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RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - ColdFlames13 - Aug. 28, 2021
(Aug. 28, 2021 7:40 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: For some reason I didn't release Chapter 16 I don't know how that happened but here it is.
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Beyblade Burst TechnoX
Chapter 16
Rival Vs Rival Or Friend Vs Friend?
Me: Go, Shoot!
(I pull off a powerful Techno Shoot, Valt walks in the room)
Valt: Hey, Unova! What’re you doing?
Me: I’m practicing for my battle with Hinote.
Valt: Cool, want some advice?
Me: Yeah, that’d really help!
Valt: Remember, no matter how stressed you are, Ultravor’s always right next to you.
Me: Thanks, I’ll go to the finals and take Oliver down!
Valt: Yeah, he thinks he knows what Valkyrie wants, but in reality, he doesn’t.
Me: What do you mean?
Valt: You know how you can talk to Ultravor, right?
Me: How’d you--
Valt: Everyone’s always wondering why you space off mid-battle!
Me/Valt: *Laughs*
Valt: Anyways, you’re both in sync because you can connect to Ultravor’s heart, but Oliver’s only thinking about what he wants, he’s not thinking about Valkyrie at all.
Me: Don’t worry, I’m totally winning this thing, then I’ll be battling alongside you guys!
Valt: I’m looking forward to it!
(Valt leaves the dorm, Aleph walks in)
Aleph: Can you throw me my pillow?
Me: Um, ok.
(I throw a pillow at Aleph, Aleph starts screaming in it)
Aleph (Muffled): It’s not fair! Ugh!! I was supposed to be the one who won!!
Me: Are you ok?
Aleph: It’s been my dream for a long time to battle with BC Sol’s Legends, and just when I get the chance, he gets in my way and decides to go evil.
Me: If it makes you feel better, I promise I’ll take him down in the finals.
Aleph: Are you sure?
Me: What do you mean by that?
Aleph: I just don’t want you to… leave me, by myself… again.
Me: I’m your Best Friend, I’ll never leave, I’d like to see you try making me leave!
Aleph: Well then, I guess you better not lose!
Me: Ha, I won’t lose like you did!
Aleph: What’re you talking about?! I was going easy on the kid!
Me: Your excuse for losing!!
(Me and Aleph start bickering)
~Deep In The Forest~
Free: Go, Shoot!
(Free pulls off a powerful Techno Shoot)
Free: You can come out, I know you're there.
(Hinote comes out behind the tree)
Free: Huh, I thought Sisco was spying on me again.
Hinote: Free De La Hoya, I challenge you to a battle!
Free: My question is… Why do you wanna battle me?
Hinote: I’ve got an important match with my friend tomorrow, I wanna hone my skills with one of the best Bladers in the world!
Free: Alright, I’ll take you on.
Hinote: Ready?
Free/Hinote: 3! 2! 1! Go, Shoot!
(Free and Hinote pull off powerful Techno Shoots)
Hinote: Go for the center, Heimdall!
Free: Go, Fafnir!
(Heimdall takes the center, Fafnir hits Heimdall with slow weak attacks)
Hinote: Is this seriously all you’ve got?
Free: Watch Heimdall’s spin go all away.
Hinote: *Gasps*
(Fafnir starts clashing with Heimdall, Fafnir starts absorbing Heimdall’s spin)
Hinote: Guarding Stance!!
(Heimdall brushes off Fafnir’s attack, Fafnir tries absorbing Heimdall’s spin but Heimdall blocks it)
Free: So, you’re still hanging in there?
Hinote: Yeah, and I’m not going to stop in till I defeat you!
Free: Alright then. Go, Fafnir!
(Fafnir speeds up and slams into Heimdall, Fafnir speeds up)
Free: Shadow Blow!
(Fafnir leans on its driver and slams into Heimdall sending it flying up the stadium slope)
Hinote: Heimdall!!
(Hinote’s Resonance Aura flares up Heimdall blazes out of the Bey)
Hinote: Now, Defender Crash!!
(Heimdall slams into Fafnir sending it flying)
Free: Aah! Fafnir!!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up Fafnir blazes out of the Bey)
Free: Rivet Break!!
(Fafnir’s driver sinks in, Fafnir speeds up and slams into Heimdall, Heimdall bursts)
Hinote: *Gasps*
Free: Well, what do you know, it’s a burst.
Hinote: One more time! I--
Free: People always come up and battle me because they think it’ll make them stronger, but in reality, I can’t make anyone stronger, that’s up to you.
Hinote: *Gasps*
Free: I suggest getting a good night’s sleep before your match tomorrow.
(Free walks away)
Hinote: He can’t make people stronger, what does that mean?
~The Next Day~
Raul: Alright, we’ll be completing the last Semi-Final match! The winner of this match will face Oliver in the finals to get a spot on BC Sol’s team! Now, First battle!
Hinote: Even though we’re friends, you’re still going down!
Me: I’d like to see you try, I’ll be going all out!
(I put the Glaze Ring On Ultravor)
Aleph: C’mon Unova, win this!
Sisco: Which one do you think will win? The American Flag Haired runt or the Defense Wizard?!
Honcho: They both seem like pretty good Bladers, but didn’t Hinote beat Unova a couple of days ago? I’m voting for him!
Free: Unova’s gonna win.
All: *Gasps*
Free: I battled Hinote yesterday night and I can safely say that Unova will win.
Valt: I think Unova will win too, he’s a strong Blader!
Honcho: I bet you both FIVE lollipops that Hinote will win.
Free: Bring it, I’m always in for a good gamble.
Valt: Get those lollipops ready Honcho!
Raul: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Hinote: Go, Shoot!
(Me and Hinote pull off powerful Techno Shoots)
Me: Techno Shoot!
(Ultravor hits Heimdall with a powerful barrage of attacks)
Hinote: Guarding Stance!!
(Heimdall blocks all Ultravor’s attacks)
Me: Glaze Crash!!
(Ultravor speeds up and slams down on Heimdall sending it down to the ground)
Hinote: Not gonna happen!!
(Heimdall shoots back up sending Ultravor flying out of the stadium)
Me: *Gasps*
Raul: Its Sentry Heimdall with an Over Finish! Hinote Miziuki claims 1 point!
Hinote: What’d you think of that!
Me: Grr!
Sisco: Better hold onto the lollipops, Honcho!
Honcho: I’m already on it!
Valt: The battle isn’t over yet, so, you better get ready to cough up those lollipops!
Me: Ultravor, what do I do?
Ultravor: Stop being so careful!
Me: *Gasps*
(I get pulled into a white void)
Ultravor: Why are you playing on the Defense?
Me: Last time I tried attacking he completely dominated me, I’ve got to go in with another strategy!
Ultravor: No.
Me: What do you mean no?
Ultravor: We’ve gotten way stronger and our attacks have gotten way stronger, don’t you believe in me?
Me: *Gasps* Of course I do!
Ultravor: Then let’s attack!
Me: Yeah, what was I thinking?!
Ultravor: That’s the Unova I know.
(I get pulled out of the white void)
Raul: Second battle!
(I put the Techno Ring on Ultravor)
Me: Hinote, will be attacking in this match!
(I hold Ultravor up)
Hinote: I’ll block all those attacks!
Raul: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Hinote: Go, Shoot!
(Me and Hinote pull off powerful Techno Shoots)
Me: Charge, Techno Shoot!
(Ultravor hits Heimdall with a powerful barrage of attacks, Heimdall gets hit off balance with each hit)
Hinote: *Gasps* Take the center!
Me: I won’t let you!
(Ultravor hits Heimdall away from the center with powerful blows, Heimdall gets hit up the stadium slope)
Hinote: Now, Defender Crash!!
Me: Counter, Techno Discharge!!
(Heimdall and Ultravor slam into each other with power, Heimdall gets shot out of the stadium)
Me: Yes!
Raul: It’s Techno Ultravor with an Over Finish! Unova Bashida claims 1 point!
Aleph: Yeah, that’s how you do it!
(Hinote picks up Heimdall)
Hinote: That’s the only fluke you're getting!
Me: Good to know, because that wasn’t a fluke!
Raul: Third Battle!
Me: I’m gonna send Heimdall flying!
Hinote: Ha, I’d like to see you even move it from the center!
(Me and Hinote’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Valt: Woah, looks like the Third Battle is gonna be intense!
Sisco: Yeah, and you’re totally losing this bet!
Free: I wouldn’t be so sure.
Honcho: Don’t worry, Honcho’s always right and I say Hinote’s gonna win!
Raul: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Hinote: Go, Shoot!
(Me and Hinote pull off powerful Techno Shoots)
Me: Go, Techno Shoot!
Hinote: Guarding Stance!!
(Ultravor hits Heimdall with a powerful barrage of attacks, Heimdall gets sent flying across the stadium)
Hinote: Heimdall!!
(Hinote’s Resonance Aura flares up Heimdall blazes out of the Bey)
Me: Ultravor!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Ultravor blazes out of the Bey)
Hinote: Defender Crash!!
Me: Techno Strike!!
(Heimdall and Ultravor slam into each other, Ultravor gets sent flying sky high)
Me: *Gasps*
Sisco: Looks like it's over!
Me: Finish it with Techno Discharge!!
All: *Gasps*
(Ultravor crashes down on Heimdall, a huge explosion ouccers, Heimdall bursts)
Hinote: *Gasps*
Raul: It’s Techno Ultravor with a Burst Finish! With a score of 1-3, Unova Bashida is the winner!!
Me: Yes, I won!!
Sisco: Dang it, looks like Unova won.
Honcho: *Sighs* Here they are.
(Honcho gives Free and Valt five lollipops each)
Free: How about we change up the deal?
Honcho/Sisco: *Gasps*
~Later That Day In My Dorm~
(Someone knocks on my door)
Me/Aleph/Hinote: Come in!
(Valt comes in the door with a lollipop in his mouth)
Valt; Hey, guys, wanna see something cool?
Me: Sure, what is it?
(We go in the Main Gym and see Honcho and Sisco in clown suits)
Sisco: Don’t you dare laugh!!
Honcho: I’m never doubting you again!
All: *Laughs*
Sisco: I told you not to laugh!!
(Sisco chases after me Hinote and Aleph)
Me: *Laughs* Man, perks of winning!
Lol you posted 17 instead
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - UnseenBurst - Aug. 28, 2021
(Aug. 28, 2021 7:42 PM)ColdFlames13 Wrote:(Aug. 28, 2021 7:40 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: For some reason I didn't release Chapter 16 I don't know how that happened but here it is.
Spoiler (Click to View)
Beyblade Burst TechnoX
Chapter 16
Rival Vs Rival Or Friend Vs Friend?
Me: Go, Shoot!
(I pull off a powerful Techno Shoot, Valt walks in the room)
Valt: Hey, Unova! What’re you doing?
Me: I’m practicing for my battle with Hinote.
Valt: Cool, want some advice?
Me: Yeah, that’d really help!
Valt: Remember, no matter how stressed you are, Ultravor’s always right next to you.
Me: Thanks, I’ll go to the finals and take Oliver down!
Valt: Yeah, he thinks he knows what Valkyrie wants, but in reality, he doesn’t.
Me: What do you mean?
Valt: You know how you can talk to Ultravor, right?
Me: How’d you--
Valt: Everyone’s always wondering why you space off mid-battle!
Me/Valt: *Laughs*
Valt: Anyways, you’re both in sync because you can connect to Ultravor’s heart, but Oliver’s only thinking about what he wants, he’s not thinking about Valkyrie at all.
Me: Don’t worry, I’m totally winning this thing, then I’ll be battling alongside you guys!
Valt: I’m looking forward to it!
(Valt leaves the dorm, Aleph walks in)
Aleph: Can you throw me my pillow?
Me: Um, ok.
(I throw a pillow at Aleph, Aleph starts screaming in it)
Aleph (Muffled): It’s not fair! Ugh!! I was supposed to be the one who won!!
Me: Are you ok?
Aleph: It’s been my dream for a long time to battle with BC Sol’s Legends, and just when I get the chance, he gets in my way and decides to go evil.
Me: If it makes you feel better, I promise I’ll take him down in the finals.
Aleph: Are you sure?
Me: What do you mean by that?
Aleph: I just don’t want you to… leave me, by myself… again.
Me: I’m your Best Friend, I’ll never leave, I’d like to see you try making me leave!
Aleph: Well then, I guess you better not lose!
Me: Ha, I won’t lose like you did!
Aleph: What’re you talking about?! I was going easy on the kid!
Me: Your excuse for losing!!
(Me and Aleph start bickering)
~Deep In The Forest~
Free: Go, Shoot!
(Free pulls off a powerful Techno Shoot)
Free: You can come out, I know you're there.
(Hinote comes out behind the tree)
Free: Huh, I thought Sisco was spying on me again.
Hinote: Free De La Hoya, I challenge you to a battle!
Free: My question is… Why do you wanna battle me?
Hinote: I’ve got an important match with my friend tomorrow, I wanna hone my skills with one of the best Bladers in the world!
Free: Alright, I’ll take you on.
Hinote: Ready?
Free/Hinote: 3! 2! 1! Go, Shoot!
(Free and Hinote pull off powerful Techno Shoots)
Hinote: Go for the center, Heimdall!
Free: Go, Fafnir!
(Heimdall takes the center, Fafnir hits Heimdall with slow weak attacks)
Hinote: Is this seriously all you’ve got?
Free: Watch Heimdall’s spin go all away.
Hinote: *Gasps*
(Fafnir starts clashing with Heimdall, Fafnir starts absorbing Heimdall’s spin)
Hinote: Guarding Stance!!
(Heimdall brushes off Fafnir’s attack, Fafnir tries absorbing Heimdall’s spin but Heimdall blocks it)
Free: So, you’re still hanging in there?
Hinote: Yeah, and I’m not going to stop in till I defeat you!
Free: Alright then. Go, Fafnir!
(Fafnir speeds up and slams into Heimdall, Fafnir speeds up)
Free: Shadow Blow!
(Fafnir leans on its driver and slams into Heimdall sending it flying up the stadium slope)
Hinote: Heimdall!!
(Hinote’s Resonance Aura flares up Heimdall blazes out of the Bey)
Hinote: Now, Defender Crash!!
(Heimdall slams into Fafnir sending it flying)
Free: Aah! Fafnir!!
(Free’s Resonance Aura flares up Fafnir blazes out of the Bey)
Free: Rivet Break!!
(Fafnir’s driver sinks in, Fafnir speeds up and slams into Heimdall, Heimdall bursts)
Hinote: *Gasps*
Free: Well, what do you know, it’s a burst.
Hinote: One more time! I--
Free: People always come up and battle me because they think it’ll make them stronger, but in reality, I can’t make anyone stronger, that’s up to you.
Hinote: *Gasps*
Free: I suggest getting a good night’s sleep before your match tomorrow.
(Free walks away)
Hinote: He can’t make people stronger, what does that mean?
~The Next Day~
Raul: Alright, we’ll be completing the last Semi-Final match! The winner of this match will face Oliver in the finals to get a spot on BC Sol’s team! Now, First battle!
Hinote: Even though we’re friends, you’re still going down!
Me: I’d like to see you try, I’ll be going all out!
(I put the Glaze Ring On Ultravor)
Aleph: C’mon Unova, win this!
Sisco: Which one do you think will win? The American Flag Haired runt or the Defense Wizard?!
Honcho: They both seem like pretty good Bladers, but didn’t Hinote beat Unova a couple of days ago? I’m voting for him!
Free: Unova’s gonna win.
All: *Gasps*
Free: I battled Hinote yesterday night and I can safely say that Unova will win.
Valt: I think Unova will win too, he’s a strong Blader!
Honcho: I bet you both FIVE lollipops that Hinote will win.
Free: Bring it, I’m always in for a good gamble.
Valt: Get those lollipops ready Honcho!
Raul: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Hinote: Go, Shoot!
(Me and Hinote pull off powerful Techno Shoots)
Me: Techno Shoot!
(Ultravor hits Heimdall with a powerful barrage of attacks)
Hinote: Guarding Stance!!
(Heimdall blocks all Ultravor’s attacks)
Me: Glaze Crash!!
(Ultravor speeds up and slams down on Heimdall sending it down to the ground)
Hinote: Not gonna happen!!
(Heimdall shoots back up sending Ultravor flying out of the stadium)
Me: *Gasps*
Raul: Its Sentry Heimdall with an Over Finish! Hinote Miziuki claims 1 point!
Hinote: What’d you think of that!
Me: Grr!
Sisco: Better hold onto the lollipops, Honcho!
Honcho: I’m already on it!
Valt: The battle isn’t over yet, so, you better get ready to cough up those lollipops!
Me: Ultravor, what do I do?
Ultravor: Stop being so careful!
Me: *Gasps*
(I get pulled into a white void)
Ultravor: Why are you playing on the Defense?
Me: Last time I tried attacking he completely dominated me, I’ve got to go in with another strategy!
Ultravor: No.
Me: What do you mean no?
Ultravor: We’ve gotten way stronger and our attacks have gotten way stronger, don’t you believe in me?
Me: *Gasps* Of course I do!
Ultravor: Then let’s attack!
Me: Yeah, what was I thinking?!
Ultravor: That’s the Unova I know.
(I get pulled out of the white void)
Raul: Second battle!
(I put the Techno Ring on Ultravor)
Me: Hinote, will be attacking in this match!
(I hold Ultravor up)
Hinote: I’ll block all those attacks!
Raul: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Hinote: Go, Shoot!
(Me and Hinote pull off powerful Techno Shoots)
Me: Charge, Techno Shoot!
(Ultravor hits Heimdall with a powerful barrage of attacks, Heimdall gets hit off balance with each hit)
Hinote: *Gasps* Take the center!
Me: I won’t let you!
(Ultravor hits Heimdall away from the center with powerful blows, Heimdall gets hit up the stadium slope)
Hinote: Now, Defender Crash!!
Me: Counter, Techno Discharge!!
(Heimdall and Ultravor slam into each other with power, Heimdall gets shot out of the stadium)
Me: Yes!
Raul: It’s Techno Ultravor with an Over Finish! Unova Bashida claims 1 point!
Aleph: Yeah, that’s how you do it!
(Hinote picks up Heimdall)
Hinote: That’s the only fluke you're getting!
Me: Good to know, because that wasn’t a fluke!
Raul: Third Battle!
Me: I’m gonna send Heimdall flying!
Hinote: Ha, I’d like to see you even move it from the center!
(Me and Hinote’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Valt: Woah, looks like the Third Battle is gonna be intense!
Sisco: Yeah, and you’re totally losing this bet!
Free: I wouldn’t be so sure.
Honcho: Don’t worry, Honcho’s always right and I say Hinote’s gonna win!
Raul: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Hinote: Go, Shoot!
(Me and Hinote pull off powerful Techno Shoots)
Me: Go, Techno Shoot!
Hinote: Guarding Stance!!
(Ultravor hits Heimdall with a powerful barrage of attacks, Heimdall gets sent flying across the stadium)
Hinote: Heimdall!!
(Hinote’s Resonance Aura flares up Heimdall blazes out of the Bey)
Me: Ultravor!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Ultravor blazes out of the Bey)
Hinote: Defender Crash!!
Me: Techno Strike!!
(Heimdall and Ultravor slam into each other, Ultravor gets sent flying sky high)
Me: *Gasps*
Sisco: Looks like it's over!
Me: Finish it with Techno Discharge!!
All: *Gasps*
(Ultravor crashes down on Heimdall, a huge explosion ouccers, Heimdall bursts)
Hinote: *Gasps*
Raul: It’s Techno Ultravor with a Burst Finish! With a score of 1-3, Unova Bashida is the winner!!
Me: Yes, I won!!
Sisco: Dang it, looks like Unova won.
Honcho: *Sighs* Here they are.
(Honcho gives Free and Valt five lollipops each)
Free: How about we change up the deal?
Honcho/Sisco: *Gasps*
~Later That Day In My Dorm~
(Someone knocks on my door)
Me/Aleph/Hinote: Come in!
(Valt comes in the door with a lollipop in his mouth)
Valt; Hey, guys, wanna see something cool?
Me: Sure, what is it?
(We go in the Main Gym and see Honcho and Sisco in clown suits)
Sisco: Don’t you dare laugh!!
Honcho: I’m never doubting you again!
All: *Laughs*
Sisco: I told you not to laugh!!
(Sisco chases after me Hinote and Aleph)
Me: *Laughs* Man, perks of winning!
Lol you posted 17 instead
No, this was supposed to be Chapter 16 but I got mixed up, Ultravor Vs Valkyrie was actually supposed to be Chapter 17 I edited that post
RE: Beyblade Burst TechnoX! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 28, 2021
LOL HONCHO AND SILAS WEARING A CLOWN SUIT, FREE YOU LITTLE-
anyways, nice chapter!.
RE: Close This Thread - UnseenBurst - Aug. 29, 2021
Please close this thread mods, I already have 1 Thread for all my fanfictions
RE: Close This Thread - JCE_13 - Aug. 30, 2021
CitrusNinja3
RE: Close This Thread - UnseenBurst - Aug. 30, 2021
For a minute I though JCE was tryna report me I was like WHAT?!
RE: Close This Thread - JCE_13 - Aug. 30, 2021
Read citrus' bio.