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RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - LegendJustice - Aug. 28, 2021
(Aug. 28, 2021 12:44 AM)Beykid2.0 Wrote:(Aug. 28, 2021 12:23 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: I edited it to a Kawmi bey
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Yeah...
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 28, 2021
Chapter 5:
Spoiler (Click to View)
Chapter 5: Thunderbolt! Starlight Zeus!
Ben: I'm gonna make you cry this time for sure!
Zeno (Came near the stadium): I wanna join in too.
Ben (Looks at Zeno): I'll take you on, when I bea-
Zeno: The battle would be more fun with three beys on the stadium... (Smiles) I wonder who'll steal the spotlight out of the three beys...
Watashi (Smirks): I guess you meant to say four!
Fubuki: A battle royale?
Ichiban (Smiles): That would be more fun!
Zeno (Shows his bey): This is... Starlight Zeus!
Ichiban (Gasps): A stamina type....
Ben (Takes his shoot stance): Belial is gonna make all of you cry!
Zeno (Flips his hair): Crying is for kids, shorty.
Ichiban: Icarus will send all of you flying!
Watashi (looks at Ben and switches to lower mode): (I won't let you get the better of me this time!)
Zeno: (Switches to Upper mode)
Fubuki: ALright then. Ready, set!
"3! 2! 1!"
Watashi: (Catches the launcher with his right hand)
"Go... Shoot!!"
(Zeus quickly takes the center)
Watashi: Awaken your inner demon! Wendigo!
(Wendigo rides along the edge of stadium and rams on Belial)
Ben: Belial!
(Belial counters by leaning it's driver with the help of V-gear)
Ben: Is that all you can do?
Watashi (with a stunned look): Tch!
Ichiban: Amaze Strike!!
(Icarus leans on it's driver, generating sparks and rushes towards Zeus)
Zeno (Smiles): That attack won't work on Zeus.
(Icarus hits Zeus with all it's force, but couldn't move Zeus from the center)
Ichiban (Gasps): It didn't even budged!
(Wendigo's driver hits the edge of the stadium)
Watashi: Moment Crash!
(Wendigo Crashes on Belial's Nexa disk)
Ben: None of your trick will work on Belial!
(Belial's uses it's disk and starts to absorb spin from Wendigo)
Watashi (Gasps): What the?!
Ben: (Laughs)
Ichiban: Icarus!
(Icarus crashes on Belial and moves both of them away)
(Wendigo hits Zeus and bursts, and moves it away from the center)
Watashi: No way...!
Zeno (Smiles): Time for the finishing blow!
Ben (Looks at Ichiban): Come at me with all you've got!
Ichiban (Smiles): You bet!
(Icarus and Belial rushes towards each other, while Zeus circles around the stadium)
(Both Ichiban and Ben screams at the same time)
- Aviate Slash!
- True Oni Bomber!
Zeno (Unleashes his sparkling gold aura): Blow them away, Zeus!
(Zeus appears from the aura, swinging his thunderbolt shaped staff)
Zeno (Snaps his finger): Starlight Smash!
(Icarus and Belial were about to clash, but Zeus interupts and rams on both of them and sends them flying)
(Icarus bursts and Belial got knocked out of the stadium)
Ichiban (Makes a angry look): I can't believe thissssss!! (Fells down on the ground)
Fubuki (Stares at Belial): (Looks like the lock of the bey is more secure now...)
Fubuki: The winner of the battle royale is Zeno Syagrios!
Ben (Looks at Zeno): It was just a fluke, I would've burst Icarus if it weren't for you!
Zeno (Smiles): Then how about you take me on again?
Ben: This time I'm really gonna make ya cry! (Takes his shoot stance)
Zeno (Takes his shoot stance): You can't even move Zeus from the center.
Ichiban (Crosses his hands): I wanna battle too!!
Watashi (looks at Ichiban): He must have taken an interest on Belial...
Fubuki: Belial just have so many abilities... There's no one who won't be interested in this kind of bey.
Fubuki: Anyways, First Battle! Ready, Set!
"3! 2! 1! Go.... Shoot!"
(Zeus circles around the outer edge and quickly takes the center)
Ben (Covers himself with his cape): Venture Shoot!
(Belial lands a barrage of fierceful attacks but couldn't move Zeus from the center)
Zeno (Smiles): There's no way Belial can move Zeus even an inch!
Ben: Belial is just getting started!
(Belial's MD armor shines)
Ben: True Oni Bomber!
(Belial lands a devastating blow on Zeus and moves it away from the center)
Ichiban (Gasps): It moved?!
Zeno (Smirks and snaps his finger): Starlight Smash!
Ben: One more time! True Oni Bomber!
(Zeus and Ben clashes at the center and both gets blown away, both Belial and Zeus began to spin slower)
Ben: (Gasps)
Zeno: You can't beat Zeus in terms of stamina! Starlight Shoot!
(Starlight Blade's Metal balls moves outwards)
(Belial rans out of stamina and stops spinnng)
Ben: Tch!
Fubuki: Starlight Zeus! Spin finish, Zeno Syagrios earns one point!
Ben (Picks up Belial): It's not gonna happen again! (He Switches the Nexa Disk to Free Spin Mode)
Fubuki: Second Battle, Ready Set!
"3! 2! 1! Go.... Shoot!"
(Zeus circles around the outer edge and takes the center)
Ben: This time.. I'm gonna finish this with one blow! (His bright black aura erupts as he said these words)
Ben: Belial! (Belial appears from the bright black aura)
Ben: True Oni Bomber!!
Zeno (Unleashes his sparkling gold aura): Zeus!
(Zeus appears from the aura, swinging his thunderbolt staff)
(Belial lands a powerful blow and knocks Zeus away from the stadium)
Zeno (Snaps his finger): Starlight Smash!
(Zeus circles around the stadium and hits Belial's Disk)
Ben: Nexa Spin!
(Belial counters the attack with his nexa disk and sends Zeus out of the stadium)
Zeno: (Gasps)
Fubuki: Oni Belial! Spin Finish, now the score is 1-1!
Ben (Laughs): You see? That's Belial's true power!
Zeno ('s phone makes a beep sound): (He checks his phone) Oh we're in South Korea right now.
Fubuki: No need to be worry. It's not our first destina-
Zeno (Picks up his bag): That's not it. I have to perform a song there.
Ichiban (Looks at Zeno): A song?
Ben (Screams): What about our battle?
Zeno: Sorry, shorty. But I'm in a bit of hurry.
(He climbs the railing of the air deck)
Zeno (Looks down at the stage): My destination is there.
Ichiban (Gasps): Aren't you gonna...
Watashi: Fell!?
Zeno (Smiles): That's the main reason I'm standing here. Bye Bye now!
(He jumps from the railing and fells down)
~ At The Concert ~
Random guy 1 (Looks at the entrance): I've waited for like 2 years for this moment! I'm finally gonna meet Zeno and shake his hand for sure!
Random guy 2: I want his autograph! And I'm gonna get it no matter what!
Random guy 1 (Looks at the sky): (Gasps)
Random guy 2 (Looks at the other guy): What's the matter?
Random guy 1 (Points at the sky): L..look up!
Random guy 2 (Looks at the sky): (Gasps)
Zeno (While wearing a parachute): Here I come everyone!
Zeno (Lands on the stage): (Makes a dab pose) Here I am!
Random guy 1 (Cries): My day... is ruined..
Random guy 2 (Looks on the ground): My autograph...
~At the air deck~
Ichiban (Looks at the Zeno): He's really an amazing guy!
Watashi: Or you could say crazy....
Fubuki (Smiles): It's not the first time since he pulled off a stunt like that.
Ben: That's not fair... He left before our battle could finish!
Fubuki (Smiles): You'll be able to battle him later.
Watashi: That's right! Kiwami League is gonna began in no time.
Fubuki: Let's get inside, it's getting dark.
(Everyone gets inside)
~Several hours later~
Fubuki: I guess you guys should sleep now. Tommorow is a big day. (He leaves)
Ichiban (Gets on his bed): What do ya think where will be our first destination?
Watashi (Gets on his bed): I don't know... sleep I'm very tired right now.
Ichiban (Looks at Ben): When are you planning to remove this mask?
Ben (While lying on his bed): ... Never!
Ichiban: This guy is really weird... (Looks at Watashi): What do you thi-
Watashi (while sleeping): (Snores)
Ichiban: Looks like I should sleep as well....
Ichiban (Picks up Icarus): I can't wait for tommorow, Icarus!
(Icarus shines)
[To Be Continued]
Next Chapter: Furious Blow! Noble Centaur!
Plus I'm not gonna take entries anymore cuz I've planned the plot from start to finish.
Here are all the Beys which are gonna appear in Kiwami
Spoiler (Click to View)
Aviate Icarus, Oni Belial, Ember Hyperion, Noble Centaur, Icicle Longinus (Attack)
Iris Mayura, Gloom Wendigo, Sovereign Lucifer, Twister Wyvern (Defense)
Starlight Zeus, Plasma Gilgamesh, Magenta Fafnir, Doomsday Ragnaruk (Stamina)
Mortal Spriggan, Legacy Dragon, Dual Yggdragon, Sovereign Astrios (Balance)
Evolutions:
Victory Icarus, Lightning Centaur and Star Astrios.
(Aug. 27, 2021 7:31 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: I'll let you choose the moves. But I can add them if you want.
Character:
.Spoiler (Click to View)Name: William Thompson
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Appearance: He has dark brown hair with purple on the end, green eyes and glasses (It's not a stereotype I promise). He wears a purple T-shirt with golden details, on the middle it has golden camera lens with the text "Smile! You're being watched." Under it. He also wears green jeans and purple shoes.
Personality: His social skills are really bad, but he's also very kind and loves blading. He is very obedient to the rules (of basically anything). He is very careful and can't do anything without a plan or instructions in mind. He tries to be away from people, but he doesn't mind being near them. He is so careful that he can't improvise even by a little. When he's battling, he always tries to surprise the opponents, making them lose focus and then increasing his winning chance. (kinda lazy bio, but that's what I can do for now. you can edit minor things to match your writing style or the plot)
Bey:
Spoiler (Click to View)Kiwami Core - Wyvern: It has 3 medium teeth and 1 tall teeth at the beginning. The motif is the flying dragon, Wyvern.
Kiwami Weight - Tungsten (Tn): It's a Kiwami weight made entirely of Tungsten. It is hollowed but still can give a big amount of weight due to Tungsten density (I think). It gives CWD. Color: smae as Terrraria tungsten.
Kiwami Blade - Twister: A right spin, defense type blade. It features 8 blades that can free-spin, when the armor is inside, the blades lock up, increasing attack. Four out of these blades have rubber. Twister free spins to both sides, unlike Jet. Color: Purple, green and some gold.
Kiwami Armor - Wind: Wind is a average weight armor and features rubber around it and is only compatible with some Kiwami beys, including Twister Wyvern. When put outside, It gives the blade rubber (and on Twister, it makes the layer completely circular). When put inside, it makes friction with the disc tabs, improving burst resistance. Color: same as Terraria tungsten, with purple rubber.
Neo Discs - either Π or π : π is a Kiwami disc. It is one of the heaviest discs, having 44.95g. It shape is similar to Ring, except bulkier and supporting high and low mode. It has the biggest OWD in the beyblade meta.
Driver - Exact: Exact features a sharp tip (Like awakened Just) and a outer ring around it, akin to it's precessor Just. Unlike Just, the free-spinning ring has a bearing and has rubber. In theory, when it makes contact with the stadium, it would reduce stamina loss, increase LAD and make the bey more stationary. The sharp tip is made out of metal to minimize stamina loss. The bey cannot scrape and/or make disc contact with the floor, due to Exact plate diameter.
Overall performance: With Armor out: Can absorb attacks and can't spin equalize. Smashing is it's weakness.
With armor in: Can spin equalize (does not have rubber, but a round design) and Can't absorb attacks. Trying to burst it is useless, but you can try outspin it (if you have enough stamina) or hit from above when Exact tilts, making it lose more balance.
Ok I'll decide the moves, but can I change Tungsten weight's name to 10 or 14?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Hollowmind13 - Aug. 28, 2021
(Aug. 28, 2021 12:03 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Chapter 15:Nice chapter, and sure. But it's whole gimmick is still the density? (It can be normal weighted, but i'd like if it was dense)
Spoiler (Click to View)
Chapter 6: Thunderbolt! Starlight Zeus!
Ben: I'm gonna make you cry this time for sure!
Zeno (Came near the stadium): I wanna join in too.
Ben (Looks at Zeno): I'll take you on, when I bea-
Zeno: The battle would be more fun with three beys on the stadium... (Smiles) I wonder who'll steal the spotlight out of the three beys...
Watashi (Smirks): I guess you meant to say four!
Fubuki: A battle royale?
Ichiban (Smiles): That would be more fun!
Zeno (Shows his bey): This is... Starlight Zeus!
Ichiban (Gasps): A stamina type....
Ben (Takes his shoot stance): Belial is gonna make all of you cry!
Zeno (Flips his hair): Crying is for kids, shorty.
Ichiban: Icarus will send all of you flying!
Watashi (looks at Ben and switches to lower mode): (I won't let you get the better of me this time!)
Zeno: (Switches to Upper mode)
Fubuki: ALright then. Ready, set!
"3! 2! 1!"
Watashi: (Catches the launcher with his right hand)
"Go... Shoot!!"
(Zeus quickly takes the center)
Watashi: Awaken your inner demon! Wendigo!
(Wendigo rides along the edge of stadium and rams on Belial)
Ben: Belial!
(Belial counters by leaning it's driver with the help of V-gear)
Ben: Is that all you can do?
Watashi (with a stunned look): Tch!
Ichiban: Amaze Strike!!
(Icarus leans on it's driver, generating sparks and rushes towards Zeus)
Zeno (Smiles): That attack won't work on Zeus.
(Icarus hits Zeus with all it's force, but couldn't move Zeus from the center)
Ichiban (Gasps): It didn't even budged!
(Wendigo's driver hits the edge of the stadium)
Watashi: Moment Crash!
(Wendigo Crashes on Belial's Nexa disk)
Ben: None of your trick will work on Belial!
(Belial's uses it's disk and starts to absorb spin from Wendigo)
Watashi (Gasps): What the?!
Ben: (Laughs)
Ichiban: Icarus!
(Icarus crashes on Belial and moves both of them away)
(Wendigo hits Zeus and bursts, and moves it away from the center)
Watashi: No way...!
Zeno (Smiles): Time for the finishing blow!
Ben (Looks at Ichiban): Come at me with all you've got!
Ichiban (Smiles): You bet!
(Icarus and Belial rushes towards each other, while Zeus circles around the stadium)
(Both Ichiban and Ben screams at the same time)
- Aviate Slash!
- True Oni Bomber!
Zeno (Unleashes his sparkling gold aura): Blow them away, Zeus!
(Zeus appears from the aura, swinging his thunderbolt shaped staff)
Zeno (Snaps his finger): Starlight Smash!
(Icarus and Belial were about to clash, but Zeus interupts and rams on both of them and sends them flying)
(Icarus bursts and Belial got knocked out of the stadium)
Ichiban (Makes a angry look): I can't believe thissssss!! (Fells down on the ground)
Fubuki (Stares at Belial): (Looks like the lock of the bey is more secure now...)
Fubuki: The winner of the battle royale is Zeno Syagrios!
Ben (Looks at Zeno): It was just a fluke, I would've burst Icarus if it weren't for you!
Zeno (Smiles): Then how about you take me on again?
Ben: This time I'm really gonna make ya cry! (Takes his shoot stance)
Zeno (Takes his shoot stance): You can't even move Zeus from the center.
Ichiban (Crosses his hands): I wanna battle too!!
Watashi (looks at Ichiban): He must have taken an interest on Belial...
Fubuki: Belial just have so many abilities... There's no one who won't be interested in this kind of bey.
Fubuki: Anyways, First Battle! Ready, Set!
"3! 2! 1! Go.... Shoot!"
(Zeus circles around the outer edge and quickly takes the center)
Ben (Covers himself with his cape): Venture Shoot!
(Belial lands a barrage of fierceful attacks but couldn't move Zeus from the center)
Zeno (Smiles): There's no way Belial can move Zeus even an inch!
Ben: Belial is just getting started!
(Belial's MD armor shines)
Ben: True Oni Bomber!
(Belial lands a devastating blow on Zeus and moves it away from the center)
Ichiban (Gasps): It moved?!
Zeno (Smirks and snaps his finger): Starlight Smash!
Ben: One more time! True Oni Bomber!
(Zeus and Ben clashes at the center and both gets blown away, both Belial and Zeus began to spin slower)
Ben: (Gasps)
Zeno: You can't beat Zeus in terms of stamina! Starlight Shoot!
(Starlight Blade's Metal balls moves outwards)
(Belial rans out of stamina and stops spinnng)
Ben: Tch!
Fubuki: Starlight Zeus! Spin finish, Zeno Syagrios earns one point!
Ben (Picks up Belial): It's not gonna happen again! (He Switches the Nexa Disk to Free Spin Mode)
Fubuki: Second Battle, Ready Set!
"3! 2! 1! Go.... Shoot!"
(Zeus circles around the outer edge and takes the center)
Ben: This time.. I'm gonna finish this with one blow! (His bright black aura erupts as he said these words)
Ben: Belial! (Belial appears from the bright black aura)
Ben: True Oni Bomber!!
Zeno (Unleashes his sparkling gold aura): Zeus!
(Zeus appears from the aura, swinging his thunderbolt staff)
(Belial lands a powerful blow and knocks Zeus away from the stadium)
Zeno (Snaps his finger): Starlight Smash!
(Zeus circles around the stadium and hits Belial's Disk)
Ben: Nexa Spin!
(Belial counters the attack with his nexa disk and sends Zeus out of the stadium)
Zeno: (Gasps)
Fubuki: Oni Belial! Spin Finish, now the score is 1-1!
Ben (Laughs): You see? That's Belial's true power!
Zeno ('s phone makes a beep sound): (He checks his phone) Oh we're in South Korea right now.
Fubuki: No need to be worry. It's not our first destina-
Zeno (Picks up his bag): That's not it. I have to perform a song there.
Ichiban (Looks at Zeno): A song?
Ben (Screams): What about our battle?
Zeno: Sorry, shorty. But I'm in a bit of hurry.
(He climbs the railing of the air deck)
Zeno (Looks down at the stage): My destination is there.
Ichiban (Gasps): Aren't you gonna...
Watashi: Fell!?
Zeno (Smiles): That's the main reason I'm standing here. Bye Bye now!
(He jumps from the railing and fells down)
~ At The Concert ~
Random guy 1 (Looks at the entrance): I've waited for like 2 years for this moment! I'm finally gonna meet Zeno and shake his hand for sure!
Random guy 2: I want his autograph! And I'm gonna get it no matter what!
Random guy 1 (Looks at the sky): (Gasps)
Random guy 2 (Looks at the other guy): What's the matter?
Random guy 1 (Points at the sky): L..look up!
Random guy 2 (Looks at the sky): (Gasps)
Zeno (While wearing a parachute): Here I come everyone!
Zeno (Lands on the stage): (Makes a dab pose) Here I am!
Random guy 1 (Cries): My day... is ruined..
Random guy 2 (Looks on the ground): My autograph...
~At the air deck~
Ichiban (Looks at the Zeno): He's really an amazing guy!
Watashi: Or you could say crazy....
Fubuki (Smiles): It's not the first time since he pulled off a stunt like that.
Ben: That's not fair... He left before our battle could finish!
Fubuki (Smiles): You'll be able to battle him later.
Watashi: That's right! Kiwami League is gonna began in no time.
Fubuki: Let's get inside, it's getting dark.
(Everyone gets inside)
~Several hours later~
Fubuki: I guess you guys should sleep now. Tommorow is a big day. (He leaves)
Ichiban (Gets on his bed): What do ya think where will be our first destination?
Watashi (Gets on his bed): I don't know... sleep I'm very tired right now.
Ichiban (Looks at Ben): When are you planning to remove this mask?
Ben (While lying on his bed): ... Never!
Ichiban: This guy is really weird... (Looks at Watashi): What do you thi-
Watashi (while sleeping): (Snores)
Ichiban: Looks like I should sleep as well....
Ichiban (Picks up Icarus): I can't wait for tommorow, Icarus!
(Icarus shines)
[To Be Continued]
Next Chapter: Furious Blow! Noble Centaur!
Plus I'm not gonna take entries anymore cuz I've planned the plot from start to finish.
Here are all the Beys which are gonna appear in Kiwami
Spoiler (Click to View)
Aviate Icarus, Oni Belial, Ember Hyperion, Noble Centaur, Icicle Longinus (Attack)
Iris Mayura, Gloom Wendigo, Sovereign Lucifer, Twister Wyvern (Defense)
Starlight Zeus, Plasma Gilgamesh, Magenta Fafnir, Doomsday Ragnaruk (Stamina)
Mortal Spriggan, Legacy Dragon, Dual Yggdragon, Sovereign Astrios (Balance)
Evolutions:
Victory Icarus, Lightning Centaur and Star Astrios.
(Aug. 27, 2021 7:31 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: I'll let you choose the moves. But I can add them if you want.
Character:
.Spoiler (Click to View)Name: William Thompson
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Appearance: He has dark brown hair with purple on the end, green eyes and glasses (It's not a stereotype I promise). He wears a purple T-shirt with golden details, on the middle it has golden camera lens with the text "Smile! You're being watched." Under it. He also wears green jeans and purple shoes.
Personality: His social skills are really bad, but he's also very kind and loves blading. He is very obedient to the rules (of basically anything). He is very careful and can't do anything without a plan or instructions in mind. He tries to be away from people, but he doesn't mind being near them. He is so careful that he can't improvise even by a little. When he's battling, he always tries to surprise the opponents, making them lose focus and then increasing his winning chance. (kinda lazy bio, but that's what I can do for now. you can edit minor things to match your writing style or the plot)
Bey:
Spoiler (Click to View)Kiwami Core - Wyvern: It has 3 medium teeth and 1 tall teeth at the beginning. The motif is the flying dragon, Wyvern.
Kiwami Weight - Tungsten (Tn): It's a Kiwami weight made entirely of Tungsten. It is hollowed but still can give a big amount of weight due to Tungsten density (I think). It gives CWD. Color: smae as Terrraria tungsten.
Kiwami Blade - Twister: A right spin, defense type blade. It features 8 blades that can free-spin, when the armor is inside, the blades lock up, increasing attack. Four out of these blades have rubber. Twister free spins to both sides, unlike Jet. Color: Purple, green and some gold.
Kiwami Armor - Wind: Wind is a average weight armor and features rubber around it and is only compatible with some Kiwami beys, including Twister Wyvern. When put outside, It gives the blade rubber (and on Twister, it makes the layer completely circular). When put inside, it makes friction with the disc tabs, improving burst resistance. Color: same as Terraria tungsten, with purple rubber.
Neo Discs - either Π or π : π is a Kiwami disc. It is one of the heaviest discs, having 44.95g. It shape is similar to Ring, except bulkier and supporting high and low mode. It has the biggest OWD in the beyblade meta.
Driver - Exact: Exact features a sharp tip (Like awakened Just) and a outer ring around it, akin to it's precessor Just. Unlike Just, the free-spinning ring has a bearing and has rubber. In theory, when it makes contact with the stadium, it would reduce stamina loss, increase LAD and make the bey more stationary. The sharp tip is made out of metal to minimize stamina loss. The bey cannot scrape and/or make disc contact with the floor, due to Exact plate diameter.
Overall performance: With Armor out: Can absorb attacks and can't spin equalize. Smashing is it's weakness.
With armor in: Can spin equalize (does not have rubber, but a round design) and Can't absorb attacks. Trying to burst it is useless, but you can try outspin it (if you have enough stamina) or hit from above when Exact tilts, making it lose more balance.
Ok I'll decide the moves, but can I change Tungsten weight's name to 10 or 14?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 28, 2021
nice chapter! also cant wait for ichibans newfound rival to enter the stage!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 28, 2021
(Aug. 28, 2021 2:10 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: nice chapter! also cant wait for ichibans newfound rival to enter the stage!
He's not a new rival lol
(Aug. 28, 2021 1:55 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:(Aug. 28, 2021 12:03 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Chapter 15:Nice chapter, and sure. But it's whole gimmick is still the density? (It can be normal weighted, but i'd like if it was dense)
Spoiler (Click to View)
Chapter 6: Thunderbolt! Starlight Zeus!
Ben: I'm gonna make you cry this time for sure!
Zeno (Came near the stadium): I wanna join in too.
Ben (Looks at Zeno): I'll take you on, when I bea-
Zeno: The battle would be more fun with three beys on the stadium... (Smiles) I wonder who'll steal the spotlight out of the three beys...
Watashi (Smirks): I guess you meant to say four!
Fubuki: A battle royale?
Ichiban (Smiles): That would be more fun!
Zeno (Shows his bey): This is... Starlight Zeus!
Ichiban (Gasps): A stamina type....
Ben (Takes his shoot stance): Belial is gonna make all of you cry!
Zeno (Flips his hair): Crying is for kids, shorty.
Ichiban: Icarus will send all of you flying!
Watashi (looks at Ben and switches to lower mode): (I won't let you get the better of me this time!)
Zeno: (Switches to Upper mode)
Fubuki: ALright then. Ready, set!
"3! 2! 1!"
Watashi: (Catches the launcher with his right hand)
"Go... Shoot!!"
(Zeus quickly takes the center)
Watashi: Awaken your inner demon! Wendigo!
(Wendigo rides along the edge of stadium and rams on Belial)
Ben: Belial!
(Belial counters by leaning it's driver with the help of V-gear)
Ben: Is that all you can do?
Watashi (with a stunned look): Tch!
Ichiban: Amaze Strike!!
(Icarus leans on it's driver, generating sparks and rushes towards Zeus)
Zeno (Smiles): That attack won't work on Zeus.
(Icarus hits Zeus with all it's force, but couldn't move Zeus from the center)
Ichiban (Gasps): It didn't even budged!
(Wendigo's driver hits the edge of the stadium)
Watashi: Moment Crash!
(Wendigo Crashes on Belial's Nexa disk)
Ben: None of your trick will work on Belial!
(Belial's uses it's disk and starts to absorb spin from Wendigo)
Watashi (Gasps): What the?!
Ben: (Laughs)
Ichiban: Icarus!
(Icarus crashes on Belial and moves both of them away)
(Wendigo hits Zeus and bursts, and moves it away from the center)
Watashi: No way...!
Zeno (Smiles): Time for the finishing blow!
Ben (Looks at Ichiban): Come at me with all you've got!
Ichiban (Smiles): You bet!
(Icarus and Belial rushes towards each other, while Zeus circles around the stadium)
(Both Ichiban and Ben screams at the same time)
- Aviate Slash!
- True Oni Bomber!
Zeno (Unleashes his sparkling gold aura): Blow them away, Zeus!
(Zeus appears from the aura, swinging his thunderbolt shaped staff)
Zeno (Snaps his finger): Starlight Smash!
(Icarus and Belial were about to clash, but Zeus interupts and rams on both of them and sends them flying)
(Icarus bursts and Belial got knocked out of the stadium)
Ichiban (Makes a angry look): I can't believe thissssss!! (Fells down on the ground)
Fubuki (Stares at Belial): (Looks like the lock of the bey is more secure now...)
Fubuki: The winner of the battle royale is Zeno Syagrios!
Ben (Looks at Zeno): It was just a fluke, I would've burst Icarus if it weren't for you!
Zeno (Smiles): Then how about you take me on again?
Ben: This time I'm really gonna make ya cry! (Takes his shoot stance)
Zeno (Takes his shoot stance): You can't even move Zeus from the center.
Ichiban (Crosses his hands): I wanna battle too!!
Watashi (looks at Ichiban): He must have taken an interest on Belial...
Fubuki: Belial just have so many abilities... There's no one who won't be interested in this kind of bey.
Fubuki: Anyways, First Battle! Ready, Set!
"3! 2! 1! Go.... Shoot!"
(Zeus circles around the outer edge and quickly takes the center)
Ben (Covers himself with his cape): Venture Shoot!
(Belial lands a barrage of fierceful attacks but couldn't move Zeus from the center)
Zeno (Smiles): There's no way Belial can move Zeus even an inch!
Ben: Belial is just getting started!
(Belial's MD armor shines)
Ben: True Oni Bomber!
(Belial lands a devastating blow on Zeus and moves it away from the center)
Ichiban (Gasps): It moved?!
Zeno (Smirks and snaps his finger): Starlight Smash!
Ben: One more time! True Oni Bomber!
(Zeus and Ben clashes at the center and both gets blown away, both Belial and Zeus began to spin slower)
Ben: (Gasps)
Zeno: You can't beat Zeus in terms of stamina! Starlight Shoot!
(Starlight Blade's Metal balls moves outwards)
(Belial rans out of stamina and stops spinnng)
Ben: Tch!
Fubuki: Starlight Zeus! Spin finish, Zeno Syagrios earns one point!
Ben (Picks up Belial): It's not gonna happen again! (He Switches the Nexa Disk to Free Spin Mode)
Fubuki: Second Battle, Ready Set!
"3! 2! 1! Go.... Shoot!"
(Zeus circles around the outer edge and takes the center)
Ben: This time.. I'm gonna finish this with one blow! (His bright black aura erupts as he said these words)
Ben: Belial! (Belial appears from the bright black aura)
Ben: True Oni Bomber!!
Zeno (Unleashes his sparkling gold aura): Zeus!
(Zeus appears from the aura, swinging his thunderbolt staff)
(Belial lands a powerful blow and knocks Zeus away from the stadium)
Zeno (Snaps his finger): Starlight Smash!
(Zeus circles around the stadium and hits Belial's Disk)
Ben: Nexa Spin!
(Belial counters the attack with his nexa disk and sends Zeus out of the stadium)
Zeno: (Gasps)
Fubuki: Oni Belial! Spin Finish, now the score is 1-1!
Ben (Laughs): You see? That's Belial's true power!
Zeno ('s phone makes a beep sound): (He checks his phone) Oh we're in South Korea right now.
Fubuki: No need to be worry. It's not our first destina-
Zeno (Picks up his bag): That's not it. I have to perform a song there.
Ichiban (Looks at Zeno): A song?
Ben (Screams): What about our battle?
Zeno: Sorry, shorty. But I'm in a bit of hurry.
(He climbs the railing of the air deck)
Zeno (Looks down at the stage): My destination is there.
Ichiban (Gasps): Aren't you gonna...
Watashi: Fell!?
Zeno (Smiles): That's the main reason I'm standing here. Bye Bye now!
(He jumps from the railing and fells down)
~ At The Concert ~
Random guy 1 (Looks at the entrance): I've waited for like 2 years for this moment! I'm finally gonna meet Zeno and shake his hand for sure!
Random guy 2: I want his autograph! And I'm gonna get it no matter what!
Random guy 1 (Looks at the sky): (Gasps)
Random guy 2 (Looks at the other guy): What's the matter?
Random guy 1 (Points at the sky): L..look up!
Random guy 2 (Looks at the sky): (Gasps)
Zeno (While wearing a parachute): Here I come everyone!
Zeno (Lands on the stage): (Makes a dab pose) Here I am!
Random guy 1 (Cries): My day... is ruined..
Random guy 2 (Looks on the ground): My autograph...
~At the air deck~
Ichiban (Looks at the Zeno): He's really an amazing guy!
Watashi: Or you could say crazy....
Fubuki (Smiles): It's not the first time since he pulled off a stunt like that.
Ben: That's not fair... He left before our battle could finish!
Fubuki (Smiles): You'll be able to battle him later.
Watashi: That's right! Kiwami League is gonna began in no time.
Fubuki: Let's get inside, it's getting dark.
(Everyone gets inside)
~Several hours later~
Fubuki: I guess you guys should sleep now. Tommorow is a big day. (He leaves)
Ichiban (Gets on his bed): What do ya think where will be our first destination?
Watashi (Gets on his bed): I don't know... sleep I'm very tired right now.
Ichiban (Looks at Ben): When are you planning to remove this mask?
Ben (While lying on his bed): ... Never!
Ichiban: This guy is really weird... (Looks at Watashi): What do you thi-
Watashi (while sleeping): (Snores)
Ichiban: Looks like I should sleep as well....
Ichiban (Picks up Icarus): I can't wait for tommorow, Icarus!
(Icarus shines)
[To Be Continued]
Next Chapter: Furious Blow! Noble Centaur!
Plus I'm not gonna take entries anymore cuz I've planned the plot from start to finish.
Here are all the Beys which are gonna appear in Kiwami
Spoiler (Click to View)
Aviate Icarus, Oni Belial, Ember Hyperion, Noble Centaur, Icicle Longinus (Attack)
Iris Mayura, Gloom Wendigo, Sovereign Lucifer, Twister Wyvern (Defense)
Starlight Zeus, Plasma Gilgamesh, Magenta Fafnir, Doomsday Ragnaruk (Stamina)
Mortal Spriggan, Legacy Dragon, Dual Yggdragon, Sovereign Astrios (Balance)
Evolutions:
Victory Icarus, Lightning Centaur and Star Astrios.
Ok I'll decide the moves, but can I change Tungsten weight's name to 10 or 14?
I'm just changing the name. The gimmick will be the same.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 28, 2021
(Aug. 28, 2021 2:17 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote:(Aug. 28, 2021 2:10 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: nice chapter! also cant wait for ichibans newfound rival to enter the stage!
He's not a new rival lol
(Aug. 28, 2021 1:55 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Nice chapter, and sure. But it's whole gimmick is still the density? (It can be normal weighted, but i'd like if it was dense)
I'm just changing the name. The gimmick will be the same.
lol i thought he was
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - i'm batman - Aug. 28, 2021
How did I miss Chapter 4? No matter, reading two chapters in one sitting was almost worth the wait. I love that you inserted comedy btw, but I almost feel bad for the fanboys (keyword being almost).
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - LegendJustice - Aug. 28, 2021
When's chapter 5? Or did I already miss it lol
Anyways loved chapter 6!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 28, 2021
(Aug. 28, 2021 4:00 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: When's chapter 5? Or did I already miss it lol
Anyways loved chapter 6!
It was chapter 5 (My bad... I typed 6 instead of 5)
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 28, 2021
dang the names are epic, cant wait for victory icar(i)us!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Dark red - Aug. 28, 2021
(Aug. 28, 2021 12:03 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Chapter 5:
Spoiler (Click to View)
Chapter 5: Thunderbolt! Starlight Zeus!
Ben: I'm gonna make you cry this time for sure!
Zeno (Came near the stadium): I wanna join in too.
Ben (Looks at Zeno): I'll take you on, when I bea-
Zeno: The battle would be more fun with three beys on the stadium... (Smiles) I wonder who'll steal the spotlight out of the three beys...
Watashi (Smirks): I guess you meant to say four!
Fubuki: A battle royale?
Ichiban (Smiles): That would be more fun!
Zeno (Shows his bey): This is... Starlight Zeus!
Ichiban (Gasps): A stamina type....
Ben (Takes his shoot stance): Belial is gonna make all of you cry!
Zeno (Flips his hair): Crying is for kids, shorty.
Ichiban: Icarus will send all of you flying!
Watashi (looks at Ben and switches to lower mode): (I won't let you get the better of me this time!)
Zeno: (Switches to Upper mode)
Fubuki: ALright then. Ready, set!
"3! 2! 1!"
Watashi: (Catches the launcher with his right hand)
"Go... Shoot!!"
(Zeus quickly takes the center)
Watashi: Awaken your inner demon! Wendigo!
(Wendigo rides along the edge of stadium and rams on Belial)
Ben: Belial!
(Belial counters by leaning it's driver with the help of V-gear)
Ben: Is that all you can do?
Watashi (with a stunned look): Tch!
Ichiban: Amaze Strike!!
(Icarus leans on it's driver, generating sparks and rushes towards Zeus)
Zeno (Smiles): That attack won't work on Zeus.
(Icarus hits Zeus with all it's force, but couldn't move Zeus from the center)
Ichiban (Gasps): It didn't even budged!
(Wendigo's driver hits the edge of the stadium)
Watashi: Moment Crash!
(Wendigo Crashes on Belial's Nexa disk)
Ben: None of your trick will work on Belial!
(Belial's uses it's disk and starts to absorb spin from Wendigo)
Watashi (Gasps): What the?!
Ben: (Laughs)
Ichiban: Icarus!
(Icarus crashes on Belial and moves both of them away)
(Wendigo hits Zeus and bursts, and moves it away from the center)
Watashi: No way...!
Zeno (Smiles): Time for the finishing blow!
Ben (Looks at Ichiban): Come at me with all you've got!
Ichiban (Smiles): You bet!
(Icarus and Belial rushes towards each other, while Zeus circles around the stadium)
(Both Ichiban and Ben screams at the same time)
- Aviate Slash!
- True Oni Bomber!
Zeno (Unleashes his sparkling gold aura): Blow them away, Zeus!
(Zeus appears from the aura, swinging his thunderbolt shaped staff)
Zeno (Snaps his finger): Starlight Smash!
(Icarus and Belial were about to clash, but Zeus interupts and rams on both of them and sends them flying)
(Icarus bursts and Belial got knocked out of the stadium)
Ichiban (Makes a angry look): I can't believe thissssss!! (Fells down on the ground)
Fubuki (Stares at Belial): (Looks like the lock of the bey is more secure now...)
Fubuki: The winner of the battle royale is Zeno Syagrios!
Ben (Looks at Zeno): It was just a fluke, I would've burst Icarus if it weren't for you!
Zeno (Smiles): Then how about you take me on again?
Ben: This time I'm really gonna make ya cry! (Takes his shoot stance)
Zeno (Takes his shoot stance): You can't even move Zeus from the center.
Ichiban (Crosses his hands): I wanna battle too!!
Watashi (looks at Ichiban): He must have taken an interest on Belial...
Fubuki: Belial just have so many abilities... There's no one who won't be interested in this kind of bey.
Fubuki: Anyways, First Battle! Ready, Set!
"3! 2! 1! Go.... Shoot!"
(Zeus circles around the outer edge and quickly takes the center)
Ben (Covers himself with his cape): Venture Shoot!
(Belial lands a barrage of fierceful attacks but couldn't move Zeus from the center)
Zeno (Smiles): There's no way Belial can move Zeus even an inch!
Ben: Belial is just getting started!
(Belial's MD armor shines)
Ben: True Oni Bomber!
(Belial lands a devastating blow on Zeus and moves it away from the center)
Ichiban (Gasps): It moved?!
Zeno (Smirks and snaps his finger): Starlight Smash!
Ben: One more time! True Oni Bomber!
(Zeus and Ben clashes at the center and both gets blown away, both Belial and Zeus began to spin slower)
Ben: (Gasps)
Zeno: You can't beat Zeus in terms of stamina! Starlight Shoot!
(Starlight Blade's Metal balls moves outwards)
(Belial rans out of stamina and stops spinnng)
Ben: Tch!
Fubuki: Starlight Zeus! Spin finish, Zeno Syagrios earns one point!
Ben (Picks up Belial): It's not gonna happen again! (He Switches the Nexa Disk to Free Spin Mode)
Fubuki: Second Battle, Ready Set!
"3! 2! 1! Go.... Shoot!"
(Zeus circles around the outer edge and takes the center)
Ben: This time.. I'm gonna finish this with one blow! (His bright black aura erupts as he said these words)
Ben: Belial! (Belial appears from the bright black aura)
Ben: True Oni Bomber!!
Zeno (Unleashes his sparkling gold aura): Zeus!
(Zeus appears from the aura, swinging his thunderbolt staff)
(Belial lands a powerful blow and knocks Zeus away from the stadium)
Zeno (Snaps his finger): Starlight Smash!
(Zeus circles around the stadium and hits Belial's Disk)
Ben: Nexa Spin!
(Belial counters the attack with his nexa disk and sends Zeus out of the stadium)
Zeno: (Gasps)
Fubuki: Oni Belial! Spin Finish, now the score is 1-1!
Ben (Laughs): You see? That's Belial's true power!
Zeno ('s phone makes a beep sound): (He checks his phone) Oh we're in South Korea right now.
Fubuki: No need to be worry. It's not our first destina-
Zeno (Picks up his bag): That's not it. I have to perform a song there.
Ichiban (Looks at Zeno): A song?
Ben (Screams): What about our battle?
Zeno: Sorry, shorty. But I'm in a bit of hurry.
(He climbs the railing of the air deck)
Zeno (Looks down at the stage): My destination is there.
Ichiban (Gasps): Aren't you gonna...
Watashi: Fell!?
Zeno (Smiles): That's the main reason I'm standing here. Bye Bye now!
(He jumps from the railing and fells down)
~ At The Concert ~
Random guy 1 (Looks at the entrance): I've waited for like 2 years for this moment! I'm finally gonna meet Zeno and shake his hand for sure!
Random guy 2: I want his autograph! And I'm gonna get it no matter what!
Random guy 1 (Looks at the sky): (Gasps)
Random guy 2 (Looks at the other guy): What's the matter?
Random guy 1 (Points at the sky): L..look up!
Random guy 2 (Looks at the sky): (Gasps)
Zeno (While wearing a parachute): Here I come everyone!
Zeno (Lands on the stage): (Makes a dab pose) Here I am!
Random guy 1 (Cries): My day... is ruined..
Random guy 2 (Looks on the ground): My autograph...
~At the air deck~
Ichiban (Looks at the Zeno): He's really an amazing guy!
Watashi: Or you could say crazy....
Fubuki (Smiles): It's not the first time since he pulled off a stunt like that.
Ben: That's not fair... He left before our battle could finish!
Fubuki (Smiles): You'll be able to battle him later.
Watashi: That's right! Kiwami League is gonna began in no time.
Fubuki: Let's get inside, it's getting dark.
(Everyone gets inside)
~Several hours later~
Fubuki: I guess you guys should sleep now. Tommorow is a big day. (He leaves)
Ichiban (Gets on his bed): What do ya think where will be our first destination?
Watashi (Gets on his bed): I don't know... sleep I'm very tired right now.
Ichiban (Looks at Ben): When are you planning to remove this mask?
Ben (While lying on his bed): ... Never!
Ichiban: This guy is really weird... (Looks at Watashi): What do you thi-
Watashi (while sleeping): (Snores)
Ichiban: Looks like I should sleep as well....
Ichiban (Picks up Icarus): I can't wait for tommorow, Icarus!
(Icarus shines)
[To Be Continued]
Next Chapter: Furious Blow! Noble Centaur!
Plus I'm not gonna take entries anymore cuz I've planned the plot from start to finish.
Here are all the Beys which are gonna appear in Kiwami
Spoiler (Click to View)
Aviate Icarus, Oni Belial, Ember Hyperion, Noble Centaur, Icicle Longinus (Attack)
Iris Mayura, Gloom Wendigo, Sovereign Lucifer, Twister Wyvern (Defense)
Starlight Zeus, Plasma Gilgamesh, Magenta Fafnir, Doomsday Ragnaruk (Stamina)
Mortal Spriggan, Legacy Dragon, Dual Yggdragon, Sovereign Astrios (Balance)
Evolutions:
Victory Icarus, Lightning Centaur and Star Astrios.
(Aug. 27, 2021 7:31 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: I'll let you choose the moves. But I can add them if you want.
Character:
.Spoiler (Click to View)Name: William Thompson
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Appearance: He has dark brown hair with purple on the end, green eyes and glasses (It's not a stereotype I promise). He wears a purple T-shirt with golden details, on the middle it has golden camera lens with the text "Smile! You're being watched." Under it. He also wears green jeans and purple shoes.
Personality: His social skills are really bad, but he's also very kind and loves blading. He is very obedient to the rules (of basically anything). He is very careful and can't do anything without a plan or instructions in mind. He tries to be away from people, but he doesn't mind being near them. He is so careful that he can't improvise even by a little. When he's battling, he always tries to surprise the opponents, making them lose focus and then increasing his winning chance. (kinda lazy bio, but that's what I can do for now. you can edit minor things to match your writing style or the plot)
Bey:
Spoiler (Click to View)Kiwami Core - Wyvern: It has 3 medium teeth and 1 tall teeth at the beginning. The motif is the flying dragon, Wyvern.
Kiwami Weight - Tungsten (Tn): It's a Kiwami weight made entirely of Tungsten. It is hollowed but still can give a big amount of weight due to Tungsten density (I think). It gives CWD. Color: smae as Terrraria tungsten.
Kiwami Blade - Twister: A right spin, defense type blade. It features 8 blades that can free-spin, when the armor is inside, the blades lock up, increasing attack. Four out of these blades have rubber. Twister free spins to both sides, unlike Jet. Color: Purple, green and some gold.
Kiwami Armor - Wind: Wind is a average weight armor and features rubber around it and is only compatible with some Kiwami beys, including Twister Wyvern. When put outside, It gives the blade rubber (and on Twister, it makes the layer completely circular). When put inside, it makes friction with the disc tabs, improving burst resistance. Color: same as Terraria tungsten, with purple rubber.
Neo Discs - either Π or π : π is a Kiwami disc. It is one of the heaviest discs, having 44.95g. It shape is similar to Ring, except bulkier and supporting high and low mode. It has the biggest OWD in the beyblade meta.
Driver - Exact: Exact features a sharp tip (Like awakened Just) and a outer ring around it, akin to it's precessor Just. Unlike Just, the free-spinning ring has a bearing and has rubber. In theory, when it makes contact with the stadium, it would reduce stamina loss, increase LAD and make the bey more stationary. The sharp tip is made out of metal to minimize stamina loss. The bey cannot scrape and/or make disc contact with the floor, due to Exact plate diameter.
Overall performance: With Armor out: Can absorb attacks and can't spin equalize. Smashing is it's weakness.
With armor in: Can spin equalize (does not have rubber, but a round design) and Can't absorb attacks. Trying to burst it is useless, but you can try outspin it (if you have enough stamina) or hit from above when Exact tilts, making it lose more balance.
Ok I'll decide the moves, but can I change Tungsten weight's name to 10 or 14?
Yes sir, we got 4 Stamina-Types in these story not just 2 or 3. I love to see it when Stamina-Types get some love too. It reminds me how awesome Stamina-Types were in the Metal Fight Saga.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 31, 2021
Chapter 6 Summary:
Spoiler (Click to View)
The first destination of the Battle Ship is BC Sol! Bladers of the battle ship will challenge Chikara Arami and Fiona Dela Hoya for a battle. Ichiban is excited for his rematch against his childhood friend, but can he beat Chikara this time? Or will he get overwhelmed by him yet again?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Demon Belial - Sep. 01, 2021
(Aug. 28, 2021 12:03 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Chapter 5:
Spoiler (Click to View)
Chapter 5: Thunderbolt! Starlight Zeus!
Ben: I'm gonna make you cry this time for sure!
Zeno (Came near the stadium): I wanna join in too.
Ben (Looks at Zeno): I'll take you on, when I bea-
Zeno: The battle would be more fun with three beys on the stadium... (Smiles) I wonder who'll steal the spotlight out of the three beys...
Watashi (Smirks): I guess you meant to say four!
Fubuki: A battle royale?
Ichiban (Smiles): That would be more fun!
Zeno (Shows his bey): This is... Starlight Zeus!
Ichiban (Gasps): A stamina type....
Ben (Takes his shoot stance): Belial is gonna make all of you cry!
Zeno (Flips his hair): Crying is for kids, shorty.
Ichiban: Icarus will send all of you flying!
Watashi (looks at Ben and switches to lower mode): (I won't let you get the better of me this time!)
Zeno: (Switches to Upper mode)
Fubuki: ALright then. Ready, set!
"3! 2! 1!"
Watashi: (Catches the launcher with his right hand)
"Go... Shoot!!"
(Zeus quickly takes the center)
Watashi: Awaken your inner demon! Wendigo!
(Wendigo rides along the edge of stadium and rams on Belial)
Ben: Belial!
(Belial counters by leaning it's driver with the help of V-gear)
Ben: Is that all you can do?
Watashi (with a stunned look): Tch!
Ichiban: Amaze Strike!!
(Icarus leans on it's driver, generating sparks and rushes towards Zeus)
Zeno (Smiles): That attack won't work on Zeus.
(Icarus hits Zeus with all it's force, but couldn't move Zeus from the center)
Ichiban (Gasps): It didn't even budged!
(Wendigo's driver hits the edge of the stadium)
Watashi: Moment Crash!
(Wendigo Crashes on Belial's Nexa disk)
Ben: None of your trick will work on Belial!
(Belial's uses it's disk and starts to absorb spin from Wendigo)
Watashi (Gasps): What the?!
Ben: (Laughs)
Ichiban: Icarus!
(Icarus crashes on Belial and moves both of them away)
(Wendigo hits Zeus and bursts, and moves it away from the center)
Watashi: No way...!
Zeno (Smiles): Time for the finishing blow!
Ben (Looks at Ichiban): Come at me with all you've got!
Ichiban (Smiles): You bet!
(Icarus and Belial rushes towards each other, while Zeus circles around the stadium)
(Both Ichiban and Ben screams at the same time)
- Aviate Slash!
- True Oni Bomber!
Zeno (Unleashes his sparkling gold aura): Blow them away, Zeus!
(Zeus appears from the aura, swinging his thunderbolt shaped staff)
Zeno (Snaps his finger): Starlight Smash!
(Icarus and Belial were about to clash, but Zeus interupts and rams on both of them and sends them flying)
(Icarus bursts and Belial got knocked out of the stadium)
Ichiban (Makes a angry look): I can't believe thissssss!! (Fells down on the ground)
Fubuki (Stares at Belial): (Looks like the lock of the bey is more secure now...)
Fubuki: The winner of the battle royale is Zeno Syagrios!
Ben (Looks at Zeno): It was just a fluke, I would've burst Icarus if it weren't for you!
Zeno (Smiles): Then how about you take me on again?
Ben: This time I'm really gonna make ya cry! (Takes his shoot stance)
Zeno (Takes his shoot stance): You can't even move Zeus from the center.
Ichiban (Crosses his hands): I wanna battle too!!
Watashi (looks at Ichiban): He must have taken an interest on Belial...
Fubuki: Belial just have so many abilities... There's no one who won't be interested in this kind of bey.
Fubuki: Anyways, First Battle! Ready, Set!
"3! 2! 1! Go.... Shoot!"
(Zeus circles around the outer edge and quickly takes the center)
Ben (Covers himself with his cape): Venture Shoot!
(Belial lands a barrage of fierceful attacks but couldn't move Zeus from the center)
Zeno (Smiles): There's no way Belial can move Zeus even an inch!
Ben: Belial is just getting started!
(Belial's MD armor shines)
Ben: True Oni Bomber!
(Belial lands a devastating blow on Zeus and moves it away from the center)
Ichiban (Gasps): It moved?!
Zeno (Smirks and snaps his finger): Starlight Smash!
Ben: One more time! True Oni Bomber!
(Zeus and Ben clashes at the center and both gets blown away, both Belial and Zeus began to spin slower)
Ben: (Gasps)
Zeno: You can't beat Zeus in terms of stamina! Starlight Shoot!
(Starlight Blade's Metal balls moves outwards)
(Belial rans out of stamina and stops spinnng)
Ben: Tch!
Fubuki: Starlight Zeus! Spin finish, Zeno Syagrios earns one point!
Ben (Picks up Belial): It's not gonna happen again! (He Switches the Nexa Disk to Free Spin Mode)
Fubuki: Second Battle, Ready Set!
"3! 2! 1! Go.... Shoot!"
(Zeus circles around the outer edge and takes the center)
Ben: This time.. I'm gonna finish this with one blow! (His bright black aura erupts as he said these words)
Ben: Belial! (Belial appears from the bright black aura)
Ben: True Oni Bomber!!
Zeno (Unleashes his sparkling gold aura): Zeus!
(Zeus appears from the aura, swinging his thunderbolt staff)
(Belial lands a powerful blow and knocks Zeus away from the stadium)
Zeno (Snaps his finger): Starlight Smash!
(Zeus circles around the stadium and hits Belial's Disk)
Ben: Nexa Spin!
(Belial counters the attack with his nexa disk and sends Zeus out of the stadium)
Zeno: (Gasps)
Fubuki: Oni Belial! Spin Finish, now the score is 1-1!
Ben (Laughs): You see? That's Belial's true power!
Zeno ('s phone makes a beep sound): (He checks his phone) Oh we're in South Korea right now.
Fubuki: No need to be worry. It's not our first destina-
Zeno (Picks up his bag): That's not it. I have to perform a song there.
Ichiban (Looks at Zeno): A song?
Ben (Screams): What about our battle?
Zeno: Sorry, shorty. But I'm in a bit of hurry.
(He climbs the railing of the air deck)
Zeno (Looks down at the stage): My destination is there.
Ichiban (Gasps): Aren't you gonna...
Watashi: Fell!?
Zeno (Smiles): That's the main reason I'm standing here. Bye Bye now!
(He jumps from the railing and fells down)
~ At The Concert ~
Random guy 1 (Looks at the entrance): I've waited for like 2 years for this moment! I'm finally gonna meet Zeno and shake his hand for sure!
Random guy 2: I want his autograph! And I'm gonna get it no matter what!
Random guy 1 (Looks at the sky): (Gasps)
Random guy 2 (Looks at the other guy): What's the matter?
Random guy 1 (Points at the sky): L..look up!
Random guy 2 (Looks at the sky): (Gasps)
Zeno (While wearing a parachute): Here I come everyone!
Zeno (Lands on the stage): (Makes a dab pose) Here I am!
Random guy 1 (Cries): My day... is ruined..
Random guy 2 (Looks on the ground): My autograph...
~At the air deck~
Ichiban (Looks at the Zeno): He's really an amazing guy!
Watashi: Or you could say crazy....
Fubuki (Smiles): It's not the first time since he pulled off a stunt like that.
Ben: That's not fair... He left before our battle could finish!
Fubuki (Smiles): You'll be able to battle him later.
Watashi: That's right! Kiwami League is gonna began in no time.
Fubuki: Let's get inside, it's getting dark.
(Everyone gets inside)
~Several hours later~
Fubuki: I guess you guys should sleep now. Tommorow is a big day. (He leaves)
Ichiban (Gets on his bed): What do ya think where will be our first destination?
Watashi (Gets on his bed): I don't know... sleep I'm very tired right now.
Ichiban (Looks at Ben): When are you planning to remove this mask?
Ben (While lying on his bed): ... Never!
Ichiban: This guy is really weird... (Looks at Watashi): What do you thi-
Watashi (while sleeping): (Snores)
Ichiban: Looks like I should sleep as well....
Ichiban (Picks up Icarus): I can't wait for tommorow, Icarus!
(Icarus shines)
[To Be Continued]
Next Chapter: Furious Blow! Noble Centaur!
Plus I'm not gonna take entries anymore cuz I've planned the plot from start to finish.
Here are all the Beys which are gonna appear in Kiwami
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Aviate Icarus, Oni Belial, Ember Hyperion, Noble Centaur, Icicle Longinus (Attack)
Iris Mayura, Gloom Wendigo, Sovereign Lucifer, Twister Wyvern (Defense)
Starlight Zeus, Plasma Gilgamesh, Magenta Fafnir, Doomsday Ragnaruk (Stamina)
Mortal Spriggan, Legacy Dragon, Dual Yggdragon, Sovereign Astrios (Balance)
Evolutions:
Victory Icarus, Lightning Centaur and Star Astrios.
(Aug. 27, 2021 7:31 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: I'll let you choose the moves. But I can add them if you want.
Character:
.Spoiler (Click to View)Name: William Thompson
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Appearance: He has dark brown hair with purple on the end, green eyes and glasses (It's not a stereotype I promise). He wears a purple T-shirt with golden details, on the middle it has golden camera lens with the text "Smile! You're being watched." Under it. He also wears green jeans and purple shoes.
Personality: His social skills are really bad, but he's also very kind and loves blading. He is very obedient to the rules (of basically anything). He is very careful and can't do anything without a plan or instructions in mind. He tries to be away from people, but he doesn't mind being near them. He is so careful that he can't improvise even by a little. When he's battling, he always tries to surprise the opponents, making them lose focus and then increasing his winning chance. (kinda lazy bio, but that's what I can do for now. you can edit minor things to match your writing style or the plot)
Bey:
Spoiler (Click to View)Kiwami Core - Wyvern: It has 3 medium teeth and 1 tall teeth at the beginning. The motif is the flying dragon, Wyvern.
Kiwami Weight - Tungsten (Tn): It's a Kiwami weight made entirely of Tungsten. It is hollowed but still can give a big amount of weight due to Tungsten density (I think). It gives CWD. Color: smae as Terrraria tungsten.
Kiwami Blade - Twister: A right spin, defense type blade. It features 8 blades that can free-spin, when the armor is inside, the blades lock up, increasing attack. Four out of these blades have rubber. Twister free spins to both sides, unlike Jet. Color: Purple, green and some gold.
Kiwami Armor - Wind: Wind is a average weight armor and features rubber around it and is only compatible with some Kiwami beys, including Twister Wyvern. When put outside, It gives the blade rubber (and on Twister, it makes the layer completely circular). When put inside, it makes friction with the disc tabs, improving burst resistance. Color: same as Terraria tungsten, with purple rubber.
Neo Discs - either Π or π : π is a Kiwami disc. It is one of the heaviest discs, having 44.95g. It shape is similar to Ring, except bulkier and supporting high and low mode. It has the biggest OWD in the beyblade meta.
Driver - Exact: Exact features a sharp tip (Like awakened Just) and a outer ring around it, akin to it's precessor Just. Unlike Just, the free-spinning ring has a bearing and has rubber. In theory, when it makes contact with the stadium, it would reduce stamina loss, increase LAD and make the bey more stationary. The sharp tip is made out of metal to minimize stamina loss. The bey cannot scrape and/or make disc contact with the floor, due to Exact plate diameter.
Overall performance: With Armor out: Can absorb attacks and can't spin equalize. Smashing is it's weakness.
With armor in: Can spin equalize (does not have rubber, but a round design) and Can't absorb attacks. Trying to burst it is useless, but you can try outspin it (if you have enough stamina) or hit from above when Exact tilts, making it lose more balance.
Ok I'll decide the moves, but can I change Tungsten weight's name to 10 or 14?
No Valtryek??
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Kiryu Kazuma - Sep. 02, 2021
Levi Winters (Guilty/Icicle Longinus)
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Appearance:
Attire: He wears an unzipped white jacket, a black shirt with golden buttons, White gloves, Black jeans with a L shaped belt and White shoes with Gold Stripes, he also has sharp teeth just like Lui.
Hair Color: White
Eye Color: Sky Blue
Personality: He's as agressive and intense like Lui, he thinks he's unbeatable and didn't upgrade Longinus cuz he didn't wanted to make it different as it was Lui's bey. He wants to become better than Lui and wanna be the best wielder of Longinus.
Beyblades:
Guilty Longinus Karma Metal Destroy -2: He trained under Lui. Lui got impressed by his skills and also likes how he admires Longinus' strength so he gave Longinus to Levi.
Icicle Longinus .1 Torpedo Shatter -Metal Dragon (He'll upgrade it in second or third arc),
Kiwami Core: Longinus, The Spear of Ruin. The core has one huge dragon dead in the middle. and two more normal sized dragon heads on the wings. The outer core is in black color and the dragon heads are gold and wings are white.
Kiwami Blade: Icicle, It has two spear shaped blades having one metal dragon each on them. The metal dragons are different than any other longinus, it have a side view of dragon breathing fire. The main color scheme of this blade is black, the color of dragon heads is in gold color and the fire is blue in color.
Neo Disk: Torpedo, It's shape is just like the Icicle layer, and has a frame fused into it, the frame has two small sized dragon heads. The middle part of the disk is black and the dragon heads are gold and the frame is blue in color. (It's an evolution of Drake Disk, the blades allign with each other when the lock moves on).
Driver: Shatter, It's a fusion of Spiral, Jolt and Destroy. It has ring around the tip, with six metal spikes (shaped like dragon heads) protruding outwards and towards the right. It has a ring just like destroy but made up of rubber and the tip is in the shape of spiral.
Kiwami Armor: Metal Dragon, It's just like the L-Gear and it's exclusive to Belial snd Longinus only.
Kiwami Weight: 1, It has a heavy metal point on the one side and the other side is lighter, it makes the bey unbalanced but increases the attack potential.
Some more details about Longinus:
1) Longinus' avatar color scheme has been completly changed. The color scheme of the avatar is black and the head and the heads on the wings (wings are white) are gold. And it's tail burns in gold flame.
2) Icicle Longinus reuses some parts,
Metal Dragon Armor of Oni Belial and 1 Weight from Avaite Icarus.
3) It has 10 dragon heads including the MD armor. If you also count the heads from driver then it has... 16 heads.
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And I'm working on Chapter 6, gonna release it tomorrow (It's gonna have 4 or 5 battles and might be longer than my usual chapters)
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Hollowmind13 - Sep. 02, 2021
(Sep. 02, 2021 3:41 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Levi Winters (Guilty/Icicle Longinus)
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Appearance:
Attire: He wears an unzipped white jacket, a black shirt with golden buttons, White gloves, Black jeans with a L shaped belt and White shoes with Gold Stripes, he also has sharp teeth just like Lui.
Hair Color: White
Eye Color: Sky Blue
Personality: He's as agressive and intense like Lui, he thinks he's unbeatable and didn't upgrade Longinus cuz he didn't wanted to make it different as it was Lui's bey. He wants to become better than Lui and wanna be the best wielder of Longinus.
Beyblades:
Guilty Longinus Karma Metal Destroy -2: He trained under Lui. Lui got impressed by his skills and also likes how he admires Longinus' strength so he gave Longinus to Levi.
Icicle Longinus .1 Torpedo Shatter -Metal Dragon (He'll upgrade it in second or third arc),
Kiwami Core: Longinus, The Spear of Ruin. The core has one huge dragon dead in the middle. and two more normal sized dragon heads on the wings. The outer core is in black color and the dragon heads are gold and wings are white.
Kiwami Blade: Icicle, It has two spear shaped blades having one metal dragon each on them. The metal dragons are different than any other longinus, it have a side view of dragon breathing fire. The main color scheme of this blade is black, the color of dragon heads is in gold color and the fire is blue in color.
Neo Disk: Torpedo, It's shape is just like the Icicle layer, and has a frame fused into it, the frame has two small sized dragon heads. The middle part of the disk is black and the dragon heads are gold and the frame is blue in color. (It's an evolution of Drake Disk, the blades allign with each other when the lock moves on).
Driver: Shatter, It's a fusion of Spiral, Jolt and Destroy. It has ring around the tip, with six metal spikes (shaped like dragon heads but are extremely small) protruding outwards and towards the right and can be tilted just like the ring around Kick driver. The tip is in the shape of spiral.
Kiwami Armor: Metal Dragon, It's just like the L-Gear and it's exclusive to Belial snd Longinus only.
Kiwami Weight: 1, It has a heavy metal point on the one side and the other side is lighter, it makes the bey unbalanced but increases the attack potential.
Some more details about Longinus:
1) Longinus' avatar color scheme has been completly changed. The color scheme of the avatar is black and the head and the heads on the wings (wings are white) are gold. And it's tail burns in gold flame.
2) Icicle Longinus reuses some parts,
Metal Dragon Armor of Oni Belial and 1 Weight from Avaite Icarus.
3) It has 10 dragon heads including the MD armor. If you also count the heads from driver then it has... 16 heads.
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And I'm working on Chapter 6, gonna release it tommorow (It's gonna have 4 or 5 battles and might be longer than my usual chapters)
Really nice, that's surely a really cool Longinus evo. Now, something that I don't understand is: If Shatter (cool driver name ngl) is a fusion between Destroy, Spiral and Jolt, why it doesn't have rubber? I mean, Jolt (imo) is a rubber Spiral.
I am not trying to offend you by any means and I respecct if you say "no", but these are my suggestions for the driver (on the spoiler). If you feel like Shatter is already perfect, then I'd reccomend not to open the spoiler.
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My opinion (don't kill me) : You could either add Jolt's tip onto the driver or at least add some rubber around like Merge or even making the ring lockable (like absorb) and having a rubber perimeter on the disc could do better for counter attacks and speed and... Longinus stuff.
Shatter does have a cool concept, but for me it fells like Destroy with Spiral tip and Kick gimmick.
Shatter does have a cool concept, but for me it fells like Destroy with Spiral tip and Kick gimmick.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Kiryu Kazuma - Sep. 02, 2021
(Sep. 02, 2021 4:04 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:(Sep. 02, 2021 3:41 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Levi Winters (Guilty/Icicle Longinus)
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Appearance:
Attire: He wears an unzipped white jacket, a black shirt with golden buttons, White gloves, Black jeans with a L shaped belt and White shoes with Gold Stripes, he also has sharp teeth just like Lui.
Hair Color: White
Eye Color: Sky Blue
Personality: He's as agressive and intense like Lui, he thinks he's unbeatable and didn't upgrade Longinus cuz he didn't wanted to make it different as it was Lui's bey. He wants to become better than Lui and wanna be the best wielder of Longinus.
Beyblades:
Guilty Longinus Karma Metal Destroy -2: He trained under Lui. Lui got impressed by his skills and also likes how he admires Longinus' strength so he gave Longinus to Levi.
Icicle Longinus .1 Torpedo Shatter -Metal Dragon (He'll upgrade it in second or third arc),
Kiwami Core: Longinus, The Spear of Ruin. The core has one huge dragon dead in the middle. and two more normal sized dragon heads on the wings. The outer core is in black color and the dragon heads are gold and wings are white.
Kiwami Blade: Icicle, It has two spear shaped blades having one metal dragon each on them. The metal dragons are different than any other longinus, it have a side view of dragon breathing fire. The main color scheme of this blade is black, the color of dragon heads is in gold color and the fire is blue in color.
Neo Disk: Torpedo, It's shape is just like the Icicle layer, and has a frame fused into it, the frame has two small sized dragon heads. The middle part of the disk is black and the dragon heads are gold and the frame is blue in color. (It's an evolution of Drake Disk, the blades allign with each other when the lock moves on).
Driver: Shatter, It's a fusion of Spiral, Jolt and Destroy. It has ring around the tip, with six metal spikes (shaped like dragon heads but are extremely small) protruding outwards and towards the right and can be tilted just like the ring around Kick driver. The tip is in the shape of spiral.
Kiwami Armor: Metal Dragon, It's just like the L-Gear and it's exclusive to Belial snd Longinus only.
Kiwami Weight: 1, It has a heavy metal point on the one side and the other side is lighter, it makes the bey unbalanced but increases the attack potential.
Some more details about Longinus:
1) Longinus' avatar color scheme has been completly changed. The color scheme of the avatar is black and the head and the heads on the wings (wings are white) are gold. And it's tail burns in gold flame.
2) Icicle Longinus reuses some parts,
Metal Dragon Armor of Oni Belial and 1 Weight from Avaite Icarus.
3) It has 10 dragon heads including the MD armor. If you also count the heads from driver then it has... 16 heads.
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And I'm working on Chapter 6, gonna release it tommorow (It's gonna have 4 or 5 battles and might be longer than my usual chapters)
Really nice, that's surely a really cool Longinus evo. Now, something that I don't understand is: If Shatter (cool driver name ngl) is a fusion between Destroy, Spiral and Jolt, why it doesn't have rubber? I mean, Jolt (imo) is a rubber Spiral.
I am not trying to offend you by any means and I respecct if you say "no", but these are my suggestions for the driver (on the spoiler). If you feel like Shatter is already perfect, then I'd reccomend not to open the spoiler.
Anyways, looking forward to the chapter. (sorry if I was somehow rude by questioning your decisions on the driver, sharing thoughts on the internet is hard)Spoiler (Click to View)My opinion (don't kill me) : You could either add Jolt's tip onto the driver or at least add some rubber around like Merge or even making the ring lockable (like absorb) and having a rubber perimeter on the disc could do better for counter attacks and speed and... Longinus stuff.
Shatter does have a cool concept, but for me it fells like Destroy with Spiral tip and Kick gimmick.
No prob and it's my fault lol, Actually I was gonna include rubber in the driver not metal. But it was a sudden change. So yeah it's my fault that it doesn't have rubber lol. And I might change the driver's gimmick cuz I too thought it's somewhat weird (The kick ring one was just an excuse to add on two small dragon heads though).
@Hollowmind8 I edited it a little bit.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Kiryu Kazuma - Sep. 03, 2021
Chapter 6: (1,808 words including the spoiler text lol)
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Chapter 6: Furious Blow! Noble Spear!!
~At Midnight~
Ichiban: (sleeping while holding Icarus)
(Icarus fells from his hand)
Ichiban (opens his eyes): Huh?
(Watashi snooring in the background)
Ichiban (picks up and looks at Ben's bed, he was not there): Where did he go?
(Ichiban picked up his jacket and went to the airdeck)
Ichiban (Looks at Ben, who was practicing): Still awake?
Ben (Picks up Belial): I could say the same for you.
Ichiban: Well... My sleep got broken.
Ben (Shows Belial to him): In that case, battle me!
Ichiban (Looks at Ben): Battle? (Smiles) Bring it on then!
Ben (Switches to lower mode): I'll make sure to make you cry this time for real!
Ichiban: (When Belial's on lower mode... It's attack power is off the charts in that case I'll...)
(He switches to Upper mode)
Ichiban (takes his shoot stance): (I'll have to dodge it's attack and burst it!)
"3! 2! 1! Go.... Shoot!"
(Belial and Icarus crosses each other at the center)
Ben: Upper mode.... huh? (He laughs) Let's go Belial!
(Belial leans on it's venture driver and heads towards Icarus with incredible speed)
Ichiban (Smiles): Dodge it, Icarus!
(Icarus leans on it's Amaze driver and succesfuly dodges Belial's attack and keeps on changing it's trajectory)
Ichiban: Now! Amaze Strike!
(Icarus rams on Belial with full force which creates a beam of yellow light on the stadium)
Ichiban (Smiles): Looks like I won again!
Ben (laughs and unleashes his aura): Belial!!
(Belial appears from the bright black aura)
(Belial broke free from Icarus's attack)
Ichiban (With a shocked look): What!?
Ben (makes a fist : Time for explosion! True Oni Bomber!!
(Belial's Blade begins to shine bright and delievers an intense slash attack on Icarus, which caused a huge explosion around the stadium)
Ichiban (shields himself by using his hand): No Way!
(Icarus got thrown from the smoke and bursts)
Ben ('s mask broke off): (Gasps)
(Icarus's parts touches the ground)
Ichiban (picks up Icarus): How could it be..?
Ichiban: (looks at Ben surprisingly)
Ben: (picks up his broken mask and tries to wear it again)
Ichiban: There's no way it's gonna fit again.
Ben (throws the mask on the ground): Looks like it...
Ichiban (smiles): It was a great battle.
Ben (turns around the other way): ....
Ichiban (yawns): (with half-opened eyes) Not gonna talk anymore? You won you should be happy right?
Ben (looks at the moon): Nope.
Ichiban: Alright then, I'm going to sleep.
(Ichiban lefts the airdeck)
Ben (as long as he left): (laughs) There's no one stronger than the demon king!
~The Next Day At The Airdeck~
Fubuki: Alright we're on our first destination!
Ichiban (Smiles): I wonder who is our first opponent?
Watashi (takes out his phone): Looks like we're on Spain... does that mean?
Fubuki: That's right, The first stop is BC Sol!
Ichiban (Smiles broadly): This means I'll get the chance to battle Chikara again!
Watashi: You know... If he got beaten by me or Ben.
Ichiban: Then I'll go first and beat him, before anyone of you get the chance!
Fubuki: Actually.... you'll be the last to battle him.
Ichiban (with a stunned look): Huh... why!?
Fubuki: Watashi woke up earlier and Ben woke up later and you...
Ichiban (with an angry look): That's not how things worrrrk!!!
Watashi (Smiles): It does, actually discipline and timing is a vital part for beyblade!
(He remembers practicing with his team members at New Beigoma)
Watashi: I always wake up early so I can train more than anybody else!
Ichiban: But you still lost plenty of times.
Ben (Chuckles): Same goes for you.
Fubuki: Enough now, look down we're already here.
(Everyone looks down from the battle ship, they saw two bladers deep in the forest at the stadium)
Ichiban (begans to run): Alright I can't wait for this!
Fubuki: Before you go...
Ichiban (stops running): What?
Fubuki: Chikara is not the real deal of this challenge.
Ichiban (makes a questionable expression): What?
Watashi (crosses his arms): Well that's true.
Fubuki (Smiles): It's Fiona Dela Hoya, rumour tells that she's believed to be the strongest blader in the world.
Ichiban (takes out Icarus): There's no one stronger than me and Icarus and I'll prove it to everyone!
Watashi (smiles): You won't get the chance to battle. Wendigo will send Centaur and Fafnir flying with one hit!
Fubuki (Worriedly): (You two should never underestimate your opponents....)
(All of them leaves the battleship)
Ichiban (runs into Chikara): I'm here!
Chikara (Smiles): Good to see you again.
Fiona (looks at Ichiban): He's the challenger?
Watashi : Nope, it's me!
Fubuki (Smiles): Yeah, first one is Watashi.
Chikara (looks at Ichiban): What about Ichi?
Fubuki: He'll face you at last if you'll be able to beat Watashi and Ben.
Ben: (I wish I had one more mask...)
Chikara (Looks at Fiona): You can battle before me if you want to.
Fiona (Smiles): No thanks.... If none of them could beat you, then I won't accept any challenge from anyone of them.
Ichiban (Gasps): What...?
Ben: I don't like her attitude...
Watashi (Takes his shoot stance): I'll crush you after I beat Chikara!
Chikara (Takes his shoot stance): Let's see then.
(A drone came out of nowhere)
Drone: First Battle!
Chikara: (Switches to lower mode)
Watashi: Lower mode huh... (He switches to upper mode)
"3!" (As the call of the three, Chikara bends his left leg)
"2" (Then he grabs the string of the launcher)
"1" (His eyes burned with Gold flames)
"Go.... Shoot" (He pulled the string of his launcher with sheer force and swings himself as soon as he launches his bey, Watashi launches his beh with his left hand)
Watashi: God's Warning!
(Wendigo takes the center and it's blades begins to shine purple, creating a shield around the layer)
Chikara (He shoves his hand while it was glowing gold): Ambush Spark!
(Centaur's driver leans on the stadium, and lands a barrage of attacks on Wendigo)
Ichiban (With a surprised look): It's.... even faster than before...
(Wendigo starts to wobble)
Watashi: Come one, don't lose yet!
Chikara: Time to end this!
(Centaur's blades lits up)
Chikara ('s hand shines gold as he makes a fist and makes a slash gesture): Noble Spear!!
(Centaur crashes down on Wendigo with a tremondous amount of speed, which creates a electrifying beam of gold light on the stadium)
(Wendigo bursts and fells on the ground)
Watashi (Gasps): He's strong....
Chikara: Now, who's next?
Ben (switches to lower mode): Let's give'em a show worth watching, Belial.
(Aight, let's just proceed to the battle)
(Centaur and Belial clashes with each other at the center again and again)
Ben: Knock him away, Belial!
Ben: True Oni Bomber!!
(Belial's blades lits up and hits Centaur and sends it flying)
Chikara (Smiles): Centaur's not gonna lose so easily.
(Centaur hits the wall of the stadium and survives)
Ben: One more time! True Oni Bomber!!
Fiona (Smirks): Only a fool uses the same trick against Chikara.
Chikara (Unleashes his bright gold aura): Finish him! Centaur!!
(Centaur appears from the glowing gold aura and shows off his spear)
Chikara ('s hand shines gold as he makes a fist and makes a slash gesture): Noble Spear!!
(Belial bursts upon contact with Centaur's slash attack)
Ben (Gasps): No way....
Drone: Noble Centaur wins with a burst finish!
Chikara (Looks at Ichiban): Alright, now it's finally your turn.
Ichiban (Shows his bey to Chikara): Icarus is going to beat Centaur at any cost!
Chikara (Smiles): You evolved Valkyrie into this? Cool.
Ichiban (swings his hand while holding his launcher): I'm gonna beat you this time!
Chikara (takes his shoot stance): I won't let you win.
Drone: First Battle!
Ichiban: (Centaur's attack is even superior to Belial, I'm gonna fighr back this time!)
(He switches to lower mode)
Drone Ready.... Set!
"3! 2! 1! Go.... Shoot!!"
(Icarus leans on it's driver and heads towards Centaur with full speed)
Ichiban: Amaze Strike!
(Icarus crashes on Centaur with full force, making Centaur's driver to lean towards the rough rubber part)
Chikara: Now!
(Centaur broke free from Icarus' attack)
Chikara (He shoves his hand while it was glowing gold): Ambush Spark!!
(Centaur changes it's trajectory and unleashes a barrage of attacks on Icarus)
Ichiban (Worriedly): Hang in there....
(Icarus starts to wobble)
Watashi: (It's just happening like the last battle...)
Chikara ('s hand shines gold as he makes a fist and makes a slash gesture): Noble Spear!!
(Centaur's blades lit up and delievers a slash attack on Icarus and sends it flying)
(Icarus touches the ground)
Fiona: (It didn't burst...)
Drone: Noble Centaur, Over Finish! The Score is 1-0!
Chikara (Smiles and looks at Ichiban): (Looks like he's definitely stronger than the rest).
Fubuki (Smiles): Not bad...
Ichiban (Picks up Icarus): It's not finished yet! Icarus is just getting started!
Drone: Second Battle!
Chikara (Takes his shoot stance): This time... I'll win with a bursy! (His aura starts to erupt from him)
Ichiban (Doesn't says anything for a sec): Not gonna happen! (Takes his shoot stance and his aura starts to erupt from him)
(They both stared at each other while smiling and their aura keeps on blazing up)
Drone: Ready.... Set!
"3! 2! 1!"
Ichiban: Go.... Shoot!!(His aura rises up as he launched his bey)
(Icaurs and Centaur landed on the stadium perfectly starts to clash at center several times)
Chikara: Knock him away, Centaur!
(Centaur sends Icarus flying)
Watashi (crosses his arms): I'm not surprised.... he lost...
Ichiban: It's not over yet!
(It survives by hitting the wall)
Watashi (gasps): It survived!
Ichiban: (I have to surpass Centaur's speed...)
Chikara (He shoves his hand while it was glowing gold): Ambush Spark!!
(Centaur unleashes a barrage of invincibe attacks on Icarus)
Ichiban (Smiles): Let's go!!
(Icarus leans on it's driver and dodges Centaur's attacks)
(Icarus begins to ride along the edge of the stadium and gains incredible speed)
Chikara (Looks at Ichiban, his aura was burning up): Incredible....
Ichiban (Unleashes his bright white aura): Icarus!!
(Icarus lits up and his avatar appeared from the glowing white aura)
(Icarus hits the wall and heads towards Centaur)
Ichiban (makes a fist and opens it up, with perfect synchronization with Icarus's avatar): Amaze Flash!!
(Icarus's avatar unleashes a blast from his hand)
(Icarus rams on Centaur with immense force)
Chikara (makes a surprised face): No way!
(Icarus knocks Centaur away from the stadium, Centaur hits the ground)
(Everyone remained silent for several seconds)
Drone: Aviate Icarus, Over Finish! The score is 1-1!
Ichiban (Smiles): Alright!
Chikara (Picks up Centaur): Not bad Ichi...
Fiona (Looks at Fafnir): (Looks like there's someone worthy to take you on...)
Ichiban (takes his shoot stance): I'm gonna win this match, Chikara!
Chikara (takes his shoot stance): Sorry... but I refuse to lose against you!!
[To Be Continued]
Next Chapter: The Sparkling Dragon! Magenta Fafnir!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Demon Belial - Sep. 03, 2021
Noise, but you atleast completed that battle.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Kiryu Kazuma - Sep. 03, 2021
(Sep. 03, 2021 11:33 AM)Demon Belial Wrote: Noise, but you atleast completed that battle.
I got lazy in the end lol, It will continue in the next chapter (It's an excuse to make the next chapter longer too).
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Kiryu Kazuma - Sep. 04, 2021
Chapter 7 Summary:
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The Battle between Ichiban and Chikara Continues! After that Fiona takes on Watashi and Ben at the same time. Ichiban will be the last one to battle Fiona, at El Santo's big arena, Is Fafnir really the best bey in the world?
Kiwami league participants
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1) Ichiban
2) Ben
3) Zeno
4) Chikara
5) Fiona
6) Griffin
7) Himaki
8) Maru
9) Shin
10) Dax
11) Yael
12) Light
And a little update:
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At the end of Arc 1 Ichiban is going to make a new blade, inspired by the bladers he fought till now.
Trinity Blade: A three bladed blade, The three blades have different colors, (Red, Yellow and Dark Blue). The Blade Red Blade is shaped like an axe, the yellow one has rubber on it and the dark blue one is shaped like a peacock feather). And the shape of the blade is just like Valkyrie.
And there's gonna be a helios too (Cuz Hyperion and Lucifer are there too lol)
Tell me, does the first arc feel like DB rip off? (If it does then I had no choice lol, This was a better way to introduce characters).
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - GenesisBlader - Sep. 04, 2021
(Sep. 04, 2021 12:13 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Chapter 7 Summary:
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The Battle between Ichiban and Chikara Continues! After that Fiona takes on Watashi and Ben at the same time. Ichiban will be the last one to battle Fiona, at El Santo's big arena, Is Fafnir really the best bey in the world?
Kiwami league participants
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1) Ichiban
2) Ben
3) Zeno
4) Chikara
5) Fiona
6) Griffin
7) Himaki
8) Maru
9) Shin
10) Dax
11) Yael
12) Light
And a little update:
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At the end of Arc 1 Ichiban is going to make a new blade, inspired by the bladers he fought till now.
Trinity Blade: A three bladed blade, The three blades have different colors, (Red, Yellow and Dark Blue). The Blade Red Blade is shaped like an axe, the yellow one has rubber on it and the dark blue one is shaped like a peacock feather). And the shape of the blade is just like Valkyrie.
And there's gonna be a helios too (Cuz Hyperion and Lucifer are there too lol)
Tell me, does the first arc feel like DB rip off? (If it does then I had no choice lol, This was a better way to introduce characters).
no way, to me it feels pretty unique
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - LegendJustice - Sep. 04, 2021
(Sep. 04, 2021 12:13 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Chapter 7 Summary:
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The Battle between Ichiban and Chikara Continues! After that Fiona takes on Watashi and Ben at the same time. Ichiban will be the last one to battle Fiona, at El Santo's big arena, Is Fafnir really the best bey in the world?
Kiwami league participants
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1) Ichiban
2) Ben
3) Zeno
4) Chikara
5) Fiona
6) Griffin
7) Himaki
8) Maru
9) Shin
10) Dax
11) Yael
12) Light
And a little update:
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At the end of Arc 1 Ichiban is going to make a new blade, inspired by the bladers he fought till now.
Trinity Blade: A three bladed blade, The three blades have different colors, (Red, Yellow and Dark Blue). The Blade Red Blade is shaped like an axe, the yellow one has rubber on it and the dark blue one is shaped like a peacock feather). And the shape of the blade is just like Valkyrie.
And there's gonna be a helios too (Cuz Hyperion and Lucifer are there too lol)
Tell me, does the first arc feel like DB rip off? (If it does then I had no choice lol, This was a better way to introduce characters).
Nah, Itw unique and I'm excited for Chapter 7 (Dax you better win)
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Kiryu Kazuma - Sep. 13, 2021
Chapter 7: (I know it took me very long, I just couldn't find the words to write)
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Chapter 7: The Sparkling Dragon! Magenta Fafnir!
Ichiban (takes his shoot stance): I'm gonna win this match, Chikara!
Chikara (takes his shoot stance): Sorry... but I refuse to lose against you!!
Drone: Third Battle! Ready... Set!
"3! 2! 1! Go.... Shoot!"
Chikara: Attack, Centaur!!
(As soon as Centaur landed it begans to hits Icarus' blade with sheer force)
Ichiban ('s hand shines with a white glow as he makes a fist): Aviate Slash!!
(Icarus' blade lit up and counters Centaur's attack)
Chikara (unleashes his bright gold aura): Argh.. Centaur!!
(Centaur appears from the erupting gold aura)
Ichiban (unleashes his bright white aura): Send it flying, Icarus!!
(Icarus appears from the bright white aura)
(Icarus and Chikara crosses each other with insane speed at the center)
Ichiban (Smiles): Let's finish this!
(Icarus rides along the edge of the stadium and unleashed sparks as it rides rapidly)
Chikara (Smirks): (That's what I was waiting for....)
(Centaur leans towards it's ambush driver and heads towards the stadium wall, not Icarus)
Watashi: What the heck is he doing? Is he gonna self burst himself..?
Fiona (while looking at the stadium): He saw through Icarus' movement.
Fubuki (Looks at Fiona): You mean...
Chikara ('s hand shines gold as he makes a fist and makes a slash gesture): Noble Spear!!
(Centaur heads towards the wall but in a slight second Icarus came there)
Ichiban (Gasps): Seriously!?
(Centaur's pins Icarus between it's shining blade and the stadium creating a damage of pincer attack)
(Sparks flew from both of the beys and a purple beam light surges upwards from the stadium)
(Icarus couldn't withstand that attack and bursts)
Drone: Noble Centaur, Burst Finish! Chikara Arami wins with the score of 3-1!
Ichiban (Picks up Icarus and assembles it): I won't lose next time!
Fiona (walks up to the stadium): (Looks at Watashi and Ben) You two...
Watashi/Ben: What?
Fiona (holds Fafnir on her hand): I have decided, I'll battle both of you together.
Watashi (makes an angry look): Are you looking down on me!?
Fiona: Call it a test of power.
Ichiban: Then what about me?
Fiona: I'll save you for the last. (Smiles) You've proved your worth to me.
Watashi (holds Wendigo on his hand): Wendigo will put you on your place!
Fubuki: Fafnir's blade is completely made up of rubber, it helps to absorb spin from right-spinning beys.
Watashi (Smiles): Fafnir can't absorb Wendigo's stamina.
Ben (holds Belial on his hand): Belial has rubber too, So I'll just drain Fafnir's spin.
(Ben and Watashi walks up to the stadium)
Watashi (takes out his launcher): Wendigo's gonna win this match!
Fiona (takes out her launcher): Fine then.
Drone: Ready... Set!
"3! 2! 1! Go... Shoot!!" (Ben and Fiona launched their beys lightly and Watashi shoots with his left hand)
(Fafnir and Belial clashes at the center and starts to drain each other's stamina)
Fiona (Smiles): So that's your strategy?
(Wendigo leans on the edge of the stadium and heads towards Fafnir)
Watashi: Moment Crash!!
Fiona: This isn't gonna work on Fafnir.
(Wendigo crashes down on Fafnir's drain disk, Fafnir evades the attack by the free-spinning disk and drain's Wendigo's stamina)
(Wendigo's trajectory got changed and it got knocked out of the stadium)
Watashi (Gasps): What!?
Ichiban: The disk is free-spining?
Chikara: There's more into it than it seems to meet the eye.....
(Belial absorbed enough spin and starts to accelarate on the stadium, Fafnir spins on the stadium with extremely low stamina)
Ben: Time to finish this! Oni Bomber!!
(Belial's blades lits up and with the help of V gear it crashes onto Fafnir's Drain disk with a immense slash attack)
Fiona (In a calm voice): Drain Counter.
(Fafnir's disk lits up and bursts Belial)
(Belial's parts flew up in the sky)
Ben (Gasps): No...
Drone: Fiona Dela Hoya is the winner!
Fiona (Smiles and looks at Watashi): You cannot best Fafnir even in your wildest dreams.
Watashi: Tch.. I won't let you get away with this...
Ichiban (Looks at Chikara): That's what you meant?
Chikara (Nods): Fafnir's rubber disk is free-spinning to left-spinning opponents, but to right-spinning opponents, it's fixed so that it could drain the spin.
Fubuki (Looks at Fiona): This explains why she's believed to be the world's number one blader...
Fiona (Walks up to Ichiban): I'll wait for you at El Santo's beyblsde arena. Don't disappoint me.
Ichiban: Yeah... I won't lose against you!
(Fiona walks away)
Chikara (Looks at Ichiban): If I were you, I would've start practicing as you have enough time to do so.
Ichiban (Nods): I will.
Watashi: She already looked through Icarus' movement, you need to be more careful.
Ichiban: She's not only one to see through my techniques! I too have noticed a little bit...
Fubuki (Smiles): It will be your very first official match, don't lose your cool when you see the audience.
Ichiban: I won't.
Chikara: Alright then, let's go.
~At El Santo~
Chikara (Looks at the rope): You know... you shouldn't practice with your bey alone, you should train your body too.
(He gets onto the rope)
Chikara (Looks at Ichiban): Do you think you can launch while standing on this rope?
Ichiban: I can do it, it sounds easy!
(Ichiban gets onto the second rope)
Ichiban (Takes out his launcher): Let's try it then. Go... Shoot!
(Ichiban fells on the ground as soon as he launched)
Ichiban (Gets up): Seriously? I didn't knew it was that hard...
Chikara (Gets onto the rope): Go... Shoot!!
(Chikara launched perfectly and didn't fell on the ground)
Ichiban (Gets back onto the rope): This time I'll do it for sure! Go... Shoot!!
(He launched perfectly and didn't fall)
Ichiban: I di-
(The rope broke off)
(Ichiban fells on the ground)
Ichiban: Argh... At least I did it right, right?
Chikara (Smiles): You did it correctly, the rope was weak to withstand your power.
Ichiban (Takes a deep sigh): Great...
Fubuki: Your match is about to start. You should be on the arena now.
Ichiban (Gets up): Alright then, (Looks at Chikara) look carefully I'll win!
Chikara: (Nods while smiling)
~At The Arena~
Hanami: Okay! Boys and Girls! A Fierce battle is about to begin!
(The crowd screams wildy)
Hanami: It's going to be an exciting battle, Valt Aoi's son. At the red corner, Ichiban Aoi makes his first appearance to the world!
Ichiban (Looks at the crowd with a nervous look): I didn't knew there'll so many people....
Hanami: And in the blue corner. It's the number 1 ranked blader, Fiona Dela Hoya!
(Both of them walks up to the stadium)
Ichiban (Switches to Upper mode): We're gonna win this thing!
Fiona (Switches to Upper mode): Is that so..?
Ref: First Battle! Ready... Set!
"3! 2! 1! Go... Shoot" (Fiona pulled the launcher string slowly)
(Fafnir reached to the center slowly)
Ichiban: Blow him away!
(Icarus attacks Fafnir, but Fafnir aborbed Icarus' spin)
Ichiban: It didn't worked....
Fiona: You won't beat Fafnir with that...
Chikara: At this rate... He's going to lose..
Ichiban: We won't give up, Attack again!
(Icarus unleashed a barrage of attacks at Fafnir, but Fafnir absorbs every impact)
Hanami: Wow!! Fafnir is still standing still and Icarus isn't giving up too!
Watashi: What is he up to? Like this Icarus' is going to lose all it's stamina.
(Icarus hits at Fafnir's disc with full force)
Fiona (In a calm voice): Drain Counter.
(Fafnir sends Icarus flying)
Hanami: Icarus is blown away!!
(Icarus hits the ground)
Ref: Magenta Fafnir with an over finish, the score is 1-0!
Ichiban: (Does Fafnir has no weakness...?)
Fiona (Holds Fafnir on her hand): You're not worthy to battle me and I'll prove it now.
Ichiban (Gasps): What?
Chikara (with a nervous look): He cannot win...
Fubuki (Smiles): At least he should've learned something from the last round.
Ichiban (Looks at Icarus): Icarus...
(Suddenly Ichiban's surroundings turned white and Icarus' avatar appeared in front of him)
Icarus: What's wrong?
Ichiban (With a sad look): I feel like.. I can't win this match...
Icarus: You think Fafnir has no weakness?
Ichiban: It doesn't have one.
Icarus: Is Fafnir really made up of 100% rubber?
Ichiban: Huh?
Icarus ('s eyes shines): Find it's weak spot and defeat Fiona, we can defeat her. Just believe in yourself.
(Ichiban's surroundings turned back to normal)
(Ichiban's aura starts to erupt within himself as he opens his eyes)
Ichiban: This time... things will be different!
Fiona: Heh, even if you do your best. You cannot beat Fafnir.
Ref: Second Battle, Ready... Set!
"3! 2! 1! Go... Shoot!!" (Fiona launched with less effort)
Hanami: Fiona again did a woobly shoot! While Icarus is speeding up around the stadium!
Ichiban: (The weak spot...)
(Fafnir reaches the center slowly)
Ichiban (Looks at Fafnir's core): The core...
Ichiban (unleashes his bright white aura): Found it! Do it Icarus!!
(Icarus' avatar appears from the white aura)
Ichiban: Let's go!!
(Icarus hits the wall and jumps, and reaches Fafnir's core)
Chikara: Is he aiming on the core?
Fiona: The core... huh.
Ichiban ('s hand shines and did a slash like gesture): Aviate Slash!!
Hanami: Icarus just landed a finishing blow!!
(Icarus hits onto Fafnir's core, but Fafnir gets pushed down on it's driver)
Fiona (unleashes her glowing yellow aura): Knock him away, Fafnir.
(Fafnir's avatar appears from the yellow aura)
(Fafnir sends Icarus flying and gains immense speed which makes it go agressive on the stadium)
Hanami: Wait.. what! It didn't worked!
Ichiban: (Makes a stunned look)
Fiona: Dragon Break!!
(Icarus reaches down on the stadium and Fafnir strikes on Icarus' core which makes it burst in a single strike)
Hanami: Fafnir just oblierated Icarus in a single strike!!
Ref: Magenta Fafnir! Burst Finish! With the score of 3-0, Fiona Dela is the winner!
Hanami: That incredible power just shows how powerful the number 1 blader is!
Ichiban: (Looks at Icarus' part silently then looks at Fiona)
Fiona (Smiles): I told you at the start didn't I?
[To Be Continued]
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - Hollowmind13 - Sep. 13, 2021
(Sep. 13, 2021 1:47 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Chapter 7: (I know it took me very long, I just couldn't find the words to write)
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Chapter 7: The Sparkling Dragon! Magenta Fafnir!
Ichiban (takes his shoot stance): I'm gonna win this match, Chikara!
Chikara (takes his shoot stance): Sorry... but I refuse to lose against you!!
Drone: Third Battle! Ready... Set!
"3! 2! 1! Go.... Shoot!"
Chikara: Attack, Centaur!!
(As soon as Centaur landed it begans to hits Icarus' blade with sheer force)
Ichiban ('s hand shines with a white glow as he makes a fist): Aviate Slash!!
(Icarus' blade lit up and counters Centaur's attack)
Chikara (unleashes his bright gold aura): Argh.. Centaur!!
(Centaur appears from the erupting gold aura)
Ichiban (unleashes his bright white aura): Send it flying, Icarus!!
(Icarus appears from the bright white aura)
(Icarus and Chikara crosses each other with insane speed at the center)
Ichiban (Smiles): Let's finish this!
(Icarus rides along the edge of the stadium and unleashed sparks as it rides rapidly)
Chikara (Smirks): (That's what I was waiting for....)
(Centaur leans towards it's ambush driver and heads towards the stadium wall, not Icarus)
Watashi: What the heck is he doing? Is he gonna self burst himself..?
Fiona (while looking at the stadium): He saw through Icarus' movement.
Fubuki (Looks at Fiona): You mean...
Chikara ('s hand shines gold as he makes a fist and makes a slash gesture): Noble Spear!!
(Centaur heads towards the wall but in a slight second Icarus came there)
Ichiban (Gasps): Seriously!?
(Centaur's pins Icarus between it's shining blade and the stadium creating a damage of pincer attack)
(Sparks flew from both of the beys and a purple beam light surges upwards from the stadium)
(Icarus couldn't withstand that attack and bursts)
Drone: Noble Centaur, Burst Finish! Chikara Arami wins with the score of 3-1!
Ichiban (Picks up Icarus and assembles it): I won't lose next time!
Fiona (walks up to the stadium): (Looks at Watashi and Ben) You two...
Watashi/Ben: What?
Fiona (holds Fafnir on her hand): I have decided, I'll battle both of you together.
Watashi (makes an angry look): Are you looking down on me!?
Fiona: Call it a test of power.
Ichiban: Then what about me?
Fiona: I'll save you for the last. (Smiles) You've proved your worth to me.
Watashi (holds Wendigo on his hand): Wendigo will put you on your place!
Fubuki: Fafnir's blade is completely made up of rubber, it helps to absorb spin from right-spinning beys.
Watashi (Smiles): Fafnir can't absorb Wendigo's stamina.
Ben (holds Belial on his hand): Belial has rubber too, So I'll just drain Fafnir's spin.
(Ben and Watashi walks up to the stadium)
Watashi (takes out his launcher): Wendigo's gonna win this match!
Fiona (takes out her launcher): Fine then.
Drone: Ready... Set!
"3! 2! 1! Go... Shoot!!" (Ben and Fiona launched their beys lightly and Watashi shoots with his left hand)
(Fafnir and Belial clashes at the center and starts to drain each other's stamina)
Fiona (Smiles): So that's your strategy?
(Wendigo leans on the edge of the stadium and heads towards Fafnir)
Watashi: Moment Crash!!
Fiona: This isn't gonna work on Fafnir.
(Wendigo crashes down on Fafnir's drain disk, Fafnir evades the attack by the free-spinning disk and drain's Wendigo's stamina)
(Wendigo's trajectory got changed and it got knocked out of the stadium)
Watashi (Gasps): What!?
Ichiban: The disk is free-spining?
Chikara: There's more into it than it seems to meet the eye.....
(Belial absorbed enough spin and starts to accelarate on the stadium, Fafnir spins on the stadium with extremely low stamina)
Ben: Time to finish this! Oni Bomber!!
(Belial's blades lits up and with the help of V gear it crashes onto Fafnir's Drain disk with a immense slash attack)
Fiona (In a calm voice): Drain Counter.
(Fafnir's disk lits up and bursts Belial)
(Belial's parts flew up in the sky)
Ben (Gasps): No...
Drone: Fiona Dela Hoya is the winner!
Fiona (Smiles and looks at Watashi): You cannot best Fafnir even in your wildest dreams.
Watashi: Tch.. I won't let you get away with this...
Ichiban (Looks at Chikara): That's what you meant?
Chikara (Nods): Fafnir's rubber disk is free-spinning to left-spinning opponents, but to right-spinning opponents, it's fixed so that it could drain the spin.
Fubuki (Looks at Fiona): This explains why she's believed to be the world's number one blader...
Fiona (Walks up to Ichiban): I'll wait for you at El Santo's beyblsde arena. Don't disappoint me.
Ichiban: Yeah... I won't lose against you!
(Fiona walks away)
Chikara (Looks at Ichiban): If I were you, I would've start practicing as you have enough time to do so.
Ichiban (Nods): I will.
Watashi: She already looked through Icarus' movement, you need to be more careful.
Ichiban: She's not only one to see through my techniques! I too have noticed a little bit...
Fubuki (Smiles): It will be your very first official match, don't lose your cool when you see the audience.
Ichiban: I won't.
Chikara: Alright then, let's go.
~At El Santo~
Chikara (Looks at the rope): You know... you shouldn't practice with your bey alone, you should train your body too.
(He gets onto the rope)
Chikara (Looks at Ichiban): Do you think you can launch while standing on this rope?
Ichiban: I can do it, it sounds easy!
(Ichiban gets onto the second rope)
Ichiban (Takes out his launcher): Let's try it then. Go... Shoot!
(Ichiban fells on the ground as soon as he launched)
Ichiban (Gets up): Seriously? I didn't knew it was that hard...
Chikara (Gets onto the rope): Go... Shoot!!
(Chikara launched perfectly and didn't fell on the ground)
Ichiban (Gets back onto the rope): This time I'll do it for sure! Go... Shoot!!
(He launched perfectly and didn't fall)
Ichiban: I di-
(The rope broke off)
(Ichiban fells on the ground)
Ichiban: Argh... At least I did it right, right?
Chikara (Smiles): You did it correctly, the rope was weak to withstand your power.
Ichiban (Takes a deep sigh): Great...
Fubuki: Your match is about to start. You should be on the arena now.
Ichiban (Gets up): Alright then, (Looks at Chikara) look carefully I'll win!
Chikara: (Nods while smiling)
~At The Arena~
Hanami: Okay! Boys and Girls! A Fierce battle is about to begin!
(The crowd screams wildy)
Hanami: It's going to be an exciting battle, Valt Aoi's son. At the red corner, Ichiban Aoi makes his first appearance to the world!
Ichiban (Looks at the crowd with a nervous look): I didn't knew there'll so many people....
Hanami: And in the blue corner. It's the number 1 ranked blader, Fiona Dela Hoya!
(Both of them walks up to the stadium)
Ichiban (Switches to Upper mode): We're gonna win this thing!
Fiona (Switches to Upper mode): Is that so..?
Ref: First Battle! Ready... Set!
"3! 2! 1! Go... Shoot" (Fiona pulled the launcher string slowly)
(Fafnir reached to the center slowly)
Ichiban: Blow him away!
(Icarus attacks Fafnir, but Fafnir aborbed Icarus' spin)
Ichiban: It didn't worked....
Fiona: You won't beat Fafnir with that...
Chikara: At this rate... He's going to lose..
Ichiban: We won't give up, Attack again!
(Icarus unleashed a barrage of attacks at Fafnir, but Fafnir absorbs every impact)
Hanami: Wow!! Fafnir is still standing still and Icarus isn't giving up too!
Watashi: What is he up to? Like this Icarus' is going to lose all it's stamina.
(Icarus hits at Fafnir's disc with full force)
Fiona (In a calm voice): Drain Counter.
(Fafnir sends Icarus flying)
Hanami: Icarus is blown away!!
(Icarus hits the ground)
Ref: Magenta Fafnir with an over finish, the score is 1-0!
Ichiban: (Does Fafnir has no weakness...?)
Fiona (Holds Fafnir on her hand): You're not worthy to battle me and I'll prove it now.
Ichiban (Gasps): What?
Chikara (with a nervous look): He cannot win...
Fubuki (Smiles): At least he should've learned something from the last round.
Ichiban (Looks at Icarus): Icarus...
(Suddenly Ichiban's surroundings turned white and Icarus' avatar appeared in front of him)
Icarus: What's wrong?
Ichiban (With a sad look): I feel like.. I can't win this match...
Icarus: You think Fafnir has no weakness?
Ichiban: It doesn't have one.
Icarus: Is Fafnir really made up of 100% rubber?
Ichiban: Huh?
Icarus ('s eyes shines): Find it's weak spot and defeat Fiona, we can defeat her. Just believe in yourself.
(Ichiban's surroundings turned back to normal)
(Ichiban's aura starts to erupt within himself as he opens his eyes)
Ichiban: This time... things will be different!
Fiona: Heh, even if you do your best. You cannot beat Fafnir.
Ref: Second Battle, Ready... Set!
"3! 2! 1! Go... Shoot!!" (Fiona launched with less effort)
Hanami: Fiona again did a woobly shoot! While Icarus is speeding up around the stadium!
Ichiban: (The weak spot...)
(Fafnir reaches the center slowly)
Ichiban (Looks at Fafnir's core): The core...
Ichiban (unleashes his bright white aura): Found it! Do it Icarus!!
(Icarus' avatar appears from the white aura)
Ichiban: Let's go!!
(Icarus hits the wall and jumps, and reaches Fafnir's core)
Chikara: Is he aiming on the core?
Fiona: The core... huh.
Ichiban ('s hand shines and did a slash like gesture): Aviate Slash!!
Hanami: Icarus just landed a finishing blow!!
(Icarus hits onto Fafnir's core, but Fafnir gets pushed down on it's driver)
Fiona (unleashes her glowing yellow aura): Knock him away, Fafnir.
(Fafnir's avatar appears from the yellow aura)
(Fafnir sends Icarus flying and gains immense speed which makes it go agressive on the stadium)
Hanami: Wait.. what! It didn't worked!
Ichiban: (Makes a stunned look)
Fiona: Dragon Break!!
(Icarus reaches down on the stadium and Fafnir strikes on Icarus' core which makes it burst in a single strike)
Hanami: Fafnir just oblierated Icarus in a single strike!!
Ref: Magenta Fafnir! Burst Finish! With the score of 3-0, Fiona Dela is the winner!
Hanami: That incredible power just shows how powerful the number 1 blader is!
Ichiban: (Looks at Icarus' part silently then looks at Fiona)
Fiona (Smiles): I told you at the start didn't I?
[To Be Continued]
Ah Magenta, the strongest color.
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The driver's gimmick countering it's anime only weakness up to date is convenient, and it could also burst same spin beys. The rope thing was kinda random, and short too. The 2v1 battle was cool, it countered Wendigo by using the disc gimmick and changing it's tragectory to self KO. While Fafnir slow-mo bursts Belial using also the disc gimmick.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Kiwami! - MasterofDerp - Sep. 14, 2021
Mind if I join? I’ll send in my OC pretty soon. One thing: They are not related to any canon(Biologically), though do wield a recurring bey(Bahamut)
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Character name: Brandt Vahan
Alias: The Gargoyle.
Character Appearance:
Brandt is extremely tall and muscular, akin to a slightly more hulking version of Lodin Haijima and Houi Oh. With bright Crimson Eyes and dark purple hair(mimicking his bey) strewn down his back in a ponytail that is kept in check by a dark turquoise band, Brandt uses his hulking status to his advantage to intimidate his opponents, often into submission. His face is adorned by turquoise markings in a pattern representing monster as a way to give off more intimidation. When his resonance is active, these markings will glow to signify a powerup. His skin is tanned slightly, though his arms also have two revealed tattoos that also glow turquoise with his facial markings. For his clothing, he wears a large dark purple denim jacket(Unzipped) with teal fur running down the zipper area, revealing a purple sleeveless shirt underneath with a simple red dot in the center. In battle, he will discard the jacket, revealing a dark brown shoulder brace going across his left shoulder and across his chest diagonally down. He wears a brown belt with a red metallic belt buckle with turquoise pants, along with dark purple hiking boots.
Personality: Brandt is a man of few words, remaining a tall, looming presence during battle. A powerful blader, Brandt seeks worthy opponents of his skill. Slow to anger but very cold towards others, most do not prefer to be around him due to his overwhelming intimidation and brunt attitude. He is extremely physically fit, which also reflects on his bey: Vile Bahamut, along with his blading style, as he prefers brute force over strategy most of the time. While he does not go out of his way to destroy beys, he does not condemn the practice, summing it up to the destroyed bey being too weak to survive. He is also extremely serious, rarely laughing, while also taking training incredibly seriously. He also notably does not care for rankings, instead simply trying to prove his strength through battle in whatever way he can.
Backstory: While mostly shrouded in mystery, Brandt was inspired by Basara Suiryu’s Roar Bahamut to forge the newest iteration of the Bahamut line. Driven to prove his dominance, though not to become the number one ranked blader, Brandt has crushed several notable bladers of the new generation, seeking to prove his strength to others.
Character Alignment: Chaotic Neutral.
Proposed Role in Story: Rival/Minor Antagonist.
Bey Combination: Vile Bahamut .10 Brute Dome-Q(Quell)
Kiwami Core: Bahamut
-Features the God Dragon motif Bahamut in a standard vertical manner, with appearance appearing similar to the Bahamut DB Core, though with a few notable changes. The central point of the core is transformed into a crimson rubber diamond as a reference to Dread Bahamut’s gen weight, with the dragon appearing more purplish-black instead of pitch black. The horns are now adorned with turquoise flames running down the outer sides of them, being a thinner width and going slightly into the horns themselves. The horns are made of plastic instead of rubber. The mouth flames are noticeable absent, instead being replaced by the mouth having a teal glow, along with the flames having been replaced by claws. The outer portion features a crimson outer core with six protrustions(3 per side evenly distributed across), represented by three claw like bulges going slightly upwards to represent Bahamut’s claws. The core features one tall lock at the very end of the teeth portion like Garuda, implying poor burst resistance, though this is nullified through two small rubber protrusions facing downwards akin to the Bahamut DB Core(Less than Gen height, DB Core width). While this drastically helps with burst resistance, the rubber may wear down(Likely not going to happen unless using a metal cap driver), so maintenance or replacement may be needed. It is a left spin core.
Kiwami Weight: .10
-Uses the .10 weight found on Wendigo.
Kiwami Blade: Vile
-A Dread Bahamut like shape consisting of two semi wide plastic wings to allow for a two blades for attacking purposes. These blades are larger than Dread’s, and can be used for attack and defensive purposes at the cost of decreased defense. In upper mode, the other two blades(Of 6) are able to be extended, making Bahamut much rounder as well as retracting the two attacking points for an extremely round base that is perfect for reflecting attacks. In lower mode, the blade is locked in its more attack oriented state, though when paired with the Quell Armor, has a specialized gimmick up its sleeve. It uses a mix between Dread and Roar’s color scheme, though with noticeably more red. The attack and morphing blades are both a translucent turquoise/teal, with the inner layer being black/dark purple, with some flecks of white found on it.
Kiwami Armor: Quell
-A circular armor with two semi large round blades that are able to extend outwards slightly upon rotation, allowing for increased defensive power and stamina. Behind the blades are layers lined with thin layers of rubber to allow for increased burst resistance when placed in lower mode. When in lower mode, the Quell armor’s blades will be kept in, allowing the thin line of rubber to grind against the disc to further slow Bahamut from bursting, though constant use will wear down the rubber and make it near useless, so ensure to have several copies of it. This extra burst resistance is only obtainable in lower mode. The rubber is red, with the armor having Dread Bahamut colors.
Neo Disc: Brute
-A circular Neo disc that supports both the upper and lower modes of the Kiwami system. It keeps its weight inwards via inwards facing spikes that go around the slightly slanted down disc like spikes facing upwards. It has high IWD, though due to the weight being focused more inwards is not recommended for stamina purposes. It is quite heavy though, and does grant some solid LAD.
Driver: Dome
-A Freespinning Ball tip driver with a massive plastic freespinning ball in the center surrounded by a freespinning cone(Think a dog cone for the cone shape.) This allows for quick counterattack movements, excellent stability in the center, high LAD(Around Universe level), and grants a slight resistance to smash and non direct to center aerial strikes(Such as Magma Smash). It is a translucent black in coloration.
Special Moves(In order of appearance):
1) Vile Claw: Using the two attack points on the Vile Blade when they are not retracted via clicking, Bahamut gains momentum from its driver going around the stadium or by drifting to land a two strike slash attack against the opponent. Mostly used in Lower Mode.
2) Vile Guard: When Bahamut reaches its final click in Upper mode, the retracted defense blades will slide out, granting Bahamut an overall more circular shape as a purplish reddish dome is cast over it for effect(The light Dome does not affect defense, just there for effect.)
3) Dome Crash: Using the dome driver’s cone to recover after being knocked back, Bahamut tilts forwards to roll off the stadium slope before using the gained momentum to unleash a devastating counterattack via charging down the slope and smacking into the opponent’s bey.
4) Vile Wing: When the attack blades are out, Bahamut utilizes the slightly sloped shape to swat the opponent’s attack away with usual ease(Especially effective against non wall-bey pincer attacks). This will often result in Bahamut’s lock advancing to its more defensive state when in upper mode, meaning it may be a once per battle move unless kept in lower mode.
5) Brutal Dragon Smash: If knocked into the air completely or mostly vertically, Bahamut will charge downwards, smacking into the opponent’s top portion of the layer and sending them upwards from the recoil, possibly bursting the bey thanks to its heavier weight and centrifugal force.
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Rip I just saw the announcement on the no more entries. Nvm
Tho (This is def a far stretch), do feel free to use the Bahamut idea in case you need it.