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Beyblade Burst Spirits - TakaraTheLord - Oct. 07, 2020
Beyblade Burst Spirits
Special parts: Dash core (Obtained by winning a dash tournament) Aiden Umuzaki Age 15
Parker Umuzaki Age 15
Valt Aoi Age 18
Shu Kerenai Age 18
Rantaro Age 16 /Ranjiro Kiyama 18
Aiga Akaba Age 16
Gwyn Reynolds Age 17
Sisco Karlisle Age 18
Lane Valhalla Age 15
Xander Shakadera Age 18 /Xavier Bogard Age 16
Drum Koryu Age 15
Ken Midori 18
Lui Shirosagijo Age 19
Wakiya Murasagi
Joe Rurikawa 17
Hogi Konda Age 18
Hikaru Asahi 15
Hyuga Asahi Age 15
Free Delahoya Age 19
Orochi Ginba Age 19
Boa Alcazaba Age 18 / Blindt DeVoy Age 19 Cuza Ackermann Age 18
Delta Zakuro 17
Phi Age 19
HYde Age 18
Amane Kusaba Age 16
Arthur Percival Age 16
Hain Suzuki Age 15 Role:Bad guy
Fubuki Sumiye Age 16
Toko Aoi Age 16
RE: Beyblade Burst Spirit - GreenK9148 - Oct. 07, 2020
This is ileagal
RE: Beyblade Burst Spirit - TakaraTheLord - Oct. 07, 2020
Beyblade Burst Spirits
Episode 1 : Spirit?!
Emma Umuzaki(Mom) : Wake Up Aiden you're going to be late.
Aiden Uzumaki : Late to what.
Emma Umuzaki : To see the first spirit bey don’t you remember ?
Aiden Umuzaki : Why didn’t you say so *gets of the bed*
Aiden Umuzaki : Bye mom time to go *closes the door and gets out*
Hikaru , Hyuga Asahi : Finally you came.
Señor Hanami : Hello folks today we're going to see the first SPIRIT bey !
Señor Hanami : And it’s going to be shown by Valt Aoi the first blader to make a spirit beyblade !
Valt Aoi : Hello everyone.
*Crowd Cheering*
Everyone : 3 2 1 Go Shoot!
The beyblade is so strong it breaks the stadium.
Everyone : Wow!!!!!!
Señor Hanami : Wow the bey’s power broke the Stadium!
Aiden Umuzaki : I’ve seen powerful beys but not as powerful as that.
Hyuga Asahi : That is so cool!
Hikaru Asahi : Yeah!
Señor Hanami : It’s not over folks, get ready tomorrow to see a triple battle with a brand new stadium that’s going to blow you away !!
Everyone leaves
Aiden Umuzaki : I want A bey Like that
Aiden gets back home and runs to the 3D printer to make his own Spirit beyblade
After 3 Hours of work
Aiden Umuzaki : Done!
Hikaru and Hyuga Asahi : Really you should name it
Aiden Umuzaki : Hmm. I got it Rain Ares
Hikaru and Hyuga Asahi : Sounds great what kinda type is it
Aiden Umuzaki : It’s a right spin balance type.It can change from defense mode to attack mode and stamina mode.
Hyuga and Hikaru : Coooooooool
Aiden Umuzaki : Want to battle ?
Hyuga and Hikaru Asahi : sure yeah let’s battle
All three : 3 2 1 Go Shoot!
All three : Ahhhhhh!!!!!!!!
Hyuga : Hyperion!!!! Xceed counter!
Hikaru Asahi : Helios!!!!!! Zone counter!
Aiden Umuzaki : Ares!! Rain Slasher!
Ares Burst
Aiden Umuzaki : No! I lost
End of episode 1
(Oct. 07, 2020 1:20 AM)GreenK9148 Wrote: This is ileagal
How Ileagal
RE: Beyblade Burst Spirit - GreenK9148 - Oct. 07, 2020
There's another fanfic called Beyblade burst spirit.
RE: Beyblade Burst Spirit - TakaraTheLord - Oct. 07, 2020
Oh didn't know so what should I do?
RE: Beyblade Burst Spirit - GreenK9148 - Oct. 07, 2020
(Oct. 07, 2020 1:24 AM)TakaraTheLord Wrote: Oh didn't know so what should I do?
Idk
RE: Beyblade Burst Spirit - TakaraTheLord - Oct. 07, 2020
It's called beyblade burst Spirits not Spirit
RE: Beyblade Burst Spirit - GreenK9148 - Oct. 07, 2020
(Oct. 07, 2020 1:36 AM)TakaraTheLord Wrote: It's called beyblade burst Spirits not Spirit
It doesn't say it on the title
RE: Beyblade Burst Spirit - TakaraTheLord - Oct. 07, 2020
Yeah I have no Idea how to edit it.
RE: Beyblade Burst Spirit - GreenK9148 - Oct. 07, 2020
Next to the report button, there is a pencil, click full edit.
RE: Beyblade Burst Spirit - TakaraTheLord - Oct. 07, 2020
What report button
RE: Beyblade Burst Spirit - BuilderROB - Oct. 07, 2020
(Oct. 07, 2020 1:47 AM)TakaraTheLord Wrote: What report button
The three dots button is the report button.
RE: Beyblade Burst Spirit - TakaraTheLord - Oct. 07, 2020
Where can I find that button
RE: Beyblade Burst Spirit - GreenK9148 - Oct. 07, 2020
(Oct. 07, 2020 1:52 AM)TakaraTheLord Wrote: Where can I find that button
Bottom right of your post
RE: Beyblade Burst Spirits - The Blacknight - Oct. 07, 2020
interesting, very interesting. pretty detailed 2, looking forward 2 more chapters(also the naruto reference is killing me)
RE: Beyblade Burst Spirits - TakaraTheLord - Oct. 07, 2020
Episode 2 coming soon
Episode 2 : Triple battle
Hyuga Asahi : I think i’m going to make my own spirit beyblade too!
Hikaru Asahi : Me too spirit beys are so cool!
Hyuga and Hikaru run their 3D printers
After hours of working
Hyuga and Hikaru : Finally done!!
Hyuga : I’m naming it Crown Hyperion
Hikaru : I’m naming it Gravity Helios
Hikaru Asahi: Aiden Want to battle our new spirit beyblades
Aiden Umuzaki : Ok
All three : 3 21 Goo Shoot!
All three Ahhhh!!!!!
Hikaru Asahi : Helios !!! use Gravity Strike !!
Hyuga Asahi : Hyperion !!! use Crown Strike !!
Aiden Umuzaki : Ares !!! use Rain Slasher !!
There is a pig explosion
All three : AHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ares Burst in the Air
Helios gets sent flying but before he could touch the ground Hyperion Bursted
*Quit*
Hikaru Asahi : I won!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hyuga Asahi and Aiden Umuzaki : Nooooo!!!
Emma Umuzaki : What was that explosion
Aiden Umuzaki : Nothing just our battle
Emma Umuzaki : The Legends triple battle is today Forgot ?
Aiden Umuzaki : Thanks for reminding me mom Bye
She Smiles
Señor Hanami : Hello folks today you're going to see a battle that’s going to blow you away ! And Here comes the brand new stadium too!!
Crowd Cheering
The stadium has two speeding craters and two little stadiums with spinning centers (Like the cyclone stadium)
Aiden Umuzaki : Such a cool stadium!
Señor Hanami : Here are our Participants. Rantaro Kiyama and his Flame Ragnaruk!
Rantaro Kiyama : Hello beautiful fans
Señor Hanami : Sisco Karlisle and his Sacred Satan
Sisco Karlisle : Get Ready to see me win
Señor Hanami : And Last but not least Drum Koryu and his Aura Dragon!
Every one : 3 2 1 Goo Shoot!!
Rantaro Kiyama : Take the Center Ragnaruk!
Sisco Karlisle : Not on my watch
Rantaro Kiyama : Flame Tornado!
Sisco Karlisle : Chaos Drift!
Drum Koryu : Don’t forget about Me! Time to get seriously serious!
Drum Koryu : Aura Destroyer!
Both Satan and Ragnaruk get sent into the little stadiums. They get more spin by going to the center of it.
Dragon goes into the speed crater and attacks Ragnaruk. Ragnaruk burst.
Rantaro Kiyama : No!!!
Satan Gets too much spin and flies out into one crater and attacks dragon.
Sisco Karlisle : Sacred Slash!
Drum Koryu : Aura Break!
Both of them get sent out but satan hits the wall and bursts
Referee : Aura Dragon with a burst finish.Drum Koryu is the winner.
Aiden Umuzaki : That was such a cool battle with those super cool spirit beyblades
End of Episodes 2
Hope you like it it's pretty long but fun.
RE: Beyblade Burst Spirits - NamanSpryzen - Oct. 07, 2020
(Oct. 07, 2020 1:17 AM)TakaraTheLord Wrote: Beyblade Burst Spirits
Special parts: Dash core (Obtained by winning a dash tournament) 1] Rain Ares,Rain slasher and Rain crush owner is Aiden Umuzaki Age 14 Role:Main character
Rain (Ring) + Ares (chip) + 1-Balance’(chassis) + Same (metal) + Live (driver) spin right
2] Supreme Valkyrie, Supreme slash and Supreme smash owner is Valt Aoi Age 18
Supreme (Ring) + Valkyrie (chip) + 9-Attack’ (chassis) + Second (metal) + Speed (driver) Spin right
3] Legacy Spriggan, Legacy whip and Legacy counter owner is Shu Kerenai Age 18
Legacy (Ring) + Spriggan (chip) + 8-Balance’ + Counter (metal) Balance (driver) spin dual
4 Flow Ragnarok , Flow tornado and Flow counter owner Rantaro/Ranjiro Kiyama 18
Flow (Ring) + Ragnarok (chip) + 3 Stamina’ (chassis) + King (driver) Spin right
5] Magma Achilles, Magma slash and Magma shield owner Aiga Akaba Age 16
Magma (Ring) + Achilles (chip) + 7 Balance’ + Crane (metal) + Station (driver) spin right
6] Wave Genesis, Wave slash and Wave portal owner Gwyn Reynolds Age 17
Wave (Ring) + Genesis (chip) + 6-Defense’ + Round (driver)
7] Sacret Satan, Sacret slash and Chaos drift and Triple Twister owner Sisco Karlisle Age 18
Unity (Ring) + Satan (chip) + 5DF’ (5 Defense) + Chaos (driver) spin right
8] Unity Lucifer, Unity wall and Unity counter owner Lane Valhalla Age 15
Unity (Ring) + Lucifer (chip) + 8 DF’ (8 Defense’) + RL (Real) spin right
9] Lightning Xcalibur, Lightning Impact and Lightning breaker owner Xander Shakadera Age 18 /Xavier Bogard Age 16
Lightning (Ring) + Xcalibur (chip) + 4 At’ (2 Attack’) + Drag (Metal) + MT (Metal) spin right
10] Aura dragon, Aura destroyer and Aura break owner Drum Koryu Age 15
Aura (Ring) + Dragon (chip) + 6 AT’ (6 Attack’) + CN (Chain) spin right
11] Kerbeus, Death counter and Death launch owner Ken Midori 18
Death (Ring) + Kerbeus (chip) + 1 DF’ (1 Defense’) + RV (Revive) spin right Demon Longinus, Demon spiral and Demon upper owner Lui Shirosagijo 19
12] Demon (Ring) + Longinus (chip) + 7 AT’ (6 Attack) + CT (Create) spin left
13] Cyclone Wyvern, Cyclone crash and Cyclone defense owner Wakiya Murasagi
Cyclone (Ring) + Wyvern (chip) + 3 DF’ (3 Defense’) + DF (Defend) spin right
14] Fusion Joker, Fusion cross and Fusion smash owner Joe Rurikawa 17
Fusion (Ring) + Joker (chip) + 2 BL’(2 Balance’) + FN(Fun) spin right
15] Spiral Horusood, Spiral nightmare owner Hogi Konda Age 18 Spiral (Ring) + Horusood (chip) + 2SN’ (2 Stamina’) TF (Transfer) spin right
16] Gravity Helios, Gravity strike and Mega counter owner Hikaru Asahi 15 Role:fourth pla
Gravity (Ring) + Helios (chip) + 6 BL’ (6Balance’) + MG (Mega) spin right
17] Crown Hyperion, Crown Strike and Crown crater owner Hyuga Asahi 15
Crown (Ring) + Hyperion (chip) + 6 AT’ (8 Attack’) + SW (show) spin right
18] Ancient Fafnir, Ancient spin and Drain break and Ancient Claw owner Free Delahoya Age 19 Ancient (Ring) + Fafnir (chip) + 4 SN’ (4 Stamina’) + DN (Drain) spin left
19 Crusher Odin, Crushing rhythm and Crusher slash owner Orochi Ginba Age 19
Crusher (Ring) + Odin (chip) + 4 AT’ (2 Attack’) + TT (Treat) Spin right
20] Cosmic Bahamut, Cosmic crush and Cosmic circle owner Boa Alcazaba Age 18/Blindt DeVoy Age 19 Comic (Ring) + Bahamut (chip) + 2 DF’ (2 Defense’) + SK (SKy) spin left
23] Speed Chronos, Speed clock (stops time) and Speed rope owner Cuza Ackermann 18
Speed (Ring) + Chronos (chip) + 3 BL’ (1 Balance’) + SK (Stick) spin right
24] Volcano Diabolos/Destroy Diabolos,Under crusher/ Destroyer break owner Delta Zakuro 17
Volcano/Destroy (Ring) + 5 BL’ (4 Balance’) + GN(Gun) Spin dual
25] Meteor Phoenix, Meteor break and Meteor crush owner Phi Age 19
Meteor (Ring) + Phoenix (chip) + 6 DF’ (6 Defense) + CM (Comet) spin right
26] Cursed Hades, cursed counter and Endless nightmare owner HYde Age 18
Cursed (Ring) + Hades (chip) + 4 BL’ (3 Balance’) + MS (Mess) spin right
27] Shield Ashura, Stay counter and Shielding defense owner Amane Kusaba Age 16 Shield (Ring) + Ashura (chip) + 1 DF’ (1 Defense’) + SY(Stay) spin right
28] Crater Apocalypse, Crater crusher and Crater blast owner Arthur Percival Age 16
Crater (Ring) + Apocalypes (chip) + 4 AT’ (Attack’) + RG (Ravage) spin dual
29] Mage Hermes, Mage slash and Mage upper owner Henry Age 15 Role:Bad guy
Mage (Ring) + Hermes (chip) + 1-Attack’ (chassis) Ultra (metal) + Magic (driver)
Evolutions
Plasma Ares, Plasma slash and plasma crate and Plasma Flash owner Aiden Umuzaki Age 14 Role:Good guy
Plasma (Ring) + Ares 2 (chip) + 9 Balance (chassis) + Row (metal) + Lava (Driver) spin dual Destruction Hermes, Destruction slash and Devastating upper owner Henry Age 15 Role:Bad guy
Destruction (Ring) + Hermes (chip)-Attack (chassis) + Ultra (metal) + Mount (driver)
sorry it's too long
Why did you make it Yellow???
RE: Beyblade Burst Spirits - TakaraTheLord - Oct. 07, 2020
What yellow
RE: Beyblade Burst Spirits - TakaraTheLord - Oct. 08, 2020
Here is even a website that I made https://beyblade-burst-spirit.webnode.com/the-band/
RE: Beyblade Burst Spirits - SunBlader98 - Oct. 08, 2020
(Oct. 08, 2020 2:09 PM)TakaraTheLord Wrote: Here is even a website that I made https://beyblade-burst-spirit.webnode.com/the-band/
Nice I am working on an website as well!
RE: Beyblade Burst Spirits - TakaraTheLord - Oct. 08, 2020
(Oct. 08, 2020 2:17 PM)SunBlader98 Wrote:(Oct. 08, 2020 2:09 PM)TakaraTheLord Wrote: Here is even a website that I made https://beyblade-burst-spirit.webnode.com/the-band/
Nice I am working on an website as well!
Thanks
Episode 3 : Spirit shoot!
Emma Umuzaki : Someone special came!
Aiden Umuzaki : No way. Dad!!!!!
Dave Umuzaki(Dad) : Hi son I missed you
Aiden Umuzaki : Me too and here is my new Spirit bey. Rain Ares
Dave Umuzaki : Great ! let me see how it performs
Aiden Umuzaki : Ok
Both : 3 2 1 Goo Shoot!
Dave Umuzaki : Wow!
Aiden Umuzaki : And I made it on my own
Dave Umuzaki : Wow! All on your own
Aiden Umuzaki : Yes! Look at the time I have to go to training with Hikaru and Hyuga
Dave Umuzaki : Hikaru and Hyuga Asahi! The legends are your trainer?!
Aiden Umuzai : Yep now got to go bye dad!!
Emma Umuzaki : Our son Is growing fast isn’t he
Dave Umuzaki : Yes he is
Hikaru and Hyuga Asahi : oday your going to Learn how to pull off a Spirit Shoot
Aiden Umuzaki : What is that.Wait wasn’t that the shoot that Valt used in the demonstration?
Hikaru and Hyuga Asahi : Yes!
Aiden Umuzaki : I was so surprised to see a bey break a stadium that I just forgot about it.
Hikaru Asahi : First 500 push ups
Aiden Umuzaki : What!! Ok
Hyuga Asahi : Next 500 Launches
Aiden Umuzaki : Ok
Hikaru and Hyuga Asahi: Now time to try and pull off a spirit shoot
Hikaru Asahi : Like this !
Aiden Umuzaki : Wow was that Helios I saw coming out of the Launcher!
Hikaru Asahi : Yes! Now you turn
Aiden Umuzaki : Ok. Goo Shoot! It didn’t work
Hyuga Asahi : You must Strengthen the bond with your bey if you want to pull it off Aiden
Aiden Umuzaki : Ok.
Aiden Umuzaki(talking in his head) : Take A deep breath
All three : 3 2 1 Goo Shoot!
Aiden Umuzaki : I did it! I pulled off a Spirit shoot!
Hikaru Asahi : Now let’s battle
Aiden Umuzaki and Hyuga Asahi : Yeah!
Aiden Umuzaki : I’m going on Defense mode
Hikaru Asahi : I’m going on Stamina
All three : 3 2 1 Goo Shoot!
All did Spirit Shoots
Aiden Umuzaki : Take the Center Ares!
Hikaru Asahi : Sorry but no the center is mine
Hyuga Asahi : Hey don’t forget about me!
Hyperion Gets knocked into the little stadium so does Ares and Helios gets into the speed crater and jumps into the center of the big stadium.
All three : Ahh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hikaru Asahi : Helios! use Mega Counter!!!
Hyuga Asahi : Hyperion! use Crown Carter!!!
Aiden Umuzaki : Ares! use Rain Crush!!!
All three beys get get send flying
All three : Ahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hyperion hits the ground (he is the heaviest so not surprising) Next Helio (He is the next Heaviest) and last Ares
Aiden Umuzaki : I won!!
Aiden Umuzaki : Hi mom i’m back
Emma Umuzaki : How was training today?
Aiden Umuzaki : I won!
Emma Umuzaki really?
Aiden Umuzaki : yes!
Emma Umuzaki : you used so much energy now go sleep to more for tomorrow.
End of episode 3
This is something funny to make you laugh
Hikar Asahi : Helios !!! use Gravity Strike !!
Hyuga Asahi : Hyperion !!! use Crown Strike !!
Aiden Umuzaki : Ares !!! use Rain Slasher !!
There is a pig explosion oh no a pig explosion
All three : AHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A pig explosion run!!!!!!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Spirits - TakaraTheLord - Oct. 09, 2020
Episode 4 : Beigoma Academy beyclub
Emma Umuzki : Wake up Aiden you have school today your going to be late
Aiden Umuzaki : Ahhhhh!!!!!! Ares! Reduce them to Dust
Emma Umuzaki : No time for dreaming Wake Up!
Aiden Umuzaki : Hey I was winning a battle!
Emma Umuzaki : You're going to be late for your new school!
Aiden Umuzaki : Ahhh!! I got to run!!
Brushes his teeth, eats breakfast, and leaves.
After school is over, Aiden goes up to the roof and sees Fubuki.
Aiden Umuzaki : Wait you are Fubuki Sumiye aren’t you?
Fubuki Sumiye : Yeah I Am
Aiden Umuzaki : you are the captain of beigoma academy Valt's former team!
Fubuki Sumiye : Yes and what do you want
Aiden Umuzaki : Can I join?!
Fubuki Sumiye : Ok but you have to pass our test
Aiden Umuzaki : I will do anything
Fubuki Sumiye : You have to pass the one hundred battles test
Aiden Umuzaki : One hundred sounds like a lot but I beat Hikaru and Hyuga
Fubuki Sumiye : Ok let’s go
Referee : First Battle
Every one : 3 2 1 Goo Shoot
Referee : Rain Ares with a burst finish
Aiden won most of the battles but there were two battles left.
Fubuki Sumiye : get a 10 minute break
Aiden Umuzaki : ok
After 10 minutes
Fubuki Sumiye : The break is over
Referee : 98th battle Toko Aoi vs Aiden Umuzaki. Rain Ares vs Central Trident
Aiden Umuzaki : Aoi?
Aiden Umuzaki (in his head) : Seems like trident is a stamina type so attack mode will do it.Shifts his chases and his driver to attack mode
Everyone : 3 2 1 Goo Shoot!!
Ares starts with a barrage of attacks but trident barely moves
Toko Aoi : Your attacks have no effects on me
Aiden Umuzaki : They will right now!!!!!
Trident get knocked into the crater.(Since his driver is metal, it gives it extra speed)
Ares Also goes into the crater
Both : Ahhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!
Toko Aoi : Trident!!!!!, Use Central Counter!!
Aiden Umuzaki : Ares!!!!! Use Rain Crush
Aiden and Ares’s spirits are unleashed
Both beyblade fly into the sky but Trident Burst
Aiden Umuzaki : Yes!
Referee : Rain Ares with A burst Finish Aiden Umuzaki is the winner
Toko Aoi : Good match your strong
Aiden Umuzaki : Thanks
Referee : 99th battle Fubuki Sumiye vs Aiden Umuzaki. Aaquatic Forneus vs Rain Ares
Fubuki Sumiye : Get ready to Lose
Aiden Umuzaki : I don’t think so
Shifting his chassis and driver to Stamina
Referee : Ready set
Everyone : 3 2 1 Goo Shoot!!
Fubuki Sumiye : Take the center Forneus! Aquatic Guard!
Aiden Umuzaki : Rain Slasher!
Forneus gets hit hard and flies into the small stadium
Both : Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Fubuki Sumiye : Forneu!!!!! Use Aquatic Crash!
Aiden Umuzaki : Ares!!!!! Use Rain Crush!
Forneus Knocks Ares out
Referee : Forneus with a Knockout 1 point
Aiden Starts to look at Ares and says in his head “ I wish I could talk to you” and then Ares appeared in front of him
Aiden Umuzaki : Ares?!
Ares : Yes it’s me
Aiden Umuzaki : What can I do to win this battle
Ares : Trust in yourself and be confident
And then Ares disappears
Aiden shifts Ares to Defense mode
Refere : Ready Set
Everyone : 3 2 1 Goo Shoot!!
Both : Take the center!!
Both beys clash again and again and again
Both : Ahhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Fubuki Sumiye : Forneus !!!!! Use Aquatic Crash!!
Aiden Umuzaki : Ares !!!!! Use Rain Slasher!!
Forneus Bursted
Referee : Ares with a score of 2-1 Aiden is the winner
Aiden Umuzaki : Yeah I won!
Fubuki Sumiye : Congratulations you're one of us now
End of episode 4
RE: Beyblade Burst Spirits - TakaraTheLord - Oct. 12, 2020
Episode 5 : Super special
Aiden wakes up and Yawns
Get off the bed and gets ready for school
Aiden Umuzaki : Bye mom and dad!
Dave and Emma Umuzaki : Bye!
When school ends, Aiden goes to the club
Aiden Umuzaki : Hello!
Fubuki Sumiye : Hi
A voice calls : What’s up everyone!
Fubuki Sumiye : Wait i can’t be
The voice : Yep it’s me
Fubuki Sumiye : Ranjiro!!! You're here!!
Aiden Umuzaki : You must be Rantaro Kiyama’s brother!
Ranjiro Kiyama : Yep
Fubuki Sumiye : So Ranjiro why are you here
Ranjiro Kiyama : Just wanted to visit my old bud
Fubuki Sumiye : Want to battle? We haven’t battled for a long time here is my Aquatic Forneus
Ranjiro Kiyama : Ok. Here is my Flame Ragnaruk
Aiden Umuzaki : Wait isn’t that the bey Rantaro Kiyama has but a white version
Ranjiro Kiyama : Yes. We share the same bey
Aiden Umuzaki : Ok and here is my Spirit beyblade. Rain Ares
Ranjiro Kiyama : That is one sick beyblade you have
Aiden Umuzaki : Thanks now let’s battle
He shifts his chassis and turns his driver to stamina mode
All three : 3 2 1 Go Shoot!!
Ranjiro Kiyama and Fubuki Sumiye and Aiden Umuzaki : Take the center!!
All three beys clash again and again
Ranjiro Kiyama : Flame Tornado
Ares and Forneus are sent frying into the craters
Aiden Umuzaki and Fubuki Sumiye : AHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
Fubuki Sumiye : Forneus!!!!!!!!!!!! Use Aquatic Counter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Aiden Umuzaki : Ares!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Use Rain Crush!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ranjiro Kiyama : Ahhh!! Ragnaruk!! Use Flame counter!!!!!!!
All three : AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I won’t lose!!!
Ares gets sent flying into the small stadium and gets more spin from the spinning center.
Forneus and Ragnaruk Burst each other salvultaneusly
Aiden Umuzaki : I won!!!!
Ranjiro Kiyama : Your one strong blader
Aiden Umuzaki : Thanks and bye I got to go!
Everyone waves bye
Aiden Knocks on the door and his dad answers
Dave Umuzaki : Your back ! Come see something that will blow you away!
Aiden goes in and smiles and runs to see his …
Aiden Umuzaki : Brother!!!! Parker you're here!!!!!!!!!!
Parker Umuzaki : Brother!!!!!!!!!!! Aiden your back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Aiden Umuzaki : it’s been so long.Here is my new Spirit beyblade Rain Ares a right spin balance type I can go on defense mode attack and stamina
Parker Umuzaki : Yeah.Your beyblade looks cool here is my new Spirit beyblade
Vortex Poseidon a Left spin Balance type that can change from defense mode to attack and stamina
Aiden Umuzaki : Thanks and your beyblade looks cool too, let's battle!
Parker Umuzaki : Yeah!
Both run to the stadium and both switch their beyblades to Attack mode
Both : 3 2 1 Go Shoot!!
The battle starts off with a lot of attacks both beys clash again and again and again
Both : AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Aiden Umuzaki : Ares!!!! Use Rain Slasher!!!!
Parker Umuzaki: Poseidon!!!!! Use Vortex Slasher!!!!
Both beys burst
Next both go defense mode the same thing happens the stamina mode the same thing
happens
Emma Umuzaki : Time to go to sleep my little champions
Parker and Aiden Umuzaki : Ok mom
End of episode 5
Does anyone even like my Fanfic?
RE: Beyblade Burst Spirits - NamanSpryzen - Oct. 13, 2020
(Oct. 07, 2020 1:21 AM)TakaraTheLord Wrote: Beyblade Burst Spirits
Episode 1 : Spirit?!
Emma Umuzaki(Mom) : Wake Up Aiden you're going to be late.
Aiden Uzumaki : Late to what.
Emma Umuzaki : To see the first spirit bey don’t you remember ?
Aiden Umuzaki : Why didn’t you say so *gets of the bed*
Aiden Umuzaki : Bye mom time to go *closes the door and gets out*
Hikaru , Hyuga Asahi : Finally you came.
Señor Hanami : Hello folks today we're going to see the first SPIRIT bey !
Señor Hanami : And it’s going to be shown by Valt Aoi the first blader to make a spirit beyblade !
Valt Aoi : Hello everyone.
*Crowd Cheering*
Everyone : 3 2 1 Go Shoot!
The beyblade is so strong it breaks the stadium.
Everyone : Wow!!!!!!
Señor Hanami : Wow the bey’s power broke the Stadium!
Aiden Umuzaki : I’ve seen powerful beys but not as powerful as that.
Hyuga Asahi : That is so cool!
Hikaru Asahi : Yeah!
Señor Hanami : It’s not over folks, get ready tomorrow to see a triple battle with a brand new stadium that’s going to blow you away !!
Everyone leaves
Aiden Umuzaki : I want A bey Like that
Aiden gets back home and runs to the 3D printer to make his own Spirit beyblade
After 3 Hours of work
Aiden Umuzaki : Done!
Hikaru and Hyuga Asahi : Really you should name it
Aiden Umuzaki : Hmm. I got it Rain Ares
Hikaru and Hyuga Asahi : Sounds great what kinda type is it
Aiden Umuzaki : It’s a right spin balance type.It can change from defense mode to attack mode and stamina mode.
Hyuga and Hikaru : Coooooooool
Aiden Umuzaki : Want to battle ?
Hyuga and Hikaru Asahi : sure yeah let’s battle
All three : 3 2 1 Go Shoot!
All three : Ahhhhhh!!!!!!!!
Hyuga : Hyperion!!!! Xceed counter!
Hikaru Asahi : Helios!!!!!! Zone counter!
Aiden Umuzaki : Ares!! Rain Slasher!
Ares Burst
Aiden Umuzaki : No! I lost
End of episode 1
It’s very good!
RE: Beyblade Burst Spirits - TakaraTheLord - Oct. 13, 2020
Thanks bro!