(Aug. 21, 2021  10:59 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: Awesome! You did Hyto really well. I am excited to see how this story expands!

(Aug. 27, 2021  9:50 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Bad chapter? Nah, only got a bit rushed.

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Chapter 7
Jumping high and... Yeah, just battling really.

How can I start this chapter... Oh, you’re already here? Yes, I can break the 4th wall.
Anyways, I’ll skip the beginning since it’s boring. I mean, who would like me detailing my breakfast? Or what I watched on the tv? All I’ll say is that after my lunch, I put my shoes and headed out towards the park... and then I go back because I forgot my launcher.
Now that I’m ready, I open the door and leave, my mission is go to the park and win the battle against Hyto. As I’m walking towards the park, I spot two guys over the street. One is wearing some really bright colors while the other is… Callum? I go near them just to say hi, but the guy notices me before.
- Who are you? Are you one of the bad guys? What’s your opinion on fish? – the “kid” asks, with his eyes locked on me and at 3cm away from my face. Callum looks at me for a moment.
- Max Hill, no, and they’re great, but could be better. – I reply, confused and surprised. I then look at Callum – Is he your friend?
Callum nods, and he does hand signals to him. The kid introduces himself as Clio. That’s when I remember him, he’s the guy that fought Twister Wyvern on tv. Clio explains that they were going to the park because Callum was going to see a battle, Callum quickly does more sign language, and then Clio says:
- Wait... You’re Max Hill!? The loser that lost all the battles on the airship!? – He then laughs, and looks at Callum – Is she any good?
How can he be so mean? Anyways, Callum looks at him and says:
- I think so... – ... Wait, Callum said something!? Clio looks a little bit surprised, and he looks at me.
- Huh, I hope your battle isn’t boring after all! That would be a shame. – He says, stretching his arms forward.
I don’t even bother to reply to that. Anyways, we arrive at the park and go on the arena. Hyto and Kevin were talking on the bench while Sarah was watching something on her phone. Kevin and Hyto get up.
- Finally, you’re here – Kevin says, and then looks at Clio – and why are you here? Aren’t you trying to get 1st on the rankings?
- Yeah, but then I got bored of winning. 3rd on the US is good for now. – 5 seconds later, he says – Also I need to go to school, according to my parents.
- What the... You’re Clio Aberra? – Hyto says, with his eyes wide open.
Clio does a whole presentation about himself and how great he is. While he’s talking, I grab Hyto and bring him to the arena. Hyto did complained a bit, but I remind him about our battle and nobody noticed we leaving. We get to the arena and get ready for launching.
- So, I’m winning by 1-0, right? – Hyto asks, while getting to his launching stance.
- Yes, but not for long. – I say, attaching Magnesium to the launcher.
We do the countdown and launch the beys; Magnesium goes straight for the middle while Horus is doing a flower pattern. Hyto launches his bey in a very fancy way that he calls “Piramid launch”. Magnesium stays strong in the middle withstanding all attacks.
- Whirlwind Whip! – Hyto says, and his bey throws Magnesium out of the middle, suddenly all attacks start pushing Magnesium more and more. – You can’t withstand the wind?
- Ha, like it could defeat me. Rush Counter! – Magnesium leans on its driver, smashing Horus and sending it across the stadium – You see, I’m a heavy-weight.
- That only makes things more interesting! – Horus starts speeding up on the stadium rim while Magnesium was going straight towards it – Now Horus! Nothing is holding you down!
Horus jumps, dodging Magnesium attack and making it go straight for the wall. Suddenly an idea appeared in my mind. You see, Magnesium doesn’t have the raw strength to beat Horus, but it doesn’t mean a little bit of strategy can’t help me.
- Magnesium, go berserk! – I say, Hyto gets confused as to why would I make a defense bey go crazy. Magnesium starts hitting the walls and scrapping on them, losing loads of stamina in the process. While I was losing stamina on purpose, Horus was slowly getting near the center, to avoid getting hit. – Now! Go for the burst!
Magnesium slowly goes for the center, only then Hyto catches on my plan. He tries making Horus speed up, but it’s already too late. Horus touches Magnesium and instantly bursts, Magnesium stops spinning 2 seconds later.
- You’re not half bad. – Hyto says, surprised that I could pull of a burst. – How did you come with the slow-mo burst idea?
- Improvising doesn’t hurt. – I then see Clio still talking from the distance, I point at him and say – How can he talk that much?
We both laugh, then we start talking about stuff, like Beyblade, hobbies, opinions, etc. We’re having a good time. Hyto looks at my hands and ask:
- Why do you always wear gloves? I mean, it is completely fine but, why?
- Oh, it’s just that... – I slowly start taking of my glove, revealing a hand full of scars – I hurt myself, very often. These gloves are meant to protect me. But now that I’m older, they only work for hiding my mistakes.
- Oh... Uhh... – Hyto says, surprised with it – That’s really unfortunate and this didn’t go the way I was expecting to. What about we just go back?
I agree and we go check out on “the gang”, Callum is gone and both Kevin and Sarah are asleep, while Clio is still talking about him.
- ... And my bey is the most powerful stamina bey on the planet! You can’t deny a fact. – He looks at us, and then at Sarah and Kevin – ARE YOU GUYS AWAKE?!
Kevin is still asleep, but Sarah jumps because of Clio yelling. She starts swearing (and I’m not going to add that here) almost in each sentence, while Kevin slowly gets up.
- What did we miss? – Kevin asks, rubbing his eye – Did you guys battled?
- Yes, and I won! – I reply.
- Don’t get like Clio, it was just a victory – Hyto says, then he looks around – Where’s the masked guy?
- Oh, you mean Callum? – Clio replies, showing his messages on the phone – He went to the arena watch Hyto and Max battle, now he must be walking home.
Wait, Callum was there? He is very good at stealth. Anyways, Sarah says that if we want to, we could do a sleepover at her house. Of course, my dad agrees with it, he really likes the fact that I’m hanging out with friends (and he also knows who takes care of Sarah and Callum). We all wait on the park entrance until a big car shows up. It’s a blue Volkswagen Sharan (for the people that wanted to know), inside there was a elderly person on the driver seat. We all enter the car and Sarah says:
- That’s my grandma, she and Grampa takes care of me and Callum – She then looks at her grandmother – These are my new friends: Max and Hyto.
We say “Hi” and Sarah’s Grandmother (with is called Annabeth) start driving. We talk until we arrive at a big house. We all get out of the car and Callum closes the door behind me... Wait, how is he... How did he... Nevermind. We all go in.
- Hey, do you guys want to see something? – Sarah says, on which all of us say “yes” – Grandma, can I take them to my place?
- Sure you can my dear, but don’t turn the volume on maximum. – Her grandmother says.
Sarah quickly picks up a key and walks to the back of the house, there was huge grass field with plants on some places and a tree at the center, on the opposite side of the house, there was a smaller “house”. What’s inside? Discover on the next episode! (You must be hating me now)

[The end]

(Aug. 27, 2021  9:57 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:

(Aug. 27, 2021  9:50 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Bad chapter? Nah, only got a bit rushed.

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Chapter 7
Jumping high and... Yeah, just battling really.

How can I start this chapter... Oh, you’re already here? Yes, I can break the 4th wall.
Anyways, I’ll skip the beginning since it’s boring. I mean, who would like me detailing my breakfast? Or what I watched on the tv? All I’ll say is that after my lunch, I put my shoes and headed out towards the park... and then I go back because I forgot my launcher.
Now that I’m ready, I open the door and leave, my mission is go to the park and win the battle against Hyto. As I’m walking towards the park, I spot two guys over the street. One is wearing some really bright colors while the other is… Callum? I go near them just to say hi, but the guy notices me before.
- Who are you? Are you one of the bad guys? What’s your opinion on fish? – the “kid” asks, with his eyes locked on me and at 3cm away from my face. Callum looks at me for a moment.
- Max Hill, no, and they’re great, but could be better. – I reply, confused and surprised. I then look at Callum – Is he your friend?
Callum nods, and he does hand signals to him. The kid introduces himself as Clio. That’s when I remember him, he’s the guy that fought Twister Wyvern on tv. Clio explains that they were going to the park because Callum was going to see a battle, Callum quickly does more sign language, and then Clio says:
- Wait... You’re Max Hill!? The loser that lost all the battles on the airship!? – He then laughs, and looks at Callum – Is she any good?
How can he be so mean? Anyways, Callum looks at him and says:
- I think so... – ... Wait, Callum said something!? Clio looks a little bit surprised, and he looks at me.
- Huh, I hope your battle isn’t boring after all! That would be a shame. – He says, stretching his arms forward.
I don’t even bother to reply to that. Anyways, we arrive at the park and go on the arena. Hyto and Kevin were talking on the bench while Sarah was watching something on her phone. Kevin and Hyto get up.
- Finally, you’re here – Kevin says, and then looks at Clio – and why are you here? Aren’t you trying to get 1st on the rankings?
- Yeah, but then I got bored of winning. 3rd on the US is good for now. – 5 seconds later, he says – Also I need to go to school, according to my parents.
- What the... You’re Clio Aberra? – Hyto says, with his eyes wide open.
Clio does a whole presentation about himself and how great he is. While he’s talking, I grab Hyto and bring him to the arena. Hyto did complained a bit, but I remind him about our battle and nobody noticed we leaving. We get to the arena and get ready for launching.
- So, I’m winning by 1-0, right? – Hyto asks, while getting to his launching stance.
- Yes, but not for long. – I say, attaching Magnesium to the launcher.
We do the countdown and launch the beys; Magnesium goes straight for the middle while Horus is doing a flower pattern. Hyto launches his bey in a very fancy way that he calls “Piramid launch”. Magnesium stays strong in the middle withstanding all attacks.
- Whirlwind Whip! – Hyto says, and his bey throws Magnesium out of the middle, suddenly all attacks start pushing Magnesium more and more. – You can’t withstand the wind?
- Ha, like it could defeat me. Rush Counter! – Magnesium leans on its driver, smashing Horus and sending it across the stadium – You see, I’m a heavy-weight.
- That only makes things more interesting! – Horus starts speeding up on the stadium rim while Magnesium was going straight towards it – Now Horus! Nothing is holding you down!
Horus jumps, dodging Magnesium attack and making it go straight for the wall. Suddenly an idea appeared in my mind. You see, Magnesium doesn’t have the raw strength to beat Horus, but it doesn’t mean a little bit of strategy can’t help me.
- Magnesium, go berserk! – I say, Hyto gets confused as to why would I make a defense bey go crazy. Magnesium starts hitting the walls and scrapping on them, losing loads of stamina in the process. While I was losing stamina on purpose, Horus was slowly getting near the center, to avoid getting hit. – Now! Go for the burst!
Magnesium slowly goes for the center, only then Hyto catches on my plan. He tries making Horus speed up, but it’s already too late. Horus touches Magnesium and instantly bursts, Magnesium stops spinning 2 seconds later.
- You’re not half bad. – Hyto says, surprised that I could pull of a burst. – How did you come with the slow-mo burst idea?
- Improvising doesn’t hurt. – I then see Clio still talking from the distance, I point at him and say – How can he talk that much?
We both laugh, then we start talking about stuff, like Beyblade, hobbies, opinions, etc. We’re having a good time. Hyto looks at my hands and ask:
- Why do you always wear gloves? I mean, it is completely fine but, why?
- Oh, it’s just that... – I slowly start taking of my glove, revealing a hand full of scars – I hurt myself, very often. These gloves are meant to protect me. But now that I’m older, they only work for hiding my mistakes.
- Oh... Uhh... – Hyto says, surprised with it – That’s really unfortunate and this didn’t go the way I was expecting to. What about we just go back?
I agree and we go check out on “the gang”, Callum is gone and both Kevin and Sarah are asleep, while Clio is still talking about him.
- ... And my bey is the most powerful stamina bey on the planet! You can’t deny a fact. – He looks at us, and then at Sarah and Kevin – ARE YOU GUYS AWAKE?!
Kevin is still asleep, but Sarah jumps because of Clio yelling. She starts swearing (and I’m not going to add that here) almost in each sentence, while Kevin slowly gets up.
- What did we miss? – Kevin asks, rubbing his eye – Did you guys battled?
- Yes, and I won! – I reply.
- Don’t get like Clio, it was just a victory – Hyto says, then he looks around – Where’s the masked guy?
- Oh, you mean Callum? – Clio replies, showing his messages on the phone – He went to the arena watch Hyto and Max battle, now he must be walking home.
Wait, Callum was there? He is very good at stealth. Anyways, Sarah says that if we want to, we could do a sleepover at her house. Of course, my dad agrees with it, he really likes the fact that I’m hanging out with friends (and he also knows who takes care of Sarah and Callum). We all wait on the park entrance until a big car shows up. It’s a blue Volkswagen Sharan (for the people that wanted to know), inside there was a elderly person on the driver seat. We all enter the car and Sarah says:
- That’s my grandma, she and Grampa takes care of me and Callum – She then looks at her grandmother – These are my new friends: Max and Hyto.
We say “Hi” and Sarah’s Grandmother (with is called Annabeth) start driving. We talk until we arrive at a big house. We all get out of the car and Callum closes the door behind me... Wait, how is he... How did he... Nevermind. We all go in.
- Hey, do you guys want to see something? – Sarah says, on which all of us say “yes” – Grandma, can I take them to my place?
- Sure you can my dear, but don’t turn the volume on maximum. – Her grandmother says.
Sarah quickly picks up a key and walks to the back of the house, there was huge grass field with plants on some places and a tree at the center, on the opposite side of the house, there was a smaller “house”. What’s inside? Discover on the next episode! (You must be hating me now)

[The end]

Hollow are you calling me out for doing your character dirty? Lol! This chapter was awesome, I'm going to assume that they're going to meet Percy sooner or later since well he's the World Champion, I'm kinda shocked that nobody said anything or mentioned him yet lol, (Percy will dominate all of them and laugh as he bursts all of their beys with Brine Poseidon)

(Aug. 27, 2021  9:59 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:

(Aug. 27, 2021  9:57 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Hollow are you calling me out for doing your character dirty? Lol! This chapter was awesome, I'm going to assume that they're going to meet Percy sooner or later since well he's the World Champion, I'm kinda shocked that nobody said anything or mentioned him yet lol, (Percy will dominate all of them and laugh as he bursts all of their beys with Brine Poseidon)

Percy will appear on arc 3 (I think, not sure, maybe earlier). And Clio only said that because he's an [redacted], if you get what I mean. Also, yeah, he will dominate, but I'm planning on add close calls.

(Aug. 27, 2021  10:04 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:

(Aug. 27, 2021  9:59 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Percy will appear on arc 3 (I think, not sure, maybe earlier). And Clio only said that because he's an [redacted], if you get what I mean. Also, yeah, he will dominate, but I'm planning on add close calls.

I know I say this a lot but you're seriously doing an awesome job making a Spin-Off for Beyjitzu, you've covered everything I've wanted to see in a spin-off and more!  Also, anyone is able to make a Spin Off of my fanfics that you find interesting, just please, don't claim the whole thing as yours and let me know like Hollowmind did

(Aug. 27, 2021  10:17 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:

(Aug. 27, 2021  10:04 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I know I say this a lot but you're seriously doing an awesome job making a Spin-Off for Beyjitzu, you've covered everything I've wanted to see in a spin-off and more!  Also, anyone is able to make a Spin Off of my fanfics that you find interesting, just please, don't claim the whole thing as yours and let me know like Hollowmind did

Nice and thank you. Anyways, what I'm about to say is for everyone:

I love doing little references, so I want to say that (at this exact moment) all my characters exist in Resonance (almost, I'm not sure of one). That means that all my entries to other fics are spoilers (kinda, not sure about it yet)

(Aug. 27, 2021  10:39 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: Annabeth, quote to Percy Jackson?

(Aug. 28, 2021  10:14 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Only some will get the reference:

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Kevin (with Sarah doing guitar cover): ♪ Life isn't quite what I thought I'd be
When I was a kid on VoIP
I thought when I get older
I'd marry her, I told her.
Now I'm 26, and I work in an office
Nine 'til five's not the best, I'll be honest
If I could change a single thing
I'd make it me and not him.
But he's in-...♪

Sarah: STOOOP!! I don't know if you can say that on the WBO.

Kevin: Really? That's sad, it's a really good song...

Sarah: I know, but it's not like you can say this kind of things. Anyways, I think people might recognize the song.

Max: Uhh... Can you tell me the song?

Kevin/Sarah: (does face)

(Aug. 28, 2021  10:23 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote:

(Aug. 28, 2021  10:14 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Only some will get the reference:

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Kevin (with Sarah doing guitar cover): ♪ Life isn't quite what I thought I'd be
When I was a kid on VoIP
I thought when I get older
I'd marry her, I told her.
Now I'm 26, and I work in an office
Nine 'til five's not the best, I'll be honest
If I could change a single thing
I'd make it me and not him.
But he's in-...♪

Sarah: STOOOP!! I don't know if you can say that on the WBO.

Kevin: Really? That's sad, it's a really good song...

Sarah: I know, but it's not like you can say this kind of things. Anyways, I think people might recognize the song.

Max: Uhh... Can you tell me the song?

Kevin/Sarah: (does face)

Hey... Thats familiar lol

(Aug. 28, 2021  10:14 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Only some will get the reference:

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Kevin (with Sarah doing guitar cover): ♪ Life isn't quite what I thought I'd be
When I was a kid on VoIP
I thought when I get older
I'd marry her, I told her.
Now I'm 26, and I work in an office
Nine 'til five's not the best, I'll be honest
If I could change a single thing
I'd make it me and not him.
But he's in-...♪

Sarah: STOOOP!! I don't know if you can say that on the WBO.

Kevin: Really? That's sad, it's a really good song...

Sarah: I know, but it's not like you can say this kind of things. Anyways, I think people might recognize the song.

Max: Uhh... Can you tell me the song?

Kevin/Sarah: (does face)

(Sep. 01, 2021  8:09 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: So, here's a system. You're free to use it but you will have to credit me:

Gemini System:

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Gemini Chip: Similar to a GT chip. It has no teeth, only keeps everything together (for now, I might update it)

Gemini Layer Base: It can be divided into 2 parts, Gemini Blade and Gemini Base. They are placed on top of each other, like Infinite achilles and it's attachments, but the attachment is 50% of the layer base and can fit into every bey.   They both have 2 teethand are locked together by the Gemini Chip., but Gemini Blades are normally 1 direction only, but you can still make dual spin Gemini Blades.

Gemini Base: The Gemini Base doesn't do contact with the opposing bey and can give to the blade different abilities (I.e. it coud make longinus have Savior's bound thing without nerfing the teeth) or add more weight. Normally, Gemini Bases are dual spin. It has the 2 first teeth. Sidenote: Their names are just their gimmicks, normally abbreviated into their first letters and are normally two words, for example:
Spring-Loaded = S-L, It's spring loaded both sides. / Impact Absorbtion = I-A, It absorbs impact. / Heavy weight = H-W, The name says it all.

Discs: normal discs

Drivers: Normal drivers

Naming: Gemini Base (abbreviation) - Gemini Blade - Gemini chip - Disc - Frame (If you want) - Driver
I.e.  U-A Morning Apollo Sun Keep'

And I'll let you guys guess this combo:

S-A Md.A Mn. Op'

(Sep. 01, 2021  8:31 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote:

(Sep. 01, 2021  8:09 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: So, here's a system. You're free to use it but you will have to credit me:

Gemini System:

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Gemini Chip: Similar to a GT chip. It has no teeth, only keeps everything together (for now, I might update it)

Gemini Layer Base: It can be divided into 2 parts, Gemini Blade and Gemini Base. They are placed on top of each other, like Infinite achilles and it's attachments, but the attachment is 50% of the layer base and can fit into every bey.   They both have 2 teethand are locked together by the Gemini Chip., but Gemini Blades are normally 1 direction only, but you can still make dual spin Gemini Blades.

Gemini Base: The Gemini Base doesn't do contact with the opposing bey and can give to the blade different abilities (I.e. it coud make longinus have Savior's bound thing without nerfing the teeth) or add more weight. Normally, Gemini Bases are dual spin. It has the 2 first teeth. Sidenote: Their names are just their gimmicks, normally abbreviated into their first letters and are normally two words, for example:
Spring-Loaded = S-L, It's spring loaded both sides. / Impact Absorbtion = I-A, It absorbs impact. / Heavy weight = H-W, The name says it all.

Discs: normal discs

Drivers: Normal drivers

Naming: Gemini Base (abbreviation) - Gemini Blade - Gemini chip - Disc - Frame (If you want) - Driver
I.e.  U-A Morning Apollo Sun Keep'

And I'll let you guys guess this combo:

S-A Md.A Mn. Op'

I guess it's Operate driver, dunno about the rest.

(Sep. 01, 2021  8:57 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Driver: Operate'

That's all I got lol

(Sep. 01, 2021  9:15 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:

(Sep. 01, 2021  8:57 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Driver: Operate'

That's all I got lol

Big Hint: It's basically Apollo combo but with Artemis theme