RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jul. 22, 2021
Chapter 5 is the only thing remaining after the apocalypse
Beyblade Burst TechnoX
Chapter 5
The Legendary Duo!
~Outside Of BC Sol Above The Water~
Oliver: Vex Solomon, you lost.
(Oliver looks at Vex Solomon angrily)
Oliver: You’re useless!!
(Oliver throws Vex Solomon over the cliff, Vex Solomon falls into the water and slowly sinks)
~In Kris’ Office~
(Valt and Honcho walk-in)
Kris: Valt, Rantaro! Thanks for coming!
Honcho: No problem!
Valt: Why’d you call us?
Kris: Well, you know Aleph and Unova right?
Honcho: Yeah, but what does that have to do with anything?
Kris: I believe they can be strong bladers, but they need someone to challenge them!
Valt: So you want us to battle them?
Kris: Exactly! It’ll be a special battle, the whole club will be watching!
Honcho: Nice! Honcho is gonna shine brighter than the sun!
Valt/Kris: *Chuckles*
~In My Dorm~
(I fall off my bed)
Aleph: Are you gonna do that every morning?
Me: Probably, I’m a hard sleeper!
(Someone knocks on our door)
Aleph: Come in!
(Honcho comes in through the door)
Me: Honcho?
Honcho: Good Morning yall!
Aleph: Morning Honcho! Need anything?
Honcho: We’re having a battle tonight, and Me and Valt wanna battle you guys!
Me: Are you kidding?
Honcho: More serious than I’ve ever been!
Aleph: I can’t believe it! We’re going up against BC Sol’s strongest bladers!!
Honcho: You’d better get practicing, Me and Valt are not backing down!!
(Honcho leaves)
Me: Well, what are we waiting for? Let’s get practicing!
~In BC Sol’s Main Gym~
Me/Aleph: Let it… rip!!
(Aleph pulls off a Techno Launch)
Me: Techno Launch!!
Aleph: Take the center! Eternal Zone!!
(Aion takes the center while Ultravor pummels it with a barrage of attacks)
Me: Techno Discharge!!
(Ultravor slams into Aion with its blade, Aion, and Ultravor get sent flying out of the stadium)
Me: Grr! You won again!
Aleph: Come on Unova! We’re going up against Valt and Rantaro, you’ve gotta pull off a Techno Launch!
Me: Can’t you see I’m trying!
Aleph: Try harder!
Me: I can’t try harder!!
(I storm off)
Aleph: Unova.
(In The Middle Of The Forest)
Me: Can’t he see that I’m trying!
(I kick a rock and it goes flying at someone)
Me: *Gasps*
(??? catches it)
Me: I’m so--
Me: Free De La Hoya?
Free: Watch where you’re throwing rocks.
Me: Yeah, sorry about that!
Free: Let it… rip!!
(Free pulls off an explosive powerful launch)
Me: *Gasps*
(Free’s bey starts speeding around the stadium)
Me: Is that Vanish Fafnir?
Free: It sure is.
Me: Free De La Hoya! I challenge you to a battle!!
Free: Like I didn’t see that coming.
Me: So?
Free: I accept.
(I get ready to launch my bey)
Ultravor: Change your launch form!
Me: *Gasps*
(I back up and lift my launcher in the air)
Free: Oh?
Me: First battle!
Free/Me: 3! 2! 1!
(I jump in the air and attach Ultravor to my launcher)
Free/Me: Let it… rip!!
(I land and launch my bey, I pull off a Techno Launch)
Me: Now! Techno Launch!!
(Ultravor hits Fafnir with a barrage of attacks)
Free: Is that all!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: In your dreams!
(Fafnir and Ultravor start clashing wildly, Energy bursts from the stadium)
Free: Kick Counter!!
(Fafnir leans on the Kick driver and bounces back up, Ultravor gets sent flying in the air)
Me: Ultravor!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Ultravor blazes out of the bey)
Me: Speed up!
(Ultravor’s driver sinks in, Ultravor starts picking up serious speed)
Me: Techno Strike!!
(Ultravor slams into Fafnir with power)
Free: Fafnir!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up Fafnir blazes out of the bey)
Free: Vanish Counter!!
(Ultravor hits Fafnir’s absorption blade, Ultravor gets shot into the wall and bursts)
Me: *Gasps*
Free: Huh. You actually made me get serious.
Me: Man, I guess I’m far from beating you.
Free: You are, just remember, finding your source of power will help you get stronger.
(Free walks away)
Me: “Power source”? Wait! I’m gonna be late!!
(I run off)
~In BC Sol’s Main Gym~
(I run right through the door)
Aleph: Unova! I’m so--
(My face turns bright red)
Me: Let’s get training!!
Aleph: Look who’s determined!
Me: Yeah, I battled Free!
Aleph: You battled Free?!
Me: Yeah!
Aleph: And?
Me: I lost!
Aleph: Oh well, I guess it can’t be helped.
Me: But I mastered the Techno Launch!!
Aleph: Awesome! Let’s get training!
~1 Hour Later~
Hanami: Hello all you bladers! Today I’m announcing from BC Sol for a special battle! It’s Valt Aoi and Rantaro Kiyama Vs Unova Bashida and Aleph Murphy!
(We walk out to the stadium)
Hanami: We will be using the Dynamite Driver Stadium!
(Kris watches from her seat)
Kris (Thoughts): Valt, Rantaro Aleph, and Unova! Show me an awesome battle!
Me: Valt! I’m taking you down!
Valt: I’d like to see you try!
Honcho: Aleph! I’m gonna blow you to the fields!!
Aleph: My new bey is gonna take Roktavor down!
Anton: First battle!
Me (Thoughts): Ultravor, let’s go all out!
Honcho (Thoughts): Let’s do this.
(Honcho puts Roktavor in High Mode)
Anton: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Valt/Aleph/Honcho: Let it… rip!!
Honcho: Go Roktavor!
Aleph: I don’t think so!
(Roktavor dodges Aion and takes the center)
Honcho: Dual Winged Cyclone!!
(Roktavor creates a huge tornado)
Hanami: Cyclone Roktavor has just created a huge cyclone!
Valt: Go Valtryek!
(Valtryek picks up speed on the ramp and slams into Ultravor, Ultravor gets sent sky high in the air)
Me: Hang in there!
(Ultravor hits the wall)
Hanami: After being shot into the air Ultravor hangs in there!
Aleph: Eternal Spin!!
(Aion starts hitting Roktavor hard with its rubber and absorbs Roktavor’s spin)
Hanami: Roktavor’s losing spin after each hit from Aion!
Aleph: Aion!!
(Aleph’s Resonance Aura flares up Aion blazes out of the bey)
Aleph: Time to attack!
(Aion picks up speed on the Dynamite Ramps speeds straight towards Roktavor)
Aleph: Eternal Counter!!
(Aion slams into Roktavor, Roktavor and Aion get sent flying)
Honcho: No way!
(Aion bursts, Roktavor lands outside of the stadium)
Aleph: *Gasps*
Hanami: Aion just couldn’t withstand Roktavor’s crazy weight!
Valt: Rush Launch!!
Me: Techno Launch!!
(Valtryek and Ultravor hit each other with a barrage of attacks)
Hanami: Valtryek and UItravor give it they're all!
Me: Ultravor!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Ultravor blazes out of the bey)
Valt: Valtryek!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up Valtryek blazes out of the bey)
Me: Techno Strike!!
(Ultravor speeds up and heads toward Valtryek)
Valt: Time to jump!
(The shot driver activates, Valtryek jumps in the air, Ultravor misses)
Me: *Gasps*
Hanami: Valtryek has jumped!
(Valtryek catches onto the Dynamite Ramp and picks up speed and heads toward Ultravor)
Valt: End this! Saber Whip!!
(Valtryek slashes at Ultravor, Ultravor bursts)
Me: *Gasps*
Anton: Saber Valtryek and Cyclone Roktavor win!
Hanami: Valtryek has just burst Ultravor! An amazing victory!
Me: Sorry.
Aleph: You’ve got nothing to be sorry about! You did awesome!
Kris (Thoughts): They’ve gotten stronger! It’s nice to see everyone growing!
(Rantaro and Valt fist bump)
Aleph: You may have gotten lucky this time!
Me: But we’re taking you down next time!
Honcho: Ha! In your dreams!
Free (Thoughts): Maybe this TechnoX system isn’t so bad.
Next Chapter Mega Dragon! Shadow Fafnir!!
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! (Character Contest) - GenesisBlader - Jul. 22, 2021
(Jul. 22, 2021 8:27 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 5 is the only thing remaining after the apocalypse
Beyblade Burst TechnoX
Chapter 5
The Legendary Duo!
~Outside Of BC Sol Above The Water~
Oliver: Vex Solomon, you lost.
(Oliver looks at Vex Solomon angrily)
Oliver: You’re useless!!
(Oliver throws Vex Solomon over the cliff, Vex Solomon falls into the water and slowly sinks)
~In Kris’ Office~
(Valt and Honcho walk-in)
Kris: Valt, Rantaro! Thanks for coming!
Honcho: No problem!
Valt: Why’d you call us?
Kris: Well, you know Aleph and Unova right?
Honcho: Yeah, but what does that have to do with anything?
Kris: I believe they can be strong bladers, but they need someone to challenge them!
Valt: So you want us to battle them?
Kris: Exactly! It’ll be a special battle, the whole club will be watching!
Honcho: Nice! Honcho is gonna shine brighter than the sun!
Valt/Kris: *Chuckles*
~In My Dorm~
(I fall off my bed)
Aleph: Are you gonna do that every morning?
Me: Probably, I’m a hard sleeper!
(Someone knocks on our door)
Aleph: Come in!
(Honcho comes in through the door)
Me: Honcho?
Honcho: Good Morning yall!
Aleph: Morning Honcho! Need anything?
Honcho: We’re having a battle tonight, and Me and Valt wanna battle you guys!
Me: Are you kidding?
Honcho: More serious than I’ve ever been!
Aleph: I can’t believe it! We’re going up against BC Sol’s strongest bladers!!
Honcho: You’d better get practicing, Me and Valt are not backing down!!
(Honcho leaves)
Me: Well, what are we waiting for? Let’s get practicing!
~In BC Sol’s Main Gym~
Me/Aleph: Let it… rip!!
(Aleph pulls off a Techno Launch)
Me: Techno Launch!!
Aleph: Take the center! Eternal Zone!!
(Aion takes the center while Ultravor pummels it with a barrage of attacks)
Me: Techno Discharge!!
(Ultravor slams into Aion with its blade, Aion, and Ultravor get sent flying out of the stadium)
Me: Grr! You won again!
Aleph: Come on Unova! We’re going up against Valt and Rantaro, you’ve gotta pull off a Techno Launch!
Me: Can’t you see I’m trying!
Aleph: Try harder!
Me: I can’t try harder!!
(I storm off)
Aleph: Unova.
(In The Middle Of The Forest)
Me: Can’t he see that I’m trying!
(I kick a rock and it goes flying at someone)
Me: *Gasps*
(??? catches it)
Me: I’m so--
Me: Free De La Hoya?
Free: Watch where you’re throwing rocks.
Me: Yeah, sorry about that!
Free: Let it… rip!!
(Free pulls off an explosive powerful launch)
Me: *Gasps*
(Free’s bey starts speeding around the stadium)
Me: Is that Vanish Fafnir?
Free: It sure is.
Me: Free De La Hoya! I challenge you to a battle!!
Free: Like I didn’t see that coming.
Me: So?
Free: I accept.
(I get ready to launch my bey)
Ultravor: Change your launch form!
Me: *Gasps*
(I back up and lift my launcher in the air)
Free: Oh?
Me: First battle!
Free/Me: 3! 2! 1!
(I jump in the air and attach Ultravor to my launcher)
Free/Me: Let it… rip!!
(I land and launch my bey, I pull off a Techno Launch)
Me: Now! Techno Launch!!
(Ultravor hits Fafnir with a barrage of attacks)
Free: Is that all!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: In your dreams!
(Fafnir and Ultravor start clashing wildly, Energy bursts from the stadium)
Free: Kick Counter!!
(Fafnir leans on the Kick driver and bounces back up, Ultravor gets sent flying in the air)
Me: Ultravor!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Ultravor blazes out of the bey)
Me: Speed up!
(Ultravor’s driver sinks in, Ultravor starts picking up serious speed)
Me: Techno Strike!!
(Ultravor slams into Fafnir with power)
Free: Fafnir!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up Fafnir blazes out of the bey)
Free: Vanish Counter!!
(Ultravor hits Fafnir’s absorption blade, Ultravor gets shot into the wall and bursts)
Me: *Gasps*
Free: Huh. You actually made me get serious.
Me: Man, I guess I’m far from beating you.
Free: You are, just remember, finding your source of power will help you get stronger.
(Free walks away)
Me: “Power source”? Wait! I’m gonna be late!!
(I run off)
~In BC Sol’s Main Gym~
(I run right through the door)
Aleph: Unova! I’m so--
(My face turns bright red)
Me: Let’s get training!!
Aleph: Look who’s determined!
Me: Yeah, I battled Free!
Aleph: You battled Free?!
Me: Yeah!
Aleph: And?
Me: I lost!
Aleph: Oh well, I guess it can’t be helped.
Me: But I mastered the Techno Launch!!
Aleph: Awesome! Let’s get training!
~1 Hour Later~
Hanami: Hello all you bladers! Today I’m announcing from BC Sol for a special battle! It’s Valt Aoi and Rantaro Kiyama Vs Unova Bashida and Aleph Murphy!
(We walk out to the stadium)
Hanami: We will be using the Dynamite Driver Stadium!
(Kris watches from her seat)
Kris (Thoughts): Valt, Rantaro Aleph, and Unova! Show me an awesome battle!
Me: Valt! I’m taking you down!
Valt: I’d like to see you try!
Honcho: Aleph! I’m gonna blow you to the fields!!
Aleph: My new bey is gonna take Roktavor down!
Anton: First battle!
Me (Thoughts): Ultravor, let’s go all out!
Honcho (Thoughts): Let’s do this.
(Honcho puts Roktavor in High Mode)
Anton: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Valt/Aleph/Honcho: Let it… rip!!
Honcho: Go Roktavor!
Aleph: I don’t think so!
(Roktavor dodges Aion and takes the center)
Honcho: Dual Winged Cyclone!!
(Roktavor creates a huge tornado)
Hanami: Cyclone Roktavor has just created a huge cyclone!
Valt: Go Valtryek!
(Valtryek picks up speed on the ramp and slams into Ultravor, Ultravor gets sent sky high in the air)
Me: Hang in there!
(Ultravor hits the wall)
Hanami: After being shot into the air Ultravor hangs in there!
Aleph: Eternal Spin!!
(Aion starts hitting Roktavor hard with its rubber and absorbs Roktavor’s spin)
Hanami: Roktavor’s losing spin after each hit from Aion!
Aleph: Aion!!
(Aleph’s Resonance Aura flares up Aion blazes out of the bey)
Aleph: Time to attack!
(Aion picks up speed on the Dynamite Ramps speeds straight towards Roktavor)
Aleph: Eternal Counter!!
(Aion slams into Roktavor, Roktavor and Aion get sent flying)
Honcho: No way!
(Aion bursts, Roktavor lands outside of the stadium)
Aleph: *Gasps*
Hanami: Aion just couldn’t withstand Roktavor’s crazy weight!
Valt: Rush Launch!!
Me: Techno Launch!!
(Valtryek and Ultravor hit each other with a barrage of attacks)
Hanami: Valtryek and UItravor give it they're all!
Me: Ultravor!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Ultravor blazes out of the bey)
Valt: Valtryek!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up Valtryek blazes out of the bey)
Me: Techno Strike!!
(Ultravor speeds up and heads toward Valtryek)
Valt: Time to jump!
(The shot driver activates, Valtryek jumps in the air, Ultravor misses)
Me: *Gasps*
Hanami: Valtryek has jumped!
(Valtryek catches onto the Dynamite Ramp and picks up speed and heads toward Ultravor)
Valt: End this! Saber Whip!!
(Valtryek slashes at Ultravor, Ultravor bursts)
Me: *Gasps*
Anton: Saber Valtryek and Cyclone Roktavor win!
Hanami: Valtryek has just burst Ultravor! An amazing victory!
Me: Sorry.
Aleph: You’ve got nothing to be sorry about! You did awesome!
Kris (Thoughts): They’ve gotten stronger! It’s nice to see everyone growing!
(Rantaro and Valt fist bump)
Aleph: You may have gotten lucky this time!
Me: But we’re taking you down next time!
Honcho: Ha! In your dreams!
Free (Thoughts): Maybe this TechnoX system isn’t so bad.
Next Chapter Mega Dragon! Shadow Fafnir!!
lol nice chapter!
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jul. 22, 2021
(Jul. 22, 2021 8:33 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jul. 22, 2021 8:27 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 5 is the only thing remaining after the apocalypse
Beyblade Burst TechnoX
Chapter 5
The Legendary Duo!
~Outside Of BC Sol Above The Water~
Oliver: Vex Solomon, you lost.
(Oliver looks at Vex Solomon angrily)
Oliver: You’re useless!!
(Oliver throws Vex Solomon over the cliff, Vex Solomon falls into the water and slowly sinks)
~In Kris’ Office~
(Valt and Honcho walk-in)
Kris: Valt, Rantaro! Thanks for coming!
Honcho: No problem!
Valt: Why’d you call us?
Kris: Well, you know Aleph and Unova right?
Honcho: Yeah, but what does that have to do with anything?
Kris: I believe they can be strong bladers, but they need someone to challenge them!
Valt: So you want us to battle them?
Kris: Exactly! It’ll be a special battle, the whole club will be watching!
Honcho: Nice! Honcho is gonna shine brighter than the sun!
Valt/Kris: *Chuckles*
~In My Dorm~
(I fall off my bed)
Aleph: Are you gonna do that every morning?
Me: Probably, I’m a hard sleeper!
(Someone knocks on our door)
Aleph: Come in!
(Honcho comes in through the door)
Me: Honcho?
Honcho: Good Morning yall!
Aleph: Morning Honcho! Need anything?
Honcho: We’re having a battle tonight, and Me and Valt wanna battle you guys!
Me: Are you kidding?
Honcho: More serious than I’ve ever been!
Aleph: I can’t believe it! We’re going up against BC Sol’s strongest bladers!!
Honcho: You’d better get practicing, Me and Valt are not backing down!!
(Honcho leaves)
Me: Well, what are we waiting for? Let’s get practicing!
~In BC Sol’s Main Gym~
Me/Aleph: Let it… rip!!
(Aleph pulls off a Techno Launch)
Me: Techno Launch!!
Aleph: Take the center! Eternal Zone!!
(Aion takes the center while Ultravor pummels it with a barrage of attacks)
Me: Techno Discharge!!
(Ultravor slams into Aion with its blade, Aion, and Ultravor get sent flying out of the stadium)
Me: Grr! You won again!
Aleph: Come on Unova! We’re going up against Valt and Rantaro, you’ve gotta pull off a Techno Launch!
Me: Can’t you see I’m trying!
Aleph: Try harder!
Me: I can’t try harder!!
(I storm off)
Aleph: Unova.
(In The Middle Of The Forest)
Me: Can’t he see that I’m trying!
(I kick a rock and it goes flying at someone)
Me: *Gasps*
(??? catches it)
Me: I’m so--
Me: Free De La Hoya?
Free: Watch where you’re throwing rocks.
Me: Yeah, sorry about that!
Free: Let it… rip!!
(Free pulls off an explosive powerful launch)
Me: *Gasps*
(Free’s bey starts speeding around the stadium)
Me: Is that Vanish Fafnir?
Free: It sure is.
Me: Free De La Hoya! I challenge you to a battle!!
Free: Like I didn’t see that coming.
Me: So?
Free: I accept.
(I get ready to launch my bey)
Ultravor: Change your launch form!
Me: *Gasps*
(I back up and lift my launcher in the air)
Free: Oh?
Me: First battle!
Free/Me: 3! 2! 1!
(I jump in the air and attach Ultravor to my launcher)
Free/Me: Let it… rip!!
(I land and launch my bey, I pull off a Techno Launch)
Me: Now! Techno Launch!!
(Ultravor hits Fafnir with a barrage of attacks)
Free: Is that all!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: In your dreams!
(Fafnir and Ultravor start clashing wildly, Energy bursts from the stadium)
Free: Kick Counter!!
(Fafnir leans on the Kick driver and bounces back up, Ultravor gets sent flying in the air)
Me: Ultravor!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Ultravor blazes out of the bey)
Me: Speed up!
(Ultravor’s driver sinks in, Ultravor starts picking up serious speed)
Me: Techno Strike!!
(Ultravor slams into Fafnir with power)
Free: Fafnir!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up Fafnir blazes out of the bey)
Free: Vanish Counter!!
(Ultravor hits Fafnir’s absorption blade, Ultravor gets shot into the wall and bursts)
Me: *Gasps*
Free: Huh. You actually made me get serious.
Me: Man, I guess I’m far from beating you.
Free: You are, just remember, finding your source of power will help you get stronger.
(Free walks away)
Me: “Power source”? Wait! I’m gonna be late!!
(I run off)
~In BC Sol’s Main Gym~
(I run right through the door)
Aleph: Unova! I’m so--
(My face turns bright red)
Me: Let’s get training!!
Aleph: Look who’s determined!
Me: Yeah, I battled Free!
Aleph: You battled Free?!
Me: Yeah!
Aleph: And?
Me: I lost!
Aleph: Oh well, I guess it can’t be helped.
Me: But I mastered the Techno Launch!!
Aleph: Awesome! Let’s get training!
~1 Hour Later~
Hanami: Hello all you bladers! Today I’m announcing from BC Sol for a special battle! It’s Valt Aoi and Rantaro Kiyama Vs Unova Bashida and Aleph Murphy!
(We walk out to the stadium)
Hanami: We will be using the Dynamite Driver Stadium!
(Kris watches from her seat)
Kris (Thoughts): Valt, Rantaro Aleph, and Unova! Show me an awesome battle!
Me: Valt! I’m taking you down!
Valt: I’d like to see you try!
Honcho: Aleph! I’m gonna blow you to the fields!!
Aleph: My new bey is gonna take Roktavor down!
Anton: First battle!
Me (Thoughts): Ultravor, let’s go all out!
Honcho (Thoughts): Let’s do this.
(Honcho puts Roktavor in High Mode)
Anton: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Valt/Aleph/Honcho: Let it… rip!!
Honcho: Go Roktavor!
Aleph: I don’t think so!
(Roktavor dodges Aion and takes the center)
Honcho: Dual Winged Cyclone!!
(Roktavor creates a huge tornado)
Hanami: Cyclone Roktavor has just created a huge cyclone!
Valt: Go Valtryek!
(Valtryek picks up speed on the ramp and slams into Ultravor, Ultravor gets sent sky high in the air)
Me: Hang in there!
(Ultravor hits the wall)
Hanami: After being shot into the air Ultravor hangs in there!
Aleph: Eternal Spin!!
(Aion starts hitting Roktavor hard with its rubber and absorbs Roktavor’s spin)
Hanami: Roktavor’s losing spin after each hit from Aion!
Aleph: Aion!!
(Aleph’s Resonance Aura flares up Aion blazes out of the bey)
Aleph: Time to attack!
(Aion picks up speed on the Dynamite Ramps speeds straight towards Roktavor)
Aleph: Eternal Counter!!
(Aion slams into Roktavor, Roktavor and Aion get sent flying)
Honcho: No way!
(Aion bursts, Roktavor lands outside of the stadium)
Aleph: *Gasps*
Hanami: Aion just couldn’t withstand Roktavor’s crazy weight!
Valt: Rush Launch!!
Me: Techno Launch!!
(Valtryek and Ultravor hit each other with a barrage of attacks)
Hanami: Valtryek and UItravor give it they're all!
Me: Ultravor!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Ultravor blazes out of the bey)
Valt: Valtryek!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up Valtryek blazes out of the bey)
Me: Techno Strike!!
(Ultravor speeds up and heads toward Valtryek)
Valt: Time to jump!
(The shot driver activates, Valtryek jumps in the air, Ultravor misses)
Me: *Gasps*
Hanami: Valtryek has jumped!
(Valtryek catches onto the Dynamite Ramp and picks up speed and heads toward Ultravor)
Valt: End this! Saber Whip!!
(Valtryek slashes at Ultravor, Ultravor bursts)
Me: *Gasps*
Anton: Saber Valtryek and Cyclone Roktavor win!
Hanami: Valtryek has just burst Ultravor! An amazing victory!
Me: Sorry.
Aleph: You’ve got nothing to be sorry about! You did awesome!
Kris (Thoughts): They’ve gotten stronger! It’s nice to see everyone growing!
(Rantaro and Valt fist bump)
Aleph: You may have gotten lucky this time!
Me: But we’re taking you down next time!
Honcho: Ha! In your dreams!
Free (Thoughts): Maybe this TechnoX system isn’t so bad.
Next Chapter Mega Dragon! Shadow Fafnir!!
lol nice chapter!
Thanks, what was your fave part?
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! (Character Contest) - GenesisBlader - Jul. 22, 2021
(Jul. 22, 2021 8:35 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 22, 2021 8:33 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: lol nice chapter!
Thanks, what was your fave part?
when savior valkyrie used rush launch and techno ultravor used techno launch
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Jul. 22, 2021
Nice chapter!
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Jul. 23, 2021
So when’s next chapter? ( NO RUSH)
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jul. 23, 2021
(Jul. 23, 2021 5:51 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: So when’s next chapter? ( NO RUSH)
Next chapter ain't gonna be out for a while, I'm currently working on Beyjitzu
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Jul. 23, 2021
(Jul. 23, 2021 5:52 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 23, 2021 5:51 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: So when’s next chapter? ( NO RUSH)
Next chapter ain't gonna be out for a while, I'm currently working on Beyjitzu
Okay, that reminds me I gotta work with TT and Hasbro
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! (Character Contest) - ColdFlames13 - Jul. 24, 2021
Name: Hinote Mizuki
Age: 14 (But seriously does it matter? Lol)
Personality: Hinote is pretty chill. Like switching from Free to Aiger in a snap.
Bey: Guard Heimdall 10 Atomic'
Guard - 4 Contact points that act as Shields (Like Artemis blades but thicker and wider)
Heimdall - A warrior with a helmet on that has bull horns.
10 - 10
Atomic' - A dash version of atomic
Bey Moves:
Defending Stance - The bey leans on Atomic, goes around (like roller drift), and takes the center.
Defender Crash - Defending Stance but if there is a bey already in the center it slams into it and (maybe) knocks them out.
Guard Blast - Like a slowed-down version of rush launch using its weight instead of speed.
(You can add details)
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! (Character Contest) - GenesisBlader - Jul. 24, 2021
(Jul. 24, 2021 4:27 PM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: Name: Hinote Mizuki
Age: 14 (But seriously does it matter? Lol)
Personality: Hinote is pretty chill. Like switching from Free to Aiger in a snap.
Bey: Guard Heimdall 10 Atomic'
Bey Moves:
Defending Stance - The bey leans on Atomic, goes around (like roller drift), and takes the center.
Defender Crash - Defending Stance but if there is a bey already in the center it slams into it and (maybe) knocks them out.
(You can add details) dang thats a splendid character heimdall
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jul. 24, 2021
The winner will be announced at noon
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! (Character Contest) - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 24, 2021
(Jul. 24, 2021 4:38 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: The winner will be announced at noon Time to bet! Oh no LegendJustice forgot to describe King Kitsune layer (chip and blade/ring)
(Jul. 24, 2021 4:41 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Jul. 24, 2021 4:38 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: The winner will be announced at noon Time to bet! Oh no egendJustice forgot to describe King Kitsune layer (chip or blade/ring) Oh lol sorry for this duplicated post
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! (Character Contest) - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 24, 2021
I feel like mine was the laziest one.
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! (Character Contest) - ColdFlames13 - Jul. 24, 2021
-Deleted cuz don't want drama-
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! (Character Contest) - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 24, 2021
(Jul. 24, 2021 4:46 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: I feel like mine was the laziest one. You can add info on the parts (ring/blade; chip; forge disc; performance tip; the techno(blade) system stuff). Describe the special moves too. You have time
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Jul. 24, 2021
(Jul. 24, 2021 4:41 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Jul. 24, 2021 4:38 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: The winner will be announced at noon Time to bet! Oh no LegendJustice forgot to describe King Kitsune layer (chip and blade/ring)
(Jul. 24, 2021 4:41 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Time to bet! Oh no egendJustice forgot to describe King Kitsune layer (chip or blade/ring) Oh lol sorry for this duplicated post
Shame on me...
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jul. 24, 2021
Ima announce the winner now since I might be busy later today (Note: Only 1st Place is going in my fanfic)
3rd Place: LegendJustice!!
2nd Place: Staron!!
1st Place.... ColdFlames13!!
Thank you, everyone, who joined, and don't worry, I will have another character contest soon but that's a wrap folks!
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! (Character Contest) - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 24, 2021
Congrats to all of you!
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! (Character Contest) - GenesisBlader - Jul. 24, 2021
(Jul. 24, 2021 5:35 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Congrats to all of you!
congrats ya'll! nice job!
im gonna enter the next one lol
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - LegendJustice - Jul. 24, 2021
Congrats to you all!!
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - UnseenBurst - Jul. 24, 2021
Chapter 6 is out! (Note: Fafnir's name was changed)
Beyblade Burst TechnoX
Chapter 6
Mega Dragon! Phantom Fafnir!!
(Oliver walks up to Raul)
Oliver: Raul, I need a new bey.
Raul: That’s the fifth time you’ve asked me!
Oliver: Well, my Vex Solomon lost so it’s basically useless.
(Raul pulls out a suitcase)
Raul: Fine, but this is the last one!
(Oliver takes a bey from the suitcase)
Oliver: Which one is this?
Raul: That’s Vex Wyveron!
Oliver: I’ll take it.
Raul: Ever thought that it was you who was bringing your bey down?
Oliver: Of course not, I’m the strongest blader in the world, no question!
Aleph (In a whiny voice): “I’m the strongest blader in the world, no question!”
(I start chuckling)
Oliver: I heard that!!
Honcho: Valt, you ready to be taken down?!
Valt: I’d like to see you try!
Me/Oliver/Aleph: *Gasps*
(Me, Oliver, and Aleph walk over to Valt and Honcho)
Valt: Hey guys!
Me: Valt! You and Honcho are facing off?
Honcho: Yeah, we’re gonna get some practice in!
Valt: Serious practice!
Aleph: We’ve gotta see this!
Raul: Aren’t you supposed to be practicing too?
Me: Come on Raul, we can’t miss this!
Aleph: And besides, we’ll learn a lot watching this battle!
Raul: I suppose you are correct.
Me/Aleph: Yes!
Oliver (Thoughts): Valt Aoi! Watching this battle will help me learn your every move! I’ll learn how to defeat you!
Raul: First battle!
Valt (Thoughts): Let’s go, Valtryek!
Raul: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Valt/Honcho: Let it… rip!!
(Valt and Honcho pull off explosive launches)’
Honcho: Take the center, Roktavor!
Valt: Rush Launch!!
(Roktavor takes the center, Valtryek hits it with a barrage of attacks)
Honcho: Take this! Dual Wing Cyclone!!
(Roktavor creates a huge tornado and sucks Valtryek in, Valtryek gets sent flying)
Valt: Speed up!
(Valtryek slams into the wall and picks up speed)
Honcho: You’ve gotta be kidding!
(Valtryek slams into Roktavor, Roktavor starts wobbling)
Honcho: Roktavor!!
(Honcho’s Resonance Aura flares up Roktavor blazes out of the bey)
Honcho: Make an even bigger cyclone!!
(Roktavor creates an enormous tornado)
Valt: Go Valtryek!
(Valtryek goes under Roktavor’s layer)
All: *Gasps*
Valt: Shot Upper!!
(Valtryek shoots up in the air and sends Roktavor flying)
Honcho: No way!
Aleph: Raul, what did Valt just do?
Raul: He used the force of Roktavor’s tornado to make a big upper attack! When Valtryek jumped, Roktavor got sent flying!
(Roktavor lands in the center and starts wobbling)
Valt: Valtryek!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up Valtryek blazes out of the bey)
Oliver (Thoughts): He’s the all-out attacking type, that'll be interesting.
(Valtryek catches onto the Dynamite Ramp and speeds up straight towards Roktavor)
Valt: Ultra Saber Whip!!
(Valtryek slashes its rubber blade at Roktavor, Roktavor and Valtryek get sent flying in the air)
All: *Gasps*
(Roktavor bursts)
Honcho: *Gasps*
Raul: It's Saber Valtryek with a burst finish! The winner is Valt!
Valt: Yes!
Honcho: That was some burst.
Raul: Looks like you’ve got some training to do!
Honcho: Yup, can’t stop the Honcho machine!
(Free walks up to us)
Valt: Hey Free!
Free: Hey Valt.
(Free whispers something in my ear)
Me: *Gasps* Sure!
Free: Thanks.
(Free walks away)
Aleph: So?
Me: So what?
Aleph: What did he say?
Oliver: Spill it, paperboy!
Me: Like I’ll ever tell!
Honcho: Seriously!
(Silas walks by)
Me: Silas!
(I run up to Silas at full speed)
Silas: What do you want?
Me: I challenge you to a battle!
Silas: You wanna battle me? Kid, I only battle strong opponents!
Me: I guess Honcho was right.
Silas: About what?
Me: You’re scared to battle me!
Silas: Excuse me!!
(I stick my tongue out)
Silas: Kid, I think it’s time to put you in your place!
Raul: Ok, I guess I’ll be a referee again!
Silas: Curse Satomb isn’t a bey you wanna mess with!
Me: I looked over your bey’s speculations and your past battles! I know how to beat you!
Silas: I’d like to see you try!
(Silas slams Satomb on his launcher)
Raul: First battle!
Me (Thoughts): If I attack and give it my all I should be able to beat Silas!
Aleph: Go Unova! You’ve got this!
Raul: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Silas: Let it… rip!!
(I pull off a powerful Techno Launch, Silas pulls off a Lightning Launch)
Me: Attack Ultravor!
(Ultravor rams into Satomb and sends it flying in the air)
Silas: *Gasps*
Me: Heh! Techno Launch!!
(Ultravor hits Satomb with a barrage of attack, Satomb continuously gets shot up in the air)
Aleph: What is he doing, isn’t he just wasting stamina by doing that?
Raul: Satomb can’t defend or counterattack if it’s not on the ground!
Aleph: Oh, keep it up!
Silas: Get outta there Satomb!
Me: Ultravor!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Ultravor blazes out of the bey)
Me: Techno Discharge!!
(Ultravor catches onto the Dynamite Ramps and picks up speed, Ultravor slams into Satomb and sends it flying, Satomb bursts)
All: *Gasps*
Raul: It’s Techno Ultravor with a burst finish! The winner is Unova Bashida!!
Me: Yes!
Silas: What?!
Honcho (Thoughts): Man, Unova is a strong dude! He has the potential to become one of the strongest bladers in the world!
Me: Told ya I’d win!
Silas: You’ve gotta be kidding me!!
~In BC Sol’s Workroom~
(Free continues working)
Free (Thoughts): Fafnir’s evolution will be unbeatable, I’ll keep my spot as
a Legend. And I won’t let him beat me!
(Free finishes his bey)
Free: It’s done, Phantom Fafnir!!
(Free holds Fafnir up)
~In BC Sol’s Main Gym~
Me: I can't believe it! I beat Silas Karsile!!
Silas: Get a grip! You only won once!
(Free walks in through the door)
Honcho: Hey Free!
Free: Hey.
Valt: Where were you?
Free: I was busy working on Phantom Fafnir!!
(Free holds up Phantom Fafnir)
Aleph: Is that a TechnoX Bey?!
Free: Yup.
(I start laughing)
Aleh/Olvier/Honcho: You knew about this?!
Me: Yeah, he asked me if he could borrow the plans for the TechnoX bey!
Aleph: *Sighs*
Free: Valt, wanna--
Silas: I’m gonna battle you Free!
All: *Gasps*
Silas: I’m tired of you always taking Me down! It’s time for me to take you down!!
Free: Whatever, I’m down for a battle.
Raul: I’ll be the referee. Inspect your opponent's bey!
Silas (Thoughts): Phantom Fafnir, a Counterclockwise spinning bey! It has quite a bit of rubber on it for absorbing attacks and turning it into spin. When it’s spinning fast enough its dragon heads and mouths close, you can use this for attack or stamina. The Wrest disk can free spin and has rubber on it so it can absorb from there. The driver is great for taking hits and can counter-attack, once it’s spinning fast enough its driver can sink in and pick up speed. This should be interesting!
Free: Don’t be surprised when I win.
Silas: As if!
Raul: First battle!
Silas (Thoughts): I’m going to knock it out early so it can’t steal any spin!
Free (Thoughts): His mind is an open book. It’s obvious he’s trying to knock Fafnir out, but I won’t let him!
Raul: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Free/Silas: Let it… rip!!
(Silas pulls off a Lightning Launch, Free does a light launch)
Silas: Go Satomb!
(Satomb hits Fafnir with a powerful barrage of attacks, Fafnir absorbs all the attacks)
Silas: *Gasps*
Honcho: He’s stealing spin so easily!
Free: Fafnir can absorb all forms of shocks.
Silas: Universe Drift!!
(Satomb starts grinding down on its driver and speeds up towards Fafnir)
Silas: Knock it out!
(Satomb slams into Fafnir, Fafnir speeds off and starts spinning fast, Fafnir’s dragon mouths close)
All: *Gasps*
Free: Fafnir!!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up Fafnir blazes out of the bey)
Free: Phantom Claw!!
(Fafnir slams into Satomb, Satomb bursts)
Silas: *Gasps*
Raul: It’s Phantom Fafnir with a burst finish! The winner is Free!!
Free: Didn’t I say not to be shocked?
(Free walks away)
Honcho (Thoughts): TechnoX System. huh?
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - LegendJustice - Jul. 24, 2021
Cool episode now I gotta go make me a villain
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - GenesisBlader - Jul. 24, 2021
nice episode dude!!
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - UnseenBurst - Jul. 24, 2021
Chapter 7 A Windy Gale! Burster Roktavor!!
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - LegendJustice - Jul. 24, 2021
It was bound to happen wonder what honcho will make it!!! Please attack type I'm kinda getting board of stamina type
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