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+--- Thread: .::Renegade Reviews::. - THE WBO's OWN NOVEL REVIEWING COMPANY - {REOPENED!} (/Thread-Renegade-Reviews-THE-WBO-s-OWN-NOVEL-REVIEWING-COMPANY-REOPENED)
RE: Renegade Reviews - THE WBO'S OWN NOVEL REVIEWING COMPANY - - Minho - Aug. 19, 2011
same with me... swamped with assignments... i think swift's gonna get the job... maybe... still reading the examples...
RE: Renegade Reviews - THE WBO'S OWN NOVEL REVIEWING COMPANY - - Temporal - Aug. 19, 2011
He says everyone should review it, since you already did. So I'll get to it once I finish up with my writing schedule for tomorrow.
RE: Renegade Reviews - THE WBO'S OWN NOVEL REVIEWING COMPANY - - Minho - Aug. 19, 2011
i meant im swamped in assignments... thats why im away...
RE: Renegade Reviews - THE WBO'S OWN NOVEL REVIEWING COMPANY - - Temporal - Aug. 19, 2011
You already reviewed it, didn't you? He wanted to get a second opinion, if I interpreted his request correctly. You still have 9 reviews, so if you're swamped, let the rest of us take care of it, and you focus on what you need to do.
RE: Renegade Reviews - THE WBO'S OWN NOVEL REVIEWING COMPANY - - RowDog - Aug. 19, 2011
I wish to apply aswell.
Name: RowDog (you probably could have told that by my username at the top left of this post)
Writing History: Currently only 'The World Spins Like a Bey'. Not as many as others but I believe it helps so I don't have thoughts of many stories in my head at once which helps me to concentrate and write one good story at a time.
Why you need me: In my spare time I tend to stroll around the forums, mostly the your creations, and I read some stories. As I can see there isn't very much good writers but there is 10 or so writers who are great. This review thread is a great way to find these good stories so people don't read a few stories on here and then give up on reading this part of the forum anymore. I wish to promote this try to get a review from the majority of the stories on the WBO so we can give a good guide to all the readers on this forum. I want to tell people who have done a good job 'Well done' and tell the others how they can improve. I also think that no story is perfect and can always give advice.
Example of Writing:http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-The-World-Spins-like-a-Bey-Bey-Story
RE: Renegade Reviews - THE WBO'S OWN NOVEL REVIEWING COMPANY - - Synth - Aug. 19, 2011
should I join or not... should i join or not
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RE: Renegade Reviews - WANNA BE A RENEGADE REVIEWER? APPLY NOW! - - Minho - Aug. 22, 2011
hmmm... okay your in the running!
RE: .::Renegade Reviews::. - WANNA BE A RENEGADE REVIEWER? APPLY NOW! - - Minho - Aug. 25, 2011
Okay i've been thinking and i've got to give the position to DeX!!!
So dex youre in for a trial run... i'll see how you go...
RE: .::Renegade Reviews::. - NEW EMPLOYEE: DeX!!! - - Synth - Aug. 25, 2011
Ok...
So all i have to do is review a story, send it go you, and you post my review, right?
Whats the trial?
RE: .::Renegade Reviews::. - NEW EMPLOYEE: DeX!!! - - RowDog - Aug. 25, 2011
Congratulations DeX!
Good luck with your new job here.
RE: .::Renegade Reviews::. - NEW EMPLOYEE: DeX!!! - - Minho - Aug. 26, 2011
(Aug. 25, 2011 9:53 AM)DeX Wrote: Ok...
So all i have to do is review a story, send it go you, and you post my review, right?
Whats the trial?
yep...
i'll find a review for you and if you do well you're in for good!
RE: .::Renegade Reviews::. - Minho - Aug. 30, 2011
hopefully i can find a review for you...
RE: .::Renegade Reviews::. - RowDog - Aug. 30, 2011
My request still stands if DeX could review that (and everyone else).
RE: .::Renegade Reviews::. - Minho - Sep. 06, 2011
Okay DeX's trial review is up!
Does he deserve the job?
RE: .::Renegade Reviews::. -DeX's Trial Review is up! Does he deserve the job? - RowDog - Sep. 06, 2011
I saw errors in his review, spelling and grammatical which isn't very good. DeX you probably shouldn't question either. If it isn't clear to you than that is other weak point in the story. It's a 'meh' review.
RE: .::Renegade Reviews::. -DeX's Trial Review is up! Does he deserve the job? - Minho - Sep. 06, 2011
true. I saw a few errors but i dont really mind the questions... They force the writer to think about what's wrong in his story... I dont think the score was right though; i'd say 7.5 overall but thats just me. Its a decent review so im saying yes so far... anyone care to prove me wrong?
RE: .::Renegade Reviews::. -DeX's Trial Review is up! Does he deserve the job? - Synth - Sep. 06, 2011
Meh is the best word for me Xd
sigh, better luck next time to me
RE: .::Renegade Reviews::. -DeX's Trial Review is up! Does he deserve the job? - .:J:. - Sep. 06, 2011
hhhhmmm
Name: Nwolf
Writing history: So far I have written 1 full story and I have started my sequel of it.
Why you need me: I look at alot of new stories, and I can be very thorough if need be. As I have written my own stories it's alot easier for me to pick out bad grammar and spelling mistakes. I can also say what they need to do to improve the plot. i'm on the WBO alot, so I can review new stories quite fast.
Example:
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RE: .::Renegade Reviews::. -DeX's Trial Review is up! Does he deserve the job? - NoodooSoup - Sep. 06, 2011
Shouldn't the overall score be 7.75 or 8 in DeX's review, since that is the average number?
RE: .::Renegade Reviews::. -DeX's Trial Review is up! Does he deserve the job? - Minho - Sep. 12, 2011
hmm... dex have you quit or are you gonna keep reviewing...
RE: .::Renegade Reviews::. -DeX's Trial Review is up! Does he deserve the job? - Sparta - Sep. 12, 2011
(Sep. 06, 2011 11:54 AM)NoodooSoup Wrote: Shouldn't the overall score be 7.75 or 8 in DeX's review, since that is the average number?
I was gonna say that...
Bunnii, I don't mean to speak out or anything, and 'no offense' or anything to DeX, but I would've given the position to RowDog. I liked his writing better, and he had less grammatical errors...
Don't get me wrong. DeX is a good writer, I just felt like RowDog was a bit better.
DeX, a few tips for reviewing:
1. You should provide a short summary of the story/chapter you reviewed
2. Grammar
3. Use some math, and when you calculate the average actually use the real average (7.75, I think?).
RE: .::Renegade Reviews::. -DeX's Trial Review is up! Does he deserve the job? - Minho - Sep. 12, 2011
...
sorry i didn't see RowDog's application...
Maybe we could have a writing battle to see who gets the job?
RE: .::Renegade Reviews::. -DeX's Trial Review is up! Does he deserve the job? - RowDog - Sep. 12, 2011
Sure, give me the theme and what I need to do and I am on it!
RE: .::Renegade Reviews::. -DeX's Trial Review is up! Does he deserve the job? - Synth - Sep. 12, 2011
Better idea. The school works killing me
RE: .::Renegade Reviews::. -DeX's Trial Review is up! Does he deserve the job? - Cygnus - Sep. 12, 2011
Wait, does this mean me and SwiftShadow are definitely not going to be in Renegade Reviews?