(Nov. 09, 2020  11:54 PM)kai edits Wrote: Warning this chapter contains blood,suicide and more scary stuff. I will not be held responsible for you hating this.

Part 3 chapter 14 goodbye shun!
Shun:I gather all of you today because I am leaving to go to Paris.
Free:wait what? Shun your really leaving me and your daughter and your sisters behind.
Shun:I have too. Sorry guys but I most go now.
Shun walks out of her house with her suitcase.
Shun:bye guys see you later.
Later in shun's mind.
Kisara:shun where are you going?
Sarah: what are doing with that rope?
Lana:whatever.
Erica:your gonna end your life.
Shun:I keep getting voices in my head to end my life but I want to-
Back in the real world.
Shu:shun are you ok?
Shu looks at shun's hands.
Shu:shun are you gonna-
Shun pushes shu aside.
Shun:let me do this. I feel empty like I should not even able to hang on. I can't even deal with the fact that mom and dad die right in fort of me stabbed to death. I have nothing nothing!
Shu:shun think about it your leaving your child behind.
Shun:I have nothing anymore just being numb. I can't go on.
Shu grabs the rope.
Shu:you are not gonna end your life for a dumb reason. Shun I need you to understand your throwing away a life of be happy.
Shun:I fought all the bladers in the world. There is no blading for me anymore.
Shu:what about maiden?
Shun grabs maiden.
Shun:this is goodbye.
Shun drops maiden on the floor.
Shu:your throwing away your title and your life for nothing.
Shun grabs maiden.
Shun:see you later.
Shun goes to the airport.
Later in Paris.
Shun:glad I am all alone now.
Eda:your shun kurenai right? The blader from hell?
Shun:yes but I quit beyblading sorry.
Eda grabs shun by the neck and slams her against the wall.
Eda:battle me.
Shun smirked.
Shun:kid you picked the wrong person.
Shun:maidens time!
*time stops*
Shun:good grief.
Eda:nice trick. I seen that many times.
Shun:hmm interesting.
Shun laughs.
Eda:what are you laughing about?
Shun:maiden has already touch this body!
A huge explosion happens.
Chapter end

(Nov. 10, 2020  4:29 AM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 09, 2020  11:54 PM)kai edits Wrote: Warning this chapter contains blood,suicide and more scary stuff. I will not be held responsible for you hating this.

Part 3 chapter 14 goodbye shun!
Shun:I gather all of you today because I am leaving to go to Paris.
Free:wait what? Shun your really leaving me and your daughter and your sisters behind.
Shun:I have too. Sorry guys but I most go now.
Shun walks out of her house with her suitcase.
Shun:bye guys see you later.
Later in shun's mind.
Kisara:shun where are you going?
Sarah: what are doing with that rope?
Lana:whatever.
Erica:your gonna end your life.
Shun:I keep getting voices in my head to end my life but I want to-
Back in the real world.
Shu:shun are you ok?
Shu looks at shun's hands.
Shu:shun are you gonna-
Shun pushes shu aside.
Shun:let me do this. I feel empty like I should not even able to hang on. I can't even deal with the fact that mom and dad die right in fort of me stabbed to death. I have nothing nothing!
Shu:shun think about it your leaving your child behind.
Shun:I have nothing anymore just being numb. I can't go on.
Shu grabs the rope.
Shu:you are not gonna end your life for a dumb reason. Shun I need you to understand your throwing away a life of be happy.
Shun:I fought all the bladers in the world. There is no blading for me anymore.
Shu:what about maiden?
Shun grabs maiden.
Shun:this is goodbye.
Shun drops maiden on the floor.
Shu:your throwing away your title and your life for nothing.
Shun grabs maiden.
Shun:see you later.
Shun goes to the airport.
Later in Paris.
Shun:glad I am all alone now.
Eda:your shun kurenai right? The blader from hell?
Shun:yes but I quit beyblading sorry.
Eda grabs shun by the neck and slams her against the wall.
Eda:battle me.
Shun smirked.
Shun:kid you picked the wrong person.
Shun:maidens time!
*time stops*
Shun:good grief.
Eda:nice trick. I seen that many times.
Shun:hmm interesting.
Shun laughs.
Eda:what are you laughing about?
Shun:maiden has already touch this body!
A huge explosion happens.
Chapter end

Shun is so strong.

(Nov. 10, 2020  4:34 AM)kai edits Wrote:

(Nov. 10, 2020  4:29 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: Shun is so strong.

She is basically me I refuse to quit even if broke every body in my body i will fight!. Shun is suffering since she basically see her parents died right in front of her. And also she has depression because of past. I will reveal more soon. Basically shun and me are the same person but I don't have siblings and my parents are alive and also I don't have my own bey I made myself.

(Nov. 10, 2020  4:36 AM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 10, 2020  4:34 AM)kai edits Wrote: She is basically me I refuse to quit even if broke every body in my body i will fight!. Shun is suffering since she basically see her parents died right in front of her. And also she has depression because of past. I will reveal more soon. Basically shun and me are the same person but I don't have siblings and my parents are alive and also I don't have my own bey I made myself.

Sad Story! I hope Shun and you get better

(Nov. 10, 2020  4:39 AM)kai edits Wrote:

(Nov. 10, 2020  4:36 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: Sad Story! I hope Shun and you get better

I mean I due suffer from depression and anxiety disorder. And thanks. Also I don't have multiple personality disorder but I feel shun and me we are haunted by our past.

(Nov. 10, 2020  4:40 AM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 10, 2020  4:39 AM)kai edits Wrote: I mean I due suffer from depression and anxiety disorder. And thanks. Also I don't have multiple personality disorder but I feel shun and me we are haunted by our past.

I am scared of life

(Nov. 10, 2020  5:01 AM)kai edits Wrote:

(Nov. 10, 2020  4:40 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: I am scared of life

Did you enjoy beyblade burst apocalypse so far?

(Nov. 16, 2020  8:31 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: I forgot this fanfic still existed lol

(Nov. 16, 2020  8:48 PM)kai edits Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  8:31 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: I forgot this fanfic still existed lol

What you don't want it to exist? if so I will ask a mod to delete

(Nov. 16, 2020  8:49 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  8:48 PM)kai edits Wrote: What you don't want it to exist? if so I will ask a mod to delete

No not that. I meant that I forgot Apocalypse is still going on

(Nov. 16, 2020  8:50 PM)kai edits Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  8:49 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: No not that. I meant that I forgot Apocalypse is still going on

Well due to my band and school I guess the next and final chapter will come on Christmas day(my birthday)

(Nov. 16, 2020  8:50 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  8:50 PM)kai edits Wrote: Well due to my band and school I guess the next and final chapter will come on Christmas day(my birthday)

oh ok. Happy early birthday

(Nov. 16, 2020  8:51 PM)kai edits Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  8:50 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: oh ok. Happy early birthday

Thanks. The final chapter I meant the arc/part.

(Nov. 16, 2020  9:05 PM)kai edits Wrote: Part 3 chapter 15 goodbye forever everyone! Part 1
Eda:nani?
A huge explosion comes from where shun is standing.
Shun:you got lucky.
Shun breaths heavily.
Eda:shun battle me.
Later.
Alice:I wonder how shun's doing.
A huge explosion happens.
Alice:what was that.
Shun's body is sent flying into the glass window of shun's house.
Alice:shun are you already.
Shun coughs up blood.
Shun:maiden!
Shun struggles to reach for maiden.
Eda:so at long last the immortal maiden of destruction is gonna die.
Shun gets up while breathing heavily.
Shun:go maiden!
3 2 1 go shoot!
Eda:go!
Eda's bey hits maiden into the air.
Shun:useless! maiden!
Maiden hits wall.
Shun:what?
Eda:my bey is stronger then your! Shun prepare to die.
Shun:if I can't win in this body then I use my newly master ability!
Shun's earrings glow blue.
Shun:haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Maiden!
Maiden glows blue.
Shun:Guardian's fusion!
Chapter end!
Skit 2
Shun:Kai edits why you make me like so dumb in that chapter?
Kai:guess flying into Windows is cool!
Shun:your lucky I don't slap you right now with my hand.

(Nov. 16, 2020  9:06 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  9:05 PM)kai edits Wrote: Part 3 chapter 15 goodbye forever everyone! Part 1
Eda:nani?
A huge explosion comes from where shun is standing.
Shun:you got lucky.
Shun breaths heavily.
Eda:shun battle me.
Later.
Alice:I wonder how shun's doing.
A huge explosion happens.
Alice:what was that.
Shun's body is sent flying into the glass window of shun's house.
Alice:shun are you already.
Shun coughs up blood.
Shun:maiden!
Shun struggles to reach for maiden.
Eda:so at long last the immortal maiden of destruction is gonna die.
Shun gets up while breathing heavily.
Shun:go maiden!
3 2 1 go shoot!
Eda:go!
Eda's bey hits maiden into the air.
Shun:useless! maiden!
Maiden hits wall.
Shun:what?
Eda:my bey is stronger then your! Shun prepare to die.
Shun:if I can't win in this body then I use my newly master ability!
Shun's earrings glow blue.
Shun:haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Maiden!
Maiden glows blue.
Shun:Guardian's fusion!
Chapter end!
Skit 2
Shun:Kai edits why you make me like so dumb in that chapter?
Kai:guess flying into Windows is cool!
Shun:your lucky I don't slap you right now with my hand.

Chapter rating: 9/10
Very funny lol

(Nov. 16, 2020  9:08 PM)kai edits Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  9:06 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Chapter rating: 9/10
Very funny lol

Bro shun be fire by flying through the window lol.
Eda is villain now

(Nov. 16, 2020  9:09 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  9:08 PM)kai edits Wrote: Bro shun be fire by flying through the window lol.
Eda is villain now

yup, lol.
New ship: Shun X Window

(Nov. 16, 2020  9:10 PM)kai edits Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  9:09 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: yup, lol.
New ship: Shun X Window

Lol shun x window is better than shun x free lol.

(Nov. 19, 2020  4:38 AM)kai edits Wrote: Part 3 chapter 15 goodbye forever everyone! Part 2
A bright light comes from shun.
Kisara:alright!
Eda:still useless go Hiatus!
Hiatus hits maiden.
Kisara:hmm. Your too slow!
Maiden dodges the attack.
Eda:what?
Maiden hits Hiatus.
Kisara:sorry you were wide open!
Eda:pathetic mortal!
Hiatus hits maiden into the air.
Kisara:now I should be warmed up. Here I come!
In shun's mind.
Shun:eda is strong how can we beat her?
Sarah:I don't know.
Erica:me too.
Kai:tch you think I know idiot.
Lana:I might know a way.
Later at shun's house.
Shun:is that all you got?
Eda:no go hiatus finish this human off!
Hiatus hits maiden.
Shun:die!
A huge explosion comes from maiden.
Eda:hmmm what power.
Shun is sent flying into another window.
Eda:damn human die already!
Shun coughs up blood.
Shun:I can't die. I will fight to protect my sister's and free.
A aura forms around shun and maiden.
Shun:arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh maiden!
Shun hair turns blue and maiden sends hiatus flying into the air.
Eda:oh you achieved a new form how interesting you mortals are but I must end you! Hiatus!
Shu:that's enough!
Spriggan hits maiden and hiatus into the air.
Shun:why did you follow me here eda!
Maiden and hiatus land into the owners hands.
Eda:watch out I will destroy you and free. Goodbye shun I hope to break maiden once more.
Chapter end.
Chapter 16 shun's discovery/Hiatus's rampage

(Nov. 19, 2020  7:08 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote:

(Nov. 19, 2020  4:38 AM)kai edits Wrote: Part 3 chapter 15 goodbye forever everyone! Part 2
A bright light comes from shun.
Kisara:alright!
Eda:still useless go Hiatus!
Hiatus hits maiden.
Kisara:hmm. Your too slow!
Maiden dodges the attack.
Eda:what?
Maiden hits Hiatus.
Kisara:sorry you were wide open!
Eda:pathetic mortal!
Hiatus hits maiden into the air.
Kisara:now I should be warmed up. Here I come!
In shun's mind.
Shun:eda is strong how can we beat her?
Sarah:I don't know.
Erica:me too.
Kai:tch you think I know idiot.
Lana:I might know a way.
Later at shun's house.
Shun:is that all you got?
Eda:no go hiatus finish this human off!
Hiatus hits maiden.
Shun:die!
A huge explosion comes from maiden.
Eda:hmmm what power.
Shun is sent flying into another window.
Eda:damn human die already!
Shun coughs up blood.
Shun:I can't die. I will fight to protect my sister's and free.
A aura forms around shun and maiden.
Shun:arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh maiden!
Shun hair turns blue and maiden sends hiatus flying into the air.
Eda:oh you achieved a new form how interesting you mortals are but I must end you! Hiatus!
Shu:that's enough!
Spriggan hits maiden and hiatus into the air.
Shun:why did you follow me here eda!
Maiden and hiatus land into the owners hands.
Eda:watch out I will destroy you and free. Goodbye shun I hope to break maiden once more.
Chapter end.
Chapter 16 shun's discovery/Hiatus's rampage

these keep getting better!