World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

(Oct. 27, 2020  3:05 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]

(Oct. 27, 2020  3:04 AM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]A little sneak peak of a character that will make a shocking entrance.
"Shun you may be the maiden of destruction but its no match for my bey darkness Zeus. Go Zeus darkness spark.

Wait is Zac coming back

Maybe.
Here is another character.
"My my seems like you don't know how's it done valt. go wyvern orbital crush".

(Oct. 27, 2020  3:38 AM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]

(Oct. 27, 2020  3:05 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]Wait is Zac coming back

Maybe.
Here is another character.
"My my seems like you don't know how's it done valt. go wyvern orbital crush".

Wakiya!!! Finally golidlocks came back lol.

(Oct. 27, 2020  3:39 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]

(Oct. 27, 2020  3:38 AM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Maybe.
Here is another character.
"My my seems like you don't know how's it done valt. go wyvern orbital crush".

Wakiya!!! Finally golidlocks came back lol.

He dead tho lol. It's Harry the hedgehog lol. 
Another one lol. Here is a extremely to import character I made.
"Good grief shun your really strong but I am strong go now demon archfiend burning soul".  - emilia aoi

Harry would just end every blader career's

(Oct. 27, 2020  3:57 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]Harry would just end every blader career's

I know right. 
Next chapter title is shun's fusion?/awaken archfiend!

(Oct. 27, 2020  4:00 AM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]

(Oct. 27, 2020  3:57 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]Harry would just end every blader career's

I know right. 
Next chapter title is shun's fusion?/awaken archfiend!

ooh nice and this series is interesting.

(Oct. 27, 2020  4:03 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]

(Oct. 27, 2020  4:00 AM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]I know right. 
Next chapter title is shun's fusion?/awaken archfiend!

ooh nice and this series is interesting.

Do you know how akira dies?

(Oct. 27, 2020  4:04 AM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]

(Oct. 27, 2020  4:03 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]ooh nice and this series is interesting.

Do you know how akira dies?

not really? And is it Akira Yamatoga?

(Oct. 27, 2020  4:05 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]

(Oct. 27, 2020  4:04 AM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Do you know how akira dies?

not really? And is it Akira Yamatoga?

Akira kurenai. Please read part 2 more of shun's past is gonna be revealed in the next few episodes so I dont want you fall behind!

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Part 2 chapter 13 shun's fusion?/the New blader from the underworld.
In shun's dream.
Akira:shun wake up your gonna be late.
Shun:I am up akira.
Akira:good I am excited to see you battle.
Shun hugs akira.
Shun:I love you little sis.
As shun hugs akira there is blood everywhere on shun's body.
Shun:akira.
Shun looks at akira. The body was covered in blood.
Shun:nooooooooooooooooooooo.
Back in the real world.
Shun screams awake.
Shun:it was that dream again.
Gwynn and lane rushed over to shun's room.
Gwynn:what happened shun.
Lane:you ok shun.
Shun:I had that dream again were akira dies in my arms.
Tears run down shun's cheek.
Gwynn:shun.
Lane:it's gonna be alright shun. There is a way we can bring her back.
Shun:how?
Lane:we have to kill Phoenix.
2 months later.
Akira:what did I miss shun?
Shun:not much.
Akira:how long since I died.
Shun:about 1-2 years.
Akira:I am happy I am alive now. The underworld is not such a pretty place.
Shun:yeah it is not.
Later
emilia:I guess this is shun's house.
emilia knocks on the door.
Shun:I wonder who that is.
Shun opens the door.
emilia:hey shun remember me?
Shun:your that girl I met in the underworld.
Emilia:yes I am.
Later.
Shun:emilia battle me.
Emilia:sure.
Chapter end.

Extra scene part 1 enter the underworld.
Shun:where am i.
Demon:the underworld.
Shun:oh thanks.
Demon:your welcome.
Shun:what happens if I end up here.
Demon:you will lose your soul and gain more power you ever dreamed of.
Shun:ok I do the offer. Maiden unfuse.
Maiden unfuses from shun.
Shun:take my soul.
Shun struggles to stay on her feet.
Demon:ok your wish was has been granted.
Shun:I feel no difference.
Demon:you will see a change in power when you fuse with maiden and get revived.
Shun:maiden fuse with me.
Maiden joins with shun once more.
Scene end.

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Part 2 chapter 14 shun vs emilia/vengeful maiden awakens.
Shun:let's go maiden.
3 2 1 go shoot.
emilia:go demon archfiend burning upper.
Archfiend hits maiden into the air.
Shun:maiden go.
Shun laughs.
Emilia:what's so funny.
Shun:your trying and maiden is just absorbing the power of your bey.
Emilia:archfiend burning abyss.
Shun:useless maiden.
Maiden dodges the attack.
Emilia:how.
Shun yawns
Shun:I am done toying with you.
Maiden shines a bright red.
Shun:let's go maiden maidens final recollection.
A huge explosion of energy hits archfiend then archfiend bursts.
Shun:I did it.
Shun collapses on her knees and coughs up a bit of blood.
Akira:shun are you ok.
Shun:I am fine.
Maiden continues to glow red.
Maiden:I need more power let me consume more.
Later during training with shu.
Shun collapses to her knees.
Shu:that's one heck of a move shun.
Shun:I know it's more dangerous than maidens recollection. This move has more of a draw back.
Shu:what do you mean shun.
Shun shows shu the mark of maiden.
Shu:what it's spreading.
Shun:it's from maiden absorbing all that power.
Shu:than stop using that move.
Shun:maiden does it on its own.
Shu:maiden is getting more stronger I think you need to ask gwynn a few questions.
Shun:alright big brother thank you very much.
Later at gwynn's house.
Gwynn:just as I thought. Shun maiden is overloaded with power. If it's not released soon it can kill you.
Shun:can you fix it.
Gwynn:yes but it's gonna take awhile. Since your fused with maiden your gonna feel pain when I fix this.
Shun:ok before I go. Maiden let's unfuse.
Maiden:you know that once we unfuse we can't talk to each other but I can hear you.
Shun:unfuse with me so it can be less painful.
Maiden unfuses with shun.
Gwynn:shun?
Shun:yes.
Shun stumbles to walk to gwynn.
Gwynn:shun you ok.
Shun:I am fine. When I unfused from maiden I get all my previous injuries before maiden healed them all.
Later.
Gwynn:shun its done maiden is back to normal.
Shun:finally. Maiden fuse with me.
Maiden fuses with shun.
Kisara:alrigh- huh why am I here.
Gwynn:kisara your here now.
Kisara unfuses into shun.
Shun:maiden I meant fuse our souls not to fuse into kisara.
Maiden fuses with shun.
Later
Shun:I wonder why lane has not showed up in few days.
Free walks into the room
Free:shun there you are lane broke his arm.
Shun:dang it maidens time
*time stops*
Shun rush into the hospital.
*time resumes*
Shun:lane
Lane:how did you get here.
Shun:lane are you ok.
Lane:yes but it seems like your gonna be awhile till I am able to blade again.
Lane hands Lucifer to shun.
Lane:keep Lucifer safe for me shun.
Shun:I will do that my beloved lane.
A tear runs down shun's cheek.
Chapter end

Part 2 chapter 15 Lucifer=maiden shun's love for lane!/shun vs alyssa!
During training with shu.
Shun breaths heavily.
Shu:shun you did good today take a break.
Shun:no shu I need to be stronger to protect lane.
Shu smiles.
Shu:your on shun.
Later.
Shun breaths heavily.
Shun:is that all you got.
Shu:shun your really gotten stronger.
Shun near collapses from exhaustion.
Shun:I am not done one more match shu.
Shu:shun I never seen you like this.
Shun:I don't want to fail lane a second time and not let akira die again.
Shu:alright come at me with all you got.
Later at the tournament.
Alyssa:what a lovely day to destroy innocent life's.
Dimitri:yeah who our next target babe.
Alyssa:maybe lane or akira.
Shun walks in.
Shun:if you lay a second finger on lane or akira I will kill you both even if you were family.
A aura forms around shun and shun's eyes glows red.
Alyssa:pathetic threats don't work on me.
Shun laughs.
Shun:you will see what hell I have in store just for you.
Later.
Alyssa :shun I am gonna beat you.
Shun:your pathetic as always.
Shun yawns.
3 2 1 go shoot.
Shun:lets maiden.
Maiden goes into the center.
Alyssa:go Helios.
Helios hits maiden.
Shun:nice stolen bey. Maiden finish this.
Maiden breaks free from the attack.
Shun:go maiden finish them right now. It's over go -.
Shun stumbles.
Shun:what's going on.
A dark mysterious aura forms around shun.
Shun:ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhharghhhhhhhhh.
The dark aura start to consume shun and maiden.
Alyssa:go Helios .
Helios hits maiden but fails.
Shun laughs.
Shun:it's pathetic. Go maiden darkness fusion.
A dark light comes from shun.
Kai:alright.
Lane:what shun what happened to you.
Kai:die Helios go maiden.
Maiden attacks brutally.
Alyssa:no Helios.
Kai:destroy everything destroy destroy even more.
Maiden hits Helios continuously.
Alyssa:Helios get out of there.
Kai:I will fill this world into darkness. Go maiden maidens dark recollection.
A huge explosion of dark energy hits Helios and shatters it.
Kai:another job well done.
Kai laugh insanely.
Alyssa:no Helios.
Kai unfuses.
Shun:what happened.
Lucifer:I helped you in the match.
Shun:why you were gonna lose control.
Maiden:Lucifer shun can handle herself.
Later at lanes hospital room.
Shun:sorry about the match.
Lane:it's fine. Lucifer just wanted to help.
Shun:here lane.
Shun hands Lucifer to Lane.
Lane:shun thank you but Lucifer needs you right now since in my condition I can't beyblade.
Shun:ok lane.
Shun hands a locket to Lane.
Shun:I made this for you.
Lane opens the locket. It was a picture of lane and shun at the beach.
Lane:it's nice shun.
Shun:read the back.
Lane looks at the back of the locket. It reads "my dear lane I love you with all my heart nothing will split us apart". There was a something written under the text.
Shun=Lane
Maiden=Lucifer.
Lane:shun.
Lane hugs shun.
Shun:I made up my mind I want to stay with you.
Shun smiles.
Lane:really.
Shun:I have other surprise for you.
???:why are so down about brother.
Lane:is that you sis.
Chapter end.

Chapter preview.
Part 2 chapter 16 awaken lanes sister Melissa!
Melissa:long time no see lane
Lane:your alive I thought you died in a car accident with our parents.
Shun:she with me the whole time in the underworld so I took her with me.
Lane:shun thank you.
Preview end.

my
god
reading
that
is
not
only
painful
but
also
soul
crushing

please for the sake of everyone
format this differently
it hurts to read
please
im getting heavy 2000's flashbacks...

(Oct. 29, 2020  9:44 PM)LeonidasKerbeus Wrote: [ -> ]my
god
reading
that
is
not
only
painful
but
also
soul
crushing

please for the sake of everyone
format this differently
it hurts to read
please
im getting heavy 2000's flashbacks...

Well
that’s
screen
play
for
you

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Has the winner for the character contest been chosen?

No Not yet

Part 2 chapter 16 awaken lanes sister Melissa/the New maiden.
Melissa:I am back lane.
Lane:how did you get her back.
Shun:she was in the underworld with me.
Later during training with shu.
Shun breaths heavily.
Shun:I am not done . go maiden.
Maiden attacks spriggan brutally.
Shu:looks like your ready for your final test.
Spriggan hits maiden then both beys went flying.
Shun:what is it.
Shu:maiden wants to evolve.
Shun:huh.
Maiden glows red and so does the mark of maiden.
Shu:see.
Later.
Shun:it's done guardian maiden.
Shu:lets see how strong maiden is now.
Shun:right.
3 2 1 go shoot.
Shu:go spriggan.
Spriggan hits maiden.
Shun:go maiden.
Maiden dash instantly fast into the middle.
Shu:what. Spriggan upper shoot.
Spriggan hits maiden out of the center.
Shun:go maiden guardian crash.
Maiden hits spriggan and knocks it into the air.
Shu:what power.
Shun:go maiden guardian recollection.
The sparking ring glows red then a huge explosion of energy hits spriggan.
Shu:not good spriggan.
Spriggan breaks free but suffers alot of spin loss.
Shun:good game big brother.
Maiden hits spriggan.
Shu:are you sure about that.
Spriggan starts to speed up.
Shun:maidens time.
*time stops*
Shun:looks like I made it in time.
Shun poses.
Shun:go maiden guardian overlay.
Maiden hits spriggan repeatedly.
Shun:time will now resume.
Shun poses.
Shu:what.
Spriggan is sent flying and knocked out.
Shun:not bad right big brother.
Shun smiles.
Shu:your really catching up to me sis.
Later.
Lane:I wonder.
Lane grabs Lucifer.
Lucifer:let me guess heal my injurys so I can see shun.
Lane:right can you do that.
Lucifer:sure.
Later.
Shun walks into lanes hospital room.
Shun:lane are you here?
Lane:I am here.
Shun kisses lane.
Lane:what was that for.
Shun:look at your hand.
Lane looks at his hand there is a ring on it.
Shun:will you marry me?
Chapter end.

I'd love to crossover with you

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It's beykids bro he said he wanted to cross over with you

(Oct. 30, 2020  8:36 PM)Lordmind71 Wrote: [ -> ]I'd love to crossover with you

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It's beykids bro he said he wanted to cross over with you

Right now I can't do a collab due me finishing the canon story line if you want we can do a collab soon.

How does Shun go from marrying Free to Lane?

(Oct. 30, 2020  11:20 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: [ -> ]How does Shun go from marrying Free to Lane?

Shun is gonna divorce free. No spoilers but something is gonna gonna happen when they get married

(Oct. 30, 2020  11:22 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]

(Oct. 30, 2020  11:20 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: [ -> ]How does Shun go from marrying Free to Lane?

Shun is gonna divorce free. No spoilers but something is gonna gonna happen when they get married

I knew it, Shun had an affair all along. Also this is something you may have wanted to explain before as it creates a sense of character mistrust in readers.

(Oct. 30, 2020  11:23 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: [ -> ]

(Oct. 30, 2020  11:22 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Shun is gonna divorce free. No spoilers but something is gonna gonna happen when they get married

I knew it, Shun had an affair all along. Also this is something you may have wanted to explain before as it creates a sense of character mistrust in readers.

Shun broke up with free like a few chapters ago.

(Oct. 30, 2020  11:23 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: [ -> ]

(Oct. 30, 2020  11:22 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Shun is gonna divorce free. No spoilers but something is gonna gonna happen when they get married

I knew it, Shun had an affair all along. Also this is something you may have wanted to explain before as it creates a sense of character mistrust in readers.

It only gets worse?....

(Oct. 31, 2020  12:03 AM)Valtryek Aoi Wrote: [ -> ]

(Oct. 30, 2020  11:23 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: [ -> ]I knew it, Shun had an affair all along. Also this is something you may have wanted to explain before as it creates a sense of character mistrust in readers.

It only gets worse?....

Shun broke up with free .

So tomorrow we’re gonna learn who wins. Nice