RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jun. 10, 2021
Can someone rate my recent chapters please 
Also, there are only 2 MORE SPOTS so if you wanna be in Dynachi then you better hurry it up
Chapter 15 is out!! Also Lights!! Camera!! Action!! just became chapter the 16th chapter hope your happy @Jjustice
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 15
ThunderBringer!! Nexus Zeutron
Me/Ryuji: Let it rip!!
(Roktavor lands but starts wobbling)
Ryuji: *Gasps*
(Valtryek unleashes a flurry of blows)
Me: Rush! Rush! Rush!
(Roktavor is sent flying out of the ring)
Ryuji: Grr!!
Brooke: Did you notice that?
Adam: Notice what?
Brooke: Ryuji completely messed up his launch.
Ryuji: Why don’t you come here and say that!!
Me: She is right though.
Ryuji: And how do I fix it, Mr. Smart Guy!! And why has it never been a problem before!!
Me: Well you just got used to Roktavor so that means you can launch harder. But Roktavor is super heavy so strong launches won’t work.
Ryuji: My point still stands!! How do I fix it!!
Adam: First you gotta get outta Jerkville then we can help you!
Me: Valt told me that Honcho was--
Ryuji: Do not mention that name!! He’s a disappointment!!
Adam: Yo, what’s up?
Ryuji: What do you mean by “What’s up”
Adam: You're being jerkier than normal.
Ryuji: *Sighs* Sorry I just--
Adam: Vlad call the doctor he just apologized!!! He’s broken!!
Ryuji: After you rudely interrupted me--
Adam: Nope, he’s back to normal!!
Ryuji: WILL YOU LET ME TALK!!
Brooke: Jeez man.
Ryuji: I’m just frustrated after my embarrassing loss yesterday.
Adam: If I’m being honest none of us thought you were going to win.
Ryuji: WHAT KIND OF FRIEND ARE YOU!!!
Adam: An honest one.
Ryuji: Why you!!
Me: Time for me to talk!! Anyways, what I was saying is Honcho had a super heavy grip which made Roktavor spin longer and raised it’s defenses!!
Ryuji: Like one of us has==
Adam: This what you're talking about?
(Adam holds up the heavy grip)
Me: Exactly!!
Ryuji: How did you find one?
Adam: My dad gave me one a while ago, I didn’t know how to use it but I bring it everywhere I go because you never know when you’ll need it!!
(Ryuji snatches it out of Adam’s hands and attaches it to his launcher)
Adam: I think thanks is in order?
Ryuji: Nope!!
(Adam falls over)
Ryuji: Brooke will be my test subject!!
Brooke: Oh, you're gonna regret saying that!!
(Ryuji puts Roktavor’s weight from the bottom to the top)
(My Thoughts): He made Roktavor higher so even if he messes up his launch he should be able to stabilize in the center!! He actually has some brain behind that talk!!
Adam: First battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
(A mysterious fellow jumps in the air)
Brooke/Ryuji/???: Let it rip!!
(All beys hit the ground)
Me/Adam/Ryuji/Brooke: *Gasps*
???: Go Zeutron!!
(Zeutron and Belarix start hitting Roktavor from everywhere)
Ryuji: How rude, let me teach you a lesson!! Berserker Wing Storm!!
(Roktavor blows Zeutron and Belarix away)
Brooke: Belarix!!
(Brooke’s Resonance Aura flares up)
(Belarix catches onto the rim)
Brooke: Venture Flash!!
(Belarix comes in full speed and breaks through the wind barrier)
Ryuji: *Gasps in fear*
???: Fear not!! I will save you!!
(Belarix and Zeutron start clashing)
Brooke: Detonate Bomb!!
???: Zeutron!!
(??? Resonance Aura flares up)
(The metal balls on Zeutron come out)
???: You’ve got this my light!!
(Huge Explosion occurs)
(Zeutron Roktavor and Belarix are sent flying)
Adam: Simultaneous Ring Out finish!! No points!!
Ryuji: We were battling!!
???: Oh please it was barely a battle till I got there!!
Ryuji: We didn’t even start battling!!
Me: Well, at least we got to test the new grip!!
Ryuji: Who even are you!!
Zafary: I’m Zafary Kaneguro!! But you can call my Zafary the Star!!
Adam: Welcome aboard Zafary!!
Ryuji: Yeah, thanks for interrupting our battle!!
Zafary: No problem!!
Me: That’s a cool Dynachi bey you’ve got!!
Zafary: Built it from scratch and with help from my Dad!!
Adam: Isn’t your Dad Zac the Sunrise?
Zafary: You're correct!!
Adam: Awesome!!
Zafary: I came to this ship to battle Vlad Aoi!! Have you seen him?
(Everybody points at me)
Zafary: Ah, you were right in front of me this whole time!!
Me: I’m ready to take you on!!
Zafary: Blondie, judge the match!!
Ryuji: I have a name you know!!
Adam: Just start the battle!! I’m excited to see who will win!!
Ryuji: Inspect your opponent's bey.
(My Thoughts): Nexus Zeutron a clockwise spinning stamina type it looks like when it starts running low on spin two big heavy balls will come on the outside part of the layer it will give the bey way more stamina!!
(Zafary takes back Zeutron, Zafary puts Zeutron’s weight from the bottom to the top)
Me: Two can play that game!!
(I put Valtryek’s weight from the bottom to the top)
Adam: They both adjusted their heights. This is going to be amazing!!
Ryuji: First battle. Ready set.
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Zafary: Let it rip!!
(The reboot tip stick comes out)
Me: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek hits Zeutron with a flurry of attacks, Zeutron doesn't move an inch)
Zafary: Is this really all you got?
Me: We’ve got way more!!
(Valtryek hits Zeutron at full power, Zeutron comes crashing back down)
Zafary: Nexus Crash!!
Me: Valiant Spring Attack!!
(Valtryek and Zeutron get sent flying but hit the wall)
Zafary: And it’s over!
(Valtryek starts wobbling)
Me: It’s not done yet!!
Valtryek: You tell them!!
Me: Let’s go Valtryek!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
(The reboot tip stick goes in)
Me: Heroic Reboot!!
(Valtryek gains a huge amount of speed)
Zafary: I’m not going to be outdone by you!!
(Zafary’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Go faster!!
(Valtryek catches onto the stadium rim and speeds around like a rocket and crashes into the wall)
Me: Valient Spring Winged Launch!!
(Valtryek and Zeutron are flung into the air, Zeutron bursts)
Ryuji: That’s Valiant Valtryek with a burst finish!! Vlad wins!!
Me: Woo hoo!!
Brooke: That was a decent match.
Me: Aw come on you’ve got to admit it was awesome!!
Brooke: Fine, I guess it was.
Zafary: Well Vlad looks like I’m staying on this boat till I defeat you!!
Me: Bring it on!!
(At the Arena)
Announcer: Ok bladers, this is where the tournament really gets serious. Since we have 12 members on the ship we will be starting one on one and you’ve only got two chances so give it your all or you're going to be going home!!
Me: I’m so ready for this!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jun. 11, 2021
(Jun. 10, 2021 11:09 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Can someone rate my recent chapters please
Also, there are only 2 MORE SPOTS so if you wanna be in Dynachi then you better hurry it up
Chapter 15 is out!! Also Lights!! Camera!! Action!! just became chapter the 16th chapter hope your happy @Jjustice
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 15
ThunderBringer!! Nexus Zeutron
Me/Ryuji: Let it rip!!
(Roktavor lands but starts wobbling)
Ryuji: *Gasps*
(Valtryek unleashes a flurry of blows)
Me: Rush! Rush! Rush!
(Roktavor is sent flying out of the ring)
Ryuji: Grr!!
Brooke: Did you notice that?
Adam: Notice what?
Brooke: Ryuji completely messed up his launch.
Ryuji: Why don’t you come here and say that!!
Me: She is right though.
Ryuji: And how do I fix it, Mr. Smart Guy!! And why has it never been a problem before!!
Me: Well you just got used to Roktavor so that means you can launch harder. But Roktavor is super heavy so strong launches won’t work.
Ryuji: My point still stands!! How do I fix it!!
Adam: First you gotta get outta Jerkville then we can help you!
Me: Valt told me that Honcho was--
Ryuji: Do not mention that name!! He’s a disappointment!!
Adam: Yo, what’s up?
Ryuji: What do you mean by “What’s up”
Adam: You're being jerkier than normal.
Ryuji: *Sighs* Sorry I just--
Adam: Vlad call the doctor he just apologized!!! He’s broken!!
Ryuji: After you rudely interrupted me--
Adam: Nope, he’s back to normal!!
Ryuji: WILL YOU LET ME TALK!!
Brooke: Jeez man.
Ryuji: I’m just frustrated after my embarrassing loss yesterday.
Adam: If I’m being honest none of us thought you were going to win.
Ryuji: WHAT KIND OF FRIEND ARE YOU!!!
Adam: An honest one.
Ryuji: Why you!!
Me: Time for me to talk!! Anyways, what I was saying is Honcho had a super heavy grip which made Roktavor spin longer and raised it’s defenses!!
Ryuji: Like one of us has==
Adam: This what you're talking about?
(Adam holds up the heavy grip)
Me: Exactly!!
Ryuji: How did you find one?
Adam: My dad gave me one a while ago, I didn’t know how to use it but I bring it everywhere I go because you never know when you’ll need it!!
(Ryuji snatches it out of Adam’s hands and attaches it to his launcher)
Adam: I think thanks is in order?
Ryuji: Nope!!
(Adam falls over)
Ryuji: Brooke will be my test subject!!
Brooke: Oh, you're gonna regret saying that!!
(Ryuji puts Roktavor’s weight from the bottom to the top)
(My Thoughts): He made Roktavor higher so even if he messes up his launch he should be able to stabilize in the center!! He actually has some brain behind that talk!!
Adam: First battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
(A mysterious fellow jumps in the air)
Brooke/Ryuji/???: Let it rip!!
(All beys hit the ground)
Me/Adam/Ryuji/Brooke: *Gasps*
???: Go Zeutron!!
(Zeutron and Belarix start hitting Roktavor from everywhere)
Ryuji: How rude, let me teach you a lesson!! Berserker Wing Storm!!
(Roktavor blows Zeutron and Belarix away)
Brooke: Belarix!!
(Brooke’s Resonance Aura flares up)
(Belarix catches onto the rim)
Brooke: Venture Flash!!
(Belarix comes in full speed and breaks through the wind barrier)
Ryuji: *Gasps in fear*
???: Fear not!! I will save you!!
(Belarix and Zeutron start clashing)
Brooke: Detonate Bomb!!
???: Zeutron!!
(??? Resonance Aura flares up)
(The metal balls on Zeutron come out)
???: You’ve got this my light!!
(Huge Explosion occurs)
(Zeutron Roktavor and Belarix are sent flying)
Adam: Simultaneous Ring Out finish!! No points!!
Ryuji: We were battling!!
???: Oh please it was barely a battle till I got there!!
Ryuji: We didn’t even start battling!!
Me: Well, at least we got to test the new grip!!
Ryuji: Who even are you!!
Zafary: I’m Zafary Kaneguro!! But you can call my Zafary the Star!!
Adam: Welcome aboard Zafary!!
Ryuji: Yeah, thanks for interrupting our battle!!
Zafary: No problem!!
Me: That’s a cool Dynachi bey you’ve got!!
Zafary: Built it from scratch and with help from my Dad!!
Adam: Isn’t your Dad Zac the Sunrise?
Zafary: You're correct!!
Adam: Awesome!!
Zafary: I came to this ship to battle Vlad Aoi!! Have you seen him?
(Everybody points at me)
Zafary: Ah, you were right in front of me this whole time!!
Me: I’m ready to take you on!!
Zafary: Blondie, judge the match!!
Ryuji: I have a name you know!!
Adam: Just start the battle!! I’m excited to see who will win!!
Ryuji: Inspect your opponent's bey.
(My Thoughts): Nexus Zeutron a clockwise spinning stamina type it looks like when it starts running low on spin two big heavy balls will come on the outside part of the layer it will give the bey way more stamina!!
(Zafary takes back Zeutron, Zafary puts Zeutron’s weight from the bottom to the top)
Me: Two can play that game!!
(I put Valtryek’s weight from the bottom to the top)
Adam: They both adjusted their heights. This is going to be amazing!!
Ryuji: First battle. Ready set.
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Zafary: Let it rip!!
(The reboot tip stick comes out)
Me: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek hits Zeutron with a flurry of attacks, Zeutron doesn't move an inch)
Zafary: Is this really all you got?
Me: We’ve got way more!!
(Valtryek hits Zeutron at full power, Zeutron comes crashing back down)
Zafary: Nexus Crash!!
Me: Valiant Spring Attack!!
(Valtryek and Zeutron get sent flying but hit the wall)
Zafary: And it’s over!
(Valtryek starts wobbling)
Me: It’s not done yet!!
Valtryek: You tell them!!
Me: Let’s go Valtryek!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
(The reboot tip stick goes in)
Me: Heroic Reboot!!
(Valtryek gains a huge amount of speed)
Zafary: I’m not going to be outdone by you!!
(Zafary’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Go faster!!
(Valtryek catches onto the stadium rim and speeds around like a rocket and crashes into the wall)
Me: Valient Spring Winged Launch!!
(Valtryek and Zeutron are flung into the air, Zeutron bursts)
Ryuji: That’s Valiant Valtryek with a burst finish!! Vlad wins!!
Me: Woo hoo!!
Brooke: That was a decent match.
Me: Aw come on you’ve got to admit it was awesome!!
Brooke: Fine, I guess it was.
Zafary: Well Vlad looks like I’m staying on this boat till I defeat you!!
Me: Bring it on!!
(At the Arena)
Announcer: Ok bladers, this is where the tournament really gets serious. Since we have 12 members on the ship we will be starting one on one and you’ve only got two chances so give it your all or you're going to be going home!!
Me: I’m so ready for this!! Another star let's gooo was man I was at the store and I saw galaxy Zeutran but I chose another bey great chapter
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jun. 12, 2021
beyblade names the one at the end is mine feel free to use it (btw its Titan Tyrent)
https://nickfinder.com/Beyblade
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jun. 14, 2021
JCE_13 if your not busy with your tournament wanna plop in an entry?
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - JCE_13 - Jun. 14, 2021
(Jun. 14, 2021 4:18 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: JCE_13 if your not busy with your tournament wanna plop in an entry?
?
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jun. 14, 2021
(Jun. 14, 2021 4:29 PM)JCE_13 Wrote: (Jun. 14, 2021 4:18 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: JCE_13 if your not busy with your tournament wanna plop in an entry?
?
For my fanfic, you can make your own character and use a Beyblade from S1-S6 (They have to be related to the person who originally owned it)
You can just add a name and bey then I will do the rest. (Beys that are taken Valtryek, Ashindra, Ragnarok Belial Spriggan Luinor Zeutron Dragon Fafnir Jinnus Xcalius and Apocalypse)
@Jjustice your gonna love this
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 16
Lights!! Camera!! Action!!
Announcer: We will be doing Block battles so that means we will have 6 participants in A group and 6 participants in B group!! Our first 3 matches will be!! Jay Burns Vs Faza De La Hoya!!
(Jay’s Thoughts): If I beat him then I’ll skyrocket to the top of the rankings I have to win!!
Announcer: After that, we’ve got!! Xerxes Shakadera Vs Aiden Peregrin!!
(Aiden’s Thoughts): Good. Apocalypse should be done by then.
Announcer: And our last A Group battle will be Adam Kusaba Vs Ryuji Kiyama!!
Ryuji/Adam: I’m going up against you? I’m totally going to win!!
Me: Uh?
Ryuji/Adam: Stop copying me!!
(Brooke snickers)
Ryuji/Adam: Aglet!! Dang it!!
Me: Just stop.
(Ryuji and Adam come up super close)
Ryuji/Adam: Will you help me train!!
Me: Um sure--
(Jay runs past me and grabs me)
Brooke: Uh?
Me: I’ll be back!!
Jay: You’ve gotta help me!!
Me: With your battle?
Jay: Exactly!
Me: I can help you!!
Jay/Me: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
Me: Rush Launch!!
(Jinnus gets hit from all sides)
Jay: Hang in there!!
(Jinnus clicks and its wall comes above its layer)
Me: *Gasps*
Jay: Jinx Wall!!
(All of Valtryek’s attacks get blocked)
Me: Attack!!
(Valtryek heads straight for Jinnus)
Jay: Jinx Counter!!
Me: Valient Spring Attack!!
(Valtryek and Jinnus get sent flying out of the stadium)
Me: I think I just thought of a way for you to win!!
Jay: How? Tell me!!
Me: If you were to adjust your center of gravity Fafnir wouldn't be able to steal your spin!!
Jay: You're right!!
Me: Then let’s try it!!
(The Next Day)
Announcer: Alright bladers!! Today we’ve got an awesome match-up for you all!! In the blue corner, we’ve got the Actor Of The Year in America Jay Burns!!
Jay: Alright, fans, are you ready to see an awesome battle!!
Announcer: In the red corner we’ve got the Best Of The Best, the king of kings Faza De La Hoya!!
Jay: Don’t take it personally but I’m gonna win!!
Faza: Dad told me that he battled your Uncle and won.
Jay: Do I look like Joshua?
Ref: First battle!! Ready set!!
(Jay puts Jinnus’ weight from the bottom to the top)
All: 3! 2! 1!
Faza/Jay: Let it rip!!
(Faza launches Fafnir with his hand)
Jay: Go Jinnus!!
Announcer: Jay starts off with a rock-hard launch and steals the center!!
Faza: Void Spin!!
(Fafnir makes a hit but gets sent flying into the wall)
Jay: You can’t do anything now!!
Announcer: Fafnir tries making a hit but can’t do anything!!
(Fafnir continuously gets rammed into the wall)
Jay: That’s the stuff!!
(Fafnir stops spinning)
Reff: It’s Jinx Jinnus with a survivor finish!! Jay Burns claims 1 point!!
Announcer: I cannot believe that Jay actually got a point off our Top Dog!!
Faza: So you got a point off me when I was going easy huh?
Jay: You're lying!!
Faza: Fine, I'll show you my true strength.
(Faza pulls out his launcher)
Announcer: Jay just poked the bear, his confidence has no bounds!!!
Ref: Second Battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
(Faza’s veins pop out)
Jay: *Gasps*
Faza/Jay: Let it rip!!
Faza: Absorb Break!!
(Fafnir speeds around the stadium and hits Jinnus, Jinnus bursts)
Jay: You’ve gotta be kidding!!
Reff: It’s Void Fafnir with a burst finish. Faza De La Hoya wins with a burst finish!!
(Jay falls to the ground)
Jay: No!!
Announcer: The Hollywood Actor just burst into the next century!!
Faza: You're never going to beat me!!
(Faza’s eyes flash dangerously)
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jun. 14, 2021
(Jun. 14, 2021 4:40 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: (Jun. 14, 2021 4:29 PM)JCE_13 Wrote: ?
For my fanfic, you can make your own character and use a Beyblade from S1-S6 (They have to be related to the person who originally owned it)
You can just add a name and bey then I will do the rest. (Beys that are taken Valtryek, Ashindra, Ragnarok Belial Spriggan Luinor Zeutron Dragon Fafnir Jinnus Xcalius and Apocalypse)
@Jjustice your gonna love this
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 16
Lights!! Camera!! Action!!
Announcer: We will be doing Block battles so that means we will have 6 participants in A group and 6 participants in B group!! Our first 3 matches will be!! Jay Burns Vs Faza De La Hoya!!
(Jay’s Thoughts): If I beat him then I’ll skyrocket to the top of the rankings I have to win!!
Announcer: After that, we’ve got!! Xerxes Shakadera Vs Aiden Peregrin!!
(Aiden’s Thoughts): Good. Apocalypse should be done by then.
Announcer: And our last A Group battle will be Adam Kusaba Vs Ryuji Kiyama!!
Ryuji/Adam: I’m going up against you? I’m totally going to win!!
Me: Uh?
Ryuji/Adam: Stop copying me!!
(Brooke snickers)
Ryuji/Adam: Aglet!! Dang it!!
Me: Just stop.
(Ryuji and Adam come up super close)
Ryuji/Adam: Will you help me train!!
Me: Um sure--
(Jay runs past me and grabs me)
Brooke: Uh?
Me: I’ll be back!!
Jay: You’ve gotta help me!!
Me: With your battle?
Jay: Exactly!
Me: I can help you!!
Jay/Me: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
Me: Rush Launch!!
(Jinnus gets hit from all sides)
Jay: Hang in there!!
(Jinnus clicks and its wall comes above its layer)
Me: *Gasps*
Jay: Jinx Wall!!
(All of Valtryek’s attacks get blocked)
Me: Attack!!
(Valtryek heads straight for Jinnus)
Jay: Jinx Counter!!
Me: Valient Spring Attack!!
(Valtryek and Jinnus get sent flying out of the stadium)
Me: I think I just thought of a way for you to win!!
Jay: How? Tell me!!
Me: If you were to adjust your center of gravity Fafnir wouldn't be able to steal your spin!!
Jay: You're right!!
Me: Then let’s try it!!
(The Next Day)
Announcer: Alright bladers!! Today we’ve got an awesome match-up for you all!! In the blue corner, we’ve got the Actor Of The Year in America Jay Burns!!
Jay: Alright, fans, are you ready to see an awesome battle!!
Announcer: In the red corner we’ve got the Best Of The Best, the king of kings Faza De La Hoya!!
Jay: Don’t take it personally but I’m gonna win!!
Faza: Dad told me that he battled your Uncle and won.
Jay: Do I look like Joshua?
Ref: First battle!! Ready set!!
(Jay puts Jinnus’ weight from the bottom to the top)
All: 3! 2! 1!
Faza/Jay: Let it rip!!
(Faza launches Fafnir with his hand)
Jay: Go Jinnus!!
Announcer: Jay starts off with a rock-hard launch and steals the center!!
Faza: Void Spin!!
(Fafnir makes a hit but gets sent flying into the wall)
Jay: You can’t do anything now!!
Announcer: Fafnir tries making a hit but can’t do anything!!
(Fafnir continuously gets rammed into the wall)
Jay: That’s the stuff!!
(Fafnir stops spinning)
Reff: It’s Jinx Jinnus with a survivor finish!! Jay Burns claims 1 point!!
Announcer: I cannot believe that Jay actually got a point off our Top Dog!!
Faza: So you got a point off me when I was going easy huh?
Jay: You're lying!!
Faza: Fine, I'll show you my true strength.
(Faza pulls out his launcher)
Announcer: Jay just poked the bear, his confidence has no bounds!!!
Ref: Second Battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
(Faza’s veins pop out)
Jay: *Gasps*
Faza/Jay: Let it rip!!
Faza: Absorb Break!!
(Fafnir speeds around the stadium and hits Jinnus, Jinnus bursts)
Jay: You’ve gotta be kidding!!
Reff: It’s Void Fafnir with a burst finish. Faza De La Hoya wins with a burst finish!!
(Jay falls to the ground)
Jay: No!!
Announcer: The Hollywood Actor just burst into the next century!!
Faza: You're never going to beat me!!
(Faza’s eyes flash dangerously)
It's nice to see that Jay's not a spoiled brat and hes not a success with faza like Joshua was with free good chapter
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jun. 16, 2021
Chapter 17 is out!!
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 17
Darkness Has Fallen, Warped Apocalypse!!
~In The Workshop~
Aiden: Yes, it’s finally finished. Warped Apocalypse!
Speaker: Aiden Peregrin you’re match is starting
Aiden: Shall we give you a test run?
(A corrupted voice responses with yes)
~In The Arena~
Announcer: Ok Mini blading legends we’ve got our second match of A Group, hitting you like a rocket!! In the red corner, we’ve got the King Of Darkness Aiden Peregrin!!
Aiden: Listen up everyone!!
(Aiden holds Apocalypse up in the air)
Aiden: Meet Warped Apocalypse!!
All: *Gasps*
Adam: He evolved his bey!!
(My Thoughts): So he was the one who stole the blueprints!!
Aiden: I am the King Of Beyblade, and will stop anyone who challenges me, they’ll be squashed like a bug!!
Sebastian: News flash!! Beyblade doesn't belong to you!!!
Aiden: Sebastian Kurenai, we’ll meet each other soon enough in battle, and don’t worry I’ll crush you along with that attitude!!
Sebastian: I can’t wait to teach you a lesson!!
Announcer: Will Sebastian and Aiden battle soon? We’ll just have to wait and see after this epic battle!! Anyways in the blue corner, we’ve got the Heir To The Throne, Xerxes Shakadera!!
Xerxes: I will not let you take over Beyblade!! You're going to have to get through me!!
Aiden: Well, that shouldn’t be so hard, should it?
Xerxes: It won’t be hard, because I’ll blast you away in one hit!!
Drone: Inspect your opponent's bey!!
(Xerxes’ Thoughts): Warped Apocalypse a clockwise spinning attack type. It has blades on the outside to dish out some wicked attacks and it has a big sword in the middle of it, just like my bey!! My only chance to burst it is hitting the sword in when Apocalypse eyes and the middle of it glows red!!
(Aiden snatches Apocalypse out of Xerxes’ hand)
Aiden: Let’s get to the battle!!
(Xerxes puts Xcalius’ weight from the bottom to the top)
Drone: First battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Aiden/Xerxes: Let it rip!!
Announcer: Both bladers pull off some strong launches!!
Xerxes: It’s the time!! Penta Saber!!
(Apocalypse gets sent flying into the wall)
Xerxes: Drat, I was at least expecting a ring-out finish!!
Aiden: Can’t beat me that easily!
Announcer: Xcalius makes a vicious first attack but Apocalypse is still in there!!
Aiden: Apocalypse!!!
(Aiden starts resonating)
Xerxes: Xcalius!!
(Xcalius hits the wall with force, Xerxes starts resonating)
Aiden: Warped Blast!!
Xerxes: Bayonet Saber!!
(An enormous explosion occurs)
Announcer: Both beys are giving it they’re all!!
(Both beys get sent flying out of the stadium, Xcalius lands on the ground first)
Xerxes: *Gasps In Shock*
Drone: It’s Warped Apocalypse with a ring-out finish!! Aiden Peregrin claims 1 point!!
Announcer: Looks like the darkness is coming out on top because Xcalius just got blown out of the stadium!!
(Xerxes picks up Xcalius)
Xerxes: Don’t worry, we’ve got a lot more up our sleeves!!
Aiden: Face it, you’re losing this battle whether you like it or not!
(Aiden puts Apocalypse's weight from the bottom to the top)
Me: That’s a risky move!
Adam: But it could pay off.
Brooke: For once Adam has a point, he could get a lot of attack power that way.
Ryuji: Yep, it worked my first time and it paid off.
Drone: Second battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(Apocalypse zooms around the stadium)
Announcer: Wow, look at it go!!
Me: Looks like he nailed the launch!
(Xcalius speeds up behind it)
Xerxes: Tera Saber!!
(Apocalypse hits the wall)
Announcer: Xcalius has pushed it into the wall again!! What’s his game plan?!
Xerxes: One more time! Tera Saber!!
(Apocalypse hits the wall, it starts glowing red)
Me/Ryuji/Adam/Brooke: *Gasps*
Announcer: This is what he was after to get it at its weak point!!
Xerxes: Saber Wall!!
(Xcalius hits Apocalypse’s button, Apocalypse’s doesn't burst, Xcalius is sent flying)
Xerxes: *Gasps*
Announcer: Apocalypse survives!!
Aiden: Useless. Apocalypse!!!
(Aiden’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Aiden: Warped Whip!!
Xerxes: No!
(Enormous purple explosion occurs, Xcalius bursts)
Xerxes: *Gasps in fear*
(Xcalius’s parts roll past him on the ground)
Drone: It’s Warped Apocalypse with a burst finish. Aiden Peregrin is the winner!!
Announcer: Uh Oh, the darkness has won and Xcalius has just been blown up!!
(Aiden smiles evilly)
Aiden: I hope that was a good demonstration of my power!! Because all of you will fall for me when I become World Champion!!
(Sebastian’s Thoughts): I can’t let him win.
Ryuji/Adam: Get ready buddy, because I’m taking you down!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jun. 17, 2021
Changing up the chapter order
18) Friends Vs Friend!!
19) Detonate Counter!! Brooke Vs Lloyd!!
20) Balance Type's True Colors !!
21) Heroic Rematch!! Vlad Vs Daniel!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jun. 17, 2021
Cool looking forward to it
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Exahertz - Jun. 17, 2021
(Jun. 16, 2021 11:27 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Chapter 17 is out!!
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 17
Darkness Has Fallen, Warped Apocalypse!!
~In The Workshop~
Aiden: Yes, it’s finally finished. Warped Apocalypse!
Speaker: Aiden Peregrin you’re match is starting
Aiden: Shall we give you a test run?
(A corrupted voice responses with yes)
~In The Arena~
Announcer: Ok Mini blading legends we’ve got our second match of A Group, hitting you like a rocket!! In the red corner, we’ve got the King Of Darkness Aiden Peregrin!!
Aiden: Listen up everyone!!
(Aiden holds Apocalypse up in the air)
Aiden: Meet Warped Apocalypse!!
All: *Gasps*
Adam: He evolved his bey!!
(My Thoughts): So he was the one who stole the blueprints!!
Aiden: I am the King Of Beyblade, and will stop anyone who challenges me, they’ll be squashed like a bug!!
Sebastian: News flash!! Beyblade doesn't belong to you!!!
Aiden: Sebastian Kurenai, we’ll meet each other soon enough in battle, and don’t worry I’ll crush you along with that attitude!!
Sebastian: I can’t wait to teach you a lesson!!
Announcer: Will Sebastian and Aiden battle soon? We’ll just have to wait and see after this epic battle!! Anyways in the blue corner, we’ve got the Heir To The Throne, Xerxes Shakadera!!
Xerxes: I will not let you take over Beyblade!! You're going to have to get through me!!
Aiden: Well, that shouldn’t be so hard, should it?
Xerxes: It won’t be hard, because I’ll blast you away in one hit!!
Drone: Inspect your opponent's bey!!
(Xerxes’ Thoughts): Warped Apocalypse a clockwise spinning attack type. It has blades on the outside to dish out some wicked attacks and it has a big sword in the middle of it, just like my bey!! My only chance to burst it is hitting the sword in when Apocalypse eyes and the middle of it glows red!!
(Aiden snatches Apocalypse out of Xerxes’ hand)
Aiden: Let’s get to the battle!!
(Xerxes puts Xcalius’ weight from the bottom to the top)
Drone: First battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Aiden/Xerxes: Let it rip!!
Announcer: Both bladers pull off some strong launches!!
Xerxes: It’s the time!! Penta Saber!!
(Apocalypse gets sent flying into the wall)
Xerxes: Drat, I was at least expecting a ring-out finish!!
Aiden: Can’t beat me that easily!
Announcer: Xcalius makes a vicious first attack but Apocalypse is still in there!!
Aiden: Apocalypse!!!
(Aiden starts resonating)
Xerxes: Xcalius!!
(Xcalius hits the wall with force, Xerxes starts resonating)
Aiden: Warped Blast!!
Xerxes: Bayonet Saber!!
(An enormous explosion occurs)
Announcer: Both beys are giving it they’re all!!
(Both beys get sent flying out of the stadium, Xcalius lands on the ground first)
Xerxes: *Gasps In Shock*
Drone: It’s Warped Apocalypse with a ring-out finish!! Aiden Peregrin claims 1 point!!
Announcer: Looks like the darkness is coming out on top because Xcalius just got blown out of the stadium!!
(Xerxes picks up Xcalius)
Xerxes: Don’t worry, we’ve got a lot more up our sleeves!!
Aiden: Face it, you’re losing this battle whether you like it or not!
(Aiden puts Apocalypse's weight from the bottom to the top)
Me: That’s a risky move!
Adam: But it could pay off.
Brooke: For once Adam has a point, he could get a lot of attack power that way.
Ryuji: Yep, it worked my first time and it paid off.
Drone: Second battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(Apocalypse zooms around the stadium)
Announcer: Wow, look at it go!!
Me: Looks like he nailed the launch!
(Xcalius speeds up behind it)
Xerxes: Tera Saber!!
(Apocalypse hits the wall)
Announcer: Xcalius has pushed it into the wall again!! What’s his game plan?!
Xerxes: One more time! Tera Saber!!
(Apocalypse hits the wall, it starts glowing red)
Me/Ryuji/Adam/Brooke: *Gasps*
Announcer: This is what he was after to get it at its weak point!!
Xerxes: Saber Wall!!
(Xcalius hits Apocalypse’s button, Apocalypse’s doesn't burst, Xcalius is sent flying)
Xerxes: *Gasps*
Announcer: Apocalypse survives!!
Aiden: Useless. Apocalypse!!!
(Aiden’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Aiden: Warped Whip!!
Xerxes: No!
(Enormous purple explosion occurs, Xcalius bursts)
Xerxes: *Gasps in fear*
(Xcalius’s parts roll past him on the ground)
Drone: It’s Warped Apocalypse with a burst finish. Aiden Peregrin is the winner!!
Announcer: Uh Oh, the darkness has won and Xcalius has just been blown up!!
(Aiden smiles evilly)
Aiden: I hope that was a good demonstration of my power!! Because all of you will fall for me when I become World Champion!!
(Sebastian’s Thoughts): I can’t let him win.
Ryuji/Adam: Get ready buddy, because I’m taking you down!!
i bursted :┃
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jun. 17, 2021
(Jun. 17, 2021 9:05 PM)Exahertz Wrote: (Jun. 16, 2021 11:27 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Chapter 17 is out!!
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 17
Darkness Has Fallen, Warped Apocalypse!!
~In The Workshop~
Aiden: Yes, it’s finally finished. Warped Apocalypse!
Speaker: Aiden Peregrin you’re match is starting
Aiden: Shall we give you a test run?
(A corrupted voice responses with yes)
~In The Arena~
Announcer: Ok Mini blading legends we’ve got our second match of A Group, hitting you like a rocket!! In the red corner, we’ve got the King Of Darkness Aiden Peregrin!!
Aiden: Listen up everyone!!
(Aiden holds Apocalypse up in the air)
Aiden: Meet Warped Apocalypse!!
All: *Gasps*
Adam: He evolved his bey!!
(My Thoughts): So he was the one who stole the blueprints!!
Aiden: I am the King Of Beyblade, and will stop anyone who challenges me, they’ll be squashed like a bug!!
Sebastian: News flash!! Beyblade doesn't belong to you!!!
Aiden: Sebastian Kurenai, we’ll meet each other soon enough in battle, and don’t worry I’ll crush you along with that attitude!!
Sebastian: I can’t wait to teach you a lesson!!
Announcer: Will Sebastian and Aiden battle soon? We’ll just have to wait and see after this epic battle!! Anyways in the blue corner, we’ve got the Heir To The Throne, Xerxes Shakadera!!
Xerxes: I will not let you take over Beyblade!! You're going to have to get through me!!
Aiden: Well, that shouldn’t be so hard, should it?
Xerxes: It won’t be hard, because I’ll blast you away in one hit!!
Drone: Inspect your opponent's bey!!
(Xerxes’ Thoughts): Warped Apocalypse a clockwise spinning attack type. It has blades on the outside to dish out some wicked attacks and it has a big sword in the middle of it, just like my bey!! My only chance to burst it is hitting the sword in when Apocalypse eyes and the middle of it glows red!!
(Aiden snatches Apocalypse out of Xerxes’ hand)
Aiden: Let’s get to the battle!!
(Xerxes puts Xcalius’ weight from the bottom to the top)
Drone: First battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Aiden/Xerxes: Let it rip!!
Announcer: Both bladers pull off some strong launches!!
Xerxes: It’s the time!! Penta Saber!!
(Apocalypse gets sent flying into the wall)
Xerxes: Drat, I was at least expecting a ring-out finish!!
Aiden: Can’t beat me that easily!
Announcer: Xcalius makes a vicious first attack but Apocalypse is still in there!!
Aiden: Apocalypse!!!
(Aiden starts resonating)
Xerxes: Xcalius!!
(Xcalius hits the wall with force, Xerxes starts resonating)
Aiden: Warped Blast!!
Xerxes: Bayonet Saber!!
(An enormous explosion occurs)
Announcer: Both beys are giving it they’re all!!
(Both beys get sent flying out of the stadium, Xcalius lands on the ground first)
Xerxes: *Gasps In Shock*
Drone: It’s Warped Apocalypse with a ring-out finish!! Aiden Peregrin claims 1 point!!
Announcer: Looks like the darkness is coming out on top because Xcalius just got blown out of the stadium!!
(Xerxes picks up Xcalius)
Xerxes: Don’t worry, we’ve got a lot more up our sleeves!!
Aiden: Face it, you’re losing this battle whether you like it or not!
(Aiden puts Apocalypse's weight from the bottom to the top)
Me: That’s a risky move!
Adam: But it could pay off.
Brooke: For once Adam has a point, he could get a lot of attack power that way.
Ryuji: Yep, it worked my first time and it paid off.
Drone: Second battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(Apocalypse zooms around the stadium)
Announcer: Wow, look at it go!!
Me: Looks like he nailed the launch!
(Xcalius speeds up behind it)
Xerxes: Tera Saber!!
(Apocalypse hits the wall)
Announcer: Xcalius has pushed it into the wall again!! What’s his game plan?!
Xerxes: One more time! Tera Saber!!
(Apocalypse hits the wall, it starts glowing red)
Me/Ryuji/Adam/Brooke: *Gasps*
Announcer: This is what he was after to get it at its weak point!!
Xerxes: Saber Wall!!
(Xcalius hits Apocalypse’s button, Apocalypse’s doesn't burst, Xcalius is sent flying)
Xerxes: *Gasps*
Announcer: Apocalypse survives!!
Aiden: Useless. Apocalypse!!!
(Aiden’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Aiden: Warped Whip!!
Xerxes: No!
(Enormous purple explosion occurs, Xcalius bursts)
Xerxes: *Gasps in fear*
(Xcalius’s parts roll past him on the ground)
Drone: It’s Warped Apocalypse with a burst finish. Aiden Peregrin is the winner!!
Announcer: Uh Oh, the darkness has won and Xcalius has just been blown up!!
(Aiden smiles evilly)
Aiden: I hope that was a good demonstration of my power!! Because all of you will fall for me when I become World Champion!!
(Sebastian’s Thoughts): I can’t let him win.
Ryuji/Adam: Get ready buddy, because I’m taking you down!!
i bursted :┃
LOL sorry about that plot did you dirty
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - PinkRose - Jun. 17, 2021
Ngl, I kinda feel bad for Longinus here. This would be the second time Belial gives him the boot, it's almost as if that thing hard counters it (it doesn't).
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jun. 17, 2021
(Jun. 17, 2021 9:25 PM)PinkRose Wrote: Ngl, I kinda feel bad for Longinus here. This would be the second time Belial gives him the boot, it's almost as if that thing hard counters it (it doesn't).
Belial might not win or might not lose gonna have to read the chapter to find out 
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jun. 20, 2021
Chapter 18 is lite
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 18
Friend Vs Friend!!
Adam: Ryuji, I’ve got to beat you! No matter what!!
(Adam says seriously)
Me: Don’t worry I’m sure you will!!
(I say cheerfully)
Adam: I’ve got to defend this whole battle to run down its stamina!!
(Adam says confidently)
Me: I dunno. Ryuji definitely has a strategy to beat Ashindra, maybe try attacking?
(I say suggestively)
Adam: Vlad, I’ve got this!! No matter what I’m gonna win!!
(Adam says confidently)
Me: Come on, just try it!!
(I say willingly)
Adam: Fine.
(Me and Adam push our launchers close to the stadium)
Me/Adam: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(Me and Adam battle in the sunset)
(The Next Day)
Announcer: Alright bladers!! We'll be having a serious match today!! We will be pitting friends against each other!! Ryuji Kiyama Vs Adam Kusaba!!
(Ryuji and Adam walk up to the stadium)
Adam: Are you ready to lose?!
(Adam holds Ashindra up)
Ryuji: Lose? In your dreams!!
Announcer: Sparks are flying and the battle hasn’t even started yet!! Let’s get to it!!
Drone: First battle!! Ready? Set!
(Ryuji tilts his launcher)
(Adam’s Thoughts): Is he trying to pull off a Rush Launch?
All: 3! 2! 1!
Adam/Ryuji: Let it rip!!
(Ryuji pulls the string hard)
(Roktavor takes the center)
Ryuji: Berserker Roktavor Zone!!
Adam: What the?!
Announcer: Plot twist!! Roktavor sets itself up in a defensive position!!
Adam: Are you kidding me?!
(Adam says in shock)
Ryuji: It was obvious you were going to defend so I practiced forever to defend all incoming attacks!!
(Ryuji says mockingly)
(Ashindra rushes at Roktavor with slow and weak attacks)
Announcer: And Ashindra’s attacks fall short!!
Brooke: This is not good. With those attacks, Ashindra’s killing its own stamina.
(Brooke says with disappointment)
Me: I told him we should’ve done more attack practice!!
(I say hitting myself on the head)
(Ashindra gets sent up the stadium)
Adam: Counter-Strike!! Atomic Counter!!
Announcer: Ashindra picks up speed for a huge counter-strike!!
(Roktavor defensive position turns into a strong tornado)
Ryuji: This is the end!! Berserker Cyclone!!
(Ashindra gets sent flying out of the stadium, it hits the ground then bursts)
Adam: *Gasps In Fear*
(Me and Brooke start breathing again)
Me: That was too close!!
Brooke: I know right?
Drone: It’s Berserker Roktavor 1 point with ring-out finish!!
Announcer: Too close for comfort!! Ashindra barely hangs in there with a ring-out finish!!
Ryuji: You hung in there huh? I should give you an award!!
(Ryuji says Mockingly)
Adam: Grr!!
(Adam’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Adam: Onto the second game!!
(Adam yells with pride)
Ryuji: Let’s see what you’ve got!!
(Adam puts Ashindra’s weight from the bottom to the top)
(Brooke’s Thoughts): He made Ashindra taller. Wonder what he’s going for?
Drone: Second Battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Ryuji/Adam: Let it--
(Ryuji tilts his launcher, Adam copies him)
Ryuji: *Gasps*
Ryuji/Adam: Rip!!
(Both beys land and start shooting attacks back and forth at each other)
Adam/Ryuji: Haaaa!!!
(Scream Ryuji and Adam striving to win this battle)
Announcer: They’ve just landed and they’re already giving it 100%!!
Me: That’s weird? Ashindra wasn’t even grazing Roktavor before but now it’s hitting it off balance!!
(I say confused)
Brooke: Because Ashindra is taller than Roktavor, it has the power to hit Roktavor into the ground, causing it to be more off-balanced.
(Brooke says looking closely at the battle)
(Roktavor takes the center)
Ryuji: Roktavor!!
(Ryuji’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Adam: ASHINDRA!!!
(Adam’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Ryuji: Berserker Roktavor Zone!!!
Announcer: Roktavor barely fends off Ashindra’s early attacks!! But what’s this? Ashindra’s is now on an onslaught hitting Roktavor from all sides!!
(Adam’s hand's flare-up in green fire, and he thrusts them forward)
Adam: Samurai Zone!!
Ryuji: Berserker Cyclone!!
(Ashindra gets sent up the flying rails)
Adam: Atomic Counter!!
(Ashindra rides the rails to the sky, Ashindra lands on Roktavor and bursts it)
Me: He did it!!
(I say joyfully)
Adam: Yes!!
(Adam says triumphantly)
Drone: It’s Samurai Ashindra with a burst finish. Adam Kusaba wins with a score of 2-1.
Announcer: Ashindra showed its aggressive side today and tore Roktavor apart!!
Ryuji: I’ve got to say, you did pretty good in that match. But you got lucky so don’t get too cocky!!
(Ryuji says a bit embarrassed)
(Ryuji walks away)
(Adam’s Thoughts): I’ll battle you anytime buddy!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - ColdFlames13 - Jun. 21, 2021
Hey.. Is it to late to enter?
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jun. 21, 2021
(Jun. 21, 2021 12:09 AM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: Hey.. Is it to late to enter?
no not to late
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - ColdFlames13 - Jun. 21, 2021
Name: Agnus Akabane
Age: 13
Appearance: https://www.google.com/search?q=katana+sakaki+beyblade but blood red hair, red shirt, Long sleeves and a huge white A like Aiger.
Personality: Agnus is a hothead, of course, being born into the akabane family... He loves inspecting Beyblades and always notes every detail.
Bey Name: Echo Achilles
Bey Appearance: Two blades on each side, like all Achilles. Echo has two shields that are inside the bey that can pop out like bound blades (More on that later)
Bey Moves: Echo Rebound: Bounces off the wall a couple times then strikes the same amount of times it bounced off the wall. Echo Boost: If its low on energy, it absorbs the power of its attacker and strikes back. Recoil: If its about to burst, it has the option to make the shields mentioned earlier to pop out.
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jun. 21, 2021
(Jun. 21, 2021 1:31 AM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: Name: Agnus Akabane
Age: 13
Appearance: https://www.google.com/search?q=katana+sakaki+beyblade but blood red hair, red shirt, Long sleeves and a huge white A like Aiger.
Personality: Agnus is a hothead, of course, being born into the akabane family... He loves inspecting Beyblades and always notes every detail.
Bey Name: Echo Achilles
Bey Appearance: Two blades on each side, like all Achilles. Echo has two shields that are inside the bey that can pop out like bound blades (More on that later)
Bey Moves: Echo Rebound: Bounces off the wall a couple times then strikes the same amount of times it bounced off the wall. Echo Boost: If its low on energy, it absorbs the power of its attacker and strikes back. Recoil: If its about to burst, it has the option to make the shields mentioned earlier to pop out.
Nice UnseenBurst
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jun. 22, 2021
(Jun. 21, 2021 1:31 AM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: Name: Agnus Akabane
Age: 13
Appearance: https://www.google.com/search?q=katana+sakaki+beyblade but blood red hair, red shirt, Long sleeves and a huge white A like Aiger.
Personality: Agnus is a hothead, of course, being born into the akabane family... He loves inspecting Beyblades and always notes every detail.
Bey Name: Echo Achilles
Bey Appearance: Two blades on each side, like all Achilles. Echo has two shields that are inside the bey that can pop out like bound blades (More on that later)
Bey Moves: Echo Rebound: Bounces off the wall a couple times then strikes the same amount of times it bounced off the wall. Echo Boost: If its low on energy, it absorbs the power of its attacker and strikes back. Recoil: If its about to burst, it has the option to make the shields mentioned earlier to pop out.
Ur in
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jun. 22, 2021
Chapter 19 is out PinkRose your gonna like this.
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 19
Detonate Counter!! Brooke Vs Lloyd
Me: Brooke!!
(I run after her)
Brooke: Hey Vlad.
(Brooke said while smiling)
Me: Wanna train? Because Lloyd is no easy opponent!!
(I say with excitement)
Brooke: Sure. But where’s Ryuji and Adam?
(Brooke said looking around)
Me: Ryuji’s got Adam working up a sweat!!
Brooke: Alright then, let’s battle!!
Me/Brooke: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(Valtryek starts gaining speed and gets faster)
Me: Go, Valiant Spring Attack!!
(Valtryek hits Belarix with its blade, Belarix gets sent out of the stadium)
Brooke: You’ve gotten stronger.
(Brooke says picking up Belarix)
Me: What do you mean?
(I say confused)
Brooke: That’s the fastest I’ve ever seen Valtryek go.
(Brooke says looking closely at Valtryek)
Me: Well, I guess we’re getting stronger.
(I say holding Valtryek into the sunset)
Brooke: We’re?
(Brooke says confused)
Me: Yup, I train every day and it helps me and Valtryek get stronger!!
Brooke: I see, anyway I’ve got to go. See you tomorrow.
Me: I’ll be cheering you on!!
(I say waving my hand)
(The Next Day)
~In Brooke’s Locker Room~
Ryuji: You’d better not lose!!
(Ryuji says fiercely)
Adam: Where’s Vlad, he should be here?
(Adam says looking around)
(I barrage in the door out of breath)
Ryuji: Where’ve you been?
(Ryuji says looking down at me)
Me: I’ve been up all night making this for Brooke.
(I pass out)
Adam: Should we help him?
(Brooke takes the thing that was in my hand)
Brooke: What’s this?
(Brooke says holding it up in the air)
Ryuji: It looks like some sort of part?
(Ryuji says confused)
(I wake up drooling)
Me: It’s a part for Belarix, it will increase attack power and spin power!! F+ Gear!!
(Brooke attaches the part to Belarix)
Brooke: Thanks.
(Brooke walks away)
Brooke (Thoughts): Vlad, I’m going to win, I promise.
~In The Main Arena~
Announcer: Hello everyone!! Today we’ve got a match between two powerhouses!! Brooke Daikokuten Vs Lloyd Shirosagi!!
(Brooke and Lloyd walk up to the stadium)
Brooke: I’m winning this thing!
(Brooke holds up Belarix)
Lloyd: So you’ve upgraded your bey! That will make this battle twice as fun!!
(Lloyd says confidently)
(Brooke and Lloyd’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Announcer: The bladers stare each other down with their cold eyes of determination!! Let’s get started!!
Belarix: Brooke!!
(Belarix pulls Brooke into a white void)
Brooke: Belarix, I want to win this but I don’t know-how.
Belarix: Don’t worry, put your trust in me and we shall win!!
Brooke: Don’t worry, I don’t plan on losing!!
(Brooke leaves the white void)
Drone: First battle!! Ready? Set!
Brooke/Lloyd: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
Announcer: And they start off with awesome launches!!
Brooke: Venture Launch!!
(Belarix hits Luinor hard with a barrage of strikes)
Brooke (Thoughts): Wow, Vlad was right, thanks to this new upgrade Belarix is hitting harder than normal!!
Announcer: Luinor gets hit with Belarix’s strong attacks!! It’s not holding anything back!!
Lloyd: Time to counterstrike!!
(Lloyd says while forcefully putting his hand forward)
(Luinor speeds up and starts clashing with Belarix, Belarix starts absorbing spin from Luinor)
Lloyd: *Gasps*
Announcer: Looks like Belarix is draining the spin right out of Luinor!!
Faza (Thoughts): Looks like the new upgraded Belarix stole a page from my book and can now spin steal.
Brooke: Keep it up!!
(Brooke said while clenching his fist)
Lloyd: Send them sky high!! Destruct Upper!!
(Luinor sends Belarix up in the air with an upper attack)
Announcer: Belarix is sent flying up in the air!!
Brooke: *Gasps In Fear*
Brooke (Thoughts): Is this the end?
(Brooke thinks while clenching his fists)
Belarix: Brooke!! Don’t give up!!
(Belarix starts falling down to the stadium fast)
Brooke: Go Belarix!!
(Brooke’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Belarix: Let’s go, Brooke!!
Brooke: Detonate Bomb!!
(Belarix dives down on Luinor, Luinor gets sent flying up)
Announcer: Now it's Luinor’s turn to fly!!
(Luinor hits the wall and speeds up)
Lloyd: Destruct Scream!!
Announcer: Luinor comes down and hits Belarix with a wicked combo move!!
(Belarix crashes into the wall)
Belarix: Turn this into an advantage!!
(Belarix flies off the wall)
Brooke: Detonate Counter!!
Lloyd: This is what I’ve been waiting for!! Luinor!!
(Lloyd’s Resonance Aura flares up)
(Luinor’s Layer and Disk and gear line up)
Lloyd: Destruct Smash!!
(Huge Explosion occurs)
Announcer: It’s an enormous clash of wills who will win!!
(Belarix gets sent up in the air and bursts)
Brooke: *Gasps*
Drone: It’s Destructing Luinor with a burst finish!! Lloyd Shirsosagi wins!!
Announcer: Even when it looked like Belarix had the advantage you just can’t topple The Raging Dragon!!
(Brooke picks up Belarix’s parts and walks away)
Lloyd: Hahahaha, hope you got a good taste of my power!!
~In The Hallway~
Brooke: Belarix, I lost but somehow I still feel happy. What’s going on?
(Brooke said while Belarix glows in her hand)
Belarix: Even though you lost you still had fun, that’s better than winning.
(Brooke smiles)
(I run up to Brooke in the hallway)
Me: Brooke!!
Brooke: Hey Vlad, sorry I totally lost that match.
(Brooke said feeling a bit bad)
Me: Are you kidding? That was awesome!! Who cares if you lost, you did amazing anyway!!
Brooke: Really?
Me: Yup!! I can’t wait to battle you again!!
(Brooke walks away smiling)
Brooke (Thoughts): Man, there’s no disappointing him.
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - GenesisBlader - Jun. 23, 2021
ITSSSSSSSS SOOOOOOOOOOO AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
ik im kinda late with this rating but ITSSSSSSSSSSSSSS AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
i love how brooke learns that fun doesn't just come with winning it also come with the awesomeness in the battle and the performace you make!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jun. 23, 2021
(Jun. 23, 2021 7:28 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: ITSSSSSSSS SOOOOOOOOOOO AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
ik im kinda late with this rating but ITSSSSSSSSSSSSSS AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
i love how brooke learns that fun doesn't just come with winning it also come with the awesomeness in the battle and the performace you make!
That was the plot to the chapter awesome mate
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Beybladedb - Jun. 23, 2021
Can I join I will have lucifer and I will the evil like lain
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jun. 23, 2021
(Jun. 23, 2021 8:31 PM)Beybladedb Wrote: Can I join I will have lucifer and I will the evil like lain
You can join but you can't have an antagonist bey sorry
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