RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jul. 06, 2021
(Jul. 06, 2021 8:35 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 25 is out!! PinkRose if you're free can you please rate this chapter thx 
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 25
Rebirth!! Thunder Valtryek!!!
(Someone knocks on my door, Valt opens it)
Valt: I made some Beybread!!
Me: I’m not hungry.
Valt: Come on! You’ve gotta eat!
Me: No thanks.
Valt: Ok. Are you going to hang out with the gang today?
Me: Nope.
Valt: What are you going to do then?
Me: Stay here.
(I cover myself in blankets, Valt sits on my bed)
Valt: Look, I know things have been hard ever since Toko and your Mom got in that accident. But you’re always positive, that's what I like about you! So you’ve gotta do something.
(I look at Valtryek sadly)
Valt: I’ll leave the Beybread here.
(Valt gets up and leaves the room)
~In The Living Room~
Valt: *Sighs*
Shu: He still won’t eat?
Valt: Nope, am I doing something wrong?
Shu: Nah, loss affects everyone in different ways, I’m sure he’ll bounce back when he’s ready.
Valt: *Sighs*
(The doorbell rings, Valt opens the door)
Colton: Is Vlad ok?
Adam: Yeah, we got really worried.
Ryuji: They dragged me here!
Brooke: Oh please, you were the one who suggested it.
Valt: Come in.
(Someone knocks on my door)
Me: *Sighs*
Colton: Vlad! I’m performing in your honor!! Wanna come?
Me: Nope.
Ryuji: Oh come on!! You lost once that’s it, get over it!!
Me: That’s rich, coming from you.
Ryuji: *Gasps* Well I never!!
Adam: Not gonna lie, you kinda deserved that.
Colton: You’ve gotta do something.
(I put my face on my pillow)
Brooke: *Sighs* Looks like there’s no helping it.
(Colton and the gang leave my room)
Valt: Any luck?
Colton: He’s really down in the dumps.
Adam: I don’t know if he’s ever gonna blade again.
(Vira listens to us behind the kitchen wall, Vira storms right into my room)
Vira: Get up!
Me: What do you want?
(Vira grabs my pillow and starts hitting me with it)
Me: Stop!
Vira: You said you were never going to disappoint Valt didn’t you!!
(Vira starts hitting me harder)
Me: Yeah, so what?!
Vira: You said you wouldn’t disappoint Toko, did you or did you not!!
(Vira starts hitting me harder with the pillow)
Me: Yes I did!!
Vira: The only way to disappoint Valt or Toko is to give up!!
(Vira slams the pillow on me and storms off, I fall off my bed)
Me: Man, she’s crazy.
Valtryek: She’s right you know!
Me: *Gasps*
(Valtryek’s fragments start glowing, Valtryek pulls me into a void)
Me: I lost and you’re destroyed.
Valtryek: So?
Me: What do you mean?
Valtryek: If you created me you can certainly fix me!
Me: You’re right!! What am I doing mopping? Let’s get started!!
Valtryek: That’s the spirit!!
(I get pulled out of the void)
Me: Time to get started!!
(I run out of my room and head straight for the workshop)
Valt: *Gasps*
Shu: Told you.
~In The Workshop~
Me: Valtryek is gonna be the strongest attack type in the world!!
(I start eating Beybread while I work on my bey)
Valt: Are you ok?
Me (Muffed): Yup.
(Brooke and the gang run upstairs into the workshop)
Colton: Awesome!! Vlad’s back!!
Ryuji: It’s about time!!
Brooke: Sweet.
Adam: I knew he’d bounce back!
Me: Guys, if you want some Beybread take it!!
(Everyone takes some Beybread and starts chowing down)
~2 Hours Later~
Me: It’s done!! Thunder Valtryek is raring to go!!
(I hold up Thunder Valtryek in the air)
Brooke: Awesome, wanna test it out?
(Brooke holds up Belarix)
Me: Of course!!
(We head to the park and get ready to battle)
Shu: Inspect your opponent’s bey!!
Brooke (Thoughts): Thunder Valtryek, a clockwise spinning bey!! It has 3 blades that can move on their own like bound blades, the 3 blades also have rubber on them. Valtryek’s disk has an added part that turns the disk into a bound disk. The Heroic Reboot driver has metal gear on it to add extra speed to it. I feel like there’s more to it though.
Shu: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Brooke: Let it rip!!
(Both beys land on the stadium floor, Valtryek starts speeding up around the stadium)
Me: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek hits Belarix with a barrage of attacks, Belarix starts wobbling)
Brooke: *Gasps* Go Belarix!!
(Belarix leans on the Venture driver and speeds up)
Brooke: Venture Launch!!
(Belarix and Valtryek hit each other with a barrage of attacks)
Shu (Thoughts): I’ve never seen strength like this!
Me: Now!! Thundering Recoil!!
(Valtryek hits Belarix with its bound blade, Belarix gets sent flying, Belarix hits the wall and catches onto the rim)
Brooke: Venture Flash!!
(Belarix starts speeding up on the rim, Belarix heads straight for Valtryek, Valtryek and Belarix start clashing)
Me: Thundering Dynachi Breaker!!!
(3 Additional blades come out from Valtryek, Belarix gets sent flying)
Brooke: Belarix!!
(Brooke’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Valtryek!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Brooke: Detonate Bomb!!
Me: Thundering Saber!!
(Valtryek and Belarix start clashing, an enormous explosion occurs)
(Valtryek’s avatar slashes at Belarix)
Me: Get to bursting!!
(Belarix bursts)
Brooke: *Gasps*
Shu: It’s Thunder Valtryek with a burst finish!! The winner is Vlad Aoi!!
Me: That was so much fun!!
Valt: That was epic!
Adam: Thunder Valtryek is super strong!
Shu (Thoughts): I haven’t seen someone that strong since…
Me: Let’s go back to Inferno and--
Shu: Hold on.
Me: What?
Shu: I admit: Thunder Valtryek is strong, but not strong enough to take down Inferno.
Me: Alright then! Time to get training!!
All: Yeah!!
toko died? Wow no wonder He and vira live with valt! Great chapter!!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jul. 06, 2021
(Jul. 06, 2021 8:44 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Jul. 06, 2021 8:35 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 25 is out!! PinkRose if you're free can you please rate this chapter thx
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 25
Rebirth!! Thunder Valtryek!!!
(Someone knocks on my door, Valt opens it)
Valt: I made some Beybread!!
Me: I’m not hungry.
Valt: Come on! You’ve gotta eat!
Me: No thanks.
Valt: Ok. Are you going to hang out with the gang today?
Me: Nope.
Valt: What are you going to do then?
Me: Stay here.
(I cover myself in blankets, Valt sits on my bed)
Valt: Look, I know things have been hard ever since Toko and your Mom got in that accident. But you’re always positive, that's what I like about you! So you’ve gotta do something.
(I look at Valtryek sadly)
Valt: I’ll leave the Beybread here.
(Valt gets up and leaves the room)
~In The Living Room~
Valt: *Sighs*
Shu: He still won’t eat?
Valt: Nope, am I doing something wrong?
Shu: Nah, loss affects everyone in different ways, I’m sure he’ll bounce back when he’s ready.
Valt: *Sighs*
(The doorbell rings, Valt opens the door)
Colton: Is Vlad ok?
Adam: Yeah, we got really worried.
Ryuji: They dragged me here!
Brooke: Oh please, you were the one who suggested it.
Valt: Come in.
(Someone knocks on my door)
Me: *Sighs*
Colton: Vlad! I’m performing in your honor!! Wanna come?
Me: Nope.
Ryuji: Oh come on!! You lost once that’s it, get over it!!
Me: That’s rich, coming from you.
Ryuji: *Gasps* Well I never!!
Adam: Not gonna lie, you kinda deserved that.
Colton: You’ve gotta do something.
(I put my face on my pillow)
Brooke: *Sighs* Looks like there’s no helping it.
(Colton and the gang leave my room)
Valt: Any luck?
Colton: He’s really down in the dumps.
Adam: I don’t know if he’s ever gonna blade again.
(Vira listens to us behind the kitchen wall, Vira storms right into my room)
Vira: Get up!
Me: What do you want?
(Vira grabs my pillow and starts hitting me with it)
Me: Stop!
Vira: You said you were never going to disappoint Valt didn’t you!!
(Vira starts hitting me harder)
Me: Yeah, so what?!
Vira: You said you wouldn’t disappoint Toko, did you or did you not!!
(Vira starts hitting me harder with the pillow)
Me: Yes I did!!
Vira: The only way to disappoint Valt or Toko is to give up!!
(Vira slams the pillow on me and storms off, I fall off my bed)
Me: Man, she’s crazy.
Valtryek: She’s right you know!
Me: *Gasps*
(Valtryek’s fragments start glowing, Valtryek pulls me into a void)
Me: I lost and you’re destroyed.
Valtryek: So?
Me: What do you mean?
Valtryek: If you created me you can certainly fix me!
Me: You’re right!! What am I doing mopping? Let’s get started!!
Valtryek: That’s the spirit!!
(I get pulled out of the void)
Me: Time to get started!!
(I run out of my room and head straight for the workshop)
Valt: *Gasps*
Shu: Told you.
~In The Workshop~
Me: Valtryek is gonna be the strongest attack type in the world!!
(I start eating Beybread while I work on my bey)
Valt: Are you ok?
Me (Muffed): Yup.
(Brooke and the gang run upstairs into the workshop)
Colton: Awesome!! Vlad’s back!!
Ryuji: It’s about time!!
Brooke: Sweet.
Adam: I knew he’d bounce back!
Me: Guys, if you want some Beybread take it!!
(Everyone takes some Beybread and starts chowing down)
~2 Hours Later~
Me: It’s done!! Thunder Valtryek is raring to go!!
(I hold up Thunder Valtryek in the air)
Brooke: Awesome, wanna test it out?
(Brooke holds up Belarix)
Me: Of course!!
(We head to the park and get ready to battle)
Shu: Inspect your opponent’s bey!!
Brooke (Thoughts): Thunder Valtryek, a clockwise spinning bey!! It has 3 blades that can move on their own like bound blades, the 3 blades also have rubber on them. Valtryek’s disk has an added part that turns the disk into a bound disk. The Heroic Reboot driver has metal gear on it to add extra speed to it. I feel like there’s more to it though.
Shu: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Brooke: Let it rip!!
(Both beys land on the stadium floor, Valtryek starts speeding up around the stadium)
Me: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek hits Belarix with a barrage of attacks, Belarix starts wobbling)
Brooke: *Gasps* Go Belarix!!
(Belarix leans on the Venture driver and speeds up)
Brooke: Venture Launch!!
(Belarix and Valtryek hit each other with a barrage of attacks)
Shu (Thoughts): I’ve never seen strength like this!
Me: Now!! Thundering Recoil!!
(Valtryek hits Belarix with its bound blade, Belarix gets sent flying, Belarix hits the wall and catches onto the rim)
Brooke: Venture Flash!!
(Belarix starts speeding up on the rim, Belarix heads straight for Valtryek, Valtryek and Belarix start clashing)
Me: Thundering Dynachi Breaker!!!
(3 Additional blades come out from Valtryek, Belarix gets sent flying)
Brooke: Belarix!!
(Brooke’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Valtryek!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Brooke: Detonate Bomb!!
Me: Thundering Saber!!
(Valtryek and Belarix start clashing, an enormous explosion occurs)
(Valtryek’s avatar slashes at Belarix)
Me: Get to bursting!!
(Belarix bursts)
Brooke: *Gasps*
Shu: It’s Thunder Valtryek with a burst finish!! The winner is Vlad Aoi!!
Me: That was so much fun!!
Valt: That was epic!
Adam: Thunder Valtryek is super strong!
Shu (Thoughts): I haven’t seen someone that strong since…
Me: Let’s go back to Inferno and--
Shu: Hold on.
Me: What?
Shu: I admit: Thunder Valtryek is strong, but not strong enough to take down Inferno.
Me: Alright then! Time to get training!!
All: Yeah!!
toko died? Wow no wonder He and vira live with valt! Great chapter!!!
It's sad really 
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jul. 06, 2021
(Jul. 06, 2021 8:50 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 06, 2021 8:44 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: toko died? Wow no wonder He and vira live with valt! Great chapter!!!
It's sad really
I know...
UnseenBurst how did he die exactly?????
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 06, 2021
(Jul. 06, 2021 8:51 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Jul. 06, 2021 8:50 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: It's sad really
I know...
UnseenBurst how did he die exactly????? prob a car accident (since it was a accident and that the most common ones involves cars(also his mom delivered things by car so Toko must have went with her to help and then... you know))
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jul. 06, 2021
(Jul. 06, 2021 8:59 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Jul. 06, 2021 8:51 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: I know...
UnseenBurst how did he die exactly????? prob a car accident (since it was a accident and that the most common ones involves cars)
Ah, so common
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jul. 06, 2021
(Jul. 06, 2021 8:51 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Jul. 06, 2021 8:50 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: It's sad really
I know...
UnseenBurst how did he die exactly?????
A year after Vira and Vlad were born Toko and Vlad's mom decided to go to Hawaii on vacation, Valt had to stay because he already made plans to see Shu, on the way to Hawaii the Plane was caught in a storm then the plane crashed
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jul. 06, 2021
(Jul. 06, 2021 9:03 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 06, 2021 8:51 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: I know...
UnseenBurst how did he die exactly?????
A year after Vira and Vlad were born Toko and Vlad's mom decided to go to Hawaii on vacation, Valt had to stay because he already made plans to see Shu, on the way to Hawaii the Plane was caught in a storm then the plane crashed
Dang......
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 06, 2021
(Jul. 06, 2021 9:03 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 06, 2021 8:51 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: I know...
UnseenBurst how did he die exactly?????
A year after Vira and Vlad were born Toko and Vlad's mom decided to go to Hawaii on vacation, Valt had to stay because he already made plans to see Shu, on the way to Hawaii the Plane was caught in a storm then the plane crashed That's really unfortunate and unlucky
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 06, 2021
(Jul. 06, 2021 9:03 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 06, 2021 8:51 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: I know...
UnseenBurst how did he die exactly?????
A year after Vira and Vlad were born Toko and Vlad's mom decided to go to Hawaii on vacation, Valt had to stay because he already made plans to see Shu, on the way to Hawaii the Plane was caught in a storm then the plane crashed
Hey am I in?
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 06, 2021
(Jul. 06, 2021 9:49 PM)Valt Aoi01 Wrote: (Jul. 06, 2021 9:03 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: A year after Vira and Vlad were born Toko and Vlad's mom decided to go to Hawaii on vacation, Valt had to stay because he already made plans to see Shu, on the way to Hawaii the Plane was caught in a storm then the plane crashed
Hey am I in?
Oh Shhhh-inzo (that was close). I forgot that here is Dynachi
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jul. 06, 2021
(Jul. 06, 2021 9:49 PM)Valt Aoi01 Wrote: (Jul. 06, 2021 9:03 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: A year after Vira and Vlad were born Toko and Vlad's mom decided to go to Hawaii on vacation, Valt had to stay because he already made plans to see Shu, on the way to Hawaii the Plane was caught in a storm then the plane crashed
Hey am I in?
Sorry I forgot to say that Ur in so Ur in
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - GenesisBlader - Jul. 06, 2021
(Jul. 06, 2021 8:35 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 25 is out!! PinkRose if you're free can you please rate this chapter thx
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 25
Rebirth!! Thunder Valtryek!!!
(Someone knocks on my door, Valt opens it)
Valt: I made some Beybread!!
Me: I’m not hungry.
Valt: Come on! You’ve gotta eat!
Me: No thanks.
Valt: Ok. Are you going to hang out with the gang today?
Me: Nope.
Valt: What are you going to do then?
Me: Stay here.
(I cover myself in blankets, Valt sits on my bed)
Valt: Look, I know things have been hard ever since Toko and your Mom got in that accident. But you’re always positive, that's what I like about you! So you’ve gotta do something.
(I look at Valtryek sadly)
Valt: I’ll leave the Beybread here.
(Valt gets up and leaves the room)
~In The Living Room~
Valt: *Sighs*
Shu: He still won’t eat?
Valt: Nope, am I doing something wrong?
Shu: Nah, loss affects everyone in different ways, I’m sure he’ll bounce back when he’s ready.
Valt: *Sighs*
(The doorbell rings, Valt opens the door)
Colton: Is Vlad ok?
Adam: Yeah, we got really worried.
Ryuji: They dragged me here!
Brooke: Oh please, you were the one who suggested it.
Valt: Come in.
(Someone knocks on my door)
Me: *Sighs*
Colton: Vlad! I’m performing in your honor!! Wanna come?
Me: Nope.
Ryuji: Oh come on!! You lost once that’s it, get over it!!
Me: That’s rich, coming from you.
Ryuji: *Gasps* Well I never!!
Adam: Not gonna lie, you kinda deserved that.
Colton: You’ve gotta do something.
(I put my face on my pillow)
Brooke: *Sighs* Looks like there’s no helping it.
(Colton and the gang leave my room)
Valt: Any luck?
Colton: He’s really down in the dumps.
Adam: I don’t know if he’s ever gonna blade again.
(Vira listens to us behind the kitchen wall, Vira storms right into my room)
Vira: Get up!
Me: What do you want?
(Vira grabs my pillow and starts hitting me with it)
Me: Stop!
Vira: You said you were never going to disappoint Valt didn’t you!!
(Vira starts hitting me harder)
Me: Yeah, so what?!
Vira: You said you wouldn’t disappoint Toko, did you or did you not!!
(Vira starts hitting me harder with the pillow)
Me: Yes I did!!
Vira: The only way to disappoint Valt or Toko is to give up!!
(Vira slams the pillow on me and storms off, I fall off my bed)
Me: Man, she’s crazy.
Valtryek: She’s right you know!
Me: *Gasps*
(Valtryek’s fragments start glowing, Valtryek pulls me into a void)
Me: I lost and you’re destroyed.
Valtryek: So?
Me: What do you mean?
Valtryek: If you created me you can certainly fix me!
Me: You’re right!! What am I doing mopping? Let’s get started!!
Valtryek: That’s the spirit!!
(I get pulled out of the void)
Me: Time to get started!!
(I run out of my room and head straight for the workshop)
Valt: *Gasps*
Shu: Told you.
~In The Workshop~
Me: Valtryek is gonna be the strongest attack type in the world!!
(I start eating Beybread while I work on my bey)
Valt: Are you ok?
Me (Muffed): Yup.
(Brooke and the gang run upstairs into the workshop)
Colton: Awesome!! Vlad’s back!!
Ryuji: It’s about time!!
Brooke: Sweet.
Adam: I knew he’d bounce back!
Me: Guys, if you want some Beybread take it!!
(Everyone takes some Beybread and starts chowing down)
~2 Hours Later~
Me: It’s done!! Thunder Valtryek is raring to go!!
(I hold up Thunder Valtryek in the air)
Brooke: Awesome, wanna test it out?
(Brooke holds up Belarix)
Me: Of course!!
(We head to the park and get ready to battle)
Shu: Inspect your opponent’s bey!!
Brooke (Thoughts): Thunder Valtryek, a clockwise spinning bey!! It has 3 blades that can move on their own like bound blades, the 3 blades also have rubber on them. Valtryek’s disk has an added part that turns the disk into a bound disk. The Heroic Reboot driver has metal gear on it to add extra speed to it. I feel like there’s more to it though.
Shu: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Brooke: Let it rip!!
(Both beys land on the stadium floor, Valtryek starts speeding up around the stadium)
Me: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek hits Belarix with a barrage of attacks, Belarix starts wobbling)
Brooke: *Gasps* Go Belarix!!
(Belarix leans on the Venture driver and speeds up)
Brooke: Venture Launch!!
(Belarix and Valtryek hit each other with a barrage of attacks)
Shu (Thoughts): I’ve never seen strength like this!
Me: Now!! Thundering Recoil!!
(Valtryek hits Belarix with its bound blade, Belarix gets sent flying, Belarix hits the wall and catches onto the rim)
Brooke: Venture Flash!!
(Belarix starts speeding up on the rim, Belarix heads straight for Valtryek, Valtryek and Belarix start clashing)
Me: Thundering Dynachi Breaker!!!
(3 Additional blades come out from Valtryek, Belarix gets sent flying)
Brooke: Belarix!!
(Brooke’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Valtryek!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Brooke: Detonate Bomb!!
Me: Thundering Saber!!
(Valtryek and Belarix start clashing, an enormous explosion occurs)
(Valtryek’s avatar slashes at Belarix)
Me: Get to bursting!!
(Belarix bursts)
Brooke: *Gasps*
Shu: It’s Thunder Valtryek with a burst finish!! The winner is Vlad Aoi!!
Me: That was so much fun!!
Valt: That was epic!
Adam: Thunder Valtryek is super strong!
Shu (Thoughts): I haven’t seen someone that strong since…
Me: Let’s go back to Inferno and--
Shu: Hold on.
Me: What?
Shu: I admit: Thunder Valtryek is strong, but not strong enough to take down Inferno.
Me: Alright then! Time to get training!!
All: Yeah!!
THIS IS SO AMAZING!!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jul. 06, 2021
(Jul. 06, 2021 10:28 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jul. 06, 2021 8:35 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 25 is out!! PinkRose if you're free can you please rate this chapter thx
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 25
Rebirth!! Thunder Valtryek!!!
(Someone knocks on my door, Valt opens it)
Valt: I made some Beybread!!
Me: I’m not hungry.
Valt: Come on! You’ve gotta eat!
Me: No thanks.
Valt: Ok. Are you going to hang out with the gang today?
Me: Nope.
Valt: What are you going to do then?
Me: Stay here.
(I cover myself in blankets, Valt sits on my bed)
Valt: Look, I know things have been hard ever since Toko and your Mom got in that accident. But you’re always positive, that's what I like about you! So you’ve gotta do something.
(I look at Valtryek sadly)
Valt: I’ll leave the Beybread here.
(Valt gets up and leaves the room)
~In The Living Room~
Valt: *Sighs*
Shu: He still won’t eat?
Valt: Nope, am I doing something wrong?
Shu: Nah, loss affects everyone in different ways, I’m sure he’ll bounce back when he’s ready.
Valt: *Sighs*
(The doorbell rings, Valt opens the door)
Colton: Is Vlad ok?
Adam: Yeah, we got really worried.
Ryuji: They dragged me here!
Brooke: Oh please, you were the one who suggested it.
Valt: Come in.
(Someone knocks on my door)
Me: *Sighs*
Colton: Vlad! I’m performing in your honor!! Wanna come?
Me: Nope.
Ryuji: Oh come on!! You lost once that’s it, get over it!!
Me: That’s rich, coming from you.
Ryuji: *Gasps* Well I never!!
Adam: Not gonna lie, you kinda deserved that.
Colton: You’ve gotta do something.
(I put my face on my pillow)
Brooke: *Sighs* Looks like there’s no helping it.
(Colton and the gang leave my room)
Valt: Any luck?
Colton: He’s really down in the dumps.
Adam: I don’t know if he’s ever gonna blade again.
(Vira listens to us behind the kitchen wall, Vira storms right into my room)
Vira: Get up!
Me: What do you want?
(Vira grabs my pillow and starts hitting me with it)
Me: Stop!
Vira: You said you were never going to disappoint Valt didn’t you!!
(Vira starts hitting me harder)
Me: Yeah, so what?!
Vira: You said you wouldn’t disappoint Toko, did you or did you not!!
(Vira starts hitting me harder with the pillow)
Me: Yes I did!!
Vira: The only way to disappoint Valt or Toko is to give up!!
(Vira slams the pillow on me and storms off, I fall off my bed)
Me: Man, she’s crazy.
Valtryek: She’s right you know!
Me: *Gasps*
(Valtryek’s fragments start glowing, Valtryek pulls me into a void)
Me: I lost and you’re destroyed.
Valtryek: So?
Me: What do you mean?
Valtryek: If you created me you can certainly fix me!
Me: You’re right!! What am I doing mopping? Let’s get started!!
Valtryek: That’s the spirit!!
(I get pulled out of the void)
Me: Time to get started!!
(I run out of my room and head straight for the workshop)
Valt: *Gasps*
Shu: Told you.
~In The Workshop~
Me: Valtryek is gonna be the strongest attack type in the world!!
(I start eating Beybread while I work on my bey)
Valt: Are you ok?
Me (Muffed): Yup.
(Brooke and the gang run upstairs into the workshop)
Colton: Awesome!! Vlad’s back!!
Ryuji: It’s about time!!
Brooke: Sweet.
Adam: I knew he’d bounce back!
Me: Guys, if you want some Beybread take it!!
(Everyone takes some Beybread and starts chowing down)
~2 Hours Later~
Me: It’s done!! Thunder Valtryek is raring to go!!
(I hold up Thunder Valtryek in the air)
Brooke: Awesome, wanna test it out?
(Brooke holds up Belarix)
Me: Of course!!
(We head to the park and get ready to battle)
Shu: Inspect your opponent’s bey!!
Brooke (Thoughts): Thunder Valtryek, a clockwise spinning bey!! It has 3 blades that can move on their own like bound blades, the 3 blades also have rubber on them. Valtryek’s disk has an added part that turns the disk into a bound disk. The Heroic Reboot driver has metal gear on it to add extra speed to it. I feel like there’s more to it though.
Shu: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Brooke: Let it rip!!
(Both beys land on the stadium floor, Valtryek starts speeding up around the stadium)
Me: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek hits Belarix with a barrage of attacks, Belarix starts wobbling)
Brooke: *Gasps* Go Belarix!!
(Belarix leans on the Venture driver and speeds up)
Brooke: Venture Launch!!
(Belarix and Valtryek hit each other with a barrage of attacks)
Shu (Thoughts): I’ve never seen strength like this!
Me: Now!! Thundering Recoil!!
(Valtryek hits Belarix with its bound blade, Belarix gets sent flying, Belarix hits the wall and catches onto the rim)
Brooke: Venture Flash!!
(Belarix starts speeding up on the rim, Belarix heads straight for Valtryek, Valtryek and Belarix start clashing)
Me: Thundering Dynachi Breaker!!!
(3 Additional blades come out from Valtryek, Belarix gets sent flying)
Brooke: Belarix!!
(Brooke’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Valtryek!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Brooke: Detonate Bomb!!
Me: Thundering Saber!!
(Valtryek and Belarix start clashing, an enormous explosion occurs)
(Valtryek’s avatar slashes at Belarix)
Me: Get to bursting!!
(Belarix bursts)
Brooke: *Gasps*
Shu: It’s Thunder Valtryek with a burst finish!! The winner is Vlad Aoi!!
Me: That was so much fun!!
Valt: That was epic!
Adam: Thunder Valtryek is super strong!
Shu (Thoughts): I haven’t seen someone that strong since…
Me: Let’s go back to Inferno and--
Shu: Hold on.
Me: What?
Shu: I admit: Thunder Valtryek is strong, but not strong enough to take down Inferno.
Me: Alright then! Time to get training!!
All: Yeah!!
THIS IS SO AMAZING!!!
Oh come on don't overreact it's not that good (But I'm glad you like it )
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - GenesisBlader - Jul. 06, 2021
(Jul. 06, 2021 10:31 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 06, 2021 10:28 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: e
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look im sorry i did this ok
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jul. 06, 2021
(Jul. 06, 2021 10:31 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 06, 2021 10:28 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: THIS IS SO AMAZING!!!
Oh come on don't overreact it's not that good (But I'm glad you like it )
What do you mean "it's not good"? We all no this is amazing (no offense to all the fan fic writers)
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - GenesisBlader - Jul. 06, 2021
(Jul. 06, 2021 10:42 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Jul. 06, 2021 10:31 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Oh come on don't overreact it's not that good (But I'm glad you like it )
What do you mean "it's not good"? We all no this is amazing (no offense to all the fan fic writers) bruh i got so sad because while i was making a new episode of my fanfic the episode was released and i couldn't read it because i wanted to complete the episode first
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jul. 06, 2021
(Jul. 06, 2021 10:47 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jul. 06, 2021 10:42 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: What do you mean "it's not good"? We all no this is amazing (no offense to all the fan fic writers) bruh i got so sad because while i was making a new episode of my fanfic the episode was released and i couldn't read it because i wanted to complete the episode first
It happens to the best of us
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jul. 06, 2021
The next chapter Thundering Dynachi Breaker (Oh my lord I love that name so much) will basically be about Vlad battling simulations of strong bladers it'll basically be like that computer episode in sparking
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - GenesisBlader - Jul. 06, 2021
(Jul. 06, 2021 10:52 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: The next chapter Thundering Dynachi Breaker (Oh my lord I love that name so much) will basically be about Vlad battling simulations of strong bladers it'll basically be like that computer episode in sparking
kewl looking forward to it!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jul. 06, 2021
Same I look fowared!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 07, 2021
(Jul. 06, 2021 9:58 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 06, 2021 9:49 PM)Valt Aoi01 Wrote: Hey am I in?
Sorry I forgot to say that Ur in so Ur in Oh Thanks!
https://ibb.co/vPnTLVP
Thunder Valtryek It's a fan art
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jul. 07, 2021
Chapter 26 is out!!
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 26
Thundering Dynachi Breaker!!!
Me: Heroic Reboot!!
(Roktavor gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Ryuji: You've gotta be kidding.
Me: Well alright!!
Shu: I feel like this training isn’t really working.
Brooke: We’ve really got no choice.
Valt: She does make a point.
Shu: Or we could use the Beyblade Simulator in my mansion.
Colton: A Beyblade Simulator? Awesome!
Adam: Looks like we’re gonna go to America again!!
(We take a plane to America, We land in America)
Me: Feels good to be back here!!
Vira: I’m gonna see Sadie again!!
Shu: Ever since I started looking for Sebastian Sadie’s been staying at home by herself.
(Vira runs off)
Me: She does realize we need to take a bus, right?
~At The Kurenai Mansion~
(Sadie runs out of the mansion)
Sadie: Dad!!
Shu: Hey Sadie!
Sadie: How’s Sebastian?
(Shu explains everything that happened at the Infernal Tower)
Sadie: So Sebastian is Crimson Eye now?
Shu: No he’s not, that’s just what he thinks.
Sadie: So why are you back?
Shu: We’re training Vlad to beat Aiden and Sebastian.
Sadie: So you want to use the Beyblade Simulator?
Me: Aw yeah!
Sadie: Our 1 on 1 simulator is broken. but our Tag Team one is still working!!
Me: I’ll still battle in it!
Brooke: I wanna battle with you!
All (Except Brooke): *Gasps*
Me: If you’re battling with me then you’ll need this!
(I hold out a part)
Brooke: What’s this?
Me: V+ Gear! It’ll make Belarix faster!!
(Brooke attaches the part)
Brooke: Thanks.
(Me and Brooke enter the simulation, Valtryek and Belarix get hooked up to the computer, Sadie gets on the computer)
Sadie: Who do you wanna battle?
Me: Faza!!
Brooke: Lloyd.
(An image of Faza and Lloyd pops up in front of us, A simulated stadium pops up in front of us, Simulated Lloyd and Faza pop)
Me: Um where are our beys?
Sadie: Coming right up!
(Thunder Valtryek and Detonate Belarix fall into our hands)
Me: Awesome!
Sadie: Now, starting the battle.
Simulation: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Brooke/Simulated Lloyd/Simulated Faza: Let it rip!!
(Fafnir(S) takes the center immediately, Luinor(S) speeds around Fafnir)
Brooke: Venture Launch!!
(Belarix speeds up around the stadium and hits Luinor, Luinor and Belarix start clashing hard)
Adam: It’s like they're battling the real Luinor and Fafnir!!
Sadie: I made this to match the exact strength of the real Luinior and Fafnir!
Me: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek hits Fafnir with a barrage of attacks, Fafnir blocks all the attacks without even moving)
Brooke: Go Belarix!!
Simulated Lloyd: Destructing Upper!!
(Fafnir and Luinor start clashing again, wind starts blowing in all directions, Belarix gets sent flying in the air)
Brooke: *Gasps*
(Valtryek keeps hitting Fafnir with a barrage of attacks, Fafnir keeps blocking all of the attacks)
Me: Valtryek!!
(Valtryek’s Resonance Aura flares up Valtryek blazes out of the bey)
Me: Thundering Recoil!!
(Valtryek hits Fafnir with its bound blade, Fafnir starts wobbling)
Me: Awesome!
(Luinor hits Belarix into Fafnir, Fafnir absorbs Belarix’s spin)
Me: *Gasps*
Faza: Absorb Break!
(Fafnir speeds up and heads straight into Belarix)
Brooke: Belarix!!
(Brooke’s Resonance Aura flares up, Belarix blazes out of the bey, Belarix starts glowing while it’s connected to the wires)
Brooke: Detonate Bomb!!
(Belarix and Fafnir get sent flying in the air, Luinor heads straight for Valtryek)
Me: Thundering Dynachi Breaker!!!
(Valtryek and Luinor start clashing, 3 additional blades come out of Valtryek, the whole stadium blows up, Valtryek and Belarix burst)
Me/Brooke: *Gasps*
Sadie: Wait what?
Shu: What’s wrong?
Sadie: Belarix and Valtryek weren’t supposed to burst!
(The system starts glitching, Valtryek and Belarix’s parts start glitching)
Me: Uh oh.
Brooke: We’d better get out of here.
(Me and Brooke run out of the simulation, The system dies)
Sadie: Looks like I’ve got some kinks to work out.
Me: It’s ok, the whole point was for us to get stronger!
Shu: And it looks like you succeeded.
Sadie: So you’re leaving to take on Aiden?
Me: Yup, don’t worry, we’ll come back the winners!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - GenesisBlader - Jul. 07, 2021
(Jul. 07, 2021 8:10 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 26 is out!!
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 26
Thundering Dynachi Breaker!!!
Me: Heroic Reboot!!
(Roktavor gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Ryuji: You've gotta be kidding.
Me: Well alright!!
Shu: I feel like this training isn’t really working.
Brooke: We’ve really got no choice.
Valt: She does make a point.
Shu: Or we could use the Beyblade Simulator in my mansion.
Colton: A Beyblade Simulator? Awesome!
Adam: Looks like we’re gonna go to America again!!
(We take a plane to America, We land in America)
Me: Feels good to be back here!!
Vira: I’m gonna see Sadie again!!
Shu: Ever since I started looking for Sebastian Sadie’s been staying at home by herself.
(Vira runs off)
Me: She does realize we need to take a bus, right?
~At The Kurenai Mansion~
(Sadie runs out of the mansion)
Sadie: Dad!!
Shu: Hey Sadie!
Sadie: How’s Sebastian?
(Shu explains everything that happened at the Infernal Tower)
Sadie: So Sebastian is Crimson Eye now?
Shu: No he’s not, that’s just what he thinks.
Sadie: So why are you back?
Shu: We’re training Vlad to beat Aiden and Sebastian.
Sadie: So you want to use the Beyblade Simulator?
Me: Aw yeah!
Sadie: Our 1 on 1 simulator is broken. but our Tag Team one is still working!!
Me: I’ll still battle in it!
Brooke: I wanna battle with you!
All (Except Brooke): *Gasps*
Me: If you’re battling with me then you’ll need this!
(I hold out a part)
Brooke: What’s this?
Me: V+ Gear! It’ll make Belarix faster!!
(Brooke attaches the part)
Brooke: Thanks.
(Me and Brooke enter the simulation, Valtryek and Belarix get hooked up to the computer, Sadie gets on the computer)
Sadie: Who do you wanna battle?
Me: Faza!!
Brooke: Lloyd.
(An image of Faza and Lloyd pops up in front of us, A simulated stadium pops up in front of us, Simulated Lloyd and Faza pop)
Me: Um where are our beys?
Sadie: Coming right up!
(Thunder Valtryek and Detonate Belarix fall into our hands)
Me: Awesome!
Sadie: Now, starting the battle.
Simulation: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Brooke/Simulated Lloyd/Simulated Faza: Let it rip!!
(Fafnir(S) takes the center immediately, Luinor(S) speeds around Fafnir)
Brooke: Venture Launch!!
(Belarix speeds up around the stadium and hits Luinor, Luinor and Belarix start clashing hard)
Adam: It’s like they're battling the real Luinor and Fafnir!!
Sadie: I made this to match the exact strength of the real Luinior and Fafnir!
Me: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek hits Fafnir with a barrage of attacks, Fafnir blocks all the attacks without even moving)
Brooke: Go Belarix!!
Simulated Lloyd: Destructing Upper!!
(Fafnir and Luinor start clashing again, wind starts blowing in all directions, Belarix gets sent flying in the air)
Brooke: *Gasps*
(Valtryek keeps hitting Fafnir with a barrage of attacks, Fafnir keeps blocking all of the attacks)
Me: Valtryek!!
(Valtryek’s Resonance Aura flares up Valtryek blazes out of the bey)
Me: Thundering Recoil!!
(Valtryek hits Fafnir with its bound blade, Fafnir starts wobbling)
Me: Awesome!
(Luinor hits Belarix into Fafnir, Fafnir absorbs Belarix’s spin)
Me: *Gasps*
Faza: Absorb Break!
(Fafnir speeds up and heads straight into Belarix)
Brooke: Belarix!!
(Brooke’s Resonance Aura flares up, Belarix blazes out of the bey, Belarix starts glowing while it’s connected to the wires)
Brooke: Detonate Bomb!!
(Belarix and Fafnir get sent flying in the air, Luinor heads straight for Valtryek)
Me: Thundering Dynachi Breaker!!!
(Valtryek and Luinor start clashing, 3 additional blades come out of Valtryek, the whole stadium blows up, Valtryek and Belarix burst)
Me/Brooke: *Gasps*
Sadie: Wait what?
Shu: What’s wrong?
Sadie: Belarix and Valtryek weren’t supposed to burst!
(The system starts glitching, Valtryek and Belarix’s parts start glitching)
Me: Uh oh.
Brooke: We’d better get out of here.
(Me and Brooke run out of the simulation, The system dies)
Sadie: Looks like I’ve got some kinks to work out.
Me: It’s ok, the whole point was for us to get stronger!
Shu: And it looks like you succeeded.
Sadie: So you’re leaving to take on Aiden?
Me: Yup, don’t worry, we’ll come back the winners!! this chapter sucks lol
its so bad
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jul. 07, 2021
Great chapter!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jul. 07, 2021
(Jul. 07, 2021 8:23 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jul. 07, 2021 8:10 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 26 is out!!
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 26
Thundering Dynachi Breaker!!!
Me: Heroic Reboot!!
(Roktavor gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Ryuji: You've gotta be kidding.
Me: Well alright!!
Shu: I feel like this training isn’t really working.
Brooke: We’ve really got no choice.
Valt: She does make a point.
Shu: Or we could use the Beyblade Simulator in my mansion.
Colton: A Beyblade Simulator? Awesome!
Adam: Looks like we’re gonna go to America again!!
(We take a plane to America, We land in America)
Me: Feels good to be back here!!
Vira: I’m gonna see Sadie again!!
Shu: Ever since I started looking for Sebastian Sadie’s been staying at home by herself.
(Vira runs off)
Me: She does realize we need to take a bus, right?
~At The Kurenai Mansion~
(Sadie runs out of the mansion)
Sadie: Dad!!
Shu: Hey Sadie!
Sadie: How’s Sebastian?
(Shu explains everything that happened at the Infernal Tower)
Sadie: So Sebastian is Crimson Eye now?
Shu: No he’s not, that’s just what he thinks.
Sadie: So why are you back?
Shu: We’re training Vlad to beat Aiden and Sebastian.
Sadie: So you want to use the Beyblade Simulator?
Me: Aw yeah!
Sadie: Our 1 on 1 simulator is broken. but our Tag Team one is still working!!
Me: I’ll still battle in it!
Brooke: I wanna battle with you!
All (Except Brooke): *Gasps*
Me: If you’re battling with me then you’ll need this!
(I hold out a part)
Brooke: What’s this?
Me: V+ Gear! It’ll make Belarix faster!!
(Brooke attaches the part)
Brooke: Thanks.
(Me and Brooke enter the simulation, Valtryek and Belarix get hooked up to the computer, Sadie gets on the computer)
Sadie: Who do you wanna battle?
Me: Faza!!
Brooke: Lloyd.
(An image of Faza and Lloyd pops up in front of us, A simulated stadium pops up in front of us, Simulated Lloyd and Faza pop)
Me: Um where are our beys?
Sadie: Coming right up!
(Thunder Valtryek and Detonate Belarix fall into our hands)
Me: Awesome!
Sadie: Now, starting the battle.
Simulation: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Brooke/Simulated Lloyd/Simulated Faza: Let it rip!!
(Fafnir(S) takes the center immediately, Luinor(S) speeds around Fafnir)
Brooke: Venture Launch!!
(Belarix speeds up around the stadium and hits Luinor, Luinor and Belarix start clashing hard)
Adam: It’s like they're battling the real Luinor and Fafnir!!
Sadie: I made this to match the exact strength of the real Luinior and Fafnir!
Me: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek hits Fafnir with a barrage of attacks, Fafnir blocks all the attacks without even moving)
Brooke: Go Belarix!!
Simulated Lloyd: Destructing Upper!!
(Fafnir and Luinor start clashing again, wind starts blowing in all directions, Belarix gets sent flying in the air)
Brooke: *Gasps*
(Valtryek keeps hitting Fafnir with a barrage of attacks, Fafnir keeps blocking all of the attacks)
Me: Valtryek!!
(Valtryek’s Resonance Aura flares up Valtryek blazes out of the bey)
Me: Thundering Recoil!!
(Valtryek hits Fafnir with its bound blade, Fafnir starts wobbling)
Me: Awesome!
(Luinor hits Belarix into Fafnir, Fafnir absorbs Belarix’s spin)
Me: *Gasps*
Faza: Absorb Break!
(Fafnir speeds up and heads straight into Belarix)
Brooke: Belarix!!
(Brooke’s Resonance Aura flares up, Belarix blazes out of the bey, Belarix starts glowing while it’s connected to the wires)
Brooke: Detonate Bomb!!
(Belarix and Fafnir get sent flying in the air, Luinor heads straight for Valtryek)
Me: Thundering Dynachi Breaker!!!
(Valtryek and Luinor start clashing, 3 additional blades come out of Valtryek, the whole stadium blows up, Valtryek and Belarix burst)
Me/Brooke: *Gasps*
Sadie: Wait what?
Shu: What’s wrong?
Sadie: Belarix and Valtryek weren’t supposed to burst!
(The system starts glitching, Valtryek and Belarix’s parts start glitching)
Me: Uh oh.
Brooke: We’d better get out of here.
(Me and Brooke run out of the simulation, The system dies)
Sadie: Looks like I’ve got some kinks to work out.
Me: It’s ok, the whole point was for us to get stronger!
Shu: And it looks like you succeeded.
Sadie: So you’re leaving to take on Aiden?
Me: Yup, don’t worry, we’ll come back the winners!! this chapter sucks lol
its so bad
Thank you for you're mean constructive criticism >:( (I'm kidding if you don't like it then I'm ok with that)
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