(Nov. 19, 2020  9:37 PM)kai edits Wrote: Part 3 chapter 15 Goodbye forever everyone! Part 3
Shu:what we're you thinking taking her on?
Shun:i-
Shun coughs up blood.
Shu:look at your self you could of died.
Shun:I won't die.
Later in free's dream.
Free:shun are you ok?
Shun:yes I am.
Free hugs shun.
Shun:free.
Blood was running down shun's body.
Free:shun?
Free checks shun's pulse.
Free:shun wake up.
Free wakes up screaming.
Shun:free are you ok.
Free:now I am.
Later at a current local tournament.
Judge:this will be the first time for a 100 vs 1 match.
3 2 1 go shoot.
Eda:move!
Alex:go dragoon! Venom slash!
Dimitri:move out of the way brother.
Alex:no.
A huge explosion happens when all 100 beys collided.
Alex:hold on dragoon.
Dimitri:victory barrier!
The smoke cleared only valkyrie,dragoon and hiatus was left standing.
Eda: Damn you mortals!
Hiatus hits dragoon.
Alex:dragoon no.
Eda:die!
A huge explosion hits both Alex and dragoon and Alex is sent flying into the air.
Dimitri:dang it.
???:you really messed up this time. You fool.
Dimitri:huh?
Alyssa:you heard me! Let me finish this mess. Go demon archfiend!
Archfiend knocks hiatus into the air.
Eda:I sense a very strong power in you. Let me consume your power with my darkness. Hiatus!
Genesis hits hiatus into eda's hand.
Gwynn:enough!
Shun:eda!
Eda:shun Lisa kurenai my my such nice encounter.
Shun:shut up! Funny thing I know your weakness now.
Eda:oh so what if you know? Hiatus raw power can kill you.
Shun pulls out the part free gave to shun.
Eda:that part it can't be!
Shun puts the part on maiden.
Shun:meet collision maiden!
Eda:you still can't control maiden with the ring on it.
Shun:maybe not in this form.
Shun jumps into the air and her earrings glow blue.
Eda:what is this.
A light comes from shun.
Kaiser:alright!
Eda:what?
Free:did shun achieve it shu?
Shu:she has! The ultimate fusion.
Kaiser:maiden and I will destroy you!
Kaiser points at eda.
Eda:hiatus will end you!
Chapter end

(Nov. 19, 2020  9:42 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 19, 2020  9:37 PM)kai edits Wrote: Part 3 chapter 15 Goodbye forever everyone! Part 3
Shu:what we're you thinking taking her on?
Shun:i-
Shun coughs up blood.
Shu:look at your self you could of died.
Shun:I won't die.
Later in free's dream.
Free:shun are you ok?
Shun:yes I am.
Free hugs shun.
Shun:free.
Blood was running down shun's body.
Free:shun?
Free checks shun's pulse.
Free:shun wake up.
Free wakes up screaming.
Shun:free are you ok.
Free:now I am.
Later at a current local tournament.
Judge:this will be the first time for a 100 vs 1 match.
3 2 1 go shoot.
Eda:move!
Alex:go dragoon! Venom slash!
Dimitri:move out of the way brother.
Alex:no.
A huge explosion happens when all 100 beys collided.
Alex:hold on dragoon.
Dimitri:victory barrier!
The smoke cleared only valkyrie,dragoon and hiatus was left standing.
Eda: Damn you mortals!
Hiatus hits dragoon.
Alex:dragoon no.
Eda:die!
A huge explosion hits both Alex and dragoon and Alex is sent flying into the air.
Dimitri:dang it.
???:you really messed up this time. You fool.
Dimitri:huh?
Alyssa:you heard me! Let me finish this mess. Go demon archfiend!
Archfiend knocks hiatus into the air.
Eda:I sense a very strong power in you. Let me consume your power with my darkness. Hiatus!
Genesis hits hiatus into eda's hand.
Gwynn:enough!
Shun:eda!
Eda:shun Lisa kurenai my my such nice encounter.
Shun:shut up! Funny thing I know your weakness now.
Eda:oh so what if you know? Hiatus raw power can kill you.
Shun pulls out the part free gave to shun.
Eda:that part it can't be!
Shun puts the part on maiden.
Shun:meet collision maiden!
Eda:you still can't control maiden with the ring on it.
Shun:maybe not in this form.
Shun jumps into the air and her earrings glow blue.
Eda:what is this.
A light comes from shun.
Kaiser:alright!
Eda:what?
Free:did shun achieve it shu?
Shu:she has! The ultimate fusion.
Kaiser:maiden and I will destroy you!
Kaiser points at eda.
Eda:hiatus will end you!
Chapter end

nice

(Nov. 19, 2020  9:43 PM)kai edits Wrote:

(Nov. 19, 2020  9:42 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: nice

This chapter is trash because shun did not fly through a window 😅😅😅😅

(Nov. 19, 2020  9:44 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 19, 2020  9:43 PM)kai edits Wrote: This chapter is trash because shun did not fly through a window 😅😅😅😅

lol

(Nov. 19, 2020  9:45 PM)kai edits Wrote:

(Nov. 19, 2020  9:44 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: lol

Next chapter
Eda:die shun!
Shun is sent flying into 10 Windows.

(Nov. 19, 2020  9:47 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 19, 2020  9:45 PM)kai edits Wrote: Next chapter
Eda:die shun!
Shun is sent flying into 10 Windows.

lol.
wow Shun loves 10 windows geez.
She is about to have 100 kids lol

(Nov. 19, 2020  9:48 PM)kai edits Wrote:

(Nov. 19, 2020  9:47 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: lol.
wow Shun loves 10 windows geez.
She is about to have 100 kids lol

Dang bro free is jealous lol

(Nov. 19, 2020  9:48 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 19, 2020  9:48 PM)kai edits Wrote: Dang bro free is jealous lol

Free has that one kid and the others have so many lol

(Nov. 19, 2020  9:49 PM)kai edits Wrote:

(Nov. 19, 2020  9:48 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Free has that one kid and the others have so many lol

Dang bro shun cheating on free with the windows

(Nov. 19, 2020  9:49 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 19, 2020  9:49 PM)kai edits Wrote: Dang bro shun cheating on free with the windows

Big LOL
#Shunlovesthewindows

(Nov. 19, 2020  9:51 PM)kai edits Wrote:

(Nov. 19, 2020  9:49 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Big LOL
#Shunlovesthewindows

Shun be crashing into Windows every time she battled eda lol.

(Nov. 20, 2020  12:28 AM)The Blacknight Wrote: dang eda be bodying

(Nov. 20, 2020  12:28 AM)The Blacknight Wrote: dang eda be bodying

(Nov. 20, 2020  6:54 PM)kai edits Wrote: Part 3 chapter 16 preview Awaken the perfect fusion Kaiser!
Shu:shun's new fusion is different.
Free:I thought kisara was shun's final form of fusion guess I was wrong.
Eda:I will destroy you Kaiser!
Kaiser:huh speak up I dont have my hearing aid.

(Nov. 24, 2020  10:45 PM)kai edits Wrote: Part 3 chapter 16 Awaken the perfect fusion Kaiser!
Eda:Kaiser I will end you!
Gwynn:go shun! Show her your new power.
Kaiser walks towards eda.
~menacing~
Shu:free are you shocked.
Free:yes. What have I done shun.
Tears run down free's cheek.
Kaiser:let's start this show we.
Kaiser laughs.
Eda:tch don't take me lightly.
3 2 1 go shoot!
Eda:go Hiatus take the center!
Kaiser:useless! Lets go maiden!
Maiden:right!
Eda:die!
Hiatus hits maiden but sent flying.
Eda:what?
Kaiser:yare yare daze. Did you remember maidens ability to stop time.
Eda:huh.
Hiatus hits the wall at a fast speed.
Kaiser:not bad.
Eda coughs up a bit of blood.
Eda:you got lucky.
Kaiser laughs.
Kaiser:what's wrong can't keep up with my speed! Let me finish you with this than.
Maiden hits hiatus into the wall.
Shu:when did she learn perfect time skip and fusion control? No way Gwynn taught her that?
Free:shu it's fine.
Eda:damn it!
Hiatus is sent flying into a wall outside the stadium and Eda falls onto the ground.
Kaiser:huh? I can't hear you did someone get mad over losing to me?
Kaiser unfuses.
Shun:good game Eda! You are really fun to battle.
Shun puts her hand out to help her up.
Eda:hmm.
Eda slaps shun's hand.
Eda:I will never be with a person like the likes of you.
Later at shun's house.
Shun pulls out glass and wood out of her body.
Shun:ow.
Free:when did you learn all those new things shun?
Shun:gwynn helped me.
Alice walks into the room.
Alice:sis your kid still does not want to go to bed.
Yua:mom what happen to arm.
Shun:nothing I just gotten into a fight with a friend.
Yua:you ok?
Free:come on let's go to bed. You have school tomorrow.
Yua:ok daddy.
Chapter end.
Yua age
part 1= born yet
Part 2=4
Part 3=6

(Nov. 24, 2020  10:47 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 24, 2020  10:45 PM)kai edits Wrote: Part 3 chapter 16 Awaken the perfect fusion Kaiser!
Eda:Kaiser I will end you!
Gwynn:go shun! Show her your new power.
Kaiser walks towards eda.
~menacing~
Shu:free are you shocked.
Free:yes. What have I done shun.
Tears run down free's cheek.
Kaiser:let's start this show we.
Kaiser laughs.
Eda:tch don't take me lightly.
3 2 1 go shoot!
Eda:go Hiatus take the center!
Kaiser:useless! Lets go maiden!
Maiden:right!
Eda:die!
Hiatus hits maiden but sent flying.
Eda:what?
Kaiser:yare yare daze. Did you remember maidens ability to stop time.
Eda:huh.
Hiatus hits the wall at a fast speed.
Kaiser:not bad.
Eda coughs up a bit of blood.
Eda:you got lucky.
Kaiser laughs.
Kaiser:what's wrong can't keep up with my speed! Let me finish you with this than.
Maiden hits hiatus into the wall.
Shu:when did she learn perfect time skip and fusion control? No way Gwynn taught her that?
Free:shu it's fine.
Eda:damn it!
Hiatus is sent flying into a wall outside the stadium and Eda falls onto the ground.
Kaiser:huh? I can't hear you did someone get mad over losing to me?
Kaiser unfuses.
Shun:good game Eda! You are really fun to battle.
Shun puts her hand out to help her up.
Eda:hmm.
Eda slaps shun's hand.
Eda:I will never be with a person like the likes of you.
Later at shun's house.
Shun pulls out glass and wood out of her body.
Shun:ow.
Free:when did you learn all those new things shun?
Shun:gwynn helped me.
Alice walks into the room.
Alice:sis your kid still does not want to go to bed.
Yua:mom what happen to arm.
Shun:nothing I just gotten into a fight with a friend.
Yua:you ok?
Free:come on let's go to bed. You have school tomorrow.
Yua:ok daddy.
Chapter end.
Yua age
part 1= born yet
Part 2=4
Part 3=6

nice chapter.
But where was the part Shun got sent into the window lol

(Nov. 24, 2020  10:49 PM)kai edits Wrote:

(Nov. 24, 2020  10:47 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: nice chapter.
But where was the part Shun got sent into the window lol

in the chapter before this one.
The full chapter of 15 and 16 shun gets sent flying into a wooden house and Windows lol.

(Nov. 24, 2020  10:49 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 24, 2020  10:49 PM)kai edits Wrote: in the chapter before this one.
The full chapter of 15 and 16 shun gets sent flying into a wooden house and Windows lol.

or Shun can just simply go to the window and kiss it lol