Oct. 31, 2020 12:23 AM
Oct. 31, 2020 12:56 AM
Rip shun and free marriage.
Oct. 31, 2020 3:27 AM
(Oct. 31, 2020 12:56 AM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Rip shun and free marriage.
i wanna see a drawing of shun
Oct. 31, 2020 3:47 AM
Oct. 31, 2020 4:08 AM
gg everyone!
Oct. 31, 2020 4:11 AM
I have one, tiny suggestion. When a move is used, plz put an exclamation mark(unless whispering or smth). Srsly, its hard to imagine these characters going all out when they are like: die. i hate you. i will rip the marrow from your bones. now go, maiden. sounds kinda monotone, right?
Oct. 31, 2020 4:25 AM
Hello. I came across this fanfic awhile ago, and I wanna say, It's pretty decent.
Oct. 31, 2020 4:50 AM
Part 2 chapter 17 end of the road/a new beginning.
During training with shu!
Shun breaths heavily.
Shu:shun you did enough for today take a break.
Shun:your right shu.
Later.
Lane:I hope I can battle shun soon.
Shun:Lane i-.
Lane walks towards shun.
Lane:sorry shun but were over.
Shun hides her face.
Later during the tournament.
In the waiting room!
Shun looks at her hands.
Shun:was this all for nothing.
Akira:it was not. Shun get up and get out there. Stop feeling sorry for yourself and show me what it means to be a kurenai.
Shun:your right.
A aura forms around shun.
Later at shun's house.
Shun:looks like this is the end.
Shun packs her belongings.
Shun:goodbye forever house.
Lane rushs over to shun.
Shun:what do you want now.
Lane:shun why are you leaving.
Shun:you said we are over so I am moving to USA
Lane:shun i did not meant it like that.
Shun:I don't care about what you have to say save that speech for someone else.
Lane:shun i-
Shun walks away.
Later.
In the US.
Shun:I made it.
Shu:shun what a surprise why are you here.
Shun hides her face.
Shu:let me guess lane broke up with you.
Shun:he did.
Shun pulls out maiden.
Shu:shun what are you doing.
Shun:go maiden! Maidens unfusion.
Maiden unfuses with shun.
Shun:I can't believe what he did.
Shun collapses on to the floor and passes out due to blood loss.
Shu:shun are you ok shunnnnn.
Later in shun's hospital room.
Lane:shun are you ok?
Shun stood still and silence.
Lane:shun are you there?
Shun:why are you here.
Maiden fuses with shun.
Lane:I was worried about you.
Shun:I thought we were through?
Lane:yes i meant being boyfriend and girlfriend. Shun will you marry me.
Shun:lane you broke my heart. I don't want to marry you.
Free:shun are you ok.
Shun:free thank goodness your here.
Free:i filled out the divorce papers.
Shun:free I don't want a divorce no more. Let's make this work.
Free:let's try to make this work.
Chapter end
Arc 2 end
During training with shu!
Shun breaths heavily.
Shu:shun you did enough for today take a break.
Shun:your right shu.
Later.
Lane:I hope I can battle shun soon.
Shun:Lane i-.
Lane walks towards shun.
Lane:sorry shun but were over.
Shun hides her face.
Later during the tournament.
In the waiting room!
Shun looks at her hands.
Shun:was this all for nothing.
Akira:it was not. Shun get up and get out there. Stop feeling sorry for yourself and show me what it means to be a kurenai.
Shun:your right.
A aura forms around shun.
Later at shun's house.
Shun:looks like this is the end.
Shun packs her belongings.
Shun:goodbye forever house.
Lane rushs over to shun.
Shun:what do you want now.
Lane:shun why are you leaving.
Shun:you said we are over so I am moving to USA
Lane:shun i did not meant it like that.
Shun:I don't care about what you have to say save that speech for someone else.
Lane:shun i-
Shun walks away.
Later.
In the US.
Shun:I made it.
Shu:shun what a surprise why are you here.
Shun hides her face.
Shu:let me guess lane broke up with you.
Shun:he did.
Shun pulls out maiden.
Shu:shun what are you doing.
Shun:go maiden! Maidens unfusion.
Maiden unfuses with shun.
Shun:I can't believe what he did.
Shun collapses on to the floor and passes out due to blood loss.
Shu:shun are you ok shunnnnn.
Later in shun's hospital room.
Lane:shun are you ok?
Shun stood still and silence.
Lane:shun are you there?
Shun:why are you here.
Maiden fuses with shun.
Lane:I was worried about you.
Shun:I thought we were through?
Lane:yes i meant being boyfriend and girlfriend. Shun will you marry me.
Shun:lane you broke my heart. I don't want to marry you.
Free:shun are you ok.
Shun:free thank goodness your here.
Free:i filled out the divorce papers.
Shun:free I don't want a divorce no more. Let's make this work.
Free:let's try to make this work.
Chapter end
Arc 2 end
Oct. 31, 2020 4:55 AM
(Oct. 31, 2020 4:50 AM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Part 2 chapter 17 end of the road/a new beginning.
During training with shu!
Shun breaths heavily.
Shu:shun you did enough for today take a break.
Shun:your right shu.
Later.
Lane:I hope I can battle shun soon.
Shun:Lane i-.
Lane walks towards shun.
Lane:sorry shun but were over.
Shun hides her face.
Later during the tournament.
In the waiting room!
Shun looks at her hands.
Shun:was this all for nothing.
Akira:it was not. Shun get up and get out there. Stop feeling sorry for yourself and show me what it means to be a kurenai.
Shun:your right.
A aura forms around shun.
Later at shun's house.
Shun:looks like this is the end.
Shun packs her belongings.
Shun:goodbye forever house.
Lane rushs over to shun.
Shun:what do you want now.
Lane:shun why are you leaving.
Shun:you said we are over so I am moving to USA
Lane:shun i did not meant it like that.
Shun:I don't care about what you have to say save that speech for someone else.
Lane:shun i-
Shun walks away.
Later.
In the US.
Shun:I made it.
Shu:shun what a surprise why are you here.
Shun hides her face.
Shu:let me guess lane broke up with you.
Shun:he did.
Shun pulls out maiden.
Shu:shun what are you doing.
Shun:go maiden! Maidens unfusion.
Maiden unfuses with shun.
Shun:I can't believe what he did.
Shun collapses on to the floor and passes out due to blood loss.
Shu:shun are you ok shunnnnn.
Later in shun's hospital room.
Lane:shun are you ok?
Shun stood still and silence.
Lane:shun are you there?
Shun:why are you here.
Maiden fuses with shun.
Lane:I was worried about you.
Shun:I thought we were through?
Lane:yes i meant being boyfriend and girlfriend. Shun will you marry me.
Shun:lane you broke my heart. I don't want to marry you.
Free:shun are you ok.
Shun:free thank goodness your here.
Free:i filled out the divorce papers.
Shun:free I don't want a divorce no more. Let's make this work.
Free:let's try to make this work.
Chapter end
Arc 2 end
Ah nice chapter. When you are trapped in a love triangle
Oct. 31, 2020 4:55 AM
super sad end i criend 10/11
Oct. 31, 2020 4:55 AM
(Oct. 31, 2020 4:55 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ](Oct. 31, 2020 4:50 AM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Part 2 chapter 17 end of the road/a new beginning.
During training with shu!
Shun breaths heavily.
Shu:shun you did enough for today take a break.
Shun:your right shu.
Later.
Lane:I hope I can battle shun soon.
Shun:Lane i-.
Lane walks towards shun.
Lane:sorry shun but were over.
Shun hides her face.
Later during the tournament.
In the waiting room!
Shun looks at her hands.
Shun:was this all for nothing.
Akira:it was not. Shun get up and get out there. Stop feeling sorry for yourself and show me what it means to be a kurenai.
Shun:your right.
A aura forms around shun.
Later at shun's house.
Shun:looks like this is the end.
Shun packs her belongings.
Shun:goodbye forever house.
Lane rushs over to shun.
Shun:what do you want now.
Lane:shun why are you leaving.
Shun:you said we are over so I am moving to USA
Lane:shun i did not meant it like that.
Shun:I don't care about what you have to say save that speech for someone else.
Lane:shun i-
Shun walks away.
Later.
In the US.
Shun:I made it.
Shu:shun what a surprise why are you here.
Shun hides her face.
Shu:let me guess lane broke up with you.
Shun:he did.
Shun pulls out maiden.
Shu:shun what are you doing.
Shun:go maiden! Maidens unfusion.
Maiden unfuses with shun.
Shun:I can't believe what he did.
Shun collapses on to the floor and passes out due to blood loss.
Shu:shun are you ok shunnnnn.
Later in shun's hospital room.
Lane:shun are you ok?
Shun stood still and silence.
Lane:shun are you there?
Shun:why are you here.
Maiden fuses with shun.
Lane:I was worried about you.
Shun:I thought we were through?
Lane:yes i meant being boyfriend and girlfriend. Shun will you marry me.
Shun:lane you broke my heart. I don't want to marry you.
Free:shun are you ok.
Shun:free thank goodness your here.
Free:i filled out the divorce papers.
Shun:free I don't want a divorce no more. Let's make this work.
Free:let's try to make this work.
Chapter end
Arc 2 end
Ah nice chapter. When you are trapped in a love triangle
This happens to shun alot lol
Oct. 31, 2020 4:56 AM
Oct. 31, 2020 4:59 AM
Arc 3(part 3) is in the works now. While making the last chapter of part 2 I felt that free needs to be with shun again since they were in a relationship throughout blazing redo(I did not write it sorry) also it was pointless to have lane marry shun because free cares more about shun then lane.
Oct. 31, 2020 4:40 PM
Is arc 3 gonna have the character contest winner in it
Oct. 31, 2020 4:46 PM
(Oct. 31, 2020 4:40 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: [ -> ]Is arc 3 gonna have the character contest winner in it
Yes it will.
Oct. 31, 2020 4:48 PM
Oct. 31, 2020 4:50 PM
Oct. 31, 2020 4:53 PM
Oct. 31, 2020 4:56 PM
Oct. 31, 2020 5:01 PM
Oct. 31, 2020 5:37 PM
Did you guys like the ending of part 2 or part 1 better?
Part 3 chapter 1 return of the maiden of destruction.
Flashback!
Shun:it was never like this with me and friends. After my parents died I was force to take my birth right at a young age. It was horrifying I saw my parents die right in front of me. It was years ago. The only friend I really call a friend is free and gwynn. I am outcast or am I a failure I would repeatedly ask myself.
Flashback end.
Free:shun were gonna be late.
Shun:I am coming.
Shun rush down the stairs.
Free:you made it in time.
Shun:I did.
Later at the beyblade tournament.
Valt:hey free where is your wife shun.
Free:I don't know.
Judge:first round of the a block finals it's shun kurenai vs a random kid.
Shun flips to her spot by the stadium.
Shun:guess who's back.
Shun lifts her hair revealing her scar.
Valt:is that really your wife?
Free:yeah why?
Valt:she looks different and sounds different.
3 2 1 go shoot.
Kid:go attack maiden.
Shun:go maiden! Maidens defense!
The kid's bey hits maiden then it bursts.
Kid:I lost.
Shun picks up the kids bey and hands it to him.
Shun:your bey is very strong. Mind if I look at it.
Kid:sure.
Shun:there is only one problem with this combo.
Kid:what is it.
Shun:your using a attack type driver on a defense type bey.
Kid:oh that's why my bey bursts alot.
Shun takes the attack type driver off and puts a defense type driver.
Shun:your set now.
Shun hands the bey to the kid.
Kid:thank shun.
Shun:anytime.
Shun smiles!
Kid:I heard you do bey classes mind if I join.
Shun:sure.
Flashback.
Shu:shun your launching angle is off by 5 percent. Let me see what's wrong.
Shu smiles.
Shun:is it good now.
Shu:yes keep that form and launch your bey.
Flashback end.
Kid:shun are you ok?
Shun:yes I remembered something.
Shun hands a beyblade to a kid.
Kid:whats this for?
Shun:I sense your a strong talented blader. Here is your new beyblade venom dragoon 4a xtend plus.
Kid:thank you shun.
Shun:whats your name?
Kid:my name is Alexander but you can call me Alex.
Shun:Alex keep up the good work.
Alex:thank you.
Shun smiles.
Later at shun's house.
Shun collapses on to her bed.
Shun:boy am I tried I guess all that training made me tried.
Shun falls asleep.
Chapter end
Part 3 chapter 1 return of the maiden of destruction.
Flashback!
Shun:it was never like this with me and friends. After my parents died I was force to take my birth right at a young age. It was horrifying I saw my parents die right in front of me. It was years ago. The only friend I really call a friend is free and gwynn. I am outcast or am I a failure I would repeatedly ask myself.
Flashback end.
Free:shun were gonna be late.
Shun:I am coming.
Shun rush down the stairs.
Free:you made it in time.
Shun:I did.
Later at the beyblade tournament.
Valt:hey free where is your wife shun.
Free:I don't know.
Judge:first round of the a block finals it's shun kurenai vs a random kid.
Shun flips to her spot by the stadium.
Shun:guess who's back.
Shun lifts her hair revealing her scar.
Valt:is that really your wife?
Free:yeah why?
Valt:she looks different and sounds different.
3 2 1 go shoot.
Kid:go attack maiden.
Shun:go maiden! Maidens defense!
The kid's bey hits maiden then it bursts.
Kid:I lost.
Shun picks up the kids bey and hands it to him.
Shun:your bey is very strong. Mind if I look at it.
Kid:sure.
Shun:there is only one problem with this combo.
Kid:what is it.
Shun:your using a attack type driver on a defense type bey.
Kid:oh that's why my bey bursts alot.
Shun takes the attack type driver off and puts a defense type driver.
Shun:your set now.
Shun hands the bey to the kid.
Kid:thank shun.
Shun:anytime.
Shun smiles!
Kid:I heard you do bey classes mind if I join.
Shun:sure.
Flashback.
Shu:shun your launching angle is off by 5 percent. Let me see what's wrong.
Shu smiles.
Shun:is it good now.
Shu:yes keep that form and launch your bey.
Flashback end.
Kid:shun are you ok?
Shun:yes I remembered something.
Shun hands a beyblade to a kid.
Kid:whats this for?
Shun:I sense your a strong talented blader. Here is your new beyblade venom dragoon 4a xtend plus.
Kid:thank you shun.
Shun:whats your name?
Kid:my name is Alexander but you can call me Alex.
Shun:Alex keep up the good work.
Alex:thank you.
Shun smiles.
Later at shun's house.
Shun collapses on to her bed.
Shun:boy am I tried I guess all that training made me tried.
Shun falls asleep.
Chapter end
Oct. 31, 2020 10:30 PM
(Oct. 31, 2020 5:37 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Did you guys like the ending of part 2 or part 1 better?
Part 3 chapter 1 return of the maiden of destruction.
Flashback!
Shun:it was never like this with me and friends. After my parents died I was force to take my birth right at a young age. It was horrifying I saw my parents die right in front of me. It was years ago. The only friend I really call a friend is free and gwynn. I am outcast or am I a failure I would repeatedly ask myself.
Flashback end.
Free:shun were gonna be late.
Shun:I am coming.
Shun rush down the stairs.
Free:you made it in time.
Shun:I did.
Later at the beyblade tournament.
Valt:hey free where is your wife shun.
Free:I don't know.
Judge:first round of the a block finals it's shun kurenai vs a random kid.
Shun flips to her spot by the stadium.
Shun:guess who's back.
Shun lifts her hair revealing her scar.
Valt:is that really your wife?
Free:yeah why?
Valt:she looks different and sounds different.
3 2 1 go shoot.
Kid:go attack maiden.
Shun:go maiden! Maidens defense!
The kid's bey hits maiden then it bursts.
Kid:I lost.
Shun picks up the kids bey and hands it to him.
Shun:your bey is very strong. Mind if I look at it.
Kid:sure.
Shun:there is only one problem with this combo.
Kid:what is it.
Shun:your using a attack type driver on a defense type bey.
Kid:oh that's why my bey bursts alot.
Shun takes the attack type driver off and puts a defense type driver.
Shun:your set now.
Shun hands the bey to the kid.
Kid:thank shun.
Shun:anytime.
Shun smiles!
Kid:I heard you do bey classes mind if I join.
Shun:sure.
Flashback.
Shu:shun your launching angle is off by 5 percent. Let me see what's wrong.
Shu smiles.
Shun:is it good now.
Shu:yes keep that form and launch your bey.
Flashback end.
Kid:shun are you ok?
Shun:yes I remembered something.
Shun hands a beyblade to a kid.
Kid:whats this for?
Shun:I sense your a strong talented blader. Here is your new beyblade venom dragoon 4a xtend plus.
Kid:thank you shun.
Shun:whats your name?
Kid:my name is Alexander but you can call me Alex.
Shun:Alex keep up the good work.
Alex:thank you.
Shun smiles.
Later at shun's house.
Shun collapses on to her bed.
Shun:boy am I tried I guess all that training made me tried.
Shun falls asleep.
Chapter end
PRAISE GOD EMOTION IN THE SPECIAL MOVES
Oct. 31, 2020 10:55 PM
(Oct. 31, 2020 5:37 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Did you guys like the ending of part 2 or part 1 better?
Part 3 chapter 1 return of the maiden of destruction.
Flashback!
Shun:it was never like this with me and friends. After my parents died I was force to take my birth right at a young age. It was horrifying I saw my parents die right in front of me. It was years ago. The only friend I really call a friend is free and gwynn. I am outcast or am I a failure I would repeatedly ask myself.
Flashback end.
Free:shun were gonna be late.
Shun:I am coming.
Shun rush down the stairs.
Free:you made it in time.
Shun:I did.
Later at the beyblade tournament.
Valt:hey free where is your wife shun.
Free:I don't know.
Judge:first round of the a block finals it's shun kurenai vs a random kid.
Shun flips to her spot by the stadium.
Shun:guess who's back.
Shun lifts her hair revealing her scar.
Valt:is that really your wife?
Free:yeah why?
Valt:she looks different and sounds different.
3 2 1 go shoot.
Kid:go attack maiden.
Shun:go maiden! Maidens defense!
The kid's bey hits maiden then it bursts.
Kid:I lost.
Shun picks up the kids bey and hands it to him.
Shun:your bey is very strong. Mind if I look at it.
Kid:sure.
Shun:there is only one problem with this combo.
Kid:what is it.
Shun:your using a attack type driver on a defense type bey.
Kid:oh that's why my bey bursts alot.
Shun takes the attack type driver off and puts a defense type driver.
Shun:your set now.
Shun hands the bey to the kid.
Kid:thank shun.
Shun:anytime.
Shun smiles!
Kid:I heard you do bey classes mind if I join.
Shun:sure.
Flashback.
Shu:shun your launching angle is off by 5 percent. Let me see what's wrong.
Shu smiles.
Shun:is it good now.
Shu:yes keep that form and launch your bey.
Flashback end.
Kid:shun are you ok?
Shun:yes I remembered something.
Shun hands a beyblade to a kid.
Kid:whats this for?
Shun:I sense your a strong talented blader. Here is your new beyblade venom dragoon 4a xtend plus.
Kid:thank you shun.
Shun:whats your name?
Kid:my name is Alexander but you can call me Alex.
Shun:Alex keep up the good work.
Alex:thank you.
Shun smiles.
Later at shun's house.
Shun collapses on to her bed.
Shun:boy am I tried I guess all that training made me tried.
Shun falls asleep.
Chapter end
can we make a crossover pls in return ill help with ur canon story
Oct. 31, 2020 10:58 PM
(Oct. 31, 2020 5:37 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Did you guys like the ending of part 2 or part 1 better?
Part 3 chapter 1 return of the maiden of destruction.
Flashback!
Shun:it was never like this with me and friends. After my parents died I was force to take my birth right at a young age. It was horrifying I saw my parents die right in front of me. It was years ago. The only friend I really call a friend is free and gwynn. I am outcast or am I a failure I would repeatedly ask myself.
Flashback end.
Free:shun were gonna be late.
Shun:I am coming.
Shun rush down the stairs.
Free:you made it in time.
Shun:I did.
Later at the beyblade tournament.
Valt:hey free where is your wife shun.
Free:I don't know.
Judge:first round of the a block finals it's shun kurenai vs a random kid.
Shun flips to her spot by the stadium.
Shun:guess who's back.
Shun lifts her hair revealing her scar.
Valt:is that really your wife?
Free:yeah why?
Valt:she looks different and sounds different.
3 2 1 go shoot.
Kid:go attack maiden.
Shun:go maiden! Maidens defense!
The kid's bey hits maiden then it bursts.
Kid:I lost.
Shun picks up the kids bey and hands it to him.
Shun:your bey is very strong. Mind if I look at it.
Kid:sure.
Shun:there is only one problem with this combo.
Kid:what is it.
Shun:your using a attack type driver on a defense type bey.
Kid:oh that's why my bey bursts alot.
Shun takes the attack type driver off and puts a defense type driver.
Shun:your set now.
Shun hands the bey to the kid.
Kid:thank shun.
Shun:anytime.
Shun smiles!
Kid:I heard you do bey classes mind if I join.
Shun:sure.
Flashback.
Shu:shun your launching angle is off by 5 percent. Let me see what's wrong.
Shu smiles.
Shun:is it good now.
Shu:yes keep that form and launch your bey.
Flashback end.
Kid:shun are you ok?
Shun:yes I remembered something.
Shun hands a beyblade to a kid.
Kid:whats this for?
Shun:I sense your a strong talented blader. Here is your new beyblade venom dragoon 4a xtend plus.
Kid:thank you shun.
Shun:whats your name?
Kid:my name is Alexander but you can call me Alex.
Shun:Alex keep up the good work.
Alex:thank you.
Shun smiles.
Later at shun's house.
Shun collapses on to her bed.
Shun:boy am I tried I guess all that training made me tried.
Shun falls asleep.
Chapter end
nice
Nov. 01, 2020 1:10 AM
(Oct. 31, 2020 10:55 PM)beykid44 Wrote: [ -> ]Can you please stop asking. We will do crossover soon after I finish the next 7 parts.(Oct. 31, 2020 5:37 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Did you guys like the ending of part 2 or part 1 better?
Part 3 chapter 1 return of the maiden of destruction.
Flashback!
Shun:it was never like this with me and friends. After my parents died I was force to take my birth right at a young age. It was horrifying I saw my parents die right in front of me. It was years ago. The only friend I really call a friend is free and gwynn. I am outcast or am I a failure I would repeatedly ask myself.
Flashback end.
Free:shun were gonna be late.
Shun:I am coming.
Shun rush down the stairs.
Free:you made it in time.
Shun:I did.
Later at the beyblade tournament.
Valt:hey free where is your wife shun.
Free:I don't know.
Judge:first round of the a block finals it's shun kurenai vs a random kid.
Shun flips to her spot by the stadium.
Shun:guess who's back.
Shun lifts her hair revealing her scar.
Valt:is that really your wife?
Free:yeah why?
Valt:she looks different and sounds different.
3 2 1 go shoot.
Kid:go attack maiden.
Shun:go maiden! Maidens defense!
The kid's bey hits maiden then it bursts.
Kid:I lost.
Shun picks up the kids bey and hands it to him.
Shun:your bey is very strong. Mind if I look at it.
Kid:sure.
Shun:there is only one problem with this combo.
Kid:what is it.
Shun:your using a attack type driver on a defense type bey.
Kid:oh that's why my bey bursts alot.
Shun takes the attack type driver off and puts a defense type driver.
Shun:your set now.
Shun hands the bey to the kid.
Kid:thank shun.
Shun:anytime.
Shun smiles!
Kid:I heard you do bey classes mind if I join.
Shun:sure.
Flashback.
Shu:shun your launching angle is off by 5 percent. Let me see what's wrong.
Shu smiles.
Shun:is it good now.
Shu:yes keep that form and launch your bey.
Flashback end.
Kid:shun are you ok?
Shun:yes I remembered something.
Shun hands a beyblade to a kid.
Kid:whats this for?
Shun:I sense your a strong talented blader. Here is your new beyblade venom dragoon 4a xtend plus.
Kid:thank you shun.
Shun:whats your name?
Kid:my name is Alexander but you can call me Alex.
Shun:Alex keep up the good work.
Alex:thank you.
Shun smiles.
Later at shun's house.
Shun collapses on to her bed.
Shun:boy am I tried I guess all that training made me tried.
Shun falls asleep.
Chapter end
can we make a crossover pls in return ill help with ur canon story
Part 3 chapter 2 awaken venom dragoon !/maiden vs venom dragoon!
During training with shu.
Shun breaths heavily.
Shun:is that all you got.
Shu:why dont you come at me at full power instead of holding back. You held back during the tournament didn't you?
Shun:I did. Go Maiden! Maidens fusion!
A bright light comes from shun.
Kisara:alright!
Shu:what!
Shu looks at kisara shocked.
Kisara:go maiden! Heaven's overblow!
Later.
Kisara:hey Alex.
Alex:ah who are you and what do you want.
Kisara:it's me shun.
Alex:prove it.
Kisara unfuses.
Shun:surprised now?
Alex:battle with me shun. Your gonna lose to me because I train harder after you give me venom dragoon .
3 2 1 go shoot.
Alex:go dragoon! Venom scream!
Dragoon attack maiden repeatly.
Shun:nice trick. Go maiden!
Maiden breaks free from the attacks.
Alex:what how did you do that?
Shun:I finish this now. Maidens fusion!
Maiden flashes red for a second then a bright light comes from shun.
Kisara:alright!go maiden! Heaven's overblow.
Maiden hits dragoon.
Alex:go dragoon! Arghhhhhhhhhh!
Dragoon gets slammed into the wall.
Kisara:oh? So you survived that blow. Go maiden!
Maiden continues to deal dragoon strong blows.
Kisara:whats wrong you can't keep up with my speed.
Alex:go dragoon! Venom break!
A huge explosion is created when both beys hit each other.
Alex:go dragoon you can do it!
Kisara:go maiden! Argahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Maiden cuts through the attack and bursts dragoon.
Alex:I lost?
Kisara:what's wrong you got quiet.
Chapter end