Aug. 05, 2021 8:24 PM
Aug. 05, 2021 8:25 PM
Zone Breaker: Speeds around the stadium and then attacks basically Rush Launch but better lol!
Legacy Whip: 3 big blades come out and start attacking
Royal Guard: It can Guard like a god! But can get broken
Type: Balance
Soler Attack: Its like Raid Upper but more stronger lol!
Aug. 06, 2021 10:11 AM
More Characters:
1) Name: Chikara Arima (Main RIval and Deuteragonist)
Age: 12
Appearance: His eyes are blue and hair color is yellow, he wears a black raincoat (Which has a arrow on the top left), black pants, and a pair of white boots.
Personality: He's described as a genuis blader and is very popular in his hometown. He is the son of WBBA's chairman and is the owner of the first kiwami bey ever made.
Beyblade: Noble Centaur .3 Clutch Ambush -S (Clockwise Attack Type)
Kiwami Core: Centaur, a creature with the head, arms, and torso of a man and the body and legs of a horse.
Kiwami Blade: Noble, it has two Spear shaped blades made up of metal which makes it's attack powerful
Kiwami Weight: 3, A triangular shaped weight, which keeps the bey balanced.
Kiwami Armor: Spear, It's similar to the Noble Blade and is used to align with the Noble Blade.
Neo Disk: Clutch, The disk is 90% made up of rubber and 10% area is metal, It has 3 rubber blades which pushes the bey's attack to a next level.
Driver: Ambush, The inner area of the driver is rubber and the outer area has rough rubber, when the bey is launched straight down into the stadium, the bey's speed will be the same like an average attack type but when launched at an angle, the bey goes insanely fast.
Special Moves:
Ambush Spark: The ambush driver's rough rubber touches the stadium and lands a barrage of attacks with insanely speed and creating huge sparks around the stadium.
Noble Spear: When the bey is on lower blade, The Spear armor and Noble Blade are perfectly aligned and uses a powerful spear attack which often leads to a burst.
Clutch Race: The Clutch disk uses the walls of the stadium and speeds up. (Just like True Flash Launch but the disk makes it speed up)
2) Wakashi Morita
Age: 14
Appearance: He's way too tall (The same height like Xhaka) for his age, his hair color is Green and eye color is black, he wears a green coat (It has a big skull on the back) and a brown shirt (Which has a W on the middle), purple gloves and a pair of green shoes.
Personality: He's the captain of New Beigoma and looks down on his opponents, never accepts his lose. And has a great bond with his bey which makes him a big deal.
Beyblade: Gloom Wendigo .10 Collapse Moment -D (Anti-Clockwise Defence Type)
Kiwami Core: Wendigo, The Evil Spirit of Forest.
Kiwami Blade: Gloom, it has 10 blades, 3 on the upper side and lower side and 2 on the left and right side. Which are used to counter incoming attacks from opposing beys.
Kiwami Weight: 10, It has 5 edgy points on both the sides of Weight. Which keeps the balance and increases center of gravity.
Kiwami Armor: Dusk, It's a black armor and has a circular shape which signifies a full moon.
Neo Disk: Collpase, It's a huge free-spinning Disk and is very high.
Driver: Moment, A Defense Type Driver with added grip due to a hemispherical inner tip and an outer guide ring that rotates freely and changes angle according to the amount of tilt.
Special Moves:
God's Warning: Wakashi throws the launcher up and grabs it with his left and launches the bey straightly to the center and it makes Wendigo spins fast and boosts it's defence.
Devil's Awakening: Wakashi throws the launcher up and grabs it with his right hand and launches his bey vertically on the edge of stadium which makes it's fast and rides the edge of the stadium.
Moment Crash: Uses the edge of stadium which makes the driver to tilt and crash on the opposing bey.
Plus I'm gonna start releasing chapters tomorrow.
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1) Name: Chikara Arima (Main RIval and Deuteragonist)
Age: 12
Appearance: His eyes are blue and hair color is yellow, he wears a black raincoat (Which has a arrow on the top left), black pants, and a pair of white boots.
Personality: He's described as a genuis blader and is very popular in his hometown. He is the son of WBBA's chairman and is the owner of the first kiwami bey ever made.
Beyblade: Noble Centaur .3 Clutch Ambush -S (Clockwise Attack Type)
Kiwami Core: Centaur, a creature with the head, arms, and torso of a man and the body and legs of a horse.
Kiwami Blade: Noble, it has two Spear shaped blades made up of metal which makes it's attack powerful
Kiwami Weight: 3, A triangular shaped weight, which keeps the bey balanced.
Kiwami Armor: Spear, It's similar to the Noble Blade and is used to align with the Noble Blade.
Neo Disk: Clutch, The disk is 90% made up of rubber and 10% area is metal, It has 3 rubber blades which pushes the bey's attack to a next level.
Driver: Ambush, The inner area of the driver is rubber and the outer area has rough rubber, when the bey is launched straight down into the stadium, the bey's speed will be the same like an average attack type but when launched at an angle, the bey goes insanely fast.
Special Moves:
Ambush Spark: The ambush driver's rough rubber touches the stadium and lands a barrage of attacks with insanely speed and creating huge sparks around the stadium.
Noble Spear: When the bey is on lower blade, The Spear armor and Noble Blade are perfectly aligned and uses a powerful spear attack which often leads to a burst.
Clutch Race: The Clutch disk uses the walls of the stadium and speeds up. (Just like True Flash Launch but the disk makes it speed up)
2) Wakashi Morita
Age: 14
Appearance: He's way too tall (The same height like Xhaka) for his age, his hair color is Green and eye color is black, he wears a green coat (It has a big skull on the back) and a brown shirt (Which has a W on the middle), purple gloves and a pair of green shoes.
Personality: He's the captain of New Beigoma and looks down on his opponents, never accepts his lose. And has a great bond with his bey which makes him a big deal.
Beyblade: Gloom Wendigo .10 Collapse Moment -D (Anti-Clockwise Defence Type)
Kiwami Core: Wendigo, The Evil Spirit of Forest.
Kiwami Blade: Gloom, it has 10 blades, 3 on the upper side and lower side and 2 on the left and right side. Which are used to counter incoming attacks from opposing beys.
Kiwami Weight: 10, It has 5 edgy points on both the sides of Weight. Which keeps the balance and increases center of gravity.
Kiwami Armor: Dusk, It's a black armor and has a circular shape which signifies a full moon.
Neo Disk: Collpase, It's a huge free-spinning Disk and is very high.
Driver: Moment, A Defense Type Driver with added grip due to a hemispherical inner tip and an outer guide ring that rotates freely and changes angle according to the amount of tilt.
Special Moves:
God's Warning: Wakashi throws the launcher up and grabs it with his left and launches the bey straightly to the center and it makes Wendigo spins fast and boosts it's defence.
Devil's Awakening: Wakashi throws the launcher up and grabs it with his right hand and launches his bey vertically on the edge of stadium which makes it's fast and rides the edge of the stadium.
Moment Crash: Uses the edge of stadium which makes the driver to tilt and crash on the opposing bey.
Plus I'm gonna start releasing chapters tomorrow.
Aug. 06, 2021 12:07 PM
I'll think of a character soon.
Aug. 06, 2021 1:42 PM
I love the characters!!!
Aug. 06, 2021 3:29 PM
(Aug. 06, 2021 10:11 AM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: [ -> ]More Characters:
Spoiler (Click to View)
1) Name: Chikara Arima (Main RIval and Deuteragonist)
Age: 12
Appearance: His eyes are blue and hair color is yellow, he wears a black raincoat (Which has a arrow on the top left), black pants, and a pair of white boots.
Personality: He's described as a genuis blader and is very popular in his hometown. He is the son of WBBA's chairman and is the owner of the first kiwami bey ever made.
Beyblade: Noble Centaur .3 Clutch Ambush -S (Clockwise Attack Type)
Kiwami Core: Centaur, a creature with the head, arms, and torso of a man and the body and legs of a horse.
Kiwami Blade: Noble, it has two Spear shaped blades made up of metal which makes it's attack powerful
Kiwami Weight: 3, A triangular shaped weight, which keeps the bey balanced.
Kiwami Armor: Spear, It's similar to the Noble Blade and is used to align with the Noble Blade.
Neo Disk: Clutch, The disk is 90% made up of rubber and 10% area is metal, It has 3 rubber blades which pushes the bey's attack to a next level.
Driver: Ambush, The inner area of the driver is rubber and the outer area has rough rubber, when the bey is launched straight down into the stadium, the bey's speed will be the same like an average attack type but when launched at an angle, the bey goes insanely fast.
Special Moves:
Ambush Spark: The ambush driver's rough rubber touches the stadium and lands a barrage of attacks with insanely speed and creating huge sparks around the stadium.
Noble Spear: When the bey is on lower blade, The Spear armor and Noble Blade are perfectly aligned and uses a powerful spear attack which often leads to a burst.
Clutch Race: The Clutch disk uses the walls of the stadium and speeds up. (Just like True Flash Launch but the disk makes it speed up)
2) Wakashi Morita
Age: 14
Appearance: He's way too tall (The same height like Xhaka) for his age, his hair color is Green and eye color is black, he wears a green coat (It has a big skull on the back) and a brown shirt (Which has a W on the middle), purple gloves and a pair of green shoes.
Personality: He's the captain of New Beigoma and looks down on his opponents, never accepts his lose. And has a great bond with his bey which makes him a big deal.
Beyblade: Gloom Wendigo .10 Collapse Moment -D (Anti-Clockwise Defence Type)
Kiwami Core: Wendigo, The Evil Spirit of Forest.
Kiwami Blade: Gloom, it has 8 blades, 3 on the upper side and lower side and 2 on the left and right side. Which are used to counter incoming attacks from opposing beys.
Kiwami Weight: 10, It has 5 edgy points on both the sides of Weight. Which keeps the balance and increases center of gravity.
Kiwami Armor: Dusk, It's a black armor and has a circular shape which signifies a full moon.
Neo Disk: Collpase, It's a huge free-spinning Disk and is very high.
Driver: Moment, A Defense Type Driver with added grip due to a hemispherical inner tip and an outer guide ring that rotates freely and changes angle according to the amount of tilt.
Special Moves:
God's Warning: Wakashi throws the launcher up and grabs it with his left and launches the bey straightly to the center and it makes Wendigo spins fast and boosts it's defence.
Devil's Awakening: Wakashi throws the launcher up and grabs it with his right hand and launches his bey vertically on the edge of stadium which makes it's fast and rides the edge of the stadium.
Moment Crash: Uses the edge of stadium which makes the driver to tilt and crash on the opposing bey.
Plus I'm gonna start releasing chapters tomorrow.
I really like those moves, God's Warning and Devil's Awakening.
Aug. 06, 2021 8:02 PM
I'll submit a character since I can just do one related to actual characters, so it'll be easier.
Spoiler (Click to View)
Daichi Akane: As you can guess the son of Delta.
Age: 14
Personality: He's quiet and reserved most of the time. He likes to study Beyblade and art, if you annoy him by trying to force him to talk about other things, he can become rude. During battle he's very wild and can be kind of scary. He does whatever it takes to win and can use strange strategies at times, but will never do anything that makes his Beyblade get hurt.
Appearance: He has blue eyes, when resonating a red flame will come over his left eye. His hair color is teal with white stripes. He wears a semi formal orange jacket unzipped, and typically wears a black shirt with white stripes. He has black sports pants and brown shoes.
Beyblade: Dual Yggdragon .3 Scorch Elec -X (Multi Spin Beyblade)
Kiwami Core: Yggdragon, a dragon version of Yggdrasil with fiery wings.
Kiwami Blade: Dual, it's half red and half white. The red side is metal, the white side is rubber. It's rounded to deflect but has push hard. When the disc hits the halfway point, both blades jut out, allowing for more aerodynamic potential, which gives the Beyblade a massive speed boost.
Kiwami Weight: 3, a balanced triangle shaped weight.
Kiwami Armor: Xcalibur, It's black and shaped like a vertical oval with 2 heavy points at the top and bottom.
Neo Disk: Scorch, it's a white and jagged disc. When it hits the halfway point, 2 black rubber spikes pop out of it.
Driver: Elec, It's a flat metal driver with a consistent and fast yellow attack pattern. The metal part can get pushed down, which causes rubber to hit the floor, making it attack wildly.
Special Moves:
Scorch Spin: Elec's rubber spikes absorb the impact of attacks.
Elec Drive: The metal tip on Elec speeds up, which also causes sparks to fly.
Elec Boost: The rubber on Elec hits the ground, causing Yggdragon to go wild.
Dual Eclipse: Dual activates, causing the Bey to speed up. The Bey then hits the opponent with a full force rubber attack to destabilize them, then a full force metal attack to burst them.
Age: 14
Personality: He's quiet and reserved most of the time. He likes to study Beyblade and art, if you annoy him by trying to force him to talk about other things, he can become rude. During battle he's very wild and can be kind of scary. He does whatever it takes to win and can use strange strategies at times, but will never do anything that makes his Beyblade get hurt.
Appearance: He has blue eyes, when resonating a red flame will come over his left eye. His hair color is teal with white stripes. He wears a semi formal orange jacket unzipped, and typically wears a black shirt with white stripes. He has black sports pants and brown shoes.
Beyblade: Dual Yggdragon .3 Scorch Elec -X (Multi Spin Beyblade)
Kiwami Core: Yggdragon, a dragon version of Yggdrasil with fiery wings.
Kiwami Blade: Dual, it's half red and half white. The red side is metal, the white side is rubber. It's rounded to deflect but has push hard. When the disc hits the halfway point, both blades jut out, allowing for more aerodynamic potential, which gives the Beyblade a massive speed boost.
Kiwami Weight: 3, a balanced triangle shaped weight.
Kiwami Armor: Xcalibur, It's black and shaped like a vertical oval with 2 heavy points at the top and bottom.
Neo Disk: Scorch, it's a white and jagged disc. When it hits the halfway point, 2 black rubber spikes pop out of it.
Driver: Elec, It's a flat metal driver with a consistent and fast yellow attack pattern. The metal part can get pushed down, which causes rubber to hit the floor, making it attack wildly.
Special Moves:
Scorch Spin: Elec's rubber spikes absorb the impact of attacks.
Elec Drive: The metal tip on Elec speeds up, which also causes sparks to fly.
Elec Boost: The rubber on Elec hits the ground, causing Yggdragon to go wild.
Dual Eclipse: Dual activates, causing the Bey to speed up. The Bey then hits the opponent with a full force rubber attack to destabilize them, then a full force metal attack to burst them.
Aug. 07, 2021 1:25 AM
i'll make a cup of coffee for your head
Name: Himaki Asahi
Age: 11
Gender: Female
Nationality: Japan
E/C: Blue
H/C: Crimson
AKA:
The Maroon Mistress
The Scarlet Siege
Characteristics:
Himaki has a red vest with yellow outlines on it, on top of a scarlet dress, with black jeans, and brown boots. She also has a blue fingerless glove with red outlines and a red cuff on her right hand.
Personality:
Himaki is a strong, fearless blader who doesn't back down from a fight. She is, however, quite reckless, like her dad, Hyuga, and that recklessness tends to be her downfall. However, she is a quick learner and strategizes more often later on. She doesn't like bullies, or bladers that propose whether if they're stronger than others or not.
Beyblade: Ember Hyperion .5 Rush Xceed+-B
Type: Attack
Spin Direction: Right
(I don't feel like describing the parts lol)
Kiwami Blade: Ember- A Blade with 3 yellow blades. It has a red motif.
Kiwami Core: Hyperion- The motif is Hyperion, the god of the heavenly light. It is a yellow knight with green eyes looking towards the left.
Kiwami Weight: 5 - A weight with 5 protrusions, locking onto the Blade+Core combo. It helps especially with the bey's attack and speed.
Kiwami Armor: Burst - Armor with a whooping 12 mini blades spiraling around it in a clockwise manner (not actually moving). It gives the bey good stamina, OWD, and attack.
Neo Disc: Rush - Rush is a disc with 3 huge blades, aligning with the Ember ring's blades, being able to pull off fierce attacks.
Performance Tip: Xceed+ - Xceed, but with a bit of rubber on the large ring part of the tip, and a more aggressive bottom part.
Special Moves:
Ember Strike: Grinding on the Xceed+ performance tip, Hyperion launches itself at the opposing bey, dealing a massive amount of damage.
Xceed Counter:
Ember Slash: Using it's 3 powerful blades, Hyperion charges up and smashes into the opponent, dealing enough damage to quite possibly burst the opposing bey on impact.
Spoiler (Click to View)
Name: Himaki Asahi
Age: 11
Gender: Female
Nationality: Japan
E/C: Blue
H/C: Crimson
AKA:
The Maroon Mistress
The Scarlet Siege
Characteristics:
Himaki has a red vest with yellow outlines on it, on top of a scarlet dress, with black jeans, and brown boots. She also has a blue fingerless glove with red outlines and a red cuff on her right hand.
Personality:
Himaki is a strong, fearless blader who doesn't back down from a fight. She is, however, quite reckless, like her dad, Hyuga, and that recklessness tends to be her downfall. However, she is a quick learner and strategizes more often later on. She doesn't like bullies, or bladers that propose whether if they're stronger than others or not.
Beyblade: Ember Hyperion .5 Rush Xceed+-B
Type: Attack
Spin Direction: Right
(I don't feel like describing the parts lol)
Kiwami Blade: Ember- A Blade with 3 yellow blades. It has a red motif.
Kiwami Core: Hyperion- The motif is Hyperion, the god of the heavenly light. It is a yellow knight with green eyes looking towards the left.
Kiwami Weight: 5 - A weight with 5 protrusions, locking onto the Blade+Core combo. It helps especially with the bey's attack and speed.
Kiwami Armor: Burst - Armor with a whooping 12 mini blades spiraling around it in a clockwise manner (not actually moving). It gives the bey good stamina, OWD, and attack.
Neo Disc: Rush - Rush is a disc with 3 huge blades, aligning with the Ember ring's blades, being able to pull off fierce attacks.
Performance Tip: Xceed+ - Xceed, but with a bit of rubber on the large ring part of the tip, and a more aggressive bottom part.
Special Moves:
Ember Strike: Grinding on the Xceed+ performance tip, Hyperion launches itself at the opposing bey, dealing a massive amount of damage.
Xceed Counter:
Ember Slash: Using it's 3 powerful blades, Hyperion charges up and smashes into the opponent, dealing enough damage to quite possibly burst the opposing bey on impact.
Aug. 07, 2021 1:35 AM
Hyuga had a child? Nice!
Aug. 07, 2021 12:58 PM
(Aug. 07, 2021 1:25 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: [ -> ]i'll make a cup of coffee for your head
Spoiler (Click to View)
Name: Himaki Asahi
Age: 11
Gender: Female
Nationality: Japan
E/C: Blue
H/C: Crimson
AKA:
The Maroon Mistress
The Scarlet Siege
Characteristics:
Himaki has a red vest with yellow outlines on it, on top of a scarlet dress, with black jeans, and brown boots. She also has a blue fingerless glove with red outlines and a red cuff on her right hand.
Personality:
Himaki is a strong, fearless blader who doesn't back down from a fight. She is, however, quite reckless, like her dad, Hyuga, and that recklessness tends to be her downfall. However, she is a quick learner and strategizes more often later on. She doesn't like bullies, or bladers that propose whether if they're stronger than others or not.
Beyblade: Ember Hyperion .5 Rush Xceed+-B
Type: Attack
Spin Direction: Right
(I don't feel like describing the parts lol)
Kiwami Blade: Ember- A Blade with 3 yellow blades. It has a red motif.
Kiwami Core: Hyperion- The motif is Hyperion, the god of the heavenly light. It is a yellow knight with green eyes looking towards the left.
Kiwami Weight: 5 - A weight with 5 protrusions, locking onto the Blade+Core combo. It helps especially with the bey's attack and speed.
Kiwami Armor: Burst - Armor with a whooping 12 mini blades spiraling around it in a clockwise manner (not actually moving). It gives the bey good stamina, OWD, and attack.
Neo Disc: Rush - Rush is a disc with 3 huge blades, aligning with the Ember ring's blades, being able to pull off fierce attacks.
Performance Tip: Xceed+ - Xceed, but with a bit of rubber on the large ring part of the tip, and a more aggressive bottom part.
Special Moves:
Ember Strike: Grinding on the Xceed+ performance tip, Hyperion launches itself at the opposing bey, dealing a massive amount of damage.
Xceed Counter:
Ember Slash: Using it's 3 powerful blades, Hyperion charges up and smashes into the opponent, dealing enough damage to quite possibly burst the opposing bey on impact.
Wow Nice!
Aug. 07, 2021 5:07 PM
Chapter 1 is here:
Chapter 1: The New Era! Kiwami Beys!!
~At the same stadium Valt and Shu used to battle~
Ichiban (While holding Centaur): So this is a.... Kiwami Bey...
Chikara: That's right, It's Noble Centaur. It can even change it's height.
Ichiban: A right-spinning attack type.... It's awesome!
Chikara: I want it's first battle to be against you, Ichi.
Ichiban: Me? Alright, Valkyrie is just as excited as I am!
Chikara: (Changes to Upper Mode): I'll go with Upper Mode.
Ichiban: Alright I'm ready for battle!
(Both of them takes their shooting stances)
Ichiban/Chikara: 3! 2! 1!
Ichiban: Go...
Chikara: Shoot!! (His launcher shined bright when he launched)
(Both beys landed on the stadium perfectly)
Ichiban: Rush Shoot!
(Savior Valkyrie heads towards Centaur with full speed)
Chikara: Dodge it!
(Ambush driver's rough area hits the ground of the stadium and dodges the attack)
Ichiban (Gasps): So fast....
Chikara (Smiles): Brace yourself, there's something more.
(Centaur's Disk touches the stadium's wall and gains abnormal speed)
Chikara: Clutch Race!
Ichiban (Smiles in amazement): Catch him! Valkyrie!
(Valkyrie tries to hit Centaur but misses and hits the wall and rebounds from the wall)
Chikara: Now time to finish this!
(Centaur rebounds from the wall)
Ichiban: Bound Saber!!
(Valkyrie and Centaur collides and Valkyrie got burst in instance)
Ichiban (Gasps): So cool....
(Ichiban picks up Valkyrie and assembles it)
Ichiban (Smiles): Centaur is really an impressive bey!
Chikara: Yeah... but I still have to discover it's true power.
Ichiban: You will! I bet you'll master this bey in no time!
Chikara: You think so?
Ichiban (nods): Yup.
Chikara (looks at the sky): You know... I got scouted by BC Sol...
Ichiban: BC Sol?
(Chikara makes a fist it looked like he grabbed the sun)
Chikara: Your dad was on the team, I wanna... become as strong as Valt. No I'll surpass him.
Chikara (Turns around): Well I'll see you tomorrow, Ichi.
(Chikara walks way)
Ichiban (Looks at Valkyrie): Valkyrie.... I guess it's time to uprgae you!
(Valkyrie responds by shining)
(Ichiban ran off to his home)
Ichiban (opens the door): I'm back!
Valt (coming down from the stairs): Oh you're back huh.
(Ichiban shows Valkyrie to Valt)
Ichiban: Dad, I wanna evolve Valkyrie!
Valt: You wanna evolve Valkyrie? Lemme guess... into a Kiwami bey right?
Ichiban: Yeah I wanna make Valkyrie stronger than ever before.
Valt (looks closely to Valkyrie): Valkyrie...
(Valkyrie responds by shining)
Valt (smiles): Alright, come with me.
Ichiban (follows Valt): Fine!
(Valt took Ichiban to his bey-printer room)
Valt (turns on the monitor): There ya go, use this to create your bey.
Ichiban: Fine then, I'll use it.
(Valt lefts the room)
Ichiban (looks at Valkyrie and thinks): (Even if I evolve you.... there won't be any difference... It would be just a three-bladed bey..)
Ichiban: What if I... Yeah! That's right!
(Ichiban creates a 3D image of a 4-bladed bey on the monitor)
Ichiban: Evolving you won't be enough... So I'm gonna reincarnate you!
(Ichiban begins upgrading Valkyrie)
~After some time~
Ichiban: It's finally here!
(Ichiban picks his new bey)
Valt (opens the door): It's ready?
Ichiban (Shows his bey to Valt): Yeah!
Valt (gasps): Wait... Valkyrie had three blades not four and the color was blue... not white..
Ichiban: Valkyrie has been reborn into... Aviate Icarus!!
Valt: Icarus... (Smiles) Alright then, time for a test lau- oh wait...
Ichiban: What is it?
Valt: We will try it tomorrow it's getting dark already.
Ichiban: Oh... (looks at Icarus) I can't wait to see your strength..... Icarus.
(Icarus shines)
(To Be Continued)
Spoiler (Click to View)
Chapter 1: The New Era! Kiwami Beys!!
~At the same stadium Valt and Shu used to battle~
Ichiban (While holding Centaur): So this is a.... Kiwami Bey...
Chikara: That's right, It's Noble Centaur. It can even change it's height.
Ichiban: A right-spinning attack type.... It's awesome!
Chikara: I want it's first battle to be against you, Ichi.
Ichiban: Me? Alright, Valkyrie is just as excited as I am!
Chikara: (Changes to Upper Mode): I'll go with Upper Mode.
Ichiban: Alright I'm ready for battle!
(Both of them takes their shooting stances)
Ichiban/Chikara: 3! 2! 1!
Ichiban: Go...
Chikara: Shoot!! (His launcher shined bright when he launched)
(Both beys landed on the stadium perfectly)
Ichiban: Rush Shoot!
(Savior Valkyrie heads towards Centaur with full speed)
Chikara: Dodge it!
(Ambush driver's rough area hits the ground of the stadium and dodges the attack)
Ichiban (Gasps): So fast....
Chikara (Smiles): Brace yourself, there's something more.
(Centaur's Disk touches the stadium's wall and gains abnormal speed)
Chikara: Clutch Race!
Ichiban (Smiles in amazement): Catch him! Valkyrie!
(Valkyrie tries to hit Centaur but misses and hits the wall and rebounds from the wall)
Chikara: Now time to finish this!
(Centaur rebounds from the wall)
Ichiban: Bound Saber!!
(Valkyrie and Centaur collides and Valkyrie got burst in instance)
Ichiban (Gasps): So cool....
(Ichiban picks up Valkyrie and assembles it)
Ichiban (Smiles): Centaur is really an impressive bey!
Chikara: Yeah... but I still have to discover it's true power.
Ichiban: You will! I bet you'll master this bey in no time!
Chikara: You think so?
Ichiban (nods): Yup.
Chikara (looks at the sky): You know... I got scouted by BC Sol...
Ichiban: BC Sol?
(Chikara makes a fist it looked like he grabbed the sun)
Chikara: Your dad was on the team, I wanna... become as strong as Valt. No I'll surpass him.
Chikara (Turns around): Well I'll see you tomorrow, Ichi.
(Chikara walks way)
Ichiban (Looks at Valkyrie): Valkyrie.... I guess it's time to uprgae you!
(Valkyrie responds by shining)
(Ichiban ran off to his home)
Ichiban (opens the door): I'm back!
Valt (coming down from the stairs): Oh you're back huh.
(Ichiban shows Valkyrie to Valt)
Ichiban: Dad, I wanna evolve Valkyrie!
Valt: You wanna evolve Valkyrie? Lemme guess... into a Kiwami bey right?
Ichiban: Yeah I wanna make Valkyrie stronger than ever before.
Valt (looks closely to Valkyrie): Valkyrie...
(Valkyrie responds by shining)
Valt (smiles): Alright, come with me.
Ichiban (follows Valt): Fine!
(Valt took Ichiban to his bey-printer room)
Valt (turns on the monitor): There ya go, use this to create your bey.
Ichiban: Fine then, I'll use it.
(Valt lefts the room)
Ichiban (looks at Valkyrie and thinks): (Even if I evolve you.... there won't be any difference... It would be just a three-bladed bey..)
Ichiban: What if I... Yeah! That's right!
(Ichiban creates a 3D image of a 4-bladed bey on the monitor)
Ichiban: Evolving you won't be enough... So I'm gonna reincarnate you!
(Ichiban begins upgrading Valkyrie)
~After some time~
Ichiban: It's finally here!
(Ichiban picks his new bey)
Valt (opens the door): It's ready?
Ichiban (Shows his bey to Valt): Yeah!
Valt (gasps): Wait... Valkyrie had three blades not four and the color was blue... not white..
Ichiban: Valkyrie has been reborn into... Aviate Icarus!!
Valt: Icarus... (Smiles) Alright then, time for a test lau- oh wait...
Ichiban: What is it?
Valt: We will try it tomorrow it's getting dark already.
Ichiban: Oh... (looks at Icarus) I can't wait to see your strength..... Icarus.
(Icarus shines)
(To Be Continued)
Aug. 07, 2021 5:17 PM
This was Awesome! your writing is great I think I saw a few mistakes like upgrae
Aug. 07, 2021 5:19 PM
(Aug. 07, 2021 5:07 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 1 is here:
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Chapter 1: The New Era! Kiwami Beys!!
~At the same stadium Valt and Shu used to battle~
Ichiban (While holding Centaur): So this is a.... Kiwami Bey...
Chikara: That's right, It's Noble Centaur. It can even change it's height.
Ichiban: A right-spinning attack type.... It's awesome!
Chikara: I want it's first battle to be against you, Ichi.
Ichiban: Me? Alright, Valkyrie is just as excited as I am!
Chikara: (Changes to Upper Mode): I'll go with Upper Mode.
Ichiban: Alright I'm ready for battle!
(Both of them takes their shooting stances)
Ichiban/Chikara: 3! 2! 1!
Ichiban: Go...
Chikara: Shoot!! (His launcher shined bright when he launched)
(Both beys landed on the stadium perfectly)
Ichiban: Rush Shoot!
(Savior Valkyrie heads towards Centaur with full speed)
Chikara: Dodge it!
(Ambush driver's rough area hits the ground of the stadium and dodges the attack)
Ichiban (Gasps): So fast....
Chikara (Smiles): Brace yourself, there's something more.
(Centaur's Disk touches the stadium's wall and gains abnormal speed)
Chikara: Clutch Race!
Ichiban (Smiles in amazement): Catch him! Valkyrie!
(Valkyrie tries to hit Centaur but misses and hits the wall and rebounds from the wall)
Chikara: Now time to finish this!
(Centaur rebounds from the wall)
Ichiban: Bound Saber!!
(Valkyrie and Centaur collides and Valkyrie got burst in instance)
Ichiban (Gasps): So cool....
(Ichiban picks up Valkyrie and assembles it)
Ichiban (Smiles): Centaur is really an impressive bey!
Chikara: Yeah... but I still have to discover it's true power.
Ichiban: You will! I bet you'll master this bey in no time!
Chikara: You think so?
Ichiban (nods): Yup.
Chikara (looks at the sky): You know... I got scouted by BC Sol...
Ichiban: BC Sol?
(Chikara makes a fist it looked like he grabbed the sun)
Chikara: Your dad was on the team, I wanna... become as strong as Valt. No I'll surpass him.
Chikara (Turns around): Well I'll see you tomorrow, Ichi.
(Chikara walks way)
Ichiban (Looks at Valkyrie): Valkyrie.... I guess it's time to uprgae you!
(Valkyrie responds by shining)
(Ichiban ran off to his home)
Ichiban (opens the door): I'm back!
Valt (coming down from the stairs): Oh you're back huh.
(Ichiban shows Valkyrie to Valt)
Ichiban: Dad, I wanna evolve Valkyrie!
Valt: You wanna evolve Valkyrie? Lemme guess... into a Kiwami bey right?
Ichiban: Yeah I wanna make Valkyrie stronger than ever before.
Valt (looks closely to Valkyrie): Valkyrie...
(Valkyrie responds by shining)
Valt (smiles): Alright, come with me.
Ichiban (follows Valt): Fine!
(Valt took Ichiban to his bey-printer room)
Valt (turns on the monitor): There ya go, use this to create your bey.
Ichiban: Fine then, I'll use it.
(Valt lefts the room)
Ichiban (looks at Valkyrie and thinks): (Even if I evolve you.... there won't be any difference... It would be just a three-bladed bey..)
Ichiban: What if I... Yeah! That's right!
(Ichiban creates a 3D image of a 4-bladed bey on the monitor)
Ichiban: Evolving you won't be enough... So I'm gonna reincarnate you!
(Ichiban begins upgrading Valkyrie)
~After some time~
Ichiban: It's finally here!
(Ichiban picks his new bey)
Valt (opens the door): It's ready?
Ichiban (Shows his bey to Valt): Yeah!
Valt (gasps): Wait... Valkyrie had three blades not four and the color was blue... not white..
Ichiban: Valkyrie has been reborn into... Aviate Icarus!!
Valt: Icarus... (Smiles) Alright then, time for a test lau- oh wait...
Ichiban: What is it?
Valt: We will try it tomorrow it's getting dark already.
Ichiban: Oh... (looks at Icarus) I can't wait to see your strength..... Icarus.
(Icarus shines)
(To Be Continued)
Awesome first chapter! R.I.P Valkyrie lol (Well, I guess it's technically still alive, just reborn as a new Bey)
Aug. 07, 2021 5:43 PM
Awesome! Can’t wait soft Shin to come!
Aug. 07, 2021 6:14 PM
It started off very well imo. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Aug. 08, 2021 9:10 AM
Huh, this is actually better than I thought it would be. Might end up following after all.
Aug. 08, 2021 11:33 AM
I had to push some character's appearance to second arc (for plot reasons)
The characters appearing in the first arc are: Shin Kurenai, Ben Daikokuten and Zeno Syagrios.
Plus upcoming chapters:
Chapter 2: God? Demon!? Gloom Wendigo!
Chapter 3: Fresh Start! The New York Bulls! (Shin's Debut)
Chapter 4: Fiery Axe! Mortal Spriggan!
Chapter 5: Climatic Three Way Battle!
Chapter 6: Ignite and Explode! Oni Belial! (Ben's Debut)
Chapter 7: Duel at the Demon's Gate!
The characters appearing in the first arc are: Shin Kurenai, Ben Daikokuten and Zeno Syagrios.
Plus upcoming chapters:
Spoiler (Click to View)
Chapter 2: God? Demon!? Gloom Wendigo!
Chapter 3: Fresh Start! The New York Bulls! (Shin's Debut)
Chapter 4: Fiery Axe! Mortal Spriggan!
Chapter 5: Climatic Three Way Battle!
Chapter 6: Ignite and Explode! Oni Belial! (Ben's Debut)
Chapter 7: Duel at the Demon's Gate!
Aug. 08, 2021 11:41 AM
Pssst, are there still a free slot for another character? I'm currently working on mine, so I'd like to see if any space is available.
Aug. 08, 2021 11:43 AM
(Aug. 08, 2021 11:41 AM)PinkRose Wrote: [ -> ]Pssst, are there still a free slot for another character? I'm currently working on mine, so I'd like to see if any space is available.
Yup, you can make an entry.
Aug. 08, 2021 11:55 AM
Let’s go Shin! Anyways, this looks cool!
Aug. 08, 2021 11:39 PM
Here goes your entry, hope it's actually writeable XD
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Name: Maru Shirasagijo
Nicknames/Aliases: The Elegant Breeze (stage nickname for battles)
Gender: Female
Age: 14
Nationality: Half-French, Half-Japanese
Physical Appearance: Maru appears as a petite teenage girl with a pale complexion, short, wavy hair in teal gradients that barely reaches her shoulders, and soft emerald eyes. Her usual outfit consists of a long-sleeved, frilly white blouse striped with black, a knee-length denim skirt with four brown buttons on the left side, a pair of cerulean blue ballerina shoes with a ribbon on top of each one, a tilted brown beanie with elegant blue embroidery on the rim, a silver ring shaped like an infinity sign, and an overly long scarf in mixed colors of green and blue that she tied around her neck to the left, leaving its ends flapping in the air or hanging just above her feet.
Resonance: Maru's aura appears as a faded haze of blue and green gradients. When she achieves perfect resonance with her Bey, her aura becomes clearer and more distinct in color, and her eyes momentarily flash golden.
Character Alignment: Neutral Good
Personality: Maru is a generally calm yet lighthearted person, and while not very outgoing, is a fairly friendly individual and doesn't mind hanging out with people as long as they don't blabber unncessarily, which she finds annoying. She's a talented artist as well, and has a symmetric vision that she uses in many of her life aspects, such as her clothing having three alternating patterns of fitting colors, and her art having not more than two themes at a time. Due to the aforementioned symmetric philosophy she uses, Maru can be quite rigid and opposed to chaotic changes or unusual elements despite her normally open-minded approach to different matters, but with enough persuasion, she can adapt to and accept change.
When Blading, Maru's main strategy is to try and analyze the opponent prior to the battle to figure out as much as she can about them, and plan accordingly to better her chances of winning. Therefore, she acts more subdued and quiet in battle, so as to not give away too much information about her. If that fails, however, she simply goes with a last-minute plan and hope for the best (this was something she had to learn to do after mutliple encounters, battles and experiences making her slowly change her rigid attitude, not something she started out doing).
Likes: Neutral colors, soft colors, cool weather, winter clothes, scenery, flying by plane, going on picnics, nature-inspired art, simple art, acrylic paint, simple accessories, skirts, cold juices, cinnamon & vanilla-flavored ice cream, casual battles, stadiums with symmetrical shapes (the standard stadium is her favorite)
Dislikes: Too bright colors, extra detailed art, clashing color palettes, hot and humid weather, overly extroverted people, naïvete, unncessary complications, drama, too competitive environments (like Beyblade teams), spicy food, any sort of meat that's not chicken or fish, crunchy food.
Relationships:
1- Lui Shirasagijo: Maru used to sporadically visit her uncle with her parents when she was younger, seeing as he was the closest one to them in the family. She didn't exactly like him at first (mainly because of how awkward he acted when they were in the same space for more than two minutes), but as time passed and she learned that he was (and according to him, still is) a Blading Legend, she started to respect and like him a bit more. This was why, after her father went missing and her mother decided to move back to Japan, she starting visiting him and spending time with him more frequently, even getting into Blading under his tutelage and actually enjoying the game. Now, Maru sees Lui as a second father figure, one that she respects, admires and loves, and she vows to uphold his expectations and her own by advancing on the world stage.
Wow, that's the sappiest relationship section I ever wrote. Ah, frick it
Beys:
1- Vanish Longinus Tapered Mobius -2: Maru's first Bey, a generic combo she got as a gift from her mother (tipped off by Lui ofc) after acing her final exams at the 3rd year of Middle School.
2- Iris Mayura .8 Feather Brush -A: Maru's current Bey, one that she designed on her own by taking some inspiration from her Vanish Longinus and several other elements she added in.
Bey Parts & Details - Iris Mayura .8 Feather Brush (Left-Spin Defense type):
Kiwami Core - Mayura: Mayura is a Left-spinning Kiwami Core featuring a side view of a peacock's head with four feather at the top to represent its namesake; Mayura, the Sanskrit word for peacock, which is one of the sacred birds of the Hindu mythology. The Core's main color scheme is dark blue, the feathers are mixed shades of blue, green, brown and amber, and the one visible eye of the metallic head is golden.
Kiwami Blade - Iris: Iris is a Left-Spinning Kiwami Blade featuring eight curved, feather-like shapes as contact points that almost overlap on each other, giving the Blade a circular shape reminiscent of a peacock's tail. Iris' gimmick lies in the 'feathers', which follow a pattern of one being hollowed out from the inside to absorb impact, while the one next to it features rubber on the outside to allow for Spin-equalization against opposite-spin opponents. The Blade's main color scheme is dark blue, while the feathers alternate between being emerald green and brownish amber on the inside (the green ones are the hollowed-out and the amber ones' outer blue is the rubber).
Kiwami Weight - 8: 8 is a nearly circular Kiwami Weight that looks like a miniature Iris, and its shape gives it good stamina and LAD potential suited for defensive combos.
Kiwami Armor - Allure: Allure is a Kiwami Armor with a gimmick, which is that it can be rotated to fill in the hollowed-out parts of the Iris Blade in both Upper and Lower Mode, by making use of four oval, springy rubber pieces. It is a translucent golden color.
Neo Disc - Feather: Feather is a Neo Disc that supports both the Upper and Lower Modes of Kiwami Beys and has a low center of gravity, similar to Tapered. As its name implies, it features two nearly overlapping feather shapes, which give it a decently circular shape that helps with stamina and LAD-based combinations. It is a solid silver color
Driver - Brush: Brush is a Defense-type Driver with a plastic ball tip and a POM ring just above it, one of which is free-spinning where the other is spring-loaded. The Driver's gimmick lies in the ring, which tilts up and down when it makes contact with the stadium to prevent a knockout with minimal stamina loss. The Driver is translucent amber in color.
Special Moves:
1- Iris Siphon: Mayura spins steadily in the centre, brushing off most attacks and gaining some speed upon contact with a Right-spinning opponent. This move is Maru's go-to at the start of a battle, especially when she doesn't know much about her opponent's Bey.
2- Iris Guard: Mayura circles the centre with its Driver's ring tilting a bit down, using both the hollowed-out and fully rubber feathers to avoid receiving damage.
3- Allure Spark: When its hollowed-out feathers are filled, Mayura uses them in conjunction with the rubber ones to deliver several quick strikes, utilizing the rubber's increased recoil to make them more impactful. This move is particularly effecient at low spin speeds in opposite-spin, as it also adds the risk of a Slow-Motion Burst if the opponent's Bey has a much higher spin speed.
4- Enchant Wing Counter: When knocked back, Mayura's Brush Driver tilts down, before immediately shooting it upwards in a counterattack that flings the opponent's Bey up in the air, which could result in an Over Finish or, in some cases, a Burst Finish.
Launch Technique: Maru holds her Launcher above her head, spinning it in her right hand twice before adjusting her beanie with a thin smirk, dropping her hand right in front of her, and pulling on the string at the call of "GO...Shoot!"
Trivia:
1- Despite being born and mainly raised in France, Maru's French is pretty bad. As such, she prefers speaking in Japanese whenever she can, and that was one of several factors that helped her settle in better after moving to Hokkaido.
2- Maru's stage name in battles was actually just a random suggestion from one of her friends that she shot down, but someone coined it as her official nickname and she's not happy about that.
3- Lui isn't Maru's direct uncle, he's actually both her parents' cousin (her parents, Ruri and Luis, are cousins as well), but due to family shenanigans, he's the closest to both of them and practically the only one who supported their marriage, and as such, is the one they're in most contact with.
Nicknames/Aliases: The Elegant Breeze (stage nickname for battles)
Gender: Female
Age: 14
Nationality: Half-French, Half-Japanese
Physical Appearance: Maru appears as a petite teenage girl with a pale complexion, short, wavy hair in teal gradients that barely reaches her shoulders, and soft emerald eyes. Her usual outfit consists of a long-sleeved, frilly white blouse striped with black, a knee-length denim skirt with four brown buttons on the left side, a pair of cerulean blue ballerina shoes with a ribbon on top of each one, a tilted brown beanie with elegant blue embroidery on the rim, a silver ring shaped like an infinity sign, and an overly long scarf in mixed colors of green and blue that she tied around her neck to the left, leaving its ends flapping in the air or hanging just above her feet.
Resonance: Maru's aura appears as a faded haze of blue and green gradients. When she achieves perfect resonance with her Bey, her aura becomes clearer and more distinct in color, and her eyes momentarily flash golden.
Character Alignment: Neutral Good
Personality: Maru is a generally calm yet lighthearted person, and while not very outgoing, is a fairly friendly individual and doesn't mind hanging out with people as long as they don't blabber unncessarily, which she finds annoying. She's a talented artist as well, and has a symmetric vision that she uses in many of her life aspects, such as her clothing having three alternating patterns of fitting colors, and her art having not more than two themes at a time. Due to the aforementioned symmetric philosophy she uses, Maru can be quite rigid and opposed to chaotic changes or unusual elements despite her normally open-minded approach to different matters, but with enough persuasion, she can adapt to and accept change.
When Blading, Maru's main strategy is to try and analyze the opponent prior to the battle to figure out as much as she can about them, and plan accordingly to better her chances of winning. Therefore, she acts more subdued and quiet in battle, so as to not give away too much information about her. If that fails, however, she simply goes with a last-minute plan and hope for the best (this was something she had to learn to do after mutliple encounters, battles and experiences making her slowly change her rigid attitude, not something she started out doing).
Likes: Neutral colors, soft colors, cool weather, winter clothes, scenery, flying by plane, going on picnics, nature-inspired art, simple art, acrylic paint, simple accessories, skirts, cold juices, cinnamon & vanilla-flavored ice cream, casual battles, stadiums with symmetrical shapes (the standard stadium is her favorite)
Dislikes: Too bright colors, extra detailed art, clashing color palettes, hot and humid weather, overly extroverted people, naïvete, unncessary complications, drama, too competitive environments (like Beyblade teams), spicy food, any sort of meat that's not chicken or fish, crunchy food.
Relationships:
1- Lui Shirasagijo: Maru used to sporadically visit her uncle with her parents when she was younger, seeing as he was the closest one to them in the family. She didn't exactly like him at first (mainly because of how awkward he acted when they were in the same space for more than two minutes), but as time passed and she learned that he was (and according to him, still is) a Blading Legend, she started to respect and like him a bit more. This was why, after her father went missing and her mother decided to move back to Japan, she starting visiting him and spending time with him more frequently, even getting into Blading under his tutelage and actually enjoying the game. Now, Maru sees Lui as a second father figure, one that she respects, admires and loves, and she vows to uphold his expectations and her own by advancing on the world stage.
Wow, that's the sappiest relationship section I ever wrote. Ah, frick it
Beys:
1- Vanish Longinus Tapered Mobius -2: Maru's first Bey, a generic combo she got as a gift from her mother (tipped off by Lui ofc) after acing her final exams at the 3rd year of Middle School.
2- Iris Mayura .8 Feather Brush -A: Maru's current Bey, one that she designed on her own by taking some inspiration from her Vanish Longinus and several other elements she added in.
Bey Parts & Details - Iris Mayura .8 Feather Brush (Left-Spin Defense type):
Kiwami Core - Mayura: Mayura is a Left-spinning Kiwami Core featuring a side view of a peacock's head with four feather at the top to represent its namesake; Mayura, the Sanskrit word for peacock, which is one of the sacred birds of the Hindu mythology. The Core's main color scheme is dark blue, the feathers are mixed shades of blue, green, brown and amber, and the one visible eye of the metallic head is golden.
Kiwami Blade - Iris: Iris is a Left-Spinning Kiwami Blade featuring eight curved, feather-like shapes as contact points that almost overlap on each other, giving the Blade a circular shape reminiscent of a peacock's tail. Iris' gimmick lies in the 'feathers', which follow a pattern of one being hollowed out from the inside to absorb impact, while the one next to it features rubber on the outside to allow for Spin-equalization against opposite-spin opponents. The Blade's main color scheme is dark blue, while the feathers alternate between being emerald green and brownish amber on the inside (the green ones are the hollowed-out and the amber ones' outer blue is the rubber).
Kiwami Weight - 8: 8 is a nearly circular Kiwami Weight that looks like a miniature Iris, and its shape gives it good stamina and LAD potential suited for defensive combos.
Kiwami Armor - Allure: Allure is a Kiwami Armor with a gimmick, which is that it can be rotated to fill in the hollowed-out parts of the Iris Blade in both Upper and Lower Mode, by making use of four oval, springy rubber pieces. It is a translucent golden color.
Neo Disc - Feather: Feather is a Neo Disc that supports both the Upper and Lower Modes of Kiwami Beys and has a low center of gravity, similar to Tapered. As its name implies, it features two nearly overlapping feather shapes, which give it a decently circular shape that helps with stamina and LAD-based combinations. It is a solid silver color
Driver - Brush: Brush is a Defense-type Driver with a plastic ball tip and a POM ring just above it, one of which is free-spinning where the other is spring-loaded. The Driver's gimmick lies in the ring, which tilts up and down when it makes contact with the stadium to prevent a knockout with minimal stamina loss. The Driver is translucent amber in color.
Special Moves:
1- Iris Siphon: Mayura spins steadily in the centre, brushing off most attacks and gaining some speed upon contact with a Right-spinning opponent. This move is Maru's go-to at the start of a battle, especially when she doesn't know much about her opponent's Bey.
2- Iris Guard: Mayura circles the centre with its Driver's ring tilting a bit down, using both the hollowed-out and fully rubber feathers to avoid receiving damage.
3- Allure Spark: When its hollowed-out feathers are filled, Mayura uses them in conjunction with the rubber ones to deliver several quick strikes, utilizing the rubber's increased recoil to make them more impactful. This move is particularly effecient at low spin speeds in opposite-spin, as it also adds the risk of a Slow-Motion Burst if the opponent's Bey has a much higher spin speed.
4- Enchant Wing Counter: When knocked back, Mayura's Brush Driver tilts down, before immediately shooting it upwards in a counterattack that flings the opponent's Bey up in the air, which could result in an Over Finish or, in some cases, a Burst Finish.
Launch Technique: Maru holds her Launcher above her head, spinning it in her right hand twice before adjusting her beanie with a thin smirk, dropping her hand right in front of her, and pulling on the string at the call of "GO...Shoot!"
Trivia:
1- Despite being born and mainly raised in France, Maru's French is pretty bad. As such, she prefers speaking in Japanese whenever she can, and that was one of several factors that helped her settle in better after moving to Hokkaido.
2- Maru's stage name in battles was actually just a random suggestion from one of her friends that she shot down, but someone coined it as her official nickname and she's not happy about that.
3- Lui isn't Maru's direct uncle, he's actually both her parents' cousin (her parents, Ruri and Luis, are cousins as well), but due to family shenanigans, he's the closest to both of them and practically the only one who supported their marriage, and as such, is the one they're in most contact with.
Aug. 08, 2021 11:43 PM
Aug. 08, 2021 11:49 PM
(Aug. 08, 2021 11:43 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]I don't know why but I almost cryed when I was reading her Relationships lol
Glad to know the sappiness is working, haha. I don't even know how it came out like that, but imagine Uncle Lui basically raising a kid Blader to kinda sorta carry on his legacy, of course it has to be partially soft.
Aug. 09, 2021 1:21 AM
Okay, can Shin and Maru (if it is okay with PinkRose) have a rivalry as Shu Vs Lui?
Aug. 09, 2021 6:04 AM
(Aug. 08, 2021 11:39 PM)PinkRose Wrote: [ -> ]Here goes your entry, hope it's actually writeable XD
Spoiler (Click to View)Name: Maru Shirasagijo
Nicknames/Aliases: The Elegant Breeze (stage nickname for battles)
Gender: Female
Age: 14
Nationality: Half-French, Half-Japanese
Physical Appearance: Maru appears as a petite teenage girl with a pale complexion, short, wavy hair in teal gradients that barely reaches her shoulders, and soft emerald eyes. Her usual outfit consists of a long-sleeved, frilly white blouse striped with black, a knee-length denim skirt with four brown buttons on the left side, a pair of cerulean blue ballerina shoes with a ribbon on top of each one, a tilted brown beanie with elegant blue embroidery on the rim, a silver ring shaped like an infinity sign, and an overly long scarf in mixed colors of green and blue that she tied around her neck to the left, leaving its ends flapping in the air or hanging just above her feet.
Resonance: Maru's aura appears as a faded haze of blue and green gradients. When she achieves perfect resonance with her Bey, her aura becomes clearer and more distinct in color, and her eyes momentarily flash golden.
Character Alignment: Neutral Good
Personality: Maru is a generally calm yet lighthearted person, and while not very outgoing, is a fairly friendly individual and doesn't mind hanging out with people as long as they don't blabber unncessarily, which she finds annoying. She's a talented artist as well, and has a symmetric vision that she uses in many of her life aspects, such as her clothing having three alternating patterns of fitting colors, and her art having not more than two themes at a time. Due to the aforementioned symmetric philosophy she uses, Maru can be quite rigid and opposed to chaotic changes or unusual elements despite her normally open-minded approach to different matters, but with enough persuasion, she can adapt to and accept change.
When Blading, Maru's main strategy is to try and analyze the opponent prior to the battle to figure out as much as she can about them, and plan accordingly to better her chances of winning. Therefore, she acts more subdued and quiet in battle, so as to not give away too much information about her. If that fails, however, she simply goes with a last-minute plan and hope for the best (this was something she had to learn to do after mutliple encounters, battles and experiences making her slowly change her rigid attitude, not something she started out doing).
Likes: Neutral colors, soft colors, cool weather, winter clothes, scenery, flying by plane, going on picnics, nature-inspired art, simple art, acrylic paint, simple accessories, skirts, cold juices, cinnamon & vanilla-flavored ice cream, casual battles, stadiums with symmetrical shapes (the standard stadium is her favorite)
Dislikes: Too bright colors, extra detailed art, clashing color palettes, hot and humid weather, overly extroverted people, naïvete, unncessary complications, drama, too competitive environments (like Beyblade teams), spicy food, any sort of meat that's not chicken or fish, crunchy food.
Relationships:
1- Lui Shirasagijo: Maru used to sporadically visit her uncle with her parents when she was younger, seeing as he was the closest one to them in the family. She didn't exactly like him at first (mainly because of how awkward he acted when they were in the same space for more than two minutes), but as time passed and she learned that he was (and according to him, still is) a Blading Legend, she started to respect and like him a bit more. This was why, after her father went missing and her mother decided to move back to Japan, she starting visiting him and spending time with him more frequently, even getting into Blading under his tutelage and actually enjoying the game. Now, Maru sees Lui as a second father figure, one that she respects, admires and loves, and she vows to uphold his expectations and her own by advancing on the world stage.
Wow, that's the sappiest relationship section I ever wrote. Ah, frick it
Beys:
1- Vanish Longinus Tapered Mobius -2: Maru's first Bey, a generic combo she got as a gift from her mother (tipped off by Lui ofc) after acing her final exams at the 3rd year of Middle School.
2- Iris Mayura .8 Feather Brush -A: Maru's current Bey, one that she designed on her own by taking some inspiration from her Vanish Longinus and several other elements she added in.
Bey Parts & Details - Iris Mayura .8 Feather Brush (Left-Spin Defense type):
Kiwami Core - Mayura: Mayura is a Left-spinning Kiwami Core featuring a side view of a peacock's head with four feather at the top to represent its namesake; Mayura, the Sanskrit word for peacock, which is one of the sacred birds of the Hindu mythology. The Core's main color scheme is dark blue, the feathers are mixed shades of blue, green, brown and amber, and the one visible eye of the metallic head is golden.
Kiwami Blade - Iris: Iris is a Left-Spinning Kiwami Blade featuring eight curved, feather-like shapes as contact points that almost overlap on each other, giving the Blade a circular shape reminiscent of a peacock's tail. Iris' gimmick lies in the 'feathers', which follow a pattern of one being hollowed out from the inside to absorb impact, while the one next to it features rubber on the outside to allow for Spin-equalization against opposite-spin opponents. The Blade's main color scheme is dark blue, while the feathers alternate between being emerald green and brownish amber on the inside (the green ones are the hollowed-out and the amber ones' outer blue is the rubber).
Kiwami Weight - 8: 8 is a nearly circular Kiwami Weight that looks like a miniature Iris, and its shape gives it good stamina and LAD potential suited for defensive combos.
Kiwami Armor - Allure: Allure is a Kiwami Armor with a gimmick, which is that it can be rotated to fill in the hollowed-out parts of the Iris Blade in both Upper and Lower Mode, by making use of four oval, springy rubber pieces. It is a translucent golden color.
Neo Disc - Feather: Feather is a Neo Disc that supports both the Upper and Lower Modes of Kiwami Beys and has a low center of gravity, similar to Tapered. As its name implies, it features two nearly overlapping feather shapes, which give it a decently circular shape that helps with stamina and LAD-based combinations. It is a solid silver color
Driver - Brush: Brush is a Defense-type Driver with a plastic ball tip and a POM ring just above it, one of which is free-spinning where the other is spring-loaded. The Driver's gimmick lies in the ring, which tilts up and down when it makes contact with the stadium to prevent a knockout with minimal stamina loss. The Driver is translucent amber in color.
Special Moves:
1- Iris Siphon: Mayura spins steadily in the centre, brushing off most attacks and gaining some speed upon contact with a Right-spinning opponent. This move is Maru's go-to at the start of a battle, especially when she doesn't know much about her opponent's Bey.
2- Iris Guard: Mayura circles the centre with its Driver's ring tilting a bit down, using both the hollowed-out and fully rubber feathers to avoid receiving damage.
3- Allure Spark: When its hollowed-out feathers are filled, Mayura uses them in conjunction with the rubber ones to deliver several quick strikes, utilizing the rubber's increased recoil to make them more impactful. This move is particularly effecient at low spin speeds in opposite-spin, as it also adds the risk of a Slow-Motion Burst if the opponent's Bey has a much higher spin speed.
4- Enchant Wing Counter: When knocked back, Mayura's Brush Driver tilts down, before immediately shooting it upwards in a counterattack that flings the opponent's Bey up in the air, which could result in an Over Finish or, in some cases, a Burst Finish.
Launch Technique: Maru holds her Launcher above her head, spinning it in her right hand twice before adjusting her beanie with a thin smirk, dropping her hand right in front of her, and pulling on the string at the call of "GO...Shoot!"
Trivia:
1- Despite being born and mainly raised in France, Maru's French is pretty bad. As such, she prefers speaking in Japanese whenever she can, and that was one of several factors that helped her settle in better after moving to Hokkaido.
2- Maru's stage name in battles was actually just a random suggestion from one of her friends that she shot down, but someone coined it as her official nickname and she's not happy about that.
3- Lui isn't Maru's direct uncle, he's actually both her parents' cousin (her parents, Ruri and Luis, are cousins as well), but due to family shenanigans, he's the closest to both of them and practically the only one who supported their marriage, and as such, is the one they're in most contact with.
Wow I like how detailed it is.