RE: Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 22, 2021
Chapter 10 is here
Chapter 10: The Dark Prince! Terror Hades!
Hyde: Now it's hades's turn to play with Dragoon!
[Drake stares and points his finger at Hyde]
Drake: Hey, I know you! You're the formal world champion... Hyde!
Hyde: So you do know me....
Drake: Yeah I saw your battle against Valt, I even know all of Hades's capabilites!
Hyde: Oh really?
[Hyde pulls out his bey and shows it to Drake]
Hyde: Say hello to Terror Hades!
Drake: Terror Hades.... That's a VS bey!
Phi: So that's why you were kinda busy huh?
Hyde: Hades has been resurrected, and he is itching for a fight.
Drake: I'll stop that itch from your bey when it's bursted into pieces!
[Hades began to shine showing he's prepared for battle, Dragoon shined too as if it was responding to Hades]
Drake: What's this?
Hyde: You don't know? Beys attract other Beys the same way Bladers attract other Bladers.
Drake: Attract?
Hyde: Why don't you ask Dragoon yourself? You can resonate right?
[Drake looks at dragoon strangely. Dragoon shines and everything around Drake became white, Dragoon appeared in front of him.]
Drake: Dragoon..?
Dragoon: Looks like you're getting stronger.
Drake: Yeah! I defeated Phi, now it's Hyde's turn.
Dragoon: Are you sure you can win?
Drake: Of course! I believe in you. You're my...... partner right?
Dragoon: Yeah, then let's do this, partner!
Dragoon disappears, Drake opens his eyes and looks at Hyde with confidence.
Drake: Hyde, I'll show you my partner's true strength!
Valt (Smiles and looks at Drake): Partner.... huh?
Damon: Alright Everyone!! Lord Hyde is back with his new bey, Terror Hades!!
Ben (While watching the match from Inferno Corp.): This might be interesting....
Hyde (Laughs): Prepared to lose?
Drake (Smiles): Heh, don't count your chickens before they've hatched.
[Drake saw Hyde being surrounded by Purple Aura, he could feel his intense spirit and began to think],
Drake: *There's something wrong about him.... Terror Hades.... Balance Type, The two sword-like attack blades can be changed into defence blades... I guess I've got what it takes to beat this guy.*
Drone: First Battle!
Hyde (Changes the layer and disc to defence mode): Just how far are you willing to go for the sake of my entertainment, Drake?
Drake: You'll get more entertainment when you'll see Hades getting burst into pieces!
Drone: Ready, Set!
Drake/Hyde: 3!..2!..1! Let it rip!!
[Hades takes the center of the stadium and Dragoon uses the slopes and heads towards Hades]
Drake: Let's go, Viking Launch!
Dragoon lands a barrage of attacks at Hades, but none was effective.
Damon: Dragoon attacks Hades! But none of it's attack can move Lord Hyde's Hades!!
Hyde: If that's the best you can do, then you've got a long way to go.
Drake: There's nothing Dragoon cannot do! Viking Crash!
[Dragoon hits Hades with it's spear-shaped blades and moves Hades from the center]
Damon: Hades got overwhelmed by Dragoon's attack!!
Drake: Alright!
Hyde (laughs): Terror Impulse!
Hades's eyes shines and knocks out Dragoon from the stadium.
Drake (Looks at Dragoon): Huh?
Drone: Terror Hades, Over Finish! Hyde scores one point.
Damon: Lord Hyde won the round! Looks like he's gonna crush Drake in the next round as well!
Drake: Th..that was just a fluke! It won't happen again!
Hyde: Oh we'll see! *Laughs* Hades is just getting started!
[Hyde changes the layer and disc to attack mode]
Drake: I'll win this round, I'm not gonna lose!!
Drone: Second Battle, Ready Set!
Drake/Hyde: 3....2....1.... Let It Rip!!
[Hades and Dragoon both uses the slopes of the stadium and heads towards each other]
Drake: Dragoon knock him away!
Hyde: Not gonna happen, Terror Impulse!
Drake: Viking Crash!!
[Dragoon and Hades clashes and creates a huge havoc and explosion in the stadium]
[Hyde screams and then began to radiate huge amount of aura from himself]
Drake (Tries to shield himself from the explosion and moves forward): I'm gonna win!!
Hyde: Hades!!
Hyde's aura transmites to Hades and Hades's avatar emerges scorching through the aura
Hyde: Terror Gravity!
[Hades covers itself in a purple aura and traps Dragoon in a purple vortex and sends Dragoon upwards and bursts it. At the same time the stadium got destroyed by Hades's fearsome strength]
Drake: I... can't believe this!
Drone: Terror Hades, Burst Finish! Hyde wins the match with the score of 3-0.
Damon: It's over!! It's Lord Hyde's comeback! He will surely keep up his winning streak after this!!
Aiden (At Inferno Tower): Looks like he lost against Hyde...
[Ben doesn't pays attention, Aiden looks at him angrily]
Aiden (Crosses his arms): You're ignoring me again.... Well, I was planning to call Drake Kazeryu here.
Ben (Looks at Aiden): What for?
Aiden: I'll tell you when he's here.
~At Dread Tower~
Drake picks up Dragoon and assembles it
Drake: Looks like we still have a long way to go...
Dragoon responds by shining
Hyde: Just as I thought, Dragoon's strength was just a joke right?
Drake: One more time! I'll battle one more time!
Hyde (Points his finger at the stadium): Stadium has been destroyed... So even if I wanted to battle you....
Drake: I'll beat you next time, Hyde!
Valt lends his hand to Drake.
Valt: Get up, that was such an awesome battle!
Drake (with an upset look): But I lost...
Valt: It's fine. You'll beat him next time, I'm sure about it!
Drake (Grabs Valt's hand): Yeah, I will!
Valt: Looks like we have nothing to do here now, Let's go back to BC Sol.
Drake: Fine, Let's go.
[To Be Continued]
Actually after chapter 11, I'll try to change my writing style. (I'll make it more detailed)
RE: Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown - GenesisBlader - Jul. 22, 2021
(Jul. 22, 2021 1:41 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Chapter 10 is here
Chapter 10: The Dark Prince! Terror Hades!
Hyde: Now it's hades's turn to play with Dragoon!
[Drake stares and points his finger at Hyde]
Drake: Hey, I know you! You're the formal world champion... Hyde!
Hyde: So you do know me....
Drake: Yeah I saw your battle against Valt, I even know all of Hades's capabilites!
Hyde: Oh really?
[Hyde pulls out his bey and shows it to Drake]
Hyde: Say hello to Terror Hades!
Drake: Terror Hades.... That's a VS bey!
Phi: So that's why you were kinda busy huh?
Hyde: Hades has been resurrected, and he is itching for a fight.
Drake: I'll stop that itch from your bey when it's bursted into pieces!
[Hades began to shine showing he's prepared for battle, Dragoon shined too as if it was responding to Hades]
Drake: What's this?
Hyde: You don't know? Beys attract other Beys the same way Bladers attract other Bladers.
Drake: Attract?
Hyde: Why don't you ask Dragoon yourself? You can resonate right?
[Drake looks at dragoon strangely. Dragoon shines and everything around Drake became white, Dragoon appeared in front of him.]
Drake: Dragoon..?
Dragoon: Looks like you're getting stronger.
Drake: Yeah! I defeated Phi, now it's Hyde's turn.
Dragoon: Are you sure you can win?
Drake: Of course! I believe in you. You're my...... partner right?
Dragoon: Yeah, then let's do this, partner!
Dragoon disappears, Drake opens his eyes and looks at Hyde with confidence.
Drake: Hyde, I'll show you my partner's true strength!
Valt (Smiles and looks at Drake): Partner.... huh?
Damon: Alright Everyone!! Lord Hyde is back with his new bey, Terror Hades!!
Ben (While watching the match from Inferno Corp.): This might be interesting....
Hyde (Laughs): Prepared to lose?
Drake (Smiles): Heh, don't count your chickens before they've hatched.
[Drake saw Hyde being surrounded by Purple Aura, he could feel his intense spirit and began to think],
Drake: *There's something wrong about him.... Terror Hades.... Balance Type, The two sword-like attack blades can be changed into defence blades... I guess I've got what it takes to beat this guy.*
Drone: First Battle!
Hyde (Changes the layer and disc to defence mode): Just how far are you willing to go for the sake of my entertainment, Drake?
Drake: You'll get more entertainment when you'll see Hades getting burst into pieces!
Drone: Ready, Set!
Drake/Hyde: 3!..2!..1! Let it rip!!
[Hades takes the center of the stadium and Dragoon uses the slopes and heads towards Hades]
Drake: Let's go, Viking Launch!
Dragoon lands a barrage of attacks at Hades, but none was effective.
Damon: Dragoon attacks Hades! But none of it's attack can move Lord Hyde's Hades!!
Hyde: If that's the best you can do, then you've got a long way to go.
Drake: There's nothing Dragoon cannot do! Viking Crash!
[Dragoon hits Hades with it's spear-shaped blades and moves Hades from the center]
Damon: Hades got overwhelmed by Dragoon's attack!!
Drake: Alright!
Hyde (laughs): Terror Impulse!
Hades's eyes shines and knocks out Dragoon from the stadium.
Drake (Looks at Dragoon): Huh?
Drone: Terror Hades, Over Finish! Hyde scores one point.
Damon: Lord Hyde won the round! Looks like he's gonna crush Drake in the next round as well!
Drake: Th..that was just a fluke! It won't happen again!
Hyde: Oh we'll see! *Laughs* Hades is just getting started!
[Hyde changes the layer and disc to attack mode]
Drake: I'll win this round, I'm not gonna lose!!
Drone: Second Battle, Ready Set!
Drake/Hyde: 3....2....1.... Let It Rip!!
[Hades and Dragoon both uses the slopes of the stadium and heads towards each other]
Drake: Dragoon knock him away!
Hyde: Not gonna happen, Terror Impulse!
Drake: Viking Crash!!
[Dragoon and Hades clashes and creates a huge havoc and explosion in the stadium]
[Hyde screams and then began to radiate huge amount of aura from himself]
Drake (Tries to shield himself from the explosion and moves forward): I'm gonna win!!
Hyde: Hades!!
Hyde's aura transmites to Hades and Hades's avatar emerges scorching through the aura
Hyde: Terror Gravity!
[Hades covers itself in a purple aura and traps Dragoon in a purple vortex and sends Dragoon upwards and bursts it. At the same time the stadium got destroyed by Hades's fearsome strength]
Drake: I... can't believe this!
Drone: Terror Hades, Burst Finish! Hyde wins the match with the score of 3-0.
Damon: It's over!! It's Lord Hyde's comeback! He will surely keep up his winning streak after this!!
Aiden (At Inferno Tower): Looks like he lost against Hyde...
[Ben doesn't pays attention, Aiden looks at him angrily]
Aiden (Crosses his arms): You're ignoring me again.... Well, I was planning to call Drake Kazeryu here.
Ben (Looks at Aiden): What for?
Aiden: I'll tell you when he's here.
~At Dread Tower~
Drake picks up Dragoon and assembles it
Drake: Looks like we still have a long way to go...
Dragoon responds by shining
Hyde: Just as I thought, Dragoon's strength was just a joke right?
Drake: One more time! I'll battle one more time!
Hyde (Points his finger at the stadium): Stadium has been destroyed... So even if I wanted to battle you....
Drake: I'll beat you next time, Hyde!
Valt lends his hand to Drake.
Valt: Get up, that was such an awesome battle!
Drake (with an upset look): But I lost...
Valt: It's fine. You'll beat him next time, I'm sure about it!
Drake (Grabs Valt's hand): Yeah, I will!
Valt: Looks like we have nothing to do here now, Let's go back to BC Sol.
Drake: Fine, Let's go.
[To Be Continued]
Actually after chapter 11, I'll try to change my writing style. (I'll make it more detailed) nice chapter man!
ummm and the reason why i was so late to reply... is because i was asleep by the time you made this
RE: Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 22, 2021
(Jul. 22, 2021 2:31 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jul. 22, 2021 1:41 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Chapter 10 is here
Chapter 10: The Dark Prince! Terror Hades!
Hyde: Now it's hades's turn to play with Dragoon!
[Drake stares and points his finger at Hyde]
Drake: Hey, I know you! You're the formal world champion... Hyde!
Hyde: So you do know me....
Drake: Yeah I saw your battle against Valt, I even know all of Hades's capabilites!
Hyde: Oh really?
[Hyde pulls out his bey and shows it to Drake]
Hyde: Say hello to Terror Hades!
Drake: Terror Hades.... That's a VS bey!
Phi: So that's why you were kinda busy huh?
Hyde: Hades has been resurrected, and he is itching for a fight.
Drake: I'll stop that itch from your bey when it's bursted into pieces!
[Hades began to shine showing he's prepared for battle, Dragoon shined too as if it was responding to Hades]
Drake: What's this?
Hyde: You don't know? Beys attract other Beys the same way Bladers attract other Bladers.
Drake: Attract?
Hyde: Why don't you ask Dragoon yourself? You can resonate right?
[Drake looks at dragoon strangely. Dragoon shines and everything around Drake became white, Dragoon appeared in front of him.]
Drake: Dragoon..?
Dragoon: Looks like you're getting stronger.
Drake: Yeah! I defeated Phi, now it's Hyde's turn.
Dragoon: Are you sure you can win?
Drake: Of course! I believe in you. You're my...... partner right?
Dragoon: Yeah, then let's do this, partner!
Dragoon disappears, Drake opens his eyes and looks at Hyde with confidence.
Drake: Hyde, I'll show you my partner's true strength!
Valt (Smiles and looks at Drake): Partner.... huh?
Damon: Alright Everyone!! Lord Hyde is back with his new bey, Terror Hades!!
Ben (While watching the match from Inferno Corp.): This might be interesting....
Hyde (Laughs): Prepared to lose?
Drake (Smiles): Heh, don't count your chickens before they've hatched.
[Drake saw Hyde being surrounded by Purple Aura, he could feel his intense spirit and began to think],
Drake: *There's something wrong about him.... Terror Hades.... Balance Type, The two sword-like attack blades can be changed into defence blades... I guess I've got what it takes to beat this guy.*
Drone: First Battle!
Hyde (Changes the layer and disc to defence mode): Just how far are you willing to go for the sake of my entertainment, Drake?
Drake: You'll get more entertainment when you'll see Hades getting burst into pieces!
Drone: Ready, Set!
Drake/Hyde: 3!..2!..1! Let it rip!!
[Hades takes the center of the stadium and Dragoon uses the slopes and heads towards Hades]
Drake: Let's go, Viking Launch!
Dragoon lands a barrage of attacks at Hades, but none was effective.
Damon: Dragoon attacks Hades! But none of it's attack can move Lord Hyde's Hades!!
Hyde: If that's the best you can do, then you've got a long way to go.
Drake: There's nothing Dragoon cannot do! Viking Crash!
[Dragoon hits Hades with it's spear-shaped blades and moves Hades from the center]
Damon: Hades got overwhelmed by Dragoon's attack!!
Drake: Alright!
Hyde (laughs): Terror Impulse!
Hades's eyes shines and knocks out Dragoon from the stadium.
Drake (Looks at Dragoon): Huh?
Drone: Terror Hades, Over Finish! Hyde scores one point.
Damon: Lord Hyde won the round! Looks like he's gonna crush Drake in the next round as well!
Drake: Th..that was just a fluke! It won't happen again!
Hyde: Oh we'll see! *Laughs* Hades is just getting started!
[Hyde changes the layer and disc to attack mode]
Drake: I'll win this round, I'm not gonna lose!!
Drone: Second Battle, Ready Set!
Drake/Hyde: 3....2....1.... Let It Rip!!
[Hades and Dragoon both uses the slopes of the stadium and heads towards each other]
Drake: Dragoon knock him away!
Hyde: Not gonna happen, Terror Impulse!
Drake: Viking Crash!!
[Dragoon and Hades clashes and creates a huge havoc and explosion in the stadium]
[Hyde screams and then began to radiate huge amount of aura from himself]
Drake (Tries to shield himself from the explosion and moves forward): I'm gonna win!!
Hyde: Hades!!
Hyde's aura transmites to Hades and Hades's avatar emerges scorching through the aura
Hyde: Terror Gravity!
[Hades covers itself in a purple aura and traps Dragoon in a purple vortex and sends Dragoon upwards and bursts it. At the same time the stadium got destroyed by Hades's fearsome strength]
Drake: I... can't believe this!
Drone: Terror Hades, Burst Finish! Hyde wins the match with the score of 3-0.
Damon: It's over!! It's Lord Hyde's comeback! He will surely keep up his winning streak after this!!
Aiden (At Inferno Tower): Looks like he lost against Hyde...
[Ben doesn't pays attention, Aiden looks at him angrily]
Aiden (Crosses his arms): You're ignoring me again.... Well, I was planning to call Drake Kazeryu here.
Ben (Looks at Aiden): What for?
Aiden: I'll tell you when he's here.
~At Dread Tower~
Drake picks up Dragoon and assembles it
Drake: Looks like we still have a long way to go...
Dragoon responds by shining
Hyde: Just as I thought, Dragoon's strength was just a joke right?
Drake: One more time! I'll battle one more time!
Hyde (Points his finger at the stadium): Stadium has been destroyed... So even if I wanted to battle you....
Drake: I'll beat you next time, Hyde!
Valt lends his hand to Drake.
Valt: Get up, that was such an awesome battle!
Drake (with an upset look): But I lost...
Valt: It's fine. You'll beat him next time, I'm sure about it!
Drake (Grabs Valt's hand): Yeah, I will!
Valt: Looks like we have nothing to do here now, Let's go back to BC Sol.
Drake: Fine, Let's go.
[To Be Continued]
Actually after chapter 11, I'll try to change my writing style. (I'll make it more detailed) nice chapter man!
ummm and the reason why i was so late to reply... is because i was asleep by the time you made this
It's 7pm here lol
RE: Beyblade Burst Viking Showdown - GenesisBlader - Jul. 22, 2021
(Jul. 22, 2021 2:36 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: (Jul. 22, 2021 2:31 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: nice chapter man!
ummm and the reason why i was so late to reply... is because i was asleep by the time you made this
It's 7pm here lol oh lol
(Jul. 22, 2021 2:36 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: (Jul. 22, 2021 2:31 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: nice chapter man!
ummm and the reason why i was so late to reply... is because i was asleep by the time you made this
It's 7pm here lol
where i am it's 9:42am
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - LegendJustice - Jul. 22, 2021
Nice chapter even tho I just some up!
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 22, 2021
Upcoming Chapters
Chapter 11: Roar Of The Red Dragon! Ares!!
Chapter 12: The Pledge of Demon! Obstruct Wall!
Chapter 13: Dragoon VS Baldur! (End of First Arc)
Chapter 14: Holy Sword! Seraph Valtryek!
Chapter 15: The Dragon of Arakawa!
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - GenesisBlader - Jul. 22, 2021
(Jul. 22, 2021 3:17 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Upcoming Chapters
Chapter 11: Roar Of The Red Dragon! Ares!!
Chapter 12: The Pledge of Demon! Obstruct Wall!
Chapter 13: Dragoon VS Baldur! (End of First Arc)
Chapter 14: Holy Sword! Seraph Valtryek!
Chapter 15: The Dragon of Arakawa! nice! i love the chapter names and looking forward to all of them!
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 22, 2021
Viking Ares .Treble Instinct Destroy -Nullify
VS Core: Treble, It aligns with the three blades of Viking Layer which increases it's attack.
VS Weight: Nullify, it adds rubber to layer, but not for spin steal but to absorb the attack from opponent's bey (So if a bey hits the rubber area the attack will be deflected or decreased).
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - GenesisBlader - Jul. 22, 2021
(Jul. 22, 2021 4:16 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Viking Ares .Treble Instinct Destroy -Nullify
VS Core: Treble, It aligns with the three blades of Viking Layer which increases it's attack.
VS Weight: Nullify, it adds rubber to layer, but not for spin steal but to absorb the attack from opponent's bey (So if a bey hits the rubber area the attack will be deflected or decreased).
cool!
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 22, 2021
(Jul. 22, 2021 4:18 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jul. 22, 2021 4:16 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Viking Ares .Treble Instinct Destroy -Nullify
VS Core: Treble, It aligns with the three blades of Viking Layer which increases it's attack.
VS Weight: Nullify, it adds rubber to layer, but not for spin steal but to absorb the attack from opponent's bey (So if a bey hits the rubber area the attack will be deflected or decreased).
cool!
Dragoon and Baldur will get an upgrade too
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 22, 2021
(Jul. 22, 2021 4:54 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: (Jul. 22, 2021 4:18 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: cool!
Dragoon and Baldur will get an upgrade too
If Baldur gets heavy then it's only weakeness would be hitting from below / high up
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 22, 2021
Viking Dragoon .Breeze Instinct Quick' -Wind
VS core: Breeze, Nothing special about it just used to make the layer more balanced and heavier.(Special gimmick: Hardens the teeths of the chip).
VS Weight: Wind, It extends the Blades of Viking layer, which increases it's attacks and burst resistancy.
VS core: Cease, It stops the free-spinning blades(So with this, the blades of Magic Layer are fixed)
VS weight: Obstruct, It's an armor which disables the rollers the bey,(The rollers were made of rubber, So rubber will help it to reduce and deflect the attack)
Note: These Upgrades will happen on Chapter 11 and 12.
(Jul. 22, 2021 5:06 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Jul. 22, 2021 4:54 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Dragoon and Baldur will get an upgrade too
If Baldur gets heavy then it's only weakeness would be hitting from below / high up
It will only get a lil bit heavy
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Demon Belial - Jul. 23, 2021
(Jul. 22, 2021 5:25 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Viking Dragoon .Breeze Instinct Quick' -Wind
VS core: Breeze, Nothing special about it just used to make the layer more balanced and heavier.(Special gimmick: Hardens the teeths of the chip).
VS Weight: Wind, It extends the Blades of Viking layer, which increases it's attacks and burst resistancy.
VS core: Cease, It stops the free-spinning blades(So with this, the blades of Magic Layer are fixed)
VS weight: Obstruct, It's an armor which disables the rollers the bey,(The rollers were made of rubber, So rubber will help it to reduce and deflect the attack)
Note: These Upgrades will happen on Chapter 11 and 12.
(Jul. 22, 2021 5:06 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: If Baldur gets heavy then it's only weakeness would be hitting from below / high up
It will only get a lil bit heavy
So the Breeze core is exclusive to make the teeth tight?
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 23, 2021
I will release Chapter 11 tomorrow.
For now some new beys name
Reign Achilles
Athan Phoenix
Divine Fafnir(I changed the name)
Arcane Kukulcan
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - GenesisBlader - Jul. 23, 2021
(Jul. 23, 2021 5:58 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: I will release Chapter 11 tomorrow.
For now some new beys name
Reign Achilles
Athan Phoenix
Divine Fafnir(I changed the name)
Arcane Kukulcan cool, ur episode rate might be higher than mine
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 23, 2021
(Jul. 23, 2021 6:05 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jul. 23, 2021 5:58 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: I will release Chapter 11 tomorrow.
For now some new beys name
Reign Achilles
Athan Phoenix
Divine Fafnir(I changed the name)
Arcane Kukulcan cool, ur episode rate might be higher than mine
Idk, Chapter 11 is not going to be really good. But I'll make sure that Chapter 12 and 13 will be my best chapters.
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - GenesisBlader - Jul. 23, 2021
(Jul. 23, 2021 6:34 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: (Jul. 23, 2021 6:05 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: cool, ur episode rate might be higher than mine
Idk, Chapter 11 is not going to be really good. But I'll make sure that Chapter 12 and 13 will be my best chapters.
oh alright!
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 23, 2021
Chapter 15 will be Yinglong’s debut episode.
Yinglong’s owner is Yuito Arakawa.
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 24, 2021
Seraph Valtryek .Valiant Miracle Awoken -Wing
VS Chip: Valtryek
VS Core: Valiant, It can be either used to lock the springs on Seraph or just make the layer more balanced.
VS Layer: Seraph, 3-bladed Layer with rubber on it. The Layer has spring which makes it bound.
Forge Disc: Miracle, it is a circular Forge-Disc with six small downward sloping blades(Made of rubber) present around its perimeter. In theory, the blades are meant to produce Down Force in Right-Spin to increase the grip of the Beyblade on the stadium floor by pushing air downward.
Driver: Awoken, just like Evolution and Variable but more aggressive, when awakened the rubber tip becomes similar to Xtreme, but is a lot faster than that.
VS Weight: Wing, Adds 3 more wings to the Seraph layer, there purpose is to re-lock the bey, Just like the gimmick of Heaven Pegasus.
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - GenesisBlader - Jul. 24, 2021
(Jul. 24, 2021 12:27 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Seraph Valtryek .Valiant Miracle Awoken -Wing
VS Chip: Valtryek
VS Core: Valiant, It can be either used to lock the springs on Seraph or just make the layer more balanced.
VS Layer: Seraph, 3-bladed Layer with rubber on it. The Layer has spring which makes it bound.
Forge Disc: Miracle, it is a circular Forge-Disc with six small downward sloping blades(Made of rubber) present around its perimeter. In theory, the blades are meant to produce Down Force in Right-Spin to increase the grip of the Beyblade on the stadium floor by pushing air downward.
Driver: Awoken, just like Evolution and Variable but more aggressive, when awakened the rubber tip becomes similar to Xtreme, but is a lot faster than that.
VS Weight: Wing, Adds 3 more wings to the Seraph layer, there purpose is to re-lock the bey, Just like the gimmick of Heaven Pegasus.
cool!
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 24, 2021
Chapter 11 is here!
Chapter 11: Rage of the Red Dragon! Ares!!
(Drake and Valt came back at BC Sol)
Drake: So we're finally back here.
Haruka: So you're finnally back! I watched your matches, they were really fun!
Drake: Yeah.... But I lost the last one.
Valt: Do you think you are ready for Big match?
Drake (mumbles): I guess... I'm ready.
Valt (pats Drake's shoulder): You'll get him this time, Just believe in yourself.
(Suddenly someone barges in)
Valt: Who are you?
???: Master Sumeragi has business with Drake.
Drake: With me?
???: Yes, I'm just a member of Inferno.
Valt: I'll come with you.
IC's member: It doesn't concern you, Drake is needed for Master's meeting.
Valt: Meeting?
Drake: I'll be back, besides I wanted to pay that guy a visit.
Drake (Looks at that member): Lead the way.
(Drake leaves)
Valt: (I have a bad feeling about this...)
(Drake reached Inferno Corp.)
(IC's member opens the door for Drake)
IC's member: This wa-
Drake (Screams): AIDEN!!!
IC's member: Please don't shout here... No one likes that.
Drake: Ya'll needed me and If you have a problem with me, then I'll leave.
???: Hey! Don't shout here!
(Drake looks at that guy and then looks at the IC member)
Drake: Is this guy your watchman?
IC's member (chuckles): H-he's not.
???: Do I look like a watchman to you?!
Drake: I guess you should look at yourself in the mirror.
???: You're pissing me off...
IC's member: Actually he's one of our strongest blader, Yuito Arakawa.
Yuito (He pulls his launcher): That's right, and I should teach you some manners!
Drake: Fine then! Bring it on! (He grabs his launcher)
(A drone came out of nowhere)
Drone: First Battle!
Yuito (Shows his bey to Drake, it was Air Knight 0 Xtreme): I'm gonna wreck your bey!
Drake: We'll see.
Drone: Ready Set!
Drake/Yuito: 3!2!1! Let It Rip!!
(Dragoon bursts his bey with the first hit)
Yuito: Wh-what?!
Drone: Viking Dragoon, Burst Finish!
???: Nicely done, Drake!
Drake (Looks at the other direction): It's you!
Aiden: Nice to meet ya again! Drake
Drake (Looks at him fiercely): Why did you do this? It's me who created VS System!
Aiden: Well.... I can't explain that... Your VS System is inferior to mine.
Drake: What?
Aiden (Shows his bey): Now you see... It's the perfect form of Viking Showdown System!
Drake: You upgraded it!?
Aiden (laughs): Now you understand why I did that?
Drake: It doesn't changes anything! It's me wh-
Yuito: You should watch your tone while taking to him!
(Ben comes by and looks at Aiden)
Ben: What's going on here?
Yuito: Nothing, A kid is just arguing wit-
Aiden (Stops Yuito): It's fine.... I have a condition for ya Drake.
Drake: What?
Aiden: If you beat me then I'll tell everyone the truth. But if you lost, then I won't.
Drake: Fine, I agree!
Ben: (I've never seen an idiot like him).
Drone: First Battle!
Drake: (I don't know what his upgraded bey can do.... but I just have believe in Dragoon!)
Drone: Ready Set!
Drake/Aiden: 3....2....1..! Let It Rip!!
Drake: Dash Launch!
(Dragoon lands a barrage of attacks on Ares but it wasn't doing much of a help)
Drake: What's happening?
Aiden: It's the VS Weight... It adds more ability for your bey.
Drake: Grr.. Dragoon!!
(Drake starts to emit a bright blue aura)
(Dragoon appears scorching out from the aura)
(Dragoon keeps up with Ares and lands a barrage of attacks and Dragoon goes half-way to burst)
Drake: Time to finish this! Viking Whip!!
Aiden: It's no use! Ares!!
(Aiden starts to emit a dark red aura and Ares appears breathing fire from his three mouths)
Aiden: Treble Snap!
(Ares and Dragoon clashes creating a explosion and havoc around the stadium)
(Ares's three dragon heads Bites Dragoon's neck)
Drake (Fells on the ground because of the explosion): Ahh!
(Dragoon Bursts)
Drone: Viking Ares, Burst Finish! Aiden Sumeragi wins!!
Drake (mumbles): It can't be happening....
Aiden: Well this settles it then! (He walks away)
Drake: Wait! You needed me here!
Aiden: I called you here to discuss. But it's settled so you can leave.
Drake (Picks up Dragoon and assembles it): I'm sorry I let you down again...
Ben: I knew you would lose, You just fell on his trap.
Drake: I will... become more stronger and beat him next time.
Ben (smiles): Yeah.... why not.
Drake: But before that I'll beat you!
Ben: You can never beat Baldur, but at least you can try.
(Drake and Ben stares at each other, their aura was shining),
(Drake leaves the corp and looks at the top of the building)
Drake: One day I'll show you guys what I'm made of!
(To Be Continued)
Read this after reading the chapter
I guess it’s not one of my best chapters(Cuz it was rushed)
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - LegendJustice - Jul. 24, 2021
this was a AMAZING chapter!!!!
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - GenesisBlader - Jul. 24, 2021
this was a cool chapter!! nice one!
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 24, 2021
I guess I will take a long time for Chapter 12 and 13 to make them the best chapters. ( I'll release both of them at the same time).
RE: Beyblade Burst: VS - GenesisBlader - Jul. 24, 2021
(Jul. 24, 2021 5:39 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: I guess I will take a long time for Chapter 12 and 13 to make them the best chapters. ( I'll release both of them at the same time).
dang you dont have to do that broski but you can anyway good luck with those two chapters, ima get to work on one of my chapters
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