RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic - UnseenBurst - Jun. 30, 2021
(Jun. 30, 2021 10:55 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: Contest ends Sunday, I am busy this week.
Ok how many winners?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic - PinkRose - Jul. 01, 2021
Oh, you're back with this thing? Noice.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic - LJ-Blader - Jul. 02, 2021
UnseenBurst
(Jun. 30, 2021 10:55 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: Contest ends Sunday, I am busy this week.
Ok how many winners?
one or two
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic - LJ-Blader - Jul. 02, 2021
Tyler Ather
Age 10 - Compassionate and always wants to help. He loves to battle and is always up for a challenge. His greatest wish is to lead his own guild. He is best friends with Bell and they have know each other since they were little. He also love math. When he battles he personality completely flips going to an absolute beast. He is even strong when he resonates with Titan.
Appearance - He has blonde hair with a red streak on one side. He wears a Black T-Shirt and red shorts. He will most likely be wearing flip flops.
Darkflame Titan Link Drive’ -6’
Darkflame - Three swords (like unions but filed in) and two spikes in between the swords (edges of 2S)
Titan - Dragon Skull with two horns, eyes glow red and black with resonance
Link - Nexus with all blades flat, giving lots of lad like wheel
Drive’ - Drift with rubber in the creases and a gimmick like ultimate reboot with a rubber tip, rubber in the lines, and metal base
-6’ - Six with 2’s design
Titan - A Demon Dragon. He has two sets of small wings by his shoulders, he stands on two legs, has sharp claws, is black and red, has a tail, and two horns that has red fire in them
Name: Athena Valhalla
Age: 10
Gender: Female
Nationality: American
Physical Appearance (warning: This will go into questionable detail)
She often wears a purple dress with bows on the chest and she wears black jeans and she wears purple dress shoes. She has purple eyes and purple hair with a twisted braid (Coronet) on top of her head. Face-wise she is incredibly beautiful.
her hair and eyes turn white when she is at full power. She is also a hero.
Personality Traits
Shy - she gets nervous around new people
Friendly - she loves her friends and likes to give them hugs.
Clumsy - she is quite clumsy
Bey - Soul Adeona Nexus Infernal-4
Adeona Chip - its basically Uranus if it was a DB Core
Soul Ring - basically First but a little more rounded
Armor: -4 - looks kinda like -2 but with 4 filled in points
Nexus Disk
Infernal Driver - pretty much Destroy but without the free-spin plate
Avatar: Basically a knight-angel-like figure with black armor and 8 blue wings. Adeona even holds a energy sword in one hand and a shield in the other.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic - GenesisBlader - Jul. 02, 2021
(Jul. 02, 2021 7:57 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote:
Tyler Ather
Age 10 - Compassionate and always wants to help. He loves to battle and is always up for a challenge. His greatest wish is to lead his own guild. He is best friends with Bell and they have know each other since they were little. He also love math. When he battles he personality completely flips going to an absolute beast. He is even strong when he resonates with Titan.
Appearance - He has blonde hair with a red streak on one side. He wears a Black T-Shirt and red shorts. He will most likely be wearing flip flops.
Darkflame Titan Link Drive’ -6’
Darkflame - Three swords (like unions but filed in) and two spikes in between the swords (edges of 2S)
Titan - Dragon Skull with two horns, eyes glow red and black with resonance
Link - Nexus with all blades flat, giving lots of lad like wheel
Drive’ - Drift with rubber in the creases and a gimmick like ultimate reboot with a rubber tip, rubber in the lines, and metal base
-6’ - Six with 2’s design
Titan - A Demon Dragon. He has two sets of small wings by his shoulders, he stands on two legs, has sharp claws, is black and red, has a tail, and two horns that has red fire in them
Name: Athena Valhalla
Age: 10
Gender: Female
Nationality: American
Physical Appearance (warning: This will go into questionable detail)
She often wears a purple dress with bows on the chest and she wears black jeans and she wears purple dress shoes. She has purple eyes and purple hair with a twisted braid (Coronet) on top of her head. Face-wise she is incredibly beautiful.
her hair and eyes turn white when she is at full power. She is also a hero.
Personality Traits
Shy - she gets nervous around new people
Friendly - she loves her friends and likes to give them hugs.
Clumsy - she is quite clumsy
Bey - Soul Adeona Nexus Infernal-4
Adeona Chip - its basically Uranus if it was a DB Core
Soul Ring - basically First but a little more rounded
Armor: -4 - looks kinda like -2 but with 4 filled in points
Nexus Disk
Infernal Driver - pretty much Destroy but without the free-spin plate
Avatar: Basically a knight-angel-like figure with black armor and 8 blue wings. Adeona even holds a energy sword in one hand and a shield in the other.
can you please say that aiga is in this fanfic
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 02, 2021
(Jul. 02, 2021 1:15 AM)LJ-Blader Wrote: UnseenBurst
(Jun. 30, 2021 10:55 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: Contest ends Sunday, I am busy this week.
Ok how many winners?
one or two
If at Sunday you get +4 entries you can do 2
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic - LJ-Blader - Jul. 03, 2021
Aiger is, not sure when he will enter…
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic - GenesisBlader - Jul. 03, 2021
(Jul. 03, 2021 12:40 AM)LJ-Blader Wrote: Aiger is, not sure when he will enter… NOOOOOOOOOO MAAAAAAAAAAAA AIGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic - LJ-Blader - Jul. 04, 2021
And the winner is…
Unseen Burst!
Gg, and your character will be in sometime around 2nd arc.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic - GenesisBlader - Jul. 04, 2021
(Jul. 04, 2021 5:45 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: And the winner is…
Unseen Burst!
Gg, and your character will be in sometime around 2nd arc.
nice job unseen, bruh i wish i had been *not lazy* enough to enter
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic - UnseenBurst - Jul. 04, 2021
(Jul. 04, 2021 5:45 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: And the winner is…
Unseen Burst!
Gg, and your character will be in sometime around 2nd arc.
No way!!/ seriously? Anyways ggs to all of u
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic - LegendJustice - Jul. 04, 2021
(Jul. 04, 2021 5:45 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: And the winner is…
Unseen Burst!
Gg, and your character will be in sometime around 2nd arc.
Gg to everyone!!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic - LJ-Blader - Jul. 05, 2021
Episode 8
Fight, Fight, Fight!
Hanami: Ladies and Gentlemen! For the third battle of today we have Tyler vs Ranzo! Who will win this fight and move to the semi finals!
*The bladers approach the stage*
Ranzo: Amigo!!!!!
Tyler: Ha! I beat your cousin, you should be no problem!
Ranzo: Oh really? My Ragnaruk will show you power like never before!
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Tyler: Go!
Tyler: *Thinking* Time to put my skills to the test!*
Tyler: Flame Shoot!
*Titan does Rush Launch but with a Star pattern*
Ranzo: Go! Keep on spinning! Ragnaruk!
Tyler: Attack! Flame Claw!
*Titan charges attack Ragnaruk but Ragnaruk is not phased*
Ranzo: You really think that pitiful attack will work! Time to end you! Ragnaruk! My Amigo! Double Wing Cyclone!
*A huge cyclone appears as well as Ragnaruk’s avatar*
Tyler: Woah! That is strong! Flame Claw! Again!
*Titan’s attack can’t connect and is thrown up into the air and is tossed out of the cyclone then Titan hits the edge of the stadium*
Tyler: Titan, Go! Flame Drive!
*Titan speeds up significantly*
Ranzo: That speed boost won’t effect me! Go finish it!
*Titan heads straight for the center but is thrown out of the stadium by Ragnaruk*
Ref: Ragnaruk with an over finish, score is 0-1
Bell *Whispering to himself*: Cmon Tyler, pull this off.
Tyler *Thinking*: We have got to win!
*Tyler is pulled into the avatar world*
Tyler: Titan! We must win! But how…
Titan: Think about it, you got this.
*Tyler is back in the real world*
Ranzo: Amigo! Let’s have a fun battle!
Tyler: Yeah!
Ref: Ready, Set!
3,2,1 Let it Rip!
*Both beys head toward the center*
Ranzo: Why you trying to control the center? Huh?
Tyler: You’ll see! Go! Flame Claw!
*Titan gets to the center first and hits Ragnaruk back*
Ranzo: Oh really? Go Never Winds!
*Ragnaruk sends a gust of winds under Titan and throws it to the outskirts the stadium, now both beys are on the outside*
Tyler: Ha! Just like I wanted! Now Titan! Tactic Bermuda Fire!
*Titan starts traveling in a triangle not letting Ragnaruk in*
Ranzo: What is this!?!
Hanami: Woah! Tyler used a planned set of moves called a tactic! It looks like this one is meant to counter stamina types!
Ranzo: This might be a problem amigos…
*Ragnaruk was losing stamina fast*
Tyler: Agg!
*Titan hits the wall changing it to blade mode and releasing his avatar*
Tyler: Now! Dark Flame Sword!
*Titan slashed with his sword sending Ragnaruk flying and leaving a gash in the side of the arena*
Ref: The score is now two to one, Tyler wins!
Hanami: What an impressive show of force! Tyler will be moving on to the next round!
*Back in the stands*
Bell: Hmm, tactics. I will have to make one as well…
Athena: That was awesome! I am so ready to battle! Adeona we’re going to rock this!
*Athena resonates with Adeona as she heads down to the stadium, on her way down she bumps into Tyler*
Athe: Oops- Oh hi Tyler! Be ready, I am gonna beat you next round!
Tyler: First beat Katie, she is no push over…
Athena: Don’t worry, I got this!
Hanami: Okay bey fans! Welcome to the the fourth and last battle of the day! Two bladers showing off some serious girl power! Athena vs Katie!
*The girls walk up to the stage*
Katie: Hah! Adeona doesn’t stand a chance against my Kitsune! We will cover your light in Darkness!
Athena: Oh really? Let’s see!
*Athena is transported to the spirit world*
Athena: Adeona, I am nervous… Katie seems strong.
Adeona: Do you believe you can win…
Athena: I don’t know, maybe?
Adeona: Believe as I believe in you and it will come to you.
*Athena is transported back more confident*
Ref: First match, Ready Set!
3,2,1 Let it Rip!
Katie: Kitsune take the center! Kukan Guard!
Athena *thoughts*: So she is going defensive… I am going to have to try harder to get in the semifinals!
Athena: Go Soul Shoot!
*Adeona does a rush shoot but it barely hits Kitsune*
Hanami: This battle is heating up! Who will win?
Katie: Me! Now Darkness Crash!
*Kitsune moves after being hit by Adeona and does shield crash*
*Adeona is sent flying back and hits a wall*
Katie: Burst!
Athena: No chance! Go! Soul Blade!
*Adeona charges at Kitsune but on impact Adeona loses all stamina*
Ref: Kitsune with a spin finish
Katie: Oh yeah! Let’s do that again Kitsune!
Athena: What did I do wrong? What can I do?
*Flashback*
Bell: You might want to know how to do this… Take it like this… then do that and you have high mode!
Athena: Oh cool! Thanks Bell
*Athena hugs Bell*
Bell: (Embarrassed) Yeah, well no prob
*Flashback ends and Athena changes Adeona to high mode*
Athena: Check this out!
Ref: Ready, Set
3,2,1 Let it Rip!
Athena: Go Adeona! Soul Shoot!
Katie: This again? Kukan Guard.
Athena: (Thoughts) You wish…
Athena: Now!
Katie: Darkness Crash, wait what?
*Kitsune did shield crash and missed and the blade hit in the crack between the ring and the disk*
Athena: Infernal Sword!
*Soul’s blade glow purple and tilt down to hit Kitsune*
Ref: Adeona with a burst finish! Athena wins 2-0
*Athena looks around at the crowd and gets nervous*
Athena: Uhh, I gota go…
*She runs back in and trips on her way*
*Adeona glows warm at Athena, proud of what she did*
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic - UnseenBurst - Jul. 05, 2021
(Jul. 05, 2021 8:12 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: Episode 8
Fight, Fight, Fight!
Hanami: Ladies and Gentlemen! For the third battle of today we have Tyler vs Ranzo! Who will win this fight and move to the semi finals!
*The bladers approach the stage*
Ranzo: Amigo!!!!!
Tyler: Ha! I beat your cousin, you should be no problem!
Ranzo: Oh really? My Ragnaruk will show you power like never before!
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Tyler: Go!
Tyler: *Thinking* Time to put my skills to the test!*
Tyler: Flame Shoot!
*Titan does Rush Launch but with a Star pattern*
Ranzo: Go! Keep on spinning! Ragnaruk!
Tyler: Attack! Flame Claw!
*Titan charges attack Ragnaruk but Ragnaruk is not phased*
Ranzo: You really think that pitiful attack will work! Time to end you! Ragnaruk! My Amigo! Double Wing Cyclone!
*A huge cyclone appears as well as Ragnaruk’s avatar*
Tyler: Woah! That is strong! Flame Claw! Again!
*Titan’s attack can’t connect and is thrown up into the air and is tossed out of the cyclone then Titan hits the edge of the stadium*
Tyler: Titan, Go! Flame Drive!
*Titan speeds up significantly*
Ranzo: That speed boost won’t effect me! Go finish it!
*Titan heads straight for the center but is thrown out of the stadium by Ragnaruk*
Ref: Ragnaruk with an over finish, score is 0-1
Bell *Whispering to himself*: Cmon Tyler, pull this off.
Tyler *Thinking*: We have got to win!
*Tyler is pulled into the avatar world*
Tyler: Titan! We must win! But how…
Titan: Think about it, you got this.
*Tyler is back in the real world*
Ranzo: Amigo! Let’s have a fun battle!
Tyler: Yeah!
Ref: Ready, Set!
3,2,1 Let it Rip!
*Both beys head toward the center*
Ranzo: Why you trying to control the center? Huh?
Tyler: You’ll see! Go! Flame Claw!
*Titan gets to the center first and hits Ragnaruk back*
Ranzo: Oh really? Go Never Winds!
*Ragnaruk sends a gust of winds under Titan and throws it to the outskirts the stadium, now both beys are on the outside*
Tyler: Ha! Just like I wanted! Now Titan! Tactic Bermuda Fire!
*Titan starts traveling in a triangle not letting Ragnaruk in*
Ranzo: What is this!?!
Hanami: Woah! Tyler used a planned set of moves called a tactic! It looks like this one is meant to counter stamina types!
Ranzo: This might be a problem amigos…
*Ragnaruk was losing stamina fast*
Tyler: Agg!
*Titan hits the wall changing it to blade mode and releasing his avatar*
Tyler: Now! Dark Flame Sword!
*Titan slashed with his sword sending Ragnaruk flying and leaving a gash in the side of the arena*
Ref: The score is now two to one, Tyler wins!
Hanami: What an impressive show of force! Tyler will be moving on to the next round!
*Back in the stands*
Bell: Hmm, tactics. I will have to make one as well…
Athena: That was awesome! I am so ready to battle! Adeona we’re going to rock this!
*Athena resonates with Adeona as she heads down to the stadium, on her way down she bumps into Tyler*
Athe: Oops- Oh hi Tyler! Be ready, I am gonna beat you next round!
Tyler: First beat Katie, she is no push over…
Athena: Don’t worry, I got this!
Hanami: Okay bey fans! Welcome to the the fourth and last battle of the day! Two bladers showing off some serious girl power! Athena vs Katie!
*The girls walk up to the stage*
Katie: Hah! Adeona doesn’t stand a chance against my Kitsune! We will cover your light in Darkness!
Athena: Oh really? Let’s see!
*Athena is transported to the spirit world*
Athena: Adeona, I am nervous… Katie seems strong.
Adeona: Do you believe you can win…
Athena: I don’t know, maybe?
Adeona: Believe as I believe in you and it will come to you.
*Athena is transported back more confident*
Ref: First match, Ready Set!
3,2,1 Let it Rip!
Katie: Kitsune take the center! Kukan Guard!
Athena *thoughts*: So she is going defensive… I am going to have to try harder to get in the semifinals!
Athena: Go Soul Shoot!
*Adeona does a rush shoot but it barely hits Kitsune*
Hanami: This battle is heating up! Who will win?
Katie: Me! Now Darkness Crash!
*Kitsune moves after being hit by Adeona and does shield crash*
*Adeona is sent flying back and hits a wall*
Katie: Burst!
Athena: No chance! Go! Soul Blade!
*Adeona charges at Kitsune but on impact Adeona loses all stamina*
Ref: Kitsune with a spin finish
Katie: Oh yeah! Let’s do that again Kitsune!
Athena: What did I do wrong? What can I do?
*Flashback*
Bell: You might want to know how to do this… Take it like this… then do that and you have high mode!
Athena: Oh cool! Thanks Bell
*Athena hugs Bell*
Bell: (Embarrassed) Yeah, well no prob
*Flashback ends and Athena changes Adeona to high mode*
Athena: Check this out!
Ref: Ready, Set
3,2,1 Let it Rip!
Athena: Go Adeona! Soul Shoot!
Katie: This again? Kukan Guard.
Athena: (Thoughts) You wish…
Athena: Now!
Katie: Darkness Crash, wait what?
*Kitsune did shield crash and missed and the blade hit in the crack between the ring and the disk*
Athena: Infernal Sword!
*Soul’s blade glow purple and tilt down to hit Kitsune*
Ref: Adeona with a burst finish! Athena wins 2-0
*Athena looks around at the crowd and gets nervous*
Athena: Uhh, I gota go…
*She runs back in and trips on her way*
*Adeona glows warm at Athena, proud of what she did*
YES IT'S BACK
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic - PinkRose - Jul. 06, 2021
(Jul. 05, 2021 8:12 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: Episode 8
Fight, Fight, Fight!
Hanami: Ladies and Gentlemen! For the third battle of today we have Tyler vs Ranzo! Who will win this fight and move to the semi finals!
*The bladers approach the stage*
Ranzo: Amigo!!!!!
Tyler: Ha! I beat your cousin, you should be no problem!
Ranzo: Oh really? My Ragnaruk will show you power like never before!
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Tyler: Go!
Tyler: *Thinking* Time to put my skills to the test!*
Tyler: Flame Shoot!
*Titan does Rush Launch but with a Star pattern*
Ranzo: Go! Keep on spinning! Ragnaruk!
Tyler: Attack! Flame Claw!
*Titan charges attack Ragnaruk but Ragnaruk is not phased*
Ranzo: You really think that pitiful attack will work! Time to end you! Ragnaruk! My Amigo! Double Wing Cyclone!
*A huge cyclone appears as well as Ragnaruk’s avatar*
Tyler: Woah! That is strong! Flame Claw! Again!
*Titan’s attack can’t connect and is thrown up into the air and is tossed out of the cyclone then Titan hits the edge of the stadium*
Tyler: Titan, Go! Flame Drive!
*Titan speeds up significantly*
Ranzo: That speed boost won’t effect me! Go finish it!
*Titan heads straight for the center but is thrown out of the stadium by Ragnaruk*
Ref: Ragnaruk with an over finish, score is 0-1
Bell *Whispering to himself*: Cmon Tyler, pull this off.
Tyler *Thinking*: We have got to win!
*Tyler is pulled into the avatar world*
Tyler: Titan! We must win! But how…
Titan: Think about it, you got this.
*Tyler is back in the real world*
Ranzo: Amigo! Let’s have a fun battle!
Tyler: Yeah!
Ref: Ready, Set!
3,2,1 Let it Rip!
*Both beys head toward the center*
Ranzo: Why you trying to control the center? Huh?
Tyler: You’ll see! Go! Flame Claw!
*Titan gets to the center first and hits Ragnaruk back*
Ranzo: Oh really? Go Never Winds!
*Ragnaruk sends a gust of winds under Titan and throws it to the outskirts the stadium, now both beys are on the outside*
Tyler: Ha! Just like I wanted! Now Titan! Tactic Bermuda Fire!
*Titan starts traveling in a triangle not letting Ragnaruk in*
Ranzo: What is this!?!
Hanami: Woah! Tyler used a planned set of moves called a tactic! It looks like this one is meant to counter stamina types!
Ranzo: This might be a problem amigos…
*Ragnaruk was losing stamina fast*
Tyler: Agg!
*Titan hits the wall changing it to blade mode and releasing his avatar*
Tyler: Now! Dark Flame Sword!
*Titan slashed with his sword sending Ragnaruk flying and leaving a gash in the side of the arena*
Ref: The score is now two to one, Tyler wins!
Hanami: What an impressive show of force! Tyler will be moving on to the next round!
*Back in the stands*
Bell: Hmm, tactics. I will have to make one as well…
Athena: That was awesome! I am so ready to battle! Adeona we’re going to rock this!
*Athena resonates with Adeona as she heads down to the stadium, on her way down she bumps into Tyler*
Athe: Oops- Oh hi Tyler! Be ready, I am gonna beat you next round!
Tyler: First beat Katie, she is no push over…
Athena: Don’t worry, I got this!
Hanami: Okay bey fans! Welcome to the the fourth and last battle of the day! Two bladers showing off some serious girl power! Athena vs Katie!
*The girls walk up to the stage*
Katie: Hah! Adeona doesn’t stand a chance against my Kitsune! We will cover your light in Darkness!
Athena: Oh really? Let’s see!
*Athena is transported to the spirit world*
Athena: Adeona, I am nervous… Katie seems strong.
Adeona: Do you believe you can win…
Athena: I don’t know, maybe?
Adeona: Believe as I believe in you and it will come to you.
*Athena is transported back more confident*
Ref: First match, Ready Set!
3,2,1 Let it Rip!
Katie: Kitsune take the center! Kukan Guard!
Athena *thoughts*: So she is going defensive… I am going to have to try harder to get in the semifinals!
Athena: Go Soul Shoot!
*Adeona does a rush shoot but it barely hits Kitsune*
Hanami: This battle is heating up! Who will win?
Katie: Me! Now Darkness Crash!
*Kitsune moves after being hit by Adeona and does shield crash*
*Adeona is sent flying back and hits a wall*
Katie: Burst!
Athena: No chance! Go! Soul Blade!
*Adeona charges at Kitsune but on impact Adeona loses all stamina*
Ref: Kitsune with a spin finish
Katie: Oh yeah! Let’s do that again Kitsune!
Athena: What did I do wrong? What can I do?
*Flashback*
Bell: You might want to know how to do this… Take it like this… then do that and you have high mode!
Athena: Oh cool! Thanks Bell
*Athena hugs Bell*
Bell: (Embarrassed) Yeah, well no prob
*Flashback ends and Athena changes Adeona to high mode*
Athena: Check this out!
Ref: Ready, Set
3,2,1 Let it Rip!
Athena: Go Adeona! Soul Shoot!
Katie: This again? Kukan Guard.
Athena: (Thoughts) You wish…
Athena: Now!
Katie: Darkness Crash, wait what?
*Kitsune did shield crash and missed and the blade hit in the crack between the ring and the disk*
Athena: Infernal Sword!
*Soul’s blade glow purple and tilt down to hit Kitsune*
Ref: Adeona with a burst finish! Athena wins 2-0
*Athena looks around at the crowd and gets nervous*
Athena: Uhh, I gota go…
*She runs back in and trips on her way*
*Adeona glows warm at Athena, proud of what she did*
Welp, rest in peace Amigo and Katie. You guys will be missed until you come back.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic - LJ-Blader - Jul. 07, 2021
Do you guys prefer script format, or the format below?
Ladies and Gents! Hanami cried. Welcome to the semifinals! Today we have two exciting matches, First! The Demon king vs The Conquer! Then Tyler vs the Demon Queen! Today is very exciting! Wooo hooo! Yelled Tyler as he jumped in enthusiasm. Athena, you are going down! I don’t know about that said Athena coming up from behind. We all know that I am going to win right? Bell said scaring his two friends. Really Bell?! Said Athena in a motherly tone, you have got to stopped doing that. Bell responded with a smirk and walked ahead. He is such a child, thought Tyler.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic - GenesisBlader - Jul. 07, 2021
(Jul. 07, 2021 3:17 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: Do you guys prefer script format, or the format below?
Ladies and Gents! Hanami cried. Welcome to the semifinals! Today we have two exciting matches, First! The Demon king vs The Conquer! Then Tyler vs the Demon Queen! Today is very exciting! Wooo hooo! Yelled Tyler as he jumped in enthusiasm. Athena, you are going down! I don’t know about that said Athena coming up from behind. We all know that I am going to win right? Bell said scaring his two friends. Really Bell?! Said Athena in a motherly tone, you have got to stopped doing that. Bell responded with a smirk and walked ahead. He is such a child, thought Tyler.
i like this format alot
wait demon king and demon queen... hmmm
(Jul. 07, 2021 3:18 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jul. 07, 2021 3:17 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: Do you guys prefer script format, or the format below?
"Ladies and Gents!" Hanami cried. "Welcome to the semifinals! Today we have two exciting matches, First! The Demon king vs The Conquer! Then Tyler vs the Demon Queen! Today is very exciting!" "Wooo hooo!" Yelled Tyler as he jumped in enthusiasm. "Athena, you are going down!" "I don’t know about that!" Athena countered, coming up from behind. "We all know that I am going to win right?" Bell said scaring his two friends. "Really Bell?!" replied Athena in a motherly tone, you have to stop doing that. Bell responded with a smirk and walked ahead. "He is such a child," thought Tyler.
i like this format alot
wait demon king and demon queen... hmmm
can't wait for the new chapters to come out!!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic - LJ-Blader - Jul. 07, 2021
Yeah, a while back DeltaZakuro made Athena a DB bey and gave her that nickname, so I used it.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic - GenesisBlader - Jul. 07, 2021
(Jul. 07, 2021 3:26 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: Yeah, a while back DeltaZakuro made Athena a DB bey and gave her that nickname, so I used it.
oh, alright
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic - PinkRose - Jul. 07, 2021
(Jul. 07, 2021 3:17 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: Do you guys prefer script format, or the format below?
Ladies and Gents! Hanami cried. Welcome to the semifinals! Today we have two exciting matches, First! The Demon king vs The Conquer! Then Tyler vs the Demon Queen! Today is very exciting! Wooo hooo! Yelled Tyler as he jumped in enthusiasm. Athena, you are going down! I don’t know about that said Athena coming up from behind. We all know that I am going to win right? Bell said scaring his two friends. Really Bell?! Said Athena in a motherly tone, you have got to stopped doing that. Bell responded with a smirk and walked ahead. He is such a child, thought Tyler.
This one is much better, but you gotta use quotation marks to clear up who's saying what (and it's preferred to split lines spoken by different characters so it's not a wall of text like this).
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic - LJ-Blader - Jul. 07, 2021
Episode 9: Final Four! Don’t let Up!
“Ladies and Gents!” Hanami cried. “Welcome to the semifinals! Today we have two exciting matches, First! The Demon king vs The Conquer! Then Tyler vs the Demon Queen!Today is very exciting!”
“Wooo hooo!” Yelled Tyler as he jumped in enthusiasm. “Athena, you are going down!”
“I don’t know about that” said Athena coming up from behind.
“We all know that I am going to win right?” Bell said scaring his two friends. “
Really Bell?!” Said Athena in a motherly tone, “you have got to stopped doing that.” Bell responded with a smirk and walked ahead.
“He is such a child,” thought Tyler.
Here is an edited preview.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic - PinkRose - Jul. 07, 2021
Nice, I like this format better.
(And if you need any help fine-tuning the following chapters or anything, I’m always up to help).
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic - GenesisBlader - Jul. 07, 2021
(Jul. 07, 2021 7:41 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: Episode 9: Final Four! Don’t let Up!
“Ladies and Gents!” Hanami cried. “Welcome to the semifinals! Today we have two exciting matches, First! The Demon king vs The Conquer! Then Tyler vs the Demon Queen!Today is very exciting!”
“Wooo hooo!” Yelled Tyler as he jumped in enthusiasm. “Athena, you are going down!”
“I don’t know about that” said Athena coming up from behind.
“We all know that I am going to win right?” Bell said scaring his two friends. “
Really Bell?!” Said Athena in a motherly tone, “you have got to stopped doing that.” Bell responded with a smirk and walked ahead.
“He is such a child,” thought Tyler.
Here is an edited preview.
lol for some reason i thought this was the last episode lol
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic - UnseenBurst - Jul. 07, 2021
I'm so excited for Parker to enter the scene and I'm really happy *Voice Cracks* *Coughs* I'm really happy that LJBlader liked him
RE: Beyblade Burst: Demonic - LJ-Blader - Jul. 07, 2021
(Jul. 07, 2021 8:12 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I'm so excited for Parker to enter the scene and I'm really happy *Voice Cracks* *Coughs* I'm really happy that LJBlader liked him
Parker will appear in Arc two and
He will be a huge help in motivating Bell and Tyler.
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