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RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Kiryu Kazuma - Sep. 15, 2021
(Sep. 14, 2021 5:47 PM)MasterofDerp Wrote: Mind if I join? I’ll send in my OC pretty soon. One thing: They are not related to any canon(Biologically), though do wield a recurring bey(Bahamut)
Spoilers
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Character name: Brandt Vahan
Alias: The Gargoyle.
Character Appearance:
Brandt is extremely tall and muscular, akin to a slightly more hulking version of Lodin Haijima and Houi Oh. With bright Crimson Eyes and dark purple hair(mimicking his bey) strewn down his back in a ponytail that is kept in check by a dark turquoise band, Brandt uses his hulking status to his advantage to intimidate his opponents, often into submission. His face is adorned by turquoise markings in a pattern representing monster as a way to give off more intimidation. When his resonance is active, these markings will glow to signify a powerup. His skin is tanned slightly, though his arms also have two revealed tattoos that also glow turquoise with his facial markings. For his clothing, he wears a large dark purple denim jacket(Unzipped) with teal fur running down the zipper area, revealing a purple sleeveless shirt underneath with a simple red dot in the center. In battle, he will discard the jacket, revealing a dark brown shoulder brace going across his left shoulder and across his chest diagonally down. He wears a brown belt with a red metallic belt buckle with turquoise pants, along with dark purple hiking boots.
Personality: Brandt is a man of few words, remaining a tall, looming presence during battle. A powerful blader, Brandt seeks worthy opponents of his skill. Slow to anger but very cold towards others, most do not prefer to be around him due to his overwhelming intimidation and brunt attitude. He is extremely physically fit, which also reflects on his bey: Vile Bahamut, along with his blading style, as he prefers brute force over strategy most of the time. While he does not go out of his way to destroy beys, he does not condemn the practice, summing it up to the destroyed bey being too weak to survive. He is also extremely serious, rarely laughing, while also taking training incredibly seriously. He also notably does not care for rankings, instead simply trying to prove his strength through battle in whatever way he can.
Backstory: While mostly shrouded in mystery, Brandt was inspired by Basara Suiryu’s Roar Bahamut to forge the newest iteration of the Bahamut line. Driven to prove his dominance, though not to become the number one ranked blader, Brandt has crushed several notable bladers of the new generation, seeking to prove his strength to others.
Character Alignment: Chaotic Neutral.
Proposed Role in Story: Rival/Minor Antagonist.
Bey Combination: Vile Bahamut .10 Brute Dome-Q(Quell)
Kiwami Core: Bahamut
-Features the God Dragon motif Bahamut in a standard vertical manner, with appearance appearing similar to the Bahamut DB Core, though with a few notable changes. The central point of the core is transformed into a crimson rubber diamond as a reference to Dread Bahamut’s gen weight, with the dragon appearing more purplish-black instead of pitch black. The horns are now adorned with turquoise flames running down the outer sides of them, being a thinner width and going slightly into the horns themselves. The horns are made of plastic instead of rubber. The mouth flames are noticeable absent, instead being replaced by the mouth having a teal glow, along with the flames having been replaced by claws. The outer portion features a crimson outer core with six protrustions(3 per side evenly distributed across), represented by three claw like bulges going slightly upwards to represent Bahamut’s claws. The core features one tall lock at the very end of the teeth portion like Garuda, implying poor burst resistance, though this is nullified through two small rubber protrusions facing downwards akin to the Bahamut DB Core(Less than Gen height, DB Core width). While this drastically helps with burst resistance, the rubber may wear down(Likely not going to happen unless using a metal cap driver), so maintenance or replacement may be needed. It is a left spin core.
Kiwami Weight: .10
-A circular weight consisting of 10(5 on each side) hexagonal protrusions facing slightly inwards to help keep the bey together(Does not affect burst resistance) and increase IWD for defensive power.
Kiwami Blade: Vile
-A Dread Bahamut like shape consisting of two semi wide plastic wings to allow for a two blades for attacking purposes. These blades are larger than Dread’s, and can be used for attack and defensive purposes at the cost of decreased defense. In upper mode, the other two blades(Of 6) are able to be extended, making Bahamut much rounder as well as retracting the two attacking points for an extremely round base that is perfect for reflecting attacks. In lower mode, the blade is locked in its more attack oriented state, though when paired with the Quell Armor, has a specialized gimmick up its sleeve. It uses a mix between Dread and Roar’s color scheme, though with noticeably more red. The attack and morphing blades are both a translucent turquoise/teal, with the inner layer being black/dark purple, with some flecks of white found on it.
Kiwami Armor: Quell
-A circular armor with two semi large round blades that are able to extend outwards slightly upon rotation, allowing for increased defensive power and stamina. Behind the blades are layers lined with thin layers of rubber to allow for increased burst resistance when placed in lower mode. When in lower mode, the Quell armor’s blades will be kept in, allowing the thin line of rubber to grind against the disc to further slow Bahamut from bursting, though constant use will wear down the rubber and make it near useless, so ensure to have several copies of it. This extra burst resistance is only obtainable in lower mode. The rubber is red, with the armor having Dread Bahamut colors.
Neo Disc: Brute
-A circular Neo disc that supports both the upper and lower modes of the Kiwami system. It keeps its weight inwards via inwards facing spikes that go around the slightly slanted down disc like spikes facing upwards. It has high IWD, though due to the weight being focused more inwards is not recommended for stamina purposes. It is quite heavy though, and does grant some solid LAD.
Driver: Dome
-A Freespinning Ball tip driver with a massive plastic freespinning ball in the center surrounded by a freespinning cone(Think a dog cone for the cone shape.) This allows for quick counterattack movements, excellent stability in the center, high LAD(Around Universe level), and grants a slight resistance to smash and non direct to center aerial strikes(Such as Magma Smash). It is a translucent black in coloration.
Special Moves(In order of appearance):
1) Vile Claw: Using the two attack points on the Vile Blade when they are not retracted via clicking, Bahamut gains momentum from its driver going around the stadium or by drifting to land a two strike slash attack against the opponent. Mostly used in Lower Mode.
2) Vile Guard: When Bahamut reaches its final click in Upper mode, the retracted defense blades will slide out, granting Bahamut an overall more circular shape as a purplish reddish dome is cast over it for effect(The light Dome does not affect defense, just there for effect.)
3) Dome Crash: Using the dome driver’s cone to recover after being knocked back, Bahamut tilts forwards to roll off the stadium slope before using the gained momentum to unleash a devastating counterattack via charging down the slope and smacking into the opponent’s bey.
4) Vile Wing: When the attack blades are out, Bahamut utilizes the slightly sloped shape to swat the opponent’s attack away with usual ease(Especially effective against non wall-bey pincer attacks). This will often result in Bahamut’s lock advancing to its more defensive state when in upper mode, meaning it may be a once per battle move unless kept in lower mode.
5) Brutal Dragon Smash: If knocked into the air completely or mostly vertically, Bahamut will charge downwards, smacking into the opponent’s top portion of the layer and sending them upwards from the recoil, possibly bursting the bey thanks to its heavier weight and centrifugal force.
Avatar Appearance:
[img]blob:https://worldbeyblade.org/9904d35c-ada6-4f04-8a3e-24f180edbec9[/img]
Rip I just saw the announcement on the no more entries. Nvm
Tho (This is def a far stretch), do feel free to use the Bahamut idea in case you need it.
I can add you, but your chara's debut will be pushed to Arc 3.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - MasterofDerp - Sep. 15, 2021
(Sep. 15, 2021 6:36 AM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote:(Sep. 14, 2021 5:47 PM)MasterofDerp Wrote: Mind if I join? I’ll send in my OC pretty soon. One thing: They are not related to any canon(Biologically), though do wield a recurring bey(Bahamut)
Spoilers
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Character name: Brandt Vahan
Alias: The Gargoyle.
Character Appearance:
Brandt is extremely tall and muscular, akin to a slightly more hulking version of Lodin Haijima and Houi Oh. With bright Crimson Eyes and dark purple hair(mimicking his bey) strewn down his back in a ponytail that is kept in check by a dark turquoise band, Brandt uses his hulking status to his advantage to intimidate his opponents, often into submission. His face is adorned by turquoise markings in a pattern representing monster as a way to give off more intimidation. When his resonance is active, these markings will glow to signify a powerup. His skin is tanned slightly, though his arms also have two revealed tattoos that also glow turquoise with his facial markings. For his clothing, he wears a large dark purple denim jacket(Unzipped) with teal fur running down the zipper area, revealing a purple sleeveless shirt underneath with a simple red dot in the center. In battle, he will discard the jacket, revealing a dark brown shoulder brace going across his left shoulder and across his chest diagonally down. He wears a brown belt with a red metallic belt buckle with turquoise pants, along with dark purple hiking boots.
Personality: Brandt is a man of few words, remaining a tall, looming presence during battle. A powerful blader, Brandt seeks worthy opponents of his skill. Slow to anger but very cold towards others, most do not prefer to be around him due to his overwhelming intimidation and brunt attitude. He is extremely physically fit, which also reflects on his bey: Vile Bahamut, along with his blading style, as he prefers brute force over strategy most of the time. While he does not go out of his way to destroy beys, he does not condemn the practice, summing it up to the destroyed bey being too weak to survive. He is also extremely serious, rarely laughing, while also taking training incredibly seriously. He also notably does not care for rankings, instead simply trying to prove his strength through battle in whatever way he can.
Backstory: While mostly shrouded in mystery, Brandt was inspired by Basara Suiryu’s Roar Bahamut to forge the newest iteration of the Bahamut line. Driven to prove his dominance, though not to become the number one ranked blader, Brandt has crushed several notable bladers of the new generation, seeking to prove his strength to others.
Character Alignment: Chaotic Neutral.
Proposed Role in Story: Rival/Minor Antagonist.
Bey Combination: Vile Bahamut .10 Brute Dome-Q(Quell)
Kiwami Core: Bahamut
-Features the God Dragon motif Bahamut in a standard vertical manner, with appearance appearing similar to the Bahamut DB Core, though with a few notable changes. The central point of the core is transformed into a crimson rubber diamond as a reference to Dread Bahamut’s gen weight, with the dragon appearing more purplish-black instead of pitch black. The horns are now adorned with turquoise flames running down the outer sides of them, being a thinner width and going slightly into the horns themselves. The horns are made of plastic instead of rubber. The mouth flames are noticeable absent, instead being replaced by the mouth having a teal glow, along with the flames having been replaced by claws. The outer portion features a crimson outer core with six protrustions(3 per side evenly distributed across), represented by three claw like bulges going slightly upwards to represent Bahamut’s claws. The core features one tall lock at the very end of the teeth portion like Garuda, implying poor burst resistance, though this is nullified through two small rubber protrusions facing downwards akin to the Bahamut DB Core(Less than Gen height, DB Core width). While this drastically helps with burst resistance, the rubber may wear down(Likely not going to happen unless using a metal cap driver), so maintenance or replacement may be needed. It is a left spin core.
Kiwami Weight: .10
-A circular weight consisting of 10(5 on each side) hexagonal protrusions facing slightly inwards to help keep the bey together(Does not affect burst resistance) and increase IWD for defensive power.
Kiwami Blade: Vile
-A Dread Bahamut like shape consisting of two semi wide plastic wings to allow for a two blades for attacking purposes. These blades are larger than Dread’s, and can be used for attack and defensive purposes at the cost of decreased defense. In upper mode, the other two blades(Of 6) are able to be extended, making Bahamut much rounder as well as retracting the two attacking points for an extremely round base that is perfect for reflecting attacks. In lower mode, the blade is locked in its more attack oriented state, though when paired with the Quell Armor, has a specialized gimmick up its sleeve. It uses a mix between Dread and Roar’s color scheme, though with noticeably more red. The attack and morphing blades are both a translucent turquoise/teal, with the inner layer being black/dark purple, with some flecks of white found on it.
Kiwami Armor: Quell
-A circular armor with two semi large round blades that are able to extend outwards slightly upon rotation, allowing for increased defensive power and stamina. Behind the blades are layers lined with thin layers of rubber to allow for increased burst resistance when placed in lower mode. When in lower mode, the Quell armor’s blades will be kept in, allowing the thin line of rubber to grind against the disc to further slow Bahamut from bursting, though constant use will wear down the rubber and make it near useless, so ensure to have several copies of it. This extra burst resistance is only obtainable in lower mode. The rubber is red, with the armor having Dread Bahamut colors.
Neo Disc: Brute
-A circular Neo disc that supports both the upper and lower modes of the Kiwami system. It keeps its weight inwards via inwards facing spikes that go around the slightly slanted down disc like spikes facing upwards. It has high IWD, though due to the weight being focused more inwards is not recommended for stamina purposes. It is quite heavy though, and does grant some solid LAD.
Driver: Dome
-A Freespinning Ball tip driver with a massive plastic freespinning ball in the center surrounded by a freespinning cone(Think a dog cone for the cone shape.) This allows for quick counterattack movements, excellent stability in the center, high LAD(Around Universe level), and grants a slight resistance to smash and non direct to center aerial strikes(Such as Magma Smash). It is a translucent black in coloration.
Special Moves(In order of appearance):
1) Vile Claw: Using the two attack points on the Vile Blade when they are not retracted via clicking, Bahamut gains momentum from its driver going around the stadium or by drifting to land a two strike slash attack against the opponent. Mostly used in Lower Mode.
2) Vile Guard: When Bahamut reaches its final click in Upper mode, the retracted defense blades will slide out, granting Bahamut an overall more circular shape as a purplish reddish dome is cast over it for effect(The light Dome does not affect defense, just there for effect.)
3) Dome Crash: Using the dome driver’s cone to recover after being knocked back, Bahamut tilts forwards to roll off the stadium slope before using the gained momentum to unleash a devastating counterattack via charging down the slope and smacking into the opponent’s bey.
4) Vile Wing: When the attack blades are out, Bahamut utilizes the slightly sloped shape to swat the opponent’s attack away with usual ease(Especially effective against non wall-bey pincer attacks). This will often result in Bahamut’s lock advancing to its more defensive state when in upper mode, meaning it may be a once per battle move unless kept in lower mode.
5) Brutal Dragon Smash: If knocked into the air completely or mostly vertically, Bahamut will charge downwards, smacking into the opponent’s top portion of the layer and sending them upwards from the recoil, possibly bursting the bey thanks to its heavier weight and centrifugal force.
Avatar Appearance:
[img]blob:https://worldbeyblade.org/9904d35c-ada6-4f04-8a3e-24f180edbec9[/img]
Rip I just saw the announcement on the no more entries. Nvm
Tho (This is def a far stretch), do feel free to use the Bahamut idea in case you need it.
I can add you, but your chara's debut will be pushed to Arc 3.
All right, sounds good
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Kiryu Kazuma - Sep. 19, 2021
So... I'll release Chapter 8 on thursday.
Plus, here are some chapters:
Spoiler (Click to View)
Chapter 8: The Max Corporation And Hyperion!
Chapter 9: Duel At The Onigashima Island!
Chapter 10: Pallete Feathurs! Iris Mayura!
Chapter 11: Crimson Axe! Mortal Spriggan!
Chapter 12: Fierce Showdown! Ichiban VS Watashi! (End of Arc 1)
Chapter 13: Rainbow Turbo! Legacy Dragon!
Chapter 14: Domination! Dragon VS Lucifer!
Chapter 15: Icarus VS The Perfect Demon King!
Chapter 16: Roaring Tornado! Twister Wyvern!
Chapter 17: A Vampire..!?
Chapter 18: The Dragon Of Creation! Dual Yggdragon!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Dark red - Sep. 19, 2021
(Sep. 19, 2021 3:22 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: So... I'll release Chapter 8 on thursday.Hey Kiryu, can the Kiwami System have Mode changes? If so, can I edit my Bey to have Mode changes? Don't worry, it won't be any OP or anything, I just wanted to add something interesting to my Bey cause compared to the other entries, my Bey sounds pretty boring.
Plus, here are some chapters:
Spoiler (Click to View)
Chapter 8: The Max Corporation And Hyperion!
Chapter 9: Duel At The Onigashima Island!
Chapter 10: Pallete Feathurs! Iris Mayura!
Chapter 11: Crimson Axe! Mortal Spriggan!
Chapter 12: Fierce Showdown! Ichiban VS Watashi! (End of Arc 1)
Chapter 13: Rainbow Turbo! Legacy Dragon!
Chapter 14: Domination! Dragon VS Lucifer!
Chapter 15: Icarus VS The Perfect Demon King!
Chapter 16: Roaring Tornado! Twister Wyvern!
Chapter 17: A Vampire..!?
Chapter 18: The Dragon Of Creation! Dual Yggdragon!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Kiryu Kazuma - Sep. 19, 2021
(Sep. 19, 2021 4:00 PM)Dark red Wrote:(Sep. 19, 2021 3:22 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: So... I'll release Chapter 8 on thursday.Hey Kiryu, can the Kiwami System have Mode changes? If so, can I edit my Bey to have Mode changes? Don't worry, it won't be any OP or anything, I just wanted to add something interesting to my Bey cause compared to the other entries, my Bey sounds pretty boring.
Plus, here are some chapters:
Spoiler (Click to View)
Chapter 8: The Max Corporation And Hyperion!
Chapter 9: Duel At The Onigashima Island!
Chapter 10: Pallete Feathurs! Iris Mayura!
Chapter 11: Crimson Axe! Mortal Spriggan!
Chapter 12: Fierce Showdown! Ichiban VS Watashi! (End of Arc 1)
Chapter 13: Rainbow Turbo! Legacy Dragon!
Chapter 14: Domination! Dragon VS Lucifer!
Chapter 15: Icarus VS The Perfect Demon King!
Chapter 16: Roaring Tornado! Twister Wyvern!
Chapter 17: A Vampire..!?
Chapter 18: The Dragon Of Creation! Dual Yggdragon!
K, go for it.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Dark red - Sep. 19, 2021
(Sep. 19, 2021 4:13 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote:Thank you for much! Here it is:(Sep. 19, 2021 4:00 PM)Dark red Wrote: Hey Kiryu, can the Kiwami System have Mode changes? If so, can I edit my Bey to have Mode changes? Don't worry, it won't be any OP or anything, I just wanted to add something interesting to my Bey cause compared to the other entries, my Bey sounds pretty boring.
K, go for it.
Beyblade: Plasma Gilgamesh.8 Sphere Endless- V (Right-Spin Stamina Type)[
Kiwami Core: Gilgamesh is a Right-Spinning Kiwami featuring a violet warrior's helmet facing the left with gold eyes.
Kiwami Blade: Plasma is a silver metallic Kiwami Blade that is split into three blades resembling spears, leaving 3 huge gaps in the blade. The Plasma blade also has a "Divine Mode" where when it is twisted at 180 degrees, three wing-like blades will appear out of the three gaps. This mode is used for more endurance against Attack-types.
Kiwami Weight: 8, an evenly weighted metal piece that is great for balance.
Kiwami Armor: Void, it has three blades that align with the Plasma Blade.[/font][/size]
Neo Disk: Sphere, a lightweight metal round disc.
Driver: Endless, Stamina Driver has a free-spinning metal ball tip but has a lot of momentum when knocked away from the center of the stadium.
Special Moves:
Divine Loop: When Gilgamesh is knocked from the center by an opposing bey, it will use that power to circle around the stadium to deliver a counterattack.
Plasma Crash: When going on the offensive, Gilgamesh converts all its energy and focuses it into the Plasma blade to attack the opposing, causing a huge collision.[/font][/size]
Divine Stance: With high velocity, Gilgamesh spins fast in the stadium, draining spin and tolerating attacks from the opposing bey. This technique is extremely difficult for Attack-types to overcome.[/font][/size]
Cosmic Shoot: Going on the offensive, Gilgamesh speed around the stadium with momentum, chasing and attacking the opposing beys constantly before going into the center. Gilgamesh has to be launched with great momentum and speed for this technique to be performed.[/font][/size]
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Kiryu Kazuma - Sep. 21, 2021
Icarus' evolution (it will probably happen later in Arc 2 or 3)
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Valor Icarus .1 Unrivalled+Sw Silver -Valient
Kiwami Core: Icarus II, Unlike the previous core, this has a side-view of Icarus. The one visible eye is in blue color and the armor on it is yellow in color.
Kiwami Blade: Valor, A four bladed kiwami blade, which have spring loaded into the blade, which makes the blade completely bound and can parry opposing bey's attacks by using the bound gimmick. (The color scheme of the blade is white but the blades are blue in color).
Neo Disc: Unrivalled, a special Neo disc which can use neo frames. (Neo frames are just like S gear. But have only one mode, the discs have the shape to have the frame fitted into it). The disc has eight clockwise edgy blades to improve the attack potential of the combo.
Driver: Silver, the driver has flat soft rubber tip in the middle with a hole on it for more agressive movement. It surpasses Ambush and Amaze in terms of performance making it the fastest attack type driver in the meta (It also has better stamina than Ambush and Amaze). The color scheme of the driver is silver and the rubber part being dark blue.
Kiwami Weight: 1, It has a heavy metal point on the one side and the other side is lighter, it makes the bey unbalanced but increases the attack potential.
Kiwami Armor: Valient, The armor has 2 blades which increases the Center of Gravity and also alligns with the Neo Frame which makes the bey's attack potential to a next level.
Neo Frame: Sword, The disc is made up of plastic but the two blades which are in a sword shape have metal onto it. The disc increases the attack potential of the combo.
There's one more thing: I'm revealing the main antagonists of Kiwami,
Light Sawashiro (Sovereign Lucifer) and Astria Sawamura (Stargaze Astrios) [I'm gonna post info about Astria and Astrios pretty soon).
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Kiryu Kazuma - Sep. 24, 2021
Yeah.... no chapter today. It's half-way done and still need some work.
But I have a potential idea for Season 2 for Kiwami. (It'll be the last season, I actually planned to have 100+ chapters, but now I have planned a season 2)
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(No Lower and Upper Modes now)
Kiwami Core (V2): A core, without teeth (but can have gimmicks).
Kiwami Blade (V2): The blade consists of 2 parts, first one is the main blade and other one is accessory blade. (For more mode changing and gimmicks) for example:
The Glamour blade (From Glamour Valkyrie): The blade is consist of two parts, The main blade has three solid plastic blades, perfect for strong attacks. The accessory blade is made of hard rubber and has 3 huge rubber blades (equal to the main blade). So this blade has two modes, Ultimate Attack Mode, where the main and accessory blade's three blades alligns to deliver strong attacks with the combination lf plaatic and hard rubber. The second one, Six Blade Mode (Barrage Attack Mode). In this one, the gap between the main blade's three blades is filled with the help of the accessory blade. So it's a six bladed Valkyrie.
And Chassis will return too. But they'll be different. There will double chassis and triple chassis. In double chasis you can use a Neo Disc on it without the weight. Triple Chassis are heavier and cannot be attached with discs.
And frames will compatible with the double Chassis only. (Unrivalled with 2 more discs are not compatible with Chassis).
And Obviously Drivers will be used in it too.
Season 2 Beys and some info.
1) Main Protagonist: Ichiban Aoi, Beyblade: Mystic Icarus Azure -1A (Right-Spin Attack Type)
2) Main Antagonist: Rei Ryuzaki, Beyblade: Realm Raiden Inflame -3A (Dual-Spin Attack Type)
Some more beys,
Glamour Valkyrie Rebound Unravel -2A+Saber [Vyncent Goodman] (Right-Spin Attack Type)
Spite Manticore Crisis -1S [???] (Left-Spin Stamina Type)
Soar Yinglong Sky Pursuit -1B+Havoc [???] (Right-Spin Balance Type)
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Hollowmind13 - Sep. 24, 2021
(Sep. 24, 2021 5:17 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Yeah.... no chapter today. It's half-way done and still need some work.
But I have a potential idea for Season 2 for Kiwami. (It'll be the last season, I actually planned to have 100+ chapters, but now I have planned a season 2)
Spoiler (Click to View)
(No Lower and Upper Modes now)
Kiwami Core (V2): A core, without teeth (but can have gimmicks).
Kiwami Blade (V2): The blade consists of 2 parts, first one is the main blade and other one is accessory blade. (For more mode changing and gimmicks) for example:
The Glamour blade (From Glamour Valkyrie): The blade is consist of two parts, The main blade has three solid plastic blades, perfect for strong attacks. The accessory blade is made of hard rubber and has 3 huge rubber blades (equal to the main blade). So this blade has two modes, Ultimate Attack Mode, where the main and accessory blade's three blades alligns to deliver strong attacks with the combination lf plaatic and hard rubber. The second one, Six Blade Mode (Barrage Attack Mode). In this one, the gap between the main blade's three blades is filled with the help of the accessory blade. So it's a six bladed Valkyrie.
And Chassis will return too. But they'll be different. There will double chassis and triple chassis. In double chasis you can use a Neo Disc on it without the weight. Triple Chassis are heavier and cannot be attached with discs.
And frames will compatible with the double Chassis only. (Unrivalled with 2 more discs are not compatible with Chassis).
And Obviously Drivers will be used in it too.
Season 2 Beys and some info.
1) Main Protagonist: Ichiban Aoi, Beyblade: Mystic Icarus Azure -1A (Right-Spin Attack Type)
2) Main Antagonist: Rei Ryuzaki, Beyblade: Realm Raiden Inflame -3A (Dual-Spin Attack Type)
Some more beys,
Glamour Valkyrie Rebound Unravel -2A+Saber [Vyncent Goodman] (Right-Spin Attack Type)
Spite Manticore Crisis -1S [???] (Left-Spin Stamina Type)
Soar Yinglong Sky Pursuit -1B+Havoc [???] (Right-Spin Balance Type)
For one moment I thought Triple Chassis were fused with the drivers lol. Anyways, nice preview ig
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Kiryu Kazuma - Oct. 03, 2021
Actually My Mid-Term Exams are gonna happen pretty soon, so uh maybe I'll post Chapter 8 in two days. For now I'll drop a character.
Paige Crassus (Owner of Perseus)
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Also Known As:
Sun Bat's Wild Card
The Heroic Warrior
Occupation:
Blader
Real Sun Bat's Second in command.
Height: 4'6
Appearance: He's a short boy who wears a white shirt and a crimson jacket with a gold badge on the top left having a upside down "P" symbol on it. He also wears a blue bracelet on his hand, a belt with gold Beyblade logo, Black pants and Crimson shoes with white laces.
Personality: He's quite clumsy and loyal to his team and follows all the rules. He's overconfident in battles and that tends to his downfall, couldn't really strategize mid-battles and gets confused what to do. (Character development will fix that)
Bey: Héroic Perseus Karma Charge Metal' -2 (Dynamite Bey)
DB Blade: Héroic, the blade features two red sword shaped angled blades with a lot of metal infused into the blade and metal is also present under the layer. The swords have a light blue metal crystal on them. (20.5 grams)
DB Core: Persues, The core which came with Savior Perseus. (10.7 grams)
Disc: Karma, A disc that supports Low Mode. Guilty has 10 upward blades that create an upward force when rotating clockwise to decrease the friction between the Beyblade and the stadium floor by pushing air upwards. (29.2 grams)
Driver: Charge Metal', a hybrid driver a metal version of charge with a dash spring. (16.9 grams)
Armor: 2, The 2 Armor provides the Beyblade with an increase in attack power by focusing the center of gravity at two opposite points. (13.7 grams)
(The Héroic Blade surpasses Guilty's weight making it the heaviest DB Blade)
Héroic Perseus is the heaviest DB Bey in comparison to stock combos of DB (Except Overdrive Beys), weighing 91 grams.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Kiryu Kazuma - Oct. 04, 2021
Chapter 8: (More than 3,000 words, I literally put a lot of effort in this one. Hollowmind8 helped me too in the first half of this chapter).
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Chapter 8: Number One!? Gilgamesh and Hyperion!
[At El Santo's Training Hall]
Ichiban (Looking at Icarus, with a sad look): There was no way I would lose... I believed in you till the end! (He looks the other way) then why am I still losing...?
(Everyone was standing in a distant from him)
Watashi (While looking at Ichiban): How long is he gonna talk with his bey?
Chikara (looking down): For about more than a hour.
Fubuki (Thoughts): (That time, his bey lit up more brightly. Way more white and glowing than before, his resonance is clearly different than others bladers...)
Chikara: I'm going to talk with him, you guys stay here.
Fubuki (Getting ready to go): I'll go with you.
Chikara (While): I will go alone, but thanks for volunteering.
(Chikara gets up and reaches towards Ichiban)
Chikara: It's been an hour since you're talking with Icarus.
Ichiban (Turns his head towards Chikara): I don't understand why I lost...
Chikara: You cannot beat the number one blader on your first try, right?
Ichiban (He tightens his grip on Icarus): That's not... what I mean... I got completely Rekt by her.
Chikara (Smiles): Maybe you should go for a walk outside. Fresh air might help you to feel better.
Ichiban (Gets up): I'll give it a try.
(Ichiban gets up and leaves El Santo)
Fubuki (Walks over and looks at Chikara): Is he going somewhere?
Chikara: He's going for a walk, it will make him feel better... I hope.
(Ichiban begans to walk around the town while holding Icarus)
Ichiban (Looking at Icarus): Icarus, I'll make sure that I- I mean, We win the next time against her, (looks up) Fafnir's gonna be-... hmm?
(He saw a stadium where someone was having a battle against a red three bladed Kiwami bey).
Ichiban (Reaches to the stadium): Isn't that a Kiwami bey...?
(The Red Bey leans on its driver, crashing onto a Cyclone Valkyrie combo making it burst upon contact).
Random Guy (Hesitantly): It's... Ember Hyperion with a burst finish! Himaki Asahi wins with the score of 3-0!
Random Guy 2: That's not possible!
(Both of them ran away from the stadium)
Himaki (Shows off Hyperion on her hand): You see? Hyperion clearly is the ultimate attack type bey!
Ichiban: I wouldn't count on that...
Himaki (Looks at Ichiban): Who are you to say that?
Ichiban (picks Icarus from his pocket and shows it off on his hand): I'm Ichiban and this is Icarus!
Himaki: That's a... Kiwami bey?
Ichiban (Grins): You're looking at the world's most powerful and unstoppable bey, Aviate Icarus!
Himaki (Looks at Icarus closely): Huh? I've never seen a bey like that, what's your name again?
Ichiban: It's Ichiban Aoi!
Himaki (Surprised): Aoi!? Are you related to Valt Aoi?
Ichiban: He's my dad.
Himaki (Smiles): Have you ever heard of Hyuga Asahi?
Ichiban (points his finger to his head): Hyuga Asahi..? Never heard of him.
Himaki: You didn't!? (Shows Hyperion to Ichiban) doesn't this bey look familiar to you?
Ichiban: It looks awesome! And well done too, how about a battle right now?
Himaki: Battle? (tilts her head slightly, a little confused) Alright, let's do this!
Ichiban: More attack is what I need... (Switches to lower mode) Just you watch, Hyperion is going to burst in the first round!
Himaki (Switches to lower mode): Not on my watch!
"3! 2! 1! Go... Shoot!!"
(Both beys lands onthe stadium perfectly, both Icarus and Hyperion starts to clash with each other continuosly)
Ichiban: Break through, Icarus!
Himaki: Hyperion! Make him go bang!
(Hyperion slashes through Icarus and send it flying)
Ichiban (a white aura lits up within him): There's no way I'm gonna lose!
(Icarus lits up and hits the wall, barely surviving the impact from Hyperion).
Ichiban (his hand shines, as he raises his right hand forth): Amaze Strike!
(Icarus leans on it's driver and head towards Hyperion at great speed)
Himaki: Let's end this, Hyperion!
(Hyperion's three blades lits up as it heads towards Icarus with lightning speed)
Himaki: Ember Slash!!
(Hyperion and Icarus collides in the center, Hyperion bursts Icarus with it's powerful slash attack, that impact creates a sparking yellow geyser on the stadium)
Ichiban (Shields himself with his hand): Icarus...
(The geyser disappears and Icarus' parts came down on the ground, Hyperion is still going around the stadium)
Himaki: Alright, I won! I said I would win against you.
Ichiban (Picks up Icarus' parts): It's not your best right? Please don't hold back anymore. (Sighs) Icarus...
Himaki (Smiles): Even if it isn't my 100% power mode, me and Hyperion got the win. Looks like Icarus isn't the strongest attack type bey huh?
Ichiban (Looks at Himaki with a serious look): This isn't my best! Battle me one more time!
Himaki (Shrugs with her eyes closed): First of all, we know I'm going to win again. Second, you need some time to think to flip hte table. And Lastly, if I battle you again, I'm gonna be late.
Ichiban (With a confused look): Late? For what?
Himaki: I'm scouted by a team in Spain, It's Real Sun Bat.
Ichiban: Real Sun Bat?
Himaki (makes a expressionless face): You don't know them? (sighs) It's BC Sol's Rival team. With me on Real Sun Bat, We'll crash and slash through all the other teams!
Ichiban: Now that got me excited! I wanna go there too!
Himaki (With a confusing look): Wait wait wait... I don't think they'll allow you to enter that easily (Looks to the side) but we can try.
Ichiban (Smiles): Cool! Lead the way then.
Himaki (rolls her eyes): You're really impatient, aren't you? (she then smiles) Follow me!
[At El Santo's Training Hall]
(Watashi and Ben were battling each other)
Watashi: Wendigo! Let's burst Belial right now!
(Wendigo and Belial keep on clashes at the center of the stadium)
Fubuki (Smiles): Looks like both of them are getting better.
Chikara: Are they? I don't see any improvement in Watashi...
Fubuki: He'll... get better slowly... I guess.
Ben: Belial's never gonna lose against you! Venture Shoot!
(Belial leans on it's venture driver and with the help of V gear, accelerates and starts pushing Wendigo to the wall of the stadium)
Watashi ('s bright purple aura brightens up within him): Not gonna lose here!! Wendigo!!
(Wendigo swings his axe and appears from the bright purple aura while roaring)
(Wendigo's 10 blades begans to emit purple light)
Watashi ('s hand shines with a purple glow): Annhilate him! (He raises his hand upwards rapidly emiting with purple lighting) Glooming Axe!!!
(Belial couldn't push Wendigo anymore and Wendigo pushes Belial in a rapid speed, hitting it in the wall and creates a crack in the wall and a yellow blast occured in the stadium).
Ben (While shielding himself with his hands): That's...
...
Chikara (Shields himself with his hands): No way, how did he drew out this much power from his bey?
Fubuki (Shields himself with his hands): He did what?
(Belial bursts and the whole stadium cracks and gets destroyed in pieces)
Watashi (Pants pretty badly): I... w- won?
Fubuki: That was... impressive! Good job!
Chikara (Looks at Centaur): Can I too... draw this much power?
(Centaur shines as if it responded to Chikara)
~At Real Sun Bat's Entrance~
Ichiban: So that's what... it looks like huh..?
(He looks up and gets surprised how big it looks)
Ichiban (With a surprised look): It's big... bigger than BC Sol..
Himaki (Smiles): Let's go inside already, I can't wait to go in!
Ichiban: Alright then, let's go.
(They reached the main gate but there was someone already)
???: You two, you can't enter here without any permission!
Ichiban (With a confused look): Permission?
Himaki: I'm Himaki Asahi, ring any bells?
???: Oh yeah, my bad. You can enter.
Himaki: Fine then, (Looks at Ichiban) do your best to get a permission, Ichiban.
(Himaki enters the gate, and that unknown person closes the gate)
Ichiban (Shouts at the unknown person): Hey, then what about meeee?
???: You can't. Unless you prove yourself to be strong enough to enter?
Ichiban: Prove? How can I prove myself?
???: By defeating me, The great Paige Crassus! Which isn't gonna happen.
(He laughs while looking at Ichiban)
Ichiban (With an arrogant look): Defeat you? I'm gonna reck you! Put you in your place for good!
Paige: Is that so? We won't find out until we battle (Pulls out his bey)
Paige (Shows off his bey): Take a look at Héroic Perseus!
Ichiban: That's... a Dynamite Bey.
Paige: Heh, System doesn't matter, skills matter! I can draw out Perseus' full strength!
Ichiban (Thoughts): (Drawing out power? Is that something I can do?)
(Both of them reaches a nearby stadium)
Paige (Smiles arrogantly): Nobody's here, It's good for you. No one's gonna see your humiliating defeat!
Ichiban: That's what I was gonna say to you.
Ichiban (Thoughts): (There's no way a Dynamite Bey can surpass Icarus' attacks).
(Ichiban switches his bey to Lower mode)
(They both took their shooting stance)
Ichiban (While holding is launcher): I'm gonna drew all of your power, Icarus!! Let's show him who's the best!!
"3! 2! 1! Go...Shoot!!"
(Icarus and Perseus lands on the stadium, with Perseus spinning rapidly doing a flower pattern while Icarus circles around the stadium)
Paige: Send him flying, Perseus!!
(Perseus changes it's trajectory by leaning on it's Charge Metal driver and heads towards Icarus with full speed)
Paige: Héroic Upper!!
(Perseus' two blades begans to emit a red glow, and sends Icarus flying)
Ichiban ('s bright white aura shines within him): End this! Icarus!!
(Icarus slashes through the white aura and appears)
(A white light shined on Ichiban's hand as he closes his fist)
Ichiban: We're gonna win this!!
Ichiban (raises his fist forth): Aviate Flight!!
(Icarus' blade and Flight armor began to shine and it fells down on Perseus' core with impulsive force, creating a beam of white light shining on the stadium and reaching to the top)
Paige (With a shocked look): Wh- What's this kind of resonance!?
(A bey flew out into the beam of light and bursts, the light disappears and the bey was Perseus)
(Ichiban closes his fists and takes a deep breath, his aura vanished as he did it)
Ichiban (Smiles): I won, this means I'm strong enough!
Paige (Looking down on the ground, tightening his fists): Tch... You're strong...(Looks at Ichiban) You can enter.
Ichiban: Alright!!
(Paige leads the way, and took Ichiban to Real Sun Bat's main hall)
Ichiban (With a surprised look): It... looks even bigger from the inside....
Paige: It is... So what's your business here?
Ichiban (Points his finger to his head): Well.... Who's the strongest blader here..?
Paige: It's...
(Suddenly a bey bursts, Ichiban looked at where the sound came from. The bey was... Hyperion)
Himaki (Looks at Hyperion with a shocked look): It's unreal....
Paige: Griffin Maximillion
Ichiban (Looks at Griffin): Th.. That guy?
Griffin (While looking at Himaki): You're strong I'll give you that, but there is still room for improvement.
Himaki: Is.. that so..? I see.
Ichiban (Reaches towards Griffin): You're the strongest blader right?
Griffin (Chuckles): Who knows? Maybe I'm the world's number one blader.
Ichiban (Smiles): World's number one huh? That's Icarus' spot!
Griffin (Shows off Gilgamesh): Maybe we can find it out in a battle.
Ichiban: A stamina type... looks like I have the advantage!
Himaki (While looking at Ichiban): You won't stand a chance, he's incredibly strong!
Ichiban: I won't find out until I try.
Griffin (Smiles): I like your confidence.
Ichiban: After this battle, you'll even like your loss.
Griffin: Heh, Let's do this then.
Paige: You seriously gonna battle an outsider?
Griffin: As long as someone is a blader (Smiles), they are welcome in here. Also Real Sun Bat is closed today, nobody's here and I don't have nothing to do.
Paige: Oh you're... right..
Ichiban (reaches towards the stadium): Let's do this then!
Griffin (reaches towards the stadium): Why not.
Ichiban: (Switches to Lower mode)
Griffin (Thoughts): (Lower mode.. huh? Try as hard as you can but... trash can never surpass the elite!)
(Griffin switches to Upper mode)
Himaki (Reaches towards the stadium): I'll be the ref then. First Battle!
(They both took their shoot stance)
Himaki: Ready, Set!
"3! 2! 1! Go... Shoot!!"
(Gilgamesh quickly takes the center while Icarus spins around the edge of the stadium)
Ichiban: Let's go Icarus! Twilight Shoot!!
(Icarus gains speed by tilting on it's driver and attacks Gilgamesh continuously, but couldn't even move it an inch)
Ichiban: That's... unusual for a stamina type....
Griffin (Smiles): If I cannot move my bey, you'll lose.
Ichiban (Looks at Griffin with a angry look): I definitely know that! No need to tell me!!
Ichiban ('s hand shines as he did a slash gesture): Aviaaate Slash!!!
(Icarus lands a massive blow on Gilgamesh and pushes it forward)
Ichiban: Alright!!
(Gilgamesh quickly circles around the center gaining speed)
Griffin: Divine Loop!
(Gilgamesh crashes into Icarus and lands an impulsive impact, making it burst instantly.
Ichiban (While looking at Icarus' parts in the air): I lost...?
Himaki: Plasma Gilgamesh! Burst Finish! Griffin Maximillion wins by the score of 2-0!
Ichiban (grabs Icarus' parts): One more time!! I wanna battle again!
Griffin: Again? Sure.
Himaki: No way, now it's my turn!
Ichiban (While looking at Himaki): Your turn can wait!
Himaki: I could say the same for you!
Griffin: Then.. How about you both battle me at the same time?
Ichiban: Same time? Not gonna happen, I'll beat both of you at once!
Paige: A three-way battle?
Himaki (Smiles): It'll work! I'll beat both of you!
Ichiban (Takes his shoot stance): Let's do this already!
(Icarus was on lower mode as he attaches his bey to his launcher)
(Himaki and Griffin took their shoot stance, their bey's were on Lower [Himaki] and Upper mode [Griffin])
Paige: Alright then, three-way battle! Ready, Set!
"3! 2! 1! Go... Shoot!!"
Griffin: Knock both of them away! Cosmic Shoot!!
(Gilgamesh speeds up around the edge of the stadium and began to chase down Icarus and Hyperion by hitting them constantly)
Ichiban (With a shocked look): Hang in there! Icarus!
Himaki: I won't let you! Xceed Counter!!
(Hyperion uses it's driver to change it's trajectory and knocks Gilgamesh away, making it take the center)
Griffin: Heh, not bad.
Ichiban: Now it's your turn, Icarus! Amaze Strike!!
(Icarus leans on it's Amaze driver and lands a impulsive blow on Gilgamesh, making it spin unstably)
Griffin (With a surprised look): How did he..?
Himaki: Hyperion, Knock Icarus with a bang!!
(Hyperion heads towards Icarus with extreme speed)
Ichiban: It won't happen! (His hand's shined with a white glow as he did a slash gesture) Aviate Slash!!
(Icarus' blade shines and hits Hyperion with all it's strength sending Hyperion sky-high)
Himaki (With a shocked look): Hyperion...
Ichiban: We ain't done yet!!
(Icarus leans on it's Amaze driver making the metal portion in contact with the groove of the stadium, changing it's trajectory towards Gilgamesh)
Ichiban: Amaze Strike!!
(Icarus lands a decisive blow on Gilgamesh, Gilgamesh reaches it's final click)
Griffin (Thoughts): (Looks like trash is gonna be trash after all)
Griffin ('s flashing gold aura lits up within him): Divine Stance!!
(Gilgamesh appears from the flashy gold aura)
(Gilgamesh draws out three blades from the gap and knocks away Icarus into the air)
Ichiban: We're not going to lose like this, Icarus!!
Himaki: We're still here! (Her burning red aura lits up within her) Hyperion!!
(Hyperion appears from the burning red aura, showing off his sword and shield)
Himaki: Ember Impact!!
(Hyperion was about to fall down on Gilgamesh but suddenly)
Ichiban ('s bright white aura begins to shine within him): We're not gonna lose this one! ICAAAAARUS!!!
(Icarus gets covered by it's white aura completely, emitting a shining white glow around it)
(Icarus appears slashing through the white aura)
(Suddenly, everything turned white around Ichiban, and Icarus stands in front of him)
Icarus: What do you wanna make me do?
Ichiban ('s aura blazes even more): I want you... to draw out you 100% power!!
(As he said those words the white world shattered like mirror and everything turned to normal)
(A white light shined on Ichiban's hand as he closes his fist)
(Icarus hits the wall and heads towards Hyperion while flying)
Ichiban (Raises his fist forth): AVIATE FLIGHT!!!!
Griffin (With a surprised look): Are you gonna... aim for Hyperion!?
(Hyperion lands a decesive blow on Gilgamesh's core and Icarus unleashes a impulsive blow on Hyperion's core leading to a massive geyser of Yellow light generating sparks in the stadium)
(Griffin and Himaki used their hands to shield themselves but fell down on the ground)
Ichiban (Crosses his arm): You see..? It's Icarus' true strength!!!
(All of the beys came out of the geyser, Hyperion and Gilgamesh bursts and Icarus lands on the ground near Ichiban)
Paige (With a surprised look): Wh... What just happened? Everything was going too fast....
(He then notices Gilgamesh and Hyperion bursted on the ground)
Paige: H..how?
Griffin (While looking at the ground): Paige.. Give the call.
Paige: A... Aviate Icarus wins the three-way battle!
Ichiban (pants): Finally... I won!!
Himaki (Gets up and thoughts): (What in the world was that glow around his bey...)
Griffin: I... I think I have nothing to say anymore...
Paige (Thoughts): It's the first time I saw him losing against someone...
Himaki (While looking at Ichiban): So.. Now what're you gonna do next?
Ichiban: Maybe... Go back to where I came from? Ah right, Paige can you show me how to get to El Santo?
Paige (Sighs): Yeah... Come with me.
~At El Santo~
Ichiban (Opens the door): Guess who's back?
Chikara (Smiles): You're back.
Fubuki: You came at the right time, we were preparing to leave.
Ichiban: Cool! (Yawns) That walk really made me tired, I think I need to sleep.
Fubuki: Alright then, Go out and get to the sir ship and sleep.
Chikara (While looking at Centaur): Drawing out full strength from your bey.... Is that what is called surpassing the limits of resonance?
[To Be Continued]
Also Gilgamesh is a hero, so imagine him being a knight with gold armor having a spear and sword on both hands.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Dark red - Oct. 04, 2021
(Oct. 04, 2021 5:44 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Chapter 8: (More than 3,000 words, I literally put a lot of effort in this one. Hollowmind8 helped me too in the first half of this chapter).Yessir!!!! My boy Griffin has finally made his appearance with his Plasma Gilgamesh! I didn't expect him to lose so early but this was a great chapter. And great job with keeping his "wolf in sheep's clothing" personality.
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Chapter 8: Number One!? Gilgamesh and Hyperion!
[At El Santo's Training Hall]
Ichiban (Looking at Icarus, with a sad look): There was no way I would lose... I believed in you till the end! (He looks the other way) then why am I still losing...?
(Everyone was standing in a distant from him)
Watashi (While looking at Ichiban): How long is he gonna talk with his bey?
Chikara (looking down): For about more than a hour.
Fubuki (Thoughts): (That time, his bey lit up more brightly. Way more white and glowing than before, his resonance is clearly different than others bladers...)
Chikara: I'm going to talk with him, you guys stay here.
Fubuki (Getting ready to go): I'll go with you.
Chikara (While): I will go alone, but thanks for volunteering.
(Chikara gets up and reaches towards Ichiban)
Chikara: It's been an hour since you're talking with Icarus.
Ichiban (Turns his head towards Chikara): I don't understand why I lost...
Chikara: You cannot beat the number one blader on your first try, right?
Ichiban (He tightens his grip on Icarus): That's not... what I mean... I got completely Rekt by her.
Chikara (Smiles): Maybe you should go for a walk outside. Fresh air might help you to feel better.
Ichiban (Gets up): I'll give it a try.
(Ichiban gets up and leaves El Santo)
Fubuki (Walks over and looks at Chikara): Is he going somewhere?
Chikara: He's going for a walk, it will make him feel better... I hope.
(Ichiban begans to walk around the town while holding Icarus)
Ichiban (Looking at Icarus): Icarus, I'll make sure that I- I mean, We win the next time against her, (looks up) Fafnir's gonna be-... hmm?
(He saw a stadium where someone was having a battle against a red three bladed Kiwami bey).
Ichiban (Reaches to the stadium): Isn't that a Kiwami bey...?
(The Red Bey leans on its driver, crashing onto a Cyclone Valkyrie combo making it burst upon contact).
Random Guy (Hesitantly): It's... Ember Hyperion with a burst finish! Himaki Asahi wins with the score of 3-0!
Random Guy 2: That's not possible!
(Both of them ran away from the stadium)
Himaki (Shows off Hyperion on her hand): You see? Hyperion clearly is the ultimate attack type bey!
Ichiban: I wouldn't count on that...
Himaki (Looks at Ichiban): Who are you to say that?
Ichiban (picks Icarus from his pocket and shows it off on his hand): I'm Ichiban and this is Icarus!
Himaki: That's a... Kiwami bey?
Ichiban (Grins): You're looking at the world's most powerful and unstoppable bey, Aviate Icarus!
Himaki (Looks at Icarus closely): Huh? I've never seen a bey like that, what's your name again?
Ichiban: It's Ichiban Aoi!
Himaki (Surprised): Aoi!? Are you related to Valt Aoi?
Ichiban: He's my dad.
Himaki (Smiles): Have you ever heard of Hyuga Asahi?
Ichiban (points his finger to his head): Hyuga Asahi..? Never heard of him.
Himaki: You didn't!? (Shows Hyperion to Ichiban) doesn't this bey look familiar to you?
Ichiban: It looks awesome! And well done too, how about a battle right now?
Himaki: Battle? (tilts her head slightly, a little confused) Alright, let's do this!
Ichiban: More attack is what I need... (Switches to lower mode) Just you watch, Hyperion is going to burst in the first round!
Himaki (Switches to lower mode): Not on my watch!
"3! 2! 1! Go... Shoot!!"
(Both beys lands onthe stadium perfectly, both Icarus and Hyperion starts to clash with each other continuosly)
Ichiban: Break through, Icarus!
Himaki: Hyperion! Make him go bang!
(Hyperion slashes through Icarus and send it flying)
Ichiban (a white aura lits up within him): There's no way I'm gonna lose!
(Icarus lits up and hits the wall, barely surviving the impact from Hyperion).
Ichiban (his hand shines, as he raises his right hand forth): Amaze Strike!
(Icarus leans on it's driver and head towards Hyperion at great speed)
Himaki: Let's end this, Hyperion!
(Hyperion's three blades lits up as it heads towards Icarus with lightning speed)
Himaki: Ember Slash!!
(Hyperion and Icarus collides in the center, Hyperion bursts Icarus with it's powerful slash attack, that impact creates a sparking yellow geyser on the stadium)
Ichiban (Shields himself with his hand): Icarus...
(The geyser disappears and Icarus' parts came down on the ground, Hyperion is still going around the stadium)
Himaki: Alright, I won! I said I would win against you.
Ichiban (Picks up Icarus' parts): It's not your best right? Please don't hold back anymore. (Sighs) Icarus...
Himaki (Smiles): Even if it isn't my 100% power mode, me and Hyperion got the win. Looks like Icarus isn't the strongest attack type bey huh?
Ichiban (Looks at Himaki with a serious look): This isn't my best! Battle me one more time!
Himaki (Shrugs with her eyes closed): First of all, we know I'm going to win again. Second, you need some time to think to flip hte table. And Lastly, if I battle you again, I'm gonna be late.
Ichiban (With a confused look): Late? For what?
Himaki: I'm scouted by a team in Spain, It's Real Sun Bat.
Ichiban: Real Sun Bat?
Himaki (makes a expressionless face): You don't know them? (sighs) It's BC Sol's Rival team. With me on Real Sun Bat, We'll crash and slash through all the other teams!
Ichiban: Now that got me excited! I wanna go there too!
Himaki (With a confusing look): Wait wait wait... I don't think they'll allow you to enter that easily (Looks to the side) but we can try.
Ichiban (Smiles): Cool! Lead the way then.
Himaki (rolls her eyes): You're really impatient, aren't you? (she then smiles) Follow me!
[At El Santo's Training Hall]
(Watashi and Ben were battling each other)
Watashi: Wendigo! Let's burst Belial right now!
(Wendigo and Belial keep on clashes at the center of the stadium)
Fubuki (Smiles): Looks like both of them are getting better.
Chikara: Are they? I don't see any improvement in Watashi...
Fubuki: He'll... get better slowly... I guess.
Ben: Belial's never gonna lose against you! Venture Shoot!
(Belial leans on it's venture driver and with the help of V gear, accelerates and starts pushing Wendigo to the wall of the stadium)
Watashi ('s bright purple aura brightens up within him): Not gonna lose here!! Wendigo!!
(Wendigo swings his axe and appears from the bright purple aura while roaring)
(Wendigo's 10 blades begans to emit purple light)
Watashi ('s hand shines with a purple glow): Annhilate him! (He raises his hand upwards rapidly emiting with purple lighting) Glooming Axe!!!
(Belial couldn't push Wendigo anymore and Wendigo pushes Belial in a rapid speed, hitting it in the wall and creates a crack in the wall and a yellow blast occured in the stadium).
Ben (While shielding himself with his hands): That's...
...
Chikara (Shields himself with his hands): No way, how did he drew out this much power from his bey?
Fubuki (Shields himself with his hands): He did what?
(Belial bursts and the whole stadium cracks and gets destroyed in pieces)
Watashi (Pants pretty badly): I... w- won?
Fubuki: That was... impressive! Good job!
Chikara (Looks at Centaur): Can I too... draw this much power?
(Centaur shines as if it responded to Chikara)
~At Real Sun Bat's Entrance~
Ichiban: So that's what... it looks like huh..?
(He looks up and gets surprised how big it looks)
Ichiban (With a surprised look): It's big... bigger than BC Sol..
Himaki (Smiles): Let's go inside already, I can't wait to go in!
Ichiban: Alright then, let's go.
(They reached the main gate but there was someone already)
???: You two, you can't enter here without any permission!
Ichiban (With a confused look): Permission?
Himaki: I'm Himaki Asahi, ring any bells?
???: Oh yeah, my bad. You can enter.
Himaki: Fine then, (Looks at Ichiban) do your best to get a permission, Ichiban.
(Himaki enters the gate, and that unknown person closes the gate)
Ichiban (Shouts at the unknown person): Hey, then what about meeee?
???: You can't. Unless you prove yourself to be strong enough to enter?
Ichiban: Prove? How can I prove myself?
???: By defeating me, The great Paige Crassus! Which isn't gonna happen.
(He laughs while looking at Ichiban)
Ichiban (With an arrogant look): Defeat you? I'm gonna reck you! Put you in your place for good!
Paige: Is that so? We won't find out until we battle (Pulls out his bey)
Paige (Shows off his bey): Take a look at Héroic Perseus!
Ichiban: That's... a Dynamite Bey.
Paige: Heh, System doesn't matter, skills matter! I can draw out Perseus' full strength!
Ichiban (Thoughts): (Drawing out power? Is that something I can do?)
(Both of them reaches a nearby stadium)
Paige (Smiles arrogantly): Nobody's here, It's good for you. No one's gonna see your humiliating defeat!
Ichiban: That's what I was gonna say to you.
Ichiban (Thoughts): (There's no way a Dynamite Bey can surpass Icarus' attacks).
(Ichiban switches his bey to Lower mode)
(They both took their shooting stance)
Ichiban (While holding is launcher): I'm gonna drew all of your power, Icarus!! Let's show him who's the best!!
"3! 2! 1! Go...Shoot!!"
(Icarus and Perseus lands on the stadium, with Perseus spinning rapidly doing a flower pattern while Icarus circles around the stadium)
Paige: Send him flying, Perseus!!
(Perseus changes it's trajectory by leaning on it's Charge Metal driver and heads towards Icarus with full speed)
Paige: Héroic Upper!!
(Perseus' two blades begans to emit a red glow, and sends Icarus flying)
Ichiban ('s bright white aura shines within him): End this! Icarus!!
(Icarus slashes through the white aura and appears)
(A white light shined on Ichiban's hand as he closes his fist)
Ichiban: We're gonna win this!!
Ichiban (raises his fist forth): Aviate Flight!!
(Icarus' blade and Flight armor began to shine and it fells down on Perseus' core with impulsive force, creating a beam of white light shining on the stadium and reaching to the top)
Paige (With a shocked look): Wh- What's this kind of resonance!?
(A bey flew out into the beam of light and bursts, the light disappears and the bey was Perseus)
(Ichiban closes his fists and takes a deep breath, his aura vanished as he did it)
Ichiban (Smiles): I won, this means I'm strong enough!
Paige (Looking down on the ground, tightening his fists): Tch... You're strong...(Looks at Ichiban) You can enter.
Ichiban: Alright!!
(Paige leads the way, and took Ichiban to Real Sun Bat's main hall)
Ichiban (With a surprised look): It... looks even bigger from the inside....
Paige: It is... So what's your business here?
Ichiban (Points his finger to his head): Well.... Who's the strongest blader here..?
Paige: It's...
(Suddenly a bey bursts, Ichiban looked at where the sound came from. The bey was... Hyperion)
Himaki (Looks at Hyperion with a shocked look): It's unreal....
Paige: Griffin Maximillion
Ichiban (Looks at Griffin): Th.. That guy?
Griffin (While looking at Himaki): You're strong I'll give you that, but there is still room for improvement.
Himaki: Is.. that so..? I see.
Ichiban (Reaches towards Griffin): You're the strongest blader right?
Griffin (Chuckles): Who knows? Maybe I'm the world's number one blader.
Ichiban (Smiles): World's number one huh? That's Icarus' spot!
Griffin (Shows off Gilgamesh): Maybe we can find it out in a battle.
Ichiban: A stamina type... looks like I have the advantage!
Himaki (While looking at Ichiban): You won't stand a chance, he's incredibly strong!
Ichiban: I won't find out until I try.
Griffin (Smiles): I like your confidence.
Ichiban: After this battle, you'll even like your loss.
Griffin: Heh, Let's do this then.
Paige: You seriously gonna battle an outsider?
Griffin: As long as someone is a blader (Smiles), they are welcome in here. Also Real Sun Bat is closed today, nobody's here and I don't have nothing to do.
Paige: Oh you're... right..
Ichiban (reaches towards the stadium): Let's do this then!
Griffin (reaches towards the stadium): Why not.
Ichiban: (Switches to Lower mode)
Griffin (Thoughts): (Lower mode.. huh? Try as hard as you can but... trash can never surpass the elite!)
(Griffin switches to Upper mode)
Himaki (Reaches towards the stadium): I'll be the ref then. First Battle!
(They both took their shoot stance)
Himaki: Ready, Set!
"3! 2! 1! Go... Shoot!!"
(Gilgamesh quickly takes the center while Icarus spins around the edge of the stadium)
Ichiban: Let's go Icarus! Twilight Shoot!!
(Icarus gains speed by tilting on it's driver and attacks Gilgamesh continuously, but couldn't even move it an inch)
Ichiban: That's... unusual for a stamina type....
Griffin (Smiles): If I cannot move my bey, you'll lose.
Ichiban (Looks at Griffin with a angry look): I definitely know that! No need to tell me!!
Ichiban ('s hand shines as he did a slash gesture): Aviaaate Slash!!!
(Icarus lands a massive blow on Gilgamesh and pushes it forward)
Ichiban: Alright!!
(Gilgamesh quickly circles around the center gaining speed)
Griffin: Divine Loop!
(Gilgamesh crashes into Icarus and lands an impulsive impact, making it burst instantly.
Ichiban (While looking at Icarus' parts in the air): I lost...?
Himaki: Plasma Gilgamesh! Burst Finish! Griffin Maximillion wins by the score of 2-0!
Ichiban (grabs Icarus' parts): One more time!! I wanna battle again!
Griffin: Again? Sure.
Himaki: No way, now it's my turn!
Ichiban (While looking at Himaki): Your turn can wait!
Himaki: I could say the same for you!
Griffin: Then.. How about you both battle me at the same time?
Ichiban: Same time? Not gonna happen, I'll beat both of you at once!
Paige: A three-way battle?
Himaki (Smiles): It'll work! I'll beat both of you!
Ichiban (Takes his shoot stance): Let's do this already!
(Icarus was on lower mode as he attaches his bey to his launcher)
(Himaki and Griffin took their shoot stance, their bey's were on Lower [Himaki] and Upper mode [Griffin])
Paige: Alright then, three-way battle! Ready, Set!
"3! 2! 1! Go... Shoot!!"
Griffin: Knock both of them away! Cosmic Shoot!!
(Gilgamesh speeds up around the edge of the stadium and began to chase down Icarus and Hyperion by hitting them constantly)
Ichiban (With a shocked look): Hang in there! Icarus!
Himaki: I won't let you! Xceed Counter!!
(Hyperion uses it's driver to change it's trajectory and knocks Gilgamesh away, making it take the center)
Griffin: Heh, not bad.
Ichiban: Now it's your turn, Icarus! Amaze Strike!!
(Icarus leans on it's Amaze driver and lands a impulsive blow on Gilgamesh, making it spin unstably)
Griffin (With a surprised look): How did he..?
Himaki: Hyperion, Knock Icarus with a bang!!
(Hyperion heads towards Icarus with extreme speed)
Ichiban: It won't happen! (His hand's shined with a white glow as he did a slash gesture) Aviate Slash!!
(Icarus' blade shines and hits Hyperion with all it's strength sending Hyperion sky-high)
Himaki (With a shocked look): Hyperion...
Ichiban: We ain't done yet!!
(Icarus leans on it's Amaze driver making the metal portion in contact with the groove of the stadium, changing it's trajectory towards Gilgamesh)
Ichiban: Amaze Strike!!
(Icarus lands a decisive blow on Gilgamesh, Gilgamesh reaches it's final click)
Griffin (Thoughts): (Looks like trash is gonna be trash after all)
Griffin ('s flashing gold aura lits up within him): Divine Stance!!
(Gilgamesh appears from the flashy gold aura)
(Gilgamesh draws out three blades from the gap and knocks away Icarus into the air)
Ichiban: We're not going to lose like this, Icarus!!
Himaki: We're still here! (Her burning red aura lits up within her) Hyperion!!
(Hyperion appears from the burning red aura, showing off his sword and shield)
Himaki: Ember Impact!!
(Hyperion was about to fall down on Gilgamesh but suddenly)
Ichiban ('s bright white aura begins to shine within him): We're not gonna lose this one! ICAAAAARUS!!!
(Icarus gets covered by it's white aura completely, emitting a shining white glow around it)
(Icarus appears slashing through the white aura)
(Suddenly, everything turned white around Ichiban, and Icarus stands in front of him)
Icarus: What do you wanna make me do?
Ichiban ('s aura blazes even more): I want you... to draw out you 100% power!!
(As he said those words the white world shattered like mirror and everything turned to normal)
(A white light shined on Ichiban's hand as he closes his fist)
(Icarus hits the wall and heads towards Hyperion while flying)
Ichiban (Raises his fist forth): AVIATE FLIGHT!!!!
Griffin (With a surprised look): Are you gonna... aim for Hyperion!?
(Hyperion lands a decesive blow on Gilgamesh's core and Icarus unleashes a impulsive blow on Hyperion's core leading to a massive geyser of Yellow light generating sparks in the stadium)
(Griffin and Himaki used their hands to shield themselves but fell down on the ground)
Ichiban (Crosses his arm): You see..? It's Icarus' true strength!!!
(All of the beys came out of the geyser, Hyperion and Gilgamesh bursts and Icarus lands on the ground near Ichiban)
Paige (With a surprised look): Wh... What just happened? Everything was going too fast....
(He then notices Gilgamesh and Hyperion bursted on the ground)
Paige: H..how?
Griffin (While looking at the ground): Paige.. Give the call.
Paige: A... Aviate Icarus wins the three-way battle!
Ichiban (pants): Finally... I won!!
Himaki (Gets up and thoughts): (What in the world was that glow around his bey...)
Griffin: I... I think I have nothing to say anymore...
Paige (Thoughts): It's the first time I saw him losing against someone...
Himaki (While looking at Ichiban): So.. Now what're you gonna do next?
Ichiban: Maybe... Go back to where I came from? Ah right, Paige can you show me how to get to El Santo?
Paige (Sighs): Yeah... Come with me.
~At El Santo~
Ichiban (Opens the door): Guess who's back?
Chikara (Smiles): You're back.
Fubuki: You came at the right time, we were preparing to leave.
Ichiban: Cool! (Yawns) That walk really made me tired, I think I need to sleep.
Fubuki: Alright then, Go out and get to the sir ship and sleep.
Chikara (While looking at Centaur): Drawing out full strength from your bey.... Is that what is called surpassing the limits of resonance?
[To Be Continued]
Also Gilgamesh is a hero, so imagine him being a knight with gold armor having a spear and sword on both hands.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Kiryu Kazuma - Oct. 07, 2021
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Chapter 9: A Different Kind Of Resonance!
Chapter 10: Duel At The Onigashima Island!
Chapter 11: Pallette Feathers! Iris Mayura!!
Chapter 12: Crimson Fire! Mortal Spriggan!
Chapter 13: Game Of Power! Aviate Icarus! [End Of Arc 1]
Chapter 9:
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Chapter 9: A Different Kind Of Resonance!!
[At The Battleship, night time]
Fubuki (While holding three pieces of paper): So, I have written your names on this paper. The one which I choose, is gonna battle the next opponent.
Ichiban: Why should we do this, we can settle this with a battle, right?
Watashi: I agree with him, why don't we just battle and find out who's gonna battle first?
Fubuki: We don't have time for that. So....
(He opened up the first one)
Fubuki: The first one is Watashi.
Watashi (Smirks): Well, looks like you guys aren't going to have any chance to battle!
Ichiban (While looking at Watashi): These are the same words when were at Spain.
Ben: Sometimes things can be different....
Fubuki (Opens up the second one): Ichiban, you're second.
Ichiban: Me? Cool!
Fubuki: That means Ben will be the last one to battle.
Ben (Looks at the other direction): Works for me...
~The next early morning~
(Watashi was alone at the Air Deck, staring at Wendigo, as it spins around the slopes of the stadium)
Watashi: I wonder if I could... feel that power again... I never saw Wendigo shine like that....
Ichiban (coming towards Watashi): What're you doing here all alone?
Watashi (Looks at Ichiban): Awake already? It's unlike you.
Ichiban: I slept twice you know.
Watashi (Looks at the stadium again): Well... Yesterday when you weren't there... Wendigo shined brighter than ever before and I too felt some strange feeling.
Ichiban (With a surprised look): Even you felt that..?
Watashi: You mean... You did that too? Fubuki too noticed that... But I wasn't sure of it.
Ichiban: When I was gone for a walk... I met some bladers on the way.. Icarus shined brighter.... and I defeated all of them.
Watashi: Chikara is your childhood friend right?
Ichiban: Yeah, he is.
Watashi: He was acting strangely that time....
[Flashback Starts]
~At El Santo~
(Watashi and Fubuki were talking in person)
Fubuki: Watashi, when you battled Ben, what did you felt?
Watashi (With a confused look): It was a strange feeling... Wendigo was shining way brighter.. I never saw a bey who can emit this much light...
Fubuki: I think, Ichiban can also pull this off.
Watashi: What? He can do this?
Fubuki: When he-
(Suddenly a crackling voice came from the back)
Fubuki (Looks behind): Who's there?
(Chikara came out from the back)
Chikara: I was just passing by..
Watashi (Speaking through his flashback): He was listening our conversation... Is he aware of what we really did?
[Flashback Ends]
Ichiban (With a confused look): I'm not sure, Chikara isn't that type of person who would spy on someone....
Watashi: Do you think if you can pull it off again?
Ichiban: Maybe... I can.
Watashi: There's only one way to find out.
(Watashi picks up Wendigo, then shows it off on his hand)
Watashi: I should warn you... Wendigo is far stronger than before! (Wendigo was in upper more)
Ichiban: Icarus is also stronger than before! (He then shows off Icarus on his hand, which was on lower mode).
"3! 2 1! Go... Shoot!!"
(Wendigo lands on the center of the stadium and Icarus spins around the slopes of the stadium)
Ichiban: Let's go, Icarus! (Raises his fist forth) Twilight Shoot!!
(Icarus starts to land a barrage of attacks on Wendigo dealing massive damage on it)
Watashi: Deflect his attacks Wendigo! Gloom Defense!
(Wendigo's ten blades starts to emit purple light and uses the moment driver to increase it's grip)
Ichiban (unleashes his bright white aura): Take him out! Icarus!!
(Icarus' eyes shines and it's avatar appears from the bright white aura that it emitted)
(Ichiban's aura brightens more and starts spiraling around him)
Watashi (Gasps and thinks): (It's same like before...)
Ichiban (A glow shined in his hand as he raised his fist forth): Aviate Slash!!
(Icarus gets covered completely by it's aura except the blades which were shining blue. Icarus goes straight towards Wendigo and hits it's driver)
Ichiban (Screams): Do it! Icarus!!
(The driver got cracked and gets shattered into pieces making Wendigo burst as soon as the driver broke)
Watashi (With a shocked look): The driver is..!?
Ichiban (With a satisfied smile): Yes!!
Watashi (Picks up the fragments of the driver): It's broken...
Ichiban (Looks at Watashi confused): It is? I.. didn't knew that.. this power would be that much stronger... I'm... just more stronger than ever before, isn't it cool?
Watashi (With a pissed off look): Cool!? Are you serious!?
(Ben and Fubuki reaches towards them)
Fubuki: What's happening here?
Ben (Looks at Watashi's hand): Wendigo's driver broke?
Watashi (Sighs): It was an accident, it just broke on it's own.
Fubuki: Is that so..?
Ichiban: (While looking at the ground, says nothing)
Ben: Drivers don't break on their own do they?
Fubuki: Maybe it's time for you to repair it.
Watashi: I was just thinkimg about that...
(Watashi leaves the air deck)
Fubuki (Looks at Ichiban): You were there with him, what exactly happened?
Ichiban: Icarus and I broke it.
Fubuki: You did that, was that intentional?
Ichiban: It wasn't. Icarus and I are just getting more stronger. Icarus is shining more bright than ever before.
Fubuki: Oh that makes sense... A sudden increase in power like that can lead to this...
Ichiban: It's amazing to see.. that Icarus is getting stronger.. I want him to get more stronger then we'll be able to beat Fafnir...
[At Watashi's room]
Watashi (Opens his bag): Heh, it's nice I had a backup driver... There it is!
(Watashi picks up the Retain driver)
[Retain Driver: features a wide ball shaped tip that sits at the standard height composed of POM and is surrounded by a metal cone made up of Tungsten for more weight. The ball's wide shape helps it to hold a grip into the stadium and the cone also helps for increased grip, Color scheme of the driver, the tip is green in color and the cone is red. (Yes metal is painted) Overall color scheme is purple. ]
Watashi: Retain driver.... The shape of the driver is perfect for Wendigo.
(He attaches the driver and assembles Wendigo)
[At The Air Deck]
Fubuki: So I narrowed down who's gonna battle the next blader and only one of you can battle him.
Ichiban (While looking at Icarus): I wonder if I could bring out more power.... Are you capable of more..? Icarus?
Fubuki: And that's.... Watashi.
Ben: Watashi? When is my chance to battle?
Ichiban (Grips Icarus a little harder): We're gonna gain more strength soon!
Fubuki: Ichiban!
Ichiban: Wh.. What?
Fubuki: Were you even listening?
[Watashi comes at the air deck]
Watashi: Here I am!!
Fubuki: You're back... Is the driver complete?
Watashi (Shows off Wendigo): Wendigo is all fine!
Watashi (Reaches towards Icarus): Come on, I'll show what true strength really is!
Ichiban: All right! Let's g-
Fubuki: We can do this another time.. Right?
(He points towards the ground)
Fubuki: Look! We're already here!
Ichiban (Looks at the ground): Cool! But.... where are we exactly?
Fubuki: We're at Onigashima Island. There's a real Demon in here.
Ichiban (with a terrified look): A demon..?
Watashi (Laughs): That guy's not a demon, it's Lui Shirosagijou
Ichiban: Lui? I remember him! The owner of the ice dragon... Longinus..
Fubuki (Smiles): Yeah, apparently he's not a blader anymore but he has a successor, two of them. Maybe you guys should find out rest of the details.
[The Air-Ship lands on the ground]
Ichiban (Gets outside): Alright, let's go!
Ben (Coming towards Ichiban): I'm coming too!
Watashi: Alright, I should go-
Fubuki: Wait...
Watashi (Looks at Fubuki): Huh? Why?
Fubuki (With a concerned look): Will you... Keep an eye out on Ichiban?
Watashi: What? Why? What's wrong with hin?
Fubuki: He's... in the middle of the process of getting possessed by his bey...
Watashi: P.. Possessed?
Fubuki: I cannot let him battle now, whether he loses or win, the chances of getting possessed will increase. But, as long as he won't battle, everything will be fine.
Watashi: Fubuki-san....
Fubuki: I saw how his eye was glowing purple when he was talking with Icarus...
Watashi: I... I'll do whatever I can do form him. Leave it to me!
Fubuki: Yeah... Thanks...
(Watashi leaves the Air-Ship)
Fubuki: Ichiban Aoi.... Despite being Valt's son... he's crazy for gaining more power... The surging light on Icarus and Wendigo... reminds me of the bey...... Astrios....
[To Be Continued].
Since some users did this, I'm doing this too.
Product List Of Kiwami
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B-00: Kiwami Battle Set: [Contents: A Stadium, Aviate Icarus (Stock Combo, color scheme: Blue and Red) and Gloom Wendigo (Stock Combo, color scheme: Red and white)] Release Date: 27 March
B-01: Starter, Aviate Icarus (Stock Combo) Release Date: 27 March
B-02: Booster, Gloom Wendigo (Stock Combo) Release Date: 27 March
B-03: Random Booster Vol.1: (Some random DB recolors Recolor and prize bey: Oni Belial) Release Date: 16 April
B-04: Triple Booster Set, (Starlight Zeus, Noble Centaur and Black Evil recolor of Aviate Icarus .3 Olympus Venture -Flight) Release Date: 18 May
B-05: Booster, Magenta Fafnir. Release Date: 28 May
B-06: Random Booster Vol.2: (3 Random DB beys recolor, Héroic Perseus and Prize Bey: Plasma Gilgamesh) Release Date: 18 June
B-07: Customize Set: Ember Hyperion (Stock Combo) and Magenta (Green) Wendigo (Green Recolor) .1 Clutch (Purple) Retain -Exert with gold recolor of Reboot and Ultimate Reboot Metal. Release Date: 1 July
B-08: Booster, Iris Mayura. Release Date: 31 July
B-09: Triple Dragon Set, [Twister Wyvern, Legacy Dragon and Icicle Longinus] Release Date: 17 August
B-10: Ultimate Customize Set, [Sovereign Luicfer, Dual Yggdragon, Mortal Spriggan and Plasma Hyperion (White Recolor) .5 Olympus Metal Variable -Dusk with Metal Atomic and Needle Metal. Release Date: 5 September
B-11: Starter, Demuirge Astrios. Release Date: 27 September
B-12: Dual-Blade Rivals Set: [Contents, A Big Stadium, Valor Icarus and Chivalric Centaur] Release Date: 18 October
B-13: Booster: Vile Bahamut. Release Date: 7 November
B-14: Random Booster Vol.3: [Random Kiwami Recolors, Prize Bey: Doomsday Ragnaruk]. Release Date: 11 December
B-15: Ultimate Blader Set: [Contents: Champion Perseus, A String Launcher and a grip shaped like a sword] Release Date: 19 January
B-16: Booster: Harmony Valkyrie .1 Clutch Metal Evolution -War. [No Debut In Anime] Release Date: 27 February
B-17: Random Booster Vol.4: [Evil Recolors of Beys: Iris Astrios, Chivalric Icarus, Gloom Mayura, Plasma Zeus and Prize Bey: Icicle Longinus Stock Combo(Winter Knight/Lui Version) Release Date: 18 March
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Kiryu Kazuma - Oct. 08, 2021
Chapter 10: ( LJ-Blader your good 'ol Shin Kurenai is here. Not the main debut though).
Chapter 10: The Duel At Onigashima Island!
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~At the Onigashima Island~
Ichiban (While looking at Ben): That's a very funny mask you got. Where did you even get that?
Ben (Wearing a black Oni mask): Lucky for me.... I bought one when were at Spain.
(Watashi came running towards Ichiban and Ben)
Ichiban: Took you long enough...
Watashi: We just need to move straight forward and eventually we'll meet Lui.
(All of them starts to move forward)
Ichiban (Looks behind while walking): Is Fubuki not gonna come?
Watashi: He's busy with something..
~At The Airship~
Fubuki (While holding a tablet): I'm pretty sure... That surging waves around the blader and the bey is the next stage of resonance..
Fubuki (Swipes through the tab): This guy....
(He swiped through the tab and found a battle of Light Sawashiro and Shin Kurenai)
Hanami: OK!! boys and girls!! It's the finals of America's Championship!! Light has already scored a point against Shin!! Who's gonna really win this match and steal the tag of America's number one??!!
Light (While looking at Shin): Are you really Kurenai's son? You don't got the fire burning in your eyes, like your dad had.
Shin: Is that so? (He shows off Astral Spriggan) Maybe after looking at this, your mind will change! (Spriggan was in High Attack mode)
Fubuki (Watching the match): He's.. Shu's son?
(Astral Spriggan emits out a shine)
Light (Smiles): Attack Mode? Go ahead then, you're welcome to prove me wrong. (He switches Lucifer to lower defense mode).
Ref: First Battle! Ready, Set!
"3! 2! 1! Go... Shoot!!"
(Lucifer lands perfectly on the center of the stadium at the start of the battle)
Shin: Push him away, Spriggan!
(Spriggan starts to attack Lucifer with a barrage of attacks, dealing no damage at all)
Shin (With a surprised look): It's not even budging at all!
Hanami: Woooo!! Spriggan's attack cannot break through Lucifer!! Looks like Lucifer has the upper hand!!
Light (Unleashes his purple aura): Show him what real strength is, Lucifer.
(Lucifer emits a purple vortext of aura, and it's avatar screams as it appears)
(The purple aura starts to spiral around Light's body)
Light (Smiles): It's the end game for Spriggan.
Shin (Gasps): Spriggan isn't gonna lose to the likes of you!
(Spriggan lighten ups with a red light and reaches towards Lucifer with full speed)
Shin (While doing a slash gesture as his hand gave out a red glow): Astral Slash!!
Light (In a calm voice): Sovereign Defense.
(Lucifer covers itself with it's purple aura and it's begins to shine red, Spriggan slash onto Lucifer's blade which created explosive a geyser of black light going upwards)
Shin (Shields himself with his hands): Knock him out! Spriggan!!
Light (lets down his hair to cover his and eyes and smirks): Looks like you're not as strong as your father after all....
(Lucifer threw Spriggan upwards in to geyser of black light, the dark light pierces through Spriggan from every direction, making it burst as soon as the geyser disappeared).
Shin: It can't be.....
Ref: It's... Sovereign Lucifer! Burst Finish!! The champion of America Championship is Light Sawashiro!!
Hanami: Oh My God....!! Lucifer bursted Spriggan like it was nothing!!!
Shin (Fells on his knees and pucks up Spriggan): Spriggan... Heh, maybe.. We'll get him next time.
Light (Looks at Shin with a pitiful look): You think mimicking your dad will make you stronger? You can't win until you surpass the first stage of resonance...
Fubuki: First stage...?
Shin: What do you mean by that?
Light: You cannot win against me until you surpass the limit of resonance.. The strength that the stage 2 offers is much stronger....
Fubuki: That.... explains a lot to me..
~At Onigashima Island~
Ichiban: We're walking for thirty minutes!! When are we gonna get there?
(Watashi was a little bit far away from them)
Watashi: Come on.. Don't be a numbskull and come over here!
Ben: Dunno why am I even going... I don't have the opportunity to ba-
Ichiban (pulls Ben shirts and stops him): Wait... (Lowers his voice) Fubuki isn't here.. We can battle anytime we want!
Ben: You got that right! (Holds Belial on his hand) It's Belial's moment to shine!
(Suddenly Ichiban and Ben heard a strange voice coming from behind)
Ichiban (Looks behind with a terrified look): D... did you heard that?
Ben: I did...
(A big person whose hair was burning came out from behind and opens up his hands as if he was going to grab them)
Ichiban and Ben (While holding each other and screaming terrifyingly): A.... MONSTER!??!
(The darkness was gone from the person's face)
Lui: Monster?
Ichiban: Hey, it's not a monster (sighs) phewww...
Ben: It's Lui Shirasagijou.
Lui (Grabs Ichiban's shirt and pulls him up near his face and smiles): So you're... Valt's brat?
Ichiban (With a terrified look): Looking at his face this close... makes me feel like he's a real monster....
Lui: Is that so? What happens if I told you that I really AM a monster? (He begins to laugh like he usually laughs)
(He took all of them to this training area, On I Dungeon, Watashi was already there)
Watashi: Took you guys long enough...
Ichiban: Who is the one you're gonna battle?
??? (Enters the dungeon from the other gate): Battle? Do you really think you can stand a chance against Longinus?
(He reaches towards Watashi)
Levi (Shows off his Guilty Longinus to Watashi): Watashi Morita... I know you, captain of the new Beigoma Academy.
Watashi: You know me?
Levi: Do you really think you can beat Longinus' attacks?
Ichiban: Who's this guy...?
Lui: He's Levi Winters, he's my student. I don't really take students, but he was an exception.
Ben: Exception?
Lui: He reminds me of myself (Laughs) though a little bratty in nature.
Watashi: You got a Dynamite bey... Aren't you on a disadvantage?
Levi: It's Lui's Longinus, I can't just upgrade it! It's a disgrace to honor.
Watashi (Sighs): Are you really serious?
Lui: Let it begin already...
(Suddenly a stadium came out from the inside the floor and a drone came out of nowhere)
Watashi: Let's try out the new driver! (He switches Wendigo to Upper mode)
Drone: First Battle!
Levi (Takes his launching stance): Wendigo's going to be Longinus' prey!
Watashi (Smiles rudely): We'll see about that.
Drone: Ready... Set!
"3! 2! 1! Go... Shoot!!"
Levi: Pierce him with your claws! Longinus!!
(As soon as Wendigo landed, Longinus lands a barrage of attacks on the stadium eventually sending it flying)
Watashi: He's strong...
Levi: Guilty Upper!!
(Longinus' blade begins to shine purple and strikes at Wendigo's Kiwami Core)
Wendigo (Unleashes his bright purple aura) Wendigo!!
(Wendigo appears roaring through the bright purple aura)
Watashi ('s aura begins to spiral around him): That's what I'm talking about!!
Ichiban: W..Watashi....
Levi (With a surprised look): Looks like I underestimated you... You have surpassed the strength, the strength what resonance usually offers...
(Wendigo broke through of Longinus' upper attack and it's blades begins to emit purple light)
Watashi (Roars): Let's go! True Gloom AXEEEE!!
(Wendigo makes use of it's Retain driver gains speed and reaches towards Longinus)
(Wendigo's avatar uses his Axe to crush Longinus)
(Wendigo strikes onto Longinus making it burst right after)
Levi: ....
Drone: Gloom Wendigo! Burst Finish! Watashi Morita is the winner!!
Watashi: Heh, I won!!
Lui: Heh, looks like Kiwami beys aren't so bad after all...
Ichiban (Looks at Icarus): We'll soon battle too, Icarus!
[To Be Continued]
Chapter 11 Summary: Looks like Levi was not the only challenge in the Onigamshima Island Lui Shirosagijou's Niece, Maru Shirosagijou appears and shows her bey, "Iris Mayura". Ichiban wants to battle her but Watashi didn't let him to do it. Watashi is not going to let Ichiban to go to path of darkness.
What do you all think about what's gonna happen in the future?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Demon Belial - Oct. 08, 2021
Levi seems to be young Lui from season one but a bit mature its bad that lui called him brat. Cool chapter. but are previous charas gonna appear before the arc ends?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - UnseenBurst - Oct. 08, 2021
(Oct. 08, 2021 3:49 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Chapter 10: ( LJ-Blader your good 'ol Shin Kurenai is here. Not the main debut though).
Chapter 10: The Duel At Onigashima Island!
Spoiler (Click to View)
~At the Onigashima Island~
Ichiban (While looking at Ben): That's a very funny mask you got. Where did you even get that?
Ben (Wearing a black Oni mask): Lucky for me.... I bought one when were at Spain.
(Watashi came running towards Ichiban and Ben)
Ichiban: Took you long enough...
Watashi: We just need to move straight forward and eventually we'll meet Lui.
(All of them starts to move forward)
Ichiban (Looks behind while walking): Is Fubuki not gonna come?
Watashi: He's busy with something..
~At The Airship~
Fubuki (While holding a tablet): I'm pretty sure... That surging waves around the blader and the bey is the next stage of resonance..
Fubuki (Swipes through the tab): This guy....
(He swiped through the tab and found a battle of Light Sawashiro and Shin Kurenai)
Hanami: OK!! boys and girls!! It's the finals of America's Championship!! Light has already scored a point against Shin!! Who's gonna really win this match and steal the tag of America's number one??!!
Light (While looking at Shin): Are you really Kurenai's son? You don't got the fire burning in your eyes, like your dad had.
Shin: Is that so? (He shows off Astral Spriggan) Maybe after looking at this, your mind will change! (Spriggan was in High Attack mode)
Fubuki (Watching the match): He's.. Shu's son?
(Astral Spriggan emits out a shine)
Light (Smiles): Attack Mode? Go ahead then, you're welcome to prove me wrong. (He switches Lucifer to lower defense mode).
Ref: First Battle! Ready, Set!
"3! 2! 1! Go... Shoot!!"
(Lucifer lands perfectly on the center of the stadium at the start of the battle)
Shin: Push him away, Spriggan!
(Spriggan starts to attack Lucifer with a barrage of attacks, dealing no damage at all)
Shin (With a surprised look): It's not even budging at all!
Hanami: Woooo!! Spriggan's attack cannot break through Lucifer!! Looks like Lucifer has the upper hand!!
Light (Unleashes his purple aura): Show him what real strength is, Lucifer.
(Lucifer emits a purple vortext of aura, and it's avatar screams as it appears)
(The purple aura starts to spiral around Light's body)
Light (Smiles): It's the end game for Spriggan.
Shin (Gasps): Spriggan isn't gonna lose to the likes of you!
(Spriggan lighten ups with a red light and reaches towards Lucifer with full speed)
Shin (While doing a slash gesture as his hand gave out a red glow): Astral Slash!!
Light (In a calm voice): Sovereign Defense.
(Lucifer covers itself with it's purple aura and it's begins to shine red, Spriggan slash onto Lucifer's blade which created explosive a geyser of black light going upwards)
Shin (Shields himself with his hands): Knock him out! Spriggan!!
Light (lets down his hair to cover his and eyes and smirks): Looks like you're not as strong as your father after all....
(Lucifer threw Spriggan upwards in to geyser of black light, the dark light pierces through Spriggan from every direction, making it burst as soon as the geyser disappeared).
Shin: It can't be.....
Ref: It's... Sovereign Lucifer! Burst Finish!! The champion of America Championship is Light Sawashiro!!
Hanami: Oh My God....!! Lucifer bursted Spriggan like it was nothing!!!
Shin (Fells on his knees and pucks up Spriggan): Spriggan... Heh, maybe.. We'll get him next time.
Light (Looks at Shin with a pitiful look): You think mimicking your dad will make you stronger? You can't win until you surpass the first stage of resonance...
Fubuki: First stage...?
Shin: What do you mean by that?
Light: You cannot win against me until you surpass the limit of resonance.. The strength that the stage 2 offers is much stronger....
Fubuki: That.... explains a lot to me..
~At Onigashima Island~
Ichiban: We're walking for thirty minutes!! When are we gonna get there?
(Watashi was a little bit far away from them)
Watashi: Come on.. Don't be a numbskull and come over here!
Ben: Dunno why am I even going... I don't have the opportunity to ba-
Ichiban (pulls Ben shirts and stops him): Wait... (Lowers his voice) Fubuki isn't here.. We can battle anytime we want!
Ben: You got that right! (Holds Belial on his hand) It's Belial's moment to shine!
(Suddenly Ichiban and Ben heard a strange voice coming from behind)
Ichiban (Looks behind with a terrified look): D... did you heard that?
Ben: I did...
(A big person whose hair was burning came out from behind and opens up his hands as if he was going to grab them)
Ichiban and Ben (While holding each other and screaming terrifyingly): A.... MONSTER!??!
(The darkness was gone from the person's face)
Lui: Monster?
Ichiban: Hey, it's not a monster (sighs) phewww...
Ben: It's Lui Shirasagijou.
Lui (Grabs Ichiban's shirt and pulls him up near his face and smiles): So you're... Valt's brat?
Ichiban (With a terrified look): Looking at his face this close... makes me feel like he's a real monster....
Lui: Is that so? What happens if I told you that I really AM a monster? (He begins to laugh like he usually laughs)
(He took all of them to this training area, On I Dungeon, Watashi was already there)
Watashi: Took you guys long enough...
Ichiban: Who is the one you're gonna battle?
??? (Enters the dungeon from the other gate): Battle? Do you really think you can stand a chance against Longinus?
(He reaches towards Watashi)
Levi (Shows off his Guilty Longinus to Watashi): Watashi Morita... I know you, captain of the new Beigoma Academy.
Watashi: You know me?
Levi: Do you really think you can beat Longinus' attacks?
Ichiban: Who's this guy...?
Lui: He's Levi Winters, he's my student. I don't really take students, but he was an exception.
Ben: Exception?
Lui: He reminds me of myself (Laughs) though a little bratty in nature.
Watashi: You got a Dynamite bey... Aren't you on a disadvantage?
Levi: It's Lui's Longinus, I can't just upgrade it! It's a disgrace to honor.
Watashi (Sighs): Are you really serious?
Lui: Let it begin already...
(Suddenly a stadium came out from the inside the floor and a drone came out of nowhere)
Watashi: Let's try out the new driver! (He switches Wendigo to Upper mode)
Drone: First Battle!
Levi (Takes his launching stance): Wendigo's going to be Longinus' prey!
Watashi (Smiles rudely): We'll see about that.
Drone: Ready... Set!
"3! 2! 1! Go... Shoot!!"
Levi: Pierce him with your claws! Longinus!!
(As soon as Wendigo landed, Longinus lands a barrage of attacks on the stadium eventually sending it flying)
Watashi: He's strong...
Levi: Guilty Upper!!
(Longinus' blade begins to shine purple and strikes at Wendigo's Kiwami Core)
Wendigo (Unleashes his bright purple aura) Wendigo!!
(Wendigo appears roaring through the bright purple aura)
Watashi ('s aura begins to spiral around him): That's what I'm talking about!!
Ichiban: W..Watashi....
Levi (With a surprised look): Looks like I underestimated you... You have surpassed the strength, the strength what resonance usually offers...
(Wendigo broke through of Longinus' upper attack and it's blades begins to emit purple light)
Watashi (Roars): Let's go! True Gloom AXEEEE!!
(Wendigo makes use of it's Retain driver gains speed and reaches towards Longinus)
(Wendigo's avatar uses his Axe to crush Longinus)
(Wendigo strikes onto Longinus making it burst right after)
Levi: ....
Drone: Gloom Wendigo! Burst Finish! Watashi Morita is the winner!!
Watashi: Heh, I won!!
Lui: Heh, looks like Kiwami beys aren't so bad after all...
Ichiban (Looks at Icarus): We'll soon battle too, Icarus!
(Icarus starts to emit a darker purplish aura from itself)
[To Be Continued]
Chapter 11 Summary: Looks like Levi was not the only challenge in the Onigamshima Island Lui Shirosagijou's Niece, Maru Shirosagijou appears and shows her bey, "Iris Mayura". Ichiban wants to battle her but Watashi didn't let him to do it. Watashi is not going to let Ichiban to go to path of darkness.
What do you all think about what's gonna happen in the future?
Lui needs to chill, if Valt found out he did that lol. Sorry I haven't been reading in a while I've been busy. But you're doing amazing!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - GenesisBlader - Oct. 08, 2021
(Oct. 08, 2021 3:49 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Chapter 10: ( LJ-Blader your good 'ol Shin Kurenai is here. Not the main debut though).
Chapter 10: The Duel At Onigashima Island!
Spoiler (Click to View)
~At the Onigashima Island~
Ichiban (While looking at Ben): That's a very funny mask you got. Where did you even get that?
Ben (Wearing a black Oni mask): Lucky for me.... I bought one when were at Spain.
(Watashi came running towards Ichiban and Ben)
Ichiban: Took you long enough...
Watashi: We just need to move straight forward and eventually we'll meet Lui.
(All of them starts to move forward)
Ichiban (Looks behind while walking): Is Fubuki not gonna come?
Watashi: He's busy with something..
~At The Airship~
Fubuki (While holding a tablet): I'm pretty sure... That surging waves around the blader and the bey is the next stage of resonance..
Fubuki (Swipes through the tab): This guy....
(He swiped through the tab and found a battle of Light Sawashiro and Shin Kurenai)
Hanami: OK!! boys and girls!! It's the finals of America's Championship!! Light has already scored a point against Shin!! Who's gonna really win this match and steal the tag of America's number one??!!
Light (While looking at Shin): Are you really Kurenai's son? You don't got the fire burning in your eyes, like your dad had.
Shin: Is that so? (He shows off Astral Spriggan) Maybe after looking at this, your mind will change! (Spriggan was in High Attack mode)
Fubuki (Watching the match): He's.. Shu's son?
(Astral Spriggan emits out a shine)
Light (Smiles): Attack Mode? Go ahead then, you're welcome to prove me wrong. (He switches Lucifer to lower defense mode).
Ref: First Battle! Ready, Set!
"3! 2! 1! Go... Shoot!!"
(Lucifer lands perfectly on the center of the stadium at the start of the battle)
Shin: Push him away, Spriggan!
(Spriggan starts to attack Lucifer with a barrage of attacks, dealing no damage at all)
Shin (With a surprised look): It's not even budging at all!
Hanami: Woooo!! Spriggan's attack cannot break through Lucifer!! Looks like Lucifer has the upper hand!!
Light (Unleashes his purple aura): Show him what real strength is, Lucifer.
(Lucifer emits a purple vortext of aura, and it's avatar screams as it appears)
(The purple aura starts to spiral around Light's body)
Light (Smiles): It's the end game for Spriggan.
Shin (Gasps): Spriggan isn't gonna lose to the likes of you!
(Spriggan lighten ups with a red light and reaches towards Lucifer with full speed)
Shin (While doing a slash gesture as his hand gave out a red glow): Astral Slash!!
Light (In a calm voice): Sovereign Defense.
(Lucifer covers itself with it's purple aura and it's begins to shine red, Spriggan slash onto Lucifer's blade which created explosive a geyser of black light going upwards)
Shin (Shields himself with his hands): Knock him out! Spriggan!!
Light (lets down his hair to cover his and eyes and smirks): Looks like you're not as strong as your father after all....
(Lucifer threw Spriggan upwards in to geyser of black light, the dark light pierces through Spriggan from every direction, making it burst as soon as the geyser disappeared).
Shin: It can't be.....
Ref: It's... Sovereign Lucifer! Burst Finish!! The champion of America Championship is Light Sawashiro!!
Hanami: Oh My God....!! Lucifer bursted Spriggan like it was nothing!!!
Shin (Fells on his knees and pucks up Spriggan): Spriggan... Heh, maybe.. We'll get him next time.
Light (Looks at Shin with a pitiful look): You think mimicking your dad will make you stronger? You can't win until you surpass the first stage of resonance...
Fubuki: First stage...?
Shin: What do you mean by that?
Light: You cannot win against me until you surpass the limit of resonance.. The strength that the stage 2 offers is much stronger....
Fubuki: That.... explains a lot to me..
~At Onigashima Island~
Ichiban: We're walking for thirty minutes!! When are we gonna get there?
(Watashi was a little bit far away from them)
Watashi: Come on.. Don't be a numbskull and come over here!
Ben: Dunno why am I even going... I don't have the opportunity to ba-
Ichiban (pulls Ben shirts and stops him): Wait... (Lowers his voice) Fubuki isn't here.. We can battle anytime we want!
Ben: You got that right! (Holds Belial on his hand) It's Belial's moment to shine!
(Suddenly Ichiban and Ben heard a strange voice coming from behind)
Ichiban (Looks behind with a terrified look): D... did you heard that?
Ben: I did...
(A big person whose hair was burning came out from behind and opens up his hands as if he was going to grab them)
Ichiban and Ben (While holding each other and screaming terrifyingly): A.... MONSTER!??!
(The darkness was gone from the person's face)
Lui: Monster?
Ichiban: Hey, it's not a monster (sighs) phewww...
Ben: It's Lui Shirasagijou.
Lui (Grabs Ichiban's shirt and pulls him up near his face and smiles): So you're... Valt's brat?
Ichiban (With a terrified look): Looking at his face this close... makes me feel like he's a real monster....
Lui: Is that so? What happens if I told you that I really AM a monster? (He begins to laugh like he usually laughs)
(He took all of them to this training area, On I Dungeon, Watashi was already there)
Watashi: Took you guys long enough...
Ichiban: Who is the one you're gonna battle?
??? (Enters the dungeon from the other gate): Battle? Do you really think you can stand a chance against Longinus?
(He reaches towards Watashi)
Levi (Shows off his Guilty Longinus to Watashi): Watashi Morita... I know you, captain of the new Beigoma Academy.
Watashi: You know me?
Levi: Do you really think you can beat Longinus' attacks?
Ichiban: Who's this guy...?
Lui: He's Levi Winters, he's my student. I don't really take students, but he was an exception.
Ben: Exception?
Lui: He reminds me of myself (Laughs) though a little bratty in nature.
Watashi: You got a Dynamite bey... Aren't you on a disadvantage?
Levi: It's Lui's Longinus, I can't just upgrade it! It's a disgrace to honor.
Watashi (Sighs): Are you really serious?
Lui: Let it begin already...
(Suddenly a stadium came out from the inside the floor and a drone came out of nowhere)
Watashi: Let's try out the new driver! (He switches Wendigo to Upper mode)
Drone: First Battle!
Levi (Takes his launching stance): Wendigo's going to be Longinus' prey!
Watashi (Smiles rudely): We'll see about that.
Drone: Ready... Set!
"3! 2! 1! Go... Shoot!!"
Levi: Pierce him with your claws! Longinus!!
(As soon as Wendigo landed, Longinus lands a barrage of attacks on the stadium eventually sending it flying)
Watashi: He's strong...
Levi: Guilty Upper!!
(Longinus' blade begins to shine purple and strikes at Wendigo's Kiwami Core)
Wendigo (Unleashes his bright purple aura) Wendigo!!
(Wendigo appears roaring through the bright purple aura)
Watashi ('s aura begins to spiral around him): That's what I'm talking about!!
Ichiban: W..Watashi....
Levi (With a surprised look): Looks like I underestimated you... You have surpassed the strength, the strength what resonance usually offers...
(Wendigo broke through of Longinus' upper attack and it's blades begins to emit purple light)
Watashi (Roars): Let's go! True Gloom AXEEEE!!
(Wendigo makes use of it's Retain driver gains speed and reaches towards Longinus)
(Wendigo's avatar uses his Axe to crush Longinus)
(Wendigo strikes onto Longinus making it burst right after)
Levi: ....
Drone: Gloom Wendigo! Burst Finish! Watashi Morita is the winner!!
Watashi: Heh, I won!!
Lui: Heh, looks like Kiwami beys aren't so bad after all...
Ichiban (Looks at Icarus): We'll soon battle too, Icarus!
(Icarus starts to emit a darker purplish aura from itself)
[To Be Continued]
Chapter 11 Summary: Looks like Levi was not the only challenge in the Onigamshima Island Lui Shirosagijou's Niece, Maru Shirosagijou appears and shows her bey, "Iris Mayura". Ichiban wants to battle her but Watashi didn't let him to do it. Watashi is not going to let Ichiban to go to path of darkness.
What do you all think about what's gonna happen in the future?
nice chapter, and good to see that lui has quit blading for a while lol!
im not really sure about whats gonna happen in the future tho
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Kiryu Kazuma - Oct. 11, 2021
Rusty Colburns (Doomsday Ragnaruk .14 Diminished High Yielding -Ignite)
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Age: 12
Nationality: German
Appearance: He appears as a medium-sized boy with purple hair and Brown eyes, he wears a T-shirt with a Bey design on the middle, a white half-worn jacket with a reverese white R on the back, he also wears a black jeans and a orange belt on it representing R and White shoes.
Personality: He's being inspired his coach who know trains bladers in germany (Rantaro Kiyama), Rantaro passed on his torch to Rusty as he thought he was capable of drawing out Ragnaruk's power even more than him and the rest of his brothers. Though Rusty is different than the kiyamas, He trains harder and is not friendly at all, He only spends time with his bey and wanted to make Ragnaruk the stongest bey to prove that his coach's bey has more potential than any other.
Beyblade: Doomsday Ragnaruk .14 Diminished High Yielding -Ignite
Doomsday Ragnaruk .14 Diminished High Yielding -Ignite
Kiwami Core: Ragnaruk, The motif is of the flames of doomsday, the core represents a Orange R in the middle with two yellow flames design on it. The core is similar to the recolor of Cyclone Ragnaruk .Nx.Rs -2. THe outer core is in silver color. (It has 3 noemal teeths)
Kiwami Blade: Doomsday, The blade has four rubber blades (Soft rubber) which are on bottom of the four big stamina wings , In lower mnode, the wings cannot open giving it the ability to steal spin with the rubber the stamina wings. However, in upper mode. the wings opens and cover ups the rubber part in exchange for better stamina and circular shape.
Neo Disc: Diminished, The disc features four blades, and features two modes. One being the oval mode which helps for spin steal as the blades can no longer come in the way of the rubber parts present in the doomsday blade. Second one, the circular mode which creates a circular shape as the blades are in different place (Imagine Flash Sagittario's Stamina mode). It helps the stamina wings to have more weight on them and improve stamina.
Kiwami Weight: 14, It's a Kiwami weight made entirely of Tungsten. It is hollowed but still can give a big amount of weight due to Tungsten density. It gives CWD. (Yes, I renamed Tungsten to 14)
Kiwami Armor: Ignite, The armor features four blades on it, giving a cyclone like image on it. The four blades helps with LAD of the bey.
Driver: High Yielding, Yielding features a cone shaped tip made of POM. Yielding's gimmick is that the POM plastic has less friction against the stadium floor than traditional plastic, increasing a Combination's Stamina. Embossed into the top of the Performance Tip is a stylized 'Y' for easy differentiation. It's a high driver, so the height of the driver is more bigger than the normal one.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Kiryu Kazuma - Oct. 17, 2021
Chapter 11: Pallete Feathers! Iris Mayura!
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Levi: Tch, Guess I'll practice somewhere else.
(Levi leaves)
Ichiban (While looking at Watashi): So who's the next one?
Watashi: You don't have to care about that, you're not gonna battle right?
Ichiban (Smiles): Fubuki isn't here, you cannot boss me around this time.
Watashi: Sorry, but I'm chosen by him, just following the rules.
Ben (Laughs): Rules? What are rules?
Watashi (Looks at Ben with a confused look): What?
Ben: He never said there are any rules and what should we follow.
Ichiban: He also never said that we're not allowed to battle anymore!
Lui: Heh, Let me decide then. Ichiban Aoi, you'll battle.
Ichiban: Me? Alright then!
Ben: Why not me?
Watashi: W.. Wait, I can't let this happen..
Lui (Looks at Watashi ferociously): What?
Watashi (Nervously): Oh it's.... Nothing, I don't wanna say.... Anything...
(Watashi turned around and thinks)
Watashi: (I can't really stand up to this guy.... Sorry Fubuki... But that's the best I can do after all...)
Lui (Smiles): So, if everything's settled, Come with me.
Ichiban (Looks at Icarus): I know you can beat anyone! The power we've obtained, with that we can beat anyone!
(Icarus shines as if it responded)
Watashi (Thinks): (What's going on...? Isn't corruptness means that the bond between him and his bey is completely vanished..?)
~All of them left the mansion and reaches to the stadium outside~
Lui (While Walking): I hope you'll show me battle worth watching against my niece.
Ichiban: You're niece? So.. Uh what's a niece??
Lui: You don't know? (Laughs)
Watashi : Niece is... well.. Like brother or sister's daughter.
Ichiban: Uh... It's not like I didn't know that... Hehe (He scratches his head in a embarrassed way)
Watashi (Slightly laughs): Yeah.. Why not.
(They all reaches towards the stadium, Maru was practicing alone there)
Lui (Speaks to Maru): Practice all alone?
Maru (While looking at Mayura, which was spinning in the center): I was bored, so I thought I'll practice alone.
Ichiban (Looks closely at Mayura): It's a left-spinning defense type?
Watashi: I kinda like the design of the bey.
Ben: Heh, I prefer black and red.
Maru (Picks up her bey, then asks Lui): So, who are these guys?
Ichiban: I'm Ichiban Aoi, and that's my bey (Shows off his bey) Aviate Icarus!
Maru: Uh, yeah I know you....., You lost against Fiona right?
Ichiban: I barely lost against her....
Lui (Comes closer to Ichiban): So then, you're gonna battle or not?
Ichiban: It's obvious that I'll battle. Ichiban Aoi never backs down against a fight!
Maru (Shows off her bey): I should warn you, Mayura's defense is unbreakable.
Ichiban: That's obvious too, I can!
Watashi (Places his hand on Ichiban's shoulder): Hey, you... Sure about this? You'll make Fubuki mad if you disobey.
Ichiban (Smiles): You want to take my place huh?
Watashi (Sighs): I have a bad feeling for you, can't you feel it too?
Ichiban: Wh-
Watashi: Wait don't bother answering it won't change anything, anyways... I think I'll be the ref.
Ichiban (Switches to lower mode): Let's crack Mayura's defense!
Lui (Thinks): I can feel it, he has the same heat burning within you just like Valt.
Maru (Switches to upper mode and thinks): (He switched to lower mode... Guess I'll have to go with more defense).
Watashi: First Battle! Ready, Set!!
"3! 2! 1! Go.... Shoot!!"
(Mayura quickly takes and the center, while Icarus drifts around the slopes of the stadium)
Maru: Iris Siphon!
(Mayura's blades lightens up with a bright blue light)
Ichiban (Raises his fist forth): Twilight Shoot!!
(Icarus crashes onto Mayura and keeps hitting it in a flower pattern, but couldn't move it an inch)
Ichiban: It's so solid.... But it's defense won't last for long!
(Icarus begins to ride along the edge of the stadium and crashes onto Mayura with much higher speed)
Ichiban (Makes a fist as it shines as soon as he opens it up): Amaze Flash!!
(Icarus moves Mayura away and makes it off-balanced)
Ben (Gasps): Icarus' attacks are even stronger than before...
Maru ('s Blue aura brightens up): Mayura, Iris Guard!!
(Mayura's avatar appears from the blue aura, and it begins to circle around the center rapidly)
Ichiban ('s hand shines as he did a slash gesture): Blow it away! Aviaate!! Slaaash!!!
(Icarus' blade lightens up with a blue glow and slashes on Mayura's rubber blade, but Mayura countered it and sent Icarus out of the stadoum)
Watashi: It's Iris Mayura with an over finish! The score is 1-0!
Lui (With a rude look): Well... Looks like you do share some traits from your dad, you're as reckless as he was in his younger days.
Ichiban: I'll... Definitely win this time! (He switches to Upper mode)
Ichiban (Shows off Icarus): Icarus is fired up just like me, we're gonna win for sure!!
Maru (Thinks): (Why upper mode? Wouldn't it make the attacks weaker?) Do whatever you want, the result will be same.
Watashi: Fine then, Second Battle!
Ichiban (Thinks): (I'll put everything into this launch, watch me Icarus, I'm gonna make you number one!!)
Watashi: Ready... Set!
"3! 2! 1! Go... Shoot!!"
Ichiban: True Amaze Flash!!
(Icarus spins around the center of the stadium gaining speed and emits a flash of white light, crashes onto Mayura which was going for the center and knocks it away, out of the stadium)
Maru (With a surprised look): Huh..?
Ichiban: Alright! I won!!
Lui: Huh? He developed a new move in the middle of the battle (laughs), I knew he wasn't half bad...
Watashi (While looking at Ichiban): Amazing....
Maru: That was.... Unexpected.
Ichiban (With a satisfied smile): Will you say the same when you see Mayura burst right in front of you?
Maru: Heh, don't get your hopes up, Mayura won't burst... Flukes don't happen twice do they?
Ichiban (Shrugs): You haven't seen Icarus' true strength yet!
Maru: Is that so? I'm gonna burst your bey into bits!
Ben (While looking at Lui): Why her voice is starting to remind me of you..?
Lui: Just... Don't make her mad and she won't act like me.
Watashi: Alright, Third Battle!
Maru (Switches to Lower mode): Get ready, for Mayura's special attack.
Ichiban (With a confused look): Special attack? (He then smiles) Let's do this then!
Watashi: Ready, Set!
"3! 2! 1!"
Ichiban/Maru (both of their aura shines as they shoots their bey): Go... Shoot!!
(Mayura took the the center quickly again, while Icarus drifts around the stadium slopes)
Maru: Iris Siphon!!
(Mayura' blades lightens up)
Ichiban (Smiles): Same strategy again? Alright then, Let's go! Icarus!! It's time to burst Mayura!!
(Icarus' leans on it's driver and reaches towards Mayura)
Ichiban: Amaze Strike!!
(Icarus Crashes onto Mayura and moves it way from the center)
Maru: Hold on to it!
(Mayura takes the center yet again)
Ichiban: Let's finish this! (His hand begins to shine as he did a slash gesture) Aviaate Slaaash!!!
Maru ('s blue aura brightens up): Mayura!
(Mayura appears from the bright blue aura)
(Icarus reaches towards Mayura and hits onto Mayura's hollowed blade, because of the difference in height, brush driver's rings carp down)
Maru: Enchant... Wing Counter!!
(A bright light upsurges from Mayura's blades and shoots Icarus in the air)
Maru (Smiles): Yes!
Watashi: Is it over?!
Lui (While looking at Ichiban): .. No it isn't.
Ichiban ('Bright white aura burns within him and breaks like glass as he closes his fists while closing his eyes): Aaarghh....
Ichiban (Opens up his eyes as soon as the aura spirals around him and upsurges even further): ICARUS!!!
(Icarus appears from the bright white aura, Icarus survived by hitting the wall of the stadium and reaches towards Mayura with lightning speed)
Maru (Gasps): Wh- what's that kind of resonance...?!
Ichiban: Aviate Slash!!!
(Icarus' gets covered up with the white aura and it's begins to shine blue and crashes onto Mayura. A geyser of white light shine on the stadium which was reaching to the sky)
Lui (Gasps): That kind of resonance....
Ben: It's the same like Watashi...
Watashi (Thinks): Is he gonna.... break Mayura?!)
(The white light disappears and an explosion occurs which completely destroys the entire stadium except the center area, Icarus was out of stamina, while Mayura was still spinning in the center)
Watashi (With a surprised look): Unbelievable.... Mayura won...
(Ichiban fells on the ground unconsciously)
Watashi (Tries to wake him up): Hey, are you okay??
Lui (Laughs): He really deserves some rest, his bey sure is full of power...
Watashi: I think I'll take him back to the ship... Ben come with me.
Ben: Fine...
(They all started to run towards the direction of the battleship)
Maru: (Pick up Mayura without saying anything)
Lui (While looking at Maru): It's surprising that Mayura survived that blow...
Maru: The driver saved Mayura there... If my bey wasn't on lower mode, things would be different.
Levi (Reaches towards Lui): Wait, what just happened here?
Lui: Heh, you missed the show.
[To Be Continued]
Plus, Chapter 12: Crimison Fire! Spriggan!!
Spoiler (Click to View)
~At The Battleship~
Watashi (While holding Ichiban): We're back, Fubuki.
Fubuki (Looks at Ichiban): What happened to him?
Watashi: Well... He..
Ben: He battled and now he's unconscious.
Fubuki (With a surprised look): He did what?
Watashi: I-It looks like you were mistaken Fubuki, he's not really showing any signs.
Fubuki: Maybe I was daydreaming back then...
Watashi (Puts Ichiban down to the bed): It's... Night already?
Fubuki: Yeah it is, and we'll go back home tomorrow.
Ben: Wait, I never got a chance to battle!
Fubuki: The league is going to happen soon than expected.. maybe you'll get enough chances there.
[Next Day, The Battleship arrived back at New Beigoma]
Fubuki: So, we're finally back.
Watashi: It was quite a ride.
Ben: It was? I only got one chance and I lost!
Ichiban (Smiles): Well, I had fun, I wish I could win against Maru though!
Watashi: Guess, I'm the only one who won a match.
Fubuki: I was gonna make this tour more long but.. Kiwami League is gonna begin and has only two more spaces left.
Watashi: So... There's a problem?
Fubuki: Apparently.... There were four blades who were registered to enter. And when I saw the format...
(He showed the tab to everyone, the battles were listed on it. The first one, Shin Kurenai VS Paige Crassus and the second one, Ichiban Aoi VS Watashi Morita)
Watashi (With a surprised look): So, only one of us can enter!?
Ichiban (Smiles): I feel bad for you Watashi, sadly you cannot win against me.
Watashi: Lose? Me? No way! I'll beat ya good, just watch me there!
Ben: Well, I'm going then. (Laughs) The demon king will tear apart everyone there!
(He said those words as he goes away)
Ichiban: Heh, I'm going home too.
(As he was going Fubuki leans his hand towards his way)
Fubuki: Wait, I wanna ask you one thing.
Ichiban: What?
Fubuki: You know you should make your bond better with Icarus, it'll make you stronger.
Ichiban: Make my bond stronger?
Fubuki: Icarus is your partner.. Right? A bond between you too would make both of you better than before.
Ichiban (Looks at Icarus, black fumes were erupting from it): (He begins to think) (Icarus is my partner? I never thought of him as a partner before....) Alright, I'll try my best! See ya.
(He then leaves)
Watashi (With a surprised look): So... It'll make his state better?
Fubuki: I don't know.... I thought anything I would say make him completely deny me... Looks like it's a different situation than before...
Watashi: Before..?
Fubuki: Heh, once a friend of mine wanted to become the best in the world, he did chose the wrong path but it was not too late for him to recover from it.
Watashi: I see....
[At Ichiban's Home]
Ichiban (Tries to open the door): Huh? It's locked?
(He then checks under the mat and found the key)
Ichiban (Opens the door): Is dad not here?
(As he opened the door, he found a note)
Ichiban (Reds the note): He's out for three months with mom? Heh, so it's me all alone at home huh? (About his mom.... Well you know who it is right?)
(He goes towards his room and sits on his bed)
Ichiban: It's boring being all alone...
(He pulls out his tab from his bag)
Ichiban (Swiping through the tab): There is going to be a match today.... Let's see...
(He clicked onto the live wbba match)
Ichiban: Found it!
Hanami: Okay! Boys and Girls!! Kiwami League is about to begin and!!
(Shin, Paige Watashi and Ichiban's image appears on the screen)
Hanami: Among these four, only two will be able to enter!! Starting with the first match at America, We have a legend's son! It's Shu Kurenai's son, Shin Kurenai!!
Ichiban (Smiles): Shu Kurenai? That's dad's best friend I guess....
Hanami: And on the other side! It's Real Sun Bat's one of the best blader! Paige Crassus!!!
Paige: Whether you are a legend's son or not, It doesn't matter to me!
Shin (Shows off Mortal Spriggan): Spriggan is the one who'll win.
Paige (Shows off Perseus): That won't happen! Perseus is the knight who shines in the dark armor! We'll win this match!
Ref: First Battle!
Shin (Switches to Right-spin Upper Defense mode): Let's defend and counter his attacks, we'll win for sure!
Ref: Ready, Set!!
"3! 2! 1! Go.... Shoot!!"
(Spriggan lands on the stadium and quickly takes the center while Perseus dashes around the slopes)
Paige: Let's go! Perseus! (He leans his fist forth) Héroic Barrage!
(Perseus leans on it's driver and crashes onto Spriggan)
Shin: Null Shield!
(Spriggan's rubber blades lighten ups and successfully counters the attack)
Hanami: Looks like Perseus' attack didn't did any good!!
Ichiban: The blade has rubber... Just like Fafnir...
Paige: It won't end like this! Now! (He raises his fist upwards which shines as he moved it) Héroic Upper!!
(Perseus' blades lits up and it reaches towards Spriggan with full speed)
Hanami: Perseus is reaching towards Spriggan with a decisive attack!! Will Spriggan Survive!?
Shin: You can't break through the null shield!
(Perseus misses the rubber blade but instead clased onto the metal blade and sends Spriggan flying instantly)
Shin (Catches Spriggan): Argh!
Ref: Héroic Perseus! Over Finish! The score is now 1-0!
Ichiban (Smiles): Paige... He's gotten stronger...
Paige (Laughs idiotically): You think you can beat Perseus with this kind of defense? It's attack can pierce any bey's shield!
Shin: Is that so? Then how about this? (He switches to Lower Balance Mode)
Shin (Shows of Spriggan's driver mode change): Can Perseus handle both attack and defense?
Ichiban (Smiles Suprisingly): Spriggan have so many mode changes... (He then looks at Icarus) We'll even beat him! Your strength is almost to it's peak!
Ref: Second Battle!
Paige (Switches to High mode): Let's blow him away with more attack power!
Ref: Ready... Set!
"3! 2! 1!"
Shin ('s Scar begins to turn red): Go.... Shoot!!
(Spriggan lands near the center and starts to circling around it)
Paige: Pierce through him! Perseus!
(Paige's hand shines as he raises his fist upwards)
Paige: Héroic Upper!!
Hanami: It's the same move from previous match!! Will he again knock him out and win!?!
(Perseus clashes with Spriggan and throws it onto the wall)
Shin ('s Scar began to glow even more and his red burning aura erupts within him): It's the end for you!!
(Spriggan appears slashing through the burning red aura)
Paige: Nothing's gonna stop us from winning this match!
(Spriggan's Gold blades began to shine as it reaches towards Perseus with full speed)
Shin ('s hand glowed as he did a slash gesture): Upper Axe!!
(Spriggan's Gold blades lightens up and threw Perseus in the air, Perseus reaches towards Paige's head and bursted)
Paige: (Shocked look with his mouth slightly opened)
Ref: I-It's... Mortal Spriggan! Burst Finish!! Shin Kurenai wins with a score of 2-1!!
Hanami: Wh- What happend!?! Spriggan has never shown a move such like that!?!
Shin (Smiles): That's Spriggan for you!
Paige (Looks down at Perseus' parts): Looks like I'll have to....
Ichiban (Turns off the tab): This power... (He then looks at Icarus) I'll beat Watashi, and after that beat this guy too! Icarus, we're gonna beat everyone in this world no matter how but we will!! I'll make you the strongest bey in this world!
(Icarus shines with a bright white light erupting from it)
[Somewhere else in Spain]
Griffin (While talking to his dad): I don't need any weakling in my team!
Griffin's dad: (Sighs) If you threw someone out that would make our organization's reputation even worse...
Griffin: I no longer wanna be a nice going guy.
Griffin's dad: Why not? You're our role model! C'mon at least do this for your dad...
Griffin (Looks away): ... Fine.. But for sometime only.
(Griffin leaves his dad's organization center and walks through the streets)
Griffin (While looking at Gilgamesh): Just wait Gilgamesh, I'll make you a real hero. We'll crush all the competitors in the league!
[To Be Continued]
I was busy with some stuff lately and I did two chapters. (12 was easy to right, so I did that first)
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - LJ-Blader - Oct. 17, 2021
Yeah! Shin coming through! I never doubted!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Kiryu Kazuma - Nov. 02, 2021
Maybe I'm going to re-write this fic, not convinced with it lol. I have smth in mind and I'll maybe make it even better than before (Tbh I didn't like this in the first place, I'm not satisfied with this. Maybe re-using ideas wasn't good afterall).
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - GenesisBlader - Nov. 02, 2021
(Oct. 17, 2021 2:30 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: Yeah! Shin coming through! I never doubted!
That makes two of us!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Kiryu Kazuma - Nov. 19, 2021
So, after a long hiatus I'm back with a rewritten chapter. I'll make some minor changes in some beys names. For eg: Aviate Icarus is now Vivid Icarus and I'm bringing a complete overhaul of the story. (I have updated my first post, you can check it out)
Chapter 1: (Rewrite and it's Hollowmind8'ed)
Spoiler (Click to View)
Chapter 1: The New Age of Beyblade, Kiwami Era! (Hollowm8 assistance ver.)
~At the place where Valt and Shu used to meet often, 2 boys are standing bear the arena,
sitting on the staircase~
Ichiban (looking to Chikara's face): So, is there anything else new? Other than BC Sol.
Chikara (Reaches hand to the pocket): Ah, thank you for remembering me. (Picks up a bey
and shows) There is, take a look at Centaur, it's a Kiwami bey.
Ichiban (While looking at Centaur): It's so awesome… Kiwami...
(Ichiban lost in the design of Chikara's bey. Chikara giggles a little)
Chikara: I can see you already like the design.
Ichiban: How couldn't I? It. Is. Incredible. (Tries to pick the bey) Let me see it
Chikara (Grins while moving his bey away from Ichiban): Not before we battle! Do you still
think your Valkyrie is the strongest bey around here?
Ichiban (retreats his hand and raises an eyebrow): "Around here?" What are you talking
about? It's the strongest bey of the entire world! Ultimate Valkyrie will always be!
Chikara (smiles): You never change do you? Let's test my bey in its first match then, after all,
I wanted its first opponent to be you, Ichiban.
Ichiban [Thoughts]: A Kiwami bey? It is certainly different from the dynamite system. I
wonder how much strong it is....
Chikara (Takes out his launcher): Let's go?
Ichiban (Snaps out of his thoughts and takes out his launcher): Y-Yeah!
Ichiban [thoughts]: We got this Valkyrie! We'll win for sure!
"3! 2! 1! Go.... Shoot!!"
Chikara: Clutch Shift!
~~Both beys land on the stadium. Centaur quickly picks up speed while Valkyrie is getting
ready to do a flower pattern, throwing Valkyrie to the wall~~
Ichiban (surprised): Wow, it's fast...
Chikara: If you think that's fast? What about that?
~~Centaur leans on it's driver and gains even more speed, reaching towards Valkyrie ready
to attack~~
Ichiban (Gasps): WhaChikara: Noble Spear!!
~~Centaur slashes through Valkyrie, throwing it into the air, Valkyrie is knocked out with
ease~~
Ichiban (Shocked): Hey, that was…
Chikara (already with his bey and picking Valkyrie from the ground): A burst finish, it isn't the
first time you have seen Valkyrie lose right? Why are you so surprised?
Ichiban: I just... Don't like losing to anyone... Even you and not that easily.
Chikara (tosses Valkyrie to Ichiban): Alright, second try then. Try harder this time and use
what you saw from the last battle.
Ichiban [thoughts]: This time I'll go faster than him, we'll win this time.
"3! 2! 1! Go.... Shoot!!"
~~Both beys land on the stadium, this time Valkyrie was also speeding around faster than
Centaur~~
Ichiban (confident): Nothing compares in speed to an awakened Variable'. Now Valkyrie,
Ultimate Flash Shoot!
~~Valkyrie rides along the tornado ridge, aiming straight towards Centaur~~
Chikara: Not so fast! Noble Spear!
~~Centaur also goes to the tornado ridge, leaning its driver on the ridge and gaining an
absurd amount of speed. Going even faster than Valkyrie and hitting it from behind. Ichiban
gets shocked~~
Chikara (Grins): I guess there is something faster than an awakened Variable'.
Ichiban (slightly annoyed): It doesn't matter, Valkyrie! Ultimate Jet Shoot!
~~Valkyrie uses the knockback to hut a wall and escape, then it hits another wall, picking up
more speed, and going back to Centaur~~
Chikara (with a more serious face): Ambush Spark, now Centaur!
~~Centaur leans on its driver rubber, going directly to Valkyrie and both landing a barrage of
attacks to each other. Both beys charge an attack and go straight to the middle~~
Ichiban/Chikara (both fully into the battle): Now, End this!
~~Both beys colide and Centaur goes through Valkyrie, bursting it~~
Chikara (happy): I couldn't have wished a better first battle than that!
Ichiban (frustated): Yeah, I guess you deserve the win.
Chikara (noticing his frustation): What's wrong? You did great!
Ichiban: But I guess that wasn't enough, Valkyrie was supposed to be the strongest…
Chikara: Then why don't you evolve Valkyrie?
Ichiban (Looks at Valkyrie): Well it's just that...
~~Valkyrie shines~~
Ichiban: I like it's design... That's all.
Chikara (With a funny look): Eh?
Ichiban: Valkyrie is fine the way it is. I'll become the strongest with Valkyrie!
Chikara (Smiles): Fine then, I won't be here tomorrow remember? I'm going to BC Sol. To
become the strongest and... I'll even surpass Valt Aoi's blading status.
Ichiban: I doubt that, besides, what will I do while you're gone?
Chikara (thinking): Hmm... Do you know who's the strongest in Asia?
Ichiban: Who?
Chikara (With a serious look): (sigh) It's Azef Ishikawa. His bey, Apophis, is believed to be
the strongest in Asia and now he too has upgraded his bey into a Kiwami Bey.
Ichiban (With an excited look): He hasn't faced me yet! I'll make sure to burst his bey!
Chikara (smiles): Good for you, there is gonna be a tournament. Whoever wins will get a
chance to get his title.
Ichiban: Does that mean...
Chikara: He's a member of Ultimate Six, the strongest six bladers around the world. It
won't be easy, besides (He looks at the ground), he's not that type of person you can handle.
You'll lose very badly.
Ichiban (Puts a finger on his forehead): That guy, Azef what he's like?
Chikara: He's... Crazy, that's all you need to know.
Ichiban (surprised): Crazy?
Chikara (still serious): His personality can be told by his bey, Apophis. He's called Lord of the
Night for a reason.
Ichiban (curious): Lord of the Night huh… I wonder what the Wiki has to say about this.
Chikara (laughs a little and looks at the horizon, then back at Ichiban): I'm going now, there's
a ton of work to do for me, I need to start packing my stuff as I'm going to Spain.
Ichiban: Fine then, I'll catch you later!
Chikara (at some distance and yelling): Hey! Consider evolving Valkyrie! Otherwise the
battle will go the same as before!
Ichiban (smiling and waving, also yelling): I'll consider it! See ya!
~~Ichiban leaves and walks around the town while looking at Valkyrie~~
Ichiban: Will it make a difference if I upgrade you? Besides, I'm pretty bad on bey designs
and Chikara can't help me with such little time...
[To Be Continued]
And a description of Azef Ishikawa: (The Primary Antagonist of Second Arc)
Spoiler (Click to View)
Azef Ishikawa
Age: 14
Also Known as: Lord Of The Night, The Chaotic Serpent and Asia's Number One Blader.
Allignment: Chaotic Evil
Personality: Azef is a sadistic and immature guy, who enjoys toying with his opponents, he has never lost a battle as he's the No.1 blader in Asia and a member of Ultimate Six (The Bladers who are dominating the Kiwami Era and are the strongest). In future he'll meet Ichiban and will see him as a toy that could be fun to play with.
Appearance: He's an average height boy and very slim, he has green hair which reaches his shoulders and his side parting let a large portion of his bangs cover the left side of his face. He wears a sleaveless black shirt and a Green coat with a upside down "A" symbol on it. He also wears a black pant and a pair of jet black boots.
Beyblade: Midnight Apophis .0 Sinister Fervour -Serpent (Left-Spinning Balance Type)
Kiwami Blade: Midnight, It's a two bladed blade which has two more blades beneath it and it symbolizes a black serpent. The gimmick is similar to that of Vice Leopard that he snatches onto the opossing bey but except throwing it away, the two blades which are beneath the blade snatches onto the opossing bey dealing massive damage.
Kiwami Core: Apophis, The motif is that of the Embodiment of Chaos, Apophis. The Core represents a Black Serpent's head showcasing it's yellow eyes and the purple flames it's throwing away from it's mouth.
Kiwami Weight: 0, Has a round shape creating much weight and OWD.
Neo Disc: Sinister: The Disc is circular in shape and showcases two Serpent heads on each sides.
Driver: Fervour, The Driver's main color scheme is white, it features a POM ball tip with an additional mode to change to attack mode. In attack mode, the ball is pressed inwards and the hollowed tip goes crazy in the stadium.
Kiwami Armor: Serpent: Showcases 9 Serpent heads revolving around.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Hollowmind13 - Nov. 19, 2021
(Nov. 19, 2021 4:13 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: So, after a long hiatus I'm back with a rewritten chapter. I'll make some minor changes in some beys names. For eg: Aviate Icarus is now Vivid Icarus and I'm bringing a complete overhaul of the story. (I have updated my first post, you can check it out).
Chapter 1: (Rewrite and it's Hollowmind8'ed)
Spoiler (Click to View)
Chapter 1: The New Age of Beyblade, Kiwami Era! (Hollowm8 assistance ver.)
~At the place where Valt and Shu used to meet often, 2 boys are standing bear the arena,
sitting on the staircase~
Ichiban (looking to Chikara's face): So, is there anything else new? Other than BC Sol.
Chikara (Reaches hand to the pocket): Ah, thank you for remembering me. (Picks up a bey
and shows) There is, take a look at Centaur, it's a Kiwami bey.
Ichiban (While looking at Centaur): It's so awesome… Kiwami...
(Ichiban lost in the design of Chikara's bey. Chikara giggles a little)
Chikara: I can see you already like the design.
Ichiban: How couldn't I? It. Is. Incredible. (Tries to pick the bey) Let me see it
Chikara (Grins while moving his bey away from Ichiban): Not before we battle! Do you still
think your Valkyrie is the strongest bey around here?
Ichiban (retreats his hand and raises an eyebrow): "Around here?" What are you talking
about? It's the strongest bey of the entire world! Ultimate Valkyrie will always be!
Chikara (smiles): You never change do you? Let's test my bey in its first match then, after all,
I wanted its first opponent to be you, Ichiban.
Ichiban [Thoughts]: A Kiwami bey? It is certainly different from the dynamite system. I
wonder how much strong it is....
Chikara (Takes out his launcher): Let's go?
Ichiban (Snaps out of his thoughts and takes out his launcher): Y-Yeah!
Ichiban [thoughts]: We got this Valkyrie! We'll win for sure!
"3! 2! 1! Go.... Shoot!!"
Chikara: Clutch Shift!
~~Both beys land on the stadium. Centaur quickly picks up speed while Valkyrie is getting
ready to do a flower pattern, throwing Valkyrie to the wall~~
Ichiban (surprised): Wow, it's fast...
Chikara: If you think that's fast? What about that?
~~Centaur leans on it's driver and gains even more speed, reaching towards Valkyrie ready
to attack~~
Ichiban (Gasps): WhaChikara: Noble Spear!!
~~Centaur slashes through Valkyrie, throwing it into the air, Valkyrie is knocked out with
ease~~
Ichiban (Shocked): Hey, that was…
Chikara (already with his bey and picking Valkyrie from the ground): A burst finish, it isn't the
first time you have seen Valkyrie lose right? Why are you so surprised?
Ichiban: I just... Don't like losing to anyone... Even you and not that easily.
Chikara (tosses Valkyrie to Ichiban): Alright, second try then. Try harder this time and use
what you saw from the last battle.
Ichiban [thoughts]: This time I'll go faster than him, we'll win this time.
"3! 2! 1! Go.... Shoot!!"
~~Both beys land on the stadium, this time Valkyrie was also speeding around faster than
Centaur~~
Ichiban (confident): Nothing compares in speed to an awakened Variable'. Now Valkyrie,
Ultimate Flash Shoot!
~~Valkyrie rides along the tornado ridge, aiming straight towards Centaur~~
Chikara: Not so fast! Noble Spear!
~~Centaur also goes to the tornado ridge, leaning its driver on the ridge and gaining an
absurd amount of speed. Going even faster than Valkyrie and hitting it from behind. Ichiban
gets shocked~~
Chikara (Grins): I guess there is something faster than an awakened Variable'.
Ichiban (slightly annoyed): It doesn't matter, Valkyrie! Ultimate Jet Shoot!
~~Valkyrie uses the knockback to hut a wall and escape, then it hits another wall, picking up
more speed, and going back to Centaur~~
Chikara (with a more serious face): Ambush Spark, now Centaur!
~~Centaur leans on its driver rubber, going directly to Valkyrie and both landing a barrage of
attacks to each other. Both beys charge an attack and go straight to the middle~~
Ichiban/Chikara (both fully into the battle): Now, End this!
~~Both beys colide and Centaur goes through Valkyrie, bursting it~~
Chikara (happy): I couldn't have wished a better first battle than that!
Ichiban (frustated): Yeah, I guess you deserve the win.
Chikara (noticing his frustation): What's wrong? You did great!
Ichiban: But I guess that wasn't enough, Valkyrie was supposed to be the strongest…
Chikara: Then why don't you evolve Valkyrie?
Ichiban (Looks at Valkyrie): Well it's just that...
~~Valkyrie shines~~
Ichiban: I like it's design... That's all.
Chikara (With a funny look): Eh?
Ichiban: Valkyrie is fine the way it is. I'll become the strongest with Valkyrie!
Chikara (Smiles): Fine then, I won't be here tomorrow remember? I'm going to BC Sol. To
become the strongest and... I'll even surpass Valt Aoi's blading status.
Ichiban: I doubt that, besides, what will I do while you're gone?
Chikara (thinking): Hmm... Do you know who's the strongest in Asia?
Ichiban: Who?
Chikara (With a serious look): (sigh) It's Azef Ishikawa. His bey, Apophis, is believed to be
the strongest in Asia and now he too has upgraded his bey into a Kiwami Bey.
Ichiban (With an excited look): He hasn't faced me yet! I'll make sure to burst his bey!
Chikara (smiles): Good for you, there is gonna be a tournament. Whoever wins will get a
chance to get his title.
Ichiban: Does that mean...
Chikara: He's a member of Ultimate Six, the strongest six bladers around the world. It
won't be easy, besides (He looks at the ground), he's not that type of person you can handle.
You'll lose very badly.
Ichiban (Puts a finger on his forehead): That guy, Azef what he's like?
Chikara: He's... Crazy, that's all you need to know.
Ichiban (surprised): Crazy?
Chikara (still serious): His personality can be told by his bey, Apophis. He's called Lord of the
Night for a reason.
Ichiban (curious): Lord of the Night huh… I wonder what the Wiki has to say about this.
Chikara (laughs a little and looks at the horizon, then back at Ichiban): I'm going now, there's
a ton of work to do for me, I need to start packing my stuff as I'm going to Spain.
Ichiban: Fine then, I'll catch you later!
Chikara (at some distance and yelling): Hey! Consider evolving Valkyrie! Otherwise the
battle will go the same as before!
Ichiban (smiling and waving, also yelling): I'll consider it! See ya!
~~Ichiban leaves and walks around the town while looking at Valkyrie~~
Ichiban: Will it make a difference if I upgrade you? Besides, I'm pretty bad on bey designs
and Chikara can't help me with such little time...
[To Be Continued]
And a description of Azef Ishikawa: (The Primary Antagonist of Second Arc)
Spoiler (Click to View)
Azef Ishikawa
Age: 14
Also Known as: Lord Of The Night, The Chaotic Serpent and Asia's Number One Blader.
Allignment: Chaotic Evil
Personality: Azef is a sadistic and immature guy, who enjoys toying with his opponents, he has never lost a battle as he's the No.1 blader in Asia and a member of Ultimate Six (The Bladers who are dominating the Kiwami Era and are the strongest). In future he'll meet Ichiban and will see him as a toy that could be fun to play with.
Appearance: He's an average height boy and very slim, he has green hair which reaches his shoulders and his side parting let a large portion of his bangs cover the left side of his face. He wears a sleaveless black shirt and a Green coat with a upside down "A" symbol on it. He also wears a black pant and a pair of jet black boots.
Beyblade: Midnight Apophis .0 Sinister Fervour -Serpent (Left-Spinning Balance Type)
Kiwami Blade: Midnight, It's a two bladed blade which has two more blades beneath it and it symbolizes a black serpent. The gimmick is similar to that of Vice Leopard that he snatches onto the opossing bey but except throwing it away, the two blades which are beneath the blade snatches onto the opossing bey dealing massive damage.
Kiwami Core: Apophis, The motif is that of the Embodiment of Chaos, Apophis. The Core represents a Black Serpent's head showcasing it's yellow eyes and the purple flames it's throwing away from it's mouth.
Kiwami Weight: 0, Has a round shape creating much weight and OWD.
Neo Disc: Sinister: The Disc is circular in shape and showcases two Serpent heads on each sides.
Driver: Fervour, The Driver's main color scheme is white, it features a POM ball tip with an additional mode to change to attack mode. In attack mode, the ball is pressed inwards and the hollowed tip goes crazy in the stadium.
Kiwami Armor: Serpent: Showcases 9 Serpent heads revolving around.
I like to think of it as an unexpected colab lol
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Kiryu Kazuma - Nov. 20, 2021
Here's are some updated and somewhat changed descriptions of the main characters:
Ichiban Aoi:
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Age: 12
Allignment: Neutral Good (Arc 1)/ Questionable (Arc 2 and beyond)
He's crazy about beyblade and is strategic when it comes to Bey-battles. He was given Valkyrie by his dad when he was 10. He wants to become the best blader in the world with Valkyrie right by his side.
Beyblade: Ultimate Valkyrie Legacy Variable'-9 (Primary Bey, as of now)
Vivid Icarus .1 Cosmos Set-off -Aviation (His Kiwami Bey, Clockwise Attack type)
Vivid Blade: It's a Four Bladed Kiwami Blade which pierces through opossing beys. The Blade's contact points are covered by POM and in the inner section, it has rubber. (The main color scheme of the bey is White, the rubber part is red and POM is blue)
.1 Weight: It has a heavy metal point on the one side and the other side is lighter, it makes the bey unbalanced but increases the attack potential.
Cosmos Disc: It's a three bladed bound disc which can deflect and parry opposing bey's attacks. (The three bound blades are blue, the bound blades will be fixed when the bey is on Lower mode because of the Weight placed on the disc.
Driver: Set-off, The Driver has a rubber tip ( and a in-built gear which kicks in, in the middle of the battle granting the bey slightly more stamina and makes it more agile.
Aviation Armor: The Armor has 4 blades which alligns with Vivid blade and focuses the Center Of Gravity at four points.
Watashi Machiya (Last name was Morita back then, I changed it for obvious reason.)
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Age: 14
Allignment: Neutral Good
He's Ichiban Aoi's Strongest Rival (Self-Proclaimed and it's one-sided rivalry). He's a skilled blader and the captain of Beigoma Academy and favourite student of his coach, Fubuki Sumiye.
Beyblade: Tsunami Forneus Giga Universe'-0. (This Bey only appeared in flashback)
DB Blade: Tsunami, Just like it's predecessor it has a round shaped and also has 12 counter-clockwise blades.
DB Core: Forneus: The motif is of the Shark devil, Forneus. The Design of the core bears no resemblance to it's predecessor. The Core showcases a Skull design of a Black Shark with it's glowing purple eyes.
Beyblade: Gloom Wendigo .10 Collapse Moment -D (Anti-Clockwise Defence Type + No change)
Kiwami Core: Wendigo, The Evil Spirit of Forest.
Kiwami Blade: Gloom, it has 10 blades, 3 on the upper side and lower side and 2 on the left and right side. Which are used to counter incoming attacks from opposing beys.
Kiwami Weight: 10, It has 5 edgy points on both the sides of Weight. Which keeps the balance and increases center of gravity.
Kiwami Armor: Dusk, It's a black armor and has a circular shape which signifies a full moon.
Neo Disk: Collpase, It's has a huge two-bladed free-spinning disc pointing downwards.
Driver: Moment, A Defense Type Driver with added grip due to a hemispherical inner tip and an outer guide ring that rotates freely and changes angle according to the amount of tilt.
Chikara Arami
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Age: 12
Allignment: Lawful Good
He's described as a genuis blader and is very popular in his hometown. He is the son of WBBA's chairman and is the owner of Noble Centaur.
Beyblade: Noble Centaur .3 Clutch Ambush -Spear
Kiwami Core: Centaur, a creature with the head, arms, and torso of a man and the body and legs of a horse.
Kiwami Blade: Noble, it has two Spear shaped blades made up of metal which makes it's attack powerful
Kiwami Weight: 3, A triangular shaped weight, which keeps the bey balanced.
Kiwami Armor: Spear, It's similar to the Noble Blade and is used to align with the Noble Blade.
Neo Disk: Clutch, The disk is 90% made up of rubber and 10% area is metal, It has 3 rubber blades which pushes the bey's attack to a next level.
Driver: Ambush, The inner area of the driver is rubber and the outer area has rough rubber, when the bey is launched straight down into the stadium, the bey's speed will be the same like an average attack type but when launched at an angle, the bey goes insanely fast.
Light Sawashiro
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Age: 15
Allignment: True Neutral
He's a member of Ultimate Six and champion of South America. He's playful towards the bladers he thinks have potential and is apathetic towards anyone he deems weak. He is convinced that he is the strongest in the world, which he technically is... maybe not, as he's ranked #2 in the whole world. He's one of the primary antagonist of this fic.
Beyblade: Sovereign Lucifer .11 Fallen Rebel -Dazzle
Kiwami Core: Lucifer, the fallen angel. (Clockwise Defence Type) The eyes of Luicfer are red and the core pattern is purple (Like the blue part in Spriggan core from DB). The core depicts Lucifer's Head and it's claws, the head is purple and the claws are red.
Kiwami Blade: Sovereign, The three Blades have a zig-zage shape divided into three layers. When the lock of the bey advances, additional three blades appears from the gaps, when they come in contact with the opposing bey, it re-locks itself, making the bey sort-of unburstable. Color Scheme of the blade is Black, the three blades are purple and the additional blades are red.
Neo Disc: Fallen, It features six blades with an upper shape which makes the opposing come in contact with the layer. (The disc is painted in Purple color)
Driver: Rebel, The Driver has two modes, first one is Defence Mode: It has a metal ball used to claim the center and hold on to it. Second one: Counter Mode: It has a rubber ball used to bounce on the stadium landing on to Opposing Beys and can also hold on to the center. (The Color Scheme of the driver is Dark Blue and the rubber ball is red in color)
Kiwami Weight: 11, A perfectly circular shape weight used to improve LAD and OWD.
Kiwami Armor: Dazzle, It increases the defense by focusing the center of gravity at six opposite points.
Arcs and Chapters:
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Arc 1: Startline: The Introductory Arc of Next Generation of Beyblade.
Chapter 1: The New Age Of Beyblade, Kiwami Era!
Chapter 2: Battle Against The Gloomy Spirit!
Chapter 3: A Devil's Legacy! Defeat The Demon King!
Chapter 4: Deepest Black! Midnight Apophis!
Arc 2: VS Apophis: A major threat has appeared against Ichiban, The Apophis Tournament begins and when he met Azef, he's convinced why Chikara warned him.
Chapter 5: A Dark and Gloomy Sky, Apophis Strikes!
Chapter 6: I'm Insanely Serious!
Chapter 7: Attack of the Demon King! D-Gear Shines!
Chapter 8: Valkyrie VS Belial!
Chapter 9: A One In A Million Chance! Ultimate Slash!
Chapter 10: The Demon King VS The Lord Of Night!
Chapter 11: The Curtain Falls! Valkyrie VS Apophis!
Chapter 12: A Vivid Scream! Defeat Apophis!
Arc 3: The Kiwami Festival: 128 Bladers Battle Royale!: Bladers all around the world participated in an event, all of them wanders around the big forest area until they find their opponent in a temple, the doors are closed when two bladers enters.
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