RE: Beyblade Burst: Justice (Character Contest) - ColdFlames13 - Jul. 05, 2021
(Jul. 05, 2021 4:10 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Jul. 05, 2021 9:12 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Sth really funny is that Unseen posted the "-Echo- Achilles" Chapter after you introduced "-Sound- Fafnir". Coincidence? I think not! What are you trying to say?
"Echo" Achilles and "Sound" Fafnir??
Get it? Lol!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Justice (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Jul. 05, 2021
(Jul. 05, 2021 5:03 PM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: (Jul. 05, 2021 4:10 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: What are you trying to say?
"Echo" Achilles and "Sound" Fafnir??
Get it? Lol! I GET it!!!!!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Justice (Character Contest) - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 05, 2021
At least you got it in time
RE: Beyblade Burst: Justice (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Jul. 05, 2021
Can some one rate my recent chapter?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Justice (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jul. 05, 2021
(Jul. 05, 2021 10:05 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Can some one rate my recent chapter?
I'll rate the next chapter u post promise
RE: Beyblade Burst: Justice (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Jul. 05, 2021
(Jul. 05, 2021 10:24 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [quote='LegendJustice' pid='1776520' dateline='1625519138']
Can some one rate my recent chapter?
I'll rate the next chapter u post promise
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RE: Beyblade Burst: Justice (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jul. 05, 2021
(Jul. 05, 2021 10:25 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Jul. 05, 2021 10:24 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [quote='LegendJustice' pid='1776520' dateline='1625519138']
Can some one rate my recent chapter?
I'll rate the next chapter u post promise
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Alr, it's almost finished
RE: Beyblade Burst: Justice (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Jul. 05, 2021
Sorry that was a glitch
(Jul. 05, 2021 10:32 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 05, 2021 10:25 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: I'll rate the next chapter u post promise
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Alr, it's almost finished
Okay same here
Chapter 19 Let's Go!!!! I know I said I was gonna post tomorrow but my schedule change
Ruckus's Debut!!!
Satsu: Jacob there you are!!!
Jacob: Oh, Hey!
Satsu: Announcement in announcement hall!
Jacob: Oka-
Satsu: Just come!!!
(Satsu drags Jacob)
Shun: Hey guys, I saved you some seats!
(Shun said waving)
Remington: Move your hands I can't see!
Shun: Sorry.
(Jacob and Satsu take there seats)
Kris: Thank you all for coming, as some of you know the WBO held a mini tournament to see who can come to the battle island and one blader beat all the challenges! Introducing Ruckus De La Russo!!!
Satsu: **Whispers** so this was what this was about? What a waste of time.
Jacob: Not a complete waste! It's nice to know new bladers are Joining!
Ruckus: Hey everyone, Me and Ragnarok are taking you all down!!!
Ryui: As if!
Ruckus: Say that again I dare you!!!
Jacob's mind: Huh, why does that voice sound familiar?
(Jacob has a flashback)
Young Jacob: Say that again I dare you!!!!
Young Ryui: AS IF!!!
(End of flashback)
Jacob: Wait, RYUI is on the island???!!!!!
Shun: Took you long enough.
Kris: Okay everyone you may return to be what you were doing
(Everyone leaves)
Kris: Oh Jacob can you stay?
Jacob: Sure!
Kris: Can you show Ruckus around the Island?
Jacob: Sure but if he gets on my bad side where gonna have a problem.
Kris: Um,I'll make sure that will not happen!
(Jacob leaves)
Jacob: Ruckus! Wait up.
Ruckus: Oh, Hi your Jacob right? The creator of Justice beys!!
Jacob: That's me! And I'm gonna show you around this place!
Ruckus: Okay.
Jacob: That was announcement hall, then we have The workshop, we also have the training room and the match room An-.
Ruckus: The dorms I know!
Jacob: Oh okay And then we have some of the storage and that's all you need to know, lol I forgot the kitchen.
Ruckus: Oh, Okay! Can you show me to the training room?
Jacob: Sure!
(They head to the training room)
Gaza: Rip!!!
Austin: Again!
Jacob: Wow lots of people are here!
Ruckus: Yeah! Who is that guy?
Jacob: Those 2 over there are Austin and Gaza, the over there we have Remington with Ronan, and the we have the other Ronin!
Ruckus: Nice! Wanna battle?
Jacob: Sure!
Ruckus: K!
(People start circling around them)
Gaza: I can my reff!!!
Ruckus: Sure!
Gaza: Okay, Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Jacob & Ruckus: Let it .... Rip!!!
(Jacob and Ruckus pull of amazing Justice launches)
Gaza: amazing launches from both bladers!
Ruckus: Ragnarok! Let's go! Crash Launch!
Jacob: Jax counter!!
(Ragnarok speeds up and attacks Jackal but Jackal dodges but in time)
Gaza: Woah Ragnarok is speeding crazy!!!
Ruckus: Did I mention Ragnarok is an attack type?
Jacob: Nope, not at all but we can take you! Jackal!!!!
(Jacob's aura fires up)
Gaza: What's Ruckus gonna do to get out of this onr????!!!!!!!I
Ruckus's mind: Okay, Ragnarok What should I do?
Ragnarok: Do what makes you win!
Ruckus: LET'S GO! CRASH SMASH!!!
Jacob: JAX SWORD!!
Gaza: Wow! Both beys are fighting fire with fire!
Austin: Who's gonna win?
(There a a huge white light)
(Both beys burst)
Gaza: It's a draw no points rewarded!
Ruckus: GG that was unseenly fun!!!
Jacob: I know I have a feeling you and me are gonna do just fine!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Justice (Character Contest) - Beyl0v3r - Jul. 05, 2021
Ronan:huh what's going on over there?
(He walks over to where Ruckus and Jacob were battling)
Ronan:who are you?
Ruckus:the names Ruckus! And I'm gonna take you down!
Ronan:oh getting straight to the point, huh? Ok! Challenge taken!
PS not part of fan fic
But LG, if this set of dialog can spark up Ronan's introduction, please include it.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Justice (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jul. 06, 2021
(Jul. 05, 2021 10:32 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Sorry that was a glitch
(Jul. 05, 2021 10:32 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Alr, it's almost finished
Okay same here
Chapter 19 Let's Go!!!! I know I said I was gonna post tomorrow but my schedule change
Ruckus's Debut!!!
Satsu: Jacob there you are!!!
Jacob: Oh, Hey!
Satsu: Announcement in announcement hall!
Jacob: Oka-
Satsu: Just come!!!
(Satsu drags Jacob)
Shun: Hey guys, I saved you some seats!
(Shun said waving)
Remington: Move your hands I can't see!
Shun: Sorry.
(Jacob and Satsu take there seats)
Kris: Thank you all for coming, as some of you know the WBO held a mini tournament to see who can come to the battle island and one blader beat all the challenges! Introducing Ruckus De La Russo!!!
Satsu: **Whispers** so this was what this was about? What a waste of time.
Jacob: Not a complete waste! It's nice to know new bladers are Joining!
Ruckus: Hey everyone, Me and Ragnarok are taking you all down!!!
Ryui: As if!
Ruckus: Say that again I dare you!!!
Jacob's mind: Huh, why does that voice sound familiar?
(Jacob has a flashback)
Young Jacob: Say that again I dare you!!!!
Young Ryui: AS IF!!!
(End of flashback)
Jacob: Wait, RYUI is on the island???!!!!!
Shun: Took you long enough.
Kris: Okay everyone you may return to be what you were doing
(Everyone leaves)
Kris: Oh Jacob can you stay?
Jacob: Sure!
Kris: Can you show Ruckus around the Island?
Jacob: Sure but if he gets on my bad side where gonna have a problem.
Kris: Um,I'll make sure that will not happen!
(Jacob leaves)
Jacob: Ruckus! Wait up.
Ruckus: Oh, Hi your Jacob right? The creator of Justice beys!!
Jacob: That's me! And I'm gonna show you around this place!
Ruckus: Okay.
Jacob: That was announcement hall, then we have The workshop, we also have the training room and the match room An-.
Ruckus: The dorms I know!
Jacob: Oh okay And then we have some of the storage and that's all you need to know, lol I forgot the kitchen.
Ruckus: Oh, Okay! Can you show me to the training room?
Jacob: Sure!
(They head to the training room)
Gaza: Rip!!!
Austin: Again!
Jacob: Wow lots of people are here!
Ruckus: Yeah! Who is that guy?
Jacob: Those 2 over there are Austin and Gaza, the over there we have Remington with Ronan, and the we have the other Ronin!
Ruckus: Nice! Wanna battle?
Jacob: Sure!
Ruckus: K!
(People start circling around them)
Gaza: I can my reff!!!
Ruckus: Sure!
Gaza: Okay, Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Jacob & Ruckus: Let it .... Rip!!!
(Jacob and Ruckus pull of amazing Justice launches)
Gaza: amazing launches from both bladers!
Ruckus: Ragnarok! Let's go! Crash Launch!
Jacob: Jax counter!!
(Ragnarok speeds up and attacks Jackal but Jackal dodges but in time)
Gaza: Woah Ragnarok is speeding crazy!!!
Ruckus: Did I mention Ragnarok is an attack type?
Jacob: Nope, not at all but we can take you! Jackal!!!!
(Jacob's aura fires up)
Gaza: What's Ruckus gonna do to get out of this onr????!!!!!!!I
Ruckus's mind: Okay, Ragnarok What should I do?
Ragnarok: Do what makes you win!
Ruckus: LET'S GO! CRASH SMASH!!!
Jacob: JAX SWORD!!
Gaza: Wow! Both beys are fighting fire with fire!
Austin: Who's gonna win?
(There a a huge white light)
(Both beys burst)
Gaza: It's a draw no points rewarded!
Ruckus: GG that was unseenly fun!!!
Jacob: I know I have a feeling you and me are gonna do just fine!
I'm busy at the moment (Moment Driver LOL) But I'll rate it later (But I posted the next chapter on Dynachi so feel free to rate that)
RE: Beyblade Burst: Justice (Character Contest) - GenesisBlader - Jul. 06, 2021
(Jul. 06, 2021 12:04 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 05, 2021 10:32 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Sorry that was a glitch
Okay same here
Chapter 19 Let's Go!!!! I know I said I was gonna post tomorrow but my schedule change
Ruckus's Debut!!!
Satsu: Jacob there you are!!!
Jacob: Oh, Hey!
Satsu: Announcement in announcement hall!
Jacob: Oka-
Satsu: Just come!!!
(Satsu drags Jacob)
Shun: Hey guys, I saved you some seats!
(Shun said waving)
Remington: Move your hands I can't see!
Shun: Sorry.
(Jacob and Satsu take there seats)
Kris: Thank you all for coming, as some of you know the WBO held a mini tournament to see who can come to the battle island and one blader beat all the challenges! Introducing Ruckus De La Russo!!!
Satsu: **Whispers** so this was what this was about? What a waste of time.
Jacob: Not a complete waste! It's nice to know new bladers are Joining!
Ruckus: Hey everyone, Me and Ragnarok are taking you all down!!!
Ryui: As if!
Ruckus: Say that again I dare you!!!
Jacob's mind: Huh, why does that voice sound familiar?
(Jacob has a flashback)
Young Jacob: Say that again I dare you!!!!
Young Ryui: AS IF!!!
(End of flashback)
Jacob: Wait, RYUI is on the island???!!!!!
Shun: Took you long enough.
Kris: Okay everyone you may return to be what you were doing
(Everyone leaves)
Kris: Oh Jacob can you stay?
Jacob: Sure!
Kris: Can you show Ruckus around the Island?
Jacob: Sure but if he gets on my bad side where gonna have a problem.
Kris: Um,I'll make sure that will not happen!
(Jacob leaves)
Jacob: Ruckus! Wait up.
Ruckus: Oh, Hi your Jacob right? The creator of Justice beys!!
Jacob: That's me! And I'm gonna show you around this place!
Ruckus: Okay.
Jacob: That was announcement hall, then we have The workshop, we also have the training room and the match room An-.
Ruckus: The dorms I know!
Jacob: Oh okay And then we have some of the storage and that's all you need to know, lol I forgot the kitchen.
Ruckus: Oh, Okay! Can you show me to the training room?
Jacob: Sure!
(They head to the training room)
Gaza: Rip!!!
Austin: Again!
Jacob: Wow lots of people are here!
Ruckus: Yeah! Who is that guy?
Jacob: Those 2 over there are Austin and Gaza, the over there we have Remington with Ronan, and the we have the other Ronin!
Ruckus: Nice! Wanna battle?
Jacob: Sure!
Ruckus: K!
(People start circling around them)
Gaza: I can my reff!!!
Ruckus: Sure!
Gaza: Okay, Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Jacob & Ruckus: Let it .... Rip!!!
(Jacob and Ruckus pull of amazing Justice launches)
Gaza: amazing launches from both bladers!
Ruckus: Ragnarok! Let's go! Crash Launch!
Jacob: Jax counter!!
(Ragnarok speeds up and attacks Jackal but Jackal dodges but in time)
Gaza: Woah Ragnarok is speeding crazy!!!
Ruckus: Did I mention Ragnarok is an attack type?
Jacob: Nope, not at all but we can take you! Jackal!!!!
(Jacob's aura fires up)
Gaza: What's Ruckus gonna do to get out of this onr????!!!!!!!I
Ruckus's mind: Okay, Ragnarok What should I do?
Ragnarok: Do what makes you win!
Ruckus: LET'S GO! CRASH SMASH!!!
Jacob: JAX SWORD!!
Gaza: Wow! Both beys are fighting fire with fire!
Austin: Who's gonna win?
(There a a huge white light)
(Both beys burst)
Gaza: It's a draw no points rewarded!
Ruckus: GG that was unseenly fun!!!
Jacob: I know I have a feeling you and me are gonna do just fine!
I'm busy at the moment (Moment Driver LOL) But I'll rate it later (But I posted the next chapter on Dynachi so feel free to rate that)
awesome chapter my guy!
i love how jacob forms a friendship with ruckus!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Justice (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Jul. 06, 2021
(Jul. 06, 2021 12:06 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jul. 06, 2021 12:04 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I'm busy at the moment (Moment Driver LOL) But I'll rate it later (But I posted the next chapter on Dynachi so feel free to rate that)
awesome chapter my guy!
i love how jacob forms a friendship with ruckus!
Thanks it's glad to have some support
RE: Beyblade Burst: Justice (Character Contest) - TylerOfChaos - Jul. 06, 2021
Meet the Tyler Williams! (aka me but in Beyblade)
He wants to be the best of the best! He wants to defeat all of the legends!
His Beyblade is GreatSword Terrios. The Black and Blue dragon wielding 3 swords! One on the Tail. The other 2 attached to the arms.
Cockier than Aiga, more persistant than Hyuga! This guy just doesn't know when to quit!
Personality being: Cocky, Loves making friends, refuses to give up, Fear of cockroaches (lol), seeks to have a strong bond with Terrios.
Wants to defeat Nazo (the antagonist) and his bey, Wrath Nemesis.(Just like Phi, his last name is unknown)
Age: 13 to 14
This character is from my own fanfic but, since you guys had some characters of your own, I decided to bring mines up
RE: Beyblade Burst: Justice (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Jul. 06, 2021
(Jul. 06, 2021 2:50 AM)TylerOfChaos Wrote: Meet the Tyler Williams! (aka me but in Beyblade)
He wants to be the best of the best! He wants to defeat all of the legends!
His Beyblade is GreatSword Terrios. The Black and Blue dragon wielding 3 swords! One on the Tail. The other 2 attached to the arms.
Cockier than Aiga, more persistant than Hyuga! This guy just doesn't know when to quit!
Personality being: Cocky, Loves making friends, refuses to give up, Fear of cockroaches (lol), seeks to have a strong bond with Terrios.
Wants to defeat Nazo (the antagonist) and his bey, Wrath Nemesis.(Just like Phi, his last name is unknown)
Age: 13 to 14
This character is from my own fanfic but, since you guys had some characters of your own, I decided to bring mines up
Nice!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Justice (Character Contest) - TylerOfChaos - Jul. 06, 2021
(Jul. 06, 2021 3:03 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Nice!
thx lol
RE: Beyblade Burst: Justice (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Jul. 06, 2021
Okay so the winners of the drum roll please!!!
@BladeKingX UnseenBurst thanks for everyone who came out!!!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Justice (Character Contest) - TylerOfChaos - Jul. 06, 2021
winners for what
RE: Beyblade Burst: Justice (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Jul. 06, 2021
Character Contest
Next chapter is Ultimate battle!
Hint: Noooo Why!!!???L
RE: Beyblade Burst: Justice (Character Contest) - Legend27 - Jul. 06, 2021
This is awesome
RE: Beyblade Burst: Justice (Character Contest) - TylerOfChaos - Jul. 06, 2021
(Jul. 06, 2021 4:00 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Character Contest
Next chapter is Ultimate battle!
Hint: Noooo Why!!!???L
soooooo.... my oc wont be in? 
RE: Beyblade Burst: Justice (Character Contest) - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 06, 2021
(Jul. 06, 2021 4:00 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Character Contest
Next chapter is Ultimate battle!
Hint: Noooo Why!!!???L
Going to break a bey?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Justice (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Jul. 06, 2021
(Jul. 06, 2021 9:47 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Jul. 06, 2021 4:00 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Character Contest
Next chapter is Ultimate battle!
Hint: Noooo Why!!!???L
Going to break a bey?
Yeah you read my mind guess who's hey is gonna be broken
RE: Beyblade Burst: Justice (Character Contest) - GenesisBlader - Jul. 06, 2021
(Jul. 06, 2021 4:12 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Jul. 06, 2021 9:47 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Going to break a bey?
Yeah you read my mind guess who's hey is gonna be broken
NOOOOO JACOB JACKAL NOOOOOOO
RE: Beyblade Burst: Justice (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Jul. 06, 2021
(Jul. 06, 2021 4:15 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jul. 06, 2021 4:12 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Yeah you read my mind guess who's hey is gonna be broken
NOOOOO JACOB JACKAL NOOOOOOO
I WON'T DO THAT TO MY MAIN CHARACTER..... yet
Hint: S
That's all
RE: Beyblade Burst: Justice (Character Contest) - GenesisBlader - Jul. 06, 2021
(Jul. 06, 2021 4:16 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Jul. 06, 2021 4:15 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: NOOOOO JACOB JACKAL NOOOOOOO
I WON'T DO THAT TO MY MAIN CHARACTER..... yet
Hint: S
That's all OH NO SHUN OR SATSU NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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