RE: Hollow's Creations Thread - GenesisBlader - Sep. 04, 2021
(Sep. 01, 2021 8:09 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: So, here's a system. You're free to use it but you will have to credit me:
Gemini System:
Gemini Chip: Similar to a GT chip. It has no teeth, only keeps everything together (for now, I might update it)
Gemini Layer Base: It can be divided into 2 parts, Gemini Blade and Gemini Base. They are placed on top of each other, like Infinite achilles and it's attachments, but the attachment is 50% of the layer base and can fit into every bey. They both have 2 teethand are locked together by the Gemini Chip., but Gemini Blades are normally 1 direction only, but you can still make dual spin Gemini Blades.
Gemini Base: The Gemini Base doesn't do contact with the opposing bey and can give to the blade different abilities (I.e. it coud make longinus have Savior's bound thing without nerfing the teeth) or add more weight. Normally, Gemini Bases are dual spin. It has the 2 first teeth. Sidenote: Their names are just their gimmicks, normally abbreviated into their first letters and are normally two words, for example:
Spring-Loaded = S-L, It's spring loaded both sides. / Impact Absorbtion = I-A, It absorbs impact. / Heavy weight = H-W, The name says it all.
Discs: normal discs
Drivers: Normal drivers
Naming: Gemini Base (abbreviation) - Gemini Blade - Gemini chip - Disc - Frame (If you want) - Driver
I.e. U-A Morning Apollo Sun Keep'
S-A Md.Artemis Mn. Op'
S-A Midnight Artemis Minus/Minimum Operate'?
RE: Hollow's Creations Thread - Hollowmind13 - Sep. 04, 2021
(Sep. 04, 2021 7:24 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: (Sep. 01, 2021 8:09 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: So, here's a system. You're free to use it but you will have to credit me:
Gemini System:
Gemini Chip: Similar to a GT chip. It has no teeth, only keeps everything together (for now, I might update it)
Gemini Layer Base: It can be divided into 2 parts, Gemini Blade and Gemini Base. They are placed on top of each other, like Infinite achilles and it's attachments, but the attachment is 50% of the layer base and can fit into every bey. They both have 2 teethand are locked together by the Gemini Chip., but Gemini Blades are normally 1 direction only, but you can still make dual spin Gemini Blades.
Gemini Base: The Gemini Base doesn't do contact with the opposing bey and can give to the blade different abilities (I.e. it coud make longinus have Savior's bound thing without nerfing the teeth) or add more weight. Normally, Gemini Bases are dual spin. It has the 2 first teeth. Sidenote: Their names are just their gimmicks, normally abbreviated into their first letters and are normally two words, for example:
Spring-Loaded = S-L, It's spring loaded both sides. / Impact Absorbtion = I-A, It absorbs impact. / Heavy weight = H-W, The name says it all.
Discs: normal discs
Drivers: Normal drivers
Naming: Gemini Base (abbreviation) - Gemini Blade - Gemini chip - Disc - Frame (If you want) - Driver
I.e. U-A Morning Apollo Sun Keep'
S-A Md.Artemis Mn. Op'
S-A Midnight Artemis Minus/Minimum Operate'?
Everything except the disc is right (go check Apollo disc for reference), you can try to guess the S-A gimmick if you want (it's two words)
RE: Hollow's Creations Thread - GenesisBlader - Sep. 04, 2021
(Sep. 04, 2021 7:33 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Sep. 04, 2021 7:24 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: S-A Midnight Artemis Minus/Minimum Operate'?
Everything except the disc is right (go check Apollo disc for reference), you can try to guess the S-A gimmick if you want (it's two words)
ohhh
S-A Midnight Artemis Moon Operate'
id what S-A means... hmmmmhmhmhmh
RE: Hollow's Creations Thread - LJ-Blader - Sep. 04, 2021
Smash Attack maybe?
RE: Hollow's Creations Thread - Hollowmind13 - Sep. 04, 2021
(Sep. 04, 2021 7:36 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: Smash Attack maybe?
Close, but remember, this part does not make contact at all, it only gives the blades a gimmick. (most of the time, exceptions exist)
but you got attack right, It's Spring Attack
This chapter introduces something, what it is? Also, you can see that I didn't put max effort into this, mostly because I need to read 2 books ASAP.
Chapter 8
Haha jokes on you I deleted it
UnseenBurst LegendJustice GenesisBlader tell me if it's ok in length.
Edit2: so a major part of the chapter bugged and the - are very close to the words, srry
RE: Hollow's Creations Thread - Hollowmind13 - Sep. 10, 2021
Who wants random beys with Greek letters? So I'm the only one...
(most likely canon)
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Πrophecy Πerceus Πrotect Πercevere -10 (any armor really)
DB Core - Πerseus: You know him, and I discovered it has this letter so that's cool.
DB Blade - Πrophecy: A right-spin, balance type Pentagon-ish Blade. It features 3 golden blades with ocean blue inside. It features a gimmick:
While spinning fast, the blades, due to centrifuge force, are sharper and hit harder. When it slows down, it assumes a rounder design and some rubber underneath the blades (basically reverse Geist Fafnir)
DB Armor - 10: good ol' 10. (Not gonna make armors for that, You can do any armor.)
DB disc - Πrotect: It is a medium weight disc with some IWD, for staying in the arena while also giving good attacks, it also features a downward slope akin to Tapered.
Driver - Πersevere: An attack type driver. It features a plate akin to Hold, but it has a semi sphere on the middle that is fixed in place. In theory, the plate would adapt to the stadium floor and make the bey speed up with minimal stamina loss. In reality however, due to it not properly free spin, the plate makes the bey go way faster around the stadium, possibly KO'ing itself.
Overall:
The combo features amazing KO resistance and some stamina thanks to the round design and rubber, it has also some good LAD. The driver makes the combo quite hard to control, but it is a good driver.
RE: Hollow's Creations Thread - Hollowmind13 - Sep. 11, 2021
Who wants another random bey with a greek letter? I'm still alone... Btw, Δ is the equivalent of D
(This one is the canon one to Resonance)
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Δillution Δionysus Δense Δrunk -2 (random armor again)
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DB Blade - Δillution: a dual-spin, attack type blade. It features an pentagon-ish shape with 5 blades. It features a gimmick: The blade has a similar thing to Revive Phoenix, on which the section that has the blades can "spin" and lock in place, activating a burst stopper. If the beys surpasses the area of the burst stopper, it regain clicks. A cool feature is that if you deactivate the burst stopper, the blades will spin, giving a powerful blow.
(1st click: Unaffected. 2nd click: Where the burst stopper can be deactivated. 3rd click: Where you regain clicks. 4th click: Bursts)
Color squeme and design: The five blades are "grape juice" purple, with some royal yellow inside. They are shaped as swords and do upper attacks. On the inner side, there's "plants" green vines.
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DB Core - Δionysus: A dual-spin DB Core. It doesn't feature a gimmick other than dual spin.
Color squeme and design: It's purple and have a head with two green eyes and golden laurels.
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DB Armor - 2: I feel like it isn't needed to make specific armors, they wouldn't expand the bey potential.
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DB Disc - Δried: A DB Disc that is hollowed on one side. It's unbalanced and has some IWD (which doesn't affect that much due to it's unbalanced nature)
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Performance tip - Δrunk: An attack type driver. It is rounder, akin to Trick, and is also an eletrical driver with Accel's tip. It features a gimmick besides being eletric:
It has 2 modes: Left and Right. On the right mode, it gives the bey a right-spin movement pattern, but can only fit in left-spin beys.
On left mode, it gives the bey a left-spin movement pattern, but can only fit in right-spin beys.
RE: Hollow's Creations Thread - Kiryu Kazuma - Sep. 11, 2021
(Sep. 11, 2021 5:02 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Who wants another random bey with a greek letter? I'm still alone... Btw, Δ is the equivalent of D
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Δillution Δionysus Δense Δrunk -2 (random armor again)
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DB Blade - Δillution: a dual-spin, attack type blade. It features an pentagon-ish shape with 5 blades. It features a gimmick: The blade has a similar thing to Revive Phoenix, on which the section that has the blades can "spin" and lock in place, activating a burst stopper. If the beys surpasses the area of the burst stopper, it regain clicks. A cool feature is that if you deactivate the burst stopper, the blades will spin, giving a powerful blow.
(1st click: Unaffected. 2nd click: Where the burst stopper can be deactivated. 3rd click: Where you regain clicks. 4th click: Bursts)
Color squeme and design: The five blades are "grape juice" purple, with some royal yellow inside. They are shaped as swords and do upper attacks. On the inner side, there's "plants" green vines.
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DB Core - Δionysus: A dual-spin DB Core. It doesn't feature a gimmick other than dual spin.
Color squeme and design: It's purple and have a head with two green eyes and golden laurels.
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DB Armor - 2: I feel like it isn't needed to make specific armors, they wouldn't expand the bey potential.
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DB Disc - Δried: A DB Disc that is hollowed on one side. It's unbalanced and has some IWD (which doesn't affect that much due to it's unbalanced nature)
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Performance tip - Δrunk: An attack type driver. It is rounder, akin to Trick, and is also an eletrical driver with Accel's tip. It features a gimmick besides being eletric:
It has 2 modes: Left and Right. On the right mode, it gives the bey a right-spin movement pattern, but can only fit in left-spin beys.
On left mode, it gives the bey a left-spin movement pattern, but can only fit in right-spin beys.
So.. It's drunk driver? It makes sense due to the nature of attack type beys lol. It's nice bey overall.
RE: Hollow's Creations Thread - Hollowmind13 - Sep. 11, 2021
(Sep. 11, 2021 5:11 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: (Sep. 11, 2021 5:02 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Who wants another random bey with a greek letter? I'm still alone... Btw, Δ is the equivalent of D
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Δillution Δionysus Δense Δrunk -2 (random armor again)
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DB Blade - Δillution: a dual-spin, attack type blade. It features an pentagon-ish shape with 5 blades. It features a gimmick: The blade has a similar thing to Revive Phoenix, on which the section that has the blades can "spin" and lock in place, activating a burst stopper. If the beys surpasses the area of the burst stopper, it regain clicks. A cool feature is that if you deactivate the burst stopper, the blades will spin, giving a powerful blow.
(1st click: Unaffected. 2nd click: Where the burst stopper can be deactivated. 3rd click: Where you regain clicks. 4th click: Bursts)
Color squeme and design: The five blades are "grape juice" purple, with some royal yellow inside. They are shaped as swords and do upper attacks. On the inner side, there's "plants" green vines.
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DB Core - Δionysus: A dual-spin DB Core. It doesn't feature a gimmick other than dual spin.
Color squeme and design: It's purple and have a head with two green eyes and golden laurels.
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DB Armor - 2: I feel like it isn't needed to make specific armors, they wouldn't expand the bey potential.
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DB Disc - Δried: A DB Disc that is hollowed on one side. It's unbalanced and has some IWD (which doesn't affect that much due to it's unbalanced nature)
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Performance tip - Δrunk: An attack type driver. It is rounder, akin to Trick, and is also an eletrical driver with Accel's tip. It features a gimmick besides being eletric:
It has 2 modes: Left and Right. On the right mode, it gives the bey a right-spin movement pattern, but can only fit in left-spin beys.
On left mode, it gives the bey a left-spin movement pattern, but can only fit in right-spin beys.
So.. It's drunk driver? It makes sense due to the nature of attack type beys lol. It's nice bey overall.
The name fits very well too. Dionysus is known with his connection to "Grape juice", and it's gimmick kinda reflect the effect of it.
I should mention that the driver has a very sensible sensor, which means that it is activated almost the entire battle.
RE: Hollow's Creations Thread - GenesisBlader - Sep. 11, 2021
(Sep. 11, 2021 5:16 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Sep. 11, 2021 5:11 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: So.. It's drunk driver? It makes sense due to the nature of attack type beys lol. It's nice bey overall.
The name fits very well too. Dionysus is known with his connection to "Grape juice", and it's gimmick kinda reflect the effect of it.
I should mention that the driver has a very sensible sensor, which means that it is activated almost the entire battle.
oh yeah and dionysus is the god of the drunken i think
RE: Hollow's Creations Thread - Hollowmind13 - Sep. 12, 2021
(edit: Ignore this for now)
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Λethal Λamia Λarge Λast -2 (any armor thing)
DB Blade - Lethal: A right spin, defense type blade. It features a square-ish overall shape, that gives recoil. It features a gimmick:
It's spring-loaded inwards, not only absorbing hits but also giving nice counter attacks.
Color squeme and design: it's gray, with white outlines and dark green details.
DB Core - Lamia: A right spin core. Features 3 teeth: 1 weak, 1 average and 1 above average.
Color squeme and design: also gray, and has a snake-like dark green head in the middle with no eyes (black).
DB armor - 2: Just a random armor.
DB Disc - Λarge: This disc features a wide metal circular perimeter covered in plastic going outwards, surpassing the layer a bit. (Similar to Yell on Dual layers)
Color: silver and red (plastic)
Performance tip - Λast: A defense driver. It features an Orbit-like tip, except it has a spring loaded plate similar to kick but, unlike Kick, it is spring loaded inwards. In theory, it would prevent KO's.
Color: white
RE: Hollow's Creations Thread - Hollowmind13 - Sep. 25, 2021
Oh yeah, I forgot about this. I'm just going to follow the trend and add products, don't judge me.
6th August:
Compass Magnesium Thin Rush 1S Sen - Booster (Beyjitzu system)
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Beyjitzu standard BeyLauncher - Booster (Beyjitzu system)
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Scarab Khepri Strain Bearing .Heavy - Random Booster
Prize bey: Scarab Khepri Strain Bearing .Heavy (DB)
Random beys: Pirate Poseidon Rush 2S Go (Beyjitzu)
Wither Ashura Convert High-Keep 4D Gen (Beyjitzu)
Kaiser Kerbeus Central Orbit (Dual layer)
Rage Fafnir 6Wall Just 4A (sparking1)
Peacebringer Hephaestus Drain 1A' Sou (Beyjitzu) .
11th September:
Sea Curse Triple Booster: Curse Charybdis Universe-metal 3D; Harsh Scylla Destroy' 9A; Swirl Lucius Thin Flood 1B
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Swirl Charybdis Polish' Depth 4D - Booster (sparking1)
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Wind Oxygen Turbine 8AN (8 Atomic Number)
RE: Hollow's Beyblade Creation Thread (Finally revived) - Hollowmind13 - Dec. 11, 2021
Resonance main post. This is where the description, chapters, beys, etc. will go I guess.
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1 year after Beyjitzu. Not canon. DB exists. Ignoring the whole head-trauma Percy arc that Unseen thought off.
Max now is Meg btw.
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Characters
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Megan 'Meg' Hill (Protag)
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Sarah Rellish
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Callum Rellish
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Kevin Drewitt
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Clio Aberra
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Nikolai Ivanovich Lisov
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Beys
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Wayward Magnesium Thin Polar 1S Sen (Beyjitzu)
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Waterspout Scylla
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Maelstrom Charybdis
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Scarab Khepri Strain Bearing' -0
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Pressure Chaos Abyssal IV-Empty
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Nocnitsa
Chapters (names, and where to find in the thread)
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The Assembly system (Burst):
Naming convention: Blade piece (or simply Blade) / Center piece (or simply Center) / Driver / Chassis / Frame
Chassis are named by roman numbers (I, II, III, ...), and can be light or heavy chassis. Light chassis can have Frames, while Heavy ones can't.
RE: Hollow's Beyblade fic thread (Dead for now) - Hollowmind13 - May. 14, 2022
Useless stuff about myself, ignore
'UnseenBurst' LegendJustice' 'GenesisBlader' LJ-Blader'
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You guys are the OGs so I would appreciate if you guys read this.
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'beansworth'
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You probably didn't even knew this thread was a thing up until this ping, now you know. This entire post is not an apologizing post or anything, it is just for my own sake because it has been bothering me for quite some time.
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So, funny pings are back. You guys (except beansworth) were the ones probably remember this place and also may have noticed that I purged all the chapters. If not, now you do.
For those new such as beansworth that may or may not read this post, Resonance is my beyblade fanfiction that is beysically a spin-off to Beyjitzu by UnseenBurst. The way my brain works is that anything I read or watch (as long as it isn't literal trash) can be engaging and even top tier, that's what I call good imagination.
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"But Hollow, what does your imagination matter here? Isn't the whole deal about how you abandoned it?" - the dude
"Abandoned" is a strong word, I'd say it "moved to the background of my life". If you notice, my last post was quite a while and that's due to some impostor syndrome stuff that I have. My imagination was what started this thread, and I admit I created it a bit too early.
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I'm what's known as a socially awkward person. Not bad per say but makes transmiting an idea become harder, which is kinda the main thing you're doing with writing.
This is the hollow cycle:
{Writes - Reads - Rewrites - Reads - Thinks it is trash - Deletes the chapter and goes on a hiatus - Back at the beggining}
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"So the fic is dead, right?" - same dude
Not at all, I'm still kinda writting it but the aforementioned problems that I have with myself makes it a slow process. Best case scenario I finish the entire fic, write it all down and THEN post the chapters here, 1 per week. Worst case scenario you guys will never hear from Resonance again
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"Then will you start writing again?" - yet again, the dude
Don't expect me to write anytime soon, if at all. I am unpredictable but I can assure you that for the entirety of 2022 it is unlikely that I'll post a single chapter (edit: Got it right ^-^). Plus I'm working on GX which by itself is a huge project. Granted it is a group project and I have awesome people such as PinkRose, ColdFlames13, Kiryu Kazuma, CinderCast and Reshiwam/Tenma, but it still takes a huge chunk of me (GX ended up never getting finished anyways, Pink (the writer) left the community)
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"You're just blamming it on your 'problems' when it is mostly your fault" - myself
Yeah... I should have thought more about it before trying it out. Too late now, all I can do is learn from my mistakes. >
I just wanted to clear out anything related to Resonance, I also updated the thread's name accordingly to the status of the fic. It was psychologically taxing to write this (Haha I love anxiety).
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