!
Drake: I won't let you! Dash launch!
(Both Dragoon and Valtryek uses the slopes of the stadium to land a barrage of attacks. Dragoon and Valtryek keeps on clashing.)
(Dragoon slows down but Valtryek has the upper hand)
Drake: (Smiles)
Valt: Is he.... hitting the turbo blades on purpose?!
(Dragoon pushes Valtryek's turbo blades, removing the turbo awakening)
Drake: This time Dragoon is gonna win!
Valt: It's even faster than before...
(Dragoon hits Valtryek and sends it flying)
Drake: All right!
Valt: It's not over yet, Go! Valtryek!!
(Valt and Valtryek's aura shines and Valtryek appears Blazing out from the aura, then Valtryek hits the stadium walls and speeds up)
Drake: Dragoon, It's time to burst Valtryek! Let's go!
(Drake and Dragoon's aura shines and Dragoon appears Blazing out from the aura)
(Dragoon and Valtryek heads towards again)
Drake: Attack, Dragoon!
Valt: Turbo Jet Launch!
(Valtryek and Dragoon clashes and creates a havoc around the entire stadium. It looked like Valtryek's Sword had clashed with Dragoon's Claws)
(Dragoon bursts)
Drake: I- it can't be......(fells down)
Valt: That was such a great battle.
Haruka: Yeah Drake literally gave his best.
(Drake began to sleep while he was lying down)
Haruka: Is he sleeping?
Valt: Yeah, Training and this battle made him very tired.
(At Inferno Corporation)
(Aiden looks at Viking Ares)
Aiden: There's gotta be a secret on this layer.... Mastering this would be very hard. Don't you think so, Ben?
(Ben wasn't even paying attention)
Ben: I think so.
Aiden: What do you think? Of light and darkness... which one will prevail?
Ben: Who knows.
Aiden: I choose Darkness.... the one who can take darkness becomes stronger than anyone could even imagine it.
Ben: The real question is how dark have you gotten.
Aiden: Enough to destroy Valtryek in pieces...
Ben: Well... my ideals are different from yours.(He walks away)
Aiden: (Looks at Ares) Ares.... I'm gonna soon feed you as many darkness as you want. (Breacks into insane laughter)
(Ares screams behind him)
[To be Continued]
This is Ares's Avatar
RE: Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown - Demon Belial - Jul. 14, 2021
(Jul. 14, 2021 10:15 AM)Valt Aoi01 Wrote: Chapter 5 is out! (I tried to make the best chapter I've ever posted. Do let me know your thoughts about it)
Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown
Chapter 5: Wielder of the sword of hope! Valtryek!
Drake/Valt: Let it rip!!
Valt: (In his thought): That shoot pose....
(Valtryek's Turbo wings came out)
(Dragoon lands perfectly and more stable and it was ever before and heads towards Valtryek)
Drake: Go! Go! Dragoon!!
(Dragoon clashes with Valtryek)
Valt: Break through, Valtryek!
(Valtryek sends Dragoon flying)
Drake: Hang in there, Dragoon!
(Dragoon hits the wall of the stadium and survived)
Valt: Now it's time for rush launch!
(Valtryek lands a barrage of attacks from the directions.)
Drake: S- so fast....
(Valtryek knocks Dragoon out from the stadium)
Drake: I- it's not over yet!
Valt: Yeah, this time I'm gonna burst Dragoon!
Haruka: Drake, you can do this just focus.
(Drake looks at Dragoon and suddenly he saw him right front of him)
Drake: Dragoon....?
Dragoon: Are you qualified to fight with this Viking Dragoon?
Drake: Qualified to..?
Dragoon: Only the strongest and invincible blader can make use of the Viking Layer.
Drake: I- I'm the strongest I'll prove you!
(Dragoon disappears, then Drake looks at Valt, he saw Valtryek behind him. Then he remembers Aiden's words that Valtryek is the strongest bey in the world despite Aiger being the world champion)
Drake: Valt, I'm gonna beat and prove that I'm the strongest blader!
Valt: Fine then let's do this.
Drake/Valt: 3!2!1! Let it rip!!
(Valtryek's Turbo Wings came out)
(Both Dragoon and Valtryek lands on the stadium and heads towards each other)
Valt: Valtryek, Rush launch!
Drake: I won't let you! Dash launch!
(Both Dragoon and Valtryek uses the slopes of the stadium to land a barrage of attacks. Dragoon and Valtryek keeps on clashing.)
Valt: Is he.... hitting the turbo blades on purpose?!
(Dragoon pushes Valtryek's turbo blades, removing the turbo awakening)
Drake: This time Dragoon is gonna win!
Valt: It's even faster than before...
(Dragoon hits Valtryek and sends it flying)
Drake: All right!
Valt: It's not over yet, Go! Valtryek!!
(Valt and Valtryek's aura shines and Valtryek appears Blazing out from the aura, then Valtryek hits the stadium walls and speeds up)
Drake: Dragoon, It's time to burst Valtryek! Let's go!
(Drake and Dragoon's aura shines and Dragoon appears Blazing out from the aura)
(Dragoon and Valtryek heads towards again)
Drake: Attack, Dragoon!
Valt: Turbo Jet Launch!
(Valtryek and Dragoon clashes and creates a havoc around the entire stadium. It looked like Valtryek's Sword had clashed with Dragoon's Claws)
(Dragoon bursts)
Drake: I- it can't be......(fells down)
Valt: That was such a great battle.
Haruka: Yeah Drake literally gave his best.
(Drake began to sleep while he was lying down)
Haruka: Is he sleeping?
Valt: Yeah, Training and this battle made him very tired.
(At Inferno Corporation)
(Aiden looks at Viking Ares)
Aiden: There's gotta be a secret on this layer.... Mastering this would be very hard. Don't you think so, Ben?
(Ben wasn't even paying attention)
Ben: I think so.
Aiden: What do you think? Of light and darkness... which one will prevail?
Ben: Who knows.
Aiden: I choose Darkness.... the one who can take darkness becomes stronger than anyone could even imagine it.
Ben: The real question is how dark have you gotten.
Aiden: Enough to destroy Valtryek in pieces...
Ben: Well... my ideals are different from yours.(He walks away)
Aiden: (Looks at Ares) Ares.... I'm gonna soon feed you as many darkness as you want. (Breacks into insane laughter)
(Ares screams behind him)
[To be Continued]
This is Ares's Avatar
Nice and Ares's avatar looks great
RE: Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 14, 2021
(Jul. 14, 2021 12:11 PM)Demon Belial Wrote: (Jul. 14, 2021 10:15 AM)Valt Aoi01 Wrote: Chapter 5 is out! (I tried to make the best chapter I've ever posted. Do let me know your thoughts about it)
Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown
Chapter 5: Wielder of the sword of hope! Valtryek!
Drake/Valt: Let it rip!!
Valt: (In his thought): That shoot pose....
(Valtryek's Turbo wings came out)
(Dragoon lands perfectly and more stable and it was ever before and heads towards Valtryek)
Drake: Go! Go! Dragoon!!
(Dragoon clashes with Valtryek)
Valt: Break through, Valtryek!
(Valtryek sends Dragoon flying)
Drake: Hang in there, Dragoon!
(Dragoon hits the wall of the stadium and survived)
Valt: Now it's time for rush launch!
(Valtryek lands a barrage of attacks from the directions.)
Drake: S- so fast....
(Valtryek knocks Dragoon out from the stadium)
Drake: I- it's not over yet!
Valt: Yeah, this time I'm gonna burst Dragoon!
Haruka: Drake, you can do this just focus.
(Drake looks at Dragoon and suddenly he saw him right front of him)
Drake: Dragoon....?
Dragoon: Are you qualified to fight with this Viking Dragoon?
Drake: Qualified to..?
Dragoon: Only the strongest and invincible blader can make use of the Viking Layer.
Drake: I- I'm the strongest I'll prove you!
(Dragoon disappears, then Drake looks at Valt, he saw Valtryek behind him. Then he remembers Aiden's words that Valtryek is the strongest bey in the world despite Aiger being the world champion)
Drake: Valt, I'm gonna beat and prove that I'm the strongest blader!
Valt: Fine then let's do this.
Drake/Valt: 3!2!1! Let it rip!!
(Valtryek's Turbo Wings came out)
(Both Dragoon and Valtryek lands on the stadium and heads towards each other)
Valt: Valtryek, Rush launch!
Drake: I won't let you! Dash launch!
(Both Dragoon and Valtryek uses the slopes of the stadium to land a barrage of attacks. Dragoon and Valtryek keeps on clashing.)
Valt: Is he.... hitting the turbo blades on purpose?!
(Dragoon pushes Valtryek's turbo blades, removing the turbo awakening)
Drake: This time Dragoon is gonna win!
Valt: It's even faster than before...
(Dragoon hits Valtryek and sends it flying)
Drake: All right!
Valt: It's not over yet, Go! Valtryek!!
(Valt and Valtryek's aura shines and Valtryek appears Blazing out from the aura, then Valtryek hits the stadium walls and speeds up)
Drake: Dragoon, It's time to burst Valtryek! Let's go!
(Drake and Dragoon's aura shines and Dragoon appears Blazing out from the aura)
(Dragoon and Valtryek heads towards again)
Drake: Attack, Dragoon!
Valt: Turbo Jet Launch!
(Valtryek and Dragoon clashes and creates a havoc around the entire stadium. It looked like Valtryek's Sword had clashed with Dragoon's Claws)
(Dragoon bursts)
Drake: I- it can't be......(fells down)
Valt: That was such a great battle.
Haruka: Yeah Drake literally gave his best.
(Drake began to sleep while he was lying down)
Haruka: Is he sleeping?
Valt: Yeah, Training and this battle made him very tired.
(At Inferno Corporation)
(Aiden looks at Viking Ares)
Aiden: There's gotta be a secret on this layer.... Mastering this would be very hard. Don't you think so, Ben?
(Ben wasn't even paying attention)
Ben: I think so.
Aiden: What do you think? Of light and darkness... which one will prevail?
Ben: Who knows.
Aiden: I choose Darkness.... the one who can take darkness becomes stronger than anyone could even imagine it.
Ben: The real question is how dark have you gotten.
Aiden: Enough to destroy Valtryek in pieces...
Ben: Well... my ideals are different from yours.(He walks away)
Aiden: (Looks at Ares) Ares.... I'm gonna soon feed you as many darkness as you want. (Breacks into insane laughter)
(Ares screams behind him)
[To be Continued]
This is Ares's Avatar
Nice and Ares's avatar looks great
Thanks
Plus Dragoon's Avatar
Next Chapter's summary
Chapter 6: Insanely Strong! Brutal Spiral!
Lui Shirosagi challenges Ben Sumeragi for a burst match! Despite Baldur's Indestructible defence, Luinor was able to move Baldur from the centre, but is it enough?
RE: Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown - Demon Belial - Jul. 14, 2021
(Jul. 14, 2021 1:32 PM)Valt Aoi01 Wrote: (Jul. 14, 2021 12:11 PM)Demon Belial Wrote: Nice and Ares's avatar looks great
Thanks
Plus Dragoon's Avatar
Next Chapter's summary
Chapter 6: Insanely Strong! Brutal Spiral!
Lui Shirosagi challenges Ben Sumeragi for a burst match! Despite Baldur's Indestructible defence, Luinor was able to move Baldur from the centre, but is it enough? I guess the title is with Lui's favor
RE: Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown - GenesisBlader - Jul. 14, 2021
(Jul. 14, 2021 3:20 PM)Demon Belial Wrote: (Jul. 14, 2021 1:32 PM)Valt Aoi01 Wrote: Thanks
Plus Dragoon's Avatar
Next Chapter's summary
Chapter 6: Insanely Strong! Brutal Spiral!
Lui Shirosagi challenges Ben Sumeragi for a burst match! Despite Baldur's Indestructible defence, Luinor was able to move Baldur from the centre, but is it enough? I guess the title is with Lui's favor
bruh if lui wins i might murder free
jk, i MiGhT dO sOmEtHinG mOrE iLlEgAl
RE: Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 14, 2021
(Jul. 14, 2021 3:57 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jul. 14, 2021 3:20 PM)Demon Belial Wrote: I guess the title is with Lui's favor
bruh if lui wins i might murder free
jk, i MiGhT dO sOmEtHinG mOrE iLlEgAl
I guess I'll make him win.
I haven't actually decided lol
RE: Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown - Demon Belial - Jul. 14, 2021
(Jul. 14, 2021 5:58 PM)Valt Aoi01 Wrote: (Jul. 14, 2021 3:57 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: bruh if lui wins i might murder free
jk, i MiGhT dO sOmEtHinG mOrE iLlEgAl
I guess I'll make him win.
I haven't actually decided lol
A suggestion. Make the battle more longer
RE: Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 15, 2021
Forget the thing I said about Gamma beys. I will make this an AU
Chapter 6 is out UnseenBurst if you're free, can you rate this chapter?
Beyblade Burst: Viking Showdown
Chapter 6: Insanely strong! Brutal Spiral!!
[At Inferno Corporation]
(Ben was looking at Baldur and remembering how he defeated Free Dela Hoya)
Ben: Looks like there is no one who could beat us, Baldur
(Baldur's aura glows)
Aiden: Baldur's defence is magnificient but can it really take hits from a strong attack type bey?
Ben: What do you mean?
Aiden: Why don't you find out by yourself?(He turns on the TV)
Hanami: We've got some insane news!! Lui Shirosagi has challenged Ben Sumeragi for a burst match!
Lui: Ben Sumeragi... My Brutal Luinor will make short work of your Baldur!
Lui: Luinor will destruct Baldur's defence within seconds!
(Aiden turns off the TV)
Aiden: So can Baldur withstand Luinor's explosive attacks?
Ben: There's no Bey in this world which can make Baldur move from the stadium.
Aiden: I see.... (He smirks)
~The next day~
[At BC Sol]
(Drake wokes up and finds himself on a couch)
Drake: W..where am I?
Valt: So you're awake huh? You've been sleeping for a whole day.
Drake: What really?
Valt: So much happened while you were asleep. Lui has challenged Ben for a Burst Match!
Drake: Burst Match.... what do you think, will Lui win?
Valt: I hope so, it's been a while I've seen him battle. (He got excited), I can't wait for it!!
Drake: Yeah same here, then let's go! I wanna see the battle as close as possible!
Valt: You bet!
~After some time~
[At El Astro]
Hanami: The wait is over! The battle between Lui Shirosagi and Ben Sumeragi has started!!
(The crowd goes wild)
Ben: Do you really think you can beat me?
Lui: Beat you? I'm gonna destroy you! (Laughs)
Ben: (Smiles) Free Dela Hoya also thought he could beat me..... even though he was the one with advantage.
Lui: I'm not Free, I'll show you why you should be afraid of Luinor's Strength!
Ben: Guess you'll understand the hard way...
Ref: First Battle Ready set!
Lui/Ben: 3!2!1! Let it rip!!
(Baldur goes straight to the centre)
Lui: Show him your fangs, Luinor!
(Luinor keeps on attacking Baldur but it didn't even moved)
Hanami: Luinor lands chaotic barrage of attack on it's prey!
Ben: Magic Defence!
(Baldur throws away Luinor because of it's free spinning layer, making Luinor out of the Stadium)
Ref: Magic Baldur, over finish!
Ben: I told you didn't I?
Hanami: Woah! even Luinor could not move Baldur from the centre!!
Valt: Is that bey invincible or what!?
Drake: I cant believe this... Baldur didn't moved an inch....
Lui: (Laughs) I'll give you credit for managing to score on me.
Ben: heh, and this time Luinor will get burst.
Lui: Luinor won't burst even in your wildest dreams!(Lui's aura glows and Luinor appears behind him)
Hanami: Will Luinor able to break through? Or Baldur will win again? Let's find out!!
Ref: Second Battle, Ready Set!
Lui/Ben: 3!2!1 Let it rip!!
(Baldur again takes the centre)
Lui: (In his thoughts) I've already found that Bey's weakness
(Luinor heads towards Baldur with full speed)
Ben: This is just like the first match....
(Luinor strikes Baldur and knocks it off from the stadium)
(Ben got shocked)
Ben: H-how did you?
Ref: Brutal Luinor, over finish!
Hanami: Oh my God! Luinor knocks Baldur from the stadium in one single hit!!
(Crowd goes wild)
Valt: He did it!
Drake: But how did he moved Baldur?
Valt: Even I don't know, Lui always has a strategy on his hands.
Lui: (Laughs) looks like Baldur cannot take a single hit from Luinor! Now where does the smile go away?
Ben(filled with anger): You'll pay for this!
Ref: Third Battle, ready set!
Lui/Ben: 3!2!1! Let it rip!!
(Baldur takes the centre)
Ben('s Aura flares up): This time I won't give you any chance! Baldur!
(Baldur's Aura flares and it appears blazing out from the aura)
Lui('s Aura and his hair flares up): It's no use! Luinor!!
(Luinor blazes out from it's aura)
Lui: Brutal Spiral!!
(Luinor uses the wall of the stadium and speeds up, Luinor hits Baldur and uses the wall again and again and creates a barrage of attacks)
Ben: This can't be! Why Baldur is struggling so much?!
Hanami: Just as Lui said! He is destroying Baldur's defence!!
Ben(Notices something): So that's how you're able to move it huh?
Valt(Stands up): Now I get it!
Drake: What?
Valt: Luinor's height is smaller than Baldur. Luinor is not even attacking on the layer!
Drake: You mean he's targetting on Baldur's disc!?
Lui: So you figured it out huh? For Luinor your bey's defence is as soft as a marshmallow.(Laughs)
Ben: Tchh...
(Baldur gots unbalanced)
Lui: Rip it to shreds! Dragon Scream!!
Ben: No way!!
(Luinor hits Baldur with Dragoon Scream, a huge blast occurs on the stadium)
Luinor: (Laughs)
Ben: It can't be.
(But....)
(Luinor Bursts and Baldur was still spinning then stops)
Lui: What the?
Ben: huh?
(There was entire silence on the stadium for some seconds)
Ref: M-magic Baldur, burst finish! Ben Sumeragi is the winner!!
Hanami: What a amazing turn on events! Lui Shirosagi lost!!
Lui: How could this be?!
Hanami: Let's see the replay of this battle!
(When Baldur was inbalanced Luinor hits on the layer which made Luinor touch the stadium and got burst because of it's own recoil)
Valt: Lui... lost?
Drake: This can't be happening...
Ben: Looks like.... I won after all!
Lui: Don't get ahead of yourself it was just a fluke!
Ben: A win is a win in my book.
(Ben walks away)
Drake(Stands up): You can't just walk away!
(Ben stops)
Drake: I will battle you, with my Viking Dragoon
(Ben looks back with a evil smile on his face)
[To be continued]
RE: Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown - Demon Belial - Jul. 15, 2021
That marshmallow part lol
RE: Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 15, 2021
(Jul. 15, 2021 2:18 PM)Demon Belial Wrote: That marshmallow part lol
I'm glad you liked it
RE: Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown - GenesisBlader - Jul. 15, 2021
i liked this episode to! it was really awesome and i thought lui won for a sec, until i saw that it said (Luinor bursts)
RE: Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 15, 2021
(Jul. 15, 2021 2:49 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: i liked this episode to! it was really awesome and i thought lui won for a sec, until i saw that it said (Luinor bursts)
Thanks!
And The first arc will end at Chapter 13.
Chapter 7: The Start of a War!
Chapter 8: Way to the top! Dread Tower!!
Chapter 9: Defeat Phi!
Chapter 10: Revival! Terror Hades!!
Chapter 11: Rage of the Red Dragon! Ares!!
Chapter 12: Pledge of a Demon!
Chapter 13: Dragoon VS Baldur!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown - Demon Belial - Jul. 15, 2021
Phi too? lol
RE: Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 15, 2021
Chapter 7 is here
Beyblade Burst: Viking Showdown
Chapter 7: Start of a War!
Ben: Viking Dragoon... Huh?
Hanami: Woah! So this kid has made a "copy" of Viking Ares!
Drake: It's not a copy, I made this damn system!!
Hanami: What am I hearing! This kid claims himself to be the inventor of the VS system!
Drake: The name's Drake Kazeryu!
(Crowd started booing on Drake)
Valt: Drake....
Ben: I accept your challenge, And I'll take you on right now.
Hanami: Alright! After the defeat of Lui Shirosagi, Ben has set his eyes on Drake!
Drake: Fine then let's do this, Time for Showdown!!
Ben: Heh
Ref: First battle, ready set!
Drake/Ben: 3!2!1! Let it rip!!
(Baldur goes for the centre but Dragoon heads straight to Baldur)
(Dragoon hits Baldur's disc and sends it flying)
Ben: So you're using the same trick just like him. I hate to say this but you this won't work.
(Baldur uses the slopes to speed up)
Drake: Are you planning to attack?
Ben: Why would I attack if my bey isn't made for this.
(Baldur heads straight for Dragoon)
Drake: Dragoon, Dash Launch!!
(Dragoon and Baldur hits each other)
Ben: Magic roller!
(Baldur deflects Dragoon's attack and Dragoon hits the wall and bursts)
Drake: It's impossible....
Ben: Looks like Dragoon is much weaker than I thought.
Drake: Take that back! Dragoon is capable of bursting Baldur into pieces!
Drake: And tell your brother, the real inventor of this Viking System is me not him!
Ben: Oh really?
Drake: And I will take down your whole corporation!
Hanami: Oh no!? Drake has just started a war against the whole Inferno Corporation!
Ben: You can't do anything...
(He walks away)
Drake: I will and I'll prove it!
Ben(In his thoughts): What an interesting fellow...
[To be Continued]
It's a Lil bit short cuz I was running out of ideas
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