RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Jul. 12, 2021
(Jul. 11, 2021 9:49 PM)AyoManWassup Wrote: (Jul. 11, 2021 6:09 PM)USN Wrote: I did not ban or report you. I know nothing about your case and I am not staff. As far as I know, you do not deserve the ban, but staff decided that you do, and I believe staff. I have done nothing except for give you advice. We have very good staff and if you truly do not believe you deserve a ban, they will listen. Weather you be banned or not is your choice now.
BTW I don't make the rules, I just carry my weight.
Well then I am glad you understand. Sorry for the fuss. dang bruh the one time i have to go somewhere the craziest stuff happens
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Jul. 12, 2021
Ikr crazy thing happens
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 12, 2021
After I post the next chapter Beyjitzu will go on break because in Dynachi the finale is coming up and I want to finish Dynachi so I can get to my next fanfic Beyblade Burst TechnoX
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Jul. 12, 2021
(Jul. 12, 2021 2:08 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: After I post the next chapter Beyjitzu will go on break because in Dynachi the finale is coming up and I want to finish Dynachi so I can get to my next fanfic Beyblade Burst TechnoX
nice!! TechnoX seems like a very lit name
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Jul. 12, 2021
Wow One Fanfic after the other
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 12, 2021
Chapter 23 is FLARING up!!
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 22
Beast Of Fire!! Flare Salamander!!!
(A bey bursts)
Hanami: Ridley just burst through Jake’s defenses!!
Jake: No way!
Raina: Oh yes!
~In The Middle Of Oribe’s Battle~
Oribe: Vile Blaze!!
(A bey bursts)
Random: *Gasps*
Hanami: Oribe’s vile spirit blasts Justin’s bey out of existence!!
~During The D Block Match~
Random: Hang in there!!
Random: Not for long!
(A bey stops spinning)
Hanmi: Incredible!! Flob just outspan Bob’s bey!!
Raina: Those are the guys that broke my bey.
Me: Don’t worry, I’m sure they won’t even make it to the finals!
Hanami: That ends our first match battles!! Tomorrow will be our Semi-Final matches for each block!! Here are the matchups!!
(The matches appear on the screen)
Hanami: For A block it’s!! Perseus Nakano Vs Hannah!! The second match will be Pam Hope Vs Sulien Genji!!
Pam: So I’m up against the mysterious kid with Flare Salamander.
Me: Plus we barely know anything about it because it always wins with one hit.
Raina: We do know it’s a Beyjitzu Bey so it’ll be a tough nut to crack!
Aiden: Pam, what do you think about practicing!
Pam: You read my mind!
Hanami: In B Block the Semi Finals will be!! Raina Reinhart Vs Babaar Blakenstone!!
Aiden: That’s the guy I lost to.
Raina: I know, but I’m going to win it for you!!
Hanami: In C Block it’s Oribe Abiko Vs Sophia!! And Fynn Sumiye Vs James!!
Oribe: Looks like I’ll be battling Fynn in the finals.
(Oribe walks away)
~On The Way To The Raging Bulls~
Me: Pam, are you ok?
Pam: I’m just a little nervous!
Aiden: I would be too if I was going up against a bey I didn’t know anything about!
(We walk inside)
Raina: Who’s up for some practice!!
(Aiden starts running on the treadmill)
Me: Pam, let’s battle!
Pam: You read my mind!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Pam: Let it rip!!
(Me and Pam pull off Beyjitzu Launcher)
Me: Flood Launch!!
(Poseidon comes in with a fast barrage of attacks)
Pam: Peaceful Zone!!
(Pegasus blocks all of Poseidon’s attacks)
Me: Hydro Counter!!
(Poseidon speeds around the stadium leans on its driver and heads straight for Pegasus, Pegasus gets sent flying)
Pam: Hang in there!!
(Pegasus hits the wall)
Me: Hydro Jet!!
(Poseidon starts picking up speed, Pegasus’ golden wings come out)
Pam: Peaceful Heal!!
(Poseidon and Pegasus get sent flying out of the stadium)
Me/Pam: *Gasps*
Aiden: Looks like you guys are an even match!
(Aiden starts doing push-ups)
Me: Nope, I’m stronger!
Pam: In your dreams!
Me: You know some dreams turn out to be real!
Pam: Grr!!
(Valt Shu Hikaru and Hyuga come through the door)
Valt: Hey guys!!
Me: Where were you?
Hikaru: Well, we ran into some fans.
Pam: Valt Aoi! I challenge you to a battle!!
All: *Gasps*
Me: Well that was random!
Pam: I need to become stronger if I wanna beat Sulien!!
Valt: Sure, why not!
~At Sam’s House~
Sulien: Suoh! Did you see my match?!
Suoh: I did, you did great little brother.
(Suoh starts cutting the flowers)
Sulien: I’m going up against Pam Hope tomorrow. Do you think I can beat him?
Suoh: Of course you can, Salamander is the strongest bey and with its new evolution, it can beat anyone!
Sam: Thanks!
~Back At The Raging Bulls~
Shu: Are both of you ready?
Valt/Aiden: You bet!
Shu: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Valt/Aiden: Let it rip!!
(Valt and Pam pull off Beyjitzu Launches)
Valt: Start things off with Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek sends Pegasus flying in the air, Pegasus lands in the center)
Pam: Peaceful Zone!!
(Pegasus blocks all of Valtryek’s attacks)
Me: Wow, it’s standing up to Valtryek!
(Valtryek catches onto the motorized rim and hits Pegasus hard Pegasus starts wobbling)
Valt: Nice!
Pam: This’ll do it! Peaceful Feather Storm!!
(Pegasus creates a tornado and sends Valtryek flying into the wall)
Raina: Wow, he’s really got everything planned out for Valt!
(Valtryek starts wobbling, Some of the Variable driver tabs come off, Valtryek starts speeding up)
Valt: Valtryek!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up Valtryek blazes out of the bey)
Valt: Heroic Flash!!
(Valtryek catches onto the stadium rim and slams into Pegasus, Pegasus bursts)
Pam: *Gasps*
Shu: It’s Heroic Valtryek with a burst finish!! The winner is Valt Aoi!!
Me: What just happened?
Valt: Valtryek just awakened!!
(Valt shows us Valtryek’s driver)
Pam: It’s worn down a bit but not fully.
Valt: Yup, it’s on its way!
Pam: Welp, I better start practicing for my match tomorrow!
~The Next Day~
Hanami: Good Morning Beyfans!! Today we’ll be diving into the Semi-Final matches! First up! We’ve got Perseus Nakano Vs Hannah!!
Hannah: I’m going to beat you!!
Me: In your dreams!
Referee: First battle! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Hannah: Let it rip!!
(Poseidon bursts Hannah’s bey)
Hannah: No!
Referee: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a burst finish!! Perseus Nakano wins!!
Hanami: And Percy goes to the finals in no time!
Me: Alright!
~In Pam’s Waiting Room~
Pam: Let it rip!!
(Pam pulls off a Beyjitzu Launch, Aiden walks in)
Aiden: Percy won pretty fast, it’s your turn now.
Pam: Don’t worry, I’m going to win!
(Pam walks out onto the stage)
Hanami: This match should be lit! It’s Sam Genji Vs, Pam Hope!! Both of them are strong bladers that don’t like losing so let’s get right into this!!
Sulien: Pegasus will burn to ashes!!
Pam: We’ll snuff out your flames!
Referee: Inspect your opponent’s bey!!
Pam (Thoughts): Flare Salamander! A Counterclockwise spinning balance
type! It has 2 modes, 5 blade mode, and 10 bladed mode, 10 blade mode boosts defense power while in 5 blade mode it focuses on the attack more than defense!! The driver operate’ can be shifted which will make it jump a lot plus it’s got rubber on it so It’ll be able to jump high!
(Sam snatches his bey out of Pam’s hand)
Pam: Jeez, I was going to give it back!
Sulien: Get ready to battle already!!
Sulien (Thoughts): Pam Hope, since you’re strong I’ll play on the defensive!!
(Sulien puts Salamander in 10 Bladed Defense Mode)
Referee: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Pam/Sulien: Let it rip!!
(Sulien and Pam pull off strong Beyjitzu Launches)
Sulien/Pam: Take the center!!
(Salamander and Pegasus start clashing hard)
Hanami: They start with a clash for the center!!
Pam: Center’s mine! Peaceful Feather Storm!!
(Pegasus creates a tornado and sends Salamander flying into the wall)
Hanami: Pegasus wins the clash for the center!!
Sulien: Blazing Holocaust!!
(Salamander starts hitting Pegasus hard with a flaming tornado)
Hanami: Salamander’s on the counterstrike!! It’s hitting Pegasus with all it’s got!
(Pegasus gets sent flying in the air)
Pam: *Gasps* Hang in there!!
(Pegasus lands out of the stadium)
Referee: It’s Flare Salamander with a ring-out finish!! Sulien Genji claims 1 point!
Hanami: Incredible! With that strong barrage of attacks, Pegasus has been knocked out of the stadium!
Sulien: Good effort but not enough!
Pam: Don’t worry, in this match I’ll hit you with everything I’ve got!!
(Pam’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Referee: Second battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Pam/Sulien: Let it rip!!
(Pam and Sulein pull off Beyjitzu Launches, Sulien launches hard, Salamander immediately goes to the center)
Hanami: Salamander wins the race to the center!!
Pam: I won’t give up! Attack!!
(Pegasus hits Salamander with a heavy barrage of strikes)
Sulien: Blazing Inferno!!
(Salamander starts blocking Pegasus’ attacks)
Raina: What is he doing, his bey is a stamina type it’s not meant for attacking!
Aiden: But it is meant for spinning!
Raina: What?
Aiden: You'll see!
Hanami: Pegasus is hitting Salamander with heavy blows but Salamander takes everything without even flinching!!
Sulien: What are you doing? You’re going to lose!
Pam: I’m going to win!
(Pegasus hits Salamander hard, Salamander and Pegasus start wobbling)
Raina: So that was his plan!
Hanami: They’ve both ran out of gas but who will last the longest!!
Pam: Pegasus!!
(Pam’s Resonance Aura flares up Pegasus blazes out of the bey)
Pam: Hang in there!!
(Pegasus starts glowing, Pegasus barely out spins Salamander)
Sulien: *Gasps*
Referee: It’s Peacebringer Pegasus with a survivor finish!! Pam Hope claims 1 point!!
Pam: Yes!
Hanami: Peacebringer Pegasus just showed Salamander the true meaning of stamina!!
Raina: Keep it up!
Me: You’ve got this Pam!!
Sulien: You really wanna see my bad side?!
Pam: Bring it!
Sulien: I’ll end you with one blow!
(Sulien puts Salamander in Attack Mode)
Pam: *Gasps*
Referee: Third battle! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Pam/Sulien: Let it rip!!
(Pam and Sulien pull off powerful Beyjitzu Launches, Salamander starts bouncing high around the stadium)
Hanami: Wow, Salamander jumps its way to the center!!
(Pegasus takes the center, Salamander hits Pegasus with a jumping barrage of strikes)
Me: *Gasps* Pegasus can’t do anything against a jumping bey!
Raina: Don’t underestimate Pam, I’m sure he’s got something up his sleeve!
Pam: Peaceful Feather Storm!!
(Salamander gets sucked in the tornado and gets sent flying into the wall)
Pam: Oh yeah!!
(Salamander jumps off the wall and hits Pegasus with a strong strike)
Pam: What the?!
Hanami: Salamander used its ten blades to disperse damage from that impact!
Sulien: Salamander is stronger than you think!
(Salamander hits Pegasus hard, Pegasus starts wobbling)
Pam: Grr!!
Hanami: Pegasus just took a strong blow to the face!!
Sulien: Salamander!!
(Sulien’s Resonance Aura flares up Salamander blazes out of the bey, Salamander slams into the wall and gets sent flying)
Sulien: Rain Of Swordfire!!
(Salamander crashes down on Pegasus, Pegasus bursts)
Pam: *Gasps*
Referee: It’s Flare Salamander with a burst finish!! The winner is Sulien Genji!!
(Pam falls to the ground)
Sulien: Easy.
(Sulien walks away)
Hanami: After a sudden dive-bombs on Pegasus Salamander bursts Pegasus’ face off the stadium!!
~In The Hallway~
(I run up to Pam)
Me: Pam! Are you ok?
Pam: Yeah.
Raina: Are you sure?
Pam: Yes, I’ve just gotta train harder!
Raina: Don’t worry Pam! I’m gonna win my battle for you!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - Demon Belial - Jul. 12, 2021
Great! Nice Chapter!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 12, 2021
(Jul. 12, 2021 5:41 PM)Demon Belial Wrote: Great! Nice Chapter!!
Thanks, what was ur fave part?
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - Demon Belial - Jul. 12, 2021
(Jul. 12, 2021 5:41 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 12, 2021 5:41 PM)Demon Belial Wrote: Great! Nice Chapter!!
Thanks, what was ur fave part?
When Salamander bursts Pegasus. Rain of Swordfire!!!!!! Lol
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Jul. 12, 2021
(Jul. 12, 2021 5:28 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 23 is FLARING up!!
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 22
Beast Of Fire!! Flare Salamander!!!
(A bey bursts)
Hanami: Ridley just burst through Jake’s defenses!!
Jake: No way!
Raina: Oh yes!
~In The Middle Of Oribe’s Battle~
Oribe: Vile Blaze!!
(A bey bursts)
Random: *Gasps*
Hanami: Oribe’s vile spirit blasts Justin’s bey out of existence!!
~During The D Block Match~
Random: Hang in there!!
Random: Not for long!
(A bey stops spinning)
Hanmi: Incredible!! Flob just outspan Bob’s bey!!
Raina: Those are the guys that broke my bey.
Me: Don’t worry, I’m sure they won’t even make it to the finals!
Hanami: That ends our first match battles!! Tomorrow will be our Semi-Final matches for each block!! Here are the matchups!!
(The matches appear on the screen)
Hanami: For A block it’s!! Perseus Nakano Vs Hannah!! The second match will be Pam Hope Vs Sulien Genji!!
Pam: So I’m up against the mysterious kid with Flare Salamander.
Me: Plus we barely know anything about it because it always wins with one hit.
Raina: We do know it’s a Beyjitzu Bey so it’ll be a tough nut to crack!
Aiden: Pam, what do you think about practicing!
Pam: You read my mind!
Hanami: In B Block the Semi Finals will be!! Raina Reinhart Vs Babaar Blakenstone!!
Aiden: That’s the guy I lost to.
Raina: I know, but I’m going to win it for you!!
Hanami: In C Block it’s Oribe Abiko Vs Sophia!! And Fynn Sumiye Vs James!!
Oribe: Looks like I’ll be battling Fynn in the finals.
(Oribe walks away)
~On The Way To The Raging Bulls~
Me: Pam, are you ok?
Pam: I’m just a little nervous!
Aiden: I would be too if I was going up against a bey I didn’t know anything about!
(We walk inside)
Raina: Who’s up for some practice!!
(Aiden starts running on the treadmill)
Me: Pam, let’s battle!
Pam: You read my mind!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Pam: Let it rip!!
(Me and Pam pull off Beyjitzu Launcher)
Me: Flood Launch!!
(Poseidon comes in with a fast barrage of attacks)
Pam: Peaceful Zone!!
(Pegasus blocks all of Poseidon’s attacks)
Me: Hydro Counter!!
(Poseidon speeds around the stadium leans on its driver and heads straight for Pegasus, Pegasus gets sent flying)
Pam: Hang in there!!
(Pegasus hits the wall)
Me: Hydro Jet!!
(Poseidon starts picking up speed, Pegasus’ golden wings come out)
Pam: Peaceful Heal!!
(Poseidon and Pegasus get sent flying out of the stadium)
Me/Pam: *Gasps*
Aiden: Looks like you guys are an even match!
(Aiden starts doing push-ups)
Me: Nope, I’m stronger!
Pam: In your dreams!
Me: You know some dreams turn out to be real!
Pam: Grr!!
(Valt Shu Hikaru and Hyuga come through the door)
Valt: Hey guys!!
Me: Where were you?
Hikaru: Well, we ran into some fans.
Pam: Valt Aoi! I challenge you to a battle!!
All: *Gasps*
Me: Well that was random!
Pam: I need to become stronger if I wanna beat Sulien!!
Valt: Sure, why not!
~At Sam’s House~
Sulien: Suoh! Did you see my match?!
Suoh: I did, you did great little brother.
(Suoh starts cutting the flowers)
Sulien: I’m going up against Pam Hope tomorrow. Do you think I can beat him?
Suoh: Of course you can, Salamander is the strongest bey and with its new evolution, it can beat anyone!
Sam: Thanks!
~Back At The Raging Bulls~
Shu: Are both of you ready?
Valt/Aiden: You bet!
Shu: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Valt/Aiden: Let it rip!!
(Valt and Pam pull off Beyjitzu Launches)
Valt: Start things off with Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek sends Pegasus flying in the air, Pegasus lands in the center)
Pam: Peaceful Zone!!
(Pegasus blocks all of Valtryek’s attacks)
Me: Wow, it’s standing up to Valtryek!
(Valtryek catches onto the motorized rim and hits Pegasus hard Pegasus starts wobbling)
Valt: Nice!
Pam: This’ll do it! Peaceful Feather Storm!!
(Pegasus creates a tornado and sends Valtryek flying into the wall)
Raina: Wow, he’s really got everything planned out for Valt!
(Valtryek starts wobbling, Some of the Variable driver tabs come off, Valtryek starts speeding up)
Valt: Valtryek!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up Valtryek blazes out of the bey)
Valt: Heroic Flash!!
(Valtryek catches onto the stadium rim and slams into Pegasus, Pegasus bursts)
Pam: *Gasps*
Shu: It’s Heroic Valtryek with a burst finish!! The winner is Valt Aoi!!
Me: What just happened?
Valt: Valtryek just awakened!!
(Valt shows us Valtryek’s driver)
Pam: It’s worn down a bit but not fully.
Valt: Yup, it’s on its way!
Pam: Welp, I better start practicing for my match tomorrow!
~The Next Day~
Hanami: Good Morning Beyfans!! Today we’ll be diving into the Semi-Final matches! First up! We’ve got Perseus Nakano Vs Hannah!!
Hannah: I’m going to beat you!!
Me: In your dreams!
Referee: First battle! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Hannah: Let it rip!!
(Poseidon bursts Hannah’s bey)
Hannah: No!
Referee: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a burst finish!! Perseus Nakano wins!!
Hanami: And Percy goes to the finals in no time!
Me: Alright!
~In Pam’s Waiting Room~
Pam: Let it rip!!
(Pam pulls off a Beyjitzu Launch, Aiden walks in)
Aiden: Percy won pretty fast, it’s your turn now.
Pam: Don’t worry, I’m going to win!
(Pam walks out onto the stage)
Hanami: This match should be lit! It’s Sam Genji Vs, Pam Hope!! Both of them are strong bladers that don’t like losing so let’s get right into this!!
Sulien: Pegasus will burn to ashes!!
Pam: We’ll snuff out your flames!
Referee: Inspect your opponent’s bey!!
Pam (Thoughts): Flare Salamander! A Counterclockwise spinning balance
type! It has 2 modes, 5 blade mode, and 10 bladed mode, 10 blade mode boosts defense power while in 5 blade mode it focuses on the attack more than defense!! The driver operate’ can be shifted which will make it jump a lot plus it’s got rubber on it so It’ll be able to jump high!
(Sam snatches his bey out of Pam’s hand)
Pam: Jeez, I was going to give it back!
Sulien: Get ready to battle already!!
Sulien (Thoughts): Pam Hope, since you’re strong I’ll play on the defensive!!
(Sulien puts Salamander in 10 Bladed Defense Mode)
Referee: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Pam/Sulien: Let it rip!!
(Sulien and Pam pull off strong Beyjitzu Launches)
Sulien/Pam: Take the center!!
(Salamander and Pegasus start clashing hard)
Hanami: They start with a clash for the center!!
Pam: Center’s mine! Peaceful Feather Storm!!
(Pegasus creates a tornado and sends Salamander flying into the wall)
Hanami: Pegasus wins the clash for the center!!
Sulien: Blazing Holocaust!!
(Salamander starts hitting Pegasus hard with a flaming tornado)
Hanami: Salamander’s on the counterstrike!! It’s hitting Pegasus with all it’s got!
(Pegasus gets sent flying in the air)
Pam: *Gasps* Hang in there!!
(Pegasus lands out of the stadium)
Referee: It’s Flare Salamander with a ring-out finish!! Sulien Genji claims 1 point!
Hanami: Incredible! With that strong barrage of attacks, Pegasus has been knocked out of the stadium!
Sulien: Good effort but not enough!
Pam: Don’t worry, in this match I’ll hit you with everything I’ve got!!
(Pam’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Referee: Second battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Pam/Sulien: Let it rip!!
(Pam and Sulein pull off Beyjitzu Launches, Sulien launches hard, Salamander immediately goes to the center)
Hanami: Salamander wins the race to the center!!
Pam: I won’t give up! Attack!!
(Pegasus hits Salamander with a heavy barrage of strikes)
Sulien: Blazing Inferno!!
(Salamander starts blocking Pegasus’ attacks)
Raina: What is he doing, his bey is a stamina type it’s not meant for attacking!
Aiden: But it is meant for spinning!
Raina: What?
Aiden: You'll see!
Hanami: Pegasus is hitting Salamander with heavy blows but Salamander takes everything without even flinching!!
Sulien: What are you doing? You’re going to lose!
Pam: I’m going to win!
(Pegasus hits Salamander hard, Salamander and Pegasus start wobbling)
Raina: So that was his plan!
Hanami: They’ve both ran out of gas but who will last the longest!!
Pam: Pegasus!!
(Pam’s Resonance Aura flares up Pegasus blazes out of the bey)
Pam: Hang in there!!
(Pegasus starts glowing, Pegasus barely out spins Salamander)
Sulien: *Gasps*
Referee: It’s Peacebringer Pegasus with a survivor finish!! Pam Hope claims 1 point!!
Pam: Yes!
Hanami: Peacebringer Pegasus just showed Salamander the true meaning of stamina!!
Raina: Keep it up!
Me: You’ve got this Pam!!
Sulien: You really wanna see my bad side?!
Pam: Bring it!
Sulien: I’ll end you with one blow!
(Sulien puts Salamander in Attack Mode)
Pam: *Gasps*
Referee: Third battle! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Pam/Sulien: Let it rip!!
(Pam and Sulien pull off powerful Beyjitzu Launches, Salamander starts bouncing high around the stadium)
Hanami: Wow, Salamander jumps its way to the center!!
(Pegasus takes the center, Salamander hits Pegasus with a jumping barrage of strikes)
Me: *Gasps* Pegasus can’t do anything against a jumping bey!
Raina: Don’t underestimate Pam, I’m sure he’s got something up his sleeve!
Pam: Peaceful Feather Storm!!
(Salamander gets sucked in the tornado and gets sent flying into the wall)
Pam: Oh yeah!!
(Salamander jumps off the wall and hits Pegasus with a strong strike)
Pam: What the?!
Hanami: Salamander used its ten blades to disperse damage from that impact!
Sulien: Salamander is stronger than you think!
(Salamander hits Pegasus hard, Pegasus starts wobbling)
Pam: Grr!!
Hanami: Pegasus just took a strong blow to the face!!
Sulien: Salamander!!
(Sulien’s Resonance Aura flares up Salamander blazes out of the bey, Salamander slams into the wall and gets sent flying)
Sulien: Rain Of Swordfire!!
(Salamander crashes down on Pegasus, Pegasus bursts)
Pam: *Gasps*
Referee: It’s Flare Salamander with a burst finish!! The winner is Sulien Genji!!
(Pam falls to the ground)
Sulien: Easy.
(Sulien walks away)
Hanami: After a sudden dive-bombs on Pegasus Salamander bursts Pegasus’ face off the stadium!!
~In The Hallway~
(I run up to Pam)
Me: Pam! Are you ok?
Pam: Yeah.
Raina: Are you sure?
Pam: Yes, I’ve just gotta train harder!
Raina: Don’t worry Pam! I’m gonna win my battle for you!!
this episode is cool, didnt see any grammar, plot, character, story, or writing problems!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - Demon Belial - Jul. 12, 2021
(Jul. 12, 2021 5:46 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jul. 12, 2021 5:28 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 23 is FLARING up!!
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 22
Beast Of Fire!! Flare Salamander!!!
(A bey bursts)
Hanami: Ridley just burst through Jake’s defenses!!
Jake: No way!
Raina: Oh yes!
~In The Middle Of Oribe’s Battle~
Oribe: Vile Blaze!!
(A bey bursts)
Random: *Gasps*
Hanami: Oribe’s vile spirit blasts Justin’s bey out of existence!!
~During The D Block Match~
Random: Hang in there!!
Random: Not for long!
(A bey stops spinning)
Hanmi: Incredible!! Flob just outspan Bob’s bey!!
Raina: Those are the guys that broke my bey.
Me: Don’t worry, I’m sure they won’t even make it to the finals!
Hanami: That ends our first match battles!! Tomorrow will be our Semi-Final matches for each block!! Here are the matchups!!
(The matches appear on the screen)
Hanami: For A block it’s!! Perseus Nakano Vs Hannah!! The second match will be Pam Hope Vs Sulien Genji!!
Pam: So I’m up against the mysterious kid with Flare Salamander.
Me: Plus we barely know anything about it because it always wins with one hit.
Raina: We do know it’s a Beyjitzu Bey so it’ll be a tough nut to crack!
Aiden: Pam, what do you think about practicing!
Pam: You read my mind!
Hanami: In B Block the Semi Finals will be!! Raina Reinhart Vs Babaar Blakenstone!!
Aiden: That’s the guy I lost to.
Raina: I know, but I’m going to win it for you!!
Hanami: In C Block it’s Oribe Abiko Vs Sophia!! And Fynn Sumiye Vs James!!
Oribe: Looks like I’ll be battling Fynn in the finals.
(Oribe walks away)
~On The Way To The Raging Bulls~
Me: Pam, are you ok?
Pam: I’m just a little nervous!
Aiden: I would be too if I was going up against a bey I didn’t know anything about!
(We walk inside)
Raina: Who’s up for some practice!!
(Aiden starts running on the treadmill)
Me: Pam, let’s battle!
Pam: You read my mind!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Pam: Let it rip!!
(Me and Pam pull off Beyjitzu Launcher)
Me: Flood Launch!!
(Poseidon comes in with a fast barrage of attacks)
Pam: Peaceful Zone!!
(Pegasus blocks all of Poseidon’s attacks)
Me: Hydro Counter!!
(Poseidon speeds around the stadium leans on its driver and heads straight for Pegasus, Pegasus gets sent flying)
Pam: Hang in there!!
(Pegasus hits the wall)
Me: Hydro Jet!!
(Poseidon starts picking up speed, Pegasus’ golden wings come out)
Pam: Peaceful Heal!!
(Poseidon and Pegasus get sent flying out of the stadium)
Me/Pam: *Gasps*
Aiden: Looks like you guys are an even match!
(Aiden starts doing push-ups)
Me: Nope, I’m stronger!
Pam: In your dreams!
Me: You know some dreams turn out to be real!
Pam: Grr!!
(Valt Shu Hikaru and Hyuga come through the door)
Valt: Hey guys!!
Me: Where were you?
Hikaru: Well, we ran into some fans.
Pam: Valt Aoi! I challenge you to a battle!!
All: *Gasps*
Me: Well that was random!
Pam: I need to become stronger if I wanna beat Sulien!!
Valt: Sure, why not!
~At Sam’s House~
Sulien: Suoh! Did you see my match?!
Suoh: I did, you did great little brother.
(Suoh starts cutting the flowers)
Sulien: I’m going up against Pam Hope tomorrow. Do you think I can beat him?
Suoh: Of course you can, Salamander is the strongest bey and with its new evolution, it can beat anyone!
Sam: Thanks!
~Back At The Raging Bulls~
Shu: Are both of you ready?
Valt/Aiden: You bet!
Shu: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Valt/Aiden: Let it rip!!
(Valt and Pam pull off Beyjitzu Launches)
Valt: Start things off with Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek sends Pegasus flying in the air, Pegasus lands in the center)
Pam: Peaceful Zone!!
(Pegasus blocks all of Valtryek’s attacks)
Me: Wow, it’s standing up to Valtryek!
(Valtryek catches onto the motorized rim and hits Pegasus hard Pegasus starts wobbling)
Valt: Nice!
Pam: This’ll do it! Peaceful Feather Storm!!
(Pegasus creates a tornado and sends Valtryek flying into the wall)
Raina: Wow, he’s really got everything planned out for Valt!
(Valtryek starts wobbling, Some of the Variable driver tabs come off, Valtryek starts speeding up)
Valt: Valtryek!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up Valtryek blazes out of the bey)
Valt: Heroic Flash!!
(Valtryek catches onto the stadium rim and slams into Pegasus, Pegasus bursts)
Pam: *Gasps*
Shu: It’s Heroic Valtryek with a burst finish!! The winner is Valt Aoi!!
Me: What just happened?
Valt: Valtryek just awakened!!
(Valt shows us Valtryek’s driver)
Pam: It’s worn down a bit but not fully.
Valt: Yup, it’s on its way!
Pam: Welp, I better start practicing for my match tomorrow!
~The Next Day~
Hanami: Good Morning Beyfans!! Today we’ll be diving into the Semi-Final matches! First up! We’ve got Perseus Nakano Vs Hannah!!
Hannah: I’m going to beat you!!
Me: In your dreams!
Referee: First battle! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Hannah: Let it rip!!
(Poseidon bursts Hannah’s bey)
Hannah: No!
Referee: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a burst finish!! Perseus Nakano wins!!
Hanami: And Percy goes to the finals in no time!
Me: Alright!
~In Pam’s Waiting Room~
Pam: Let it rip!!
(Pam pulls off a Beyjitzu Launch, Aiden walks in)
Aiden: Percy won pretty fast, it’s your turn now.
Pam: Don’t worry, I’m going to win!
(Pam walks out onto the stage)
Hanami: This match should be lit! It’s Sam Genji Vs, Pam Hope!! Both of them are strong bladers that don’t like losing so let’s get right into this!!
Sulien: Pegasus will burn to ashes!!
Pam: We’ll snuff out your flames!
Referee: Inspect your opponent’s bey!!
Pam (Thoughts): Flare Salamander! A Counterclockwise spinning balance
type! It has 2 modes, 5 blade mode, and 10 bladed mode, 10 blade mode boosts defense power while in 5 blade mode it focuses on the attack more than defense!! The driver operate’ can be shifted which will make it jump a lot plus it’s got rubber on it so It’ll be able to jump high!
(Sam snatches his bey out of Pam’s hand)
Pam: Jeez, I was going to give it back!
Sulien: Get ready to battle already!!
Sulien (Thoughts): Pam Hope, since you’re strong I’ll play on the defensive!!
(Sulien puts Salamander in 10 Bladed Defense Mode)
Referee: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Pam/Sulien: Let it rip!!
(Sulien and Pam pull off strong Beyjitzu Launches)
Sulien/Pam: Take the center!!
(Salamander and Pegasus start clashing hard)
Hanami: They start with a clash for the center!!
Pam: Center’s mine! Peaceful Feather Storm!!
(Pegasus creates a tornado and sends Salamander flying into the wall)
Hanami: Pegasus wins the clash for the center!!
Sulien: Blazing Holocaust!!
(Salamander starts hitting Pegasus hard with a flaming tornado)
Hanami: Salamander’s on the counterstrike!! It’s hitting Pegasus with all it’s got!
(Pegasus gets sent flying in the air)
Pam: *Gasps* Hang in there!!
(Pegasus lands out of the stadium)
Referee: It’s Flare Salamander with a ring-out finish!! Sulien Genji claims 1 point!
Hanami: Incredible! With that strong barrage of attacks, Pegasus has been knocked out of the stadium!
Sulien: Good effort but not enough!
Pam: Don’t worry, in this match I’ll hit you with everything I’ve got!!
(Pam’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Referee: Second battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Pam/Sulien: Let it rip!!
(Pam and Sulein pull off Beyjitzu Launches, Sulien launches hard, Salamander immediately goes to the center)
Hanami: Salamander wins the race to the center!!
Pam: I won’t give up! Attack!!
(Pegasus hits Salamander with a heavy barrage of strikes)
Sulien: Blazing Inferno!!
(Salamander starts blocking Pegasus’ attacks)
Raina: What is he doing, his bey is a stamina type it’s not meant for attacking!
Aiden: But it is meant for spinning!
Raina: What?
Aiden: You'll see!
Hanami: Pegasus is hitting Salamander with heavy blows but Salamander takes everything without even flinching!!
Sulien: What are you doing? You’re going to lose!
Pam: I’m going to win!
(Pegasus hits Salamander hard, Salamander and Pegasus start wobbling)
Raina: So that was his plan!
Hanami: They’ve both ran out of gas but who will last the longest!!
Pam: Pegasus!!
(Pam’s Resonance Aura flares up Pegasus blazes out of the bey)
Pam: Hang in there!!
(Pegasus starts glowing, Pegasus barely out spins Salamander)
Sulien: *Gasps*
Referee: It’s Peacebringer Pegasus with a survivor finish!! Pam Hope claims 1 point!!
Pam: Yes!
Hanami: Peacebringer Pegasus just showed Salamander the true meaning of stamina!!
Raina: Keep it up!
Me: You’ve got this Pam!!
Sulien: You really wanna see my bad side?!
Pam: Bring it!
Sulien: I’ll end you with one blow!
(Sulien puts Salamander in Attack Mode)
Pam: *Gasps*
Referee: Third battle! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Pam/Sulien: Let it rip!!
(Pam and Sulien pull off powerful Beyjitzu Launches, Salamander starts bouncing high around the stadium)
Hanami: Wow, Salamander jumps its way to the center!!
(Pegasus takes the center, Salamander hits Pegasus with a jumping barrage of strikes)
Me: *Gasps* Pegasus can’t do anything against a jumping bey!
Raina: Don’t underestimate Pam, I’m sure he’s got something up his sleeve!
Pam: Peaceful Feather Storm!!
(Salamander gets sucked in the tornado and gets sent flying into the wall)
Pam: Oh yeah!!
(Salamander jumps off the wall and hits Pegasus with a strong strike)
Pam: What the?!
Hanami: Salamander used its ten blades to disperse damage from that impact!
Sulien: Salamander is stronger than you think!
(Salamander hits Pegasus hard, Pegasus starts wobbling)
Pam: Grr!!
Hanami: Pegasus just took a strong blow to the face!!
Sulien: Salamander!!
(Sulien’s Resonance Aura flares up Salamander blazes out of the bey, Salamander slams into the wall and gets sent flying)
Sulien: Rain Of Swordfire!!
(Salamander crashes down on Pegasus, Pegasus bursts)
Pam: *Gasps*
Referee: It’s Flare Salamander with a burst finish!! The winner is Sulien Genji!!
(Pam falls to the ground)
Sulien: Easy.
(Sulien walks away)
Hanami: After a sudden dive-bombs on Pegasus Salamander bursts Pegasus’ face off the stadium!!
~In The Hallway~
(I run up to Pam)
Me: Pam! Are you ok?
Pam: Yeah.
Raina: Are you sure?
Pam: Yes, I’ve just gotta train harder!
Raina: Don’t worry Pam! I’m gonna win my battle for you!!
this episode is cool, didnt see any grammar, plot, character, story, or writing problems!
Yes it was nice.
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 12, 2021
Beyjitzu is going on a small 1-week break so I can work on the Finale For Dynachi so swing by there!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Jul. 12, 2021
(Jul. 12, 2021 5:57 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Beyjitzu is going on a small 1-week break so I can work on the Finale For Dynachi so swing by there!!
k
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Jul. 12, 2021
“Me and Pam pull of beyjitzu launcher” don’t you mean Launches?
Is it Sam or Suilen cause I’m not sure you said that in the fanfic like “Sam Genji” but then it said
Suilen: Pegasus will burn!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 12, 2021
(Jul. 12, 2021 9:21 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: “Me and Pam pull of beyjitzu launcher” don’t you mean Launches?
Is it Sam or Suilen cause I’m not sure you said that in the fanfic like “Sam Genji” but then it said
Suilen: Pegasus will burn!
I changed the name to Sulien mid way so I might've missed that
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Jul. 12, 2021
(Jul. 12, 2021 9:35 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 12, 2021 9:21 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: “Me and Pam pull of beyjitzu launcher” don’t you mean Launches?
Is it Sam or Suilen cause I’m not sure you said that in the fanfic like “Sam Genji” but then it said
Suilen: Pegasus will burn!
I changed the name to Sulien mid way so I might've missed that
K (sorry if I sounded rude)
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 12, 2021
(Jul. 12, 2021 9:39 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Jul. 12, 2021 9:35 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I changed the name to Sulien mid way so I might've missed that
K (sorry if I sounded rude)
Nah, your good
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Jul. 12, 2021
(Jul. 12, 2021 9:43 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 12, 2021 9:39 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: K (sorry if I sounded rude)
Nah, your good
Okay
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu (Name Contest) - BeybladeManiac0 - Jul. 13, 2021
(Jul. 08, 2021 9:43 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 08, 2021 9:39 PM)TylerOfChaos Wrote: Blader: Ryan Evenos
Persona: cocky
Age: 11
Appearance: Messy, Spiky, Black and Purple hair, 4'7
Bey: Tenebris Reaper (attack type, counterclockwise rotation, 2 bladed, chassis 3a (rage longinus chassis)
wow bro i actually made an aether helios lol. one of its moves is Swirling Aether
Srry Ty but currently I'm not having any character contests
Chapter 20 is out!!
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 20
Junior World Championships!!!
~In America’s Arena~
Receptionist: Perseus Nakano, Pam Hope, Aiden Kusaba, and Raina Reinhart! You are all registered for the tournament!!
Me/Aiden/Raina/Pam: Awesome!!
Valt: You guys better win!
Me: Don’t worry I will!!
(Oribe walks up to the Receptionist)
Oribe: Sign me up.
Receptionist: I’ll need your first and last name!
Oribe: Oribe Abiko.
Receptionist: I’ll need you to put your bey logger here.
(Oribe places his Bey Logger on the machine)
Receptionist: Thank you! We look forward to--
(Oribe walks away)
Receptionist: How rude! Hmp!
Shu: (Something seems different about him).
Pam: Shu? Did you say something?
Shu: Nothing.
(We head back to the Raging Bulls)
Shu: How about we do some practice?
Me: Sure!
Pam: I’m going first!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Pam/Robot: Let it rip!!
Pam: Take the center! Pegasus!!
(Pegasus locks down the center, The Robot’s bey starts attacking)
Shu (Thoughts): Wow, he's a master of defending while keeping her stamina in check, Pegasus is a strong bey!
(The Robot’s bey sends Pegasus flying up the slope)
Pam: Peaceful Thunder!!
(Pegasus counterstrikes, The robot’s bey gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Pam: Well alright!
Hikaru: I want a shot at this!!
Shu: Give it a go.
All: 3! 2! 1!
Hikaru/Robot: Let it rip!!
(The Robot’s bey takes the center, Helios starts attacking)
Hikaru: Take ‘em down! Helios!!
(Helios’ flare blazes wildly, Helios speeds up and knocks it out of the stadium)
Hikaru: Oh yeah!!
Hyuga: I wanna kablam them out of there!!
Raina: Um, they do realize we're the ones battling, right?
Valt: A little practice doesn't hurt anyone!
(My stomach growls)
Me: Sorry, I haven’t eaten in a while.
Valt: You should try Shu’s spaghetti!!
Raina: Shu makes spaghetti?
Valt: Yup, it’s the best thing in the world!!
Shu: I wouldn’t say best.
Me: I wanna try some!
Shu: I guess I’ll start making some.
~In The Cafeteria 15 minutes later~
(Shu comes out of the kitchen with a big plate of spaghetti and places it on the table)
Valt: This is gonna be good!!
(We all put some spaghetti on our plates)
Me: Let’s dive in!
(We slowly put the fork in our mouths, the whole room goes silent)
Shu: So?
All (Except Shu): It’s so good!!
Hyuga: This is the best spaghetti ever!!
Hikaru: I think Dad would be upset if he heard that!
(Hyuga falls asleep)
Hikaru: I can’t believe it, he liked it so much he fell asleep!
Valt: This tastes better than ever!!
~10 Minutes Later~
Raina: That was the best thing I’ve ever eaten!
Pam: That’s an understatement.
Aiden: I never wanna eat anything else again!
Me: I could live off this!
(Shu smiles)
Shu: Glad you liked it!
(Hyuga holds Hyperion up in the air)
Hyuga: Who wants to battle!!
(I glance at Hyperion’s driver)
Me: *Gasps*
(I run out of the cafeteria)
Valt: What’s up with him?
Aiden: It looks like he just had an idea.
(I run into the workroom)
Me: I can evolve Poseidon’s driver!
Poseidon: Can you now?
(Poseidon pulls me into a white void)
Me: With your new evolution you’ll be able to speed up like crazy!!
Poseidon: Wise decision!
(I get pulled out of the void)
Me: Let’s get started!
(I start working on the part)
Valt: I made some Beybread!
(Valt puts it to my side, I grab one and put it in my mouth as I work)
Me (Muffled): Thanks.
~1 hour later~
Me: It’s done!!
(I hold up the part)
Aiden: You’ve finally finished?
Me: Yup, this is the Accelerate Part!!
(I attach it to Poseidon)
Raina: Wow, this part looks amazing!
Pam: What does it do?
Me: It stops it from free spinning but makes it faster!!
Pam: Sweet!
Me: Raina! Wanna battle?
Raina: thought you’d never ask!
(Shu comes up)
Shu: I guess I’ll judge.
Me: Ok, thanks, Shu!
Shu: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Raina: Let it rip!!
Me: Flood Launch!!
(Poseidon hits Ridley with a quick barrage of attacks)
Raina: Pirate Launch!!
(Ridley starts picking up speed and countering all Poseidon’s attacks)
Me: Hydro Jet!!
(Poseidon leans on its driver, Poseidon starts picking up a lot of speed, Ridley gets sent flying)
Raina: RIDLEY!!!
(Raina’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Raina: Pirate Rush!!
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
(Poseidon and Ridley speed up, Poseidon and Ridley start clashing, the whole stadium blows up)
Me: Burst it!!
(Both beys get shot up in the air, Ridley bursts)
Raina: *Gasps*
Shu: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a burst finish!! The winner is Perseus Nakano!!
Me: Can I get a boo ya!!
Shu (Thoughts): Hydro Poseidon is a strong bey, I’ll have to keep evolving to keep up with it!
~The Next Day~
Hanami: Hello all you bladers!! Today we’ll be starting the ultimate Junior World Championships!! Today the very few 16 competitors we have will be battling it out to go out to the world stage with our legendary bladers!! We’ll be starting our first round in A group very soon!!
Me: I’m in A Group! What group are you guys in?
Pam: I’m in A Group as well!!
Adam: I’m in B Group!!
Raina: So am I! Get ready to lose Aiden!
Aiden: Hah, in your dreams!
Pam: You’re going down Hydro King!
Me: You can dream!
(The first match is… Ben Aoki Vs Perseus Nakano)
Aiden: We’ll be cheering for you buddy!
Me: Thanks, but I’ll win anyway!
(I walk up to the stage)
Hanami: And there he is!! Running his way to his first match!!
Ben: Ready to lose kid?
Me: You should be asking yourself that question!
Referee: First battle! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Ben: Let it rip!!
Me: Hydro Geyser!!
(Poseidon bursts Ben’s bey)
Ben: No way!!
Referee: Hydro Poseidon claims 2 points with a burst finish!! Perseus Nakano wins with a score of 2-0!!
Hanami: Hydro Poseidon a bey we barely know about just burst the daylights out of Ben’s bey!!
Me: I’m gonna keep bursting beys!!
Good chapter! Lol Shu cooks spaghetti faster than Papyrus.
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Jul. 13, 2021
UnseenBurst so here I’ll rate Chapter 23
Grammar: 4.2/5 I notice some mistakes like how you made Suilen become sam I was confused
Dialogue: 5/5
Characters: 5/5 you really brought them to life you know I could understand there feeling very much!
Plot: 4/5 so in one of the scenes I couldn’t understand where they where but besides that this was good!
Writing: 5/5 it’s nice some times I wanna steal your writing style lol
Length: 5/5 Nice! It’s like more than average long!
Over all: 28/30 this was good I like it!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 13, 2021
(Jul. 13, 2021 2:27 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: UnseenBurst so here I’ll rate Chapter 23
Grammar: 4.2/5 I notice some mistakes like how you made Suilen become sam I was confused
Dialogue: 5/5
Characters: 5/5 you really brought them to life you know I could understand there feeling very much!
Plot: 4/5 so in one of the scenes I couldn’t understand where they where but besides that this was good!
Writing: 5/5 it’s nice some times I wanna steal your writing style lol
Length: 5/5 Nice! It’s like more than average long!
Over all: 28/30 this was good I like it!
I just wanna say, you're really good at rating when you rate my stuff I know exactly what I need to improve! Thanks so much!! 
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Jul. 14, 2021
(Jul. 13, 2021 11:17 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 13, 2021 2:27 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: UnseenBurst so here I’ll rate Chapter 23
Grammar: 4.2/5 I notice some mistakes like how you made Suilen become sam I was confused
Dialogue: 5/5
Characters: 5/5 you really brought them to life you know I could understand there feeling very much!
Plot: 4/5 so in one of the scenes I couldn’t understand where they where but besides that this was good!
Writing: 5/5 it’s nice some times I wanna steal your writing style lol
Length: 5/5 Nice! It’s like more than average long!
Over all: 28/30 this was good I like it!
I just wanna say, you're really good at rating when you rate my stuff I know exactly what I need to improve! Thanks so much!! No problem!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - UnseenBurst - Jul. 15, 2021
So I decided to create Percy in IRL he's way taller then I want him to be but whatever here it is Also Chapter 36 is out on Dynachi! so check that out!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - LegendJustice - Jul. 16, 2021
i like it!
RE: Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu - GenesisBlader - Jul. 16, 2021
(Jul. 16, 2021 6:53 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: i like it!
same, he kinda looks like he's from britain (which is not a problem) lol
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