Aug. 12, 2021 4:07 PM
Aug. 13, 2021 1:39 PM
Chapter 3: Overcome! Icarus VS Wendigo! (Yes I changed the title)
Ichiban: That's... Fubuki Sumie?
Watashi (crosses his arms): We were just having a battle, there's something wrong about it?
Fubuki: I've told you a hundred times do not underestimate your opponent!
Watashi: That won't make a difference, I look down on 'em or not I'll be the one victorious in the end!
(Fubuki walks up to Watashi)
Fubuki (pats his shoulder): You don't ge-
Watashi (removes his hand): I don't have time for this.
(Watashi walks away)
Ichiban (Looks at Watashi who was walking away): Wait! What about my rematch?
(Watashi didn't respond and lefts)
Ichiban (screams): I'm gonna win next time just you wait!
Fubuki (looks at Ichiban): So you're Valt Aoi's son?
Ichiban: Yes it's me.
Fubuki: You're shooting stance is a little bit messed up.
Ichiban: I.. Is that so?
Fubuki (Takes out his launcher): I can train you if you want.
Ichiban (Smiles broadly): I would be glad to!
Fubuki: Alright, let's begin then.
(Ichiban starts to practice his launch)
Ichiban: Go... Shoot!
(Icarus lands on the stadium unbalanced and goes crazy in the stadium)
Fubuki: That's Valt's shoot form, It isn't meant for Icarus.
Ichiban (Looks at Fubuki): Then what should I do?
Fubuki: Try to make your own shoot form, which fits best for you and your bey
Ichiban (Looks at Icarus): The best huh....
Watashi (Returns): You're still here huh?
Ichiban: I told ya, I'm not going anywhere before our rematch!
Watashi: You're very stubborn than you look,.... Ichi-bad.
Ichiban: Don't call me by that name again!
Watashi: I don't think you're worthy for your name (Takes out his launcher) and I shall prove it once again!
Ichiban (Looks at Icarus): I'm counting on you Icarus! Let's get him!
Fubuki: (Watashi....)
(Flashback starts)
Watashi (Holds Emperor Forneus): So this your bey... Fubuki-san?
Fubuki: Yeah, Your skills have proved me that you're a capable blader to wield Forneus.
Watashi: Thanks, I'll take good care of it!
~After some years~
Watashi (Checking his Bey-tab): So this is Kiwami System... I'm gonna evolve Forneus even stronger now!
(Watashi reaches the Beigoma Lab)
Watashi (While working on his bey): I'm going to make you even different and stronger than before!
Watashi (Holds Wendigo): It's finally ready... Gloom Wendigo!
Fubuki (Checks on Watashi): What're you doing?
(Fubuki witnesses Watashi holding Wendigo)
Fubuki: So you evolved Forneus into... this?
Watashi: Yeah, It's the true form of Forneus!
Fubuki: (True form of Forneus..?)
(Flashback Ends)
Fubuki (Comes back in present): Alright then, The battle will be held in the two points format.
Fubuki: First Battle!
(Ichiban and Watashi takes their shooting stances)
Watashi (Switches to lower mode): Let's try this...
Ichiban (Switches to upper mode): (I cannot think of a better shooting stance... what shoud I do..?)
Fubuki: Ready, Set!
Ichiban/Watashi: 3! 2! (Ichiban uses his primary shoot form)
Watashi: 1! (He holds his launcher with his left hand)
Ichiban: (Left one...)
Ichiban/Watashi: Go... Shoot!
Watashi: God's Warning!
Ichiban: I won't let you!
(Before landing, Icarus hits Wendigo in mid-air and throws it away)
Watashi: What?
Ichiban: I'm going to burst Wendigo in a single blow! Aviate.. Slash!!
(Icarus's 4 blades shines and it heads towards Wendigo)
Watashi: You won't be able to burst Wendigo, not even in your wildest dreams!
(Wendigo's driver tilts towards the edge of the stadium)
Watashi: Moment Crash!!
(Icarus and Wendigo clashes with each other and creates a explosive beam of light inthe stadium)
(Both Icarus and Wendigo gets knocked out into the air)
Icarus: Huh?
Watashi (Catches Wendigo): Dang it!
(Icarus Bursts)
Ichiban: (Gasps)
Ichiban/Watashi (Looks at Fubuki): Who won?
Fubuki (Points towards Ichiban): Aviate Icarus, Over Finish!
Ichiban (Sighs): It was so close...
Watashi (Presses Wendigo Harder): I shouldn't have catche-
(Suddenly Wendigo bursts in his hand)
Watashi: Huh?
Ichiban: This time I'm definetly gonna win!
Watashi: You're starting to piss me off....
Fubuki: Second Battle!
Ichiban (Holds Icarus): Icarus....
(Ichiban's surroundings turns completely white and Icarus appears front of him)
Icarus: What will be your strategy?
Ichiban: I want to unleash your true potential.. But I can't... I cannot even launch you properly.
Icarus: Just launch as hard as you can, Leave the rest to me.
Ichiban: Huh?
Icarus: Watashi is certain of his win, His guard is down. This is our chance to win!
Ichiban (Smiles): Yeah!
(Ichiban's surrondings turned back to normal)
Ichiban (Switches to lower mode): (No... I'm going to launch you properly this time.... No matter what!)
(Ichiban grabs his launcher with his right hand and holds it vertically)
Watashi: (What is he up to?)
Fubuki: Ready, Set!
Ichiban 3! 2! 1! (He spins just like Valt and he stomps his left leg on the ground)
Ichiban/Watashi: Go.... Shoot! (He holds the launcher sting and rapidly switches to a horziontal launch)
Watashi: Devil's Awakening!
(Wendigo rides along the edge of the stadium)
Ichiban: Amaze Boost!
(Icarus lands on stadium and speeds up rapidly by using the metal portion of the driver)
Fubuki (Gasps): It's even faster than before!
Watashi: Send him flying, Wendigo!
(Wendigo hits the wall and heads towards Icarus)
Ichiban: Amaze Strike!
(Icarus speeds up and heads towards Wendigo)
Ichiban: I'm...
Watashi: Not gonna lose..
Ichiban/Watashi: No matter what!!
(Icarus and Wendigo collides and Icarus sends Wendigo into the air)
Watashi (Unleashes his aura): Time to end this... just like last time! Wendigo!!
(Wendigo appears from the bright purple aura)
Ichiban (Unleashes his aura and his eyes turns blue): Icarus!
Icarus ('s eyes shines): Time to put this to an end!
(Icarus appears from the bright white aura)
Watashi: Gloom Dive!!
(Icarus hits the stadium wall and heads towards Wendigo into the air)
Ichiban: Aviate Flight!!
(Icarus's 4 blades and Flight Armor begins to shine)
(Wendigo and Icarus clashes each other and creates a huge beam of explosion)
Watashi: It's my victory!
Ichiban: Break through! Icarus!!
(Icarus bursts Wendigo by piercing through him)
Watashi: You gotta be kidding me!
Fubuki: Aviate Icarus, Burst Finish! With the score of 3-0, Ichiban Aoi is the winner!
Ichiban (Smiles): We did it!
Watashi (Picks up Wendigo): I can't believe this....
Watashi (Looks at Ichiban): I'm still not convinced.
Ichiban: Huh?
Watashi: It was a fluke! It has to be!
Fubuki (Looks at Watashi): Watashi, You cannot always win until you learn how to lose.
Watashi: (Sighs) I hate to say it but.... You're tough, Ichiban.
Ichiban: You're tough too, Watashi. I wanna battle even more stronger bladers!
Fubuki: More stonger opponents? How about you come with me? I was going to america with Watashi.
Ichiban: America? (He pictures Shu Kurenai) You mean the New York Bulls?
Fubuki: Yeah, you're gonna meet many stronger bladers there, One of them is Shu Kurenai's succesor.
Watashi (Looks at Ichiban): He wields Spriggan, the ultimate balance type bey!
Ichiban: Shu Kurenai.... (Dad told me that Shu is his best friend and one of his biggest rivals.)
Fubuki: So you wanna come or not?
Ichiban: Of cource I'll come!
Fubuki (Smiles): Then it's settled!
(To Be Continued)
Spoiler (Click to View)
Ichiban: That's... Fubuki Sumie?
Watashi (crosses his arms): We were just having a battle, there's something wrong about it?
Fubuki: I've told you a hundred times do not underestimate your opponent!
Watashi: That won't make a difference, I look down on 'em or not I'll be the one victorious in the end!
(Fubuki walks up to Watashi)
Fubuki (pats his shoulder): You don't ge-
Watashi (removes his hand): I don't have time for this.
(Watashi walks away)
Ichiban (Looks at Watashi who was walking away): Wait! What about my rematch?
(Watashi didn't respond and lefts)
Ichiban (screams): I'm gonna win next time just you wait!
Fubuki (looks at Ichiban): So you're Valt Aoi's son?
Ichiban: Yes it's me.
Fubuki: You're shooting stance is a little bit messed up.
Ichiban: I.. Is that so?
Fubuki (Takes out his launcher): I can train you if you want.
Ichiban (Smiles broadly): I would be glad to!
Fubuki: Alright, let's begin then.
(Ichiban starts to practice his launch)
Ichiban: Go... Shoot!
(Icarus lands on the stadium unbalanced and goes crazy in the stadium)
Fubuki: That's Valt's shoot form, It isn't meant for Icarus.
Ichiban (Looks at Fubuki): Then what should I do?
Fubuki: Try to make your own shoot form, which fits best for you and your bey
Ichiban (Looks at Icarus): The best huh....
Watashi (Returns): You're still here huh?
Ichiban: I told ya, I'm not going anywhere before our rematch!
Watashi: You're very stubborn than you look,.... Ichi-bad.
Ichiban: Don't call me by that name again!
Watashi: I don't think you're worthy for your name (Takes out his launcher) and I shall prove it once again!
Ichiban (Looks at Icarus): I'm counting on you Icarus! Let's get him!
Fubuki: (Watashi....)
(Flashback starts)
Watashi (Holds Emperor Forneus): So this your bey... Fubuki-san?
Fubuki: Yeah, Your skills have proved me that you're a capable blader to wield Forneus.
Watashi: Thanks, I'll take good care of it!
~After some years~
Watashi (Checking his Bey-tab): So this is Kiwami System... I'm gonna evolve Forneus even stronger now!
(Watashi reaches the Beigoma Lab)
Watashi (While working on his bey): I'm going to make you even different and stronger than before!
Watashi (Holds Wendigo): It's finally ready... Gloom Wendigo!
Fubuki (Checks on Watashi): What're you doing?
(Fubuki witnesses Watashi holding Wendigo)
Fubuki: So you evolved Forneus into... this?
Watashi: Yeah, It's the true form of Forneus!
Fubuki: (True form of Forneus..?)
(Flashback Ends)
Fubuki (Comes back in present): Alright then, The battle will be held in the two points format.
Fubuki: First Battle!
(Ichiban and Watashi takes their shooting stances)
Watashi (Switches to lower mode): Let's try this...
Ichiban (Switches to upper mode): (I cannot think of a better shooting stance... what shoud I do..?)
Fubuki: Ready, Set!
Ichiban/Watashi: 3! 2! (Ichiban uses his primary shoot form)
Watashi: 1! (He holds his launcher with his left hand)
Ichiban: (Left one...)
Ichiban/Watashi: Go... Shoot!
Watashi: God's Warning!
Ichiban: I won't let you!
(Before landing, Icarus hits Wendigo in mid-air and throws it away)
Watashi: What?
Ichiban: I'm going to burst Wendigo in a single blow! Aviate.. Slash!!
(Icarus's 4 blades shines and it heads towards Wendigo)
Watashi: You won't be able to burst Wendigo, not even in your wildest dreams!
(Wendigo's driver tilts towards the edge of the stadium)
Watashi: Moment Crash!!
(Icarus and Wendigo clashes with each other and creates a explosive beam of light inthe stadium)
(Both Icarus and Wendigo gets knocked out into the air)
Icarus: Huh?
Watashi (Catches Wendigo): Dang it!
(Icarus Bursts)
Ichiban: (Gasps)
Ichiban/Watashi (Looks at Fubuki): Who won?
Fubuki (Points towards Ichiban): Aviate Icarus, Over Finish!
Ichiban (Sighs): It was so close...
Watashi (Presses Wendigo Harder): I shouldn't have catche-
(Suddenly Wendigo bursts in his hand)
Watashi: Huh?
Ichiban: This time I'm definetly gonna win!
Watashi: You're starting to piss me off....
Fubuki: Second Battle!
Ichiban (Holds Icarus): Icarus....
(Ichiban's surroundings turns completely white and Icarus appears front of him)
Icarus: What will be your strategy?
Ichiban: I want to unleash your true potential.. But I can't... I cannot even launch you properly.
Icarus: Just launch as hard as you can, Leave the rest to me.
Ichiban: Huh?
Icarus: Watashi is certain of his win, His guard is down. This is our chance to win!
Ichiban (Smiles): Yeah!
(Ichiban's surrondings turned back to normal)
Ichiban (Switches to lower mode): (No... I'm going to launch you properly this time.... No matter what!)
(Ichiban grabs his launcher with his right hand and holds it vertically)
Watashi: (What is he up to?)
Fubuki: Ready, Set!
Ichiban 3! 2! 1! (He spins just like Valt and he stomps his left leg on the ground)
Ichiban/Watashi: Go.... Shoot! (He holds the launcher sting and rapidly switches to a horziontal launch)
Watashi: Devil's Awakening!
(Wendigo rides along the edge of the stadium)
Ichiban: Amaze Boost!
(Icarus lands on stadium and speeds up rapidly by using the metal portion of the driver)
Fubuki (Gasps): It's even faster than before!
Watashi: Send him flying, Wendigo!
(Wendigo hits the wall and heads towards Icarus)
Ichiban: Amaze Strike!
(Icarus speeds up and heads towards Wendigo)
Ichiban: I'm...
Watashi: Not gonna lose..
Ichiban/Watashi: No matter what!!
(Icarus and Wendigo collides and Icarus sends Wendigo into the air)
Watashi (Unleashes his aura): Time to end this... just like last time! Wendigo!!
(Wendigo appears from the bright purple aura)
Ichiban (Unleashes his aura and his eyes turns blue): Icarus!
Icarus ('s eyes shines): Time to put this to an end!
(Icarus appears from the bright white aura)
Watashi: Gloom Dive!!
(Icarus hits the stadium wall and heads towards Wendigo into the air)
Ichiban: Aviate Flight!!
(Icarus's 4 blades and Flight Armor begins to shine)
(Wendigo and Icarus clashes each other and creates a huge beam of explosion)
Watashi: It's my victory!
Ichiban: Break through! Icarus!!
(Icarus bursts Wendigo by piercing through him)
Watashi: You gotta be kidding me!
Fubuki: Aviate Icarus, Burst Finish! With the score of 3-0, Ichiban Aoi is the winner!
Ichiban (Smiles): We did it!
Watashi (Picks up Wendigo): I can't believe this....
Watashi (Looks at Ichiban): I'm still not convinced.
Ichiban: Huh?
Watashi: It was a fluke! It has to be!
Fubuki (Looks at Watashi): Watashi, You cannot always win until you learn how to lose.
Watashi: (Sighs) I hate to say it but.... You're tough, Ichiban.
Ichiban: You're tough too, Watashi. I wanna battle even more stronger bladers!
Fubuki: More stonger opponents? How about you come with me? I was going to america with Watashi.
Ichiban: America? (He pictures Shu Kurenai) You mean the New York Bulls?
Fubuki: Yeah, you're gonna meet many stronger bladers there, One of them is Shu Kurenai's succesor.
Watashi (Looks at Ichiban): He wields Spriggan, the ultimate balance type bey!
Ichiban: Shu Kurenai.... (Dad told me that Shu is his best friend and one of his biggest rivals.)
Fubuki: So you wanna come or not?
Ichiban: Of cource I'll come!
Fubuki (Smiles): Then it's settled!
(To Be Continued)
Aug. 13, 2021 1:55 PM
awesome! cant wait to read!
Aug. 13, 2021 1:56 PM
I forgot to mention one thing, Ichiban uses Valt's Sparking/DB shoot form. (But changed it in this chapter)
Aug. 13, 2021 1:59 PM
nice chapter! ichiban showed em whats up, and whats up is icarus, the winged god!
wow, nice!
(Aug. 13, 2021 1:56 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: [ -> ]I forgot to mention one thing, Ichiban uses Valt's Sparking/DB shoot form.
wow, nice!
Aug. 13, 2021 2:03 PM
Shin is coming! Yay! Also good on Ichiban for getting his own shoot form.
Aug. 13, 2021 4:00 PM
Ultimate Balance type....
why dragon is balance tyor?
Aug. 13, 2021 5:09 PM
(Aug. 13, 2021 4:00 PM)Demon Belial Wrote: [ -> ]Ultimate Balance type....
why dragon is balance tyor?
I guess he can make Dragon a balance type. (There are so many attack type beys already though)
Aug. 13, 2021 5:12 PM
Aug. 13, 2021 5:15 PM
Awesome chapter
Valkyrie reading this be like: I have a son?
Icarus: Yes father.
Valkyrie reading this be like: I have a son?
Icarus: Yes father.
Aug. 13, 2021 5:16 PM
I can't wait for the next episode!
Aug. 13, 2021 5:18 PM
(Aug. 13, 2021 5:15 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]Awesome chapter
Valkyrie reading this be like: I have a son?
Icarus: Yes father.
It would be mother according to mythology but it's a spinning top game at the end of the day.
Aug. 13, 2021 5:20 PM
(Aug. 13, 2021 5:15 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]Awesome chapter
Valkyrie reading this be like: I have a son?
Icarus: Yes father.
Hmmmm I wouldn't say son... Valkyrie reborn into Icarus. So they're basically the same soul in different body/bey.
Aug. 13, 2021 5:20 PM
(Aug. 13, 2021 5:18 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: [ -> ](Aug. 13, 2021 5:15 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]Awesome chapter
Valkyrie reading this be like: I have a son?
Icarus: Yes father.
It would be mother according to mythology but it's a spinning top game at the end of the day.
Well, Valkyrie in the anime is a boy (I share such a strong bond with my bey, I knew it was male before I even watched God/Evolution lol) but I could care less if it's a Boy Or Girl
Aug. 13, 2021 5:20 PM
Same with me
Aug. 13, 2021 5:21 PM
(Aug. 13, 2021 5:20 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [ -> ]yeah ditto(Aug. 13, 2021 5:18 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: [ -> ]It would be mother according to mythology but it's a spinning top game at the end of the day.
Well, Valkyrie in the anime is a boy (I share such a strong bond with my bey, I knew it was male before I even watched God/Evolution lol) but I could care less if it's a Boy Or Girl
Aug. 13, 2021 5:23 PM
Is anyone else bored right now
I kinda am
I kinda am
Aug. 14, 2021 11:03 AM
I'm gonna spend my whole day on Chapter 4 lol, to make it more longer and add even more details.
Aug. 19, 2021 9:15 PM
Sorry I couldn't deliver the chapter on time (I got the same excuse exams, (I regret taking Science lol))
And I have good news too, I decided to extend the first arc so I could make debutes of more characters.
Chapter 4:
Chapter 4: The Demon King Emerges!
Ichiban (Opens the door): I'm back!
Valt (comes down the stairs): Oh you're back. I got a text message from Fubuki.
Ichiban: I didn't knew he was in touch with you.
Valt: My bad.. I didn't told you about him, he's my succesor... (He looks the other direction) in a way.
Ichiban (makes a questionable expression): Succesor..?
Valt: He was the captain of Beigoma but got promotion and became the coach. And I was the one who build the team, In other words...
Ichiban: You were the previous captain before him..?
Valt (Smiles): Yeah... and now it's getting dark. Let's have the dinner and after that you should sleep, if you wanna wake up on time.
Ichiban: Alright!
~The Next Day~
(The alarm clock rings)
Ichiban (turns it off): Heh, It's the first time I've ever woke up on time.
Valt (comes at his room): It's time to wa-
(He notices Ichiban was already ready, carrying a backpack)
Valt: Oh you're already ready. (Smiles)
Ichiban (leaves his home and waves at Valt while running): Now I'm off! Take care of yourself, dad!
Valt (waves back): Don't worry about me, You take care of yourself and Valk- I mean.. Icarus!
(Ichiban reached the New Beigoma)
Fubuki (Notices Ichiban): Oh you're here.
Ichiban: Yeah!
Watashi: Heh, I thought you won't show up.
Ichiban: Sorry but I wanted to battle Spriggan!
Fubuki (Smiles): Don't get excited already, Spriggan is going to be your final challenge.
Ichiban/Watashi: Final Challenge?
Fubuki: Yeah... two more bladers are going to join this journey!
Ichiban: But didn't you said that we're going straight to america?
Fubuki (Smiles): It's a surprise. Besides, you're gonna battle more stronger bladers and make your way to the Kiwami League.
Ichiban (makes a questionable expression): Kiwami League?
Watashi: It's a league, only the strongest 12 bladers who have registered are going to enter.
Ichiban (Smiles): Sounds fun! I wanna enter too!
Fubuki: I presumed that, so I already signed you up for the league.
Ichiban: Oh cool!
(A Battleship-like plane lands on the rooftop)
Fubuki (looks at the sky): Oh it's here.
Ichiban (runs to the rooftop): I'll reach there first!
Watashi (tried to stop him): Hey, don't run around like a kid!
(All of them reached at the rooftop)
(The door of the plan automatically opens)
Fubuki (pats Ichiban and Watashi's shoulder): Let's go.
Ichiban (Smiles): Yeah! (He enters) I'm gonna look for the bladers!
Watashi (Enters the plane): Can you slow down a bit?
(Ichiban reaches the air deck and witnesses two bladers there)
Ichiban (Looks at the masked blader): Hey why do you have a mask on your face? (He laughs) It's funny it's the same design like your shirt.
??? (Looks at Ichiban): I'm the Demon King! (Takes out his bey) the owner of Oni Belial!
Ichiban: Demon King? (Smiles) You're really interesting!
Watashi (comes at the air deck): That's Ben Daikokuten.
Ichiban (touches his forehead with his finger): Never heard of him...
Watashi: He's already selected for the league, (crosses his hands) He even defeated ten bladers in a battle. (Smirks) He's worthy to take on Wendigo.
Ichiban: Defeated ten bladers..? That's insane!
Watashi (whispers at Inchiban's ears): He's very shy, that's why he wears a mask.
Ichiban (quietly): Oh I see... But who's the other guy?
Watashi: He's... Zeno Syagrios, owner of Zeus.
Zeno (while sitting on the bench): (Waves at them)
Ben (While holding Belial): Enough chit-chatting! Is none of you gonna challenge the demon?
Ichiban: Yeah I'm fir-
Watashi (Takes out his launcher): You bet! I'm gonna burst Belial in a single strike!
Ichiban: Hey! I was the one who was asking!!
Ben (points at Watashi): I'm gonna battle that huge guy, let's see who'll get burst in a single strike.
Ichiban (makes a desperate look): Awww.. Come on..
(Both of them reaches the stadium and took their shoot stance)
Fubuki (enters the air deck): They're already having a battle..?
Ichiban: I guess I'll the ref.
Watashi: (Belial has rubber on it's blade... I need to be careful or else it will drain Wendigo's stamina..)
(Ben switches Belial to upper mode, Nexa disc to free spin mode and removes the V-gear from the driver)
Ben (takes his launching stance): I hope you won't run away after your defeat.
Watashi (sighs): You talk a lot don't ya?
Ichiban: First Battle! Ready, Set!
Watashi/Ben: 3! 2!
Watashi: 1! (Catches the launcher with his right hand)
Watashi/Ben: Go... Shoot!!
(Wendigo circles around the stadium and rides along the edge of the stadium)
Watashi: Let your inner devil awaken! Wendigo!
Ben: Venture Flash!
(Belial rides the edge of the stadium and lands a fierce blow on Wendigo, which makes it take the center)
Watashi (Gasps): Not bad at all...
Ben (covers himself with his cape): Venture Shoot!
(Belial lands barrage of attacks, striking from every direction)
Watashi: God's Warning!
(Wendigo's blades shines and creates a armor around the blade)
Ben: Let's finish this! Oni Bomber!!
(Belial lits up and lands a explosive slash attack on Wendigo creating smokes around the stadium)
Watashi (Gasps): I can't see anything!
(A bey bursts in the smoke and drops on the ground.... it was Wendigo)
Ichiban: Oni Belial... Burst finish! Ben Daikokuten wins...
Fubuki: (You've still got a long way to go... Watashi)
Watashi (Grabs Wendigo): It can't be...
Zeno (makes a camera gesture at Ben): Demon King... huh?
Ben (laughs): It's not like you're weak... I'm just way stronger!
Ichiban (Smiles): Hey, Demon King! It's my turn now!
Ben: Heh, You all can battle me anytime, I can do this all day!
Watashi: Belial's attacks are more stronger than Icarus, You've got no chance against him.
Ben (looks at Ichiban): Yup, You got a chance of running away, You're out of my league (laughs)
Ichiban (switches to lower mode): Then I won't let him attack!
(Icarus lits up)
Watashi: Fine then, First Battle!
Zeno (comes closer to the stadium): I guess I'll take a closer look this time.
Watashi: Ready, Set!
Ichiban/Ben: 3! 2! 1!
Ichiban/Ben: Go... Shoot!!
Ichiban: Go! Amaze Strike!!
(Icarus leans on it's driver, which makes the metal portion touch the stadium generating sparks and gaining speed, it head towards Belial)
Ben (covers himself with his cape): Venture Shoot!
(Belial and Icarus collides at the center, creating a havoc on the stadium).
Ichiban: Send it flying!
(Icarus sends Belial flying and keeps on attacking it, not letting Belial land on the stadium)
Ben: (Gasps)
Ichiban (unleashed his aura): Icarus!
(Icarus appears, slashing the white aura with his claws)
Ichiban ('s hand shines with a white glow as he makes a fist): Aviate Slash!!
(Icarus's blades lit up and lands a devastating blow on Belial, which makes it burst instantly)
Ben: ....
Icarus: Alright!!
Watashi (Looks at Ichiban with a serious look): (How did he pulled this off....?)
Zeno (makes a camera gesture and looks at Ichiban): Looks like that tiny spark took all my attention (smiles)
Ben: (begans to laugh idiotically)
Icarus (looks at him): What's the matter?
Ben: Looks like you're worthy for this!
(Ben switches Belial to lower mode, switches the nexa disc to fixed mode and adds the V-gear on the driver)
Ben (shows Belial to Ichiban): The real battle starts now!
Ichiban (shows Icarus to Ben): I'm ready when you are!
[To Be Continued]
Next Chapter: Thunderstorm! Starlight Zeus!!
(The Chapter lived up to my expectations, but ya'll can tell me your opinion).
And I have good news too, I decided to extend the first arc so I could make debutes of more characters.
Chapter 4:
Spoiler (Click to View)
Chapter 4: The Demon King Emerges!
Ichiban (Opens the door): I'm back!
Valt (comes down the stairs): Oh you're back. I got a text message from Fubuki.
Ichiban: I didn't knew he was in touch with you.
Valt: My bad.. I didn't told you about him, he's my succesor... (He looks the other direction) in a way.
Ichiban (makes a questionable expression): Succesor..?
Valt: He was the captain of Beigoma but got promotion and became the coach. And I was the one who build the team, In other words...
Ichiban: You were the previous captain before him..?
Valt (Smiles): Yeah... and now it's getting dark. Let's have the dinner and after that you should sleep, if you wanna wake up on time.
Ichiban: Alright!
~The Next Day~
(The alarm clock rings)
Ichiban (turns it off): Heh, It's the first time I've ever woke up on time.
Valt (comes at his room): It's time to wa-
(He notices Ichiban was already ready, carrying a backpack)
Valt: Oh you're already ready. (Smiles)
Ichiban (leaves his home and waves at Valt while running): Now I'm off! Take care of yourself, dad!
Valt (waves back): Don't worry about me, You take care of yourself and Valk- I mean.. Icarus!
(Ichiban reached the New Beigoma)
Fubuki (Notices Ichiban): Oh you're here.
Ichiban: Yeah!
Watashi: Heh, I thought you won't show up.
Ichiban: Sorry but I wanted to battle Spriggan!
Fubuki (Smiles): Don't get excited already, Spriggan is going to be your final challenge.
Ichiban/Watashi: Final Challenge?
Fubuki: Yeah... two more bladers are going to join this journey!
Ichiban: But didn't you said that we're going straight to america?
Fubuki (Smiles): It's a surprise. Besides, you're gonna battle more stronger bladers and make your way to the Kiwami League.
Ichiban (makes a questionable expression): Kiwami League?
Watashi: It's a league, only the strongest 12 bladers who have registered are going to enter.
Ichiban (Smiles): Sounds fun! I wanna enter too!
Fubuki: I presumed that, so I already signed you up for the league.
Ichiban: Oh cool!
(A Battleship-like plane lands on the rooftop)
Fubuki (looks at the sky): Oh it's here.
Ichiban (runs to the rooftop): I'll reach there first!
Watashi (tried to stop him): Hey, don't run around like a kid!
(All of them reached at the rooftop)
(The door of the plan automatically opens)
Fubuki (pats Ichiban and Watashi's shoulder): Let's go.
Ichiban (Smiles): Yeah! (He enters) I'm gonna look for the bladers!
Watashi (Enters the plane): Can you slow down a bit?
(Ichiban reaches the air deck and witnesses two bladers there)
Ichiban (Looks at the masked blader): Hey why do you have a mask on your face? (He laughs) It's funny it's the same design like your shirt.
??? (Looks at Ichiban): I'm the Demon King! (Takes out his bey) the owner of Oni Belial!
Ichiban: Demon King? (Smiles) You're really interesting!
Watashi (comes at the air deck): That's Ben Daikokuten.
Ichiban (touches his forehead with his finger): Never heard of him...
Watashi: He's already selected for the league, (crosses his hands) He even defeated ten bladers in a battle. (Smirks) He's worthy to take on Wendigo.
Ichiban: Defeated ten bladers..? That's insane!
Watashi (whispers at Inchiban's ears): He's very shy, that's why he wears a mask.
Ichiban (quietly): Oh I see... But who's the other guy?
Watashi: He's... Zeno Syagrios, owner of Zeus.
Zeno (while sitting on the bench): (Waves at them)
Ben (While holding Belial): Enough chit-chatting! Is none of you gonna challenge the demon?
Ichiban: Yeah I'm fir-
Watashi (Takes out his launcher): You bet! I'm gonna burst Belial in a single strike!
Ichiban: Hey! I was the one who was asking!!
Ben (points at Watashi): I'm gonna battle that huge guy, let's see who'll get burst in a single strike.
Ichiban (makes a desperate look): Awww.. Come on..
(Both of them reaches the stadium and took their shoot stance)
Fubuki (enters the air deck): They're already having a battle..?
Ichiban: I guess I'll the ref.
Watashi: (Belial has rubber on it's blade... I need to be careful or else it will drain Wendigo's stamina..)
(Ben switches Belial to upper mode, Nexa disc to free spin mode and removes the V-gear from the driver)
Ben (takes his launching stance): I hope you won't run away after your defeat.
Watashi (sighs): You talk a lot don't ya?
Ichiban: First Battle! Ready, Set!
Watashi/Ben: 3! 2!
Watashi: 1! (Catches the launcher with his right hand)
Watashi/Ben: Go... Shoot!!
(Wendigo circles around the stadium and rides along the edge of the stadium)
Watashi: Let your inner devil awaken! Wendigo!
Ben: Venture Flash!
(Belial rides the edge of the stadium and lands a fierce blow on Wendigo, which makes it take the center)
Watashi (Gasps): Not bad at all...
Ben (covers himself with his cape): Venture Shoot!
(Belial lands barrage of attacks, striking from every direction)
Watashi: God's Warning!
(Wendigo's blades shines and creates a armor around the blade)
Ben: Let's finish this! Oni Bomber!!
(Belial lits up and lands a explosive slash attack on Wendigo creating smokes around the stadium)
Watashi (Gasps): I can't see anything!
(A bey bursts in the smoke and drops on the ground.... it was Wendigo)
Ichiban: Oni Belial... Burst finish! Ben Daikokuten wins...
Fubuki: (You've still got a long way to go... Watashi)
Watashi (Grabs Wendigo): It can't be...
Zeno (makes a camera gesture at Ben): Demon King... huh?
Ben (laughs): It's not like you're weak... I'm just way stronger!
Ichiban (Smiles): Hey, Demon King! It's my turn now!
Ben: Heh, You all can battle me anytime, I can do this all day!
Watashi: Belial's attacks are more stronger than Icarus, You've got no chance against him.
Ben (looks at Ichiban): Yup, You got a chance of running away, You're out of my league (laughs)
Ichiban (switches to lower mode): Then I won't let him attack!
(Icarus lits up)
Watashi: Fine then, First Battle!
Zeno (comes closer to the stadium): I guess I'll take a closer look this time.
Watashi: Ready, Set!
Ichiban/Ben: 3! 2! 1!
Ichiban/Ben: Go... Shoot!!
Ichiban: Go! Amaze Strike!!
(Icarus leans on it's driver, which makes the metal portion touch the stadium generating sparks and gaining speed, it head towards Belial)
Ben (covers himself with his cape): Venture Shoot!
(Belial and Icarus collides at the center, creating a havoc on the stadium).
Ichiban: Send it flying!
(Icarus sends Belial flying and keeps on attacking it, not letting Belial land on the stadium)
Ben: (Gasps)
Ichiban (unleashed his aura): Icarus!
(Icarus appears, slashing the white aura with his claws)
Ichiban ('s hand shines with a white glow as he makes a fist): Aviate Slash!!
(Icarus's blades lit up and lands a devastating blow on Belial, which makes it burst instantly)
Ben: ....
Icarus: Alright!!
Watashi (Looks at Ichiban with a serious look): (How did he pulled this off....?)
Zeno (makes a camera gesture and looks at Ichiban): Looks like that tiny spark took all my attention (smiles)
Ben: (begans to laugh idiotically)
Icarus (looks at him): What's the matter?
Ben: Looks like you're worthy for this!
(Ben switches Belial to lower mode, switches the nexa disc to fixed mode and adds the V-gear on the driver)
Ben (shows Belial to Ichiban): The real battle starts now!
Ichiban (shows Icarus to Ben): I'm ready when you are!
[To Be Continued]
Next Chapter: Thunderstorm! Starlight Zeus!!
(The Chapter lived up to my expectations, but ya'll can tell me your opinion).
Aug. 19, 2021 9:30 PM
(Aug. 19, 2021 9:15 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: [ -> ]Sorry I couldn't deliver the chapter on time (I got the same excuse exams, (I regret taking Science lol))"Watashi (whispers at Inchiban's ears): He's very shy, that's why he wears a mask."
And I have good news too, I decided to extend the first arc so I could make debutes of more characters.
Chapter 4:
Spoiler (Click to View)
Chapter 4: The Demon King Emerges!
Ichiban (Opens the door): I'm back!
Valt (comes down the stairs): Oh you're back. I got a text message from Fubuki.
Ichiban: I didn't knew he was in touch with you.
Valt: My bad.. I didn't told you about him, he's my succesor... (He looks the other direction) in a way.
Ichiban (makes a questionable expression): Succesor..?
Valt: He was the captain of Beigoma but got promotion and became the coach. And I was the one who build the team, In other words...
Ichiban: You were the previous captain before him..?
Valt (Smiles): Yeah... and now it's getting dark. Let's have the dinner and after that you should sleep, if you wanna wake up on time.
Ichiban: Alright!
~The Next Day~
(The alarm clock rings)
Ichiban (turns it off): Heh, It's the first time I've ever woke up on time.
Valt (comes at his room): It's time to wa-
(He notices Ichiban was already ready, carrying a backpack)
Valt: Oh you're already ready. (Smiles)
Ichiban (leaves his home and waves at Valt while running): Now I'm off! Take care of yourself, dad!
Valt (waves back): Don't worry about me, You take care of yourself and Valk- I mean.. Icarus!
(Ichiban reached the New Beigoma)
Fubuki (Notices Ichiban): Oh you're here.
Ichiban: Yeah!
Watashi: Heh, I thought you won't show up.
Ichiban: Sorry but I wanted to battle Spriggan!
Fubuki (Smiles): Don't get excited already, Spriggan is going to be your final challenge.
Ichiban/Watashi: Final Challenge?
Fubuki: Yeah... two more bladers are going to join this journey!
Ichiban: But didn't you said that we're going straight to america?
Fubuki (Smiles): It's a surprise. Besides, you're gonna battle more stronger bladers and make your way to the Kiwami League.
Ichiban (makes a questionable expression): Kiwami League?
Watashi: It's a league, only the strongest 12 bladers who have registered are going to enter.
Ichiban (Smiles): Sounds fun! I wanna enter too!
Fubuki: I presumed that, so I already signed you up for the league.
Ichiban: Oh cool!
(A Battleship-like plane lands on the rooftop)
Fubuki (looks at the sky): Oh it's here.
Ichiban (runs to the rooftop): I'll reach there first!
Watashi (tried to stop him): Hey, don't run around like a kid!
(All of them reached at the rooftop)
(The door of the plan automatically opens)
Fubuki (pats Ichiban and Watashi's shoulder): Let's go.
Ichiban (Smiles): Yeah! (He enters) I'm gonna look for the bladers!
Watashi (Enters the plane): Can you slow down a bit?
(Ichiban reaches the air deck and witnesses two bladers there)
Ichiban (Looks at the masked blader): Hey why do you have a mask on your face? (He laughs) It's funny it's the same design like your shirt.
??? (Looks at Ichiban): I'm the Demon King! (Takes out his bey) the owner of Oni Belial!
Ichiban: Demon King? (Smiles) You're really interesting!
Watashi (comes at the air deck): That's Ben Daikokuten.
Ichiban (touches his forehead with his finger): Never heard of him...
Watashi: He's already selected for the league, (crosses his hands) He even defeated ten bladers in a battle. (Smirks) He's worthy to take on Wendigo.
Ichiban: Defeated ten bladers..? That's insane!
Watashi (whispers at Inchiban's ears): He's very shy, that's why he wears a mask.
Ichiban (quietly): Oh I see... But who's the other guy?
Watashi: He's... Zeno Syagrios, owner of Zeus.
Zeno (while sitting on the bench): (Waves at them)
Ben (While holding Belial): Enough chit-chatting! Is none of you gonna challenge the demon?
Ichiban: Yeah I'm fir-
Watashi (Takes out his launcher): You bet! I'm gonna burst Belial in a single strike!
Ichiban: Hey! I was the one who was asking!!
Ben (points at Watashi): I'm gonna battle that huge guy, let's see who'll get burst in a single strike.
Ichiban (makes a desperate look): Awww.. Come on..
(Both of them reaches the stadium and took their shoot stance)
Fubuki (enters the air deck): They're already having a battle..?
Ichiban: I guess I'll the ref.
Watashi: (Belial has rubber on it's blade... I need to be careful or else it will drain Wendigo's stamina..)
(Ben switches Belial to upper mode, Nexa disc to free spin mode and removes the V-gear from the driver)
Ben (takes his launching stance): I hope you won't run away after your defeat.
Watashi (sighs): You talk a lot don't ya?
Ichiban: First Battle! Ready, Set!
Watashi/Ben: 3! 2!
Watashi: 1! (Catches the launcher with his right hand)
Watashi/Ben: Go... Shoot!!
(Wendigo circles around the stadium and rides along the edge of the stadium)
Watashi: Let your inner devil awaken! Wendigo!
Ben: Venture Flash!
(Belial rides the edge of the stadium and lands a fierce blow on Wendigo, which makes it take the center)
Watashi (Gasps): Not bad at all...
Ben (covers himself with his cape): Venture Shoot!
(Belial lands barrage of attacks, striking from every direction)
Watashi: God's Warning!
(Wendigo's blades shines and creates a armor around the blade)
Ben: Let's finish this! Oni Bomber!!
(Belial lits up and lands a explosive slash attack on Wendigo creating smokes around the stadium)
Watashi (Gasps): I can't see anything!
(A bey bursts in the smoke and drops on the ground.... it was Wendigo)
Ichiban: Oni Belial... Burst finish! Ben Daikokuten wins...
Fubuki: (You've still got a long way to go... Watashi)
Watashi (Grabs Wendigo): It can't be...
Zeno (makes a camera gesture at Ben): Demon King... huh?
Ben (laughs): It's not like you're weak... I'm just way stronger!
Ichiban (Smiles): Hey, Demon King! It's my turn now!
Ben: Heh, You all can battle me anytime, I can do this all day!
Watashi: Belial's attacks are more stronger than Icarus, You've got no chance against him.
Ben (looks at Ichiban): Yup, You got a chance of running away, You're out of my league (laughs)
Ichiban (switches to lower mode): Then I won't let him attack!
(Icarus lits up)
Watashi: Fine then, First Battle!
Zeno (comes closer to the stadium): I guess I'll take a closer look this time.
Watashi: Ready, Set!
Ichiban/Ben: 3! 2! 1!
Ichiban/Ben: Go... Shoot!!
Ichiban: Go! Amaze Strike!!
(Icarus leans on it's driver, which makes the metal portion touch the stadium generating sparks and gaining speed, it head towards Belial)
Ben (covers himself with his cape): Venture Shoot!
(Belial and Icarus collides at the center, creating a havoc on the stadium).
Ichiban: Send it flying!
(Icarus sends Belial flying and keeps on attacking it, not letting Belial land on the stadium)
Ben: (Gasps)
Ichiban (unleashed his aura): Icarus!
(Icarus appears, slashing the white aura with his claws)
Ichiban ('s hand shines with a white glow as he makes a fist): Aviate Slash!!
(Icarus's blades lit up and lands a devastating blow on Belial, which makes it burst instantly)
Ben: ....
Icarus: Alright!!
Watashi (Looks at Ichiban with a serious look): (How did he pulled this off....?)
Zeno (makes a camera gesture and looks at Ichiban): Looks like that tiny spark took all my attention (smiles)
Ben: (begans to laugh idiotically)
Icarus (looks at him): What's the matter?
Ben: Looks like you're worthy for this!
(Ben switches Belial to lower mode, switches the nexa disc to fixed mode and adds the V-gear on the driver)
Ben (shows Belial to Ichiban): The real battle starts now!
Ichiban (shows Icarus to Ben): I'm ready when you are!
[To Be Continued]
Next Chapter: Thunderstorm! Starlight Zeus!!
(The Chapter lived up to my expectations, but ya'll can tell me your opinion).
He's a shy guy, but doesn't act like one, so I guess he has some kind of Scopophobia / Scoptophobia (the fear of being watched or stared at) (also, idk if you did this character).
Anyways, Nice chapter.
Aug. 19, 2021 9:35 PM
(Aug. 19, 2021 9:30 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: [ -> ](Aug. 19, 2021 9:15 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: [ -> ]Sorry I couldn't deliver the chapter on time (I got the same excuse exams, (I regret taking Science lol))"Watashi (whispers at Inchiban's ears): He's very shy, that's why he wears a mask."
And I have good news too, I decided to extend the first arc so I could make debutes of more characters.
Chapter 4:
Spoiler (Click to View)
Chapter 4: The Demon King Emerges!
Ichiban (Opens the door): I'm back!
Valt (comes down the stairs): Oh you're back. I got a text message from Fubuki.
Ichiban: I didn't knew he was in touch with you.
Valt: My bad.. I didn't told you about him, he's my succesor... (He looks the other direction) in a way.
Ichiban (makes a questionable expression): Succesor..?
Valt: He was the captain of Beigoma but got promotion and became the coach. And I was the one who build the team, In other words...
Ichiban: You were the previous captain before him..?
Valt (Smiles): Yeah... and now it's getting dark. Let's have the dinner and after that you should sleep, if you wanna wake up on time.
Ichiban: Alright!
~The Next Day~
(The alarm clock rings)
Ichiban (turns it off): Heh, It's the first time I've ever woke up on time.
Valt (comes at his room): It's time to wa-
(He notices Ichiban was already ready, carrying a backpack)
Valt: Oh you're already ready. (Smiles)
Ichiban (leaves his home and waves at Valt while running): Now I'm off! Take care of yourself, dad!
Valt (waves back): Don't worry about me, You take care of yourself and Valk- I mean.. Icarus!
(Ichiban reached the New Beigoma)
Fubuki (Notices Ichiban): Oh you're here.
Ichiban: Yeah!
Watashi: Heh, I thought you won't show up.
Ichiban: Sorry but I wanted to battle Spriggan!
Fubuki (Smiles): Don't get excited already, Spriggan is going to be your final challenge.
Ichiban/Watashi: Final Challenge?
Fubuki: Yeah... two more bladers are going to join this journey!
Ichiban: But didn't you said that we're going straight to america?
Fubuki (Smiles): It's a surprise. Besides, you're gonna battle more stronger bladers and make your way to the Kiwami League.
Ichiban (makes a questionable expression): Kiwami League?
Watashi: It's a league, only the strongest 12 bladers who have registered are going to enter.
Ichiban (Smiles): Sounds fun! I wanna enter too!
Fubuki: I presumed that, so I already signed you up for the league.
Ichiban: Oh cool!
(A Battleship-like plane lands on the rooftop)
Fubuki (looks at the sky): Oh it's here.
Ichiban (runs to the rooftop): I'll reach there first!
Watashi (tried to stop him): Hey, don't run around like a kid!
(All of them reached at the rooftop)
(The door of the plan automatically opens)
Fubuki (pats Ichiban and Watashi's shoulder): Let's go.
Ichiban (Smiles): Yeah! (He enters) I'm gonna look for the bladers!
Watashi (Enters the plane): Can you slow down a bit?
(Ichiban reaches the air deck and witnesses two bladers there)
Ichiban (Looks at the masked blader): Hey why do you have a mask on your face? (He laughs) It's funny it's the same design like your shirt.
??? (Looks at Ichiban): I'm the Demon King! (Takes out his bey) the owner of Oni Belial!
Ichiban: Demon King? (Smiles) You're really interesting!
Watashi (comes at the air deck): That's Ben Daikokuten.
Ichiban (touches his forehead with his finger): Never heard of him...
Watashi: He's already selected for the league, (crosses his hands) He even defeated ten bladers in a battle. (Smirks) He's worthy to take on Wendigo.
Ichiban: Defeated ten bladers..? That's insane!
Watashi (whispers at Inchiban's ears): He's very shy, that's why he wears a mask.
Ichiban (quietly): Oh I see... But who's the other guy?
Watashi: He's... Zeno Syagrios, owner of Zeus.
Zeno (while sitting on the bench): (Waves at them)
Ben (While holding Belial): Enough chit-chatting! Is none of you gonna challenge the demon?
Ichiban: Yeah I'm fir-
Watashi (Takes out his launcher): You bet! I'm gonna burst Belial in a single strike!
Ichiban: Hey! I was the one who was asking!!
Ben (points at Watashi): I'm gonna battle that huge guy, let's see who'll get burst in a single strike.
Ichiban (makes a desperate look): Awww.. Come on..
(Both of them reaches the stadium and took their shoot stance)
Fubuki (enters the air deck): They're already having a battle..?
Ichiban: I guess I'll the ref.
Watashi: (Belial has rubber on it's blade... I need to be careful or else it will drain Wendigo's stamina..)
(Ben switches Belial to upper mode, Nexa disc to free spin mode and removes the V-gear from the driver)
Ben (takes his launching stance): I hope you won't run away after your defeat.
Watashi (sighs): You talk a lot don't ya?
Ichiban: First Battle! Ready, Set!
Watashi/Ben: 3! 2!
Watashi: 1! (Catches the launcher with his right hand)
Watashi/Ben: Go... Shoot!!
(Wendigo circles around the stadium and rides along the edge of the stadium)
Watashi: Let your inner devil awaken! Wendigo!
Ben: Venture Flash!
(Belial rides the edge of the stadium and lands a fierce blow on Wendigo, which makes it take the center)
Watashi (Gasps): Not bad at all...
Ben (covers himself with his cape): Venture Shoot!
(Belial lands barrage of attacks, striking from every direction)
Watashi: God's Warning!
(Wendigo's blades shines and creates a armor around the blade)
Ben: Let's finish this! Oni Bomber!!
(Belial lits up and lands a explosive slash attack on Wendigo creating smokes around the stadium)
Watashi (Gasps): I can't see anything!
(A bey bursts in the smoke and drops on the ground.... it was Wendigo)
Ichiban: Oni Belial... Burst finish! Ben Daikokuten wins...
Fubuki: (You've still got a long way to go... Watashi)
Watashi (Grabs Wendigo): It can't be...
Zeno (makes a camera gesture at Ben): Demon King... huh?
Ben (laughs): It's not like you're weak... I'm just way stronger!
Ichiban (Smiles): Hey, Demon King! It's my turn now!
Ben: Heh, You all can battle me anytime, I can do this all day!
Watashi: Belial's attacks are more stronger than Icarus, You've got no chance against him.
Ben (looks at Ichiban): Yup, You got a chance of running away, You're out of my league (laughs)
Ichiban (switches to lower mode): Then I won't let him attack!
(Icarus lits up)
Watashi: Fine then, First Battle!
Zeno (comes closer to the stadium): I guess I'll take a closer look this time.
Watashi: Ready, Set!
Ichiban/Ben: 3! 2! 1!
Ichiban/Ben: Go... Shoot!!
Ichiban: Go! Amaze Strike!!
(Icarus leans on it's driver, which makes the metal portion touch the stadium generating sparks and gaining speed, it head towards Belial)
Ben (covers himself with his cape): Venture Shoot!
(Belial and Icarus collides at the center, creating a havoc on the stadium).
Ichiban: Send it flying!
(Icarus sends Belial flying and keeps on attacking it, not letting Belial land on the stadium)
Ben: (Gasps)
Ichiban (unleashed his aura): Icarus!
(Icarus appears, slashing the white aura with his claws)
Ichiban ('s hand shines with a white glow as he makes a fist): Aviate Slash!!
(Icarus's blades lit up and lands a devastating blow on Belial, which makes it burst instantly)
Ben: ....
Icarus: Alright!!
Watashi (Looks at Ichiban with a serious look): (How did he pulled this off....?)
Zeno (makes a camera gesture and looks at Ichiban): Looks like that tiny spark took all my attention (smiles)
Ben: (begans to laugh idiotically)
Icarus (looks at him): What's the matter?
Ben: Looks like you're worthy for this!
(Ben switches Belial to lower mode, switches the nexa disc to fixed mode and adds the V-gear on the driver)
Ben (shows Belial to Ichiban): The real battle starts now!
Ichiban (shows Icarus to Ben): I'm ready when you are!
[To Be Continued]
Next Chapter: Thunderstorm! Starlight Zeus!!
(The Chapter lived up to my expectations, but ya'll can tell me your opinion).
He's a shy guy, but doesn't act like one, so I guess he has some kind of Scopophobia / Scoptophobia (the fear of being watched or stared at) (also, idk if you did this character).
Anyways, Nice chapter.
I tried to pull a Ken situation (where he uses to talk with his puppets, in Ben's case he's like that when he wears a mask). But will be a completely different guy when the mask is off.
And I'm trying to slowly evolve my writing style, So that's why it was better. (I don't actually write, I use a notepad so you can say I write digitally).
Aug. 19, 2021 9:41 PM
(Aug. 19, 2021 9:35 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: [ -> ](Aug. 19, 2021 9:30 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: [ -> ]"Watashi (whispers at Inchiban's ears): He's very shy, that's why he wears a mask."
He's a shy guy, but doesn't act like one, so I guess he has some kind of Scopophobia / Scoptophobia (the fear of being watched or stared at) (also, idk if you did this character).
Anyways, Nice chapter.
I tried to pull a Ken situation (where he uses to talk with his puppets, in Ben's case he's like that when he wears a mask). But will be a completely different guy when the mask is off.
And I'm trying to slowly evolve my writing style, So that's why it was better. (I don't actually write, I use a notepad so you can say I write digitally).
More like a mix between Ken and the other guy from Cho-Z that had Kerbeus. Anyways, I've seen some changes (the good type of changes) (obviously, not drastically changes, which you decide if its good or not)
Aug. 19, 2021 10:05 PM
Yo, This was a good chapter nice!
Aug. 19, 2021 10:05 PM
(Aug. 19, 2021 9:41 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: [ -> ](Aug. 19, 2021 9:35 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: [ -> ]I tried to pull a Ken situation (where he uses to talk with his puppets, in Ben's case he's like that when he wears a mask). But will be a completely different guy when the mask is off.
And I'm trying to slowly evolve my writing style, So that's why it was better. (I don't actually write, I use a notepad so you can say I write digitally).
More like a mix between Ken and the other guy from Cho-Z that had Kerbeus. Anyways, I've seen some changes (the good type of changes) (obviously, not drastically changes, which you decide if its good or not)
I forgot to tell you, Ben is Unseen's character.
Aug. 19, 2021 10:08 PM
nice chapter lololol 😏👌