(Jul. 03, 2021  10:02 PM)LegendJustice Wrote:

(Jul. 03, 2021  9:58 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: 15) World Champions!! Heroic Valtryek!!

16) Teamwork!! Helios Blazebringer And Hyperion Flamebringer!!

17) Spryzen Vs Spryzen

18) Lord Of Darkness!! Vile Overlord!!

19) The Junior World Championships!!

20) Fiery Dragon!! Cinder Salamander!!

21) The Roaring Dragon!! Wicked Balkesh!!

I wish i had your talent

(Jul. 03, 2021  10:13 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:

(Jul. 03, 2021  10:02 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: I wish i had your talent

What do you mean?

(Jul. 03, 2021  10:25 PM)LegendJustice Wrote:

(Jul. 03, 2021  10:13 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: What do you mean?

Idk writing good chapters that people want to read

(Jul. 03, 2021  10:33 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:

(Jul. 03, 2021  10:25 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Idk writing good chapters that people want to read

You have a good fanfic mine is no better I can still get better so can you but if you want some tips here they are

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1. Try writing on google docs (It's easier that way and it helps you with grammar errors)

2. Develop an interesting story Plot (You need a good one that your character will try reaching towards the end)

3. Get Grammarly (Grammarly helps a lot with grammar so it would help your spelling a lot)

4. Read over your fanfic before you post it (If you read it before you post it you'll find mistakes or can make edits to make it better)

5. Take and ask for feedback (I know you do this a lot which is good but if you have someone like Pinkrose give your fanfic a good look over he can give you feedback on what you should change or edit)

6. Read other fanfics and try adding some of it on yours while making it original (Try reading really good fanfics like DeltlaZakuro's and add on a bit of it to yours, I'm not saying copy anyone I'm saying mimic them a bit)

7. Be Patient (I can't tell you how crucial this is your fanfic will not get a lot of posts on it at times but just keep writing and getting better then it will be better)

I hope I helped

(Jul. 03, 2021  10:34 PM)LegendJustice Wrote:

(Jul. 03, 2021  10:33 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: You have a good fanfic mine is no better I can still get better so can you but if you want some tips here they are

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1. Try writing on google docs (It's easier that way and it helps you with grammar errors)

2. Develop an interesting story Plot (You need a good one that your character will try reaching towards the end)

3. Get Grammarly (Grammarly helps a lot with grammar so it would help your spelling a lot)

4. Read over your fanfic before you post it (If you read it before you post it you'll find mistakes or can make edits to make it better)

5. Take and ask for feedback (I know you do this a lot which is good but if you have someone like Pinkrose give your fanfic a good look over he can give you feedback on what you should change or edit)

6. Read other fanfics and try adding some of it on yours while making it original (Try reading really good fanfics like DeltlaZakuro's and add on a bit of it to yours, I'm not saying copy anyone I'm saying mimic them a bit)

7. Be Patient (I can't tell you how crucial this is your fanfic will not get a lot of posts on it at times but just keep writing and getting better then it will be better)

I hope I helped

Thanks dude I’m gonna post a chapter in 20-30 minutes this was really helpful

(Jul. 03, 2021  10:40 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: LegendJustice (this is expanding tip 5. And 7.) you could also show to someone that you believe in to rate it before you post the chapter, and also don't set a time limit for it like "daily upload" of "tomorrow":
1.Fancfics generally are hurt by daily uploads
2. Just say "tomorrow is going to be a new..." If you already finished it.

(Jul. 04, 2021  1:24 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 15 is out!!

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Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
                  Chapter 15
 World Champions!! Heroic Valtryek!!!

(I run through the forest with tears falling out of my eyes)

Me: This is why I never made any friends.

(I trip over a rock, Poseidon falls out of my pocket, I look down at it)

Me: It’s me isn’t it.

(I pick up my bey)

Poseidon: Is it really you?

(Poseidon pulls me into a void)

Me: If I would’ve told her then--

Poseidon: Then what?

Me: Well um.

Poseidon: Nothing, everyone gets mad, she just needs some time.

Me: Thanks.’

Poseidon: I also need to tell you something else.

Me: What?

(Poseidon turns into a shark and starts chomping in front of me)

Me: AH!!

(Poseidon turns back and starts laughing)

Me: Very funny.

Poseidon: Lighten up.

(I get out of the void)

Me: Well, that was new.

Aiden: Yo, Percy!!

(Aiden runs after me)

Me: Hey Aiden!!

(I wave over at him)

Aiden: Are you ok?

Me: I’m awesome!!

Aiden: You’re a weird one. Anyways Valt needs you!!

Me: Really?!

(I run off)

Aiden: Wait for me!!

(Aiden runs off after me)

~At BC Sol’s Work Room~

Valt: Percy, glad you could make it!!

Me: Hey Valt, what do you need?

Valt: I want to make a Beyjitzu Bey!!

Aiden/Me: Seriously?!

Valt: If I wanna get stronger then I need to use the strongest system!!

(Valt smiles)

Me: Let’s get started then!!

~In The Middle Of The Forest~

Raina: I can’t believe him!!

(Raina punches a tree, Birds fly out of the tree, Pam walks up to Raina)

Pam: You’re really mad at Percy, huh?

Raina: Don’t even mention his name!!

Pam: Alright, I’ll call him Anonymous.

Raina: I broke Doomsizer and it’s his fault!!

Pam: He didn’t know till after the battle.

Raina: *Gasps*

Pam: He didn’t tell you because you wouldn’t believe him.

Raina: I guess you’re right.

(Raina gets up)

Pam: Where are you going?

Raina: I’m still mad at Percy, but I need to fix my bond with Ridley, so I won’t be around for the rest of the day.

Pam: Glad I could help a bit.

(Pam walks away)

~Back At The BC Sol WorkRoom~

Valt: It’s finally done!!

(Valt holds his new bey up)

Valt: Heroic Valtryek!!

Aiden: You did awesome!!

Valt: You mean we!!

Me: Who are you gonna battle first?

Valt: You.

Me: *Gasps*

Valt: After your battle with Free you’re now eligible to challenge me to a Title match!!

Me: Are you kidding?!

Valt: Nope.

Me: Then what are we waiting for?!

Aiden: I’ll get Pam and Raina!!

~At El Astro’s Main Stadium~

Hanami: Hello all you bladers!! Today we’ll be diving into Valt’s first title match!! In the blue corner, we’ve got the WaterBoy Perseus Nakano!!

(I run-up to the stadium)

Me: Hey guys!!

(I wave at Aiden and Pam)

Aiden: Go Percy!!

Hanami; In the red corner, we’ve got our World Champion!! Valt Aoi!!

(Valt runs up to the stage)

Valt: Hey everyone!! Wanna see my new Heroic Valtryek battle!!

(Valt holds up Heroic Valtryek)

Hanami: What’s this?! Valt’s got a new bey!! Welp, I just got the details about Heroic Valtryek!!

Valt: Ready to battle, Percy?!

Me: Are you kidding? Of course!!

Reff: Inspect your opponent’s bey!!

Me (Thoughts): Heroic Valtryek, a clockwise spinning attack type. Looks like each one of its blades can be moved on its own so it can use bound strikes, it also has a combination of metal and rubber to assault the opponent with strength. It looks tough but I can still beat it!!

Reff: First battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Valt/Me: Let it rip!!

(Me and Valt pull off two amazing Beyjitzu Launches)

Me: Go Poseidon!!

Valt: Valtryek!!

(Valtryek and Poseidon hit each other with a barrage of attacks)

Announcer: Valtryek and Poseidon hit each other with a brawl!!

Valt: Stand your ground!! Rush Launch!!

(Valtryek sends Poseidon flying)

Me: *Gasps*

Hanami: Valtryek sends Poseidon flying!!

Me: I’ve got this!! Flood Launch!!

(Poseidon lands back on the stadium floor and speeds up)

Valt: We’ll take on everything you’ve got!!

(Poseidon hits Valtryek with a barrage of strikes)

Hanami: Poseidon is playing with Valtryek like a toy!!

(Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim, Poseidon flies through the air)

Me: Hydro Jet!!

(Poseidon hits Valtryek out of the stadium)

Ref: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a ring-out finish!! Perseus Nakano claims 1 point!!

Hanami: Percy comes out with a surprise attack!!

Aiden: Yes!!

Pam: Awesome man!!

Valt (Thoughts): This was a huge evolution so it may take me some time to master you but I will.

(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up)

Reff: Second Battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Valt: Let it rip!!

(Me and Valt pull off Beyjitzu Launches)

Hanami: Excellent Beyjitzu Launches from both bladers!!

(Valtryek speeds up and heads straight for Poseidon)

Valt: Heroic Recoil!!

(Valtryek’s bound blade sends Poseidon flying out of the stadium)

Me: *Gasps*

Reff: It’s Heroic Valtryek with a ring-out finish!! Valt Aoi claims 1 point!!

Hanami: Valt Aoi shows us some new tricks and sends Poseidon flying!!

Pam: Uh Oh, this is not good.

Aiden: Don’t worry, Percy can turn this around.  

(Jul. 04, 2021  2:00 AM)LegendJustice Wrote:

(Jul. 04, 2021  1:24 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 15 is out!!

Spoiler (Click to View)

Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
                  Chapter 15
 World Champions!! Heroic Valtryek!!!

(I run through the forest with tears falling out of my eyes)

Me: This is why I never made any friends.

(I trip over a rock, Poseidon falls out of my pocket, I look down at it)

Me: It’s me isn’t it.

(I pick up my bey)

Poseidon: Is it really you?

(Poseidon pulls me into a void)

Me: If I would’ve told her then--

Poseidon: Then what?

Me: Well um.

Poseidon: Nothing, everyone gets mad, she just needs some time.

Me: Thanks.’

Poseidon: I also need to tell you something else.

Me: What?

(Poseidon turns into a shark and starts chomping in front of me)

Me: AH!!

(Poseidon turns back and starts laughing)

Me: Very funny.

Poseidon: Lighten up.

(I get out of the void)

Me: Well, that was new.

Aiden: Yo, Percy!!

(Aiden runs after me)

Me: Hey Aiden!!

(I wave over at him)

Aiden: Are you ok?

Me: I’m awesome!!

Aiden: You’re a weird one. Anyways Valt needs you!!

Me: Really?!

(I run off)

Aiden: Wait for me!!

(Aiden runs off after me)

~At BC Sol’s Work Room~

Valt: Percy, glad you could make it!!

Me: Hey Valt, what do you need?

Valt: I want to make a Beyjitzu Bey!!

Aiden/Me: Seriously?!

Valt: If I wanna get stronger then I need to use the strongest system!!

(Valt smiles)

Me: Let’s get started then!!

~In The Middle Of The Forest~

Raina: I can’t believe him!!

(Raina punches a tree, Birds fly out of the tree, Pam walks up to Raina)

Pam: You’re really mad at Percy, huh?

Raina: Don’t even mention his name!!

Pam: Alright, I’ll call him Anonymous.

Raina: I broke Doomsizer and it’s his fault!!

Pam: He didn’t know till after the battle.

Raina: *Gasps*

Pam: He didn’t tell you because you wouldn’t believe him.

Raina: I guess you’re right.

(Raina gets up)

Pam: Where are you going?

Raina: I’m still mad at Percy, but I need to fix my bond with Ridley, so I won’t be around for the rest of the day.

Pam: Glad I could help a bit.

(Pam walks away)

~Back At The BC Sol WorkRoom~

Valt: It’s finally done!!

(Valt holds his new bey up)

Valt: Heroic Valtryek!!

Aiden: You did awesome!!

Valt: You mean we!!

Me: Who are you gonna battle first?

Valt: You.

Me: *Gasps*

Valt: After your battle with Free you’re now eligible to challenge me to a Title match!!

Me: Are you kidding?!

Valt: Nope.

Me: Then what are we waiting for?!

Aiden: I’ll get Pam and Raina!!

~At El Astro’s Main Stadium~

Hanami: Hello all you bladers!! Today we’ll be diving into Valt’s first title match!! In the blue corner, we’ve got the WaterBoy Perseus Nakano!!

(I run-up to the stadium)

Me: Hey guys!!

(I wave at Aiden and Pam)

Aiden: Go Percy!!

Hanami; In the red corner, we’ve got our World Champion!! Valt Aoi!!

(Valt runs up to the stage)

Valt: Hey everyone!! Wanna see my new Heroic Valtryek battle!!

(Valt holds up Heroic Valtryek)

Hanami: What’s this?! Valt’s got a new bey!! Welp, I just got the details about Heroic Valtryek!!

Valt: Ready to battle, Percy?!

Me: Are you kidding? Of course!!

Reff: Inspect your opponent’s bey!!

Me (Thoughts): Heroic Valtryek, a clockwise spinning attack type. Looks like each one of its blades can be moved on its own so it can use bound strikes, it also has a combination of metal and rubber to assault the opponent with strength. It looks tough but I can still beat it!!

Reff: First battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Valt/Me: Let it rip!!

(Me and Valt pull off two amazing Beyjitzu Launches)

Me: Go Poseidon!!

Valt: Valtryek!!

(Valtryek and Poseidon hit each other with a barrage of attacks)

Announcer: Valtryek and Poseidon hit each other with a brawl!!

Valt: Stand your ground!! Rush Launch!!

(Valtryek sends Poseidon flying)

Me: *Gasps*

Hanami: Valtryek sends Poseidon flying!!

Me: I’ve got this!! Flood Launch!!

(Poseidon lands back on the stadium floor and speeds up)

Valt: We’ll take on everything you’ve got!!

(Poseidon hits Valtryek with a barrage of strikes)

Hanami: Poseidon is playing with Valtryek like a toy!!

(Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim, Poseidon flies through the air)

Me: Hydro Jet!!

(Poseidon hits Valtryek out of the stadium)

Ref: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a ring-out finish!! Perseus Nakano claims 1 point!!

Hanami: Percy comes out with a surprise attack!!

Aiden: Yes!!

Pam: Awesome man!!

Valt (Thoughts): This was a huge evolution so it may take me some time to master you but I will.

(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up)

Reff: Second Battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Valt: Let it rip!!

(Me and Valt pull off Beyjitzu Launches)

Hanami: Excellent Beyjitzu Launches from both bladers!!

(Valtryek speeds up and heads straight for Poseidon)

Valt: Heroic Recoil!!

(Valtryek’s bound blade sends Poseidon flying out of the stadium)

Me: *Gasps*

Reff: It’s Heroic Valtryek with a ring-out finish!! Valt Aoi claims 1 point!!

Hanami: Valt Aoi shows us some new tricks and sends Poseidon flying!!

Pam: Uh Oh, this is not good.

Aiden: Don’t worry, Percy can turn this around.  

This is great work

(Jul. 04, 2021  2:04 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:

(Jul. 04, 2021  2:00 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: This is great work

Why thank you

(Jul. 04, 2021  1:24 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 15 is out!!

Spoiler (Click to View)

Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
                  Chapter 15
 World Champions!! Heroic Valtryek!!!

(I run through the forest with tears falling out of my eyes)

Me: This is why I never made any friends.

(I trip over a rock, Poseidon falls out of my pocket, I look down at it)

Me: It’s me isn’t it.

(I pick up my bey)

Poseidon: Is it really you?

(Poseidon pulls me into a void)

Me: If I would’ve told her then--

Poseidon: Then what?

Me: Well um.

Poseidon: Nothing, everyone gets mad, she just needs some time.

Me: Thanks.’

Poseidon: I also need to tell you something else.

Me: What?

(Poseidon turns into a shark and starts chomping in front of me)

Me: AH!!

(Poseidon turns back and starts laughing)

Me: Very funny.

Poseidon: Lighten up.

(I get out of the void)

Me: Well, that was new.

Aiden: Yo, Percy!!

(Aiden runs after me)

Me: Hey Aiden!!

(I wave over at him)

Aiden: Are you ok?

Me: I’m awesome!!

Aiden: You’re a weird one. Anyways Valt needs you!!

Me: Really?!

(I run off)

Aiden: Wait for me!!

(Aiden runs off after me)

~At BC Sol’s Work Room~

Valt: Percy, glad you could make it!!

Me: Hey Valt, what do you need?

Valt: I want to make a Beyjitzu Bey!!

Aiden/Me: Seriously?!

Valt: If I wanna get stronger then I need to use the strongest system!!

(Valt smiles)

Me: Let’s get started then!!

~In The Middle Of The Forest~

Raina: I can’t believe him!!

(Raina punches a tree, Birds fly out of the tree, Pam walks up to Raina)

Pam: You’re really mad at Percy, huh?

Raina: Don’t even mention his name!!

Pam: Alright, I’ll call him Anonymous.

Raina: I broke Doomsizer and it’s his fault!!

Pam: He didn’t know till after the battle.

Raina: *Gasps*

Pam: He didn’t tell you because you wouldn’t believe him.

Raina: I guess you’re right.

(Raina gets up)

Pam: Where are you going?

Raina: I’m still mad at Percy, but I need to fix my bond with Ridley, so I won’t be around for the rest of the day.

Pam: Glad I could help a bit.

(Pam walks away)

~Back At The BC Sol WorkRoom~

Valt: It’s finally done!!

(Valt holds his new bey up)

Valt: Heroic Valtryek!!

Aiden: You did awesome!!

Valt: You mean we!!

Me: Who are you gonna battle first?

Valt: You.

Me: *Gasps*

Valt: After your battle with Free you’re now eligible to challenge me to a Title match!!

Me: Are you kidding?!

Valt: Nope.

Me: Then what are we waiting for?!

Aiden: I’ll get Pam and Raina!!

~At El Astro’s Main Stadium~

Hanami: Hello all you bladers!! Today we’ll be diving into Valt’s first title match!! In the blue corner, we’ve got the WaterBoy Perseus Nakano!!

(I run-up to the stadium)

Me: Hey guys!!

(I wave at Aiden and Pam)

Aiden: Go Percy!!

Hanami; In the red corner, we’ve got our World Champion!! Valt Aoi!!

(Valt runs up to the stage)

Valt: Hey everyone!! Wanna see my new Heroic Valtryek battle!!

(Valt holds up Heroic Valtryek)

Hanami: What’s this?! Valt’s got a new bey!! Welp, I just got the details about Heroic Valtryek!!

Valt: Ready to battle, Percy?!

Me: Are you kidding? Of course!!

Reff: Inspect your opponent’s bey!!

Me (Thoughts): Heroic Valtryek, a clockwise spinning attack type. Looks like each one of its blades can be moved on its own so it can use bound strikes, it also has a combination of metal and rubber to assault the opponent with strength. It looks tough but I can still beat it!!

Reff: First battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Valt/Me: Let it rip!!

(Me and Valt pull off two amazing Beyjitzu Launches)

Me: Go Poseidon!!

Valt: Valtryek!!

(Valtryek and Poseidon hit each other with a barrage of attacks)

Announcer: Valtryek and Poseidon hit each other with a brawl!!

Valt: Stand your ground!! Rush Launch!!

(Valtryek sends Poseidon flying)

Me: *Gasps*

Hanami: Valtryek sends Poseidon flying!!

Me: I’ve got this!! Flood Launch!!

(Poseidon lands back on the stadium floor and speeds up)

Valt: We’ll take on everything you’ve got!!

(Poseidon hits Valtryek with a barrage of strikes)

Hanami: Poseidon is playing with Valtryek like a toy!!

(Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim, Poseidon flies through the air)

Me: Hydro Jet!!

(Poseidon hits Valtryek out of the stadium)

Ref: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a ring-out finish!! Perseus Nakano claims 1 point!!

Hanami: Percy comes out with a surprise attack!!

Aiden: Yes!!

Pam: Awesome man!!

Valt (Thoughts): This was a huge evolution so it may take me some time to master you but I will.

(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up)

Reff: Second Battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Valt: Let it rip!!

(Me and Valt pull off Beyjitzu Launches)

Hanami: Excellent Beyjitzu Launches from both bladers!!

(Valtryek speeds up and heads straight for Poseidon)

Valt: Heroic Recoil!!

(Valtryek’s bound blade sends Poseidon flying out of the stadium)

Me: *Gasps*

Reff: It’s Heroic Valtryek with a ring-out finish!! Valt Aoi claims 1 point!!

Hanami: Valt Aoi shows us some new tricks and sends Poseidon flying!!

Pam: Uh Oh, this is not good.

Aiden: Don’t worry, Percy can turn this around.  

(Jul. 04, 2021  3:07 AM)BladeKingX Wrote:

(Jul. 04, 2021  1:24 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 15 is out!!

Spoiler (Click to View)

Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
                  Chapter 15
 World Champions!! Heroic Valtryek!!!

(I run through the forest with tears falling out of my eyes)

Me: This is why I never made any friends.

(I trip over a rock, Poseidon falls out of my pocket, I look down at it)

Me: It’s me isn’t it.

(I pick up my bey)

Poseidon: Is it really you?

(Poseidon pulls me into a void)

Me: If I would’ve told her then--

Poseidon: Then what?

Me: Well um.

Poseidon: Nothing, everyone gets mad, she just needs some time.

Me: Thanks.’

Poseidon: I also need to tell you something else.

Me: What?

(Poseidon turns into a shark and starts chomping in front of me)

Me: AH!!

(Poseidon turns back and starts laughing)

Me: Very funny.

Poseidon: Lighten up.

(I get out of the void)

Me: Well, that was new.

Aiden: Yo, Percy!!

(Aiden runs after me)

Me: Hey Aiden!!

(I wave over at him)

Aiden: Are you ok?

Me: I’m awesome!!

Aiden: You’re a weird one. Anyways Valt needs you!!

Me: Really?!

(I run off)

Aiden: Wait for me!!

(Aiden runs off after me)

~At BC Sol’s Work Room~

Valt: Percy, glad you could make it!!

Me: Hey Valt, what do you need?

Valt: I want to make a Beyjitzu Bey!!

Aiden/Me: Seriously?!

Valt: If I wanna get stronger then I need to use the strongest system!!

(Valt smiles)

Me: Let’s get started then!!

~In The Middle Of The Forest~

Raina: I can’t believe him!!

(Raina punches a tree, Birds fly out of the tree, Pam walks up to Raina)

Pam: You’re really mad at Percy, huh?

Raina: Don’t even mention his name!!

Pam: Alright, I’ll call him Anonymous.

Raina: I broke Doomsizer and it’s his fault!!

Pam: He didn’t know till after the battle.

Raina: *Gasps*

Pam: He didn’t tell you because you wouldn’t believe him.

Raina: I guess you’re right.

(Raina gets up)

Pam: Where are you going?

Raina: I’m still mad at Percy, but I need to fix my bond with Ridley, so I won’t be around for the rest of the day.

Pam: Glad I could help a bit.

(Pam walks away)

~Back At The BC Sol WorkRoom~

Valt: It’s finally done!!

(Valt holds his new bey up)

Valt: Heroic Valtryek!!

Aiden: You did awesome!!

Valt: You mean we!!

Me: Who are you gonna battle first?

Valt: You.

Me: *Gasps*

Valt: After your battle with Free you’re now eligible to challenge me to a Title match!!

Me: Are you kidding?!

Valt: Nope.

Me: Then what are we waiting for?!

Aiden: I’ll get Pam and Raina!!

~At El Astro’s Main Stadium~

Hanami: Hello all you bladers!! Today we’ll be diving into Valt’s first title match!! In the blue corner, we’ve got the WaterBoy Perseus Nakano!!

(I run-up to the stadium)

Me: Hey guys!!

(I wave at Aiden and Pam)

Aiden: Go Percy!!

Hanami; In the red corner, we’ve got our World Champion!! Valt Aoi!!

(Valt runs up to the stage)

Valt: Hey everyone!! Wanna see my new Heroic Valtryek battle!!

(Valt holds up Heroic Valtryek)

Hanami: What’s this?! Valt’s got a new bey!! Welp, I just got the details about Heroic Valtryek!!

Valt: Ready to battle, Percy?!

Me: Are you kidding? Of course!!

Reff: Inspect your opponent’s bey!!

Me (Thoughts): Heroic Valtryek, a clockwise spinning attack type. Looks like each one of its blades can be moved on its own so it can use bound strikes, it also has a combination of metal and rubber to assault the opponent with strength. It looks tough but I can still beat it!!

Reff: First battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Valt/Me: Let it rip!!

(Me and Valt pull off two amazing Beyjitzu Launches)

Me: Go Poseidon!!

Valt: Valtryek!!

(Valtryek and Poseidon hit each other with a barrage of attacks)

Announcer: Valtryek and Poseidon hit each other with a brawl!!

Valt: Stand your ground!! Rush Launch!!

(Valtryek sends Poseidon flying)

Me: *Gasps*

Hanami: Valtryek sends Poseidon flying!!

Me: I’ve got this!! Flood Launch!!

(Poseidon lands back on the stadium floor and speeds up)

Valt: We’ll take on everything you’ve got!!

(Poseidon hits Valtryek with a barrage of strikes)

Hanami: Poseidon is playing with Valtryek like a toy!!

(Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim, Poseidon flies through the air)

Me: Hydro Jet!!

(Poseidon hits Valtryek out of the stadium)

Ref: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a ring-out finish!! Perseus Nakano claims 1 point!!

Hanami: Percy comes out with a surprise attack!!

Aiden: Yes!!

Pam: Awesome man!!

Valt (Thoughts): This was a huge evolution so it may take me some time to master you but I will.

(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up)

Reff: Second Battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Valt: Let it rip!!

(Me and Valt pull off Beyjitzu Launches)

Hanami: Excellent Beyjitzu Launches from both bladers!!

(Valtryek speeds up and heads straight for Poseidon)

Valt: Heroic Recoil!!

(Valtryek’s bound blade sends Poseidon flying out of the stadium)

Me: *Gasps*

Reff: It’s Heroic Valtryek with a ring-out finish!! Valt Aoi claims 1 point!!

Hanami: Valt Aoi shows us some new tricks and sends Poseidon flying!!

Pam: Uh Oh, this is not good.

Aiden: Don’t worry, Percy can turn this around.  

awwwww poor percy i feel bad nice episode

(Jul. 04, 2021  3:11 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:

(Jul. 04, 2021  3:07 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: awwwww poor percy i feel bad nice episode

Don't worry Percy will get over it

(Jul. 04, 2021  3:39 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Shouldn’t pal be mad at Raina for breaking doomscyther???!!!!!!

(Jul. 04, 2021  3:53 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:

(Jul. 04, 2021  3:39 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Shouldn’t pal be mad at Raina for breaking doomscyther???!!!!!!

Pam's a good person so although he was sad and mad that's why he kept it in for Raina

(Jul. 04, 2021  4:05 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Is m

(Jul. 04, 2021  3:53 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Pam's a good person so although he was sad and mad that's why he kept it in for Raina

If that was me I would go home and cry then I would come back and act like nothing happened

(Jul. 04, 2021  4:59 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 16 is coming hot!!

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  Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
                    Chapter 16
 Teamwork Makes The Dreamworks!!!

Valt: How did you like that?!

Me: It was ok.

Me (Thoughts): I’ve gotta switch things up if I wanna ace this match!!

(I put Poseidon in left spin mode)

Hanami: They’re tied 1-1 so a burst finish could give any of them the game!!

Reff: Third battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Valt: Let it rip!!

Valt: Rush Launch!!

Me: Flood Launch!!

(Valtryek and Poseidon hit each other with a barrage of attacks)

Hanami: They both give it they’re all!!

Me: Hydro Strike!!

(Poseidon hits Valtryek hard, Poseidon steals some of Valtryek’s spin)

Me: That’s the way you do it!!

(Valtryek and Poseidon start clashing hard)

Valt: I don’t think so!! Heroic Recoil!!

(Valtryek’s bound blade sends Poseidon flying)

Hanami: Valtryek uses its bound blade to counterstrike!!

Me: Hydro Ripple!!

(Poseidon dives down on Valtryek, Valtryek gets sent flying)

Valt: *Gasps*

Hanami: The underdog shows us some tricks!!

Valt: We’re not giving up!! Valtryek!!!

(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up, Valtryek lands on the motorized rim and starts picking up speed)

Valt: Heroic Sword!!

(Valtryek flies off the motorized rim hits and hits Poseidon, Poseidon bursts)

Me: *Gasps*

Reff: It’s Heroic Valtryek with a burst finish!! Valt Aoi wins with a score of 3-1!!

Hanami: Our World Champion shows our Underdog some class!!

Me: *Sighs* GG Valt.

Valt: Don’t worry, you’ll get to my level soon!! But you did a great job anyway!!

Aiden: You did awesome!!

Pam: Great effort!!

Valt: Looks like your friends think so too!!

Me: Thanks, guys!!

~At The Airport~

Dad: Alright, are we all ready to go?!

Me: Dad what did you do when we were here?

Dad: Mostly hung out at the beach.

(Me and Raina’s eyes lock)

Me/Raina: Hmp!!

(We look away instantly)

Dad: Um, what’s up with them?

Pam: I’ll tell you on the flight.

Me: Bye Valt!!

Valt: It was fun meeting you!!

(Valt waves goodbye, Free looks at us behind a tree)

Free (Thoughts): I’ll see you again, Perseus Nakano.

(Our Plane takes off)

~Back At The Warehouse~

Me: Spain was so epic!!

Pam: Who’s up for a battle first?!

Aiden: I’m your man!!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Aiden/Pam: Let it rip!!

Aiden: Go Ashindra!!

Pam: Pegasus take center stage!!

~At The Comets Gym~

???: Go Helios!!

???: Vroom into them, Hyperion!!

???: Hikaru, Hyuga!!

Hikaru: What’s up Honcho?

Hyuga: Is something wrong?

Honcho: Valt wants you two to battle 2 strong bladers!!

Hikaru: Really?!

Hyuga: How strong?

Honcho: So strong that one of them has beaten Valt!!

Hikaru: That strong?!

Hyuga: They beat Valt?

Honcho: Yup!

Hikaru: Come on Hyuga, we’ve gotta battle them!!

Hyuga: Vroom, Vroom!!

(Hikaru and Hyuga run out the door)

~At The Warehouse~

(Ashindra gets sent flying out of the stadium)

Aiden: Not again!!

Pam: Face it my Pegasus is too strong!

(Pam and Aiden start bickering but I hear something outside)

???: Honcho said it was right here!!

???: Well maybe he was wrong Hikaru!!

???: Hyuga, I’m pretty sure this is the place!!

(I get up and open the door)

Me: Um, you guys here to battle me?

Hikaru: That’s right, two blading legends!!

Hyuga: We’re gonna go all kablamo up in here!!

Me: Blading Legends?

Hikaru: I’m Hikaru Hizashi!!

Hyuga: And I’m Hyuga Hizashi!!

Me: How could I forget!! From the Super Tag League?!

Hikaru: Yup, that’s us!

Me: Then come in!!

(They come inside)

Pam: No way!!

Aiden: Is that?

Me: Yup, it’s Hyuga Hizashi and Hikaru Hizashi!!

Hyuga: What’s up!!

Hikaru: Oh yeah, we’re here for a Tag Battle!!

Me: Really?! Against who?

Hikaru: You-

Me: Aw yeah!!

Hyuga: And Raina!

(Me and Raina stare at each other angrily)

Hikaru: Is there a problem?

(Aiden and Pam fills Hikaru and Hyuga in)

Hikaru: Oh, that’s probably why Valt wanted us to battle you two.

Raina: Fine, I’ll battle with him.

Me: Same.

(Dad pulls something under a blanket on a moving dolly)

Dad: I was able to order the stadium you battled Free and Valt in!!

(Dad pulls the blanket off)

Hikaru: Wow, this stadium looks awesome!! Helios Blazebringer is going to win!!

Hyuga: Hyperion Flamebringer will zoom all around this stadium!!

Dad: We’re live in 3! 2! 1!

Hanami: Hello Beyfans around the world!! Today we’ve got The Tag Team World Champions!! Hikaru Hizashi and Hyuga Hizashi Vs The Beyjitzu Duo Raina Reinhart and Perseus Nakano!!

Raina: I’ll attack both of them, you just make sure none of them getaway.

Me: I’m gonna do more than that!

Raina: If we don’t do that we’ll lose!!

Me: So you’re saying that Ridley is better than Poseidon?!

Raina: Even though that is true, I’m not saying that!

Me: I’m attacking and you can’t stop me!!

Hanami: Um, looks like The Beyjitzu Duo is having some issues!

Me/Raina: Stay out of it!!

Hanami: Um, ok let’s get down to business.

Dad: First battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Raina/Hyuga/Hikaru: Let it rip!!

(Hyuga and Hikaru pull off Lightning Launches while Me and Raina pull off Beyjitzu Launches)

Hanami: We get some Lightning Launches and some Beyjitzu Launches!!

(Poseidon tries attacking Hyperion, Ridley clashes with Poseidon and sends Poseidon flying)

Hanami: Apparently Ridley thinks Poseidon is its foe?!

Me: What are you doing?!

Raina: I told you to stay back!!

Me: Nobody tells me what to do.

(Poseidon leans on its driver and speeds up, Poseidon heads straight for Helios)

Hikaru: *Gasps*

(Poseidon sends Helios flying)

Hikaru: Helios hang in there!!

(Helios hits the wall)

Hanami: Poseidon goes on the attack!!

Hyuga: Go kablamo all over Ridley!!

(Hyperion speeds up and heads straight for Ridley)

Raina: Pirate Boost!!

Hanami: Hyperion and Ridley start duking it out hard!!

(Ridley absorbs Hyperion’s hit and picks up speed)

Hyuga: We’re not giving up yet!!

(Hyperion catches onto the motorized rim, Hyperion speeds up and heads straight for Ridley)

Raina: One last time!! Pirate Boost!!

(Ridley absorbs the impact again)

Me: Hydro Jet!!

Hikaru: Whirl Counter!!

(Helios starts drifting on its driver and heads straight for Poseidon, Poseidon leans on its driver and speeds into Helios, Helios gets sent flying)

Hanami: And they hit each other and send each other flying!!

Hikaru: Hyuga now!!

Hyuga: Time to go, brrrrr!!

(Helios and Hyperion start grinding against each other create sparks)

Hikaru: HAAA!!! Helios!!

Hyuga: Vroom!! Hyperion!!

(Hyuga and Hikaru’s Resonance Aura flares up)

Hyuga/Hikaru: Twin Strike!!

(Helios and Hyperion’s blades both slash into us in complete synchronization)

Hanami; They both attack in complete synchronization!!

Me: You can take the blow, right?

Raina: Wait what?!

(Poseidon hits Ridley into the double attack, Ridley absorbs the whole impact and sends Hyperion and Helios flying in separate ways)

Hanami: Twin Strike has failed!!

Hikaru/Hyuga: *Gasps*

Raina: You know how reckless that was?!

(I roll my eyes)

Hikaru: They defeated Twin Strike.

Hyuga: I don’t care!! Go in for it!!

Hikaru: You two Helios!!

(Hyperion and Helios both catch onto the motorized rim and both fly above us)

Hanami: Hyperion and Helios speed up!!

Me: *Gasps*

(Helios and Hyperion bounce off the wall and head straight for us)

Me: Hydro Strike!!

Raina: Pirate Launch!!

(Poseidon and Ridley send Hyperion and Helios flying in the air)

Hanami: Helios and Hyperion are airborne!

Hikaru: Hyuga, let’s show them our true power!!

Hyuga: Vroom Vroom!!

(Hyuga and Hikaru’s Resonance Aura turns into a raging flare, Hyperion and Helios’ flare flares up, Helios and Hyperion slam into each other in mid-air)

Hikaru: Twin

Hyuga: Breaker

Hikaru/Hyuga: Impact!!

(Helios’ limit break activates and shoots Hyperion down to Poseidon and Ridley, Helios blows up, Hikaru grabs Hyuga and throws him into Raina)

Hanami: Hyuga and Hikaru use their ultimate move to end the match!!

Me: Time to get reckless!!

(Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim, Poseidon flies in the air and hits Hyperion in mid-air, Hyperion’s limit break activates, Hyperion and Poseidon burst)

All: *Gasps*

Raina: Why’d you do that?

Me: Because sometimes you gotta be a little reckless!!

(I smile, Raina’s Pure Resonance Aura flares up, Helios lands back on the ground)

Raina: I’m taking you down!! Pirate Rush!!

Hikaru: Blazing Recoil!!

(Helios and Ridley get sent flying out of the stadium)

Hanami: They both get sent flying!!

Dad: It’s Pirate Ridley with a ring-out finish!! Hydro Poseidon and Pirate Ridley win!!

Hanami: After struggling in the beginning they turn the tables and beat Helios and Hyperion!!

Me/Raina: Awesome!!

Hikaru: Man.

Hyuga: That was still fun!!

Hikaru: It really was bro.

Raina: Sorry for being a bit harsh on you.

Me: Nah, it should be me apologizing. But I won’t.

(Everyone freezes, Everyone breaks into laughter)

Hyuga/Hikaru: Man, this is awesome!!

(Jul. 04, 2021  4:59 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 16 is coming hot!!

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  Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
                    Chapter 16
 Teamwork Makes The Dreamworks!!!

Valt: How did you like that?!

Me: It was ok.

Me (Thoughts): I’ve gotta switch things up if I wanna ace this match!!

(I put Poseidon in left spin mode)

Hanami: They’re tied 1-1 so a burst finish could give any of them the game!!

Reff: Third battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Valt: Let it rip!!

Valt: Rush Launch!!

Me: Flood Launch!!

(Valtryek and Poseidon hit each other with a barrage of attacks)

Hanami: They both give it they’re all!!

Me: Hydro Strike!!

(Poseidon hits Valtryek hard, Poseidon steals some of Valtryek’s spin)

Me: That’s the way you do it!!

(Valtryek and Poseidon start clashing hard)

Valt: I don’t think so!! Heroic Recoil!!

(Valtryek’s bound blade sends Poseidon flying)

Hanami: Valtryek uses its bound blade to counterstrike!!

Me: Hydro Ripple!!

(Poseidon dives down on Valtryek, Valtryek gets sent flying)

Valt: *Gasps*

Hanami: The underdog shows us some tricks!!

Valt: We’re not giving up!! Valtryek!!!

(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up, Valtryek lands on the motorized rim and starts picking up speed)

Valt: Heroic Sword!!

(Valtryek flies off the motorized rim hits and hits Poseidon, Poseidon bursts)

Me: *Gasps*

Reff: It’s Heroic Valtryek with a burst finish!! Valt Aoi wins with a score of 3-1!!

Hanami: Our World Champion shows our Underdog some class!!

Me: *Sighs* GG Valt.

Valt: Don’t worry, you’ll get to my level soon!! But you did a great job anyway!!

Aiden: You did awesome!!

Pam: Great effort!!

Valt: Looks like your friends think so too!!

Me: Thanks, guys!!

~At The Airport~

Dad: Alright, are we all ready to go?!

Me: Dad what did you do when we were here?

Dad: Mostly hung out at the beach.

(Me and Raina’s eyes lock)

Me/Raina: Hmp!!

(We look away instantly)

Dad: Um, what’s up with them?

Pam: I’ll tell you on the flight.

Me: Bye Valt!!

Valt: It was fun meeting you!!

(Valt waves goodbye, Free looks at us behind a tree)

Free (Thoughts): I’ll see you again, Perseus Nakano.

(Our Plane takes off)

~Back At The Warehouse~

Me: Spain was so epic!!

Pam: Who’s up for a battle first?!

Aiden: I’m your man!!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Aiden/Pam: Let it rip!!

Aiden: Go Ashindra!!

Pam: Pegasus take center stage!!

~At The Comets Gym~

???: Go Helios!!

???: Vroom into them, Hyperion!!

???: Hikaru, Hyuga!!

Hikaru: What’s up Honcho?

Hyuga: Is something wrong?

Honcho: Valt wants you two to battle 2 strong bladers!!

Hikaru: Really?!

Hyuga: How strong?

Honcho: So strong that one of them has beaten Valt!!

Hikaru: That strong?!

Hyuga: They beat Valt?

Honcho: Yup!

Hikaru: Come on Hyuga, we’ve gotta battle them!!

Hyuga: Vroom, Vroom!!

(Hikaru and Hyuga run out the door)

~At The Warehouse~

(Ashindra gets sent flying out of the stadium)

Aiden: Not again!!

Pam: Face it my Pegasus is too strong!

(Pam and Aiden start bickering but I hear something outside)

???: Honcho said it was right here!!

???: Well maybe he was wrong Hikaru!!

???: Hyuga, I’m pretty sure this is the place!!

(I get up and open the door)

Me: Um, you guys here to battle me?

Hikaru: That’s right, two blading legends!!

Hyuga: We’re gonna go all kablamo up in here!!

Me: Blading Legends?

Hikaru: I’m Hikaru Hizashi!!

Hyuga: And I’m Hyuga Hizashi!!

Me: How could I forget!! From the Super Tag League?!

Hikaru: Yup, that’s us!

Me: Then come in!!

(They come inside)

Pam: No way!!

Aiden: Is that?

Me: Yup, it’s Hyuga Hizashi and Hikaru Hizashi!!

Hyuga: What’s up!!

Hikaru: Oh yeah, we’re here for a Tag Battle!!

Me: Really?! Against who?

Hikaru: You-

Me: Aw yeah!!

Hyuga: And Raina!

(Me and Raina stare at each other angrily)

Hikaru: Is there a problem?

(Aiden and Pam fills Hikaru and Hyuga in)

Hikaru: Oh, that’s probably why Valt wanted us to battle you two.

Raina: Fine, I’ll battle with him.

Me: Same.

(Dad pulls something under a blanket on a moving dolly)

Dad: I was able to order the stadium you battled Free and Valt in!!

(Dad pulls the blanket off)

Hikaru: Wow, this stadium looks awesome!! Helios Blazebringer is going to win!!

Hyuga: Hyperion Flamebringer will zoom all around this stadium!!

Dad: We’re live in 3! 2! 1!

Hanami: Hello Beyfans around the world!! Today we’ve got The Tag Team World Champions!! Hikaru Hizashi and Hyuga Hizashi Vs The Beyjitzu Duo Raina Reinhart and Perseus Nakano!!

Raina: I’ll attack both of them, you just make sure none of them getaway.

Me: I’m gonna do more than that!

Raina: If we don’t do that we’ll lose!!

Me: So you’re saying that Ridley is better than Poseidon?!

Raina: Even though that is true, I’m not saying that!

Me: I’m attacking and you can’t stop me!!

Hanami: Um, looks like The Beyjitzu Duo is having some issues!

Me/Raina: Stay out of it!!

Hanami: Um, ok let’s get down to business.

Dad: First battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Raina/Hyuga/Hikaru: Let it rip!!

(Hyuga and Hikaru pull off Lightning Launches while Me and Raina pull off Beyjitzu Launches)

Hanami: We get some Lightning Launches and some Beyjitzu Launches!!

(Poseidon tries attacking Hyperion, Ridley clashes with Poseidon and sends Poseidon flying)

Hanami: Apparently Ridley thinks Poseidon is its foe?!

Me: What are you doing?!

Raina: I told you to stay back!!

Me: Nobody tells me what to do.

(Poseidon leans on its driver and speeds up, Poseidon heads straight for Helios)

Hikaru: *Gasps*

(Poseidon sends Helios flying)

Hikaru: Helios hang in there!!

(Helios hits the wall)

Hanami: Poseidon goes on the attack!!

Hyuga: Go kablamo all over Ridley!!

(Hyperion speeds up and heads straight for Ridley)

Raina: Pirate Boost!!

Hanami: Hyperion and Ridley start duking it out hard!!

(Ridley absorbs Hyperion’s hit and picks up speed)

Hyuga: We’re not giving up yet!!

(Hyperion catches onto the motorized rim, Hyperion speeds up and heads straight for Ridley)

Raina: One last time!! Pirate Boost!!

(Ridley absorbs the impact again)

Me: Hydro Jet!!

Hikaru: Whirl Counter!!

(Helios starts drifting on its driver and heads straight for Poseidon, Poseidon leans on its driver and speeds into Helios, Helios gets sent flying)

Hanami: And they hit each other and send each other flying!!

Hikaru: Hyuga now!!

Hyuga: Time to go, brrrrr!!

(Helios and Hyperion start grinding against each other create sparks)

Hikaru: HAAA!!! Helios!!

Hyuga: Vroom!! Hyperion!!

(Hyuga and Hikaru’s Resonance Aura flares up)

Hyuga/Hikaru: Twin Strike!!

(Helios and Hyperion’s blades both slash into us in complete synchronization)

Hanami; They both attack in complete synchronization!!

Me: You can take the blow, right?

Raina: Wait what?!

(Poseidon hits Ridley into the double attack, Ridley absorbs the whole impact and sends Hyperion and Helios flying in separate ways)

Hanami: Twin Strike has failed!!

Hikaru/Hyuga: *Gasps*

Raina: You know how reckless that was?!

(I roll my eyes)

Hikaru: They defeated Twin Strike.

Hyuga: I don’t care!! Go in for it!!

Hikaru: You two Helios!!

(Hyperion and Helios both catch onto the motorized rim and both fly above us)

Hanami: Hyperion and Helios speed up!!

Me: *Gasps*

(Helios and Hyperion bounce off the wall and head straight for us)

Me: Hydro Strike!!

Raina: Pirate Launch!!

(Poseidon and Ridley send Hyperion and Helios flying in the air)

Hanami: Helios and Hyperion are airborne!

Hikaru: Hyuga, let’s show them our true power!!

Hyuga: Vroom Vroom!!

(Hyuga and Hikaru’s Resonance Aura turns into a raging flare, Hyperion and Helios’ flare flares up, Helios and Hyperion slam into each other in mid-air)

Hikaru: Twin

Hyuga: Breaker

Hikaru/Hyuga: Impact!!

(Helios’ limit break activates and shoots Hyperion down to Poseidon and Ridley, Helios blows up, Hikaru grabs Hyuga and throws him into Raina)

Hanami: Hyuga and Hikaru use their ultimate move to end the match!!

Me: Time to get reckless!!

(Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim, Poseidon flies in the air and hits Hyperion in mid-air, Hyperion’s limit break activates, Hyperion and Poseidon burst)

All: *Gasps*

Raina: Why’d you do that?

Me: Because sometimes you gotta be a little reckless!!

(I smile, Raina’s Pure Resonance Aura flares up, Helios lands back on the ground)

Raina: I’m taking you down!! Pirate Rush!!

Hikaru: Blazing Recoil!!

(Helios and Ridley get sent flying out of the stadium)

Hanami: They both get sent flying!!

Dad: It’s Pirate Ridley with a ring-out finish!! Hydro Poseidon and Pirate Ridley win!!

Hanami: After struggling in the beginning they turn the tables and beat Helios and Hyperion!!

Me/Raina: Awesome!!

Hikaru: Man.

Hyuga: That was still fun!!

Hikaru: It really was bro.

Raina: Sorry for being a bit harsh on you.

Me: Nah, it should be me apologizing. But I won’t.

(Everyone freezes, Everyone breaks into laughter)

Hyuga/Hikaru: Man, this is awesome!!

(Jul. 04, 2021  4:59 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 16 is coming hot!!

Spoiler (Click to View)

  Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
                    Chapter 16
 Teamwork Makes The Dreamworks!!!

Valt: How did you like that?!

Me: It was ok.

Me (Thoughts): I’ve gotta switch things up if I wanna ace this match!!

(I put Poseidon in left spin mode)

Hanami: They’re tied 1-1 so a burst finish could give any of them the game!!

Reff: Third battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Valt: Let it rip!!

Valt: Rush Launch!!

Me: Flood Launch!!

(Valtryek and Poseidon hit each other with a barrage of attacks)

Hanami: They both give it they’re all!!

Me: Hydro Strike!!

(Poseidon hits Valtryek hard, Poseidon steals some of Valtryek’s spin)

Me: That’s the way you do it!!

(Valtryek and Poseidon start clashing hard)

Valt: I don’t think so!! Heroic Recoil!!

(Valtryek’s bound blade sends Poseidon flying)

Hanami: Valtryek uses its bound blade to counterstrike!!

Me: Hydro Ripple!!

(Poseidon dives down on Valtryek, Valtryek gets sent flying)

Valt: *Gasps*

Hanami: The underdog shows us some tricks!!

Valt: We’re not giving up!! Valtryek!!!

(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up, Valtryek lands on the motorized rim and starts picking up speed)

Valt: Heroic Sword!!

(Valtryek flies off the motorized rim hits and hits Poseidon, Poseidon bursts)

Me: *Gasps*

Reff: It’s Heroic Valtryek with a burst finish!! Valt Aoi wins with a score of 3-1!!

Hanami: Our World Champion shows our Underdog some class!!

Me: *Sighs* GG Valt.

Valt: Don’t worry, you’ll get to my level soon!! But you did a great job anyway!!

Aiden: You did awesome!!

Pam: Great effort!!

Valt: Looks like your friends think so too!!

Me: Thanks, guys!!

~At The Airport~

Dad: Alright, are we all ready to go?!

Me: Dad what did you do when we were here?

Dad: Mostly hung out at the beach.

(Me and Raina’s eyes lock)

Me/Raina: Hmp!!

(We look away instantly)

Dad: Um, what’s up with them?

Pam: I’ll tell you on the flight.

Me: Bye Valt!!

Valt: It was fun meeting you!!

(Valt waves goodbye, Free looks at us behind a tree)

Free (Thoughts): I’ll see you again, Perseus Nakano.

(Our Plane takes off)

~Back At The Warehouse~

Me: Spain was so epic!!

Pam: Who’s up for a battle first?!

Aiden: I’m your man!!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Aiden/Pam: Let it rip!!

Aiden: Go Ashindra!!

Pam: Pegasus take center stage!!

~At The Comets Gym~

???: Go Helios!!

???: Vroom into them, Hyperion!!

???: Hikaru, Hyuga!!

Hikaru: What’s up Honcho?

Hyuga: Is something wrong?

Honcho: Valt wants you two to battle 2 strong bladers!!

Hikaru: Really?!

Hyuga: How strong?

Honcho: So strong that one of them has beaten Valt!!

Hikaru: That strong?!

Hyuga: They beat Valt?

Honcho: Yup!

Hikaru: Come on Hyuga, we’ve gotta battle them!!

Hyuga: Vroom, Vroom!!

(Hikaru and Hyuga run out the door)

~At The Warehouse~

(Ashindra gets sent flying out of the stadium)

Aiden: Not again!!

Pam: Face it my Pegasus is too strong!

(Pam and Aiden start bickering but I hear something outside)

???: Honcho said it was right here!!

???: Well maybe he was wrong Hikaru!!

???: Hyuga, I’m pretty sure this is the place!!

(I get up and open the door)

Me: Um, you guys here to battle me?

Hikaru: That’s right, two blading legends!!

Hyuga: We’re gonna go all kablamo up in here!!

Me: Blading Legends?

Hikaru: I’m Hikaru Hizashi!!

Hyuga: And I’m Hyuga Hizashi!!

Me: How could I forget!! From the Super Tag League?!

Hikaru: Yup, that’s us!

Me: Then come in!!

(They come inside)

Pam: No way!!

Aiden: Is that?

Me: Yup, it’s Hyuga Hizashi and Hikaru Hizashi!!

Hyuga: What’s up!!

Hikaru: Oh yeah, we’re here for a Tag Battle!!

Me: Really?! Against who?

Hikaru: You-

Me: Aw yeah!!

Hyuga: And Raina!

(Me and Raina stare at each other angrily)

Hikaru: Is there a problem?

(Aiden and Pam fills Hikaru and Hyuga in)

Hikaru: Oh, that’s probably why Valt wanted us to battle you two.

Raina: Fine, I’ll battle with him.

Me: Same.

(Dad pulls something under a blanket on a moving dolly)

Dad: I was able to order the stadium you battled Free and Valt in!!

(Dad pulls the blanket off)

Hikaru: Wow, this stadium looks awesome!! Helios Blazebringer is going to win!!

Hyuga: Hyperion Flamebringer will zoom all around this stadium!!

Dad: We’re live in 3! 2! 1!

Hanami: Hello Beyfans around the world!! Today we’ve got The Tag Team World Champions!! Hikaru Hizashi and Hyuga Hizashi Vs The Beyjitzu Duo Raina Reinhart and Perseus Nakano!!

Raina: I’ll attack both of them, you just make sure none of them getaway.

Me: I’m gonna do more than that!

Raina: If we don’t do that we’ll lose!!

Me: So you’re saying that Ridley is better than Poseidon?!

Raina: Even though that is true, I’m not saying that!

Me: I’m attacking and you can’t stop me!!

Hanami: Um, looks like The Beyjitzu Duo is having some issues!

Me/Raina: Stay out of it!!

Hanami: Um, ok let’s get down to business.

Dad: First battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Raina/Hyuga/Hikaru: Let it rip!!

(Hyuga and Hikaru pull off Lightning Launches while Me and Raina pull off Beyjitzu Launches)

Hanami: We get some Lightning Launches and some Beyjitzu Launches!!

(Poseidon tries attacking Hyperion, Ridley clashes with Poseidon and sends Poseidon flying)

Hanami: Apparently Ridley thinks Poseidon is its foe?!

Me: What are you doing?!

Raina: I told you to stay back!!

Me: Nobody tells me what to do.

(Poseidon leans on its driver and speeds up, Poseidon heads straight for Helios)

Hikaru: *Gasps*

(Poseidon sends Helios flying)

Hikaru: Helios hang in there!!

(Helios hits the wall)

Hanami: Poseidon goes on the attack!!

Hyuga: Go kablamo all over Ridley!!

(Hyperion speeds up and heads straight for Ridley)

Raina: Pirate Boost!!

Hanami: Hyperion and Ridley start duking it out hard!!

(Ridley absorbs Hyperion’s hit and picks up speed)

Hyuga: We’re not giving up yet!!

(Hyperion catches onto the motorized rim, Hyperion speeds up and heads straight for Ridley)

Raina: One last time!! Pirate Boost!!

(Ridley absorbs the impact again)

Me: Hydro Jet!!

Hikaru: Whirl Counter!!

(Helios starts drifting on its driver and heads straight for Poseidon, Poseidon leans on its driver and speeds into Helios, Helios gets sent flying)

Hanami: And they hit each other and send each other flying!!

Hikaru: Hyuga now!!

Hyuga: Time to go, brrrrr!!

(Helios and Hyperion start grinding against each other create sparks)

Hikaru: HAAA!!! Helios!!

Hyuga: Vroom!! Hyperion!!

(Hyuga and Hikaru’s Resonance Aura flares up)

Hyuga/Hikaru: Twin Strike!!

(Helios and Hyperion’s blades both slash into us in complete synchronization)

Hanami; They both attack in complete synchronization!!

Me: You can take the blow, right?

Raina: Wait what?!

(Poseidon hits Ridley into the double attack, Ridley absorbs the whole impact and sends Hyperion and Helios flying in separate ways)

Hanami: Twin Strike has failed!!

Hikaru/Hyuga: *Gasps*

Raina: You know how reckless that was?!

(I roll my eyes)

Hikaru: They defeated Twin Strike.

Hyuga: I don’t care!! Go in for it!!

Hikaru: You two Helios!!

(Hyperion and Helios both catch onto the motorized rim and both fly above us)

Hanami: Hyperion and Helios speed up!!

Me: *Gasps*

(Helios and Hyperion bounce off the wall and head straight for us)

Me: Hydro Strike!!

Raina: Pirate Launch!!

(Poseidon and Ridley send Hyperion and Helios flying in the air)

Hanami: Helios and Hyperion are airborne!

Hikaru: Hyuga, let’s show them our true power!!

Hyuga: Vroom Vroom!!

(Hyuga and Hikaru’s Resonance Aura turns into a raging flare, Hyperion and Helios’ flare flares up, Helios and Hyperion slam into each other in mid-air)

Hikaru: Twin

Hyuga: Breaker

Hikaru/Hyuga: Impact!!

(Helios’ limit break activates and shoots Hyperion down to Poseidon and Ridley, Helios blows up, Hikaru grabs Hyuga and throws him into Raina)

Hanami: Hyuga and Hikaru use their ultimate move to end the match!!

Me: Time to get reckless!!

(Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim, Poseidon flies in the air and hits Hyperion in mid-air, Hyperion’s limit break activates, Hyperion and Poseidon burst)

All: *Gasps*

Raina: Why’d you do that?

Me: Because sometimes you gotta be a little reckless!!

(I smile, Raina’s Pure Resonance Aura flares up, Helios lands back on the ground)

Raina: I’m taking you down!! Pirate Rush!!

Hikaru: Blazing Recoil!!

(Helios and Ridley get sent flying out of the stadium)

Hanami: They both get sent flying!!

Dad: It’s Pirate Ridley with a ring-out finish!! Hydro Poseidon and Pirate Ridley win!!

Hanami: After struggling in the beginning they turn the tables and beat Helios and Hyperion!!

Me/Raina: Awesome!!

Hikaru: Man.

Hyuga: That was still fun!!

Hikaru: It really was bro.

Raina: Sorry for being a bit harsh on you.

Me: Nah, it should be me apologizing. But I won’t.

(Everyone freezes, Everyone breaks into laughter)

Hyuga/Hikaru: Man, this is awesome!!

(Jul. 04, 2021  1:07 PM)NamanSpryzen Wrote:

(Jul. 04, 2021  4:59 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 16 is coming hot!!

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  Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
                    Chapter 16
 Teamwork Makes The Dreamworks!!!

Valt: How did you like that?!

Me: It was ok.

Me (Thoughts): I’ve gotta switch things up if I wanna ace this match!!

(I put Poseidon in left spin mode)

Hanami: They’re tied 1-1 so a burst finish could give any of them the game!!

Reff: Third battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Valt: Let it rip!!

Valt: Rush Launch!!

Me: Flood Launch!!

(Valtryek and Poseidon hit each other with a barrage of attacks)

Hanami: They both give it they’re all!!

Me: Hydro Strike!!

(Poseidon hits Valtryek hard, Poseidon steals some of Valtryek’s spin)

Me: That’s the way you do it!!

(Valtryek and Poseidon start clashing hard)

Valt: I don’t think so!! Heroic Recoil!!

(Valtryek’s bound blade sends Poseidon flying)

Hanami: Valtryek uses its bound blade to counterstrike!!

Me: Hydro Ripple!!

(Poseidon dives down on Valtryek, Valtryek gets sent flying)

Valt: *Gasps*

Hanami: The underdog shows us some tricks!!

Valt: We’re not giving up!! Valtryek!!!

(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up, Valtryek lands on the motorized rim and starts picking up speed)

Valt: Heroic Sword!!

(Valtryek flies off the motorized rim hits and hits Poseidon, Poseidon bursts)

Me: *Gasps*

Reff: It’s Heroic Valtryek with a burst finish!! Valt Aoi wins with a score of 3-1!!

Hanami: Our World Champion shows our Underdog some class!!

Me: *Sighs* GG Valt.

Valt: Don’t worry, you’ll get to my level soon!! But you did a great job anyway!!

Aiden: You did awesome!!

Pam: Great effort!!

Valt: Looks like your friends think so too!!

Me: Thanks, guys!!

~At The Airport~

Dad: Alright, are we all ready to go?!

Me: Dad what did you do when we were here?

Dad: Mostly hung out at the beach.

(Me and Raina’s eyes lock)

Me/Raina: Hmp!!

(We look away instantly)

Dad: Um, what’s up with them?

Pam: I’ll tell you on the flight.

Me: Bye Valt!!

Valt: It was fun meeting you!!

(Valt waves goodbye, Free looks at us behind a tree)

Free (Thoughts): I’ll see you again, Perseus Nakano.

(Our Plane takes off)

~Back At The Warehouse~

Me: Spain was so epic!!

Pam: Who’s up for a battle first?!

Aiden: I’m your man!!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Aiden/Pam: Let it rip!!

Aiden: Go Ashindra!!

Pam: Pegasus take center stage!!

~At The Comets Gym~

???: Go Helios!!

???: Vroom into them, Hyperion!!

???: Hikaru, Hyuga!!

Hikaru: What’s up Honcho?

Hyuga: Is something wrong?

Honcho: Valt wants you two to battle 2 strong bladers!!

Hikaru: Really?!

Hyuga: How strong?

Honcho: So strong that one of them has beaten Valt!!

Hikaru: That strong?!

Hyuga: They beat Valt?

Honcho: Yup!

Hikaru: Come on Hyuga, we’ve gotta battle them!!

Hyuga: Vroom, Vroom!!

(Hikaru and Hyuga run out the door)

~At The Warehouse~

(Ashindra gets sent flying out of the stadium)

Aiden: Not again!!

Pam: Face it my Pegasus is too strong!

(Pam and Aiden start bickering but I hear something outside)

???: Honcho said it was right here!!

???: Well maybe he was wrong Hikaru!!

???: Hyuga, I’m pretty sure this is the place!!

(I get up and open the door)

Me: Um, you guys here to battle me?

Hikaru: That’s right, two blading legends!!

Hyuga: We’re gonna go all kablamo up in here!!

Me: Blading Legends?

Hikaru: I’m Hikaru Hizashi!!

Hyuga: And I’m Hyuga Hizashi!!

Me: How could I forget!! From the Super Tag League?!

Hikaru: Yup, that’s us!

Me: Then come in!!

(They come inside)

Pam: No way!!

Aiden: Is that?

Me: Yup, it’s Hyuga Hizashi and Hikaru Hizashi!!

Hyuga: What’s up!!

Hikaru: Oh yeah, we’re here for a Tag Battle!!

Me: Really?! Against who?

Hikaru: You-

Me: Aw yeah!!

Hyuga: And Raina!

(Me and Raina stare at each other angrily)

Hikaru: Is there a problem?

(Aiden and Pam fills Hikaru and Hyuga in)

Hikaru: Oh, that’s probably why Valt wanted us to battle you two.

Raina: Fine, I’ll battle with him.

Me: Same.

(Dad pulls something under a blanket on a moving dolly)

Dad: I was able to order the stadium you battled Free and Valt in!!

(Dad pulls the blanket off)

Hikaru: Wow, this stadium looks awesome!! Helios Blazebringer is going to win!!

Hyuga: Hyperion Flamebringer will zoom all around this stadium!!

Dad: We’re live in 3! 2! 1!

Hanami: Hello Beyfans around the world!! Today we’ve got The Tag Team World Champions!! Hikaru Hizashi and Hyuga Hizashi Vs The Beyjitzu Duo Raina Reinhart and Perseus Nakano!!

Raina: I’ll attack both of them, you just make sure none of them getaway.

Me: I’m gonna do more than that!

Raina: If we don’t do that we’ll lose!!

Me: So you’re saying that Ridley is better than Poseidon?!

Raina: Even though that is true, I’m not saying that!

Me: I’m attacking and you can’t stop me!!

Hanami: Um, looks like The Beyjitzu Duo is having some issues!

Me/Raina: Stay out of it!!

Hanami: Um, ok let’s get down to business.

Dad: First battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Raina/Hyuga/Hikaru: Let it rip!!

(Hyuga and Hikaru pull off Lightning Launches while Me and Raina pull off Beyjitzu Launches)

Hanami: We get some Lightning Launches and some Beyjitzu Launches!!

(Poseidon tries attacking Hyperion, Ridley clashes with Poseidon and sends Poseidon flying)

Hanami: Apparently Ridley thinks Poseidon is its foe?!

Me: What are you doing?!

Raina: I told you to stay back!!

Me: Nobody tells me what to do.

(Poseidon leans on its driver and speeds up, Poseidon heads straight for Helios)

Hikaru: *Gasps*

(Poseidon sends Helios flying)

Hikaru: Helios hang in there!!

(Helios hits the wall)

Hanami: Poseidon goes on the attack!!

Hyuga: Go kablamo all over Ridley!!

(Hyperion speeds up and heads straight for Ridley)

Raina: Pirate Boost!!

Hanami: Hyperion and Ridley start duking it out hard!!

(Ridley absorbs Hyperion’s hit and picks up speed)

Hyuga: We’re not giving up yet!!

(Hyperion catches onto the motorized rim, Hyperion speeds up and heads straight for Ridley)

Raina: One last time!! Pirate Boost!!

(Ridley absorbs the impact again)

Me: Hydro Jet!!

Hikaru: Whirl Counter!!

(Helios starts drifting on its driver and heads straight for Poseidon, Poseidon leans on its driver and speeds into Helios, Helios gets sent flying)

Hanami: And they hit each other and send each other flying!!

Hikaru: Hyuga now!!

Hyuga: Time to go, brrrrr!!

(Helios and Hyperion start grinding against each other create sparks)

Hikaru: HAAA!!! Helios!!

Hyuga: Vroom!! Hyperion!!

(Hyuga and Hikaru’s Resonance Aura flares up)

Hyuga/Hikaru: Twin Strike!!

(Helios and Hyperion’s blades both slash into us in complete synchronization)

Hanami; They both attack in complete synchronization!!

Me: You can take the blow, right?

Raina: Wait what?!

(Poseidon hits Ridley into the double attack, Ridley absorbs the whole impact and sends Hyperion and Helios flying in separate ways)

Hanami: Twin Strike has failed!!

Hikaru/Hyuga: *Gasps*

Raina: You know how reckless that was?!

(I roll my eyes)

Hikaru: They defeated Twin Strike.

Hyuga: I don’t care!! Go in for it!!

Hikaru: You two Helios!!

(Hyperion and Helios both catch onto the motorized rim and both fly above us)

Hanami: Hyperion and Helios speed up!!

Me: *Gasps*

(Helios and Hyperion bounce off the wall and head straight for us)

Me: Hydro Strike!!

Raina: Pirate Launch!!

(Poseidon and Ridley send Hyperion and Helios flying in the air)

Hanami: Helios and Hyperion are airborne!

Hikaru: Hyuga, let’s show them our true power!!

Hyuga: Vroom Vroom!!

(Hyuga and Hikaru’s Resonance Aura turns into a raging flare, Hyperion and Helios’ flare flares up, Helios and Hyperion slam into each other in mid-air)

Hikaru: Twin

Hyuga: Breaker

Hikaru/Hyuga: Impact!!

(Helios’ limit break activates and shoots Hyperion down to Poseidon and Ridley, Helios blows up, Hikaru grabs Hyuga and throws him into Raina)

Hanami: Hyuga and Hikaru use their ultimate move to end the match!!

Me: Time to get reckless!!

(Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim, Poseidon flies in the air and hits Hyperion in mid-air, Hyperion’s limit break activates, Hyperion and Poseidon burst)

All: *Gasps*

Raina: Why’d you do that?

Me: Because sometimes you gotta be a little reckless!!

(I smile, Raina’s Pure Resonance Aura flares up, Helios lands back on the ground)

Raina: I’m taking you down!! Pirate Rush!!

Hikaru: Blazing Recoil!!

(Helios and Ridley get sent flying out of the stadium)

Hanami: They both get sent flying!!

Dad: It’s Pirate Ridley with a ring-out finish!! Hydro Poseidon and Pirate Ridley win!!

Hanami: After struggling in the beginning they turn the tables and beat Helios and Hyperion!!

Me/Raina: Awesome!!

Hikaru: Man.

Hyuga: That was still fun!!

Hikaru: It really was bro.

Raina: Sorry for being a bit harsh on you.

Me: Nah, it should be me apologizing. But I won’t.

(Everyone freezes, Everyone breaks into laughter)

Hyuga/Hikaru: Man, this is awesome!!

Awesome!

(Jul. 04, 2021  11:36 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:

(Jul. 04, 2021  4:59 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 16 is coming hot!!

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  Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
                    Chapter 16
 Teamwork Makes The Dreamworks!!!

Valt: How did you like that?!

Me: It was ok.

Me (Thoughts): I’ve gotta switch things up if I wanna ace this match!!

(I put Poseidon in left spin mode)

Hanami: They’re tied 1-1 so a burst finish could give any of them the game!!

Reff: Third battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Valt: Let it rip!!

Valt: Rush Launch!!

Me: Flood Launch!!

(Valtryek and Poseidon hit each other with a barrage of attacks)

Hanami: They both give it they’re all!!

Me: Hydro Strike!!

(Poseidon hits Valtryek hard, Poseidon steals some of Valtryek’s spin)

Me: That’s the way you do it!!

(Valtryek and Poseidon start clashing hard)

Valt: I don’t think so!! Heroic Recoil!!

(Valtryek’s bound blade sends Poseidon flying)

Hanami: Valtryek uses its bound blade to counterstrike!!

Me: Hydro Ripple!!

(Poseidon dives down on Valtryek, Valtryek gets sent flying)

Valt: *Gasps*

Hanami: The underdog shows us some tricks!!

Valt: We’re not giving up!! Valtryek!!!

(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up, Valtryek lands on the motorized rim and starts picking up speed)

Valt: Heroic Sword!!

(Valtryek flies off the motorized rim hits and hits Poseidon, Poseidon bursts)

Me: *Gasps*

Reff: It’s Heroic Valtryek with a burst finish!! Valt Aoi wins with a score of 3-1!!

Hanami: Our World Champion shows our Underdog some class!!

Me: *Sighs* GG Valt.

Valt: Don’t worry, you’ll get to my level soon!! But you did a great job anyway!!

Aiden: You did awesome!!

Pam: Great effort!!

Valt: Looks like your friends think so too!!

Me: Thanks, guys!!

~At The Airport~

Dad: Alright, are we all ready to go?!

Me: Dad what did you do when we were here?

Dad: Mostly hung out at the beach.

(Me and Raina’s eyes lock)

Me/Raina: Hmp!!

(We look away instantly)

Dad: Um, what’s up with them?

Pam: I’ll tell you on the flight.

Me: Bye Valt!!

Valt: It was fun meeting you!!

(Valt waves goodbye, Free looks at us behind a tree)

Free (Thoughts): I’ll see you again, Perseus Nakano.

(Our Plane takes off)

~Back At The Warehouse~

Me: Spain was so epic!!

Pam: Who’s up for a battle first?!

Aiden: I’m your man!!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Aiden/Pam: Let it rip!!

Aiden: Go Ashindra!!

Pam: Pegasus take center stage!!

~At The Comets Gym~

???: Go Helios!!

???: Vroom into them, Hyperion!!

???: Hikaru, Hyuga!!

Hikaru: What’s up Honcho?

Hyuga: Is something wrong?

Honcho: Valt wants you two to battle 2 strong bladers!!

Hikaru: Really?!

Hyuga: How strong?

Honcho: So strong that one of them has beaten Valt!!

Hikaru: That strong?!

Hyuga: They beat Valt?

Honcho: Yup!

Hikaru: Come on Hyuga, we’ve gotta battle them!!

Hyuga: Vroom, Vroom!!

(Hikaru and Hyuga run out the door)

~At The Warehouse~

(Ashindra gets sent flying out of the stadium)

Aiden: Not again!!

Pam: Face it my Pegasus is too strong!

(Pam and Aiden start bickering but I hear something outside)

???: Honcho said it was right here!!

???: Well maybe he was wrong Hikaru!!

???: Hyuga, I’m pretty sure this is the place!!

(I get up and open the door)

Me: Um, you guys here to battle me?

Hikaru: That’s right, two blading legends!!

Hyuga: We’re gonna go all kablamo up in here!!

Me: Blading Legends?

Hikaru: I’m Hikaru Hizashi!!

Hyuga: And I’m Hyuga Hizashi!!

Me: How could I forget!! From the Super Tag League?!

Hikaru: Yup, that’s us!

Me: Then come in!!

(They come inside)

Pam: No way!!

Aiden: Is that?

Me: Yup, it’s Hyuga Hizashi and Hikaru Hizashi!!

Hyuga: What’s up!!

Hikaru: Oh yeah, we’re here for a Tag Battle!!

Me: Really?! Against who?

Hikaru: You-

Me: Aw yeah!!

Hyuga: And Raina!

(Me and Raina stare at each other angrily)

Hikaru: Is there a problem?

(Aiden and Pam fills Hikaru and Hyuga in)

Hikaru: Oh, that’s probably why Valt wanted us to battle you two.

Raina: Fine, I’ll battle with him.

Me: Same.

(Dad pulls something under a blanket on a moving dolly)

Dad: I was able to order the stadium you battled Free and Valt in!!

(Dad pulls the blanket off)

Hikaru: Wow, this stadium looks awesome!! Helios Blazebringer is going to win!!

Hyuga: Hyperion Flamebringer will zoom all around this stadium!!

Dad: We’re live in 3! 2! 1!

Hanami: Hello Beyfans around the world!! Today we’ve got The Tag Team World Champions!! Hikaru Hizashi and Hyuga Hizashi Vs The Beyjitzu Duo Raina Reinhart and Perseus Nakano!!

Raina: I’ll attack both of them, you just make sure none of them getaway.

Me: I’m gonna do more than that!

Raina: If we don’t do that we’ll lose!!

Me: So you’re saying that Ridley is better than Poseidon?!

Raina: Even though that is true, I’m not saying that!

Me: I’m attacking and you can’t stop me!!

Hanami: Um, looks like The Beyjitzu Duo is having some issues!

Me/Raina: Stay out of it!!

Hanami: Um, ok let’s get down to business.

Dad: First battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Raina/Hyuga/Hikaru: Let it rip!!

(Hyuga and Hikaru pull off Lightning Launches while Me and Raina pull off Beyjitzu Launches)

Hanami: We get some Lightning Launches and some Beyjitzu Launches!!

(Poseidon tries attacking Hyperion, Ridley clashes with Poseidon and sends Poseidon flying)

Hanami: Apparently Ridley thinks Poseidon is its foe?!

Me: What are you doing?!

Raina: I told you to stay back!!

Me: Nobody tells me what to do.

(Poseidon leans on its driver and speeds up, Poseidon heads straight for Helios)

Hikaru: *Gasps*

(Poseidon sends Helios flying)

Hikaru: Helios hang in there!!

(Helios hits the wall)

Hanami: Poseidon goes on the attack!!

Hyuga: Go kablamo all over Ridley!!

(Hyperion speeds up and heads straight for Ridley)

Raina: Pirate Boost!!

Hanami: Hyperion and Ridley start duking it out hard!!

(Ridley absorbs Hyperion’s hit and picks up speed)

Hyuga: We’re not giving up yet!!

(Hyperion catches onto the motorized rim, Hyperion speeds up and heads straight for Ridley)

Raina: One last time!! Pirate Boost!!

(Ridley absorbs the impact again)

Me: Hydro Jet!!

Hikaru: Whirl Counter!!

(Helios starts drifting on its driver and heads straight for Poseidon, Poseidon leans on its driver and speeds into Helios, Helios gets sent flying)

Hanami: And they hit each other and send each other flying!!

Hikaru: Hyuga now!!

Hyuga: Time to go, brrrrr!!

(Helios and Hyperion start grinding against each other create sparks)

Hikaru: HAAA!!! Helios!!

Hyuga: Vroom!! Hyperion!!

(Hyuga and Hikaru’s Resonance Aura flares up)

Hyuga/Hikaru: Twin Strike!!

(Helios and Hyperion’s blades both slash into us in complete synchronization)

Hanami; They both attack in complete synchronization!!

Me: You can take the blow, right?

Raina: Wait what?!

(Poseidon hits Ridley into the double attack, Ridley absorbs the whole impact and sends Hyperion and Helios flying in separate ways)

Hanami: Twin Strike has failed!!

Hikaru/Hyuga: *Gasps*

Raina: You know how reckless that was?!

(I roll my eyes)

Hikaru: They defeated Twin Strike.

Hyuga: I don’t care!! Go in for it!!

Hikaru: You two Helios!!

(Hyperion and Helios both catch onto the motorized rim and both fly above us)

Hanami: Hyperion and Helios speed up!!

Me: *Gasps*

(Helios and Hyperion bounce off the wall and head straight for us)

Me: Hydro Strike!!

Raina: Pirate Launch!!

(Poseidon and Ridley send Hyperion and Helios flying in the air)

Hanami: Helios and Hyperion are airborne!

Hikaru: Hyuga, let’s show them our true power!!

Hyuga: Vroom Vroom!!

(Hyuga and Hikaru’s Resonance Aura turns into a raging flare, Hyperion and Helios’ flare flares up, Helios and Hyperion slam into each other in mid-air)

Hikaru: Twin

Hyuga: Breaker

Hikaru/Hyuga: Impact!!

(Helios’ limit break activates and shoots Hyperion down to Poseidon and Ridley, Helios blows up, Hikaru grabs Hyuga and throws him into Raina)

Hanami: Hyuga and Hikaru use their ultimate move to end the match!!

Me: Time to get reckless!!

(Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim, Poseidon flies in the air and hits Hyperion in mid-air, Hyperion’s limit break activates, Hyperion and Poseidon burst)

All: *Gasps*

Raina: Why’d you do that?

Me: Because sometimes you gotta be a little reckless!!

(I smile, Raina’s Pure Resonance Aura flares up, Helios lands back on the ground)

Raina: I’m taking you down!! Pirate Rush!!

Hikaru: Blazing Recoil!!

(Helios and Ridley get sent flying out of the stadium)

Hanami: They both get sent flying!!

Dad: It’s Pirate Ridley with a ring-out finish!! Hydro Poseidon and Pirate Ridley win!!

Hanami: After struggling in the beginning they turn the tables and beat Helios and Hyperion!!

Me/Raina: Awesome!!

Hikaru: Man.

Hyuga: That was still fun!!

Hikaru: It really was bro.

Raina: Sorry for being a bit harsh on you.

Me: Nah, it should be me apologizing. But I won’t.

(Everyone freezes, Everyone breaks into laughter)

Hyuga/Hikaru: Man, this is awesome!!

Dreamworks. . . sounds familiar.
About the Chapter, nice

About the next chapter: Sprizen vs Sprizen

Spoiler (Click to View)

It's going to be a knock off vs the original? Like Wizard vs Geist that never happened Sprizen-edition? That's a great idea that I considered doing (but then Idk if I'm going to make one fanfic so it was useless)

(Jul. 04, 2021  4:04 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:

(Jul. 04, 2021  11:36 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Dreamworks. . . sounds familiar.
About the Chapter, nice

About the next chapter: Sprizen vs Sprizen

Spoiler (Click to View)

It's going to be a knock off vs the original? Like Wizard vs Geist that never happened Sprizen-edition? That's a great idea that I considered doing (but then Idk if I'm going to make one fanfic so it was useless)

Evil Spryzen vs original

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Beyjitzu shall go on a break till next Sunday so bid far well (For now) Don't worry Hollowmind8 I'll make Dynachi interesting