(Nov. 01, 2020  1:54 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: Does it seem like a coincidence the main character keeps on winning every time or no?

(Nov. 01, 2020  2:03 AM)SacredXcalibur Wrote:

(Nov. 01, 2020  1:54 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: Does it seem like a coincidence the main character keeps on winning every time or no?

I think what he's trying to do is that since Shun wins every time its gonna create some character development when she loses.

(Nov. 01, 2020  9:54 AM)kai edits Wrote: Part 3 chapter 3 shun goes crazy?!/maiden vs spriggan!
During training with shu.
Shun collapses to her knees and coughs up a bit of blood.
Shun:is that all you got.
Shun wipes the blood off with hand.
Shu:no it's not. spriggan!
Spriggan hits maiden repeatedly.
Shun:ahhhhhhhhh.
Shun coughs up more blood.
Shun:more more increase my power. My mark burns with each attack that increases my flare. Keep attack more let me consume more power.
Shu:what wrong with you shun?
Maiden breaks free from spriggans attacks.
Shun:go maiden! Maidens collection!
Maiden hits spriggan and drains its spin and power.
Shu:what? Shun what are you doing.
Shun:increasing my flare.
Shu:shun get a grip of your self.
Shun:maiden!
Maiden hits spriggan once more.
Shun:die! Maidens recollection!
A huge explosion hits spriggan.
Shu:what?
Shun:arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
A random bey invades the attack and Maiden bursts.
???:looks like I made it in time.
It was Alice kurenai.
Alice:shun.
Rose Pegasus hits the wall and lands in Alice's hand.
Shun:what happened.
Shun puts her hand over her scar.
Shu:you lost control again.
Alice:you could of hurt yourself badly sis.
Shun:thank you very much i-
Shun collapses onto the floor suddenly.
Later.
Alice:I can't believe shun put so much into her battles.
Alice holds rose Pegasus tightly.
Alice:I guess I have to do the same.
Alice poses like Joseph joestar.
Alice:it's my time to help shun!
Chapter end

(Nov. 01, 2020  10:41 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: When will blacknight’s character be showcased? Also what will happen to the rest of the characters?

(Nov. 01, 2020  9:41 PM)kai edits Wrote: Part 3 chapter 4 bloom my flower awaken rose Pegasus!
Alice:shu is shun is going to be alright.
Shu:I think so. Why did heard something familiar what shun said. Her flare?
Shu looks at Alice in shook.
Alice:it can't be!
Shu:Lane did this.
Later.
Alice:Lane battle me.
Lane:why would i?
Alice:or are you scared of losing to me.
Lane:your on.
3 2 1 go shoot.
Lane:go Lucifer.
Lucifer goes into the center.
Alice:go Pegasus!
Pegasus hits Lucifer and breaks through the barrier.
Lane:what?
Alice:go Pegasus! Rose recollection!
Pegasus hits Lucifer once more then Lucifer was hit with a massive explosion.
Lane:lucifer!
Alice:it's over!
Lucifer burst midair then Lucifers chassis snaps into two.
Lane:why did you that?
Alice:you put shun in coma by transfers some of your flare into her bey.
Lane:she was about to lose her match and won it with my flare. I wanted her to win more.
Later.
Alice picks up shun's locket.
Alice:I wonder what's in here.
It was a picture of shun and free.
Alice:I will forever love this picture. This is all I have left of you shun.
Tears run down Alice's face.
Later.
Alice:I hope shun wakes up.
Shun:where am i?
Akira and alice:your in the hospital.
Shun:who are you?
Chapter end

(Nov. 01, 2020  11:09 PM)kai edits Wrote:

(Nov. 01, 2020  10:41 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: When will blacknight’s character be showcased? Also what will happen to the rest of the characters?

Soon in part 4 or 6

(Nov. 01, 2020  11:16 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:

(Nov. 01, 2020  11:09 PM)kai edits Wrote: Soon in part 4 or 6

Cool, what will happen to those characters that weren’t selected? Will they ever debut or are they just history?

(Nov. 01, 2020  11:34 PM)kai edits Wrote:

(Nov. 01, 2020  11:16 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: Cool, what will happen to those characters that weren’t selected? Will they ever debut or are they just history?

It's a surprise.

(Nov. 01, 2020  11:39 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:

(Nov. 01, 2020  11:34 PM)kai edits Wrote: It's a surprise.

Also, I know that for my character I gave you this long dramatic backstory, but I would like it if you choose that (keep the bio the same, just mold the backstory to you liking).

(Nov. 01, 2020  11:40 PM)kai edits Wrote:

(Nov. 01, 2020  11:39 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: Also, I know that for my character I gave you this long dramatic backstory, but I would like it if you choose that (keep the bio the same, just mold the backstory to you liking).

Ok.
Here a teaser for what's going to happen to shun.
Shun:where am I?
4 voices speak out of no where.
???:Your one of us now a personality!

(Nov. 01, 2020  11:45 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:

(Nov. 01, 2020  11:40 PM)kai edits Wrote: Ok.
Here a teaser for what's going to happen to shun.
Shun:where am I?
4 voices speak out of no where.
???:Your one of us now a personality!

That’s pretty random

(Nov. 01, 2020  11:47 PM)kai edits Wrote:

(Nov. 01, 2020  11:45 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: That’s pretty random

It's a huge hint. If watch tokyo ghoul it's a huge reference since kaneki has multiple person syndrome. Try to put the pieces today and you have what happens to shun.

(Nov. 01, 2020  11:53 PM)beykid44 Wrote: no take mine out i dont want my character to be a personality

(Nov. 02, 2020  1:15 PM)kai edits Wrote: Part 3 chapter 6 Maidenvs Lucifer!/shun is back!
In shun's mind.
Shun:how is this going to work out?
Sarah:I guess you can be in control for now the rest of us will just stay here.
Shun:alright thanks.
Back in the real world.
Shun wakes up.
Akira:good morning shun!
Shun:good morning.
Shun gets out of bed.
Shun:what?
Shun collapses onto the floor.
Akira:shun you ok.
Shun:who's shun?
Akira:it's you.
Later.
Lane:Alice I need shun to battle me.
Alice:she is in no condition to battle. Maybe if kisara takes over shun's body it might work.
Later.
Alice grabs shun.
Alice:I need to take you somewhere.
Shun:wait where?
Alice:it's a surprise.
Lane:shun we meet again.
Shun:who are you? And who's shun?
Lane:battle me!
Shun:sure but I don't remember how to beyblade.
A bright light comes from shun.
Kisara:alright! I am back! Lets go lane.
3 2 1 go shoot
Lucifer hits maiden.
Lane:go Lucifer! flare drain!
Lucifer drains the flare from shun's bey.
Kisara:what? What's going on.
Kisara unfuses.
Shun:am I back?
Akira:shun are you ok.
Shun:yes I am akira.
Alice:she's back.
Shun:good grief. Go maiden!
Maiden knocks Lucifer into the air.
Shun:take on my birthright! Maidens recollection release element.
A huge burst of energy hits Lucifer.
Shun:this is my power!
Lucifer burst midair.
Alice:you won.
Shun looks at her hands.
Shun:i- i- don't know who I am really.
Tears run down shun's cheek.
Alice:shun you ok.
Shun runs away.
Alice:I guess she done.
Alice smiles.
Lane:happy now. Their is a small piece of my flare in shun's bey still.
Lane laughs.
Lane:it's too late shun is going to lose her memory again.
Alice punchs lane in the face really hard.
Alice:pathetic as always. I can't believe shun wanted to marry such a man like your self.
Lane:it's your fault for not protecting her. I-.
Alice punchs Lane hard enough to knock him off his feet.
Alice:don't mess with my family or I will end you.
Alice throws something at lane.
Alice:bye Lane.
Alice poses like Joseph joestar.
Chapter end.

(Nov. 02, 2020  3:45 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 02, 2020  1:15 PM)kai edits Wrote: Part 3 chapter 6 Maidenvs Lucifer!/shun is back!
In shun's mind.
Shun:how is this going to work out?
Sarah:I guess you can be in control for now the rest of us will just stay here.
Shun:alright thanks.
Back in the real world.
Shun wakes up.
Akira:good morning shun!
Shun:good morning.
Shun gets out of bed.
Shun:what?
Shun collapses onto the floor.
Akira:shun you ok.
Shun:who's shun?
Akira:it's you.
Later.
Lane:Alice I need shun to battle me.
Alice:she is in no condition to battle. Maybe if kisara takes over shun's body it might work.
Later.
Alice grabs shun.
Alice:I need to take you somewhere.
Shun:wait where?
Alice:it's a surprise.
Lane:shun we meet again.
Shun:who are you? And who's shun?
Lane:battle me!
Shun:sure but I don't remember how to beyblade.
A bright light comes from shun.
Kisara:alright! I am back! Lets go lane.
3 2 1 go shoot
Lucifer hits maiden.
Lane:go Lucifer! flare drain!
Lucifer drains the flare from shun's bey.
Kisara:what? What's going on.
Kisara unfuses.
Shun:am I back?
Akira:shun are you ok.
Shun:yes I am akira.
Alice:she's back.
Shun:good grief. Go maiden!
Maiden knocks Lucifer into the air.
Shun:take on my birthright! Maidens recollection release element.
A huge burst of energy hits Lucifer.
Shun:this is my power!
Lucifer burst midair.
Alice:you won.
Shun looks at her hands.
Shun:i- i- don't know who I am really.
Tears run down shun's cheek.
Alice:shun you ok.
Shun runs away.
Alice:I guess she done.
Alice smiles.
Lane:happy now. Their is a small piece of my flare in shun's bey still.
Lane laughs.
Lane:it's too late shun is going to lose her memory again.
Alice punchs lane in the face really hard.
Alice:pathetic as always. I can't believe shun wanted to marry such a man like your self.
Lane:it's your fault for not protecting her. I-.
Alice punchs Lane hard enough to knock him off his feet.
Alice:don't mess with my family or I will end you.
Alice throws something at lane.
Alice:bye Lane.
Alice poses like Joseph joestar.
Chapter end.

It seems like Lane messed with the wrong girls

(Nov. 02, 2020  3:53 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Man in Sparking Lane has plot armour.
But in Apocalypse Lane gets beykicked