[Fan Fiction] Hollow's Beyblade fic thread

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RE: Beyblade Burst Resonance [Character Contest] - GenesisBlader - Aug. 13, 2021

(Aug. 13, 2021 9:09 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
(Aug. 13, 2021 9:06 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: no, i cant think of a character lol

Fair enough. (I'll edit this post when I finish double checking the winners)
Aham- The winners are, actually, idk for sure

LJ-Blader certainly got first place, but I can't decide if LegendJustice or Kiryu Kazuma , mostly because I can see both characters fit very well. So here's is the bracket:

1st place: LJ-Blader
2nd Place: Kiryu Kazuma
3rd Place: LegendJustice
(lol, that's basically the order of the submissions)

1st place character will appear soon, as for 2nd and 3rd, they will appear later on. Maybe as friends, maybe as enemies, only future will tell.

Also, Legend. Consider it your lucky day, I would choose Kiryu's character but since I'm in a good mood I spared you.

nice! good job everyone who participating

RE: Beyblade Burst Resonance [Character Contest] - Hollowmind13 - Aug. 13, 2021

I'm very sorry for LJ-Blader, LegendJustice and Kiryu if you guys get mentioned a lot of times (If it does happen, prob not)

RE: Beyblade Burst Resonance [Character Contest] - Dread hades12 - Aug. 13, 2021

GG everyone

RE: Beyblade Burst Resonance [Character Contest] - LJ-Blader - Aug. 13, 2021

Gg everyone!

RE: Beyblade Burst Resonance [Character Contest] - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 14, 2021

GG everyone!

RE: Beyblade Burst Resonance [Character Contest] - Hollowmind13 - Aug. 14, 2021

Chapter 5, a good example that I'm not that good at writing yet. Half way through I got nauseous, so yeah.
(I don't see a chapter here, must have been outdated)
Also, Is it a Beyjitzu reference?

RE: Beyblade Burst Resonance [Character Contest] - GenesisBlader - Aug. 15, 2021

lemme see...

eh, not to me, nice episode! i see no grammar mistakes!

RE: Beyblade Burst Resonance - Hollowmind13 - Aug. 16, 2021

I'll try doing sth different, I'll try to make a longer chapter since that might improve quality and etc. So GenesisBlader , no need to be worried, expect it to be at least this week.
I'll try counter the increase of time between chapters with some #shorts.

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RE: Beyblade Burst Resonance - GenesisBlader - Aug. 16, 2021

(Aug. 16, 2021 12:13 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: I'll try doing sth different, I'll try to make a longer chapter since that might improve quality and etc. So GenesisBlader , no need to be worried, expect it to be at least this week.
I'll try counter the increase of time between chapters with some #shorts.

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Expected things to come (in order):
* Tyson info
* A #short
* Anna and Ashley info.
* Chapter 6: ... And that's how I meet a Egyptian God.

alright nice!

RE: Beyblade Burst Resonance - Hollowmind13 - Aug. 17, 2021

Tyson info:

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Even tho he's the antag, I tried to make him less evil and stuff. It's not like every antag is evil anyways

RE: Beyblade Burst Resonance - LegendJustice - Aug. 17, 2021

(Me who was making my Antag being trained by Phi) Oh Antag is not always evil?

RE: Beyblade Burst Resonance - PinkRose - Aug. 17, 2021

(Aug. 17, 2021 5:49 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Me who was making my Antag being trained by Phi) Oh Antag is not always evil?

We’re in 2021, antagonist does not equal villain. They’re simply someone whose goal and/or ideals conflict with the protagonist’s, and sometimes act as foil to said protagonist, but doesn’t have to be evil.

RE: Beyblade Burst Resonance - UnseenBurst - Aug. 17, 2021

(Aug. 17, 2021 5:49 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Me who was making my Antag being trained by Phi) Oh Antag is not always evil?

Pinkrose is correct, Lui wasn't an evil villain, it's just his style of Blading clashed with Valt and he was ruthless while Valt was a bit more careful (What am I talking about, this kid trips everywhere) I don't really know about Gwyn because HE wanted to break Dragon but wasn't really evil, Definition of Antagnost in Google

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Opposes not evil, so Lui in a way opposed Valt because they both had very different Blading Style's but overall: You don't need to be evil to be an antagonist, in fact, I'm thinking Rashad won't be an evil antagonist he just despises Bell for many legit reasons (Sorry Pinkrose)

RE: Beyblade Burst Resonance - LegendJustice - Aug. 17, 2021

(Aug. 17, 2021 7:11 PM)PinkRose Wrote:
(Aug. 17, 2021 5:49 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Me who was making my Antag being trained by Phi) Oh Antag is not always evil?

We’re in 2021, antagonist does not equal villain. They’re simply someone whose goal and/or ideals conflict with the protagonist’s, and sometimes act as foil to said protagonist, but doesn’t have to be evil.

UnseenBurst PinkRose I already know that Not all Antags are evil I just wanted my Antag to be Truly evil I know that Lui just had a different idea of what valt idea, Thus you don't have to correct me I already no it and I just said that as a joke.

RE: Beyblade Burst Resonance - Dread hades12 - Aug. 17, 2021

The last truly evil antagonist was phi who was a sadistic malicious Blader who enjoyed tormenting his opponents and seeing despair and hopelessness when he destroyed their Beys

RE: Beyblade Burst Resonance - UnseenBurst - Aug. 17, 2021

(Aug. 17, 2021 7:41 PM)Dread hades12 Wrote: The last truly evil antagonist was phi who was a sadistic malicious Blader who enjoyed tormenting his opponents and seeing despair and hopelessness when he destroyed their Beys

Lane would like to know your location

RE: Beyblade Burst Resonance - Dread hades12 - Aug. 17, 2021

*Squeals in fear and scampers behind couch

RE: Beyblade Burst Resonance - ColdFlames13 - Aug. 17, 2021

(Aug. 17, 2021 7:49 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Aug. 17, 2021 7:41 PM)Dread hades12 Wrote: The last truly evil antagonist was phi who was a sadistic malicious Blader who enjoyed tormenting his opponents and seeing despair and hopelessness when he destroyed their Beys

Lane would like to know your location

Lane at the end of sparking And Flare would like yours

RE: Beyblade Burst Resonance - LegendJustice - Aug. 17, 2021

Guys I don't wanna be a party pooper and stuff but this is Hollow's thread so I'm pretty sure we can't use it as a chatting server

RE: Beyblade Burst Resonance - Hollowmind13 - Aug. 17, 2021

(Aug. 17, 2021 10:33 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Guys I don't wanna be a party pooper and stuff but this is Hollow's thread so I'm pretty sure we can't use it as a chatting server

Thank you !
You're right 100%. It's against the rules, but at the same time if you guys do it about the fic itself, it's fine ig. (I'm talking about ontopic stuff)

I wouldn't have stopped them on my own so thank you.

RE: Beyblade Burst Resonance - Hollowmind13 - Aug. 18, 2021

Tyson bey (aka Tyson info part.2)
Banish Tartarus metal Zephyr' 12Axe-II

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RE: Beyblade Burst Resonance - GenesisBlader - Aug. 18, 2021

(Aug. 18, 2021 9:48 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Tyson bey (aka Tyson info part.2)
Banish Tartarus metal Zephyr' 12Axe-II

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Chip - Tartarus: A right spin sparking-II chip. It has flames and rock-like features, the flames are bright red, the rocks are dark green and the background is dark red. It also features metal teeth.

Ring - Banish: A right-spin, attack type sparking-II ring. It features 3 big blades and 3 smaller blades under it. It has a spring loaded gimmick on which the part where the big 3 blades are is spring loaded, when it starts getting pulled, it would absorb most of the hit and counter attack with the smaller blades, similar to Genesis/god Valtryek/Valkyrie. The 3 big blades are bright red, the 3 small blader are dark red and the rest is dark green, with some black details here and there.

Chassis-II - 12: A light-weight chassis (not so light). It has a very similar shape to the disc 12, except it isn't as sharp. It's not colored.

Chassis frame - Axe: It features a shape similar to Axe. It's black.

Driver - metal Zephyr': Zephyr' but with the metal cap. It's dark green.

g n a r l y !

RE: Beyblade Burst Resonance - LegendJustice - Aug. 18, 2021

(Aug. 18, 2021 9:48 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Tyson bey (aka Tyson info part.2)
Banish Tartarus metal Zephyr' 12Axe-II

Spoiler (Click to View)
Chip - Tartarus: A right spin sparking-II chip. It has flames and rock-like features, the flames are bright red, the rocks are dark green and the background is dark red. It also features metal teeth.

Ring - Banish: A right-spin, attack type sparking-II ring. It features 3 big blades and 3 smaller blades under it. It has a spring loaded gimmick on which the part where the big 3 blades are is spring loaded, when it starts getting pulled, it would absorb most of the hit and counter attack with the smaller blades, similar to Genesis/god Valtryek/Valkyrie. The 3 big blades are bright red, the 3 small blader are dark red and the rest is dark green, with some black details here and there.

Chassis-II - 12: A light-weight chassis (not so light). It has a very similar shape to the disc 12, except it isn't as sharp. It's not colored.

Chassis frame - Axe: It features a shape similar to Axe. It's black.

Driver - metal Zephyr': Zephyr' but with the metal cap. It's dark green.

WHAT A OG NAME!!!

RE: Beyblade Burst Resonance - Hollowmind13 - Aug. 18, 2021

(Aug. 18, 2021 10:00 PM)LegendJustice Wrote:
(Aug. 18, 2021 9:48 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Tyson bey (aka Tyson info part.2)
Banish Tartarus metal Zephyr' 12Axe-II

Spoiler (Click to View)
Chip - Tartarus: A right spin sparking-II chip. It has flames and rock-like features, the flames are bright red, the rocks are dark green and the background is dark red. It also features metal teeth.

Ring - Banish: A right-spin, attack type sparking-II ring. It features 3 big blades and 3 smaller blades under it. It has a spring loaded gimmick on which the part where the big 3 blades are is spring loaded, when it starts getting pulled, it would absorb most of the hit and counter attack with the smaller blades, similar to Genesis/god Valtryek/Valkyrie. The 3 big blades are bright red, the 3 small blader are dark red and the rest is dark green, with some black details here and there.

Chassis-II - 12: A light-weight chassis (not so light). It has a very similar shape to the disc 12, except it isn't as sharp. It's not colored.

Chassis frame - Axe: It features a shape similar to Axe. It's black.

Driver - metal Zephyr': Zephyr' but with the metal cap. It's dark green.

WHAT A OG NAME!!!

Idk what you mean by that (I also don't know what it means).
OG
[OG]

ABBREVIATION

officer of the guard. (this is it?)

RE: Beyblade Burst Resonance - UnseenBurst - Aug. 18, 2021

(Aug. 18, 2021 10:05 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
(Aug. 18, 2021 10:00 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: WHAT A OG NAME!!!

Idk what you mean by that (I also don't know what it means).
OG
[OG]

ABBREVIATION

officer of the guard. (this is it?)

Og means Original