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RE: Beyblade Burst: Matrix! - GenesisBlader - Jun. 28, 2021 Episode 5! Spoiler (Click to View) Burning Resilience! Pursuit Whip! *It was a windy morning in the streets of El Astro, and Uriel, Shinito, Peyton, and Aria were going to the Bey Park for the Battle with Bax!* Uriel: Ulysses, are you ready? We're gonna take Bax down a notch! *Ulysses would sparkle in agreement.* Shinito: You look pumped! Maybe Bax will learn his lesson once you defeat him! Nora: Yeah, he needs to learn his lesson! Aria: Don't worry Uriel, we got your back the whole way through! Uriel: Thanks guys! I know I'm gonna win this! *The gang would arrive at the Bey Park. It would be surrounded by Bax's grunts and gang members all around, live streaming.* Bax: So ya actually decided to show up, huh? Uriel: Yeah! And I'm gonna win this thing! Bax: In your dreams, squirt! *They'd line up at the Bey Stadium.* Uriel's Thoughts: I gotta pull off a Quantum Shoot if I wanna win this thing... *Morgon would go to the Bey Stadium.* Aria's Thoughts: You got this Uriel... Shinito: YOU CAN DO THIS BRO!! Uriel: Thanks guys... Morgon: First Battle! Ready, and set! Uriel and Bax: Three! Two! One! Let it... *Uriel would gain an even greater surge of power. This would be called an Encouragement Surge.* Uriel: RIPPPPPPP!!!! *Ulysses would zoom around the stadium so fast that nobody could really get a glimpse of the bey.* Uriel: Ulysses! Clash Shoot! *Basilisk would go flying up the stadium rim.* Bax: Just what I planned! Now, Under Counter! *Basilisk would ride down the stadium engulfed in a green flame.* Uriel: I KNEW YOU WOULD DO THAT BEFORE YOU DID IT! ULYSSES, DODGE IT! *Basilisk would hit the stadium rim and lose a great deal of stamina.* Uriel: Clash Shoot, one more time! *Basilisk would get sent flying out of the stadium.* Morgon: ...with a ring out finish, Uriel Nomura takes the lead! Point standings, 1-0! Bax: Not bad squirt! Looks like ya really did get better from the last time we battled! But the next point you'll be seeing is gonna go to me! Uriel: We'll see! Me and Ulysses will go super duper Matrix and defeat you! Shinito: He's doing good! Right Aria? Aria: Yeah...but I'm getting kind of worried, Bax is starting to get serious... Uriel: Wait... what's this? *Uriel would click the ring to the left a bit and then flipped it around to the other side. Bax would do the same.* Uriel: Hmmm, I'll call this slash mode, *he'd click it again* and I'll call this mode smash mode! Bax: Interesting, I'll call this mode Sheild mode, and this mode Crush mode! Morgon: Second battle! Ready, and set! *Bax would switch to crush mode, while Uriel would switch to smash mode.* Uriel and Bax: Three, two, one! Let it.. *Bax would do a Quantum shoot.* Uriel and Bax: RIP! Bax: Basilisk! *Basilisk would move very fast along the stadium ring.* Shinito: Oh no... Uriel: That won't work! Ulysses, Clash Shoot! *Despite all of Ulysses' efforts, his moves weren't even putting a dent in Basilisk' defenses.* Bax: Now Basilisk! Dominate Crush! *Basilisk would charge at Ulysses, Ulysses would be sent flying out of the stadium.* The Whole Gang: Yeah! That's our boss! Morgon: With a ring out finish, Bax Diminoro ties the game! Point standings 1-1! Shinito: Man... Uriel... Hang in there! Aria: Yeah! You got this! Uriel: Ulysses... We can do this! *Uriel would be transported to the avatar realm.* Uriel: Argh... where am I? *Uriel would look up at Ulysses towering over him.* Uriel: WHOA! Ulysses is that you?! Ulysses: Yes, it is. Uriel: Cool! So... we need to defeat Bax for revenge! Ulysses: Yes... Uriel, I want you to give it all that you have, and I'll give it all that I have. Uriel: Got it Ulysses! We'll win it together! *Uriel would exit the realm.* *Uriel would enter deep resonance.* Shinito: He's in the zone! Nora: What's gonna happen? Shinito: You'll see... Bax: This'll be the last match, cause I'll win! *Uriel wouldn't say anything, but then..* Uriel: How about you let your bey decide that. *Bax would gasp. Psyching out Uriel wasn't gonna work.* Morgon: Ready, and set! *Uriel would switch to slash mode, while Bax would stay in crush mode.* Uriel and Bax: Three! Two! One! Let it... *Uriel would gain an even more immense boost of power!* Uriel: RIP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Shinito: Yeah Uriel! That's the way to do it! *Ulysses would go zooming around the stadium, and Basilisk would too.* Bax: Now Basilisk! Dominate Crush! *Basilisk would hit Ulysses, instead that this time it would hit the stadium wall and rebound off of it.* Uriel: Ulysses! Clash Counter!! *Ulysses would attack Basilisk, it would hit the wall and go flying into the air.* Bax: WHAT?! Uriel: This is our time! Ulysses! *Ulysses' avatar would erupt from the beyblade in a green/orange aura.* Uriel: PURSUIT WHIP!! *Before Basilisk could reach the stadium, Ulysses would slash at the defense type beyblade. It would burst.* *The whole crowd would be silent.* Shinito: He... HE DID IT!! Aria: That training payed off! Good job Uriel!! Bax: Grrrr... *He would sigh* ...give him the point... Morgon: W-with a burst finish, the score is now 3-1, which means Uriel Nomura wins! Uriel: YEAH! I did it! *Bax would go over to Uriel. He would put his hand on Uriel's shoulder.* Bax: Not half bad kid! But next time we'll be the one's winning! Uriel: Nuh uh! Me and Ulysses will go super matrix again next time and defeat you! Bax: Hey everyone! How about we do a battle royale! Everyone (but Aria?): Yeah! Everyone: Three, two, one! Let it rip! *Aria would go over to Akio's house. Nora would be following behind her.* Nora: Hi Aria! What are you doing over at Akio's house? Aria: I'm gonna upgrade my beyblade a notch or two! That beyblade battle really inspired me to upgrade Aurora so I can be at the level of Uriel, no even stronger! *Aria would knock on Akio's house door.* Akio: Hello there! You must be one of Uriel's friends, right? Aria: Yeah, but I need a favor! Akio: What would that be? Aria: Can you upgrade my bey? Akio: Of course! Follow me inside to the 3D printing room! *He would lead Aria to the 3D printing room.* Aria: Alright, I want the upgrade to be right here! I want it to be pink, and rubber, so I can steal spin easily! Akio: Interesting choice! Let's get to work, shall we? Aria: Right! *Montage through Akio and Aria making Aurora's new upgrade.* Aria: It's done! I'll call it... Twirl! Akio: Excellent! Aria: Thanks, Akio! *She'd say as she would walk out of the house.* Akio: Don't mention it! *Aria would go to the Bey Park.* Uriel: Hey Aria! What brings you back? Shinito: Yeah! You've been gone for a while... Aria: My bey got a new upgrade! Meet the new and improved Golden Maiden! hope you guys enjoy! :D Episode 6 Preview! Uriel: Wow! Aria's got a new upgrade to her bey! I'm first in line! Uriel: Wait, Bax has a strategy to defeat her? This'll be wicked epic! Uriel: WOW! Time for Ulysses to get an upgrade as well! Next Episode on Beyblade Burst Matrix! Fierce Showdown! Aurora Vs. Basilisk! also update on news valt will have a MUCH bigger role in later chapters RE: Beyblade Burst: Matrix! - Hollowmind13 - Jun. 28, 2021 (Jun. 28, 2021 5:39 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: Episode 5!They're friends now. Anyways nice job overall RE: Beyblade Burst: Matrix! - GenesisBlader - Jun. 28, 2021 (Jun. 28, 2021 10:23 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:(Jun. 28, 2021 5:39 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: Episode 5!They're friends now. Anyways nice job overall alright thanks since im so bored i might post another chapter today lol RE: Beyblade Burst: Matrix! - LegendJustice - Jun. 28, 2021 (Jun. 28, 2021 10:48 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:(Jun. 28, 2021 10:23 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: They're friends now. Anyways nice job overall Lol I have done it before RE: Beyblade Burst: Matrix! - GenesisBlader - Jun. 29, 2021 Episode 6! Spoiler (Click to View) Fierce Showdown! Aurora Vs. Basilisk! *A day since Aria's got her new beyblade upgrade, she's been winning against, well, everyone at the Bey Park.* Aria: Go Aurora! You know the drill! Bennet: No, don't lose! *Aurora would knock Bennet's beyblade out of the stadium. It was a red and orange World Luinor Zone 2A.* Bennet: Aw man! Aria: Yeah Aurora! That's how we do it! Shinito: So Uriel.. you think it's kind of strange that Aria's been winning every match she's been in? Uriel: Yeah! It's like there's no defeating her! Shinito: Yeah! But I've looked at the data of her previous battles, and I think she's gotten herself a Matrix Excess! Uriel: Wow! It looks awesome! *He'd look at the excess* It looks like it goes on the Forge Disc! Shinito: Mhm! So ya think you can defeat it? Uriel: Yeah! No problem! Uriel: Hey Aria! Can we do a battle! Aria: Sure! *Shinito would go over to the stadium.* Shinito: Inspect your opponents Beyblades! Uriel's Thoughts: Ok, Shinito definitely wasn't lying when he said that Aria's gotten a new upgrade. It looks as if its rubber, and can help the beyblade spin steal. We'll have to be careful! Shinito: First Battle! Ready, and Set! Aria: We can do this, Aurora! Just gotta pull off a Quantum Shoot! Uriel: Ulysses, let's go Matrix and defeat her one more time! Uriel and Aria: Three! Two! One! Let it... *Both Uriel and Aria would get a Boost in power.* Uriel and Aria: RIPPP!!!!! Shinito: Looks like Ulysses is accelerating around the stadium! But... what?! Aurora is staying in the middle of the stadium?! Uriel: Go! It's time for our Clash Shoot, Ulysses! *Ulysses would impact Aurora multiple times, leaving a green trail behind him. But... it looked like Aurora was just gaining spin!* Uriel: Go Ulysses! Attack some more! Aria: That won't work! Aurora! *Aurora would start to spiral around Ulysses.* Aria: Counter Drain! *Aurora would hit Ulysses, draining all of it's stamina, causing a spin out.* Shinito: Survivor Finish! Point standings 1-0! Uriel: Argh... Aria: Yeah! *Valt and Bax would come over.* Bax: Hey, you there in the pink. How about we battle! Uriel: Bax...? Aria: But me and Uriel were- Bax: BATTLE ME RIGHT NOW!!! Aria: Ok ok, geez. *Bax would line up at the stadium. Uriel and Valt would sit down near Shinito.* Bax: I heard ya got a new upgrade, right? Well, I've got one myself! Uriel: Wait, Bax has an upgrade too? Wow, this'll be exciting! Valt: Yeah! Make's me wanna go and battle too! Shinito: First battle! Ready, and set! *Bax would change to Sheild Mode.* Uriel's Thoughts: He's going on the defensive?! Aria and Bax: Three, two, one! Let it rip! *Bax would pull of a Quantum Shoot.* Bax: Take the center, Basilisk! *Basilisk would head straight to the center, while Aurora went on the offensive.* Aria: Go, and Attack Aurora! Uriel's Thoughts: Wait, she's using my style! Bax: Those attacks won't work. Let's harden our defenses with our Dominate Sheild! *Basilisk would block all of Aria's attacks, but would not realize what she was trying to do.* Valt: Oh no... she's using all of those attacks to boost her stamina! Aria: Now lets go for a Counter Drain! Bax: We're not done yet! Basilisk! Super Dominate Sheild! *While Basilisk was wobbling, it would use the center of it's chip to fully endure the attack, yet both of the beyblades would go flying out of the stadium, Aurora landing a second after Basilisk landed.* Bax: Dang it! Shinito: Ring Out Finish! Point Standings 1 to Nothing! Aria: Whew... that was a close call, huh Aurora? Bax: This next point'll be ours! Shinito: Second Round! Ready, and set! *Bax would switch to Crush mode.* Aria and Bax: Three, Two, One! Let it... RIP!!! *Both Aria and Bax would pull off fierce Quantum Shoots.* Bax: Spiral around the stadium, Basilisk! Aria: Let's do this, Aurora! *Aurora would accelerate.* Aria: SHINING SPIRAL!! *Aurora would speed up around the ring, but Basilisk was right behind him.* Bax: Heheh. *He would grin.* Basilisk, Dominate Crush! *Basilisk would charge at Aurora. It would burst!* Aria: WHAT?! Shinito: With a Burst finish, the score is 2-1, which means Bax Noiji wins! Bax: That wasn't bad! Good game! Aria: Good game... I'll get better and defeat you someday, though! Bax: Yeah right... Uriel: Ooh ooh! I got an idea! *Uriel would go running towards Akio's house. Akio would be cutting flowers.* Uriel: Hey Akio! Akio: Hey Uriel, what brings you here? *He'd cut a flower.* Uriel: You know how Aria had gotten her bey and upgrade, right? Akio: Yeah? Uriel: So I've decided! I want to give my bey an upgrade as well! Can you do that please? Akio: Sure! Uriel: Yeah! Let's do it Ulysses! *Ulysses would sparkle.* Akio: Alright, where do you want the part to be? Uriel: I want it to be right here! *points to the bey's performance tip.* Akio: Interesting... Alright, lets get to it! Uriel: Yeah! *Montage to Uriel and Akio getting done with Uriel's beyblade upgrade!* Uriel: Finally! It's done! I'll call it... the Accelerate excess! Akio: Nice! Uriel: Just gotta look for someone to practice with... *He'd go out of Akio's door.* *A strange boy would appear, walking on the sidewalk.* ???: Hmmm, maybe he's the perfect opponent! *He'd head towards the Bey Park.* RE: Beyblade Burst: Matrix! - PinkRose - Jun. 29, 2021 You know, aside from the little nitpick I always leave on inserting more detail into your story's universe, you're doing pretty good so far. Nice. RE: Beyblade Burst: Matrix! - GenesisBlader - Jun. 29, 2021 (Jun. 29, 2021 12:05 AM)PinkRose Wrote: You know, aside from the little nitpick I always leave on inserting more detail into your story's universe, you're doing pretty good so far. Nice. wow thanks i try my best Episode 7 Preview! Uriel: Wait, a person to try it out on? This'll be wicked! Uriel: Aw man! He's gonna battle Bax first... Uriel: Wait, his beyblade's name is Salamander?! Uriel: No matter! Me and Ulysses will go super Matrix! Next Episode of Beyblade Burst Matrix! Abysmal Roar! Royal Salamander! (Jun. 29, 2021 12:23 AM)BladeKingX Wrote:(Jun. 29, 2021 12:05 AM)PinkRose Wrote: You know, aside from the little nitpick I always leave on inserting more detail into your story's universe, you're doing pretty good so far. Nice. and Guess who's oc's beyblade is debuting! RE: Beyblade Burst: Matrix! - GenesisBlader - Jun. 29, 2021 Episode 7! Spoiler (Click to View) Abysmal Roar! Royal Salamander! *It was a bright morning in El Astro, and Uriel just got finished helping his mom do the dishes.* Mom: Thanks, hun! *She'd give Uriel 10 dollars.* Uriel: Aw yeah! Thanks mom! *Shinito would knock on the door.* Uriel: I'll get it! *Uriel would open the door.* Uriel: Hey Shinito! Why do you look so tired? Shinito: Well... this guy named Santino is going around and defeating all the bladers! He's looking for you so you can battle him! Uriel: WOW! He sounds amazing! Let's go to the park right now! Shinito: Ok... *They'd head to the park, but on the way, Shinito says something...* Shinito: Also Uriel, his beyblade's name is apparently Salamander? Uriel: What an odd name...makes the battle even more fun! *Shinito would sigh.* *They'd arrive at the Bey Park.* Santino: Burst it, Salamander! *Salamander would burst the other beyblade.* Santino: That was too easy. Anyone care for a match? Uriel: Hey!! Santino: Oh, it's you. Aren't you the one who gotten your bey upgraded prior to yesterday? Uriel: Mhm! Now it's super fast and attacks like crazy! Santino: Alright, sounds splendid. How about we battle? Uriel: Sure! But be warned, we're about to go Matrix and defeat you! Santino: We'll see... *Aria and Bax would come up to Uriel.* Aria: Uriel, I don't think this would be an opponent you wanna fight... Bax: Yeah, he's pretty strong. He totally annihilated Aria and the others! Aria: Hey, I was goin' easy on him! Bax: Yeah right, you didn't even last a second! Aria: I bet if you battled him, you wouldn't last a mili-second! Bax: Wanna bet on that?! Aria: Yeah! Bax: You know what, outta the way, Uriel. *He'd say as he shoved Uriel out of the way.* Uriel: Hey, but- Bax: I'ma take you down, Sanio... or whatever your name is... Santino: MY NAME IS SANTINO!! IT'S SIMPLE!!! Bax: Whatever, Santiro, lets just battle... Santino: You'll pay for saying my name in vain!! *Shinito would go to the Bey Stadium to ref.* Shinito: First ba- Bax: And this will be a Burst only match! Uriel: What's a burst o- Bax: ...a burst only match is a match that whenever the other opponent bursts, they win (how did I lose to you?). Uriel: HEY!! I HEARD THAT!!! Shinito: Can we just start the match... Santino and Bax: Yes, please! Santino: I'll be battling you with Royal Salamander, in it's 10 bladed mode! Uriel: Salamander?! 10 Bladed Mode? I wonder what that means... Bax's Thoughts: Hmm, he must be goin' defensive. Well, in that case, I'll fight fire with fire! *Bax would switch Basilisk to it's Sheild mode.* *Valt would come over to watch the match, just done with his run on the sidewalk.* Valt: Hey Uriel! What's going on? Uriel: Hey Valt! Umm, Bax and Santino are battling... Valt: Hmmm... Shinito: First battle! Ready, and set! Santino and Bax: Three! Two! One! Let it... *Bax would gain a boost in power, called the Determination Surge.* Shinito and Bax: RIPPPPPP!!! Santino: Take the center, Salamander! Bax: Not before we can have it, Basilisk! *Basilisk and Salamander would rush to the center.* Santino: Salamander, let's go for a Royal Guard! Push it way! *Salamander would send Basilisk flying towards the stadium rim.* Bax: Right what I planned, Basilisk! *Basilisk would head charging down at Salamander, as it was in the middle.* Bax: UNDER COUNTER!! *He'd scoop his left arm and bring it back up, like an uppercut.* *Basilisk would send Salamander flying as he attacked it.* Santino: You fool... *Salamander would hit the rim of the stadium.* Santino: Salamander!!! *Salamander's avatar would come erupting from the beyblade.* Santino: HIT 'EM WITH YOUR UP CHARGE! *Salamander would send Basilisk flying out of the stadium.* Bax: What!? Santino: Heh. Shinito: Ring out finish, but since we are doing a burst only match, no points awarded. Bax: Grrrr, this round I'll win! Santino: You can try. *Santino would switch to 5 bladed mode.* Santino: Prepare to burst! Uriel's Thoughts: He's predicting a burst! How cocky can he get?! Bax's Thoughts: Hmmm, he must be goin' attack mode this time. I can't gamble that Basilisk would burst Salamander in it's Sheild mode, but with Crush mode, we definitely have a chance! Shinito: Second battle! Ready, and set! Bax and Santino: Three! Two! One! Let it... *Santino and Bax would both get a boost of power.* Bax and Santino: RIP!!! Valt: They both pull off powerful Quantum launches! Awesome! Uriel: Yeah, wonder if Bax is gonna put up a fight or not! Bax: Guard the middle, Basilisk! Aria's Thoughts: Wait, he's defending with Crush mode?! Wha?! Santino: Now Salamander, attack it! Aria and Uriel: Wait, he's trying to wear out his stamina so he can burst it in the end!! Bax: Keep the attacks coming! Santino: Just don't forget that you asked for it... *Salamander would go up the stadium slope.* Santino: GO SALAMANDER! *Salamander's avatar would erupt from it's beyblade in pink/magenta flames.* Santino: ROYAL UPPER!! *He'd thrust his left hand up, engulfed in pink/magenta flames.* *Salamander would thrust towards Basilisk, with the assault ending with an upper attack.* *Basilisk would hit the stadium rim.* Bax: We aren't done yet! BASILISK!! *Basilisk would erupt from it's beyblade, engulfed in purple, green, and red flames.* Bax: DOMINATE CRUSH!!! *Basilisk would charge at Salamander.* Bax: BURST ITT!!! Santino: ...you never learn, do you? *Salamander would lean on the freespinning rubber ring on its driver.* Santino: ROYAL SMASHHHH!!! *Salamander would shoot itself at Basilisk with immense power and speed, Basilisk would burst.* Bax: Aw man... Santino's Thoughts: Hmm, that battle was pretty fun. I might hang with them for a while or so. Valt: That much power, huh. Uriel: WOW! TOTALLY AMAZING! Shinito: With a burst finish, Santino wins! Santino: Hey, you all are a fun group, could I hang with you guys for a while? Aria: Sure! That is, if you battle me first! Uriel: Nuh uh! I should go first! Aria: No, me!! Uriel: No me!! *Valt would chuckle as he would watch them.* Shinito: That's the team for ya. *He'd laugh.* Santino: I could get used to this. *He'd smile, then started to laugh.* *A notification would pop up, with a video on Shinito's tablet.* Uriel: Huh? What's that? *He'd tap on the video, it would lead to Bey Tube.* Hanami: Hello all you Bey Fans, have I got exciting news for you! This just in, we are holding a tournament called the Quantum Cup! If you wanna join, simply register on Bey Tube! I'll be looking forward to seeing you all duke it out on the battlefield! Hanami out! Uriel: A TOURNAMENT?! NO WAY!! Aria: We can show our skills of to the world! Bax: And I can challenge legends all around the would if I win... Santino: I think the tournament will be awesome! I hope we- *Another notification popped up on Shinito's tablet. It would be a video with...* Everyone: THE QUANTUM 4?! *Uriel would have a brief memory.* Mom: Your brother was invited to the Quantum 4! *The memory would end.* Uriel: YEAH! I get to battle my brother if I win!!! *Shinito would click on the video.* ???: Hello all you bladers! We're the Quantum 4! ???: If you wanna have a chance at winning the tournament, you gotta try your hardest! ???: So do your absolute best! ???: .... *The video would end.* Uriel: Hey guys! Lets sign up for the tournament! Everyone: Yeah! *A strange, familiar legend would appear.* ???: Hey Valt. Valt: Hey ???, what are you doing over here? ???: Just a question, why didn't you tell them about the tourney before it was on Bey Tube? Valt: Just didn't wanna ruin the surprise. ???: Oh, ok. *The legend would run off.* Valt: Hey guys, do you want to do some training before you get into the tournament! Everyone: Sure! Valt: Ok, meet me at the Bey stadium tomorrow, I have a surprise for you! Uriel: YEAH! Surprises are the best! Aria: Mhm! Bax: Sure. *Everyone would go home.* Uriel: Hey Ulysses, I wonder what the surprise is gonna be! *Ulysses would glimmer brightly.* Uriel: Huh, wonder what that means... Episode 8 Preview! Uriel: Yeah, we're gonna do some training before the tournament! Sweet! Uriel: I wonder what's the surprise gonna be... Uriel: Awesome! We're gonna meet a legend! Uriel: FREE DE LA HOYA!? Next Episode Of Beyblade Burst Matrix! Ghostly Dragon! Spectre Fafnir! 3, 2, 1! Let it... RIP!! also this will be the last episode of the 1st arc RE: Beyblade Burst: Matrix! - UnseenBurst - Jun. 29, 2021 (Jun. 29, 2021 5:14 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: Episode 7! Grammar: 4/5. I only noticed one mistake and that was you didn't capitalize one of the character's names's can't remember which one tho. Story: 4/5. It was really good it felt like an advertisement for Salamander but you pulled it off really well tho I wish you described the bey more. Characters: 5/5. The Characters had a lot of life and I loved it hanging out and you nailed Valt's personality tho him coming out of who knows where was kinda odd but I'll let it slide Dialogue: 4/5. It was really good you showed the characters' emotions really well and I loved that though you could've shown a bit more. Length: 5/5. Nice and long doesn't feel rushed at all I loved that you did a great job with length and I can see the work you put in. Total: 22/25 Really good you just need to do the things I suggested then your golden (Also could you rate my recent chapter on Beyjitzu please) RE: Beyblade Burst: Matrix! - GenesisBlader - Jun. 29, 2021 (Jun. 29, 2021 6:06 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:(Jun. 29, 2021 5:14 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: Episode 7! alright thanks and sure Blader: Bax Noiji Gender: Male Age: 12 Birthday: September 15 Status: Tritagonist Characteristics: Bax is a medium height boy with dark skin, green eyes and red hair. He has a purple vest with red fur around it and a red snake on the right and a giant snake at the back of the vest, on top of a dark green camouflage shirt (with the sleeves being ripped out of them). He has green ripped jeans with full black shoes, and has a snake going across his left eye. Personality: Bax is very aggressive towards people, shown how he called Uriel a Punk in episode 1. He can also act selfish, shown in episode 6 when he completely disregarded the fact that Aria and Uriel were battling and interrupted anyway. However, he has a soft side, shown how when he befriended and joined Uriel's journey during episode 5. Sometimes, he can act a bit selfless, like Aria. Beyblade: Dominate Basilisk Down Under Protect+Shielding Type: Defense Parts: Matrix Chip: Basilisk - Basilisk is a chip with a red serpentine-like dragon head that is looking downward along with a green overall motif with purple details. Matrix Ring: Dominate - Dominate is a red ring with purple on the outside, it has a whopping 14 blades spaced out, making its defense and stamina higher. Forge Disc: Down - Down is a disc with 7 *shields* that increases the beyblade's burst resistance and defense. Performance Tip: Under - Down is a black, metal ball tip that can be pushed in to become a very aggressive tip. It increases the tips defense and weight, but has its stamina lowered. Layer Plating: Protect - Protect is a green plating that has 8 protrusions. It gives the beyblade more weight, and defense. Matrix Excess: Shielding - Shielding is an excess that goes onto the Dominate ring. It is metal, green, and gives the beyblade more weight and defense, yet makes it quite unstable. Special Shoots: Quantum Shoot: When a blader achieves the Quantum Shoot, their beyblade gains IMMENSE attack, defense, or stamina (depending on the typing). The blader is also able to pull off a Quantum Special Move. Special Moves: Under Counter: When Basilisk gets sent up the stadium by an attack, it uses it's weight and the Under Performance Tip to ride down to the opponent, resulting in a massive attack. Dominate Shield: When Basilisk gets to the center, it uses it's Dominate ring in its Shield mode, and its Matrix Excess, Shielding, to deflect the opponents attacks. Dominate Crush: While Basilisk is in it's Crush Mode, it spirals around the stadium, and then charges at the opposing bey, dealing massive damage. Launching Style: 3: He clicks his beyblade in his launcher. 2: He thrusts his launcher forward with his left hand. 1: He bends down and brings the launcher down to his knees. RE: Beyblade Burst: Matrix! - PinkRose - Jun. 30, 2021 Lesson to learn from this entry: Always pick the OC with the least number of previous entries so you don't spend two hours picking unused part names (and end up using three existing parts regardless). Spoiler (Click to View) Name: Juudai Akemi Nicknames/Aliases: None Gender: Female Age: 14 Nationality: Japanese Physical Appearance: Juudai is an androgynous teen girl of average height, with a fair complexion, neck-length brown hair streaked with magenta, and pinkish purple eyes. She wears a typical performer's attire, which consists of a navy blue tailcoat with white, red and pink linings and six golden buttons, a pair of matching pants, brown boots, and a purple tophat with four feathers of the same colors as the coat placed on its side. Character Alignment: Chaotic Good Personality: Juudai is a flashy and charismatic individual who always likes to put on a show. She is fairly outgoing and positive, which makes her easy to get along with. She also likes to surprise people whenever the chance presents itself, and tends to tease her friends a lot too. However, she can be serious when the situation calls for it, knowing that smiles won't solve all sorts of problems, but she prefers to deal with things in a more chill way. Likes: Surprises, dramatic flair, confetti, chocolate, risks, funky people, and the spotlight (I mean, all performers like this one). Dislikes: Killjoys, slow procedures, long trips, way-too-long games, scams, and overly defensive Beyblade comboes as they 'make no action at all'. Bey: Arcana Joker 0Glaive Merge' Focus +Rotate Bey Parts & Details: Matrix Chip - Joker: Joker is a Right-spinning Chip featuring a stylized 'J' design to represent its namesake; Joker, a playing card typically bearing the figure of a jester, used in some games as a wild card. The chips's base color is fuschia, and the J is a glittery dark blue with thin golden lines. Matrix Ring - Arcana: Arcana is a Right-spinning Ring featuring two rubber contact points along its outer perimenter, which give the Ring very high Attack Potential due to the huge recoil it generates on contact. There is a rubber tab on one side of the inner ring where the prongs of Forge Discs go into, which grips onto said prongs. Theoretically, this tab will provide additional burst resistance when the layer collides with an opposing Beyblade on the side it is on. The Layer is mainly dark blue with hints of gold and silver, and the rubber is hot pink. Forge Disc - 0: Refer to this article for details on the Disc. Disc Frame - Glaive: Refer to this article for details on the Frame. One thing to note is that this Frame lines up with the the contact points of the Arcana Ring, which gives a small boost in attack power, and another thing is that its color is pinkish purple for this Bey. Driver - Merge': Merge' is a Balance type Driver featuring a six pointed flat rubber tip, with a sharp plastic tip in the center, that sits at the standard height. When the Driver is either knocked off balance by an opponent or launched at an angle, the rubber will make contact with the stadium, creating an aggressive movement pattern with high speed. However, this aggressive movement is somewhat unreliable as the sharp center can slow it down in the center of the stadium or stop the movement entirely and the greater surface area reduces Stamina. Like other Dash Drivers, Merge' features a red spring pad and a tighter spring lock, which enhances its Burst resistance. The Driver is a translucent pink, and the rubber is fuschia. Layer Plating - Focus: Focus is a Layer Plating that is fairly round in shape and goes along the inner perimeter of the Energy Layer, with two metal points meant to concentrate weight and attack power. This Plating is detachable, and can therefore switch the weights into being aligned or misaligned with the Arcana Ring's contact points. It is a transparent golden color. Matrix Excess - Rotate: Rotate is a Matrix Excess that fits just above the Merge' Driver's tip, and is shaped like a plastic ring that is similar to the V Gear in shape to, theoretically, boost the Driver's speed and power. The Excess is the same color as the Driver. Special Moves: 1- Dash Shoot: Joker uses the rubber on its Merge' Driver to deliver fast attacks from all directions in an unpredictable pattern, leaving the opponent with almost no time to react. This move is usually used at the beginning of the battle, but can be used later on as well. 2- Arcane Shocker: Joker clashes with the opponent head-on, using the rubber on its Ring for an explosive Burst Attack with great impact. This one is usually a game-ender, unless the opponent Bey has some very sturdy defense. 3- Arcane Flash: Joker catches onto the Tornado Ridge and gains a great boost in speed, zooming around the stadium before going in to strike. 4- Merge Counter: When Joker is knocked off-balance, the rubber on the Merge' Driver grinds hard against the stadium, launching it at the opponent with great force in a powerful counterattack. 5- Arcane Verdict: It's basically a mix between Arcane Shocker and Merge Counter, but this one is very risky as it's much faster and generates more recoil, and on the off-chance that it fails, Joker receives a part of the recoil and can possibly be Burst or knocked out alongside the opponent due to the sheer force of impact. Launch Technique: Juudai throws her Bey and launcher in the air so they drop in her hat, then she gives the hat a shake and throws them out, and finally catches the launcher (with the Bey now clipped onto it) before pulling on its string at the call of "GO...Shoot!" RE: Beyblade Burst: Matrix! - GenesisBlader - Jun. 30, 2021 YES THIS IS WHAT I WAS LOOKING FOR alright ur character is in! she'll probably debut during the Matrix Bladers Cup arc OK guys, im gonna change the name of the Matrix Bladers Cup ehhh im not RE: Beyblade Burst: Matrix! - LegendJustice - Jun. 30, 2021 (Jun. 30, 2021 1:46 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: YES THIS IS WHAT I WAS LOOKING FOR lol okay RE: Beyblade Burst: Matrix! - GenesisBlader - Jun. 30, 2021 Episode 8! Spoiler (Click to View) Ghostly Dragon! Spectre Fafnir! *It was a bright morning in El Astro, and Uriel and the gang were heading to the Bey Park to check out what surprise Valt was talking about!* Uriel: I wonder what surprise Valt has for us to help us with training! Aria: Yeah! I have no clue what it is... Santino: Yeah, Valt was clearly very eccentric about the surprise. Bax: I hope it's a legend that I can battle for glory! Shinito: *He would shake his head.* Bax, is that the only thing you like about beyblade? Bax: No... Shinito: *sarcastically* Yeah, right... *Santino would chuckle.* Nora: I'm looking forward to this surprise! *The gang would arrive at the Bey Park, where Valt was waving his hands at them.* Uriel, Shinito, Aria, and Nora: Hey Valt! Valt: Hey guys! You ready for the suprise? Everyone: YEAH! Valt: Alright then, follow me! *Valt would lead them into a forest.* Santino: This forest is beautiful! Shinito: This is getting pretty spooky... Uriel: Shinito, don't telling me your gonna chicken out again! Shinito: No... I never chicken out! I-I'm not scared at all! *Valt would chuckle.* Bax: This forest ain't nothin'! Aria: It's pretty cool with all the rabbits and deers- *Nora would attach herself to Aria.* Nora: ARIA!!!! I-IT'S A DEER!!! Santino: A measly deer? Aria: Yeah, it's friendly, see? *She'd pet the deer.* Nora: I dunno... *She'd scratch her head.* Valt: Let's keep on going ahead! *They'd travel farther into the forest.* *They'd be at what looks like a place with pillars around it, then, suddenly, a figure with yellow hair and an arm softener would come out of the forest.* ???: Oh, they must be the people he was talking about... The Whole Gang: FREE DE LA HOYA?!? Santino: I didn't expect Free to be somewhere in the woods... Uriel: Yeah, but it is really cool! Santino: Touche. Valt: Hey Free! Free: Hey Valt, so these are the people you told me about. Uriel: I can't believe it! I'm looking at THE Free De La Hoya in person! This surprise is amazing! Aria: Yeah! Thanks Valt! This is awesome! Nora: Thanks alot, Valt! Valt: Don't mention it guys! Bax's Thoughts: If I defeat Free, I'll skyrocket in popularity! Then I'll get to become the world champ and battle Valt! I'm gonna battle him first! Santino: I won't be battling Free today... I want to battle him where everyone can see it. Uriel: Wow! Free: So, who's battling first?! Uriel, Aria, and Bax: Me!! Uriel: How about we do rock paper scissors! Aria: Yeah! Bax: I guess... Uriel, Bax, and Aria: Rock, Paper, Scissors, Shoe! Uriel: Scissors! Bax and Aria: Rock! Uriel: Aw man... Valt: Ok, you two are going up first! Aria: Yeah! I get to battle Free De La Hoya! Bax: Not just you, I do as well! *Santino would sigh.* Free: You two are in a very poor spot if you wanna have a chance at defeating me. Lets just start the match. *They'd take their places at the stadium.* Shinito: Valt, do you wanna ref? Valt: Sure! Shinito: Alright, go for it! Valt: Got it! *Valt would run up to the referee's spot.* Free: Meet my Quantum beyblade, Spectre Fafnir! Uriel: WHOA! Thats so cool! I wish I could battle it... Shinito: Man, Valt's gonna have a fun time watching this battle, huh! Santino's Thoughts: A perfect opponent for Salamander... Aria: That looks so awesome! But I'm winning this! Bax: Us, dork! Aria: How about you say that again! Bax: DORK! Bax and Aria: Grrr!!! Uriel: *sigh* I don't like how this battle's gonna end... Shinito: If they don't put their differences aside, Free will mop the floor with them! Valt: Inspect your opponents beys! Aria's Thoughts: Free really took this Fafnir to a whole new level. It looks like it has 6 semi-circular blades that have rubber on them and can spin steal, a bit like my Aurora. It seems like it also has a heavy disc with holes in it to help with stamina and outer weight distrubution. I can't really make out what the tip is supposed to do, but lets just see it in action! Valt: First Battle! *Free would get ready to launch with his hand.* Bax: WHAT?! Your launching with your hand? What about your launcher, use that! Free: I think I'm fine with using my hand. Bax: If your trying to psyche me out, it won't work! *He'd say as he'd put his bey in Crush mode, then attach his bey to his launcher.* Aria Thoughts: What is he trying to pull off... *She'd say as she'd look at Free.* Valt: Ready, and Set! Free: 3! Aria: 2! Bax: 1! Bax and Aria: Let it RIP!!! *They'd both pull off Quantum Shoots, with their bodies and launchers being engulfed in blue and pink flames.* Free: So I see you both know about the Quantum Shoot, huh. This won't be half as boring as I thought it would be. Aria: Go Aurora! Shining Siphon! *Aurora would fiercely attack Fafnir, but it seems as though Fafnir absorbed Aurora's spin!* Aria: Wait, What?! Bax: My turn! Basilisk, attack! Go for your Dominate Crush! *Basilisk would charge at Fafnir, but Fafnir would drain it's spin as well! It looked like Aurora and Basilisk were running out of spin! Aria: It's not over yet! Aurora! *Aurora's avatar would erupt from the beyblade, engulfed in pink flames.* Aria: Let's go for a Shining Spiral!! *Aurora would use its tip to boost up and charge at Fafnir.* Free: Dodge it. *He'd say as he'd tilt his head to the right.* Santino: Basilisk is done. *Aurora would attack Basilisk, which was right behind Fafnir, and then Basilisk would lose all its stamina.* Aria: Heheh, sorry! Bax: Grrr!! Free: Go, Fafnir. *Fafnir's avatar would erupt from it's beyblade.* Free: Spectre Drain. *He'd absorb most of Aurora's spin, then Aurora would run out of stamina, causing a Survivor finish. Valt: Survivor Finsih! 1 Point goes to Free! Free: Huh, guess I was wrong, *He'd yawn.* who's next to battle? Uriel: Me!! *Nora would come over to her sister Aria.* Nora: Nice job sis! You put up a fight against THE Free De La Hoya! Aria: You're right... thanks Nora! Nora: No problem! *She'd say as she'd sit down, about to watch Uriel and Free battle.* Bax's Thoughts: One day I'll surpass you, Free De La Hoya! *He'd then sit down to watch the battle.* Uriel: I've been looking forward to this, Free! But me and Ulysses will go super duper Matrix and defeat you! Santino's Thoughts: Free's blading style compared to Uriel's blading style is completely immeasureable. Let's see how this plays out. Free: Lets get to the match. *Free would whip out his launcher.* Free: Since I'm pretty sure you saw the match I did, it wouldn't really be fun to launch with my hand, wouldn't it? Lets see if you are strong enough to keep up. Uriel: We're definitely strong enough, right Ulysses? *Ulysses would glimmer in response.* Uriel: We got this, Ulysses! *Uriel would enter the avatar realm.* Uriel: Hey Ulysses, it's you again!! Ulysses: Yes, but that is not important. What is important right now is the battle in front of you. Uriel: Yeah, Free's strong, I dunno if I can take him down... Ulysses: Remember Uriel, if you believe in me, I'll believe in you. Focus on the battle in front of you. Uriel: Got it Ulysses! We're gonna go Matrix together! *Uriel would leave the avatar dimension.* Uriel: Focus on the battle in front of me... *Uriel's battle Aura would be flaring up quickly.* Free's Thoughts: This should be fun! *Free's battle Aura would intensify.* *Uriel would switch to Smash mode.* Shinito: He gets a big power increase, but its stamina wears down fast. I dunno if this is the best idea... Santino: Your right, however, Fafnir isn't a defense type, so Ulysses' heavy attacks could knock it out of the ring. Aria: Shush, Uriel's in the zone! Bax: I wonder how this'll play out! Valt: First Battle! Ready, and set! Free: 3! 2! 1! Let it... *Free would gain an immense power boost, Uriel would as well.* Uriel and Free: RIP!!!! *Fafnir would stay in the middle, while Ulysses would go zooming around the stadium.* Uriel: Hit it with our Clash Shoot! *Ulysses would land a very fast barrage of attacks, rendering Fafnir unable to spin steal.* *Fafnir would be running low on stamina.* Free: Hmm? Uriel: YEAH! It's working! Shinito: You're doing good Uriel! Aria: Yeah! Keep it up! Free: Go, Fafnir! Spectre Drain! Uriel: No chance! Dodge it! *Ulysses would dodge it, but then hit the wall and started to soar into the air.* Uriel: Exactly what I aimed for! Ulysses! *Ulysses avatar would erupt from it's beyblade engulfed in a orange flame.* Uriel: PURSUIT DIVE! *Ulysses would start making it's course for Fafnir. It would then hit it, but then... Ulysses bursts?!* Uriel: What?! *Free would smirk.* Valt: Burst Finish! Free wins by a score of 2-0! Uriel: What happened? Why didn't Ulysses burst it? Santino's Thoughts: A Slow Motion burst... Aria: Yeah, what happened? Fafnir was also about to run out of stamina! Shinito: I don't even know what happened there. Valt: That was a slow motion burst! It's when a fast spinning clockwise beyblade makes contact with a slow spinning counter-clockwise bey! Uriel: Aw man... we lost... Welp, good game, Free! *Free would smile.* Bax's Thoughts: Another person I have to surpass... Valt: Seeya Free! We're off! Everyone: Bye Free! *Free would wave.* *The gang would arrive back at the Bey Park.* Valt: So how was the surprise? Everyone (Except Bax): Awesome! Uriel: I'ma train a whole lot more to defeat Free! Aria: Me too! Bax: We'd better start headin' back to our places. It's gettin' dark. Uriel: Yeah! Bye everyone! Aria: Bye Uriel! Bye Shinito! Bye Santino! Shinito: See you guys tomorrow at the tournament! Santino: Of course! I'll be looking forward to it! Bax: Whatever... *They'd all go home.* Uriel: Ulysses, we'll go super Matrix and win the tournament! *Ulysses would shine in response.* *A mysterious blader would watch from the distance.* ???: Hmmm, win or lose, coin, you choose! *She'd flip the coin, it would land on ?????* ???: Hm! This tournament will be fun! Episode 9 Preview! Uriel: This is awesome! We're gonna win this thing! Uriel: A new blader?! Yeah! This is gonna be so fun! Uriel: We're going all out and making it to the semi-finals! Next Episode Of Beyblade Burst Matrix! Intermission! The Quantum Cup! since we are already kinda in the 2nd arc i'll be revealing the legends that will be debuting: Valt Aoi (Present) Beyblade: Paladin Valkyrie Shank Blade Ahead+Pierce Shu Kurenai (Not Present) Free De La Hoya (Present) Spectre Fafnir Withdraw Seize Void+Cushion Lui Shirosagi (Not Present) RE: Beyblade Burst: Matrix! - PinkRose - Jun. 30, 2021 Big lol at the Joe throwback with Juudai's little scene in the end, that was a nice one. RE: Beyblade Burst: Matrix! - GenesisBlader - Jun. 30, 2021 (Jun. 30, 2021 10:22 PM)PinkRose Wrote: Big lol at the Joe throwback with Juudai's little scene in the end, that was a nice one. lol thanks, joe was one of my favorite characters in rise yes i finally made my profile image RE: Beyblade Burst: Matrix! - GenesisBlader - Jul. 01, 2021 Episode 9! Spoiler (Click to View) Intermission! The Quantum Cup! *It was a bright and sunny morning in El Astro, and Uriel had just woke up.* Uriel: Alright Mom! I'll do my best! Mom: Good, also don't forget, your brother has a surprise for you if you win! Uriel: Ok! Got it! *He'd leave the house.* *His friends would be waiting him outside.* Bax: Took ya long enough. Uriel: Hey, I slept in late, ok? Shinito: You do have a tendency to do that.... Santino: True. Aria: Let's get going, guys! Everyone: Right! *They'd walk down the sidewalk.* Shinito: Hey guys... I have something important to tell you. Everyone: Yeah? What is it? Shinito: I-I can't be in the tournament... Uriel: Why not? Aria: Yeah! It's gonna be fun! Shinito: ...I'll tell you later... Uriel: Ok... Santino: Strange... *They'd enter the Bey Arena lobby.* Uriel: Don't worry, Shinito! We'll win it for you! Everyone (except Bax): Yeah! Bax: Whatever. Shinito: Thanks guys... *They'd head into the Bey Arena, while Shinito would go to the stands.* Hanami: Hello all you Bey Fans! I welcome you to... The Quantum Cup!! *The whole crowd would cheer.* Hanami: Here are the brackets of the people that will be battling! *He'd show the brackets.* Hanami: So, let's get blading!! Everyone: Yeah!!! Uriel: Ulysses, we can win this tournament! *Ulysses would shine in agreement.* Santino: Don't get your hopes up, 'cause I'll be the one winning! Aria: Nuh uh, me! Uriel: No, me! Bax: No, I am! Nora's Thoughts: ...they all have Quantum bey's, but what about me? Hanami: First round is... Bax Noiji vs Giro Habana! *Timeskip to the end of the battle.* Hanami: A burst!? There's no holding back! Hanami: Next round is... Azuki Felver vs Nora Soranora! Aria: You can do this Peyton! Uriel and Shinito: Yeah! Go Peyton! *Timeskip to the end of the battle.* Hanami: Two Survivor finishes! Peyton wins and moves on to the next round! Peyton: Yeah! Hanami: Next round is... a mysterious girl vs Onori Lanayr! Juudai: This mysterious girl has a name! It's Juudai Akemi, the one who will be winning this tournament! Uriel: NOOO, I WILL!!! *Timeskip to the end of the battle.* Hanami: A Burst Finish! Juudai moves on to the next round! Hanami: Next battle is Lamaa Joorin vs Akiro Useni! *Timeskip.* Hanami: A BURST FINISH!!! Akiro moves on! Hanami: Now it's Santino Genji vs Warama Tyuuji! *Timeskip.* Hanami: 2 ring out finishes! Santino moves on! Hanami: Jzyut Graeme Vs. Alan Gretus! *Timeskip.* Hanami: Burst Finish! Alan moves on! *Timeskip to when both Uriel and Aria were done with their matches.* Hanami: Alright you Bey Fans! Now we're moving on to the Quad Finals! Hanami: We have Bax Noiji vs Nora Soranora! Aria: C'mon Nora! You got this! Do it! Bax: This'll be a piece of cake. *He'd put his bey in Crush mode.* Nora's Thoughts: i gotta win this and make it to the semi finals! Bax's Thoughts: This'll be the perfect time to test this out... *He'd put the metal Sheilding excess on Basilisk.* Referee: First Battle! Ready, and set! Nora: Three! Bax: Two! Both: One! Both: Let it... *Bax would gain a surge in power.* Bax: RIPPP!!! *Basilisk would take the center almost immediately.* Hanami: And Basilisk takes the center with no hesitation! Nora: Go! Attack, Dragon! *Nora's beyblade was a black and purple First Dragon Xceed 3A.* *Dragon would attack several times, but it didn't seem to effect Basilisk.* Bax: Let's just end this already, Basilisk! *Basilisk would charge at Dragon.* Nora: Noo!! Bax: DOUBLE DOMINATE CRUSH!! *Basilisk would finally hit Dragon, resulting in it breaking due to the sheer force of the impact.* Referee: *gasps* B-Burst finish! Bax Noiji wins! Hanami: I-I can't believe my eyes! First Dragon has been destroyed!! Bax moves on to the semi-finals! Nora: N-No... Bax: Yes! One step away from winning this tournament! *Nora would go running out of the arena.* Aria: Nora... Uriel: Grrrrr.... WHY DOES HE ALWAYS BREAK BEYS!! Bax: HEY! I DIDN'T MEAN TO DO IT, YA KNOW! Uriel: (How did he hear that?) Hanami: Now its Juudai Akemi vs Akiro Useni! Juudai: Let's see who will win, shall we? *She'd flip her coin.* Juudai: Doesn't look too good for you! Akiro: How about you stop using that dum coin and lets battle! Juudai: If you say so- *Timeskip.* Hanami: A Burst Finish! Looks like Juudai is moving on to the semi finals! Shinito: Using that coin makes her look like she's about to try and psyche out her opponent. Bax: Well she ain't psychin' me out! Hanami: Next Round is Santino Genji vs Alan Greetus! Alan: I'm winning this! Santino: You wish. Alan: Grrr... *Timeskip through the first battle.* Hanami: Burst finish! Santino is moving on to the semi-finals! Santino: Awesome. Alan: Aw man... Hanami: And last but not least, Uriel Nomura vs Aria Soronora! *They'd walk up to the stadium.* Aria: Uriel! I'm gonna win this and make it to the semi-finals! Uriel: No chance, I'm winning! *Their battle aura would flare up.* Hanami: Sparks are flying and they haven't even started the match! *Uriel would change Ulysses to it's slash mode.* Referee: First battle! Ready, and set! Uriel: Three! Aria: Two! Both: One! Both: Let it... *Uriel and Aria would gain a boost of power.* Uriel and Aria: RIP!!!! *Ulysses would be zooming around the stadium.* Hanami: Ulysses is picking up some serious speed!! Uriel: Hit 'em with Super Clash Shoot!! *Ulysses would hit Aurora many times.* Hanami: Ulysses is nailing a fierce barrage of attacks! Santino: Which one will I fight in the semi-finals... Aria: Go Aurora! Shining Spin! *Aurora would nullify every single attack Ulysses pulled off.* Uriel: Ulysses! Pursuit- Aria: Shining Siphon! *Aurora would drain almost all of Ulysses' spin, while knocking it back to the wall.* Hanami: Aurora pulled of a fierce attack on Ulysses! *Ulysses would run out of stamina.* Referee: Survivor Finish! Point Standings 1 to Nothing! Santino's Thoughts: That all you got, Uriel? Uriel: Ulysses! We'll win this next one, I promise! *Ulysses would glow.* Aria: If that's all you got, then you have no chance at winning this! Uriel: Wha?! We totally got more! That was just the beginning! *Uriel would switch to smash mode.* Shinito: That's a risky move... Aurora can deplete Ulysses of all it's stamina as it's attacking! *Uriel's battle aura would flare up.* Uriel: We can do this, Ulysses! *Ulysses would shine.* Shinito: He's in the zone!! Referee: Second battle! Ready, and set! Aria: Three! Aria: Two! Uriel: One! Both: Let it... *Uriel would gain an even greater amount of power than before.* Uriel: RIPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!! Aria: Aurora, take the cen- Uriel: Ulysses, go to the center! *Ulysses would go to the center and do a flower pattern.* Hanami: Wha?! Has Uriel predicted what Aria was gonna do before she did it?! Aria: No! Uriel: Hit 'em with Pursuit Smash! *Ulysses would ram into Aurora, sending Aurora flying up to the stadium rim.* Aria: Aurora, Shining SPIRAL!! *Aurora would spiral around the stadium, engulfed in a pink flame.* Uriel: THAT WON'T WORK THIS TIME! HAAAAA! ULYSSES!! *Uriel's hair and eyes would start glowing, and he would be surrounded be green lightning.* *Ulysses would blaze out from it's beyblade, engulfed in green flames.* Uriel: Hit the wall! Hanami: What? What is Uriel planning?! *Ulysses would hit the wall, then go flying in the air.* Hanami: ULYSSES HAS SERIOUS AIR!! Uriel: PURSUIT DIVE!!! *He'd thrust his hand down.* Aria: Aurora, Go!!!! *Aurora's avatar would blaze from it's beyblade, engulfed in pink flames.* Aria: SHINING SIPHON!!! *Ulysses and Aurora would collide, but Ulysses would get back onto the stadium floor and accelerate.* Uriel: JUST WHAT WE PLANNED!! GO FOR PURSUIT SMASH!!!! *Ulysses would ram into Aurora once more, bursting it.* The Whole Crowd: ... Hanami: ... Aria: ... Uriel: ... Referee: Burst Finish! By a score of 2-1, Uriel Nomura wins! *The whole crowd would cheer.* Shinito: YEAH! HE DID IT!! Bax: That was amazing... Santino's Thoughts: Not bad, Uriel. Looks like I'll be facing that in the semi-finals. Juudai: That's a tough opponent, huh? Aria: Aw man... well, Uriel. Make sure you win this tournament, got it? Uriel: Yeah! *They'd fist bump.* Hanami: That was an amazing match, Bey Fans! Tomorrow will be the the semi-finals, so make sure you don't miss that! Hanami out! *They'd all leave the arena.* Santino: Hey Uriel. Uriel: Yeah, Santino? Santino: That match of yours was awesome. But I'll be the one winning against you in the semi-finals, got that? Uriel: No, me and Ulysses will go super Matrix and defeat you! Shinito: Guys, I'd hate to break this rivalry up briefly, but has anyone seen Aria? She's been gone ever since that match. Bax: To be honest, she probably went to go check in on Nora. Uriel: Yeah... Let's just leave them alone for now... Santino: Alright, see you guys tomorrow then. Shinito: See you all! Uriel: See ya! Bax: Whatever, dweebs. *Juudai would be watching from a distance.* Juudai: What an interesting group... *Meanwhile, Aria would be trying to cheer Nora up.* Aria: Don't worry Nora, it's just a loss, you can get back up and try again. Nora: I don't really want to do blading anymore... Aria: Don't be like that, Nora... Nora: Hmph! *She'd say as she'd go to her room.* Aria: *sigh* *Nora would be at her 3D printer.* Nora: I'm gonna get revenge someday... *Back to Uriel's house.* Uriel: Mom, guess what! I won two matches today, I'm going to the semi-finals! Mom: That's good, hun! Uriel: Well, I got some training to do Mom! Mom: Alright, I'll leave you to that. *They'd both laugh.* Uriel: Ulysses, we'll go super duper matrix tomorrow! But first, we gotta train! *Ulysses would shine.* Episode 10 Preview! Uriel: I gotta get to training if I wanna win the tournament! Uriel: YEAH! Valt's gonna be in town, he can help me with training! Uriel: Quantum Flare? Quantum Special Moves? What's that? Next Episode On Beyblade Burst Matrix! Divine Sword! Paladin Valkyrie! RE: Beyblade Burst: Matrix! - GenesisBlader - Jul. 02, 2021 Episode 10! Spoiler (Click to View) My Own Quantum Flare! *It was a bright morning, and Uriel was chilling at the Bey Park with his friend, Shinito, trying to look for a way to defeat Salamander.* Uriel: Hmmm, how do I defeat it? Shinito: I dunno, Santino's pretty unpredictable if I'm gonna be totally honest... Uriel: Maybe a move that will help knock it off balance... like Pursuit Smash! Shinito: Yeah! Let's practice that move! *They'd grab their beys and launchers.* Uriel and Shinito: Three, two, one! Let it RIP!! Shinito: Take the center! Uriel: Now Ulysses! Pursuit Smash!! *Ulysses would miss it's Pursuit Smash and instead ram into the wall, knocking it out of the stadium.* *Valt Aoi would catch his beyblade.* Valt: So I see you two are training, right?* Uriel: Yeah, what about it? Valt: How about I help? Shinito: Sure! Uriel: Yeah! Training with Valt! *Meanwhile, at Santino's gym, he was sweating from top to bottom, training to get a stronger launch.* Santino: I... Will... Not... LOSE!!!! *He'd weight lift much faster than he originally was.* *He'd stop, then go over to his Bey Stadium.* Santino: Three! Two! One! Let it... RIP!!!!! *He'd pull of an incredibly powerful Quantum Shoot.* *Salamander would spiral around the stadium so fast, Santino couldn't even see it.* Santino: If he wants to win, he's got a whole other thing coming at him!! *Back to the Bey Park.* Valt: Alright Uriel, let me teach you something! Uriel: Alright! I'm down! Valt: So you know a Quantum Shoot, right? Uriel: Mhm! I pull it off almost all the time now! Valt: Cool! So, you also know that when you pull off a Quantum Shoot, your bey get's a massive boost in power and speed? Uriel: Yeah! Valt: Alright! With that, you can gain Quantum Flare! To get Quantum Flare, you have to bond with your bey and know it's feelings, and yours as well! Uriel: Quantum Flare?! Awesome!! Valt: And you can also get a Quantum Special Move! Uriel: WHOA!! How do you do that? Valt: You gotta bond with you bey the whole way through! Uriel: Got it! So let's test it out! Valt: Ok! *Valt and Uriel would line up at their respective places at the stadium, while Shinito would follow behind and get in the referee's spot.* Shinito: Inspect your opponent's beyblade! *Valt and Uriel would give their beyblades to each other.* Uriel's Thoughts: Wow! I can't believe I'm battling Valt! Anyway, Valkyrie has a ring that has 3 strong blades that can increase the beyblade's power. It also feels like it has a medium weight disc with tiny red rubber pieces around it for more bound attacks. Finally, it's driver looks like its a semi flat rubber tip with a small ring close to the rubber that helps with attacks and counterattacks! Let's do this, Ulysses! *They'd give each other back their beyblades.* Shinito: First battle! Ready, and set! Valt: Three! Uriel: Two! Both: One! Both: Let it... RIP!! *They'd both pull off fierce Quantum Shoots.* Shinito: Wow! They both nail Quantum Shoots! *Bax would be watching from a distance.* Uriel: Go Ulysses! Valt: Lets do this, Valkyrie! *Bax would come a bit close to the stadium to spectate.* Bax's Thoughts: Wow, Uriel's battling Valt! Valt: Let's go for a Rush Launch!! *Valkyrie would be laying fierce attacks off of Ulysses.* Uriel: We're not done! Ulysses! Go for a Super Clash Counter! *Ulysses would grind on it's Accelerate Excess and charge towards Valkyrie!* Uriel: How ya like that? Valt: Yes! Just like we planned! *Ulysses would hit Valkyrie, but as it did, Valkyrie would hit the wall.* Uriel: What? Valt: BOUNDING SLASH!! *Valkyrie would hit Ulysses, forcing it up into the air.* Bax's Thoughts: He's done for. Uriel: We still got some fight left in us!! Ulysses! *Ulysses' avatar would erupt from it's beyblade, engulfed in green flames.* Uriel: PURSUIT DIVE!! *Ulysses would start to make his course for Valkyrie while in the air.* Uriel: HAAAAA!!!! Valt: Not yet! Valkyrie!! *Valkyrie's avatar would erupt from the beyblade, engulfed blue flames.* Valt: PALADIN SWORD!!! *Valkyrie would slash at Ulysses, Ulysses would burst.* Uriel: Wow... Valt: That's how we do it! Shinito: With a Burst Finish, Valt Aoi wins! *Bax would come over.* Bax: What are you guys doing. Uriel: We're training so I can defeat Santino! Bax: Could I maybe tag along? Valt: Of course! Shinito: Sure! Bax: Alright. *They would all sit down.* Uriel: Alright Valt, what's next on the list? Valt: To be honest, that battle really- Bax: Battle me next! I wanna see if you still have that spirit in ya! Uriel: O-ok! Valt: Or... that. *chuckles* *They' line up at the stadium, Shinito would go and ref.* Shinito: First to 2 points, got it? Uriel: Yeah! *Bax would switch Basilisk to Crush mode, Uriel would switch to Smash mode.* Shinito: First Battle, ready and set! Bax: Three! Two! One! Let it... *They'd both gain a surge of power.* Uriel and Bax: RIP!!! Shinito: Wow! They're going head on! Bax: Basilisk, Dominate Crush! Uriel: Dodge it! *Ulysses would dodge Dominate Crush, but wouldn't be prepared for what Bax was gonna do next.* Bax: Dominate THRASHER! *Basilisk would hit the wall, then trap Ulysses in a chain of attacks.* Uriel: Oh no! Bax: Now hit 'em with Under Counter! *Basilisk would scoop under Ulysses in with an upper attack, then knock him out of the ring.* Shinito: Ring out finish! One point to Bax Noiji! Bax: How ya like my new move?! Uriel: It's great and all, but me and Ulysses will win this one! *Ulysses would start glowing, then Uriel would enter the avatar dimension.* Uriel: Ulysses! It's you! Ulysses: ... Uriel: What's wrong Ulysses? Ulysses: Nothing. You need to find your flare, or Bax will win. Uriel: Alright Ulysses! I'm counting on you and myself! Ulysses: So will I, Uriel! *Uriel would exit the avatar dimension.* Uriel: Find my flare... find my flare!! *Uriel would then gain flare, as his eyes, and hair would start glowing and a fiery battle aura would surround him.* Bax: I'm winning this one! *Bax's battle Aura would flare up, but not as much as Uriel's was.* *Bax would go to sheild mode, Uriel would switch to slash mode.* Valt: This'll be good! Uriel finally achieved Quantum Flare! Shinito: Wow... this is so epic!! First battle, ready and set! Bax: Three! Two! One! Let it... Uriel: RIPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Uriel would pull off a Flaring Quantum Shoot!* Shinito: Uriel leads with a fiery Quantum Shoot! Bax: Let's go Basilisk! Take the center! Dominate Sheild! *Basilisk would head to the center, but Ulysses wasn't there?* Uriel: Ulysses! Hit 'em with Super Clash Shoot! *Ulysses would land a fierce barrage of attacks, afterwards Basilisk would be sent up the stadium.* Bax: Basilisk! Under Counter! Uriel: Take it on with Pursuit Whip! Bax's Thoughts: He didn't dodge it? This'll make things much more difficult! Uriel's Thoughts: By facing Under Counter head on, I can prevent Dominate Thrasher! *Ulysses would meet Basilisk with a fierce clash in the middle of the stadium, with Ulysses being sent flying into the air!* Uriel: Just what we planned! HAAAA, ULYSSES!! *Ulysses' avatar would flare up from it's beyblade in a green aura.* Uriel: PURSUIT DIVE! Bax: YOU WON'T DEFEAT ME!! BASILISK!! *Basilisk's avatar would flare up from its beyblade in a blue aura.* Bax: Super Dominate Shield!! *While blocking Ulysses' attack, this also meant that Basilisk was in the opening so Ulysses can pull off a new special move!* *Ulysses would hit the stadium floor.* Uriel: ULYSSES!! *Ulysses would hit the stadium wall.* Valt's Thoughts: He's getting it! Uriel: PURSUIT... SWORD!!!!!!! *Uriel's flare would burn brightly.* *Ulysses would then accelerate towards Basilisk, bursting it.* *Uriel would pass out.* Shinito: With a Burst Finish, Uriel Nomura wins- Wait, wait happened to Uriel?! Bax: Uhh, what? Valt: Uh oh... *He'd get a flashback* Valt (Flashback): WINGED LAUNCH!! Xander: DUAL SABERS!!!! *Xcalibur would burst.* *Valt and Xander would pass out.* *The memory would end.* Valt: Oh no! *Valt would rush over to Uriel.* *Uriel would wake up.* Uriel: D-Did I win? Bax: Yeah, unfortunately. Shinito: Mhm! That was an awesome move you pulled off! Valt: Yeah! It was super cool! Uriel: Wow... it must have been so strong I passed out! Valt: Alright, I think that's enough training for today! You guys ready for the semi-finals? Uriel: Yeah! Bax: Sure. Valt: Alright! Let's all get some shut eye! Shinito: Agreed! Bye everyone! Uriel: See you guys! Valt; Bye! Bax: Whatever, I'm out. *They'd all leave.* *Meanwhile, at Aria's house.* Aria: Uriel, you better win... *In Nora's room...* Nora: I'll get revenge on him, but to do that, I'll need to evolve my bey into a Quantum bey! *She'd leave her bed.* Uriel: Ulysses, we got this! *Ulysses would shine.* Uriel: YEAH! *At Santino's Mansion.* Santino: I'll win tomorrow's round! *At Juudai's house.* Juudai: I'm gonna win the tournament! *At Bax's Hideout.* Bax: I'll win this whole thing! *At Uriel's house.* Uriel: We can do this, Ulysses! RE: Beyblade Burst: Matrix! - Lucha Burst - Jul. 02, 2021 (Jul. 02, 2021 3:41 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: Episode 10! Wait Santino has a mansion? RE: Beyblade Burst: Matrix! - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 02, 2021 (Jul. 02, 2021 3:41 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: Episode 10!Nice Spoiler (Click to View) I guess RE: Beyblade Burst: Matrix! - GenesisBlader - Jul. 02, 2021 (Jul. 02, 2021 10:34 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote:(Jul. 02, 2021 3:41 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: Episode 10! uh i just added that in there i thought it would be cool because for some reason santino gives me bell vibes when i write him in this fanfic RE: Beyblade Burst: Matrix! - PinkRose - Jul. 02, 2021 Come on Juudai I believe in you my girl. RE: Beyblade Burst: Matrix! - GenesisBlader - Jul. 02, 2021 (Jul. 02, 2021 11:48 PM)PinkRose Wrote: Come on Juudai I believe in you my girl. Spoiler (Click to View)
Juudai will have to lose RE: Beyblade Burst: Matrix! - PinkRose - Jul. 03, 2021 Oof, losing the first on-screen match is not a very good start there...R.I.P RE: Beyblade Burst: Matrix! - GenesisBlader - Jul. 03, 2021 Valt's beyblade burst matrix character profile! Spoiler (Click to View)
Blader: Valt Aoi Gender: Male Age: 17 Characteristics: Valt has now grown taller with nothing really being changed except his attire. He now dons a black vest with yellow and red semi trangles going along the side of it. Under that he wears a dark blue short sleeved hoodie with red outlines. He wears black shorts with yellow outlines and black boots with yellow and red outlines. Personality: (Nothing Has Changed) Beyblade: Paladin Valkyrie Shank Blade Ahead+Pierce Spin Direction: Right Parts & Info: Matrix Chip: Valkyrie - Valkyrie is a chip with rubber teeth, allowing for the lock to be stronger. It has a blue motif with a golden knight with yellow eyes looking to the left. Matrix Ring: Paladin - Paladin is a 3 bladed ring, helping it with slash attacks. It has a blue motif with golden wings tucked inside of the 3 blades. It also has golden swords going along the side of the ring, which can activate if you pull off a Quantum Shoot. Forge Disc: Shank - Shank is a forge disc with 3 medium blades and 3 red rubber pieces in the middle for more attack and bounding potential. Performance Tip: Blade - Blade is a blue tip with red rubber on the bottom of it. It is a semi flat tip with a ring that can pull off wicked attacks. Layer Plating: Ahead - Ahead is a plating with 4 powerful blades that eclipse with the Paladin ring's 3 blades. It is red, and can be used for slash attacks. Matrix Excess: Pierce - Pierce is a red, plastic excess that goes onto the performance tip. It is a bit like the +V Gear in shape, but is sloped downwards and goes under the ring on the Blade performance tip for more attack power. Special Shoots: Quantum Shoot: When a blader achieves the Quantum Shoot, their beyblade gains IMMENSE attack, stamina, or defense (depending on the typing.) Special Moves (In Matrix): Rush Shoot: Paladin Sword: Valkyrie uses it's Pierce excess to speed up and slash at the opponent, doing massive damage. Bounding Slash: When Valkyrie hits the stadium wall, it uses the Matrix Excess (Pierce) and the speed it gains from the impact to charge at the opponent with devastating power. Launch Form: 3: He thrusts his launches out. 2: He spins around multiple times. 1: He stomps and grabs the launcher Let it... RIP!: He tugs on the launcher so hard that his hand is symmetrical with the middle of his head. (Jul. 03, 2021 12:08 AM)PinkRose Wrote: Oof, losing the first on-screen match is not a very good start there...R.I.P maybe she'll win, maybe she'll lose. 50/50. i dont realy wanna spoil episode 11 tho lol |