(Aug. 15, 2021  11:41 PM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: Before Heimdall comes out can I upgrade it?

(Jul. 24, 2021  4:27 PM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: Name: Hinote Mizuki

Age: 14 (But seriously does it matter? Lol)

Personality: Hinote is pretty chill. Like switching from Free to Aiger in a snap.

Bey: Guard Heimdall 10 Atomic'

Guard - 4 Contact points that act as Shields (Like Artemis blades but thicker and wider)

Heimdall - A warrior with a helmet on that has bull horns.

10 - 10

Atomic' - A dash version of atomic

Bey Moves:

Defending Stance - The bey leans on Atomic, goes around (like roller drift), and takes the center.

Defender Crash - Defending Stance but if there is a bey already in the center it slams into it and (maybe) knocks them out.

Guard Blast - Like a slowed-down version of rush launch using its weight instead of speed.

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(Aug. 18, 2021  4:34 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:

(Jul. 24, 2021  4:27 PM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: Name: Hinote Mizuki

Age: 14 (But seriously does it matter? Lol)

Personality: Hinote is pretty chill. Like switching from Free to Aiger in a snap.

Bey: Guard Heimdall 10 Atomic'

Guard - 4 Contact points that act as Shields (Like Artemis blades but thicker and wider)

Heimdall - A warrior with a helmet on that has bull horns.

10 - 10

Atomic' - A dash version of atomic

Bey Moves:

Defending Stance - The bey leans on Atomic, goes around (like roller drift), and takes the center.

Defender Crash - Defending Stance but if there is a bey already in the center it slams into it and (maybe) knocks them out.

Guard Blast - Like a slowed-down version of rush launch using its weight instead of speed.

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Is Hinote Male or Female? You never gave me a clear gender or any clues

(Aug. 18, 2021  9:38 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: OLIVER YOU RASHAD FAN

(Aug. 18, 2021  9:45 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote:

(Aug. 18, 2021  9:38 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: OLIVER YOU RASHAD FAN

OLIVER YOU LOT GOING AROUND NOW UR COPYING VALT?! BRUH IS RASHAD YOUR TWIN OR BROTHER

BLIMEY, YE WHO HAVE COPYED THY VALT AOI SHALL BE CURSED TO ETERNAL SUFFERING

YOU LOT THINK YOU CAN WIN WITH VALKYRIE?! BRUH JUST MAKE YOUR OWN BEY

YOU RASHAD FAN!! GRRR STOP COPYING VALT, ALSO (READ THIS IF YoU WANT VaLt TO LIVE)

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BRUH VALT GET A PATENT ON ORIBE, OR JUST COPYRIGHT STRIKE HIM LOLOLOL
IDK WHY BUT RASHAD IS A GOODMAN FOR NOW SO LOL

SO TO CONCLUDE, ORIBE YOU LOT GOING AROUND COPyING BREAKING BEYS IT NEEDS TO STOP!!

(Aug. 18, 2021  9:56 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:

(Aug. 18, 2021  9:45 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: OLIVER YOU LOT GOING AROUND NOW UR COPYING VALT?! BRUH IS RASHAD YOUR TWIN OR BROTHER

BLIMEY, YE WHO HAVE COPYED THY VALT AOI SHALL BE CURSED TO ETERNAL SUFFERING

YOU LOT THINK YOU CAN WIN WITH VALKYRIE?! BRUH JUST MAKE YOUR OWN BEY

YOU RASHAD FAN!! GRRR STOP COPYING VALT, ALSO (READ THIS IF YoU WANT VaLt TO LIVE)

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BRUH VALT GET A PATENT ON ORIBE, OR JUST COPYRIGHT STRIKE HIM LOLOLOL
IDK WHY BUT RASHAD IS A GOODMAN FOR NOW SO LOL

SO TO CONCLUDE, ORIBE YOU LOT GOING AROUND COPyING BREAKING BEYS IT NEEDS TO STOP!!

*with a documentary narrator voice* Right here you can see the rage of the internet, it is a phenomenon that happen to a lot of users. This makes them become angry and change their habits for a short period of time, when the users spend all of their rage, they become more tame and less aggressive.

Anyways, nice chapter. Also, why 2 of your antagonists have "O" names? Coincidence? I think not!

(Aug. 21, 2021  5:21 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: ugh im so pumped for the next roundddd! aleph vs oliver and unova vs heimdall! pog nuggets! 😏👌

(Aug. 21, 2021  5:25 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:

(Aug. 21, 2021  5:21 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: ugh im so pumped for the next roundddd! aleph vs oliver and unova vs heimdall! pog nuggets! 😏👌

I'll post another Yin Yang Chapter (Adrian and Austin Vs Free) then post the Semi-Finals which'll be Aleph Vs Oliver and Unova Vs Hinote, we'll get a look in Aleph's past in the next chapter

(Aug. 20, 2021  4:21 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 14 has fallen from Mars

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Beyblade Burst TechnoX
Chapter 14
BC Sol’s Rising!

~In The Morning~

Me: *Yawns* Morning everyone!

Aleph/Hinote: Mornin.

Me: Who wants to just go back to sleep?

Aleph/Hinote: Me.

Speaker: Attention all Bladers, We have a very important announcement so please gather in the Meeting Room!

Me: *Sighs* Looks like we’ve got to get ready.

Aleph/Hinote: *Sighs*

~In The Hallway~

Hinote: I wonder what the meeting’s about?

Aleph: Maybe we’re having another team battle?

Me: I want in on that!

(We open the door to the meeting room and sit down)

Kris: Good Morning, Bladers!

All: Good Morning, Kris!

Kris: We’ve been invited to a special tournament called, The Legend’s Team Festival!

All: *Gasps*

Me: That sounds super fun!

Kris: Our Bladers will be, Valt Aoi, Rantaro Kiyama, Silas Karlisle, and Free De La Hoya!

Random Blader: Wait, what about the other Legend?

Me: “Other Legend?”

Aleph: Beats me!

Kris: He wanted one of you Bladers to have a chance to enter, so, he’ll be taking a break from BC Sol. With that being said, all the top team Bladers will be battling in a tournament to decide who will take the final spot!

Me: Seriously?! This is going to be fun!

(Oliver gets up and leaves)

Raul: And, there won’t be training! You have till the afternoon to prepare, so get training for your dorms!

All: Got it!

(Everyone leaves in a hurry)

Hinote: I guess we should get training!

Aleph: I’m battling Unova first!

Me (Thoughts): We’ve gotta get way stronger if we want to win this thing, I know you want to too!

(Ultravor glimmers in the light)

Hinote: Unova?

Me: I’ll be back!

(I run off)

Hinote: What’s up with him?

Aleph: He’s got an idea.

~In My Dorm~

Me: Ultravor, I’ve got a wicked idea on how to make you stronger!

(I get pulled into a white void)

Ultravor: What’s your idea?

Me: Well, I’m gonna make a Stamina Layer, it’ll be able to fend off attacks and spin as long as possible! It’ll also have rubber for stealing spin!!

Ultravor: I like this idea, I know you’ll be able to bring out my full power!!

(Me and Ultravor fist bump, I get pulled out of the white void)

Me: It’s time to start working!

(I start working on the layer)

Aleph: So, you’ve decided to upgrade it again?

Me: Yeah.

Aleph: I’ll be waiting.

~1 Hour Later~

Me: It’s finally done!

(I put the parts together and lift it high in the air)

Me: Voltaic Ultravor!!

(Hinote and Aleph burst into the room)

Aleph: It’s done?!

Me: Yeah, this is the strongest Stamina Bey ever!

Aleph: You’ll have to battle me if you think that’s true!

Me: That’s fine by me! But, don’t hold back!!

Aleph: Sounds good to me!

Hinote: I guess I’ll be the referee!

Me: Ok then, Aleph, you can inspect Ultravor!

(I give Aleph Ultravor)

Aleph (Thoughts): Voltaic Ultravor, it’s still an Attack Type but has a more Stamina Type shape! It has two large Blades that can be used to balance out the Bey so it can have more stamina! It also has some rubber on those Blades so it can spin steal from Counterclockwise Spinning Beys! Man, this upgrade is powerful, I’ll have to go all out!

Me: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Aleph: Go, Shoot!

(Me and Aleph pull off powerful Techno Shoots)

Aleph: Take the center, Aion!

Me: Don’t let it get there!

(Ultravor hits Aion with a powerful blow sending it away from the center)

Aleph: Eternal Zone!

Me: Attack now!

(Ultravor and Aion’s rubber start clashing causing a huge surge of power)

Hinote: Woah, they’re really going at it!

(Ultravor hits Aion with a powerful attack, Aion gets sent flying in the air)

Aleph: Aion!!

(Aleph’s Resonance Aura flares up Aion blazes out of the Bey)

Me: Ultravor!!

(My Resonance Aura flares up Ultravor blazes out of the Bey)\

Aleph: It’s over, Eternal Counter!!

(Aion speeds up and heads straight for Ultravor)

Me: Now, Voltaic Lightning!!

(Ultravor leans on its driver and speeds up, Ultravor hits Aion with a powerful fast barrage of attacks)

Aleph: *Gasps* It's so fast!

(Ultravor sends Aion flying, Aion bursts)

Aleph: *Gasps*

Hinote: It’s Voltaic Ultravor with a Burst Finish! Unova’s the winner!

Me: Yes, super duper awesome!

Aleph: Geez, you got the best of me again? You’re getting way too strong!

Hinote: I wanna taste that power, so Unova, let’s battle!

Me: I’ll take you on! *Smiles*

~In BC Sol’s Main Gym~

Kris: All of you will be battling for a spot in the tournament. I want all of you to take it very seriously and give it your all, so, let the battles begin!

Raul: First up, we’ve got Unova Bashida Vs Romeo! First battle!

(I put the Techno Ring on Ultravor)

Romeo: Listen, kid, I hate to break it to ya, but you're a goner!

Me: Don’t be so cocky, I’ve beaten Valt Aoi before!

Romeo: Only once! Me and First Lucius are going to take you down!!

Raul: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Romeo: Go, Shoot!

(Romeo pulls off a powerful Sparking Shoot, I pull off a powerful Techno Shoot)

Romeo: Now, First Lucius!

Me: Techno Shoot!

(Ultravor speeds up and hits First Lucius, First Lucius bursts)

Romeo: *Gasps*

Raul: It’s Techno Ultravor with a Burst Finish! Unova Bashida is the winner!

Me: Yes!

Romeo: Grr!

~In The Middle Of Hinote’s Battle~

(Heimdall bursts First Ragnaruk)

Raul: It’s Sentry Heimdall with a Burst Finish! The winner is Hinote!

Hinote: Yes!

~In The Middle Of Aleph’s Battle~

Aleph: Eternal Counter!

(Aion speeds up and slams into Variant Satomb, Variant Satomb bursts)

Anton: *Gasps* No way!

Raul: Eternal Aion wins with a Burst Finish! Aleph’s the winner!

Aleph: Yeah, that’s the stuff!

~In The Middle Of Oliver’s Battle~

Oliver: Bold Scimitar!

(A Bey bursts)

Random Blader: *Gasps*

Raul: It’s Bold Valkyrie with a Burst Finish! Oliver takes the win!

Valt (Thoughts): He thinks he’s mastered Valkyrie, but he has a long way to go.

Me: Wow, Oliver’s gotten super strong, I wanna battle him!

Aleph: Settle down, I’m sure we’ll battle him soon.

Hinote: I want revenge for my Bey, I’ll never forgive him for what he did!

(Me, Aleph, and Hinote’s Resonance Aura flares up)

Me/Aleph/Hinote: We’ll defeat you no matter what!! [/B]

(Aug. 28, 2021  6:42 PM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: WHERES 15??

(Aug. 22, 2021  5:38 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 15 owes me money

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       Beyblade Burst TechnoX
                     Chapter 15
          Old Rivals?! Old Friends?

Me: Glaze Crash!

(Ultravor speeds up and slams into Variant Uranus, Variant Uranus bursts)

Random Bladers: *Gasps*

Raul: It’s Glaze Ultravor with a Burst Finish! Unova is the winner!

Me: I won, yes!

Raul: Aleph Murphy, Oliver Agawa, Hinote Miziuki, and Unova Bashida advance to the Semi-Finals!!

Aleph (Thoughts): Yes, I finally made it!

Raul: The matches will consist of Aleph Murphy Vs Oliver Agawa and Unova Bashida Vs Hinote Mizikuki! The matches will start tomorrow.

(Raul walks away)

Me: Awesome, I’m gonna get to battle Hinote again!

(Aleph gets up and walks away)

Aleph: I’ll be back.

(Aleph runs off)

Me: Aleph…

~Deep In The Forest~

Aleph: Go, Shoot!

(Aleph pulls off a powerful Techno Shoot, Aion takes the center)

Aleph: That’s the stuff, now just keep going!


(Aleph has a flashback)

Kris: Hello everyone, meet our new Blader, Aleph Murphy!

All: Hi Aleph!

Aleph: H-- H-- Hi.

Kris: Treat him nicely and help him fit in.

(Everyone leaves the meeting room, Oliver walks up to Aleph)

Oliver: Hey, Aleph. Are you ok?

Aleph: Yeah, I’m just a little nervous.

Oliver: It’s ok, everyone here is nice! Wanna be friends?

Aleph: Sure!

~During Training Time At BC Sol~

Aleph/Oliver: Go, Shoot!

(Aleph and Oliver pull off Sparking Shoots)

Aleph: Go, Jet Uranus!

Oliver: Knock ‘em out, Super Solomon!

(Jet Uranus and Super Solomon slam into each other and burst)

Aleph/Oliver: *Gasps* *Laughs*

(Aleph’s flashback ends)

Aleph: Then, one day, he completely changed.

(Aleph has another flashback)

Aleph: Today’s the day, Oliver’s back from his special training with Theodore Glass!

(Aleph runs outside and runs up to Oliver)

Aleph: Oliver--

Oliver: Get out of my way.

Aleph: Oliver, what’re you talking about?

Oliver: I said get out of my way!

Aleph: What’re you talking about, I’m your Best Friend!

Oliver: I have no friends.

Aleph: *Gasps*

(Aleph ends his flashback)

Aleph: He’s completely changed, he’ll never come back.

???: Go, Shoot!

(??? pulls off a powerful Eclipse Shoot)

Aleph: *Gasps*

Me: Go, Ultravor!

(Ultravor speeds up and hits Aion with a powerful blow)

Aleph: What’re you doing?

Me: Helping you train!

Aleph: Thanks, go Aion!

(Aion speeds up and slams into Ultravor, Ultravor gets knocked out of the stadium)

Me: *Gasps* Looks like you won!

Aleph: Yeah, I did.

Me: What’s the matter, is it Oliver?

Aleph: *Sighs* I need to tell you something… about Oliver.

(Aleph explains everything that happened between him and Oliver)

Me: Oliver was trained by Theodore Glass?!

Aleph: Yeah, I didn’t know who he was till I did some research.

Me: Theodore Glass forced Shu Kurenai to become an evil Blader, but luckily Valt was able to knock him out of it and bring him back.

Aleph: Yeah, but he wasn’t done, he trained Oliver to become the evilest Blader he could be with trickery and manipulation, and he… succeeded.

Me: So, Oliver used to be friends with you but Theodore Glass turned him into a jerk?

Aleph: Yeah, and… he still feels like my friend, so… I don’t think I can bring myself to battle him.

Me: I have to battle a friend too… So why don’t we train?

Aleph: *Gasps*

Me: If we both train together we’ll be sure to win!

Aleph: *Chuckles* Sure, I’ll be sure to take you down!

Me: In your dreams, I’ll take you down right here and now!

Me/Aleph: 3! 2! 1! Go, Shoot!

(Me and Aleph pull off powerful Techno Shoots)

~The Next Day~

Raul: Good Morning everyone! Today, we’ll be doing the first Semi-Final match! It’ll be Aleph Murphy Vs Oliver Agawa, this will be the first to 3 points! The first Blader to get three points wins! Now, First battle!

Oliver: The True Bold Valkyrie will crush you!

Aleph: That’s not “The True Valkyrie!” That’s just what you think, but in reality, you're just scared you’ll lose!

Oliver: Grr!! That’s it, I’ll crush you swiftly!

Raul: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Aleph/Oliver: Go, Shoot!

(Aleph and Oliver pull off powerful Eclipse Shoots)

Aleph: Take the center, Aion!

Oliver: Rush Shoot!

(Valkyrie hits Aion with a powerful barrage of attacks, Aion absorbs the attacks and start spinning faster)

Sisco: Looks like the puny punk is absorbing all of Oli’s attacks.

Me: Keep it up!

(Valkyrie speeds up and slams into Aion sending it flying in the air)

Aleph: Eternal Counter!

(Aion slams into Valkyrie sending it flying across the stadium)

Oliver: Now, attack!

(Valkyrie speeds up and hits Aion with a mega-powerful barrage of attacks, Aion absorbs the attacks)

Aleph: One more time, Eternal Counter!

(Aion speeds up and slams into Valkyrie, Valkyrie gets shot out of the stadium)

Oliver: What?!

Raul: It’s Eternal Aion with an Over Finish! Aleph claims 1 point!

Me/Hinote: Yeah, that’s how you do it!

Oliver (Thoughts): How did he knock Valkyrie out of the stadium?! its attacks were super powerful!

Aleph: How’s that for you?!

Oliver: Oh please, you think I haven’t seen luck before?!

Raul: Second Battle!

Aleph: What do you mean luck? I just wiped the floor with you!

Oliver: Please, you actually think I was going all out?

Aleph: Prove it!

Oliver: I will!

Raul: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Oliver/Aleph: Go, Shoot!

(Oliver and Aleph pull off powerful Eclipse Shoots)

Aleph: Go for the--

Oliver: Don’t let ‘em get in the center, Rush Shoot!

(Aion tries going in the center but Valkyrie hits it away, Aion continuously tries going for the center but Valkyrie hits it away continuously)

Aleph: *Gasps*

Hinote: Why is Oliver so focused on keeping Aion out of the center?

Honcho: Because when Aion’s in the center it can tank attacks from all sides, but when it’s out of the center it’ll be harder to take attacks!

Oliver: Charge, now!

(Valkyrie starts speeding up and slams into Aion sending it flying into the wall, Aion starts wobbling)

Aleph: *Gasps*

Oliver: Bold Scimitar!!

(Valkyrie slams into Aion with full power, Aion gets shot out of the stadium)

Aleph: It can’t be!

Raul: It’s Bold Valkyrie with an Over Finish! Oliver Agawa claims 1 point!

Oliver: Told you your win earlier was a fluke!

Aleph: Grr! I’ll take you down in the next battle!

Raul: Third battle!

Oliver: You won’t be taking me down, not ever!!

Aleph: We’ll see about that!

Raul: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Aleph/Oliver: Go, Shoot!

(Aleph and Oliver pull off powerful Techno Shoots)

Aleph: Go for the center!

Oliver: Stop it with your Rush Shoot!

(Aion takes the center, Valkyrie hits Aion with a powerful barrage of attacks)

Aleph: True Eternal Zone!!

(Aion blocks all Valkyrie’s attacks and turns them into spin power)

Oliver: Keep going for it!

(Valkyrie keeps attacking rapidly)

Aleph: Aion’s just gonna keep absorbing your hits!

Oliver: That’s what I want!

Aleph: *Gasps*

(Valkyrie slams into Aion with a powerful blow, Aion speeds up and starts wobbling, Valkyrie rapidly hits Aion into the wall)

Oliver: How are you gonna control your Bey now?

Aleph: Oh no.

Hinote: He made Aion go out of control, it’s going to lose!

Oliver: Time to end this, Oblivious Scimitar!!

(Valkyrie slams into Aion sending it flying into the wall, Aion bursts)

Aleph: *Gasps*

Raul: It’s Bold Valkyrie with a Burst Finish! Oliver Agawa wins!

Me: Aleph… lost.

Honcho: He made it lose control so he could try destroying it!

Valt: Grr! Not cool.

Sisco: The runt’s gotten better, I’ll give him that.

Free: He really thinks his Blading Style is how Valkyrie should be used, someone needs to talk some sense to him.

(Free looks at Valt)

~In The Hallway~

Oliver: Valkyrie, let’s crush whoever we face in the finals!

Valt: Valkyrie doesn’t want that.

(Valt walks up to Oliver)

Oliver: What do you mean?! It’s my Bey, I can do what I want with it!

Valt: Don’t just think about what you want, Valkyrie’s battling with you, it’s about both of you!

Oliver: Be quiet, I know my Bey better than you!!

Valt: Is it really your Bey?

Oliver: *Gasps*

(Valt walks away)

Valt (Thoughts): Valkyrie, we can’t let him continue with this Blading Style, he needs to be stopped!

Thoughts?