RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - GenesisBlader - Jul. 24, 2021
(Jul. 24, 2021 8:41 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 7 A Windy Gale! Burster Roktavor!!
cool! im looking forward to honcho getting his own techno beyblade!
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! (Character Contest) - Staron - Jul. 25, 2021
(Jul. 24, 2021 5:34 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Ima announce the winner now since I might be busy later today (Note: Only 1st Place is going in my fanfic)
3rd Place: LegendJustice!!
2nd Place: Staron!!
1st Place.... ColdFlames13!!
Thank you, everyone, who joined, and don't worry, I will have another character contest soon but that's a wrap folks!
Man, got second, but alright.
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - UnseenBurst - Jul. 25, 2021
Chapter 7 has emerged from the tornado!
Beyblade Burst TechnoX
Chapter 7
A Windy Gale! Burster Roktavor!!
~In BC Sol’s Main Gym~
Silas: Let it… rip!!
(Silas pulls off a powerful Lightning Launch)
Silas: Not good enough!
(Silas rapidly starts launching)
Raul: If you really want a tough workout then I’ve got just the thing for you!
Silas: Did you finish it?
Raul: Yeah, wanna give it a try?
Silas: You bet.
Honcho: You practicing without me?!
Silas: Ugh, if you wanna come and lose then be my guest.
Me: We wanna see what Raul built too!
Silas: Ugh!
Raul: Sure, let’s go!
(Raul brings us to a basement)
Aleph: This place makes me wanna scream.
Raul: Only top-tier bladers get to come down here.
(Raul opens the door)
Me: Woah! What is this stadium?!
Raul: It’s the Infinite Bey Stadium!!
Aleph: That looks awesome!
Raul: It’s the ultimate practice stadium!
Honcho: Is that a black Roktavor?
Raul: Yup, because your bey has perfect stamina!
Honcho: Awesome!
Silas: Raul, crank it up to the max!
Raul: Okie Dokie!
(Raul puts the stadium to max power)
Silas: Time to take a hit at this!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Silas: Let it… rip!!
(Silas pulls off a Lightning Launch)
Silas: Go, Satomb!!
(Satomb hits Infinite Roktavor with a barrage of attacks)
Me (Thoughts): Wow, Silas is dishing out a plate of everything!
Silas: Universe Drift!!
(Satomb starts grinding on its driver and speeds up, Satomb slams into Infinite Roktavor, Infinite Roktavor and Satomb get sent flying out of the stadium)
Silas: *Gasps*
Raul: You knocked it out of the center, nice job! Though your attacks could use some work!
Silas: I guess so!
Honcho: My turn!
Raul: Go ahead!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Honcho: Let it… rip!!
(Honcho pulls of an explosive launch)
Honcho Take the center!
(Roktavor and Infinite Roktavor start clashing)
Aleph: Honcho’s battling the exact same bey as him so this shouldn’t be too hard.
Me: Or too easy?
Honcho: Blow it away! Dual Wing Cyclone!!
(Roktavor creates a huge tornado)
Raul: Surprise!
(Infinite Roktavor creates an enormous tornado)
Honcho: *Gasps*
(Roktavor gets sucked in Infinite Roktavor’s tornado, Roktavor bursts)
All: *Gasps*
Silas: Looks like Roktavor’s copycat is stronger than the original!
Honcho: Grr!!
Silas: Oh well, I guess the sequel is always better!
(Honcho storms off)
Raul/Silas: *Gasps*
~While Honcho Walks Away~
Honcho (Thoughts): This isn’t cutting it!
(Honcho walks past the Workroom)
Honcho: Wonder what we can do here!
~In BC Sol’s Basement~
Aleph: Is Honcho going to be okay?
Raul: Honcho’s as tough as an ox! He’ll be fine!
Me: Then I guess it’s my turn on this stadium!
Silas: Are you sure? This stadium isn’t for noobs you know!
Aleph: He beat you didn’t he?
Silas: Grr!!
Raul: All right, start!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me: Let it… rip!!
(I pull off a powerful Techno Launch)
Me: Go!
(Ultravor hits Infinite Roktavor with a barrage of attacks)
Me: Keep going!
(My Resonance Aura blazes up, Ultravor glows brightly)
All: *Gasps*
Silas (Thoughts): He’s really going at it!
Raul: Cranking up to full power!
(Infinite Roktavor starts spinning fast, Infinite Roktavor creates an enormous tornado)
Me: Blow it up! Techno Bomb!!
(Ultravor slams into Infinite Roktavor with powerful force, the whole basement blows up)
All: *Gasps*
(Silas, Aleph, and Raul get blown off their feet, Infinite Roktavor gets sent flying and bursts)
Raul: *Gasps*
Me: Woah! I did it!
Silas: How did he burst it?
Raul: It wasn’t at full power but still very impressive!
Me: Super awesome!
~In The BC Sol Workroom~
Honcho: It’s done! Burster Roktavor!!
(Honcho holds up his new Burster Roktavor)
Honcho: And my new heavy grip!
(Honcho attaches his new heavy grip to his Techno Launcher)
Honcho: This should do the trick!
~In BC Sol’s Basement~
Aleph: Go, Aion!
(Aion starts clashing with Infinite Roktavor, Aion starts wobbling then stops spinning)
Aleph: You’ve gotta be kidding!
Raul: You should work on making Aion spin longer, Try improving your launch!
Aleph: Got it!
???: Silas!
(Honcho runs down the stairs)
Honcho: I challenge you to an unforgettable battle!
(Honcho holds up Burster Roktavor)
All: *Gasps*
Silas: Well, looks like you evolved it, I accept!
~In BC Sol’s Main Gym~
Raul: I’ll be the referee! Inspect your opponent's bey!
Silas (Thoughts): Burster Roktavor, a Clockwise spinning stamina type! It has four blades that can make a windy up force, Two of them are metal! Its disk is the heaviest one I’ve ever seen! And its driver is meant to take the center and never give it back! Let’s see how well you’ll do now!
Raul: First battle!
Honcho (Thoughts): I’m going to blow him away with my new move!
Silas (Thoughts): Whatever trick his new bey has, I’ll easily counter!
Raul: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Silas/Honcho: Let it… rip!!
(Silas pulls off a powerful Lightning Launch, Honcho pulls off a powerful Techno Launch)
Honcho: Go Roktavor!
(Roktavor takes the center)
Me: Wow, Roktavor is super fast!
Raul: He took the center right away!
Silas: Attack Satomb!
(Satomb hits Roktavor with a powerful barrage of attacks, Roktavor doesn't even flinch)
Honcho: We’ve got stamina for days!
Silas: I don’t think so! Universe Drift!!
(Satomb starts grinding on its driver and speeds into Roktavor, Roktavor sends Satomb back flying)
All: *Gasps*
Aleph: Why aren’t Satomb’s attacks doing anything?
Raul: Because good old Honcho pulled off a strong enough launch to be able to withstand Satomb’s attacks!
Silas: Time to end this! Satomb!!
(Silas’ Resonance Aura flares up Satomb blazes out of the bey)
Silas: One more time! Universe Drift!!
Honcho: Roktavor!!
(Honcho’s Resonance Aura flares up Roktavor blazes out of the bey)
Honcho: Blazing Whirlwind!!
(Roktavor creates a huge tornado and sucks Satomb in, Satomb bursts, its parts get sent flying high in the sky)
All: *Gasps*
Raul: Its Burster Roktavor with a burst finish! The winner is Rantaro Kiyama!!
Honcho: Rantaro Kiyama here on never disappointing news!
Silas: Grr!!
(Silas storms off)
Me: That win was completely awesome!
Aleph: You created a huge tornado and completely demolished Satomb!
Honcho: What can I say, all in a day’s work!
Silas (Thoughts): I’m tired of being thrown around by these TechnoX Beys! Time to even up the table!
Next Chapter. Chapter 8 Surprise Defense! Baleful Satomb!!
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - LegendJustice - Jul. 25, 2021
wow the whole of BC sol are getting new beys...
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - UnseenBurst - Jul. 25, 2021
(Jul. 25, 2021 5:10 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: wow the whole of BC sol are getting new beys...
Yeah, they've seen how strong it is but I'm only giving TechnoX Beys to characters important to the plot
Main Antagonist revealed! (You won't believe it)
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - LegendJustice - Jul. 25, 2021
I KNEW IT he is just so evil!!!!
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - Staron - Jul. 25, 2021
So, will the characters who got third second and first be in the chapters?
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - GenesisBlader - Jul. 25, 2021
(Jul. 25, 2021 3:42 PM)Staron Wrote: So, will the characters who got third second and first be in the chapters?
uh unseen said only first place will be in the fanfic
(Jul. 24, 2021 5:34 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Ima announce the winner now since I might be busy later today (Note: Only 1st Place is going in my fanfic)
3rd Place: LegendJustice!!
2nd Place: Staron!!
1st Place.... ColdFlames13!!
Thank you, everyone, who joined, and don't worry, I will have another character contest soon but that's a wrap folks!
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - UnseenBurst - Jul. 25, 2021
1st 2nd and 3rd place get Chapter 8 an hour before release (But I'm currently working on Beyjitzu so you'll have to wait)
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - GenesisBlader - Jul. 25, 2021
(Jul. 25, 2021 4:26 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: 1st 2nd and 3rd place get Chapter 8 an hour before release (But I'm currently working on Beyjitzu so you'll have to wait)
wait im confused
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - UnseenBurst - Jul. 25, 2021
(Jul. 25, 2021 4:32 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jul. 25, 2021 4:26 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: 1st 2nd and 3rd place get Chapter 8 an hour before release (But I'm currently working on Beyjitzu so you'll have to wait)
wait im confused
Let's say you entered the contest and got 3rd place, I would PM you chapter 8 right when it's finished
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - GenesisBlader - Jul. 25, 2021
(Jul. 25, 2021 4:40 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 25, 2021 4:32 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: wait im confused
Let's say you entered the contest and got 3rd place, I would PM you chapter 8 right when it's finished
oh ok, nice
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - ColdFlames13 - Jul. 26, 2021
(Jul. 24, 2021 5:34 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Ima announce the winner now since I might be busy later today (Note: Only 1st Place is going in my fanfic)
3rd Place: LegendJustice!!
2nd Place: Staron!!
1st Place.... ColdFlames13!!
Thank you, everyone, who joined, and don't worry, I will have another character contest soon but that's a wrap folks!
O- Wasnt expecting that
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - UnseenBurst - Jul. 26, 2021
(Jul. 26, 2021 7:32 PM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: (Jul. 24, 2021 5:34 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Ima announce the winner now since I might be busy later today (Note: Only 1st Place is going in my fanfic)
3rd Place: LegendJustice!!
2nd Place: Staron!!
1st Place.... ColdFlames13!!
Thank you, everyone, who joined, and don't worry, I will have another character contest soon but that's a wrap folks!
O- Wasnt expecting that
I really liked your character and I think it would fit well in the story
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - ColdFlames13 - Jul. 26, 2021
(Jul. 26, 2021 7:33 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 26, 2021 7:32 PM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: O- Wasnt expecting that
I really liked your character and I think it would fit well in the story
Well thx
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - UnseenBurst - Jul. 26, 2021
8) New Defense! Baleful Satomb!
9) The Victories Vs BC Sol!
10) New Beginnings, Shogun Valtryek!
(All I have for right now)
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - Staron - Jul. 26, 2021
(Jul. 26, 2021 7:38 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: 8) New Defense! Baleful Satomb!
9) The Victories Vs BC Sol!
10) New Beginnings, Shogun Valtryek!
(All I have for right now) So chapter 8 is when we come in?
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - UnseenBurst - Jul. 26, 2021
(Jul. 26, 2021 7:43 PM)Staron Wrote: (Jul. 26, 2021 7:38 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: 8) New Defense! Baleful Satomb!
9) The Victories Vs BC Sol!
10) New Beginnings, Shogun Valtryek!
(All I have for right now) So chapter 8 is when we come in?
I've just started working on it, so probably in an hour or two
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - Staron - Jul. 26, 2021
(Jul. 26, 2021 7:45 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 26, 2021 7:43 PM)Staron Wrote: So chapter 8 is when we come in?
I've just started working on it, so probably in an hour or two You said that Chapter 8 is when 1st 2nd and 3rd characters come in, right?
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - UnseenBurst - Jul. 26, 2021
(Jul. 26, 2021 7:46 PM)Staron Wrote: (Jul. 26, 2021 7:45 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I've just started working on it, so probably in an hour or two You said that Chapter 8 is when 1st 2nd and 3rd characters come in, right?
Nah, I'm working on a way to incorporate 1st place in but 2nd and 3rd only get the chapter early sorry
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - LegendJustice - Jul. 26, 2021
I honestly don’t care if Kane gets in
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - UnseenBurst - Jul. 26, 2021
(Jul. 26, 2021 7:49 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: I honestly don’t care if Kane gets in
Don't worry, you'll get another chance to get in soon!
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - GenesisBlader - Jul. 26, 2021
(Jul. 26, 2021 7:49 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: I honestly don’t care if Kane gets in
bruh who is Kane
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - LegendJustice - Jul. 26, 2021
(Jul. 26, 2021 7:51 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jul. 26, 2021 7:49 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: I honestly don’t care if Kane gets in
bruh who is Kane
My character
(Jul. 26, 2021 7:51 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 26, 2021 7:49 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: I honestly don’t care if Kane gets in
Don't worry, you'll get another chance to get in soon!
Okay thanks this time it will be Kane’s successor
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - GenesisBlader - Jul. 26, 2021
(Jul. 26, 2021 7:51 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Jul. 26, 2021 7:51 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: bruh who is Kane
My character
(Jul. 26, 2021 7:51 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Don't worry, you'll get another chance to get in soon!
Okay thanks this time it will be Kane’s successor
ohhhh i feel so stupid sorry for the random lashing out
lol i wonder who's kane's successor...
yo unseen you doing another character contest? if you do then things are about to get spicy lol
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