(Aug. 20, 2021  12:52 AM)PinkRose Wrote: Hmm, not bad. I like what you’re trying to do with Ben, but the change feels a bit sudden for me? If that’s the intended effect, then you’re doing it well, and that asde, the chapter is overall neat, especially with your improvement in writing. Nice.

(Aug. 20, 2021  1:00 AM)LJ-Blader Wrote: I really like Ben’s character, and the fact that he has all the gears. I am really excited to see all the characters interact with the other OCs.

(Aug. 21, 2021  5:48 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Light Sawashiro (Sovereign Lucifer)

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Height: 5'6


Age: 15


Role: Antagonist


Appearance: He's fair-skinned and has unsettled and unstylled brown hair, with bangs long enough to reach his eyes when his hair is let down, his eyes are purple in color and wears a white sweatshirt with purple borders on the sleeves and a purple 'L' Symbol on the middle, and a Crimson Coat, pair of black jeans with stitched-in patches and jet black boots.


Bey: Sovereign Lucifer .11 Fallen Rebel - Dazzle


Kiwami Core: Lucifer, the fallen angel. (Clockwise Defence Type) The eyes of Luicfer are red and the core pattern is purple (Like the blue part in Spriggan core from DB). The core depicts Lucifer's Head and it's claws, the head is purple and the claws are red.


Kiwami Blade: Sovereign, The three Blades have a zig-zage shape divided into three layers. When the lock of the bey advances, additional three blades appears from the gaps, when they come in contact with the opposing bey, it re-locks itself, making the bey sort-of unburstable. Color Scheme of the blade is Black, the three blades are purple and the additional blades are red.


Neo Disc: Fallen, It features six blades with an upper shape which makes the opposing come in contact with the layer. (The disc is painted in Purple color)


Driver: Rebel, The Driver has two modes, first one is Defence Mode: It has a metal ball used to claim the center and hold on to it. Second one: Counter Mode: It has a rubber ball used to bounce on the stadium landing on to Opposing Beys and can also hold on to the center. (The Color Scheme of the driver is Dark Blue and the rubber ball is red in color)


Kiwami Weight: 11, A perfectly circular shape weight used to improve LAD and OWD.


Kiwami Armor: Dazzle, It increases the defense by focusing the center of gravity at six opposite points.



Note: I didn't add personality because it will lead to spoilers.

(Aug. 21, 2021  5:48 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Light Sawashiro (Sovereign Lucifer)

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Height: 5'6


Age: 15


Role: Antagonist


Appearance: He's fair-skinned and has unsettled and unstylled brown hair, with bangs long enough to reach his eyes when his hair is let down, his eyes are purple in color and wears a white sweatshirt with purple borders on the sleeves and a purple 'L' Symbol on the middle, and a Crimson Coat, pair of black jeans with stitched-in patches and jet black boots.


Bey: Sovereign Lucifer .11 Fallen Rebel - Dazzle


Kiwami Core: Lucifer, the fallen angel. (Clockwise Defence Type) The eyes of Luicfer are red and the core pattern is purple (Like the blue part in Spriggan core from DB). The core depicts Lucifer's Head and it's claws, the head is purple and the claws are red.


Kiwami Blade: Sovereign, The three Blades have a zig-zage shape divided into three layers. When the lock of the bey advances, additional three blades appears from the gaps, when they come in contact with the opposing bey, it re-locks itself, making the bey sort-of unburstable. Color Scheme of the blade is Black, the three blades are purple and the additional blades are red.


Neo Disc: Fallen, It features six blades with an upper shape which makes the opposing come in contact with the layer. (The disc is painted in Purple color)


Driver: Rebel, The Driver has two modes, first one is Defence Mode: It has a metal ball used to claim the center and hold on to it. Second one: Counter Mode: It has a rubber ball used to bounce on the stadium landing on to Opposing Beys and can also hold on to the center. (The Color Scheme of the driver is Dark Blue and the rubber ball is red in color)


Kiwami Weight: 11, A perfectly circular shape weight used to improve LAD and OWD.


Kiwami Armor: Dazzle, It increases the defense by focusing the center of gravity at six opposite points.



Note: I didn't add personality because it will lead to spoilers.

(Aug. 25, 2021  12:03 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Fiona Dela Hoya (Magenta Fafnir)

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Gender: Female


Also Known as:

Magenta Star

The Number 1 Blader


Age: 13


Height: 5'2


Occupation: 

Blader

Captain of BC Sol

Member of the Kiwami Three


Appearance: She's a young teen with light yellow eyes, her hair is spiked and very long messy pink hair with a yellow streak running through it (Similar to Free's hair but more longer that it reaches her neck). She wears a plain pink sweatshirt and a yellow leather jacket, having an upside down dragon shaped "F" at the top right of her jacket, she also wears a blue skirt and black leggings. And dark blue shoes with red strips and white soles.


Personality: She's quite hard working and don't see any potential in the bladers who're careless or losses frequently, She is in a search for a blader capable of awakening the true strength of Fafnir. She's very obsessed with Fafnir and loves it the most than any other bey. When she gets serious in battles, her eyes glows pinkish yellow.


Resonance: Her aura appears as a bright Magenta and Yellow gradient color. When she's serious in battles, her eyes glows pinkish yellow and her aura becomes more magenta in color than yellow.


Bey: Magenta Fafnir .9 Drain Everything -Exert


Kiwami Core: Fafnir, The Golden Dragon. It's a left-spinning Kiwami Core, features a Golden Dragon who is grabbing a red orb with it's claws. The core pattern is in pink.


Kiwami Blade: Magenta, It has 3 golden dragon heads fused with rubber (Rubber's color scheme is Magenta), The rubber blades doesn't have any gap between them, and can be awakened by getting enough hits by oppossing beys to make a complete hole between the blades that will increase the spin steal potential of the bey. (The blade is completely made up of rubber except the dragon heads and the shape is different than Vanish, the shape of blades are more like spear shaped, like Geist Fafnir)


Neo Disc: Drain, It's a rubber mounted disc with 8 free-spinning blades, Against Right spin Beys, the rubber mounted disk absorbs the spin. Against Left spin Beys, the rubber blades deflects the attack by it's free-spinning ability. (Basically a reverse Jet Ring made up into a Disk)


Driver: Everything, The driver is a evolved version of Nothing/Absorb driver, It features a spring loaded sharp metal tip surrounded by a free-spinning rubber ring. The spring loaded tip has two purposes, One is to prevent knock outs from the opposing beys and the second is that when the metal tip is fully depressed, the center sharp metal tip is retracted and the rubber ring is locked in place, creating a hollow flat rubber tip with aggressive movement akin to Ambush.


Kiwami Weight: 9, The armor features 9 blades in a semi-circular shape which increases LAD and OWD.


Kiwami Armor: Exert, It also features three rubber blades alligning with the Blade and can also help absorbing spin when used in lower mode. (Just like Screw Trident)

And I forgot to tell about the color scheme of these beys

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Aviate Icarus, The Avaite Blade's main color scheme is white, the stickers on the four blades has a red lightning sign with rainbow outlines. (Signifying Achilles and Dragon) The Core has a Warrior with a helmet in the middle with two wings design (Just like DB Valkyrie Core) and core pattern is light blue (Signifying Valkyrie)

The Amaze Driver's color scheme is light blue. (The move, Amaze Strike signifies Hyperion and Helios plus the metal portion made signifies Belial and Dragon)


Gloom Wendigo, The Gloom Blade's main color scheme is black, the blades being purple. The Core signifies a Demon head with two goat-like horns, weilding a axe and the core pattern is pink.


Noble Centaur, The Noble Blade's main color scheme is Gray, the blades being gold. The Core signifies a Golden Warrior with a helmet looking at left direction and has only one white eye. The core pattern is white.

The Clutch disk's rubber part is red in color and the Ambush driver's color scheme is gray with black rubber.

Plus I'm gonna try my best to post Chapter 6 today (Or tomorrow).

(Aug. 21, 2021  6:06 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Bonus Fact: Ichiban Aoi: Aviate Icarus (Protagonist) and Light Sawashiro: Sovereign Lucifer (Antagonist)

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This is how the first arc will work,

The Battle Ship will reach three destinations for battles.

1) Spain

2) Onigashima Island

3) America.

Plus some chapter titles

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Chapter 6: Furious Blow! Noble Spear!

Chapter 7: The Golden Dragon!

Chapter 8: The Max Organization and Hyperion!

Chapter 9: Duel at the Onigashima Island!

Chapter 10: Pallete Feathers! Iris Mayura!

Chapter 11: Crimson Axe! Mortal Spriggan!

(Aug. 25, 2021  8:50 PM)Dark red Wrote:

(Aug. 21, 2021  6:06 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Bonus Fact: Ichiban Aoi: Aviate Icarus (Protagonist) and Light Sawashiro: Sovereign Lucifer (Antagonist)

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This is how the first arc will work,

The Battle Ship will reach three destinations for battles.

1) Spain

2) Onigashima Island

3) America.

Plus some chapter titles

Spoiler (Click to View)

Chapter 6: Furious Blow! Noble Spear!

Chapter 7: The Golden Dragon!

Chapter 8: The Max Organization and Hyperion!

Chapter 9: Duel at the Onigashima Island!

Chapter 10: Pallete Feathers! Iris Mayura!

Chapter 11: Crimson Axe! Mortal Spriggan!

Hold up, is my man Griffin about to show up? (Hyped by the Episode titles) 😏😏😏

(Aug. 26, 2021  3:01 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: Uhhhh idk if the character thing is still going, can I put an entry in?

(Aug. 26, 2021  3:05 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote:

(Aug. 26, 2021  3:01 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: Uhhhh idk if the character thing is still going, can I put an entry in?

Yeah, you still can.

(Aug. 26, 2021  5:30 PM)The Blacknight Wrote:

(Aug. 26, 2021  3:05 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Yeah, you still can.

Okey dokey


Name: Mordred Glass

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Relation to past characters: is Ashtem’s son. Was abandoned when the snake pit was legally dismantled a few years after db. Gwyn found him years later, taught him for a year, then gave him to train with Xander and Xavier(now a king). Xavier adopted him, making him a while gwyn named him an aruthurian name as he thought of him as a brother.

Bey: Blitzen drive ou raze (limit break, and the avatar is the reindeer)

Appearance: Black hair, a white camo hoodie, and red ripped jeans. One of his eyes is black, and the other red. He has a pair of green earrings as well. He’s mid height as well. He has sharp teeth like lui or Xander.

Personality: incredible and extreme apathy. He hates his dad. He’s also very good at helping Xavier with politics, as his calm and uncaring nature allows him to assess situations well. When his dad is involved or he gets like really mad(justifiably, not like he dropped his ice cream), his black eye turns red, his resonance hits hits max, his personality shifts to become more cold, but present as well. Like mob from mob psycho.

Skills: gwyn taught him a lot, and he’s at masters level in most subjects, but bachelors and PhD in some. He’s also incredibly strong. Like lifting frees Boulder with one hand strong. He also trains xaviers military, along with Xander and other people. When fully released, his resonance can shatter concrete.

Bey:

Color scheme: red, white, gold, and green

Blitzen: sort of a heavier, more balanced lucifer II, with the rubber lock as well. Is right spin

Drive: an electric part. It’s like king with 7 blades. When  it’s halfway to bursting, the ring spins faster than the bey. This dramatically raises attack(obviously), burst resistance(this makes the ring essentially free spin) and defense again spin equalization(though the other bey will gain energy, the energy will be taken from the ring, not the base)

Ou: Ou

Raze: destroy with a rubber driver and a small plastic tip in the middle

Moves:

Explosive burst: a powerful attack out of nowhere, brought on by the raze driver. This can also be used as an evasion.

Limit break: drive: blitzen activates its limit break, sending enemies flying.

Phase burst: blitzen uses raze to quickly move behind an enemy, giving the illusion that it went directly through. Blitzen then uses its drive ability to attack its opponent while they are moving away from each other, sending an enemy away and not giving them room for a counter.

Drive shield: drive prarries attacks with incredible power.

Absolute drive: dread vertical on steroids


Xmas star: almost like valts winged launch, but its trail makes a star. Anything which crosses the star gets hit with an an incredibly strong attack. The longer it is prolonged, the more powerful the attack is

Nicholas: can only be used at full resonance.no one but mordred knows what this move looks like. Everyone who witnesses it gets knocked unconscious, and all cameras at destroyed. The stadium and area around it always obliterated. The opponents bey is either shattered, melted, or it has disappeared.





Uhm idk if this is good, but whatever lol

(Aug. 26, 2021  6:48 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote:

(Aug. 26, 2021  5:30 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: Okey dokey


Name: Mordred Glass

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Relation to past characters: is Ashtem’s son. Was abandoned when the snake pit was legally dismantled a few years after db. Gwyn found him years later, taught him for a year, then gave him to train with Xander and Xavier(now a king). Xavier adopted him, making him a while gwyn named him an aruthurian name as he thought of him as a brother.

Bey: Blitzen drive ou raze (limit break, and the avatar is the reindeer)

Appearance: Black hair, a white camo hoodie, and red ripped jeans. One of his eyes is black, and the other red. He has a pair of green earrings as well. He’s mid height as well. He has sharp teeth like lui or Xander.

Personality: incredible and extreme apathy. He hates his dad. He’s also very good at helping Xavier with politics, as his calm and uncaring nature allows him to assess situations well. When his dad is involved or he gets like really mad(justifiably, not like he dropped his ice cream), his black eye turns red, his resonance hits hits max, his personality shifts to become more cold, but present as well. Like mob from mob psycho.

Skills: gwyn taught him a lot, and he’s at masters level in most subjects, but bachelors and PhD in some. He’s also incredibly strong. Like lifting frees Boulder with one hand strong. He also trains xaviers military, along with Xander and other people. When fully released, his resonance can shatter concrete.

Bey:

Color scheme: red, white, gold, and green

Blitzen: sort of a heavier, more balanced lucifer II, with the rubber lock as well. Is right spin

Drive: an electric part. It’s like king with 7 blades. When  it’s halfway to bursting, the ring spins faster than the bey. This dramatically raises attack(obviously), burst resistance(this makes the ring essentially free spin) and defense again spin equalization(though the other bey will gain energy, the energy will be taken from the ring, not the base)

Ou: Ou

Raze: destroy with a rubber driver and a small plastic tip in the middle

Moves:

Explosive burst: a powerful attack out of nowhere, brought on by the raze driver. This can also be used as an evasion.

Limit break: drive: blitzen activates its limit break, sending enemies flying.

Phase burst: blitzen uses raze to quickly move behind an enemy, giving the illusion that it went directly through. Blitzen then uses its drive ability to attack its opponent while they are moving away from each other, sending an enemy away and not giving them room for a counter.

Drive shield: drive prarries attacks with incredible power.

Absolute drive: dread vertical on steroids


Xmas star: almost like valts winged launch, but its trail makes a star. Anything which crosses the star gets hit with an an incredibly strong attack. The longer it is prolonged, the more powerful the attack is

Nicholas: can only be used at full resonance.no one but mordred knows what this move looks like. Everyone who witnesses it gets knocked unconscious, and all cameras at destroyed. The stadium and area around it always obliterated. The opponents bey is either shattered, melted, or it has disappeared.





Uhm idk if this is good, but whatever lol

Actually.... I was planning something else with Ashtem and it's limit break system right? You must use Kiwami System. Plus this bey is too op (If this bey is in this fic, then antagonist's role would make no sense). Sorry but I cannot accept this entry. You can edit it though.

(Aug. 26, 2021  9:56 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Kiryu Kazuma I summon you, so uhh... Is there any Wyvern/Deathscyther already? just to know.

(Aug. 26, 2021  8:56 PM)The Blacknight Wrote:

(Aug. 26, 2021  6:48 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Actually.... I was planning something else with Ashtem and it's limit break system right? You must use Kiwami System. Plus this bey is too op (If this bey is in this fic, then antagonist's role would make no sense). Sorry but I cannot accept this entry. You can edit it though.

Welp can’t say I’m surprised, I made this guy’s bey as a protagonist for another series that was meant to have mfb level power scaling. Tbh, I’m content with just reading it lol, though I’m still a bit confused about the system

(Aug. 27, 2021  5:15 AM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote:

(Aug. 26, 2021  9:56 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Kiryu Kazuma I summon you, so uhh... Is there any Wyvern/Deathscyther already? just to know.

Nope there isn't. (And you can use Achilles if you want to, cuz GenesisBlader chose Hyperion instead of Achilles).

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(Aug. 26, 2021  8:56 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: Welp can’t say I’m surprised, I made this guy’s bey as a protagonist for another series that was meant to have mfb level power scaling. Tbh, I’m content with just reading it lol, though I’m still a bit confused about the system

Check out the first post. I've explained it there.

(Aug. 05, 2021  4:59 PM)LegendJustice Wrote:

(Aug. 05, 2021  4:20 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: OK so it's a sparking bey? (Should I evolve it later?)

Nah it’s a DB bey it’s gonna evolve to a Kawimi bey tho

(Aug. 28, 2021  12:22 AM)Beykid2.0 Wrote:

(Aug. 05, 2021  4:59 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Nah it’s a DB bey it’s gonna evolve to a Kawimi bey tho

trying to figure out how 2b fits on a db bey

(Aug. 28, 2021  12:23 AM)LegendJustice Wrote:

(Aug. 28, 2021  12:22 AM)Beykid2.0 Wrote: trying to figure out how 2b fits on a db bey

I edited it to a Kawmi bey