RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Twin Heros (Ch 3 Up!) - akio314 - Sep. 15, 2012
I did not say anything hateful or insulting, I just said "Why don't you like ChinaBlade's story?" I apologize if I hurt anyone with my private messages.
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Twin Heros (Ch 3 Up!) - beybladefoever - Sep. 15, 2012
dont stop writing chinablade you inspired me to write my story
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Twin Heros (Ch 3 Up!) - Eternal-E - Sep. 15, 2012
you inspired me too. THE REASON I CREATED MY STORY! You stop, i stop.
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Twin Heros (Ch 3 Up!) - Driger Kai - Sep. 15, 2012
She has also inspired me. All of this nonsense is pointless, if you have anything nasty to say, keep it out of the public, better yet, keep it to yourself.
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Twin Heros (Ch 3 Up!) - Katniss - Sep. 15, 2012
Pastaa?
W-w-w-why?
China! Come on! Your better than this!
Think of something better like puppies or Italy in Chibitalia or something!
Don't quit.
Don't.
Don't.
Im going to leave this thread for you's to sort out. Its getting out of hand.
IF you continue I will jump up and down and draw a super amazing picture dedicated to you.
So don't.
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Twin Heros (Ch 3 Up!) - NenMrix - Sep. 15, 2012
Please don't give up. HI! I just popped out of random here :3 U MAD BROS? Anywaaayyyyssssss, ChinaBlade, many people idolize you. It's because the way you write (and luv HETALIA  ) gives us a thrill to our minds. I myself, am too tired to watch too much Beyblade anime ( BUT NAWT HETALIA :3 ) so I became interested in literature which involves a new story with new characters. I have been flattered by your amazing work (America: AND LUV FOR HETALIA! Me:shut it America! ) and am very interested to your type of literature. Please don't lose hope. Anyone who is with me is free to join, while I am not to be breaking rules for this post. (*America pops out randomly* This guy has a likes you ME: WHAAATT?! err, no I don't ="l ) If I broke a rule, I'm sorry.
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Twin Heros (Ch 3 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Sep. 16, 2012
Thanks for all the nice posts guys...
I apologized to Hazel and Kai-V for the way I acted.
Anyways, I'm back!
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Twin Heros (Ch 3 Up!) - NenMrix - Sep. 16, 2012
YaY! Your back! (AMERICA: =w= Me: WHAT?!)
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Twin Heros (Ch 3 Up!) - Katniss - Sep. 16, 2012
YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
When you stoped I was like:When I saw you would continue I was like :Did thinking about puppies and Chibi Italy help?
Know time for that picture................
What do you want in it?
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Twin Heros (Ch 3 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Sep. 17, 2012
No need for the picture. Anyways, here's the ever awaited, chapter 4!
Chapter 4:
The Assistant
"Wolf!" Francis shouts. His Wolf and Phantom's bey, Death Striker BD145RDF, clashed fiercely. Phantom laughed. "You're getting tired, Francis." He says. "Give it up already!" Francis refuses. Both beys continue smashing and clashing. I stand back, watching with close eye. Then, out of the corner of my right eye I saw someone running towards us. I look up to see a woman running over.
"Francis!" She shouts. Francis looks to her. "Camille!" He says. "Get out of here! It's dangerous!" Just then, Striker sent out a blast. "Special Move!" Phantom shouted. "Tri Horn Smash!" Francis takes a step back. A blue aura surrounds Striker. He charges right for Wolf, then disappears. He then reappears behind Wolf and starts attacking. Striker speeds up with the attacks, and soon, a triangle forms.
"Now!" Phantom shouts. The triangle sends out shocks of energy, that hit Francis. He flies back and lands on me. We both let out howls of pain. "Get off of me, bro!" I say. The woman runs over and helps us up. "Thanks." I say to her. She nods. I look back to Francis, who is pretty ticked right about now.
"How dare you insult me like that!" He says. A purple aura surrounds him. "You mess with the Wolf, you get the fangs!" A purple aura also surrounds Wolf. "This is the royal family's power!" He shouts. Phantom takes a step back. Striker also backs up a bit. "Go Wolf!" Francis shouts. "Special Move! Darkness Destruction Blast!" I see the beast of Wolf appear. It goes straight for Phantom, smashing into him.
Wolf attacks Striker with ferocious power, draining most of Striker's spin. I had only see one other person use a move like that. "Who though? Oh yeah! I remember! It was... Um," I thought. "Anca! Anca Stephan and Blood Vulpimancer!" I had met her once. When I was five. Her and the other Knights just happened to be in town. She said that she liked my style and that if I ever needed her, she'd protect me.
I will never forget that promise. Never. No matter what. "Come on Francis!" I shouted. Francis looks back with a smirk. He then turns back to the battle. Striker's spin was almost drained by now. Phantom then puts his hand up. Striker comes back to him and he sets off a smoke bomb. Francis runs over. "You coward!" He says. He then started shouting stuff in French and I don't know or want to know what it means.
He turns back to me and catches Wolf. He walks over. "I almost had him." He says to me. The woman gives Francis a hug. Francis still has an angry expression. "Oh master!" The woman says. "I thought you got hurt!" Francis rolls his eyes as she sets him down. I smile and so does Francis. "Don't worry Camille," He starts. "I'm fine."
The woman, who I assume is Camille, then turns to me. "I forgot to introduce myself." She says. "My name is Camille Roux. And this is my bey, Spiral Lacerta ED145MF." I looked at the bey. An attack type, but it isn't as updated on parts. Still pretty good though. "Nice." I say. Camille smiles.
"I don't battle that much anymore, though." She says. "I'm more of a bey technician. And Francis' assistant." I frown. "How come you don't battle?" I ask. Camille lifts up her right hand. "You see that I have gloves on, right?" She asks. I nod. She also had on a long pink overcoat, and knee-high, black boots. She had long, brown hair, that was braded down the back, and blue eyes. She also had on a pair of circular glasses and had a red bow and two hair clips in her hair. To be honest, she was very pretty.
She takes the glove off, revealing a plastic hand. I gasp. "How'd that happen?!" I ask. Camille frowns. "I don't like to talk about it." She says as she puts the glove back on. "Let's just say," She starts. "Always pay attention." I nod. "What does she mean?" I think. "I'll find out later." I look up. The sun had started to set.
"Guess it's time for be-" "No way!" Francis says, cutting me off. "This is New Orleans!" He says. "Like New York, this place never sleeps! Let's go have some fun!" I smile and look to Camille. She takes out a clip board and reads something. "I guess we have tim-" "Thank you Camille!" Francis exclaims, while hugging her. He runs off.
"Master!" Camille shouts. I smile and laugh. Camille laughs, too. She looks to me. "Can't control him." She says. "Ever." She then giggles. I smile. We start walking in the direction Francis went. I have this feeling in my chest. A funny feeling. I'll figure it out later. "Hey Camille." I say. She looks down to me. "Can we battle?" I ask. She smiles and nods. "Bring it on!" She says.
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Twin Heros (Ch 4 Up!) - Katniss - Sep. 17, 2012
Awshum as always!
I luv it!
Ima gonna do it anyways!
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Twin Heros (Ch 4 Up!) - King of Misfits - Sep. 17, 2012
Good Chapter China! 
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Twin Heros (Ch 4 Up!) - Eternal-E - Sep. 17, 2012
that chapter was so cool, it's like a frozen version of liquid nitrogen(that liquid that freezes other things on contact.) so... yeagh. great chapter china.
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Twin Heros (Ch 3 Up!) - Dum Spiro Pugno - Sep. 17, 2012
(Sep. 17, 2012 5:58 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: No need for the picture. Anyways, here's the ever awaited, chapter 4!
Chapter 4:
The Assistant
"Wolf!" Francis shouts. His Wolf and Phantom's bey, Death Striker BD145RDF, clashed fiercely. Phantom laughed. "You're getting tired, Francis." He says. "Give it up already!" Francis refuses. Both beys continue smashing and clashing. I stand back, watching with close eye. Then, out of the corner of my right eye I saw someone running towards us. I look up to see a woman running over.
"Francis!" She shouts. Francis looks to her. "Camille!" He says. "Get out of here! It's dangerous!" Just then, Striker sent out a blast. "Special Move!" Phantom shouted. "Tri Horn Smash!" Francis takes a step back. A blue aura surrounds Striker. He charges right for Wolf, then disappears. He then reappears behind Wolf and starts attacking. Striker speeds up with the attacks, and soon, a triangle forms.
"Now!" Phantom shouts. The triangle sends out shocks of energy, that hit Francis. He flies back and lands on me. We both let out howls of pain. "Get off of me, bro!" I say. The woman runs over and helps us up. "Thanks." I say to her. She nods. I look back to Francis, who is pretty ticked right about now.
"How dare you insult me like that!" He says. A purple aura surrounds him. "You mess with the Wolf, you get the fangs!" A purple aura also surrounds Wolf. "This is the royal family's power!" He shouts. Phantom takes a step back. Striker also backs up a bit. "Go Wolf!" Francis shouts. "Special Move! Darkness Destruction Blast!" I see the beast of Wolf appear. It goes straight for Phantom, smashing into him.
Wolf attacks Striker with ferocious power, draining most of Striker's spin. I had only see one other person use a move like that. "Who though? Oh yeah! I remember! It was... Um," I thought. "Anca! Anca Stephan and Blood Vulpimancer!" I had met her once. When I was five. Her and the other Knights just happened to be in town. She said that she liked my style and that if I ever needed her, she'd protect me.
I will never forget that promise. Never. No matter what. "Come on Francis!" I shouted. Francis looks back with a smirk. He then turns back to the battle. Striker's spin was almost drained by now. Phantom then puts his hand up. Striker comes back to him and he sets off a smoke bomb. Francis runs over. "You coward!" He says. He then started shouting stuff in French and I don't know or want to know what it means.
He turns back to me and catches Wolf. He walks over. "I almost had him." He says to me. The woman gives Francis a hug. Francis still has an angry expression. "Oh master!" The woman says. "I thought you got hurt!" Francis rolls his eyes as she sets him down. I smile and so does Francis. "Don't worry Camille," He starts. "I'm fine."
The woman, who I assume is Camille, then turns to me. "I forgot to introduce myself." She says. "My name is Camille Roux. And this is my bey, Spiral Lacerta ED145MF." I looked at the bey. An attack type, but it isn't as updated on parts. Still pretty good though. "Nice." I say. Camille smiles.
"I don't battle that much anymore, though." She says. "I'm more of a bey technician. And Francis' assistant." I frown. "How come you don't battle?" I ask. Camille lifts up her right hand. "You see that I have gloves on, right?" She asks. I nod. She also had on a long pink overcoat, and knee-high, black boots. She had long, brown hair, that was braded down the back, and blue eyes. She also had on a pair of circular glasses and had a red bow and two hair clips in her hair. To be honest, she was very pretty.
She takes the glove off, revealing a plastic hand. I gasp. "How'd that happen?!" I ask. Camille frowns. "I don't like to talk about it." She says as she puts the glove back on. "Let's just say," She starts. "Always pay attention." I nod. "What does she mean?" I think. "I'll find out later." I look up. The sun had started to set.
"Guess it's time for be-" "No way!" Francis says, cutting me off. "This is New Orleans!" He says. "Like New York, this place never sleeps! Let's go have some fun!" I smile and look to Camille. She takes out a clip board and reads something. "I guess we have tim-" "Thank you Camille!" Francis exclaims, while hugging her. He runs off.
"Master!" Camille shouts. I smile and laugh. Camille laughs, too. She looks to me. "Can't control him." She says. "Ever." She then giggles. I smile. We start walking in the direction Francis went. I have this feeling in my chest. A funny feeling. I'll figure it out later. "Hey Camille." I say. She looks down to me. "Can we battle?" I ask. She smiles and nods. "Bring it on!" She says. Much better. The Camille bit was pretty interesting.
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Twin Heros (Ch 4 Up!) - NenMrix - Sep. 18, 2012
@ChinaBlade lol: You mess with the wolf, you get the fangs. You got that saying from KungFu Panda 2 XD
Katniss and China: HETTTTTAAAAAAAAAAAAAALLLLIIIIIIIIIAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Twin Heros (Ch 3 Up!) - goten17 - Sep. 20, 2012
(Sep. 14, 2012 11:17 PM)xXJCherzXx Wrote: If you can't take criticism then you shouldn't be a writer. I'm done.
Hey u need to be quite. She's trying to make entertainment for some of us. She actually inspired me to write a story not on here though it's about a show called Zatch Bell
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Twin Heros (Ch 4 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Sep. 20, 2012
Sorry there was no chapters!
I had a track meet. (We came in 2nd out of the top 6 schools in the county!)
Anyways, there should be new chapters up tomorrow!
We had Beez In The Trap by Nicki Minaj blasting on the bus ride back.
It's now stuck in my head.
Neyh. XD
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Twin Heros (Ch 4 Up!) - Toto Sakigami - Sep. 21, 2012
Oh yeah Pinky, try to fix up one detail in some area :3
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Twin Heros (Ch 4 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Sep. 29, 2012
Wow, it's been awhile.
Well, here it goes...
I have bad news...
I have gotten a concusion.
I got hit in the head with a discus at my track meet the other day, and well...
You can figure out the rest.
Anyways, I have completely forgoten what was going to happen...
Yeah. I lost my memory of my story.
Neyh.
But! Don't get too upset! I have a new idea!
It has new characters and an even better story line!
Just need a title.
Anyways, this story is officially... Over.
Thanks for reading, I guess. :\
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Twin Heros (Ch 4 Up!) - sarabscientist - Sep. 29, 2012
(Sep. 29, 2012 12:12 AM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: I got hit in the head with a discus at my track meet the other day, and well...
You can figure out the rest.
Anyways, I have completely forgoten what was going to happen...
Yeah. I lost my memory of my story.
Pretty sure that discus wasn't the reason you want to end the story. Or it must've hit you insanely hard and probably made you to go to the hospital ...
But anyways, some stories just don't end. That's cool. Looking forward to the next.
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Twin Heros (Ch 4 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Sep. 29, 2012
(Sep. 29, 2012 12:15 AM)ლ(ಠ益ಠლ) Wrote: (Sep. 29, 2012 12:12 AM)ChinaBlade™ Wrote: I got hit in the head with a discus at my track meet the other day, and well...
You can figure out the rest.
Anyways, I have completely forgoten what was going to happen...
Yeah. I lost my memory of my story.
Pretty sure that discus wasn't the reason you want to end the story. Or it must've hit you insanely hard and probably made you to go to the hospital ...
But anyways, some stories just don't end. That's cool. Looking forward to the next.
It was insanely hard. Like, I was standing in front of the chick. I blacked out for 5 or 6 minutes. DX
Me and my smartness.
... And I somehow made a 100 on a math test two days later.
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Twin Heros (Stopped Writing. Read my last post!) - beybladefoever - Sep. 29, 2012
sad that this ones over but good thing your making a new one anyway did you really hit your head
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Twin Heros (Ch 4 Up!) - MexaMaster - Sep. 29, 2012
(Sep. 29, 2012 12:12 AM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: Wow, it's been awhile.
Well, here it goes...
I have bad news...
I have gotten a concusion.
I got hit in the head with a discus at my track meet the other day, and well...
You can figure out the rest.
Anyways, I have completely forgoten what was going to happen...
Yeah. I lost my memory of my story.
Neyh.
But! Don't get too upset! I have a new idea!
It has new characters and an even better story line!
Just need a title.
Anyways, this story is officially... Over.
Thanks for reading, I guess. :\ Well that's good(not the concussion,the new story line)
Hope you'll use older characters XD
Angry Face
They never do
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Twin Heros (Stopped Writing. Read my last post!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Sep. 29, 2012
(Sep. 29, 2012 12:18 AM)beybladefoever Wrote: did you really hit your head
Yes.
I was standing in front of this person, trying to get my discus.
Long story short, I got hurt. Badly.
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Twin Heros (Stopped Writing. Read my last post!) - beybladefoever - Sep. 29, 2012
oh, im never doing track i dont want to get hurt
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